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(dada ji) Thakur samsher paratap singh
(dadi ji) sandhya devi
(chacha) thakur dharmveer pratap singh
(chachi) sharmila singh
Mina aur rina :- sisters
Rina hero ki lover aur sex partner
Mina hero ki lover aur sex partner
(chote chacha) :- thakur veer pratap singh
(me) :- thakur rajveer pratap singh
Rajni :- hero ki asli maa (dead)
Ranveer :- hero ke pita (dead)
Nana :- shekhar chaudhry
Nani :- sima Chaudhary
B. Mama :- arun
Mami :- kamini
C. Mama :- sanjay
Mosi :- deepa
Sanika :- mosi ki beti
Swati :- sanika ki dost
(guide) aacharya raghwendra
Kaal :- hero inhi ke shaktiyon ka uttaradhikari hai
(hero ke roop)
King
Yodha
Sadhu
Tantrik
Angel
Devil
Side characters
Mira ma :- hero ke liye maa saman aur hero ki pahali sex partner
Sakshi :- hero par crush hai aur uski second sex partner
Kajri :- ye bhi hero ki sex partner hai
Bheema :- dadaji ka right hand
Shera :- bheema ka chota beta
Sangram :- bheema ka bada beta
Shiva :- bheema ka bhatija
Billa :- nanaji ka right hand
Some upcoming character
Lakshmi :- main heroine
Lakshmi ke pita :- sunil singh
Others not have to much role
Pandit ji :- lakshmi ke gharwalon ke kulguru
JASIEN :- hero ka jinn aur jinnlok ka rajkumar
Mr. Negative :- the one of the villain
Suba :- the slave of Mr. Negative
Umir :- also slave of Mr. Negative
Mahamahim unknown villain
(Brijesh) Prabhu the great god from eternal religion
Powers of hero
1) sapt chakr
2) five element
3) slow mode
4) third eye
5) his varients (roop)
6) vijayi dhanush
7) mayavi shaktiya (from tantrik)
8) satvik shaktiya (from sadhu)
9) knowledge
10) chakra astra
11) weponide dragon
12) tamsik tatva (from devil)
13) satvik tatva (ashta vidhi) (from angel)
14) the reaper army (devils army)
The powers of heroine
1) super strength
2) flying ability
3) mind control ability
4) the Carnage Queen
5) the Carnage Army
6) The wepons creating ability
7) the carnage armour
8) copy cat
And some more characters are comming in future
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(dada ji) Thakur samsher paratap singh
(dadi ji) sandhya devi
(chacha) thakur dharmveer pratap singh
(chachi) sharmila singh
Mina aur rina :- sisters
Rina hero ki lover aur sex partner
Mina hero ki lover aur sex partner
(chote chacha) :- thakur veer pratap singh
(me) :- thakur rajveer pratap singh
Rajni :- hero ki asli maa (dead)
Ranveer :- hero ke pita (dead)
Nana :- shekhar chaudhry
Nani :- sima Chaudhary
B. Mama :- arun
Mami :- kamini
C. Mama :- sanjay
Mosi :- deepa
Sanika :- mosi ki beti
Swati :- sanika ki dost
(guide) aacharya raghwendra
Kaal :- hero inhi ke shaktiyon ka uttaradhikari hai
(hero ke roop)
King
Yodha
Sadhu
Tantrik
Angel
Devil
Side characters
Mira ma :- hero ke liye maa saman aur hero ki pahali sex partner
Sakshi :- hero par crush hai aur uski second sex partner
Kajri :- ye bhi hero ki sex partner hai
Bheema :- dadaji ka right hand
Shera :- bheema ka chota beta
Sangram :- bheema ka bada beta
Shiva :- bheema ka bhatija
Billa :- nanaji ka right hand
Some upcoming character
Lakshmi :- main heroine
Lakshmi ke pita :- sunil singh
Others not have to much role
Pandit ji :- lakshmi ke gharwalon ke kulguru
JASIEN :- hero ka jinn aur jinnlok ka rajkumar
Mr. Negative :- the one of the villain
Suba :- the slave of Mr. Negative
Umir :- also slave of Mr. Negative
Mahamahim unknown villain
(Brijesh) Prabhu the great god from eternal religion
Powers of hero
1) sapt chakr
2) five element
3) slow mode
4) third eye
5) his varients (roop)
6) vijayi dhanush
7) mayavi shaktiya (from tantrik)
8) satvik shaktiya (from sadhu)
9) knowledge
10) chakra astra
11) weponide dragon
12) tamsik tatva (from devil)
13) satvik tatva (ashta vidhi) (from angel)
14) the reaper army (devils army)
The powers of heroine
1) super strength
2) flying ability
3) mind control ability
4) the Carnage Queen
5) the Carnage Army
6) The wepons creating ability
7) the carnage armour
8) copy cat
And some more characters are comming in future
Jin characters ka kahani me jyada roll nahi hai unhe ignore kia gaya hai

