Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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Ab aaya Khaane me alg hu swaad sa mja hi aa gya mtlb... Aakhir raaz ki soch ke saare samikaran hi badal diye gye ki wo khud ko aaj tak kya samjh rha tha aur wo kya nikla jinhone usko jindgibhr pala jo hhmesha uske sath the wohi uske asal maa baap nikle jo log phle apni beti aur fir apne mare hue bacche ke dukh me the unhe kya hi malum ki jo baccha mra hu paida hua wo to ek maaya matr thi bss asal me unka bccha to jeevit tha jise SANKARSHAN vidhi ke dwara kokh se hi trasnfer kr diya gya jis prakar BALRAM G paida hue the..bss yaha fark itna tha ki usko kisi aur garbh ki jgha aise hi janam diya gya wahan se kuchh duri pr aur fir waps laalan paalan ke liye unke paas hi pahuchaya gya....khair ye to bakai uska manshik santulan hilane wali cheez thi jahan wo khud ko ek robot ki trha smjh rha tha ( ki bss use srf mission hi pura krna h waise to wo abhi bhi same h ki mission to pura krna h usko kaise krega bss tb wo apne astitva se anbhigya tha ) wahi wo ek insaan ka putr bhi bss uska janam alg trha se hua baki nirman to sbhi ki trha hua aur uska ek parivaar bhi h ...aaj phli dfa wo roya tha uski aankhon se aanshu bahe the abhi na jaane kya kya hoga...intzaar h hmko bhi wahi griffin ne mahi ko btla hi diya ki usko kya krna h aur kis prakar baki uspr h ki wo raaz ko bcha paye iss dfa aur khud ko bhi...last time usne kaise bchaya ye to khair raaz hi h waqt pr pta chlega chliye dekhte ki ab dark mega update me kya deemag ka dahi krne wala milega...
Intzaar h brother...
 
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF SHAILA MAHI KO RAAZ KI USKE PRATI BERUKHI KE SECRET JAANANE KA TARIKA BATATI HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF JAB MAHI KO US SECRET KE BAARE ME BATA CHALTA HAI TOH USKI HAALAT KHARAB HO JAATI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-116



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSENS




KAL HUA KYA THA TUJHE...ACHANAK SE BOLA KI NEEND AA RAHI HAI AUR PHIR TURANT SONE CHALE BHI GAYA..

DRINK ME NEEND KI GOLI TOH NAHI MILAYA THA TUNE...!!!


mujhe ghurte hue kahi thi ye baat ALFREEN ne jispar....


MAI-naya kaam chalu kiya aur bataya bhi nahi...

ALFREEN-naya kaam..!!?kya bol raha hai tu...??? maine koi naya kaam shuru nahi kiya...

MAI-toh fokat me detective giri karke kya milega tujhe...!! mujhe neend aayi,mai sone chala gaya,ye bhi koi discussion ka toioc hai kya...???


jahan meri baat sun ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur BRAWNY has pade, ALFREEN ne apna mooh bichkaya liya wahin hasi toh MABEL bhi par phir jab uski nazar MAHI par padi toh...


MABEL-ab tujhe kya hua..??mooh kyun utaara hua hai tune...??aur ye teri aankhon ko kya hua hai...??? halki suji lag rahi hai aur laal bhi...


MABEL ki baat sun sabhi ki nazar MAHI par gayi jisse pehle toh andar hi andar hadbadayi MAHI par apne chehre ko normal hi rakha usne aur...


MAHI-arre kuch nahi yaar...woh raat ko theek se neend nahi aayi isiliye aankhen thodi jal rahi hai...

shayad isiliye sujan aur laalipan aa gaya hai...


ALFREEN-lai,ajeeb hai..in mahanubhav ko kal turant neend aa jaati hai aur iske ulat tujhe bilkul nahi aati...

ye kaisa contrasting raasta jaa raha hai yaar tum dono ka...

MAI-tujhe koi kaam vaam nahi hai kya...???kisko kitni neend aa rahi hai,issi par agar p.h.d karni thi toh yahan aayi hi kyun tu..??


meri baat par ALFREEN kuch kehti ki tabhi...


SILENCE EVERYBODY....


HIDA ki awaaz par naa sirf hum aur baaki saare SAVENTS ki aapsi baatien rook gayi balki hum sabki nazar saamne hamare teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS par tik gayi jiske baad...


HIDA-INVISIBLE WEAPON COMBAT....

aaj hum issi topic ke baare me baat karenge...

naam sun kar aap sabko andaza ho hi gaya hoga ki aaj kya hone waala hai..???

woh shashtra jo hum dekh sakte hain,unhe toh asaani se combat kiya jaa sakta hai par woh shashtra jisse gayab kar ke humpar chhoda jaaye,usse bachna aur ladhna behadh mushkil hota hai....

aur aaj hum ussi invisible fight tenchnique ke baare me aapko batayenge aur usse use me laana sikhayenge....

REGIS-apne shashtron ko apne sharir me gayab karke chuppana aur phir usse use me laana koi badi baat nahi hai...

COMBAT SPELL BOOK me aisa karne ke liye kayi SPELLS bataye gaye hain jinhe aapko bas memorize karke use me laana hai...

asal mudda hai khudko un invisible weapons se bachana...

haan, agar weapon ek hai aur bhaari hai toh usse nikalne waali tarange bhi itni heavy hoti hai jinhe mehsoos kar bacha jaa sakta hai,par agar light weapons jinka aakar chota ho,yaa phir magic se chota kar diya gaya ho toh unhe sense karna bohot mushkil hota hai..

aur mushkil tab aur badh jaati hai jab aap par koi ek weapon nahi balki bohot se adrishya weapons ke through ek saath humla ho jaaye..

aise me bachna next to impossible ho jaata hai aur aaj aap issi next to impossible task ko possible banane ka tarika sikhne waale hain..

SAPIUS-aur us tarike ka naam hai SAMOGAMA SHASHTRAM....

SAMOGAMA SHASHTRAM ek aisa SPELL hai jo BODY AMPLIFICATION ke antargat aata hai...

is SPELL ko agar apne BODY AMPLIFICATION ke saath merge kar liya jaaye toh aapka sharir adrisya humlon ko sense karne ke kaabil ho jaata hai...

HIDA-BODY AMPLIFICATION ke saath is spell ko thik se merge karne ke baad ek step aage badhte hue is SPELL ko apne SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke saath bhi merge kiya jaa sakta hai but aisa successfully kar paana kaafi time taking bhi hai aur hard bhi....

par woh baat ki baat hai.. pehla step toh BODY AMPLIFICATION ke saath SAMOGAMA SHASHTRAM SPELL ko merge karna hai aur aajse thik ek hafte tak aap sab yahi karenge...

ek hafte ke baad jab ye SPELL aap sabke bodies ke saath merge completely ho jaayega,tab hum aapko iske use ka live demo dikhayenge...

HIDA-waise live demo hum abhi bhi dikha sakte hain...


HIDA ke is acahanak kiye gaye baat par REGIS aur SAPIUS chownke aur....


REGIS-abhi,par kaise..???

HIDA-RAAZ.... usne merge kiya hua hai SAMOGAMA SHASHTRAM SPELL ko apne body ke saath..

SAPIUS-really...!!!


hairani se mujhe dekhte hue kahi ye baat SAPIUS ne jispar...


HIDA-yup..and he is really good...aur waise bhi,agar ek SAVENT ke through hum abhi ek demo de den,toh isse saare SAVENTS kaafi zyada motivate ho jaayenge...

REGIS-woh sab toh thik hai but are you sure about this...!!!ye vidhya asaan nahi hai...aur iske demo me bhi high risk hota hai..

do you really think RAAZ can do it...???

MAI-i am ready.. let's start the demo...


REGIS ke sawal ka jawab HIDA ne nahi,maine diya jisse sun jahan ek taraf HIDA aur mere baaki sabhi friends ke face par smile aa gayi,wahin in sabke beech thi MAHI,jisse mere demo me participate karne par tention ho gayi thi aur isiliye....


MAHI-RAAZ,you dont have to do it....

MAI-and who decides that..!!!you...!!!


ghurte hue kahi ye baat maine MAHI se jisse sun MAHI ko toh kuch fark nahi pada par uske yun beech me bolne se aur khaaskar mujhe interfere karne se mere saare dost hadbada gaye the..

unhe maalum tha ki MAHI ko meri fikr hai but woh ye bhi jaante the ki mujhe mere faislon me dakhal andaazi pasand nahi...

aur jab un sabne mujhe MAHI ko ghurte paaya toh ye soch ki mai zyada bhadakte hue sabke saamne MAHI ki fazzihat na kar dun...


ALFREEN-kya kar rahi hai MAHI..pagal ho gayi hai kya..!?sirf demo hai,aur woh RAAZ hai..

he is the best SAVENT of this PHASE...woh koi faisla yunhi nahi leta...agar usne demo ke liye haan kaha hai toh iska matlab hai ki he is ready...

isiliye beech me interfere karna band kar nahi toh teri love story shuru hone se pehle hi khatm ho jaani hai..


kheench kar baithate hue kahi ye baat ALFREEN ne MAHI se jispar MAHI baith toh gayi par ALFREEN ki baat sun..


MAHI man me-love story toh tab banegi naa jab RAAZ ki sansein chalengi...pata nahi kyun isse lagta hai ki isse kuch ho jaayega...

par unsure hokar toh kuch kehta hi nahi hai ye...par kya ho sakti hai woh cheez jisse isse lagta hai ki iski...!!!

nahi nahi..ye mai kya soch rahi hun..mai kuch nahi hone dungi apne RAAZ ko...uski taraf badhti hui mout ko mujhse hokar guzarna padega...

REGIS-ok then..toh demo mere saath perform karega phir RAAZ...


MAHI ye sab soch hi rahi thi ki tabhi REGIS ke awaaz se jaise present me jhatke se waapas aayi woh..

wahin REGIS ki baat par SAPIUS ya HIDA kuch kehte ki tabhi..


VALDIS-WHIZZDER,i have a request...agar demo me part ek SAVENT le raha hai toh uske saamne bhi ek SAVENT ko hi hona chahiye..

isse hum sab SAVENTS me excitement aur confidence, dono
hi badh jaayega...

jahan VALDIS ki baat par uske friends ne haan me haan milayi, wahin teeno WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ko bhi uski baat janchi but is suggestion par ek sawal bhi tha aur isiliye...


REGIS-idea acha hai VALDIS but ye possible nahi hai..haan, RAAZ ko is combat technique ke baare me maalum hai but uske alawa aur koi SAVENT iske baare me nahi jaanta..


MUJHE PATA HAI INVISIBLE WEAPONS COMBAT KE BAARE ME..I WILL PERFORM...


piche baithe VIDEOUS ne khade hote hue kahi ye baat jispar sabki nazar uspar padi aur...


HIDA-are you sure VIDEOUS....!!!

WOOOOO.....

