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UPDATE - 65
Deva – ye bhi thik hae. ab tu badi ho gayi hae aur samajhdar bhi.
Shalaka - A hello mae shuru se samajhdar hu. Aap hi nahi mante wo alag baat hae. itne salo tak tilism nagri aur nag lok dono ka dhyan akele rakha hae. halke ma mat lena mere ko. jakar dekhna jara kitne chhed ho chuke hae tumhare suraksha kavach me waha par. Maene hi smbhala hae sab wo bhi akele.
Deva – galti ho gayi meri maa tu hum sab se jyada bahadur hae hum to paani kam chaay hi hae. ab jao aur ha………..
Shalaka – …….. pata hae ghar ka aur ghar walo ka dhyan rakhugi. Ab jao tum log.
Fir deva apne kamre me jata hae aur rudra aur nilam bhi apne kamre me aakar taiyar ho jate hae fir deva neeche aata hae aur rudra aur nilam ke saath RR me nikalta hae poonam ke ghar.
Deva – rudra chal aaj tujhe apni nayi suasural le chalta hu.
Rudra – abe kitni sasural banai hae tune yaha? Pahle to tu bahut sharmila tha is janam me kya tujhe bhi 16000 raniya banana hae kya khud ko Krishna ji na samajh liyo kahi. Kytu ki Ek to wo haweli teri sasural hae ek poonam se shadi karne ja raha hae. aur kaun kaun hae.
Deva – kitna bhonkta hae be. poonam ke ghar ki hi baat kar raha hu. Meri ye sasural tune kaha dekhi hae? chal wahi chalte hae.
Rudra – aesa bol na mae to dar hi gaya tha bhai.
Fir wo log poonam ke ghar aa jate hae. aur sab log gadi se utar ke andar jate hae jaha padma bhi baethi thi aur shalaka aur poonam to unhi ka intjar kar rahi thi.
Deva – Namaste kaki kaesi ho?
Padma – mae thik hu beta ye log kaun hae?
Deva – kaki ye mera dost rudra hae dost kya yu samjho bhai hae. shahar me rahta hae. aur ye iski mangetar hae nilam ….. aur rudra ye hae padma kaki poonam ki maa.
Rudra aur nilam aage bad ke padma ke paer chute hae.
Deva – kaki hum log jara shahar tak ja rahe hae.poonam ko saath lekar
Padma - jao beta jaldi aana.
Deva – ha kaki hum aa jayege jaldi aap chinta mat karo
Fir charo gadi me baeth kar nikal jate hae shahar ki taraf rudra aur deva aage baethe the poonam aur nilam peeche.
Nilam – deva bhaiya kaha le chaloge hame?
Deva – jaha tum log chaho mae to yu hi le aaya.
Poonam – dev pahle shoping karege fir kisi hotel me chal ke khana khayege aur fir kisi garden me chalege.
Deva – jo hokum rajkumari.
Sab isi tarah haste bate karte hue. Chale ja rahe the. Tabhi samne se ek van teji se inhe cross karti hui nikalti hae jisme se kisi ladki ke rone ki awaje aa rahi thi. Aur kuchh second ke liye deva aur rudra ki najar bhi van me haath pair marti ladki pe gayi. Dev aur rudra ki najre mili aur dev ne jor se brake maar di aur steering poora ghuma diya gadi skid hoti hui aage tak gayi lekin wapas gaanv ki disha me palat gayi. Dev ne fir se gear down kiye aur poori speed me gadi ko van ke peeche laga diya.
Kuch hi minut me deva ki RR van ke bagal me pahuch gayi to rudra ne teji se apne side ka gate khola aur RR ke upar pahuch kar seedhe jump maar di van ke upar. Aur fir chat pe let kar haath neeche badaya aur driver ka gala daboch liya. Driver is hamle ke liye taiyar nahi tha uski van unbalance hone lagi to usne bhi gadi me brake maare aur gadi sadak se neeche hoti hui bagal ke khet me ghus kar ruk gayi.
