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Hello, Ladies 
& Gentleman, 
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.
Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 17th, Nov 2019, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.
Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.
Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.
Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.
On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Siraj Patel
& Gentleman, We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.
Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 17th, Nov 2019, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.
Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.
Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.
Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.
On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Siraj Patel
Fir honaa kyaa thaa, gore badanwali shradha ko apne cute baby ke saath akelaa paakar dhondu aur raheman apni hawas se bhari ankhonpar jo akash ke rahate huwe taala lagaye huwe the uss taale ko kholkar we dono bhuke bhediye ki tarah shradha ke gore kaamuk badanko uparse niche tak ghurne lage.
Shradha khule swabhav ki thi to wo aisi apne kamuk badanki oor mardonki ghurti najronko hamesha apni khubsurti keliye compliment hi samajhti thi. Lekin apne high class circle se bahar aakar abb aise inh low class mardonki ghurti najronse maadak shradha kaa pahali baar samnaa horaha thaa to wo ek alagsi kaam uttejanaa mahesuss karr sakti thi.
Apne maadak rasile badanki oor ghurti dhondu aur raheman ki najronko dekh tab shradha sirf apne rasile gulabi hotonse smile hi desaki.
Shradhaki cute smile dekh raheman aur dhondu shradhaake maadak gore rasile badanko uparse niche ghurnaa band kar shradha ki nili aankhonme dekh wo dono apni pili battisi dikhate huwe muskurane lage, aur tab raheman dhonduse dhimi aawaajme bolaa, "yaar aaj iss maal ke saath masti karne me bada majaa aane waala hai, iss mast patakhe kaa gora lachila jism to dekho, tauba tauba." Aisaa bolkar raheman apne half pant se jo uske kaale lund ne bonner banaya tha usse wo bich bich me shradhase aankh churakar masalne lagaa.
(To yaha aapko ek baat samajhni hogi ke raheman aurtonke maamle me bada hi daring baaj hai aur dhondu to bass baheti ganga me hath dhone me hi yakin karta hai. Matlab sale ye dono sadak chaap badbudaar kide aurtonke maamle me hawas se bhare huwe darinde hai. 'They both are perverts.' Lekin inh dononke saamne ek maadak gore badanwali high class aurat thi, aur pahali baar kisi mast badanwali auratne khulkar inh dono sadak chaap hawas se bhare mardonse baat karne ki cheshtaa ki thi, jisase wo afsara jo pahale we apne aukatke bahaar ki samajhte the wo jaise unh dononke perverted shaitaani dimag ki simame hi aachuki thi, yahi wo vajah thi jo saali inh kamine dono suwaronko kaam uttejana me excited karr rahi thi.)
Shradhaa ke kaamuk badanko dekh dhondu itnaa kaamuk hochukaa thaa ke uski lungise uskaa mussal lund tent banaye huwe dikh raha tha jisspar haath rakh jaise taise usne apne bonner ko shradhase chipaaye rakhaa thaa, tab raheman ki baat par dhondu shradhaki nashili ankhonme dekh apni pili battisi dikhate huwe muskuraate huwe rahemaan se dhimi aawaj me bolaa, "jo bhi karno hai jaldi shuru kar, mujhse sabar nahi horahaa." Apne adhed umar waale dost ki baat sun rahemaan ne saamne seat par baithi shradha ki nashili ankhonme dekh bade majakiya andajme baat karna shuru kiya, "kya memsahab, hamare hote huwe aapne sahab ko aisa kyu bola ke aap 'bore' hojaaengi akele?" Raheman ki baat sun shradha raheman ko dekh muskurai aur aage kuch raheman ko bolne hi waali thi ke raheman bichme jhatse bolaa, "wo jaane do memsaheb, sahab ne hame jo kaam diya hai wo ham karenge, ham aapko bore hone nahi denge. To entertainment shuru kiya jaaye memsaheb?"
Raheman ne kahi baatpar natkhat shradha kisi maharani ki tarah ek haathse ishara kar boli, "ji shuru kiyaa jaaye." Ayse bolkar shradhane apni hassi ko apne muhme hi dabadiya aur raheman ki oor tak taki lagate huwe dekhte huwe apne godme soye apne baby ke sarko ek hathse sahelaane lagi.
