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(dada ji) Thakur samsher paratap singh
(dadi ji) sandhya devi
(chacha) thakur dharmveer pratap singh
(chachi) sharmila singh
Mina aur rina :- sisters
Rina hero ki lover aur sex partner
Mina hero ki lover aur sex partner
(chote chacha) :- thakur veer pratap singh
(me) :- thakur rajveer pratap singh
Rajni :- hero ki asli maa (dead)
Ranveer :- hero ke pita (dead)
Nana :- shekhar chaudhry
Nani :- sima Chaudhary
B. Mama :- arun
Mami :- kamini
C. Mama :- sanjay
Mosi :- deepa
Sanika :- mosi ki beti
Swati :- sanika ki dost
(guide) aacharya raghwendra
Kaal :- hero inhi ke shaktiyon ka uttaradhikari hai
(hero ke roop)
King
Yodha
Sadhu
Tantrik
Angel
Devil
Side characters
Mira ma :- hero ke liye maa saman aur hero ki pahali sex partner
Sakshi :- hero par crush hai aur uski second sex partner
Kajri :- ye bhi hero ki sex partner hai
Bheema :- dadaji ka right hand
Shera :- bheema ka chota beta
Sangram :- bheema ka bada beta
Shiva :- bheema ka bhatija
Billa :- nanaji ka right hand
Some upcoming character
Lakshmi :- main heroine
Lakshmi ke pita :- sunil singh
Others not have to much role
Pandit ji :- lakshmi ke gharwalon ke kulguru
JASIEN :- hero ka jinn aur jinnlok ka rajkumar
Mr. Negative :- the one of the villain
Suba :- the slave of Mr. Negative
Umir :- also slave of Mr. Negative
Mahamahim unknown villain
(Brijesh) Prabhu the great god from eternal religion
Powers of hero
1) sapt chakr
2) five element
3) slow mode
4) third eye
5) his varients (roop)
6) vijayi dhanush
7) mayavi shaktiya (from tantrik)
8) satvik shaktiya (from sadhu)
9) knowledge
10) chakra astra
11) weponide dragon
12) tamsik tatva (from devil)
13) satvik tatva (ashta vidhi) (from angel)
14) the reaper army (devils army)
The powers of heroine
1) super strength
2) flying ability
3) mind control ability
4) the Carnage Queen
5) the Carnage Army
6) The wepons creating ability
7) the carnage armour
8) copy cat
And some more characters are comming in future

Jin characters ka kahani me jyada roll nahi hai unhe ignore kia gaya hai



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Wacth man :- kaha ja rahe ho ladke pata nahi aaj bade malik aur malkin ki shaadi ki saal girah hai toh aaj haweli me jashn rakha hai aaj tum unse nahi mil paoge
Me :- ha mujhe pata hai aaj party hai isiliye toh me aaya hu party attend karne mujhe invitation diya hai party ka
Wacth man :- tumhare ye kahaniya kisi aur ko sunana mujhe nahi samjhe
Me (apna phone nikal kar) :- tum aise nahi manoge
Phir mene c. Mama ko phone karke unhe bina kisi se kuch bole bahar aane ko kaha phir thode hi der me c. Mama bahar aa gaye aur phir wacth man se meri pahchaan karwake mujhe haweli ke andar le gaye
Jab me aur c. Mama ghar me ghuse toh sab ka muh khula ka khula rah gaya kyunki me sabko surprise dena chahta tha isliye mene apne aane ka kisi ko nahi bataya tha
Me :- (nana nani ke pair chute hue) aapko shadi ki saal girah ke liye hardik abhinandan
Jab mene unke pair chue toh unhone uthake mujhe apne seene se laga liya
Nana :- aaj mere kaleje ko thandak mili hai nahi toh mujhe laga tha ki apne nawase ki narazgi ke sath hi is duniya ko alwida kahna padega
Nani :- aap chup raho itne salo baad mera nawasa apne ghar aaya hai aur aap hai ki marne ki baat kar rahe hai
Me :- nani bilkul sahi kah rahi hai nanaji aapko toh abhi bahut jina hai
Nana :- thik hai beta ab nahi kahunga aisi bate
Nani (b. mama se) :- sun arun raj ko fresh bhi hona hoga aur party ke liye taiyar bhi hona hai toh use uska room dikha do
B. Mama :- ji maa chalo raj
Phir me b. Mama ke piche piche jane laga phir b. Mama ne mujhe mera kamra dikhaya aur niche chale gaye party ke taiyari ke liye
Phir me bhi kamre ka darwaja band karke nahane chala gaya phir fresh hoke mall se jo kapde liye the un mese ek dress nikal ke pahan liya
Wahi niche hall me
Jab mama mujhe kamra dikhake wapis aaye toh unhone dekha ki ghar ke sare log tention me khade hai aur 2 ladkiya ro rahi hai
B. Mama :- (c. Mama se) kya hua chote ye aise sab tention me aur ye dono ro kyu rahe hai
Ladki 1 :- mama jab hum suraj garh me aa rahe the toh jo dakuon ka ilaaka hai waha par
Itna bolke woh ladki aur jor se rone lagi
B. Mama :- kya hua waha kahi dakuon ne tumhe kuch kiya toh nahi batao mujhe aaj tak toh unhe me ignore karta aaya lekin agar unhone tumhe hath bhi lagaya hoga toh me unhe chodunga nahi
Ladki 2 (rote hue) :- nahi uncle unhone kuch nahi kia lekin jab hum us raste se aa rahe the toh waha 10-12 pahalwan mare pade hue the jise dekh kar hum dono dar gaye aur jab hum waha se nikal hi rahe the ki tabhi aasman se ek kauwa aaya aur ek aadmi ki lash se uski aakh ukhad li ye nazara dekh hum itna dar gaye ki humne gadi ko itni tez chalaya ki humare gadi ke niche 2 lashon ke sar bhi kuchal gaye
B. Mama :- (chillake) billa
Mama ki aawaj sunke haweli ke bahar se ek 7 feet lamba aadmi daudte hue andar aa gaya shayad usi ka naam billa tha
Billa :- ji boliye malik
B. Mama :- tum us hari singh ke ilaake me jao aur dekho ki aaj kon abhaga hari singh aur uske sathiyon ke hathe chadh gaya
Billa :- ji malik
Itna bolke woh waha se nikal pada
Mosi :- (un dono se) chalo ab shant ho jao dono tumse mana kiya tha na akele ghar se bahar jane par phir bhi tum gaye aur ab ro rahe ho
B. Mama :- deepa shant ho jao ye dono toh apne bhai ke liye gift lene gaye the
Nani :- sanika aur swati jao jake dono fresh hoke aao raj bhi aa gaya hai tum kya chahti ho apne bhai se pahli baar rote hue milna hai
(new introduction
Sanika :- mosi ki beti wahi jo mall me mili thi
Swati :- sanika ki dost)
Nani ki baat sunke dono ne apni aakhe saaf ki aur na me sar hilane lage
Sanika :- (mosi se) maaf karna maa hum bas bhai ke liye gift lene gaye the aakhir bhai itne salo baad aaj pahli baar apni bahan se milne wala hai
C. Mama :- lekin tumhe kaha tha na raj aaj kal ke bachon jaisa nahi hai use in sab ka shok nahi hai
Swati :- ha pata hai humne bhi raj ke liye kuch khas hi khareeda hai
Mosi :- chalo acha hai jyada kharcha toh nahi kiya na
Mosi ka sawal sunke dono ek dusre ka chehra dekhte rah gaye kyunki mene jo unhe dress di tha uske alwa bhi unhone bahut kuch kahareeda tha
B. Mama :- deepa rahne do agar jyada kharch kia bhi hoga toh kya hua chahe toh woh paise me de dunga
Mosi :- nahi bhaiya mera ye kahna nahi tha
Swati :- calm down uncle and aunty humne jyada kharcha nahi kia hai.
Sanika (baat badalte hue):- maa bhai kaha hai mujhe milna hai usse
Mosi :- woh fresh hone gaya hai tum dono bhi fresh ho jao jaldi
Mosi ki baat sun kar woh dono apne kamre ke taraf nikal gaye
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Is waqt suba aur Mr. Negative dono bhi apni asuri sena aur daityon ke saath ek ghane jungle me the jis jungle ke surrounding me shayad koi majboot kawach bana hua tha jisse waha ki asuri urja na mujhe aur na hi lakshmi ko mahsus ho rahi thi

