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Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)
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ab tak aapne dekha A1 ne apna
teesra astra pyapt kar liya hai
ab aage ....
Shivali ko yu apne taraf dekhte hue dekhte hue dekhkar ....mein
mein - Shivi aise kya dekh rahi hu
shivali - Kya kaha aapne Shivi.......
aapko kiaise pata chal ki mein apne liye aapke muh se yeh hi naam sunnana chahti hu....
mein - kuch baatein apno ki apne aap dil tak pahunch hi jaati hai.....
Shivi - accha ji aap sach mein muzhe apna maante hai....
mein - kyu tum nahi maanti....kya tumhe muzhse prem nahi hai...
Shivi - kuch sharmate hue .....baat ko badalte hue......accha aap woh sab baatein chodiye aur jaldi se apne lakshya ko prapt kijiye......
aur ek locket dete hue ....yeh lijiye locket isse hamesha dharan karke rahiye........isske jariye aap jab chahe muzhse sampark bana sakte ho....
yeh locket aapki agli yaatra mein bahut sahayak hoga....
muzhe locket pahna kar ...ussne ek baar nazar bhar kar muzhe dekha aur adrishya ho gayi.....
ab aage ki yatra kaha karni hai.......isska pata toh gurudev ne nahi bataya tha .........
Mein aur GK wahi baith kar vichar karne lage ki aage kya kiya jaaye
Inhe tahi par chodte hai aur dekhte hai waha Roopnagar mein kya ho raha hai
Yaha Mayasur ab apne paao dheere dheere poore underworld mein failane laga aur Reasearch lab k jariye usske experiments bhi shuru the......
ek bahut bade se hall mein bahut bada ek round table tha aur uske charo taraf kareeb 20 chair lagi hui thi
unn par poore underworld k main main Historyshiter baithe hue the
sab aaps mein khusur phusur kar rahe the .......k unko yaha kyu laaya gaya hai ....kaun hai yaha ........
ki tabhi ek bhari si aawaj gunji .........
chup ho jaao saare kyu shor macha rahe ho........
tabhi ek kursi se Gunda type 6.5 ft ka Pappu bhai khada hua ---
saala ek toh apun ku idher aisaich uthkar laylela hai......aur bc khali phokat humko dum de rahyla hai
....teri maa ki.....tabhi waha krodhasur ko dekhar (jo dikhne mein ek dum kaala aur bhayankar sharir)
aur jaise hi krodha sur ko dekha ....
ki pooja karu ....arre bhidu log bhai aagayle hai ....
aur woh baith ......
ks - abhi boss aarahe hai tum sab ko jawab mil jaayega ki kyu laaye gaye ho tab tak chup bilkul aawaj nahi...
tabhi Mayasur ek alag roop mein black overcoat aakhon par black gaugles haath mein sigaar aur dono taraf apne jism ka numayish karti hui mini skirt mein do ladkiyaa.....
bikul jaise purane filmo mein villan ki entry hoti thi waise hi.....shayed isne bhi koi waisi film se idea liya ho ....
ussko aata hua dekh kar kuch log khade ho gaye
Mayasur (MS) - Aap sabhi ko yaha humne hi bulaya hai .....
aap sabhi apne apne jagah k don ho ..
lekin kuch dino se underworld khauf mein jee raha hai jab se koi nakab posh tumahare addo ko tabah kar raha hai ....
isiliye humne faisla liya hai k ab iss poore under world ko hum handle karenge.....
tabhi ek kala africa don - Hey how dare you to do this .....who are you to order us.......i am not afraid of you....
you know ..i am jack....Jack ..the killer
tabhi KS pal bhar mein waha pahuncha aur Jack ki garden pakadkar ghuma di.....Jack ho gaya pack.....
KS - kisi ko kuch aur bolna hai...
Jack hi aisi haalat dekhkar koi kya kahe.......
