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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

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  • Sab kuch kho baithega

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Werewolf

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Msst update bhai
Mzza Aya
I think ye last me jo bnda tha ye wo tha jo Crimson arc me Aya tha
Jb veer past dekh rha tha
And vo bnda Crimson se baat kr rha tha ki I can't show my face maybe future me koi ye sb dekhe
To ye to whi lg rha h jo Rebecca ka boss h
To game to bhot tagdi lgti h
baki aap writer ho you know better
Keep going
Thanks man. :five:
Game tagdi hi hai bhai. :approve:
Rebecca ka hypnotism sab par kaam kar gaya, saare government officials par, yahaan tak ki past memory se bhi usne hypnotize kar liya tha, lekin sochne ki baat hai ki yeh skill/card blackmailer par kaam nahi kar raha hai. So, the blackmailer must also be having system with some skill/card to neutralize Rebecca's hypnotism. Also, the way he addressed Rebecca as 'girl', he does not seem to be young.
:smartm:
System holders don't follow the general rules and mannerisms anymore. Or, it's more like that they don't apply to them now.

Veer Renshu se kayi saal chhota hai. Still, he calls him by name. And, Renshu doesn't even mind it. Among system holders 'respect' is earned through 'strength.' Veer has already demonstrated his strength.

So, the unknown guy can either be elder than Rebecca or younger than her. We can't say anything for sure right now.
It seems, Rebecca has brought radioactive material for blackmailer. Is he making some type of bomb to blackmail the entire world.
We will see. :smartm:
Veer's business sense has become very sharp, he has got guarantee for supply of lithium from Renshu, an essential part for batteries, which are in great demand for electric cars. Also he has got promise from Garofano to market his cloth brand.
:smartm: Grasp the opportunity when it presents itself to you. You must not let it go. And, Veer knows it.
Your skill of planning so many things in advance, and then linking them in later updates is commendable.
Thanks a lot. :five:
Great update I think lithium will be used in cars battery and has something to do with Sonia
:smartm:
Bhai mujhe to next update ka intzaar h jab veer ke family members Ava ko veer ke sath dekhenge to sabke hosh ud jayenge
Usme samay hai. Disembowler ki blueprint taiyaar ho rahi. Kaam already shuru ho Gaya hai. And 40% ready bhi ho gayi hai. Kuch links ko jodna baaki hai.
Suspense, suspense & suspense. Kaafi sare naye sawal hai ab. Intezar rahega jawab ka.
Kahani ke akhir tak suspense hai.
 

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ab likhne ka dil nahi karta, kabhi agar hua to likhunga lekin Safar ek lambi aur tense kahani hai chute hue bhi dar lagta hai, dekhte hain kya hoga aage
BTW Sir I'm Talking About Your Previous Stories On Xossip Kya Mast Stories The Mai To Bus Kuchh Chuninda Writers Ki Kahani Hi Read Karta Tha Aur Abhi Bhi Karta Hu Jisme Aap, Avi Bhai, Pritam Bhai Aur Kuchh Writers The Those Were Golden Stories For Me Thanks For Your Precious Stories :respekt:
 

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Jaisa ummid tha usse bhi Jabardast aur Rahasya se Bhara raha hai..... Kuchh purane sawalon ke Hamen jawab Mile To Kuchh Aur Bhi tagade Sawal Nikal Ke Samne Aaya.....
Jaisa ki maine pehle hi kaha tha. Answers milenge zaroor but new questions saamne aa jayenge. :approve:
Update ki shuruaat mein Hamen dekhne Ko Milta Hai ki Veer Ko Jab Hosh Aata Hai aur Khud Ko vah check karta hai To pata hai ki vah puri tarike se pattiyon mein lipata hua hai aur Kai Jagah per tanke Lage hue hain... jo ki ek Tarah Se Saboot tha Uske aur jaw long Sardar ke bich Hue Jung ka.......

