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Fantasy Abhi....The Wizard King

abhi_mishra_91

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Update9:

Previously:

Mein West me tha aur hamara ghar North East me tha. Jab mein pehle aya tha tab Northwest k gate se aya tha. Pata nahi kyun mujhe aaj phir se wo jhode p jane ka maan hua. Mene ek Ghoda(Horse) kharid liya. Aur uss taraf chala gaya. Abhi lagbhag Dopehar hua tha ki mein jhopdi k paas pahunch gaya. Jhopdi k bahar ek ped pe mene horse ko bandh diya. Mein jhopdi k andar jake dekha to sab kuchh waisa ka waisa hi tha. Pata nahi kyun aaj mujhe yahan ane k maan hua. Jaise hi mene jhopdi bahar nikal muje ek awaz sunayi diya.


For Reference:

Blade:


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Long knife:


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5 Magic Levels:


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Aab Aage:

Ye awaz Ghodon(Horses) ki thi. Jaise ghode daud rahe ho. Par ye awaz dhimi thi. Ab bhai kya kare jigyansa(Curiosity) ye ek kida hai jab kisi ko kat ti hai na, dimag kharab kar ke rakh deti hai. Aur yahi haal mera bhi hua. Mene bhi curiosity k chalte badh gaya apni marane k aur(awaz ki aur). Kuchh der chal ne k baad mujhe kuchh chikhe sunayi di. Main chaukanna ho gaya. Mene Dhanush k kaman me arrow laga diya. Aur dhire dhire age badhta chala gaya. Kuchh der badne k baad mujhe kuchh lash dikhi. Mene jindegi me bahut hi lash dekhi hai. Isiliye mujhe inse pharak nahi padta. Par lashon ko dekh k aisa laga ye kisi Janwar ka kaam nahi par kisi giroh ka kaam hai. Phir mujhe kaki ki wo baat yaad agayi, jisme unhone luteron ka jikar kiya tha. Phir me thoda age badh gaya. Mujhe kuchh logon k hasne ki awaz arahe thi aur kisi chillane ki. Ye koi ladki ki awaz hai. Main jaldi se uss taraf badh gaya. Aur uske baad jo mene dekha mera khoon khol gaya.

Kuchh aadmi ek ladki ko bina kapdo k ussko lita diya. Char aadmi uske haath par pakad rakhe the. Phir 5th aadmi apne kapde utar raha tha. Jaise hi usne apne kapde utar kar ladki k upar ane laga. Tab kahan se ek arrow ake uske aankh mein ghus gaya. Aur wo nikal gaya. Ye arrow mene hi chalaya tha. Ye arrow chalake mein ped k pichhe chup ke dusra arrow kaman pe lagaya. Uss aadmj k girte hi baki char aadmi chaukanna ho gaye. Jaise hi wo log uthe tab phir se ek k aankh mein ek Arrow ghus gaya. Wo log abhi ped k pichhe chup gaye. Itne wo ladki apna kapada samet kar ek ped k pas beth gayi. Ab me bhi dhire dhire age badhne laga. Itne me ek khanjar udta hua mere pas aya. Mene apna Dhanush phek diya aur phauran apna 2 Long Knifes jo mere apne kamar k pichhe bandh ke rakhi thi, wo nikali aur jo khanjar mere taraf aa raha tha to usko mod ne k liye war kiya. Par jaise hi wo mere se takrane wala tha wo ghum gaya aur mere pet ke paas and laga. Waqt rehte me ghum gaya, nahito phirse mere pet me kuchh ghus jata. Mene ghum te waqt dekh liya ki ek lutera apne haath se kuchh usare kar raha tha. Sala ye Magician lagta hai. Phirse wo khanjar mere taraf badh raha tha. Achha tha ki mere dono hath me hathiyaar the warna aaj to meri lag jati. Main jaise taise kar ke khanjar se bach raha tha. Lekin har bar se bachne k baad me ankhe tedhi kar k uss lutera ko dekh raha tha. Jaise mujhe laga ki me abhi uss pe hamla kar sakta hun tab mene apna ek Long Knife uss k taraf phek diya. Par sala wo pura chaukanna tha, wo khanjar mere long knife ko block kardiya. Lekin main bhi kam chalak nahi tha, mene ek long knife phekne k baad fauran hi dusra wow bhi phek diya. Wo lutera is k liye ready nahi tha, aur wo dusra long knife sidha uss k dil mein ghus gaya. Ab mere paas ek Blade tha, Blade talwar se chhota hota hai,aur long knife se bada aur use ek side hi dhar rehta hai. Ab mene apna Blade nikal diya, aur baki dono ko dekhne laga. Par wo dono mujhe kahin nahi hai dikhe. Main Ladki ki taraf dekha wo ek taraf dekh rahi thi. To mujhe bhi yakin ho gaya, baki dono bhi udhar hi honge. Main bhi uss taraf chal diya.