Mr. Negative :- mere bahadur sainiko aaj aap sabko patal lok se yaha isiliye bulaya hai kyunki aaj hum ek badi yudh ki ghoshna karne wale hai aaj suraj ki pahli kiran ke saath humari yojna aarambh ho jaye gi jisme humare rastee aane wale har ek ko chahe woh dev ho ya asur uska ant kiya jayega aur is grah par kewal humara raj hoga aur is yudh ka pahla tir chalega us lakshmi ke parivaar ke uper

Suba :- lekin malik agar uske pariwar ko maarne ka try kiya ya phir unke uper halka sa khatra bhi aaya toh bhi woh sense kar lenge aur wahi hoga jo is ek mahine se ho raha hai

Mr. Negative :- agar khatra aaya toh woh dono mahsoos kar payenhe agar bina khatra paida kiye unhe maar diya toh woh dono kya koi bhi sense nahi kar payega

Suba :- matlab kya hai aapka malik me samjha nahi

Mr. Negative :- agar samajh pata toh tu mere jagah na hota tu bas woh kar jo me kahu

(apne sainikon se) toh mere sena ke jabaz yodhaon taiyar ho jao is dharti lok ko dusra patal lok bana denge hum

Apne leader ki baat sunke sari sena utsahit ho gayi aur yudh ki taiyari karne lagi

Toh wahi dusri taraf

Abhi mere 24 ghanton mese 8 ghante bit gaye the abhi mere pass kewal 16 ghante baki the in 16 ghanton ke baad kya hone wala hai iske baare me na me jaanta hoon aur na hi koi aur

Is waqt subah ke 6 baje lakshmi ke ghar me sab jag gaye the shiwaye lakshmi ke ghar ke sare naukar apna kaam kar rahe the toh ghar ki leadies apni normal puja path me lage the aur gents tv dekh rahe the ki tabhi lakshmi ke dadaji ka phone baj utha

Aur jab unhone call receive kiya toh unke chehre par pahle toh chinta ki lakire aa gayi jo jald hi dar me bhi paravartit ho gayi unke chehre par ye badalte expressions dekh kar waha baitha unka beta (sunil uncle) bhi tension me aa gaye

Sunil :- kya hua pitaji sab theek toh hai na

L. Dada :- ashram se pandit ji ka phone aaya tha woh kah rahe the ki aaj humare pariwaar pe bhari sankat aane wala hai jisse hume bachne ke liye jald hi aashram pahuchna hoga unhone hume saawdhan kiya hai ki jitni jaldi ho sake utne jaldi aaye aur bhul ke bhi kisi kunwari stree ya purush humare saath na aaye nahi toh khatra badh sakta hai aur pura pariwar ka namo nishan mit sakta hai

L. Maa :- lekin lakshmi ka kya agar ghar me koi samasya aa gayi toh kya hoga

L. Dada :- uska tarika bhi guruji ne mujhe bataya hai ki use hum kisi aur jagah ya apne vishwasu logon ke sath rahne ko bole nahi toh anarth ho jayega

S. Uncle :- ok agar pandit ji ne bola hai toh jaroor koi na koi baat avashya ho gi hume unke kahe mutabik karna chahiye

Uske baad sabne lakshmi ko bhi is sab ke baare me bata diya jiske baad lakshmi pahle toh andhvishvas bolke unhe rokne lagi lekin uske pariwar walon ke aage usne bhi haar manli aur woh apne doston ke ghar jane ka batakar apne kamre me taiyar hone chali gayi aur uske baad uske pariwar wale bhi apne kamron me chale gaye

Toh wahi lakshmi jab puri taiyar hoke aayi toh usne dekha uska pura pariwar aaram se hall me baith kar gappe maar raha hai

Lakshmi :- kya hua aap sab ko jana nahi hai kya

L. Dada :- ha woh pandit ji ne call karke mana kar diya hume aane ke liye jis wajah se humara jana cancel ho gaya lekin tum chaho toh apne doston ke ghar ja sakti ho

Lakshmi :- okay then bye

Itna bolke woh apne ghar se nikal gayi lekin uske jane ke baad kuch bahut bada aur bahut bhayanak kand uske ghar me hua jisse na sirf uski balki meri duniya bhi nasht hone wali thi lekin uske liye 15 ghante baki the

Wahi dusri taraf mere ghar me is waqt me apne family ke sath baith kar breakfast karne me laga hua tha ki tabhi mere mobile ki notification tone baj uthi aur jab mene apna phone dekha toh lakshmi ka msg aaya tha

Msg :- l want to meet you its urgent

Ye msg padh kar ab mujbe tension hone lagi thi me yahi soch raha tha ki ab kya nayi pareshani aa gayi agar is waqt akela hota toh turant hi apne tri netra ko jagrit kar ke jawab dhoondh leta lekin na me akela tha aur na hi mere pass itna samay tha isiliye mene urgent kaam ka bahana bana kar nikal raha tha ki tabhi mom ne piche se aawaj lagayi

Mom :- kaha ja rahe ho beta pahle nashta toh kar lo phir chale jana

Me :- nahi ruk sakta ho sakta hai koi bahut important kaam ho

Mom :- (mujhe jabardasti khurchi par bithate hue) nahi kahi nahi jayega tu waise bhi mera dil subah se bechin ho raha hai jaroor kuch gadbad hogi mat ja mera pyara bacha hai tu mat ja

Is waqt mere se bilkul bhi sabar nahi ho raha tha mere dimag me yahi chal raha tha ki kya hua hoga lakshmi ke sath jo usne itne urgent me mujhe milne bulaya waise bhi asur baar baar kisi na kisi tarika se lakshmi aur uske pariwar ko maarne ka try kar rahe the

Toh wahi lakshmi ne bhi koi proper reason nahi bataya tha milne ka jisse mere dimag me bahut bhayanak khayal aa rahe the aur kahi na kahi is 1 mahine me mere man me bhi lakshmi ke liye soft corner jaroor ban gaya tha jise me nakar nahi sakta tha kyunki wahi sach hai

Aur isi sab tension ki wajah se ab mujhe kuch sujh nahi raha tha isiliye jab maa ne mujhe jabardasti khurchi par bithaya toh meri tension mere gusse me badal gayi jise me kabu to kar raha tha lekin gussa irritation me badal gaya

Me (irritate hote hue) :- kya mom aap abhi bhi un sab andhvishwas me maanti ho me koj bacha nahi hu me khud ka dhyan rakh sakta hu

Itna bolke me waha se gusse me nikal pada lakshmi ki di hui location par jaha pe mujhe us sawal ka jawab dena tha us raste ka chunav karna tha jo sahi hua toh meri jindagi sawar jayegi nahi toh bikhar jayegi

Wahi dusri taraf

Is waqt sari asuri sena usi jungle me khadi thi aur apne malik ke aadesh ka intezaar kar rahi thi aaj sab apni shaktiyon se apne malik ko khush karna chahte the jisse woh jyada se jyada inaam pa sake wahi Mr. Negative ek daitya ko apne pass bulata hai aur use kuch samajhata hai jise sun kar toh jaise woh daitya Pagal ho gaya air joro joro se hasne laga lekin woh akela nahi tha jo has raha tha balki uske saath Mr. Negative aur suba bhi has rahe the

Toh wahi is waqt me us location par pahuch gaya tha jaha lakshmi ne mujhe milne ke liye bulaya tha woh ek pahadi location thi jo sher garh se jyada door nahi thi balki pass me hi thi jis wajah se me apni bike se hi us aur nikal gaya tha aur is waqt md apni bike ko hawa ki speed se bhaga raha tha jisse jald hi me us location par 30 minute me hi pahuch gaya

