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(dada ji) Thakur samsher paratap singh
(dadi ji) sandhya devi
(chacha) thakur dharmveer pratap singh
(chachi) sharmila singh
Mina aur rina :- sisters
Rina hero ki lover aur sex partner
Mina hero ki lover aur sex partner
(chote chacha) :- thakur veer pratap singh
(me) :- thakur rajveer pratap singh
Rajni :- hero ki asli maa (dead)
Ranveer :- hero ke pita (dead)
Nana :- shekhar chaudhry
Nani :- sima Chaudhary
B. Mama :- arun
Mami :- kamini
C. Mama :- sanjay
Mosi :- deepa
Sanika :- mosi ki beti
Swati :- sanika ki dost
(guide) aacharya raghwendra
Kaal :- hero inhi ke shaktiyon ka uttaradhikari hai
(hero ke roop)
King
Yodha
Sadhu
Tantrik
Angel
Devil
Side characters
Mira ma :- hero ke liye maa saman aur hero ki pahali sex partner
Sakshi :- hero par crush hai aur uski second sex partner
Kajri :- ye bhi hero ki sex partner hai
Bheema :- dadaji ka right hand
Shera :- bheema ka chota beta
Sangram :- bheema ka bada beta
Shiva :- bheema ka bhatija
Billa :- nanaji ka right hand
Some upcoming character
Lakshmi :- main heroine
Lakshmi ke pita :- sunil singh
Others not have to much role
Pandit ji :- lakshmi ke gharwalon ke kulguru
JASIEN :- hero ka jinn aur jinnlok ka rajkumar
Mr. Negative :- the one of the villain
Suba :- the slave of Mr. Negative
Umir :- also slave of Mr. Negative
Mahamahim unknown villain
(Brijesh) Prabhu the great god from eternal religion
Powers of hero
1) sapt chakr
2) five element
3) slow mode
4) third eye
5) his varients (roop)
6) vijayi dhanush
7) mayavi shaktiya (from tantrik)
8) satvik shaktiya (from sadhu)
9) knowledge
10) chakra astra
11) weponide dragon
12) tamsik tatva (from devil)
13) satvik tatva (ashta vidhi) (from angel)
14) the reaper army (devils army)
The powers of heroine
1) super strength
2) flying ability
3) mind control ability
4) the Carnage Queen
5) the Carnage Army
6) The wepons creating ability
7) the carnage armour
8) copy cat
And some more characters are comming in future
Jin characters ka kahani me jyada roll nahi hai unhe ignore kia gaya hai

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[Bilal jan]

Update 170 (time over)

Mr. Negative :- ab dekhte hain tum kya chunte ho tumhari shaktiya dekhkar me ye toh samajh gaya ki me jinda nahi bachunga lekin ab ye dharti bhi nahi bachegi

Uske itna bolte hi mene apni talwar se uska sar kaat diya uske marte hi sare asur daitya gayab ho gaye aur suba ko toh lakshmi ne maar diya tha

Uske baad lakshmi mere pass aayi

L :- raj ye kya hai tumne mujhe bataya kyu nahi

Me :- hum dono ki majburiya dono ko pata hai hum kisi ko bhi nahi bata sakte apne baare me

L :- ab kya hoga woh Mr. Negative marte hue kya bol raha tha

Abhi usne itna bola hi tha ki tabhi us pure jagah pe bhukamp ke jhatke lagne lage jise mahsoos kar ke hum dono bhi us jungle se bahar nikal ke khuli jagah me aa gaye aur jaise hi waha aaye toh waha ka nazara dekhke toh hum dono ke hi dimag sann rah gaye hum dono mese kisi ko bhi kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ki ye ho kya raha hai

Is waqt pura aasman lal rang ka ho rakha tha jaise ki aasman me kisi ne har jagah khoon faila diya ho aur ye kam tha ki tabhi meri nazar aasman se gir rahe ulka pindon pe giri jise dekh mujhe Mr. Negative ki baat yaad aane lagi "ab ye dharti bhi nahi bachegi" uske baat ka matlab ye tha

L. :- ab hum kya karenge raj agar ye ulka pind dharti se takra gaye toh bahut badi problem ho jayegi

Me :- JASIEN batao mujhe

JASIEN :- aaka ye koi aam ulka nahi ye khaas asuri ulka hai jine rokne ke liye unhe aasman me hi khatam karna hoga agar ek bhi ulka dharti se takrayi toh yaha itni tabahi mach jayegi ki aap soch bhi nahi paoge

Me :- thik hai phir (lakshmi se) lakshmi tum dharti par sabki madad karo me aasman me in ulkaon ko rokta hoon

L :- lekin me bhi sath aaungi

Me :- samjho lakshmi me uper ulkaon ko sambhal lunga lekin agar dharti pe koi khatra aaya toh kisi ko rukna hoga yaha pe

L :- theek hai lekin tum akele

Me :- me akela kaha hoon mere saath JASIEN hai na

Mere itna bolte hi JASIEN mere sharir se alag ho gaya aur apne asli jinn wale roop me aa gaya jise dekh kar lakshmi bhi dar ke maare piche hat gayi

Me :- chalo JASIEN

Itna bolke mene apne angel wings nikal liye aur me JASIEN ke saath chal pada aasman me jaha lakhon ki sankhya me ulka pind dharti ki taraf badh rahe the lekin ye acha hai ki abhi tak woh dharti ki gravitational force ke bahar the phir mene apni aakhe band karke apne aur bhi sathi matlab mera dragon aur THE REAPER dono ko bhi waha aasman me prakat kiya

