Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

[vj4u]

Awesome update.
Mahi ko sabse fast brain wardan me mila to eski kimmat ek trah se emotionallesa life aur akelepan ke rup chukani padi .
Aaj usse en sab ka ahshah hua jab alreen ne apne mata pita ke emotion pahchae ki baat kahi .
Raj ke pass magic wala brain hi nahi hai ?
Wo charo wizz Raj ko samjane me khood hi behosh ho gaye .
Edwina ne to sabko pause karwa diya ab sab ek kadam aur aage badhenge .

thanks brother...saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Jabardasttt update bhai

Nice

Bhai kya jhatka diya dimag hilgaya

Aacha update hai .

Super update hai bhai

Very Nice update ab charo whiz raz se ka se kam 100 feet ka fasla rakhengy ab nava locha pta ni kia hy raaz k pas bole to magic wala dimag he ni raaz ka ek raaz khulta hy to usse jura dosra raaz samne ajata hy ab dekhte is k peechy kia raaz hy waiting for next update

thanks brothers...saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Kuch v kaho ek baat to hai acchuta aur slunder ki jodi kamal ki hai puri story m entertaining character ye dono hi hai kya dialogue aur kya gali galauj aisa lagta h apne schl days k dosto se baat kar raha hu same feeling. Chalo ye to pata lag gya ki 4 teacher kaise behosh huye aur ye to h new teacher really intelligent hai. Unhone jo technique btayi wo wastav m Gaur karne layak hai. Aur lastly molaskar ne to fr se story ko ek level upar chada diya. Shuru se story m ye baat btayi gayi h ki subconscious mind ki help se hi magic kar sakte hai but yaha to raaz brainless h. Brother apke isi suspense k wajah se story baar baar padhne ka man karta h aur sbse jyada wait v isi story k part ka rehta h. Ab sawal hai ki agr raaz brainless h to magic nahi kar payega aur agr nahi to VJ ki galti kaise sudharega aur jab wo magic kar nahi skta to use iss jagah laya hi kyu gya. Ab ye to aage hi pata lagega lekin dekhna h ki ab sovereigns kya karte h sath hi raaz k sath aage kya hota h.
Waiting for next update

thanks for the review brother..saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Jabardasttt update bhai

Nice

Bhai kya jhatka diya dimag hilgaya

Awesome bro

Bada jatka hei bhai....
Raaz ka 2nd brain nahi hei......

I guess raaz ka second brain ka hisssa us animal k paas hei jo raaz earth k jungle mei mila tha yahaan aane k pahle

Lajwab update bhai kya update tha

Nice update

Matlab kya hai,
Kya raaz ke paas subconscious mind nahi hai, sirf active mind hai.
Raaz bahut dilchasp hota jaa raha hai.

Bahut hi shandaar update hai bhai.?
Next update ka intzaar jaldi khatm kijiye?

thanks brothers...saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Awesome update buddy.....Mahi ki aur Alfreen ki baate wahi new WIzz ka sabi ko new idea dena taki vo sabhi apne first task ko pura kar sake wahi chaaro wizz aur wizzers ka behosh hone ka reason aur wahi jab Mokalsar ne Raaz ke brain ko inspect karna aur ek shocking baat batana sab kuch awesome tha. well let's see what happens next.
PEACE .

thanks for aprreciating brother...saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Excellent brilliant fantastic good update

U r very awesome great yar jawab nahi tumhara

Excellent brilliant fantastic good update

Hr baar ek new dhmaka

Oh Teri ki is ka MATLAB raaz k 2sra brain h hi nahi how is possible

Let's see what happened
Excellent brilliant fantastic good update

Gazab ekdam marvelous update.aab ham sab bih brainless hai raaj ke sath.raaj raaj ka bhandar hai.keep rocking bhai

Ye kya tha.....
Brian hai hi nahi...

Bhai jabardast jatka Diya h ye kaise ho sakta h iska ek hi brain ho
Aur ye itna surprise h waha us brain ke Khali space main charo pase the
Keep posting

Hein.... Jiska dimag nahi uske dimag me koi kaise fans sakta hai..... Or agar dimag nahi to wo itne unch koti ke vichar lata kaha se hai .... Koi to gahra raaz hai iss raaz ka

Dameke par damaka maaja as gaya

Mast update bhai maza aa gaya

super update bhai
waiting next

Bhai aapki story ki to yahi khas baat mujhe bahut aacha lagta hai ki har update me ek dhamaka hota

Lajawaab update Bhai maza aa gaya

Waiting for the next update bro

thanks brothers...saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Awesome updates till now story is best in class , no one can compete you in this section your writing skill is superb ,

Well. I think mahi anjali and rohan ki beti hogi , rest you know better ,

padhte jaaiye brother..thanks for the compliment...saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

update shaam tak

 

[Iron Man]

update shaam tak

Intzar rahega

 

[Ronnr]

update shaam tak

Intzaar rhega