Fantasy इच्छाधारी देव

[Vickey1211]

UPDATE - 50



Deva – par…….marne ki itni bhi kya jaldi hae? waese maene tumahre sare sawalo ke jawab de diye tum ne mere ek chhote se sawal ka jawab nahi diya, jabki gun bhi mere hatho me hae



Gurum - mae yaha andhere me baetha tumhe hi yad kar raha tha. Matlab tumahre Vishay me hi soch raha tha. Ke aakhir wo kaun sa aadmi hoga jise marne ke liye thakur ne 25 aadmi bulwaye ? kya wo itna taqatwar hoga? Aur aaj ek hi din me tumne hamare 15 aadmi mar diye to mae usi bare me soch raha tha. Achha hua tum aa hi gaye.



Deva – tumhe apne dosto wale showk nahi hae kya? Andar itna rangeen mahoul chhod ke yaha bahar andhere me baethe the.



Gurum – mae sharab aur shabab dono ka istemal karta hu lekin marji se jabardasti na mujhe kisi ki pasand hae na mae kisi par karna pasand karta hu. Andar jo aurte aur ladkiya hae wo sab jabardasti uthayi hui hae. aur ye baat mujhe pasand nahi.



Deva – aesa hae to tumhe un ki madad karni thi apne gunde sathiyo se unhe bachana tha.



Gurum – wo thakur ne uthwayi hae mere sathiyo ne nahi. Aur thakur ne hame yaha tumhe marne ke liye bulwaya hae. mae usse abhi nahi lad sakta. Ye dhandhe ke khilaf hoga.



Deva – aur kisi ki supari lena pasand hae? kisi ka khoon karna pasand hae ?



Gurum – tumse maene pahle bhi kaha ke mujhe goli maar do mae nahi darta mout se. lekin sach ye hae ke mae yaha paese ke liye hi aaya tha bas bina tumahri galti jaane mae tumhe marne wala tha nahi. Jab ye sab sale mar jate to mae ye kah kar nikal jata ke sare log mare gaye akela mere bas ka nahi mere paese do mae ja raha hu. Aur fir ek baar tumse milta jaroor asliyat janne ke liye aur fir chala jata.



Deva – aur agar galti meri hi nikal aaye abhi to? Maan lo maene thakur ko pareshan kiya hae jis wajah se wo mujhe marwane ke liye aadmi ikatthe kar chuka hae to?



Gurum – samasya yahi hae. agar galti tumhari hoti to mae tumhe marne ki poori koshish karta. Aur yakeen mano aaj tak maene kisi begunah ki hatya nahi ki. Kisi aurat par julm nahi kiya, kisi masoom bachhe ko anath nahi hone diya. agar tum galat hote to mae tumhe marne ki koshish jaroor karta. Uske liye mujhe kisi saathi ki jarurat nahi wo mae ab bhi kar sakta hu.



Deva – tumhe lagta hae ke tum mujhe maar sakte ho?



Gurum - maene KOSHISH shabd ka istemal kiya hae bhulo mat.



Deva – mujhe tumse yahi sab janna tha. Tumhe marna hota to itni der nahi lagata. Tum chaho to mere saath rah sakte ho. Paese ki koi dikkat nahi hogi. Aur ha usool mere bhi tumahre jaese hi hae. to tumhe koi takleef nahi hogi. Lekin agar tum jana chaho to ja sakte ho.



Gurum muskra ke – gun point pe baat karte ho aur saath rahne ko bhi kahte ho?



apne hath ki gun fenk deta hae aur kamar me lagi gun bhi nikal fenkta hae. gurum bade dhyan se deva ki har harkat dekh raha tha.



Deva – ab? Mere pas koi gun nahi. Na hatho me na hi mere kisi jeb me. Ha tumhari kamar me jaroor hae. ab kya vichar hae?



Gurum – mae tumhe marne aaya tha. Tumhe marne ke hi paese milne hae mujhe. Tumhe itna yakeen kyu hae ke mae tumahre saath rah kar tumhe maaruga nahi?



Deva – mujhe insane ki pahchan hae gurum. Baki tumhari marji.



Tabhi waha sab log aa jate hae. shalaka, poonam, nagarjun, aur sari ladies. Aur akhiri ki baate sab ne suni thi.



Gurum - tumahra naam kya hae?



Deva – mera nam deva hae mae yahi rahta hu. Ye teeno mere hi saathi hae. jisme se ye meri hone wali biwi poonam hae.



Gurum – mae sab samajh gaya ab mujhe koi shaq nahi ke tum ek sahi insane ho. Galat wo sala thakur hi hae.



Deva – aesa kyu?



Gurum – jis kam me tumahre dost aur khud tumhari hone wali biwi shamil hae, jinhone itni aurato ki ijjat ke saath unki jindagi bhi bachai andar itni firng ke baad bhi sari ladies ko surakshit le kar aa gaye wo log galat nahi ho sakte. Mujhe tumahre saath kam kar ke khushi hogi.



Gurum deva ki taraf hath bada deta hae to deva bhi turant use se haath mila leta hae.



Gurum - lekin deva mae inhe { poonam ki tarfa ishara kar ke } abhi se bhabhi hi kahuga. Bhale hi ye abhi tak tumhari biwi nahi bani.



Deva – fir to gadbad ho jayegi yar. Tab to tumhari bhabhiyo ki ginti badi lambi hone wali hae.



Sab hasne lagte hae. aur fir deva aur sab gadiyo ke paas aate hae. itne me deva un me se teen ladkiyo ke sir pe hath ferta hae jo nagarjun ke saath ja rahi thi.



Deva – Jao aur khush rahna koi chinta mat karna ab sab thik hae. gurum tum aur nagarjun do gadiya le lo aur jo aas paas ki ladies ho unhe chhod do in gundo ki gadiya yaha khadi hi hae.



