Aakhirkaar aapki story completely padhkar end kardi aur waise aapki story bahut achi hai aur aap un chunida writers me se jo forum par story start karte hai aur complete bhi karte hai aur apne toh bahut saari kahaniyan likhi jo es forum ko bahut kaamyaab banaata hai bas ek chij mujhe lagti toh sex scenes wagaira bahut aasani se huye hai es story me bhi shayad baki me bhi story start bahut jabardast hoti hai no doubt but half story aate aate sach kahu utna excitement nahi rehta aur sex bhi isliye thoda improve Nani dadi tai ya characters dikhane chahiye jisse waqt waqt par story me romanch bana rahe aur es story me mujhe kuch galtiya lagi jaise ki Faizal ki 31-33 age dikhai hai jab hero 19 ka tha baad me 6 saal ke Kareeb dikha diye aur Faizal 38 year something ho gaya but uska baby plan bhi nahi kiya aur na hua aise hi Diya ka bhi aur aise Deepak jo ki start me 38 ka tha 44 ka hoga pre time me abhi bhi try kiya but nahi hua but ye nahi ye Nisha hero ke sath baby karle toh please en baato par dhyan denge asha hai waise Mera koi iraada nahi hai ki aapko bura Lage but meri koi baat buri lagi ho toh sorry chota Bhai samajh kar maanf kar dena waise hamesha aapki story achi rahi hai Dani wali bhi isiliye mujhse pause ho gayi thi but jaldi hi usko bhi restart karunga