Thoda age badhte hi. Mere upar se chillane ka awaz aya. Mene Blade ko apne sar k taraf kar k upar dekhne laga. Ek aadmi ped se mere upar kud raha tha. Bewakuf kahin ka. Sala humla karne k time koi chhillake humla karta hai kya. Uska talwar mere Blade pe laga. Uske baad usne mere right, left me humla kiya main ne usko apne Blade se rok diya. Jaise ho wo mere pet pe marne k liye war kiya mein ghum gaya aur mere Blade sidha uske gardan k aar par ho gayi. Ab uske bad kya hua bol k fyda bhi nahi hai. Lekin wo sala aakhri wala kahan hai. Tab sala pichhe se ladki k chillane ki awaz aayi. Wo aadmi ladki k gardan par talwar rakh diya tha. Achha hua ladki ne kapde pahan liye the. Wo jor se ro rahi thi.

Lutera-
“ Jaldi se apne hathiyar phek de, barna me iss ladki ko mar dunga.”

Main abhi apna Blade pekh kar dono haath upar kar uss k paas dhire dhire badh gaya. Main uss Magician lutera k paas pahunch gaya. Wo lutera mujhe rukne k liye bola. Main ruk gaya aur nichhe ek per kar k beth gaya. Uske baad wo sala hasne laga. Ye uski jindegi ki aakhri Hansi thi. Kyun ki jab wo has raha tha, uska dhyan mere upar se hat gaya tha. Mene apne right hand se mera long knife Magician Lutera k Sine se nikala aur uske taraf phek diya. Mera knifr sidha ladki k kaan k pas se uske sar pe lagi. Aur ladki ki chikh nikal gayi. Aur wo aadmi pichhe ki taraf gir gaya. Ab mamla khatam hua. Uske baad main ladki k pas jake bola.

Main-
“ Daro mat, main tumhe kuchh nahi karunga. Ye sab bhi khatam ho gaya. Ye sab mar gaye hai. Ab tumhe dar ne ki jarurat nahi hai.”

Ladki-“ Aap mere sath jabardasti nahi karenge na. Aap mujhe nahi marenge na.”

Main-“ Nahi Marunga nahi jabardasti karunga, Chalo yahan se chalte hain, ye jagah khatre se khali nahi hai. Yahan pe unke aur bhi aadmi ho sakte hain.”

Uske baad mene jake apne sare hathiyar, arrows k sath samet liya. Sab laash k paas jake acche se check in kiya. Mujhe sab k paas se kuchh Mudraye jarur mili. Ab wo Mudraye unke kaam ki to nahi thi, to mene le liya. Uske baad ek arrow ko kaman me lagake main age badh chala . Thode dur pe mujhe Ghodon ki awaz aayi. Main uss taraf badh gaya. Wahan pe panch ghode the. Ghodon k side mein saman bandhe hue the. Main ne ladki ko ek ghode pe bithaya aur baki char ko rassi mein bandh kar leke age chal pada. Age aake hum log uss jag aa pahunch gaye jahan pe kuchh logon ki lashen padi thi. Ladki ghode se utar kar unn logo k paas jake rone lagi. Mene usko kuchh samay rone diya aur charo taraf dekhne laga. Wahan pe ek Tanga(Horse Carriage) tha. Yahan pe mujhe jyada der rukna thik nahi laga tab mene ladki se bola.

Main-
“ Ye jagah khatre se khali nahi hai. Hame chalna chahiye.”

Ladki-“Par mere Mata, Pita aur Bhai hain. Main inko kaise chhod k ja sakti hun.”

Main-“ Inko hum log aise Nagar ke andar nahi le ja sakte, iInka antim sanskar yahin karna hoga par ye jagah thik nahi hai.Chalo pehle inko tanga mein lad dete hai.”

Itna bol k mene sab ki laash ko Tanga mein dal kar ladki k saath uss jhopdi mein chala gaya. Phir sab k lash ko jhopdi k andar rakh kar. Jhopdi ko aag laga di. Apne mata,pita aur bhaiyon ki chita jalte dekh ladki rone lag gayi. Mene uski chup karaya aur Tanga k paas aa gaya. Mene jake apne ghode ki sab k sath bandh diya. Pancho ghode me jo saman tha, usse tanga mein rakh diya. Ab ladki tanga k samne beth gayi aur mein ek ghode pe beth k baki sab ghodo ko rassi se bandh kar nagar ki taraf chal diya. Ab me to thehra lalchi insaan. Isiliye main jate jate Aam k ped dhund raha tha thode der baad wo bhi mujhe mil gaya. Isiliye jate jate mene 25 Aam tod diye.

Main-
“ Tum ne kabhi Aam khaye hain.”

Ladki ne Naa me sar hilaya. To mene ek Aam usko khane k liye de diya. Usko khate hi uska chehra thoda achha hua.

Main-
“Kya Naam h tumhara.”

Ladki-“Komal”

Main-“Abhi hum Nagar thode duri pe hai. Isiliye hume jaldi chalna hoga.”

Komal ne haan me sar hilaya. Uske bad hum log Nagar k taraf teji se nikal gaye.

