Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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Update - 177 ~ Berserk
[Note : Contains Gore related scenes.]​

Ab tak...

Magar, sirf itna hi nahi tha. Ava apni maa ko bachaane ke liye ye sab kari thi. Aur, isliye Island chorr kar jaane se pehle Veer ne ek vaakya aur kaha tha. Itni dheere ki sirf use hi sunaayi de sake. Lekin, Ava ne woh sunn liya tha.

Woh bol the-

'Go and protect your loved one now.'

Ab aage...

Pedo ki daalo ke upar Erica chhalang maarte hue aage badhti jaa rahi thi. Hawa se uske baal lehra rahe the aur bauhe bechaini ke maare kasi hui thi.

'Veer!!!'

Badi mushqil se usne apne darr ke upar qaabu paaya tha. Kahi na kahi mann hi mann woh khud ko dosh bhi de rahi thi ki woh yaha aayi toh Veer ko bachaane thi magar khud hi sakpaka ke baith gayi. Kya aise woh apne pita ko proof karne waali thi ki woh ab frontline missions ke liye taiyaar thi?

Dekha jaaye toh galti uski bhi nahi thi. Woh kabhi bhi aisi paristhiti me padi nahi thi aur na hi usne kabhi aise drishya apni aankhon ke saamne dekhe the. Jis wajah se woh hamesha cheezon ko halke me le liya karti thi. Bilkul waise hi jaise ek kue me baitha mendhak, upar kue ki golayi se dikh rahe aasmaan ko dekh ye samajhne lagta hai ki aasmaan bas itna hi hai. Magar, baad me kue se nikalne ke baad use pata chalta hai ki aasmaan asal me kitna vishal hai. Aaj Erica ko poorn roop se abhaas ho gaya tha ki asli darr kya hota hai, duniya me kitne khatarnak log hote hai, apno ko khone ka bhay kya hota hai aur ek jaan ki qeemat kya hoti hai.

'Hang in there.'

Bhaagte hue use kuch theek sa nahi lag raha tha. Jaise ye khamoshi use bechain kar rahi thi.

'Achanak se itni shaanti kyu chha gayi hai?'

[Something is off.]

Jaw Long ke Animal Kingdom card ka asar khatam hote hi saare janvar waha se afra tafri me dur bhaag chuke the. Toh wahi neeche chal rahi Veer aur Jaw Long ki ladayi bhi Veer ke ghayal hone ke chalte lagbhag samapt ho chuki thi. Yahi kaaran tha ki ab Erica ko koi bhi shor sunayi nahi de raha tha. Magar, jitni vatavaran me khamoshi fel rahi thi Erica ki bechaini utni hi badhti jaa rahi thi. Kahi ye kisi anhoni ke ghatit hone ka sanket toh nahi tha? Woh nahi jaanti thi. Woh toh bas itna jaanti thi ki Veer ko iss daldal se baahar nikaal ke use sahi salamat wapas leke jaana hai.

[Woh dono yaha nahi hai, Erica. Ab ya toh woh pul ke uss paar gaye hai ya fir neeche.]

Erica dusre pul tak pahuch chuki thi jaha se Veer neeche gira tha. Pul ke uss paar se toh use koi bhi dhwani sunayi nahi di. Ab yaha se talashi karne ke do raaste the.

'Kaha gaye honge woh? Aage dekhe Genie?'

[Mere khayal se aage badhne se pehle hume neeche dekh lena chahiye. Neeche bhi kaafi jagah hai. Jangal neeche bhi hai. Neher ke uss orr dekho Erica.]

'Par bhala neeche kyu jayega woh?'

[Kyu nahi jayega woh? Judging by how he was escaping from those animals... There's a high possibility he might have chosen that route. Zara socho. Itne saare janvaro se bachne ka sabse behtar vikalp kya ho sakta hai? Insaan kaha jayega? Seedhe raaste par jaha janvar lagatar uska peechha kare? Ya fir neher ka sahara lete hue dusre chhor par jaha janvar aa hi na paaye?]

'You have a point, Genie! Theek hai toh fir. Pehle neeche hi talashi lete hai.'

Nirnay lete hue Erica pul ke madhya aayi, neeche dekhi, aur bina jhijke iss baar paani me kood gayi.

*Splaaaashhhhh*

Chhapak ki awaaz ke saath girte hi woh tairte hue fauran chhor par aayi aur khud ko neher se nikaalte hue ek gehri saans chhori. Iss baar usne paani me koodne ke liye koi shikayat nahi ki. Woh jaise sthiti ki gambheerta ko ab samajh rahi thi. Woh sambhalte hue aage badhi. Dheere dheere woh jangal ki gehrayiyo me pravesh karne lagi. Daudate daudate hi use kuch derr baad zameen par dur kuch nazar aaya. Aur, jaise hi woh aakriti uski nazro me aur spasht hui uski aankhein darr ke maare fel gayi. Qadmo ki gati aur tez ho gayi.

'N-Noooo-!!!!'

Ghabrahat! Ek ajeeb si ghabrahat uske andar janm li. Seene me vichitr sa ek bharipann mehsoos hua aur geele badan pe raungte khade ho gaye. Dur zameen par Veer ka shareer khoon se lathpath bejaan sa pada hua tha. Erica ki toh jaisi saari umeedein hi toot gayi. Kya usne derr kar di? Kya woh sahi samay par nahi pahuch paayi? Tamaam sawaal uske mastishk aur dil dono par chot karne lage.

Woh tez raftar se Veer ke nazdeek aayi aur ghisatate hue khud ko roki. Jhukte hi usne Veer ke sarr ke peeche ek haath le jaate hue uske sarr ko badi hi savdhani se uthaya aur apne kaan ko neeche uske seene par le jaate hue lagaya. Aur-

*Ba-dump*

*Ba-dump*

Agle hi shan uski aankhon me aansu apne aap panap aaye. Dil dhadak raha tha..! Usne kabhi nahi socha tha ki kabhi kisi ki dhadkan sunn ke use itna sukoon milega, itni khushi milegi, itni raahat milegi. Ek dil ki dhadkan ka mol jaise aaj use pata chal gaya tha.

Kabhi usne nahi socha tha ki Veer jaise ladke ke liye woh aisa kuch mehsoos karegi. Pehle din se hi Veer aur uska rishta koi khaas nahi tha. Magar, iss waqt Veer ke dhadakte dil ki awaaz sunn jo woh mehsoos kar rahi thi, unhe shabdo me bayaa kar paana uske liye behad mushqil tha.

'Thank God-!! Thank God!!! You idiot!!! *sniff* You are alive.'

[Ek minute!! Agar, Veer yaha hai. Toh, Jaw Long kaha hai?]

Genie ke prashn karte hi Erica ko jaise dhyaan aaya. Khatra woh janvar nahi the. Asli khatra toh Jaw Long tha. Uske baare me sochte hi uski aankhein satarkta ke chalte fel gayi.

Woh idhar udhar apni gardan ghumate hue chaaro orr dekhi. Magar, Jaw Long kahi bhi use dikhayi nahi diya. Woh toh aise gayab tha jaise cheel ke ghosle me maans.

Aur, tabhi-

*Booooooooommmmmm*

Dur use kuch shor sunayi diya. Aisa lag raha tha maano do log aapas me lad rahe the.

'What? What's happening?'

Uske sawal ka jawab bhi use jaise agle hi pal mil gaya. Dur jangal ki gehrayiyo se nikalta hua Jaw Long bhayanak tez raftar me uski orr hi aa raha tha. Ek shan pehle uski koi upasthiti nahi thi aur agle hi shan woh khud uski orr pagal saand ki tarah dauda chala aa raha tha.

'Huh!?'

Jab Erica ne danav jaise Jaw Long ko apni orr aata dekha toh maano uski haalat hi patli ho gayi. Jaise jaise woh nazdeek aa raha tha uski aakriti badhti jaa rahi thi. Asal me woh kitna vishal tha ye ab Erica ko samajh aa raha tha. Jaw Long ke haatho me uska wahi bada sa kulhada bhi tha. Ek baar hi uske chalane par Erica ke shareer ke do tukde ho sakte the.

Ye sochte hi woh bechari itna ghabra gayi ki usne neeche letey Veer ko apne seene se lagaya aur aankhein band kar apne haath khade kar diye. Agar, yahi unka ant tha... Toh wahi sahi.

Magar, iss se pehle ki Jaw Long unn tak pahuchta-

*Whooooooosshhhh*

Ek saaya unn dono ke beech aake khada ho gaya. Jab aakriti spasht hui toh pata chala ki ye Ava hi thi. Erica ne jab khamoshi ko mehsoos kar apni aankhein kholi toh apne saamne Ava ko khada dekh dang reh gayi.

Aur, uske hosh aur bhi zyada tab ude jab usne Ava ko check kar ye pata lagaya ki woh bhi ek system holder thi.

'Whattttt!!?? Wh-Who is she!?'

Ava agar chaahti toh camouflage activate kar woh fake status dikha sakti thi. Parantu, usne aisa na kiya. Veer ko dhoka dene ke baad se jaise use iss skill se nafrat si ho gayi thi.

Woh Jaw Long ke saamne nidarta se khadi hui thi. Usne apne kandhe ke upar se peeche halka sa mud Erica ko dekha jisne apne seene se Veer ko laga rakha tha. Uski nazre Erica ke seene aur Veer ke chehre par kuch zyada derr hi tiki rahi. Kuch shan baad woh boli.

Ava : Kuch samjhane ka time nahi hai. Uske wounds deep hai. Uska system andar hi andar bleeding ko rokne ki koshish kar raha hoga. Tab tak uski safety, mein tumhare haatho saunpti hu.

Erica itni zyada confused thi ki use kuch bhi samajh nahi aaya. Kaun thi ye ladki? Kar kya rahi thi ye yaha? Aur, Veer ko kaise jaanti thi?

Erica (frowns) : Who are you?

Ava : I'm... I'm someone who owes him a debt.

Erica (frowns) : Ye mere question ka answer nahi! Who exactly are you? Aur, mein tum par bharosa kyu karu?

Ava (smiles) : Kya waqai iss waqt tum ye sawal puch rahi ho? Saamne dekho apne. Agar, mein yaha se hatt gayi toh anjaam kya hoga?

Erica ne jaise hi Jaw Long ko dekha jo abhi tak satark hue unke saamne khada tha, uski bauhe ghabrahat ke chalte sikud gayi. Ava ki baat sahi thi. Agar, woh unke saamne se hati toh woh dono hi maare jaane waale the.

Ava : Shayad ab tumhe samajh aa gaya hoga ki tumhe mujhpe bharosa kyu karna chahiye. Right?

Erica : ...

Ava (exhales) : Take care of him! Use abhi move mat karna. Warna, blood flow hota rahega. Bleeding ruki nahi hai. Bas, uski hifazat karo. Bleeding ke rukte hi use yaha se leke nikal jaana.

Erica chup chaap sab kuch sunn rahi thi. Sawaal dher saare the uske mann me magar filhal unhe taal dena hi behtar tha. Kya iss ladki par bharosa kiya jaa sakta tha? Uske Dad bhi yaha nahi the. Ek decision hi unn dono ki life ya toh bacha sakta tha ya fir khatam kar sakta tha. Ek bahut badi zimmedari iss samay uske sarr thi.

Usne ek gehri saans lete hue fir apna nirnay liya. Haami bharte hue woh boli,

Erica (nods) : Theek hai! I'm trusting you.

Ava : Good! I will stall him until then. Yaad rakhna! Bleeding band hote hi tumhe use leke yaha se nikalna hai.

Erica : Hmm!

Aur, itna bol Ava wapas se apne saamne khade Jaw Long par focused ho gayi. Jaw Long jaan boojh ke hamla nahi kar raha tha.

Veer ke alawa uske saamne do do system holders maujood the. Zahir hai woh jaldbazi me koi galat qadam nahi uthana chahta tha. Aur, Ava ki woh zordar kick jo use padi thi. Uss se kahi na kahi use andaza lag gaya tha ki ye system holder ladki sirf kehne ki system holder nahi thi.

Woh kehte hai na, 'fook fook kar chalna hi samajhdari hoti hai.' Baad me dukhi hone se behtar tha ki abhi satark raha jaaye. Kisi tareeqe se woh Ava ko chakma deke yaha Veer aur Erica ko maarne ke liye aa toh gaya tha. Par, saamne khadi Ava ko dekh uske qadam sanshay me thame hue the.

Aur, Ava ne bhi jaise uske sanshay ka abhaas kar liya. Woh palak jhapakte apni jagah se gayab hui aur Jaw Long ki taraf lapki. Uske haath me ek katana talwar uski sheath se bahar nikli aur seedhe Jaw Long ke gale ki orr badhi.

Kuch bura abhaas hote hi Jaw Long ki aankhein sankat ke chalte chaudi ho gayi. Bhay ke maare woh peeche hua aur isi prakar Ava Jaw Long ko Veer aur Erica se dur karne me safal ho gayi.

Toh wahi idhar Erica Ava aur Jaw Long ko bhidte dekh ek alag anubhav le rahi thi. Usne apna dhyaan Veer par jaise hi punah daala toh veh ghabra uthi.

'My god...!'

Veer ke zakhm gehre the. Erica ne apne jeevan kaal me kayi maut apni aankhon ke saamne dekhi thi. Par, kabhi bhi kisi system holder ko iss tarah ghayal nahi dekha tha.

Ek system holder ka iss tarah zakhmi hona kis baat ka saboot tha? Iss se ye pata chalta tha ki Jaw Long unke liye kitna bada khatra tha. Agar, Veer unki madad na kar ke Jaw Long ko yaha baandh ke na rakhta toh kya hota? Woh sochna bhi nahi chahti thi.

[He's badly injured.]

'Uss ladki ne kaha ki Veer ka system use heal kar raha hoga andar hi andar.'

[So, he does have a healing skill huh?]

'Pata nahi! Card bhi ho sakta hai. Lekin, ye ghaav...! Kitna dard saha hoga Veer ne Genie?'

Erica Ava ke chehre ko poori tarah se nahi dekh paayi thi. Ava uss se baat karte samay bas halka sa hi mudi thi, jis kaaran vash use Ava ki soorat poori tarah se spasht dikhayi na padi. Parantu, woh Ava ke baare me kaafi kuch jaanti thi.

Woh jaanti thi ki Ava ek system holder thi. Veer ko Crimson se bachane ke baad Renshu ne use kaafi kuch bataya tha. Use ab bhi apne pita ke saath kiya gaya woh sanvaad yaad tha.

'Woh celebrity Natalia Martin bhi ek system holder hai, Erica!'

'Really?'

'Hmm! Aur, uss ladke ki maut ka ek kaaran bhi bann sakti thi. Agar, mein sahi samay par waha na pahuchta toh-'

'Hmph! Aap jab se waha se aaye ho uss ladke ke baare me hi baat kare jaa rahe ho. Akhir kaun hai woh?'

'Haha! Jo bhi hai bahut hi kaabil naujavan hai. Aur, rahi baat ki kaun hai woh? Jald hi tumhe pata lag jayega. Mera ek favour hai uspe ab. Jise chukaane wo zaroor yaha aayega. Tab, tum khud apni aankhon se dekh lena.'

'Hmph! I don't care! Balki, aap celebrity Natalia ke baare me mujhe kuch bataiye.'

'Uske baare me mein zyada nahi jaanta aur na hi uss se mila hu. Lekin, itna zaroor pata hai mujhe ki uss ladke ko shadyantra me phasane waali woh bhi ek thi. Maine itna anuman laga liya tha.'

'Woh kaise?'

'Ladka jab samundar me doob raha tha tab maine use waha se bachaya tha. Uss dauran, woh Natalia Martin helicopter me upar baithi neeche nazre gadayi sab kuch dekh rahi thi.'

'Ohhh-!?'

