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Update - 179 ~ The Real Profession

[Note : This update contains a lot of information. So, read it carefully.]​

Ab tak...

Renshu : Kuch pak raha hai andar hi andar. Bahut gehraayi me...! Mujhe nahi laga tha itna involvement hoga kisi ka. Lekin, mein galat tha. Veer ne past zaroor dekha hoga Jaw Long ka...! Woh aur jankari hume de sakta hai.

Garofano : Par, galti tumhari hi hai. Akhir, tum use uss danav aadmi se ladne akele kaise bhej sakte ho?

Renshu (smiles) : Simply because of one reason...!

Garofano : Huh??

"Because, Veer is stronger than I am!!!"

Aur, ye bol sunte hi Garofano se leke baahar khadi Erica ke badan me raungte khade ho gaye.

Ab aage...

Ek vishalkay ghar ke mand raushni waale kamre me, hawa me ek bhaari sannata chhaya hua tha jo keval ek insaan ki saanson se toot raha tha. Dhalte sooraj ki halki raushni sarasar pardo ke madhyam se chhan kar, bistar par lete uss insaan ke chehre par naram kirne daal rahi thi.

Aur, ye Veer hi tha jiske maathe par silvatein chhaa hui thi. Usne kun-munate hue palke jhapkayi toh dheere-dheere aankhon se woh dhundhla-pann chhata. Aur, upar ki lakdi se bani bhoore rang ki ceiling uski nazar me aayi.

"Urgh-!"

Dard se karahte hue woh peeche lage takiye se tikne ko halka sa utha. Usne aas-paas dekha toh paaya ki woh Renshu ke ghar ke hi kisi kamre me tha. Yaani, jung samapt ho chuki thi. Apne badan par usne jab nazre daudayi toh pata chala ki uske gehre ghaavo par pehle se taake lage hue the.

Uska shareer jagah-jagah pattiyon se lipta hua tha, jo uske dwara ladi gayi ladayi me vijay hone, aur sehen-sheelta ki pareeksha ka ek saboot tha.

[Master-!!!]

Pari ki awaaz akasmat uske mann me goonji.

'Pari!'

[Ab kaisa mehsoos kar rahe hai aap?]

Woh chaahti toh khud-ba-khud Veer ke andhruni dard ko mehsoos kar pata laga sakti thi. Use ye sawal puchne ki zaroorat hi nahi thi. Lekin, fir bhi woh apni mann maani kar Veer ke mann me jhaakna nahi chaahti thi aur na hi uski anumati ke bina uske shareer ki jaanch padtaal karna chaahti thi. Woh chaahti thi ki jitna ho sake unke beech sanvaad ke zariye hi vicharo ka aadan-pradan ho.

'Dard toh kaafi hai. Mein jhooth nahi bolunga.'

Veer ne uske sawal par mann hi mann muskurate hue jawab diya.

[Don't worry! Samay samay par Beowulf aapko heal karta rahega. Aaj ka istemal maine subah hi kar liya tha, jab aap neend me the.]

'It's okay! Ab koi khatra nahi hai shayad...! Toh, mujhe Beowulf ki zaroorat nahi padne waali.'

[Hmm!]

Veer ke vichar raat ki ghatna ki orr chal pade. Kya hua tha? Woh aurat kaun thi? Aur, peeth peeche akhir kya kuch chal raha tha?

'Rebecca Elsher-!!!'

[Ye naam internet par available nahi hai, Master.]

'Toh fir do hi scenarios ho sakte hai.'

[Hmm?]

'Pehla ye ki- usne jo naam bataya woh fake ho sakta hai. Aur, dusra ye ki woh koi aisi personality hai jaha use apne naam ko gupt rakhne ki zaroorat hai.'

[Agar naam fake hai tab toh theek hai, Master. Par, agar woh waqai apne naam ko ek secret rakhne ki koshish kar rahi hai toh usne itni asaani se hume apna naam kyu bata diya?]

'Yahi toh mujhe samajh nahi aa raha, Pari! Shayad mujhe apna naam batane me use koi nuksaan nahi hai. Isliye, usne bata diya?'

[Usne ye bhi kaha tha ki woh aapki cute lover ki tarah nahi jo jhootha naam bataye.]

'Cute lover...!?'

[Umm...! Ava! Aur, kaun?]

'I know woh Ava ki baat kar rahi thi par woh meri cute lover kab se bann gayi?'

[Umm...! Master! Aapko nahi pata?]

'Huh? Kya nahi pata?'

[Umm-!! N-No, kuch nahi! It's good if you realise it by yourself. N-No! Don't realise it. Forget it. Mein use maaf nahi karne wali waise bhi.]

'Pari, tum fir mujhse kuch chhipa rahi ho?'

[No-!!! Maine kaha ki bhool jaiye jo kuch bhi maine kaha.]

'What? Tumne abhi kaha ki aap ko khud se realise hoga. Kis baare me keh rahi thi tum? Kahi tum ye toh nahi kehna chaah rahi ki Ava mujhse-!?'

Veer ko Ava ke bol yaad the. Usne hi Ava ko kaha tha ki woh jaa ke apne chaheete ki hifazat kare. Aur, ab Ava ka yaha aa jaana use bachaane ke liye. Iska kya matlab tha? Bhale hi prem ke maamle me woh thoda kaccha tha magar, woh itna bhi bewakoof nahi tha ki saamne se diye gaye ishaaro ko samajh na paaye.

Kintu, Pari toh jaise kuch kehne ko taiyar hi nahi thi.

[Nahi-!!! Mein nahi bataungi. I can't-! I'm sorry! I just can't forgive her.]

'Huh?'

[Mujhe yaad hai. Kaise usne hume dhoka diya tha. Uski wajah se... I could have lost you. She can't please me that easily. Usne hamari madad kari toh kya? Use bhi rewards mile hi honge. In the first place, agar woh hume dhoka deti hi nahi, toh Renshu hume bachata hi nahi. Aur, na hi hume uska favor chukane yaha aana padta aur na hi hum Jaw Long se bhidte. In other words, she's responsible for this domino effect. Period.]

'Hahahaha!'

Veer uski baaton par thahaake lagaate hue hass pada.

[Wh-What!? Why are you laughing?]

'Mein tumhari reasoning par hass raha hu... ki tumne kaha ki sab kuch Ava ki wajah se ho raha hai.'

[Toh maine galat kya kaha, Master?]

'Ab agar mein ye kahu ki system hi nahi hota toh mein iss daldal me fassta hi nahi. Toh?'

[That's-]

Veer ki palke aadhi jhuki aur usne ahista se aage bola.

'But then again-!!! Agar, tum nahi hoti toh kya mein zinda bhi rehta?'

[Master!]

Veer ne ek gehri saans chorrte hue apna dhyaan fir beeti hui vardat par lagaya.

'I'm confused, Pari!'

[Huh?]

'That Rebecca-!! Jaw Long ka past dekhne par mujhe pata chala ki woh mine me maujood radioactive elements ko paane ki firaq me thi. Aur, shayad woh use mil bhi gaye honge. Kya mein ye deduce kar sakta hu ki uske paas radiation se khud ko bachane ki koi skill hai?'

[Aapne sahi kaha, Master. Bina kisi protection ke woh aise radioactive elements ko apne saath nahi le jaa sakti.]

Veer apne haatho ko mod aur gehre chintan me doob gaya.

'Agar waqai aisa hai toh ab sawal ye uthata hai ki use woh elements kis liye chahiye bhala?'

[Jo bhi ho, par mujhe uske iraade theek nahi lag rahe, Master.]

'Mujhe bhi! Something is off. Aur, mujhe tumse bhi kuch sawal puchne hai.'

[I'm all ears, Master!]

'Mujhe Berserk card Jaw Long se praapt hua. Baaki cards aur skills ka kya? Mujhe pata hai ki saare cards aur skills nahi milti kabhi. Toh, woh sab jaati kaha hai?'

[It's simple, Master. Jaise aag ki lau bhujte hi mombatti ka dhua hawa me hi udd jaata hai. Waise hi system ka astitva uske owner ke marrte hi khatam ho jaata hai. Aur, woh saari bachi hui skills aur cards vatavaran me vileen ho jaate hai. Sab khatam!]

'I see! Kya cards ke distribution ka koi tareeqa hai? Jaw Long ke paas Animal Kingdom tha. Shayna's Access bhi. Woh cards mujhe kyu nahi mile?'

[Aapne sahi guess kiya, Master. Iska jawab hai insaan ki pravatti.]

'Hmm?'

[Insaan ki pravatti hi ye tay karti hai ki use kaun sa card milna hai. Master, kya aapne kabhi gaur nahi kiya? Aapke paas jitne bhi cards hai, kya unme se koi bhi evil card hai?]

'Huh?'

[Shayna's Access, Animal Kingdom, Shayna's Blood Ritual, Jemisha's Blood Ring. Ye sab buri pravatti ke hai, Master. Inme kahi na kahi kisi na kisi cheez ka dur-upyog hota hai. Jaha Animal Kingdom bechaare janvaro ko niyantran me karta hai, Jemisha's Blood Ring insaano ka khoon maangti hai, toh wahi Shayna's Blood Ritual me insan ko apne ang ka balidan dena padta hai buri shaktiyo ka istemal karne ke liye. Ab bataiye! Kya kabhi bhi aapko kisi ko nuksan pahuchane waala card mila hai?]

Veer, Pari ke iss sawal par apni chuppi saadhne par vivash ho gaya. Waqai! Use aaj tak kabhi bhi aisa koi bhi card avum skills praapt nahi hui thi jo dusro ko haani pahuchaye.

Limb Substitution jo uske paas tha. Agar, uska ang ukhad bhi jaaye toh uske istemal ke liye bhi Veer kabhi kisi nirdosh ka ang ukhaad ke apne khud ke liye nahi lega. Woh hamesha hi apne hi ang ko wapas se jodega bajaaye kisi aur ke ang ke.

'Samjha! Toh, Jaw Long ke paas inn cards ka hona matlab kya mein keh sakta hu ki woh buri pravatti ka maalik tha?'

[Nis-sandeh, Master!]

'I see!'

[Ab meri bhi aapse ek request hai, Master!]

'Hmm? Kya?'

[Jo kuch bhi hua. Iss baat ka pata kisi ko bhi lagna nahi chahiye. Aapne jo raat me kiya, uske baare me sirf aur sirf woh Jaw Long hi jaanta tha. Uske system ko sab pata lag gaya tha shayad. Magar, aap Ava aur Erica se kaafi dur the. Unki nazro me sab kuch aapne kiya tha. Pari ne nahi!]

'Hmm! Mein jaanta hu ki ye baat saajha karne jaisi nahi. Lekin-! Lekin, mujhe toh kuch bhi yaad nahi, Pari. Akhir hua kya tha? Jab mujhe hosh aaya tab woh Jaw Long mujhse kisi bheegi billi ki tarah dur bhaag raha tha.'

[Woh darasal aapse nahi-! Mujhse bhaag raha tha.]

'Y-Yeah, I know! Par, kya mein puch sakta hu ki kyu nahi bata sakta mein ye baakiyon ko?'

[Kyuki, ye bataane waali baat nahi hai Master. It might bring us trouble.]

'Hmm! Akhir, mere points dene ke baad aisa kya hua tha? Pari! Jawab do! Agar, mein uss waqt aur points de deta toh kya hota?'

Pari kuch pal ke liye khamosh reh gayi. Uske baad jo kuch bhi usne bataya, use sunn Veer ke hosh udd gaye.

[Agar, uss waqt aap zaroorat se zyada points de dete...! Toh, aap yaha nahi hote.]

'Kya matlab?'

[Matlab ye ki- *breathes* Usne aapke shareer par qabza kar liya hota. Aapke soul ko absorb kar liya hota. Aap iss duniya se gaayab ho chuke hote. Aapka astitv samapt ho gaya hota. Sirf aur sirf ye shareer reh jaata jo uske control me hota aur woh aapke shareer se zindagi jee rahi hoti. Apni mann marzi chala rahi hoti.]

Veer ke aankhein hairat ke maare feli hui thi. Usne itna bada jokhim uthaya tha use iss baat ka andesha tak nahi tha.

'K-Kya itni power hai, tumhari uss personality me?'

[Unfortunately, yes!]

'That means, I just dodged a bullet.'

[Yes! Aur, sirf wahi ye kar sakti thi. She was dying since the day she was activated to have you submit to her.]

'Aur, ant me mujhe uski baat maanani hi padi.'

[Kyuki, aapke paas koi aur chaara nahi tha. I agree! Lekin, kam se kam hum Jaw Long ke panjo se baahar aa paaye. Only she could have done that... Mein bhi agar waha hoti toh aapko waha se bacha nahi paati.]

'Huh?'

[Uske alawa meri koi bhi personality aapko uss situation se baahar nahi nikal paati, Master.]

'Yaani tum uski tarah mere shareer ko control nahi kar sakti?'

[Exactly! Only she... can take control of you.]

'What the hell-!!!

Veer jaise-jaise pichhli Pari ki personality ke baare me jaanta jaa raha tha woh utna hi hairan ho raha tha. Woh Pari apne iraado aur apni taaqat ko iss qadar chhipa ke rakhi hui thi, iska andaaza use ab lag raha tha.

Aur, ab uski samajh me aa raha tha ki kyu baaki system holders ke shareer ko unke system ne control nahi kiya. Kyuki, woh asamarth the. Keval aur keval wahi ye kar sakti thi.

Uski samajh me aa gaya ki kyu Crimson ya Jaw Long ke system ne kabhi aisa nahi kiya. Kya woh Pari ki aisi personality ko paake khush-kismat tha? Aur, agar haan toh uski ye khush-kismati kahi bad-kismati me toh nahi badalne waali thi?

[Aur, isliye- mein aapko ahinda se points dene ke liye mana kar rahi hu. Zaahir hai jaise mein wapas aayi hu, wo bhi wapas se activate hoyegi. Aur, aapko rijhaane ki koshish karegi. Tab, aap zara bhi uske jaal me mat fassna.]

'Woh wapas aayegi? Iska matlab harr baar new personalities nahi aati!? Repeat pe bhi aati hai?'

[Ek insaan ki thousand different personalities kaise ho sakti hai, Master. I have a limited number of personalities as well. Zaahir hai, woh repeat pe aati rahengi. And, sooner or later... she will come too-!!!]

'Toh tumhara kya, Pari? Tum kaise aa paayi? Aur, agar tum aa paayi toh... Baaki kaha hai?'

[It's because you were remembering me. I could feel your thoughts. And, also-]

'!!??'

[I missed you too, Master!]

'Ah-!!!'

[...]

'Samajh gaya! *sighs* It's a lot to take in...!

[It's okay, Master. Aapko zyada sochne ki zaroorat nahi. I'm here! You need not worry about anything else. Just focus on what's next.]

'Yeah!'

Woh abhi baitha hi hua tha jab-

*Creaks*

Darwaza khulne ki charmarahat sunn usne apni nazre uss orr pheri. Ek haseen chehra kamre me dakhil hua. Veer use dekh thoda taajub hua. Aur, woh aurat apne hontho par muskaan bikhere uske qareeb aane lagi.

Veer (surprised) : Garofano!??

Garofano : Oh? Tum jaag chuke ho? It's good to see you doing well, Veer. But we'll have to see how those bandages are holding up, shall we?




Veer : Huh?

Woh uske bistar ke nazdeek aayi. Uski adaayein haseen aur aatma-vishvas se bhari hui thi. Usne Veer ke shareer par bandhi pattiyo ka savdhani se nireekshan kiya, aur badi hi komalta se uski ungliyaan Veer ke badan par firne lagi.

Garofano : Hmm! Sab kuch theek tareeke se heal ho raha hai.

Veer : T-Tum yaha!?

Garofano (smiles) : Toh aur kaun hoyega bhala? Hmm?

Kehte hue woh uthi aur wahi rakhi ek table par se kuch medicines nikaalne lagi.

Veer : Par, tum yaha kyu?

Garofano : Hmm? Tumhe kya lagta hai? Tumhara ilaaj kisne kiya, Veer?

