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Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)

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abhi1008

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Update - 110

Ab tak aapne dekha Addu ki pranshakti ne vinash ka roop dhara aur un saayo k pran sokh liye ...Golark Addu ko lekar ghar aaya ........

Addu par hue humle aur Deepu ki maut k kaaran ghar mein sab dukhi hai....aur Abhi tut sa gaya ...

ab aage........

Deepu ki maut ko 3 din hue the ......in 3 dino mein Abhi ne kisi se bhi baat nahi ki thi .....Iss samay bhi Abhi room mein hi baitha tha .....k Waha Shivali aur Vibhakta aayi..

Shivali - kab tak aap aise hi baithe rahoge ....bahut ho gaya ab .....Aapko inn bhavnavo se upar uthna hoga ....aap aise sadharan logo jaose harkar nahi baith sakte ......aap ek Rakshak hai ....aapko yeh samaz na hi hoga ....

Abhi - Rakshak ....kaisa Rakshak ..jo apne pariwar ki raksha nahi kar sakta woh sansar ki kya raksha karega ......

Shivali - Aur kitni baar aap bhavnao k adhin baar baar apne karm path se alag hote rahenge .......maine pahele hi kaha tha k hamare paas samay bahut kam hai .....aur chunauti jayada ......
yu bar bar aapko samzhana muzhe accha nahi lagta .......

Vibhakta - Aap Deepu ko lekar pareshan hai na......Vidhi ne iss janam mein uska itna hi saath likha tha ......... lijiye aap ussi se baat kar lijiye .....aur Vibhakta ne aage haath badakar kuch mantra ucharan kiye .....toh waha ek shvet prakash k saath Deepu ki aatma pragat ho gayi ........

Abhi Apne daamne deepu ko dekhkar hairan rah gaya .......

Abhi - Deepu .....tumm

Deepu aatma - Haa ... Bhai ...aap mere baare mein itna na soche .......mein jaha bhi hu bahut khush hu .....bas aapko iss tarah dekhkar muzhe accha nahi lag raha hai....

Abhi - Deepu ...muzhe maaf karde mein tere liye kuch nahi kar paaya ......

Deepu - bhai kshama toh muzhe maangni chahiye .....aapne toh muzhe itna pyar diya ........par bhai is janam mein vidhi ne mera itna hi saath likha tha .....aurbahut jald ....mein aapke ghar wapas aaunga .......

itna kah kar Woh waha se adrishya ho ho gaya ....

Abhi ka mann shant hua ...aur ab usse apni bhul ka ahsas hua ....k Dhyan mein mahaguru k kahne par ...Shivali k bhi baar baar samzhane par woh bar baar bhavnao k aaveg mein bah jaata hai ........

Abhi - Shivu muzhe kshama kar do ....tumne kitni baar samzhaya lekin...mein hi bar bar bhavnavo mein bah jaata hu ......

Shivali - Shayad isiliye kyu k aapmein prem ki adhikta hai......aur prem ko moh mein badalne mein jyada samy nahi lagta .......aapko apne aapko aur sudrudh banana hoga .......

Abhi - tum thik kahti ho ...Shivu......

Shivali - ab aapko apni agli yatra par nikalna chahiya .......Kyu ki samay bhi bahut kam hai .........Abhi sirf karib dhai mahino mein aapko 5 aur shaktiya prapt karni hai......

Kuch der aisi hi baatein chalti rahi .......Shalu ..shamli ..aur Rimpy se bhi Abhi mila ......

Abhi - apne dono kaan pakadte hue .......Muzhe maaf kar do jaan ....kaha muzhe tumhe sambhalna tha .....lekin apne moh aur dukh k chalte meine yeh bhi nahi jaane ki koshish ki k tumpar kya beet rahi hogi .......

Rimpy aage badhkar Abhi ka haath uske kaano se hatakar ...khade hone ka ishara karti hai aur Abhi jab khade ho jaata hai ....yoh jor se uske gale lagkar rone lagti hai .....inn 3 dino ka dukh ka gubar jo woh ander dabaye baithi thi ....uski aanko se bah chala .......

Abhi ne uske chehre ko pakadkar uske aansoo ponche.....Aur uske hontho par apne hontho ko rahkar kiss karne laga ......badi det tak dono aise hi prem aalingan mein bandhe rahe phir alag ho gaye ......

Abhi ne Aadu ko bhi samzhaya......aur mom k room ki aur badh gaya .....Mom baithi kisi soch mein gum thi ...Abhi jaakar maa ki goad mein sir rakhkar let gaya ......mom itne gahri soch mein thi k unhe Abhi k aane ka pata hi nahi chala ...lekin jab apni goad mein unhe kisi ka aabhas hua ...toh woh apni soch se bahar aayi ....

Mom - arre betu tu......aaj tuzhe apni maa ka khayal aaya hai .....ek taraf toh jisse maine apna beta maana usse kho diya ........aur dusri taraf tu jisne apne aapko band karke rakh diya ......tume socha k mere dil par kya beet rahi hogi ........aur uski aankhon se aansoo ki kuch bunde Abhi k chehre par aa giri ....Abhi ne apne haato se ....mom k aansoo ponche .....

