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Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)

Aapko Kahani kese lag rahi hai...

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abhi1008

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bahut bahut Shukriya bhai aapke support aur jabardust comment k liye
:thanks: :thanks::thanks:


aise hi saath banaye rakhe...

Latest update 102 posted....


Nice Update bhai. KS itni aasani se tou haarega nahi zaroor woh koi na koi chaal chalega. Dekhte hein kya hota hai.
 

abhi1008

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Update - 103

ab tak aapne Dekha Sutal lok mein Abhi ne apni Baaton se VK ko apni taraf kar liya ...
VK ki putri Chaitali k mann mein Abhi k liye prem
Rajasthan mein KS k shadyantra ko Sangharak Aur Rakesh k dwara vifal hona ...aur KR ....MR...ka maara jaana...
Rakesh ka Atomic weapon ko antariksha mein le jana aur blast...

ab aagee ......

Atomic urja ka dhamaka itna jabardust tha ..k Rakesh ka Sharir uss dhamake mein nasht hogaya.......aur Abhi ki marak shakti.....wapas ek urja mein badalkar Abhi k sharir mein sama gayi.........

uss samay Abhi Sutal lok mein VK k saath baitha hua tha........Jab usski maarak shakti na uske sharir mein pravesh kiya ....toh uske sharir ko ek zhatka laga .......aur Abhi k saamne woh drisya aagaya jab woh blast hua ........

ab Abhi ko paya chala k Rakesh ka manav roop nasht ho chuka hai aur woh wapas uske sharir mein sama gaya .....apne bachpan k mitra ko ab dubara nahi dekh paayega ....iss vichar se uski aankhon se do bund aansoo k nikal aaye ....Lekin VK k saamne apne aapko woh kamjor darshana nahi chahta tha........

isiliye waha se uthkar VK k hi bhawan mein apne kaksh ki taraf chal diya ......

Room mein pahunchkar Abhi ko Rakesh ki saari yaadien taza hone lagi k kaise usne ek sacche mitra ki bhati pag pag par usse saath diya ......gurukul ki woh saari baatein k kaise usne Abhi k tatvo ki shakti jagrit karne mein sahyata ki .....aur uske ghayal hone par kaise MLA k ladke se usme badla liya ...sabkuch .....

Abhi ko apne mitra khone ka dukh tha ......uski aankhon se aansoo bah rahe the ......uske mann mein wahi bhav pragat hone lage jo GK ki mrityu par hone lage the ........lekin woh jaanta tha k bhavna k adhin hokar kuch karna parajay hi deta hai .......

Tabhi usse apne kahdhe par kisi ka haath mehsus hua toh usne palatkar dekha toh waha Shivali thi....

Shivali - Kya soch rahe ho jaan ........

Abhi - Tumse kya chipa hai....tum toh sabkuch pahle se hi jaanti ho ......

Shivali - Apne aapko Sambhalo ki aapki yeh Bhaynaye phir kisi anarth ka kaaran na ban jaaye.......Aur aapka mitra kahi nahi gaya hai woh aapke hi bhiter hai ........
jara usse apne antar mann mein dhundo.....

Abhi - Nahi jaan ab mein bhavana k adin hokar phir se wahi galti mahi karunga jo pahle ki thi ....tum nischint ho jaao .....

Kuch der aur batein hui jismien aage ki ranniti par vichar hua ..
baad mein Shivali waha se chali gayi........

Shivali k jaane k baad Apne mann ko shant karne .....Abhi dhyan mein baith jaata hai.......Pahle toh vichlit mann k kaaran dhyan mein kathinayi hui ...par dhere dhere woh dhyan mein utarta chala gaya.......

Dhyan mein Abhi ko apne ander aaj laal rang ki urja adhik dikhi jo uski uske maarak shakti ki urja thi ......Apne bhiter usse kuch drishya dikhayi diye ........Aur sunayi di Rakesh ki aawaj .......

Jab Abhi ka dhyan tuta toh dekha saamne Chaitali khadi thi....Aur Abhi ko ektak dekh rahi thi.......
Abhi usske mann mein uth rahe bhavo ko samazraha tha ....woh jaanta tha k yahi uaki agli shakti hai.....

Abhi - aise kya dekh rahi ho ......