Veer ne apne Sharir per Lage hue ghav ke bare mein Parichay update Manga to usne bataya ki Bewolf madad se vah usko धीरे-धीरे hil kar rahi hai jisse Veer ke ghav bharane ki kshamta me bahut Teji se ijaafa Hua Hai......
Hmm! :approve: I mean... Mein isme kuch burayi nahi kar raha. But I already know this. Ye maine hi likha hai, after all. :?:
Aur Yahan per Hamen Ek Apne Sawal Ka Jawab Milta Hai Ki Renshu ne Aakhir garfanon ko kyon Bulaya tha ...kyuki ......"WAH EK DOCTOR HAI".
Bilkul yah Meri Soch Kabhi Nahin Ban Pai ki Yadi Ek system holder ke chot ka ilaaj Sadharan doctor karti hai to uska reaction Kaisa Hoga Kyunki system holder ka chot bahut Teji se Bharta hai...... lekin is Baat Ka Dhyan Hamare writer Sahab ko tha aur inhone bataya Renshu ko..... aur usne turant Garfano Ko Bulaya...... iska matlab bhai log jante ho Renshu ne pahle bhi garfano ki madad Le chuka hai apni choton ka ilaaj karane ke liye....
Tabhi toh mein writer hu. :D
Zahir hai ki system holders ka shareer aam insano ke comparison me jaldi heal hota hai. Aise me agar aam doctor ko aap apna shareer inspect karne de doge toh woh toh pata nahi kya kya khoj kar nikaalega. Isliye, Renshu ne Garofano ko bulaya tha. Woh iske baare me pehle se hi janta tha. Another proof that Garofano and Renshu have met before. :declare:

Aur, choonki Garofano ne apne iss card ke baare me pehle hi bata diya tha. So, one more reason to trust Garofano. :declare:
Garfano ko system dawara ek card mila tha..."Yohana's Scalpel", aisa card jo surgery ki vidhi se leke uska saara gyaan aur uski hunar puplabdh karwata tha. Ab yah baat bhi Koi Rahasya Nahin Raha ki vah Itni unchaiyon per Kaise pahunchi. Is card ki madad se isne surgery industry me acha nam aur paisa kamaya....jiski madad se usne khud ka brand banaya....
Garfano k pass jo dusra card tha wah tha"Scourge" jo iske sabhi stats ko badha deta tha.
Kahi pe plastic surgeries sabse zyada hoti hai toh woh hai Korea. Garofano South Korea se hi hai. Toh, imagine kar sakte ho ki usne kitni surgeries kari hongi aur kitne charges liye honge. Choonki, woh poori tarah se usme skilled hai, aur precision ke saath sab kuch karti hai. Log use zaroorat se zyada pay karne ko taiyar rehte hai.

Scourge sabhi stats nahi badhata. :sigh:
You should read the description of the card again. Garofano ka card latest update me uploaded hai. You can read it from there.
Jab violet aur Veer baith kar batchit kar rahe the tabhi use Kamre Mein nataliya ne entry ki Lekin garfano Ka Veer K Itni najdeek Dekhkar usko bahut hi pida mahsus Hui.... lekin abhi Kahan violet ne nataliya ke Aankhon aankhon ka emotion Shayad padh liya tha aur isliye usko Aur jalane Ke Liye usne Veer ko kis kar liya Jisko Dekhkar nataliya ki bacchi Khushi jhante Sulag gai.....hahahhahaha
Yes. :approve:
Ava ko jalaane ke liye hi woh kiss ki gayi thi. Aur, use ye batane ke liye bhi ki ab woh Veer ki pasandeeda banane ki firaaq me hai.
Violet ke vahan se jaane ke bad nataliya bhi Veer ke najdeek Aakar khada ho gai aur apni bhavnaon ko batane ke liye Bechain Hone Lagi lekin uski Jaban uski Sath nahin de pa rahi hai... lekin Himmat jutate hue usne apni Dil Ki Baat kah Di....... lekin aise kaise Veer man Jata.. usne bhi usko Do Char baten Sunai aur kah diya ki vah use per Dobara Bharosa nahin kar sakta.... Pari ne bhi Veer se saaf saaf kah diya tha vah nataliya Martin ko bilkul bhi Maaf Nahin karegi Kyunki usne unhen Dhokha Diya Hai Lekin Veer Ne use samjhate Hue Kaha usne bhi apni Man Ko Khoya Hai To Ek mauka Dena banta hai....
Veer Ne nataliya Se mission ke riwards ke bare mein poochha usne bhi Kuchh Na chhipate Hue Sab Kuchh Bata Diya ki use kya Mila....
Yes. :approve: Ab isme mein kya bolu? :idk1:
Ye summary hai mere hi update ki... Readers ke liye hai ye. Not for me. :D
Ava ko mission suscessful hone par 10000 points ,Explo Artisan aur Tribal Survival. Aur, saath hi ek perk bhi "Shrapnel" mila.
Explo Artisan
..... is skill ko pa kar ava ab exposiv banane me saksham ho gayi thi aur perk Shrapnel istamal kar ke usko 25%aur vinaskari bana sakti th
Yes. :approve:
Bhai perk hunt Ko Thoda Aur clear Karke Samjha sakte ho??
Hmm! Basically, Veer ab jo bhi mission poora karega... Uske baad uske saamne teen random perks aayenge jo hidden rahenge.