Nagarjun - fir bhi do ladkiya bach rahi hae deva.



Deva – mae inhe janta hu ye isi gaanv ki hae to inhe hum le jate hae. tum log niklo aur ye kaam poora kar ke tum dono ghar aa jana



Fir deva, shalaka, poonam aur do ladkiya RR me baeth kar gaanv ki taraf nikal jate hae. is waqt koi 11 baj rahe the. Deva ne un do ladkiyo ko unke ghar ke samne utara aur…….......

…………..Tum dono ab jao apne ghar. Deva ne unse kaha



Ladkiya – lekin bhaiya hamari jindagi to barbad kar di na un logo ne, hamari ijjat loot kar.



Dev gadi se utra aur unke sir pe hath fer diya………….



Deva - apni jindagi naye tareeke se shuru karo kuch nahi hua tum logo ko. Ye baat tum logo ko bhi samajh me aa jayegi. Jab tum logo khud ko dekhogi to.



Ladkiya kuch samajh nahi paa rahi thi. Lekin wo log apne gharo ki taraf badne lagi to deva ne poonam ko ishara kiya jise samajh kar poonam gadi se utar kar unke saath un ke ghar me gayi is waqt wo ek saree me thi.



Poonam ne darwaja khat khataya to andar se ek aadmi ne darwaja khola. Aur samne apni dono betiyo ko dekh kar khush ho gaya.



Aadmi – are aa gayi beti tum log badi der kar di?



Ladkiya – haeran rah gayi ke hamare baap ko to rona chahiye ye kya baat kar raha hae.



Aadmi – are beta haeran kyu ho rahi ho aao andar aao.



Wo dono Ladkiya aur poonam andar aate hae to



Aadmi – beta deva kal aaya tha. Aur usne kaha tha ke tum inke saath (poonam) shahar gayi ho apne collage ke bare me baat karne aur waha se inke kisi rishtedar ke pas jaogi isliye kal tak aogi. Mujhe to dar lagne laga tha lekin jab deva ne ye sab aakar kaha to rahat mili.



Dono ladkiyo ne haeran ho kar poonam ko dekha to poonam ne use aankh se chup rahne ka ishara kiya.



Poonam – kaka ab mae chalti hu. Bas inhe chhodne aayi thi.



Aadmi – are beta raat ko tum akeli kaese ?



Poonam - akeli kaha kaka bahar dev hae na usi ki gadi me to aaye hae hum sab



Aadmi – kya deva aaya hae to bahar kyu khada hae use andar bula lo.



Poonam – abhi nahi kaka waese bhi kafi raat ho gayi hae. to fir kabhi aayege. Abhi mae chalti hu. Ghar pe sab raah dekh rahe hoge.



Poonam bahar aati hae aur palatkar - are ek minut suno jara, poonam un dono ladkiyo ko bulati hae.



Ladki – ji didi?



Poonam apni jeb se do chhoti chhoti pani ki bottle nikal ke unhe deti hae jo real me pani hi tha aur kuchh nahi



Poonam – ye jaldi se pee lo dono



Dono ladkiya ek duje ko dekhti hae aur poonam se pani le kar pi jati hae.



L – ye kya tha didi?



Poonam – isme maene ek khas jadi buti milayi thi. ab tum dono fir se kuwari ho chuki ho. Isiliye chinta chhod do. Aur jakar aaram karo. Ye man lo ke ek bura sapna tha jo khatam ho gaya. Jao apna dhyan rakhna .



Dono ladkiyo ke aansu nikal aate hae aur dono hi poonam se lipat jati hae. – thank you didi. Hamara kunwarapan hame wapas kar ke aapne hum par aur hamare maa bap par bahot bada ahsan kiya hae jise hum kabhi nahi chukka payege apni jaan de kar bhi nahi. Yahi to hum gareebo ka gahna hota hae hamari ijaat. Thank you so much didi thank you.



Poonam – bas ab chup ho jao. Ab mae chalti hu kabhi koi bhi kam ho to bejhijhak mere pas aa jana.



Fir poonam waha se nikal aati hae. aur aakar gadi me baeth jati hae. aur deva gadi bada deta hae



Poonam – dev aapne inhe kab bataya ke ye ladkiya shahar mere saath gayi hae?



Deva – jaese hi inka apaharan hua tha usi samay.



Poonam - aesa tha to aapne apharan hone kyu diya?



Deva – kuch baate bahot gahri hoti hae poonam isliye har baat ki tah me mat jao. Jo hua wo jaroori tha. Inke bhagya me yahi tha na. aur mae khud kuch nahi karta jaesa aadesh milta hae waesa hi karta hu. Ahr insan ke kuchh pichhle karm hote hae jiska fal use bhugatna hi padta hae. ache karmo ka achha fal aur bure karmo ka bura fal. Jo kuchh in sab ke saath hua wo unke karmo ke karan hua lekin insab ke karm itne bhi kharab nahi the ke inhe achhi jindagi na mile. Wahi hua badi taqato ne mujhe aadesh diya aur mae inhe bachane pahucha tum sab ke saath. Aur ab ye sab surakshit hae.



Poonam - aur un sab ladkiyo ke sir pe hath kyu fera?



Deva – unhe unka kuwarapan wapas mil chuka hae, ab wo wapas kuwari ladkiya hi hae. kal tak wo ye bhi bhul jayegi ke unka balatkar hua. Waese tumne bhi inhe pani me jadi buti wali bat bol kar jo kahani banayi sahi kiya.



Poonam – aur wo aurate?

Deva - Wo unka pesha hae to un par farak nahi padne wala wo ek bar sex kare ya 100 baar. Aur fir wo apni marji se aayi thi. Paese ke liye gundo ke saath sone. Shalaka tum un dono gadiyo ke papers mere naam kar do ab wo dono scorpio mere pas hi rahegi.



