Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

[vj4u]

Bro bura mat manna aap thoda bhawo kha rhe ho mana aap ekk awal number ke writer ho per aap Wednesday ko Thursday mt bolo or ekk baat dost aap ne bola out off station hu maan liya jb aap out off station ho to itni chating kese yaar mtlb aap ke pass time hai aap bs klpd bna rhe hai only review ke liye yaar aap kiu nhi smjte aap ki story ke updated ke liye hum kitna beswri se intjaar krte hai please bro agge se esa mt kro please

brother, aisa hai ki jawab bohot hai mere paas aapke sawalon ke par let's keep it simple..

pehli baat Thursday bola hi nahi tha maine, Wednesday bola tha,aur aaj jab Wednesday hai, update aa jaayega aur aisa lagbhag har baar hota hai..

mai apne commitments se piche nahi haththa..

dusri baat chatting karne me aur update dene me zamin aasman ka fark hota hai...

update taiyar karne me 3 se 4 ghanton ka CONTINOUS effort lagta hai par chatting karne me utna hi dimag lagta hai jitna aapko comment karte waqt laga..zero...

last baat..kahani ke first page par jaaiye..usme maine updates kaise aayenge,uske baare me clearly bataya hai... phir se padhkar khudko clear kar lijiye...

 

[vj4u]

बेह्तरीन भाई


aaj phir shaame tanhaayi jaagi....
aaj phir ek aansu GIRA GIRA HAI...(2)

baarish naa bhigaayi zamee ko,(2)
ek aansu se aaj ye GILA HAI...
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dard itni uthi hai SEENE ME...
mushkil ho rahi hai JEENE ME...

ro rokar magar JEE RAHA HUN...
khudke aansu me aaj PEE RAHA HUN...

dil me aaj uth raha ek NASHA HAI,
tujhko chaah ke bas gum hi MILA HAI....
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aaj phir, aaj phir,haan aaj phir shaame tanhaayi jaagi....
aaj phir ek aansu GIRA HAI.....

baarish naa bhigaayi zamee ko,(2)
ek aansu se aaj ye GILA HAI...




बहुत ही खूबसूरत भाई

thanks ki aapko acha laga..saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Behtrin...aaj to raaz ne mahi ko maar hi dena tha agr errapel kuchh nhi krti to ...kher ab usi cheez ke liye wo sharminda bhi h iska karan h uske emotions jinse uska filhal human and angel form generate ho rha h aur jb uski yaddast aayegi waps tb uska devilish form bhi generate ho jayega tb machega kohram...sbki zindgi me..par dekhte h wo khud ko kitne waqt me stable kr pata h taki jis cheez ke liye wo astitva me aaya h uska hi astitva mita ske...aur wahi aaj mahi apne pitah se milte hue bhi bin-mile hui si rh gyi...dekhte h ab kitna waqt lgati h mahi raaz ke deemag se apne energy particles nikalne me aur kitna waqt lgati h apna angel and human form merge krne me.. Aur gaana bahut gazab tha brother aur usme chhipa dard bahut hi bhayanak...jisse wo khud anjaan h..
Dekhte h kya hota h aage
Waiting brother..

thanks for appreciating brother..yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[Kill_monger]

Bro bura mat manna aap thoda bhawo kha rhe ho mana aap ekk awal number ke writer ho per aap Wednesday ko Thursday mt bolo or ekk baat dost aap ne bola out off station hu maan liya jb aap out off station ho to itni chating kese yaar mtlb aap ke pass time hai aap bs klpd bna rhe hai only review ke liye yaar aap kiu nhi smjte aap ki story ke updated ke liye hum kitna beswri se intjaar krte hai please bro agge se esa mt kro please