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[Bilal jan]

Update 181

Jab hum dharti lok par pahuche humari entry kisi sunsan se jungle wale are hui thi jaise hi humne us jagah par entry mari toh waha aate hi hume strong asur waves mahsoos hone lagi jinhe mahsus karke hume kuch jyada faeak to nahi padta tha lekin aaj unka ant toh karna hi tha toh me turant apne JASIEN roop me aa gaya

Me :- yaha is jungle ke andar se jo waves nikal rahi hai usse toh yahi lag raha hai ki yaha badi dumdar fauj hogi unki

SENTRY :- kya hua dar lag raha hai kya tumhe

Me :- ha unke liye dar lag raha hai ki aaj unhe kitne dard se gujhrana hoga

SENTRY :- kya kare jiske naseeb me jo hoga wahi milega isme hum tum kuch nahi kar sakte

Me :- chalo phir

Phir hum dono us jungle ke andar jane lage jaha hume jungle ke bich me gufa dikhni lagi aur jaise hi hum us gufa me andar jaise hi gaye toh waha ka nazara dekhke hum dono bhi shocked ho gaye the kyunki andar 10-20 nahi balki lakhon ki tadad me asur the

Woh gufa bahar se jitni choti aur kamjor lag rahi thi utni hi andar se vishal aur majboot thi waha khade sabhi asuron ke madhya me ek murti rakhi hui thi jiske saamne sab apne hath jode khade the

Lekin shock ki baat unki sankhya ya unka hath jode khada hona nahi tha shicking baat thi ki woh murti meri thi jiske saamne asur hath jode khade the

Use dekhte hi mene bina ek pal gawaye sidha vidyut tarang se us murti ke tukde kar diye jisse un sabhi ka dhyan hum dono pe aa gaya aur woh hum par humla larne ke liye aage badhne lage

Lekin woh hum tak pahuch pate usse pehle hi me apna dhanush liye un par nishana laga chuka tha aur bahuban ki wajah se mera ek ek tir 100 asuron ko maar raha tha jo dekh kar SENTRY kaha piche rahne wala tha usne bhi apni vidyut shakti ki madad se asuron ko maarna start kar diya

Uske hathon se nikalti bizli jise bhi chuti woh wahi jal ke rakh ho jata jab use woh vidyut tarang kam lagi toh usne use rok diya aur phir usne unhe ghoor kar dekha toh uske aakho se ek hit vision ray nikli jisse waha toh mano tabahi mach gayi sare asur us heat vision se bachne ke liye bhagne lage

Lekin koi usse bach na paya sab mare ja raha tha lekin hum dono ko kharoch bhi nahi aayi thi aati bhi kaise woh asur toh humare najdeek bhi nahi aa pa rahe the aise hi sirf 5 minute me lakhon ki tadad me maujood asur ab bas 300 ki tadad me maujood the jo dekhke mene apna dhanush hatake apni talwaar nikal ke unke beech me kud gaya aur unhe katne laga mujhe un asuron ke bich dekh kar SENTRY ne turant apne hit vision ko rok diya aur wahi khada ho kar mujhe dekhne laga

Aur me lagataar un asuron ke tukde karte ja raha tha jisse jald hi me pura khoon me san gaya tha jiske baad jab sare asur mare gaye toh me ruka aur phir jaldi se mene apne jal tatva ki shslti se khud ko saaf kiya aur phir chalte hue SENTRY ke pass aa gaya

Me :- aise kya ghur rahe ho pahli baar ladte dekha hai kya

S :- angel ko ladte bahut baar dekha hai lekin ye angel ka nahi balki devil ka style hai

Me :- tumne devil ko ladhte dekha hai

S :- ha ek waqt tha jab is pure sansar ki mahan shaktiya kewal ek uddeshya leke ji rahe the usi uddeshya ko pura karne ke liye angel ke saath devil ko bhi chuna tha lekin us vinashkari raat me hue yudh me sab badal gaya

Me :- kyun kya hua tha aisa

S :- pata nahi us din ki jyadatar yaadon ko sabhi ke mastishk se mita diya gaya hai taki aage chalke is wajah se koi pareshaani na khadi ho jaye

