Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)

[Naik]

Mega Update - 91

ab tak aapne dekha k Markesh ne apni chal chali ...jisse Shivali ne asafal kar diya .......lekin Markesh is baat se anjan tha ...Abhi markesh ko woh hi dikhata hai jo woh dekhna chahta tha.....

Ab aage .......

Markesh apni taraf se toh chal chal chuka tha ........
lekin usse Abhi ki chal ka pata nahi chala.......Markesh ne Jab confirm karne k liye k uski chal kamayab rahi k nahi .....usne Ritu ko call lagaya.....lekin Ritu ki Aawaj mein Rinku ne usse baat ki .

ph par baat hone k kaaran ab woh nischint tha....lekin nahi jaanta hai.....k....Abhi ....apni chal chal chuka hai.......

Raat ko Dinner k baad thodi der Rimpy Aur apni patniyon k saath bithkar todi masti tohdi yaha ki baatein chal rahi thi ......maine dekha Rimpy...Bhadra .....aur Daksha ...kuch gumsum si thi.....

Shivali iska kaaran jaanti thi .....isliye woh Sulekha aur Shalu ko lekar kuch kaam ka bahana banakar chali gayi.......

Bhadra bhi jaane lagi toh maine uska haath pakadkar rok liya aur apne paas bitha liya.....

Main - kya baat hai tum teeno gumsum si ho ........

teeno phir bhi chup the ......

Main jaanta tha k bhale ki kaamagni k maya se woh mukt ho gaye the ...lekin jo unhone room mein dekha toh ...uska kuch asar toh hona hi tha .....

mein - dekho main jaanta hu k tumne jo room mein dekha ....uski wajah se tumahare mann mein bahut kuch chal raha hai ........
kya tumhe apne pyar par vishwas nahi........

Bhadra - Aisi baat nahi hai bas hum bhi kuch samay aapke saath bitana chahte hai.......
hume pata hai room mein jo kuch hua woh kisi shakti k prabav se hua tha ....lekin yeh dil kya kare......

Rimpy - haa jaan yeh duriya ab bardasht nahi ho rahi hai......

Mein - aisi baat hai toh aaj raat mein timahare saath hi sounga ......lekin koi sharat nahi .....

Daksha - yeh bhi koi baat hui.....thodi si toh chalegi ......

Mein - ok done thodi si ......ab jaao main kuch kaam niptakar aata hu...

waha se mein Ritu k room mein pahuncha ...woh Ritu se kuch baat karna chahta tha......lekin mom bhi ussi room mein thi .......aur shushila chachi bhi wahi baithi thi.......

Mom - arre betu aao ..............mil aaya Rinku aur uski cousins se.......unhe koi pareshani toh nahi .

main samaz raha tha mom ka ishara kis taraf hai.......

mein - kya mom aap bhi ....aur....mom ki godi mein sir rakhkar let jaata hu........aur mom mere sir ko sahlane lagti hai.....

Mom - cahl mein sab jaanti hu tu muzse nahi chipa sakata .....

Chachi - kya chupa raha hai betu.......jara hume bhi pata chale .....

Ritu - yahi k aapka betu ....Ab shadi karne ki jaldi mein hai

Chachi - accha kaun hai woh

Ritu - wahi jo hamare saath aayi hai Rimpy.......

Chachi - accha ji....hume toh pta hi nahi.....sach mein ab hamata Abhi bada ho gaya hai.....

Kuch der aisi hi baatein chalti rahi ....main Ritu di ae baat karna chahta tha lekin mauka hi nahi mila.......

Phir amin wapas Cottage chala gaya ...jaha...Bhadra ....Daksha.aur Rimpy...mera intezar kar rahi thi.......

Thodi der unke saath pyar bhari masti ki .....phir hum saath mein hi sogaye........

Subah apne samay par nind khuli toh main cottage se nikal kar ghar k ander apne room mein fresh hone chala gaya......apne daily routine karke Dhyan mein baitha......

aaj bhi dhyan mein muzhe kuch drishya dikhayi diye .......issbar woh drishya spasht the.......Jaha muzhe ek khandher mein Markesh dikhayi diya .......drishya mrin muzhe waha k ek ek chiz dikhayi di..........

Jab dhyan khatam hua aur maine aankhien kholi toh dekha ...Mere saamne Addu aur Sona bhi dhyan mein baithi thi ..aur ek aankh khol kar bich bich mein muzhe dekh rahi thi........


main - kya kar rhi ho ho Sona ........

Sona - arre bhai toh uth gaye ......gm bhai....
mein usse apni goad mein lekar .....

mein- Gm & Happy Birthday to my sweet angel.....

Addu - Gm ..bhai....

Mein - gm gudiya .......

Thodi der unke saath masti ki phir dono Chali gayi mein uthkar niche aagaya.....aur cottage ki taraf ....tabhi waha lawn mein Ritu di gumsum si baithi thi........

Main bhi di k paas gaya .......aur baith gaya......

Main - gm di .....
meri aawaj sunkar di chauk gayi.....Gm bhai.....kaisa hai....

Mein - lagta hai di aap yaha khush nahi ho ......

Di - nahi toh khush hu.....main....muzhe kya pareshani ho sakti hai .......

Main - mann mein ( koi baat nahi di aapki saari pareshani aaj khatam ho jaayegi )

di - kya soch raha hai.....