Me :- JASIEN tum dharti ke dusre taraf ulkaon ko roko (reaper se) tum uttar disha me jao aur ulkaon ko roko (dragon se) aur tum dakshin taraf yaad rahe ulkaon ko rokne ke liye une puri tarike se tabah karna hai

Mere bolte hi woh teeno apni apni position lene chale gaye toh wahi neeche dharti par jaise jaise woh ulkaye dharti ke taraf badh rahe the waise dharti par bhi samudron me iska parinaam dikh raha tha samudron ki lahren tezi se samudra taton par takra rahi thi jisse sabhi beaches ko red alert par rakh diya tha aur jo log pahle se hi maujood the unke rescue ke liye police force army sab tainat the aur jo samudra me doob rahe the unhe lakshmi apni flying power se bacha rahi thi

Wahi jab sab ne lakshmi ko C. Queen ke roop me dekha toh sab use superhero bolke cheer karne lage jisse lakshmi apni khushi sambhal nahi pa rahi thi aisa pahli baar uske saath ho raha tha lekin usne khudko sambhal liya aur phir se insano ko bachane lagi

Toh wahi media bhi kam nahi thi woh sabhi apne news channels ke dwara sabko saawdhan kar rahi thi har taraf dar ka mahoul dikh raha tha lekin aise me media lakshmi ke kaarnamon ko dikha kar sabko bishwas bhi dila rahe the

Jaha lakshmi india me har taraf logon ko bacha rahi thi toh wahi guide aur kaal adrushya hokar alag alag deshon me logon ki madad kar rqhe the

Toh wahi aasman me maujood satelight bhi mere aur mere saathiyon ki image ko dharti pe bhej rahe the jisse har taraf mujhe aur lakshmi ko bhagwan ka roop ya phir super man ki tarah koi alien samajh raha tha jo unhe is aapda se bachane aaye hai

Me batadu is waqt me kaal ke costume me tha jisse kisi ko mera chehra nahi dikh raha tha lekin sabhi REAPER JASIEN aur dragon ko dekh ke shocked jaroor the

Toh wahi mere ghar pe news sabhi ne dekh li thi aur waha wahi ho raha tha jo hona chahiye tha news dekhte hi mom aur didi mere number par call laga rahe the woh bhi non stop toh wahi dadaji aur ghar ke baki member sabhi praja jan ki suraksha karne ke liye kuch na kuch kar rahe the dadaji ns apne contacts laga kar shergarh me army force ko tainat karva diya tha suraksha ke liye

Toh wahi aasman me

Is waqt me aasman me maujood tha mere hath me mera vijayi dhanush bhi maujood tha jisse leke me taiyar tha aur jaise hi woh ulka mere nazdeek aaye waise hi mene apne dhanush se tir chalana start kar diya aur ek ke baad ek me ulkaon pe aakraman karta ja raha tha wahi jaise hi mene pahal ki waise hi REAPER JASIEN aur Dragon bhi start ho gaye

Me apne tiron se lagatar ulkaon ko todte ja raha tha me ab ek saath tin tin arrow chala raha tha jisse meri speed bhi bad rahi thi aur ulkaon ki bhi toh wahi JASIEN bhi apne magic se ek saath 5-6 ulkaon ko nasht kar raha tha toh REAPER bhi apni sword se ulkaon ko nasht karta ja raha tha toh wahi dragon ulkaon ko kabhi apne puch se door fekta ya kabhi apne sar se maar ke tod deta toh kabhi apne pankhon se unhe door uda deta jisse jyadatar ulakaye ek dusre se hi takrake tutte ja rahe the

Abhi me ulkaon ko tod raha tha ki tabhi mere mastishk me prabhu ki aawaj sunayi dene lagi aur saath me hi kuch pictures bhi dikh rahe the

Prabhu :- raj in aam teeron se asuri ulkaon ka tum jyada der saamna nahi kar paoge tumhe divya astra ka istemaal karna hoga ye kuch divya astra hai jo Tumhaari sahayata karenge

Phir Mene parbhu ke kahe anusaar divya astron ka aavhan kia sarva pratham astra tha BAHUBAAN is astra se chalaya hua ek tir dhanush se chutne ke kuch hi der me hazaron tiron me badal jata

Jiske istemaal se me ab ek saath hazaron ulkaye nasht karte ja raha tha ki tabhi mere dimag me ek idea aaya aur mene hum charon ke saamne ek portal create kiya jiska exit point usi portal ke thik uper tha horizontal way me jisse sare ulakaye us portal mese teleport hokar ek dusre se takrake khud hi nasht ho rahe thi jisse jald hi is ulkapat ki samasya se chutkara mil gaya aur phir mene ek aur portal banake un ulakon ke tukdon ko dharti se lakho karodo yojan dur phek diya jisse woh kabhi wapas na aaye aur phir darti wasiyon ki memory se mene aaj ki sari ghatna ko mita diya

Lekin abhi musibat kam nahi hui thi abhi bhi ek bahut badi musibat mera intezaar kar rahi thi

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Zabardast update

 

[Bilal jan]

Update 171 (time of tragedy)

Jaha ye sab hi raha tha wahi dharti lok ke neeche andhere ke samrajya patal lok me is waqt koi tha jo aaj ke incident ko baar baar dekh raha tha khaskar raj ke moves aur actions ko