Shalaka - thik hae deva wo mae tumhare nam pe transfer kar deti hu.



Fir ye log ghar aate hae. RR ko deva seedha garage me le jata hae. fir poonam aur shalaka ke saath neeche basement me pahuchta hae. tum log yaha fresh ho ke aaram karo aur kuch kha pi lo jab nagarjun aur gurum aa jayege to mae bhi aa jauga. Aur ha gurum ke liye khane ka intjam aur yaha uske aaram ki cheeje arrange bhi kar do aaj ki raat to use yahi rahne hae bad me use gharwalo se milwa duga mae.



Itna kah kar deva bangle me andar chala jata hae. jaha sab apne apne kamre me ja chuke the. Deva bhi apne kamre me jata hae. aur change kar ke naha ke fresh ho jata hae. fir apna clone ready kar deta hae. deva ka clone change kar ke bistar pe chala jata hae. aur deva fir se basement me pahuchta hae. ready ho kar.

Jaha nagarjun aur gurum aa chuke the aur khana hi kha rahe the.



Gurum - boss aapne mujhe bataya nahi ke mujhe kya karna hae.



Deva – gurum tum hamari family ka hissa ho ab. Mere noukar nahi. To sabse pahle ye jan lo ke mae tumhara boss nahi dost hu , bhai hu, isiliye tum mujhe mere nam se bulaoge, Tum poori tarah se ajad ho jo chaho kar sakte ho. Filhal tum mere saath yaha aam ke bag dekhoge. Aur jab hum kisi special task pe niklege to hamare saath hi rahoge. Aur wo jo thakur ka farm house hae jaha pe tum rah rahe the. Mae kuchh aadmi bhej kar saaf safai karwa duga to wo ab se tumhara ghar hoga. Leagly bhi sare papres tumhare nam se ho jayege. Tum wahi rahoge.



Gurum – thik hae deva lekin abhi ye taiyari kaesi kahi ja rahe ho kya?



Deva – ha gurum hum ja rahe hae abhi lekin tum yaha aaram karo. Aur yahi pe poore ghar ke camera bhi lage hae to watch karte rahna hathiyaro ki kami nahi hae yaha. Agar koi khatra dekho to khul ke istemal kar sakte ho.



Gurum - lekin deva kya mae tum logo ke saath nahi chal sakta abhi?



Deva – jaha hum ja rahe hae. abhi tumhara waha jane ka samay nahi aaya. Lekin bahot jald tumhe waha bhi le jauga mae. Par abhi filhal nahi.



Gurum - ok deva jaesa sahi samjho. Mae hu yaha tum log jao.



Deva – kal milte hae gurum bye and gud night.



Fir deva, poonam, nagarjun, shalaka charo nikalte hae tilism nagri ki taraf. Aur thodi hi der baad wo log tilism nagri me hote hae.

Mast update h bhai
Maza aa gya

 

[Sabhi91]

UPDATE - 50



Deva – par…….marne ki itni bhi kya jaldi hae? waese maene tumahre sare sawalo ke jawab de diye tum ne mere ek chhote se sawal ka jawab nahi diya, jabki gun bhi mere hatho me hae



Gurum - mae yaha andhere me baetha tumhe hi yad kar raha tha. Matlab tumahre Vishay me hi soch raha tha. Ke aakhir wo kaun sa aadmi hoga jise marne ke liye thakur ne 25 aadmi bulwaye ? kya wo itna taqatwar hoga? Aur aaj ek hi din me tumne hamare 15 aadmi mar diye to mae usi bare me soch raha tha. Achha hua tum aa hi gaye.



Deva – tumhe apne dosto wale showk nahi hae kya? Andar itna rangeen mahoul chhod ke yaha bahar andhere me baethe the.



Gurum – mae sharab aur shabab dono ka istemal karta hu lekin marji se jabardasti na mujhe kisi ki pasand hae na mae kisi par karna pasand karta hu. Andar jo aurte aur ladkiya hae wo sab jabardasti uthayi hui hae. aur ye baat mujhe pasand nahi.



Deva – aesa hae to tumhe un ki madad karni thi apne gunde sathiyo se unhe bachana tha.



Gurum – wo thakur ne uthwayi hae mere sathiyo ne nahi. Aur thakur ne hame yaha tumhe marne ke liye bulwaya hae. mae usse abhi nahi lad sakta. Ye dhandhe ke khilaf hoga.



Deva – aur kisi ki supari lena pasand hae? kisi ka khoon karna pasand hae ?



Gurum – tumse maene pahle bhi kaha ke mujhe goli maar do mae nahi darta mout se. lekin sach ye hae ke mae yaha paese ke liye hi aaya tha bas bina tumahri galti jaane mae tumhe marne wala tha nahi. Jab ye sab sale mar jate to mae ye kah kar nikal jata ke sare log mare gaye akela mere bas ka nahi mere paese do mae ja raha hu. Aur fir ek baar tumse milta jaroor asliyat janne ke liye aur fir chala jata.



Deva – aur agar galti meri hi nikal aaye abhi to? Maan lo maene thakur ko pareshan kiya hae jis wajah se wo mujhe marwane ke liye aadmi ikatthe kar chuka hae to?



Gurum – samasya yahi hae. agar galti tumhari hoti to mae tumhe marne ki poori koshish karta. Aur yakeen mano aaj tak maene kisi begunah ki hatya nahi ki. Kisi aurat par julm nahi kiya, kisi masoom bachhe ko anath nahi hone diya. agar tum galat hote to mae tumhe marne ki koshish jaroor karta. Uske liye mujhe kisi saathi ki jarurat nahi wo mae ab bhi kar sakta hu.