Puchte waqt uske chehre par ek kutil muskan thi. Veer ko jaise kuch gyaat hua. Ilaaj? Uski aankhein punah chakit hone ke chalti chaudi ho gayi.

Veer (surprised) : T-Tum-!? Iska matlab-

Garofano (turns) : Fufu~ Haan! Haan! Kaho!?

Veer : Tum...!? Ek doctor ho?

Garofano (smiles) : Not just a doctor but a surgeon as well-!!

Usne apni jeb se ek scalpel nikaalte hue Veer ko dikhaaya. Aur, agle hi shan Veer ko unn dono ke beech hui woh pehli mulaqat ke dauran uske dwara kahe gaye kuch bol yaad aa gaye.

"Such beautiful proportions. Your face is clearly the greatest asset. Wouldn’t it be bad if I cut it down? Hmm?"

Unn bol ke yaad aate hi ab Veer ko samajh aaya ki kyu Garofano ne aisa uss waqt uss se kaha tha.

Veer : Toh ye hai tumhara real profession? Jiske baare me tum sabse chhipa rahi thi? It makes sense now. Tumhara needles ka use karna, serum design karna, aur mere chehre ke baare me woh sab kehna.

Garofano (smiles) : Ohh! Tumhe yaad hai woh? Fufu~ It's good that you remember it.

Veer : ...

Garofano : Shayad tumhe ab kuch-kuch samajh aa gaya hoga. Yahi kaaran hai ki kyu Renshu mera saath chaahta hai. Because, I'm a surgeon who can operate on other system holders. Tum aam hospital me jaoge aur agar kisi doctor ne tumhare andar ki jaanch kar li toh pata hai kya hoga?

Veer : Huh?

Garofano (smirks) : Duniya ko pata lag jayega ki tum koi aam insaan nahi. Hamare andar ki healing process bahut zyada hai. Agar, kisi ne tumhari body ka analysis kiya, toh use ye baat samajhne me derr nahi lagegi ki tumhare shareer ke saath kuch na kuch gadbad hai.

Veer ko yaad aaya. Jab pehle bhi woh ghayal hua tha toh Karan ki parichit doctor Mrs. Mrinal ne hi uska ilaaj kiya tha. Tab bhi woh kuch sanshay me lag rahi thi, uski healing process ko leke. Aur, ab toh system aur bhi adhik upgrade ho chuka tha. Aise me apne shareer ka kisi ko aaklan karne dena bahut hi jokhim bhara tha.

Veer (frowns) : This is troublesome!

Garofano : Indeed! Ek system holder ka shareer ab woh rehesyamayi khazana bann chuka hai jiske baare me baahri duniya ko pata nahi lagna chahiye. Yahi kaaran hai ki kyu Renshu ne mujhe turant hi yaha bula liya. Kyuki, na hi woh khud apne shareer ki jaanch kisi aam doctor ko karne dega aur na hi tumhari jaanch ki zimmedari kisi aur ko saupega.

Veer : Par... Par, aise me toh ye bahut badi dikkat hai. Tum yaha thi isliye mera ilaaj kar paayi. Par, tum harr waqt harr kisi ke saath toh nahi ho sakti na? Uss case me-

Garofano : Beshaq! Mein harr jagah tumhare saath toh nahi ho sakti, Veer. Fir aise me tum agar ghayal hote ho toh tumhara ilaaj kaun karega? Right? Yahi hai na tumhari chinta? Well! Iska jawaab mere paas nahi. Tumhe kisi na kisi ko dhundhna hi padega, jo hamare raaz ko apne tak hi chhipa ke rakh sake.

Veer : Ye aur bhi mushqil hoga.

Garofano : Lekin, mujhe vishvaas hai tum kisi na kisi ko dhundh hi loge. Aur, agar nahi bhi dhoondh paaye toh aur bhi accha hai. Kyuki, mein toh chaahti hi nahi ki tumhare iss badan ki jaanch mere alawa koi aur kare.

Veer : Huh?

Garofano (winks) : Hahaha! I'm just joking!

Veer (frowns) : There are more things. I want to know everything. Tell me! No excuses! And, no lies.

Garofano : My my... Itna gussa!? Puchne se pehle kam se kam ek 'thank you' to banta hi tha na, Veer? After all, maine hi tumhara ilaaj kiya hai.

Veer khamosh raha. Abhi tak uski pehchan me jitne bhi system holders the unme se Garofano sabse zyada rehesyamayi thi uske liye. Yaha tak ki Ava bhi itni zyada mysterious nahi thi jitni woh thi. Isliye, Veer kahi na kahi hamesha se hi uske prati apna guard rakh raha tha. Garofano ne uski chuppi dekh ek gehri saans li aur fir boli.

Garofano : Yohana's Scalpel, Veer!

Aur, uske utna kehte hi Pari ne Veer ke samaksh saari jankari rakh di.




Ek aisa card jo surgery ki vidhi se leke uska saara gyaan aur uski qala praapt karwata tha.

Garofano : Yahi woh card hai jiski wajah se mein itne kam samay me itna bada business khada kar paayi. Mere paas business ki koi alag se skills nahi.

Veer : Hmm?

Garofano : Tumhe ab sab samajh aa hi gaya hoga. Koreans apni sundarta ko leke kitne possesive hai ye baat tum jaante hi hoge. Bade-bade celebrities se leke chhote-chhote stars tak plastic surgeries karwate hai. In fact, ye kehna galat nahi ki Korea me plastic surgery bahut common hai.

Veer ye baat jaanta tha. Korea unn desho me se tha jaha sundarta ko bahut tavajjo di jaati thi. Aur, duniya me agar sabse adhik plastic surgeries karwane waala koi desh tha toh woh tha Korea. Jinme aurte badh chadh ke iss hod me aage rehti thi. Kareeban, harr raah chalti 5 ladkiyo me se ek ladki plastic surgery waali hoti thi.

Chhoti se chhoti surgeries ka bhi kam se kam 2000-4000$ ka kharcha aata tha. Jo desi rupaye me tabdeel kiye jaaye toh 1.5 lakh ke bhi upar ka budget. Agar, Yohana's Scalpel jaisa card Garofano ke paas tha, toh na jaane usne kitni hi surgeries ab tak kar di hongi.

Veer ne jaise hi aaklan lagaya, woh siwae aashcharya hone ke aur kuch na kar saka.

Veer : Log tumhe iss profession se jaante hai?

Garofano : Nahi! I'm an anonymous surgeon. Mein kisi hospital me kaam nahi karti. Mera khud ka clinic hai. Mere khud ke equipments hai.

Veer : Toh customers kaise aate hai?

Garofano : Kisi ek jaani maani celebrity ki aap surgery kar do. *smiles* Uske baad khabar apne aap fel jaati hai. Mein hamesha hi apna face hide kar ke ye kaam karti aa rahi hu. Mein social groups me kaafi famous hu, you know. They call me the ~ anonymous surgeon. Fufu-!

Veer : Everything is making sense now.

Garofano : Celebrities aksar auro se behtar dikhne ke liye saare nuskhe apnaate hai. Meri perfect surgery ke baad woh sirf apne qareebi ko hi mere baare me bataate hai taaki harr koi mujhse surgery na karwa paaye.

Veer : Akhir, kitna paisa kama liya hoga tumne inn sab se?

Garofano (smiles) : Itna ki mein 'Garofano products' ko worldwide famous bana paayi.

Veer (sighs) : No wonder!

Woh muskurati hui table par se kuch medicines lekar aayi aur Veer ke haatho me unhe thamaate hue boli.

Garofano : Ye lo! Inhe jaldi se lo!

Veer : Ye kis liye?

Garofano : Uff-oh! Tum sawal bahut karte ho. Ye pain killer hai. Bhale hi humara system hume dheere-dheere heal kar hi dega par medicines hamari healing process me ek catalyst ki tarah kaam karti hai. Behtar hoga hum jitna jaldi ho sake utna jald heal ho. Right?

Veer : Hmm!

Garofano ki nazar jaise hi Veer ke seene par punah padi toh woh uske gale me latke uss pendant ko haatho me lete hue puchi.

Garofano : Tumne abhi tak mera pendant pehna hua hai?

Ye wahi pendant tha jo usne khud Veer ko pehnaya tha hotel Casa Belle me. Jab woh Veer ke vaar ko dodge kar uske upar se hoke guzar gayi thi, tabhi usne badi hi chalaaki se ye pendant Veer ke gale me daal diya tha.

Veer : Yeah! Kyu? Kya utaar dena chahiye mujhe?

Garofano : Not at all-!!

Veer ne fir dawayi ka wrapper khol dawayi nikali aur bina use check kar gatak li aur ye dekhte hi Garofano ki muskan aur bhi badh gayi.

Veer : Kya hua?

Garofano (smiles) : Dekh rahi hu ki tumne dawayi ko check tak nahi kiya. Kya itna bharosa hai mujhpe?

Veer : Kyuki, mein jaanta hu ki dawayi me kuch gadbad nahi thi.

Garofano : Itna confidence kaise?

Veer : Simply, because you won't take any risk to hurt me here.

Garofano (frowns) : I will never hurt you, Veer!

Veer (glances) : ...

Garofano : Anyways! Maine tumhe mana kiya tha na? I warned you. Jaw Long se bhidne mat jaana par-

Veer (sighs) : I had to. Maine Renshu ko vachan diya tha. Uske baad mein mukar nahi sakta.

Garofano : Lekin-

Veer : I'm a man of my words.

Ek pal ke liye Garofano uske chehre ko ek taq dekhti rahi. Uske baad baat palatate hue puchi.

Garofano : Toh? Meri di hui shirt ka kya hua? Did you lose it?

Veer : Ah! Sorry about that... Ladayi ke waqt woh fatt gayi. Tumhari needles aur serum bhi. Mein unka istemal kar hi nahi paaya.

Garofano (sighs) : Don't worry! I'll give you some more later.

Veer : Kya ek sawal puch sakta hu?

Garofano : Hmm? *nods* Zaroor!

Veer : Tum akhir meri itni parvah kyu kar rahi ho? Pehle din se hi tum meri madad karti aa rahi ho. Akhir, tumhara irada kya hai?

Garofano : Irada? Veer, kya harr koi kisi ke paas uska fayda uthaane ke liye rehta hai kya? I simply enjoy your company. Aur, wese bhi jis hisaab se system holders ek dusre ke groups bana rahe hai kya ye behtar nahi ki hamare beech bhi acchi dosti ho?

Veer : Ek dusre ke groups-!? Ek minute-

Magar, uske bolo ko beech me kaatate hue woh achanak hi Veer ki orr jhuki. Uska seena Veer ki chaathi se jaa laga aur garam saansein Veer ke kaano par padne lagi. Woh uske kaan ki orr aur badhte hue apne gulabi honth nazdeek le gayi.

Garofano : Aur, wese bhi mein dhokebaazo me se nahi. Agar, mein tumhari jagah hoti toh uss Ava ko apne nazdeek rakhne se pehle sau baar sochti.

*Creaks*

Aur, uska itna kehna hi tha ki darwaze ki awaaz punaah aayi aur Ava dehleez par khade unn dono ko iss qadar dekh wahi ruk gayi. Uske haatho me ek phoolo ka khubsoorat sa bouquet tha.




Garofano ye dekhte hi ek kutil muskan liye Veer ke gaalo ke nazdeek aayi aur-

*Kiss*

Uske gaal ko halka sa choomte hue woh uske seene par se uthi. Veer ke gaal pal bhar ke liye sharmsaar ho gaye. Darwaze par khadi Ava ne jaise hi ye dekha toh uski aankhein felti chali gayi. Nazre wahi tiki hui thi jidhar Garofano apna haath Veer ke seene par rakhi thi.

Garofano (smiles) : Meri baat ko yaad rakhna. It's better to be safe than sorry. Take care, Veer!

Aur, itna bol woh apni jagah se uthi. Uske uthate hi Ava kamre ke andar dakhil hui aur dono haseenayein ek dusre ke bagal se aise nikli jaise maano kisi chumbak ke same poles ek dusre ke qareeb se guzar rahe ho.

Ek shan ke liye dono ki nazre ek dusre se bhidi. Laga jaise chingariyaan baras rahi thi. Aur, bina kuch kahe woh dono hi apni-apni disha me aage badh gayi. Bin bole hi hazaar vaakya unki nazro dwara keh diye gaye the.

Garofano chalte-chalte baahar jaane ko hui parantu, ek baar woh mud ke Veer ko zaroor dekhi. Aur, muskurate hue waha se ravana ho gayi.




Idhar, Ava ki mutthi kasi hui thi. Glaani, krodh, nirasha, chinta saare bhaav ek saath uske andar samaye hue the.

Ava : V-Veer!

Veer ne nazre upar kar use dekha. Woh bebas si nazar aa rahi thi.

Veer : Ava!?

Ava : M-Mein...! Mein tumhare liye ye flowers laayi thi. I thought they might cheer you up.

Woh asahaj mehsoos kar guldaste ko yuhi pakdi rahi. Kintu, Veer ne aage badh woh nahi thama.

Veer : Thanks!

*Silence*

Dono ke beech ek bhaari sannata chhaya, jo ankahe tanaav se bhar gaya.

Ava : K-Kaisa mehsoos kar rahe ho ab?

Veer : Aisa jaise kisi truck ne mujhe kuchal diya ho. But I'm healing...!

Ava : V-Veer! Veer...! I-!! Mujhe tumse kuch kehna tha.

Veer : ???

Ava : I'm-!!! I'm sorry Veer-!!!!

Usne achanak hi sarr jhukaate hue teevra swar me kaha.

Ava : I'm sorry! Mera kabhi bhi ye iraada nahi tha ki cheezein... cheezein iss tarah se ghatit ho.

Veer (smiles) : Kya waqai? I doubt it!!!

Ava (panics) : Noooooo-!!! I swear-!!! It was my mistake...! A stupid impulsive mistake. Veer, mein-

Veer jaanta tha ki Ava kis cheez ke liye uss se maafi maang rahi thi. Toh wahi Ava bhi, na jaane akhir kitni himmat kar ke uss se maafi maangne aayi thi.

Veer : Kitni ajeeb baat hai ki galtiyon ke bhi parinaam hote hai. Nuksan dayak parinaam-! *sigh*

Ava : Mein jaanti hu!!! Aur, mein use theek karne ke liye kuch bhi karungi, Veer! Kuch bhi!!!

Veer (softens slightly) : Mujhe nahi lagta tum ise theek karne ke liye kuch kar sakti ho, Ava. Y-You... You broke my trust.

Veer ki nigaahein uske chehre par se hatt gayi. Kehte waqt uske swar me nirasha saaf jhalak rahi thi.

Ava (desperately) : Mujhe pata hai, Veer-!!! I know! Aur, iske liye mein khud se nafrat karti hu. I hate myself for doing that-!!!

Kehte hue Ava ki aankhon me aansu panap uthe jinhe dekh Veer ke bhaav apne aap narm pad gaye. Akhir, Ava ne bhi apni maa ko toh khoya hi tha.

Veer (sighs) : Dekho, Ava! Mujhe nahi lagta ki abhi iss baare me hume baat karni chahiye. Lekin, tumhara yaha aana aur mere liye ye bouquet laana. I really appreciate it.

Jitna Veer uss se apni nazre chura raha tha, jitna woh uss se dur bhaag raha tha, jitna uss se baat karne aur bharosa karne me katra raha tha utna hi Ava ke dil me glaani ka khanjar khus ke use ghayal karta jaa raha tha.

Woh himmat kar apna haath aage badhate hue Veer ke haath ke upar rakhi.

Ava : Kya hum... Kya hum kam se kam cheezon ko suljhane ki koshish kar sakte hai?

Veer : I... I don't know...! I mean-! I need time to think.

Ava apne aansu pochhte hue sarr haan me hilayi. Uske liye Veer ka ye jawab uske nakaar dene ya chuppi saadhne se laakh guna behtar tha.

Ava (nods) : I understand! You can have all the time you need.

Dono afsos aur laalsa ke mishran se bhari ek lambi nazar saajha karte rahe, jab Veer ne nazro ko ferrte hue baat ko ghuma diya.

Veer : Why don't you have a seat?