Samnese natkhat shradhaka kisi maharani ki tarah aaya response dekh raheman bhi bade taav me shradhase bolaa, "to maharaani sahebaa aapki khatirdari me ek joke haajir hai." Aisaa bolne ke baad usne majakiya joke aur majedaar kissonki aisi apne badbudaar muhse baarish ki ke shradha hass haskar lotpot hogayi, rahemaan ko follow karte huwe dhondune bhi majedaar kisse shradhase share kiye. To dusri oor akash jo shradhaake barabar upari seat par sine ke bal lete huwe kambal odhe huwe sone kaa naatak kar rahaa thaa use to raheman aur dhondu ki bate itni majakiya lag rahi thi ke sonekaa dhong karna apni hassi rokne ke chakkar me usse abb mushkilsa hone laga tha aur unh dhondu aur raheman ki shradhako hasaane keliye ki huwi majakiya baate sun use lagne lagaa tha ke usne unh dono sadak chaap mardonke baare me galat socha hai ke we dono apni aukatse aage badhkar uski high class khubsurat biwi se flirt karr sakte hai, ye acha khayal unh sadak chaap bandaronke baare me ek palke liye akash ke dimag me aaya, lekin jab kuch minute baad akash jo uski biwi ki upari seat par sineke bal kambal odhe huwe letaa thaa wo gahari nind me soyaa hai ye yakin dilane keliye akash ne jab dhimi snoring start ki, fir jo huwaa usase akash ke to hosh hi udgaye.
Akash snoring, "ghrrrrr, ghrrrrrr, ghrrrr."
(Nind me soye akash ko snore karta dekh raheman aur dhondu ko abb lagne lag chukaa tha ke akash abb gahari nind me hai to raheman ek majedaar kissa shradhako sunaake hasaaneke baad apni gardan apne bagal me baithe dhondu ki oor kar usne aankh maari jisase dhondu ko samaj aagaya ke raheman shradha ke aage kaamuk mastise bhara fansaa fenkane waala hai jiska dhondu kabse besabrise intajaar kar raha tha. )
dhondu ko aankh marne ke baad raheman firse saamne shradha ki oor dekhne lagaa aur fir jhatse apni pili battisi dikhate huwe bolaa, "memsaheb, ek aur joke suno, badahi majedaar hai."
Raheman ki baat par shradha khil khilaate huwe samne seat par baithe raheman se boli, "haa, sunaonaa, hehe."
Shradhaki masti bhari aawaj sunn raheman shradhaki sarike palluse ubharkar dikhti chuchiyonko wo hawas bhari najronse usne ek palke liye dekhaa fir waapas shradha ki nashili ankhonme dekh bolaa, "to gaur se suniye memsahab bada hi majedaar joke hai. ek din ek feriwala rastese aawaj lagate huwe jaaraha tha 'dudh ki thaili lelo dudh ki thaili.' tab ek aurat uss feriwale ki aawaj sun gharse baahar aai aur feriwaale ko dekh kar fir gharke andar gayi. Tab uss auratki saas ne uss auratko puchaa, 'bahu dudh nahi laaya. Memsahab tab uss saas ki bahu ne kya bolaa pata hai?"
Raheman ki baat ko sunn shradha majedaar chutkule ko puraa sunane ki excitement me uchalkar saamne baithe raheman se boli, "haa batav batav kyaa huwaa aage."
Shradha ki baat sunn raheman firse shradhake sarike palluse ubharkar dikhte stanonko khane waali najronse dekhte huwe wo besharmi se bolaa, "memsahab tab uss saas ki bahune kaha ke, 'maa ji, wo kamina braa bech raha thaa." Aisaa kahekar usne apni najare shradhaki nashili najronme kar usne apni pili battisi dikhayi.
(Ek ganda joke, ji haa yahi hai raheman kaa shradha ke saamne fenka huwaa fansaa. To iss pahale fenke huwe kamuk faansese raheman shradhake majakiya aur khule swabhav ki gaherayi janana chahata hai, aur wo apne ghinone khel ki ek ek level badhaate huwe ye andaja lagana chahata hai ke shradha iss kaamuk khell me kiss had tak aage jaasakti hai, lekin abhi jo pahela kamuk ghinonaa waar raheman ne kiya thaa uskaa reaction shradhaa kya degi? apne ghinone joke ko shradha ko bataaneke baad raheman ko aisa bhi lag raha thaa ke usne koyi jaldbaaji to nahi ki? To iss sawalkaa uttar usse jald milne hi waala tha jo dhondu aur raheman ke kamuk armanonko ek to kuchal degaa yaa fir aur jyada bhadka degaa.)