Lakshmi :- aa gaye tum me tumhara hi intezaar kar rahi thi raj

Me :- bolo kya baat karni hai

Lakshmi :- tum itnd gusse aur tention me kyu ho

Me :- tumne hi toh bola tha urgent hai isiliye kitna tention hua mujhe pata hai sab thik hai na

Lakshmi :* ha sab thik hai mene urgent isiliye bola kyunki jo me bolna chahti hoon woh hai hi urgent

Jab Lakshmi ne ye bola ki sab theek hai tab mere jaan me jaan aayi lekin tabhi mujhe mom ka khayal bhi aaya ki kaise mene unse irritate hoke baat ki phir mene socha ki baat me unhe mana lunga unko manane me mujbe kaha samay lagne wala tha wahi ye soch kar me lakshmi ki baat sunne laga ki use kya jaroori baat karni hai mujh se

Lakshmi :- aaj se 1 mahine pahle me bilkul ghamandi ladki thi jise na kisi se baat karne ki tamiz thi aur na kisi ko sorry bolne ki manners lekin jab me tumse mili toh jaise me aazad ho gayi apne ghamand se us din toh mujhe tum par gussa itna aaya tha ki socha tumko goliyon se bhun du lekin jab mene apne mata pita ko apne baare me baat karte suna toh pata chala ki me bas us din nahi balki har waqt galat thi aur inhi sab wajah se us din shayad mene pahli baar kisi ko sorry bola tha aur uske baad se tumhare saath bitaya har ek pal jaise ki mujhe aise lagta jaise ki samay wahi ruk jaye aur phir kabhi shuru na ho aur na hi hum kabhi alag ho us din se shayad me tumhare taraf attract hone lagi thi aur woh attraction kab pyar me badal gaya ye mujhe bhi pata nahi chala so RAJ I LOVE YOU DO YOU LOVE ME

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Jaise hi samay normal hua waise hi waha par maujood sabhi lakshami samet sabhi C Army ko gayab dekh kar sabhi shocked ho gaye

Lakshmi :- ye C Army kaha gayi

Me :- unhe mene hi gayab kiya hai taki is yudh me unhe koi kshati na pahuche

Abhi hum baat hi kar rahe the ki tabhi us jagah par bhukamp aane laga jisse me aur lakshmi dono shock the aur jab meri nazar us dsitya par padi toh uske chehre pe muskaan si cha gayi thi jab tak me us muskaan ke piche ka raj samajh pata usse pahle hi waha us jagah par kala dhua failne laga aur us kale dhue se ek ek karke asur nikalne lage abhi hum dono ke saamne lakhon ki tadad me asur the

Lakshmi :- raj ab kya karenge

Me :- ab yudh hoga

Mere itna bolte hi us jagah par phir se ek baar bhukamp aane laga aur kala dhua failne laga lekin is baar muskaan mere chehre pe thi aur jald hi us jagah par meri Devil army and THE REAPER bhi aa gaye jinhe dekh kar ab woh daitya shocked tha

Uske baad us jagah par yudh aarambh ho gaya jaha pe Devil army un asuron ko kacha chaba rahe the toh wahi reaper apne talwar se lagatar kaate ja raha tha toh wahi lakshmi ne bhi apne swords ke madad se asuron ko mare ja rahi thi

Toh me is waqt us daitya ke saamne the hum dono ke hi hath me talwaar pakdi hui thi aur hum dono bas ek dusre ko ghoor rahe the ki tabhi us daitya ne apni sword se mijh par humla kar diya jiske jawab me mene bhi apni talwaar ke madad se uske waar ko rok diya aur phir shuru hua humare beech ghamasan yudh me chahta toh use pal bhar me khatam kar deta lekin na jane kyu lekin me kewal apni aadhi urja hi istemaal kar pa raha tha

Abhi hum dono ladh rahe the ki tabhi mene uska hath pakad liya aur uske sine par lath maar di jisse woh door jake gira lekin woh hara nahi tha woh phir se khada hua aur is baar uski aakhe lal ho chuki thi jaise ki khoon utar aaya ho uske aakho me aur woh apni un khoon bhari aakhon se meri aur hi dekh raha tha wahi meri aakhe bhi usi ke uper tiki hui thi ki woh ab kya karega ki tabhi usne apni aakhe band ki aur apne hath me pakdi hui talwaar ko aasman ki taraf utha di aur kuch bolne laga jisse aasman se ek kadkadti bizli aake sidha usi talwaar pe giri aur jaise mano ki us talwar ne us bijli ko apne andar sokh liya ho

Ye dekh kar mene bhi apni talwar ko electric power se energized kar diya abhi hum dono ke hi talwar me se bizli nikal rahi thi aur dono ek dusre ko ghur rahe the jaise dekh rahe ho ki pahla humla kon karta hai ki tabhi woh daitya jaha khada tha waha se hi woh daudte hue meri aur aaya aur mujh par apni talwaar se waar karne laga uske waar karte hi mene bhi apni talwaar ko aage kar diya jaise hi hum dono ki talwaare aapas me takrayi waise hi aasman me jaise bijli si chamak gyi aur ek energy wave bhi nikli humare talwaar se jisse hum dono ke hi aas pass ki jamin ped asur sabhi us wave ke chapet me aake ya toh door jake girte ya phir nasht ho jate

Lekin hum dono ka yudh ruka nahi aur ye silsila bhi yahi par nahi thama balki uske baad toh jaise us daitya ne mere uper humlon ki barish kar di kabhi left se toh kabhi right se jaise ki usne mujhe maarne ka man bana liya ho woh mujhe bachne ka ek mauka bhi nahi de raha tha lekin me bhi taiyar tha me uske har humle ka jawab barabar de raha tha woh jaise hi mujh par humla karta me us humle se bachne ka rasta turant soch leta aur uspe counter attack kar deta lekin woh daitya bhi kuch kam nahi tha woh bhi bade ache se mere har attack ko fail kar deta ya phir meri hi taakat kam ho rahi thi kyunki mujhe abhi bhi aisa lag raha tha ki me apni asal shakti ka kewal 25% hi use kar pa raha hoon

Aise hi thodi der tak ye ladhai chalti rahi lekin na me daitya ko chot pahucha paya tha na daitya mujhe hum dono ka mukabla barabari ka tha na woh mujhe hara pa raha tha na me use hara pa raha tha lekin jab bhi hum dono ki talware takrati thi tab aaspass ke watawaran me bijli si kapkapa jati thi me aur rahul apna pura jor laga rahe the kabhi woh mere attack ko counter karta toh kabhi me uske attacks ko counter kar deta

Tabhi mene apni jagah se us daitya ke uper jump laga di aur jitni shakti use kar pa raha tha utni puri shakti laga ke us daitya par apni talwaar se waar kar diya jisse bachne ke liye usne apni talwaar ko uper kar diya lekin mera force itna tha ki meri talwar uski talwar ko todte hue uske sharir ke 2 samaan bhag karte hue sidha jamin ke andar ghus gayi aur wahi hum dono ke talwaaron ke takrane ki wajah se is baar itni strong wave nikali ki usne us pure bali pind ko tabah kar diya tha aur phir mene apni talwaar ko gayab kiya aur phir apni aakhe band ki aur apne right hath ki mutthi banakar use apne honthon ke paas le liya aur ek mantra bolne laga jise mene kaal ki di hui book se sikha tha aur jaise hi mene us mantra ka istemaal kia waise hi waha par maujood har asur daitya rakshas par bizli girne lagi jisse woh chutkiyon me jal ke rakh ho jate wahi apne saamne maujood shatruon ko aise achanak marte dekh lakshmi shock ho gayi thi ya yeh bhi kah sakte ho ki buri tarah se dar gayi thi