HIDA ne sawal kiya hi tha ki tabhi uske aur baaki dono WHIZZDERS ne apni taraf aate hue kuch adrishya weapons ko feel kiya par isse pehle ki woh un weapons ko rokte,woh weapons wapas lout gaye the aur issi cheez par react kiya tha un sabne...

wahin is achanak hue action ke baad ab un teeno ke face par hairani thi aur issi hairani ke saath woh VIDEOUS ko dekh rahe the...

reason..

un teeno ko hi pata tha ki abhi abhi jo hua,woh VIDEOUS ne kiya tha par hairan woh is baat ko lekar the ki VIDEOUS ne abhi abhi jo invisible weapons use me laaye the,waisa karne ke liye usne SPELL uccharit nahi kiya tha balki bas budbudaya tha..

aur aisa sirf wahi kar sakta tha jisne SAMOGAMA SHASHTRAM SPELL ko apne body ke saath nahi balki apne SOUL ke saath merge kar liya tha.

aur ye ek PHASE 3 level ka hunar tha jisse VIDEOUS ne naa sirf seekh liya th balki perfect bhi kar liya tha aur yahi sab dekh aur jaan woh teeno kaafi hairan hue the..

wahin saare SAVENTS ne bhi kuch invisible par behadh powerful chiz hawa me mehsoos ki thi jisse feel kar woh sab bhi hairan the..

par in sabke beech ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur BRAWNY bhi the jinhone naa sirf un invisible weapons ko feel kiya tha balki un weapons ki movement aur displacement tak se woh teeno waakif the..

unhe pata tha ki VIDEOUS ne aaj sikhaye jaane waali kala ka aur apne worthy hona ka first demo de diya aur ye jaan woh halke halke smile kar rahe the...

khair, VIDEOUS ke is presentation ke baad ab jahan HIDA relaxed thi,wahin REGIS aur SAPIUS ko ab VIDEOUS ki jagah RAAZ ki fikr ho rahi thi..

jis level ka demo abhi VIDEOUS ne dikhaya tha,usse dekh unhe RAAZ ke injured hone ka dar tha par woh dono ye bhi jaante the ki RAAZ kitna stubborn hai..

aur jab baat challenge ki aati hai toh backoff karna usse aata hi nahi isiliye ek thandi saans bharte hue..


SAPIUS-lets walk to the GREAT HALL...


ye bol jahan SAPIUS, REGIS aur HIDA aage badh gaye wahin sabhi SAVENTS bhi un teeno ke piche ho liye...

is beech MAHI ne ek baar phirse mujhse baat karne ki koshish ki par ACCHUTA aur baaki sabne usse aisa nahi karne diya....

woh sab nahi chahte the ki mujhe samjhane ke chakkar me MAHI ki insult ho...

anyways,apne man ko maarti hui MAHI bhi baaki sabke saath THE GREAT HALL ki taraf badh gayi....




THE GREAT HALL:-



HIDA-toh equation simple hai SAVENTS....

aap dono hi ek dusre par ek ke baad kuch INVISIBLE WEAPONS se attack karenge..

chaahe toh direct matlab straight kijiye aur chaahe toh zigzag pattern me...

jiska bhi hit saamne waale ko lag gaye,woh jeet jaayega...

lekin ek baat ka dhyan rahe, weapons chaahe aap jo bhi chune,ek chune yaa phir multiple,un weapons ki sharpness bohot kam honi chahiye taaki us weapon ke lagne ke baad bhi saamne waala injured naa ho jaaye...

ye sirf ek demo hai,isse demo bi rakhiyega..

got it...!!!

MAI/VIDEOUS-yes....


ek dusre kse kareeb 30 feet door aamne saamne khade the mai aur VIDEOUS..

jahan mai normal hi tha wahin VIDEOUS ki aankhon me ek chamak thi..

ek negetive chamak..waise ye negetive chamak bhi normal hi thi...

ab bande ka ATTITUDE hi negetive hai toh aankhon me positiveness toh aane se rahi....!!!

anyways, HIDA ne apni baat keh di thi jiska matlab tha ki ab hum jab chaahe,demo dena start kar sakte the...

wahin saare SAVENTS aankhon me excitement liye hum dono ko dekh hi rahe the ki tabhi....


VIDEOUS-taiyaar hai RAAZ..!!!!


SSSSSSWWWWSWWWWSSWWW


VIDEOUS ka sawal pura hua hi tha ki tabhi uske chaaron taraf ek ajeeb si awaaz uthne lagi jisse naa toh SAVENTS samajh paaye aur naahi turant teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS ke palle kuch pada tha..


par phir pehle HIDA ke aur phir dono WHIZZDERS ko un awaazon se nikalne waale intensity se sab samajh aa gaya aur aisa hote hi jahan ek taraf HIDA bas hairan thi ki itna intense waar maine kyun chuna hai woh bhi sirf ek demo me wahin SAPIUS aur REGIS ke toh dimag hi fuse ho chuke the..

kyunki woh dono hi ye jaan gaye the ki maine ek saath 100 se zyada alag alag ke astra aur shastra joki gayab awastha me the,unka awahan kar bulaya hua hai aur ye koi choti baat toh thi nahi..

bina SPELL bole maine ye kiya tha aur saath hi badi dakshata se un saare invisible astron ko sanchalit bhi kar raha tha..

ab itna kuch mere kar lene se un dono ka hairan hona toh banta hi tha..

wahin in sabke beech VIDEOUS bohot shaanti se khada tha...

aur kuch pal baad jab mere awahan kiye saare astra shashtra uski taraf badhe tab bhi woh shaant hi raha par haan,uske aankhon me halki si movements hui aur aisa hote hi..

TAN..TAN..TAN...TAN...TAN...TAN.....

ek ke baad ek kayi saare astra VIDEOUS ki taraf waise hi invisible mode me prakat hue the jinhone mere awahan kiye hue astron se takrana shuru kar diya tha...

us takrav se sirf awaaz hi nahi aa rahi thi,balki saath hi unke takrane se ek shockwave paida ho raha tha jisse teeno WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ke saath sabhi SAVENTS bhi feel kar paa rahe the...

us wave ko feel kar jahan ek taraf HIDA jaan gayi thi ki VIDEOUS bhi meri hi tarah ek exceptional case hai wahin SAVENTS ke beech khadi MAHI ka mere liye dar aur badh gaya tha..

saath hi VIDEOUS ke prati uska ghussa bhi kaafi badh gaya tha..

uska bas chalta toh abhi nichod deti VIDEOUS ko woh..

par filhal woh kuch kar toh sakti thi nahi isiliye bebas si khadi rahi woh apni jagah par...

khair,kuch der tak yunhi mere aur VIDEOUS ke astra shashtra takrate rahe par phir woh sab nirastra hokar gayab ho gaye aur aisa hote hi..


VIDEOUS-ab meri baari...

PHDDDDDDPHDDDDDD.....


VIDEOUS ke kapde ajeeb tarah se aur behadh tezi se phadphadaye aud aisa hote hi uske kapdo se ek behadh strong energy force nikla jisse mehsoos kar teeno hi WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS ki aankhen badi ho gayi aur un teeno ke mooh se ek saath nikla...


TEENO-VASTRA AGHATAM....


ek behadh hi khatarnaak invisible weapon waar tha ye SPELL joki obviously ATTACH MODE ke tahat SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke under aata tha..

is SPELL ko practice kar use me laana bohot hi mushkil kaam tha par jis tarah se VIDEOUS ke kapde fadfadaye the,usse woh teeno hi samajh gaye ki VIDEOUS ne is SPELL par mastery kar li hai..

par ek dar bhi tha un teeno ko aur woh dua kar rahe the ki unka dar sach me naa badle..

aur woh dar tha VIDEOUS ke bole SPELL ke extreme level ke hone ka..

kyunki agar aisa hua toh uske kapdon me jo fadfadahat hui thi,jaise hi us fadfadahat se release hui hawa dusre kapdon ko touch karti,toh un saare kapdon me bhi halki si fadfadahat hoti jiske agle hi pal unme se bhi invisible astra shashtra bahar nikal jaate jiska matlab tha ki yahan moujud har SAVENT khatre me aa jaata..

teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS aisa naa ho,ye dua kar rahe the par jab saamne VIDEOUS ho toh dua kaam me aane ke chances kam hi hote hain aur yahan bhi ye hua...

VIDEOUS ke kapdon se release hui hawa jaise hi saare SAVENTS se takrayi,un sabke kapdon me bhi halki kampan hui jiske agle hi pal..

SRRRRRR.....

ek ajeeb si awaaz ke saath kuch invisible but nukile shastra saare SAVENTS ke saamne invisible mode me prakat hokar wahin un sabke aage aur piche tezi se ghumne lage jisse mehsoos karte hi..


HIDA-SAVENTS...dont move an inch... aap sabke saamne invisible astra ghum rahe hain..

agar aap aage yaa piche hue toh woh shashtra aapko chot pahuncha sakte hain...

jahan HIDA ki baat sun majority of the SAVENTS dar se gaye aur apni jagah par jadh hokar khade ho gaye wahin ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur BRAWNY ko toh waise in shashtron se koi dar ya khatra nahi tha par phir bhi woh teeno bhi shaanti se apni jagah par khade rahe...

khair,in sabke beech tha mai jiski taraf tezi se bohot saare astra shashtra joki VIDEOUS ke kapdon se nikle the,woh badh chuke the par isse pehle ki woh shashtra mere radar ko chhu bhi paate,maine apna haath aage ki taraf tezi se lehraya aur mere aisa karte hi VIDEOUS ki hi tarah ek energy force mere saamne bhi ban gaya jiske bante hi VIDEOUS ke saare shashtra ek hi jagah par rook gaye..

VIDEOUS ke shashtra roopi waar ko toh rok diya tha maine,par jo dimagi waar joki uska asli waar tha,usse pehchaan nahi paaya mai aur jo woh chaahta tha,woh ho gaya...

hua ye ki light speed se meri aur badh rahe uske adrishya shashtron ko rokne ke liye mujhe apna pura concentration saamne rakhna pada aur isiliye jo energy force meri body se nikla tha,uski wajah se mere force aur VIDEOUS ke shashtron ke beech ek tadga impact hua jiski wajah se sirf ek nano second ke liye hi sahi,par VIDEOUS ke mere upar chhode saare shashtra visible ho gaye...

jahan SAVENTS aur teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS apne aage piche hawa me ghum rahe shahstron par concentrate kar rahe the wahin MAHI hi ek aisi shaksh thi jiska dhyan abhi bhi khudpar nahi balki mujhpar tha aur yahi wajah thi ki woh nano second ke liye dikhne waale shashtra uski aankhon se nahi chhup paaye..

un shashtron ki sankhya aur mere retaliation waale force ki wajah se unme aayi tez kampan ko dekh MAHI hadh se zyada dar gayi thi...

aur tabhi uska dar ek level tak aur tab badh gaya jab usne mere piche bhi kuch halke visible shashtron ko prakat hote aur phir meri taraf badhte dekha aur jab aisa hua toh uski zubaan toh jaise sil hi ho gayi par uske kadam khudbakhud aage badh gaye is baat ko completely bhulte hue ki uske aage aur piche bhi do adrishya shahstra ghum rahe the...

wahin jaise hi VIDEOUS ne mere piche bhi shashtra create kar mujhpar humla kiya toh mujhe is baat ka pata chal chuka tha aur isiliye isse pehle ki mere piche se meri taraf aate shastra mujhe chhu bhi paate,maine apne piche bhi ek energy force create kar diya tha jisse takrate hi woh saare shashtra aage nahi badh paaye par tabhi..


AHHHH....AHHHHHHH....

ek ke baad ek do baar cheekh sunayi di mujhe aur mere saath baaki sabko bhi jisse sun ALFREEN ki cheekh nikal gayi..

MAHI........

ye cheekh MAHI ki thi jo mujhe bachane ke chakkar me khud ko laparwaah kar baithi thi aur phir jab woh aage badhi toh pehle woh shahstra jo uske saamne tha joki ek GADE ke akaar ka solid crusher tha aur tezi se apni jagah par gol ghum raha tha,woh sidhe MAHI ke sir ko hit hua aur aisa hote hi pehli cheekh ke saath MAHI piche ki tarah ghumte hue halki si udi par tabhi MAHI ke piche ka shahstra joki ek bhala tha aur woh bhi ghum hi raha tha,MAHI ke kareeb aate hi us bhaale ka nok MAHI ke peeth ko cheerta hua nikal gaya jisse uske mooh se dusri cheekh nikli aur MAHI side ki taraf dham karkar gir gayi..

first hit joki uske sir par hua tha, uski wajah se behosh hone lagi thi MAHI..is beech apne peeth par gilepan ka ehsaas bhi hua usse jisse feel kar woh samajh gayi ki usse tez bleeding ho rahi hai...

ye feel karte hue woh puri behosh ho chuki thi..

wahin MAHI ki cheekh sun ek saath do chizen hui...


pehli..