Aise samajh lo ki ju ke saamne Maine teen taash ke patte dhaak ke rakh diye. Tumhe nahi pata ki unme se kaun sa patta kya ho sakta hai.

Aise hi Veer ke saamne 3 perks rahenge jo hidden rahenge. Veer ko unme se ek perk select karna hoga. Aur, use select karne ke baad hi use pata lagega ki woh Perk positive perk hai ya negative.

Jaise ju ke taash ke patto me hukum ka ikka bhi nikal sakta hai, ya fir joker bhi. :D

Waise hi yaha agar positive perk nikla toh Veer ko fayda milega. Perk kuch bhi ho sakta hai. Wahi agar negative nikla, toh Veer ko use jhelna padega, jab tak ki woh wapas se hatt nahi jaata.

Ab ye hatega kaise? Harr perk ki ek time limit hoti hai. Ye temporary hote hai. Permanent nahi. :nana:

Limit time ki bhi ho sakti hai, ya fir usage ki bhi. Saral shabdo me, example ke roop me maan lo ki Veer ko koi Aisa perk mila jo uske luck ko badhata ho.

Ab limit time ki bhi ho sakti hai. Yaani, jaise ye perk keval 3 din kaam karega. 3 din Veer ka luck zyada rahega. Toh wahi limit usage ke hisaab se bhi ho sakti hai.

Yaani, ki Veer jab bhi koi lucky draw ya kisi bhi cheez me apni kismat aazmayega toh woh aisa 3 baar kar payega. Ab ye zaroori nahi ki 3 baar hi ho. Maine bas example diya. It can be any number and any time limit. Phew! Hope ab samajh aa gaya hoga. :sweat:

Ab wese toh ye updates me already samjhaya jaane waala tha aage. But fir bhi samajh lo. Ye koi aisa major spoiler nahi hai. Working samajh me aani chahiye readers ko... That's what matters.
Veer Jab aur thoda heel hua aur chalne firne layak Ho Gaya To vah Apne Kamre se bahar nikal kar HAL Mein Aaya Jahan per Sabhi system holder Baithe hue the...Renshu ne uska abhivadan Kiya aur uske Swasthya ke bare mein bhi Jankari li....
Jab Renshu ne bataya ki uske sath Jiski Ladai hui thi vah Bhi Ek system holder hai lekin usne apna Chehra Dhak Rakha tha aur Uski khasiyat uski speed thi....veer ko bahut jayad aaschrya hua.
Veer Ne sari ghatnaon ko aapas Mein jodte Hue bahut bariki se nirikshan Karne Laga aur jab vah Nishkarsh par pahunche to Uske rongte khade ho gaye.....
Veer ne Renshu ko bataya ki vah Aurat Jo Khud Ko Rebecca Elsher kah rahi thi uske pass mind control karne ki kshamta thi Jiski madad se usne Chinese government officials ko Apne control mein liya aur aasani se Is Desh Mein entry bhi ki aur Nikal Bhi gai......
Basically, Rebecca ne khud ko hi bulwaya, khud se hi case solve karwaya, khud hi iska hissa bani aur sab loot laat ke le gayi. :laughing:
Veer ne violet ko nirdeshit Kar Kaha Ki Jab vah donon mile the tab violet ne usse kch Kaha Tha..... Veer ke Yad dilane per violet Ne Bhi Han me ishra kiya. ...... to Fir veer Na Dobara Sawal poochha Ki vah Sab usko Kisne Kaha Tha...
Violet is Sawal Ka Jawab Yad karne ki koshish Karti Rah Gai lekin vah Bata Nahin Paye..... jisse Sabhi Logon Ko confirm ho gaya ki violet bhi Us lady ke mind control mein use Waqt thi...... yah sab baten jaankar ine sab ki gand fat ke Hath Mein a gai ki Itni Khatarnak planning.....
Iska matlab bas ye hai ki Garofano Rebecca ke contact me pehle aa chuki hai. :D
Aur, Rebecca ne use jo bhi bataya... Woh toh use yaad hai. Jaise Mumbai me Casa Belle ka nasht ho jaana... Parantu, Garofano ko na hi Rebecca ki shaqal yaad hai aur na hi uska naam...! Uske dimaag se Rebecca ki memory poori tarah se mit chuki hai. Aur, ye kaise hua? You can take a guess. :D
Sabhi Logon ke bich Kuchh der bat chit hone ke bad renshu me mukhya mudda ki taraf sabka Dhyan dilvaya.... usne bataya ki Kuchh system holder bahut Pahle Se Hi Sath Milkar kam kar rahe hain.... aur bahut hi gehri Sajish Rache Baithe Hain yadi Unka Mukabala karna hai to hamen bhi Ek sagathan banana Padega... Jo unke viruddh Ek Sath Lad sake aur yah tabhi Mumkin hoga Jab Hamare bich pardarshita Hogi uske liye Hamen Ek dusre per Vishwas karna padega aur apne system ke bare mein Jankari sajha karni padegi.....
Renshu ke is Baat per Sabhi system holders ne agri Kiya aur Apne Apne systems ke bare mein Jankari pradan Kiya Jo ki is Prakar tha....
Ek syndicate se bhidne ke liye alliance toh lagegi hi.
Renshu ko sirf 5000 points hi praapt hue hai. System level 10.
Erica ko 1000 points mile . Also, basic seer vision skill bhi mili hai. Aur, system ab level 9 par hai.
Ava : ko 10,000 points. And, Explo Artisan, Tribal Survival ye do skills mili hai And, also ek perk hai 'Shrapnel' ke naam se. System level 9.
Garofano ne is ladayi me hissa nahi liya tha is liye use kuch bhi nahi mila . Us ke pass jo pahale se tha wahi batayi jo ki hai... Yohana's Scalpel jo usko ek skilled surgeon banata hai. And, the other card is ~ Scourge! ....system level is 10.
Veer ko 15,000 points mile hai. Berserk card mila hai. Aur, Aura Vision, Radio protective skills mili hai. System level 10....
Yes. :approve:
Yah sab baten Ho Jaane ke bad agale din Veer ne nataliya ko Apne Sath chalne ke liye Kaha Jisko sunkar vah bahut ashcharya hua aur Khush Bhi Hui Kyunki ab Uske pass Rahane ke liye Jagah Nahin bachi thi...
Veer aur nataliya sabse bida Lekar helicopter Mein Sawar Ho gaye the...
Helicopter me nahi bhai... :sigh:
Veer aur Ava Erica ke saath uski car me baith ke airport tak pahuche aur waha se flight se Mumbai aaye. Not in the helicopter... :nana:
Jahan per Veer Veer ne ek Uljhan jahir Kiya jahir Kiya nataliya Ke Samne usne nataliya ke system ke bare mein poochha ki kya Lily ki bhi different personality hoti hai Jab Bhi uska system upgrade Hota Hai...
Veer ke sawal ko sunkar nataliya confuse ho gai aur usne jawab Diya Nahin Aisa Kuchh Nahin Hota Hai.. Iske jawab to sunkar Dil Ne Apna Sar pakad liya aur Bhag kar bathroom pahunch gaya...
Veer Pari se Sawal Jawab karne Lag Gaya Pari bhi shahami Si jawab de rahi thi.... Veer ne bhi chillate Hue Kaha

YOU DON'T HAVE DIFFERENT PERSONALITIES.'

[????]

'RATHER... YOU ALL ARE DIFFERENT BEINGS!!!'

lo bhai Ek Aur Raj khul gaya Pari ke bare mein.
Khul Gaya na? Ab na kehna ki pari ka raaz nahi khula. Ya ab raaz kab khologe. :D
Dheere dheere aise hi sab saamne aata jayega.
o bahanchod Veer dwara Kiya Gaya khulase khulase se Pari ki bolati hi Band Ho Gai साथ-साथ meri bhi .....Ab Mujhe Kuchh Na Kahana bahanchod is bare mein yah kya Chutiyapa Pak raha hai... writer Babu Hi Jaane.
It's simple. Hum jise ek jann ki alag alag personalities samajh rahe the woh darasal alag alag log the. Ek Jann nahi. :D
Aur Is Tarah Ek Bhayanak yuddh ke bad Veer Ki Ghar wapasi ho rahi thi Jahan per Uska Kai Sawal intzar kar raha hai.....
Lekin jaane se pahle Renshu Ne Veer se Kuchh mangne ke liye Kaha Uske madad Ke Badle...
Veer mein bhi Lithium ki demand kar di jahan tak ummid hai yah Ek ka radio active element hai aur radioactive element se bhi Kuchh banaa Nahin Sakta to ho sakta hai yah element vah nataliya Martin ke liye Manga Ho yah bus meri ek Soch hai....
Lo! Aaj ka gyaan le lo. :D

Lithium ek radioactive material nahi hota Bhai. :nana: woh ek non radioactive element hai. Lithium batteries me use hota hai. TV remotes se leke ye sab charging waali jitni cheezein hai unme kahi na kahi lithium hi use hota hai. Ya fir uske alternatives.

