Fantasy AKELA...TANHA(Adultery,Action,thrill,romance, Friendship,Fantasy)

[Damha]

congratulation for new story.....

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[Damha]

Ok i will wait

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[Damha]

Bhai jahan dosri site ma writer na chori thi wahan tak aik hi dfa ma post kar ka new update da do warna waise boht time lagega

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[Damha]

for new story

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[Damha]

nayi kahani suru karne ke liye par aap thread par thread khole ja rahe kahin kuch din baad bimaar na ho jao mujhe chinta hai kyonki yahan kai story ek sath likhne wale aksar bimaar ho jate

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[Damha]

congrats for new story

congrats for new story

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[Damha]

Ye sirf story ka introduction tha update raat 8:30 baje aye gi

 

[Avir]

Congratulations for new thread
Waiting for next update

 

[Damha]

Any gusse about story

 

[Mathur]

Well congratulations first for new thread an story

STORY probably past mai chlegi yan past sath sath chlega

STORY ARHAM pr base bhi ho skti hai as mujhe story ka koi idea nhi hai aur na hi maine pehli yeh kabhi padhi hai so guesses tph update ke baad effectively lag skte hai

Abhi ke liye story mai ek aisa insaan hai jisse apne 5 doston mai se kisi ke bete (ARHAM) ki fikr hai jiske chlte usne bure kaam chode hai but ab story ko base 5 doston ke milne yan unki origin se story shuru ki ja skti hai as pancho maut DHUNDH rhe they toh simple hai unhone bahut kuch sha hai

HERO toh vahi aadmi lag rha hai jo ARHAM ki dekhbhal kr rha hai aur shayad kisi LADKI yan apne purane pyaar ko apne badal jaane ke baare mai bta rha hai aur uske past mai se koi dhondhta usske pass aa jata hai jisse dekh vo MAUT kr khoff mai aa jata hai as usne ARHAM ke liye jina sikha hai

Well aapka update btayega ki iska regular reader mai ban pata hoon yan nhi
Hopefully story jald hi aage bde aur mai iska regular reader ban paun

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...MATHUR