Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

[Pintupaul]

Awesome update bro....

 

[Jerry]

Bro next update kab tk aaega ...

 

[Rudrathakur]

Aaj tk jis paheli ko koi suljha nhi paya tha uss paheli ke sulajhne ka waqt bhi aahi gya aakhir... Raaj ki aankho ke band hote hi ek nya adhyay janm lene wala h.. ...gjb update bro keep it up...waitng for next...

 

[K S Lover]

Eagerly Waiting for next update

 

[vj4u]

Bhai mujhe to lagta h ki lord of judgement and creature nahi ho sakta h kyunki wo to phle se hi hai. Dorian aur Gaston to black energy k dharak h to raaz m shyd black aur white energy dono ho. Last story m VJ v jab black energy k chakkar m fasa tha curious pe tab black energy k wajah se VJ ko bahut problem hua tha islie iss baar it may be possible ki raaz m both black and white energy ho. But ek baat ye v hai agr Dorian aur Gaston dno ko raaz k sath rhne pe ghutan hoti thi to v wo dono har waqt uske sath hi kyu rehte the. Mana ki uske bhitar k raz ko janne k lie uske sath ho but fir v jab wo koii jawab nahi de raha tha tab to usse dur reh sakte the. Ye av tak smjh nahi aaya.
Raaz m ye v kaha tha ki indno k v raaz h kahi raaz infno ko pehchan to nahi gya tha matlab acchuta aur slunder ki story sunayi jrur gayi thi but usne ispe believe kiya ya nahi uska koii reaction aaya nahi tha. Aisa v to ho sakta h ki wo sach jaan gya ho ki ye dno acchuta aur slunder nahi h aur use nuksan pahunchana chahte ho aur apne bachav k lie koii upay phle se kar rakha ho. But jo v ho use insb se laut k aane m waqt to lagega hi.
Tab tak idhar alfreen musibat m fas jayegi. Jaise hi raaz aur 3 ladke gayab honge baat failegi aur anwir and morona ye baat pkka bolnge ki unhone alfreen ko raaz pe humla karte huye dekha h......
Agr ye baat bahar nikli to pkka alfreen anwir morona 3no ka band bajna tay h. Florin and maria ko v shock lagega.......
Pls brother post update asap.
Eagerly waiting for next update brother

aapne jo doubts rakhe hain,wo toh aage khul hi jaayenge, kaafi kuch toh next update me hi pata chal jaayega par aapke ek tark ka jawab mai abhi de deta hun ki kyun ACHHUTA aur SLUNDER jo ki GASTON aur DORIAN the,ghutan ke baawjud RAAZ ke saath rahe...

first update se do cheezen clear thi RAAZ ko lekar aur wo thi iski classes ko lekar carelessness....

second uska ATTITUDE jo hamesha sabko negetive laga khaaskar WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ko aur saath hi wo shuru se hi weakling catagory ka laga sabko...

ab baat karen GASTON aur DORIAN ki RAAZ ke saath rehne ki toh brother,uske bohot se wajah hain..

first...last update me unhone kaha tha ki koi ho yaa naa ho,par wo dono hamesha ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke character me rehte the...

brother acting real tabhi lagti hai jab usse jude aspect bhi utne hi real lage jitna wo character lagta hai...

jaise ki ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER dono ka hi appearence average se bhi low tha jiski wajah se baaki ke SAVENTS unse door rehte the..iske baare me in dono ke intro me bataya jaa chuka h... aise me sirf ek RAAZ tha jo unke appearence ke hisab se fit tha aur uske saath rehne se sabhi yahi sochte ki teeno ek se hain,shakl se bhi aur akl se bhi isiliye saath hain..

second... ACCHUTA ki language sabhi ko unse door karne ki perfect wajah bhi deti thi...par yahi usse nikalte negetive aura ko bhi control karti thi...

third....agar ye kisi se bhi ghule mile nahi,sirf ek dusre ke saath rahe toh aise me VIOLET WHIZ jo indirect tarike se in dono par nazar rakh rahi thi, usse ye karne ka direct tarika mil jaata..

fourth and most important...

GASTON ne last update me bataya tha ki RAAZ ke kareeb aane se unhe ghutan hoti thi...