Baaki, ju samajhdar ho. You can take a guess. :D

Aur, kisne kaha ki radioactive elements ka use nahi bhai. :laugh: Radioactive elements se hi ye sab nuclear bombs bante hai. Toh ab samajh jao. Radioactive elements ke itne uses hai ki bataate bataate saalo nikal jayenge. Kyuki, koi ek element nahi hai. Dherr saare radioactive elements hote hai. Aur, unke apne apne uses hote hai. Ab mines se Rebecca kaun se elements leke gayi hai, ye toh wahi jaane.
FBCC Headquarters,
New York,

Jaisa ki Yahan per bahut se Logon Ne tukka Lagaya Tha ki vah lady f bcc ki director Ho sakti hai aur is Drishya mein Humne Dekha ki rebcaa elsher hi ....FBCC KI DIRECTOR HAI.
Ye bahut easy tha guess karna...! Saari hints saamne thi. :D
Lekin Iske bad dikhaya Gaya Drishya mein Humne Dekha ki director Sahiba bhi kisi ki under kam kar rahi hai jo Unse bhi takatvar hai Shayad vah mister X ho sakta hai.....
ine donon ki Baton Se Mujhe yah lagta hai director Saiba Ki Soch to sahi thi ...it means woh good Ke Sath Hai..... lekin Samne Wale Ki Soch To Bhagwan banne Ki Hai.....
Sirf soch se hum kisi ko judge nahi kar sakte. Jab thoda aur unhe screen time milega, unke baare me hum jaanenge tabhi hum kuch guess laga payenge. But... Abhi ke liye toh... Jo anuman lagao woh hi theek hai. :D Kyuki, kuch pata hi nahi hai unke baare me.
dekhte hain writer Sahab Hamen aage kya dikhate hain ....lage raho ...jindabad Raho ....khush raho
Bahut bahut dhanyavad itne bade revo ke liye man. :dost:
Ye revi readers ke nazariye se kaafi madadgar hoga unke liye. Jinhe update padhne ke baad bhi kuch clear na hua ho unke liye ye behatreen hai. Aur, kuch baato ka sudhaar Maine yaha kar diya hai. Toh woh alag hai. Thanks btw and keep supporting. ✨
 

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Yeh update mere liye 1 shocking update tha
Bahut se logo ke liye tha. :laughing:
1 : Werewolf bhai ne bina zada jankari k or raat 12 se pehle update de diya
Kya matlab? :silly:
2: Pari ka 1 Raaz khula k uski parsonality nhi insan he badal jata
Yup.
3: Rebecca kisi or k liye kaam kar rahi jo shayad Mr X ho sakta hai or woh apne kisi plan pe kaam kar rahe hai jo bahut khatarnak lag raha
Maybe or maybe not.
4 : Mere hisab se Fbcc mein Divya ko Lana bhi 1 socha samjha move tha taki woh Veer or team k aas pass reh sake
Maybe Divya bhi hyptonise thi
Who knows? :D
Ava ne apne Dil ki kafi baate Veer se keh di
Garofano ne bhi kafi hadh tak Veer k kareeb aa gayi or uska 1 or Raaz Veer pe khula k woh 1 Doctor he nhi badi surgeon bhi hai
Yessss!!!
Wohi bechari Erica apni feelings ko share nhi kar payi
Koi na... Bahut time hai. Haha!
System holders k groups Banna shuru ho Gaye jo aage Ane wali ladaiyon ko or khatarnak banayege
Bilkul!!!
Khair Veer ab Mumbai chal diya family mein bahut kuch jawab dena hai Veer ko or kuch naye mission bhi milege yahan bhi usko
Hum. Family saga along with the main plotline in parallel.
Werewolf bhai 1 request hai ho sake tho next Arc iss month k end Tak shuru kar dena

Happy Holidays 👍👍👍👍
Soch Raha hu ki abhi hi chaalu kar du. Jaise hi blueprint bann jaaye toh. Samay batayega. Thanks a lot btw. And, keep supporting. ✨
 

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Kya matlab? :silly:
Matlab yeh k iss baar update k liye hum readers zada shor nhi kiya or apko utna zada force Kiya jaisa ki or updates k liye waiting waiting k comments aate rehe hai
Or dusra yeh k aap updates mostly 12 am k baad dete ho iss baar aisa nhi hua

New Arc agar next 8-10 days mein shuru ho jati hai tho mere liye yeh 1 gud news hai
Keep writing 👍👍
 
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