Main - yahi di k meri pyari di ki saari parshani dur ho jaaye ...aur pahele jaisi hojaaye

phir mein waha se chala aaya .....

main samaz gaya tha k di kyu udas hai ....raat se jo baat nahi hui thi markesh se .......maine apni maaya se markesh ko jo drishya dikhaya tha....uske baad muzhe pata tha k woh di ko jarur call karega ...toh maine di k saare calls apne mobile pe divert kar diye the .......aur Rinku jo mimic karne mein expert tha usse Di ki aawaj mein markesh ki baat karayi thi.......

Ab prob yeh thi k di ko nahi pata tha k maarkesh ka koi aadmi usse lene aanewala hai..........lekin waha di ka jaana jaruri tha ......

yeh kaam maine Rinku ko saunpa.....

Ab mein Cottage mein shivali k saath baitha tha ....

Shivali - Jaan kya di ka waha jaana thik hai.....

Main - Jaan ...maakesh ek mayavi aur tantra vidya jaanewala asur hai ....isiliye hum koi maya ki Di toh waha nahi bhej sakte ....
aur di ka waha jana bhi jaruri hai taaki woh khud apni aankhon se uski sachayi dekhe......

unhe samazna hoga ....k ...apne pariwar se baatein chupana kitna anishtkari ho sakta hai........

Shivali - Lekin di toh uske mohni vidya k kaaran vash mein thi....

main - Main manta hu k mohini vidya k kaaran di usse prem karne ko badhya ho gayi ...lekin koi mohini vidya ......ghar mein apne dil ki baat batane se toh nahi rokti.... ...

Di ko samazna hoga k apne pariwar ki ahmiyat.....

Rinku apna kaam kar chuka tha .......

ab toh intezar tha ...bas raat ka .......

Sona ki Birthday party Newyork city k xyz hotel mein rakhi thi.....Sabhi tayar hokar Party venune par pahunche ......

Party hall bahut bada tha ....
poora hotel booked tha ....Chacha ji ne iss party mein sirf apne saare staff ko bulaya tha ....jo jyadatar Bhartiya the.....
party ki theme bhi traditionl thi......aur khane ki arrengments bhi ussi hisab se ki gayi thi.......

Sona toh muzhe ek pal k liye chod hi nahi rahi thi .......Cake kata .....aur party shuru hui.......Di baar baar time dekh rahi thi .........

Gifts ka sisila shuru ho gaya tha ......Sabhi Sona ko stage par jaakr wish karne lage
Sona aur Addu toh Gifts aur pic mein busy ho gayi thi........

mein wasroom jaane ka bahana kar k nikal gaya......aur Waha jaakar apne ek roop party mein bhej diya .....

Aur hotel k bahar aakar chupkar wait karne laga.....

tabhi maine dekha k di jaldi jaldi bahar nikli tabhi ek gaadi unke saamne ruki ........maine bhi der na karte hue ....Laghima shaki jo Daksha se milan par prpt hui thi uski madat se ekdum sukshma roop banakar gadi mein pravesh kar gaya .......

Di k baithte hi gadi full speed mein nikali ......aur waha se teleport hokar sidha pahunchi Ussi jagah jo muzhe dhyan mein dikhayi di thi .......Honduras k khandher mein .....

Achanak is trah se gadi k kisi jungle k bich khander par aane se di ghabra gayi .........

Di ne door khola aur bahar aagayi .......waha markesh besabri se intejar kar raha tha......

Markesh - aao jaan ....welcome ......to my world

Di - yeh sab kya hai aur yeh gadi wha se achanak yaha kaise aagayi.......

Maarkesh tum sawal bahut karti ho ......jaldi ander chalo samay bahut kaam hai.......

Di - nahi pahele muzhe sab sach batao........

Markesh - uff ....tum bhi ....kya tumhe muzpar vishwas nahi raha ........

Di k upper jo markesh ne Mohini vidya ka prayog kiya tha ....woh bas unke ander prem ko hi jaga paya ....di poori tarah se uske vash mein nahi ho paayi thi......Sahyad yeh di k ander special power hone se ho.....

Di - Vishwas hai tabhi apne pariwar ko chod kar yaha aayi hu ......lekin main bhi sach jaana chahti hu.....yeh mere jiwan ka bahut bada faisla hai ......

Markesh apne asur roop mein aajata hai.........lo dekh lo sach .....

waise bhi kahte hai marne wale ki aakhiri iccha puri ki jaati hai.........
toh suno main koi tumse pyar vyar nahi karta tum toh kewal mere lakshya tak pahunchne ka ek sadhan ho ..........

Muzhe Bali k liye ek Aisa manusya chahiye tha jiske ander divya shakti ho ....aur meri khoj tumpar aakar ruki ......

Maine dekha tum akelepan se dukhi ho ...tumhe koi saathi chahiye tha jo tumhe pyar kare samzhe.........

toh maine iss mauke ka fayda uthaya ....lekin meri vidya tumhe poori tarah vash nahi kar saki .....


Ritu - rote hue ......itna bada dhoka ......mein tumahari baatao mein aakar apne pariwar ko hi galat samzti rahi .....unse dur ho gayi......
hey bhagwan ....yeh mane kya kar diya ........Betu ne kitne baar muzhe pucha ...lekin main hi nahi samzhi .......
shayad main isike laayak hu

Lekin tum kya samazte ho tum bach jaaoge......agar muzhe kuch bhi hua toh tum bhi nahi bach paaoge.....

Markesh - Kaun maarega muzhe tera bhai .....uski shaktiyan toh kal raat ko hi kahtam ho gayi.......Uss lakdi k maare ki wajah se......aur ab tumari bali k baad toh woh wise bhi ek kamjor insan ban jaayega .......

chalo ab bahut hogaya tera natak aur aage badkar Ritu ka haath pakad leta hai ........Ritu gusse mein ek ek jordar punch uske pet mein mar deti hai.......
jisse woh thoda piche hat jaata hai........