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Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai VAJRADHIKARI bhai....
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Abhi lakshmi dwara kiye ijhar a ishq se me khud ko sambhal nahi pa raha tha mujhe samajh nahi aa raha tha ki me kya bolu aisa nahi tha ki ye situation pahli baar mere saamne aa rahi hai isse pahle sakshi aur rina didi ne bhi mere se apne pyar ka izhar kia tha lekin unke jawab mere mind me clear the toh wahi is baar lakshmi ko kya bolu mujhe samajh nahi aa raha tha ek taraf toh is 1 mahine me main bhi lakshmi ko chabne laga tha lekin wahi agar me lakshmi ko ha kar deta hoon toh mujhe lakshmi ko sab sach batana ho ga chahr woh JASIEN ka sach ho ya mere aur meri bahnon ke bich ke relation ka sach ho kyunki agar me use ha kar deta hoon toh me use andhere me nahi rakh sakta tha

Abhi me is uljhan se bahar nikal hi raha tha ki tabhi lakshmi ke phone ki bell baji jab usne phone ki screen dekhi toh kisi ne use ek video clip bheji thi waise toh lakshmi is moment ko kharab nahi karna chahti thi lekin phir bhi na jane uske man me kya aaya aur usne us clip ko play kar diya aur jaise hi usne us clip ko play kiya toh jaha is waqt uske chehre pe mera jawab janne ki utsukta thi wahi agle par woh jagah uske dukh ne le li jaha kuch samay pahle uske aakho me sharm thi toh wahi ab uske aakhon me kewal aasu aur gussa tha aur turant hi woh wahi ghutnon par baith gayi aur jori se rone lagi

Lakshmi :- (rote hue) nahi aisa nahi ho sakta hai aisa nahi

Aise hi badbadate hue lakshmi uthi aur apna phone wahi chod ke apni car me baith kar nikal gayi aur me bas is scene ko dekhte rah gaya aur jab usne car start ki toh uski aawaj se me apne hosh me aaya lekin tab tak woh nikal chuki thi

Me abhi uske yu achanak jane ka karan samjh hi raha tha ki tabhi meri nazar uske phone par padi jisme woh clip abhi bhi play ho rahi thi jab mera dhyan us video par gaya toh mere pairo tale se jamin hi khisak gayi kyunki us clip me lakshmi ke pure pariwar ki lashe dikh rahi thi ki tabhi mere saamne lakshmi ka gusse bhara face aa gaya jise yaad karke mere dimaag me uske liye chinta aa gayi aur me turant hi teleport ho kar lakshmi ke ghar pahunch gaya

Abhi tak woh yaha pahuchi nahi thi jis wajah se me pure jagah ki dhyan se dekh raha tha abhi me sab dhyan se dekb raha tha ki tabhi mujhe kuch mahsoos hone laga jisse mere man me ajib si bhavnaye janm lene lagi

Hua yu ki me sab dhyan se dekh toh raha tha lekin mere se ye sab jyada der dekha na gaya aur me side me bane pillar se sat kar khada ho gaya jaise hi mene us pillar ko chua toh saamne rakhi sari lashe gayab hone lagi jisse mujhe mere aas pass asuri shakti ka anubhav hone laga aur ye sab ke baad mujhe asuron ki chaal samajhne me jyada samay na laga

At morning time

Jaise hi lakshmi taiyar hone apne kamre me chali gayi toh kuch der baad uska sara pariwar bhi uske guru ji ke aashram ke liye nikal gaye aur jaise hi woh apne ghar se nikale turant waha ek daitya aa gaya

Ye wahi daitya tha jo jungle me Mr. Negative ke sath has raha tha shayad isne apne aura ko chupa liya tha nahi toh ab tak toh lakshmi ko uske urja ka ehsaas ho jana chahiye tha

Toh wahj jaise hi woh daitya aaya usne apni aakhe band ki aur kuch bolne laga shayad koi mantra bol raha tha aur jaise hi usne apni aakhe kholi toh uske saamne lakshmi ke pure pariwar ke duplicate aa gaye jise dekh kar woh haste hue gayab ho gaya aur uske gayab hote hi waha ek pillar aa gaya jo ki dikhne se lakshmi ke ghar ke baki pillar jaise hi dikh raha tha

Aur jaise hi lakshmi ghar se bahar nikli toh uske nikalne ke kuch der baad hi us pillar se ek yellow kiran nikali aur woh puri duplicate family ek ek karke jamin pe gir gayi

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Ab me samajh gaya tha ki Mere samne ka sara drushya un asuron dwara nirmeet kiya hua chalawa tha jo shayad unhone lakshmi ko kamjor karne ke liye taiyar kia tha me abhi sab samajh hi raha tha ki tabhi mujhe C. Queen ke urja ka ehsaas hone laga

Jisse me us pillar se dur ho gaya mere dur hote hi woh sara drjshya phir se normal ho gaya jise dekh kar is chalawe ke baare me lakshmi ko batane ka idea mere dimag me aa gaya aue me waha se gayab ho ke lakshmi ke ghar ke bahar aa gaya aur lakshmi apne C. Queen ke roop me ghar ke andar chali gayi

Aur me bhi kuch dair me uske ghar me pravesh kar gaya jaha par pahuch ke me aisa dikbane laga jaise ki mene pahli baar dekha hai aur phir me lakshmi ko sambhalne laga mujbe pata tha ki is waqt agar mene use sambhalne ka try kiya mujhe malum tha ki jitne gusse aur dukh me lakshmi is waqt hi ki jisse koi bhi use sambhalne ka try karta toh sabse pahle lakshmi apna gussa usi par utarti

Aur hua bhi waisa hi jab mene lakshmi ko sambhalne ka try kiya toh lakshmi ne mujhe dhakka de diya aur me bhi aise hi position me khada tha jisse ki me sidha us pillar se jake takra jau waise bhi lakshmi ke dhakke me itni taakat nahi thi ki woh mujhe itni dur uchal sake isiliye me jaanbujh ke khud hi jake us pillar se takra gaya aur me us pillar se itni jor se takraya tha ki mere takrane se us khambhe ke tukde tukde ho gaye aur jaise hi woh pilllar tuta sara mayajal bhi tut gaya aur sari lashe ek saath gayab ho gayi

Achanak se sabhi lashon ko gayab hota dekh ke lakshmi puri tarah se shocked rah gayi thi lekin jald hi woh bhi un asuron ke gande plan ko samjh gayi aur abhi woh kuch karti ki tabhi uski nazar mere upper padi jaha me behose hone ka natak kar raha tha

Mujhe behose dekh kar lakshmi ko khud ke uper hi bada gussa aa raha tha lekin usne khud ko sambhal liya aur daud ke mere pass aane lagi lekin tabhi us puri jagah me dhua fail gaya jise dekh kar mene jald hi apni sase rok li lekin lakshmi us waar se nahi bach payi aur behose ho gayi

Toh wahi lakshmi ke behose hote hi waha ek daitya aaya aur usne lakshmi ko apne khande pe utha liya aur usne kuch der mujhe dekha aur phir mujhe bhi apne kandhe pe utha ke gayab ho gaya

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Daitya ne Lakshmi ko uthaya to thik hai par raj ko utha ke sath le jana.bohot bhari padne wala hai asuro ko

