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Main story ko apni hisab se likhunga....aur likhunga kyon maine pahle hi likh Li hai bas thode thode gape me deta jaunga...jab mujhe Lage ki naya update ab de deni chahiye..Chinta na kare agar aap date rahoge to hum aap ke saath hai
Actually hota haya hai kuch serious reader story mein itna ghus jaate hai ki woh padte waqt ek character mein apne aap ko sama lete hai
Aur jub woh unke anusaar nahi chalta to chubdh ho ja te hai aur negative ya alag tarah ke comment kar dete hain.
Writer ko chahiye ki woh apni story apne hisab se chalayen aur sab maja karen![]()
Sure enjoy the story....daily abhi to kuchh din Kam se kam 2 updates to post karunga hi...keep reading the storyBahut badhiya jabrdast story keep going
Nice and superb update....Update 7
Morning me door knock hua to meri aur Dhruv ki eyes khul gayi maine jakar door khola to Chachi door par khadi thi maine Chachi ko good morning wish Kiya badle me Chachi ne bhi good morning kaha aur fresh hone ka bolkar chali gayi.
Main aur Dhruv fresh hokar garden me aa gaye, Maine use football se khelne ke liye bolkar garden me running karta raha aur 30 minutes ke running ke bad kuch der exercise karta raha ...
Jab Dhruv ke pass aaya to usne kaha bhaiya main bhi aapke sath running karunga to maine usse kaha abhi nahi chhote bhai abhi thoda aur bade ho jao phir hum dono bhai sath me exercise karenge....
At the break fast table...
Chacha ji breakfast karke apne duty pe chale gaye...
Dhruv:mumma bhaiya Aaj Sunday hai mujhe movie dekhne Jana hai bahut din ho gaye Gaye huye....
Kajal Chachi:nahi Dhruv Aaj nahi agle Sunday ko chalenge ...
Arjun:chaliye na Chachi mere chhote bhai ka man hai aaj.....
At the cinema hall
Hum teeno movie dekhne ke liye baith gaye, main middle me tha Chachi aur Dhruv mere dono side the...
Movie cartoon ki thi Dhruv bahut hi jayada enjoy kar raha tha ... Chachi mere kanhde pe apna sar rakhkar movie dekh rahi thi... Maine sabke liye cold drink and samose le liye the ...
Movie 2 hours me end huyi hum sabne kul milkar movie kaphi enjoy Kiya especially Dhruv ne kyonki uski man pasand ki movie jo thi...
Movie ke bad humlog park me chale gaye ...
Park kaphi bada tha kuch der humlog ghume uske bad Dhruv Ghar chalne ke liye zidd karne laga .....
Raste me Chachi ne car ek restaurant ke pass roka hum andar chale gaye. Kajal Chachi ne sabke liye lassi order Kiya ,hum lassi pikar wapas ghar aa gaye.....
AT THE HOME
Kajal Chachi :thanks Arjun Aaj tumhare Karan itna acha beautiful moment phir se kaphi dino ke bad spend Kiya aur mere gale lag gayi...
Arjun:it's ok Chachi we are family.
Kajal:kash tum pahle yaha mere sath rahte mujhe tumhare sath rahna achha lagene laga hai...
Tumhare heart me sabke liye only innocent love hai... Kash Maine tumhe janam diya hota aur mujhe kaskar aur apne sine se chipka li.
Arjun:it's ok Chachi main bhi Dhruv ke jaisa aapka hi beta hoon aur maine Chachi ke galo par kiss kar liya badle me Chachi ne bhi mujhe kiss kar liya.
Dhruv:mumma ye achhi bat nahi aapne bhaiya ko kiss kiya aur mujhe nahi.....
Kajal Chachi ne Dhruv ke galo par aur lips pe kiss de diya, Dhruv khush ho gaya aur bola bhaiya mumma aapse jayada pyar mujhse karti hai mumma ne mere galo aur lips dono jagah kiss kiya.
Arjun: offcourse chhote mumma tumse jayada pyar karti hai mujhse jayada.....
Achanak Chachi ne mere lips pe kiss kar liya aur boli ab khush dono bhai aur main Chachi ke is hamle se bilkul shocked rah gaya.....
........That's all for this update dear friends.....
Bhai aap ek careful reader ho...... story ko dhyan se padho aur enjoy Karo..Waah jabrdast ab to starting ho gyi chote bhai ki madad se