'Lloyd ne mujhe bata diya tha ki wo bhi ek system holder thi. Mujhe poore shadyantra ke baare me jankari to nahi hai. Lekin, kaafi kuch anumaan mein laga sakta hu.'

'I see!'

'Uske paas camouflage kar ke ek skill hai.'

'Camouflage?'

'Hmm! Uski madad se wo nakli status laga ke ghum rahi thi.'

'Iska matlab-!'

'Haan! Usi ke chakkar me shayad wo naujavan ek khatarnak shadyantra ka shikar ho gaya. Kherr, woh zinda hai abhi yahi acchi baat hai. Shayad, tab uss Natalia ne Camouflage ko band kar rakha tha. Tabhi, Lloyd use check kar paaya tha. Aur, asliyat ka pata laga paaya tha.'

'Hmm! Lekin, aapko kaise pata chala Dad ki Natalia ke paas Camouflage skill hai?'

'Kyuki jab maine use check kiya tha tab uska status mujhe dikhayi de raha tha. Woh nakli tha. Lloyd ne sahi pehchan baad me ki thi.'

'Ahh!'

'Erica!!!'

'Huh!?'

'Agar, kabhi tumhara saamna iss Natalia Martin se ho. Toh uss par bharosa mat karna. Celebrity hone ka matlab ye nahi ki kisi ka dil saaf ho.'

'Jii dad. Mein aapki baat ka dhyaan rakhungi.'

Ye baatein use acchi tarah se yaad thi. Magar, uska dhyaan to abhi uski jaangh par sarr rakha yeh naujavan kheenche hue tha.

Genie chup chaap Erica ke emotions ko padh rahi thi. Kaise Erica ke kaanpte hue haath Veer ke zakhmo par haule se fir rahe the. Jaise wo ghaav dekh ke hi unhe mehsoos kar paa rahi thi ki kitna dard hua hoga Veer ko jab ye chotein uske shareer par aayi hongi. Uski sarsari nigaahein Veer ke uttam kataav waale badan par bhi fir rahi thi.

[Tum uski dressing kyu nahi kar deti? Hamare paas rakhi hui hai na?]

'Arrey haan! M-Mujhe to dhyaan hi na raha.'

Usne apni jebo me se dressing ke liye kuch first aid ki pattiyaan nikaali aur Veer ke ghaavo ko saaf kar unn par savdhani se baandhne lagi. Bhale hi inse zyada madad nahi milne wali thi par ghaavo ko khula chorrne se toh ye behtar hi tha.

Dressing baandhte baandhte Erica ki nazre baar baar Veer ke chehre par phir rahi thi.

'G-Genie-! I... I was just thinking... Veer ki kya favorability hai mere liye?'

Sawaal sunte hi mann hi mann jaise Genie muskurayi. Woh jaise bhaanp gayi ki ye sab kis orr jaa raha tha.

[Sach me jaanana hai tumhe?]

'N-Nahi aisi koi khaas wajah nahi hai. M-Mein toh bas yuhi- curious thi...! Isliye- socha ki-'

Apne baalo ki latt ko ungli se ghumate hue woh khusur-pusur karte hue boli.

[Uski favorability tumhare liye 90 hai.]

Ank sunte hi Erica ki jaise aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi.

'Wh-What-!???'

Use pata tha ki 70-80 ke upar favorability ka hona kya darshata tha.

Pyaar!!!

Samajh aate hi uske gaal laal tamatar ki tarah laal hote chale gaye. Par, agle hi shan, maano jaise Genie ne uske sarr par thande paani se bhari balti udel di.

[Hahaha! Just kidding. Asli favorability 22 hai.]

'Y-You-!!! Genieeeeee!!!!'

Woh mann hi mann Genie par barsi. Toh wahi Genie uska reaction dekh aur zyada thahaake lagaane par majboor ho gayi. Genie jaan boojh ke mahaul ko halka karne ki koshish kar rahi thi. Aur, usme woh poori tarah se qamyab thi. Erica ka aisi sthiti me calm hona behad aavashyak tha.

'Ahinda se aisa tumne kabhi kiya na, toh mein tumhe sleep mode me daal dungi.'

[What?? H-Hey! Wait a minute! It was just a joke. Okay? Aur, maine ab bata to di asli favorability. It's 22. Twenty two. Jise dusri bhaasha me-]

'Haan pata hai!! Sunn liya maine. Sunn liya. I-It's not even a good number. Why are you yelling so much??? Enough! Sunn liya maine. 22 hai. I know! Hmph!'

[What? Kya tum chaah rahi thi aur zyada ho?]

'Wh-Who cares? *blushes* Ahem! Anyways! Mera ek sawal hai. System jab ek dusre ko check nahi kar sakta toh ek dusre ki favorability kaise bata deta hai?'

[Hmm! A very good question.]

'Please, ab baatein mat ghumaana.'

[Nahi nahi! I will tell you. Look! Hum sabhi system ek dusre ke prati satark rehte hai. Koi bhi system ye nahi chaahta ki agla system unke stats dekh paaye. We are afraid of each other.]

'Afraid?'

[Hmm! System apne stats ko hide kar sakta hai. Isliye, check karne par hume kuch bhi info haath nahi lagti. Ek prakar se ye hamara defensive mechanism hai. Par, Erica...! Emotions chhipaye nahi jaa sakte.]

'Ah!'

[Bhale hi stats hide kar diye gaye ho par feelings ko hide nahi kiya jaa sakta. Agla system holder tumhare liye kya bhaav rakh raha hai woh asaani se dikh jaata hai. Jaw Long ko dekhte hi uski ill intent humne mehsoos kar li. Zahir hai favorability minus me hai uski.]

'Right!'

[Wahi Veer ki 22 hai. Tumhare Dad ki tumhare prati 90 hai. Of course, it's all fatherly love.]

'Dad to meri chinta hi nahi chorrte. Mein badi ho gayi hu ab. *sighs* Toh aise work karta hai ye. Samajh gayi. Thanks Genie! Ohh! Look, woh ab saansein behtar dhang se le raha hai.'

[Uske system ne blood flow ko control me rakha hai. I think wo neend me hai.]

'Use araam ki sakht zaroorat hai. So, just-'

Iske pehle ki wo apni baat poori keh paati Jaw Long ki tezz dahaad ne uska dhyaan kheencha.

"Shebaaaaaaaaa-!!!!!"

*Keeeeeeaaaaaarrrrr*

Aur, beshaq...! Wahi baaj hawa me apne parr felaaye uske ek bulaave par haazir ho gaya. Sheba udta hua seedhe Erica ki orr aaya.

'Ahhh!'

[Careful!!]

Par, iss baar Erica ghabra ke dur nahi bhaagi. Usne apni peeth par peeche khusi hui kisi cheez ko baahar nikaala. Aur-

'This time...! I won't run!!'

*Fwoosh*

Seedha uss baaj ki orr usne wo fek diya. Wo cheez hawa me sansanati hui gol gol ghoom ke udte Sheba ko giraane ke liye aayi.

Sheba tezz raftaar se apni orr aa rahi cheez ko dekh baukhlate hue hawayi marg se hatt gaya. Aur, woh cheez jo hawa me feki gayi thi woh wapas se ek golaayi ka raasta apnaate-

*Thuck*

Erica ke haatho me aa thami.

Ek boomerang!!! Magar, koi sadharan boomerang nahi. Uske ird gird metal ke kuch nukeele tukde lage hue the. Kisi prakaar ki dhaar-daar blades. Jo nishchit roop se kisi ko ghayal karne ke liye hi lagayi gayi thi.

Metal bhi koi aisa wesa nahi. Ye tha titanium. Sabse halka aur mazboot metal. Aur, iss anokhe boomerang ki rachayita koi aur nahi ~ Swayam Erica thi.

Uska ek maatra card ~ Metallurgy!!!




Ek aisa card jo use saara gyaan, saari kshamtaye aur saara kaushal pradaan karta tha metals se hathyar banaane ke liye. Usne Garofano ke liye bhi kuch needles bana ke use di thi.

Erica ki aankhon me iss baar tej tha. Aur, uske mann me tabhi-

*Ding*

[Mission : Safeguard Veer until he recovers.
Rewards : Skill ~ Basic Seer Vision.
Mission failure penalty :
1) Loss of Order.
2) 10,000 points deduction.]

'Iss baar...! Mein peeche nahi hatne waali. Chaahe kuch bhi ho jaaye. Jab tak Veer recover nahi ho jaata! Mein yahi hu-!!!'

Aur, dur se use Sheba se ladta dekh, idhar Ava ke hontho par ek halki si muskan bikhar gayi.

***

Kintu, hua kya tha? Ava yaha kaise pahuchi? Woh itne din kaha thi? Veer yaha hai iss baare me use kaise pata chala? Aur, yaha aane ka uska maqsad kya tha?

Ye tamaam sawaal Veer ke mann me the behosh hone se pehle. Jinka uttar keval aur keval Ava hi apne muh se de sakti thi.

Kuch derr pehle...

Jab Veer eastside ki entrance se pravesh kar raha tha. Tab, woh nahi jaanta tha ki theek uske peeche Ava bhi use follow kar rahi thi.

[There he is, Miss! Thoda aur nazdeek jaa sakte hai hum. Itna peeche chalne ki zaroorat nahi.]

'Nahi Lily! Veer ke paas Beowulf hai. Senses badh jaate hai uske. Ho sakta hai usne activate kar ke rakha ho. Agar, mein iss se zyada nazdeek gayi toh wo meri presence ko mehsoos kar lega.'

[Ohh!]

Ava ne Veer ki aankhon me woh laal rang ki parat pehle bhi dekhi hui thi. Lily ne hi use khoj ke bataya tha ki Veer ke paas Beowulf card tha.

[Toh ab?]

'I will follow him from a distance.'

[Okay!]

'Lily...! What does he think of me now?'




[His favorability towards you is only 10.]

Ava ke chehre par ek muskan bikhar gayi. Magar, iss muskan me kahi na kahi nirasha bhi chhipi hui thi.

'10... is not a bad number.'

[My dear Miss! Is 10 really a good number?]

'Lily! Jo maine kiya tha...! Uske baad toh iss favorability ko minus me hona chahiye tha. *smiles* 10 is already a great number.'




[You've been smitten by him. *sighs* Kya hoga aage? I don't even know.]

'N-No-! That's not it! I-'

[Jhooth bolne ki zaroorat nahi hai. I can feel your emotions.]

Ava uske jawab me kuch na boli. Woh chupke chupke Veer ka peecha karti rahi. Veer jab uss blood trail ko laangh ke aage gaya toh Ava kuch shan wahi ruk gayi.

[Ye ek sensory type boundary ho sakti hai.]

'Andar jaane ke liye ise cross karna hi hoga.'

Aur, blood trail ko paar karte hue woh khud bhi Veer ki disha ki orr aage badh gayi.

Uske andar aate hi Jaw Long ko do vyaktiyo ke andar ghusne ke baare me pata lag chuka tha. Magar, Ava jaise pehle hi sab kuch plan kar ke chal rahi thi.

Seedhe taur par ladayi me na ghuste hue woh ped ki daali par baithe dur se sab kuch dekhti rahi.

'Yaha se mein uss par nazar rakh sakti hu. Jaise hi situation bigdegi, mein waha pahuch jaungi.'

Sirf Erica hi nahi thi, Veer ko unn janwaro se bhaagta dekh Ava ka badan bhi kaanp utha tha. Akele Veer ka waha ladna...! Woh kisi yoddha se kam nahi lag raha tha. Aur, uski woh nidarta se bhari chhavi Ava ke dil me aur nayi tarange utpann kar rahi thi.

Magar, akhir use Veer ke thikaane ka pata kaise laga? Yeh koi raaz nahi tha.

[Death Flag]

Wahi skill, jo Ava ne Veer par mark ki thi. Tab jab woh aur Suhana Las Vegas me uske concert me pehli baar daakhil hue the. Yeh wo skill thi jo ek vyakti ko mark kar ke rakhti thi. Ek seemit range tak uss vyakti ke zinda ya mrit hone ke baare me batati thi.

Tab se leke ab tak Veer par Death Flag ki woh marking bani hui thi. Kintu, Veer ke ruth ke jaane ke baad, Ava ne kuch kiya tha. Apne system ke saath. Uski system Lily ko bhi saari baatein yaad thi. Island par Veer jab use akela chorr ke chala gaya tha. Uss raat-

'Lily!'

[Yes?]

'Upgrade Death Flag's range!'

[What?]

'Suna nahi tumne? Maximize the range.'

[Jaanti ho na upgrade ke liye kitne points lagte hai? The first upgrade will take 5000 points. And, the second upgrade will take 10,000 points. Total 15,000 points.]

'Yes! Jaanti hu! Do it!'

[My dear Miss! Why are you so determined? Kis liye itne points ikhatta kiye the? Ab jab hum itna close hai Maisie's cure ke liye, you want to waste them on Death Flag's upgradation?]

'Lily!!!'

[Fine then!]

*Ding*

[Death Flag's range has been maxed out.]

'Good!'

Yahi woh pal tha jab Ava ki skill Death Flag ki range maximum ho chuki thi. Na sirf ab woh jeevit ya mrit ke baare me bataane me saksham thi balki, insaan ki ab location bhi woh saaf saaf dekh sakti thi. Veer duniya ke kisi bhi kone me hi kyu na rahe, agar Death Flag uss par marked thi toh Ava uski location ko asaani se dekh sakti thi.

Woh uss tak jab chaahe tab pahuch sakti thi. Aur, isi tarah woh yaha Veer ko dhundh paayi.

Veer ka achanak Mumbai chorr yaha China aana. Woh jaan chuki thi ki kuch gadbad thi. Yahi kaaran tha jo woh khud yaha chali aayi. Aur, uska sanshay ekdum sahi tha.

Aaj woh yaha na hoti toh Veer bahut bade jokhim me pad jaata. Kam se kam ab woh uske liye kuch samay nikaal sakti thi. Aur, yahi uska prayshchit tha. Bhale hi... Uski jaan hi kyu na chali jaaye.

[I just don't understand. Why are you so focused on him? Kya waqai aapko uss se-!?]

'He...! He gave me happiness, Lily. Jab mein use trap me fasaane ke liye uske khilaf chaale chal rahi thi. Tab woh meri khushiyo ka dhyaan rakhte hue mujhe protect kar raha tha. Can you imagine it?'




[...]

'Maine kabhi nahi socha tha unn moments ko mein firse enjoy kar paungi. Meri asli khushiyaan Mumbai me hi thi Lily. Jab mein chhoti thi. Mera bachpan...! Kaera aur Sonia ko chorr ke aane ke baad woh saari khushiyaan jaa chuki thi.'

[...]

'Veer ka saath jaise mujhe unhi lamho me le gaya. Par, kya kiya maine uske saath? I don't deserve his friendship. I don't deserve to be around him.'




Ho na ho, Veer hi woh kaaran tha jiski wajah se aaj Ava jeevit thi. Warna, France ki unn vardato ke baad usne-

[W-Wait!!! What are you doing?]

Uska uss pahaad ki choti par khade hona. Aur, neeche khaayi ki orr dekhna.

[D-Dear! Stop it! What the hell are you doing? H-Hey don't scare me! Please!]

'There's nothing left now! I must go as well! Lily...!'

[W-Wait!! N-Noooooo!]

Woh khud khushi karne jaa rahi thi. Aur usne apna perr aage badha bhi diya tha.

[Noooooooooooooo!!!!!]

Par, usi waqt Veer ke akhiri shabd uske mastishk me punah goonj gaye.

'Go and protect your loved one now.'

Aur, usne apne santulan ko girne se bacha liya.

[You idiot!!! You scared the shit outta me. Ye... Ye kya kar rahi thi dear? Whyyy?]

'I'm sorry-!!! *sniff* I'm sorry, Lily. I'm so sorry!!! Maine tumhare baare me zara bhi nahi socha. N-No-!! I didn't even think of him either-!!'

[Huh!?]