ACCHUTA, BRAWNY aur SLUNDER,teeno ne hi turant apne haath hawa me ghumaye aur unke aisa karte hi unke aur baaki saare SAVENTS ke aage hawa me ghum rahe shashtra nishkriya hokar gayab ho gaye..

teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS ne bhi yahi kiya tha..

dusri..

ek baar MAHI ke behosh sharir ko dekh meri nazar saamne khade VIDEOUS par padi jo is waqt mujhe dekhkar muskura raha tha jaise bol raha ho ki uska plan kaamiyab hua..

aur ye dekh mera usse dekhna ghurne me badal gaya aur...


MAI-ye nahi karna chahiye tha tujhe....!!!

SAMPURN KANAM AAGHATAM...


apne dono haathon ko har taraf lehrate hue man me socha maine is SPELL ko aur mere aisa karte hi VIDEOUS jahan khada tha,uske chaaron taraf halki kampan ke saath hazaron ki sankhya me invisible weapons prakat hue..

saare shahstra ek dusre se jude hue the aur un sabne VIDEOUS ko halka sa bhi gap nahi diya tha jisse ki woh ud kar bache yaa phir gayab bhi ho sake..

kyunki gayab hone ke liye bhi ek halki si hi sahi par khuli jagah chahiye jiske through apne body ko invisible karne ke baad nikala jaa sake par woh space VIDEOUS ke paas nahi tha...

aur ye dekh us slight space ko create karne ke liye VIDEOUS ne apna haath aage lehrane ki sochi jisse uske haath se nikle energy se shashtra halke hi sahi hile jisse usse jagah mil sake par woh aisa karta ki tabhi...

maine apna haath aage kiya aur mere aisa karte hi VIDEOUS ka haath aage ki taraf lehrana toh door ki baat hai,hil bhi nahi paaya..

reason...

SPRADHAM VARJITE

MOVEMENT BLOCK...

is SPELL ke through apni jagah par khade khade hi maine VIDEOUS ke har movement ko block kar diya tha..

woh jo bhi karta,ek combat ki hi tarah uske har waar ko yaa harkat ko block kar sakta tha mai...

wahin apne haathon ko yun jakadte dekh VIDEOUS ne meri taraf halke ghusse de dekha aur phir shuru kiya usne lagana apna dum taaki meri grip usse chhut sake par apni aloukik shaktiyon ke bina ye karna uske liye asambhav tha...

par mai abhi jo chaahe kar sakta tha aur isiliye apne wrist ko ghumaya maine aur mere aisa karte hi VIDEOUS ko aisa laga jaise maine uski dono kalayi pakad li hai par isse pehle ki woh mere hatheli ko jhatakne ki koshish karta,

maine usse uski kalayiyon ke through hawa me ucchal diya aur jab aisa hua toh...


DHAABBBB....DHABBBB...DHABBBB.....


VIDEOUS ka sharir hawa me udta hua sidhe saamne ki taraf jahan shashtra ghum rahe the,unse takraya aur aisa hote hi un shashtron ne VIDEOUS ko hit karte hue dusri taraf fek diya jahan uske swagat me dusre shashtra ready hokar ghum rahe the aur isiliye jaise hi VIDEOUS ki body un shashtron ke range me aayi toh un shashtron ne bhi usse hit karte hue dusri taraf ucchal diya aur iske baad VIDEOUS ka body ek badminton ke CORK ki tarah ek disha se dusri disha ki taraf udne laga jisse dekh..


REGIS-RAAZ stop it...VIDEOUS ko chhodo...bhul gaye kya ki ye sirf ek demonstration hai,aur kuch nahi...

HIDA-haan RAAZ..aur MAHI ke saath jo hua,woh uski laparwaahi ki wajah se hua..agar woh apni hi jagah par rehti toh usse kuch bhi nahi hota...


jahan REGIS aur HIDA ki baat sun sabki nazar VIDEOUS aur uski CORK jaisi haalat par padi aur woh dar gaye wahin HIDA ki baat sun maine apna sir uski naasamjhi par halka sa left right hilaya...

waise uski bhi kya galti...!!!HIDA ko kahan maalum tha ki jo hua,ye is VIDEOUS ka hi kiya dhara tha..

khair,HIDA ki baat par maine apna haath ek baar phir se lehraya aur mere aisa karte hi mere create kiye gaye saare shashtra gayab ho gaye aur VIDEOUS neeche gir gaya..

aur jab aisa hua toh...


HIDA-REGIS,aap MAHI ko lekar HEALING section me jaaiye..mai VIDEOUS ko dekhti hun..

HIDA ki baat sun REGIS ne MAHI ko apni godh me uthaya aur aage badh gaye...

saare SAVENTS bhi unke saath ho liye the..HIDA bhi kuch aage tak gayi thi un sabke saath..

wahin is beech meri nazar VIDEOUS par thi jo abhi apni jagah par baitha apne upari kapdo ko jhaadte hue mujhe hi dekh raha tha..

usse kuch physical cut nahi aaya tha..aata bhi kaise..??saale ne hazaron talented WICKED SAVENTS ka AURA jo lapeta hua tha..

aur isiliye uske body ko pierce karna aam weapons ke bas ki baat nahi thi...

khair mujhe apni taraf dekhta dekh uske face par ek smile aa gayi aur usne mujh dekhte hue ek wink kiya...

wahin ek aur pal VIDEOUS ko dekh mai bhi THE GREAT HALL se bahar ki taraf nikal gaya..

is beech HIDA bhi VIDEOUS ke paas pahunch chuki thi aur jab usne VIDEOUS ko apne kapde jhaadte hue araam se khade hue dekha toh..


HIDA-thank god tumhe kuch nahi hua VIDEOUS...

VIDEOUS-VIDEOUS ko kuch ho sakta bhi nahi WHIZZ..aap MAHI ko dekhiye..make sure she lives...

HIDA-woh theek ho jaayegi..cut gehra zaroor hai but it can be taken care of...so,you dont worry...she will live..

VIDEOUS-she has to...aisi maut me maza kahan...????zindagi ki shuruat jab kisike saath hui hai,toh maut bhi uske saath hi honi chahiye...

HIDA-matlab..!!!

VIDEOUS-aa jaayega samajh..sahi waqt toh aane dijiye...


ye bol VIDEOUS ruka nahi,bahar nikal gaya wahin HIDA usse jaate dekhti rahi aur uski baaton ke matlab ko samajhne ki koshish karti rahi par jab uske palle kuch nahi pada toh..

HIDA-kabhi kabhi ye bhi mujhe RAAZ ka xerox hi lagta hai..kab kya bolta hai,pata hi nahi chalta...!!!






PLACE-HEALING ROOM



I WILL TAKE IT FROM HERE....


MAHI,ek bed par leti hui thi aur REGIS kuch jadibutiyon ka ras mix kar hi rahe the ki tabhi unke piche se aayi thi ye awaaz jisse sun jaise hi woh piche palte toh apne saamne khade sakshiyat ko dekh halka hadbada gaye..

unke saamne SOVES SHAILA khadi thi..ab SHAILA toh PHASE 2 kya PHASE 3 ke WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS se bhi personally khud jaakar nahi milti thi,toh aise me unhe apne saamne dekhkar REGIS ka hadbadana toh laazmi hi tha..

khair,ab jab khud SHAILA MAHI ka checkup kar usse completely heal karne waali thi,ye janane ke baad REGIS ka wahan rookne ka koi matlab hi nahi tha...

aur isiliye..


REGIS-i will take your leave than SOVES...


apni baat keh sir jhukaaye hue hi REGIS healing room se bahar nikal gaye aur unke baahar nikal hi ACCHUTA,MABEL, ALFREEN SLUNDER aur BRAWNY jo wahin bahar hi khade MAHI ka theek hone ka wait kar rahe the, woh sab REGIS ke saamne aa gaye aur...


ALFREEN-how is MAHI WHIZZDER..??

MABEL-woh theek oh ho jaayegi naa..!!

SLUNDER-is he awake now...!!!

REGIS-relax SAVENTS.. sirf physical cut hua hai uski body me...aur sir par jo hit hua hai MAHI ke,jisse woh behosh ho gayi thi,usme bhi koi darne waali baat nahi thi...

filhal toh behosh hi hai woh but bohot jald usse hosh bhi aa jaayega aur uske cuts bhi pure heal ho jaayenge...

waise bhi,aap sabne SOVES SHAILA ko andar jaate dekha hoga,toh aise me agar kuch serious bhi hua hota,tab bhi MAHI ko theek ho jaana tha..

haan,usse hosh me aane ke liye kamsekam 2 ghanta toh lagega hi,toh agar aap sab chaahen toh apne apne ABODES jaa sakte hain..

2 ghante baad aa jaaiyega yaa phir MAHI se uske ABODE me hi mil lijiyega...

ALREEEN-no WHIZZDER,we will wait here.. hum usse saath lekar hi jaayenge..


ALFREEN ki baat par smile karte hue aage badh gaye REGIS aur unke jaate hi..


MABEL-ye sab us VIDEOUS ki wajah se hua hai..mai chhodungi nahi usse...

ACCHUTA-aisa sochna bhi mat..RAAZ ke hum strictly kaha tha ki VIDEOUS se hume khud involve nahi hona hai...

aur tum jaanti ho ki RAAZ kabhi kuch bhi yunhi nahi kehta isiliye koi usse kuch nahi kahega..

SLUNDER-waise bhi , WHIZZ HIDA ne kaha tha naa ki MAHI apni galti ki wajah se behosh hui hai.. isiliye chhodo is baat ko...


SLUNDER ki baat par koi kuch kehta ki tabhi un sabko mai saamne se aata dikha jiske baad unke discussion ka full stop lag gaya..

wahin jab mai unsabse guzarkar HEALING ROOM ke door ko kholne ko hua toh..


SLUNDER-RAAZ...andar SOVES SHAILA hai..

MAI-toh..


ye bol maine door khola aur andar chala gaya jisse dekh jahan ek taraf SLUNDER, ACCHUTA aur BRAWNY has diye wahin ALFREEN aur MABEL ka mooh ban gaya aur..


ALFREEN-ye SOVES ko bhi kuch nahi samajhta kya..???

ACCHUTA-RAAZ hawa ki tarah hai ALFREEN...jagah dekhkar nahi behti..apne hisaab se chalti hai...




INSIDE HEALING ROOM:-



SHAILA-kya dekh rahe ho RAAZ...!!???

MAI-behoshi me utni bewakuf lagti nahi hai jitni asal me hai...


MAHI ke behosh chehre ko dekhkar kahi ye baat maine jispar pehle toh SHAILA muskurayi aur phir....


SHAILA-waise aaj ke iski bewakufi ka reason toh tum the RAAZ....

apna woh RAAZ jo ab tak sirf tum tak tha,tumne mere through isse disclose karwa diya jiska natija aaj ki iski harkat hai...


SHAILA ki baat sun maine kuch kaha nahi jispar..


SHAILA-ek baat puchun..??aakhir kyun...???kya zaroorat thi tumhe apne RAAZ ko isse share karne ki...??

MAI-do wajah hain,ek ka toh pata hi hai aapko...

SHAILA-haan,par us wajah ke liye isse apni mout ke baare me batane ki kya zaroorat padh gayi tumhe...???

woh wajah toh waise bhi puri hogi aur kaise hogi,iske liye tumhe sir khapaane ki zaroorat hai hi nahi..

MAI-hmm...par meri kismat me mout hai,ye jaankar iski nazar har waqt mujhpar rahegi jisse us wajah ke anjaam tak pahunchne me asaani hogi...