Ritu - itni badi chaal chali tune ...mere betu ko nuksan pahunchaya ......tumhe toh mein jinda nahi chodungi .....aur usske taraf badi......

Markesh - Saali tu maaregi muzhe abhi batata hu ......aur Ritu ko pakadne k liye aage hi bada tha ....k side ki pasliyo mein jordar laat padi ........aur woh chikhte hue dur jaakar gira .......

Ritu ne dekha toh waha Abhi khada tha..........

Abhi - na...munna naa.....agar abhi tune di ko haath lagane ki koshsih bhi ki toh aisi haalat karunga k maut ki bhik maangega

Markesh - tum yaha kaise......nahi yeh nahi ho sakta .....kal raat k mere waar ne toh tumahari saari shakti khatam ho gayi thi......Aur iss Ritu ne bhi ph par muzhe sab bataya tha......

Tabhi waha Rinku Di ki aawaj nikalte hue pragat hua .........Haai janu kaise ho......
Rinku - toh aashik janab woh hum the jinko Ritu di samazkar tu gutar gu kar rahe the.....

Mein - Rinku tum di ko yaha se le jaoo....

Ritu - nahiii main iski maut dekhe bina yaha se nahi jaaungi......

Mein - Rinku ..suna nahi tumne ..le jaao di ko ....

Rinku - arre huzur dono k bich hume kyu fasa rahe ho .....

Markesh - tum kya sochte ho tum yaha se nikal jaaoge .......ha..ha...ha....
karkata .....tabhi waha uska saathi asur pragat ho jaata hai........

jo kisi ajeeb se jeev ko tarah tha aur uski aaankhien ekdum safed.......

Woh asur turant Ritu ki taraf lapka .....k uske muh par ek jor dar punch pada Abhi ka .....aur uske muh se ajeeb si aawaje nikalne lagi ......

Jisse ghane jungle mein asankhya jeev jinki ginti bhi nahi kar sakte khandhar ki taraf badhne lage........aur charo taraf se gher liya .....

Abhi - Rinku tu isse dekh tab tak mein inhe dekhta hu .........

Abhi ne Apna Divya dhanush nikala Aur usse aneko teer un jeevo par chodne laga ........teer lagte hi woh jeev ek gaade se liquid mein badalakar jamin par gir jaate -- aur phir wapas apne roop mein aajaate .......

Abhi ne ek shied ka nirman kiya jisse woh jeev khandahar mein na pravesh kar paaye......

Aur panch tatva ki urja se unpar waar karne laga ....lekin unki sankhya itni jyada thi ....Panch tatva ki urja bhi unka kuch nahi bigad paarahi thi .......

Tabhi Shivali ...Bhadra...Sulekha ....Shalu ...aur daksha bhi aagayi .....
aur un jeevo ka mukabla karne lagi........

Jab bhi un jeevo ko koi war lagta woh liquid mein badal jaate .....aur phir apne roop mein aajate......

Yaha Rinku ne Markesh ko pareshan kar k rakh diya tha .....

Rinku ka ladne ka tarika hi kuch alag tha Markesh jab bhi ladne k liye badta Rinku picche se ek jor se tapli uske sir par maarta .....aur apni utpatang baato se usse aur ulzha deta.....

Rinku - Kya baat hai yr maaru .....haa yahi naam thik hai......Saale baap ne maari mendki aur beta bangaya Shikari ....Bada aaya ...Markesh .....

Markesh khiz gaya tha .....ab usne apni sampurna urja ko ekatrit kiya .....aur Rinku par waar kiya ....Rinku ne bachne ki koshish ki toh woh waar jaakar laga Ritu ko jisse ...Ritu ko jor ka zhatka laga ....aur .....aur woh jamin par gir gayi .......

Yaha Abhi ne jeevo k khatme ka rasta dhund liya ........aur uske ishare par Shivali aur baaki Unn jeevo par waar karne lagi .....Aur jaise hi jeev liquid mein badalte Abhi Shhit lehar ka prayog karke unhe barf mein jama deta ........

Aise karke unn jeevo ka khatma hone laga ......

Yaha Rinku kuch karta uske pahele hi Markesh Ritu tak pahuncha aur ritu ko pakadne k liye haath badaya hi tha ......k achanak ek bhayankar urja pragat hui aur Ritu khadi ho gayi ......Uski aakhon se aur pure sharir se prakash nikalne laga tha....

Markesh k prahar k kaaran Ritu ki samriddhi shakti jagrit ho gayi thi.....

Samriddhi Shakti Vyakti ko Sampurna Aiswarya jaise ...Dhan ...Bal....Saundrya....Aur divyata...pardan karta hai....aur yadi kupit ho jaaye toh sab kuch chin leta hai.....

Tab tak Abhi aur baaki sab bhi jeevo ko khatam karke waha pahunche........

Sab Ritu k iss roop ko dekhkar hairan rah gaye the ...
Abhi aur Shivali ko chodkar.....

Tabhi ek tez kiran Ritu ki ankhon se nikalkar Maarkesh par padi aur woh tadapne laga......chikhne laga.....aur uska saara bal saari shakti samapt ho gayi.......

usski haalat 100 saal se uper budhe se bhi badter hogayi .......Saare badan par kewal patli si chamdi ki parat aur haddiyon ka dhancha sa rah gaya......

aur Ritu shant hokar behosh ho gayi ....uske jamin par girne se pahele hi Abhi ne usse tham liya .....

Markesh tapdapte hue - Maar do muzhe .....maar do ....