'Usi ne kaha tha na!? Th-Then I must protect him!'

[Y-You-!!!?]

*Clang* *Clang*

Ateet se baahar aate hue Ava ki aankhein saamne Jaw Long ke harr move ko padhne me vyast thi.

Woh prahar karti jaa rahi thi magar Jaw Long peeche fall back karte hue khud ko bacha le raha tha.

Jaw Long uss se direct fight nahi le raha tha. Pata nahi kyu, par woh Ava ke hathyar katana se kaafi bhaybheet sa nazar aa raha tha.

Ava ne apni tactic turant hi badli aur apni jeb se usne handgun nikaal seedha dur khade Jaw Long ki upar taan di.

'Kisi wajah se woh mujhse directly nahi lad raha hai. Agar woh long ranged fight hi chaahta hai toh theek hai. He can have a kiss of my bullet.'




*Bang*

Jaise Jaw Long ne kuch bhaanp liya. Woh tezz raftar me daudta hua apni jagah se bhaagne laga. Aur, Ava ki bullets apne nishaane se choonk gayi.

'Shit!! Kaash mere paas perfect aim ki koi skill hoti.'

*Bang* *Bang* *Bang*

Bullets gun ki nozzle se nikalti jaa rahi thi, par harr baar Jaw Long apni speed ke chalte unse bachta jaa raha tha. Saari bullets ya toh hawa me ya fir pedo ke tane par lag unke parchhatte udhedte hue nikal gayi.

Ava ko bhi mission mila hua tha. Magar, uska mission Jaw Long se bhidant ka nahi tha. Uska mission tha~

[Mission : Stall the time.
Description : Don't let your loved one die.
Rewards : ??]

Koi bhi penalty nahi dikh rahi thi. Iska matlab... Penalty death thi. Aur, system ko kho dena.

'Veer se ladne ke baad lagta hai ye aadmi kaafi thak chuka hai. I might be able to take him down.'

[Filhal toh wo hamari saari bullets se bach raha hai. Hume use jald se jald ghayal karna hoga.]

'Toh ek baar me ek bullet enough nahi haan? Alright then!'

Agle hi shan usne apni jacket khol andar se ek aur handgun nikali. Aur, dono handgun Jaw Long ke bheje ki orr taan usne trigger daba diya.




*Bang* *Bang*

Do sansanati hui bullets guns se nikal Jaw Long ki chithde udaane ko aayi. Lekin, lagatar tez gati se bhaag raha Jaw Long unhe chakma dene me qamyab raha. Magar, khel yahi samapt nahi hua tha. Fire karte hi Ava ne unn dono guns ko upar hawa me ucchaal diya. Guns hawa me upar gol ghumti hui gayi aur tabhi-

Ava ne apni jacket punah khol aur do handguns usme se nikali. Unse fir se bhaag rahe Jaw Long ki taraf nishana lagaya. Aur, iss baar jaise Jaw Long ke chehre par dehshat saaf nazar aa gayi.

*Bang* *Bang*

Hawa ko cheerte hue woh bullets uske maans me dhassne ko aayi aur Jaw Long darr ke chalte ped ke peeche jaa dubka. Woh bullets ped ke tane ko ukhaadte hue usme jaa dhansi.

Idhar Ava ne haath me pakdi dono guns ko bhi turant hi hawa me uchaal diya. Jaise hi usne ye guns hawa me feki, pichhli do guns jo usne pehle se hi hawa me feki hui thi woh gravity ke chalte tezi se neeche aayi.

Unhe punah haath me thaam usne firse-

*Bang* *Bang*

Aur, wapas se unhe hawa me uchhal diya. Upar feki gayi baaki ki do guns fir neeche aayi aur iss baar unhe thaam-

*Bang* *Bang*

Woh do guns hawa me fekti, do se fire karti aur fir unhe hawa me fekti aur pichli do guns se fire karti. Ek baar me hi... Woh 4 handguns istemal kar rahi thi.

Aur, ye sab kuch itni tezi se ho raha tha ki aam insaan ko bas Ava ke haath ki dhundhli aakritiyaan hi nazar aati. Uske haath after images bana rahe the. Guns itni tezi se hawa me uchhal ke neeche gir rahi thi aur wapas se hawa me jaa rahi thi ki pata laga paana mushqil tha kaun si gun pehli waali thi aur kaun si dusri.

Usne itni bullets ped pe daag di ki ped ka tana hi toot ke bikhar gaya. Jaw Long kisi bheegi billi ki tarah ek ped se dusre ped ki aadh me khud ko chhipane par majboor ho gaya.

Ab tak close ranged fight me woh bada hi guroor dikha raha tha. Par, bandook ke saamne aate hi woh dubak ke chhupne par vivash ho gaya.

[Such skill of handling weapons. She's a skilled warrior.]

Yaha tak ki uska khud ka system bhi Ava ki weapon handling ki tareef karne me peeche na raha.

'Kai! Agar, aise hi chalta raha toh-'

Woh mann me kehte hue ek ped ki aadh lene bhaaga jab tabhi-

*Bang*

*Squelch*

"Urrrghhh!"

"Finally! I got him!"

Akhir kaar ek bullet ne apna kaam kar hi diya. Kandhe ke paas aake bullet maans ko cheerte hue andar ghusi. Aur, Jaw Long ki ek dabi dard bhari karah muh se nikal gayi.

'Agility badhani hogi, Kai!'

[Long! Tumhare paas sirf 3000 points hi baaki hai.]

Kehte hue usne uske mann me hi full status dikha diya.







'Jaanta hu! Lekin, Aura vision ko upgrade karne ke liye mere paas paryapt points nahi. Agility ki zyada zaroorat hai.'

[Accha? Aur, sleep ka kya? Bina sleep ke points nahi badhne waale. Stats me points invest karna bekar hai.]

'...'

Jaw Long kuch na bola. Kai ki baat sahi thi. Agar, agility me points invest kar bhi diye to bina neend ke woh nahi badhne waale the.

[Intezar kiska kar rahe ho? Apne trump cards ka istemal karo. Aur, jald se jald ye ladayi khatam karo. Straight way se ghuse Li Renshu aur unke aadmi kahi mine tak na pahuch jaaye.]

'Hmm!'

Kai ki baat maante hi Jaw Long ke ird gird ki hawa badalne lagi. Woh poori tarah se gambheer ho gaya. Wahi, yaha Ava ki bullets ki saari magazines khatam ho chuki thi.

Woh ab apni katana ko haath me pakdi wapas se close combat ke liye taiyaar thi. Magar, Jaw Long ke haav bhaav use satark rehne par majboor kar rahe the.

Aur, fir-

*Ding*

['Berserk' has been equipped.]

*Ding*

['Berserk' has been activated.]




Agle hi shan Jaw Long ka saara intelligence dhadalle se neeche girne laga. Ek ke baad ek uske intelligence ke 150 points girte chale gaye. Aur, usi ke saath ye points uski 180 strength me judne lage. Jaha ek taraf intelligence ghat raha tha toh wahi dusri orr strength badhti jaa rahi thi.

Berserk! Ek aisa card jo intelligence aur strength stat ke beech apna game khelta tha. Ek aisa card jisme intelligence ka balidan dene ke baad uske saare points strength stat me liye jaa sakte the.

*Ding*

[Intelligence has reached zero.]

[Strength stat has reached 330.]

Intelligence ke saare ke saare points strength me jaa chuke the. Jaw Long ke ird gird ki hawa bhaari mehsoos hone lagi. Uske lambe baal hawa me lehrane lage.

330 ki strength. Akhir kitni taqat rakhti thi? Woh kisi pagal khule saand ki tarah ho chuka tha. Jo raaste me aaye kisi bhi insaan ke tukde tukde karne ko taiyaar tha.

[This is bad!!! I can feel it. He's using something. Dear! Distance leke hi fight lena. Woh kisi prakar ka card istemal kar raha hai. Uski taqat badhti hui mehsoos ho rahi hai. Be careful!]

Lily ki chinta janak awaaz Ava ke mann me goonji. Ava ki bauhe bhi bhay aur duwidha ke chalte sikudi hui thi. Jaw Long ka aura woh feel kar paa rahi thi.

Aur, tabhi-

"Haaaaaaaarrrggghhhh!!!"

Jaw Long dahaad maarte hue hawa me uchakta uski orr aaya. Ava ghabrate hue peeche koodi aur Jaw Long ka taqatvar mukka zameen par jaa gira.

*Boom*

Ava ne jaise hi uss jagah ko dekha jaha woh pehle khadi hui thi uski aankhein khauf ke maare fel gayi. Zameen ke chithde udd chuke the. Ek mukke se hi waha par crater bann gaya.

'Wh-What kind of power is he using?'

[Maine kaha tha na. Usne kisi prakar se apni strength badhayi hai. Warna iss tarah ka damage asaani se nahi kiya jaa sakta. Beware! Agar ek bhi attack hume laga, to hamare liye mushqil ho jayegi.]

'Yeah!'

Jaw Long par jaise bhoot sawar ho chuka tha. Ava ko maarne ke liye jaise hi usne dusra mukka feka, Ava peeche gulati maarte hue uss se distance bana ke bachi aur ped ki aadh lete hue peeche ho gayi.

Parantu, ped jaise hi Jaw Long ke mukke ke sampark me aaya-

*Smaaaashhhhh*

Aisa laga maano ped me kisi ne bomb laga ke chorr diya ho. Kyuki, kisi visfot ki tarah hi uske parchhatte udd gaye. Ped tukdo tukdo me toot ke hawa me bikhar gaya. Itna vishalkaay ped yu ek hamle se hi dhwast ho gaya. Ava ki haalat iss samay shabdo me bayaan kar paana mushqil tha. Usne aaj tak aisi taaqat ka namoona nahi dekha tha. Ghabrahat ab uske andar janm le chuki thi.

'Th-That's-!'

Woh abhi koi rann-neeti sochti ki tabhi kisi vyakti ki awaaz aayi.

"Hahaha! Koi bhi bhaag nahi sakta ab Lord. Maine saare pul ki rassiya kaat di hai. Ab sabko-"

Kehte hue woh nadaan tribe ka member jaise hi Jaw Long ke nazdeek aaya. Jaw Long ne uska kandha thaam use wahi jakad liya.

"Huh?"

Apne Lord ki bina aankhon ki putliyo waali chhavi qareeb se dekh uss tribe ke aadmi ka moot uski jaanghiya me hi nikal gaya.

"L-Lord?"

Aur, ye uske akhiri shabd the. Kyuki, palak jhapakte hi-

*Bammmm*

"A-Ah-!!!"

Ava ki aankhon me dehshat saaf nazar aayi. Saamne ka drishya dekh uska badan kaanp utha. Jaw Long ne aisa mukka maara ki uss tribe member ka sarr kisi tarbooj ki tarah fatt gaya. Khoon sahet dimag ke chhote chhote tukde, aur andhruni ang bhi kayi tukdo me vibhajit hote hue chaaro orr fel ke gir gaye. Uska bina sarr ka bacha hua shareer bhi ladkhada ke zameen par dhamm se gir pada.

Aur, vatavaran me khoon ki gandh fel gayi.

*Blurgh*

Ava ko vomiting jaisa feel hua. Usne iss tarah ki maut kabhi nahi dekhi thi. Neeche uss tribe member ke dimaag ke tukde, toh kahi aankh ki putliyaan, uske chehre ke alag alag ang dale hue the jo ab pehchan me bhi nahi aa rahe the.

Yahi tha Berserk card! Jo apno aur dushmano ke beech antar karne me asaksham tha. Jaw Long ne apna intelligence sacrifice kar strength ko apnaya tha. Ab 15 minute tak bas Berserk ka hi prakop chalne wala tha.

[He's a monster!]

'H-How am I gonna fight him?'

[Tabhi toh keh rahi hu. Iski koi zaroorat nahi. Just run and escape.]

'N-No Lily! I can't-! And, I won't! Mein use yaha chorr ke nahi jaa sakti.'

[You-!!!]

'I'm sorry, Lily. But please...! Help me this one last time.'

[ *sighs* Fine!]

*Ding*




['Vinona's Mark' has been equipped.]

['Vinona's Mark' has been activated.]

['Vinona's Mark' has been applied on the target.]

[20 minutes...! Sirf 20 minutes hai. Hume uss se tez rehna hoga. Tabhi uske attacks se bach payenge. Defensive hote hue uss par bas ek ek vaar karti jaana. 10 consequent hits lagte hi use 150% zyada dard pahuchega. Aur, bleed bhi apply ho jayega.]

'I know! Par, uss se bachna hi sabse bada challenge hai.'

[Lekin, hume karna hoga.]

'How many points do I have?'

[See for yourself!]

*Ding*







Ava ka full status uske samaksh tha. Points ki kami dekh usne apne nichle honth ko gusse me daanto tale daba liya.

'Sirf 1500!?'

[You purchased 'Rekkaken' and 'Judo Combat' last month. Aur, Masie's cure ke liye itne saare points Death Flag me istemal ho gaye the. Mission bhi itne time baad mila hai. Of course, we have a shortage of points.]

'Damn it!'

Ava zyada derr tak apni vartalap Lily ke sang na kar paayi kyuki, Jaw Long chhalaang maar apni jagah se uda aur use maarne ke liye aaya.

Vinona's Mark activate hote hi Ava apne Judo combat style ko apnaate hue stance me aa gayi.

'Come!'

Weapon Master card ki wajah se woh harr hathyaar ko chalaane me saksham thi. Magar, Judo Combat usne ab tak kisi pe istemal nahi ki thi. Ye skill nayi thi. Aur, uska pehla hi pratidwandi Jaw Long tha.

Jaw Long ka mukka uski kamar par lagne ko aaya toh Ava chhalaang maarte hue peeche hui aur perr zameen par rakhte hi-

*Whoosh*

Woh jhatke se Jaw Long ke peeche aayi. Aur, ek strike seedhe Jaw Long ki peeth par maari.

*Thuck*

Maarte hi woh hawa ki gati se peeche hatt gayi. Aur, ye ekdum sahi faisla tha. Jaw Long ne apni laat itni tezi me peeche ghumayi ki agar woh waha khadi rehti toh uski haddiya toh tootati hi saath hi woh kayi metre dur jaake girti.

Idhar strike padte hi Jaw Long ko jaise kaafi kshati pahuchi. Vinona's Mark marked target par 120% damage zyada karta tha. Ava ki strength 150 par thi.

150 strength ka 120% zyada damage. Matlab 330 ka physical damage. Ava khud bhi nahi jaanti thi ki woh itna damage kar sakti thi. Usne kabhi bhi Vinona's Mark ka itna istemal nahi kiya tha. Aur, na hi Judo Combat ka.

Woh nahi jaanti thi ki uska damage Jaw Long ke damage ke barabar pahuch chuka tha. Ya yu kahe ki usne uss detail par utna dhyan hi nahi diya tha. Jaw Long ko jaise hi peeth par woh vaar pada, uski peeth ki maans peshiyaan andar hi andar phatne ko ho gayi.

[Bas 9 hits aur...!]

Bleed apply karne ke liye Ava ko 9 baar aur vaar karna tha. Aur, woh bhi bina ek bhi attack apne upar liye. Tabhi, uske attacks consequent kehlaate.

Woh datt kar aage badhi. Magar, pichli baar wali chaal iss baar qamyab na ho saki. Jaisi hi woh Jaw Long ki taraf feint attack karne ko aayi.

Sheba na jaane achanak kaha se uske bagal se apne panje felaata use nochne ko aa gaya. Woh ghabrati hui jaise hi mudi-

Uss se yahi par galti ho gayi. Sheba apne pankh fad-fadata hua wapas upar uda aur Jaw Long ko yaha mauka mil gaya.

[Shit...! Dear, careful!]

Parantu, kaafi derr ho chuki thi. Ava jaisi hi wapas palti-

*Pooooowwwwwww*

Jaw Long ka punch uske pait par pada aur woh hawa me udti hui kayi feet dur jaa giri. Uske muh se khoon nikalne laga.