Woh :- wahhh kya yodha hai ye is par kabu pane me maja aayega THAKUR RAJVEER PRATAP SINGH taiyaar ho jao ab tumhare saamne me khada hoon lekin me tumhare nazdeek nahi agaar dhoondh paye toh tum maroge aur agar nahi dhundh paye toh sabko marte dekhoge jiski shurwat me hi kar deta hoon

Itna bolke usne apni aakhe band ki aur kuch badabadane laga aur jaise hi usne aakhe kholi waise hi dharti lok ke ek area me blast hua jise mahsoos kar ke woh joro joro se hasne laga

Wahi dharti par

Is waqt mene apne shaktiyon ke madad se lakshmi ko Teleport karke apne adde pe le gaya tha jo ki jungle me tha jab Lakshmi ne achanak apne ap ko achanak jungle me Teleport hote dekha toh ek pal woh bhi sachet ho gayi lekin jab usne aaspass ke jungle ko dekha toh use yaad aaya ki ye wahi jagah hai jaha pe mene use C. Queen ke sampoorn ansh saumpa tha ye yaad aate hi woh thodi normal ho gayi thi ki tabhi me bhi waha pahuch gaya

L :- tumne mujhe yaha Teleport kyu kiya pata hai waha pe sab hume bhagwan ka ansh maan rahe the agar tum mujhe yaha nahi late toh hume woh sab bhagwan ki upaadi de dete

Me :- jisne bhi khud ko god ke jagah imagine kiya hai uska vinash hi hua hai

L :- tum itne sad kyu ho

Me :- kuch theek nahi lag raha hai aisa lag raha hai kahi kuch bahut burs ho raha hai lekin me kuch dekh nahi pa raha hoon na jane konsi aisi shakti hai jo mujhe dhyan lagane nahi de rahi hai

L :- aaj tumne bahut kaam kiya hai tumhe rest ki jarurat hai jao aaram karo aur ha kal tum mujhse milne aaoge aur sab sach bataoge shuru se

Me :- kal milte hain

Itna bolke mene ek portak open kar diya jisse lakshmi apne ghar chali gayi phir JASIEN, REAPER and Dragon bhi mere andar sama gaye phir me usi jagah chala gaya jaha meri bike park thi phir me waha se sidha me ghar ki aur chal pada

Jab me ghar ke najdeek pahucha toh waha pahle se hi logon ki bheed lagi hui thi jise dekh kar mijhe thoda ajib laga lekin me jaise hi ghar ke gate tak pahucha meri saas hi atak gayi aisa lagne laga jaise ki kisi ne jite ji mujhe maut de di ho saamne ka nazara hi dil dahla dene wala tha saamne mere apne ghar ko dekh kar aisa lag raha tha ki jaise kisi ne waha blast kiya ho abhi me ghar ko dekh kar sambhal nahi paya tha ki tabhi mere samne kuch hospital ke karmchari mere ghar se kuch logo ki lashe leke ja rahe the jo lashe koi aur nahi mera pariwaar hi tha

Ye scene dekh kar mujhe itna jyada shock laga ki me wahi par baith gaya aur apna gala phad ke rone laga meri aawaj sunke jab sab ka dhyan meri aur gaya tab bhima kaka aage aaye aur mujhe sambhalne lage lekin me kaha sambhalne wala tha mere uper toh jaise musibaton ka pabad tut gaya tha

Ye khabar failte jyada der nahi lagi is khabar ko milte hi nanaji ka pariwar aur lakshmi ka pariwar dono bhi humare gjar aa gaye the phir nana ji ne sari formality puri kar ke un sabke bodies ko apne kabje me liya phir mere hatho sabka riti riwaj mutabik antim sanskar hua phir aise hi 15 din beet gaye nana nani mere saath hi rahne lage toh lakshmi bhi ab aaye din aane lagi thi abhi me apne kamre me baithe hue apne purane yadon kovhi yaad kar raha tha ki tabhi mere dimag me kuch khayal aane lage jinke baare me abhi main soch raha tha ki tabhi mere room ke darwaje pe knock hua jab maine door khol ke dekha toh door pe nanaji khade the

Nana ji :- raj pichld 15 dinon se tumne khud ko aise band karke rakha hai ab shok bahut ho gaya agar tumhare dada dadi tumhe aise dekh rahe honge toh unhe kitna bura lagega thoda bahar nikala karo logon me jao pahle ki tarah raha karo me nahi kah raha ki sab bhul jao lekin ab tum aage badho kab tak ek hi dukh ko sahte baithoge. Me tumhara niche intezaar kar raha hoon ye kuch documents hai sambhalke rakhna

Itna bolke woh chale gaye lekin unke baton ka mere uper jyada asar nahi hua tha na mere pass koi aur tarika tha isiliye mene wahi baithne ka faisla kiya lekin tabhi mera dhyan waha rakhe papers par gaya jo ki property ke papers the jo dadaji ne mere naam ki thi mene unhe ye karne se bahut roka tha lekin phir bhi unhone mujhe kasam dilake ye sab mere naam kiya tha

Jab me unhe cupboard me rakhne gaya toh waha mujhe wohi bansuri dikhi jo mene us bache se kharidi thi Jise dekh kar mere man me achanak hi prabhu ke khayal aane lage aur mere hath apne ap hi us bansuri ke taraf badhne lage aur jab mene us bansuri ko pakda toh mere man uth rahe sare dukh jaise kam hone lage jo mahsus karke mere man ko vichitra si shantata milne lagi

Usi shantata me kab me woh bansuri ko apne hothon se laga kar bajane laga ye mujhe bhi pata nahi chalaabhi me woh bansuri baja raha tha ki tabhi mere kano me man mohane wali aawaj sunayi dene lagi jo ki kisi aur ki nahi khud prabhu ki thi