Nagar pe pahunch te hi shaam ho gayi. Par Dwar abhi band nahi hua tha. Mene Dwar k sainik ko Luteron k bare mein bata diya. Pehle to wo log bahut gussa hue ki Komal k parivar ko mar diya,aur uske sath balatkar karne ki koshish bhi ki. Par jaise unhe pata chala ki mene sahi samay pe use bachaya aur un Luteron ko mar diya, tab wo log bahut khush hue. Nagar k andar hum log jaldi chal nahi sakte, yahan ka rule hai. Isiliye ghar pahunch te pahunch te raat ho gayi.

Jab main ghar k andar pahuncha to dekha Paras aur Payal udaas bethe the. Pandit ji unhe khane k liye bol rahe the, par wo khana nahi kha rahe the. Mujhe dekte hi ,wo dono ake mujhse lipat kar rone lage.

Main-
“Kya hua tum dono ko, aise ro kyun rahe ho.”

Payal-“ Hame laga aap bhi hame chhod k chale gaye.”(Rote hue)

Main-“ Aisa kabhi ho sakta hai, ki main apne pyare bachho ko chhod k chala jaun. Main to tum logo k liye aam lane gaya tha. Ye dekho.”

Itna bol kar main ne unhe aam dikhaya. Aur un dono ko ek ek Aam diya. Wo dono khush ho gaye aur Aam khane lage. Mene Pandit ji ko bhi ek diya par unhone mana kar diya. Uske baad mene Komal ka parichay sab se karwaya. Uske baad mene Komal ko tisre room me rehne k liye dikhane le gaya. Usse bathroom bhi dikhaya aur fresh hone k liye bol k chala gaya. Usska saman mene uske room me rakh diya. Uske baad mene Tanga se luteron ka saman leke apne room me rakh diya aur baki jo Komal k parivar ka tha use nichhe rakh diya. Phir mene Tanga se Ghoda ko nikal kar baki Ghodon k sath ek khunte mein bandh diya aur chara dal diya (jab mene ghoda kharida tha tab ghode bale ko mere ghar chara bhejne k liye bol diya tha,kuchh jyada Mudraye deke).

Main ghar k andar aa gaya. Komal bhi fresh hokar saaf kapde pehan kar aa gayi thi. Jab mene Komal ko dekha to socha dikhne buri nahi hai. Sarir thoda patla hai, rang bhi utna gora nahi hai, par dikhne mein achhi hai. Phir hum sabne khana khaya. Khana khake Panditji ghar chale gaye. Wo kal nahi ane wale the. Kal Mandir me badi pooja hai to wo nahi aa sakte the. Payal aur Paras Komal se baat karna chahte the par mene unhe ye bol diya ki Komal bahut lamba safar tay kar k aayi hai, usko aram karne diya jaye. Wo dono bhi maan gaye aur apne room sone chale gaye. Komal ko mene apna room dikhaya aur agar kuchh jarurat hi yo mujhe bulane k liye bol diya. Wohi sone chali gayi. Main bhi apne room ake ,bed par let k aaj k din k bare me sochne lag gaya. Aise hi sochte sochte main so gaya.
 

abhi_mishra_91

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abhi_mishra_91 Bhai aapki story lajawab hai aapki story aaj hi pdhi Achi lag rhi hai
Jhutt nhi aapki story just for tym pass start kri bcz koi another story nhi bchi pdhne ke liye aur aisa isliye Jo starting main khud Ka introduction dia usme Likha hai sirf isliye start kri bcz lockdown ki vjh se samay mil paya to main nhi pdhna Chahta tha but aaj start kri TB LGA boss story main dum hai
Aur Aapne starting main index main sirf 5 tak update kra hai
Maine Kaha rhne de lgta hai gyi kahani mgr JB akhiru tak pahucha to pta chla 2 update bdh gye hai
Ab aate story pr faltu ki bchodi bahut krli
Boss bilkul Naya plot hai interesting LGA I think vo gussel healer humari heroine bneg.

Aur akhiri main maffi sorry
SORRY Kisi Baat Ka Bura lge to
Welcome Hunterrr Bhai...
Apke kisi bhi baat ka mujhe bura nahi laga.
Sath bane rahiyega...
 

Hunterrrr69

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Update9:

Previously:

Mein West me tha aur hamara ghar North East me tha. Jab mein pehle aya tha tab Northwest k gate se aya tha. Pata nahi kyun mujhe aaj phir se wo jhode p jane ka maan hua. Mene ek Ghoda(Horse) kharid liya. Aur uss taraf chala gaya. Abhi lagbhag Dopehar hua tha ki mein jhopdi k paas pahunch gaya. Jhopdi k bahar ek ped pe mene horse ko bandh diya. Mein jhopdi k andar jake dekha to sab kuchh waisa ka waisa hi tha. Pata nahi kyun aaj mujhe yahan ane k maan hua. Jaise hi mene jhopdi bahar nikal muje ek awaz sunayi diya.