Uss ghinone joke ke baad cauch me kuch second kaa sannata fail gaya, raheman apne ghinone joke ko shradhako batane ke baad shradha ke najuk chehare par koyi bhav naa dekh wo bhi kuch palkeliye apni pili battissi dekhaane ke baad expressionless huwaa, aur raheman ke bagalme baithaa dhondu kaa bhi waisaa hi haal thaa yaa kahe usse bhi buraa. Aur shradha ke barabar upari seat par sine ke bal blanket odhe huwe sonekaa naatak kar rahaa akash ne jab raheman kaa ghinonaa joke sunaa tab pahelaa reaction akash kaa man hi man yahi thaa ke, "aagaye saale sadak chaap kide apni aukatpar." Yah man hi man bolte huwe akash ne apne ek hathse apne khade land ko masalna shuru kiya, matlab saaf thaa ke akash raheman ne jo ghinona joke jo auaratke stanonse juda huwa tha usko apni biwiko batate huwe sun akash kaam uttejit huwaa thaa aur apne patni vrata swabhav ko ye kahekar bahelaa raha thaa ke, "bas ek joke hi to hai. Isase bhi jyada gandi baate me apni biwi se kar chukaa hu." Jihaa iss baatse akash kaa ek aur dark secret pata chalta hai jo hai apni maadak biwi se gandi baante karna jiske aane waale samay me aapko darshan honge.
To abb dusri taraf khule swabhav waali shradha raheman ke ghinonaa joke jo auratke stanonse judaa huwaa tha usko sunn wo ek palke liye sahem gayi yaa kahe ek sadak chaap mard ke muhse aisi gandi baat sunn kaam uttejit huwi. Lekin 5 second ke silent ko chirte huwi shradha ke andar jo khule swabhav waali natkhat bachi thi wo khil khilakar uss gande joke parr hasne lagi, uss khule swabhav waali bachi ko to koyi lena dena hi nahi thaa ke ye joke kitna bhada aur gandaa hai wo to ji bharke haste jaarahi thi, "hahahahahaha." Shradha ko gande chutkule par haste dekh fir kya tha, dhondu aur raheman to jaise kisi badaa yudh jitaa ho waise we shradhake thahakonke saath apne badbudaar muhse kisi rakshas ki tarah hasne lage. Aur dusri oor shradha kaa pati jo shradha ke barabar upar waale seat par sineke bal blanket odhe huwe sonekaa naatak karr raha thaa wo apni biwi ko unh lafangonke saath uss gande chutkule par hasta dekh akash kaa pahala reaction thaa ke, "i knew it, meri jaan aam waale incident ke baad bhi tera bachpana nahi gaya, i knew it."
Kuch 1 minute tak shradha pet pakadkar raheman ke joke par hasti rahi, aur fir shant hote huwe wo apne godme apna 6 mahine kaa baby jo abb unh tinonke thahakonke karan jaag gaya thaa uske sar ko ek hathse sahelaane lagi fir aage raheman ki oor dekh boli, "aap bhi naa raheman ji bade hi majakiya hai aap, hass hass kar meraa to pet dard karne lagaa."
Shradha kaa raheman ke gande bhade joke par jo reaction aaya thaa wo raheman aur dhondu keliye jit thi jo unhe aur aage badhne keliye uksaa chuki thi. Unh dononko kisinaa kisi tarikese shradha jaisi kaamuk khubsurat gulabi badanwali high class auratke saath gandi baate karni hi thi jo joke ke madhyam se hi kyo naa ho, unhe apni aukat pata thi to we shradha jaisi maadak high class auratke saath gandi baatonse jyada kuch soch nahi paarahe the, unh gandi baatonme hi unhe kaam aanand ki anubhuti horahi thi. Lekin aage aisaa hone waala thaa ke jaise ek bhikari ko raaste par 1 rupaye kaa note dikhe aur uss note ko uthaate hi usse ek besh kimati hiraa uss note ke niche mill jaaye.
