Adultery " रेल, रात और वो ..."

[Royal Lover]

Hello Every One,

Dekho bhai bahut dino bad ek story likhane ki koshish kar rha hoon, aur pahli bar adultery try kar rha hoon. Is story mein kya hoga mujhe khud nahi pta. Ye story long to nahi hai, lekin puri jarur likh li hai. To beech me adhora chhodne ka sawal hi nahi hai. Meri pahli koshish hai. Agar pasand na aaye to maaf kariyega. Agali story feedback ke hisab se likh dunga. Vaise, ye adult story hai, romance nahi hai. Ise pdiye aur feedbak jarur dijiye:


To Bane Rahiye... Dhanywad
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[Mr Sinister]

Hello Every One,

Dekho bhai bahut dino bad ek story likhane ki koshish kar rha hoon, aur pahli bar adultery try kar rha hoon. Is story mein kya hoga mujhe khud nahi pta. Ye story long to nahi hai, lekin puri jarur likh li hai. To beech me adhora chhodne ka sawal hi nahi hai. Meri pahli koshish hai. Agar pasand na aaye to maaf kariyega. Agali story feedback ke hisab se likh dunga. Vaise, ye adult story hai, romance nahi hai. Ise pdiye aur feedbak jarur dijiye.

Update kal dunga :


To Bane Rahiye... Dhanywad

for new story early waiting for first update..

 

[rajeev13]

नई कहानी के लिए शुभकामनाएं

पहले अपडेट की प्रतीक्षा रहेगी...

 

[Royal Lover]

UPDATE - 1
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Sapna ne platform par lagi purani, dhundli ghadi ki taraf dekha. Suinyaan jaise uske dil par chal rahi thi. Delhi ki shaam thi, lekin hawa mein thandak ka naam-o-nishaan nahi tha. Platform number 5 par logon ka samandar umad raha tha….chaiwalon ki cheekhein, engine ki bhari ‘thak-thak’, aur loudspeaker par goonjti be-jaan awaaz.

Uska gala sookh raha tha. Usne purse mein rakhi pani ki bottle ko tatola, magar nikaalne ki himmat nahi hui. Saansein tez chal rahi thi. Ghar se phone aaya tha …. dadi ki halat bahut nazuk hai. Har haal mein nikalna zaroori tha. Reserved ticket ka sapna toot chuka tha. Waiting list 150 par atki rahi. Ab sirf General Dibba bacha tha....

Train ne ek bhayanak horn diya. Sapna ki ungliyan bag ke handle par itni kas gayi ki naakhoon safed pad gaye.

“Abhi nahi… abhi mat chhuto please…” usne dheeme se budbudaya.

Jaise hi General dibba saamne aaya, logon ka hujoom us par toot pada. Sapna ne gehri saans li aur bheed mein kud padi. Yeh safar nahi, jung thi. Dhakel, thokar, kisi ka bag seene par, kisi ka haath kandhe par ….har taraf pressure tha.

Uska reshmi dupatta kisi ke tiffin se ulajh gaya. Sapna ne ek jhatke se use khinchaa, parwah nahi ki phat bhi jaye. Kaise bhi andar pahunchi. Dibbe ke andar ka manzar narak jaisa tha .. seat par paanch-paanch log, upar berth par log lete hue, farsh par bhi jagah nahi. Paseene aur thakaan ki hui boo hawa mein ghuli hui thi.

Sapna bathroom ke paas ek chhoti si jagah par ruk gayi. Uske baal chehre se chipak gaye the, suit paseene se peeth par chipak chuka tha. Thak kar usne aankhen band ki.

“Yahin… yahin theek hai,” usne mann hi mann socha.

Train ne jhatka liya aur platform chhod diya. Pehle aadhe ghante tak Sapna ne khud ko bachaane ki poori koshish ki …. bag ko seene se chipkaye, sharir ko chhota karke. Par agle station par aur log chadh gaye. Ab haalat yeh thi ki Sapna charon taraf mardon ki deewar se ghir chuki thi.

Uski personal space ab khatam ho chuki thi….

Pichhe koi khada tha. Bahut kareeb. Itna kareeb ki uski shirt ke buttons Sapna ki peeth par mehsoos ho rahe the. Shuru mein usne socha …. bheed hai, majboori hai. Usne thoda side mudne ki koshish ki, par wahan bhi kisi ki kohni uske pet mein ghus rahi thi.

Dheere-dheere dibbe ki garmi badhne lagi. Sapna ki gardan par paseene ki lakeerein banne lagi. Usne gehri saans li, magar hawa garam aur bhari thi.

Tabhi… usne mehsoos kiya.

Pichhe wale shaqs ne apna pura wazan uski taraf shift kar diya tha. Pressure hat nahi raha tha. Woh jawaan ladka ab bilkul usse chipak gaya tha. Uske kandhe Sapna ki peeth ko chhoo rahe the.

