★☆★ Xforum | Ultimate Story Contest 2024 ~ Reviews Thread ★☆★

[Rajizexy]

Story: Dohra fayda
Writer Rajizexy
Awesome superb story
Ten out of ten marks

Thanks a lot dear Jasvir for like.So nice of u

 

[kirantariq]

Thanks a lot dear Jasvir for like.So nice of u

Best story

 

[Devil_Mind]

Story : Dohra fayda
writer : Rajizexy

Aapki sab story ko padhne mai maza aata hai ..aapki ye story bhi kamal ki thi ak alag type ki story likhi hai aapne shemale ke uper ...padh kar maza ayaa ...Awesome story

 

[🌺 Adhira Thakur 🌺]

Story: Adhure prem ki dastan
writer: Alpha werewolf
friend aapki bahut hi achhi aur dhasu story hai aur sath sath aapki story bahut hi emotional bhi hai...
aapki story padhate huye mujhe aanshu aagaye.

Story -Adhure prem ki dastan..
Writer -Alpha werewolf

aapki story me bahut jagah ki baate meri dil ko chhu liye friend .... Ho sake to aap story ko aap contest ke baad likhne ke koshish kariyega friend .,.. mai is story ko aage janane ke liye bahut hi curious hun friend

 

[Akki ❸❸❸]

Story: पूर्ण अपूर्ण
Writer: avsji

Bdiya pyari story bhai ji.
Smaj ki shadi na krne k prati soch ko short story me bdiya se dikhaya h

Baki short story me readers k liye mushkil ho jata h kyuki chitra ka support krke Shobha ko bhi najarandaj nhi kr sakte aur shobha ka support krke chitra ko bhi najarandaj nhi kr sakte.

 

[🌺 Adhira Thakur 🌺]

Story - Kissa ek Anhoni ka
Writer - Shetan
friend aapki story bhi padhane me bahut achhi lagi aur nice story

 

[☣️Alpha_werewolf☣️]

Story: Adhure prem ki dastan
writer: Alpha werewolf
friend aapki bahut hi achhi aur dhasu story hai aur sath sath aapki story bahut hi emotional bhi hai...
aapki story padhate huye mujhe aanshu aagaye.

Thanks for supporting friend

 

[Akki ❸❸❸]

Story : चौबीस घंटे
Writer : SANJU ( V. R. )

BDiya story Sanju Bhai long story kho ya short stories sabme novel ki jhalak hi milti h
Jeet the Rockstar.
GOod one.

 

[🎭secret_devil👿_Angel😇]

Story - Adhure prem ki dastan
writer - werewolf
Bhai aapki bahut hi achhi aur dhasu story hai aur sath sath aapki story bahut hi emotional bhi hai... aur aapki story me last seen me jisme hero bhagwan se duwa maang Raha tha vo scene mujhe bahut aachi aur emotional scene tha bhai

 

[Akki ❸❸❸]

Story : Suraj
Writer : Black

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