Uske kehne par Ava wahi rakhi ek chair par uske bagal se baith gayi. Veer ne dekha ki woh pehle se kaafi behtar prateet ho rahi thi. Shayad Garofano ne uska ilaaj bhi kar diya tha. Use wese bhi zyada kisi ilaaj ki zaroorat nahi thi.

Bas, ek khamoshi fir chhayi rahi. Jo awkwardness unke beech thi woh punah barkarar ho gayi. Veer ne hi fir iss shaanti ko bhang karte hue pucha.

Veer : Abhi... Kya time hua hai?

Ava : Hmm? Oh! Abhi... Abhi shaam ke lagbhag 6 baj rahe hai.

Veer : Matlab hum raat me idhar aa gaye the?

Ava : Raat me nahi actually... H-Hume aate-aate subah ke 4:30 baj chuke the.

Veer : Ohh!?

Aur, firse ek baar khamoshi ne apni jagah bana li. Ava hazar shabd kehna chaahti thi magar, uske muh se ek shabd bhi nahi nikal raha tha. Uski nazre bas idhar-udhar hi daud rahi thi. Badi mushqil se usne himmat kar kuch pucha.

Ava : Kahi ab dard hai?

Veer : Hmm? Violet ne mujhe medicine di hai. So, jald hi dard kam ho jayega.

Ava : Violet???

Veer : Ah! Mera matlab Garofano se tha.

Sunte hi Ava ka badan ek baar fir thitur gaya. Veer ko Garofano ka asli naam bhi pata tha? Aur, woh uss ladki ko uske asli naam se bula raha tha. Kyu? Kya unke beech kuch chal raha tha? Aur, woh kuch shan pehle kiya gaya chumban...! Woh kya tha?

Bechari Ava behad hi pareshan ho uthi. Akhir, unn dono ke beech aisa kya rishta tha? Dono kab se ek dusre ko jaante the? Ab ye tamaam sawaal uske mann me utpann hone lage.

Veer : Wese...

Ava : Huh???

Veer : Thanks!

Ava : ?????

Kehte hue Veer ne uske haath se woh bouquet thaama aur khubsoorat phoolo ko halke haatho se chhoote hue aage bola.

Veer : Tumhare waha hone se hi...! Mujhe sleep ka time mil paaya tha. Agar, tum na hoti toh mere saath-saath Erica bhi maari gayi hoti. Tumhare waha hone se hi mein situation ko tumhare upar chorr paaya aur recover ho paaya. Uske baad hi Jaw Long ko maarna possible hua. Warna-

Ava : N-No-! I didn't do much!

Veer : No, you did!

Ava : Huh!!?

Veer : Isliye... Thanks!

Ava : I-

Ava kuch bolne ki haalat me hi na rahi.

Veer : Na sirf uske liye, balki iss bouquet ke liye bhi. Tumhe samay kab mila ye laane ke liya?

Ava : B-Bas abhi din me.

Veer : Ohh! Matlab tumne area already explore kar liya?

Ava : Just a bit.

Veer : Hmm!

Ava : I think I should fill you in about the situation.

Veer : Huh? Yeah! Right! Meri behoshi ke baad kya-kya hua?

Ava : Din me hi Chinese government ke officials ne news me declare kar diya ki Yunnan ki mine ab unke under aa chuki hai. Din bhar officials yahi par hi the. Sab kuch discuss hota raha. Mujhe bhi jo cheezein nahi pata thi woh pata chali.

Veer : Legion aur Order ka kya?

Ava : Legion ke Lord ki death ke baad 'Ken' unka naya Leader hai. Aur, Legion aur Order ne haath milaate hue peace ki treaty sign ki hai. Saare news reporters din bhar yahi telecast kar rahe the. Sab abhi kuch derr pehle hi fursat hue hai. Aur, sabhi tumhare hosh me aane ka intezar kar rahe hai.

Veer : I see!

Ava : Kya tum... Woh nahi puchoge?

Veer : Huh? Kya?

Ava : I mean...! Mujhe kya mila? Rewards ke roop me?

Veer : I don't think I should ask that, right?

Ava : Nahi! Mein tumse ab kuch bhi chhipana nahi chaahti, Veer. I will never-!! I want to share everything with you.

Veer : !?

Ava : Mujhe do skills mili hai. Explo Artisan aur Tribal Survival. Aur, saath hi ek perk bhi. Shrapnel.

Veer : Ah! Right! Perks!!!

'Pari!!!'

[Mein jaanti hu aap kya puchne waale hai. Toh, mein apne aap hi bata deti hu. 'Perk hunt' ek new feature hai, Master. Harr mission complete karne ke baad aapko ek choice di jayegi.]

'Choice?'

[Yes! Perks ko select karne ki. Teen hidden perks aapke saamne aayenge jo random rahenge. Usme se jo bhi perk aap select karenge woh aapke perks me add ho jayega.]

'Ohh!'

[Par, dhyaan rahe. Perks positive bhi hote hai aur negative bhi. Also, ye perks sirf temporary basis par hi rahenge. Permanent nahi. Inki limits hoti hai.]

'Huh?'

[Positive perks aapki help karenge toh wahi negative perks aapke liye mushqile bhi paida kar sakte hai. It's all based on your luck.]

'Toh, Ava ko jo perk mila hai. Shrapnel! Woh kaisa hai?'

[Ava ka system probably abhi level 9 par hi hai. That's why woh Perk ko access nahi kar paa rahi. Kyuki, system level 10 par hi perk hunt unlock hota hai aur unka istemal kiya jaa sakta hai. Ava ka perk 'Shrapnel' uski 'Explo Artisan' skill me madad karega.]

'Woh kaise?'

[Aapko yaad hai jab aap Jaw Long ke banaye gaye explosives par perr rakh diye the?]

Veer ke mann me woh manzar daud gaya. Jab woh Jaw Long ke dwara uski Explo Artisan skill ka shikaar ho gaya tha. Aur, usi dhamake me uski shirt aur Garofano ke dwara di gayi sabhi needles wahi bikhar gayi thi.

'Haan! Mujhe yaad hai!'

[Ava ko Explo Artisan mili hai iska matlab woh ab explosives design kar sakti hai. Lekin, 'Shrapnel' perk unn explosives ki explosiveness ko 25% se badha dega.]

'Iska matlab-!'

[Aapne sahi socha. Dhamaka 25% teevra hoga. Yahi kaaran hai ki kyu Jaw Long ka dhamaka hamare liye itna ghatak tha.]

'I get it!'

Ava : Veer!? Veer? Kaha kho gaye?

Ava ne jab use itni derr shaant paaya toh woh haath hilaate hue use uske mann se baahar laayi.

Veer : Huh? Nahi! Kuch bhi nahi! Tumhara perk system level 10 hone ke baad hi istemal me aa payega.

Ava : H-Haan, mujhe Lily ne bata tha thoda-thoda iss baare me.

Veer : Lily!?

Ava : Umm...! Meri system!

Veer : Ohh!!! Right!

Aur, isi tarah dono me halki fulki baatein thodi derr aur hui. Iske baad Veer ko araam karne dene ke liye woh baahar aa gayi. Woh khush thi ki kam se kam unke beech vartalap toh hone lagi thi. Ye unke naye rishte ki ek nayi shuruat thi.

***

Agla din hua. Veer ne uss poori raat se leke din tak araam farmaya. Uska badan kaafi heal ho chuka tha aur toh aur Garofano ne kuch jagah ke taake bhi nikaal diye the.

Beowulf apna kaam ekdum behatreen dhang se kar raha tha. Saath hi uske badan par lipti pattiyaan bhi kaafi kuch khul chuki thi. Pait par bandhi hi bas ek patti thi jise abhi tak nahi nikala tha.

Shaam ka waqt ho raha tha aur Erica bhi pehle se behtar mehsoos kar rahi thi. Woh apne pita, Renshu aur Garofano avum Ava ke saath hall me hi thi jab Veer ne hall me dastak di. Aur, teeno ladkiyo ki nigaahein uss par tik gayi.

Renshu : Veer!!! Aao! Tumhara hi intezar tha.

Veer : Hmm? Sab yahi hai?

Garofano (smiles) : Hum sab tumhara hi wait kar rahe the.

Veer : Ohh!

Veer chalte hue unn sab ke nazdeek aaya. Renshu ne shaam ke snacks ki plate aage karte hue usko saunpi.

Renshu : Aaj shaam ke snacks Erica ne banaaye hai. Khaas indo-chinese, tumhare liye. Mujhe yaad hai ki tum non-veg nahi khaate. Isliye, ye sab kuch vegetarian hi hai.

Apne pita ke muh se 'khaas tumhare liye' sunte hi bechari Erica ke gaal laal ho gaye. Woh Veer se apni nazre churaane lagi. Veer ne dekha ki ek plate me jaha spring rolls rakhe the.

Toh wahi side me ek bowl me manchou soup bhi tha. Woh khud hi 'absolute chef' ki wajah se ek behtareen chef tha. Muskurate hue usne spring rolls ke zayke ka swaad liya. Toh woh haami bharte hue bola.

Veer : Mmm! Waqai! Ye badhiya bane hai.

Erica jo ek aas liye uske chehre ko taktaki laga ke dekhti jaa rahi thi woh apne khaane ki bani tareef sunte hi khil uthi.

Renshu (frowns) : Ab kuch zaroori baatein, Veer!

Veer : Hmm?

Renshu : Hum sab jaanana chaahte hai ki tumne Jaw Long ke past me kya dekha?

Veer (nods) : Hmm! Jaw Long kisi ke saath mila hua tha. Past mein poora nahi dekh paaya. Lekin, jitna dekha utna kaafi hai sab kuch samajhne ke liye.

Garofano : Poora nahi dekh paaye matlab?

Veer : Samjhata hu. Jaw Long ke paas Rebecca Elsher naam ki system holder aayi thi.

Garofano : Rebecca Elsher-!?

Veer : Hmm! Usne ek deal rakhi thi Jaw Long ke liye. Jaw Long kaise bhi kar ke Order ko hathiyana chahta tha. Par, uske liye use aur taqat ki zaroorat thi. Aur, isliye Rebecca uske liye woh deal leke aayi.

Renshu : Kaisi deal?

Veer : Yahi ki woh Jaw Long ko insaan laa ke degi.

Renshu : Insaan?

Veer : Maut ke ghaat utaarne ke liye.

Erica : Ah!!?

Veer : Woh ek black magic practitioner tha. Uske paas aisi aisi skills thi jinme sacrifices ka upyog hota tha. Rebecca ne use woh sacrifices uske haatho me laa ke diye. Aur, badle me usne apni bas ek maang rakhi thi.

Renshu : Hmm?

Veer : Wo ye ki mine praapt hone ke baad woh usme se kuch radioactive elements apne saath leke jayegi.

Garofano : Radioactive elements? Kis liye?

Veer : Yahi toh nahi pata. Par, agar ek system holder ye sab kar raha hai toh zahir hai ki uska uddeshya bhalayi karne ka toh nahi hai.

Renshu (frowns) : Jitna maine socha tha, ye uss se bhi zyada pechida nikla.

Veer : Aur, mein uska past poora nahi dekha paaya. Kyuki, past me hi uss Rebecca ne kuch karna chaaha tha.

Renshu : Huh?

Veer : Uske paas shayad mind ke saath khilvaad karne ki koi skill hai. Shayad hypnosis ya aur kuch. Jaise hi mein aage dekh paata, usne apni pocket watch nikali aur past me hi woh- mujhe jaise hypnosis kar sab kuch bhulwa dena chaahti thi.

Garofano : Whaaaattt???

Renshu (shocked) : Past me hi-!? Agar, ateet me hi usne ye kiya hai. Iska matlab... Woh bahut pehle se hi bahut aage ki soch ke chal rahi hai. Usne ateet me hi tumhari memory ko vanish karna chaaha. Yaani woh jaanti thi ki aisa kuch hoga.

Veer : Hmm!

Renshu : Kya usne black hat pehni hui thi?

Veer : Huh? Tumhe kaise pata?

Renshu : Kyuki... Kyuki, woh mere saamne hi helicopter me savar hoke bhaagi thi. Aur, Divya uske kandho par thi.

Jaise hi Veer ne ye vaakya suna woh apni jagah se uth khada hua.

Veer : Kya matlab? Divya!! H-Haan! Divya kaha hai? Woh mujhe kal se hi nahi dekhi.

Ava (frowns) : Divya ko woh aurat apne saath le gayi, Veer.

Veer ki mutthi zorr se kasi. Aur, woh apna haath kass ke table par patakne hi waala tha ki usne aenn waqt par khud ko rok liya.

Renshu : Mein samajh sakta hu ki tumhe kaisa mehsoos ho raha hoga. Par, abhi gusse se nahi dimaag se kaam lene ka waqt hai, Veer.

Veer (nods) : Right! Woh Divya ko kuch nahi karenge. P-Par-

Par, uske bawajood woh apne andar ki ghabrahat ko daba nahi paa raha tha.

Garofano : Divya ek aam insaan hai. Mujhe nahi lagta ki woh uske saath abhi kuch karenge. Aur, Divya ko wapas le jaane ka shayad ek hi maqsad ho sakta hai.

Unn sabhi ki nazre punah Veer par tik gayi. Sab jaante the ki Divya aur Veer ke beech hi qareebi ka ek rishta tha.

Renshu : Woh Divya ke zariye tumhe baahar laane ki koshish karenge.

Garofano (nods) : Exactly!

Renshu : Aur, woh akeli nahi hai. There was a man!! Ek system holder aur tha jisne mujhe ghayal kiya tha.

Veer (surprised) : You got wounded?

Renshu (nods) : Hmm!

Veer : Kaun tha?

Renshu : Usne apna chehra dhak rakha tha. Lekin, woh ek agile system holder hai. Raftar hi uska hathiyaar hai. Aur, aksar teer kamaan ka prayog karta hai. Uske teer kisi cheez se sparsh hote hi dhamaake me badal jaate hai. Dusre shabdo me, woh explosive arrows rakhta hai.

Veer (nods) : Got it!

Renshu : Veer! Hum sab ne milke kuch socha hai.

Veer : Hmm?

Renshu : Hume ek alliance ki zaroorat hai.

Veer : Alliance?

Renshu : Hmm! Jo kuch abhi humne dekha uske baad se koi sanshay nahi hona chahiye ki kuch system holders group me kaam kar rahe hai. Aur, unka maqsad kuch theek nahi lag raha. Hum pehle se hi ek dusre ke saath parichit ho chuke hai. Aise me ye behtar hoga ki hum ek dusre ka dhyaan rakh sake.

Veer (nods) : Hmm! Toh?

Renshu : Mein chaahta hu ki hum sab baari-baari bataaye ki iss ladaayi ke dauran unhe kya-kya rewards mile aur kitne points mile. Taaki, hamare beech ek transparency bani rahe aur ek dusre par vishvas karna hum sab ke liye asaan ho jaaye.

Veer : Hmm! Mujhe koi aapatti nahi hai.

Renshu : Hmm! Toh mein hi shuruat karta hu. Mein jhooth nahi bolunga. Mujhe iss ladaayi se sirf 5000 points hi praapt hue hai. System level 10.

Erica : A-Aur mujhe 1000. Also, basic seer vision skill bhi mili hai. Aur, mera system ab level 9 par aa chuka hai.

Ava : I got 10,000 points. And, Explo Artisan, Tribal Survival ye do skills mili hai mujhe Jaw Long se. And, also ek perk hai 'Shrapnel' ke naam se. System level is 9.

Garofano : Umm...! Well! Tum sab jaante ho ki maine isme participate kiya hi nahi so, I got nothing, okay? Par, fir bhi... Kahi aisa na lage tumhe ki maine kuch bataya nahi toh bharose ke liye mein apne cards share karti hu. I have Yohana's Scalpel jo mujhe ek skilled surgeon banata hai. And, the other card which I have is ~ Scourge! And, my system level is 10.

*Ding*

Garofano ke muh se card ka naam nikalte hi idhar Pari ne Veer ke mann me uss card ka description prastut kar diya.




'Ohh! Toh ye tha woh card!'