For Reference:

Blade:


blade.jpg

Long knife:


images-20663a9366f75b0b2.md.jpg

5 Magic Levels:


IMG_20200407_180952.md.jpg


Aab Aage:

Ye awaz Ghodon(Horses) ki thi. Jaise ghode daud rahe ho. Par ye awaz dhimi thi. Ab bhai kya kare jigyansa(Curiosity) ye ek kida hai jab kisi ko kat ti hai na, dimag kharab kar ke rakh deti hai. Aur yahi haal mera bhi hua. Mene bhi curiosity k chalte badh gaya apni marane k aur(awaz ki aur). Kuchh der chal ne k baad mujhe kuchh chikhe sunayi di. Main chaukanna ho gaya. Mene Dhanush k kaman me arrow laga diya. Aur dhire dhire age badhta chala gaya. Kuchh der badne k baad mujhe kuchh lash dikhi. Mene jindegi me bahut hi lash dekhi hai. Isiliye mujhe inse pharak nahi padta. Par lashon ko dekh k aisa laga ye kisi Janwar ka kaam nahi par kisi giroh ka kaam hai. Phir mujhe kaki ki wo baat yaad agayi, jisme unhone luteron ka jikar kiya tha. Phir me thoda age badh gaya. Mujhe kuchh logon k hasne ki awaz arahe thi aur kisi chillane ki. Ye koi ladki ki awaz hai. Main jaldi se uss taraf badh gaya. Aur uske baad jo mene dekha mera khoon khol gaya.

Kuchh aadmi ek ladki ko bina kapdo k ussko lita diya. Char aadmi uske haath par pakad rakhe the. Phir 5th aadmi apne kapde utar raha tha. Jaise hi usne apne kapde utar kar ladki k upar ane laga. Tab kahan se ek arrow ake uske aankh mein ghus gaya. Aur wo nikal gaya. Ye arrow mene hi chalaya tha. Ye arrow chalake mein ped k pichhe chup ke dusra arrow kaman pe lagaya. Uss aadmj k girte hi baki char aadmi chaukanna ho gaye. Jaise hi wo log uthe tab phir se ek k aankh mein ek Arrow ghus gaya. Wo log abhi ped k pichhe chup gaye. Itne wo ladki apna kapada samet kar ek ped k pas beth gayi. Ab me bhi dhire dhire age badhne laga. Itne me ek khanjar udta hua mere pas aya. Mene apna Dhanush phek diya aur phauran apna 2 Long Knifes jo mere apne kamar k pichhe bandh ke rakhi thi, wo nikali aur jo khanjar mere taraf aa raha tha to usko mod ne k liye war kiya. Par jaise hi wo mere se takrane wala tha wo ghum gaya aur mere pet ke paas and laga. Waqt rehte me ghum gaya, nahito phirse mere pet me kuchh ghus jata. Mene ghum te waqt dekh liya ki ek lutera apne haath se kuchh usare kar raha tha. Sala ye Magician lagta hai. Phirse wo khanjar mere taraf badh raha tha. Achha tha ki mere dono hath me hathiyaar the warna aaj to meri lag jati. Main jaise taise kar ke khanjar se bach raha tha. Lekin har bar se bachne k baad me ankhe tedhi kar k uss lutera ko dekh raha tha. Jaise mujhe laga ki me abhi uss pe hamla kar sakta hun tab mene apna ek Long Knife uss k taraf phek diya. Par sala wo pura chaukanna tha, wo khanjar mere long knife ko block kardiya. Lekin main bhi kam chalak nahi tha, mene ek long knife phekne k baad fauran hi dusra wow bhi phek diya. Wo lutera is k liye ready nahi tha, aur wo dusra long knife sidha uss k dil mein ghus gaya. Ab mere paas ek Blade tha, Blade talwar se chhota hota hai,aur long knife se bada aur use ek side hi dhar rehta hai. Ab mene apna Blade nikal diya, aur baki dono ko dekhne laga. Par wo dono mujhe kahin nahi hai dikhe. Main Ladki ki taraf dekha wo ek taraf dekh rahi thi. To mujhe bhi yakin ho gaya, baki dono bhi udhar hi honge. Main bhi uss taraf chal diya.

Thoda age badhte hi. Mere upar se chillane ka awaz aya. Mene Blade ko apne sar k taraf kar k upar dekhne laga. Ek aadmi ped se mere upar kud raha tha. Bewakuf kahin ka. Sala humla karne k time koi chhillake humla karta hai kya. Uska talwar mere Blade pe laga. Uske baad usne mere right, left me humla kiya main ne usko apne Blade se rok diya. Jaise ho wo mere pet pe marne k liye war kiya mein ghum gaya aur mere Blade sidha uske gardan k aar par ho gayi. Ab uske bad kya hua bol k fyda bhi nahi hai. Lekin wo sala aakhri wala kahan hai. Tab sala pichhe se ladki k chillane ki awaz aayi. Wo aadmi ladki k gardan par talwar rakh diya tha. Achha hua ladki ne kapde pahan liye the. Wo jor se ro rahi thi.

Lutera-
“ Jaldi se apne hathiyar phek de, barna me iss ladki ko mar dunga.”