Aur lete hue hi apne dono kan pakadkar... maa ki aankhon mein dekhne laga ......mom ne bhi halka sa thappad uske gaal mein maara.....toh Abhi apna gaal pakadkar aisa dikhata hai jaise usse bahut jor se lagi ho......

toh mom ne pyar se ek aur thappad uske gaal par tika diya.....bada aaya nautanki kahi ka ...aur zhukhkar uske matthe par kiss kar diya......

Dono maa bete aise hi baatein karte rahe ....aur sath2 mein mom Abhi k baalo ko bhi sahlaye jaa rahi thi.....

Apni maa ka vatsalya bhare Sprash k kaaran 3 din se jage hone k kaaran Abhi ...baat karte karte so gaya.....3 ghante ki gahri nind k baad Abhi ki aankhein khul gayi toh dekha ...mom bhi Abhi k sir par haath rakhe rakhe so gayi thi.......

Apne bete ko ab thik dekhkar uske bhi dil ko sukun pahuncha tha.......

main waha se dhire se uthkar apne room mein aagaya ....Room mein iss samay koi nahi tha.....Toh chal diya fresh hone ....sham ho gayi thi .....Gallery se thodi thandi gandi hawa aarahi thi ....toh main galery mein khada ho gaya aur aage k baare mein sochne laga ....

Ab usse apni agli yatra par nikalna tha lekin .....usse andesha tha ......k didara bhi uske ghar aur pariwar par humla ho sakta hai ......Toh usse Golark ka dhyan aaya ........Toh Abhi ne telepathy k jariye usse sampark kiya aur bula liya ........aur pal bhar mein Golu waha pragat ho gaya .......

Abhi - Golu ...muzhe kshama kar dena .......uss din tumne Addu ki sahyata ki thi ....lekin bhavnao k aaveg mein main tumhe hi doshi maan baitha ....

Golu - Koi baat nahi bhai ....woh ....paristhiti hi aisi thi ...koi bhi aisa hi karta .......
aap kahe aapne muzhe kyu yaad kiya .....

Abhi - tum bilkul apne pita ki tarah bahut acche ho ........muzhe apne agle laksya ki taraf jaana hai .........Aur abhi hum iss ghatna k jimmedar shtruo tak nahi pahunch paaye hai.......issiliye mein tumhpar yaha ki raksha ka bhar saunpna chahta hu .....

Golu - bhai yeh toh mere liye saubhagya ki baat hogi aap nischint rahe ........

Abhi - Yaha mera manomay roop hoga jo bhavna pradhan hai .......usse yudh kala aur powers se kuch lena dena nahi hai ......tumhe kuch sahyata ki jarurat hogi toh tum Shivali ya ...Rinku se sampark kar sakte ho.....

Golu - aap nischint rahe bhai ....yeh pariwar ab mera pariwar hai ....mein isski apne jaan se jyada dhyan rakhunga .....

thodi der Golu se baat hui phir woh chala gaya ......

Bahar mausam Accha ho raha tha ....jo mann mein ek naya utsah bhar raha tha
mann mein aaya kai dino se dhyan nahi kar paaya .....toh baith gaya dyan mein ......pahele pranayam karke apne prano ko niyantrit kiya ...Aur muladhar chakra se upper hote hue ....ek ..ek chakra mein dhyan karte hue ...aagya chakra mein pahuncha ...........Jaha ek divya prakash ....mein muzhe kuch Rishiyo ki chavi dikhayi dene lagi .......jo dhyan mein baithe .......Aur ved mantro ki bhi aawaje sunayi dene lagi ........

Badi der tak dhyan k paschat jab Abhi ne aankhien kholi.......toh saamne dekha ......woh kisi alag hi duniya mein hai .......jaha ......7 Rishi dhyan mudra mein uske saamne baithe the .......usne charo or ghumkar dekha ....uss jagah ki dharti poori shvet hai ....,....woh jaha iss samay Rishiyo k saamne baitha tha ........Woh kisi gurukul k saaman hai..........

Tabhi saamne baithe hue ek rishi ki aawaj se Abhi ka dhyan uss taraf gaya ......

Rishi 1 - Aise charo taraf kya dekh rahe ho ....Abhinav........

Abhi - Rishivar mein yaha kaise mein toh ghar par tha ....aur yeh jagah kaunsi hai.......

Rishi 1 - Putra yeh Maher lok hai .....Yeh Brahmand k har saurmandal k Saptrishiyo ka lok hai .....

Abhi - kya aap vistar se bata sakte hai rishivar

Putra .....iss brahamand mein koti aakash gangaye (galaxy) hai .....aur har aakash ganga mein kai saur mandal hote (solar system) hai ....har saur mandal mein gyan k prasar k liye tridevo dwara Satprishi (7 rishi) niyukt kiye jaate hai ......jo har ......Devraj ...Indra k saath badal jaate hai....


iss samay k hamare solar system k 7 sapt rishi hai -
Kashyap....Atri....Vashisht....Vishwamitra.......Gautam ...
Jamadagni .......aur Bharadwaj ....hai....