Aur, Veer ko turant hi yaad aa gaya jab Garofano ne Renshu ke ghar par hamla kiya tha toh uski aankhein hare rang se kyu chamak rahi thi. Toh, ye card tha jo usne uss samay equip kar rakha tha.

Jab sab ne apne baare me bata diya toh sab Veer ke uttar ke liye uska intezar karne lage. Aur, usne bina koi reward chhipaate hue sab bata diya.

Veer : Mujhe 15,000 points mile hai. Berserk card mila hai. Aur, Aura Vision, Radio protective skills mili hai.

Erica : That much-!??

Veer : Hmm? Yeah! Uske badle me mujhe bahut kuch chukana bhi pada.

Kehte hue usne apne shareer ki orr ishara kiya jaha jagah jagah use chotein pahuchi thi. Aur, Erica ye dekh turant hi shaant ho gayi. Use woh manzar yaad tha jab Veer unn janvaro se bhaag raha tha. Uska woh khoon se lathpath shareer par woh nidar chehra jo haar maanane ko taiyaar nahi tha. Woh ant me uska khade hona aur aisi fight ka demonstration dena jo usne kabhi apne sapne me bhi imagine nahi ki thi.

Ye sab baatein kaafi thi uske puraane ego ko choor-choor karne ke liye. Woh laalsa bhari nazre Veer ke chehre ki orr tikaayi jaise kahi kho gayi.




Renshu : Aur, Erica tum-!!! Maine tumhe samjhaya tha na ki frontline missions ke liye tum taiyaar nahi? Tumhe zara bhi andaza hai ki tumne kya kiya tha? Tum Order ke logo ko yu akela chorr bhaag nikli? Humne apne 6 aadmiyon ko khoya hai tumhe pata hai?

Erica : I... I was...

Veer ne jab dekha ki Erica apne pita ke aage kuch bol nahi paa rahi toh woh khud hi bol pada.

Veer : Don't blame her!

Renshu : Hmm?

Erica : ???

Veer : Ava ne mujhe bataya tha ki jab mein behosh tha aur woh Jaw Long se bhidi hui thi toh Erica ne hi meri hifazat ki thi Jaw Long ke uss eagle se.

Renshu : Ohh!?

Veer (smiles) : So, don't blame her. Woh ab frontline missions ke liye taiyar hai. She... has grown up!

*Ba-dump*




Maano jaise Erica ka dil ek dhadkan phaand liya. Woh mudte hue apne bagal se khade Veer ko dekhi. Aur, uski nigaahein chumbak ki tarah Veer ke chehre par jamm gayi. Dil ki dhadkane tezz ho chuki thi. Achanak hi uske gaalo ka paara badhne laga aur woh swayam apni nazro ko ferrte hue khud ko dosh dene lagi.

Ye kya ho raha tha uske saath? Itni zorro se uska dil toh kabhi nahi dhadka tha. Aur, woh bhi Veer ke prati kyu? Woh toh hamesha se hi Veer ke khilaf bolti aayi thi. Unhe mile hue itna samay bhi nahi hua tha. Fir kyu?

[Ohh!? Have you fallen for him?]

'Wh-What?*blushes* Nooo! Shut up, Genie!!!'

[Well, you have got a hard competition my girl. Look around you. There are two very competitors present in this room.]

'Huh!?'

Erica ne jaise hi dekha toh paaya ki Ava aur Garofano bhi Veer ko hi dekh rahi thi. Aur, unki aankhon me bhi wahi bhaav the jo kuch derr pehle uski khud ko aankhon me the.

Usne apna sarr zorro se hilaate hue inn vichaaro nikaalne ki koshish kari aur gehri saans lete hue shaant ho gayi.

Renshu : Mujhe ek baat bas khatak rahi hai.

Veer : Kya?

Renshu : Akhir, woh Rebecca bhaag ke nikal kaise gayi?

Veer : Hmm?

Renshu : Woh helicopter se gayi thi. Mujhe poora bharosa hai ki woh usi helicopter se China se bhaagi hai. Par, akhir security ne aisa karne se roka kyu nahi? Koi bhi foreign air object 12 nautica miles ke andar pravesh nahi kar sakta. Foreign flights ko bina permission ke 12 nautica miles ki doori se hi nikalna padta hai. Par, na sirf woh andar aayi balki asaani se nikal bhi gayi. Akhir kaise?

Veer : Ek doubt mujhe bhi hai. Garofano ke case ke waqt jab Divya yaha aayi thi. Toh, maine uss se kaha tha ki ye case woh handle kare. Aur, permission le ki woh FBCC se iss case ko handle karne aayi hai.

Renshu : Hmm!

Veer : Par, government ke officials ko toh ye pata hona chahiye tha na ki Divya FBCC se Legion aur Order ke beech ka case handle karne aayi hai. Na ki Garofano ka crime related case dekhne. Akhir, unhone manzoori de kaise di? Aur, koi virodh bhi nahi- Huhhhh!???

Achanak jaise Veer ka badan ek jhatka kha ke thitur gaya. Ek sansani bhara vichaar uske mastishk se hoke guzra. Aur, jitna woh sochta gaya uske haav bhaav utne hi bigadte chale gaye.

Renshu : Veer? K-Kya hua?

Veer ke maathe par silvatein chhaa gayi. Usne apne baalo ko kass ke pakad ke peeche kiya toh do latt uski aankhon ke saamne gir ke jhool gayi. Aur, uski woh aankhein bahut kuch bayaan kar gayi.

Veer (frowns) : That bitch-!!!

Renshu : Huh???

Veer ne aage jo kuch bhi kaha, use sunn na sirf Renshu balki, Ava samet baaki sab bhi hairat ke chalte uth ke khade ho gaye.

Veer : Ab samajh aaya meri. We were being played, Renshu!

Renshu : Saaf saaf kaho, Veer!

Veer : Maine tumhe abhi bataya tha ki uske paas koi hypnosis se related skill ho sakti hai, right?

Renshu (nods) : Haan!

Veer : That bitch... she hypnotised your government official.

*Silence*

Renshu ka chehra dekhne layak tha. Uski aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi thi.

Veer : Usne uss government official ko hypnotise kiya, aur khud hi uss se madad mangwayi. Yahi reason hai ki kyu Divya ke case badalne par government ki taraf se koi action tak nahi hua. Aur, rahi baat woh China se bhaagi kaise-!!?

Renshu : Don't tell me-!!!

Veer : Yeah!!! That's right! Foreign air flights ki security bhi hypnotised thi probably. Isliye, woh asaani se nikal paayi.

Renshu (growls) : Mere hi desh me aake mujhe hi gumrah karne ki koshish-

*Craaaackkkkk*

Renshu ne apne haath me liya glass itni zorr se jakda ki uske tukde-tukde ho gaye.

Garofano : Wh-What a master plan!

Veer abhi inn baato se ubhar paata ki tabhi ek aur sihran faila dena waala vichar uske mann me aaya. Aur, woh yahi chaah raha tha ki woh jhooth nikle.

Veer : Violet!!!

Garofano : Huh?

Veer (frowns) : Hamari pehli mulaqat ke dauran tumne mujhse kuch kaha tha. Tumne aisa kuch kaha tha ki- "She was right! You are the one who I was yearning for...!"

Ava (glances) : Huh???

Veer : Woh 'she' kaun thi?

Garofano : Ahh! Woh? Woh thi- huhhhh???

Garofano ne jaise hi yaad karna chaaha ki akhir kisne uss se ye sab kaha tha, woh achanak hi jaise uss insaan ke baare me sab kuch bhool gayi. Uske chehre par darr aur chinta saaf-saaf jhalak rahi thi.

Garofano (panics) : I- I don't remember!!!

Aur, uske itna kehte hi Renshu aur Veer ki nazre aapas me bhid gayi. Woh dono hi wahi soch rahe the.

Veer (frowns) : Damnnnn ittt!!!

Renshu : Veer?

Veer : Yeah!!! Rebecca Elsher-!!!! You were the mastermind behind all of this.

Ava : It was a plan all along.

Veer : Shit!!! Violet! Tumne ye bhi kaha tha ki Mumbai me Casa Belle hotel par baad me ek bada hamla hoga, right? Damn ittt!!! Renshuuu-!!! Turn on the news!!

Erica : M-Mein karti hu!!!

Erica ne daud ke jaise hi television on kar uspe international news lagayi toh jaisa socha tha bilkul wesa toh nahi hua magar-

"Breaking News : Luxury 5-Star Hotel named 'Royal Oasis' in Morocco obliterated by mystery missiles, Miraculously No Casualties Reported."




"This is Lina reporting live from Morocco, where a stunning and tragic event has unfolded. In a shocking turn of events, a prestigious 5-star hotel, renowned for its opulence and grandeur, has been reduced to rubble by a barrage of unidentified missiles."

"Lina, what's the situation there? Have there been any eye-witnesses?"

"Ah! Yes, James. Eyewitnesses described a terrifying scene as explosions ripped through the hotel, sending debris flying in all directions. Despite the devastation, authorities confirm that there have been no reported casualties or injuries among guests or staff, marking a miraculous outcome amid the chaos. They say that someone made all the staff empty the whole hotel just prior to... to this destruction."

"And, how's security handling this situation right now, Lina?"

"Umm! Security forces and international agencies are scrambling to ascertain the origin and motive behind this brazen attack. Speculations abound as to the perpetrators and their intentions, with no clear answers emerging at this time. For the time being nothing has been confirmed, James."

"Alright! Lina! I'll catch up to you later. So, ladies and gentlemen, the destruction of this iconic landmark has sent shockwaves through the local community and the global hospitality industry. Questions loom large about the safety and security of similar establishments worldwide, prompting heightened vigilance and concerns for future incidents."

"So, stay tuned to our channel for the latest updates and insights into this developing crisis."

*Silence*

Sabke hosh ude hue the. Sabse zyada toh Veer aur Garofano ke. Jaha Garofano ka kehna tha ki Mumbai ka hotel Casa Belle tabaah kar diya jaayega toh wahi aisa kuch nahi hua. Hotel tabaah toh hua, magar Mumbai ka nahi, Morroca ka.

Veer : Kisne bataya tha tumhe ki Mumbai ki hotel par attack hone waala hai?

Garofano : I-It was her-!!! Aahhh!! V-Veer! I-I don't remember!!!!

Veer (yells) : Damnnnn ittt!!!

*Thuddddd*

Veer ne apne haath zorr se table par patke toh table ke beech ek moti daraar fel gayi.

Veer : Ava-!!

Ava : Huh?

Veer : You are coming with me!!!

Ava : What?

***

Agla din hua aur akhir kar lautne ka samay bhi jald hi aa hi gaya. Veer aur Renshu uske ghar ke baahar hi khade hue the. Aur, Erica car me Ava aur uska intezar kar rahi thi.

Veer ke kehne par Ava uske saath hi laut rahi thi. Abhi woh dono baahar aaye hi the ki tabhi aasmaan me ek awaaz goonj gayi.

*Keaaaarrrrrr*

Hawa me udta Sheba Veer ko dekh apne pankh fadfadate hue seedha uske kandho par aake baith gaya.

Veer : Ah! Right! Mein tumhe kaise bhool sakta hu? Kya mein Sheba ko India le jaa sakta hu?

Renshu (nods) : Bilkul! Par, abhi nahi! Iske liye kuch formalities karwani padengi. Akhir, Sheba ek janglee baaj hai. Koi sadharan pakshi nahi. Mein apne aadmi ke zariye ise tum tak bhijwa dunga.

Veer (smiles) : Thanks!

Renshu : Maango, Veer! Tumne yaha aake apna farz bas nahi nibhaya hai. Jaw Long jaise system holder ko maat deke Order ke liye jeet ka jhanda lehraya hai. Badle me tum jo chaaho maang sakte ho.

Veer (smiles) : Jo chaahu woh maang sakta hu?

Renshu : Order ka Lord hu. Aur, Shaolin ka master. Mein apne vaade se peeche nahi hatata. Maango, Veer!

Veer : Agar, mine se woh mil sake. Toh, woh mujhe chahiye hoga.

Renshu : Kya?

Veer : Lithium!!!

Ek khamoshi waha chhaa gayi. Mine milne ke baad Renshu ne apna dab-daba government par punah bana liya tha. Zaahir hai, government ki orr se use kuch na kuch chhooth di gayi thi mine ke liye. Aur, aise me Veer apne liye koi sunehra mauqa nahi chorrna chaahta tha.

Renshu (sighs) : Theek hai! Mein yaad rakhunga.

Veer (smiles) : That's it then!

Renshu : Aur, woh alliance-!!!

Veer : Hmm! I'm in!

Renshu (nods) : Good! Aur-

Veer : !??

Renshu (frowns) : Kuch bahut bada game khela jaa raha hai. Hume ek dusre ke sampark me rehna hoga.

Veer (nods) : Mmm!

Garofano : Aur, mera kya? Kya mujhse kuch nahi maangna Veer? Akhir, tumne hi mera case solve karwaya tha. *grins*

Veer : Mein, jald hi apni clothing brand ko market me utaarne jaa raha hu. So... Will you collab with me?

Garofano (smiles) : Ek guest ki tarah request kar rahe ho ya ek dost ki tarah haq se order de rahe ho?

Veer : Ek dost ki tarah haq se puch raha hu.

Garofano (smiles) : Then, consider it done!

Renshu aur Veer ne ek dusre se haath milaaya aur dono ne haami bhari. Ye ek ghoshna thi ki do taqatvar system holder ke beech ab ek dosti ka rishta bann chuka tha. Jisme Ava, Erica aur Garofano jaisi sadasya bhi shaamil thi.

Veer : Then, I'll take my leave.

Renshu (nods) : Hmm!

Garofano : Until next time, Veer!!!

Veer : See you later!

Aur, woh palat ke Ava ke sang Erica ki car me baith chal diya. Kuch ghanto ki duri tay karne ke baad hi airport par pahuch bhi gaye.

Ava aur Veer apna-apna samaan lete hue utre. Ava ko zara bhi umeed nahi thi ki Veer uss se apne sang chalne ke liye kahega. Uske paas kahi jaane ka koi thikana nahi tha. Wese bhi woh Veer ki suraksha karne ke liye hi ab jee rahi thi. Ye uske liye behtar tha ki woh Veer ke paas hi rahe.

Jaise hi Veer aur Ava flight ke liye nikalne lage toh Erica ki bekarari aur adhik ho gayi. Woh Veer ko dur se hi awaaz laga ke chillaate hue pukaari-

Erica : Veeeeeerrrrrr!!!

Veer (mudte hue) : Hmm?

Erica : W-Will we... Will we meet again???




Veer bas muskuraya aur wapas se mudte hue apna haath yuhi hawa me hilaata hua chala gaya. Uska matlab Erica samajh toh nahi paayi par woh jaanti thi ki jab fir se koi badi vipda aayegi toh uske Dad ke saath saath Veer waha zaroor maujood hoga. Woh kayi saare shabd kehna chahti thi. Magar, keh na saki.

Aur, dur se uski bebasi dekh kahi na kahi Ava ka dil ghabra raha tha. Aisa lag raha tha maano jaise koi apni cheez saamne rakhi hai magar baaki logo ki nazar bhi uss par hai. Na jaane kab kaun use jhapat ke hadap le.

Dheere-dheere Ava aur Veer Erica ki aankhon se ojhal ho gaye. Flight take-off hui aur dono apni manzil wapas se India ki orr chal pade.

Baithe-baithe Veer ne Ava se yuhi jab system ki baat chhedi toh kahi se usne ek aisa sawaal kar diya jiska jawab paate hi ek aakhiri par sabse bada jhatka use laga.

Veer : So? Tumhari Lily ki kitni personalities hai?

Ava : Huhhh?

Veer : Hmm? Maine pucha ki tumhari Lily ki kitni personalities hai?

Ava : What? What are talking about-!?

[M-Master-!]

Pari ki halki si dabi awaaz uske mann me goonji. Lag raha tha jaise woh nahi chaah rahi thi ki iss baare me koi charcha ho. Magar, Veer aaj jaise sab kuch janana chaahta tha. Inn do dino me uska dimag kisi supercomputer ki tarah chal raha tha.