Main abhi apna Blade pekh kar dono haath upar kar uss k paas dhire dhire badh gaya. Main uss Magician lutera k paas pahunch gaya. Wo lutera mujhe rukne k liye bola. Main ruk gaya aur nichhe ek per kar k beth gaya. Uske baad wo sala hasne laga. Ye uski jindegi ki aakhri Hansi thi. Kyun ki jab wo has raha tha, uska dhyan mere upar se hat gaya tha. Mene apne right hand se mera long knife Magician Lutera k Sine se nikala aur uske taraf phek diya. Mera knifr sidha ladki k kaan k pas se uske sar pe lagi. Aur ladki ki chikh nikal gayi. Aur wo aadmi pichhe ki taraf gir gaya. Ab mamla khatam hua. Uske baad main ladki k pas jake bola.

Main-
“ Daro mat, main tumhe kuchh nahi karunga. Ye sab bhi khatam ho gaya. Ye sab mar gaye hai. Ab tumhe dar ne ki jarurat nahi hai.”

Ladki-“ Aap mere sath jabardasti nahi karenge na. Aap mujhe nahi marenge na.”

Main-“ Nahi Marunga nahi jabardasti karunga, Chalo yahan se chalte hain, ye jagah khatre se khali nahi hai. Yahan pe unke aur bhi aadmi ho sakte hain.”

Uske baad mene jake apne sare hathiyar, arrows k sath samet liya. Sab laash k paas jake acche se check in kiya. Mujhe sab k paas se kuchh Mudraye jarur mili. Ab wo Mudraye unke kaam ki to nahi thi, to mene le liya. Uske baad ek arrow ko kaman me lagake main age badh chala . Thode dur pe mujhe Ghodon ki awaz aayi. Main uss taraf badh gaya. Wahan pe panch ghode the. Ghodon k side mein saman bandhe hue the. Main ne ladki ko ek ghode pe bithaya aur baki char ko rassi mein bandh kar leke age chal pada. Age aake hum log uss jag aa pahunch gaye jahan pe kuchh logon ki lashen padi thi. Ladki ghode se utar kar unn logo k paas jake rone lagi. Mene usko kuchh samay rone diya aur charo taraf dekhne laga. Wahan pe ek Tanga(Horse Carriage) tha. Yahan pe mujhe jyada der rukna thik nahi laga tab mene ladki se bola.

Main-
“ Ye jagah khatre se khali nahi hai. Hame chalna chahiye.”

Ladki-“Par mere Mata, Pita aur Bhai hain. Main inko kaise chhod k ja sakti hun.”

Main-“ Inko hum log aise Nagar ke andar nahi le ja sakte, iInka antim sanskar yahin karna hoga par ye jagah thik nahi hai.Chalo pehle inko tanga mein lad dete hai.”

Itna bol k mene sab ki laash ko Tanga mein dal kar ladki k saath uss jhopdi mein chala gaya. Phir sab k lash ko jhopdi k andar rakh kar. Jhopdi ko aag laga di. Apne mata,pita aur bhaiyon ki chita jalte dekh ladki rone lag gayi. Mene uski chup karaya aur Tanga k paas aa gaya. Mene jake apne ghode ki sab k sath bandh diya. Pancho ghode me jo saman tha, usse tanga mein rakh diya. Ab ladki tanga k samne beth gayi aur mein ek ghode pe beth k baki sab ghodo ko rassi se bandh kar nagar ki taraf chal diya. Ab me to thehra lalchi insaan. Isiliye main jate jate Aam k ped dhund raha tha thode der baad wo bhi mujhe mil gaya. Isiliye jate jate mene 25 Aam tod diye.

Main-
“ Tum ne kabhi Aam khaye hain.”

Ladki ne Naa me sar hilaya. To mene ek Aam usko khane k liye de diya. Usko khate hi uska chehra thoda achha hua.

Main-
“Kya Naam h tumhara.”

Ladki-“Komal”

Main-“Abhi hum Nagar thode duri pe hai. Isiliye hume jaldi chalna hoga.”

Komal ne haan me sar hilaya. Uske bad hum log Nagar k taraf teji se nikal gaye.

Nagar pe pahunch te hi shaam ho gayi. Par Dwar abhi band nahi hua tha. Mene Dwar k sainik ko Luteron k bare mein bata diya. Pehle to wo log bahut gussa hue ki Komal k parivar ko mar diya,aur uske sath balatkar karne ki koshish bhi ki. Par jaise unhe pata chala ki mene sahi samay pe use bachaya aur un Luteron ko mar diya, tab wo log bahut khush hue. Nagar k andar hum log jaldi chal nahi sakte, yahan ka rule hai. Isiliye ghar pahunch te pahunch te raat ho gayi.

Jab main ghar k andar pahuncha to dekha Paras aur Payal udaas bethe the. Pandit ji unhe khane k liye bol rahe the, par wo khana nahi kha rahe the. Mujhe dekte hi ,wo dono ake mujhse lipat kar rone lage.

Main-
“Kya hua tum dono ko, aise ro kyun rahe ho.”