Internal bleeding!!!

[Dear...!]

Lily chintit swar me chillaayi. Aisa lag raha tha maano andar ki saari atadiyo par 100 kilo ka wazan rakh diya ho. Uski saansein ukhdi ukhdi prateet hone lagi. Jaw Long ka endurance 200 par tha. Magar, wahi Ava ka maatr 150. Zahir hai uski dard sehen karne ki kshamta Jaw Long se kam thi.

"Urgghhh!!!"

[D-Dear-!!]

Na chaahte hue bhi Ava apne ghutno par gir padi.

'It hurts like hell...! Urrghhh! L-Lily!'

[Y-Yes!!?]

'Aisa lag raha hai jaise andar se kisi ne mere ango ko noch ke daba diya ho. Ahhh-!!'

[Bear with it, dear. Just bear with it.]

Magar, use react karne ka samay hi nahi diya gaya. Jaw Long uske saamne aake khada ho gaya.

[N-No-!!! Dear!!! RUNNN!]

***

Jab Jaw Long aur Ava dur ladne me vyast the. Toh wahi Veer apni neend me kaafi recovery kar chuka tha.

Pari ne Beowulf ko kuch derr ON rakh Veer ki healing ko badha diya tha. Aur, jaise hi bleeding band hui, usne use wapas se band kar diya. Kyuki, woh jaanti thi ki Beowulf aage kaam aane waala tha.

Veer ki palke jhapki... Aur, woh apne hosh me aaya. Neend ki wajah se usne jo points pehle add kiye the woh ab invest ho chuke the.

[Are you awake now?]

'Pari-!!!'

Saamne ka dhundhla drishya jaise hi spasht hua toh Veer ne paaya ki uske saamne Erica baithi hui thi. Erica bhi jaise use hosh me aata dekh chehek uthi.

Erica : Ahhh!!! Tumhe hosh aa gaya!!!?

Veer (breathes heavily) : Erica???

Erica (nods) : Haan! Tum theek ho na?

Veer : T-Tum yaha?

Erica : Uh-huh!

Veer : Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?

Erica : M-Mein tumhe yaha se le jaane aayi hu obviously. Jaw Long bahut zyada shaktishali hai. Hum abhi uske level par nahi hai.

Veer : Jaw Long! Th-That's right! W-Wait-!!! Ava...! Ava kaha hai?

Jaise ab use sahi se hosh aaya. Woh uth ke baitha aur apne shareer ko idhar udhar mod apne dheele aur ghayal purjo ko usne jaise sahi kiya.

Erica : Ava?? Kaun Ava?

Veer : Wahi jisne mujhe bachaya. Jo yaha aayi thi...! Jaw Long mujhe maarna aa raha tha aur woh-

Erica : Oh tumhara matlab woh ladki? System holder?

Veer : Yeah!!

Erica : Wahi toh jab se Jaw Long se bhidi hui hai.

Veer : She's fighting Jaw Long?

Jab Veer ke chehre par uss ladki ke liye chinta ke bhaav Erica ne dekhe toh woh asahaj sa mehsoos karte hue tapaak se puchi,

Erica : K-Kaun hai woh ladki?

Veer : Ava-!!! She's none other than... Natalia Martin!

Erica (stands up) : Whaaatttt???

Apne pita ke wahi bol Erica ko fir yaad aa gaye. Chaahe kuch bhi ho jaaye Natalia Martin par bharosa mat karna. Aur, yaha woh usi Natalia Martin ke bharose pehle hi baithi hui thi.

Erica : U-Uss par bharosa nahi kar sakte hum. Hai na?

Uske sawal par Veer khamosh raha. Uski chuppi ko dekh Pari ne kaha.

[Boy-!!! What are you thinking?]

'Woh move...! Maine wo knife feki thi uss Jaw Long ki taraf.'

[Yeah, so? Pata laga liya hai humne already ki uske paas koi dodging skills nahi hai.]

'Ho sakta hai...! Par-! Maine woh sirf isliye nahi feki thi.'

[Huh!?]

'Aura vision!!! Non living things nahi dekh sakti-!!'

Pari ne jaise hi ye suna uske dil ne jaise ek dhadkan phaand li. Agar woh yaha uske saamne khadi hoti toh uske badan me khade hue raungte Veer saaf saaf dekh paata.

[You fucking-! Hahahahaha!!!!]

Woh zorro se hassne lagi.

Aura vision non living things nahi dekh sakti thi jab tak ki use upgrade na kiya jaaye. Yahi kaaran tha jo Jaw Long Ava ke dwara nikaali gayi katana se itna bhaybheet hoke dur bhaag raha tha.

Kyuki, use katana dikhayi hi nahi de rahi thi. Woh sirf Ava ke haath ke movements ko padh andaaza laga ke uss se ladd raha tha. Ava ke haath me hathyaar kitna lamba tha woh bas iska anumaan hi laga sakta tha. Aur, isliye woh Ava ki guns se bhi bhaagta raha. Na hi woh guns dekh paa raha tha aur na hi bullets. Kyuki, ye sab non living things thi.

Veer ne na sirf woh knife fek ke ye check kiya ki Jaw Long ke paas koi dodging skills thi ya nahi, balki ye bhi check kar liya tha ki Jaw Long ne Aura vision upgrade ki hui thi ya nahi. Aur, isi ke chalte use ye baat bhi pata lag gayi ki Jaw Long ke paas Aura vision ko upgrade karne ke paryapt points nahi the.

[If I would have been in my physical form. I swear I would have crushed your head while hugging you. Hahahahahahaha!!!]

Pari ka excitement iss waqt charam pe tha. Agar woh saamne hoti toh uske chehre par ek khaufnak muskan feli hui hoti.

'It's time for Round 2!'

Gehri saans lete hue Veer uth khada hua. Badan abhi bhi dard kar raha tha. Ghaav abhi bhi gehre the. Magar, samay yaha baith ke araam farmaane ka nahi tha.

Erica : U-Utho mat! Just rest! Bleeding abhi abhi band hui hai. Agar, tum zyada chaloge firoge to ho sakta hai firse shuru ho jaaye.

Veer : I need to go-!

Erica : What???

Veer : Erica! Kya tum mujhe yaha reh ke protect kar rahi thi?

Erica : Uh-huh! M-Mujhe mission bhi mila tha.

Usne jaise hi bola, uske mann me tabhi ghanti bhi baj uthi.

*Ding*

['Mission : Safeguard Veer until he recovers' is completed.]

*Ding*

[You have been rewarded with the skill 'Basic Seer Vision.']

[Skill : Basic Seer Vision.
Description : Allows the host to witness all the events that transpired at a particular place within an hour prior from the running time.]

Erica : O-Oh! Mission poora ho gaya.

Veer : Thanks!

Erica : Ehh??

Veer : Meri safety ka dhyan rakhne ke liye thanks. You... have grown up!

Erica : ...!!!?

Veer : Now I need to fulfill my role.

Erica : Wait-! Tum iss haalat me-

*Whoosh*

Kintu, uski baat adhoori hi reh gayi. Kyuki, Veer hawa ke jhonke ki tarah waha se jaa chuka tha.

Erica (shouts) : Veeeeerrrrrr!!!!

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'I think... This is the end, Lily!'

[Noooo-!!! Get up and run!!!]

'I... I can't-! Mere perr kaanp rahe hai.'

Jaw Long uske saamne uski maut bann ke khada hua tha. Ek hit me hi Ava ka shareer atyadhik damage le chuka tha. Endurance kam hone ka nateeja tha ye.

Jaw Long bhi kaafi ghayal tha. Magar, Berserk use tike rehne ki himmat de raha tha. Usne apna haath hawa me uthaaya aur uss tribal ke aadmi ki tarah woh Ava ke sarr ke chithde udaane hi wala tha jab-

Bagal se aati ek zordaar kick ne use dur girne par majboor kar diya. Jab Ava ne saari umeedein chorr di thi, tab ek baar fir Veer uske saamne aake khada ho gaya.

Ava : !!!??

Veer uski taraf peeth kar ke khada hua tha. Woh nahi jaanta tha ki iss waqt Ava ki aankhon me aasu the.

Veer : I told you to never show me your face. Right?

Ava : ...!

Woh khamosh rahi. Apna sarr jhukaate hue woh apne hontho ko daanto se kaat khud ko dosh dene lagi. Kya kar sakti thi? Woh apne dil ke aage bebas thi.

Veer ne aage kuch na kaha. Woh bas Jaw Long ki taraf daud pada. Aur, idhar Ava ke chehre ke bhaav taajub me tab badle jab use apne mann me woh notification sunayi diya.

*Ding*

[Veer's favorability has increased to 20.]

Ava bas aashcharya me dur jaate Veer ki peeth ko dekhti reh gayi.

'V-Veer-!!?'

Veer Jaw Long se bhid baitha. Berserk ko khatam hone me abhi 2 minute baaki the. Woh tez raftar ke saath uske paas pahucha. Jaw Long ne jaise hi Veer ki taraf apni kick maarni chaahi-

Veer neeche jhuk gaya. Zordar force waali kick uske sarr ke upar se nikal gayi. Aur, Veer ka taqat se bhara mukka seedha Jaw Long ki jaangh pe jaa ke laga.

*Pooowwww*

Uska santulan bigda aur woh ladkhadaya. Mauka dekh Veer seedhe uske peeche gaya. Uske dono haath Jaw Long ki kamar par lipte-

Aur, agle hi shan itna bhari bharkam Jaw Long hawa me tha. Peeche se Veer ne use uthaaya aur peeche hi le jaate hue-

*Baaaaaaammmmm*

Neeche zameen par use sarr ke bal patak diya. Zameen par ek crater bann gaya.

Haafte hue Veer Jaw Long ki kamar ke peeche se baahar nikla. Sarr par bahut zorr ke padi thi Jaw Long ko.

'Did I... win?'

Veer abhi khade hue ye soch hi raha tha kyuki Jaw Long koi bhi harqat nahi kar raha tha. Par, achanak hi-

'Shit-!!!'

Jaw Long ne akasmat hi uske ankle ko apne haath me jakad liya. Uski pakad itni mazboot thi ki uss se chhootna namumkin sa tha.

Jaw Long uchakta hua Veer ko apne saath hawa me upar le gaya aur fir-

Usne itni zorr se neeche Veer ko patka ki ek shockwave uss poore ilaaqe me fel gayi. Sahi samay par Pari ne Bone Reaper equip kar liya warna Veer ki haddiyon ko aaj choorma bann jaata.

"Veeeeeer-!!", Ava dur se hi kamzor awaaz ke saath uski orr chillaayi. Lekin, koi fayda na tha.

Veer ka ang ang dard se tadap raha tha. Magar, Jaw Long wahi par nahi ruka. Usne punah Veer ke perr ko kheencha aur use-

*Craaaassshhhhh*

Ped se bhedte hue ped ke tukde kar diye. Veer ek baar fir khoon se lathpath dur jaata hua gira.

Jo bhi bleeding pehle ruki thi woh dheere dheere wapas se behna shuru ho rahi thi.

[Agar, aise hi chalta raha toh tum blood loss se hi marr jaoge.]

Tabhi-

*Swoosh* *Swoosh*

*Swoosh* *Swoosh*

Kuch teer Veer ke ird gird golaayi me jaa ke zameen par dhansne lage. Parantu, woh sirf teer nahi the. Unke chorr par insaano ki asli khopdi latki hui thi.

Berserk ka samay samapt ho chuka tha. Jaw Long wapas se apne hosh me aa chuka tha.

"Shebaaaaaa-!!!!"

Baaj ko awaaz lagaate hi woh baaj jaise ishara samajh kahi udta hua chala gaya.

Jaw Long fir Ava ki taraf badhne laga. Usne Ava ke baalo ko apne haath me jakda aur use kheenchte hue le jaane laga.

"Nnnghhh!!!"

Veer ne apni ardh khuli aankhon se jab ye dekha toh himmat kar woh uthne ki koshish karne laga. Magar, dard ke chalte woh wapas se gir gaya.

'N-No-!!!'

[Tumhari chaheeti ko baalo se pakad ke woh le jaa raha hai. Toh? Ab kya karoge tum?]

'Pari-!!'

[Fufu~ Yes?]

Bhaagti hui aayi Erica ne jab ye manzar dekha toh ek sihran uske badan me fel gayi. Ava ko bachaane ke liye usne apna boomerang Jaw Long ki orr feka.

Toh, Jaw Long ne ek haath se uss boomerang ko pakad liya.

Erica : K-Kaise-!?

Woh majbooran uski orr bhaagi. Peeche nahi baith sakti thi. Magar, nateeja wahi. Erica ko pakad ke jaise hi Jaw Long ne ek ped se bheda, bechari Erica ke sarr se khoon behna shuru ho gaya. Sirf do mukke hi kaafi the Erica ko ghaayal karne ke liye. Dono haatho me do sundariyo ke kesho se unhe jakadte hue Jaw Long unhe zameen me ghaseetata hua le jaane laga.

Veer apna haath aage badha ke unki taraf jaane chaahta tha. Lekin, uska shareer jawab de raha tha.

[What are you gonna do now?]

Pari toh jaise uski iss haalat par lutf le rahi thi. Jaise woh kuch soch ke baithi hui thi.

'A-Ava-!! Erica!!!'

Jaw Long ne unn dono ko bhi ek ek jagah par patak diya. Aur, unn dono ke ird gird bhi teer zameen par baari baari khuse hue the. Aur, unke chhor se insaano ki khopdiyaan latak rahi thi.

Jaw Long zameen par baitha. Aur, tabhi-

*Keaaaarrrrrr*

Sheba akaash me udta hua uski orr aane laga. Uske panjo me kuch tha jo bilbila ke tadap raha tha. Ek murga!!!

Murge ko hawa me chorrte hue Sheba wapas se ped ki daali par baithne chala gaya. Toh wahi Jaw Long ne uss murge ko pakda aur apni vidhi ko shuru karne ke liye taiyaar ho gaya.

Uske muh se vichitra bhaasha me bol nikalne lage. Aisi bhaasha... Jise Veer kya, kisi ka bhi system pehchaan na saka.

[He's using Gong Tau!!!]

Pari ke bol tabhi Veer ke mann me goonje.

Gong Tau ek black magic skill thi. Aur, iska upyog karne ke peeche ek hi kaaran tha ~ Laalach!

Gong Tau ek vashikaran ki kriya thi. Jiski madad se targets ko control kiya jaa sakta tha. Vashikaran hone ke baad agar targets ko maar diya jaaye toh unke saare cards aur skills Jaw Long ke paas aa jaane waale the.

Isi laalach ke peeche woh iss kriya ka upyog karne laga. Woh kuch padhta jaa raha tha. Aur, nirantar uski awaaz badhti jaa rahi thi.

Achanak hi-

*Rattle* *Rattle*

Teer par khusi khopdiyaan apne aap kampan karne lagi. Kad-kad ki awaaz ke saath woh thar-tharaane lagi. Hawaaein tezz ho gayi. Aur, Jaw Long ne fir uss murge ko pakda-

*Slit*

Uske gale ke paas ek cut maara...! Murge ko latkaya toh uska khoon neeche tapakte hue kisi vichitra si dikhne waali cheez par girne laga.

Khoon kuch maatra me giraate hi Jaw Long ne uss murge ko feka toh murga apni peeth ke bal hawa me perr kiye zameen par gir pada. Jaw Long ne ye dekh haami bhari. Iska matlab tha ki aatmao ne uski kriya ko sweekar kar liya tha.

Aur tabhi-

Woh murga jiska gala kaata gaya tha woh apne aap uth khada hua aur pankh fad-fadaata hua waha se bhaag utha. Idhar Jaw Long apni kisi prakar ki tantra vidyao me wapas se lag gaya.