Idhar dev ne bhi gadi tok di. aur bahar aa gaya. Waha van se 5 log nikle. Rudra bhi chhat se kood ke neeche utar aaya.
A1 - kya hae be marna hae kya. Is tarah hame rokne ki galti kaese kar di.
Rudra – abe sale ladies khadi hae nahi to apni bhasha me tujhe batata ki tujhe kyu roka hae. tu ye bata is kanya ko kaha le ja rahe ho.
A1 – chal ja be nikal tujhe kya karna hum ise kahi se bhi laye kahi bhi le jaye nikalo tum log waese bhi tum logo ki harkat to hae nahi jinda chhodne wali par abhi hame ye ladki chahiye isliye tum log ko baad me dekhege.
Rudra – waah mere shoor veer bad me dekhega. Abe abhi andha hua pada hae kya abhi dekh na.
Itne me sabne hathiyar nikal liye. Kisi ne chaku to kisi ne revolver.
Ye dekhte hi dev ne nilam poonam aur us ladki ko shield cover de diya. aur rudra ke bagal me khada ho gaya.
Deva – aaj to 3 mere 2 tere rudra.
Rudra – abhi sabji bhaji hae kya teen tere do mere. Bada aaya. Sala gadi ki chat pe mae gaya inhe maene roka. 3 to mae hi luga chahiye to 2 le le varna wo bhi nahi duga.
Deva – tu nahi sudhrega. Chal mani teri baat lekin revolver wale dono mere
Rudra – bhai aesi kya dushmani hae ek to de do revolver wala
Deva – nahi ye baat to tujhe meri manni hi hogi in dono me se koi nahi milega.
Rudra sada sa mooh bana ke – thik hae ja le le revolver wale mae chaku walo se kaam chala luga. Par mere teeno me se kisi ko ungli bhi nahi lagana
Deva – done
A1 – abe kya baat kar rahe ho be.
Rudra – tu nahi samjhega bachhe aaja
Teeno chaku wale in par hamla kar dete hae. to deva kood ke revolver walo ke pas jata hae. aur rudra un teeno ko sambhalne lagta hae. un teeno ne rudra ko gher liya aur us par ek saath war kiya. To rudra ne do ke hath pakad liye aur teesre ko ek kick mari jisse wo apne chaku samet kafi door tak ludakta chala gaya. Rudra ne fir se apne pas wale ek ka haath ghuma ke tod diya aur use bhi chhod diya bacha ek to rudra ne uska hath apne kandhe pe lakar ek jhatka diya jisse uska bhi chaku wala hath gaya kam se fir rudra ne use laat ghuso pe rakh liya.
Idhar deva ke samne dono revolver wale khade the jisme se ek ne dev ape fire kiya to deva ne ek side ho kar uski goli ko nikala aur neeche baeth kar apni tang ghuma di. Jo seedhe uske lund e lagi aur wo wahi lund pakad ke beth gaya. Itne me dusre ne deva pe lagatar fire kiye to deva jameen pe role hota hua uski har goli ko maat deta hua nikla. Aur back hand jamup lekar jhatke se apne paero pe aaya. Aur ek flying kick use bhi di jo uske thobde ka naksha bigadne ke liye kafi thi.
Udhar rudra ne palat kar us door gaye hue gunde ki taraf dekha to wo apna chaku rudra ki taraf fenk chuka tha rudra ne jhatke se hath aage kiya aur chaku ko hawa me hi pakad liya apni dono ungliyo se aur use wahi fenk diya itne me us aadmi ne doud kar van se hocky nikali aur rudra ki taraf aaya. Aur ek jordar war rudra ke sir pe karna chaha lekin rudra ne hocky ko hawa me rok kar us par apna punch mara to hocky bhi do tukdo me toot gayi . fir rudra ne us bache hue gunde ko bhi apne punches se sula diya Idhar deva bhi apne wale dono aadmiyo ko adhmara kar chukka tha.