Shradha ki baat sun raheman kuch kahane hi waala thaa ke dhondu jo uske bagalme safed maili lungi me thaa wo jhatse shradhase bolaa, "memsahab abb meri baari."
Dhondu ki baat sun jhatse shradha apni ek hath ki ungli pati ki oor kar boli, "shhhhhh, waise waale joke mat sunao."
Shradha ki baat sun dhondu to jhatse chup hogaya lekin raheman ko shradha ki baat me unh dono dhondu aur raheman ke ghinone kamuk khel keliye green signal dikhayi deraha thaa. Kyoke shradhane jo kaha wo uske pati ki oor ishara karte huwe kaha thaa, yaane agar uska pati yaha maujud naa hotaa to yakinan shradhake saath unh logone bahutsare gande chutkule batadiye hote aur kahina kahi shradha ko we kaam uttejana se garam karr rahe hote. To fir kyatha, shradhane kahi baatke turand baad raheman apni seat se khada huwaa aur apni gardanse isharakarte huwe shradha ko cauch se bahar chalne keliye kaha jiska jawab shradhane naa me sar hilakar diya.
Akash jaga huwa to thaa lekin apni seat par wo sine ke bal aankhe band kiye huwe thaa jiss karan usse raheman jo uski biwi ki oor jo bahar chalne kaa ishara kar raha tha wo dikhaa nahi. Raheman ne kiya huwa shradhako ishara aisa lag raha thaa ke raheman kisi sadak chaap randi ko room me chalne kaa isharaa karr raha ho.
Jab shradhane apne godme apne baby ke sarko sahelaate huwe unh dono sadak chaao mardonke saath cauch se bahar jaanese inkar kiyaa tab raheman ne badaa juaa khelaa aur wo dhondu ke sath cauch se bahar jaate huwe shradhaa jo apni seat par baithi thi uski oor dekh bolaa, "thik hai memsahab, ham garibonke saath kaun hassi majak karnaa chaahegaa." Aisa bolkar raheman dhonduke saath cauch se bahar chala gaya.
Cauch se bahar nikakte hi dhondu jhatse raheman se bolaa, "abe saale tune socha bhi kaise ke wo tere ek ishaare se ham dononke saath baahar aayegi. Uss saali kutiya ko agar gande joke pasand nahi to wahi baithkar uske gore badanko dekh kar to maje liye hote."
Second class dibbe ke exit door ke najdik jaakar, exit door kholkar, khule darwajese aati hawakaa majaa lete huwe raheman dhondu ki baatpar bolaa, "dekh bhai ham kabse uss afsarake badanko dekh dekh kar aankhe sekh rahe hai, to abb mujhe kuch extraa mangta hai boss, to maine ye bada daav khelaa hai isme kamyabi mili to sahi nahi to firkya cauch me jaakar firse uss afsarake badanka to hame najronse balatkar karna hi hai. Sach kahu to mujhe pahalesehi pataa hai ke wo nahi aane waali, firbhi ham dononke raat me maje hi hai."
Raheman ki baat par dhondu jo rahemanse satkar second class dibbe ke khule exit door ke paas khada tha wo raheman ki oor dekh apne lungi ke andar jo uska lund abb cauch se bahar aate hi murjha chukaa thaa wo uss lund ko masalte huwe bolaa, "dekh bhai teri baat to sahi hai, lekin majaa to tab hi chala gaya jab uss randi ne ham dononke gande jokes par fool stop lagadiya, to tu kis maje ki baat karr raha hai."
Raheman apni nili half pant ke uparse apna mussal lund masalte huwe apne chehare par shaitani smile laakar apne bagalme khade dhondu ki oor dekh bolaa, "abe saale, jab wo afsara ghode bechkar sojaayegi naa tab ham uski saari nichese uthakar saarike andarka maal dekhenge.'' raheman ki iss baatpar dhondu kaa murjhaya huwaa lund ek baar fir fatakse tankar lungi se tent banaaye huwe khada huwa jise masalte huwe dhondu haste huwe bolaa, "ye huwi naa baat hehe."
To Be Continued By Your Response.
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