Me :- thik hai koi baat nahi ab ye tum decide karo ki aage kya karna hai

S :- jab tak inke leader ko na maar de

Me :- aur woh kaha milega

S :- PATAL LOK ME

Me :- chalo phir chal ke khatam karte hai

S :- ha ye toh bachon ka khel hai na patal lok se pahle 6 lok aur aate hai aur ye 6 lok us patal lok ke 6 gates hai jab tak unhe paar nahi karoge tab tak aage nahi badhoge

Sabse pahle aata hai atal lok jaha pe sabhi TAMSEEK JEEVON ki puja karne wale yodha aur bhayanak prani rahte hai

Uske baad aata hai vittal lok jaha par sare asur sainik sadaiv pahra dete hai

Phir aata hai sutal lok yaha woh asur rahte hai jo bina kisi swarth ke punya karm aur AADIDEV ki bhakti karte hai yaha ka raja koi aur nahi balki raja bali hai jinko vaman avtaar me khud prabhu ne yaha bheja tha

Phir 4the kramank par hai rasatal lok yaha woh asur hai jo is sansaar me burai aur pap failane ka kaarya karte hai

Phir talatal lok jaha pe sabhi mayavi asur rahte hai jinki maya se har koi mohit ho jata hai

Phir mahatal lok jaha is sansaar sabse vishele aur shakti shaali nag rahte hai jinke vish se bachna kisi bhi aam ke liye asambhav hai

Aur phir hai patal lok jaha par woh asur rahte hai jo itne shaktishali hai ki agar woh apni puri shakti se waar kare toh ek war me hi bade se bade sena ka vidhwansh kar de

Aur humara mukabla is patal lok ke raja se hai toh uski shaktiyon ko kam mat samjho

Abhi usne itna bola hi tha lekin itni der me mene trinertea ko jagrit kar ke puri jaankari ikattha karvli thi aur abhi me kuch bolta ki tabhi

Lakshmi :- toh tum bhi hume kam mat samajho

Lakshami ko aise achanak dekh kar me shocked ho gaya tha

Me :- lakshmi tum yaha kya kar rahi ho tumhe C Lok me hona chahiye tha

L :- acha toh tum alag alag lokon me ghum kar alag alag adventure karoge aur me waha rajniti me boar hoti rahungi kyu aur waise bhi me apna chayaroop waha chodke aayi hoon

Lakshmi ka ye jawab sunkar me kuch bolne wala tha ki tabhi

S :- dekho tum premiyon ke bich me mera bolna galat hoga lekin humare pass samay nahi hai jald hi woh puri shakti se hum par aakraman kare usse pahle hume us tak pahuchna hoga

L :- ha sahi kaha aapne hume jaldi karna chahiye naki aise faltu ki discussion me apna Time waste karna chahiye

Me :- agar sab pahle se tay karke hi aayi ho toh ab me kya bolu chalo lekin jab tak me na bolu tab tak kisi se bhi ladai jhagda mat karna samjhi

L :- yes ab chale ya yahi lecture dene ka plan hai kya

Me :- nahi aadhi raat ka jab atal lok ka darwaja khulega

L :- aur ye darwaja kaha khulega

S :- BAIKAL JHEEL ke ekdum gahrai me jaha ek gufa hai wahi hai atal lok ka dwar

L :- kya kaha tumne mujhe kuch samajh nahi aaya

Me :- south east siberia me ek lake hai jo ki is duniya ki sabse purani aur ghari jheel hai

Lake Baikal is the oldest (25 million years) and deepest (1,700 m) lake in the world.

L :- wow starting me hi itna acha adventure maja aayega

Me :- ha woh toh hai jab tumhe pani ke andar 5387 feet andar jana hoga toh maja kaise nahi aayega

Meri baat sunke lakshmi ka muh aisa ho gaya jaise najane kya hi dekh liya ho

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[Bilal jan]

Update 182

Is waqt hum teeno south east Siberia me maujood the hum teeno apni shakti ke madad se adrushya hoke aaye the jisse kisi bhi tarah ka security issue toh nahi hua tha aur abhi hum adrushya awastha me usi BAIKAL JHEEL ke pass khade the uski sundarta dekh mere aur lakshmi ke aakhon me chamak saaf dikh rahi thi

Aur jab hum us jheel ko dekh rahe the ki tabhi meri nazar Sentry par padi jo ki us jheel ke taraf hi dekh raha tha lekin uski nazar jheel ke andar thi

Me :- kya dekh rahe ho Sentry

S :- ye jheel jitni uper se aakarshak hai utni hi andar se khatarnak hai isme kewal samudri jeev nahi balki atal lok ke pahredaar bhi maujood hai jinko mare bina atal lok me praveah na mumkin hai