Deva – tumhe lagta hae ke tum mujhe maar sakte ho?



Gurum - maene KOSHISH shabd ka istemal kiya hae bhulo mat.



Deva – mujhe tumse yahi sab janna tha. Tumhe marna hota to itni der nahi lagata. Tum chaho to mere saath rah sakte ho. Paese ki koi dikkat nahi hogi. Aur ha usool mere bhi tumahre jaese hi hae. to tumhe koi takleef nahi hogi. Lekin agar tum jana chaho to ja sakte ho.



Gurum muskra ke – gun point pe baat karte ho aur saath rahne ko bhi kahte ho?



apne hath ki gun fenk deta hae aur kamar me lagi gun bhi nikal fenkta hae. gurum bade dhyan se deva ki har harkat dekh raha tha.



Deva – ab? Mere pas koi gun nahi. Na hatho me na hi mere kisi jeb me. Ha tumhari kamar me jaroor hae. ab kya vichar hae?



Gurum – mae tumhe marne aaya tha. Tumhe marne ke hi paese milne hae mujhe. Tumhe itna yakeen kyu hae ke mae tumahre saath rah kar tumhe maaruga nahi?



Deva – mujhe insane ki pahchan hae gurum. Baki tumhari marji.



Tabhi waha sab log aa jate hae. shalaka, poonam, nagarjun, aur sari ladies. Aur akhiri ki baate sab ne suni thi.



Gurum - tumahra naam kya hae?



Deva – mera nam deva hae mae yahi rahta hu. Ye teeno mere hi saathi hae. jisme se ye meri hone wali biwi poonam hae.



Gurum – mae sab samajh gaya ab mujhe koi shaq nahi ke tum ek sahi insane ho. Galat wo sala thakur hi hae.



Deva – aesa kyu?



Gurum – jis kam me tumahre dost aur khud tumhari hone wali biwi shamil hae, jinhone itni aurato ki ijjat ke saath unki jindagi bhi bachai andar itni firng ke baad bhi sari ladies ko surakshit le kar aa gaye wo log galat nahi ho sakte. Mujhe tumahre saath kam kar ke khushi hogi.



Gurum deva ki taraf hath bada deta hae to deva bhi turant use se haath mila leta hae.



Gurum - lekin deva mae inhe { poonam ki tarfa ishara kar ke } abhi se bhabhi hi kahuga. Bhale hi ye abhi tak tumhari biwi nahi bani.



Deva – fir to gadbad ho jayegi yar. Tab to tumhari bhabhiyo ki ginti badi lambi hone wali hae.



Sab hasne lagte hae. aur fir deva aur sab gadiyo ke paas aate hae. itne me deva un me se teen ladkiyo ke sir pe hath ferta hae jo nagarjun ke saath ja rahi thi.



Deva – Jao aur khush rahna koi chinta mat karna ab sab thik hae. gurum tum aur nagarjun do gadiya le lo aur jo aas paas ki ladies ho unhe chhod do in gundo ki gadiya yaha khadi hi hae.



Nagarjun - fir bhi do ladkiya bach rahi hae deva.



Deva – mae inhe janta hu ye isi gaanv ki hae to inhe hum le jate hae. tum log niklo aur ye kaam poora kar ke tum dono ghar aa jana



Fir deva, shalaka, poonam aur do ladkiya RR me baeth kar gaanv ki taraf nikal jate hae. is waqt koi 11 baj rahe the. Deva ne un do ladkiyo ko unke ghar ke samne utara aur…….......

…………..Tum dono ab jao apne ghar. Deva ne unse kaha



Ladkiya – lekin bhaiya hamari jindagi to barbad kar di na un logo ne, hamari ijjat loot kar.



Dev gadi se utra aur unke sir pe hath fer diya………….



Deva - apni jindagi naye tareeke se shuru karo kuch nahi hua tum logo ko. Ye baat tum logo ko bhi samajh me aa jayegi. Jab tum logo khud ko dekhogi to.



Ladkiya kuch samajh nahi paa rahi thi. Lekin wo log apne gharo ki taraf badne lagi to deva ne poonam ko ishara kiya jise samajh kar poonam gadi se utar kar unke saath un ke ghar me gayi is waqt wo ek saree me thi.



Poonam ne darwaja khat khataya to andar se ek aadmi ne darwaja khola. Aur samne apni dono betiyo ko dekh kar khush ho gaya.



Aadmi – are aa gayi beti tum log badi der kar di?



Ladkiya – haeran rah gayi ke hamare baap ko to rona chahiye ye kya baat kar raha hae.



Aadmi – are beta haeran kyu ho rahi ho aao andar aao.



Wo dono Ladkiya aur poonam andar aate hae to



Aadmi – beta deva kal aaya tha. Aur usne kaha tha ke tum inke saath (poonam) shahar gayi ho apne collage ke bare me baat karne aur waha se inke kisi rishtedar ke pas jaogi isliye kal tak aogi. Mujhe to dar lagne laga tha lekin jab deva ne ye sab aakar kaha to rahat mili.



Dono ladkiyo ne haeran ho kar poonam ko dekha to poonam ne use aankh se chup rahne ka ishara kiya.



Poonam – kaka ab mae chalti hu. Bas inhe chhodne aayi thi.



Aadmi – are beta raat ko tum akeli kaese ?



Poonam - akeli kaha kaka bahar dev hae na usi ki gadi me to aaye hae hum sab



Aadmi – kya deva aaya hae to bahar kyu khada hae use andar bula lo.



Poonam – abhi nahi kaka waese bhi kafi raat ho gayi hae. to fir kabhi aayege. Abhi mae chalti hu. Ghar pe sab raah dekh rahe hoge.



Poonam bahar aati hae aur palatkar - are ek minut suno jara, poonam un dono ladkiyo ko bulati hae.