Payal-“ Hame laga aap bhi hame chhod k chale gaye.”(Rote hue)

Main-“ Aisa kabhi ho sakta hai, ki main apne pyare bachho ko chhod k chala jaun. Main to tum logo k liye aam lane gaya tha. Ye dekho.”

Itna bol kar main ne unhe aam dikhaya. Aur un dono ko ek ek Aam diya. Wo dono khush ho gaye aur Aam khane lage. Mene Pandit ji ko bhi ek diya par unhone mana kar diya. Uske baad mene Komal ka parichay sab se karwaya. Uske baad mene Komal ko tisre room me rehne k liye dikhane le gaya. Usse bathroom bhi dikhaya aur fresh hone k liye bol k chala gaya. Usska saman mene uske room me rakh diya. Uske baad mene Tanga se luteron ka saman leke apne room me rakh diya aur baki jo Komal k parivar ka tha use nichhe rakh diya. Phir mene Tanga se Ghoda ko nikal kar baki Ghodon k sath ek khunte mein bandh diya aur chara dal diya (jab mene ghoda kharida tha tab ghode bale ko mere ghar chara bhejne k liye bol diya tha,kuchh jyada Mudraye deke).

Main ghar k andar aa gaya. Komal bhi fresh hokar saaf kapde pehan kar aa gayi thi. Jab mene Komal ko dekha to socha dikhne buri nahi hai. Sarir thoda patla hai, rang bhi utna gora nahi hai, par dikhne mein achhi hai. Phir hum sabne khana khaya. Khana khake Panditji ghar chale gaye. Wo kal nahi ane wale the. Kal Mandir me badi pooja hai to wo nahi aa sakte the. Payal aur Paras Komal se baat karna chahte the par mene unhe ye bol diya ki Komal bahut lamba safar tay kar k aayi hai, usko aram karne diya jaye. Wo dono bhi maan gaye aur apne room sone chale gaye. Komal ko mene apna room dikhaya aur agar kuchh jarurat hi yo mujhe bulane k liye bol diya. Wohi sone chali gayi. Main bhi apne room ake ,bed par let k aaj k din k bare me sochne lag gaya. Aise hi sochte sochte main so gaya.
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Previously:

Mein West me tha aur hamara ghar North East me tha. Jab mein pehle aya tha tab Northwest k gate se aya tha. Pata nahi kyun mujhe aaj phir se wo jhode p jane ka maan hua. Mene ek Ghoda(Horse) kharid liya. Aur uss taraf chala gaya. Abhi lagbhag Dopehar hua tha ki mein jhopdi k paas pahunch gaya. Jhopdi k bahar ek ped pe mene horse ko bandh diya. Mein jhopdi k andar jake dekha to sab kuchh waisa ka waisa hi tha. Pata nahi kyun aaj mujhe yahan ane k maan hua. Jaise hi mene jhopdi bahar nikal muje ek awaz sunayi diya.


For Reference:

Blade:


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Long knife:


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5 Magic Levels:


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Aab Aage:

Ye awaz Ghodon(Horses) ki thi. Jaise ghode daud rahe ho. Par ye awaz dhimi thi. Ab bhai kya kare jigyansa(Curiosity) ye ek kida hai jab kisi ko kat ti hai na, dimag kharab kar ke rakh deti hai. Aur yahi haal mera bhi hua. Mene bhi curiosity k chalte badh gaya apni marane k aur(awaz ki aur). Kuchh der chal ne k baad mujhe kuchh chikhe sunayi di. Main chaukanna ho gaya. Mene Dhanush k kaman me arrow laga diya. Aur dhire dhire age badhta chala gaya. Kuchh der badne k baad mujhe kuchh lash dikhi. Mene jindegi me bahut hi lash dekhi hai. Isiliye mujhe inse pharak nahi padta. Par lashon ko dekh k aisa laga ye kisi Janwar ka kaam nahi par kisi giroh ka kaam hai. Phir mujhe kaki ki wo baat yaad agayi, jisme unhone luteron ka jikar kiya tha. Phir me thoda age badh gaya. Mujhe kuchh logon k hasne ki awaz arahe thi aur kisi chillane ki. Ye koi ladki ki awaz hai. Main jaldi se uss taraf badh gaya. Aur uske baad jo mene dekha mera khoon khol gaya.