Aur, ab Veer ko apne shareer me kuch gadbad mehsoos hone lagi. Sirf Veer hi nahi, Ava aur Erica ka bhi yahi haal tha.

[He's taking control of your body...! Agar tumne kuch nahi kiya. Toh, sab khatam hai.]

'P-Pari-!! Help me-!!!'

Veer ki bahut kamzor awaaz uske mann me aayi.

[Hmm? I didn't hear you-!?]

Jaw Long ke garajte bol apna asar kar rahe the. Veer samet Ava aur Erica ke haath apne aap unke gale par jaake jakad gaye. Woh sabhi apne apne gale ko kass ke dabaane lage. Erica aur Ava dono ki aankhon me aasu the.

Jaha ek taraf Ava haar maante hue sab kuch sweekar kar chuki thi aur mayus aankhein liye Veer ko dekhti jaa rahi thi jaise ye antim shan tha ek dusre ko akhiri baar dekhne ka toh wahi Erica ka chehra kuch aur keh raha tha. Use dekh ke lag raha tha maano jaise woh marrna nahi chaahti thi. Bebasi uske chehre par saaf jhalak rahi thi. Aankhon se mote mote aansu uske gaalo se behte hue gir rahe the.

'Pariiii-!!!'

[Hmm?]

'H-Help me-!!'

[Ohh? Mujhe kuch sunayi nahi de raha! Fufu~]

'I beg you-!! Please!!!'

[Ohh!! Waqai?]

'Please!!'

Veer ki saansein ukhdi ukhdi aa rahi thi. Pari kuch derr shaant rahi. Veer ke haath apne aap gale ko dabaate hue kasste jaa rahe the.

"Urrghhh!"

'P-Pari...!!!'

Agle hi shan Pari ki awaaz thodi badal gayi. Maano jaise woh bhayanak gusse me uss se baat kar rahi thi.

[THEN...! ARE YOU WILLING TO GIVE YOUR BODY TO ME???]

'Huh!??'

[DO YOU WANT ME TO TAKE CONTROL? TO DEFEAT THIS PUNY LITTLE BASTARD?]

'H-Haan-!!'

[ARE YOU WILLING TO HAND OVER YOUR POINTS TO ME???]

Woh chillaayi.

'Haan! *Gwakh* H-Haan!'

[THEN GIVE THEM TO ME-!!!]

'Hmmm!!'

[YOU ARE DOING THIS BY YOUR OWN ACCORD. RIGHT???]

'Y-Yes-!!!'

[THEN GIVE ME... THOSE POINTS!]

'Hmmm-!'

Aur, tabhi Veer ke 5692 points jo usne emergency ke liye bachaaye the. Woh dhadalle se ghatne lage.

[YES...! YES...! GIVE THEM TO ME!! THAT'S RIGHT!!! KEEP IT COMING!! THE MORE THE BETTER...!]

Woh points kaha jaa rahe the, unka istemal kaha ho raha tha Veer kuch nahi jaanta tha. Woh toh Pari ki baat maan vivash hote hue apne saare points daav par laga diya tha.

[YOU MUST THANK ME LATER KID-!!! IT'S YOUR GOOD LUCK THAT I WAS HERE-!!! OTHERWISE, YOU WOULD'VE BEEN DEAD!!!]

Veer ki consciousness dheere dheere jaane lagi. Aur, kuch hi shano me woh behosh ho chuka tha. Pari ne poore shareer pe takeover kar liya tha. Ghatate ghatate Veer ke saare points zero par aake ruk gaye.

[Hahahahahahahaha-!!!]

Pari paaglo ki tarah hass rahi thi.

[Hahahaha-!!! THIS BODY...! IT'S WEAK!!! BUT YOU'RE LUCKY KID-!! BECAUSE I'M THE ONE POSSESSING IT NOW.]

Veer ka badan jab gale ko dabaate hue gir pada toh Erica ne rote hue apni nazre ferr li. Use laga ki Veer iss duniya se jaa chuka hai. Magar, Ava ki nigaahein ekdum Veer ke shareer ke upar sthir tiki hui thi.

Death Flag me aisa koi bhi notification nahi aaya tha. Woh jaanti thi ki Veer zinda tha.

Aur, fir-

Achanak hi Veer ka shareer gravity ke viruddh uski iccha ke bina upar uthne laga. Aas paas ke neeche bikhre sookhe patte kaapne lage. Uske uthate hi uski zulfo ne uski aankhon ko dhak liya.

Ava, Erica samet Jaw Long khud palat ke use dekhne par majboor ho gaya. Ye chal kya raha tha?

Jaw Long ko poora yakeen tha ki Veer kaafi damage le chuka tha. Uske baad bhi iss tarah uth khade hona...! Zaahir hai use hairangi honi hi thi. Use kya, yaha par uski jagah koi bhi system holder maujood hota toh uska bhi yahi reaction hota.

Na pehle kabhi aisa kuch dekha gaya, na suna gaya aur na hi aisa kuch hone ki kisi system holder ne kabhi kalpana bhi kari thi. Kintu, Jaw Long sab kuch mehsoos kar paa raha tha. Aur, ye sab kuch asal me ho raha tha. Uske saamne khada yeh naujavan ladka iska jeeta jaagta udahran tha ki aisa kuch bhi sambhav tha.

Veer utha. Uska muh achanak hi khula aur usne ek gehri saans muh se chorri. Kintu, raat me jangal me thand hone ke chalte uski garam saans dhue me tabdeel ho gayi. Aur, dhua uske chehre se chhatate hi uske hontho par ek bhayanak, daanavi aur kutil muskaan fel gayi.





'Huh!?'

Jaw Long ka badan iss baar ek jhatka khaaya, pal bhar ke liye shareer par ruye khade ho gaye. Thand iska kaaran nahi thi. Uski vidhi beech me hi ruk gayi. Harr insaan ka aura neele rang ka hota tha.

Par... Par kabhi bhi usne aisa kuch aaj tak nahi dekha tha. Veer ka aura...

Veer ke badan se jo aura nikal raha tha. Woh pichli baar ki tarah neele rang ka nahi tha. Uske badan se... Iss baar... Woh bhayanak gehre kaale rang ke aura ki lapto se ghira hua tha. Aura keval andar hi nahi tha. Balki, Veer ke badan ke baahar ird gird bhi lapte maarta hua nikal raha tha.

Aisa lag raha tha jaisa nark se koi bhayanak pishaach dharti par aa gaya ho. Jaw Long ne iske pehle bas aatmao ki nakaratmak urjao ke aura ko hi halke kaale rang se lipta dekha tha. Aura vision urjao ko bhi halke rango se dikhaane me saksham thi.

Bhoot, pret, pishaach jeevit praani nahi hote the lekin nakaratmak urja ka strotra zaroor hote the isliye, unka bhi kahi na kahi thoda bahut aura hota tha. Magar, woh aura itna prachand nahi hota tha. Kaali lapte zaroor hoti thi par behad maamuli si. Par, idhar-

Veer ke badan se bheeshan kaali lapte aise nikal rahi thi jaise maano uss par kisi ne aag laga di ho. Bas, farq itna tha ki lapte peeli nahi kaali thi. Beshaq, ye lapte kisi ko bhi dikhayi nahi de sakti thi.

Veer ke naye roop ko dekh Jaw Long do qadam apne aap peeche ki orr chala gaya. Woh samajh raha tha ki savdhani baratna kitna zaroori tha yaha par.

Kintu, Veer poori tarah se shaant khada hua tha. Uski aankhein uske baalo se chhipi hui thi aur muh se nikalti saans nirantar thand ke chalte bhaap me badalti jaa rahi thi. Uske hontho par saji muskan kahi se bhi uski prateet nahi ho rahi thi. Lag raha tha maano uske andar kisi aur jeev ne apna vaas kar liya ho. Kisi aur ne uske shareer par qabza kar liya ho.

Iss waqt uska roop bhayanak, raudra, aur prachand maalum pad raha tha. Yuhi nahi Jaw Long ne apne qadam peeche liye the. Chaah ke bhi Veer ki iss badli hui sthiti ke baare me use kuch pata nahi lag paa raha tha. Yaha tak ki uska system bhi iss paristhiti se anjaan tha.

[Kuch gadbad hai. Samajh nahi aa raha ki kaun se card ya skill ka istemal kiya gaya hai.]

Ava jo Veer ko uthata dekh ek raahat ki saans li, usne apni katana ko hawa me feka jo Veer ke bagal se jaa ke zameen par khus gayi.

Ava : Take it... Veer!!!

Magar, Veer ke muh se uske baad jo bol nikle woh uske nahi the. Awaaz uski hi thi, parantu bol Pari ke the.

"I don't need any weapons...! I AM THE WEAPON!!!"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
This update consists of 10.6k words. Ye thoda aur lamba jaata magar kisi bhi cheez ki zaroorat se zyada maatra haanikarak hoti hai. Isliye, ise yahi rokna sahi tha. Agle update me sab kuch samapt hai. Maine keh hi diya tha ki fight 4 updates legi. Teen update ho chuke hai. Bas ek baaki hai. Aur, uske baad shayad ek update aur rahega jo arc ke closure ke liye rahega. Update bahut late aaya hai jaanta hu. Par, mein vivash hu dosto. Baaki, likes thokne ka aur revos dene ka. Target apna 200 hi hai. Pahucha do. Agla update jald dene ki koshish rahegi.
Dhanyavad!

 

[Werewolf]

Zabardast and fantastic update bhai

Werewolf again he had proven that he is the best writer on xforum literally i got goosebumps after reading this update everyday i come and check your index for update but after 1 month i was also a little frustrated why you were not giving update as i don't read new messages but after reading this you proved time you took was worth it

Msst update bhai
Things are making a lot of sense now
Ava ke ane se Veer ko thoda to rest Mille ga
Wha pr Erica bhi h
So ab veer ke chances kaffi high h
Renshu nr bhi dusri side apna kaam kr dia h
Baki jaw long ke kuch patte shyd abhi khulne baki

So
Waiting for next update
And hopefully ye walla thodi jldi aye

Ava's return turned the all the prediction backwards really a funtastic update and bhai please don't take me wrong pr pls ap ye bta skte hai next update kitne time me aa skta hai btw happy holi to you and your family bro

Ok bro

Jabardast update

Happy Holi. Great update. What fighting... Very innovative...

Super bro

Gajab bhai Pura system hi hila dala React kese kre smjh k bahar hogya bht hi gajab update hai ab age kya hoga uske lie intzaar nahi hoga bhai

Mind blown! 2 legendary cards and multiple skills in use! Really well depicted fight scenes!

You were correct. These skills don’t project something that’s fiction - seem realistic enough that we can assume they are possible in this world.

Kudos

Great chapter! Ava! I never ever ever thought she’ll be back, that too in this situation! How long had she been keeping tabs on Veer! Veer really is lucky in so many ways!

Just excited for what you’ll have cooking up for next chapter

Itnay saray SYSTEM HOLDERS wowwwww. Maza a gaya bhai simply marvellous. Jaw long kay marnay pa who will get the rewards veer or Avaa or they will share the rewards same like when crimson died.

MIND BLOWING AND AWESOME UPDATE

Jabardast udate bhai

Happy Holi

Nice update bro

Good update bro

Shandar update
Happy Holi

Happy Holi bhai

Kya mast fight chl rhi Hy yh lrki zinda Hy àpni kisi Loved one ko bachane kyly
Janwron Sy Jan chot gi ab yh jaw long ka Koch acha sa seen kro
Àpni chipkali abhi tk tree py chipki hoi Hy

mast behtreen update

Mind blowing updated next update ki date batade bhai

Superb update Bhai

Bccccc….

Kya hi scenes create kiye hai bhai….
Can’t even imagine….
Padhke hi goosebumps aa rahe the
Never seen such a fight scene in any type of movie..

Love you bro..

Holi ka asli gift to aap diye ho, bahut hi jabardast update, Happy Holi sir

Awesome update. Fight end hone ke baad Veer ka harem will have Erika, gorefano, Ava and Divya. Wow.

Awesome fight sequences. Renshu and Veer fight scenes were awesome.

Agli baar thoda jaldi update dijiyega.

Bahut hi behterin or super update bro

This story is too good
And this update is superb and full action pack
Bro is baar Jayda wait mat karvana because maja nahi aata fir kaam sa kaam week me 1 update to aana hi chaiya

Happy Holi friend. Update was wonderful to read. As usual this update has given rise to many questions.

Tremendous action packed update Werewolf bhai...

Just loved it.

Thanks for a Mega Mega Holi Special update and my best wishes for a very Happy Holi to you and to your family. Normally I read long updates in the morning, that too in two sittings, but this update was so thrilling, and full of surprises, that I completed it without any break in the night itself. The fighting was intense, very chilling, and full of surprises. It was worth waiting.

First the fight between Renshu and unknown system holder, who is trying to lure Renshu in traps inside deep forest. Use of Mayhem, and what not, everything has been planned and written beautifully. Unlike Veer, who is always calm in any situation, Renshu is angry, but still is taking care to make Legion people come to his side. This mysterious fighter is also young but very skilled. Aakhir Renshu ne usko hara hi diya.

Erica bhi Veer ki side pahunch gayi, yeh accha hua weh pedon ke sahare hi aage badhi. Lekin wahan ka drishya dekh kar weh to maare darr ke freez hi ho gayi. To system me Evil cards bhi hote hain, aur Jaw Long ke pass to do legendary cards hain. Kisi tarah se Veer ne unki time limit ko bhagte huye paar kar liya. Yahan bhi ladayi badi intense thi. Your innovative skills and creation of the atmosphere using the environment are beyond imagination, one really feels as if one himself is at the center of this intense fighting.

So most of the readers wish has come true, Ava has appeared, in the most critical movement, as was the case in Crimson's fight. Her Mark on Veer must have been still active, so she could have easily located Veer. Indirectly, she has confessed her love for Veer, let's see what happens as the fight nears end. I was expecting Veer to somehow find his vest where needles given by Garofano are still there, and use them on Jaw Long. Veer has already noticed that Jaw Long does not have dodging skills. One more thing, he has to be very careful, he has used Probability Manipulation skill's all three chances.

Pari was very helpful, but still she has not left her teasing nature, pehle 'Mummy' bolo. Hahaha...

One thing more, Jaw Long may not be very popular in Legion tribe, from where he got so much blood to make the trail. He must have sacrificed his own people.

Koi itti axi story kese likh skta h

Kahi aapke pass b to system n h ?
Koi story writing ki skill le rakhi ho

By the way update bahut achha tha ,
Jitna expect kiya tha usse jyada hi mila

Awesome Update Padhkar Dil Khush Ho Gaya

Happy Holi
Kya hi bolein bhai..ik trah se akhon ke sahmne film chal rahi thi.....kya likh rahe ho yaar.. writing skills k kya kehne... Udhar Li ne mamla sulja liya hai or veer bhi kadi takkar de raha hai...jbb halat patli hui toh Ava aa gyi... Kyu aayi woh toh pta nhi pr abhi k liye toh good hai... Long ka ant toh veer k hatho chahiye bs.... Pr Erica lgta hai nyi musibat creat karegi... Woh abb lgegi Long k hatho i think....
As always you never disappoint us....dil khush ho gya..bs ik binati hai agar next update thoda jaldi ho sake toh ...baat bann jaye.... Aapki sehatzabi ki dua krte hein... Tandrus rahiye khush rahiye....hume entertain krte rahiye..