L :- kya hua phir hum maar denge unhe chinta ki kya baat hai

Me :- atal lok ke pravesh dwar par koi aam asur nahi honge woh jaroor khaas honge shaktishali honge

L :- thik hai jo hoga dekha jayega

Phir isi tarah baate karte hue aadhi raat kab ho gayi pata bhi nahi chala aur jaise hi samay aaya hum teeno ne ek saath us pani me kud gaye mujhe aur Sentry ko toh koi tension nahi tha hum aaram se saas le pa rahe the lekin lakshmi jaise jaise gahrai me utarti ja rahi thi waise waise usko saas lene me problem ho rahi thi ye dekh kar mene turant jal aur vayu tatva ke mishran se ek kawach banaya jisse lakshmi ko saas lene me koi dikkat na ho

Jaise jaise hum gahrai me ja rahe the waise waise hi us jheel ki sundarta hume mohit kar rahi thi

Lekin ye sundarta jyada der tak nahi thi dheere dheere woh sundar drushya bhayanak aur dil dahla dene wale drushya me badal gaye

Sentry :- pruthvi ki seema khatam ho gayi hai ab yaha se atal lok ke sipahi hum par aakraman karnge saavadhan rahna

L :- kya itni jaldi hum dharti ki seema ko paar kar diya

Sentry :- hum jitni gati se ja rahe hai us hisab se ye barabar hai

L :- kitni speed se ja rahe hum

Me :- hum philhaal 1000km/min ke speed se ja rahe hai

L :- kya ye impossible hai itne speed se jana woh bhi deep lake me ye science ke according impossible hai toh kaise

Me :- acha toh jinn, carnage, asur aur daitya kis science ke according possible hai batao

Sentry :- tumhara vigyan jitna jaanta hai woh is duniya ke asliyat ka kewal 1% hai aur ye tezi ko pane ke liye raj ne apne jal tatva ko jagrit kiya hai jisse jal ke andar bhi hum teeno isi gati se bina kisi rukawat jate rahe samjhi

L :- lekin itni speed ke baad me bhi mujhe kuch mahsoos kyu nahi ho raha hai

S :- raj ke kawach ke wajah se jo tumhe jal me bhi dharti par ho aisa mahsoos kara raha hai

Abhi hum bate kar hi rahe the ki tabhi humare piche se ek trident udte hue aaya lekin mere jal tatva activate hone ke wajah se me use aaram se sense kar paya aur turant use pakad liya

Me :- be alert unhe humare aane ka pata chal chuka hai

Meri baat sunkar woh dono alert ho gaye aur phir ab humare saamne atal lok ke pahredaar maujoof the jo ki badi khoonkhar aur shayad asuri sharks par baithe the jinhe dekh ke me aur Sentry turant attacking position me aa gaye aur phir sabse pahle mene apne hath me pakada hua unka trident unhike uper feck diya jo ki sidha ek sipahi ke kaan ke pass se chala gaya

Sipahi :- kon ho tum aur yaha kaise aaye

Me :- hum atal lok jana chahte hai waha jane ke liye pravesh dwar yahi hai isiliye hum yaha aaye hai

Sipahi :- tum yaha se aage nahi ja sakte ho

Me :- hum tumhare aagya ke liye nahi ruke hai balki woh gufa kaha hai jaha dwar hai woh dhoondh rahe hai

Sipahi :- humare jite ji tum teeno kabhi bhi us dwar tak nahi pahuch sakte

Waha kul 5 sipahi maujood the jo sharks par baithe the un sharks ko dekh kar hi lag raha tha ki ye bhi asuri hai aur

S :- raj jab tak woh sharks hai tab tak hum un sipahiyon ko kuch nahi kar paynge isiliye hume sabse pahle unka hi kuch karna hoga

Me :- theek hai

Abhi me kuch karta ki usse pahle hi un panchon sharks ne apna muh khola jisse unke muh me ek energy blast sa kuch banne laga aur jaise hi woh taiyar ho gaye unhone woh energy blast humare uper shoot kar diya jisse bachne ke liye Sentry ne apni shakti se hum teenon ke saamne ek deewar si bana di jisse woh blasts takrar wahi nasht ho gaye

Me :- ab meri baari

Itna bol ke mene turant apne dhanush ka aavhan kiya aur uske prakat hote hi eke ke baad ek aise 5 tir mene un asuron ke sharks par chod diye jisse bachne ke liye jaise hi un sharks ne apni shaktiyon ka istemaal karne ke liye apna muh khola toh mera tir turant unke gale me utar gaya aur unke andar hi blast ho gaya jisse woh sabhi sharks ki toh dhajjiya ud gayi toh wahi ye dekh kar sabhi sipahiyon ke chachere par dar aur gusse ke expressions saaf dikh rahe the