Iss baar woh bauhe kase aage thoda uthate hue pucha.

Veer : Tumhari... Lily ki different personalities nahi?

Ava : Huh? Nahi! Tum kehna kya chaah rahe ho? Why would she have different personalities?

Aur, ye sunte hi Veer ki aankhein bhauchakke hone ke chalte failti chali gayi. Woh jhatke se apni jagah se utha.

Ava : V-Veeeerrr????

Magar, Ava ki pukaar ko ansuna kar woh sarpat washroom ki orr bhaaga.

Ava : Veeeeeer-!!!!

Peeche se Ava chillati rahi magar Veer seedhe washroom me ghusa aur usne andar se darwaza band kar washbasin ka nal chalu kar lagatar thande paani ke chheete apne muh pe maare. Saamne ke baal geele hote hue uski aankhon ke saamne latak gaye aur usne apne saamne lage sheeshe me khud ko dekha. Woh gusse me lag raha tha.

'Pari-!!!'

[M-Master-! I...]

Pari ki awaaz bhi thodi sehmi hui thi.

'Matlab mein sahi soch raha tha...! You fucking lied to me.'

[N-No! M-Master! P-Please listen to me.]

'Mujhe laga tha aisa possible nahi. Magar-!! Meri ek theory sach nikli.'

[M-Master!]

'Pari-!!! Stop being a bitch!!!'

[Noooo-!!!]

'YOU DON'T HAVE DIFFERENT PERSONALITIES.'

[????]

'RATHER... YOU ALL ARE DIFFERENT BEINGS!!!'

Boom! Maano jaise iss baar Pari ke mann me visfot hua. Aur, isi ke saath woh poori tarah se maun reh gayi.

***

FBCC Headquarters,
New York,
Evening ~ 7:44 PM

Ek kamra mand raushni me dooba hua tha jis se waha ke aparichit parivesh par lambi chhaaya pad rahi thi. Karahte hue ek aurat dheere-dheere apne hosh me aayi. Uska sarr dard se phata jaa raha tha aur peeche gardan par bhi kaafi dard fela hua tha. Palke jhapkaate hue woh apni yaadon ke kuch hisso ko jodne ki koshish karne lagi jab kahi se ek jaani maani awaaz uske kaano me padi.

"Took you quite a while aye, Mrs. Divya?"

Ye awaaz sunte hi Divya jo behoshi se abhi-abhi baahar aayi thi usne turant hi palat ke dekha. Toh paaya ki-




Uske saamne ek aurat black hat lagayi hui baithi thi. Aur, awaaz woh bhali bhaanti pehchanti thi.

Divya : Director???

Director : Yes!! Mrs. Divya, aap pichle do din se behosh ho. You know that?

Divya : Ahhh! M-Mein kaha hu? Wait! China?? M-Mera assignment-

Director : Calm down, Miss Divya. Aapka assignment complete ho chuka hai.

Divya : What?

Director : Yes! Aap hamle ka shikaar ho gayi thi. Par, hamari team ne aapko waha jald se jald sahi salamat khoj nikala. Hum FBCC ke headquarters me hai. More specifically, you are in my personal space here.

Divya ye sunte hi uth ke khadi ho gayi.

Divya : Th-That's... Apologies, please.

Director : It's okay! Just take rest. Aap free ho.

Divya : Free ho matlab? Did I mess up? Mera first assignment?

Director : Ohh no no! You did very well. In fact, meri umeed se kahi zyada aap uss par khari utri. *smiles*

Divya : Oh!

Director : Free se mera matlab tha ki aap ab jaha jaana chaahe kuch dino ke liye jaa sakti hai. Because, very soon... You will be given another assignment. It's a short break for you. So, enjoy!

Divya : O-Ohhh! Okay!

Woh waha se aage badhi. Use sabse pehle khud ko shaant karne ki zaroorat thi aur saari kadiyon ko ek dusre se jodne ki zaroorat thi. Saath hi use Veer ko bhi call karke kaafi cheezein puchni thi. Woh jaise hi baahar nikalne ko hui ki itne me Director chalte hue uske qareeb aa gayi.

Director : By the way, you wanted to know my name, right?

Divya : Ahhh! Y-Yes-!!

Director : Toh dhyaan se sunana. Kisi ko pata nahi chalna chahiye. *smiles* Okay? You have earned my trust. So, it's the least I could do.

Woh aage jhuki aur Divya ke kaano ke paas aayi.

Divya : ???

Director : Remember! My name is...

Divya : ???

Director : REBECCA ELSHER!!!

Divya : Rebecca-!??

Director (smiles) : You may take your leave now. Remember! Not to disclose it. Okay?

Divya (nods) : S-Sure!

Woh haami bharte hue waha se nikal gayi. Magar, uske jaate hi Rebecca ke hontho se muskan gayab ho gayi. Woh apne cabin se baahar nikal lift pakad seedhe ek floor neeche ko gayi.

Aur, waha ghuste hi uske saamne ek badi si chaudi kursi par ek insaan pehle se baitha hua tha.

"You are late-!!!!"

Uski awaaz Rebecca ke kaano me padi.

Rebecca : Mujhe apne staff ka dhyaan rakhna padta hai. Unlike you...

??? : Ohh?? How did it go?

Rebecca : Everything is just as you planned.

??? : Of course!!!!

Rebecca (frowns) : Now-!!! Woh records-

Iske pehle ki woh aage kuch keh paati. Ek chhuri uski orr tezi se udte hue aayi aur uski kaan ki baali ko kaatate hue peeche darwaaze me jaa ke khus gayi.

??? : I.. have limited patience, girl!

Rebecca (frowns) : Itna gussa theek nahi. Akhir woh... Unhone hamesha duniya ka bhala hi chaaha tha. Aise me, tum...

??? : Murde ateet ka hissa hote hai!!! Aur, mein... *inhales* Mein sirf aur sirf bhavishya ke baare me sochta hu.

Rebecca : And, what about the world???

"THE WORLD... NEEDS A LIVING GOD!!!"


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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
This marks the end of the Chinatown arc. Kaisa laga? Maza aaya na? This update consists of 10.4k words. Umeed hai sabhi ne itminan se padha hoga. This update answers most of the questions which were left unanswered. I know naye questions saamne aa gaye hai but hey... Maine pehle hi kaha tha ki nayi gutthiyaan saamne aayengi hi. So, likes thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka. Target apna wahi hai. 200! Pahucha dene ka. Bolna na pade. Also, mein ek trip pe jaa raha hu family ke sang toh abhi kahani ab thode break par rahegi. Mujhe Disembowler arc ki blueprint taiyar karni hogi. Till then, enjoy this update.
Dhanyavad.

 

[Werewolf]

Ab tak kaa best update tha
Sab kosh clear ho gaya ha
But last vala jo vi aurat aayi thi vi kon ha aor vo divya ko kis liye la ka gayi ha ya fir vo divya ko as a chara la ka gayi ha jis se vo fir se veer ko bola saka apna pass
Aor vo dusra ladka vo bi us ka sathi ha
Dekhna se to lag raha ha ki ab jo next enemy aaya he vo ab tak ka sab se dengures ho ga.
Ab intazar rahaga next update ka

Hello wolf bhai. .
I am a silent reader.
But ek chiz bolunga. Ye story etni zabardast likhi gyi hai ki aane wale time me ye es site PE top pe rhegi and kaafi time tak rhegi.
Aapke likhne ka tarika bhut shandar hai. Aam taur pe yaha log views ke liye bus sex story hi likh dete hai. But apne aisa nhi kiyaa. .
Veer ke andar jo system hai shyad vo kaafi takatwar system hai. And aage shyad veer hi saare system owners ka head bnega.
Bus ek chiz mujhe abhi tak pta nhi lag saki ki
'NEELMANI' ka kya role hai. Coz uska bus starting ke update me hi jikar kiya tha aapne , kya uska bhi system se lena dena hai kuch??.
And lastly
Thank you so much for such a wonderful story. Aise hi hum logo ka manoranjan krte rhe aap.
Dhyanawad

What the hell was it.
Mind blowing nahi dimag phaad aur gaand phaad update.

It need to fucking process this.

Shandar, jaandar and beyond the fucking my capacity of imagination.

Long review soon

Mind-Blowing Update

Zabardast update tha bhai ...maza aa gaya..perr bechari divya fas gai in sab chakkaro main..Rebecca ek new character k intro dia hai..dekhta yeh aaga kya dhamaka karta hai aur voh ladka kaun hai....Pari sabse achi personality yeh lagti hai mujhe bholi bhali......

1 ghanta lga hai padne me.. Padte padte lgta hai jese mein bhi sath hi tha.. Gajab update

Muje lgta hai ki rebecca fbbc ki wahi directer hai.. Tabi wo divya ko sath le gai.. Divya normal insaan hai use pakad kar rebecca ko kuch nhi milega

Mind blowing update brother... Bahut bada update diya hai aapne

Amazing super update Bhai

Mast update bro mza gya yh new system holder kn hy
Kitne system holder bachy hn
Divya bhi gi
Pri n n itne point hadap liye veer
Chipkali srf behosh hi hi rhi hy bar bar
Is ki Thk Sy sutai krwao

Just mind blowing update Werewolf bhai.

Finally our hero won the battle for his team and got rewarded but he must thank eva for his help knowing that veer will fully ignore her...

Wolfie bhai ke aage koi bol skta h kyaa bahut bhayankar wala update dia h yrr or ye last wala seen bhi gajabe h bhai waiting for your next update bro mene kbhi apni life m esi chije nhi sochi yrr how is this possible!!! Kese kr lete ho bhaai tum ye secret toh batana pdegaa yrr

Superb update

ek dum faadu update bhai
jowlong aur veer bolu ya pari ek hi baat hai ki ladai to maza hi aa gaya
par ye nayi team kaun hai bhai jo in sabko nacha raha hai
jaha wo naya system holder ladka renshu ko fansa rha tha wahi ye rebecca veer ko
mujhe lagta hai ye divya ki boss hi hai, hai na
aur iska kuch alag hi team aur motive hai ye to aage hi pata chalega
aur idhar ladies section me to aur bhi kichdi hoone wala hai
jaha erica eva aur garfano me ab veer ko leke jhagda kahu ya masti hone wali hai
erica aur eva ne jo veer ka roop jungle me dekha hai wo kabhi nahi bhulne wale khaskar erica jo daar se behosh hi hoagyi
ab jawlong ki saare cards aur power bhi veer ke pass hai saath hi ek naya slot jo veer ko abhi tak kuch jyada hi powerful bana de rahe hai
over all a great episode
keep going

Nice update bro

Bahut badiya update bhai

Superb update

MIND-BLOWING UPDATE

Superb update

Fack bhai kitna bada update tha fir se padunga raat mein

Mast shabd nhi h aapka har upadate dhasu hota h or ye to super duper hit update tha

Amazing updates dear
Do naye character vah v system holder
Keep it

Gajab jabardast update bhai

Werewolf bhai ekdum excellent update diya hai aapne iss update ko pad kar kuch kuch andaza lagaya ja sakta ha
1.divya is kidnapped by lady rabecca iska matlb wo lady future main divya ka istamaal karegi veer ko harane main
2.jow long se lady ne radioactive material ki deal ki some how lady uses that matarial to increase her power
3.pari ka system bhi apni charecter change karta hai jab system upgrade hota hai ya yeh kahe ki system apne main hi ye saabit karna chahata hai ki who is best! And good system don't want to take points(mystery)
4.2 unknown system in this updatemay be working for same X boss
And in tha last ki kya likha hai aapne! Mind blowing mujhe pata hai is update ko likhne main kitna time laga hoga script banane main Chinese translation karne main hatsoff to you for this nice plot! Thanks from reader to writer amazing

Vah bhai maja a Gaya....

Yah Jo action seen ka last segment Pari dwara dikhaya Gaya..sala jabarjast raha..pari ne second k hisab se jaw long ko dho kar rakh diya... Gajab Ki furti Gajab Ka takat ka namuna pesh Kiya Pari ne.. Itna Mara ki Bechara bhaagane per majbur Ho...jaw long ke system ne use Bata diya tha ki Veer ko system ne takeover kar liya hai.

At last Veer ne apne Buddhi Ka prayog Karke mines mein hi Ja Laung ko Dafan Kar Diya ... [aur Yahan pura credit jata hai writers ki thought per] falsawarop system dwara use Kai Sare rewards mili...

1. 15000 points
2. The card Berserk
3. Scroll Bird tamer
4. Skill Aura Vision
5. Skill Protection form radio activ matreials
6. New Slot :that provide uses of multipal cards
7. System Upgarde lev10.
8. New Internal features Perk Hunt

system upgrade hone ke bad Sabse Bada fayda Hua new slot ka Milana Kyunki usse Kai Sare cards Ek sath use kar sakte the ..
aur ISI ke sath Veer Ki Sabse favourite Pari ki wapasi hui....
Pari ne wapasi ke sath Veer ko sabse bada chutiya ghoshit Kiya ...hahahaha
aur Kafi Bhari shabdon mein bataya ki points bahut hi avashyak chijen hai system ke liye ..yah Keval point ho sakte hain Veer ke liye Lekin yah point system ki Jaan Hoti Hai Jahan Tak Mujhe samajhna Hai ..
yah ummid thi ki Agar system upgrade Hota Hai To Hamen Pari ki nai variety dekhne ko milegi lekin Yahan to Purani Pari ki wapasi ho gai .....
kya Aisa ho sakta hai ki system host k bhavnaon ko Dhyan Mein rakhte hue purane Pari ki wapasi kiya ho ???
jaw long k past illustration me hume ek aur system holder k bare me pata chala...jo ye sara khel piche se khel raha tha....Rebecca Elsher
aur uska ek sathi.....kun hai ye log kaha se aate hai kyu ki pure internet par inka koi surag nahi mila pari ko. Aur jate hue miss divya ko bhi le gayi apne sath ....aur is bandi ko veer k bare me bhi pata tha...kyu ki jab ye jaw long ko offer de rahi thi to usne kaha tha ki ..koi hoga jo ye scen dekhega...aur is bandi ne past me rahte hue bhi veer ko hyptonise karne ki kosis kiya tha..kyu agar veer kuch der aur rukta to paka hyptonise ho kar rah jata ....

Behchode abhi hum log GARFANO ko lekar baithe the ki uske pass kya kya skill cards ho sakte hai. Samane se abhi tak to ye veer ki side lag rahi hai.....aur ye new holders to out of box chale gaye..

Renshu ne Garfano ko milne ke liye kyu bulaya???veer k ilaz k liye...ya kuch aur.

Erica ,Ava aur ,Renshu ne bhi apne apne mission ko complte kiya hai. DEKHATE hai inko kya rewads milte hai system dawara.

ek baat to manani padegi nataliya ne Veer Ki Jaan bachane Ke Liye Apni Jaan Ki Baji Laga Laga Di.... Jiske mukhyata do Karan the pahla system dwara Diya Gaya mission aur dusra Pyar ya attraction Veer ke Prati..

bhai kya scroll Bird tamer se kya animal ko bhi tame Kiya Ja sakta hai???

Shandar update brother lage raho..

Ky baat hai bhai, Pari se wapas milwane ke liye thanks.

Zabardast update

Gajab maza aa gya kya update Diya h aapne

ABSOLUTELY MIND-BLOWING AND AWESOME UPDATE

Nice and fantastic update bhai keep posting

Wa
Hummm wao dil karta hy bs yeh chalti rahy aur parhty rahin but majbori apki bhi social life hy but thanks

Msst bhai
Active movie lgi ye update to

Sandar update bhai jaw longki mayya ****** di lekin ye new entry khatarnak lag rahi he aage jyada majha aane vala he or veer bhi strong hota jaraha he gajab

Idk but I'll be really happy if Rebecca dies. Between, what rewards did my cutie Ava get, shed some light on that as well..