Chaitali - Mein toh aapke liye bhojan laayi thi lekin aap ...dhyan mein baithe the ...isiliye ruk gayi......

Abhi - kya sirf yahi kaaran tha .....Dekho Chaitali mein tumahre ander chal rahe bhavo ko padh sakta hu ........aur samaz bhi sakta hu......

Cahitali - jab aap sab kuch jaante ho toh phir aapka iss bare mein kya vichar hai .......mein bas itna janana chahti hu k mere mann mein aapke prati jo bhav jjanm le chuka hai kya aapke hriday mein bhi mere liye vaisa hi bhav hai..

Abhi uske paas jaakar uski aankhon mein dekhne lagta hai.....

Abhi - Tumhe meri aankhon mein kya dikhta hai.....Aut uske karib jaakar ....

Chaitali ka hridaya Abhi ko apne itne paas mehsus karke joro se dhadkne lagta hai.......
usse Abhi ki aankhon mein apne liye wahi prem nazar aata hai jo iske dil mein Abhi k liye tha ....

Abhi - Dekho Chaitu abhi hum ek yudh k muhane par khade hai ....abhi tumhe thofi pratiksha karni hogi ......

Chaitali - mein bhi iss baat ko samzti hu ....mein aapki pratiksha karungi.....

Yaha Pralamb KS ki baato mein aagaya tha .....Aur Apni poori urja k saath k saath Sutal lok ki taraf badh chala .....

Abhi k shakti trishool dwara banayi gayi shield bhi usse rokne mein asamarth thi .....Uske paas vaishnavi maya aur Narayan astra tha .....jiska poore brahamad mein koi tod nahi tha.......

Iss samay Abhi M.Bali k saath tha ......

M. Bali - Rakshak muzhr aisa aabhas ho raha hai ki iss yudh mein hamara saamna Aasuri vidya se nahi , apitu kisi bhayankar devik urja se hone wala hai.....
mein swayam iss yudh mein tumahare saath rahunga ....

Abhi - Maharaj .....Niyati ne iss yudh ki jimmedari muzhe saup rakhi hai .......aur dhyan mein dikhe drisya k kaaran muzhe yeh aabhas hua k aapka iss yudh mein jaana uchit nahi........

maine drisya mein vaishnavi maya ko hamre viruddh dekha hai ...aur aap Narayan k param bhakt hai.....

Jab dono baat kar rahe tha ..ussi samay Sutal lok ki seema par shankh naad hua ....aur uss naad se Abhi k dwara banaya gayi shield khatam ho gayi...

Aur pralamb pravesh kar gaya ....aur Sutal lok k pravesh dwar par

Abhi aur Sutal lok ki danav sena dwar k bahar pahunchi ......

Pralamb iss samay apni poori urja aur siddihiyo k saath khada tha......Iss samay woh prachand agni ki tarah tejasvi dikh raha tha ...uska prakash itna tha k sadharan Danav toh aankh uthakar usse delh bhi nahi paa rahe the....

Iss samay uske panch mukh pragat ho rakhe the.....aur haat mein prachand gada .....

Abhi ne kabhi kisi asur ka aisa divya roop nahi dekha tha ........

Pralamb - aapne saamne danavo ki sena dekhkar jor se garja ..........Hat jaao tum sab mere raaste se ......mein vyart mein tum sabka sanhar nahi karna chahta .......

Abhi - Mrityu toh har jeev ki nirdharit hoti hai.......pahle apna parichay do.....aur yaha aane ka kaaran batao....

Pralamb - Accha toh tum ho inke senanayak ......shankhnaad se toh tumhe samaz jaana chahiye k mere aane ka kaaran kya hai........

Abhi - Lekin maharaj Bali se tumahari kya shatruta hai........

Pralamb - vyarth baato mein apna aur mera samay nasht mat karo yudh karo......

Aur usne apna ek haath upar uthakar ek trishool paragat kiya aur Abhi ki taraf phenka .......Abhi ne uss Trishool ko badi veg se aate dekhkar Apne Divya dhanush se Se Teer chalakar bich mein hi kaat diya .....

Ab yudh mein uske taraf KS k samarthak danav bhi aagaye .....dono taraf se danav aapas mein bhid gaye... ......

Abhi ne lagatar Pralamb par teer chode jisse ussne apni Gada k parhar se rok diya .....