SHAILA-aur dusri wajah...!!!

MAI-ek baat bataiye,aur sidhe sidhe bataiye,kya mera khatm hona kisi bhi tarah tal sakta hai...???


mere is sawal par kuch pal dekha SHAILA ne mujhe aur phir..

SHAILA-nahi...tumhari aur VIDEOUS ki ladhayi me yaa toh tum khatm ho jaaoge,aur agar kisi tarah tumne VIDEOUS ko khatm kar bhi diya toh uski keemat tumhari puri urja hogi...

aur kyunki tum aur VIDEOUS ek hi urja se bane ho, isiliye khatm hote hote bhi VIDEOUS ki urja tumhari urja ko bhi khudme sokh kar tumhaare har swaroop ko nigal jaayegi....

MAI-woh ant jo nishtit hai,uske baare me usse kyun chuppaya jaaye jo meri hi tarah is kahani ka mukhya kendra hai..

MAHI ke aankhon me mere liye junoon har guzarte din ke saath badhta chala jaa raha hai..

kohish karkar dekh li maine,par iske junoon ko mera rukhapan rok nahi paa raha tha..

pa mera bhavishaya jaan shayad ye khud ko mere bina soch sakegi...

haan,aaj ka iska action zaroor negetive tha par saath hi aisa hona normal bhi tha..

aag jab nayi nayi jalti hai toh uski law hadh se zyada fadfadati hai par phir woh khudko vatavaran ke anukul kar hi leti hai..

MAHI ke dil me bhi abhi nayi nayi aag lagi hai..jab ye sach ko accept kar legi,shaant ho jaayegi...


ye bol mai palat kar jaane laga par tabhi SHAILA ki awaaz aur baat ko sun mere kadam rook gaye...


SHAILA-ek baat ka jawab doge..sidhe sidhe..do u also have feelings for MAHI...???do you love her...???

MAI-jis pyar ki tum baat kar rahi ho,woh insaanso aur living creatures ke liye hoti hai..

aur mai ek robot hun SHAILA...jiski uttpatti ka sirf ek uddeshya hai...VIDEOUS ka khaatma..

ek yahi folder stored hai mere system me....aur kuch nahi...


ye bol mai rooka nahi aur room se bahar nikal gaya..

wahin meri baat sun mere jaane ke baad ek lambi aur thandi saans chhodi SHAILA ne aur....


SHAILA-yahin toh galat ho tum RAAZ....but taklif ye hai ki tumhe khud apne galat hone ka andaza tak nahi....par kar bhi kya sakte hain...????

woh waqt bohot nazdik hai jab tumhe apne robot hone ki galatfehmi ke baare me pata chalega....

...WAQT...!!!



aakhir,kisne socha tha ki waqt ek aisa khel RACHEGA....

sahi ho yaa galat,har taraf ek kohraam MACHEHGA....

woh waqt nazdik hai jab tu hoga apne wajood se rubaroo,aur tab,

mujhe dar hai ki ye sansaar VIDEOUS se nahi,tujhse kaise BACHEGA....!!!!!














AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....














AAPKA APNA V....J.....
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF VIDEOUS AUR RAAZ EK BAAR PHIRSE EK DEMONSTRATION ME AAMNE SAAMNE AATE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF US DEMONSTRATION KE BEECH MAHI INJURED HO JAATI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-117


"A FUTURE GLIMPSE".....



PLANET-GALEN


PLACE-ERRAPEL'S COTTAGE





BHAADDDD..........


main door kuch zyada hi zor se khula aur uske beech se HORUS lambi lambi saansein leta hua hall me enter hua jahan is waqt ERRAPEL thik waise hi nirjeev sa behosh pade RAAZ ka haath pakde baithi hui thi..

HORUS jabse gaye the,tabse ERRAPEL ki aankhen ro rokar laal si ho gayi thi,chehre par dar aur dard, dono hi bhaav ek saath tairte aa rahe the,par ab apne BABA ko wapas apne saamne dekh itni der me pehli baar naa sirf usne chain ki saans li balki uske face me chhaye woh dar aur dard ke bhaav jaise ek jhatke me chhat se gaye the aur ab unki jagah khushi ne le li thi...

aur ussi khushi ko apne alfaazon me darshate hue..


ERRAPEL-aap aa gaye baba...mera dil kehta tha ki chaahe kuch bhi ho jaaye,aap zaroor wapas lout aayenge..


apni beti ki baat par muskurate hue
HORUS aage badhe aur thik ERRAPEL ke paas pahunch unhone apne haath aage kar diye jahan is waqt kuch peeli colour ki pattiyan thi jinhe dekh ERRAPEL samajh gayi ki yahi woh COGNIZANT LEAF hai jinhe lene uske baba gaye hue the...

ek pal un leafs ko dekh ERRAPEL ne unhe apne baba ke haath se le liya aur tabhi....


AHHHH....HAMMM....


ek dard bhari karah ke saath HORUS apne ghutno par aa gaye jisse dekh ERRAPEL hadbada bhi gayi aur dar bhi...

par woh kuch keh paati ki tabhi kuch aisa hua ki uski aankhen dar,dard aur khouf ki wajah se aur badi ho gayi...

HORUS ke sharir ka pura kapda khoon se naha sa gaya...

aisa lag raha tha maano HORUS ke body pores phat se gaye hain aur unse khoon ris raha ho...

ye dekh darte hue ERRAPEL apne baba ko chhune ko hui par tabhi..


HORUS-nahi beta...mujhe chhuna mat..verna meri jaisi haalat teri bhi ho jaayegi...

dard se bhari awaaz me ye baatein kisi tarah bol HORUS ne apne upari vastron ko jo khoon ke risne ki wajah se laal hone ke saath hi kamzor bhi ho gaye the,unhe pakad kar halka sa kheencha aur unke aisa karte hi chrrr ki awaaz ke saath woh kapda jo kisi kurte ki tarah tha par sweater ki tarah mota,wo faththe hue unke sharir se alag ho gaya aur jab aisa hua toh ERRAPEL ki aankhen badi ho gayi...

reason..

is waqt HORUS ke chest aur shoulder areas me bade bade keede lage hue the jo waise toh peele the par is waqt HORUS ke khoon se laal ho gaye the...

aur saath hi chest aur shoulders ke jis jis bhaag me woh keede chipke hue the,wahan se halka halka dhuan bhi nikal raha tha..

ye sab dekh dimag hi boukhla gaya tha ERRAPEL ka aur...


ERRAPEL-ye sab kya hai baba...???ye kaise kide hain...??inhe nikaliye naa...


ye bol ERRAPEL ne apna haath apne baba ke chest ki taraf badhaya par tabhi apni puri takat laga jo waise kam hi bachi thi, HORUS thoda piche hue aur...


HORUS-nahi ERRAPEL...inhe chhune ki galti kabhi mat karna..khaas kar tab jab tumne pehle hi COGNIZANT leaf ko chuu liya hai...

in keedo ka naam COGNIZANT WORMS hai..ye wahi shraap hain jo COGNIZANT LEAF ko todne waale ko lagte hain....

COGNIZANT LEAF ko chhune aur haasil karne ka mool hain ye keede jo ab mujhe lag chuke hain jo meri mout ke baad hi ab mujhse alag honge..

aur waise bhi,ye jo dhuan dekh rahi ho,ye inka zeher hai jo ab mere saare sharir me fail chuka hai,mai ab bas chand saanson ka hi mehmaan hun meri bacchi..

aakhri shabd kehte hue neeche zamin par gir chuke the HORUS....

unke sharir ki kampan unka dard aur taklif saaf bayan kar rahi thi aur us dard se hone waali aatmik taklif ko khudme samete hue baithkar ro rahi thi ERRAPEL..

jo hua hai,woh hona hi tha,ye pata tha usse par apne baba ko apni aankhon ke saamne marta hua dekh taklif toh honi hi thi usse...

khair,apni beti ko rota dekh..


HORUS-apni niyati se koi nahi bhaag sakta beti...aur meri haalat par rone ke bajaye tumhe toh garv hona chahiye ki tumhare baba ko saunpa daayitv unhone pura kiya...

ERRAPEL-garv aur dard kabhi kabhi ek saath dil me jagah bana lete hai baba....har mousam me hone waala badlav pehle hi maalum hota hai par jab woh mausam sach me aata hai aur us badlaw ko sharir chhuta hai,toh us kriya ki pratikriya hoti hi hai...


apni beti ki baat sun us beinteha dard ke beech bhi halka sa muskura uthe HORUS aur..


HORUS-waqt kam bacha hai ERRAPEL..meri saasein band hone se pehle agar in COGNIZANT LEAFS ko ras me badal RAAZ ko nahi pilaya tumne,toh mere sharir me lipte hue worms us leaf ki sugandh sungh tum par chhad jaayenge aur inse bacha nahi jaa sakta...

isiliye jaldi karo.. waise bhi antim baar apni aankhon ko band karne se pehle ek baar mai inhe hosh me dekhna chahta hun....

woh tumhare saamne pade flask ko sidha karo aur ek ek kar in saare leafs ko uske upar rakh ragdo...ye leafs ras me badalkar us flask me ikkatha jo jaayenge...

aankhen abhi bhi num thi ERRAPEL ki par aise waqt me bhi jab uske baba apni amtim saans le rahe the,apne kartavya se mooh nahi mod sakti thi woh..

aur isiliye flask ko jo uske side me hi rakha hua tha,apne saamne rakh ek ek kar un COGNIZANT LEAFS ko ragadne lagi ERRAPEL....

ek haath me RAAZ ka haath jisse uske hosh me aane tak usse thaame rakhna tha, dusre haath me COGNIZANT LEAF jisse ragad apne kartavya ko nibhana tha, aur aankhon me apne baba ko unki maut ke darwaze par pahunchte dekhna tha,ek saath in teen alag alag situations ko ek saath handle kar rahi thi ERRAPEL...

wahin ab HORUS ki haalat kaafi kharab ho chuki thi..kisi bhi waqt unki saanson ki dor rook sakti thi par aise waqt me bhi unke face par ek sukoon tha..

aur ussi sukoon ke saath ERRAPEL ko dekhte hue..


HORUS-meri life me aane ke liye thanks beti...tune meri zindagi aur aur ab mout ko bhi saarthak banaya hai...


apne baba ki baat chupchaap aansu bahate hue suni ERRAPEL ne aur is beech usne saare leafs ko ras me badal flask me daal diya tha aur aisa hote hi usne turant us flask ko uthaya aur RAAZ ke dono gaalon ko pakad usse pichkaya jisse uska mooh halka sa khul gaya aur aisa hote hi ERRAPEL ne us flask ko uske mooh me sata dheere dheere ulta diya..

pura COGNIZANT LEAFS ke ras ko RAAZ ke mooh me udelne ke baad ERRAPEL usse alag hui aur itne der me pehli baar usne RAAZ ke haath ko chhoda aur apne baba ke paas pahunch kar khadi ho gayi..

wahin apni mout ke antim padhav par pahunchne ke baad bhi is waqt HORUS ke chehre par excitement saaf dikhne lagi thi...

unka dil jo ab tak khoon ke adhik beh jaane se kaafi dheere dheere beat kar raha tha,uski speed bhi achanak badh gayi thi...

is beech jaise hi RAAZ ke mooh se hota hua woh COGNIZANT LEAFS ka ras uske pure sharir aur mainly uske soul me pahuncha toh wahan ek vibration honi shuru hui...

ab tak andhere me dooba uske soul me achanak ek halki si roshni ne janm liya jo har guzarte second ke saath badhti chali gayi aur phir jaise hi woh roshni puri tarah se us ghar me joki RAAZ ka SOUL tha,bhar gayi toh...

ek jhatke me khuli uski aankhen aur woh uthkar baith gaya..

pathrayi aakhon se kuch pal sunya ko ghurne ke baad jaise achanak se dimag me jhanaka hua RAAZ ka aur woh apne present me wapas aaya..

present me wapas aate hi usne dekha ki woh abhi ek hall jaise kamre me hai....

par ye drishya yaa phir ye kahun ki ye hall uske liye anjana tha..

infact abhi toh RAAZ ke liye sabkuch hi anjaana sa tha..

aankhon me sawal liye RAAZ ka sir us taraf ghuma jahan neeche khun se latpath HORUS pade hue the aur unke hi paas ek khubsoorat si ladki khadi thi..

woh dono mujhe hi dekh rahe the jispar..


