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    Thriller GaLaTH...(THE WRONG THAT MADE EVERYTHING RIGHT)

    guyz,meri mom ki tabiyat kuch sahi nahi hai isiliye writing par zyada focus ho nahi paa raha.. but phir bhi thoda bohot update likh liya maine..agar pura likh paaya toh update aaj hi de dunga nahi toh phir kal dunga...
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    Thriller GaLaTH...(THE WRONG THAT MADE EVERYTHING RIGHT)

    brother,ek simple sa request hai..kahani me kya ho aur kya nahi,uspar suggestions mat dijiye..mai amal nahi kar paaunga.. ye teesri kahani hai meri..likhi baad me hai maine,har important aspect ke baare me clear pehle se raha hun mai. reader's choice ke hisaab se change ya modification nahi...
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    Thriller GaLaTH...(THE WRONG THAT MADE EVERYTHING RIGHT)

    brother,ye jo baat bol rahe ho aap.isme kou logic nahi hai..sab kuch acha acha hoga,aisa toh hone se raha.. aur wapas zinda kar dena ka kya matlab hua.. supernatural nahi hai idhar kuch aur jiske saamne khada hona hai SANVY ko,uske aage sabko khukna ya marna hi hai.. kahani jis concept aur...
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    Thriller GaLaTH...(THE WRONG THAT MADE EVERYTHING RIGHT)

    sanvy ki maa ke saath GALATH already ho chuka hai brother.. is kahani ka ek base yeh bhi toh hai..she is already dead... aur usse pehle agar kuch galath hona hai,toh woh bhi ho hi jaayega aur agar nhi toh dekhte hain phir kya hoga aage...
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    Thriller GaLaTH...(THE WRONG THAT MADE EVERYTHING RIGHT)

    SANVY ke kaam dhaam par DAAG DEHLVI sahab ka ek behadh khubsoorat aur charchit sher suit karta hai ki.. HazaaroN kaam mohabbat mein hain maze ke "Daag" jo log kuch nahin karte woh aksar kamaal karte hain... woh naa karega abhi kuch aur karna bhi chahe toh maa uski naa karne degi usse.. rahi...
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    Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

    thanks brother for all the love and support throughout the attitude journey... back to the day when i started writing here,you were among one of the very first readers who encouraged me continously.. and i am so proud of your transfiguration from a patient and admirable reader to an excellent...
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    Thriller GaLaTH...(THE WRONG THAT MADE EVERYTHING RIGHT)

    AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF SANVY AND GROUP KHUDKO NIRDOSH SAABIT KAR DETE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF D.I.G KEWAL KHURANA RAJESH MISHRA KO SUSPEND KAR DETE HAIN.. AB AAGE:- CHAPTER-1 (ETIOLOGY OF BEING GALATH) UPDATE-22 DATE-17TH JUNE 2019 PLACE-SIRIUS DHABBBB... PPAGAL HHO...
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    Thriller GaLaTH...(THE WRONG THAT MADE EVERYTHING RIGHT)

    thanks brothers...be along...
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    Thriller GaLaTH...(THE WRONG THAT MADE EVERYTHING RIGHT)

    welcome brother..and thanks meri lekhni ko itna pasand karne ke liye...yunhi saath bane rahiye
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    Thriller GaLaTH...(THE WRONG THAT MADE EVERYTHING RIGHT)

    thanks brother...saath bane rahiye
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    Thriller GaLaTH...(THE WRONG THAT MADE EVERYTHING RIGHT)

    abhi toh bohot se rang dekhenge aap..saath bane rahiye
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    Thriller GaLaTH...(THE WRONG THAT MADE EVERYTHING RIGHT)

    dhanyawad bhai... is kahani ke hisaab se rajesh villain ka ansh maatra bhi nahi hai...haan,woh shani mishrit dhaaga jo SANVY ke khilaaf khada hoga,us dhaage ka ek gaanth zaroor hai woh jisse nikaal fekega SANVY.. meri isse pehle likhi dono kahaniyon me hero se zyada maayne maine villain ko...
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    Thriller GaLaTH...(THE WRONG THAT MADE EVERYTHING RIGHT)

    thanks for the review brother...saath bane rahiye
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    Thriller GaLaTH...(THE WRONG THAT MADE EVERYTHING RIGHT)

    thanks brother...saath bane rahiye
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    Thriller GaLaTH...(THE WRONG THAT MADE EVERYTHING RIGHT)

    thanks brother..G.O.D toh bas ek acronym hai brother...aage aur aise words aayenge...saath bane rahiye..
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