Bbbbhaaaaiiii kyaaa thaaa ye abhi bhi goosbumps aarahe hai kya ho faadu update thaaa yaarrr wwooooooowwww really suupeerrrvbb

Sabse pehle kya hi jordar block buster update thaa agar aisa update har baar mile to main 1 month to nathi but 15 days Bina update ke sarvaiv karlunga 1month kafi lamba gap hogya but is Wale update ko padh kar wo intezaar bhi wassol hogya

Or buddy first aate hai renshu ki fight par bhai mayhem ka kyahi dimag faad denewala jalwa dekhne ko mila chalo kamse kam legion ke logo ko ye pata to lag gaya hai ki unke lord jaw long ki tarah order ka lord bhi koi titpujiya ya fir koi aira gaira nahi hai bulki wo ek asali yoddha hai jo sach ki rah par chalta hai and sach ka sath deta hai

Or bhai crimson arc main mujhe laga tha ki reshu ek doctor hai jo sirf medical skills ka Malik hai is Wale update ne mere saare doubt ko galat sabit kardiya bhai 200 % leathal damage or ek ghuse main hi us nousikhiye ki gaand faad di use koi batao ki samne tumhare dada ji khade hai sala ek system and wo mine kya milgayi sala apne aapko
Jaw long the second samjne laga bhai kya hi ghusa pada hoga use accha hai usko potty nahi aayi thi wrna to


Now next Erica bechari har taraf se Aaj wo neechi dikhai ja rahi thi well uski galti bhi nahi hai aakhir kaar wo ek stealth expert hai par Aaj use ye jaruri pata laga hoga ki kyu uske pita or veer ki itni jyada banti hai or kyu uske pita veer ko itni respect dete hai and genie bhi use Samy samay par nayi nayi chize bata Rahi hai

Next sabse ghamasaan ladai bhai ye jaw long to sach main hi Jadu tona wala danav hi nikla bhenchod kya hi skills hai uske pass wo bhi legendary and uske evil card and skills bhai jiske liye usne aakhe hi dedi apni fir bhi itna satik and ghatak and akramak inshan

Bhai sach main agar ye webseries hoti or mey ye apni aakhon se ye episode dekh Raha hota to bhai kya hi maza aata but ye thoda jyada hojayega aapke liye

Bhai but sach main veer ke pass legendary skills ki thodi Kami to hai or strength bhi use 190 ke aspas ki rakhni cahiye thi jab samne jaw long jesa dushman ho and kafi din hojaye hai jab veer ne quest hunt main koi Naya card nahi nikala jisse use koi fighting skills releted or strength power badhane wala koi kard nahi mila veer pass now daobut saare hi legendary card hai but ek bhi card indonose fighting and strength power se related nahi hai jese renshu ke pass hai

And next and unexpected baki logo keliye butere liye ye expected tha ki Ava ki entry hogi to jarur bhai or mujhe lagta hai in beete dino main Ava ne apne aapko jyada empruv Kiya hai ab dekhte hai jab almost 6 system holders aapas main bhidenge to kya rang layegi unki ye ladai

Or buddy veer ko mene Jo card nikalvane ka socha hai usper jarur dhyan dena baki bhai sach main me jab ye update padh Raha tha mere sarir ke roungte khade hogaye the dar se gaand fat gayi thi buddy kya hi likhte ho aap

And yes aapne jo meri card ke or skills ke discription Dene wali baat ka Maan rakha uskeliye thank you bhai or ek ho sake to jaw long ka bhi full status window dikhaiyega please it's a humble request tu you

Buddy ek baat kehna cahunga kya jaw long ke aane se crimson ki value down ho jayegi kya kyu ki mere liye to crimson ek power full villan tha as compare tu jaw longmera matlab hai mere liye humesha crimson ek one of the power full and favourite villain rahega veer keliye ha second jaw long ho sakta hai

And ha buddy aapne abhi tak us system holder ko introduce nahi Kiya hai jisse renshu ki fight chal Rahi hai kya manjara hai aakhir uska and mr. X ka bhi thoda scene dikhaiyega and Ava ka full status bhi bhi

Bhai Mai. Tumhe mere favourite card ke baare main batana cahunga jo tumhare is story main mere subse favorites hai abhi tak

1 . Probability manipulation ye first hai mere liye
2 . Beowolf blessings
3. meyham
4. Born reaper
5 . Limb substitution

Ye 5 car mere subse favorites hai dekhte hai kya tumhare aage story main jocars aayege wo meri is list main saamil honge ya nahi or ye jese mene unhe jis ank par rakkha hai ye wo Ankit deserve karte hai

Baki kuch nahi wolfi bas is baar 1 month ka wait na karana warna mujhe thoda bura lagega baki jordaar speech
Less update tha Bhai

Bhai aap jitna bhi time lete ho utna deliver karte ho . Always well thought out update.Story me jis tarah se scene ko description hota hai bilkul kisi bade novel writers ki tarah hi hai .
Har ek chij aapki story me me koi naa koi purpose jarur Serve karti hai ,jo ki Action ko behad khatarnak banati hai .upar se action ko suspenseful tarike se likhna , Mujhe to aapki story ka action behad pasand hai, top tier level ka hai Jo ki itna well bade bade novels me bhi jyada tr nahi hota.

Prediction -
Jaa lung ka andha hona bhi uski maut ka Karan banega ye meri prediction hai.

Shandar update. Happy Holi

Bahut hi khatarnaak update bhai

maza hi aa gaya ... awesome update

Bhai aapne update to bahut late Diya per isme kya kya seen the pad kar koi imagine nahi kar sakta pahle jungle ke sare animal veer per chod Dena fir paani main poison fir Ava ka aana jo kafi time se gayab usne to phadi se Marne ke liye kud gayi thi fir akdam se Jahan kase pargat ho gayi
Bhai veer ki shadi sabi girl system holder se karbana aur is story ko countinue bahut bahut longer tak chalana aur hur baar nayi se nayi chunotiyon ka veer samne kare aur her nayi se nayi skills prapat kare Jaa lung ko veer ke hatho marbana jisse Jaa lung ki saari skills card veer ko mile jese crimson ki card veer ko mile the base hi ab mile

Gjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjb yaar Love you bhai
❤

होली के दिन अगर ऐसा निःशब्द कर देने योग्य अपडेट आए तो हम यही दुआ करेंगे कि साल के हर महीने मे एक होली तो अवश्य ही आए ।
क्या ही लाजवाब अपडेट दिया है वोल्फी भाई ! पढ़कर वास्तव मे दिल गार्डेन गार्डेन हो गया । ऐसे कई मौके भी आए जब हमारे रोंगटे तक खड़े हो गए ।

पुरी तरह से आप हमे एक मायावी दुनिया मे लेकर चले आए जहां विषाक्त नहर थी , खुंखार जंगली जानवर थे , रहस्यमय जंगल था और एक मायावी दानव सम्राट था । और इन सभी से जूझता , संघर्ष करता , अपनी जान की बाजी लगाता हमारा नौजवान और सदाबहार हीरो ' वीर ' था ।

लेकिन इस अपडेट का एक महत्वपूर्ण टर्निंग प्वाइंट हमारी दिलकश , हुस्न -ए -मल्लिका , ए ब्यूटीफुल डिस्ट्रेश एवा उर्फ नतालिया मार्टिन का कम बैक रहा । यह खुबसूरत बाला जब भी एन्ट्री करती है तब तब वीर के लिए शगुन का काम ही करते आई है ।
इस लड़की को लीड हीरोइन बनाने का वोल्फी भाई !

जाॅउ लोंग साहब किसी पौराणिक कथा के कलयुगी असुर की तरह नजर आए । साहब ने काफी कुछ ऐसे वरदान ब्रह्मा से प्राप्त किए है जो इस युग मे शायद ही किसी के पास हो । लिजेंडरी स्किल कुछ ऐसे ही वरदान की तरह ही थे ।
लेकिन साहब अधर्म के पक्ष मे खड़े है , अतः इनका अंत होना ही होना है और वह वीर के हाथों ही होना है ।

इरिका मैडम ने कुछ किया हो या न किया हो पर वीर के लिए कुछ कोशिश तो की । और यही बड़ी बात है ।
रेंशू सर और अज्ञात सिस्टम होल्डर्स के बीच की फाइटिंग भी अविश्वसनीय थी ।

कुल मिलाकर " वाह वाह " और " जगमग जगमग "
आउटस्टैंडिंग वेयरवोल्फ भाई ।

A very nice update...

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Werewolf bhai....
Nice and awesome update....

Bhayanak shandar dhanshu update mitra

Awesome, speechless

Super duper update.

Super, amazing, legendary update Bhai

Ab tak ki sabse khatarnak update..rongtay khaday hogay padhtay padhtay!

Legendary update had goosebumps

Bhai apki jitni tareef karo wo kam he samjh hi ni arhi kesy apni feeling bayan krein k kitni kamal ki update thi yé

Update Der se aaya par saari shikyate door kar gaya…jaise ki Koyi hollywood ki thriller movie dekh rahe ho…
Super duper goosebumps update…

Jabardast update superb

Ava following to veer......From when??

Super se upar update

Bahut hi lajawab update

Didn’t ava commit killer herself hmmm
Or did i miss something fuck me
Dimaag kha bhosda ho gya lol

Zabardast update

Super se bhi upar update

Awesome Update Bhai

Superb update

A

Awesome update bro

Bahot hi behtareen update tha.nice 1 agein

Zabardast update

Damakedar update bhai Mja aa gaya

Wakai me shandaar update hai bhai maza aa gaya
Par Ava yaha achanak se kaha se prakat ho gayi mujhe laga tha Erica hogi

Zabrdast update

हर किरदार अपनी एक अलग भूमिका में है।

ओर बहुत उम्दा है। यहां ava की एंट्री अलग ही मोड़ ले कर आ गयी है।

अब पावर किसे मिलती है। प्यार किसे किसका नसीब होगा।

या नफरत ही मिलेगी।

आख़िर दोष नही था ava का वो अपनी माँ के लिए लड़ रही थी।

ऊपर डाल पर बैठी छोरी के दिमाक ही काम ना कर रहा है। आख़िर उसने ऐसा पहले कभी देखा ना था।
ओर अभी हुई एंट्री पर उसकी क्या प्रति किर्या होगी वो देखना होगा। साला सोतन कोई बर्दास्त नही करता है।

आपकी लेखनी ने जादू बिखेर रखा है। कब क्या होगा ये वही जबाब देगी।

कोई कितने घोड़े दौड़ा ले। हाथ कुछ ना लगेगा।

ऐसे ही अपडेट देते रहे।

उम्मीद है अब कोई लम्बा ब्रेक नही लगेगा। क्यो सब्र ना रहा इस अपडेट को पढ़कर जिज्ञासा अपने चरम पर आ चुकी है। किसी की क्या प्रति किर्या रहेगी। जंग का अंत क्या होगा। कौन किस पर भारी होगा। जावा लांग के मरने के बाद शक्ति किस के पास जाएगी। या कुछ अन्य घटित होगा। बहुत से सवाल जरूर है। जबाब आपकी लेखनी देगी।

बहुत ही ज़बरदस्त अपडेट werewolf भाई वाकई यह युद्ध बहुत ही रोमांचक है वीर की energy अगर उन जानवरों से बचने के लिए अगर दौड़ भाग में कम हुईं होती तो वीर कब का jaw long को ख़त्म कर चुका होता खैर ava की entry धमाकेदार रही अब देखना ये है कि क्या वीर अवा से अब भी वैसा ही बरताव करेगा

बाक़ी आपकी लेखनी की जितनी प्रशंसा की जाए कम है ।

Amazing
Brilliant writing
Outstanding writing

Bhai kya likha rongte khade ho gaye
Inte sare system holder ek sath or unki na jane kon kon se skills ab tho thoda bahut tantra mantra or atma ki bhi entry ho gayi hai story mein kaise or Kahan se kya kya soch lete ho aap yahan tho kiske paas kya hai sala ye bhi sahi se yaad nhi reh pa raha

1 confusion hai Mera ho sake tho dur kare ( dead silence) skill Jahan Tak mujhe yaad hai Garofano k paas thi kya Erica k paas bhi yeh skill hai ya phir dono k paas ?
Update bahut late aaya lekin itna bada or zabardast tha k logo k mu band ho gaye

Hope next update April k first week mein AA Jana chahiye ho sakta iss Jung ka ye last update ho

Holi ki bahut bahut shubhkamnaye

Next update do bhai jldi

Hmm thanks
itna kuch ho Raha hai story mein k sab kuch yaad rakhna mushkil hai

Matlab

Zabardast update

Lovely update bhai
Lekin next update jldi do

Bhai next update jldi dena.. Beech excitement me update end ho gya last wala

Gjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjb yaar kya hi update diya apne next update bhi jaldi do yaar main to new member hu muje to apki story bahut hi gjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjb lagi

I have a strong feeling that rensu gonna die in this arc

To shayad ab ladai apne antim charam per pohach chuki the magar yaha tak ka safar bada hi dardnak thaa
Apne maqsad ke hasil karne ke liye Jaw long ne apni aakhey bhi phor di aur shayad woh apne maqsad me kamyab bhi ho jaata agar veer apne jeevat vektitvey ko ujagar nahi karta. Aur yahi vektitvey usay 25 min Tak un sab badhao se takar lene me madad karta raha hai.
Edhar Erica ne bhi apne Jaan ko jhokim me dal kar wah tak pohchay magar abhi tak uska koi involvement ya benifit nahi Mila aur wahi doosri aur veer ne jaw ke 2nd hamle uske hatiyaro ko almost khatam kia aur
Ladai ab physical strength per aa gayi jis me woh Puri tarah se kam thaa jaw long ke pahad Wale vaikti ke samne aur usne abhi tak koi bhi nuqsan nahi pohcha paya hai veer ke hamlo se per jab woh Puri tarah veer per qabu paa liya tabhi samne aa gayi AVA
Lekin woh yaha tak kaisay pohchi aur usko kaisay pata veer yaha hain. Aur kia woh itni taqat rakhti hai ki jaw long se takra sakey.

Kia hua Renshu ke sath. Kia ant hoga is mutbhed itni sarey sawalo ka jawab ke liye intezar rahega agli update and hopefully jald hi milega agla update bhi.
Magar sab se aeham baat ab aapki tabiyat kaisi hai bhai. Take care of your self and your family. Update waqai bohat lamba thaa. Ab intezar agli ka rahega.

Bahot jabardast update tha ekdamm khatarnaak wala maja aa gaya bhai. Next update ka intajaar rahegaa bhai

Same...!!
Aur shayad marne se pehle wo veer se promise le, ki veer uske jane ke baad uski beti ka khayal rakhega.
Aur phir shayad Veer aur Erica dono hi sath me Mumbai jaye.....and Bingo.... Ek New girl ka, welcome to the house ho jaye.......who knows??

Nice update

Apne kisi loved one ko? Arey Bhai ju samjhe nahi kya abhi tak? Chalo koi baat nahi. Next update me mein toh sab clear kar hi dunga.
Pa g achy Sy smjh gy thy

Cutie Ava bhi is Veer ke pyaar mein gir gayi Jaane kya hoga us bechaari ka ab...

Update 176
Bahot zabardast shaandar lajawab update bhai
Aakhir kaar Renshu apne samne system dhari khade ladke ko harane m kamyab ho gaya Baki dekhte h agle update m kia batata h woh apne baare m
Erica gayi veer ki madad kerne lekin waha scene dekh ker haath pair sab fool gaye bechari ke
Jaw Long ke paas Dunia Bhar ki skills thi aise card the ki janwaro ko apne bas kia huwa tha lekin Pari sabka pata laga ker veer ki jaan bacha li nahi tow
Zabardast fight huwi veer or jaw long ki jsme jaw long hi bhaara raha lekin last AVA ne bacha lia
Lekin AVA waha kaise pohchi
Or sabse badi Jo veer Kahi thi (apne loved one ko Bachao) tow AVA ne loved one ko bacha lia
Baherhal ab dekhte yeh Jaw Long ki Kahani khatam ho gayi ya bahi bhi kuch Baki h
Bahot zabardast shaandar lajawab update

Top class update bhai

Sad ending ka apna hi maja hota hai bhai. Jab readers ko dukh ho, dard ho, writer ko gali dene ka man kare, request kare ki ending badal ho aur writer dam marte hue sab enjoy kare.