Prabhu :- kya hua raj tum bade ashant aur dukhi ho

Me :- toh kya karu prabhu aap toh sab jaante hai phir bhi ye sawal

Prabhu :- jeevan mrutyu toh sab bhagya ka khel hai

Me :- lekin prabhu kya fayda mere pass itni sari shaktiya hone ka jab me apne pariwar ko hi bacha nahi paya toh

Prabhu :- mene tumse pahle hi kaha tha raj ab sab kuch tumhare chunav pe nirbhar karta hai ki tum apna swarth chunte ho ya jan kalyan

Me :- toh ab mujhe kya karna chahiye prabhu

Prabhu :- wahi jo tum ab tak karte aaye ho chunav ya toh apne pariwar ke shok me aise hi baithe baithe aasu bahao ya phir apne karm karo

Itna bolke woh gayab ho gaye aur jab mera dhyan tuta toh me apne kamre me laita hua tha jaise hi me utha mere man me prabhu ki kahi gayi baate wapas aane lagi jiske baad mene ye tay kar liya tha ki ab shok mana kar koi fayda nahi hai ab mera ek hi maksad hai aur soh tha revenge mere pariwar ke maut ka revenge

Ye khayal mere dimag me aate hi me turant uth gaya aur dhyan lagane laga aur jis din ye sab hua tha us din ki sari ghatnaon ko me apne tri netra se delhne laga

Sabse pahle mene apne ghar ke drushya dikhe jisse me ye toh jaan gaya tha ki ye dhamaka kisi shaitaani shakti ne hi kia tha kyunki ghar me sab thik tha achanak kahi se kali roshni aayi mera pura ghar us kali roshni ke andhakar me dub gaya

Wahi uske baad mene us jagah ke drushya dekhne laga jaha par meri aur Mr. Negative ki fight hui thi jab me woh sab dekh raha tha toh mera dhyan usi crystal pe gaya jisse woh Mr. Negative ne JASIEN ko bhi waar na karne par majboor kar diya tha us crystal ko dekh kar mene turant dhyan tod diya aur JASIEN ko bulane laga

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Shandaar update

 

[Bilal jan]

Update 172 (woh 15 din)

Ab dekhte hain in 15 dinon me kya kya ho gaya

Jab se raj ns khud ko apne kamre me band kar ke rakha hai tabhi se uske nana har jagah chaanbeen kar rahe hai ki achanak se ghar me itni badi aag lagi kaise lekin har baar result ke roop me short circuit hi unke saamne aata lekin isse woh shant nahi baith rahe the woh toh jaise mano har tarah se confirm karana chahte the unhe baar baar check karne par bhi short circuit ke piche kya reason hai iske baare me pata nahj pad raha tha jisse ab haar maan kar unhone raj ko leke permanently surajgarh jane ka faisla kiya hai ab dekhte hain raj maanta hai ya nahi

Toh wahi dusri taraf

Jaha ek tarf raj apne dukhon se ladh raha tha wahi patal lok me koi tha jo raj ke har choti se choti baat par dhyan rakhe hua tha itna hi nahi toh woh raj ke sabhi purane kand ko bhi dekh raha tha jaise ki woh uski shaktiyon ke baare me puri tarah se jaankari lena chata hai toh is sab ke saath hi woh raj ke saath saath hi lakshmi pe bhi nazar rakhe hua tha lekin kuch samay se lakshmi ko woh apne shaktiyo se dhundh nahi pa raha tha ab iske piche kya kaaran hai woh toh hume bhi dekhna hoga

Jab raj ne apne dukhon me khud ko kaid kar liya tha tab se har din lakshmi usse milne jati lekin raj waha bhi apne hi khayalon me ghira hota jisse woh bina usse baat kiye woh apne ghar laut jati toh aise hi ek din jab lakshmi raj se milke wapas aayi thi toh jaise hi usne apne kamre ka darwaja band kiya waise hi uske phiche se ek aadmi ki aawaj aayi jise sunkar woh turant palat gayi aur usne dekha ki uske kamre 5 log khade the jo ki dekhne se hi woh bilkul Carnage ki tarah dikh rahe the lekin kisi bhi aam Carnage se alag the inki sharir rachna bilkul insanon jaisi thi wahi jab lakshmi ne apne saamne un Carnage group ko dekha toh woh turant hi C. Queen ke roop me aa gayi aur uske aise karte hi woh pancho apne ghutno pe baith gaye

L :- kon ho tum aur yaha kya kar rahe ho

C1 :- ham sabhi aapke sewak hai queen jab se aapne un dono maniyon ko apne andar samaya hai tabhi se hi hum aapko dhoondh rahe the lekin aapka kawach hume aapko dekhne se har baar rok deta th aur jab aapne is dharti ko bachane ke liye apni shaktiyon ka istemaal kia tab hume aapke baare me pata chala aur hum aapko yaha se le jane ke liye aa gaye

L :- lekin aap sab mujhe kaha le jane aaye ho aur aap sab ho kaun

C2 :- aapko us rakshak ke shrap ke kaaran kuch yaad nahi hai me aapka senapati aur ye sabhi aapke mantrigan hai aur hum sab aapko Carnage lok le jane aaye hai jaha aapko apki yadon ke saath hi aapki sampoorn shaktiya bhi milegi aur phir aap pahle ke tarah pure Carnage lok pe raj karogi