(Pari's best version till now is back, gotta put that word 'useless' in hiding for a while now.. )

Bbbbbrroooo whhaaat is thisss yaar this is aa fucking insane woooowwww really brother ye update ne to itne jhatke diyee hai ki kyaa hi kahu

Sabse pehle wo unknown system holder and that women with haatt brro ye dono ka system levar may bhi bahut advanced hai lagta hai saalo ko ye bhi pata tha ki veer jaw long ka past jarur dekhega par kya ye dono system holders mr.x ke dwara bheje Gaye the ye janne wali bat hogi

And the Divyas kidnapping bro aakhir ab wo Divya se kya cahte hai kyu ki Divya to koi system holder nahi hai to aakhir unka uddeshya kya hai and agar ye dono system holder itne khatarnaak hai to mr .x to kya hi hoga

And pari and jawlong ki fight bhai kyaa hi likhte ho agar tum ispe webseries banate to Naa jane international leval par ye kitne hi records Tod daalti bro really suupeerrrvbb and dillse respect for you and your imagination and your writing skills buddy

Jesa ki main chahta tha veer keliye ek strength power badhane wala card ye to main jaw long ke pass bersark card dekh kar hi samjh Gaya tha ki ye jaw long ka sabse power full card hai or aapne kaha tha jo bhi jaw long se bhidega or use sabse jyada chot pahuchayega jaw long ki sabse top tier skills and card use hi milenge or yahi huva but bro mujhe laga tha ki ek animal kingdom bhi milega veer ko

But ek baat main dilse chahta tha ki veer ko shaynas access Naa mile pata nahi kyu but main nahi chahta tha ki Ava ya veer black magic wali skills main pade but bro ab ye dekhna hoga ki animal kingdom and wo black magic card kise mila hai or baki ki jaw long ki skills kiske hath kya laga hai or ab ye baate sense bana Rahi hai ki kyu jaw long nahi chahta tha ki koi bhi us jungle me aaye jaw long to khud hi seitaan banke baitha tha jo inshano ki bali Chadha Raha tha khud powerful banne keliye or order ko apne keliye or bro ab legion ka kya hoga

Buddy sach main jab jawlong ka past ho ya fir renshu or us unknown ki ladayi bhai kya hi gazab thi I am almost speech less yaar main khud shock main hu abhi bhi or last wala jawlong ko mine sahit uda Diya ye to Maine expect bhi nahi kiya tha yaar or mujhe laga tha ki jawlong and Li renshu ek baar keliye ho sahi but aamne samne jarur ayenge but koina ye to hona hi nahi tha kabhi jaw long ke nasib main veer ke hatho hi mitna likha tha

And the Paris personality sach main bro ye wahi personality dekh kar accha laga main humesha hi chata hu ki jab bhi veer aisi ladai lade tab uske paas yahi pari ho naki attitude personality walikyu ki wo veer le aagenst hokar pura maza kirkira kardeti hai mujhe ye pari personaly pasand hai

Bhai jiss hisab se ye pari uski duri image ko gali bak Rahi thi us hisab se to lagta hai ye sab karna veer keliye kabhi khatra bhi ban sakta hai

And kehte haina save the best for last one more card slot buddy this is insanely insane yaar ye ek or slot kis had ki taqat badha sakta hai veer ki ye sirf main or tum hi jante hai veer ne single slot se hi jawlong or crimson jese dushmano ko haraaya hai us hisaab se to veer ab kitni tabahi macha sakta hai samne wali ki ye to guess bhi nahi kiya jasakta and mujhe lagta hai veer ka subse jyada accha pair bansakta hai berserk and beowolf card ye dono jab milenge na tab samne walo ke pajame fatke haath main ajayenge and aura vision ko ko bhi veer jab cahe use karsakta hai jese aakhon Mai mitti girna ya kuch or chize jo veer ko temporery blind karti ho ya ghuup andhere main dekhna ho vwaha aura vision bahut kam aa sakta hai

Buddy tumto jante hi ho ki meri halat ki business ke vhjah se main reply nahi de pa Raha tha but Aaj ka update padhke mujse Raha nahi Gaya broo sach main Aaj to mujhe reply bhejna hi bhejna tha but bro aage ka game kitna khofnaak hoga ye to ab sirf tum hi jante ho or bro kya tum is story ka part 2 laaoge kyu ki tumne kaha tha ki jo dusri story tum likhoge wo is sse link hoga to kya aadha ye part or adha dusra hoga ya ye ek hi story main complete karoge or bhai Divya ka kya hoga


But bro mujhe sach main Ava and veer ki camestriy acchi lagti hai naki veer or garofano ki but ab dekhna ye hai ki jyada taqatwer kon hai Ava ya garofano ye sach main dekhna hoga or mujhe ek baat ki tahe dill se khusi hogi jab Ava or veer ek saath honge or bhai kya Ava wapas Apni wo life jee payegi apni dono dosto ke sath or Sonia or keara ka kya reaction hog jab unhe pata chalega ki veer or Ava ek dusre ko bakhubi pehchante hai ye sach main dekhne layak hogi

And jab veer ki family ko jab pata chalega ki Ava jesi sakhshiyat veer ke itne close hai tab kya hi reaction hoga

Wolfi bhai aap kehte ho ki bade reply pasand aate hai jise dekh kar aapni din bhar ki thakn utar jati hai so I hope Mera ye reply aapko pasand aaya hoga


Verry verry insanely thriller update buddy hatts of o you

Tnq, dear bro , for your kind words. I was literally exhausted so much that within few minutes I fell asleep. Thanks again dear bro .

Bird tamer I think only bird

Ha... Jab Maine Ja Laung ka ful status Dekha tab Samajh Mein Aaya ki animal ko control karne ke liye animal kingdom Namak Card hai aur bird ko control karne ke liye ek scroll hai Bird temar

बहुत बढ़िया अपडेट भाई! एक के बाद एक सभी अपडेट अद्भुत हैं! इसका वर्णन करने के लिए कोई शब्द नहीं हैं !!!!

Mind-blowing update Bhai

mast behtreen update

Bahut hi shaandaar update

Story ka ak scene jisme aapne btaya ki koi b insaan jb dra hua hota hai to vo apni matra bhasha me hi bt krta h yu khe ki uske muh se vhi language nikalti h
Y scene bahut axa lga kyuki aapne kitne axe se ak ak point describe kiya
Ak hota h story likhna lkn....
Aap kvl story likh hi n rhe h balki ak ak point ko describe b kr rhe h
har ak event ke peeche koi n koi logic jaroor hota h

Story ke ak scene me jb pari ne bola ki kabhi b system ko apne points mt dena
tb mere dimaag me kuchh points hit hue jese ki ye to sbko pta hi hai ki system earth se to bilkul n h
y another planet se hi hai jha pe yha se kai jyada guna technology hogi
to kuchh aisa ho skta h ki shyd y system insaan ke body me aake kaid ho gye ho aur inko aajad hone ke liye kuchh points ki need ho jo ye system holders se lenge
Aur un points ke milte hi ye unki body se aajad ho jayenge


Shyd mai kuchh jyada hi soch gya...

(Hollywood and fiction movie dekhne ka asar hai )

Aur ha ak bt aur ki veer ke pass limbo waali skill to hai hi to kisi doosre pe limbo use krne ki kya requirements h kya use uski body ko touch krna hota h y uske hatho ko touch krna hota h
veer ko jaw- long. Se lete wakt uspe use krna chahiye tha limbo jese hi uska hath pkd turnt limbo
KHEL KHTM

Bhai kya update tha ek daam dhamakedar

Ak new system holder lady b aai kya y wahi lady hai jisko Renshu ne letter bheja tha aur jisne Renshu ko bheja tha veer ko bachane k liye crimson waale matter me,
us system holder ka pass ak watch and I guess wo koi normal watch nhi hogi
uske shyd kux aisa hai ki vo apni memory bhool jayega like hypnotize

Bohat hi lagwab update tha janab

ak bt abhi b clear n hui ki veer ka system hi kvl aisa kyu kr saka
agr maan lo kux reasons ho ki veer ka system hi ye kr skta ho ki apne host ko control kre
and y critical cases me hi trigger hota ho jese veer ne ava and (naam bhool gya )
ki jaan bachane ke liye pari se bola tb ye trigger hua
to y crimson waale case me kyu n hua tb to vo marne waala tha
aur yha p to jaw-long ke system ko b pta chal gya ki system ne control le rakha h
to use b jaw-long ke points deduct krke control lena chahiyw

Kux b ho update bahut hi lajawab tha
Thanks for this typ of amazing update

Again. Ur killed it bro Werewolf

Great update. Yahan to System Holders ki ladi hi lag gayi, Veer, Renshu, Erica, Garofano, Ava, Unknown-boy-fighter aur ab Rebecca, total seven. Visphot to hona tha.

Renshu aur ladke ki fight badi innovative thi, itne experience ke baad bhi ladke ne Renshu ko outsmart kar diya aur use buri tarah ghayal kar diya. Pari aur Jaw Long ki fight to one-sided thi. Jaw Long usase bachta hi raha. Shayad thodi der aur bach jata, aur Pari ka time over ho jata, tab Veer ki musibat aa jati. Veer ki intelligence aur speed ne use jita diya. Pari ka time khatam hone ke baad bhi Jaw Long usase bhagta raha, yahin weh maat kha gaya. Captain Feng aur uki team ka commitment bhi dekhne layak tha.

Ab Asli baat. Yeh Rebecca kaun hai, sari aag to uski hi lagayi huyi hai. Human blood ke badle mine ka sauda kiya tha usane. Lekin akhir usko mine se aisi kya khaas cheez chahiye. Kya ye hi FBCC ki Director hai. akhir weh Divya ko apne saath kyon le gayi. Aur 9th level ki Pari kya keh rahi thi,

<'IF ONLY I HAD EVEN A TINY OUNCE OF MY POWER THAT I HAD BEFORE, I WOULD HAVE DESTROYED THIS INSIGNIFICANT, LITTLE PLANET OF YOURS IN A BLINK OF AN EYE, YOU LOWLY PIG...! YOU ALL ARE LIKE ANTS GROVELING IN THE DIRT WAITING ONLY TO BE CRUSHED UNDER THE FEET OF AN UNPARALLELED BEING... SUCH AS ME-!!!'>

Yeh to pata tha ki System bahar ke dusre planet wale chala rahe hain, lekin weh log itne powerful honge, pata nahi tha.

Dusri taraf purani Pari,

<[You idiot, Master!!! There was no need to give your points. I missed you so much, aapko pata bhi hai? Mujhe laga tha aap se acche se dobaara milungi. It will be our happy reunion. But no... Here you are in this mess.]>

To different level ki Pari bhi alag hain aur system ke liye points bahut important hain. Acchi baat yeh huyi, Jaw Long ki koi bhi negative skill Veer ko nahi mili.

Ab Garofano ko Renshu ne kyon bulaya tha. Khas baat yeh hai ki Rebecca ne Veer ko hyptonise kerna chaha aur usko Jaw Long ka past dekhne nahi diya, jisase Rebecca, jo in sab jhagde ki mastermind hai, weh saaf bach gayi. Kabhi lagta hai ki Rebecca hi to kahin Mr X nahi hai.

Khair ab ladayi ke baad sab wapis chale jayenge, aur asli family time shuru hoga. I am keen to learn the updated favorability of Ava and Erica with Veer.

Agg laga di bro

Bhut hi bahtrin update bro

Super update

Bhai jitne update badhane ho badhate jao bas story mast chalni chahiye.
Hume maja milta rahe aur story badi hoti jaye to hume Khushi hi hogi ki aur kuch romanchak dekhne ko milega.

Nice update

Super update
Bahut hi shandaar update hai
Bro nxt update jaldi hi post karna
Waiting for nxt

Mind blowing superb ekdam jhakass

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Super update.
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Jabardast update

wo unknown system holder kaun hai jo itna takatwar hai jisne renshu ko bhi lagbhag lagbhag maut de hi Diya tha , aur ab ye new lady kaun aa gayi jisne Divya ko kidnap ker Liya ....

Well i am so surprised that only one person guess the Rebecca elshir character yes
I am 99.9 percent sure that she is the fcuking director whom send divya after veer to china and it make sense because how can some organization send the new member to next level mission like this
And we all have read it in update that Rebecca was having deal wit jaw long so it make more clear that he send divya intentionally and and other one will be probably like member of her organization

Now it will be more intresting to see
Because there is now two groups
1 veer li renshu ava gorafano and erica
2 ravecca unknown boy mr x
And maybe more

But i also have not been to conclusion about mr x
Who is he / she
Is Rebecca the mr x or not
It will be fun to watch

And another intresting part will be card distibution among ava and erica well erica doesn't have that much impact on jaw long but maybe he also got some card or skills

And if ava got animal kingdom and shayan's one
How she will use these two cards
And will they be able to find who is rabecca in next update
And again you are an amazing writer on this forum
And i must say in my 4 years of reading stories ive never seen such amazing story
Thanks for making our time best
Love you
Keep rising and
Keep shining

I timed it. Mujhe padhne me 45 minutes lage.

Kya detailing hai. Aur itni fight scenes sujhti kaha se hai.

Adbhut. To pari ke ek roop par dusre roop ka kabja tha .......... really........

Awesome update.

Ye mysterious Rebecca Elsher seems to be the one who wants to finish all other system holders. Divya ko leke gai hai matlab ab agle arc ki bhumika ban gayi hai.

Awesome.

Shandar update

Gjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjb yaar
Wating for next update

Super

Bohat hi behtreen bohat hi aala aur shandar update hai Maza a giya

Just amazing update Bhai bahut badiya update

Mast action , (jealousy grufuno and Ava), veer ke prati 1 update extra bada dena bhai

Bohat hi zabardast update Diya hai bhai maza aa gaya veer aka Pari ki jaw long ke sath final battle hua aur aakhir me veer wapas lot Aya aur usne jaw long ko khatam kar diya. Is ladai se veer ko bohat sari powers mili aur ab woh 2 system holder ki powers le chuka hai unko khatam kar ke. Lekin Jo sab se acchi cheez Hui woh is pari ka aana jisko hum sab miss kar rahey they ko veer ko ek kid na samajh kar uski liye caring and helping personality thee. Sab story ke readers ki 1st choice. Is ladai ke baad Kai sawal samne aaye:​

• Lekin Jo sawal yaha par khada hua hai woh yah ki jaw long se fight ke waqt pari ka kahna ki agar uske pass apni power ka thoda bhi ansh hota it means yah sab system kisi aur planets Sai ya universe se hai aur abhi apni taqat ko kho chukey hai aur woh apni taqat ko apne hosts ke zariye achive ya phir bada rahey hai. Maybe it is my thought only. Coz story to aap bata rahey hai.​
• woh ladaka jo jaw long ki taraf se lad raha thaa woh kaun hai aur woh kaha Gaya coz woh system owner hai to story me aage aayega. ​
• Jaw long ke past se veer ko Rebecca mili jo itni taqatwar n chalak thee ki usko andaza thaa ki koi bhi jaw long ke past me jaa ker usay dekh sakta hai means woh wahi per hypnotize kar ke sare Raaz khatam karna chah Rahi thee. Aur past se hi present ko bhi hypnotize kar leti magar ab waqt per pari usko wapas le aayi aur woh Bach Gaya magar again woh present me bhi uske samne apni mysterious identity ke sath samne aa gayi. Kiya usne veer ko hypnotized kar payi ya nahi. Aur woh Divya ko kyu lekar chali gayi ab again jaisa mainay pehlay kaha thaa ki shayad Divya ki boss aur Rebecca ka koi connection ya dono ek hi na ho. ​
• Aakhir me Garofano aur Renu apas me mile huay to nahi hai aur kuch bohat soch samjh ke plan kar ke veer ko bulaya ho ya bohat so ko bulaya ho magar aa veer gaya waha per. Erica ko ek baat to pata chal gayi ki veer kiya cheez hai aur woh uske baap se kahi zada taqatwar hai.​
• Bohat hi zabardast likha bhai aur aisay ke liye waqai hi time chahiye hota hai aur woh bhi jab aap kahi job kar rahay ho to waqt milna na mumkin hota hai magar phir bhi aap apna time nikaltey hai uske liye aur itni acchi update and story ke liye thanks Bhai Jo humay entertain kar deti hai apne tention life me. Koi aapko kuch boley to uska load nahi Lena ka aur bhedu log be patient agar update late aaye to. Bhai apun log ke wastey likhta hai warna bohat se paid forum per paid writer log hai waha jane ka pay karne aur unki logo ko tight rakhne ka agar update ek din bhi Late ho to bindass sunane ka co aap pasay de rahe ho. Magar yaha writer ko respect Dene ka. Take care Bhai intezar rahega is arc ke final update ka aur next arc ka bhi thoda hint Dene ka ki kaun sa arc shuru ho raha hai.​

Excellent and nice update

Bhai thanks for giving such legendary story

Wow I still can't snap out of it. That personality of Pari was scary. And addition of new system holders was not only interesting but chaotic too. Yakenan kuch bara game chal raha hay or is game main bht saray log involve hain. Aik cheez to nazar a rahi hay k now we have a strong group Veer, Renshu, Garofano, Eva, Erica isi trah I believe we should be expecting an opposition of a system holders group too. Let's see agay kya hota hay. Also aik or bat Jo interesting lagi kay that other personality of pari us ka Veer pa control limited time or only veer kay approval say tha it means total control ya take over ki possibilities minimal hain. But that was really scary I mean the while plant damn. Awesome update bro maza a gaya.