On the other hand mujhe lagta hai es story me abhi tak jo hua vo happy happy hua hai and from now onwards yaha readers ke dilo ke sath khilwad kiya jayega. I can see few betrayals as well as deaths in near future. (Just don’t turn sonia and arohi against veer and i am all good with the rest)

Yes yes lekin kya ava ne special skill khardi thi apni Maa ke liye? Lekin Jaha tak mujhe yaad hai usne woh points kisi aur skill ko upgrade karne mai use kiye tha but mere hisab se uss ke pass knowledge jarur hai ki asi skill ya phir card ho sakte hai jis se kisi ki jaan bachyi ja sakti hai baki toh werewolf bhai ke upar hai

Nice mast awesome update bro

BAHUT HI SHAANDAAR LAJAWAAB JABARDUST FANTASTIC MIND BLOWING EXCELLENT AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI

Lo Bhai Ava fir agai.. Itna der ldaai kra veer.. jaw long jab thoda thak gya toh agai credit lene ..crimson ke time bhi agai thi or skill le gai thi.. Ab bhi jaw Long ki skill le jayegi... Veer thoda or lad Leta toh Sari skill veer ko hi milta.. Kahaani me ek hi chiz 2baar.. Ye thoda ajeeb sa lgta hai.. Khairr apne ko Kya hai maza aye ya na aye pdho or niklo...

Bro next update kab tak aayega i am waiting

Still not showing

Update plz

Update

Awesome nf amazing

Update hamesha ki tarah lajawab tha ava wapas agayi wo bhi strong comeback

Werewolf Bhai aap ney bola tha update 177 Saturday or Sunday ko aayega
But still update nahi aaya
Kab Tak aiyega update 177

Rongte khade kar denewaala update tha Bhai . Ek taraf Renshu dhamaal macha raha hai toh is taraf hamara hero toh usse bhi Kahi guna badkar apni Jaan ki baazi lagaakar qyamat laane mein tula hua hai Jaw Long ke liye. Ava Ka entry 11th hour mein karwaakar aap ne toh hamlogon ke hosh hi uda diye Veer ke Saath Saath. Hum toh yeh hi umeed & dua Kar rahe the ki Erica kuch Tarah Veer ki sahayata Karne mein safal ho Sakegi kintu Ava ki sudden aur surprise entry ne is aasha pe paani fer Diya aur Jaw Long ke liye bhi ghaatak attack honewaala hai Veer ki or se, bahut khoobi se Aapne toh takhta hi palat Diya, dear bro . What a superb masterstroke indeed . Kitne bhi taareef Karen is update KO, Woh Kam hi padenge Aapke writing skills ke aage! Dekhte hain kaise Renshu us naye ladke se information ugalwaatha hai aur Law Jong Ka anth kaise aur kiske haathon hotha hai, aanewaale aapke dhamekedaar updates dwaara, dear bro

Gorofano ke yaar kaha cards dikhaye hai bas itna dikhaya hai ki uski aakhen green rang ki hoti hai nato aapne image show ki nahi koi discription Diya and same chiz Ava ke sath bhi ki hai now dobut aapne vinonas mark ki image Dali but discription Diya buddy


Buddy jawlong ki image or status dekhna hai Hume or Ava ke bhi or garobfano ke bhi baki card to chalo aapne dhyan main rakkha hai to chalo accha Kiya aapne buddy thank you bhai

Kitne Tarah ke cards aur skills, is mine ke Jung mein istemaal kiye jaa rahe Hain, badi hairaani ki baat hai. Veer ne Sahi hi Kaha tha jab system holders aapas mein bidthe Hain toh udhar ghor kohram hi Mach jaata hai - no quarters given nor taken - no holds barred - everything is fair & just in battle for justice - in the end only truth and justice prevails. Alas, the cost it extracts is beyond anyone's imagination & expectations. Someone has to pay the price for maintaining the status quo in this world/society - a superb social message too from you, dear bro, through this masterpiece of a story . Kudos to you

Fantastic

Bhai ab to new update dedo aur sare confusion clear kar do ab wait nahi hota order renshu ki ladki jo veer ki madat aur bachane aayi thi Bo kaha dubak kar bathi hai

Wonderful update Bhai

awesome bhai

Warewolf bhai any update about the next update ?

AS ALWAYS A GREAT UPDATE BROTHER....
Bhut lamba intezar krna pda iss update ke liye prr aise update ke liye ye itntezar bhi worth it tha...
An update full of action

First of all sorry bro itne late review ke liye...Exams me busy chal rha tha
Iss update me 2 main fight scene dekhne ko mile aur dono hi jabardast the...Hrr scene ko perfectly likha gya hai aur likhne ka tarika to harmesa se hi one of the biggest positive point rhi hai aapki story me

Renshu aur New system holder ke fight scene me bhi bhut kuch dekhne ko mila....In dono ke fight dekh kr aisa lga jaise New ne bhut kuch pre planned kr rakha tha renshu ko fasane ke liye...Bhut sare jagaho pr usse bhut tough competition diya Renshu ko....Renshu ka apne aap ko guuse me bhi calm rakhna bhut help kiya iss New ko harane me...Ab ye jo bhi hai iska raaz sayad agle update me khul jaye kyuki dekhne me to yhi lg rha hai ki sayad Renshu ne uspe kabu pa liya hai ya fir kya pta picture abhi baki ho....

Erica ne bhi aakhir Veer ko khoj hi liya....Jaisa ki sbne kha tha ye war Erica ko bhut change krne wala hai...Aaj use system aur skills ki dark side ke bare me pta chala jo definitely uske thought process ko effect krega ki chize jitni dikhti hai utni simple nhi hoti....Erica ki system Genie bhi kafi shi lgi mujhe. Uska involvement kafi jyada tha jaise samay samay pr usse badhiya suggestion dena , panic ke time usse calm krna ya fir apne aap mandatory action perform krna for the betterment of Erica...Simple words me mujhe Genie ki personality bhut had tk France ke Pari se similar lgi...Ab ise coincidence khe ya koi hint Pari bhi france me lvl. 8 pr thi aur Genie bhi abhi lvl. 8 ki hai....

Jab se ye war chalu hua hai system lovers ki to chandi hi ho gyi hai...Mtlb itne sare system owner ke full stats , darzano new skills aur cards ki information mtlb kya kuch nhi dekhne ko mila pichle 2 updates me aur ummed hai abhi aage bhi bhut kuch baki hai kyuki aapne kha tha ki fight 4 updates tk jaiegi...Waise mujhe lgta hai ki inti detailing se itni sare skills aur cards ke bare me sochna aur likhna one of the most toughest job hota hoga...Aur itni tough job ko inti khubsuruti se krne ke liye dil se respect....Khaskar ki iss update me bhut new skill aur card dekhne ko mile
Jha Veer ke pas ek bhi legendary skill nhi hai whi Jaw Long ke pas 2-2 hai yani ki uska level bhi veer se aage hi hona cahiye...Agar Jaw Long Veer ke hatho marta hai to veer ko bhu faida hone wale hai Jaw Long se
Jaw Long ki Aura Vision skill mujhe kafi interesting lgi....iske apne positive aur negative impact hai...negative ye ki normal life me aap Non-living ko nhi dekh paoge to whi positive ye ki ye skill fight ke time kafi madad kregi kyuki different aura ke different colours ke chalte ab koi aapse chup nhi paiega....Jaw Long jaise aadmi ke liye ye best skill hai kyuki usko to normal life jeena nhi hai
Aur probability manipulation , ab iske bare me to kya hi khna...ye mera one of the fav card rha hai jbse ye aaya hai... iss fight ke duran bhi isne 3 bar Veer ki jan ko bacha liya hai (special thanks to Crimson)

Ek aur kafi interesting chiz notice hui ki Jaw Long iss fight ko leke kafi jyada serious hai....Mtlb serious to Renshu bhi hai pr wo bat chit se bhi mamla suljhane ko ready hai pr Jaw Long....Wo to aise sacrifices kr rha hai jaise ye uske jindgi ki aakhri fight ho aur usse jitna hi jitna hai ise at any cost....I mean usne apne dono eyes sacrifice kr diye aur sayad apne tribe ke kuch aadmi ka bhi balidan diya for fresh human blood

Ab Pari ke bare me to kya hi bolu....Personality cahe pari ki koi bhi ho kam aksar pariyo wala hi kiya krti hai....Kya accurate information nikal ke di hai sb correct , aur ye sb to tb jb wo uski bat nhi man rha hai...Ek bar ko agar Mommy bol de tb to khud bahar aakar sbko pel de....Ab dekhte hai last me kaun jit ta hai Veer ya Sugar Mommy Pari

Aur as always update ka end bina kisi dhamake ke to hota nhi hai...Pr aaj ke update me to sidhe bomb ko wapas lete aaye : ....Mtlb yha pr Ava ko kisi ne bilkul bhi expect nhi kiya hoga...Kya entry mari Ava ne...Wo aayi , jaw long ko peli , veer ko indirectly apna pyar btaya aur fir jaw long ko pelne aage badh gyi...idhar se Erica bhi aage badh chuki aur Ava bhi , yani agle update me hme jaw long 2 beauties se bhidte dikhega??....Yani ab Jaw Long V/S 3 System owner dekhne ko milne wala hai...Sunne me bhale aasan lge pr I am sure ki abhi fight me bhut kuch hone wala hai...Afterall its Werewolf story , to chize itni simple kaise ho skti hai

Ab ek guess hai Ava se related jo mai kr pa rha hu...Shi ya galat ye to nhi pta pr mujhe lgta hai Ava aur Gorofano ek dusre ko jante hai aur Ava Veer ki information Gorofano ke through hi leti hogi....Yad hai Gorofano aksar Veer ke sath conversation ke bich kuch kuch kha krti thi like 'She was right about you' krke....to yha pr wo jis She ki bat krti thi wo sayad Ava hi ho....ab kitna shi hu mai ye to agle update me hi pta lgegi

Thanks again bhai story ke sbse lmbe update ke liye

KEEP WRITING
WAITING FOR NEXT

Next update kab?

Good one . Once you give an update the next is when comes in my mind. Such a skillful writing. You keep things simple and always on to the roots. Thank you waiting for your next extravaganza.

Update plzz

Waiting for next one

Ding take your time werewolf bhai waiting for your special update keep posting

Congratulations on 3800 pages

Congratulations on 3800

Congratulations on 3800 pages

Pa g next update kb tk aye ga

भाया हम साथ साथ है।

आप जॉब + फैमेली+ खुद की लाइफ

ओर फिर अपडेट दे दो

Congratulations on 3800 pages
Bhai next dhamaka kb kr rahy hoo shidat say intizar hye

Congratulations

Werewolf bhai next update kab tak aayega?

Awesome update

Update plzz

That was mind blowing update Bhai abhi Tak Aisa kuch kabhi pda hi ni tha itne twist aur turns specially that fight just wow didn't have words to explain brother kis level ka update tha bhai super se bhi upar update brother to gud luvd it Jo veer aur jaw long ki fight thi specially luvd each and every details u mention eagerly waiting for your next update brother pls do cont asap take care

For completed 3800 pages on your story thread......

for 3800

for 3800

भाया

कश्मकश कब दूर होगी

बेचैनी भी है।

Nice bro its fantastic pr veer ki halat zyada ni patli kr di usy come back krwao isi fight mai that would be good. Magar kahani apki hy so continue. loving it

Vahi to main bolu, bhai publicity stunt hai , vaise main comments delete ke sakht khilaf hota hu , lekin aisi comments ka intention saaf najar aa raha hai.Un comments me mujhe ek bhi neat criticism nahi dikha . Jyada se jyada bass gumrah karne ke liye hai naye readers ko .

Bhai jitne tumari story pe views nhi he us se ziyada to wolf bhai ki story pe comments hain aur wolf bhai ki story subse achi he

Werewolf bhai ek kaam karo, Mere dil kaleja phephda sab le jaao mtlb kyaa khe, Bhala Aisa julm kon krta h.. Aap pe murder ka case krne chla mai mtlb Bhai itne saare readers ke dimaag ko mar Diya aapne haha .. SHABD NAHI HAI UPDATES KI TAREEF KE LIYE... KOI MAARG DIKHAAIYE WEREWOLF PRABHU...

Wa

Werewolf Bhai gajab kar Diya re Baba......
Ye kya hi likh dala mind blank kar kar diya hai, Kasam se Bhai iss update ko char bar pad chuka hu lekin abhi bhi lagta hai ki kuchh missing hai.
I don't know ki aap kya kar rahe ho kis tarah time nikal kar likh rahe ho but still aap yahan ho yahi bahut hai hum sab ke liye Bhai isko complete karna chahe toh saal ek hi update Dena lekin complete karna.

Aur Haan yahan par kya Naya drama chalu kar Rakha hai HAD naam ke user Bhai HAd jab tumko kuchh aata nahin hai toh kyun apni naak ghused kar rahe ho, hoge tum koi teesmaarkhan writer ya whatever lekin yahan only werewolf Bhai ka jalwa Jo dekhne me halwa lekin agar gale me atak gaya toh niche pran nikal dega so dare with us, yahan par hum sab family hai toh please humari family me hum kisi bahar ke insaan ka interruption bardasht nahin karenge, isiliye dubara agar yahan aao toh apna attitude apne Ghar per rakh kar aana yahan par hum izzat Bahut karte hain lekin agar koi syana banta hai to uski beizzati bhi wholesale me karte hain.

So please aapse haath jodkar vinti hai ki stay away from our family.

Aur Haan wolf Bhai arc jaldi se pura karne ki koshish karo please humari aapse yahi aasha hai.

Thank you all of you my family
Please Everyone should show your support to the people of spring when they come here.

We all are informed to our family members that the demand for ban against the person named HAD should be registered in the report and sent to admin so that the ban can be done as soon as possible.