Pappu bahi - nahi bhai iss saale k jack k saath aisaich hona mangta tha...
ab toh tumich apun ka maaibbaap hai.......bole toh Godfather..
sabhi ne apna sir jhuka kar MS ko apna head maan liya
MS - toh saathiyo aaj se iss apradh jagat k har kaam par meri nazar hogi..
agar tum sab mere under kaam karoge toh mauj karoge ...nahi toh milegi maut.....
hume sabse pahle logo ki rago mein khun ki jagah nasha bharna hoga .....
sabhi school colledge aur cafe mein hamari drugs pahunchne chahiye..
tabhi India mein drugs ka sabse bada dealer LALA
sir aajkal drugs ...suppy karna aasan nahi hai .....pata nahi kaise jab bhi naaya maal hum supply karne ki sochte hai toh saara maal pakda jaata hai
MS - ab aisa nahi hoga ...kyu ki hamare banaye drugs ko koi bhi pakad nahi paayega - hamara yeh naya drugs ka formula kisi bhi khane pine ki chijo mein milakar supply kar sakte hai.......
bas tum sab log tayar ho jaao aur dekho kaise charo taraf barbadi hiti hai
ha ..ha ....ha...
meeting khatam hui ...
yaha Pappu bhai apne saathiyo se
- saala bahut hi khatarnak hai woh bhai log...
hum log aaj tak chori ...loot... aur choti moti smuggling karte aaye hai
lekin yeh bc toh ...poori duniya ki watt lagana chahta hai.....
tabhi ek - lekin bhai hume bhi unnka saath dena hoga......aur ismein hum bhi fayeda bhi bahut hai...
pappu - arre chottu jab chaaro traf barbadi failegi toh ..psisa kya karenge
hum sab ki hamari family bhi hai...
iss drugs se unko bhi nuksan ho sakta hai...
dekh bhai hum aaj tak logo ko loot loot kar khate the.....
lekin aisi barbadu ka hissa hum nahi kar sakte...
toh bhai hum kya karenge ....
pappu - aisa hai abhi humara chup rahana hi thik hai .....agar police ko batate hai toh pata nahi saala kaun kuan system mein bik chuka hai
kuch hi dino mein MS k bheji hui drugs ...India k kuch schoolo k canteen tak pahunh gaye......
air ab unnka asar shuru ho gaaya
uss durgs k asar se bacche pagal se hone lage.....
unka krodh bad gaya choti choti baato par woh bacche katal karne lage ...
pahle pahele iss drugs k asar mein aanewala dusro k khun ka pyasa ho jaata hai aur dheere dheere jab asar badh jaata hai toh apne hi shair ko daato se katne lage the
charo taraf loot ..rape ..aur murder ki vaardate badhne lagi thi .....
Sabhi dep bade pareshan the ...
crime rate badh gaya tha ...
Yaha MS apne cabin mein - ha....ha.
ha ......ab rok k dikhao Sangharak mere iss waar ko......
abhi toh sirf school aur colleges mein hi drugs pahunchi hai
Bas 10 Din aur uske baad toh phir tum manavo ki tabahi...
ha ...ha..ha...
Yaha RAW ki meeting mei
yeh sab kya ho raha hai sangharak yeh padhnewale bacche achank itne criminal ho gaye hai....
kuch toh pagal ho kar apne aap ko hi khatam karne par tule hue hai.....
RVS- sir mein puri koshish kar raha hu
isska karan jaanane ki ....
kai students ko meine apni powers se thik karne ki koshis ki....
woh shant toh ho gaye lekin unka mind blank ho gaya .....
mein itna jaan paaya ki yeh kisi drug ka asar hai.......
Hamari reasearch lab lekin isko detect nahi ka paa rahi hai.....
Har news cahnnel mein yahi sab chal rahs tha........
dekhte hai RVS kaise iss musibat ka haal nikalte hai.... inhe sochne do thoda
ab chalte hai A1 k paas
A1 baithe baithe soch raha tha ki kya kiya jaaye kaise Vyastra aur Chakra tak pahucha jaaye ....
kya yeh chakra wahi toh nahi jo Bhagwan Vishnu k haath mein hai...
mein aise hi sochne laga ki tabhi waha thandi thandi hawa chalne lagi
GK - wah mitra dekho kitne thandi thandi sugandhit vaayu chal rahi hai
mein - Haa mitr aise hi hamare ashram mein bhi sugandhit hawa chal ti thi...
tabhi muzhe khayal aaya....ki vaayu ka koi ek sthan toh hai nahi woh toh achal nahi chal shakti hai ....
ab muzhe marg pata chal gaya tha ..