Kuchh aadmi ek ladki ko bina kapdo k ussko lita diya. Char aadmi uske haath par pakad rakhe the. Phir 5th aadmi apne kapde utar raha tha. Jaise hi usne apne kapde utar kar ladki k upar ane laga. Tab kahan se ek arrow ake uske aankh mein ghus gaya. Aur wo nikal gaya. Ye arrow mene hi chalaya tha. Ye arrow chalake mein ped k pichhe chup ke dusra arrow kaman pe lagaya. Uss aadmj k girte hi baki char aadmi chaukanna ho gaye. Jaise hi wo log uthe tab phir se ek k aankh mein ek Arrow ghus gaya. Wo log abhi ped k pichhe chup gaye. Itne wo ladki apna kapada samet kar ek ped k pas beth gayi. Ab me bhi dhire dhire age badhne laga. Itne me ek khanjar udta hua mere pas aya. Mene apna Dhanush phek diya aur phauran apna 2 Long Knifes jo mere apne kamar k pichhe bandh ke rakhi thi, wo nikali aur jo khanjar mere taraf aa raha tha to usko mod ne k liye war kiya. Par jaise hi wo mere se takrane wala tha wo ghum gaya aur mere pet ke paas and laga. Waqt rehte me ghum gaya, nahito phirse mere pet me kuchh ghus jata. Mene ghum te waqt dekh liya ki ek lutera apne haath se kuchh usare kar raha tha. Sala ye Magician lagta hai. Phirse wo khanjar mere taraf badh raha tha. Achha tha ki mere dono hath me hathiyaar the warna aaj to meri lag jati. Main jaise taise kar ke khanjar se bach raha tha. Lekin har bar se bachne k baad me ankhe tedhi kar k uss lutera ko dekh raha tha. Jaise mujhe laga ki me abhi uss pe hamla kar sakta hun tab mene apna ek Long Knife uss k taraf phek diya. Par sala wo pura chaukanna tha, wo khanjar mere long knife ko block kardiya. Lekin main bhi kam chalak nahi tha, mene ek long knife phekne k baad fauran hi dusra wow bhi phek diya. Wo lutera is k liye ready nahi tha, aur wo dusra long knife sidha uss k dil mein ghus gaya. Ab mere paas ek Blade tha, Blade talwar se chhota hota hai,aur long knife se bada aur use ek side hi dhar rehta hai. Ab mene apna Blade nikal diya, aur baki dono ko dekhne laga. Par wo dono mujhe kahin nahi hai dikhe. Main Ladki ki taraf dekha wo ek taraf dekh rahi thi. To mujhe bhi yakin ho gaya, baki dono bhi udhar hi honge. Main bhi uss taraf chal diya.

Thoda age badhte hi. Mere upar se chillane ka awaz aya. Mene Blade ko apne sar k taraf kar k upar dekhne laga. Ek aadmi ped se mere upar kud raha tha. Bewakuf kahin ka. Sala humla karne k time koi chhillake humla karta hai kya. Uska talwar mere Blade pe laga. Uske baad usne mere right, left me humla kiya main ne usko apne Blade se rok diya. Jaise ho wo mere pet pe marne k liye war kiya mein ghum gaya aur mere Blade sidha uske gardan k aar par ho gayi. Ab uske bad kya hua bol k fyda bhi nahi hai. Lekin wo sala aakhri wala kahan hai. Tab sala pichhe se ladki k chillane ki awaz aayi. Wo aadmi ladki k gardan par talwar rakh diya tha. Achha hua ladki ne kapde pahan liye the. Wo jor se ro rahi thi.

Lutera-
“ Jaldi se apne hathiyar phek de, barna me iss ladki ko mar dunga.”

Main abhi apna Blade pekh kar dono haath upar kar uss k paas dhire dhire badh gaya. Main uss Magician lutera k paas pahunch gaya. Wo lutera mujhe rukne k liye bola. Main ruk gaya aur nichhe ek per kar k beth gaya. Uske baad wo sala hasne laga. Ye uski jindegi ki aakhri Hansi thi. Kyun ki jab wo has raha tha, uska dhyan mere upar se hat gaya tha. Mene apne right hand se mera long knife Magician Lutera k Sine se nikala aur uske taraf phek diya. Mera knifr sidha ladki k kaan k pas se uske sar pe lagi. Aur ladki ki chikh nikal gayi. Aur wo aadmi pichhe ki taraf gir gaya. Ab mamla khatam hua. Uske baad main ladki k pas jake bola.

Main-
“ Daro mat, main tumhe kuchh nahi karunga. Ye sab bhi khatam ho gaya. Ye sab mar gaye hai. Ab tumhe dar ne ki jarurat nahi hai.”

Ladki-“ Aap mere sath jabardasti nahi karenge na. Aap mujhe nahi marenge na.”

Main-“ Nahi Marunga nahi jabardasti karunga, Chalo yahan se chalte hain, ye jagah khatre se khali nahi hai. Yahan pe unke aur bhi aadmi ho sakte hain.”

Uske baad mene jake apne sare hathiyar, arrows k sath samet liya. Sab laash k paas jake acche se check in kiya. Mujhe sab k paas se kuchh Mudraye jarur mili. Ab wo Mudraye unke kaam ki to nahi thi, to mene le liya. Uske baad ek arrow ko kaman me lagake main age badh chala . Thode dur pe mujhe Ghodon ki awaz aayi. Main uss taraf badh gaya. Wahan pe panch ghode the. Ghodon k side mein saman bandhe hue the. Main ne ladki ko ek ghode pe bithaya aur baki char ko rassi mein bandh kar leke age chal pada. Age aake hum log uss jag aa pahunch gaye jahan pe kuchh logon ki lashen padi thi. Ladki ghode se utar kar unn logo k paas jake rone lagi. Mene usko kuchh samay rone diya aur charo taraf dekhne laga. Wahan pe ek Tanga(Horse Carriage) tha. Yahan pe mujhe jyada der rukna thik nahi laga tab mene ladki se bola.