Train ek bade jhatke se hili…..

Aur us jhatke ne saari dooriyan mita di. Ladka poori tarah Sapna ki peeth se lag gaya. Sapna ka badan pathar jaisa sakht ho gaya. Uski saans ruki si gayi. Usne bag ko itni zor se pakda ki ungliyon ke jod dard karne lage.

Jhatka guzar gaya, lekin ladka pichhe nahi hata….

Ab woh dheere-dheere, bahut maheen tarike se apni kamar ko Sapna ki peeth aur nitambhon par ragad raha tha. Yeh hadsa nahi tha. Yeh jaan-bujh kar ki ja rahi baat thi.

Sapna ki aankhen khud-ba-khud band ho gayi. Uska dil itni zor se dhadak raha tha ki use darr lag raha tha kahin woh ladka uski dhadkan na sun le. Uski gardan aur kaan laal pad gaye. Jism mein ek ajeeb si garmi failne lagi …. thakaan se nahi, balki ek anjaani, sharmili tadap se.

Main chillaoon?

Lekin kya kahegi? Bheed itni tight thi ki chillane ka matlab bhi nahi tha. Log kehte, “Behenji, General dibba hai…”

Train ab poori raftaar mein thi. Bahar andhera gehra ho chuka tha. Dibbe ki lights dhundli pad chuki thi.

Sapna ab hil bhi nahi sakti thi. Woh pichhe khade us ladke ke sparsh ki qaidi ban chuki thi. Woh ladka ab aur himmati hota ja raha tha. Usne apne jism ko Sapna ki curvy peeth par aur gehra dhasana shuru kar diya tha.

Sapna chup-chaap khadi thi.

Aankhen band.

Honth jor se bandhe hue.

Par uske andar ek ladai shuru ho chuki thi ….maryada aur us anjaane ehsaas ke beech. Har ‘thak-thak’ ke saath woh ladai kamzor padti ja rahi thi….

Raat abhi shuru hui thi…

Aur Sapna ka safar ek anjaan samarpan ki taraf badh raha tha…….

To be Continued....​

 

[Royal Lover]

Pahla Update de diya hai to ab pdo aur maje kro

 

[AP 316]

Hello Every One,

Dekho bhai bahut dino bad ek story likhane ki koshish kar rha hoon, aur pahli bar adultery try kar rha hoon. Is story mein kya hoga mujhe khud nahi pta. Ye story long to nahi hai, lekin puri jarur likh li hai. To beech me adhora chhodne ka sawal hi nahi hai. Meri pahli koshish hai. Agar pasand na aaye to maaf kariyega. Agali story feedback ke hisab se likh dunga. Vaise, ye adult story hai, romance nahi hai. Ise pdiye aur feedbak jarur dijiye.

Update kal dunga :


To Bane Rahiye... Dhanywad

Congratulations Guruji on new story can't wait to read this Masterpiece

 

[JTN]

Congratulation on new story,
Jaisa writer sahab ne bataya ki story pahle hi poori likh chuke hai, bas timely update dete rahenge to story incomplete hone ka sawal hi nahi hai.
Vaise writer sahab maine yaha AP 316 bhai ka comment dekha, I am fan of his writing skill- WLHTA series.
Mujhe vishvas hai aapki story bhi mast hogi,
or feedback ke liye to yaha bade bade dhurandhar aa chuke hai.

 

[AP 316]

Vaise writer sahab maine yaha AP 316 bhai ka comment dekha, I am fan of his writing skill- WLHTA series.

Comment issliye kiya hai bhai kyunki ye Guruji hain humaare .13 saal se Forums par jaanta hun main inko ,godly writer toh woh hain he sath sath mere guide bhi hain suru mein mujhe bahot guide kiya inhone jab maine writing suru ki thi he's been with me ever since . Wlhta k kaafi parts likh chuke hain ye and also few major sex scenes meri story k inki help se he likhe hain maine . Story padhna jaruri he's a goated writer .

 

[JTN]

Comment issliye kiya hai bhai kyunki ye Guruji hain humaare .13 saal se Forums par jaanta hun main inko ,godly writer toh woh hain he sath sath mere guide bhi hain suru mein mujhe bahot guide kiya inhone jab maine writing suru ki thi he's been with me ever since . Wlhta k kaafi parts likh chuke hain ye and also few major sex scenes meri story k inki help se he likhe hain maine . Story padhna jaruri he's a goated writer .

Bhai jaise ye aapke guruji Aap hamare. Is forum ka chaska aap ki story se hi laga.
Jaisa aapne kaha ye WLHTA ke kaafi parts likh chuke hai to inki writing skill pe kuch sochne ka to ab sawal hi paida nahi hota.
Baki jaisi aapki aagya story bhi padenge or comment bhi karenge.

 

[Adirshi]

on new story ganna