Phir me aur Sentry bina unko mauka diye 2-2 sipahiyon ka gala pakad liya aur bache hue ek ko lakshami dhone lagi phir un pancho ki dhulayi karke jab woh pancho mar gaye toh hum phir se woh gufa dhoondhne lage

Jaha kuch der ki mehanat ke baad hume woh gufa mil gayi jo wahi ek kone me bani hui thi

Jaise hi humne us gufa me pravesh kiya toh turant hi humare saamne ek murti aa gayi jiske jo ki kad kathi me hum teenon se teen guna jyada thi

Jaise hi hum teenon us murti ke saamne aaye toh mano us murti me jaan hi aa gayi jaise hi humne atal lok ke darwaje ki taraf jane lage toh turant hi us murti ne apni talwar se mujh par waal kar diya lekin JASIEN ke majboot kawach ke wajah se me bach gaya

Use jinda hota dekh mene turant apne dono hathon me khanjar le liye jo ki weaponide dragon se mil gaye the aur phir turant hi mene us murti pe chalang laga ke dono khanjaron ko uske dono aakhon me utar diye phir buna use koi mauka diye mene sidha dono khanjron ko us murti dono aakhon ke bich me ghusa diye

Jiske baad jaise hi woh girne wala tha ki tabhi mene apni talwar se uske gardan par waar kar diya jisse uska sar uske dhad se alag ho gaya aur woh murthi bhi ab bas patharon ke tukadon me badal ke rah gayi thi

Wahi jab me us murti ke tukade karke wapas aaya toh jaha lakshmi mujhe shocked hoke dekh rahi thi toh Sentry mujhe sawalatmak nazron se dekh raha tha

Me :- aise kya dekh rahe ho

S :- jaise jaise hum patal lok ke najdeek pahuch rahe hai waise waise hi tumahre andar ki tamsik shaktiya badh rahi hai mujhe pahle lag raha tha ki hume lakshmi ka khas dhyan rakhna hoga lekin ab lag raha hai ki lakshmi se jyada dhyan tumhara rakhna hoga

Me :- uski jarurat nahi padegi chalo ab hume der ho rahi hai

Phir hum sabhi chale gaye atal lok ke dwar ke taraf jo us gufa me hi maujood tha

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Zabardast update

 

[Naughtyrishabh]

Update 181

Jab hum dharti lok par pahuche humari entry kisi sunsan se jungle wale are hui thi jaise hi humne us jagah par entry mari toh waha aate hi hume strong asur waves mahsoos hone lagi jinhe mahsus karke hume kuch jyada faeak to nahi padta tha lekin aaj unka ant toh karna hi tha toh me turant apne JASIEN roop me aa gaya

Me :- yaha is jungle ke andar se jo waves nikal rahi hai usse toh yahi lag raha hai ki yaha badi dumdar fauj hogi unki

SENTRY :- kya hua dar lag raha hai kya tumhe

Me :- ha unke liye dar lag raha hai ki aaj unhe kitne dard se gujhrana hoga

SENTRY :- kya kare jiske naseeb me jo hoga wahi milega isme hum tum kuch nahi kar sakte

Me :- chalo phir

Phir hum dono us jungle ke andar jane lage jaha hume jungle ke bich me gufa dikhni lagi aur jaise hi hum us gufa me andar jaise hi gaye toh waha ka nazara dekhke hum dono bhi shocked ho gaye the kyunki andar 10-20 nahi balki lakhon ki tadad me asur the

Woh gufa bahar se jitni choti aur kamjor lag rahi thi utni hi andar se vishal aur majboot thi waha khade sabhi asuron ke madhya me ek murti rakhi hui thi jiske saamne sab apne hath jode khade the

Lekin shock ki baat unki sankhya ya unka hath jode khada hona nahi tha shicking baat thi ki woh murti meri thi jiske saamne asur hath jode khade the

Use dekhte hi mene bina ek pal gawaye sidha vidyut tarang se us murti ke tukde kar diye jisse un sabhi ka dhyan hum dono pe aa gaya aur woh hum par humla larne ke liye aage badhne lage

Lekin woh hum tak pahuch pate usse pehle hi me apna dhanush liye un par nishana laga chuka tha aur bahuban ki wajah se mera ek ek tir 100 asuron ko maar raha tha jo dekh kar SENTRY kaha piche rahne wala tha usne bhi apni vidyut shakti ki madad se asuron ko maarna start kar diya