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B. Mama :- deepa rahne do agar jyada kharch kia bhi hoga toh kya hua chahe toh woh paise me de dunga
Mosi :- nahi bhaiya mera ye kahna nahi tha
Swati :- calm down uncle and aunty humne jyada kharcha nahi kia hai.
Sanika (baat badalte hue) :- maa bhai kaha hai mujhe milna hai usse
Mosi :- woh fresh hone gaya hai tum dono bhi fresh ho jao jaldi
Mosi ki baat sun kar woh dono apne kamre ke taraf nikal gaye
Wahi me apne kamre me aa kar sabse pahle fresh hua aur naye kapde pahan taiyar ho gaya aur dhyan me baith kar pahuch gaya apne antar man me jaha mujhe bada hi aanad mil raha tha antar man me aa toh gaya lekin ab karu kya samajh nahi aa raha tha ki tabhi mere saamne achanak se guide prakat ho gaya
Me :- tum yaha bhi aa gaye kahi toh mujhe akela chodo ki me apni taakaton ke baare me khud se study kar pau
G :- mene kab mana kiya hai tumhe jo karna hai karo me toh bas tumhara margdarshan karne ke liye aaya hoon
Me :- mujhe maaf karna lekin mujhe aisa lag raha hai ki mere se kuch problem ho gayi hai muldhar chakra jagrit karne me jis wajah se mujhe bada hi ajib anubhav ho raha tha
G :- kaisa anubhav ho raha hai mujhe vistaar me batao
Me :- aaj jab me mall me tha tab mujhe ek dress dikha jise dekh kar mere man me mere pure jivan me pahli baar aisa laga ki ye dress mera hi hona chahiye me sirf ek kapde ke liye lakhon karoro rupaye bhi kharch karne ko taiyar ho gaya tha itna hi nahi mujhe aisa lag raha tha ki agar koi bolta ki dress ke liye kisi ki jaan lele to me woh bhi kar deta
G :- hmmm aur kuch hai batane layak
Me :- ha aaj jab me dakuon ko maar raha tha tab mujhe kuch pata nahi chal raha tha mujhe un sab ki jaan lete hue kuch feel nahi ho raha tha jaise me insano ko nahi kide makodon ko maar raha hu
G :- bas ya aur bhi kuch hai
Me ;- nahi bas itna hi hai
G:- mujhe toh isme koi bhi chinta ki baat nahi dikh rahi hai aur na mujhe aisa lag raha hai ki tumhare muldhar chakr ko jagrit karne me koi galti hui hai
Me :- toh in sab ka kya matlab hai
G :- yaad karo mene muldhar chakra ke baare me kya kaha tha
"ye darshata hai tum kon ho yah chakr tumhare samrddhi, sampatti aur suraksha kee bhaavana ko kholata hai. "
Me :- ha lekin iska isse kya sambandh
G :- muldhar chakr ko jagri karne se pahle tumhe in sab se koi moh nahi tha kyunki tum mante the ki tum kuch nahi ho tum sirf ek manav ho lekin jab tumne muldhar ko jagrit kiya toh muldhar ne tumhare man me tumhara sachha parichay banaya jisse tum ab tak bhagte aaye ho
Me :- acha toh kya hai woh parichay
G :- tum raja ho tumhe tumhari praja bhagwan maanti hai tum sarv sakti shaali ho tumhare liye kuch bhi karna na mumkin nahi hai tum jo chahe woh kar sakte ho
Aur rahi baat aaj hui haadson ki toh sarv pratham jab tumne us wastra ko dekha toh woh tumhe raja hone ehsas dene laga jisse tumhare man me chupa raja uske teraf aakarshit hone laga aur jab tum use kharidne me asamarth the toh us raja ka swabhiman ko thes pahuchi aur woh use pane ke liye kisi bhi had tak jane ka prayas karne laga
Aur wahi jab baari yudh ki aayi toh tumhari shaktiyon ne ek yodha ka roop liya jiske liye aam manushy kide makode saman hi hai jinka uske nazron me koi mol nahi kyunki unki shakti chahe kitni bhi ho lekin woh tumhare saamne chiti jaise hi hai
Me :- lekin ye toh galat hai isse toh mere me phir se ghamand aa sakta hai mere me burai janm le sakti hai
G :- ye tumse kisne kaha hai ki jab tum khud ki khwahishon ko puri karna chahoge toh woh tumhare man me burai paida kar sakti ho
Me :- shastron me yahi likha hai ki hum tabhi yogya banenge jab moh maya se pare ho jayenge
G :- tumhare pass gyan bahut hai lekin woh ardh gyan hai
Me :- toh aap purn gyan dijiye
G :- ye satya hai ki jab manushya moh maya se pare hoga toh woh sarvotam yogi hoga woh ek yogya sadhu banega lekin phir woh manushya nahi rahega kyunki jinhe tum buri aadate maante ho wahi manushyon ke jeevan ka aadhar hai unki jarurate unka moh unhe aur kabil banne ke. Liye prerit karta hai aur jo ghamand aur burai ki baat kar rahe ho unse toh swayam bhagwan aur devta bhi na bach sake to tum manushya kya rakhte ho
Me :- me samajh gaya shukriya mere man ka waham door karne ke liye
Mere itna bolte hi mere antar man me achanak se do roshniyon ne janam liya jisme se mere jaise hi dikhne wale 2 mere pratibimb ne janam liya jinmese ek ne wahi royal dress pahana tha woh sighasan par baitha tha aur uske kamar me talwar bandhi hui thi kuch is tarah ki

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Aur jo dusra tha pratibimb tha usne ek armour jaisa pahna hua tha jiske pith par dhal aur hath me talwaar thi aur uske piche ek ghoda bhi tha kuch is tarah ki
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G :- raj ye tumhare hi do roop hai ek mahan raja toh ek viron ka vir mahan yodha inhe naman karo aur jaise jaise tum apne rah me aage badhoge waise waise tum apne aur bhi naye rup se awgat hoge

