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Subah kitne baje tak update aayega bhai
Main pichle 2 gante se Update Post karne ki koshish kar raha hu par Website bahut slow hai aur Update kaafi jada bada esliye Problem aa rahi hai

Pics Ya Gif add karne ki koshish kar raha hu toh error aane lag rahi hai
 
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ok bro, mene 1st part pad liya hai. Second jab complete hoga tab, start krunga.......nahi toh bohot se writers bich chod dete hai story ko. anyways good luck bhai
Meri baat ka galat matlab na samjhana par Writer Story esliye adhuri chor dete hai qki unhe Support nahi milta aur jaisi aapki soch hai unka Story chorna banta bhi hai Tujhe_Kya
 
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Update kab do ge bro morning to chala gaya afternoon aa gaya update kab do ge
Update kaafi jada bada hai esliye uske Correction aur Changes mein bahut adhik samay lag gaya

Par ab jaldi hi Post karunga lundbur123
 
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Previous Update on Page No. 📃 348

Update #19

Scene 🖼️ #03 & Scene 🖼️ #04
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Sundarpur Gaon k us sunsaan khandhar mein aaj meri Maa Maalti ki kamuk siskariyon ne use phir se jeevit kar diya tha aur unki ye kamuk aur hawas k ras mein dubi hui siskariya nikalne wala aur koi nahi apitu mere Tau ji ka beta yani Bhai aur meri Maa ka saga Bhatija.. Satyam hai

Yaha tak aap sabhi ne pada aur ananad liya

Par abhi bhi Maa aur Satyam ghar nahi pahuche hai, toh sawal ye hai ki kiya ye khel aaj k liye pura ho chuka hai.. Chaliye jante hai

Maalti us anokhe aur ajeeb se sapne k karan apne jism mein ek baar phir se wahi kamuk chitiya rengti hui mehsus karne lagi thi, par jaise taise wo apna kabu banaye rakhne ki bharkas koshish kar rahi thi.. Sayad wo nahi chahti thi ki Satyam ko uski yoni ki manodasha ka pata chale esliye wo khud ko jitna sambhav ho sakta tha samanya banaye hue thi

Par kamukta ki lehar kabhi bhi kisi k kabu mein rehne waali cheez nahi hai, ye toh inshan ko apne sath baha le jane mein yakeen rakhti hai.. Q sahi kaha na ?

Es samay agar gadi ki suniyon pe dhiyan diya jata toh sayad subha k 11.55 hone ko honge, yahi es kamuk din ka pehla pehar pura hi hone wala tha.. Aur din apne agle padav ki aur aage badne laga tha, waise abhi k liye barish ka haal kuch aisa tha maano nanhi nanhi bundhe hawa se ladti hui fuhar ka roop leke jameen ko chumne ki koshish kar rahi thi, par unmein itni taqat kaha jo wo esmein safal ho paati aur aise khushnuma par shaam jaise mausam mein dono Chachi Bhatije ghar ki aur kadam bada chuke thay.. Par sawal yahi hai ki kiya meri Maalti ghar pahuch payengi
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(Maa)Maalti aur Satyam un nanhi bondho k beech apne ghar ki aur kadam bada chuke thay, yani safar ki suruwat phir se ho chuki thi, aur jaldi hi dono us khandhar ko kaafi peeche chor k Gaon k hare bhare kheton k kinare kinare us kachi pakki sadak pe aage badne lage thay

Wahi bina Bra k hone k karan Maalti k halke bheege hue Blouse mein uske jamun jaise nipples ka aakar saaf saaf nazar aa raha tha

Par kismat se abhi tak unhe koi manushya nahi mila tha.. jo hamari Khubsurat Maalti ko aise avtaar mein dekh paata, par sawal ye tha ki kiya ghar tak ki ye Yatra itni hi saral hogi

Wahi Satyam.. Maalti k theek bagal mein chalte hue ek baar ko Maalti k tane hue nipples pe apni nazar daalta hai aur halke uchalte hue uske doodh dekh k uske chehre pe ek kamini si muskan khel jaati hai