Abhi - itni aasani se nahi ab tu aise hi tadpta hua pal pal apni maut ka intejar karta rahega aur maut hai k itni jaldi nahi aayegi......

aaj k liye itna hi ......
agla update kal .......

Superb tow ritu ki apni shaktia jagrit ho aur
Markesh ka kaam tamam ker dia aur aise halat kerdi ki maut ki bheek mangta firega sabse
Thanks for lovely update

 

[Naik]

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[Naik]

Update - 93

Ab tak aapne dekha KS ne swarg par akraman karne k liye apne mayavi Antak naam k asur ko chuna .......
Shivali ne Abhi ki agli yatra k baare mein bataya..........
Aur Agli shakti koi Gandhrva kaya k baare mein bhi

ab aage........

Bhuva lok k yaksha bhoomi se uper hai Sawha Lok ........Jiska vistar prithvi se koi teen guna hai......

Iss lok mein pravesh karne k liye 7 dwar hai ......jaha Dev sainik humesha pahra dete rahte hai.....

Swaha lok ka mukhya aakarshan Swarg hai jaha ka aakarshan , hat vyakti ko hai ........kai kavi aur lekin bhi kisi jagah ki sunderta ki upma Swarg k naam se hi dete hai...

Swarg lok main devtao ka vas hai jo Tridevo ko aagaya ansar iss shristi ka sanchaln karte hai .....

swarg charo tarf se Alaknanda jo ganga ki hi roop hai usse ghita hua hai.....yaha har prakar ki siddhiya sakshat vas karti hai......Swarg.... rog... vyadi ..Vridhawastha....Bhuk pyas aadi se rahit hai........Yaha k bagiche mein Kalpvriksha hai jo har prakar ki Samriddhi dene wala hai.....

Yaha devtao k Raja Indra ka shasan hai.........

Swarg k adhikar mein do nagar aur hai jo iss lok k dusre hisse mein hai ....Ek hai Gandhrva nagar......jaha Devtao ki sabha mein Gaane wale aur Shrishti mein Sangeet vidya failane wale Gandharvo ka vaas hai .......Inka Raja Ranjan Gandhrva hai.....inki patni Sandhya aur beti Shamli hai......

Wahi dusri or Kinnar nagar hai jo Nirtya kala mein nipun hai......

Devraj Apni sabha mein baithkar Devguru Brihaspati aur baki devtao k saath kisi vishay par mantrana kar rahe the.......

Tabhi Swarg mein joro se kampan hua ...yeh tha sanket k kisi ne Swarg par aakraman kar diya hai........

Devraj turant apni dev sena lekar Swarg k pratam dwar par pahunch gaye aur dekha toh woh dwar tuta hua pada hai .....aur sainik maare jaa chuke hai........

Aur saamne dekha toh ek vishalkaye Daitya dono haath kamar par rakh kar jor jot se hasraha tha........yeh tha Antak.....

Antak - ha....ha....ha....Aayiye Devraj .......muzhe tumhari hi pratiksha thi.......yeh bechare sainik toh aise hi maare gaye........

Devraj - Tumahara itna dusaahas k tumne yaha pravesh karne ka prayatna kiya .......

Antak - Dusahas toh aapne kiya hai ...jo Hamre Asur samrat k putra ko bandi bana liya hai.......

Devraj - Humne aisa kuch nahi kiya hai........

Antak - Devta hokar asatya vachan ....ha...ha...ha....
sidhe se Maarkesh ko lauta do ...nahi toh tumahare Swarg ki aisi dasha hogi ki phir koi swarg ki Sunderta ki upma nahi dega .......

Devraj - Apni vani ko viram do asur....tum shayad Indra ke kop ko nahi jaante tabhi yaha akele aagaye ho ...........

Antak - waise toh mein akela hi kaafi hu ....parantu Mera naam Antak hai .....Shatru ka ant karne se pahele uski aakhri iccha toh poori kar hi salta hu .......

Aur usne mantra padhkar dono haath uper utha diye.......
aur waha laakho Divya Asuro ki sena pragat ho gayi.....

Antak - lo Devaraj ab sena bhi aagayi.........

Devraj - Aakarman ....Har.har.mahadev....

Aur dono aur ki sena aapas mein bhid gayi.......

teen tatvo k devta apni tatvo ki urja se asur ko samapt kar rahe the ......

Toh Antak ne apne bhiter se panch asur pragat kiye .....jo unhi panch tatva ki urja se bane hue the......

Agni devta k saath Jwalasur ......Varun devta k saath .....jalasur........Aur Vayu dev k saath Pawanasur ........

Yeh teeno asur un teen devtao k hi pratirup dikhayi de rahe the .........

Teeno devta apni poori urja k saath yudh kar rahe the parantu un teen asuro ko kuch hone ki bajaye woh devtao ki urja ko apne bhiter sokh rahe the.......

Yaha yumraj ji bhi apne yum pash se Asuro ko yumlok bhej rahe the........lekin jitne asur maate jaate utne hi phir pragat ho jaate......Antak ne aur ek Asur pragat kiya kaalnidhi ...jo Yumraj se bhid gaya......

Yaha Devraj ne dekha k Antak bar bar divya asuro ko apne bhiter se pragat kar raha hai.....toh woh swayam yudh mein utar aaaye ......

Devraj ne Antak par aneko divyastro se waar kiya jisse Antak ek hi haath se rokta aur uska mukh swarg ki or mod deta......isse Swarg ko badi hanni ho rahi thi..........

Antak ne ab tak srf devtao ki urja ko unke hi viruddh karke lad raha tha.........