Me :- agar ye mere hi rup hai toh me ab tak in se anjaan kaise tha
G :- kyunki ab tak tum inse bhaag rahe the isiliye tum in se anjaan the aur ab tumne inhe swikaar kar liya hai toh ab ye tumhare saamne aaye hai
Abhi hum bate kar hi rahe the ki tabhi kamre ka darwaja knock hone laga
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G :- raj ye tumhare hi do roop hai ek mahan raja toh ek viron ka vir mahan yodha inhe naman karo aur jaise jaise tum apne rah me aage badhoge waise waise tum apne aur bhi naye rup se awgat hoge
Me :- agar ye mere hi rup hai toh me ab tak in se anjaan kaise tha
G :- kyunki ab tak tum inse bhaag rahe the isiliye tum in se anjaan the aur ab tumne inhe swikaar kar liya hai toh ab ye tumhare saamne aaye hai
Abhi hum bate kar hi rahe the ki tabhi kamre ka darwaja knock hone laga
Jab mene darwaja khola toh saamne c. Mama the
Me :- ha bolo mamu kya kaam hai
Mama :- kaam kya kaam niche chal sare tera hi intezaar kar rahe hai
Me :- ha aap chalo me aaya
Mama :- are sath chal na taiyar toh hua hi aur handsome bhi lag raha hai
Me :- haa aap chalo me washroom jake aaya
Mama :- thik hai chal jaldi aana sab niche intezaar kar rahe hai
Phir mama waha se chale gaye aur me bhi room ke andar chala aaya aur muh dhokar niche jane laga
Wahi dusri taraf niche kamre me is waqt sanika aur swati dono taiyar hoke apne bed par baithe the
Sanika :- swati mujhe dar lag raha hai
Swati :- kis baat ka
Sanika :- bhai ko gift pasand nahi aaya toh
Swati :- is baat ka mat soch ye soch tab kya hoga jab us dress ki prise ka sabko pata chalega woh bhi chod jab ye pata chalega ki humne ek anjaan ladke se itna mahanga gift liya hai toh kya hoga
Sanika :- haa ye toh hai lekin humne kya gift liya
Swati :- us ladke ne na dress ke badle na paisa liya na koi aur chij toh woh gift hi hua na
Sanika :- ha jaise use itne paise kharch karna koi badi baat hi nahi hai soch jo 3.5 lacks sirf ek dress kharidne ke liye pay kar sakta hai woh bhi dress kisi aur ko dena ho
Swati :- ha yaar waise woh hai ekdum mast soch ke dekh uske pass andha paisa hai handsom itna ki bade se bade flim star ko bhi piche chod de aur body dikhne se bhi powerful lag raha hai aur kya chahiye ladki ko agar woh phir se mil gaya to use pata hi lungi
Sanika :- mujhe toh dar lag raha hai ki kahi ab woh humare piche na pad jaye agar papa ko pata pad gaya toh is baar woh bhi gussa karenge
Swati :- are chinta mat kar agar woh piche pad gaya toh me use sambhal lungi bhale hi uske pass andha paisa ho toh bhi dekhna kaise mere piche piche kaise paglon ki tarah ghumaungi
Sanika :- chup kar waqt wahi sab sochti rahti hai lekin tujhe kaise pata ki uske pass andha paisa hai
Swati :- tu hi soch na jo ek dress ke liye puri mall kharidne tak ko taiyaar tha uske pass kitna paisa hoga amir gharane se toh hum bhi hai mere pita ka business pure sahar me top 5th position pe aata hai wahi tere pita ka business pure sahar me top 2 position pe aata hai tere toh nana ji pire suraj garh ke raja hai lekin phir bhi hum pura mall kharid le itna toh hum sapne me bhi nahi soch sakte kash woh phir ek baar mil jaye toh sach me use pata lungi me toh
Sanika :- chal ab jyada mat soch niche sab intezaar kar rahe hai
Swati :- chal me toh kabse intezaar kar rahi hu me bhi dekhu ki tera bhai dikhta kaisa hai kahi aisa na ho ki hum uske liye itna badhiya dress laye aur woh koi kala mota ladka nikle
Itna bolke woh jor jor se hasne lagi
Sanika :- agar ab tu chup nahi hui na toh me tujhe chodungi nahi
Swati :- pahle pakad toh sahi phir bolna
Itna bolke woh waha se bhagne lagi aur usi ke piche piche sanika bhi bhagne lagi
Woh dono bhagte hue bahar hall me aa gaye jaha sab khade the
Mosi :- ye kya tum dono ko jara bhi chain nahi hai jab dekho tab ladti rahti ho
B. Mama :- rahne do deepa bache hai ab ye majak masti nahi karenge toh kab karenge
Mosi :- lekin bhaiya
Nana :- beti shant raho dekho mera nawasa bhi aa gaya
Is waqt me apne kamre se bahar nikal ke sidhiya utar raha tha
Me is waqt kuch aisa dikh raha tha
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mera ye look dekh ke waha sab ka muh khula ka khula rah gaya
Is waqt sanika aur swati dono ki pith mere taraf thi jaise hi unhone nana ji ki baat suni toh dono ne piche mudke mujhe dekha jab unhone mujhe dekha toh jaise un dono ke pairon tale jameen hi khisak gayi
Jab meri nazar unke chehre par padi toh shock mujhe bhi laga lekin me jald hi us shock se ubhar aaya
Me niche utar ke sabse pahle nana nani ke pair chuke pranam kiya
Nana :- (mere kandhe pakad ke) wahh kya khubsurat lag raha hai mera pota ek dum picture ke hero ke jaisa nahi nahi unse bhi jyada woh kya kahte hai English me
Me :- (apne baal set karte hue style maar kar) handsome
Nana :- (haste hue) haa haa wahi handsome
Nani :- aap shant baitho mere pote ko nazar laga doge aap toh
Itna bolke unhone mere kaan ke piche kajal ka tikka laga diya
Phir me waha se b. Mama aur mami ke pass chala gaya aur unke bhi pair chue toh mama ne mujhe apne gale se laga liya
Mama :- ab kaleje ko thandak mili na jane kab se ye bahe tadap rahi thi apne bhanje ko gale lagane ke liye
Me :- no emotional drama please me abhi kuch din yahi hu toh ye rona dhona phir kabhi kar lena
Mama :- (mere sar par tapli maarte hue) chup kuch bhi bolta hai
Hello dosto jaise aap sab dekh i mean padh pa rahe ho ki dono stories par me kuch naye ideas try kar raha hu toh agar aapke pass bhi koi idea hai toh krupya kar ke mujhe bataye agar acha laga toh me jarur story me add karunga
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Is waqt Mr. Negative usi jungle me maujood tha apne baki asuri sena ke saath shayad woh kisi chij ka intezaar kar raha tha abhi woh intezaar kar raha tha ki tabhi waha woh daitya aa gaya jiske saath me aur lakshmi behose avastha me the

Me behose hone ka natak karte hue us pure jungle ko dekh raha tha aur itni badi asuri sena daitya sena ko dekh kar me bhi soch me pad gaya me abhi soch hi raha tha ki tabhi mere saamne Mr. Negative aa gaya

Mr. Negative :- (daitya se) sbabash mere veer yodha tumne is C. Queen ko aakhir pakad hi liya (mere taraf ishara kar ke) ye ladka kon hai kahi ye woh toh nahi (uska matlab JASIEN se tha)

D :- nahi hukum ye woh nahi hai balki ye is C. Queen ka premi hai jab ye waha behose hua tha toh mene is ladki ke man me iske liye prem ki bhavna mahsoos ki thi aur wahi is ladke ke andar se bhi wahi bhavnaon ko mene mahsoos kia tha

Mr. Negative :- (haste hue) ha ha ha ab dekhte hai kitna majboot prem hai inka bandh do is ladke ko aur dono ko hosh me lao

Mr. Negative ki baat sun kar kuch sainikon ne mujhe pakad kar ped se bandh diya me chahta toh ek hi pal me sabka ant kar deta lekin yaha ek chij thi jo mujhe khatak rahi thi aur woh thi is Mr. Negative ka chamcha yani suba jo us jagah par kaha bhi nahi dikh raha tha abhi me use dhoondh hi raha tha ki

Tabhi un asuro ne mere chehre pe pani ke chinte maarna shuru kar diye jisse me hosh me aane ki acting karne laga toh wahi lakshmi bhi ab tak hosh me aa gayi thi aur jab usne itne sare asuron ko dekha toh woh bhi ek pal ke liye dar gayi lekin jald hi usne khud ko kabu kar liya

Wahi jab uski nazar mere uper padi toh use gussa aur dar dono ke mile jule bhav uske chehre pe aa gaye ek taraf asuron par gussa toh dusri taraf mujhe kuch ho na jaye uska dar

Lakshmi :- asuron use chod do nahi toh tum sabki maut ke jimmedar tum swayam hoge

Mr. Negative :- ohh gussa badi ajib baat hai ki tumhara pariwar sahi salamat hai aur humne tumhe bhi kuch kiya nahi toh ye gussa kyun kahi mahan C. Queen ko ek insaan se pyar toh nahi ho gaya

Me :- (darne ka natak karte hue) ye sab kya hi raha hai lakshmi ye sab kis baare me bol rahe hai aur ye chipakli se shakal ke hai kon

Mr. Negative :- kya baat hai dono premiyon ki juban ek jaisi hi chalti hai toh kon pahle marega rani ya (mere gadan par talwar rakhke) raja

JASIEN (mere man me) :- aaka aap hukum kare toh yahi sab ko kahatam kar du

Me :- nahi JASIEN yaha mujhe gadbad lag rahi hai yaha na woh suba hai na hi mujhe us shakti astra ki urja mahsoos ho rahi hai kuch samay intezaar karo

Jaha me aur JASIEN baat kar rahe the toh wahi lakshmi mere gardan par talwar dekhke dar gayi

Lakshmi :- use kuch mat karo please me tumhe apni sari shakri de dungi bas use kuch mat karna

Mr. Negative :- ha ha kitna ajib rishta hai ye prem jo kal tak apne shaktiyon par ghamand karti thi woh aaj wohi apni shakti ko ek mamuli insaan ke liye gawana chahti hai (mujh se) kyu ladke kya lagta hai bach paoge tum

Me :- yaha kya ho raha hai ye toh me samajh nahi pa raha hoon lekin mujhe itna jarur pata hai ki meri maut kisi chipkali ki shakal wale insaan ke hathon toh nahi hogi

Mr. Negative :- (gusse me) bas bahut hua ab tum dono maroge maar do unko

Uske itna bolte hi sabhi asuron ne lakshmi par humla kar diya jiske baad lakshmi bhi apne C. Queen wale avtaar me aakar sabhi asuron ko maarne lagi aur me wahi ped se bandha hua kewal is dumdaar action scene ka maja le raha tha

JASIEN :- aaka aap kis chij ka intjaar kar rahe hai aap kahe to abhi sabko khatam kar dunga

Me :- me suba ko dhoondh raha hu pata nahi woh chuha kis bill me chupa hai shayad woh intezaar kar raha hai ki kab me JASIEN ke roop me aau aur woh mujh pr piche se waar kare

JASIEN :- toh ab kya hukum hai aaka

Me :- suno.......