Sabhi neeche jameen pe pade karah rahe the.
Deva – ab bolo bachho batao kaun ho tum log.
A1- tumne thik nahi kiya. Hamara boss tumhe chhodega nahi. Ye ladki hamare boss ke liye bahot jaruri hae. agar apni jaan ki salamti chahte ho to hame jane do.
Rudra – tum logo se hame koi matlab nahi lekin tere jaeso ki dhamkiya sunne ke liye hum log nahi aaye hae yaha. Tere boss ka naam bata. Use hum khud samajh lege. Wo kya hame nahi chhodega hum hi use pakad lege.
A1 – shahar me hamare boss ka bahot bada gang hae. wo tumhe chhodega nahi. Abhi bhi waqt hae. ye ladki hame do aur nikal jao. Ye bol bachhan kisi kam nahi aane wale tum logo ke hamare boss ki pahuch upar tak hae.
Rudra - tu hamari chinta kyu kar raha hae be tere jija lagte hae kya hum. Tum log jao aur apne boss se kah do ke suryagad ke rudra aur dev ne tumahri ye halat ki hae. agar usme dam hae to ukhad le jo ukhad sakta ahe. Hum bhi dekhte hae kya kar leta hae wo tera boss. Chal bhag yaha se ab. Bada aaya upar tak ki pahuch wala sale hamari pahuch sun bhi li na to fat jayegi teri yahi moot dega.
Sare gunde jaese tease gadi me baeth kar waha se nikal jate hae.
Deva – ye bhi thik hae. ab tu badi ho gayi hae aur samajhdar bhi.
Shalaka - A hello mae shuru se samajhdar hu. Aap hi nahi mante wo alag baat hae. itne salo tak tilism nagri aur nag lok dono ka dhyan akele rakha hae. halke ma mat lena mere ko. jakar dekhna jara kitne chhed ho chuke hae tumhare suraksha kavach me waha par. Maene hi smbhala hae sab wo bhi akele.
Deva – galti ho gayi meri maa tu hum sab se jyada bahadur hae hum to paani kam chaay hi hae. ab jao aur ha………..
Shalaka – …….. pata hae ghar ka aur ghar walo ka dhyan rakhugi. Ab jao tum log.
Fir deva apne kamre me jata hae aur rudra aur nilam bhi apne kamre me aakar taiyar ho jate hae fir deva neeche aata hae aur rudra aur nilam ke saath RR me nikalta hae poonam ke ghar.
Deva – rudra chal aaj tujhe apni nayi suasural le chalta hu.
Rudra – abe kitni sasural banai hae tune yaha? Pahle to tu bahut sharmila tha is janam me kya tujhe bhi 16000 raniya banana hae kya khud ko Krishna ji na samajh liyo kahi. Kytu ki Ek to wo haweli teri sasural hae ek poonam se shadi karne ja raha hae. aur kaun kaun hae.
Deva – kitna bhonkta hae be. poonam ke ghar ki hi baat kar raha hu. Meri ye sasural tune kaha dekhi hae? chal wahi chalte hae.
Rudra – aesa bol na mae to dar hi gaya tha bhai.
Fir wo log poonam ke ghar aa jate hae. aur sab log gadi se utar ke andar jate hae jaha padma bhi baethi thi aur shalaka aur poonam to unhi ka intjar kar rahi thi.
Deva – Namaste kaki kaesi ho?
Padma – mae thik hu beta ye log kaun hae?
Deva – kaki ye mera dost rudra hae dost kya yu samjho bhai hae. shahar me rahta hae. aur ye iski mangetar hae nilam ….. aur rudra ye hae padma kaki poonam ki maa.
Rudra aur nilam aage bad ke padma ke paer chute hae.
Deva – kaki hum log jara shahar tak ja rahe hae.poonam ko saath lekar
Padma - jao beta jaldi aana.