har jagah bal nahi kahi kahi buddhi k prayog se hi samasya hal ho jaati hai
mein dhyan main baith gaya aur apni urja ko Vaayu tatva ki urja ka sthan
Anahad Chakra ekatrit kiya
jaise jaise dhyan gahra hota gaya mere chaaro taraf chakra k roop mein hawa chalne lagi aur dheere dheere usne ek chakra vat ka roop le liye
mein bhi uss chakrawat mein gol gol ghumne laga.....usska veg itna tha ki aas paas ki chije uss mein pravesh karne lage jo muzhse takrane lagi
aur mere dhyan mein badha pahunchane lagi ...do baar mera dhyan tuta ...apne aap ko chakra vat mein ghumte hue dekhkar bhi phir aone mann ko ekagrachit jar k Anahat chakra mein dhyan lagaya....toh mere sharir chamakne laga aur bhiter se Anahad naad OM ki dhwani pragat hone lagi jaise hi ANAHAD nad muzhe sunai dene laga waise waise hi woh chakrawat shanth hone laga ...
ab wih puri tarah shanth ho gaya aur muzhe aawaj aayi
utho putra hum bahut prasnanna hai
jab mein dekha toh saamne Vayu dev the
Vayu dev - putr visham paristhitiyon mein bhi tumne aatmasanyam ka parichaya diya ..mein prasanna hu
yeh lo vyavastra upahar meri tarf se
mein - parantu hey dev gurudev ne Chakra bhi kaha tha
Vaayudev - mera jo astra hai wahi chakra k roop mein hai.....
Vaayudev apna var aur aashirwad dekar antardhyan ho gaye ....
ab rah gayi thi aakash tava k astr ki khoj .....
abhi k liye itna hi ...
agla update jald hi.....
ab tak aapne dekha A1 ne apna
teesra astra pyapt kar liya hai
ab aage ....
Shivali ko yu apne taraf dekhte hue dekhte hue dekhkar ....mein
mein - Shivi aise kya dekh rahi hu
shivali - Kya kaha aapne Shivi.......
aapko kiaise pata chal ki mein apne liye aapke muh se yeh hi naam sunnana chahti hu....
mein - kuch baatein apno ki apne aap dil tak pahunch hi jaati hai.....
Shivi - accha ji aap sach mein muzhe apna maante hai....
mein - kyu tum nahi maanti....kya tumhe muzhse prem nahi hai...
Shivi - kuch sharmate hue .....baat ko badalte hue......accha aap woh sab baatein chodiye aur jaldi se apne lakshya ko prapt kijiye......
aur ek locket dete hue ....yeh lijiye locket isse hamesha dharan karke rahiye........isske jariye aap jab chahe muzhse sampark bana sakte ho....
yeh locket aapki agli yaatra mein bahut sahayak hoga....
muzhe locket pahna kar ...ussne ek baar nazar bhar kar muzhe dekha aur adrishya ho gayi.....
ab aage ki yatra kaha karni hai.......isska pata toh gurudev ne nahi bataya tha .........
Mein aur GK wahi baith kar vichar karne lage ki aage kya kiya jaaye
Inhe tahi par chodte hai aur dekhte hai waha Roopnagar mein kya ho raha hai
Yaha Mayasur ab apne paao dheere dheere poore underworld mein failane laga aur Reasearch lab k jariye usske experiments bhi shuru the......
ek bahut bade se hall mein bahut bada ek round table tha aur uske charo taraf kareeb 20 chair lagi hui thi
unn par poore underworld k main main Historyshiter baithe hue the
sab aaps mein khusur phusur kar rahe the .......k unko yaha kyu laaya gaya hai ....kaun hai yaha ........
ki tabhi ek bhari si aawaj gunji .........
chup ho jaao saare kyu shor macha rahe ho........
tabhi ek kursi se Gunda type 6.5 ft ka Pappu bhai khada hua ---
saala ek toh apun ku idher aisaich uthkar laylela hai......aur bc khali phokat humko dum de rahyla hai
....teri maa ki.....tabhi waha krodhasur ko dekhar (jo dikhne mein ek dum kaala aur bhayankar sharir)
aur jaise hi krodha sur ko dekha ....
ki pooja karu ....arre bhidu log bhai aagayle hai ....
aur woh baith ......