Devraj ne ab apne Vajra k prayog karna shuru kiya aur bhayankar Vidyut urja se Antak par waar kiya ........lekin woh bhi vyarth .........

Sabhi devta kamjor pad rahe the......Aur asuro ka kuch bhi ahit nahi ho raha tha.......

Devaraj vivash hokar Narayan astra ka prayog karne hi waale the ...k devguru ne unhe rok diya .....

Sawdhan Devraj .......yeh asur vardan ki shakti se balwan ho raha hai ...isse aur iske sharir se pragat hue asuro ko koi kisi bhi astra se nahi maar sakte hai........isliye jab tum tridevo k astra chaloge ko k toh varadan k kaaran iss asur ko toh kuch nahi hoga .....

jisse innastro ki vinashkari shati iss lok ko nasht kar degi.....

Ab Antak ne Sabhi devtao ko apne paash mein band diya jo ek divya paash tha.........phir kuch socker ...Devraj waha se nikalkar Abhi k room mein pragat hue .....

Abhi bed par baitha kuch soch raha tha......k achanak Devraj ko apne saamne dekhkar samz gaya k ab samay aagaya hai agli shakti hassil karne ka .......

Abhi - Pranam Devraj ......

Devraj - Vijayi bhava putra........

Abhi - aap yaha swayam aaye ho koi vishesh baat .......

Devraj - tumhe shigra hi humare saath chalna hoga vats....abhi aur baato ka samay nahi hai....

Tab maine apna ek pratiroop waha choda Aur Devraj k saath turant yudhsthal k liye nikal pada ......

Jab hum waha pahunche toh uss samay Dev sainiko ki sthiti badi vikat thi......Jine asur maare jaa rahe the utne hi aur pragat ho rahe the.......

Aur tatvo k devta Antak k pash mein bandhe the...........Jaise hi Antak ne muzhe aur Devraj ko dekha ......

Antak - aagaye Devraj .....aur yeh kisse saath laaye ho ........

Abhi - Mera parichaya toh tumhe mil hi jaayega .......Aur Agni shool se Antak par waar kiya ........lekin woh waar uska kuch nahi bigad saka ......Antak ne uss waar ko wapas Abhi par kiya lekin Abhi ko lagte hi woh thanda ho gaya....

Abhi ne Dekha k dev sainik kamjor padrahe hai ....toh ussne prithvi tatva aur vayu tatva milakar bhayankar dhul se bawander banaya Jismein saaare aasur tinke ki bhati udrahe the aur ek dusre se takarakar samapt hone lage .....

Dhool bharu Aandi chalne k wajah se waha kuch bhi dikhayi nahi de raha tha ..........

Tabhi Aakash mein megh garajne lage aur barish hone lagi aur Bawander aur aandhi shant ho gayi.......

Antak - Ohho toh tum mayavi bhi ho ......lekon Antak k paas tumahari har maaya ka jawab hai .....

Jo asur bawander mein maare gaye woh jamin par gir gaye....Abhi ne dhyan diya k Asuro k shav jamin par girne k baad gayab ho rahe hai aur phir jeevit hokar laut rahe hai.......

Abhi ne phir aisi maya ki rachna ki ki jitne asur the utne hi Abhi har asuro k saamne aagaye .....Asur apne hatiyaro se humla toh kar rahe the .....lekin koi bhi maya prakash k saat rango se nirmit hoti hai .....dikhne mein yoh sthool dikhti hai lekin woh chaya se jtada kuch nahi hoti....

Asuro ko maya mein ulzhakar Abhi ne Apne Shakti trishool ko pragat kar k Aakash mein Ek ghera sa banaya Aur Agni tatva ki bhayaka jwalao ko Aakash mein sthit kar diya.... Aur Apne Divya dhanush se Ek aisa astra chalya jismein se niranter teer nikalkar Asur sainiko ko lagne lage aur aur woh uper uss ghere mein pahunchkar jalkar raakh ho jaata tha ....

iss tarah Asuro ki sankhya kam hone lagi ....yeh sab karne mein Abhi ko kuch hi ..pal lage .......

Antak Abhi ki maaya ko samaz chuka tha .....Aur usne apni urja se uss maya ko samapt kar diya .....
lekin tab tak Asuro ki aade se adhik sena maari jaa chuki thi ........

Antak ne krodh mein bharkar ek Divya shool ka waar Abhi par kiya .....Yeh shool usse para shakti dwara prapt hua tha.......Abhi ne Uss prahaar ko apne Shakti trishool par roka ......Jab do shaktiya aapas mein takrayi toh bhayankar urja pragat hui ........

Prarashakti k maarak urja k kaaran Abhi ka kawach kamjor pada Aur isse Abhi jakhmi hua ........Kyu k Abhi ka kawach usse devik aur aasuri astro se bacha sakta tha .....lekin parashakti aur tridevo k astro ko koi kawach nahi rok sakta tha...

Antak Abhi aut waar karta ussi samay Surya asth ho gaya .....Aur Antak ne Aaj k liye yudh samapti ki ghoshna ki .....

Antak - Aaj toh tum bach gaye ....jaao aur kal poori tayari kar k aana ......mein bhi dekhu kitna bal hai tumme......

Aur woh waha se chala jaata hai ...........
Abhi Shakti k prahar se ghayal hone k kaaran murchit ho jaata hai .......Jisse Devraj Swarg mein apne mahal le jaate hai..........

Parashakti ki urja k kaaran Daksha se milan k baad mili hui healing power dhire dhiire kaam kar rahi thi ........

Devraj ne bhi Swarg k vaid Aswini kumar se aaushadi tayar ki aur Abhi k liye bhej di........