Deva – ha kaki hum aa jayege jaldi aap chinta mat karo
Fir charo gadi me baeth kar nikal jate hae shahar ki taraf rudra aur deva aage baethe the poonam aur nilam peeche.
Nilam – deva bhaiya kaha le chaloge hame?
Deva – jaha tum log chaho mae to yu hi le aaya.
Poonam – dev pahle shoping karege fir kisi hotel me chal ke khana khayege aur fir kisi garden me chalege.
Deva – jo hokum rajkumari.
Sab isi tarah haste bate karte hue. Chale ja rahe the. Tabhi samne se ek van teji se inhe cross karti hui nikalti hae jisme se kisi ladki ke rone ki awaje aa rahi thi. Aur kuchh second ke liye deva aur rudra ki najar bhi van me haath pair marti ladki pe gayi. Dev aur rudra ki najre mili aur dev ne jor se brake maar di aur steering poora ghuma diya gadi skid hoti hui aage tak gayi lekin wapas gaanv ki disha me palat gayi. Dev ne fir se gear down kiye aur poori speed me gadi ko van ke peeche laga diya.
Kuch hi minut me deva ki RR van ke bagal me pahuch gayi to rudra ne teji se apne side ka gate khola aur RR ke upar pahuch kar seedhe jump maar di van ke upar. Aur fir chat pe let kar haath neeche badaya aur driver ka gala daboch liya. Driver is hamle ke liye taiyar nahi tha uski van unbalance hone lagi to usne bhi gadi me brake maare aur gadi sadak se neeche hoti hui bagal ke khet me ghus kar ruk gayi.
Idhar dev ne bhi gadi tok di. aur bahar aa gaya. Waha van se 5 log nikle. Rudra bhi chhat se kood ke neeche utar aaya.
A1 - kya hae be marna hae kya. Is tarah hame rokne ki galti kaese kar di.
Rudra – abe sale ladies khadi hae nahi to apni bhasha me tujhe batata ki tujhe kyu roka hae. tu ye bata is kanya ko kaha le ja rahe ho.
A1 – chal ja be nikal tujhe kya karna hum ise kahi se bhi laye kahi bhi le jaye nikalo tum log waese bhi tum logo ki harkat to hae nahi jinda chhodne wali par abhi hame ye ladki chahiye isliye tum log ko baad me dekhege.
Rudra – waah mere shoor veer bad me dekhega. Abe abhi andha hua pada hae kya abhi dekh na.
Itne me sabne hathiyar nikal liye. Kisi ne chaku to kisi ne revolver.
Ye dekhte hi dev ne nilam poonam aur us ladki ko shield cover de diya. aur rudra ke bagal me khada ho gaya.
Deva – aaj to 3 mere 2 tere rudra.
Rudra – abhi sabji bhaji hae kya teen tere do mere. Bada aaya. Sala gadi ki chat pe mae gaya inhe maene roka. 3 to mae hi luga chahiye to 2 le le varna wo bhi nahi duga.
Deva – tu nahi sudhrega. Chal mani teri baat lekin revolver wale dono mere
Rudra – bhai aesi kya dushmani hae ek to de do revolver wala
Deva – nahi ye baat to tujhe meri manni hi hogi in dono me se koi nahi milega.
Rudra sada sa mooh bana ke – thik hae ja le le revolver wale mae chaku walo se kaam chala luga. Par mere teeno me se kisi ko ungli bhi nahi lagana
Deva – done
A1 – abe kya baat kar rahe ho be.