ks - abhi boss aarahe hai tum sab ko jawab mil jaayega ki kyu laaye gaye ho tab tak chup bilkul aawaj nahi...
tabhi Mayasur ek alag roop mein black overcoat aakhon par black gaugles haath mein sigaar aur dono taraf apne jism ka numayish karti hui mini skirt mein do ladkiyaa.....
bikul jaise purane filmo mein villan ki entry hoti thi waise hi.....shayed isne bhi koi waisi film se idea liya ho ....
ussko aata hua dekh kar kuch log khade ho gaye
Mayasur (MS) - Aap sabhi ko yaha humne hi bulaya hai .....
aap sabhi apne apne jagah k don ho ..
lekin kuch dino se underworld khauf mein jee raha hai jab se koi nakab posh tumahare addo ko tabah kar raha hai ....
isiliye humne faisla liya hai k ab iss poore under world ko hum handle karenge.....
tabhi ek kala africa don - Hey how dare you to do this .....who are you to order us.......i am not afraid of you....
you know ..i am jack....Jack ..the killer
tabhi KS pal bhar mein waha pahuncha aur Jack ki garden pakadkar ghuma di.....Jack ho gaya pack.....
KS - kisi ko kuch aur bolna hai...
Jack hi aisi haalat dekhkar koi kya kahe.......
Pappu bahi - nahi bhai iss saale k jack k saath aisaich hona mangta tha...
ab toh tumich apun ka maaibbaap hai.......bole toh Godfather..
sabhi ne apna sir jhuka kar MS ko apna head maan liya
MS - toh saathiyo aaj se iss apradh jagat k har kaam par meri nazar hogi..
agar tum sab mere under kaam karoge toh mauj karoge ...nahi toh milegi maut.....
hume sabse pahle logo ki rago mein khun ki jagah nasha bharna hoga .....
sabhi school colledge aur cafe mein hamari drugs pahunchne chahiye..
tabhi India mein drugs ka sabse bada dealer LALA
sir aajkal drugs ...suppy karna aasan nahi hai .....pata nahi kaise jab bhi naaya maal hum supply karne ki sochte hai toh saara maal pakda jaata hai
MS - ab aisa nahi hoga ...kyu ki hamare banaye drugs ko koi bhi pakad nahi paayega - hamara yeh naya drugs ka formula kisi bhi khane pine ki chijo mein milakar supply kar sakte hai.......
bas tum sab log tayar ho jaao aur dekho kaise charo taraf barbadi hiti hai
ha ..ha ....ha...
meeting khatam hui ...
yaha Pappu bhai apne saathiyo se
- saala bahut hi khatarnak hai woh bhai log...
hum log aaj tak chori ...loot... aur choti moti smuggling karte aaye hai
lekin yeh bc toh ...poori duniya ki watt lagana chahta hai.....
tabhi ek - lekin bhai hume bhi unnka saath dena hoga......aur ismein hum bhi fayeda bhi bahut hai...
pappu - arre chottu jab chaaro traf barbadi failegi toh ..psisa kya karenge
hum sab ki hamari family bhi hai...
iss drugs se unko bhi nuksan ho sakta hai...
dekh bhai hum aaj tak logo ko loot loot kar khate the.....
lekin aisi barbadu ka hissa hum nahi kar sakte...
toh bhai hum kya karenge ....
pappu - aisa hai abhi humara chup rahana hi thik hai .....agar police ko batate hai toh pata nahi saala kaun kuan system mein bik chuka hai
kuch hi dino mein MS k bheji hui drugs ...India k kuch schoolo k canteen tak pahunh gaye......
air ab unnka asar shuru ho gaaya
uss durgs k asar se bacche pagal se hone lage.....
unka krodh bad gaya choti choti baato par woh bacche katal karne lage ...
pahle pahele iss drugs k asar mein aanewala dusro k khun ka pyasa ho jaata hai aur dheere dheere jab asar badh jaata hai toh apne hi shair ko daato se katne lage the
charo taraf loot ..rape ..aur murder ki vaardate badhne lagi thi .....
Sabhi dep bade pareshan the ...
crime rate badh gaya tha ...
Yaha MS apne cabin mein - ha....ha.
ha ......ab rok k dikhao Sangharak mere iss waar ko......
abhi toh sirf school aur colleges mein hi drugs pahunchi hai
Bas 10 Din aur uske baad toh phir tum manavo ki tabahi...
ha ...ha..ha...