Ladki – ji didi?



Poonam apni jeb se do chhoti chhoti pani ki bottle nikal ke unhe deti hae jo real me pani hi tha aur kuchh nahi



Poonam – ye jaldi se pee lo dono



Dono ladkiya ek duje ko dekhti hae aur poonam se pani le kar pi jati hae.



L – ye kya tha didi?



Poonam – isme maene ek khas jadi buti milayi thi. ab tum dono fir se kuwari ho chuki ho. Isiliye chinta chhod do. Aur jakar aaram karo. Ye man lo ke ek bura sapna tha jo khatam ho gaya. Jao apna dhyan rakhna .



Dono ladkiyo ke aansu nikal aate hae aur dono hi poonam se lipat jati hae. – thank you didi. Hamara kunwarapan hame wapas kar ke aapne hum par aur hamare maa bap par bahot bada ahsan kiya hae jise hum kabhi nahi chukka payege apni jaan de kar bhi nahi. Yahi to hum gareebo ka gahna hota hae hamari ijaat. Thank you so much didi thank you.



Poonam – bas ab chup ho jao. Ab mae chalti hu kabhi koi bhi kam ho to bejhijhak mere pas aa jana.



Fir poonam waha se nikal aati hae. aur aakar gadi me baeth jati hae. aur deva gadi bada deta hae



Poonam – dev aapne inhe kab bataya ke ye ladkiya shahar mere saath gayi hae?



Deva – jaese hi inka apaharan hua tha usi samay.



Poonam - aesa tha to aapne apharan hone kyu diya?



Deva – kuch baate bahot gahri hoti hae poonam isliye har baat ki tah me mat jao. Jo hua wo jaroori tha. Inke bhagya me yahi tha na. aur mae khud kuch nahi karta jaesa aadesh milta hae waesa hi karta hu. Ahr insan ke kuchh pichhle karm hote hae jiska fal use bhugatna hi padta hae. ache karmo ka achha fal aur bure karmo ka bura fal. Jo kuchh in sab ke saath hua wo unke karmo ke karan hua lekin insab ke karm itne bhi kharab nahi the ke inhe achhi jindagi na mile. Wahi hua badi taqato ne mujhe aadesh diya aur mae inhe bachane pahucha tum sab ke saath. Aur ab ye sab surakshit hae.



Poonam - aur un sab ladkiyo ke sir pe hath kyu fera?



Deva – unhe unka kuwarapan wapas mil chuka hae, ab wo wapas kuwari ladkiya hi hae. kal tak wo ye bhi bhul jayegi ke unka balatkar hua. Waese tumne bhi inhe pani me jadi buti wali bat bol kar jo kahani banayi sahi kiya.



Poonam – aur wo aurate?

Deva - Wo unka pesha hae to un par farak nahi padne wala wo ek bar sex kare ya 100 baar. Aur fir wo apni marji se aayi thi. Paese ke liye gundo ke saath sone. Shalaka tum un dono gadiyo ke papers mere naam kar do ab wo dono scorpio mere pas hi rahegi.



Shalaka - thik hae deva wo mae tumhare nam pe transfer kar deti hu.



Fir ye log ghar aate hae. RR ko deva seedha garage me le jata hae. fir poonam aur shalaka ke saath neeche basement me pahuchta hae. tum log yaha fresh ho ke aaram karo aur kuch kha pi lo jab nagarjun aur gurum aa jayege to mae bhi aa jauga. Aur ha gurum ke liye khane ka intjam aur yaha uske aaram ki cheeje arrange bhi kar do aaj ki raat to use yahi rahne hae bad me use gharwalo se milwa duga mae.



Itna kah kar deva bangle me andar chala jata hae. jaha sab apne apne kamre me ja chuke the. Deva bhi apne kamre me jata hae. aur change kar ke naha ke fresh ho jata hae. fir apna clone ready kar deta hae. deva ka clone change kar ke bistar pe chala jata hae. aur deva fir se basement me pahuchta hae. ready ho kar.

Jaha nagarjun aur gurum aa chuke the aur khana hi kha rahe the.



Gurum - boss aapne mujhe bataya nahi ke mujhe kya karna hae.



Deva – gurum tum hamari family ka hissa ho ab. Mere noukar nahi. To sabse pahle ye jan lo ke mae tumhara boss nahi dost hu , bhai hu, isiliye tum mujhe mere nam se bulaoge, Tum poori tarah se ajad ho jo chaho kar sakte ho. Filhal tum mere saath yaha aam ke bag dekhoge. Aur jab hum kisi special task pe niklege to hamare saath hi rahoge. Aur wo jo thakur ka farm house hae jaha pe tum rah rahe the. Mae kuchh aadmi bhej kar saaf safai karwa duga to wo ab se tumhara ghar hoga. Leagly bhi sare papres tumhare nam se ho jayege. Tum wahi rahoge.



Gurum – thik hae deva lekin abhi ye taiyari kaesi kahi ja rahe ho kya?



Deva – ha gurum hum ja rahe hae abhi lekin tum yaha aaram karo. Aur yahi pe poore ghar ke camera bhi lage hae to watch karte rahna hathiyaro ki kami nahi hae yaha. Agar koi khatra dekho to khul ke istemal kar sakte ho.



Gurum - lekin deva kya mae tum logo ke saath nahi chal sakta abhi?



Deva – jaha hum ja rahe hae. abhi tumhara waha jane ka samay nahi aaya. Lekin bahot jald tumhe waha bhi le jauga mae. Par abhi filhal nahi.



Gurum - ok deva jaesa sahi samjho. Mae hu yaha tum log jao.



Deva – kal milte hae gurum bye and gud night.