First of all tum jis bande ki baat kr rhe ho unhone story ki start me hi bol diya tha ki wo Weekly me 1,2,3-4 updates hi denge.
2nd thing Story likhne me or Padhne me difference hota hai...Tumhare is ek comment me jitni spelling mistakes h na utni mistakes VJ bhai ki poori story mila ke hogi,
tumhe kya lgta h kesa hota h ye ??
3rd thing unhone Thursday kahi bola hi nhi Wednesday bola h unhone or hum sbko ptaa h ki update mostly Late night hi aata h or aaj bhi aayega.
4th thing Ho sakta h tum velle baithe ho, tumhari life me koi kaam na ho but it doesn't mean ki samne wala bhi Vella ho.
5th thing Jitne bde is story ke ek update hote h na utne me is poore xforum ke 95% writers ke 3-4 updates de dete h toh appreciate kro ki tumhe quality or quantity dono mil rhi h.
6th thing I understand ki tumhe update ka wait h hum sbko h maybe tumse jyda h but it doesn't mean ki tum kuch bhi likh doge.
Peace out.

 

[Chandan533]

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Bro mein nya member nhi hu shuru she story reading kr rha hu mein ungli nhi utha rha hun bro sach hamesha kdwa hota hai mein manta hun wo writer hai pr writer ko v itna geo nhi pana chahiye story mein yaar writer ko apne chahne walo ka dhyan rkhna chaiye yaad jb updated late ata hai to dukhta hai yaar smjo mere dil ki v yaar intar nhi hota yaar smja kro bro

Intejar kyu karna, gf se batya le bhai. Agar na h to padosi se kar le. Aur wo v na h to bahut saare app h play store pr us se kam chala le.

 

[vj4u]

First of all, I want to congratulate you very much for being a Member Of The Month.​

Videous made this challenge very difficult and exciting, it is very difficult to take the right decision at such a time, the person in front tries to weaken our morale but we should not give up. At first I felt very bad, but later when I learned that Griffin was alive, my grief went away and Mahi was fighting with her father as Videous, who is impossible to defeat, well everything was great.

Raaz and Mahi finally meet, but Raaz is angry with Mahi despite having no memories, Well, despite Raaz's bad behavior, Mahi does not feel bad, it proves to be true love. I hope that Mahi's heart will not break now.



As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.

Thank You...


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thanks for appreciating brother.. lot's more to come..be along..

 

[Chandan533]

thanks for appreciating brother.. lot's more to come..be along..

Congratulations bro

 

[vj4u]

Congratulations bro

thanks mate..

 

[vj4u]

Sabse pehle congratulations for being member of the month.. badiya update thi.. jo mein kafi samay se wait kar raha tha Vikram ka apni daughter se milna woh finally padne ko mila.. Vikram ki beti hone ki wajah se physically toh mahi waise bhi Sabse strong character hai but mein abhi bhi uska wo Vikram wala dimag dekhna chahta hu jo badi se badi problems ka solutions bhi seconds ke kuch hisso mein hi nikal sakta tha.. itna toh mein sure hu ki V.J. ne abhi bhi ek aisa bomb sambhal kar rakha hai jo third chapter mein bhi is story ko twist karega.. once again thanks for the lovely update.

thanks for appreciating brother..yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[Loverboy sukh]

First of all tum jis bande ki baat kr rhe ho unhone story ki start me hi bol diya tha ki wo Weekly me 1,2,3-4 updates hi denge.
2nd thing Story likhne me or Padhne me difference hota hai...Tumhare is ek comment me jitni spelling mistakes h na utni mistakes VJ bhai ki poori story mila ke hogi,
tumhe kya lgta h kesa hota h ye ??
3rd thing unhone Thursday kahi bola hi nhi Wednesday bola h unhone or hum sbko ptaa h ki update mostly Late night hi aata h or aaj bhi aayega.
4th thing Ho sakta h tum velle baithe ho, tumhari life me koi kaam na ho but it doesn't mean ki samne wala bhi Vella ho.
5th thing Jitne bde is story ke ek update hote h na utne me is poore xforum ke 95% writers ke 3-4 updates de dete h toh appreciate kro ki tumhe quality or quantity dono mil rhi h.
6th thing I understand ki tumhe update ka wait h hum sbko h maybe tumse jyda h but it doesn't mean ki tum kuch bhi likh doge.
Peace out.

Teri mein kiun mirchi lgi hi wehla hoga tun peace out you mene writer se baat ki hai na ki tum se