Ab uss asur ne badi veg se Abhi k taraf apni gada chalayi .....Toh Abhi ne bhi Apni gada k prahar se Uss asur ki gada ko apne paas pahunchne se pahle hi chur chur kar diya ....

Ab pralamb krodh mein bhar aaya aur uske paancho mukh se Alag alag prakar k astra nikalne lage .....jo Danavo par jaakar girne lage ......

Abhi - Inn danavo par kyu apna bal dikha rahe ho .....kuch bal hai toh jara hume bhi dikhao .......

Pralamb - aacha toh tu mera bal dekhna chahta hai toh lo .....Aur uss asur k char sir alag hokar 4 Vishalkay asur mein badal gaye aur Abhi ki taraf badhe ........

Unko apni taraf aata dekhkar Abhi ne Apne Agni shool .....Shakto trishool aur panch tatva ki urja se kai prahar kiye parantu unnpar uska kkoi asar nahi hua .....

Abhi ab apni Divya talwar lekar unke saamne dat gaya......Sampoorna devtao ki urja ka aawahan usne apni talwar mein kiya aur Un 4 Asuro k aage dat gaya.....woh charo Abhi par teer talwar gada aur urja k golo se prahar kar rahe the ........

Abhi bas unhe block hi kar paa raha tha.......Ab Abhi ne Apni maaya pragat kar di jisse Un asuro ko eaha Har jagah Abhi dikhayi dene lage ........

Pralamb - mere saamne maya ka prayog ......aur usne apni vaishnavi maaya ko pragat kar diya isse Abhi ki maaya samapt ho gayi ......

Lekin intne samay mein Abhi ne Indra k Vajra ko yaad kiya aur unn 4 asuro par choda .....jisse woh charo katgaye aur wapas Pralamb mein sama gye .....

Pralamb ne Abhi par Apni vaishnavi shakti chalayi ..........
Abhi k paas iska koi tod nahi tha - Abhi ne bade prayas kiye usse rokne k .......Isse pahele Abhi ko woh shakit lagti .....Cahitali uss shakti k aage haath jodkar khadi ho gayi......

Vaishnavi shakti ek naari par prahar nahi kar sakti thi ....isi.kaaran shant ho gayi .....

Yaha dono paksh k danavo mein ghamasan yudh chal raha tha ........

Jab pralamb ne dekha....uski shakti bekar chali gayi toh usne Chaitali par Agni ban ka prayog kiya ....isse pahele Woh waar Chaitu tak pahunchta Abhi ne Varunastra k prayog se uss waar ko vifal kar diya ........Aur Chaitali ko Turant yudh bhoomi se hatakar ......VK k Bhawan le aaya ....

Aur phir yudh bhoomi mein laut aaya........

Ab asur Apni talwar lekar Abhi k taraf dauda ....Abhi ne bhi apni talwar sambhal li ......aur uss asur k waar ka saamna karne laga .......

Apne Talwar k saath saath laat aur ghuse ka bhi prayog karne laga .......jisse uss asur ko bahut chote aayi ..........

Ab uss Asur ne Abhi par apni talwar phenk kar maari ......lekin divya kawach k kaaran ...woh talwar Abhi se takrakar chur ho gayi......

Pralamb k ab karib karib saare astra Abhi par prayog ho chuke the..........

Ab koi aur astra shesh na rahe par ......Pralamb ne Ab narayan astra ka aawawhan kiye .....jiske pragat hote hi aakash mein bhayankar garjana utpanna hui..........Charo taraf bhayankar aandhi chalne lagi jissmein ....Danav tinke ki tarah udne lage .......

Ab pralamb ne Narayan adtra ko Abhi k taraf choda ........Woh astra Sudarshan chakra k roop mein bhayankar tez aur urja k saath Abhi ki taraf badne laga ........

Jaise Jaise Abhi apne astro ka prayog Narayanastra par karta usska tez aur badne laga ......

Woh Astra jaise jaise Abhi k nikat aaraha tha Abhi ka bal aur urja kamjor padne lagi jaise woh astra Usski saari urja sokh raha ho.....

Abhi kaise iss Narayan astra se Apne aapko bachayega ......aur Pralanb ka saamna karega

Abhi k liye itna hi.....

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