RAAZ-kaun hain aap dono...aur.........

MAI.... KAUN.....HUN.....!!!!!!...







PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSENS




3 MONTHS LATER:-




AHHHHH...AHHHHH...AHHHH...AHHHHH....AHHHHH....AHHHH........


kaale labadon se dhake teen shaksh joki aur koi nahi balki THE THREE DEVOTEES the,un sabne ek ke baad ek alag alag jagahon par jaakar apne haathon ko ghumaya aur unke aisa karte hi kuch dard bhari cheekhen fizaaon me gunji aur phir mahoul pehle ki tarah completely shaant ho gaya....




NEXT DAY:-


PLACE-THE GREAT HALL





AAJ AAP SABKO YAHAN EK DUKHAD SUCHNA DENE AUR EK ANOUNCEMENT KARNE KE LIYE BULAYA GAYA HAI...


stage par aakar kahi thi ye baat AKSHAANT ne jisse sun saare SAVENTS shocked ho gaye the...

waise ek aur baat bhi thi jiski wajah se sabhi SAVENTS pehle hi hairan the aur woh ye ki aaj unke pure batch as in dono catagories ko milakar lagbhag 75 percent SAVENTS unke beech moujud nahi the...

PHASE 2 ki strength aaj sirf 25 percent thi..aur usme bhi STELLARS ke hi aadhe SAVENTS wahan moujud the,GROOMERS me toh sirf 2 hi SAVENTS dikh rahe the,baaki saare gayab the aur aisa pehle kabhi hua nahi tha toh aise me sabka hairan hona toh laazmi hi tha...

khair, AKSHAANT ki baat ko aage badhate hue...


MOKALSAR-jaisa ki aap sab dekh rahe hain ki aaj aapke PHASE ki strength aadhe se bhi kam hai..

aur ye koi sanjog nahi hai..

jo SAVENTS abhi yahan moujud nahi hain,woh saare SAVENTS kal raat se hi behosh ho chuke hain...


MOKALSAR ki baat sun bohot zyada shocked ho gaye the saare SAVENTS...

MOKALSAR ki baat par kaise react karen,ye bhi samajh me nahi aa raha tha kisiko...!!!

wahin apni baat ko jaari rakhte hue...


MOKALSAR-aur aisa sirf aapke PHASE ke saath hi nahi,balki PHASE 3 ke saath bhi hua hai....

PHASE 3 ke saare MORALS apni chetna kho chuke hain...


ye ek naya bomb tha jo phoda tha MOKALSAR ne jisse sun SAVENTS ka brain fuse hi hone laga tha..


ALFREEN-guyzz,suna tumne,MORALS behosh ho gaye par WICKEDS nahi...

kahin ye ab unki hi toh karastani nahi hai...!!!

SLUNDER-kuch bhi bolti hai yaar..maana WICKEDS me kaafi strong SAVENTS hain,par hain toh woh sab bhi SAVENTS hi...

unme naa toh itna hunar hai aur nahi itni audacity ki aisa kuch kar paayen..


SLUNDER ki baat par koi kuch kehta ki tabhi..


SHAILA-wo saare SAVENTS joki kal raat se behosh hain,woh sab filhal HEALING ROOM me shift kiye jaa chuke hain...

unki behoshi ki jaanch bhi ho chuki hai...jaanch me ye pata chala hai ki un sabke brain me ek DHUAN faila hua hai jisne un sabke senses ko dull kar diya hai..

woh dhuan ek bohot hi strong energy se bana hai...dukh ki baat ye hai ki us dhuen ko SAVENTS ke brain se extract nahi kiya jaa sakta kyunki woh dhuan un sabke brain cells se connect ho chuka hai aur jab tak woh dhuan un sabke brain se nikal nahi jaata,tab tak woh sab wapas hosh me nahi aa sakte...

par ek achi baat bhi hai...darasal woh dhuan dheere dheere hi sahi par khud hi gayab hote chala jaa raha hai..

par kyunki uske gayab hone ki raftar bohot zyada kam hai, isiliye uski maatra aur gayab hone ki speed ko dhyan me rakhte hue hamara anumaan hai ki usse SAVENTS ke brain se gayab hone me kareeb 3 mahine lag jayenge...

aur aisa hote hi SAVENTS wapas hosh me aa jaayenge....

par kyunki ye pura procedure teen mahine lamba hai isiliye humne ek faisla kiya hai...

jaisa ki aap sab jaante hain ki filhal aap sabke is PHASE ka half term khatm ho chuka hai...

jaisa ki har term me hota aaya hai,mid term ke baad PHASE 2 ke sabhi SAVENTS kisi naye tourist planet me ek lambe tour ke liye jaate hain jahan un sabko bramhaand se judi aur bhi kayi nayi baatein aur chizen sikhne ko milti hai...

par kal raat hue unfortunate incident ki wajah se is tour ko cancel kar diya gaya hai..

itna hi nahi,kyunki ab behosh hue SAVENTS jinki sankhya aapke pure batch ki 75 percent se bhi zyada hai,woh sab ab sidhe 3 mahine ke baad hi hosh waale hain aur saath hi kyunki hume ye nahi pata ki itne lambe waqt ke baad aur us dhuen ke impact ki wajah se hosh me aane ke baad kya woh sab SAVENTS classes resume karne ki condition me honge bhi ki nahi, isiliye humne tay ki kiya hai ki behosh hue saare SAVENTS ke hosh me aate hi PHASE 2 ke is saal ke tenure ko khatm kar diya jaayega..

un sabke hosh me aane aur completely fit hone ke baad aap sabke PHASE 3 ke liye selections shuru kar diye jaayenge..

worth ke according aap sabko WICKEDS aur MORALS me select kiya jaayega...

tab tak ke liye PHASE 2 officially off kiya jaata hai...haan,agar aap sab chaahen toh ab tak jo bhi aapne sikha hai,usse yahan aakar akele yaa phir ek dusre ke saath practice kar sakte hain...

aapke WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS bhi aapke request par unofficially aap sabki help kar sakte hain...

but officially, from now onwards PHASE 2 is closed....

you all can leave now....


teeno SOVEREIGN'S ki anouncement sunkar saare moujud SAVENTS kuch zyada hi hairan the..

haan,ye sach tha ki ab tak ke unke is half term duration me un sabne apne is PHASE ke lagbhag 75 percent se zyada learning ko practice kar liya tha aur baaki ka bacha bhaag bhi theoretically un sabko pata tha jisse khudse bhi practice kar woh sab practically kaam me laana sikh sakte the but phir bhi institution me officially kuch sikhna aur unofficially khudse sikhna,in dono hi tarikon me kaafi fark hota hai...

par sabse zyada shock sabko apne PHASEMATES ki haalat ko jaankar hua tha..

agle teen mahine woh sab unconscious hi rehne waale the,aur ye koi choti baat nahi thi...

aisa kya hua hoga un sabke saath,woh dhuan kya hai jo un saare behosh pade SAVENTS ke dimag me ghusa hua hai,ye saare sawal un sabke man me ghum rahe the par jawab naa toh unke paas abhi tha aur naahi near future me unhe milne waala tha..

par in sabke beech mai ye saari baatein sunkar bhi bilkul shaant tha..bahar se bhi aur andar se bhi...

khair, anouncement ho chuki jiske baad yun achanak ghati is ajeeb ghatna ke baare me sochte hue sabhi SAVENTS mude aur ek dusre se baat karte hue jaane lage aur tabhi....


SHAILA-VIDEOUS...one moment...


SHAILA ki baat sun VIDEOUS joki baaki sabhi SAVENTS ke saath mudkar jaa raha tha,jab uske kaano me SHAILA ki ye awaaz padi toh uske face par ek smile aa gayi aur woh wapas moodkar teeno SOVEREIGN'S ke paas pahunch gaya....


SHAILA-puch sakti hun ki ye sab kyun...???mind divert toh waise bhi tumhare teeno DEVOTEES hameshaa SAVENTS ka karte hi hain phir is baar SAVENTS ko yun direct BLACK ENERGY ki chapet me daalne ke piche kya reason hai....???

VIDEOUS-common SHAILA..itne bhi naasamajh nahi hain aap...jis wajah ke liye is CHOSENS naam ke maidan me maine khel racha tha,uska antim padhav aane hi waala hai..

toh agle padhav ki taiyaari bhi toh zaroori hai...

bramhaand ke har jeeven deyi grah par base har manushya ka hriday parivartan ka waqt sameep hai,toh aise me shuruat ki neev CHOSENS se hi toh hogi....

jeetne bhi SAVENTS behosh hue hain,ye woh SAVENTS hain jinki pratibha baakiyon se zyada hai par afsos manupalation process ke baad bhi un murkhon ne acchayi ka rasta nahi chhoda...

par jo dhuan un sabke mastishk me ghar kar chuka hai,woh un sabke is lambi behoshi ke dauran un sabka ATTITUDE puri tarah change kar dega...

aur waise bhi,woh samay atyant nazdik hai jab se har manushya chaahe woh aam ho ya SAVENT ki tarah khaas,woh do bhaago me batenge..

pehle bhaag me woh honge jo VIDEOUS ke aur kaali shaktiyon ke aage saharsh jhukenge aur dusre bhaag me honge woh bewakuf log jo kaali shaktiyon ko apna sirtaaj maanane se mana karenge,aur aise logon ka faisla do tariko se hoga.

pehle tarike me ye log KAALI SHAKTIYON ke upasakon ke gulaam bankar jiyenge aur dusre tarike me aayenge woh jo aisa karne se mana karenge,unhe badi khushi ke saath mout ki neend me sula diya jaayega...

AKSHAANT-is institution ke sabse kaabil SAVENTS woh hain jo thodi der pehle tumhare aas paas khade the..

par woh sab toh behosh nahi hue...kya hum ye samjhe ki tumhare teeno DEVOTEES aur khud tum bhi chand WHITE ENERGY ke dhaarakon ko badalne yaa behosh karne me asamarth ho...!!!

VIDEOUS-hahaha...meri ye ungliyan dekh rahe ho...iske halke jhatakne bhar se raakh me badal jaayenge tumhare woh WHITE ENERGY ke dhaarak...

baat bas itni si hai ki kyunki un sabko khaas banakar bheja hai mere dono FATHERS ne...

toh aise me unka anjaam bhi toh khaas hi hoga naa...

isiliye filhal ke liye unhe baksh diya hai maine...

par tumhe un sabki fikr karne ki zaroorat nahi hai..

fikr tum apni karo aur apne saath apne LORDS ki jinpar bharosa karte hain THE ALMIGHTY...

par RAAZ ke anth ke saath woh bharosa,woh vishwash tootne waala hai...

woh waqt bohot nazdik hai jab.....




KHUDA se nahi balki VIDEOUS se pura BRAMHAAND DAREGA....

is baar paap ka nahi balki punya ka ghada BHAREGA....

ek naya daur shuru hone ke kagaar par hai.....

RAAZ ke anth ke saath swarg aur har dharti par VIDEOUS raj KAREGA....















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....
