Uske hathon se nikalti bizli jise bhi chuti woh wahi jal ke rakh ho jata jab use woh vidyut tarang kam lagi toh usne use rok diya aur phir usne unhe ghoor kar dekha toh uske aakho se ek hit vision ray nikli jisse waha toh mano tabahi mach gayi sare asur us heat vision se bachne ke liye bhagne lage

Lekin koi usse bach na paya sab mare ja raha tha lekin hum dono ko kharoch bhi nahi aayi thi aati bhi kaise woh asur toh humare najdeek bhi nahi aa pa rahe the aise hi sirf 5 minute me lakhon ki tadad me maujood asur ab bas 300 ki tadad me maujood the jo dekhke mene apna dhanush hatake apni talwaar nikal ke unke beech me kud gaya aur unhe katne laga mujhe un asuron ke bich dekh kar SENTRY ne turant apne hit vision ko rok diya aur wahi khada ho kar mujhe dekhne laga

Aur me lagataar un asuron ke tukde karte ja raha tha jisse jald hi me pura khoon me san gaya tha jiske baad jab sare asur mare gaye toh me ruka aur phir jaldi se mene apne jal tatva ki shslti se khud ko saaf kiya aur phir chalte hue SENTRY ke pass aa gaya

Me :- aise kya ghur rahe ho pahli baar ladte dekha hai kya

S :- angel ko ladte bahut baar dekha hai lekin ye angel ka nahi balki devil ka style hai

Me :- tumne devil ko ladhte dekha hai

S :- ha ek waqt tha jab is pure sansar ki mahan shaktiya kewal ek uddeshya leke ji rahe the usi uddeshya ko pura karne ke liye angel ke saath devil ko bhi chuna tha lekin us vinashkari raat me hue yudh me sab badal gaya

Me :- kyun kya hua tha aisa

S :- pata nahi us din ki jyadatar yaadon ko sabhi ke mastishk se mita diya gaya hai taki aage chalke is wajah se koi pareshaani na khadi ho jaye

Me :- thik hai koi baat nahi ab ye tum decide karo ki aage kya karna hai

S :- jab tak inke leader ko na maar de

Me :- aur woh kaha milega

S :- PATAL LOK ME

Me :- chalo phir chal ke khatam karte hai

S :- ha ye toh bachon ka khel hai na patal lok se pahle 6 lok aur aate hai aur ye 6 lok us patal lok ke 6 gates hai jab tak unhe paar nahi karoge tab tak aage nahi badhoge

Sabse pahle aata hai atal lok jaha pe sabhi TAMSEEK JEEVON ki puja karne wale yodha aur bhayanak prani rahte hai

Uske baad aata hai vittal lok jaha par sare asur sainik sadaiv pahra dete hai

Phir aata hai sutal lok yaha woh asur rahte hai jo bina kisi swarth ke punya karm aur AADIDEV ki bhakti karte hai yaha ka raja koi aur nahi balki raja bali hai jinko vaman avtaar me khud prabhu ne yaha bheja tha

Phir 4the kramank par hai rasatal lok yaha woh asur hai jo is sansaar me burai aur pap failane ka kaarya karte hai

Phir talatal lok jaha pe sabhi mayavi asur rahte hai jinki maya se har koi mohit ho jata hai

Phir mahatal lok jaha is sansaar sabse vishele aur shakti shaali nag rahte hai jinke vish se bachna kisi bhi aam ke liye asambhav hai

Aur phir hai patal lok jaha par woh asur rahte hai jo itne shaktishali hai ki agar woh apni puri shakti se waar kare toh ek war me hi bade se bade sena ka vidhwansh kar de

Aur humara mukabla is patal lok ke raja se hai toh uski shaktiyon ko kam mat samjho

Abhi usne itna bola hi tha lekin itni der me mene trinertea ko jagrit kar ke puri jaankari ikattha karvli thi aur abhi me kuch bolta ki tabhi

Lakshmi :- toh tum bhi hume kam mat samajho

Lakshami ko aise achanak dekh kar me shocked ho gaya tha

Me :- lakshmi tum yaha kya kar rahi ho tumhe C Lok me hona chahiye tha

L :- acha toh tum alag alag lokon me ghum kar alag alag adventure karoge aur me waha rajniti me boar hoti rahungi kyu aur waise bhi me apna chayaroop waha chodke aayi hoon

Lakshmi ka ye jawab sunkar me kuch bolne wala tha ki tabhi

S :- dekho tum premiyon ke bich me mera bolna galat hoga lekin humare pass samay nahi hai jald hi woh puri shakti se hum par aakraman kare usse pahle hume us tak pahuchna hoga