Uski aankhon mein aayi wo chamak uski aankhon k aage wo drishya utpann karne lagti hai jab usne jaan k Maalti ki Bra ko wahi us Khandhar mein usi jagah rakh diya tha jaha se use wo Chatai aur lalten mili thi

Maano jaise wo us Bra k dwara us Khandhar mein jaane waale agle vyakti ko batana cha raha ho ki wo Bra es baat ki nishani hai ki usne waha ek aurat ko nanga kiya tha.. aur ye kaam usne tab kiya tha jab Maalti us ajeeb se sapne mein khoyi hui thi


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Esi din Sundarpur Gaon mein subha k kareeb 8.30 pe

“Subha subha kaha chal diye.. Mausam ka haal toh dekh lijiye kahi jane se pehle”
Apne Pati ko subha subha ghar se bahar jane ki tayyari karte hue dekh, uski bhare jism waali Patni use tokte hue
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“Kitni baar kaha hai, jab kahi bahar jane wala rahu toh toka mat karo, pata hai na kitna bada apshagun hota hai”
Aadmi jo bahar jane ko puri tarah tayyar ho chuka tha, wo apni Patni ki baat sunkar buri tarah khiskiya sa gaya tha.. Aur apne daat pesste hue apni baat kehta hai

Uski Patni bura sa munh banate hue
“Are main toh bas ye keh rahi thi ki aise mausam mein bahar jane ki kiya hi jarurat hai ?”

Aadmi aangan mein ek aur pade apne jute pehente hue, jinhe dekh hi lag raha tha ki wo kaafi achi keemat deke liye gaye honge aur aise jute Sundarpur gaon mein har kisi k pass hona itna asan nahi tha
“Mandir ja raha hu.. phir soch raha hu waha se kheton ki aur nazar saudha lunga

Suna hai wo kaamchor buddha pura din daru k theke pe pada rehta hai, aise toh wo tharki buddha sare khet barbad kar dega.. aaj Jake saale ki Maa chodta hu"

Apne Pati ki baat pe uski Dharampatni aise has padti hai maano khud apne Pati ki baat pe kataska sa kar rahi ho

Par uska Pati uski aur dhiyan diye bina aage bolta jaata hai.. par aise jaise koi badi rahasya ki baat bolne ja raha ho
"Uske baad hume Thakur Sahab k jungle waale adde par bhi chalna hai.. tayyar rehna”

Aurat apne Pati ki baat sunkar ha mein sar hilati hai par tabhi use Mandir waali baat yaad aa jati hai jispe use maano abhi tak yakeen nahi ho pa raha tha
“Waise.. Aap aur Mandir.. ?”

“Duniya ko dikhana bhi hota hai, warna tum toh mujhe janti hi ho..”
Aadmi apni baat kehte hue has padta hai aur jaldi hi wo ghar se bahar nikal chuka tha, wahi uski patni aangan mein hi padi ek charpai ki aur badti hai aur agle hi pal uspe puri tarah pasar si jaati hai aur uper aasman ki aur dekhte hue
“Hmm.. aaj phir Thakur Sahab ka wahi khel hoga..”


Wo aurat laite laite uper aasman ki aur dekhti hai jaha badalon ka rang badalna suru ho chuka tha, aur aisa lag raha tha jaise kaali chaya chaati ja rahi ho.. Charpai pe laiti hui wo aurat ek lambi saans chorte hue
“Na jane aaj kaunsa tufan aane wala hai’

Phir kuch sochte hue wo man hi man muskura padti hai aur apni dhili dhali maxi.. Jo gaon mein sayad hi koi dusri stree pehenti hogi, uske uper se hi apni yoni k stan pe apni ungliyon ko ragadte hue
“Baal bahut bade ho gaye hai.. Saaf karne honge”


Edhar uska pati Gaon k usi mandir ki aur chal padta hai, jaha Maalti aage bad rahi thi aur gauriya waha se wapas laut rahi thi..

Es rahasmay aadmi ko yahi chor k hum wapas Maalti aur Satyam k pass laut chalte hai..


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