JASIEN :- jo hukum mere aaka

Me :- lekin sambhal ke

JASIEN :- aap chinta mat kijiye aaka me ek jinn hu aur meri shakti mere aaka me hoti hai isiliye koi bhi astra mujhpar nishkriya hai

Me :- thik hai jao phir

wahi mera plan sunne ke baad JASIEN turant mere sharir se bahar nikal gaya toh wahi ab tak daityon ne lakshmi ko puri tarh se gher liya tha aur abhi woh use maarme wale ki tabhi ek bade dhamake ki aawaj aayi jisse waha dhua dhua ho gaya tha aur jis disha se aawaj aayi thi usi disha se 2 aag ke gole aaye aur sidha un asuron ko ja lage aur woh wahi jal ke rakh ho gaye

Aur jab waha ka sara dhua gayab hua toh waha pe JASIEN tha jo apne armour wale roop me tha jise dekh waha lakshmi aur Mr. Negative ke chehre par muskaan aa gayi toh wahi JASIEN apne dono hathon me talware prakat kar li aur lakshmi ko ghere hue sabhi daityon ko maarne laga uski speed itni tez thi ki woh daitya uske waron ko dekh bhi nahi pa rahe the

Aur jaise hi JASIEN unhe maar ke ruka ki tabhi uske piche se suba ne us par shakti astra ka humla kar diya aur phir jaise hi us shakti astra ne JASIEN ko chua waise hi woh shakti astra ek bade dhamake ke saath gayab ho gaya

Mr. Negative :- (jor se chillate hue) ye nahi ho sakta hai (JASIEN se) kon ho tum

JASIEN :- tumhari maut THE JASIEN

Me :- (siti bajate hue) kya dialogue mara hai

Mr. Negative :- pahle toh tum hi maroge ladke

JASIEN :- tere baap ka raj hai kya aa mujh se ladh ke dikha

JASIEN ke itna bolte hi Mr. Negative ne us par waar kar diya aur wahi lakshmi daityon se ladhne lagi aur me phir se is fight ka maja lene laga shayad ye pahli baar tha jab me ladhne ke badle kewal dekh kar maje le raha tha

Abhi sab ladh rahe the ki tabhi JASIEN ne apni magic powers se ek dumdaar waar Mr. Negative pae kar diya lekin isse use ek kharoch bhi nahi aayi toh wahi ye dekhke Mr. Negative ek pal ke liye khud hi shock ho gaya lekin jald hi uske chehre par muskaan aa gayi

JASIEN :- ye kaise ho sakta hai mera ye waar se tumhe kuch nahi hua

Mr. Negative :- ab pata chala ki tum mere shakti astra se kaise bach paye tum ek jinn ho ek maha shaktishali jinn isiliye toh tum us shakti astra ko nishkriya karne me safal ho paye lekin tum kuch bhi kar ke is shakti ko nahi hara paoge

Itna bolke usne apne right hath ko uper ki tarf kar diya jisse uske hath me ek crystal jaisa kuch aa gaya

JASIEN :- ye kya jinn crystal ye tumne kaise mila

Mr. Negative :- jinn lok ko apne adhin kaeke aur ab tum toh kya duniya ka koi bhi jinn mujhe nahi maar payega

Un dono me kya baate ho rahi thi ye toh mujhe clearly samajh nahi aa rahi thi lekin itna jaroor samajh aa raha tha lekin me itna jaroor samajh gaya tha ki us Mr. Negative ne JASIEN ka tod dhoondh liya hai

Jaha ek taraf JASIEN majboor khada tha toh wahi dusri taraf lakshmi akeli daityon se ladh rahi thi aur isi baat ka fayda uthake suba ne us par piche se waar karne ke liye apni talwar ko yaad kiya jisse black fire nikal rahi thi

Aur jaise hi usne lakshmi par waar karna chaha waise hi meri nazar uspe padi aur turant hi mene apni aakhe band karke slow mode ko activate kar diya

Me :- chalo raj aaram khatam kaam shuru

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Chalo raj aaram khatam kaam shuru
Fantastic update
 

