Fantasy इच्छाधारी देव

[Thakur008]

aane wale updates me aap log ke sath shuru hoga dev and team ka wahi adventure trip Jiska jikra kai baar ho chuka hae aur jiska intjar bhi besabri se tha. to naye safar pe chalne ko taiyar ho jaiye ye safar ek aesa safar hoga jo aap logo ne ab tak kisi story me nahi padha hoga. kyu ki is adventure trip ko maene kai bar likha mitaya fir se likha aur apni koshish ki hae ki ise behtar nahi behtareen banau aur jo vaada aap logo se kiya tha ke ye safar aap logo ko full maja dega. wahi maja aur intrest aap logo ko mile hamne ye safar abhi poora to nahi likha hae lekin is ki shuruat aur iska plan bahot dino se ban raha tha mind me aur ab wo samay aa gaya hae ke is lock down ke time me dev apne sathiyo ke saath is adventure toor pe aapko le ja sakta hae. to taiyr ho jaiye is romanchank aur khatarnak safar ke liye. apni raay jaroor dete rahiyega jo ke is safar ko aur romanchak banaye.

seee you friends be safe bye

Lagta h dhamal hone wala h story me mjaa aaye ga bhai
Hum to bahut time se intezaar krr rhe h ki kaab adventure trip aaye ga

Waiting for adventure trip .......

 

[Boby]

Good going but aap beech beech mein kayi dafa Deva ke is janm ke mata pita ke antarang palon ko dikha rahe hain aur woh tab jab Deva kahin aaspaas hota hai that means kahin Deva aur uski maa ke beech relationship toh nahin banne wala na jaisa Deva ka uski bhabhi ke saath hai
Aur ab Deva and team ka safar shur'u ho chuka hai dekhte hain is safar mein kya kya sawal aayenge inke samne aur yeh kaise unka jawaab dhundhenge....

Thanks akil bhai for your wonderful review baki aap ke sawalo ke jawab to story ke aane wale update hi dege aur aapko achha bhi usi me lagega plz yu hi sath bane rahiye thank you

 

[Boby]

Nice update

Thank you krish ji

 

[Boby]

nice update bro

Thanks ragish bhai

 

[Boby]

Awsum fantastic superb update

Thanks shanu

 

[Boby]

Bhai safar ka maza to tab hi ayega jb thoda jaldi jaldi update mile ek update ke bad itna lmba gap ho jata hai ki purane update ka matter hi dhyan se utar jata hai so plz agr ho sake to

Bhai hum weekly 2 se 3 hi update de pate hae hame is lock down m
e bhi fursat nahi milti. Uske liye hum mafi chahte hae . Lekin koshish karege ke update dene ki speed badha sake jisse aap sab ko jyada wait na karna pade.

Thanks for your review bhai sath bane rahiye

 

[Boby]

Nice update bhai waiting for next update

Thanks for your response bhai next update shayad kal aa jayega

 

[Boby]

Hasi khushi Jyoti ki sadi ho gyi jo sirf logo ke liye hai suhagraat to Pahle hi Mna chuki
Gurum shalaka Nagarjun or bde bhaiya Charo milkr plan bnayenge kaise Deva ki maskhari leni hai raat me Jyoti ke lanhga to dikhana jara ham bhi to dekhe Aakhir kya khas baat hai us lahge me Jisse yadgar sadi ho jayegi mera mtlb Jyoti ka pic dal dena bhai ek
To agle din 4ro ko nikalna hai ek anjane safar me dekhte hai kya kya drisya dikhati hai kudrat hme jb ham lok kalyan ke liye apna kadam bdhate hai

Superb update with awesome writing skill Bhai
Sabhi pahluo ka tarika se dhyan rakha hai aapne

aalu bhai thoda apni najar yaha pr bhi daliye

Thank you very much bhai for your beautiful review hamari writing ki tareef ke liye bhi aapka dhanyavaad. Lekin shayad ab bhi hamari story me kuchh kami hae kyu ke hum aapki intresting story list me shamil nahi hae. Well hum koshish karege ke hamari skill aur badhe. Yu hi sath bane rahiye. Adventure trip bas shuru hi hone wala hae to uska maja lijiye lekin usse pahle jaisa ke aapne hi kaha thoda sa garam mahoul aur chhed chhad to banti hae kyu ke us safar me sex bas na ke barabar hi milega to yaha se nikalne se pahle ek bar to maja karna banta hae.
Milte hae kal hi next update me

 

[Boby]

are bhai aap bulaye aur hum chale aaye... updates toh iske dher saare ho gaye hain.... padhte hain... ... tab tak aap enjoy kijiye...

Aalu bhai thanks and welcome in my thread

 

[Boby]

दोस्तो आप सबका बहोत बहोत धन्यवाद क्यों कि आप सब के सहयोग से हमारी पहली ही स्टोरी के 300 पेज पूरे हुए है। जिन्होंने अपने अपने रिव्यू दिए उनका भी धन्यवाद और जो साइलेन्ट रीडर है उनका भी धन्यवाद। आप सब अपना सहयोग और साथ इसी तरह बनाये रखियेगा। क्यों कि ये स्टोरी हुम् अधूरी नही छोड़ने वाले।