Putra tumhe yaha yog dwara apni shaktiyo aur Bhavnavo par niyantran k liye ....laaya gaya hai......aur saath hi tumahari agli shakti ....ko iss lok mein dhundna hai ....isske liye tumahare paas kewal 3 din hai .....

Abhi - Paratu Rishivar mere ghar par ......

rishi - uski chinta tum mat karo humne tumahara pratirup waha chod diya hai.......

itna kahkar woh Risihi waha bani hui apni apni kutiya mein chale gaye......

Abhi Uss lok mein ghumkar dekhne laga .....toh usse .....7 - 7... rishiyo k kai samuh jo alag alag solar system k the ........

Ab itne bade lok mein apni shakti ko kaise dhunde .....

Do din 7 rishiyo k nirakshan mein Abhi ne dhyan ki kai kalaye sikhi .....Jismein Samadhi awastha Aur Brahmarandhra mein sthit Chid shaki mein dhyan .....sikha ......Jsse har chakra mein sthit apni shakti ko poori tarah niyantrit karne ki kala sikhi .......

Do din bit chuke the ab bas kewal ek hi din baaki tha........Sandhya k dyan mein ...Abhi .....aur gahre dhyan mein utar gaya ....jisse ....usske 5 tatvo ka poori tarah iss lok k 5 tatvo se sampark ho gaya .....Ab woh dhyan mein iss lok ki har jagah ko dekh paa raha tha .....

Jab Abhi ne apni agli shakti ka sankalp kiya ....toh dhyan mein ...usse ek sarover k kinare apni kutiya k samip ek Rishi kanya dihki......usne ek saadvi jaise vasyra dharan kar rakhe the .......uske chehre par ek aalokik tez tha....aur woh baithi hui mala piro rahi thi ......

Abhi jab dhyan se utha toh uss kanya tak pahunchne k liye ...teleport hone ki koshish ki .....lekin sab vyarth ....kyu ki yaha gyan shakti ...aur yog siddhi k siwa koi shakti kaam nahi kar sakti thi .....

Ab usse apne ghyan aur buddhi dwara hi uss tak pahunchna tha ......

Iss samay sandhya ka samay ho gaya tha ........aur Dhyan mein Abhi ne jis sarover k nikat uss Rishi kanya ko dekha uss sarver k nikat ghane ped the ........

Abhi ko yeh pata tha k sarover k nikat pedo par bahut se panchiyo ka vaas hota hai .......aur sabhi panchi sham k samay apne ghoslo mein wapas aate hai uss samay unka shor bahut hota hai .......

Abhi ne yog shakti dwara apni indriyo ki urja (sences) ko aur teevra kiy aaur aas paas aane wali aawajo ka picha karte hue chalne laga ......

Kai sarover usne dekh liye ....Abhi andhera hone laga tha aur panvhiyo k swar bhi bahut dheeme ho gaye the ......k ...aahkir ...woh uss Sarover k nikat pahunch hi gaya .....

usne dekha k Sarover k nikat ...hi ..7 kutiya bani hui hai ........

Lekin ab raat ho chuki thi ......In 7 mein se kis kutiya mein uski manzil hai yeh toh ab usse subah hi pata chalne wala tha.....isiliye ....woh uss Sarover k hi nikat ek saaf jagah dekhkar ......let gaya.

Nind toh poori raat aayi nahi .....Subah brahmamuhurat mein ussne sarover mein snan kiya ....aur wapas aakar apni jagah par dhyan karne laga ........

k kuch aawajo k kaaran usska dhyan tuta ........toh usne dekha suryodaya hone wala hai ..aakash mein laalima aagayi hai

aur sarover k nikat ek vishal daitya ne ek baaalak ko pakad rakha hai ......Aur ek mahila uss daitya k saamne haath jodkar baar baar ...uss baalak ko chodne k liye kah rahi hai.....

Uss mahila k hi nikat ek kanya khadi hai .....Abhi ne dekga yeh toh wahi rishi kanya hai ...jisse usne dhyan mein dekha tha .....

abhi k liye itna hi......

agla update raat ko .......
 

abhi1008

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abhi1008

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abhi1008

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Nice update brother.:good:
Lagta hai jis baat ka dar tha wohi hua. Abhi bhavnao mein beh gaya. Dekhte hein iss se wo kaise nikalta hai.
Aik baat samajh nahi ayi, Golark ke mann mein tou Abhi ke liye karwahat thii aur uske paas acha moka tha ke woh Addu ki madad na karta aur baad mein koi bahana bana deta. Phir usne Addu ki madad kyu ki? Kya uska mann badal gaya hai?
Aur woh saye kon thae? Kya woh KS ne bheje thae ya phir koi naya dushman hai?

Thanku soo much Darkknight king bhai for your support & superb ...fantastic comment

:thanks: :thanks: :thanks:

Bhai kabhi kabhi jo dikhta hai woh waisa nahi hota ....Ab Golarrk ka kya role hai yeh toh baad mein hi pata chalega .....

aisr hiSaath banaye rakhe....

Latest update 110 posted......

 
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