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Me :- oh sorry mujhe khayal rakhna chahiye tha
Sanika :- nahi bhai isme aapki koi galti nahi hai waise ye sab chodiye ye aapke liye ek chota sa gift
Itna bolke usne 3 bags mere taraf badha diye
Me :- ye kya 1 bolke 3 pakada rahe ho
Sanika :- msre aur swati ke taraf se 1-1 gift aur 3ra gift wahi royal dress hai jo aapko pasand aayi thi
Me :- acha
Mene uske hathon se woh teeno box le liye aur cupboard me rakh diye
Me :- chalo ab tum dono sone jao aaj bahut thak gayi hongi
Phir woh dono sone chali gayi aur mujhe toh nind nahi aa rahi thi isiliye me door lock karke dhyaan lagane laga
Jab me dgyan laga raha tha ki tabhi mere phone par didi ka phone aaya
Me (phone uthake) :- hii sweet heart kya baat hai soyi nahi abhi tak
Didi :- sweet heart ke bache ek call toh kar nahi sakte aur chinata aise jatate ho jaise ek pal bita nahi sakte
Me :- (mand hi mand muskurate hue) sorry darling time hi nahi mila waise kya kar rahi ho abhi
Didi :- me tumhari koi darling nahi hu samjhe ek call toh laga nahi sakte aur aaye bade darling bolne wale
Me :- are maaf bhi kar do ruko me aapko ek photo bhejta hu woh dekh kar batana gussa utra ki nahi
Itna bolke mene call cut kar diya aur mene jo gifts unke liye kharide the unke photos nikal ke send kar diye
Jo ki kuch is prakar the
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Aur kuch dresses bhi the
Jab mene sare photos send kiye toh turant baad mene saamne se hi unko call laga diya
Me :- bolo darling kaise lage gifts
Didi :- bhai kitna kharcha kiya hai tumne inpar
Me :- tchh ab ye kharcha mat ginao aapke liye toh jaan bhi hazir hai
Didi :- chup baitho kuch bhi bolte ho tum aur ye kya aaj bada pyar aa raha hai mujh par
Me :- kyu nahi aa sakta
Didi :- chal ab so ja raat bahut ho gayi hai aur waise bhi mere pass tere liye kuch hai bhejti hu ruk
Itna bol ke unhone phone cut kar diya aur phir turant hi mere phone me notification aaya jab mene check kia toh didi ne ek photo send kia tha jab mene photo open kia toh meri nazar us photo se hat hi nahi payi
Woh photo kuch aisi thi
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Uske baad me didi ka ek aur msg aaya
Didi :- kaisi lagi apni darling ki photo
Me :- very sexy agar yaha hoti toh achese bata pata
Didi :- aaj itne se hi kaam chalao
Phir uske baad unka kuch msg nahi aaya toh me bhi phone ko side me rakh ke dhyaan lagane laga lekin aaj din bhar ki baate dimaag se nikal hi nahi rahi thi
Me aaj hui ghatna ke baare me soch raha tha ki kaise jab mami mujhe se gale lagi to unki chati ka sparsh kitna haseen tha or phir didi ke sath abhi jo hua yahi sab sochte hue mujhe mere ling me ab tanav mahsoos hone laga or apne aap hi mera hath mere lund ko sehlane laga jis me ab mujhe ek alag hi anand mil raha tha me jitna lund ko masal raha tha utna hi or mann kar raha tha ki masalta hi rahu aise hi kuch der aur masalne ke baad jab mera maal nikla toh mujhe aisa lag raha tha ki jaise me hawa me ud raha hu lekin phir mami ke baare me soch kar mujhe guilty fill hone laga toh me uth kar baathroom chala gaya aur shower ke niche khada ho kar ache se nahaya fresh hua aur guide ke kahne mutabik me apne muldhar chakr par dhyan lagane laga abhi thodi der hi hui thi ki mujhe aise lagne laga ki koi mujhe niche ki taraf khiche ja raha hai lekin me usse ignore karte hue apne chakra par hi focus kiye hua tha aur jab me dhyan me baitha hua tha tabhi mujhe mere dhyan me wahi chitra dikhne laga jise pahle mene antarman me dekha tha
Lekin ye pahle se alag tha isme mujhe sharir ke kendra me lal rang ka hira laga dikh raha tha
Kuch is tarah
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Aur jab phir bhi me nahi ruka aur apne muldhar chakr par hi focused tha ki tabhi mujhe phir se mere sharir ke uper badhta bhar mahsoos hua jiske baad mujhe mere mastishk me ek chitra aur dikha jo kuch aisa tha
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Uske baad me apne dono hathon ko jod kar us lan ke mitra ko pranam kiya jaise hi mene use pranam kiya woh kisi rocket ki speed me mere dimag me ghus gaya jisse mera balance bigad gaya jaha me is waqt baitha hua tha wahi ab me jamin par lait chuka tha
Mujhe pata hai ye update chota hai uske liye me mafi chahunga lekin ab story jis track par hai mujhe har ek scene likhne ke liye bahut research aur mehant lagi hai jo aapko agle Update me pata chalega tab tak ke liye me aapka chahunga ki aise hi aapka pyar mere dono stories par barasta rahe
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Uske baad me apne dono hathon ko jod kar us lan ke mitra ko pranam kiya jaise hi mene use pranam kiya woh kisi rocket ki speed me mere dimag me ghus gaya jisse mera balance bigad gaya jaha me is waqt baitha hua tha wahi ab me jamin par lait chuka tha
Lekin sabse ajib baat ye thi ki jaise hi me laita mere man me ek sath do chitra ubhre jisme se pahla tha ek hathi ka jo ki ajib tha Kuch aisa
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Aur dusra tha wahi lan ka hi lekin usme kuch different tha ye kuch aisa tha
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Jab mene us chitra ko dhyan se dekha toh aisa laga ki wahi 4 shabd jo us lan ke sath the woh us chitra se alag hue aur kisi circle ki tarah ghumne lage jo kuch is prakar tha
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Jab woh 4ro shabd ghum rahe the toh mujhe aisa lag raha tha ki woh 4 shabd 4 mantra banke mere kano me baj rahe hai jinki aawaj har dam pahle se jyada teevra ho rahi thi aur jab woh mantra mere kano me baj rahe the toh mujhe mere sharir ke kendra me ek ajib si kampan mahsoos hui jo ki un manton ki aawaj ke sath aur teevra ho rahi thi
Aise hi thodi der tak in sari ghatnaon ka anubhav lete hue mene apna dhyan todte hue apni aakhe kholi toh mere saamne guide khade the aur is waqt hum mere antarman me the
Jaha guide ke saath mere dono roop bhi jinda ho ke mujhe ghur rahe the
G:- ab kaisa lag raha hai raj
Me :- thodi kampan mahsoos ho rahi hai sharir me
G :- koi baat nahi waise badhayi ho tumne apne muldhaar chakra par 80% tak kabu pa liya hai aur ab tum dusre chakra ki aur badh sakte ho
Me :- aur jo chije mujhe mere dhyan awastha me dikhi thi unka kya
G :- un sabke baare me bhi tum janoge lekin abhi uska sahi samay nahi aaya hai
Me :- thik hai toh ab dusra chakra jagrit karne ki process start kare
G :- nahi abhi nahi abhi bhale hi tumhara sharir tarotaza hai lekin phir bhi tumhara mastishk thak chuka hai use aaram ki jarurat hai
Me :- thik hai ab me samajh gaya hu
Phir uske baad har baar ki tarah guide gayab ho gaya aur phir me bhi apne antarman se bahar nikal gaya
Jab me apne antarman se bahar aaya toh subah ho gayi thi toh me bhi uth kar niche aa gaya jaha par is waqt toh koi nahi tha toh me waha se kicthen me chala gaya jab me kicthen me pahucha toh waha bhi koi nahi tha shayab sab abhi tak so rahe the toh me abhi soch me pad gaya ki kya karu kyunki agar abhi sab uthe toh sab ko nashta lagega aur ghar ki sari leadies bhi kal raat ko bahut thak gayi hai phir mene ye decision liya ki aaj ka nashta me bana leta hu waise bhi mira ma se mene aayurveda ke saath aur bhi gyan liya tha jisme cooking bhi hai
Toh me aaj usi gyan ka istemaal karne waala tha
Toh me lag gaya apne kaam par sabse pahle mene apne senses ki madad se sare masalon ki location pata kar li phir jaise mira ma khana banati thi bilkul uske tarah me bhi khana banane laga phir mene jaise taise karke sara khana bana diya jab khana banane ka kaam complete ho gaya toh me gav ghumne ke liye haweli se bahar aa gaya jab me haweli se bahar aaya toh bahar ke watawaran ki jo sundarta dikhi use dekh kar hi man khush ho gaya
Toh me usi watawaran me gav ki sheetal hawa ke jhoko ko mahsus karte hue joging karte hue gav ka chakkar kaatne laga jaha shergarh gav ke saath saath sahar bhi tha woh bahut had tak updated tha wahi surajgarh totally gav ki feel de raha tazi hawa gay bhaison ki aawaze khet ki mitti ki khushbu jo mere man ko ek alag hi aanand de raha tha
Me joging karta hua gav ke aakhade tak pahuch gaya jab aakhade ke andar gaya toh waha puri open gym bani hui thi jaha dumble sare pathar ke bane the aur waha ek se badh kar ek kale sand dekhne ko mil rahe the
Wahi aakhade ke bich me 2 sand yani pahalwan lad rahe the dono ek dusre ko barabari ki takkar de rahe the
Tabhi ek pahalwan ne dusre ko uthake aise patka jaise koi khilona ho uske baad wahi hua jo har baar har aakhade me hota hai jitne wala pahalwan baki sare pahalwanon ko chunauti dene laga
Pahalwan :- he kisi me himmat jo mujhe pachad sake
Ab ye chunauti sun ke me chupchap waha se satakne laga kyunki mujhe pata tha ki ye pahalwan ko toh me 2 sec me pachad sakta hu
Me abhi waha se nikal hi raha tha ki tabhi mere saamne mera yodha wala roop aa gaya jise sirf me hi dekh sakta tha
Yodha(y) :- kaha bhag rahe ho raj agar koi kisi yodha ko aise sare aam chunauti de toh use swikaarna hi yodha dharm hai nahi toh tum kayar kahlaoge
Me :- are sabse pahle tum ye batao tum bahar kaise aaye tum toh antarman me the
Y :- tum jitna apni taakat badhaoge utna hi humari taakat badhegi aur hum apni marzi se ya tumhare bulave par aa sakte hai
Me :- ye thik hai aur rahi uske chunauti ki baat toh aise bahut se logon ki battisi todi hai ab is khel me maja bhi nahi aata
Abhi hum bate kar hi rahe the ki tabhi us pahalwan ne phir se muh khola
P :- lagta hai aaj kal veer paida hone hi band ho gaye ya kisi ne apne maa ka dhoodh nahi piya kya jo itni si chunauti bhi nahi le sakta
Me (yodha se) :- tum andar chalo ab baat personal ho gayi hai abhi toh isko muh tod jawab dena hi hoga
Y :- ye hui na sache yodha ki baat
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