Fir deva, poonam, nagarjun, shalaka charo nikalte hae tilism nagri ki taraf. Aur thodi hi der baad wo log tilism nagri me hote hae.

Superb boby bhai.....
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[Luckyloda]

Bhut shandaar kahani.....

Wait f0r another superb update
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[abhi1008]

Update 1
Baat bahot bar kahi gayi hae dusro ka pata nahi lekin mere mamle me ye sahi hae k ye meri pahli kahani hae. Jo regular readers hoge wo jaan jayege. Ek to meri language se dusre meri kahani se. ab jyada bate na karte hue seedhe hi kahani par aate hae. Charrectors aate jayege aur intro hota jayega. Please guys mera hosla tootne mat dijiyega. Aape comments mere liye keemti hae.
ek bahot hi Ghana jangle tha jaha unche unche ped the wo itne ghane the ki suraj ki roshni bhi unhe cross kar ke jameen pe nahi aa rahi thi. Isliye waha andhera, seelan, aur halki thand bhi thi . usi ghane jungle me ek andheri gufa thi . jisme kisi ke jor jor se bole jane wale ajeeb se mantro ki awaz aa rahi thi.
AGHORI . . ji ha waha ek lagbhag nanga shaks baetha hae jiska nam hae aghori. Wo kisi pooja me magn hae Uske kareeb hi do bahot hi khubsurat aur nangi ladkiya khadi thi. Jinke chuche bahot bade bade the aur gand bhi lekin kamar ek dam patli dono ke baal khule hue the aur wo aese khadi thi jaese aghori ke aadesh ka intjar kar rahi thi . tabhi aghori ne unhe ishare se neeche baethne ko kaha aur unke baethte hi ek chaku le ke ek ladki ki jangh pe halka sa cut laga diya jisse khun nikalne laga aghori ne apne anguthe pe bhi cut lagaya aur apne usi anguthe se ladki ki jangh se bahte khun ko mila ke uthaya aur apne samne dharti pe hi wo kuch ajeeb si aakrati banae laga. Jab wo aadi tedi lakeere bana chuka to dusri ladki ki, ki jangh pe bhi waese chaku se cut lagaya aur apne khun bahate anguthe se us ladki ki jangh se bahte khun ko mila ke uthaya aur jameen pe bani hui aakrati poorai karne laga. Jab wo aakrati poori ban gayi tab usne kuch pani apne hath me leke mantr pade jisse uska angutha ek dam thik ho gaya aur wahi kuch cheete dono ladkiyo ki jangho pe mare jisse ladkiyo ki jkangh se bahta khun bhi ek dam gayab ho gaya wo ladkiya fir se khadi ho gayi wahi pe. yaha aghori kuch mantra padta hua us tasweer pe bhasm fenkne laga dekhte hi dekhte waha ek saanp k jode ki tasweer ban gayi aur kush samay baad waha ka drashya aese lagne laga jaese tv pe koi film chal rahi ho ek jangle waha bhi dikhai de raha tha jisme wo dono saanp aage badh rahe the aghori ne thodi der dhyan se dekha aur fir thahaka lagata hua haath hawa me hilane laga koi kuch samajh nahi paa raha tha. Par tabhi waha kuch roshni hui aur ek buda shaks waha aa gaya.
Aghori- gurdev aap aa gaye mae aapko hi bulane wala tha . ye dekhiye meri saalo ki mehnat rang layi.
Ye naag aur nagin hae jo isi taraf bad rahe hae aur kareeb ek mahine baad isi jungle me pravesh karege. Tab meri manokamna poori ho jayegi gurudev.
Gurudev(GD)- ha aghori teri manokamna poori ho jayegi lekin tu nahi janta k isme abhi kitni mushkile hae. Abhi bas tune unhe dhundha hi hae. Abhi tu aane wali mushkilo se anjan hae.
Aghori- gurudev kaesi bhi mushkile aa jaye meri shaktiyo ke samne unki koi aukat nahi. Bas ye nag nagin mujhe mil jaye fir mae apna uddeshya poora karuga. Aur ban jauga sarvshaktiman. Koi mujhe nahi hara payega na hi koi mujhe maar payega.
GD- tu mera shishya hae isliye tujhe aagah karta hu. tere uddeshya ki purti ke liye is naag ka marna bahot jaroori hae wo bhi poori tarah. Kyu ki ye hi tere kam me rukawat daal sakta. Hae. Tujhe to is nagin ki jarurat hae na naag ko maar kar hi tu is nagin ke saath sambhog kar payega us se pahle nahi. Aur yaad rahe us naag ko tujhe is jungle me aane se pahle marna hae kyuki yaha aa kar us naag ki shakti bhi das guna badh jayegi aur teri mushkile bhi badegi.,
Aghori- to kya mae use abhi maar du?
GD-nahi use is jungle ke bahar hi marna jungle ke bahar jo gaanv hae jab wo waha tak pahuche tab marna hae use kyu k abhi wo raksha kawach me hae abhi tu unka kuch nahi bigad payega balki abhi agar tune un pe hamla kiya to tu fir kai varsho tak unhe dhundh bhi nahi payega. Wo naag apni nagin ko apni shaktiyo ke kawach me chhupa lega . abhi wo log nishchint hae isliye tujhe dikh rahe hae.
Aghori thik hae gurudev aesa hi hoga use mae jungle ke bahar wale gaanv me pahuchte hi maar duga ab se meri najar har pal un pe rahegi.
GD- mae ab bhi kahta hu chhod de ye sab isme teri jaan bhi ja sakti hae.
Aghori – nahi guduev mae aapki ye baat nahi maanuga.
GD- muhje jo kahna tha kah diya baki tu jane aur teri kismet. Itna kahte hi GD waha se chalegaye.
Aghori fir se thahake lagate hue – kya khubsurat nagin hae ise apne lund se chod ke iska kuwara lahu nikaluga tabhi meri aage ki yojna poori hoogi. Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha

UPDATE - 2


Surya garh – ye us gaanv ka nam hae jo usi jungle ke bahar hae jaha aghori apni ghinauni sajeeshe bana raha hae. Par yaha ka mahoul kuch alaga hae. Yaha ke log bhi apni masti me mast hae yahi hamara hero bhi hae ek dam sadharn sa na kisi se koi dushmani na koi baer abhi wo nahi janta ki bahot jald uska samna kitne khatarnak halato se hone wala hae par abhi wo chain ki nind so raha hae aur apne sapno ki haseen duniya me hi khoya hua hae. Tabhi use aesa mahsoos hota hae jaese use koi bula raha ho

Deva…… Deva…… Deva…… Deva……

Deva .. kaun hae ? kaun bula raha hae, mujhe koi najar kyu nahi aa raha?

…….. mae hu deva ek faker.

aur waha kuch dhua sa uthta hae aur usme se ek booda aadmi najar aata hae. Jiske chehre pe bahot jyada tez tha ek hath me manko ki mala safed dhoti kurte me. Lambi safed dadhi aur kandho tak jhulte safed baalo wala wo budha shaks muskrat ke bola

Deva.. aap kaun hae baba.

… hu to ma ek fakeer hi lekin bhatak raha hu apni manjil ki talash me.

Deva . . . . Baba aap mere pas kyu aaye hae. Kya chahiye aapko mujhse

Fakeer baba - deva meri manjil ka rasta tujhse ho ke hi nikalta hae aur mae tujhse isiliye milne aaya hu . kyu ki ab wo waqt jyada door nahi aur ab tujhe bhi meri sahayta ki jaroorat hogi.

Deva . . lekin baba mae aapki madad kaese kar sakta hu

Fakeer Baba . . deva us poore sansar me ek tu hi to hae jo meri madad kar sakta hae lekin abhi usme kuch waqt hae . isse pahle tujhe bahot kuch janna samajhna aur seekhna hae. Baki bate tujhe sahi waqt pe pata chal jayegi.

Deva . . Lekin baba mae to ek sadharan sa insane hu bhala mae kisi ke kya kam aa sakta hu

Fakeer baba . .beta niyati ne agar tujhe chuna hae to tu bhi badlega aur tera waqt bhi badlega. Mae fir aauga tujhse milne.

Tabhi Deva ki aankh khul jati hae wo poora paseene me bheega hua tha. Subah ho gayi thi aur wo soch raha ki ye jo sapna dekha kya ye sach hae ya uska koi waham . fir wo apna sir jhatak deta hae aur chala jata hae apne nityakarm niptane aur jab lautta hae to dekhta hae uski bhabhi aangan me naha rahi thi ye roj ka tha uski bhabhi apne gore chikne badan pe chuchiyo tak apne peticot ko band ke naha rahi thi deva ki najar us pe jati hae lekin wo aage bad jata hae.

Deva . . maa jaldi nashta de do mujhe khet jana hae.

Deva ki maa Savitri devi hath me nashte ki thali liye aati hae.

Savitri devi. . beta aaj tu jaldi aa jana kyu ki aaj thoda kam hae. shahar jana hae aur wapsi me teri bahan ko bhi mama ke ghar se lana hae. Hafta bhar ho gaya hae use waha gaye hue.

Deva . . thik hae maa aa jauga.

Fir deva nikal jata hae. Aaiye tab tak deva ke parivar ke bare me jante hae.

Deva ke ghar me uski maa baap bhai bhabhi aur bahan hae jisme se

Baap Deenanath ek behad imandar aur ijjatdar sehatmand aur achha insane hae jo apne khushhal pariwar ke saath chain se apni jindagi gujar raha hae. Shuru se hi gaanv me rahne k karan inke jism me aaj bhi bharpoor kasawat hae aur aaj bhi apni patni savitri devi ko jab patak ke chodte hae to unki cheekhe nika dete hae. Lekin apni patni ke alava ye kisi pe najar nahi rakhte.

maa Savitri Devi umar to uski bhi ho gayi hae lekin ek to gaanv ki mitti ka asar dusra is umar tak bhi pati ke mote tagde lund se roj chudne ka kamal uske sharer pe bhi hae. 5.5” ki hight, gora rang, gatheela badan, bhari bhari 36 ki chuchiya aur 38 ki nikalti hui gaand. Aur gaand se bhi neeche tak jhoomte hue uske kale ghane baal. kisi ka bhi man lalcha de aur jo agar koi use nangi dekh le to kamjor dil wala to wahi heart attack se mar jaye aesa kateelana figure hae uska. Aur fir roj raat ko pati ka lund lene ka aur gaare virya ko apni bur me lene ka bhi kamal hae jo use boodi nahi hone deta. Par sanskro ki pakki hae . pati ke saath bistar par kisi randi ki tarah khul ke chudwane wali, par apne kamre se bahar nikalte hi wo ek devi se kam nahi apne teeno bachcho ko saman roop se pyar to deti hi hae bahu ko bhi beti se kam nahi samajhti.

Bhai Raghu - kisi kam ka nahi wo bas awaragardi karta rahta hae aur nashe ki adat ne use barbad kar diya hae sara din ya to apne awara dosto ke saath ghumna, jua khelna, ya sharab pee kar kahi pade rahna . isi wajah se shayad ab tak wo jindagi me kuch na kar paya yaha tak ki baap bhi na ban paya.

Bahan Payal - ek 19 saal ki kadak jawani se bharpoor ladki hae rang roop me ma ape hi gayi hae. Mast bhara hua jism 32 ki tani hui choochiya aur 34 ki ubharti hui gaand ek dam gori haseen.