Yaha RAW ki meeting mei
yeh sab kya ho raha hai sangharak yeh padhnewale bacche achank itne criminal ho gaye hai....
kuch toh pagal ho kar apne aap ko hi khatam karne par tule hue hai.....
RVS- sir mein puri koshish kar raha hu
isska karan jaanane ki ....
kai students ko meine apni powers se thik karne ki koshis ki....
woh shant toh ho gaye lekin unka mind blank ho gaya .....
mein itna jaan paaya ki yeh kisi drug ka asar hai.......
Hamari reasearch lab lekin isko detect nahi ka paa rahi hai.....
Har news cahnnel mein yahi sab chal rahs tha........
dekhte hai RVS kaise iss musibat ka haal nikalte hai.... inhe sochne do thoda
ab chalte hai A1 k paas
A1 baithe baithe soch raha tha ki kya kiya jaaye kaise Vyastra aur Chakra tak pahucha jaaye ....
kya yeh chakra wahi toh nahi jo Bhagwan Vishnu k haath mein hai...
mein aise hi sochne laga ki tabhi waha thandi thandi hawa chalne lagi
GK - wah mitra dekho kitne thandi thandi sugandhit vaayu chal rahi hai
mein - Haa mitr aise hi hamare ashram mein bhi sugandhit hawa chal ti thi...
tabhi muzhe khayal aaya....ki vaayu ka koi ek sthan toh hai nahi woh toh achal nahi chal shakti hai ....
ab muzhe marg pata chal gaya tha ..
har jagah bal nahi kahi kahi buddhi k prayog se hi samasya hal ho jaati hai
mein dhyan main baith gaya aur apni urja ko Vaayu tatva ki urja ka sthan
Anahad Chakra ekatrit kiya
jaise jaise dhyan gahra hota gaya mere chaaro taraf chakra k roop mein hawa chalne lagi aur dheere dheere usne ek chakra vat ka roop le liye
mein bhi uss chakrawat mein gol gol ghumne laga.....usska veg itna tha ki aas paas ki chije uss mein pravesh karne lage jo muzhse takrane lagi
aur mere dhyan mein badha pahunchane lagi ...do baar mera dhyan tuta ...apne aap ko chakra vat mein ghumte hue dekhkar bhi phir aone mann ko ekagrachit jar k Anahat chakra mein dhyan lagaya....toh mere sharir chamakne laga aur bhiter se Anahad naad OM ki dhwani pragat hone lagi jaise hi ANAHAD nad muzhe sunai dene laga waise waise hi woh chakrawat shanth hone laga ...
ab wih puri tarah shanth ho gaya aur muzhe aawaj aayi
utho putra hum bahut prasnanna hai
jab mein dekha toh saamne Vayu dev the
Vayu dev - putr visham paristhitiyon mein bhi tumne aatmasanyam ka parichaya diya ..mein prasanna hu
yeh lo vyavastra upahar meri tarf se
mein - parantu hey dev gurudev ne Chakra bhi kaha tha
Vaayudev - mera jo astra hai wahi chakra k roop mein hai.....
Vaayudev apna var aur aashirwad dekar antardhyan ho gaye ....
ab rah gayi thi aakash tava k astr ki khoj .....
abhi k liye itna hi ...
agla update jald hi.....
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aise hi saath banaye rakhe...
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aap sabhi mitro ka bahut bahut dil se dhnyawad aapke pyar aur support k liye.....
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bas aise hi apna saath banaye rakhe
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super fantastic aur shandar review....Thank you soo much naina jihmm toh mansarover jhil se talwar hasil karne ke baad jwalamukhi parvat se agni shool bhi hasil kar liya....waise gk ne bhi kaafi madad kiye a1 k..... raah kathin hai par a1 apne lakshya par agrasar hai...
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill
aapka comment padkar aur likhne ki prerna milti hai.....
bas aise hi saath banaye rakhe
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Super mind blowing update Bhai.
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Awesome update bhai story bahut achchi lagi aise hi likhte rahiye waiting for next
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bahut bahut shukriya bhai aapke appreciation k liye...
haa bhai story bahut lambhi hogi ...abhi toh bas shuruwat hai.....
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