Yaha Abhi ki aankhien khuli toh apne saamne ek ladki haath mein Aushadi ka katora liye Abhi ki taraf aascharya se dekh rahi thi......

Yeh Ladki thi Shamli jo Gandharva raj ki kanya thi.....aur yahi thi Abhi ki agli shakti........

Abhi bas usse ektak dekhne laga .....Kisi Aspara jaisa saundrya ...Aur chehre par masumiyat....Aankhe jaise hirni ki tarah badi badi ......Abhi bas uss rup saundrya ko dekhkar jaise kho sa gaya tha......

Dhyan mein kai dino se jis kanya ko Abhi dekh raha tha aaj woh saamne thi

Tabhi Ashwini kumar ander aate hue .....Arre Shamli tumne abhi tak yeh aushadi inhe lagayi nahi.....


Shamli - Gurudev ....aushadi toh hai parantu kaha lagau inko toh koi ghav hi nahi hai ......tab tak healing power apna kaam kar chuki thi....

Ashwini aushadhi wapas lete hue ...koi baat nahi tum inka khayal rakho ....Dhyan rahe yeh Devraj ka aadesh hai.....aur woh chale jaate hai...

Abhi - Tumne aisa kyu kaha ki koi ghav nahi hai ,

Shamli - Satya hi toh kaha ....kaha hai muzhe toh dikhayi nahi de raha

Abhi - apna haath idhar laao .....

Shamli - kyu...

Abhi - tumhe apne ghav dikhana hai.....
Aur abhi usska ek haath pakadkar apne dil par rakh deta hai........

Abhi - tumahari in aankhon k baan ne mere hridaya par ghav kar diya hai .....dekho toh kaisa joro se dhadak raha hai.......

Pahele toh woh samaz nahi paayi par jab samaz aaya toh woh sharmakar haath chudakar bhagne lagi ......

Abhi - Dekho ...Devraj ne aadesh diya hai tum aise nahi jaa sakti ......

Abhi ki baat sunkar woh wapas mud jaati hai....

Aaj k liye itna hi.....
Agla update kal.......

Excellent update brother keep posting
Thanks for lovely update

 

[ashish_1982_in]

Super update bhai

 

[Pradeep singh]

Superb update Bhai.
Dekhte h Abhi Ko ab koin si shakti milti h.
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[Aryanv]

Awesome update

 

[abhi1008]

Update - 94

ab tak aapne dekha k Swarg par Antak ne aakraman kar diya hai ....
Devaraj Abhi ko apne saath yudh bhoomi le jaate hai.....
Pahle din k yudh viram k baad ...Abhi ghyal hokar behosh ho jaata hai ...aur jab aankhien khulti hai ....toh apne saamne Shamli ko paaya hai ...jisse itne din se dhyan mein dekh raha tha....

ab aage .........

Shamli chup chap sir niche kar k baithi jane kya soch rahi thi............k Abhi ki awaj se woh apni soch se bahar aayi.....

Abhi - Waise Shamli kya naam hai tumahara........

Shamli - mera naam Sh.....(lekin jab usse abhi ki baat samz aayi) .....toh .....aap bade woh ho ....mera naam lekar muzhse hi naam puch rahe ho

Abhi - Accha yeh Woh matllab kya hai........waise tum gaati bahut hi acchi , aur woh sarover k kinare baith kar jo geet gaa rahi thi woh toh apratim hai....

Shamli - Yeh sab aapko kaise pata.......

Abhi - muzhe toh yeh bhi thi hai.....k sarover k jal mein tum kiska chehra dekhti hui gaati hoo.....ab toh mein tumahare saamne hu......

Shamli - Lekin aapko kaise pata chala k mein aapka hi chehra dekh rahi thi.....

lekin ahsas hote hue k uske muh se sach nikal gaya......toh usne ek haath apne sir par maara aur apne daanto tale ungli daba di.........

Abhi - uff yeh maasum adda ......hum se hi pyar aur hum se hi parda..........aur Abhi ythkar uske paas jaata hai aur apne haath se uske chehre ko upar uthata hai......

jab tum muzhse itna prem karti ho toh jab mein tumahare saamne aaya toh kyu apne prem ko apne hriday mein chupa liya......

Abhi ki baaton se Shamli ka pyar jo woh ab tak dil mein dabae baithi thi aankho k raaste bahar aane laga...

Shamli - Aapne toh muzhe kabhi dekha nahi tha ...isiliye dar tha k kahi aap mera prem asweekar na karde........

Abhi uske aansoo ponchta hue usse apne gale lagata hai.......

Abhi - Jis prem mein itni shakti ho k bina mile hi apne premi ka chehra dikh jaaye uss prem ko kaise koi asweekar kar sakta hai......Jaise tum muzhe Sarover k jal mein dekhti thi ......main tumhe apne dhyan mein dekhta tha......

Muzhe bhi kai dino se tumahari hi pratiksha thi aur dekho aaj tum mil gayi.....

Shamli bhi kaskar Abhi ko pakad leti hai .....itne varsho ki prtiksha uski aaj jo khatam ho gayi hai......dono ek dusre ko bahon mein khoye hue the.......

ek dusre ki dhadkan aur usmein chipe ek dusre k prati prem ko mehsus kar rahe the......

Abhi ne Shamli ka chehra upar kiya .....Aur usko aankho mein dekhne laga jaha uske liye beshumar pyar k alawa aur kuch nahi tha......

Sharam k kaaran Shamli k kanpte honth Abhi ko jaise nimantran de rahe the ...Abhi honth Shamli k hontho k karib aagaye dono k saanse ek dusre se mein sama rahi thi ....Abhi ne apne honth Shamli k hontho par rakh diye .......