L :- nahi me aapke saath nahi aa sakti mere yaha bahut se kaam pending hai un asuron ka ant karn hai mere mata pita unka kya

C3 :- uski chita mat kijiye aap maharani ye aapke mata pita toh kewal parchayi matra hai inke asli roop aur aapke asali mata pita toh Carnage lok me aapka intezaar kar rahe hai yaha jo hai woh kewal unki ek parchayi hai jo dharti pe aapko koi pareshaani na ho isiliye hai abhi aaj woh samay aa gaya hai jab aap apne shrap se mukt ho jao aur apne lok ko punha apne adhin kare

L :- lekin raj (baat badalte hue) Yaha aur bhi kaam hai mujhe

C1 :- aap us ladke ki baat kar rahi ho hum jaante hain lekin jo aapko andhere me rakha itne dino tak aapki sachai jaan ke bhi usne aapko apni sachai se anjaan rakha jo sari shaktiya woh aapko aasani se de Sakta tha uske liye usne aapko dhyan jaise durgan aur lamba marg bataya usse kai guna jyada gyani aur shaktishali yodha hai Carnage lok me

L :- lekin

Abhi lakshmi kuch bolti ki tabhi uske man me ek aawaj sunayi dene lagi

Aawaj :- lakshmi beta teri maa tujhe gale lagane ke liye tadap rahi hai jaldi aaja

Ji ye aawaj lakshmi ke maa ki thi jo shayad Carnage lok se telepathic connection ke dwara baat kar rahi thi jise sunne ke baad lakshmi jaise emotional ho gayi

L :- thik hai me chalne ke liye taiyar hu bas ek baar raj se milne do

C2 :- humare pass itna samay nahi hai agar muhurt se pahle ye karya nahi hua toh aapko apni shaktiya pane ke liye agle raktchand tak ka intjaar karna hoga

L :- theek hai chaliye

Lakshmi ke sanmati pate hi uske kamre me ek portal khula aur woh sabhi bhi usi portal se chalr gaye toh wahi lakshmi ke mata pita ke parchayi roop bhi achanak gayab ho gaye

Toh wahi

In 15 dino me dharti par aur bhi bahut se mehman aaye ab dekhte hai raj inse kab aur kaise milta hai

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Awesome update

 

[Shanu]

Very nice update Bhai

 

[VAJRADHIKARI]

Update 173

Present time

Abhi me us din ki fight scenes ko dekh raha tha ki tabhi mera dhyan us crystal pe gaya jiske madad se woh Mr. Negative JASIEN tak ko rok pa raha tha aur phir mene use apne andar sama liya tha jiske baare me yaad aate hi mene turant JASIEN ko bulane laga jiske turant baad woh mere saamne khada tha

JASIEN :- hukum aaka

Me :- mujhe us crystal ke baare me sab sach batao

JASIEN :- aaka woh crystal koi aam crystal nahi balki jinn crystal hai duniya ke sabhi jinnon ka shakti strot bhi aap kah sakte ho aapko yaad hai mene aapko rakt chand ki kahani batai thi (update 115) ye usi ka hissa hai chand par jo shakti strot tha usi strot ek chotasa bhag hai ye jinn crystal jo pichle kai salon se hum jinno ke pass tha

Me :- toh woh us asur ke pass kaise pahuch gaya

JASIEN :- usne jaroor jin lok par humla kiya hoga aur usne jin lok par kabja karke waha se ye crystal churaya hoga kyunki ye crystal usi ko mil sakta hai jo jinn lok ke sinhasan par virajman ho

Me :- phir toh hume jaldi se jinn lok jana chahiye waha na jane kya sthiti ho gayi hongi

JASIEN :- ji aaka me bhi kitne dino se aapko yahi bolna chahta tha lekin aapka dukh dekh kar me aapse kuch baat nahi kar pata

Me :- koi baat nahi abhi mujhe lakshmi ko bhi sanbhalna hoga woh toh jaroor gussa ho gi

JASIEN :- aaka pixhle kuch dino se me unhe apne jadui shaktiyon se dekhne ki koshish kar raha hoon lekin me unhe dekh nahi pa raha hoon

Me :- ye kaise ho sakta hai hume jald hi lakshmi ke pass jana chahiye

Uske baad me aur JASIEN turant teleport hoke lakshmi ke ghar ke pass pahuch gaye jaha laakshmi ke ghar pe lock laga tha jise dekh kar me shocked ho gaya mene bhi use apne tri netra se dhundhne ki poori koshish ki lekin me use dekh nahi pa raha tha

Phir me waha se wapas apne ghar aa gaya jaha par nanaji ne mujhe unka faisla sunaya jise sunkar mere dimaag me ek idea aaya jiske tahet mene nanaji se kah diya ki me khud ko sambhalne ke liye aur jo bhi hua usse ubharne ke liye world tour karna chahta hoon woh bhi akele

Jiske liye woh maan toh nahi rahe the aur mere pass jyada samay bhi nahi tha isiliye majboor hoke mujhe sammohan vidya ka istemaal karna pada jisse nana ji ek pal me maan gaye phit me bhi nikal pada apne mission par puri duniya ke nazar me world tour lekin asal me is sab ke piche us asur ko dhoondhne jisne Mr. Negative ko yaha bheja tha

Jaha me apne mission par nikal gaya tha toh wahi woh shaks jo mujh par nazar rakhe hue tha woh bhi ye sab dekh pa raha tha

