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Wolfi buddy Maine ye bas isiliye kaha ki kyu ki tum mom and son incest bahut badhiya likhte ho or jis hisab se yaha maa bete ka pyaar missing hai thoda jisse tum dikha sakte ho isi liye Maine kaha but jesa tumhe theek LageAlready posted.
Usko personal me ek foursome sex waala update de dunga. Theek?
Bhavna, Shweta aur Veer teeno ko leke filhal koi aisa sex ke baare me nahi socha gaya hai honestly. But decide mein hi karunga ki kis orr le jaana hai ise.
Thanks a lot. Keep supporting.
Dekhna hoga hume.
Dekhna padega Bhai. Kahani lambi hai, aise ghabrao na.Bhai please yaar Aisa Naa karo yaar abhi or bhi arcs rakkho agar aise itni jaldi final arc aa jayega to Sara maza kirkira hojayega please buddy you are genius kuch bhi Karo bhai please itni jaldi final arc matlana abhi 7 unknown system holders bache hai agar aap sabhi PE ek arc nahi laate to koi baat nahi but kamse kam 7 ke hisab se aap ko abhi 7 system holders Wale 3 arc Lana hi cahiye 3 na sahi but 2 arc to bante hai baad main aap final arc laana it's aa humble request
We'll see.Wolfi buddy Maine ye bas isiliye kaha ki kyu ki tum mom and son incest bahut badhiya likhte ho or jis hisab se yaha maa bete ka pyaar missing hai thoda jisse tum dikha sakte ho isi liye Maine kaha but jesa tumhe theek Lage
Psycho aur prisoner dono ek hi hai yaar.Or bhai ye pagal doctor or prisonal ye dono carecter kis update main hai ye bata sakte ho kya wese to main pehle se ab Tak yaha sath hi hu story reading main par shayad mujhse ye dono carecter Wale update Dhyan se shayad na padhe ho mujhe bus us update ke number mil sakta hai kya
Garofano ka baap mara Gaya toh 6 Bach hai!!Jaw Long maara jaa chuka hai. Toh, ab 16 system holders jeevit hai. Jinme se-
1) Veer
2) Ava
3) Garofano
4) Renshu
5) Erica
6) Mr. X
7) Rebecca
8) Unknown system holder jo Renshu se bhida.
9) Aur, aap log jise prisoner keh ke pukaar rahe ho.
Ye 9 hai jinhe aap abhi tak system holders ki soochi me bitha rahe ho. Toh, aise me bach jaate hai 7. Jo ki sahi samay par apne apne darshan de jayenge.![]()
Ye konsa scene hai jo bina likhe padh liya tumne. Garofano ka baap system holderGarofano ka baap mara Gaya toh 6 Bach hai!!
Hahaha... As readers, we presume a lot of things, which may later come out to be true or may be totally off-track. This gives us a little thrill, to know whether our guess was right or wrong . Anyways, now what is clear is that there is only one system which different persons are running from a different planet. The level 9 system operator was most powerful and had the power to take control of the host. This was most dangerous as he could have taken control of Veer permanently, sending his soul to oblivion. One more thing, why only Veer's system is being operated by more then one person.Umm...! Mr. X ne apna purpose kab show kiya?Usne kab kaha ki woh system holders ko maarna chahta hai? Mujhe toh yaad nahi aa raha.
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TDekhna padega Bhai. Kahani lambi hai, aise ghabrao na.
Brainstorming bahut zyada karni padegi. Zaroori nahi hai ki harr system holder ke upar ek arc ho. Ek hi arc me kayi saare system holders saamne aa sakte hai. But haan, agar formulate accha karna hai toh time dena hoga mujhe kaafi. Aur, brainstorming hadd se zyada lagegi. Kyuki, mein bhi insan hu. Itne tagde tagde plots aur twists ke baad mera mind bhi khaali ho jaata hai. Toh ideas ke liye brainstorming lagti hi hai.
Aur, woh fir ek din bhi le sakti hai, ek saptah bhi aur ek mahina bhi.It depends on the mind. Arcs Jo bhi aayenge interesting rahenge. Aur, Chinatown jitne hi lambe rahenge at least. So, don't worry.
Bhtreen bat bs intezar ha update ka yh bata den kitna din tak aie gi kahen yh breek lambi na chli jaie aor hm intezar ki soli pr ltka rahenFir usme bhi ladayi hui toh? Ava aur Garofano agar ladne lagi ki mujhe ye waala Veer chahiye. Nahi mujhe wo waala chahiye. Toh? You know how girls can be sometimes you know...
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Ise kehte hai writer ki tactic.
Dekhna hoga hume. Abhi usme samay hai. Thanks btw.
Arrey bhai mein break pe hu.
Target poora ho gaya hai already. Par, ab naye arc ki blueprint bhi toh taiyar karni padegi na. Mein unn writers me se nahi hu jo flow ke hisab se chalte jaate hai. Jaisa mann me aaya likhte gaye aur story ko naya raasta dete gaye. Iss kahani ka poora raasta pehle se roughly tay hai. Bas, scenes kaise rakhne hai, kis hisaab se kin sequences ko pehle dikhana hai ye sab decide hota hai aur isliye harr naye arc ke pehle mein break leta hu. Thanks btw.