Shamli ka jism kaanp gaya prem k iss pahele chumban k ahsas se ....

Abhi uske hontho ko bas apne honto se shala raha tha ........Ab Abhi uske upper k honth ko muh mein bharke dhire2 chusne laga.....Shamli k haath Abhi k pith par kas gaye ....Woh bas apne premi k har kriya ko mahsus kar rahi thi......

Thodi der aise hi chumban k baad dono alag hue ......

k tabhi waha ek Sainik bhiter aakar Devraj ka sandesh Abhi ko deta hai k Devraj ne usse Sabha mein bulaya hai.........Toh Abhi bhi Shamli se phir milne ka ishara karke sainik k saath chala jaata hai .....

Yaha sabha mein kewal Devraj aur Devguru baithe hue the ...kyuki baaki devtao ko toh Antak ne apne paash mein bandh rakha tha.........

Abhi bhi jaakar dono ko pranam karta hai phir baith jaata hai.........

Devraj - Ab aapka swastha kaisa hai........

Abhi - main bilkul thik hu Devraj , Aap bataiye kya koi marg mila Antak k nash ka ...

Devguru - hum isi baat par vichar kar rahe the........kya aapko koi marg suzha

Abhi - Devguru ek baat muzhe samaz nahi aayi .......K ...Antak ne ek asur hokar bhi suryastha k samay yudh rok diya jab k Asuro ki shakti raatri k samay hi adhik hoti hai.......

Devguru - yahi baat toh usse baaki asuro se alag karti hai......Antak baaki asuro jaisa Kaali shaktiyo ka upasak nahi hai.....Antak Brahma ji ka upasak hai.......

Prakash andhere ko khatam kar sakta hai ....Prakash prakash ko sapt nahi kar sakta ..........
shayad isiliye devta bhi uska ya uske nirmit asuro ka kuch nahi bigad paa rahe hai......

Antak yudh poore niyam k saath ladta hai......

Abhi - toh kya iske ant ka koi upay nahi hai........

Narayan ...narayan ki dhun gaate hue tabhi waha devrishi narad aate hai jinhe dekhkar Devraj aur Abhi khade ho jaate hai aur pranam karte hai.....

Narad ji - Upay hai Devraj ........Antak ne badi bhayanka tapasya se brahma ji ko prassana kiya aur Amarta ka vardan maanga...

Tab Brahma ji ne Amarta ka vardan dene mein asamarthata darshayi aur usse apni mrityu ka ek kaaran chunne k liye kaha.......

Tab antak ne bade vichar k baad ek vishesh prakar ki dhvani ki urja ( sound energy) ko chuna....
isilye liye koi astra shastra usska kuch nahi bigad sakte......

Abhi - Aur woh vishesh dhwani kya hai Devmuni

Narad ji - mein itna hi kah sakta hu k woh dhwani sangeet k kisi raag se judi hui hai.......

Itna kahkar Narad ji waha se chale gaye...

Devguru - hume is vishaya mein Gandharwa raj Ranjan (GR) ki sahayta leni hogi ........

Devraj - thik hai gurudev him abhi sandesh bhejkar unhe yaha bulate hai........

Devguru - Devaraj niti kahti hai k sahyata maangne walo ko swayam uske paas jaana chahiye jisse sahyata leni ho ......chahe woh chakrvarti samrat hi kyu na ho.....

Devraj - aap uchit kah rahe hai gurudev ....chaliye ....

Phir him teeno Gandharva nagar mein GR k bhawan pahunche .......yaha pahunchte hi hume ardhraatri ka raag ....Raag Shivranjani ....mein madhur sangeet sunayi dene laga.......jo vina bajate hue Shamli gaa rahi thi ...Aur GR usska saath de rahe the .......

Uss raag ki divyata mein hum teeno aise kho gaye k hume koi sudh hi nahi rahi k huma yaha kyu aaye hai........

Jab woh sangeet band hua toh hume hosh aaya .........GR aur Shamli aankhe band karke gaa rahe the......jab geet samapt hua toh dono ne aankhe kholi....

GR Devraj aur Devguru ko sakshat apne saamne dekhkar ekdum se khade hue aur unhe pranam kiya ......

GR - Aaj toh mein dhnya ho gaya jo Swayam Devraj aur Devguru mere bhawan aaye hai .......aayie aasan grahan kijiye ...........

Aur Abhi k taraf dekhte hue - aur shayad aap wahi Rakshak hai jo Devtao ka yudh mein saath de rahe hai.......aayiye aap bhi virajman hoyiye.....

GR - Devraj kahiyhe Sewak k liye kya aagya hai.....

Devraj - Iss samay hum tumse Sangeet ki shaktiyo baare mein janne aaye hai ......

GR - kya baat hai Devraj yudh k samay Sangeet k baare mein jaana chahte ho ...ascharya hai ....

Devraj - kyu ki iss yudh mein Sangeet ki awashkta hai.....aap bataye

GR - Toh suniye Devraj .....Sangeet mein woh shakti hai jo saare shrishti toh kya swayam bhagwan ko bhi vash mein kar de ......

Bhagwan ka har roop issi sangeet se sampurana shristi ka sanchalan karta hai.........

Shiv ka damroo, Krishna ki murli....Vishnu ka shankh......Aur Brahama ji k paas niranter bajti hui Maa saraswati ki vina .....Aur samved se aati hui rago ki dhwani.......

yeh sab sangeet k hi mool hai......

Jaha Raag megh malhar barsat kara sakta hai .....wahi Raag basant samay se pahele hi Basant ritu ko laa sakta hai .......Raag Shiv ranjani sakshat Mahadev ko pragat karsakta hai.....