Woh :- acba badi jaldi apne dhukhon pe kabu pa liya chalo acha hai ab dekhte hai ye is pariksha me ab kaise pass hota hai THAKUR RAJVEER PRATAP SINGH tumne apne jeewan kal me bahut sari parikshaye di hongi lekin ye un sab me sabse kathin hogi kyunki ye pariksha lene wala tumhara guide nahi balki mr hoon shaitaan (devil smile ke sath) tumhare andar ki achayi ka dushman

Itna bolke woh joro se hasne laga aur jab uski hasi band hui toh woh joro se chillake bolne laga

Shaitaan :- jao jinn lok ja rahe ho na toh tumhari pariksha ki shurwat bhi wahi se hogi aur wahi pe tumhe mere baare me pata chalega phir aayega maja ab dekhte hai kya kar pate ho tum

Wahi is waqt me aur JASIEN ek susaan se pahad par khade the jiske thik saamne JASIEN ne ek portal khola hua tha jiske dusre taraf mujhe kewal andhkaar dikh raha tha

JASIEN :- aaka yahi rasta hai jinn lok jane ke liye

Me :- lekin dusri taraf toh mujhe kewal andhakar dikh raha hai

JASIEN :- aaka ye jadui portal hai bahar se jinn lok aapko andhakar me hi dikhega agar use dekhna ho toh aapko jinn lok ke andar pravesg karna hoga

Me :- theek hai chalo phir

Phir me aur JASIEN us portal ke andar chale gaye aur pahuch gaye jinn lok jaha par is waqt JASIEN mere andar sama gaya tha aur phir mere sharir par kawach ki tarah chadh gaya tha is waqt shayad me us jinn lok ke gate pe khada tha mere saamne 2 bade gate the jo ki puri tarike se sone ke bane hue the jinhe kholne ke liye jaise hi mene un gates ko chua waise hi mere saamne 2 asur aa gaye jinhe dekh ke JASIEN ne mere man me bola

JASIEN :- aaka ye asur yaha hai matlab andar bhi sab kuch un asuron ke kabje me hi hoga yaha se aage mujhe sambhalne dijiye

Me :- theek hai karo apne man ki

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[peerdip Meena]

Nice update bro

 

[Naughtyrishabh]

Update 168 (only 12 hours left)

Is waqt Mr. Negative usi jungle me maujood tha apne baki asuri sena ke saath shayad woh kisi chij ka intezaar kar raha tha abhi woh intezaar kar raha tha ki tabhi waha woh daitya aa gaya jiske saath me aur lakshmi behose avastha me the

Me behose hone ka natak karte hue us pure jungle ko dekh raha tha aur itni badi asuri sena daitya sena ko dekh kar me bhi soch me pad gaya me abhi soch hi raha tha ki tabhi mere saamne Mr. Negative aa gaya

Mr. Negative :- (daitya se) sbabash mere veer yodha tumne is C. Queen ko aakhir pakad hi liya (mere taraf ishara kar ke) ye ladka kon hai kahi ye woh toh nahi (uska matlab JASIEN se tha)

D :- nahi hukum ye woh nahi hai balki ye is C. Queen ka premi hai jab ye waha behose hua tha toh mene is ladki ke man me iske liye prem ki bhavna mahsoos ki thi aur wahi is ladke ke andar se bhi wahi bhavnaon ko mene mahsoos kia tha

Mr. Negative :- (haste hue) ha ha ha ab dekhte hai kitna majboot prem hai inka bandh do is ladke ko aur dono ko hosh me lao

Mr. Negative ki baat sun kar kuch sainikon ne mujhe pakad kar ped se bandh diya me chahta toh ek hi pal me sabka ant kar deta lekin yaha ek chij thi jo mujhe khatak rahi thi aur woh thi is Mr. Negative ka chamcha yani suba jo us jagah par kaha bhi nahi dikh raha tha abhi me use dhoondh hi raha tha ki

Tabhi un asuro ne mere chehre pe pani ke chinte maarna shuru kar diye jisse me hosh me aane ki acting karne laga toh wahi lakshmi bhi ab tak hosh me aa gayi thi aur jab usne itne sare asuron ko dekha toh woh bhi ek pal ke liye dar gayi lekin jald hi usne khud ko kabu kar liya

Wahi jab uski nazar mere uper padi toh use gussa aur dar dono ke mile jule bhav uske chehre pe aa gaye ek taraf asuron par gussa toh dusri taraf mujhe kuch ho na jaye uska dar

Lakshmi :- asuron use chod do nahi toh tum sabki maut ke jimmedar tum swayam hoge

Mr. Negative :- ohh gussa badi ajib baat hai ki tumhara pariwar sahi salamat hai aur humne tumhe bhi kuch kiya nahi toh ye gussa kyun kahi mahan C. Queen ko ek insaan se pyar toh nahi ho gaya

Me :- (darne ka natak karte hue) ye sab kya hi raha hai lakshmi ye sab kis baare me bol rahe hai aur ye chipakli se shakal ke hai kon

Mr. Negative :- kya baat hai dono premiyon ki juban ek jaisi hi chalti hai toh kon pahle marega rani ya (mere gadan par talwar rakhke) raja

JASIEN (mere man me) :- aaka aap hukum kare toh yahi sab ko kahatam kar du

Me :- nahi JASIEN yaha mujhe gadbad lag rahi hai yaha na woh suba hai na hi mujhe us shakti astra ki urja mahsoos ho rahi hai kuch samay intezaar karo

Jaha me aur JASIEN baat kar rahe the toh wahi lakshmi mere gardan par talwar dekhke dar gayi