AAPKA APNA V....J...
Awesome fantastic Mindblowing update
 

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guyz,ye CHAPTER 2 final dark mega update ka size kuch zyada hi hone waala hai..

isiliye mai isse 2 parts me divide kar raha hun..

first aaj aa jayega aur second parso...
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF TEENO SOVES PHASE 2 KO OFFICIALLY OFF DECLARE KARTE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF VIDEOUS TEENO SOVES KO BATATA HAI KI RAAZ KE ANTH AUR USKE RAJ KA WAQT AA CHUKA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-118



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-BRAWNY'S ABODE





DAD......YE SAB KYA...!!! KISNE KIYA YE HAAL AAPKA....!!!


apne ABODE me tezi se jaise hi ghussa BRAWNY,toh apne pitah ko hall me hi neeche zamin par gira paaya..

is waqt unke sir aur honthon se halka halka khun ris raha tha aur woh dard se karah rahe the....

aur yahi sab dekh BRAWNY ko hairani aur ghussa, dono ek saath aaya tha..

waise uske man ke bhaav abhi abhi hi nahi jaage the..

balki kuch der pehle jab woh ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke ABODE ki taraf jaa raha tha,tab achanak hi uski danger sensing ability joki khaas kar us waqt jab koi apna musibat me ho,toh kuch zyada hi trigger ho jaati hai,us ability ne BRAWNY ke dimag me ek alarm bheja tha jiski wajah se woh turant wapas apne ABODE lout aaya tha aur yahan aate hi usse apne dimag me baje alarm ka reason samajh me aa gaya tha..

khair,sawal puchte puchte hi sahara dekar uthaya BRAWNY ne apne pitah ko jispar..


SHALTON-beta, apni mom ko bachao..woh RAAZ mujhe maarkar tumhari mom ko zabardasti wahan room lekar gaya hai...


apne pitah ki baat sun aakhon me awishwas ke samandar ko liye BRAWNY turant ghuma aur tezi se apne mom dad ke bedroom ki taraf joki is waqt band tha,badha aur door ke paas pahunch...


BHADAAKKKKHHH...

ek laath me hi woh darwaza toot gaya tha jiske baad BRAWNY turant andar gaya aur aisa kar jab uski aankhen bed par padi toh uske face par hairani,ghussa,dard sab ek saath dikhne laga tha...


BRAWNY-RAAZ..........


cheekh pada BRAWNY RAAZ ka naam lekar joki is waqt saamne bed par BRAWNY ki mom ke upar chaddha hua tha...

NAOMI ke pure sharir me is waqt kapde ke naam par ek resha bhi nahi tha aur RAAZ lagatar uske sharir se khele jaa raha tha aur issi drishya ko awishwas bhari aakhon se dekhne ke baad cheekh utha tha BRAWNY..

wahin BRAWNY ki awaaz ko sun RAAZ ne bade itminaan se palat kar uski taraf dekha aur BRAWNY ko dekh woh ghabraya ya embarrass nahi hua balki uske face par ek smile naach uthi...

woh bade araam ke saath bed se niche utra aur saath hi NAOMI ka haath pakad usse bhi apne baaju me sataye khada hokar haste hue BRAWNY ko dekhne laga..

par apni mom ko nude kaise dekh sakta tha BRAWNY aur isiliye uski aankhe neeche ho gayi thi...

aur in sabke beech thi NAOMI jiska ab tak ro ro kar bura haal ho chuka tha aur ab apne bete ke saamne yun nude rehkar khada hona,usse pal pal maar raha tha...

aur apni mom ki haalat aur feelings,dono se hi waakif tha BRAWNY aur isiliye.....


BRAWNY-meri mom ka haath chhod RAAZ...teri himmat kaise hui meri mom ke baare me galat sochne ki bhi...

MAI-teri ye nayi zindagi jisse tu looser se champion ban gaya,ye zindagi tujhe meri wajah se mili hai....

dekha jaaye toh ek tarah se woh tera baap hun mai jisne tujhe behtar banaya hai...

ab agar mai tera baap hun toh ye NAOMI meri biwi hui naa..haan second hand hain,par itna toh adjust kar hi sakta hun mai...


RAAZ ki baat sun BRAWNY ka dimag
pura out ho chuka tha par itna sab hone ke baad bhi usse situation par thoda doubt ho raha tha aur isiliye usne bina kuch kahe chupchaap apne SENSE AURA ko release kar diya taaki woh pehchaan sake ki saamne khada shaksh kya wakayi RAAZ hai yaa phir koi imposter....

wahin jab kuch seconds baad BRAWNY ke SENSE AURA ne saamne khade RAAZ ko sense kiya toh BRAWNY ki hairani aur taklif ka thikana naa raha...

saamne khade shaksh ki authenticity saabit ho chuki thi aur isiliye....

BRAWNY ke haathon me current rays joki mass destruction jitne strong the, dikhne lage aur phir..

SWWOOHHHH...

BRAWNY ne apna woh haath jinme woh current rays bane hue the, RAAZ ki taraf nishana kar chhod diya jisse badi asaani se apna haath aage karte hue RAAZ ne absorb kar liya...

par jab woh aisa kar raha tha,toh uske body se halki heat release hui...

waise toh ye heat kaafi kam thi,par uske saath lag kar khadi hui NAOMI ke liye kuch zyada hi thi isiliye jaise hi RAAZ ke through woh heat NAOMI ke nange sharir ko touch hua,ek cheekh ke saath NAOMI behosh ho gayi aur aisa hote dekh RAAZ ne bhi uski body ko chhod diya aur woh baaju me rakhe bed par gir padi..

aur ye dekh...


BRAWNY-MOM.....


aise chillata hua BRAWNY aage badha aur sabse pehle usne ek chaadar mom ke body par lapeti aur unhe examine karne laga..

par ye jaan ki NAOMI sirf behosh thi,woh thoda relax hua par tabhi uske kandhe par ek haath aakar laga joki RAAZ ka tha aur..


MAI-kya yaar...abhi tak maine kuch kiya bhi nahi tha aur tune apni maa ko behosh kar diya...

ab jab ye uthegi,tab bhi kaafi time tak weak rahegi...

aise me isse ragadane me maza nahi aayega..koi baat nahi, there's always a next time....

jo aaj nahi hua, agli baar ho jaayega..waise bhi,mujhe rok sake,aisa hai hi kaun....!!!


jab RAAZ baat kar raha tha,us waqt BRAWNY ka right hand joki neeche tha,usme dheere dheere ek sword prakat ho raha tha,aur jaise hi RAAZ ki baat khatm hui toh..


SWOOOOBBBB...

uske haath ko apne kandhe se jhatatkte hue tezi se dusre haath me pakde sword ko RAAZ ke gale ka aim lekar ghuamaya BRAWNY ne par woh waar khaali jaate hue aar paar ho gaya...

reason....

RAAZ dhuen me badal gayab ho chuka tha....

aur ye dekh ek baar apni mom ko joki behosh padi hui thi,unhe dekh apni aankhon me utre khoon numa aanuson ko saaf karte hue...


AHHHHHHH.....

zor se cheekha BRAWNY aur...


BRAWNY-mai tujhe zinda nahi chhodunga RAAZ...I AM GONNA KILL YOU....





PLACE-REGIS ABODE





AHHHH...AHHHHH......AHHHHHH....

YE ACHANAK SHURU HUI TAANKA JHAANKI AUR MOHOBBAT KE KEEDE KO AISE ACHANAK SE HI KHATM BHI KAR DIJIYE WHIZZDER,AAPKE LIYE ACHA HI HOGA...


BRAWNY ke powers activation process me apne AURA ko usse jod kar jo madad ki thi HIDA ne uski,uski wajah se ek BRAWNY ki danger sensing ability ka ek chota sa bhaag usme bhi transfer ho gaya tha..

aur woh bhaag sidhe jaakar HIDA ke REFINER POWERS se attach ho gaya tha jiski wajah se jo bhi HIDA ke dil ke sabse nazdik hoga,usse HIDA har waqt sense kar sakti thi..

yahi wajah thi ki aaj jab HIDA apne ABODE me baithi thi,tab uske man me achanak se hi ek dar paida hua joki uske dil ke sabse kareebi shaksh par chaaye khatre ki ghanti se awgat kara raha tha...

aur wlh shaksh tha REGIS..

ji haan REGIS.. REGIS jinse HIDA man hi man beintaha pyar karne lagi thi...

waise same feelings REGIS ke man me bhi HIDA ke prati thi par abhi tak dono me se kisine bhi ek dusre ko propose nahi kiya tha...

khair, coming to the origin of the scene, jaise hi HIDA ne REGIS par chaaye khatre ko feel kiya toh woh turant gayab hote hue REGIS ke ABODE ke andar uske hall me prakat hui aur prakat hone ke baad jaise hi woh REGIS ke bedroom ki taraf badhi toh darwaaze par hi usse andar se awaaz sunayi di jisse sun woh wahin rook bhi gayi aur saath hi hadh se zyada hairan bhi ho gayi....

reason..

jo awaaz uske kaano me padi thi,woh aur kisiki nahi balki RAAZ ki thi..

aur apni baat kehte hue usne REGIS ko teen baar lagatar bijli ke jhatke diye the jinpar REGIS ke mooh se dard bhari karah nikli thi...

khair,apni hairani ko control me kar usne RAAZ ki baat sunane ka faisla kiya...

wahin RAAZ ke dwara punishment aur phir uski baat ko sun...


REGIS-are you out of your mind RAAZ..ye kya kar rahe ho tum...??mat bhulo ki mai tumhara WHIZZDER hun....

MAI-institution me..yahan nahi...aur mai aisa kuch karta nahi,par tune HIDA ke nazdeek jaakar mujhe majboor kar diya yahan aane par...

HIDA se door reh...tere liye acha rahega...


RAAZ ki baat ghussa toh bohot aaya REGIS ko par woh kuch kar paata,usse pehle hi RAAZ ne usse ek power NEUTRALIZER electric rope me baandh diya jiski wajah se uski puri power lock ho gayi aur isiliye...


REGIS-par tumhe mere aur HIDA ke relationship se kya problem hai..???and more importantly, how's that even your business...???

MAI-HIDA aaj jo bhi hai,jis mukaam par hai,meri wajah se hai..uspar sirf mera hakh hai..

REGIS-tum kya bol rahe ho,mujhe kuch samajh me nahi aa raha hai...??aur hakh matlab kya..??do you love her...??

MAI-i lust her..uska jism sirf mere liye hai...only i can play with her...isiliye,keep yourself away from her...

haan,ek baar mai usse acchi tarah bhog lun,dil bharne tak usse use kar lun,phir agar us second hand maal ko rakhna chaaho,toh tum usse rakh sakte ho...


jahan meri baat sun door ke bahar khadi HIDA ka bhi bura haal ho gaya tha par BRAWNY ki hi tarah usne bhi sense ray se mere AURA ko test kiya aur mere sharir se meri authenticity jaan uska shak bhi door ho gaya...

wahin REGIS joki man hi man HIDA ko apna sab kuch maanta tha,uska dimag kharab ho gaya aur isiliye...


REGIS-RAAZ....

AHHHH.......


chillate hue liye mera naam REGIS ne par uske agle hi pal uske body se chipka rope chamka jisse ek behadh tez electric current paas hua aur aisa hote hi ek dardnaak cheekh nikal gayi REGIS ke mooh se aur woh neeche gir kar tadapne laga aur ye dekh..


MAI-isbaar sirf sharir tadpi hai,agar dobara tu HIDA ke kareeb gaya toh teri aatma tak ko challni kar dunga mai,yaad rakhna..

HIDA aur uska jism sirf mera hai... sirf mera...