L :- ha sahi kaha aapne hume jaldi karna chahiye naki aise faltu ki discussion me apna Time waste karna chahiye

Me :- agar sab pahle se tay karke hi aayi ho toh ab me kya bolu chalo lekin jab tak me na bolu tab tak kisi se bhi ladai jhagda mat karna samjhi

L :- yes ab chale ya yahi lecture dene ka plan hai kya

Me :- nahi aadhi raat ka jab atal lok ka darwaja khulega

L :- aur ye darwaja kaha khulega

S :- BAIKAL JHEEL ke ekdum gahrai me jaha ek gufa hai wahi hai atal lok ka dwar

L :- kya kaha tumne mujhe kuch samajh nahi aaya

Me :- south east siberia me ek lake hai jo ki is duniya ki sabse purani aur ghari jheel hai

Lake Baikal is the oldest (25 million years) and deepest (1,700 m) lake in the world.

L :- wow starting me hi itna acha adventure maja aayega

Me :- ha woh toh hai jab tumhe pani ke andar 5387 feet andar jana hoga toh maja kaise nahi aayega

Meri baat sunke lakshmi ka muh aisa ho gaya jaise najane kya hi dekh liya ho

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Abhi hum teeno atal lok ke andar pravesh kar gaye the ye jagah jitni bhayanak ab tak lag rahi thi usse kai guna jyada bhayanak thi

Jo dekh kar lakshmi ne darke maare halke se mera hath pakad liya abhi hum kuch dur pahuche hi the ki hume waha khali jagah par ek kale rang ka jhanda laga hua dikhayi de raha tha

S :- abhi hum atal lok ke seema ke thik saamne khade hain yaha se atal lok shuru hota hai aur atal lok ke aakhri chor pe bhi thik aisa hi dhwaj dikhayi dega aur us dhwaj ke neeche se hi hum vittal lok ja payenge jiske liye hume ek khas shakti ki jarurat hai jo hume is atal lok ke bicho bich bane mahal me milegi

Me :- toh yaha time pass kyu kar rahe ho chalo aage badhte hai

S :- agar hum aise hi aage badhe toh jald hi atal lik ke sipahi hume gher lenge aur phir unke saath yudh kiye bina hum aage nahi badh payenge

Me :- toh kya hua hum yaha yudh ke liye hi aaye hai woh chahe abhi ho ya baadme kya farak padta hai

S :- hum dono toh ladh lenge lakshmi ka kya woh kaise ladhegi uske pass abhi utna anubhav nahi hai jo itne bada yudh woh akele ladh legi

Me :- usme kya hai lakshmi ko bas ek kawach ki jarurat hai jo mene use de diya hai baki woh khud saksham hai

S:- jo karna hai karo tumhe bol ke fayda bhi nahi hai tumhara devil roop patal lok ki tamsikta se aur prabal ho raha hai

Phir mene use ignore kar ke aage badha aur jo dhwaj waha jamin me gada hua tha use mene pakad ke ukhad diya us jhande ko nikalte waha ki puri dharti hilne lagi jaise waha bhukamp sa aa gaya ho aur dekhte hi dekhte waha bahut sare jeev aa gaye

Jinme kuch asur the toh kuch asuri jeev aur kuch mahakay daitya the unhone jab mere hath me unka jhanda dekha toh woh sabhi bina kuch bole sune apne hathiyaar leke humare aur daud pade aaye

Jab humne Unhe aise aata dekha toh hum teeno bhi taiyar ho gaye aur hum teeno alag ho gaye jisse lakshmi asur sainikon se ladhti Sentry asuri jeevon se aur me mahakay daityon se jab hum teeno alag huye

Toh sab se pahle lakshmi ne apna hissa sambhala is waqt usne apne dono hathon me talware pakdi hui thi aur jaise hi koi bhi asur uske paas aata toh woh apne talwaar se use turant kaat deti abhi woh asuron se ladh hi rahi thi ki tabhi

Un asuron me se ek asur ne apni shakti se ek aag ka gola bana kar uski taraf bhej diya lekin mere diye kawach ki wajah se woh bach gayi aur woh aag ka gola reflect hoke jis disha se aaya tha usi disha me wapas jake usi asur ko jalakar rakh kar diya

Is humle ke baad lakshami ne bhi apne shaktiyon ka istemaal karna shuru kar diya woh abhi talwaron se toh sabko kaat hi rahi thi ki tabhi uske costume se tanticles nikal ne lage aur woh tanticles bhi kisi talwaar ki tarah sabhi asuron ko kaate ja rahe the