Lakshmi :- use kuch mat karo please me tumhe apni sari shakri de dungi bas use kuch mat karna

Mr. Negative :- ha ha kitna ajib rishta hai ye prem jo kal tak apne shaktiyon par ghamand karti thi woh aaj wohi apni shakti ko ek mamuli insaan ke liye gawana chahti hai (mujh se) kyu ladke kya lagta hai bach paoge tum

Me :- yaha kya ho raha hai ye toh me samajh nahi pa raha hoon lekin mujhe itna jarur pata hai ki meri maut kisi chipkali ki shakal wale insaan ke hathon toh nahi hogi

Mr. Negative :- (gusse me) bas bahut hua ab tum dono maroge maar do unko

Uske itna bolte hi sabhi asuron ne lakshmi par humla kar diya jiske baad lakshmi bhi apne C. Queen wale avtaar me aakar sabhi asuron ko maarne lagi aur me wahi ped se bandha hua kewal is dumdaar action scene ka maja le raha tha

JASIEN :- aaka aap kis chij ka intjaar kar rahe hai aap kahe to abhi sabko khatam kar dunga

Me :- me suba ko dhoondh raha hu pata nahi woh chuha kis bill me chupa hai shayad woh intezaar kar raha hai ki kab me JASIEN ke roop me aau aur woh mujh pr piche se waar kare

JASIEN :- toh ab kya hukum hai aaka

Me :- suno.......

JASIEN :- jo hukum mere aaka

Me :- lekin sambhal ke

JASIEN :- aap chinta mat kijiye aaka me ek jinn hu aur meri shakti mere aaka me hoti hai isiliye koi bhi astra mujhpar nishkriya hai

Me :- thik hai jao phir

wahi mera plan sunne ke baad JASIEN turant mere sharir se bahar nikal gaya toh wahi ab tak daityon ne lakshmi ko puri tarh se gher liya tha aur abhi woh use maarme wale ki tabhi ek bade dhamake ki aawaj aayi jisse waha dhua dhua ho gaya tha aur jis disha se aawaj aayi thi usi disha se 2 aag ke gole aaye aur sidha un asuron ko ja lage aur woh wahi jal ke rakh ho gaye

Aur jab waha ka sara dhua gayab hua toh waha pe JASIEN tha jo apne armour wale roop me tha jise dekh waha lakshmi aur Mr. Negative ke chehre par muskaan aa gayi toh wahi JASIEN apne dono hathon me talware prakat kar li aur lakshmi ko ghere hue sabhi daityon ko maarne laga uski speed itni tez thi ki woh daitya uske waron ko dekh bhi nahi pa rahe the

Aur jaise hi JASIEN unhe maar ke ruka ki tabhi uske piche se suba ne us par shakti astra ka humla kar diya aur phir jaise hi us shakti astra ne JASIEN ko chua waise hi woh shakti astra ek bade dhamake ke saath gayab ho gaya

Mr. Negative :- (jor se chillate hue) ye nahi ho sakta hai (JASIEN se) kon ho tum

JASIEN :- tumhari maut THE JASIEN

Me :- (siti bajate hue) kya dialogue mara hai

Mr. Negative :- pahle toh tum hi maroge ladke

JASIEN :- tere baap ka raj hai kya aa mujh se ladh ke dikha

JASIEN ke itna bolte hi Mr. Negative ne us par waar kar diya aur wahi lakshmi daityon se ladhne lagi aur me phir se is fight ka maja lene laga shayad ye pahli baar tha jab me ladhne ke badle kewal dekh kar maje le raha tha

Abhi sab ladh rahe the ki tabhi JASIEN ne apni magic powers se ek dumdaar waar Mr. Negative pae kar diya lekin isse use ek kharoch bhi nahi aayi toh wahi ye dekhke Mr. Negative ek pal ke liye khud hi shock ho gaya lekin jald hi uske chehre par muskaan aa gayi

JASIEN :- ye kaise ho sakta hai mera ye waar se tumhe kuch nahi hua

Mr. Negative :- ab pata chala ki tum mere shakti astra se kaise bach paye tum ek jinn ho ek maha shaktishali jinn isiliye toh tum us shakti astra ko nishkriya karne me safal ho paye lekin tum kuch bhi kar ke is shakti ko nahi hara paoge

Itna bolke usne apne right hath ko uper ki tarf kar diya jisse uske hath me ek crystal jaisa kuch aa gaya

JASIEN :- ye kya jinn crystal ye tumne kaise mila

Mr. Negative :- jinn lok ko apne adhin kaeke aur ab tum toh kya duniya ka koi bhi jinn mujhe nahi maar payega

Un dono me kya baate ho rahi thi ye toh mujhe clearly samajh nahi aa rahi thi lekin itna jaroor samajh aa raha tha lekin me itna jaroor samajh gaya tha ki us Mr. Negative ne JASIEN ka tod dhoondh liya hai

Jaha ek taraf JASIEN majboor khada tha toh wahi dusri taraf lakshmi akeli daityon se ladh rahi thi aur isi baat ka fayda uthake suba ne us par piche se waar karne ke liye apni talwar ko yaad kiya jisse black fire nikal rahi thi

Aur jaise hi usne lakshmi par waar karna chaha waise hi meri nazar uspe padi aur turant hi mene apni aakhe band karke slow mode ko activate kar diya

Me :- chalo raj aaram khatam kaam shuru

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Ekdam shandaar update Bhai....