Raag bairavi Sampurna nakaratmak urja ko samapt kar sakta hai .......
raag bhairav jeevo k mann k andhkar ko mitakar prakash se bhar deta hai.....

aap batayie iss yudh mein Sangeet ki kya awashyakta aan padi hai..

Tab Devraj Narad ji ki batayi saari baatein GR ko bata deta hai......

GR - Accha toh yeh baat hai ........Devraj Bhale hi Antak kaali shaktiyo ka upasak nahi hai lekin hai toh woh asur hi aur KS k liye kaam karta hai .....isliye Uske man ki aasuri pravriti toh wahi hai ....jo andhkar ka roop hai .......

Aur uss andhakar mein hi uske pran chipe hue hai jo kewal godhuli vela k Raag Ahir Bhairav se hi samapt hona sambhav hai........Aur iss raag mein parangat hai meri putri Shamli hai .........

Abhi - Parantu is bhayankar yudh bhumi mein Jaha har taraf astra shastra chal rahe ho waha hum Shamli ko kaise le jaaye.......

Shamli - meri dhrishtata k liye muzhe kshama kare ......k mein aapke madhya mein bol rahi hu .....parantu yeh aawashyak hai.....

Maaribhoomi ki raksha se badkar prano ka mulya nahi hota .........isiliye yadi aaj muzhe yeh awsar prapt hua hai .....toh prano ki raksha k moh mein main na jaau yeh sambhav nahi hai .....

DR - Wah putri mein dhanya ho gaya tum jaisi santan paakar ........

Aise aur thodi der mantrana chalti rahi phir hum wapas Swarg k mahal mein aagaye.....

Subha Shankh naad k saath sawera hua .........aur phir phunche yudh bhoomi par....

Phir aamne sammne ayi dono taraf ki sena .......


Antak - Accha toh Devtao ka Rakshak thik hogaya .........
Abhi toh sirf ek hi waar kiya tha.......Ab jara aur dikhao kitna bal hai tumme ......

Shamli ko waha laane k liye Antak ko yudh mein uljhana jaruri tha ...........Toh Abhi ne bhi apni gada ka aawahan kiya ......

Abhi - Antak Vradan mein prapt shaktiyo dwara woh ladte hai jinhe apne Baahubal par vishwas nahi hota .......Yadi sach mein tum ek veer yodha ho muzhse apne bahubal se yudh karo .........

Antak - Rakshak chinta mat karo .....ab antak apne Baahubal se hi iss yudh ko jitega .....yeh Antak ka vachan hai......

Aur gada lekar Abhi ki taraf dauda aur ek jodar waar kiy ....jisse Abhi ne sir par gada lejaakar toka .......Aur ek Kick uske pet mein maari aur picche dhakel diya ......

Jisse Antaj air krodh mein bhar gaya ......Aur phir prahar kiya dono gadao k takrane se waha bhayakar aawaj hone lagi thi ......tabhi Antak ne Abhi k waar ko block karke uske face par ek jordar punch maara....jisse abhi ko koi chot toh nahi aayi lekin itne force ki wajah se woh dur jaakar gira ........

Antak - ha..ha...ha...Ab pata chala Antak ka bahubal .......

Abhi ne Devraj ki taraf dekha toh unhone gada ki taraf ishara kiya ......Abhi samaz gaya

....Gada k takrav k kaaran hone wali aawj k kaaran aur yudh k iss mahol k kaaran Shamli gaa nahi paa Rahi hai.....

Abhi - Antak gada yudh toh bahut dekh liya .....asli bahubal ki pariksha toh mallyudh se hoti hai ......aur Abhi apni gada chodhkar taal thokkar maidan mein aajata hai .....

Antak - wah Rakshak maan gaye ....Ab toh aur maza aayega ...aur dono kissi pahlwan k jaise ek dusre par apne daav pech chalane lage ........


Devraj ne dekha k Ab Antak Abhi se ladne mein poora magan hai ....toh sahi awasar jaankar.....woh Shamli ko waha le aaye ......

Yaha Abhi Chalang lagakar Antak k piche pahunch gaya....aur Apni baaju se uski garden aise kaskar pakad li ....k woh hil bhi nahi paa raha tha......

Ussi samay Shamli ne Raag Ahir Bhairav k sur chede ....Aur jaise hi woh sur Antak k kaano mein pade ....toh woh jor se chillya ......

Antak - Chal hai yeh .....roko is sangeet ko ahhhh .....yeh mere pran le raha hai........Tumne Chal kiya hai mere saath....ahhh

Jaise jaise Shalini gaane lagi Antak k sir mein bhayankar pida hone lagi ...aur uske nask kaan aur muh se khoon nikalne laga .......tab Abhi ne usse chod diya.....

Antak apne baal nochne laga chillane laga .......Aur phir aakhir mein ek bhayankar Chikh k saath dharti par gir pada .....Lekin girte girte usne apne aakhri urja se ek jalta hua shool Shamli ki taraf phenka ....aur girkar mar gaya .....

Woh shool Shamli ki taraf bade tezi se badne laga .....

abhi k liye itna hi ......
agla update raat ko ......

 

[abhi1008]

Thanku so much frnds for your Appreciation & comments


Bas aise hi saath banaye rakhe..

Latest update 94 posted....

Wow nice update
Waiting for next

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next

 

[abhi1008]

Thanku so much frnds for your Appreciation & comments


Bas aise hi saath banaye rakhe..

Latest update 94 posted....

Awesome update bhai

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बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई

 

[Black water]

Fantastic update bhai