Kya hi update Diya Bhai alfaaz hi nahi soojh rahe mujhe
Bahut hi shaandaar update
Fight scene mind blowing
Purani pari ka wapas aana use miss karna aur Rebecca ke aane ke waqt aagah karna
Aur ye Jo lady hai Rebecca iska character bahut alag lag raha hai mysterious feeling aarahi hai isse
Jo bhi ho bahut time lage padhne me itna pasand aaya ye update ki maine 5 baar padha take har details samajh saku
Now I'm waiting another update bro

Awesome update

Bahut hi jabardast lajawab khatarnak adbhut update, jitna bhi tariff kro Kam hy is update k liye, apki writing skills bahut hi umda hy, aisa kuch naa mai kisi movie me dekha hu naa hi kahi story me padha hu, thank you sir for giving us a wonderful story

Jaw Long ko maarne par jo Points, Cards, Scrolls, Skills, Slot mile, wo samajh me aa gaye, ye Internal features Perk Hunt kya hai...

Waiting for next shandaar update

Super update
Boss maja aa gya

पहले तो बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद गुरु जी महा मेगा अपडेट देने के लिए
क्या ही रोचक अपडेट था
आशा है ऐसे ही कुछ महा मेगा अपडेट मिलेगासे

Interesting way to kill jaw long! Very interesting update!

Pari definitely has split personality. But I never thought one personality could dislike other. Also, old personality returns! This is opposite to original logic… I’m really curious to see what happens next.

The lady in hat - Divya’s boss? Looking forward to the next chapter!!!

Mind-blowing super sandar update

I think yeh Rebbecca toh Divya ki Director hai na.
Toh yeh Divya isiliye bhaja tha details janne ke liye.yeh toh pre-planned hai.

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Werewolf bhai....
Nice and beautiful update....

Atlast Jaw Long mara gaya or hame 1 naya vilan bhi dekhne ko mil gaya (Rebecca)

Ab aate hai fight pe tho Jaw Long kitna zada powerfull tha is baat ka andaza hame tab laga jab 1 system khud usko itni jaldi maar nhi paya fight ko apne itna ache se cerograh Kiya hai lagta hai har chiz samne ho Rahi hai hamari
Li Renusha or unknown system holder ki fight bhi shandar thi or woh system holder hame aage bhi dekhne ko milega yeh tho ab sure ho gaya gai hai
Rebecca yeh a 1 strong or powerful dushman hai jisse Veer ki fight shayad kabhi aageJake ho

Divya ka kidnap hona Veer k liye buri khabar hai or woh kaise react karega jab usko pata chalega

Wahi Erica Ava & Garofano teeno ko Veer or uska pyar chahiye
Ab lagta hai hum sab bahut jald India mein honge Veer ki family mein kya ho raha hai or woh serial killer kya kya kar Raha yeh pata lagega

Last but not the least
Veer got lots of skills/ points/& card for this mission most importantly Veer got her old Pari
Thank you for this brilliant update

REVIEW - Update 178

Wowwwww.... amazing mindfucking fabulous and ultra imaginative update.

Whenever I think that it's is the limit what could be more greater than this but in next update I get proved wrong always.

This approach like not starting the scene where it ended in last update, jaise last update me pari ke dialogue par scene khatam hua tha but yahan shuruaat renshu ki side vali fight se hui.
This parallel approach to every aspect of story creates extra excitement and uneasiness in story and keep stick to the update and also sabhi aspect ko time to time dikhana story ka flow kamjor nahi padne deta.

Last time renshu and uss unknown archer ki fight se laga tha ki renshu is the winner but you can't even guess 1% what's happen next, because every system has something totally unpredictable skill aur card jiska kab uss karke game palat jaye kehna mushkil hai.
Veer ke case me bhi we have seen this no one even the system holders haven't think ki system host ko control karega.

This time pari totally dominated in the fight, last update agar Jaw long ke naam tha to ye update me pari ne use ek moka tak nahi diya vaar karne ka, kutte ki tarah dho diya use.

And that words pari ki dhamki ki ek hissa bhi uski power ka uske paas hota to voh iss planet ko chutki me masal sakti hai. Kya hi khatarnaak fight hui, andha to tha hi jaw long pehle se phir bhi uski aankhe phod di koi rehem nakko dikhaya.

Veer won and get a huge amount of rewards 15000 points, berserk, animal kingdom, bird tamer, extra slot, radioactive protection. Now this mission was worth it.

But what about shyana's access and other cards of jaw long. Did Ava get that.

System only shows the important part of the past in past illustration. So jaw long's aim was never to capture the mine vo to sirf uss lady (Rebecca Elser) ke liye kar rha tha. And in return he was getting persons for his black magic ritual.

And why someone has interest in capturing a nuclear element mine illegally other than making nuclear b*m*s. And if someone has nuk*s how much powerful he can become we can think of.

The lady Rebecca Elser is dangerous and powerful and clever like a fox definitely she knew it ki Veer Jaw long ko hara sakta hai aur uske baad voh uska past dekhega and she placed a trap in the fucking past already but our beloved old good pari save him from it, but for it she already has another plan to hypnotize veer in live and make him forget everything about jaw long and Rebecca Elser. But she failed in that. Now veer at least know something about them although it's like nothing.

Everything was planned from starting. Bhayankar level ka manipulation ho raha hai. Slogan, Crimson and Jaw long sabme mr X ka hath hai. Jaise veer joh bhi kar raha tha voh sab unka plan tha pehle se hi.

I don't think this lady is mr X, he is still behind the curtain. But yeah she works for X. Kya Mr X sab system holders ko Veer ke hatho marva raha hai. Apne kisi maksad ke liye.

Finally the most favourite version of pari came back. I luv her.

Divya ki kidnapping pe main hairan nahi hua, maine pehle bhi kaha tha ki ladki pakka fasegi, inn system holders ki chaos me.

But the thing is timing of kidnapping. So as we know that in next update the arc will be completed and after that in next disembowler arc focus will be on the personal and relationship life of veer.

Aur Divya jis musibat me fasi hai usme se veer use ek update me to bacha nahi sakta. Ek pura arc lagega vaise bhi apne dushman ke bare me use zero knowledge hai. Lekin voh Divya ki problem ko ignore bhi nahi kar sakta.

So how will he do it, kyoki next arc majorly family and relationship par based hai and jyadatar chize India me hi hongi. Vais bhi veer bahar bahut ghum liya, now he deserves some slape from tezal.

Divya ko kidnap karna veer ke liye ek trap hai. Yaa phir Divya kisi musibat me hai hi nahi.

Everyone is saying that maybe the Rebecca Elser and Director are same. Jaisa mujhe bhi lagta hai, khaskar Divya ka iss arc me involvement and uski kidnapping ye shak aur badha deti hai.

But as I know Werewolf bhai sabki soch ko chakma dekar kuch Naya hi laate hai.

Pure fight scene me aisa dikhaya ki garofano yaa erica veer ki help ke liye aayengi but aaya kon. My beloved twin of hande ercel Ava aka Natalia.

Koi badi baat nahi director ko plot karke Rebecca Elser koi aur nikle yaa shayad dono ek ho.

And finally the old pari came back, and what was her last words after crimson arc. I love you master, did Veer remember that? Now we will see again a good chemistry between both.


Again super duper hit update brother and the word count is also insane this time almost took 35 - 40 minute to me to read this mind blowing update.

Write and give whenever you want to give I am not waiting at allbut I will be the first to read.

Werewolf bhai kuch jyada to nahi chhap diya review me flow flow me

What a masterpiece..

So finally the legendary fight ended with this insane and biggest update....
As always kafi kuch dekhne ko mila iss update me....Jaw long aakhir kar mara gya aur ek aur nye system holder ka bhi entry ho gya hai

Renshu aur new system holder ka fight as expected utna hi nhi tha jitna hme phle dekhne ko mila tha aur ye new to expectation se kuch jyada hi takatwar nikla....Mujhe aisa bhi feel hua ki usne Resnhu ko thore halke me hi liya pure fight ke dauran I mean jis tarah se wo bat kr rha tha usse se yhi lg rha tha ki wo confident tha ki Renshu uska kuch nhi bigad skta

Bat kre Pari vs Jaw Long ki to ye to completely one sided rha...Jaw Long bechare ko to sambhalne ka mauka tk nhi mila
'IF ONLY I HAD EVEN A TINY OUNCE OF MY POWER THAT I HAD BEFORE, I WOULD HAVE DESTROYED THIS INSIGNIFICANT, LITTLE PLANET OF YOURS IN A BLINK OF AN EYE, YOU LOWLY PIG...!'.....Pari ke dwara bola gye iss line ke bare me kya hi bolu...Mtlb ye single line apne aap me bhut kuch show krr rha hai
Tiny ounce of power jo uske pas phle thi usse wo pure planet ko khatam kr skti thi to aakhir phle pari ke pas kitni powers thi???...Aur yha phle se uska kya mtlb tha??? Tb ka jb wo apne planet pr thi???Aur jis planet pr itne powerful beings presnt hai wo planet aakhir kaisa hoga???
I know ki abhi aap inme se kisi ka answer nhi krne wale kyu ki spoiler ho jaiega pr ye system ke raaz ko jaise jaise aage badh rhe hai waise waise solve hone ke jagah aur twist hote ja rhe hai

Khair finally Jaw Long mara gya aur mission complete hua....Sath hi sath rewards ke bhi line lg gye...Second slot waqai bhut kam aane wala hai Veer ke I mean card kitne dangerous sabit ho skte hai ye to sabhi jante hai aur ab ek time pr 2-2 card use kr pana will be really very beneficial for him...Ha aur Jaw Long ke cards aur skill to mile hi Jaw Long ko marne ke bad....Btw jaise Crimson ko marne time Ava ne Veer ko assist kiya tha to usko bhi kuch cards mile the to kya yha bhi Ava aur Erica ko bhi Jaw Long ke card ya skills mile hai???

Reward to bhut se mile prr jo sbse best reward tha wo tha france wali Pari ka comeback...Lvl 9 wali Pari jo ki ab ja chuki hai wo without any doubt ab tk ki most mysterious personality of Pari thi....France wali Pari ne wapas aate hi bta diya kyu log usse best khte hai....That feeling of care and worry for Veer was the thing that lacked previous Pari....Pari ki bat sun ke itna pta chala ki points are very essential for system....Aur jis tarah se previous Pari ne apni points ke greed ko show kiya usse to ye bat confirm bhi ho jati hai....Maybe they could be something like currency for them....Khair system se related to abhi hm kewal guess hi kr skte hai kuch confirm nhi bta skte

Last me ek aur system holder Rebecca Elsher ki entry hui...As I remember total 17 system holder alive the joki Jaw Long ke marne ke bad 16 hi rhh gye jimse se 9 ( Veer, Ava, Renshu, Erica, Gorofano, Rebecca, Mr.X, Rebecca ke sath wala new system holder, aur ek wo jise crimson ne prison se churaya tha) ko hmne story me dekh liya ya fir at least unki ek glimpses to dekh hi li....
Rebecca maybe wo FBCC Director ho skti hai....Aisa sochne ke piche ek reason ye bhi tha ki Rebecca ko veer ke bare me sari information phle se thi aur same FBCC director bhi Veer ke bare me janti thi aur upr se vo Divya ko bhi utha ke le gyi...Waise khi Rebecca hi to wo nhi thi n jisne Renshu ko phone krke Veer aur Gorofano ke bare me btaya tha??

So basically the main cause for this whole fight was Rebecca only...She asked Jaw Long to capture the mine for her which resulted in fight between Jaw Long and Renshu....Ab mine se usse aisa kya kam tha ye to aage hi pta chalega
By the way sometimes it feels like Veer kewal mohre ke tarah use kiya ja rha hai Mr.X aur Rebecca jaise system holder ke plans me...Inke plans fully prepared hote hai. For example Rebecca ko hi dekh lo usko jo cahiye tha wo to usne le hi liya pr sath hi sath usne phle se hi future me hone wale khatre ko sense krr liya tha aur uske liye safety measure bhi le liya tha....Vo to Veer ka kismat accha tha ki wo apne plan me successful nhi ho payi aur veer ki usse related memory mita nhi payi
Definitely Jaw Long and crimson were also powerful but MR.X aur Rebecca se alag level ki dangerous vibe aa rhi hai....To inka samna krna Veer ke liye bhut hard hone wala hai...

Khair Veer to abhi behosh hai aur Divya gayab ho chuki hai....Jb use hosh aaiega aur pta chalega ki Divya gayab hai to definitely wo sant to nhi hi baithega aur sayad jb tk Divya mil n jaye wo wapas India bhi na jaye....Aisa bhi possible hai ki Divya shi salamt apne ghar yani America pahuch chuki ho ( Mostly aisa tb hi possible hoga jb FBCC director and Rebecca same person ho , aur agar aisa hua to iss theory ke sach hone ki possibility aur badh jaiegi)
Gorofano is also back...Let's see ki wo kewal veer ke ilaz ke liye aayi hai ya fir koi aur bhi baat hai
Intezar rhega ab iss Arc finale ka...Ab dekhna ye hai ki wo update mysteries ko clear krega ya aur badha dega

Btw , mere pichle review ke reply me aapne ek idea ke bare me likha tha of creating a separate space for all skills and cards...Definitely ye idea kamal ka hai and it would help us readers a lot

AS ALWAYS A GREAT UPDATE...
KEEP WRITING...
WAITING FOR NEXT...

Lajavab.......
khaufnak drisho ki bharmar k sath maza charguna ho gya... Specially jaw long or veer ki fight... Fight ka last part darindgi se bharpur .... Aesa lag raha tha jaise tv mei movie dekh rahe ho....well fight ki ending toh ho gayi lekin end isse or bhi gehra le gya hai .... Crimson se upper yeh arc tha abb aage kya hi hoga hum toh soch hi nhi payenge..... Khairujhe lgta hai Divya ki head hi hogi jo usse lekar gayi hai....baki update aane pr pta chalega.....