Toh wahi dusri taraf

Is waqt Sentry ke saamne asuri jeev jo dikhne me aade insaan aur aadhe jaanwar lag rahe the jinhe dekh ke Sentry aise khada ho gaya jaise ki freezr ho gaya hi aur isi baat ka fayda utha kar unhone dekhte hi dekhte Sentry ko gherna shuru kar diya aur ye dekh kar sentry ke aakho me chamak aur chehre par muskan aa gayi

Aur jaise hi asuron ne use puri tarike gher liya toh tabhi usne apne hath ko apne kandhe se samantar unchayi pe utha diya jisse uske haath me ek kulhadi jaisa hathiyaar aa gaya tha aur us hathiyaar ke aate hi Sentry bhi action me aa gaya aur usne sabse pahle jo sipahi uske najdeek the unhe maarna shuru kar diya

Jo bhi uske paas aata woh uski gardan hi uda deta aur jo door the woh unhe apne heat vision se maarne lagta jisse jald hi usne bhi apna ilaka saaf kar diya ab bas me bacha tha

Wahi ab mere taraf

Is waqt me ek jagah shant khada tha aur mere saamne sare mahakay daitya the jinhe dekh ke mene turant hi apne dhanush ko yaad kiya aur jaise hi woh mere haath me aaya waise hi mene turant hi dhnush ki pratyncha khich di thi ab me chahta toh sabko ek hi tir me khatam kar deta lekin na jane mujhe kya hua aur mene dhanush ko gayab kar diya aur apne dono hathon ko aage kar diya jisse mere hahon me ye aa gaya

Jise dekh kar sare daitya piche hatne lage jo dekh mere chehre pe muskaan si aa gayi aur phir mene jo daitya sabse aage tha uske uper us chain se attack kar diya jisse us chain ke saath lagi blade sidha us daitya ke gale me ghus gayi aur jaise hi mene us chain ko halka sa apni or khicha toh woh blade us asur ka gala fadte hue bahar aayi aur phir kya me us blade ke hi madad se alag alag kala bajiya dikhate hue un sare mahakay daityon ko maarne laga

Jisse dekhte hi dekhte waha daitya bhi khatam ho gaye lekin abhi woh sabhi mare nahi the toh atal lok se aur bhi tezi aur pahle se do gune log aane lage jinko aata dekh mene aur Sentry ne turant hi dono ke vidyut tarng ko ekagra karke unke taraf bhej diya jisse waha itna bada aur damdaar blast hua ki jitne bhi sipahi us disha se aa rahe the woh sab ek saath mare gaye

S :- jab tak hum inke raja ko nahi marenge ye nahi marne wale

Me :- toh der kiski hai agli tukadi aaye usse pahle hum hi chalte hai yaha se

Phir hum teeno chal pade atal lok ke madhya bane mahal ki or jo li dikhne se bada bhavya dikh raha tha lekin woh puri tarike se kale rang ka tha jo use bilkul bhayanak bana raha tha aur jab hum uske pass pahuche toh

Me :- Sentry aur lakshmi tum dono yaha se aage badho jaha vital lok ka dwar hai aur waha mere aane se pahle saaf safai kar dena tab tak main yaha ka swachata abhiyaan pura kar ke aata hu

L :- lekin tum akele

S :- woh sambahal lega hume chalna chahiye kaam jitne jaldi ho utna acha hota hai

Uske baad me woh dono aage ke liye nikal gaye aur me wahi ruk gaya lakshmi jana toh nahi chahti thi lekin mere aur Sentry ke baton ke dabaw me aake chali gayi aur phir me bhi mahal me ghus gaya waha pe jitne bhi sipahi mere raste me aate unhe me apne khaas wepon "Machete" se maar deta

Aise hi thodi tabahi machkar me raj mahal ke madhya me pahuch gaya jaha pe atal lok ka raja apni rajya seema pe jo tabahi humne machayi thi uske liye apne mantriyon pe gussa kar raha tha us bichare ko kya pata ki woh bawandar jisne seema pe tabahi machayi ab woh chakriwad ka roop leke uske sabha gruh tak aa pahucha hai

Atal lok ke raja ka Short intro

Raja medhavi :- atal lok par isika raj hai ye apne pita ka eklauta ladka hai jis wajah se uske maut ke baad ise choti umra me hi raja banaya gaya jisse iske andar ka bachpana abhi bhi jinda hai ek baar jo vastu pasand aaye use pake hi rahta hai chahe uske liye ise kitna hi khoon kyu na bahana pade

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