Bhabhi Diya - ye hae deva ki bhabhi jo khoobsurti me kisi se kam nahi mast 34 32 36 ka figure hae inka aur doodh si gori hae ye bhi. Jab ulte palle ki saari pahan kar nikalti hae to side se jhankti hui inki kamar to ek mareej ka lund bhi khada kar de aur muskan aesi ki insane apna sab kuch us pe vaar de. pariwar me sab se pyar se rahti hae pati ke nakara hone ke bawjood ghar me sabka samman karti hae isliye sab inhe pyar bhi karte hae aur poora khayal bhi rakhte hae inke pitaji deenanath ji ke dost hae aur isi wajah se apni beti diya ki shadi deenanath ke bete se kar di lekin aaj wo apne faisle pe pachtate bhi hae par kar kuch nahi sakte. Inhe ghar me sab ka pyar milta hae par jo pyar pati se chahiye bistar pe us ke liye wo aaj bhi tarasti hae. Shadi dhuda hae par. Aaj bhi kuwari ahe kyu ki raghu se aaj tak inki seal bjh nahi tooti. Wajah ? ek to inhe sharab ke nashe se bahar aane ka samay nahi hae. Kabhi galti se ye hosho hawas me apne kamre me pghus bhi gaye aur diya ki koshisho se ye us ke upar chad bhi a\gaye to inki lulli diya ki bur jane se pahle hi jhad jati hae sirf bur ki garmi mahsus hote hi. Diya ko aaj bhi intjar ha eke kabhi uski bhi jndagi me khushiya aayegi jo fir kabhi uska saath nahi chhodegi.

Baaki carrector jab aayege to unka intro bhi hota jayega chalte hae apne deva ke pas.

Deva apne khet me kam karte hue paseene se bheega hua tha yu to unka khet bhi kafi bada tha aur waha aur bhi gaanv ke log majdoori karte the par deva bhi unke saath hi lag kar kaam karta tha. Ek mehnat kash majdoor ki tarah. Kisi malik ki tarah nahi.

Tabhi ek car bahot teji se chalti hui aayi aur deva ke khet ke pas thodi andar aa kar mitti me uske pahiye fas gaye. Deva ki najar us car pe gayi to wo doudta hua waha pahucha deva samajh gaya tha ki ye car thakur ki chhoti bahan jyoti thakur ki hae jo kafi gusse wali hae deva un logo se door hi rahta tha. Lekin ab wo khud hi aa gayi hae to use waha tak jana pada.

Deva. . . kya hua thakurain

Jyoti thakur. . apne ghamand me , andha hae kya dikhta nahi hamari car ka pahiya tere khet ki mitti me fans gaya hae. Chal nikal ise.

Deva ne apne 4-5 admiyo ko awaz lagayi aur sab mil ke nikalne lage car ko. jyoti thakur aur uski do saheliya car ke andar hi baethi thi jisse thodi dikkat aa rhi thi

Deva . . . thakurain aap bahar aa jaiye car aasani se nikal aayegi.

Jyoti . . bahar aayi aur deva pe hanste hue. Tera baap to bada pahlwan bana firta hae tujhme usne taqat nahi dali kya. Ek car ka pahiya nikalne ke liye 5 aadmi bulata hae aur tum 6 mil ke bhi car nahi nikal paye. Mujhe car se uatrane ko kahna hi pada tujhe.

Deva ko uski ye bate bahot tej chubhti hae par wo kuch nahi kahta . Jaese tease car nikalti hae .

Deva. . . thakurain hamne aapki madad ki hae apni saheiyo ke samne aapko hamara majak nahi banan chahiye.

Jyoti . . do koudi ke aadmi tu hame sikhayega k kya karna chahiye hame aur kya nahi. Abhi mae jaldi me hu lekin tujhe is baat ka jawab mae jaldi hi dugi .

Jyoti waha se chali jati hae aur deva bhi apna sir jhatak kar apne kaam pe lag jata hae. Fir din bhar ke kam se nipat ke wo apne ghar jata he .

Deva . . . Maa chal jaldi khana laga fir shahar bhi nikalna hae.

Savitri - tu aa gaya beta . jaldi se hath mooh dho le

Deva . . are maa tu to kamal ki lag rahi hae aaj taiyar ho ke .

S . . chal badmash maa pe najar dalta hae. Chal jaldi kar khana laga deti hu mae.

Diya . . muskrate hue. Maa isme deva ka koi kasoor nahi ha eek to aap deva ko bahu nehi dila rahi ho dusre khud aaj aap bahot khoobsurat lag rahi ho. Ye bhi kya kare bechara.

S . . halke se muskrate hue. . tu fir shuru ho gayi koi mouka nahi chhodti na tu bhi jab dekho tum sab mil ke mujhi ko chhedte rahte ho.

Deva. . hath mooh dhoke aata hae aur khana kha ke fir apne tractor pe maa ko le ke nikal jata hae, jaha wo shahar jate hae aur savitri apne aur ghar ke logo ke liye kuch kapde khareedti hae fir wo log nikal jate hae deva ke mama ke ghar.

good start bro....and nice srory plot...with good writing skills...

 

[123aaliahai]

Nice update

 

[Azagar Dada]

Bhai mast update. Deva ne ladakiyon ko bachakar bahut nek kaam kiya. Sachmuch ladkiyan najuk hoti hai.unase pyar karana chahiye . Balatkar nahin. Deva ko ek achchha dostmil gaya hai. Ab dekhna hai tilasmi nagari me kya hota hai.

 

[Boby]

Super fantastic update bhai shandaar

thanx bhai

 

[Boby]

Awesome and shandaar update

thank you dost

 

[Boby]

Mast update

thank you friend

 

[Boby]

Superb boby bhai.....
Waiting for next.....

thanx bro