Main-
“ Ye jagah khatre se khali nahi hai. Hame chalna chahiye.”

Ladki-“Par mere Mata, Pita aur Bhai hain. Main inko kaise chhod k ja sakti hun.”

Main-“ Inko hum log aise Nagar ke andar nahi le ja sakte, iInka antim sanskar yahin karna hoga par ye jagah thik nahi hai.Chalo pehle inko tanga mein lad dete hai.”

Itna bol k mene sab ki laash ko Tanga mein dal kar ladki k saath uss jhopdi mein chala gaya. Phir sab k lash ko jhopdi k andar rakh kar. Jhopdi ko aag laga di. Apne mata,pita aur bhaiyon ki chita jalte dekh ladki rone lag gayi. Mene uski chup karaya aur Tanga k paas aa gaya. Mene jake apne ghode ki sab k sath bandh diya. Pancho ghode me jo saman tha, usse tanga mein rakh diya. Ab ladki tanga k samne beth gayi aur mein ek ghode pe beth k baki sab ghodo ko rassi se bandh kar nagar ki taraf chal diya. Ab me to thehra lalchi insaan. Isiliye main jate jate Aam k ped dhund raha tha thode der baad wo bhi mujhe mil gaya. Isiliye jate jate mene 25 Aam tod diye.

Main-
“ Tum ne kabhi Aam khaye hain.”

Ladki ne Naa me sar hilaya. To mene ek Aam usko khane k liye de diya. Usko khate hi uska chehra thoda achha hua.

Main-
“Kya Naam h tumhara.”

Ladki-“Komal”

Main-“Abhi hum Nagar thode duri pe hai. Isiliye hume jaldi chalna hoga.”

Komal ne haan me sar hilaya. Uske bad hum log Nagar k taraf teji se nikal gaye.

Nagar pe pahunch te hi shaam ho gayi. Par Dwar abhi band nahi hua tha. Mene Dwar k sainik ko Luteron k bare mein bata diya. Pehle to wo log bahut gussa hue ki Komal k parivar ko mar diya,aur uske sath balatkar karne ki koshish bhi ki. Par jaise unhe pata chala ki mene sahi samay pe use bachaya aur un Luteron ko mar diya, tab wo log bahut khush hue. Nagar k andar hum log jaldi chal nahi sakte, yahan ka rule hai. Isiliye ghar pahunch te pahunch te raat ho gayi.

Jab main ghar k andar pahuncha to dekha Paras aur Payal udaas bethe the. Pandit ji unhe khane k liye bol rahe the, par wo khana nahi kha rahe the. Mujhe dekte hi ,wo dono ake mujhse lipat kar rone lage.

Main-
“Kya hua tum dono ko, aise ro kyun rahe ho.”

Payal-“ Hame laga aap bhi hame chhod k chale gaye.”(Rote hue)

Main-“ Aisa kabhi ho sakta hai, ki main apne pyare bachho ko chhod k chala jaun. Main to tum logo k liye aam lane gaya tha. Ye dekho.”

Itna bol kar main ne unhe aam dikhaya. Aur un dono ko ek ek Aam diya. Wo dono khush ho gaye aur Aam khane lage. Mene Pandit ji ko bhi ek diya par unhone mana kar diya. Uske baad mene Komal ka parichay sab se karwaya. Uske baad mene Komal ko tisre room me rehne k liye dikhane le gaya. Usse bathroom bhi dikhaya aur fresh hone k liye bol k chala gaya. Usska saman mene uske room me rakh diya. Uske baad mene Tanga se luteron ka saman leke apne room me rakh diya aur baki jo Komal k parivar ka tha use nichhe rakh diya. Phir mene Tanga se Ghoda ko nikal kar baki Ghodon k sath ek khunte mein bandh diya aur chara dal diya (jab mene ghoda kharida tha tab ghode bale ko mere ghar chara bhejne k liye bol diya tha,kuchh jyada Mudraye deke).

Main ghar k andar aa gaya. Komal bhi fresh hokar saaf kapde pehan kar aa gayi thi. Jab mene Komal ko dekha to socha dikhne buri nahi hai. Sarir thoda patla hai, rang bhi utna gora nahi hai, par dikhne mein achhi hai. Phir hum sabne khana khaya. Khana khake Panditji ghar chale gaye. Wo kal nahi ane wale the. Kal Mandir me badi pooja hai to wo nahi aa sakte the. Payal aur Paras Komal se baat karna chahte the par mene unhe ye bol diya ki Komal bahut lamba safar tay kar k aayi hai, usko aram karne diya jaye. Wo dono bhi maan gaye aur apne room sone chale gaye. Komal ko mene apna room dikhaya aur agar kuchh jarurat hi yo mujhe bulane k liye bol diya. Wohi sone chali gayi. Main bhi apne room ake ,bed par let k aaj k din k bare me sochne lag gaya. Aise hi sochte sochte main so gaya.
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