Rudra – tu nahi samjhega bachhe aaja
Teeno chaku wale in par hamla kar dete hae. to deva kood ke revolver walo ke pas jata hae. aur rudra un teeno ko sambhalne lagta hae. un teeno ne rudra ko gher liya aur us par ek saath war kiya. To rudra ne do ke hath pakad liye aur teesre ko ek kick mari jisse wo apne chaku samet kafi door tak ludakta chala gaya. Rudra ne fir se apne pas wale ek ka haath ghuma ke tod diya aur use bhi chhod diya bacha ek to rudra ne uska hath apne kandhe pe lakar ek jhatka diya jisse uska bhi chaku wala hath gaya kam se fir rudra ne use laat ghuso pe rakh liya.
Idhar deva ke samne dono revolver wale khade the jisme se ek ne dev ape fire kiya to deva ne ek side ho kar uski goli ko nikala aur neeche baeth kar apni tang ghuma di. Jo seedhe uske lund e lagi aur wo wahi lund pakad ke beth gaya. Itne me dusre ne deva pe lagatar fire kiye to deva jameen pe role hota hua uski har goli ko maat deta hua nikla. Aur back hand jamup lekar jhatke se apne paero pe aaya. Aur ek flying kick use bhi di jo uske thobde ka naksha bigadne ke liye kafi thi.
Udhar rudra ne palat kar us door gaye hue gunde ki taraf dekha to wo apna chaku rudra ki taraf fenk chuka tha rudra ne jhatke se hath aage kiya aur chaku ko hawa me hi pakad liya apni dono ungliyo se aur use wahi fenk diya itne me us aadmi ne doud kar van se hocky nikali aur rudra ki taraf aaya. Aur ek jordar war rudra ke sir pe karna chaha lekin rudra ne hocky ko hawa me rok kar us par apna punch mara to hocky bhi do tukdo me toot gayi . fir rudra ne us bache hue gunde ko bhi apne punches se sula diya Idhar deva bhi apne wale dono aadmiyo ko adhmara kar chukka tha.
Sabhi neeche jameen pe pade karah rahe the.
Deva – ab bolo bachho batao kaun ho tum log.
A1- tumne thik nahi kiya. Hamara boss tumhe chhodega nahi. Ye ladki hamare boss ke liye bahot jaruri hae. agar apni jaan ki salamti chahte ho to hame jane do.
Rudra – tum logo se hame koi matlab nahi lekin tere jaeso ki dhamkiya sunne ke liye hum log nahi aaye hae yaha. Tere boss ka naam bata. Use hum khud samajh lege. Wo kya hame nahi chhodega hum hi use pakad lege.
A1 – shahar me hamare boss ka bahot bada gang hae. wo tumhe chhodega nahi. Abhi bhi waqt hae. ye ladki hame do aur nikal jao. Ye bol bachhan kisi kam nahi aane wale tum logo ke hamare boss ki pahuch upar tak hae.
Rudra - tu hamari chinta kyu kar raha hae be tere jija lagte hae kya hum. Tum log jao aur apne boss se kah do ke suryagad ke rudra aur dev ne tumahri ye halat ki hae. agar usme dam hae to ukhad le jo ukhad sakta ahe. Hum bhi dekhte hae kya kar leta hae wo tera boss. Chal bhag yaha se ab. Bada aaya upar tak ki pahuch wala sale hamari pahuch sun bhi li na to fat jayegi teri yahi moot dega.
Sare gunde jaese tease gadi me baeth kar waha se nikal jate hae.
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Mast update h bhai
Maza aa gya
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Super fantastic update bhai
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Nokjhonk achchhi rahi jija-saali and doston ke darmiyaan
Yeh banda kahin thakur ke usi bete ke saathi ka toh nahin na jiske saath milkar woh jail se bhaaga tha?
Yeh banda kahin thakur ke usi bete ke saathi ka toh nahin na jiske saath milkar woh jail se bhaaga tha?
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Superb Update Bro...
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Bhai maja aa gaya.shalaka bhi ab bari ho gai hai.Uska bhi jugar laga do. Gunde to thakur ke dost ke hi aadami malum parate hain. Waiting for next update.
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Romanchkari shabdo se likhi gai ek aur anmol rachnakriti laaye hai bandhu.