Wolfi bhi mra ps update nhi show rha full

Bro is baar update thodi jaldi dene ki koshish karna

Kab aaya update no.179

Bhai update ho to esa puri story finish hoke bhi nahi huaa bahot suspenseful ho gaya hain story esa lagta hain jaise story to abhi suru huaa hain maja aa gaya bhai Next update ka intajaar rahegaa bhai

Bahut hi jabardast or badhiya update bro

Pari ne to veer ke sharir pe control karke keher dha diya bhai jo long ki khatia khadi kardi ab to apni purani wali pari bhi lit ayi ha lekin ye wali pari me kuchh to bat thi agar ye na hoti to ye sab jinda bhi na hote

Or wo unknown system holder na jane kon tha lekin wo apne app ko bahut jyada hi tis markhan samajh raha tha iska samna ab tak veer se nahi hua ha or ab to veer ki powers bhi badh chuki ha

Or wo unknown lady Rabecca jaise use sab pata tha future ke bare me or uske pas sammohan karne ki power bhi ha shayad or lagta ha ye lady veer se bhi jyada strong malum hoti ha or ya lady mujhe lagta ha ki FBCC ki director divya ki boss hi ha or renshu ko call karne wali bhi shayad yahi lady hogi or ek theory ha ki shayd iske pas koi aisi skill ha jisse ye future dekh sakti ha ya satik anuman laga sakti ha jisee ab tak sab iske hisab se ho raha ha ab dekhenge ki iska or veer ka amna samna kab hota ha kyonki veer ise bhula nahi ha

IDhar ava or groffano ka apas me hi veer ko leke dimag me jung chhidi hui ha inhe bhi veer ko pana ha veer le liye ladkiyon ki line badhti jaa rahi ha ab to usme system holders girls bhi shamil ho gayi ha beo abhi tak groffano ko action me ate hue nahi dekha ha shayd future me dekh e ko milega

waiting for next update

Intejar rahega.....btw new update bhi bahut badhiya tha..new character ki entry wow....iss bar pala ek aurat se pada hai maza aayega

Bahut hi jabardast update aur fir se ek black character,jab crimson mara tha ek system holder saamne aaya tha joh veer ke life ke har choti badi cheezon ko note karta rehta hai aur ab yeah hat wali ladki, jaahir hai usko long ke saare cards even veer ke past illustration ke baare mein jaanti thi aur usmein hi ek plan bhida diya. Aur toh aur 'Sanskari Pari' is back but mein 'mommy Pari' ko miss bahut karunga, ummid hai jaldi laut kar woh aayegi. Points wala hisab kitab aage wale arc mein khule jiska hint humko 'Sanskari Pari' ne diya. Aage gorfano aur ava ke bich cat fight dekhne mein maja aayega.aur shayad erica bhi thoda apni jalwe bikharegi veer ke aage.

Waise next arc ka naam kya hai Wolfie bro?

update was fabulous as usual ....full of action...
I was thinking that lady will be someone who is very close to him like Divya .... becauae Betrayal is an art .... But writer sahab ne naya character daala hai...aab iss ladki ke baare mei jaanene ki iccha hoo rhe hai...

Finally the old pari is back........

Kya gazab likha hai dada. Matlab ab to ye pakka hai ki Veer will evolve into the strongest system holder.

Mind blowing update

Mind blowing update

Most thrilling spine update Fabolous awesome amazing phadoo dhasu totally unbelievably fantastic rapchik update

Nice update bro

Sir, app ne ase story show ki haa Jase hum wahi khare sub dekh rahe haa.... great story

Jabardast update

सही मायने मे कहा जाए , यह पुरा अपडेट सिस्टम खासकर ' परी ' के वीरतापूर्वक वाणी और उसके रणकौशल पर केंद्रित रहा ।
वीर के दिमाग और शरीर पर कब्जा किए हुए जाॅउ लोंग को ललकारना ऐसा प्रतीत हो रहा था जैसे " सीता स्वयंवर " के दरम्यान लक्ष्मण ने अपना आक्रोश दिखाया था -

" सुनहु भानुकुल पंकज भानु ।
कहउं सुभाउ न कछु अभिमानु ।।
जौं तुम्हारि अनुशासन पावौं ।
कंदुक इव ब्रह्मांड उठावौ ।।
काचे घट जिमि डारौं फोरी ।
सकउं मेरू मूलक जिमि तौरी ।। "

उनका कहना था कि मै ब्रह्मांड को गेंद की तरह उठा लूं , और उसे कच्चे घड़े की तरह फोड़ डालूं ।

लेकिन प्रश्न यह है कि ' परी ' के अंदर इतनी ताकत कैसे आई ? वह बाकी सभी सिस्टम से मजबूत कैसे है ?
वैसे सभी सिस्टम पहले से ही अबूझ और रहस्यमय बने हुए हैं । आखिर ये सभी हैं कौन ? कहां से यह आए हैं ? इनका मकसद क्या है ? यह मनुष्य के शरीर मे क्यों प्रवेश करते हैं ?

मुझे बस यही समझ आ रहा है कि यह लोग किसी पैरेलल वर्ल्ड से कनेक्टेड हैं , शायद पैरेलल वर्ल्ड की अतृप्त आत्माएं ! इनमे कुछ लोग अच्छे हैं तो कुछ बुरे भी हैं । अच्छे सिस्टम अच्छे इंसान को अपना आशियाना बनाती है और बुरे सिस्टम बुरे लोगों के शरीर मे प्रवेश करती है ।

सिस्टम जिस शरीर के अंदर प्रवेश करती है , उस शरीर उस इंसान के लिए लाॅयल रहती है । सिस्टम अधिक कारगर हो , ज्यादा पावरफुल हो उसके लिए सिस्टम का अप ग्रेड होना आवश्यक है । नए नए कार्ड हासिल करके न सिर्फ इंसान ताकतवर बनता है बल्कि सिस्टम भी अधिक एक्टिव होती है ।

शायद सत्रह या अठारह सिस्टम होल्डर्स की बात एक बार कही गई थी ।
Veer , Renshu , Erica , Crimpson , Ava , Mr.X, Gorofano , Jaw long , Rebecca , unknown fighter ( Renshu ke saath jiska fight hua tha) and A prisoner .
शायद ग्यारह का दर्शन अबतक हो गया है लेकिन अब भी छ या सात का दर्शन होना बाकी है । वैसे कैदी का बस एक बार के लिए जिक्र ही किया गया है ।

इन सभी के पास सिस्टम है और हर सिस्टम के पीछे एक नाम भी है ।
इन सब मे कुछ अच्छे सिस्टम होल्डर्स हैं और कुछ बुरे । ऐसा लगता है जैसे सभी सिस्टम होल्डर्स अपने सिस्टम के एक तरह से अधीन हैं । यह लड़ाई एक लिहाज से सिस्टम की भी लग रही है ।

खैर , यह सस्पेंस है और एक अबूझ पहेली है जो स्टोरी के अंतिम पड़ाव पर ही खुल पायेगा ।


रेबेका मैडम झट से आई और पट से वीर को सम्मोहित कर के , रेंशू सर के योद्धाओं के बीच से दिव्या मैडम को लेकर छूमंतर हो गई ।
यह औरत मिस्टर एक्स है या दिव्या की बाॅस या फिर एक नई सिस्टम होल्डर्स , हमे नही पता । लेकिन मोहतरमा नेगेटिव कैरेक्टर मे है यह स्पष्ट झलक रहा है ।
इस मैडम को चाइना के जाॅउ लोंग के कब्जे के खदान से ऐसा क्या खास चीज चुराना है जिसके लिए वह व्याकुल है ?
वैसे भी एक महिला सिस्टम होल्डर्स की जरूरत अवश्य बन रही थी जिसका कैरेक्टर ग्रे शेड लिया हुआ हो । क्रिम्पसन और जाॅउ लोंग दो मर्द के बाद एक औरत का भी नेगेटिव किरदार होना आवश्यक था ।

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट वेयरवोल्फ भाई ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड जगमग जगमग अपडेट ।

Gajab lajawab update warewolf bhai. Best chiz iss update me purani pari ka wapis aana. Keep writing bhai. This story is going to make history for sure.

Amazing update, good to see old Pari back

मस्त रिव्यू SANJU ( V. R. )

आपकी समीक्षा सबसे अलग होती है।

बाकी खदान का प्रश्न है तो, एक न्यूक्लियर तत्व की खदान पर कब्जा करके इंसान क्या क्या हासिल कर सकता है इसका अंदाजा लगाया जा सकता है।

Werewolf wolfie bhau ek baat khni thi apse yrr aapne hme do system holders ki fight dikha di dosti dikha di ab ek br ek ghamasan sex seen or dikha do pta to chale do system holder ka sex ke bich ka romanch

Great bro. It was mind blowing. Keep it up. Aur jo new characters dalen hyn achy thy lagata hy story or lambi chly gi 200 episodes sy zyada mai tu yehi umeed rakhta hu. Good luck

Wolfy bhai kya Ava aur veer ke romantic seen and sex ho sakta hai ya nahi kyoki isse hoga ki Ava aur veer ke beech sab kuchh thik ho jayega Jo bhi dono ke man me manmutav hai wo dhumil ho jayega baaki apke man me kya hai wo pta nahi kya hai

Jabardast update bro

Werewolf bro ab to fight over hoi ab to choreography bhi nahi hogi to kya hum update jaldi milne ki ummed kar sakte hai

This is unbelievable, unimaginable, unreal update, I think this update is parallel to the update in which Veer got system and this marvelous story began. Thanks dear Werewolf

अब मैं क्या ही लिखूं भाई एकदम धांसू अपडेट क्या ही seen create है भाई एकदम फाड़ के रख दिए jaw long को मारने के बाद वीर को उसके कार्ड के साथ ही ये स्लॉट मिला है यह आगे चलकर उसके लिए वाकई फायदेमंद साबित होगा और ये rebecca कौन है इसके क्रिया कलाप से तो ऐसा प्रतीत होता है की यही mr. X है

बाकी आपकी लेखनी की जितनी प्रशंसा की जाए कम है
अगले अपडेट की प्रतीक्षा रहेगी।

Waiting for the next update

Mujhe mere sawalon ka jawab nhi mila???

AWESOME BRO

NOW WAITING FOR PARI SECRET TO REVEIL

Ho jata hai idher udhar phone par Google translator apni ma. Na.

Toh kaise kam chalega...

karea Sonia Ava veer dekhne ko milenge jaldi....

Popcorn ready ... Rakhna padega tab toh...
Baaki besabri hai ab toh... Next update ki...

JABARDAST MIND BLOWING EXCELLENT AMAZING AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI

Bhai veer ko achanak se hua kya.. Ye swal to ava or erica ke mind me bhi hoga jiska answer wo apne systam se hi puchegi ab dekhna hai ki. Unka systam unko kya btata hai.. Or unka khud ka systam bhi easa kr skta hai ya nahi..

bhai update bahut hee aacha diye ho...mja hee aa gaya

bhai vase agla update lgbhag kitne din m doge...?????

Known system holders - Veer, Renshu, Erica, Ava, Garofano, Rebecca, Unjaan Ladka, Prisoner aur Pagal Doctor. In suspense - Mr. X. If we count Mr X separately, then total 10. So 6 are still left who may or may not come in the story. Edited...

5 system holder to ek hi jga bethy hn bki ko tlash krty hn

We are getting older and wiser brother ab nahi uth sakte raat bhar lafaado jaise. Din bhar kaam rehte hain bhai... But keep writing these awesome updates

Ha bhai....jab maine jaw long ka full status re cheque kiya tab pata chala ki uske pass ANIMAL KINGDOM legendary card hai.

Awesome update again and awaiting next anxiously…

1. Pehle lag raha tha ki har level per Pari ki personality change ho jati hai, ek tarah se weh bhi host ke saath grow karti hai, lekin is update ko padh kar laga ki Level 9 aur Level 10 ki Pari different hain. Yeh nayi Pari purani wali Pari lagti hai.
2. Akhir kya hua ki dusre planet ke logon ke system ki power chali gayi.
3. Host ke willingly apne system ko points dene se kya weh system apni khoyi huyi power ko phir se pane lagta hai.

I know, all these doubts will get clear as the story progresses, just raising some flags.

Ek baat aur, update 5 - system activation me =

[Baap re Baap! Tumhara toh boht bura haal hai. Itne bekaar stats mene kabhi nahi dekhe apne life cycle me. Ye kya? Zero talents? Baap re!!! Tum reh kese liye itne din? Hmm? Endurance bas zyada hai tumhara. Arre haa! Itni maar khaoge toh ye toh zaahir si hi baat hai. Hehehe~]

To Pari ka life cycle Veer ko host banane se pehle se hi shuru ho gaya tha...

Waiting for next update bhai

Bhai apne kha tha iss arc m system ke Kai Raaz khulenge system ka koi Raaz agar apne khola h to batana jarur

Who is pagal doctor?
And you didn't mention garofano!
Are you referring garofano as pagal doctor? Or I had missed something here.

More things to add in the review

Veer got Animal Kingdom, but what's use of it without Shayna's Blood ritual.

Jemisha's blood ring, Shayna's Blood ritual, Animal Kingdom and Shayna's Access all are connected with each other.

You can't access Animal kingdom without Shayna's Blood ritual, and for perform Blood ritual you must have Shayna's Access.

But veer only got Animal kingdom, will veer buy Shayna's cards from his system with points or something else.

I'm more interested in Shyana than the Rebecca. I think Mr. X is not the final villan, he knows more than anyone but not know everything. Maybe the System or secret of system itself is ultimate villan.

BC piche ke update repeat par padho to kuch jyada hi detail me chize samajh aati hai, pehli baar me to upar upar se nikal jata hai.

Dukh dard peeda.
Bas harem aur incest part ko change kare to pura public me dikhane layak hai. But I understand

Dimag ka bhosda ho rkha hai...
Maine bola tha ye card skills sab ab meri IQ se pare hai.

Ye kaam tab hi kar lena tha jab hame pta chala tha ki Veer ke alawa bhi koi system holder hai.

But nahi aalas kara lo tumse

I agree with you buddy

Thanks for your kind reply and appreciation dear bro . Shall be highly grateful for your kind words . Awaiting your upcoming amazing update dear bro.

My mistake, missed Garofano. At the time of jail break with Crimson, one prisoner escaped and one later Pagal Doctor dashed with Crimson saying he has to go and see his patients. I am taking these two as different persons as Crimson scanned them separately. Thanks for corrections. Editing...

Kya bus 2 arc bacche Hain??

Bhai next update ka tak aaiga

When will we see an foursome between karea Sonia Ava and veer and waiting for next update

Waiting

छी! छी!

देख लो कैसी कैसी डिमांड आ रही है Werewolf
Ek writer ko hamesha readers ki baat maan ni chahiye

Ek dam sahi baat hai hum sabko chahiye yeh

Waiting

Great story

Status of the update wolfie

Waiting for update

Bhai please update post kardo

Nice update lekin wo usko kyu laad le gayi wo to ek normal si insaan hai Jo khufiya vibhaag me kaam karti hai baki sab theek hai

Ik baar to hona hi chahiye ya to bro

Next update kaab taak aayaga

Idk why every time I imagine veer sidharth Gupta suddenly comes to my mind Werewolf

Bhai Mumbai me jo murders ho rahe the unka kya ? And wo Madhuri ?

Update?

Mera first anime uske bad se to count nhi hai kitni dekhi currently one piece follow up hai

Waiting for last update of China Town arc

Nice awesome mast update bro

Bhai update ki koi newskb tak sa skta
Hai

Ding dhamakedar update werewolf bhai superb naration of fight superb next update mein ye arc clear ho jayega keep posting such mega update take care of your health too

Waiting for update

Waiting for update

Waiting...

Bhai updet kab tak aie gi

Waiting for next update bhai

Bhai kounse anime ke baare me aap log baat kar rahe ho....hume bhi batao takibhum dekh sacke

Bhai main kafi prana member hon abhi neo id sa aia hon kuch arsa sa aor ap mere comments ka bilkl jawab nahi data

City Hunter anime try karo bro. Total 4 seasons hain aur bahot enjoyable hain.

Teleg se download kar sakte ho aap

Intejaar kab Tak hum kare yuu bhalaa.

Bhai update ka intezar hai

Bhai apki story se related konsi manga ya anime hai? Please suggest

System based kon sa h werewolf bro

Updet kitnay din bad ati ha

Up

Update kub tak aaega

Bhai eagerly waiting your next awesome update

Bhai
Next update kb tk?

Update aayega kya Bhai aaj

No problem iske baad part 2 likh lijiyega but aapka time bhi important hain

Update 50

Waiting brother

Bhai shidat sa agli update ka intezar ha ap na update ka aisa nasha laga dia ha jisa ksi ganjha wala ko ganjha na milay to woh bay chain ho jata he bilkl aisa hi

Mere khayal se Mr. X vahi ladki hai jisne divya ko utha liya hai or usne shayad isiliye Mr. X name bataya taki koi soche na ki vo ek ladki hai or shayad usne renshu ke sath aavaj balad ke hi baat Kari thi kisi device ya fir kisi card ki madad se

Isse editing ko na samjhe ??

intezaar rahega Werewolf bhai....

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