 

[Raja thakur]

Awesome updates

 

[krish1152]

nice update

 

[Yasasvi3]

Update 173

Present time

Abhi me us din ki fight scenes ko dekh raha tha ki tabhi mera dhyan us crystal pe gaya jiske madad se woh Mr. Negative JASIEN tak ko rok pa raha tha aur phir mene use apne andar sama liya tha jiske baare me yaad aate hi mene turant JASIEN ko bulane laga jiske turant baad woh mere saamne khada tha

JASIEN :- hukum aaka

Me :- mujhe us crystal ke baare me sab sach batao

JASIEN :- aaka woh crystal koi aam crystal nahi balki jinn crystal hai duniya ke sabhi jinnon ka shakti strot bhi aap kah sakte ho aapko yaad hai mene aapko rakt chand ki kahani batai thi (update 115) ye usi ka hissa hai chand par jo shakti strot tha usi strot ek chotasa bhag hai ye jinn crystal jo pichle kai salon se hum jinno ke pass tha

Me :- toh woh us asur ke pass kaise pahuch gaya

JASIEN :- usne jaroor jin lok par humla kiya hoga aur usne jin lok par kabja karke waha se ye crystal churaya hoga kyunki ye crystal usi ko mil sakta hai jo jinn lok ke sinhasan par virajman ho

Me :- phir toh hume jaldi se jinn lok jana chahiye waha na jane kya sthiti ho gayi hongi

JASIEN :- ji aaka me bhi kitne dino se aapko yahi bolna chahta tha lekin aapka dukh dekh kar me aapse kuch baat nahi kar pata

Me :- koi baat nahi abhi mujhe lakshmi ko bhi sanbhalna hoga woh toh jaroor gussa ho gi

JASIEN :- aaka pixhle kuch dino se me unhe apne jadui shaktiyon se dekhne ki koshish kar raha hoon lekin me unhe dekh nahi pa raha hoon

Me :- ye kaise ho sakta hai hume jald hi lakshmi ke pass jana chahiye

Uske baad me aur JASIEN turant teleport hoke lakshmi ke ghar ke pass pahuch gaye jaha laakshmi ke ghar pe lock laga tha jise dekh kar me shocked ho gaya mene bhi use apne tri netra se dhundhne ki poori koshish ki lekin me use dekh nahi pa raha tha

Phir me waha se wapas apne ghar aa gaya jaha par nanaji ne mujhe unka faisla sunaya jise sunkar mere dimaag me ek idea aaya jiske tahet mene nanaji se kah diya ki me khud ko sambhalne ke liye aur jo bhi hua usse ubharne ke liye world tour karna chahta hoon woh bhi akele

Jiske liye woh maan toh nahi rahe the aur mere pass jyada samay bhi nahi tha isiliye majboor hoke mujhe sammohan vidya ka istemaal karna pada jisse nana ji ek pal me maan gaye phit me bhi nikal pada apne mission par puri duniya ke nazar me world tour lekin asal me is sab ke piche us asur ko dhoondhne jisne Mr. Negative ko yaha bheja tha

Jaha me apne mission par nikal gaya tha toh wahi woh shaks jo mujh par nazar rakhe hue tha woh bhi ye sab dekh pa raha tha

Woh :- acba badi jaldi apne dhukhon pe kabu pa liya chalo acha hai ab dekhte hai ye is pariksha me ab kaise pass hota hai THAKUR RAJVEER PRATAP SINGH tumne apne jeewan kal me bahut sari parikshaye di hongi lekin ye un sab me sabse kathin hogi kyunki ye pariksha lene wala tumhara guide nahi balki mr hoon shaitaan (devil smile ke sath) tumhare andar ki achayi ka dushman

Itna bolke woh joro se hasne laga aur jab uski hasi band hui toh woh joro se chillake bolne laga

Shaitaan :- jao jinn lok ja rahe ho na toh tumhari pariksha ki shurwat bhi wahi se hogi aur wahi pe tumhe mere baare me pata chalega phir aayega maja ab dekhte hai kya kar pate ho tum

Wahi is waqt me aur JASIEN ek susaan se pahad par khade the jiske thik saamne JASIEN ne ek portal khola hua tha jiske dusre taraf mujhe kewal andhkaar dikh raha tha

JASIEN :- aaka yahi rasta hai jinn lok jane ke liye

Me :- lekin dusri taraf toh mujhe kewal andhakar dikh raha hai

JASIEN :- aaka ye jadui portal hai bahar se jinn lok aapko andhakar me hi dikhega agar use dekhna ho toh aapko jinn lok ke andar pravesg karna hoga

Me :- theek hai chalo phir

Phir me aur JASIEN us portal ke andar chale gaye aur pahuch gaye jinn lok jaha par is waqt JASIEN mere andar sama gaya tha aur phir mere sharir par kawach ki tarah chadh gaya tha is waqt shayad me us jinn lok ke gate pe khada tha mere saamne 2 bade gate the jo ki puri tarike se sone ke bane hue the jinhe kholne ke liye jaise hi mene un gates ko chua waise hi mere saamne 2 asur aa gaye jinhe dekh ke JASIEN ne mere man me bola

JASIEN :- aaka ye asur yaha hai matlab andar bhi sab kuch un asuron ke kabje me hi hoga yaha se aage mujhe sambhalne dijiye

Me :- theek hai karo apne man ki

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Bhot hi batereen update.....bhot hi saandaar.....
Now hameha ki trh chota update...thola sa jayda diya karjyda nahi to 5 10 line apun ke name ki hi likh diya kare....
And ha intazaar rahaga agle update ka