RAAZ ki baat sun HIDA se aur rooka nahi gaya aur haathon me ek current ray ko paida kar woh room ke andar aayi aur phir mujhe piche se dekh aur meri baaton ko sun ghusse me usne woh ray mujhpar chhod diya par woh rays mujhe lagti,usse pehle hi mai REGIS ko warn kar gayab ho chuka tha...

mujhe gayab hota dekh HIDA turant aage badhi aur REGIS ke paas pahunchi jo is waqt un ropes se lagatar nikalne waale electric powers ki wajah se tadapte hue behosh hone ke kagar par tha..

uski aankhen bojhil ho chuki thi jiska matlab tha ki woh kisi bhi waqt behosh hone waala tha...

ye sab dekh HIDA ne turant apne haath us electric rope ke upar ghuamaye aur uske aisa karte hi woh rope gayab ho gaya...

rope ke gayab hote hi jahan ek taraf REGIS ko us asahaniya pain se relief mil gaya wahin ab tak jo pain iske sharir ne jhel liya tha, uski wajah se ab woh bas behosh hone hi waala tha..

khair,HIDA ne REGIS ke sir ko apni godh me rakh liya aur pyar,dard se mishrit bhaavon ko apne aakhon me liye usse dekhne lagi..

REGIS bhi apni aadhi khuli aur aadhi band ho rahi aankhon se HIDA ko dekhne laga aur..


REGIS-kabhi kaha nahi HIDA..but i love you...aur ye pyar abhi se nahi hai,tab se hai jab tum WEAKLINGS me thi....

par himmat hi nahi hui kabhi tumse apne dil ki baat kehne ki...


REGIS ki baat sun khush toh bohot ho gayi HIDA par situation jisme abhi woh dono the, uski wajah se woh kuch keh nahi paayi aur bas aansu bahati rahi...

wahin HIDA ko khamosh dekh...


REGIS-agar tum mujhse pyar nahi karti toh koi baat nahi HIDA par please,apna partner dhyan se chunana..

aur us RAAZ se door hi rehna..uski niyat tumhare liye achi nahi hai...

ye aakhri baat thi jo REGIS ne kahi thi kyunki iske baad woh behosh ho gaya...

wahin REGIS ki baat ko sun aur phir usse behosh hota dekh HIDA ka rona kaafi badh gaya par phir jab kuch der baad usne khud ko thoda sambhala toh woh neeche jhuki aur usne REGIS ke maathe ko chum liya aur...


HIDA-i love you REGIS...mai,mera sharir aur meri aatma,sab tumhari hai..sirf tumhari...ispar kisi aur ka hakh toh door shadow bhi nahi pad sakta...

aur RAAZ...tumne bohot madad ki hai meri par iska ye matlab nahi ki tum mere pyaar ko hurt karo aur most importantly,mai koi cheez nahi hun jiske jism par hakh samajhte ho tum apna.

mere pyar par haath utha tumne mujhpar kiye ehsaan ki keemat pehle hi wasool li thi par meri asmat par nazar rakh tune apni hade paar kar li....

mai tujhe zinda nahi chhodungi RAAZ..I AM GONNA KILL YOU....






PLACE-ACCHUTA'S ABODE




TUM.......!!!!!!



SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA dono ke hi mooh se ek saath hairani se bhara ye shabd ek saath nikla tha...

reason...

kuch der pehle ACCHUTA ke ELUSORY ne un dono ko bataya tha ki unse milne koi aaya hua hai jiske baad jab woh dono hall me pahunche toh wahan couch par baithe shaksh ko dekhte hi surprise ho gaye woh dono kyunki unka mehman jo is waqt couch par baitha hua tha,woh aur koi nahi VIDEOUS tha...

surprise hone ke saath saath woh dono halke nervous bhi ho gaye the aur woh isiliye kyunki ek toh VIDEOUS pehli baar unke paas khud aaya tha,aur dusri ye ki un dono ko VIDEOUS se bhi wahi vibe aati thi jo RAAZ se aati thi..

bina usse compete kiye hi woh ye jaante the ki VIDEOUS unse kahin aage hai..

khair, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ko yun surprised dekh pehle toh VIDEOUS muskuraya aur phir apni jagah par khade hote hue...


VIDEOUS-surprised..!!mai bhi hun... VIDEOUS kabhi bhi khud kisike paas nahi jaata par dekho,aaj mai yahan tumhare paas khud aaya hun...

waise mera yahan aana justified bhi hai...aakhir tum dono RAAZ ke sabse KHAAS jo ho....


KHAAS..is shabd ko bolte waqt ek vyang feel kiya tha ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne par us feeling ko dimag se jhatak...


ACCHUTA-puch sakta hun tum yahan kyun aaye ho..!!!???

VIDEOUS-puch toh liya...khair,ek baat batao mujhe ki itni khaas dosti hai tum dono ki RAAZ ke saath par itne waqt me kya jaante ho tum dono uske baare me...!!!

SLUNDER-hume ye maalum hai ki woh hamara dost hai..aur kuch jaanane ki hame zaroorat nahi..

VIDEOUS-kya wakayi.....!!!

ACCHUTA-dekho,agar tum yahan RAAZ ke baare me hume bhadkaane aaye ho toh bhool jaao.. it's never gonna happen...

VIDEOUS-every damn thing that VIDEOUS wants,is bound to happen....

aur waise bhi,sach ka aayna dikhana bhadkana nahi hota...

ACCHUTA-apna aayna apne paas rakho..hume naa RAAZ ke baare me tumse kuch sunana hai aur naa janana hai...

chal SLUNDER...


ye bol wapas room ki taraf mood gaye ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER par woh kuch kadam hi aage badhe the ki tabhi...


VIDEOUS-and what about your parents...???unke baare me bhi nahi janana chaahte tum dono...


badhte kadam wahin rook gaye ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke jaise hi unhone VIDEOUS ke mooh se apne parents ke baare me suna aur saath hi woh dono ek jhatke me wapas VIDEOUS ki taraf palte aur..


ACCHUTA-humare parents se tumhe kya lena dena..?? kahin tumne unke saath kuch galat toh nahi kiya..???


aakhri baat bolte waqt ek ghussa dikhne laga tha ACCHUTA aur uske saath khade SLUNDER ke face par bhi...

wahin ACCHUTA ki baat par ek muskaan naach uthi VIDEOUS ke face par aur...


VIDEOUS-sach kahun toh mai chahta toh tha ki tum dono ke parents ki kuch sewa karna par chah kar bhi mai aisa kar nahi sakta..

kyunki sewa zinda logon ki kari jaati hai,mare hue logon ki nahi...


kaan me kisine garm pighla hua loha daal diya ho jaise,aisa feel hua ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ko VIDEOUS ki baat ko sunkar aur saath hi unka ghussa apni charam par pahunch gaya..

woh dono hi ghusse se VIDEOUS ki taraf badhe aur uske paas pahunch dono ne hi apne hatheli ka mukka bana swing kiya VIDEOUS ke mooh ki taraf par unka waar hawa me hi ghum gaya kyunki VIDEOUS apni jagah se gayab hokar wahan prakat hua jahan kuch seconds pehle ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER khade hue the...

aur iska abhaas ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ko bhi ho gaya aur isiliye woh dono wapas palte par is baar woh dono aage nahi badhe balki un dono ke hi haath me ek ek chamchamati talwar aa gayi jisse dekh..


VIDEOUS-arre,tum dono mujhpar aise attack kar rahe ho jaise maine tum dono ke mom dad ko maara hai...!!!

ACCHUTA-hamare mom dad ko kuch nahi hua hai...aur hum tujhpar isiliye waar kar rahe hain kyunki tune apni gandi zubaan se hamare mom dad ki mare hue hone ki afwah udaayi...


VIDEOUS-hahahaha......


jahan ACCHUTA ki baat sun zoron se has diya VIDEOUS wahin apni baat keh ACCHUTA aur saath hi SLUNDER bhi ek baar phirse aage badhe aur apne apne hathon me pakdi talwar ko VIDEOUS ke gardan par nishana bana ghuma diya jiske agle hi pal..


TANNNN...

VIDEOUS se naa takrate hue woh dono talwar ek dusre se hi takra gaye...

VIDEOUS is baar gayab nahi hua tha balki usne khudko spirit form me badal liya jis wajah se aisa hua..

wahin apne waar ko khaali jaata dekh aur VIDEOUS ko spirit form me badalta dekh ab ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne magic ke through VIDEOUS ko punish karne ki sochi par tabhi...


VIDEOUS-shaant ho jaao aur pehle meri puri baat suno..

sabse pehle ye jaan lo ki maine jo bhi bola hai, woh purnataha sach hai...

par us sach ke saath ek sach aur bhi hai aur woh ye ki tumhare mom dad ki hatya tumahare chahete mitr RAAZ ne ki hai...


VIDEOUS ko uske spirit form me punish karne ke liye SPELL budbudane hi waale the ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER par tabhi jo VIDEOUS ne kaha,usse sun unka dimag hi hil gaya...

kuch palon ke liye jaise blank se ho gaye woh dono...unhe VIDEOUS ki kahi kisi baat par bharosa nahi tha phir bhi ek anjaane dar ne ghar kar liya tha un dono ke man me...

wahin VIDEOUS bhi achi tarah ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke man me uth rahe bhavon ko samajh raha tha aur isiliye..


VIDEOUS-mujhe maalum hai ki jo bhi maine kaha hai, uspar yakin nahi hai tum dono par..

par ek batao,apne apne grah ke yuvraaj the tum..itna toh malum hi hoga naa ki jab koi kuch baat kehta hai,toh woh baat sach hai yaa phir jhuth,sabse pehle iski pushti karni aniwaarya hai, uske paschat hi koi nirnay liya jaa sakta hai..

toh jo maine kaha hai,uski jaanch kar lete hain,agar mai galat hua toh mai bhi yahi hun aur tum dono bhi..apna apna zor laga lenge...


apni baat kehte hue hi VIDEOUS ne apna haath aage kar gol ghumaya aur uske aisa karte hi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke theek piche ek WORLD DOOR khul gaya jiska abhaas un dono ko bhi ho gaya tha aur isiliye woh dono bhi piche palte..

aisa karte hi un dono ko apne saamne ek WORLD DOOR dikha jisme un dono ke beech se hote hue VIDEOUS aage badha aur us DOOR ke dusri taraf chala gaya..

aisa kar woh piche palta aur..


VIDEOUS-aajao.. meri baat ki pushti yahin hogi...


jahan apni baat keh VIDEOUS aage badh gaya wahin ek pal tak apni jagah par hi khade rehne ke baad ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER,dono hi us WORLD DOOR ke dusri taraf pahunch gaye aur aisa kar unhe pata chala ki woh is waqt ek jungle ne hain..

kuch seconds chaaron taraf dekh woh dono VIDEOUS ke piche chal diye...


(NOTE:-ye wahi planet aur wahi jungle hai guyz jahan ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ko WOOGER ne maara tha..)


khair, VIDEOUS ke piche chalte hue un dono ne dekha ki kuch door aage KAALE LABADE me dhaka ek lamba chowda shaksh khada hai aur ussike paas VIDEOUS jaa raha tha..

VIDEOUS ke paas pahunchte hi woh shaksh joki uska DEVOTEE tha,uske aage jhuk gaya..

wahin ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER bhi ab VIDEOUS aur uske DEVOTEE ke paas pahunch chuke the..

aur aisa hote hi VIDEOUS ne ishara kiya apne DEVOTEE ko jiske baad usne ek shishi VIDEOUS ko jiske andar laal par jama hua dravya joki sukha hua khoon tha,de diya...

us sukhe dravya se bhare shishi ko pakad VIDEOUS ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki taraf palta aur...


VIDEOUS-is shishi me jo ye sukha hua dravya hai,woh tum dono ke maata pitah ka khoon hai...


VIDEOUS ke is revelation se andar tak jam gaye the ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER...

unhe samajh me hi nahi aa raha tha ki woh kaise react karen....??

wahin apni baat ko aage badhate hue...


VIDEOUS-kya hua tha tumhare mata pitah ke saath,woh is khoon ki madad se pata chal jaayega tum dono ko..


apni baat keh VIDEOUS ne us shishi ke upar haath rakha aur....