GASTON aur DORIAN sabse kaabil SAVENTS reh chuke hain jo kabhi nahi haare..kabhi panic nahi hue..aise me ek maamuli SAVENT ke bas kareeb rehne bhar se ghutan feel karna, unke liye RAAZ ko shak ke catagory me khada karta hai..

aam situation me log aise bande ko avoid karte hain jinse unhe pareshani ho par naa ye kahani aam hai aur naa hi GASTON aur DORIAN...

unke liye toh ye feeling khatre ki ghanti thi jiska hal unhe har haal me dhundna tha aur iska ek hi tarika tha ki wo RAAZ ke kareeb rahkar usse unfold karen par jab wo ye naa kar paaye,jab unhe unka shak baimaani lagne laga toh us ghutan ki jad yaani RAAZ ko khtam karna hi unhe sahi laga aur unhone wahi kiya...

brother aag toh jalaati hi hai par roti sekhne ke liye ussi aag ki zaroorat bhi padti hai par agar tab bhi roti naa paken toh aag ko bujha diya jaata hai jaisa GASTON aur DORIAN ne kiya....

 

[vj4u]

hmm Next update me hi pata chalega bhai
Ke kya hoga ub age

lekin hamne jesa soch hoga wese to nai hoga
muje pta he

vj bhai ne bhot soch samj kar is khani ke plot khud creat kiye huwa he

unhe pta he khani padhne ke bad ham kya sochege vo vj bhai ko pta hoga

is liye wo is khani ke plot ese tayyar kiye he ke hum soch bi nai sakte

har update me khani ek naya mod leti he
or sub apne sahi samy par unke bi raz khulege
bus hum soch ne ke siva kuch nai kar sakte

hahahaha...meri soch ko itna respect dene aur alag batane ke liye thanks brother...

alag nahi likhunga,kuch aisa naya nahi bataunga jo ab tak nahi hua hai,toh fir aapki ummidon par jo is part ko lekar aapke beech raha hai,uspar khara kaise utrunga...???

kahani ke plot ko sochte waqt maine khudke hi kuch 4 se 5 ideas ko reject kiya tha aur yakin maaniye,wo rejected plots kaafi ache the...

mujhe kuch alag likhna tha..kuch alag sochna tha...kuch aisa jisse jab likhne ki baari aaye toh likhte likhte mai bhi chownk jaaun...

bas wahi karne ki koshish hai..dekhte hain,kahan tak successful hota hun!!!next update me meri ussi soch ki ek jhalak aapko padhne milegi....

 

[Jamesleon]

 

[AAS]

Suparb update bhai

 

[Jamesleon]

Respect to dena hi padega vj bhai

Apko lagta hoga me kuch jyada hi bol raha hu

or coment kar raha hu
lekin vj vhai such kahu To
Muje is khani se bhot lagav he
Kye ke

is khani me sub kuch alag he
Je sa ap dikha rahe he sub kuch
esa lagta he kisi film ko dekh nai raha
But us ko feel kar raha hu

*** Khani bhot log likh te he
usme jyada sex bi hota he
hero ko garreb se amir dikhaya jata he
Or duniya walo ke samne bhot bada amir admi bnake hmare samne pesh karte he
Uska sunghers dikhaya jata he
Sub coman ho ta he har khani me **

Me kisi ke khani ke kilaf nai bol raha
to bura mat maniyega meri coment se

Ye sirf vj bhai ko hi coment ki he mene
Dusre writer apne pe nale

Vj bhai apki story vakiy lajavb he
or tarif ke kabil is liye apko itni respect deta hu me
Apki khani me na sex he na herro ko garreb se amir bnaya gaya he

Apka pura likhne ka tarika alag he

jese harkoi james cameron jesi titanic or avtar film nai bana sakte

Vese apke siva koi esi khani nai likh payge
Iskie liye tarif or respect deata hu apko
Jo apka hak he
Bol

Na bhot asan hota he or likhna bhot khatin
likhte vakt bhot se khayl ghumte he esa likhuga vesa likhuga
Lekin likne ke liye bi himat honie chaiye
khusi khusi me bhot jada hi bol gaya me lekin jo such he vo to raehga bhai
ap bilku tarref ke kabil he or hamesa rahege
???

 

[Aman Gupta]

Lajwab update bhai shuruwat se anth tak aur ant se shuruwat ki kahani byan ho chuki h