VIDEOUS-SATYAM DRISHYAM PRAKATAM

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VIDEOUS ke SPELL uccharit karte hi uske haathon se ek ray nikal us shishi ke andar rakhe khoon par padi aur jab aisa hua toh....

ua shishi me kampan hona shuru ho gaya jiske baad woh shishi VIDEOUS ke haathon se nikal thodi door jaakar hawa me sthir ho gayi....

shishi ke sthir hote hi uske andar chipka hua sa woh sukha khoon kisi saanp ki tarah upar ki tarah utha aur shishi ke bahar nikal gaya..

shishi se bahar nikalte hi un khoon ki bundo ne expansion hone laga aur dekhte hi dekhte...


BOOMMMMM.....

ek dhamaka sa hua us expand hue khoon ke theek beech me jisse woh khoon jhitakte hue neeche zamin par gir gaya aur jab aisa hua toh...

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke saamne ussi din ka wahi drishya dikhne laga jis din un dono ke hi mom dad yahan is jagah par shikar ke liye aaye the...

dekhte hi dekhte woh scene bhi aaya jab un sabke saamne WOOGER prakat hua aur phir usne un sabko maarne ki baat kahi..

ye drishya dekh aur WOOGER ki baatein sun ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke aankhon se ashru pravah tez ho chuke the aur tabhi..


VIDEOUS-jaante ho ye jaanwar jo tum dono ke mom dad ko khudko maarne ke liye keh raha hai,woh kaun hai...

us jaanwar ka naam hai WOOGER joki tumhare priya mitr RAAZ ka ansh hai aur ussike kehne par woh ye sab kar raha hai...


ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke dimag me toh drishya ko dekh aur VIDEOUS ki baaton ko sun dhamake par dhamake ho rahe the..

unhe samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki woh kaise react karen...??

aur is dauran woh waqt bhi aaya jab un dono ke parents ne khudko shoot kar liya aur aisa hote dekh...


MAAAAA.PITAAJI.......


ye cheekhte hue ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER turant us drishyam ke beech apne mom dad ki taraf bhaage par unke paas pahunch jab un dono ne unhe gale lagane ki koshish ki toh unke haath aar paar ho gaye...

ab bhala ek drishyam ki chavi ko woh kaise sparsh kar sakte the..???

apne haathon ko hawa me ghumta dekh woh dono wahin apne mom dad ke dikh rahe drishya ke paas neeche baith gaye aur zoron se rone lage..

wahin peeche khade VIDEOUS ka kaam ho chuka tha...aur ab uska yahan rookne ka koi matlab tha mahi aur isiliye...


VIDEOUS-jo drishya dekha hai abhi tum dono ne,woh purnataha sach hai....

agar ab bhi doubt hai toh apne priya SOVEREIGN'S se puch lena...aur aakhir me apne us dost se bhi jisne dosti ki aad me tumse tumahari sabse badi khushi cheen li...

par filhal jab rona band ho jaaye toh piche WORLD DOOR khula chhoda hai...chale jaana...


ye bol VIDEOUS apne DEVOTEE ke saath gayab ho gaya....

wahin uske jaane ke baad kaafi der tak rote rahe ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER par phir dheere dheere unka rona subakne me badla aur aur phir shaant ho gaye..

sirf upar se shaant hue the dono,par andar toh bhuchaal macha hua tha dono ke...

aankhon ne dard aur angaare, dono hi naach rahe the is waqt ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke aur issi bhaav ke saath dekha un dono ne ek dusre ki taraf aur...


SLUNDER-hume SOVEREIGN'S se baat karni padegi...

ACCHUTA-aur agar VIDEOUS ki baat sach nikli toh....

ACCHUTA/SLUNDER-mai tujhe zinda nahi chhodunga RAAZ...I AM GONNA KILL YOU....





PLACE-VIDEOUS ABODE...



KAAM HO GAYA LORD...

VIDEOUS-hmm..


VIDEOUS ke saamne khade do RAAZ ne ek saath ye baat kahi jispar VIDEOUS ne bas apni gardan hilate hue hmm kaha tha.....

jab VIDEOUS ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke paas se wapas apne ABODE pahuncha tab in do RAAZ ko apne saamne paaya...

wahin apni baat kehne ke baad un dono ka swaroop badalne laga aur dekhte hi dekhte woh dono apne asli DEVOTEE ke roop me aa gaye the..

aisa hote hi un dono ke sharir se do rays nikal VIDEOUS ke paas chali gayi...

ye rays asal me RAAZ ke woh AURA the jisse VIDEOUS ne kayi baar jo unki bhindat hui thi,usse haasil kiye the aur aaj issi AURA ki madad se BRAWNY aur HIDA RAAZ ke nakli hone ki baat ko nahi pehchaan paaye the...

khair, VIDEOUS ki haami ke baad...


1ST DEVOTEE-kuch puchne ki ijazat chahta hun LORD....???

VIDEOUS-ye pura khel hi jis anjaam par tika hai,woh anjaam kisi aur ke hawale kyun kiya hai maine...???

RAAZ ko khatm kar dono FATHER'S ko harana,yahi toh maksad hai mera,phir is maksad ki dor BRAWNY, HIDA,ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ko kyun pakda di maine,yahi janana chahate ho naa tum...!!!!

IST DEVOTEE-yes LORD....

VIDEOUS-do logon ke beech kisi bhi pratispardha me bhale naam sirf un dono khiladiyon ka hi hota hai,par us khel ko roop dene ka kaam un dono hi khiladiyon ke kheme me moujud logon ka bhi hota hai...

mere kheme me tum log ho jinhe maine niyukt kiya hai par RAAZ ke kheme ke logon ko khud mere FATHERS ne aur GOD ne niyukt kiya hai..

toh aise me agar wahi log jo RAAZ ki madad ke liye hain,wahi usse nuksaan pahuncha de,toh isse sharmsaar baat mere FATHERS aur GOD ke liye kya hogi....!!!

haan,RAAZ ko aur uske saath MAHI ko unke anth tak mai hi pahunchaunga par usse pehle uske saathi uski haalat kharab karenge..

unka har waar jab RAAZ ke sharir par padega toh dard mere FATHERS bhi mehsoos karenge...

VIDEOUS ke peeth piche ye jo master planning ki thi unhone,usse backfire hote dekhna hai unhe...

2ND DEVOTEE-par LORD,kya woh sab milkar bhi RAAZ ko haani pahunchane ke kaabil hain...???

VIDEOUS-normal situation me bilkul bhi nahi... par jo ab hone waala hai,woh RAAZ ke liye kahin se bhi normal nahi hai....

sharirik aur magical ability,dono me hi RAAZ bina apne aloukik shaktiyon ke bhi kaafi shaktishaali hai par sharirik aur jaaduyi shakti se bhi upar ek aur shakti hoti hai...

maansik shakti....

maansik shakti woh shakti hai jo baaki har ability ko shakti pradaan karti hai..agar kisime maansik theraav hai,toh uski har yogyata nikharti hai par agar kisika maansik santulan hil jaaye,uspar aghaath pahunche toh phir uski koi shakti uske kaam ki nahi hoti....

aur aisa hi kuch RAAZ ke saath hone waala hai...

isiliye us waqt uske dost uspar bhaari padenge...

woh waqt aa gaya hai jab RAAZ ko khudke hi sabse bade RAAZ ke baare me pata chalega aur jab aisa hoga toh woh apni sudh budh kho baithega...

us waqt pehle uske woh chune hue saathi uski haalat kharab karenge aur phir mai usse khatm kar uski vyatha ko bhi uske saath samapt kar dunga...

RAAZ,RAAZ,RAAZ.........



waqt ka kaanta,beech mazdaar me JHULNE WAALA HAI....

jo kuch bhi yaad hai tujhe,woh sab kuch tu BHULNE WAALA HAI....

jaane kayi rahasya hai tune par ab....

RAAZ,tere khudka sabse bada RAAZ ab KHULNE WAALA HAI.....














AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......















AAPKA APNA V...J.....
Awesome extraordinary fantastic update
 

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Ye Kya tha Bhai aaj to aapne ghuma hi dala Raaz Jo saari dunia ke liye ek raaz hai vo apne astitva ka itna bada raaz nahi jaanta. Ab aisi haalat me bechare ke hath pair kaampna koi badi baat to nhi . Ab itne bade jhatke ke baad apne dosto ke dwara kiye gye hamle se kaise bachega Raaz . Ye VIDEOUS to bahut tez cheez hai par VIKRAM aisa lagta hai ki usse bi do kadam uper hai Jo itni badi planning Kar rakhi hai VIDEOUS ke liye .
Hat's off to you Bhai .
You are the best fantasy writer.
thanks brother..saath bane rahiye
 

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or ye giraya vj bhai ne raaz ke upar parmanu bomb......
raaz is a normal child born with supernatural powers
jinke pass wo pal kr bda hua h wo hi uske maa - baap h isse bda jhtka raaz k liye shayad hi koi dusra ho.......ab tk wo khud ko dono father dwara launch kiya gya product smjhta tha.but aaj use pta chla ki usme bhi feelings h ......wo bhi kisi ka beta h........aakhir kese bardast krega raaz ye sdma.......upar se uske apne jinki soyi hui powers ko usne hi jagaya h wo hi uski jaan k piche pde ho.........kese nikalegi mahi raaz ko is chakraviewh se....aakhir kese bachegi raaz ki jaan..........or ek or raaz ki mahi ne raaz ki jaan phle bhi bachayi h ...........ye kb hua.........mahi ne isse phle raaz ki jaan kb or kese bachayi..........raaz ke jnm ka such kya florin, mariya and AL ko pta chalega......or ydi chla to kya bitegi unke upar ki unka baccha unke hote hue bhi orphan ki jindgi jiya........aakhir kya gul khilayenge raaz ke ye raaz....iska jawab to ab hamare mr SECRET vj bhai hi denge........
thanks brother...saath bane rahiye
 

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Ab aaya Khaane me alg hu swaad sa mja hi aa gya mtlb... Aakhir raaz ki soch ke saare samikaran hi badal diye gye ki wo khud ko aaj tak kya samjh rha tha aur wo kya nikla jinhone usko jindgibhr pala jo hhmesha uske sath the wohi uske asal maa baap nikle jo log phle apni beti aur fir apne mare hue bacche ke dukh me the unhe kya hi malum ki jo baccha mra hu paida hua wo to ek maaya matr thi bss asal me unka bccha to jeevit tha jise SANKARSHAN vidhi ke dwara kokh se hi trasnfer kr diya gya jis prakar BALRAM G paida hue the..bss yaha fark itna tha ki usko kisi aur garbh ki jgha aise hi janam diya gya wahan se kuchh duri pr aur fir waps laalan paalan ke liye unke paas hi pahuchaya gya....khair ye to bakai uska manshik santulan hilane wali cheez thi jahan wo khud ko ek robot ki trha smjh rha tha ( ki bss use srf mission hi pura krna h waise to wo abhi bhi same h ki mission to pura krna h usko kaise krega bss tb wo apne astitva se anbhigya tha ) wahi wo ek insaan ka putr bhi bss uska janam alg trha se hua baki nirman to sbhi ki trha hua aur uska ek parivaar bhi h ...aaj phli dfa wo roya tha uski aankhon se aanshu bahe the abhi na jaane kya kya hoga...intzaar h hmko bhi wahi griffin ne mahi ko btla hi diya ki usko kya krna h aur kis prakar baki uspr h ki wo raaz ko bcha paye iss dfa aur khud ko bhi...last time usne kaise bchaya ye to khair raaz hi h waqt pr pta chlega chliye dekhte ki ab dark mega update me kya deemag ka dahi krne wala milega...
Intzaar h brother...
thanks for appreciating brother..yunhi saath bane rahiye
 
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