Waiting

wow bro what the fuck action packed update it is..
veer ki aur jaw long ki ladai was unbelievalbe
udhar renshu was also amzing in his place
or ye kya avaa is back but how kaise use pata chala ki veer china me hai
usse bhi badi baat ki usne veer ko jaw long se marte marte bachaya matlab she still love him
mast hai aage bahot kuch hone wala hai
keep going

Werewolf bhai update kab tak ayega
Bta do bhai
Kaha chhup ke baith gye bhai
Aap ladki hote to ek baar jarur. I love you meri raani to bol hi dalta
Update jald hi Dene ka bhai
Intezaar nahi hota
I am waiting

Ye yha kya nya chutiyapa chalu kiya gya hai do (ya ek hi) chutiyo dwara khaskar ye Dark RIder dwara
I mean criticism is not a bad thing...It definitely helps the writer in improving and correcting his mistakes....But the thing is that , koi logic bhi to ho usme....Ye padh ke to aisa lga jaise kisi ne sir pr bandook tan ke boli ho ki chal criticize kr ...Isliye bechare ne apne dimag se jabardasti kuch bhi points soch liya jo kabhi story me btaya hi nhi gya ya hua hi nhi aur usko leke sawal utha rha hai....mtlb hdd hai bhai

Iske review ke first part se hi pta chal gya ki ye waise readers me se hai jo ki story me story se jyada sex khojte hai....Iske hisab se abhi tk veer ko sbke sath sex kr lena cahiye tha tb ye story best lgti isko....Bhai mere aise stories bhari pdi hai forum pr...usko padho na , kyu kuch chuninda badhiya stories ko bhi waisa bnana cahte ho

Nidhi ka character jisse samaj aaye gya uske liye wo one of the best character rhegi story ki...Wo ek bhartiya sanskari nari ki reality ko show krta hai jo apne se jyada dusro ke bare me sochti hai....Kisne aur kb kha ki wo veer se pyar nhi krti....Kai jagah pr aise scene aaye hai jihne dekh kr hi pta chalta hai ki she too has feeling for veer...Par khi na khi wo khud iss bat ko nakar rhi hai samaj ke dar se ki samaj kya khega jb wo apne se chote apne hi student ke sath relationship me aa jaiegi....Wo drti hai ki khi uske iss kadam se uske baccho ko aage kisi ka tana na sunna pde....Aur isi sb karan se mujhe uska character reality ke bhut close lgta hai jo ki usko story ka one of the best character bnata hai (according to me)
Aur jha tk bat hai incest ki to logo ko samajhne ki jarurat hai ki reality kafi alag hai usse jaisa ki yha pr max stories me dikhai jati hai....Incest is not that common (not at least in India)...Jis pace se iss story me incest development ja rhi hai wo mere hisab se to best hai...Aur wolfi bhai ne bola hai ki sb samay se hoga , to bharosa rakhne ka na unpr

Ha ye mai manta hu agar aapka koi fav character story me bhut din ke liye na dikhe to wo thora kast dayak hota hai pr tumhe bhi to samajhna hoga ki inte sare character hai story me ab sbko aise hi kisi bhi time to nhi laya ja skta hai na...Thora patience to rakhna hoga na...Ab itna common sense to lgana pdega

He also wrote somewhere in his review that 'Your story is going to be a big disappointment for readers'...Mtlb sach me bhai??...Iss story ko readers ka jo pyar aur support mil rha hai uske bare me jante to ye bikul nhi khte lekin ye bhi hai ki agar nhi khte to itna attention kha se pate aur apna maksad kaise pura krte jise werewolf bhai ne turant hi decode kr liya

Ab uske aage to review me jo likha hai uske bare me kya hi bolu....Ye ek aise reader ke category se belong krte hai jinhe sbkuch clear likha hua cahiye story me nhi to apne se kuch bhi ulta sidha assume kr lena hai apna common sense bilkul nhi lgana...Oo sorry , common sense to hai hi nhi agar hota to aaj mujhe itna lamba likhna thori pdta
3-3 bar padh kr bhi agar ye hal to bhai meri bat mankar cauthi bar mt padhna kyuki tumhe tb bhi kuch palle nhi padne wala
Ha agar ye sb kewal attention pane ke liye kiya tha to It was really a great move...You won then

Ho skta hai tumhe lge ki mujhe itni kyu lg gyi story ko kuch bolne pe...To mere bhai story pr review bhale mai abhi nya nya likhna chalu kiya hu pr padh kafi phle se rha hu isliye ek connection sa bn gya hai iss story , werewolf bhai aur iske character se....criticism se kisi ko koi dikkat nhi pr aise illogical aur galat intension se review doge to sunoge hi

They both are same & its pretty evident by seeing typos.
This is biggest and the best story on this forum...of course it'll attract such attention seekers. This proves how great warewolf bhai's writing skills are. Just putting my views. Personally i'm a fan of your story...even better than a few novels i have read.
Keep writing warewolf bhai

Werewolf jis jagah khada hai
Wahan pahunchne mein abhi bahut samay lagega tumhein
Bewajah pange mat lo
Writer ho na apni writing se compete karo
Na ki kisi aur writer se pange lo
Aur werewolf kisi se darta nahi
Jab xf ke chaamiya writer's apni story mein 80 percent updates mein fambhog likhke views lete the
Utne update mein werewolf warmup karta hai
Apni story pe dhyan do
Wolfy ki story ke ek update pe 200 likes aate hain
Itne likes jab tumhare story ke ek update pe aajayein tab aake bolna ki story mein kya Kami hai kahan kahan sudhar ki jarurat hai...

Pa g gussy MN a k update hi tpka do

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werewolf bhai chodo na aise chutiyo ko ye to aate jate rahege inhe kya pta kuch bhi iska story ka intro padha sala samjh nhj aaya kon c bhasa mai likha hai tum apni story pe focus or thrill or maza lao baki in jaiso ko hum log dekh lenge

हे बन्धु, आप मेरे DARK केले का RIDE कीजिये...

तब तक इस कहानी को हम सब पढ लेते हैं ।​

उपर बाला आपकी गुद्दा द्वार मे तीर मारेगा मित्र .
डरो बे ....कुछ तो डरो​

अरे इन महाज्ञानियो को extra knowledge क्यों दे रहे हो भाई... इन्हे ज्ञान की ज़रूरत थोड़ी है...
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इन्हे तो बस मेरी लाँ.... खैर छोड़ो...
फिर सब मेरे लिखे शब्दों को एडिट करने को कहोगे...
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बाकी समझ तो गए होगे​

Waiting for update

Nice update

Ye story padhni chhodi hai par recent updates aaye hai ya nahi ye check karne ke liye iss thread par najar banaye rakhta hoon. Sabne ek kahawat to suni hi hogi "Ae lakdi kyun padi hai jhaad, aaja ghuss ja meri gaand me" Aur jo Dark Rider69 ne li hai wo lakdi nahi kateela baans hain jo door tak aur der tak andar iske har chhidra ko khol ke rakh dega. Tune tip taap ke hi sahi point wise apni vishtha nikaali hai to points wise hi jawab sunn.

1) System kya hai ye tere se jyada Werewolf Bhai ko pata hai. Story ke according unhe jaisa change sahi lagega wo karenge. Mujhe to kahi aisa nahi laga ki Pari unusual ho gayi ho. Jaise kisi software me development hote hain waisa ho raha hai isliye har level ke baad Pari ka style badal raha hai. Thoda gehraai se padh bhai. Upar upar se padhega to bhram bana rahega.



2) Honestly saying Nidhi ka character mujhe pasand nahi hai par reality me ek aam bhartiya mahila jo divorcee ho aur jiska ek baccha ho wo aisi hi hoti hai. Nidhi ne hamesha se ghar ki jimmedaari nibhaai hai. Wo koi bahot rich family se belong nahi karti isliye bichari job karke Rajat ko paise dena chahti thi. Jisne hamesha khud se jyada family ke baare me socha ho aur usko pati ke naam par shaitaan mil jaaye jo ek maa ko uske hi bete se alag karde to uss mahila ke mann ki kya sthiti hogi ye andaja lagana bhi asmabhav hai. Kaise wo Veer ko apna le???? Uske peeche uske maa papa hain, chhoti behan hain, bacche hain. Jitni simple sex stories me life lagti hai utni real me hoti to har koi hanste hanste hi duniya se jaata. Pyaar karti hai wo Veer se par abhi tak aisa koi trigger point nahi aaya hai jo Veer ke liye uske andar dabe hue pyaar ko bahar nikaal de. Main guraantee se keh raha hoon jis din Nidhi ne Veer ke saamne apna pyaar accept kar liya log Suman ko bhool jayenge.

3) Matlab females hain to sirf chudai ke liye??? Aabha Suman Sonali ke saath kya case hai agar tune sahi se padha hai to pata hoga. Baaki sabke saath itna time kaha mila hai Veer ko??? Mana aam bande se kayi guna accha hai to kya har ladki kapde utaar de uske saamne??? Fir to har update me sex chhapne waali aur iss story me koi antar nahi hua. Seedhi si baat hai jiska jitna interaction hoga usse utni closeness aayegi. "Pehli baar dekha tujhe love ho gaya, second time me sab ho gaya" Ye filmo me chalta hai. Iss kahani me ye funda to nahi hi chalega.



4) Ye point padhke to pakka yakeen ho gaya ki tune story ek baar bhi sahi se nahi padhi. Kaera ko Kiara likh raha hai, Siddharth Malhotra masal dalega tujhe uske maal par najar maarne ke evaj me....... Kaera me feelings aayi hai par abhi bhi wo kisi businesswoman ki tarah as an authority type hi soch rahi hai jaise usne Julia se kaha ki I want him( Veer) to claim me. Uski feelings ka mission tab clear hoga jab use dukh prem bichoh gussa nirasha mehsoos hona shuru ho jaayegaa aur kya mehsoos ho raha wo khud pehchaan sakegi.


5) Kisi situation ke hisaab se kab kya dikhana hai ye faisla writer pe hi chhod de. Jiski jaisi ability, kismat, uske paas waise cards. Ab isme kisi ke paas ye card kyun nahi hai, uske paas wo card kyun nahi hai sochega to tu apna adhaar card pan card bhool jayega.



6) Crimson waale updates ko ek baar phir se padh aur apne points ko bhi. Pata chal jaayega tune kya miss kiya hai. Aur Update 167 ke baad waale updates maine padhe nahi hai phir bhi daave ke saath keh sakta hoon ki mistake tujhse hui hai samajhne me. Naruto ka to tune naam bhi nahi suna hoga. Usme chakra ka use dikhaya gaya hai jo sharir me alag alag points par hote hain. Ho sakta hai isi ka use Jaolong ne kiya ho. Naye waale updates detail me padhne de phir teri ye vishtha bhi door kar doonga.



Aur ek baat tere comments aur likes ki sankhya se hi pata chal jaata hai ki ye bas ek ghatiya sa publicity stunt tha. Raat ke 12 baje apni neend kharab karke ye post likhne ka mera koi mann nahi tha par tere jaise chapadganju ko aaina dikhana jaruri tha.Werewolf Bhai maine soch liya tha ki abse aapki story par na hi comment karunga na hi new updates padhunga par koi aira gaira mere 2nd favourite writer ki story pe bematlab ke sawaal uthaaye aur main chup reh jaaun ye to hone se raha. Abhi to ye kateela baans aur door tak aur der tak tere har chhidra ko saaf karega. Just wait and read.

भाई जिस लोडु को system के बारे मे नही पता वो पैसा फूंक कर manga पढ ले अगर फिर भी दिमाग मे गोबर भरा हो तो Solo leveling anime देख ले, यहा क्यों रायता फैला रहे हो भाई। Werewolf लगा पङा है free मे एक बहतरीन story लिखने और हम तक पहुंचने तो भाई दिमाग chill कर और कहानी पढो। writer कि भी life है यार

So be cool and enjoy this marvelous story because my Ava has just came back after a long break.

Ding Ava ki entry jawlong kya chez hai dark mind renshu filhal upper hand hai Erica in coma best way of base for Trinity mind-blowing update keep posting take care of your health

Bahut hi jabardast update aur yeah kiya i thought ki gorfano hi aayegi veer ke madad ke liye magar yeah toh uski Ex-Gf Ava hi aage aagayi. Pichle update mein jahan fight jaw long aur veer ke bich 70-30 tha ab woh 55-45 tak aachuka magar joh bhi kaha jaaye bande ka battle prowess bahut badhiya hai jo apne aankh khone ke baad bhi veer se equal foot pe lad raha hai. Ab aage ka intezar hai.

Bhai,

plz give a mega update

Update na shi lakin masala mill gya idhar

Ding waiting for your super mega update bhai

1000word ka update har dusre din de dijiye to alag hi maza aata hai bhai

Ek baat samjh se bahar hai jab Eva ek system holder hai strong hai to fir apni maa ko kaise bacha nhi paai

Warewolf bhai super sunday bna do kal update dekar

April first week is going bro
Still waiting for another masterpiece

Bhai Aaj update de do to maza aa jaye

Bhai Aaj update de do to maza aa jaye

Bhai apki story fantastic hai update padhke maza aa jata hai ,,, bas ek request hai ki update thoda juldi Dene ka kosis kre plz vo kya hai na Mai silent reader but kabhi kabhi comment krke bta deta hu ki Mai bhi Zinda hu
Vaise ek bat samjh me nhi aai ki Eva ko kaise veer ki location ka pta chla kya vo track kar rhi thi veer ko ya uske pass koi Aisa card hai jisase use pta chla ki veer kab problem me hoga or vo aa gyi use bachane????

Bhai jab Ava ka last time zikr hua tha tab usne apne points death flag ko upgrade karne me laga diye the taaki use pata rahe ki veer kahan hai or Zinda hai ki nahi kyunki us time Ava ka death flag sirf 1 km ki range tak hi kaam karta tha

maan gaye anshul710 !

Job wali problem smjh skta hun bhai take care of yourself and take time brother no issues itna wait Kiya hai thoda or sahi

Nice behtarin mast update bro

Intejar rahega update ka bhai

Keep it bro we always stand with you

4 Days Me Puri Story Read Kari as per Now . Just an Incredible Story , Just Incredible . Abhi Tak Sirf 2 Stories Padhi aur Dono hi Shandaar . Now Heading Towards Your Aakhir Kyu !

Aaj update aa sakta hai kya ?

Aaham atrasmi mahodya

Waiting

Waiting

Ok

Waiting

Bhai please update dedo

Bro jitna jaldi ho saka update da do aor intajar nahi ho raha hai

Exactly

Update 177 has been posted guys.

 

[Werewolf]

Index has been updated.

 

[PS10]

MIND-BLOWING UPDATE!!!

Ab dekhte hain what Pari (THE WEAPON) has in store for us.

 

[Roy 07]

Fantastic mind-blowing

 

[spritemathews]

Jabardast aur Mazedar Update Diya Hai Please Keep It Up ️

 

[Ashuk2705]

Mega Update

Update - 177 ~ Berserk
[Note : Contains Gore related scenes.]​

Ab tak...

Magar, sirf itna hi nahi tha. Ava apni maa ko bachaane ke liye ye sab kari thi. Aur, isliye Island chorr kar jaane se pehle Veer ne ek vaakya aur kaha tha. Itni dheere ki sirf use hi sunaayi de sake. Lekin, Ava ne woh sunn liya tha.

Woh bol the-

'Go and protect your loved one now.'

Ab aage...

Pedo ki daalo ke upar Erica chhalang maarte hue aage badhti jaa rahi thi. Hawa se uske baal lehra rahe the aur bauhe bechaini ke maare kasi hui thi.

'Veer!!!'

Badi mushqil se usne apne darr ke upar qaabu paaya tha. Kahi na kahi mann hi mann woh khud ko dosh bhi de rahi thi ki woh yaha aayi toh Veer ko bachaane thi magar khud hi sakpaka ke baith gayi. Kya aise woh apne pita ko proof karne waali thi ki woh ab frontline missions ke liye taiyaar thi?

Dekha jaaye toh galti uski bhi nahi thi. Woh kabhi bhi aisi paristhiti me padi nahi thi aur na hi usne kabhi aise drishya apni aankhon ke saamne dekhe the. Jis wajah se woh hamesha cheezon ko halke me le liya karti thi. Bilkul waise hi jaise ek kue me baitha mendhak, upar kue ki golayi se dikh rahe aasmaan ko dekh ye samajhne lagta hai ki aasmaan bas itna hi hai. Magar, baad me kue se nikalne ke baad use pata chalta hai ki aasmaan asal me kitna vishal hai. Aaj Erica ko poorn roop se abhaas ho gaya tha ki asli darr kya hota hai, duniya me kitne khatarnak log hote hai, apno ko khone ka bhay kya hota hai aur ek jaan ki qeemat kya hoti hai.

'Hang in there.'

Bhaagte hue use kuch theek sa nahi lag raha tha. Jaise ye khamoshi use bechain kar rahi thi.

'Achanak se itni shaanti kyu chha gayi hai?'

[Something is off.]

Jaw Long ke Animal Kingdom card ka asar khatam hote hi saare janvar waha se afra tafri me dur bhaag chuke the. Toh wahi neeche chal rahi Veer aur Jaw Long ki ladayi bhi Veer ke ghayal hone ke chalte lagbhag samapt ho chuki thi. Yahi kaaran tha ki ab Erica ko koi bhi shor sunayi nahi de raha tha. Magar, jitni vatavaran me khamoshi fel rahi thi Erica ki bechaini utni hi badhti jaa rahi thi. Kahi ye kisi anhoni ke ghatit hone ka sanket toh nahi tha? Woh nahi jaanti thi. Woh toh bas itna jaanti thi ki Veer ko iss daldal se baahar nikaal ke use sahi salamat wapas leke jaana hai.

[Woh dono yaha nahi hai, Erica. Ab ya toh woh pul ke uss paar gaye hai ya fir neeche.]

Erica dusre pul tak pahuch chuki thi jaha se Veer neeche gira tha. Pul ke uss paar se toh use koi bhi dhwani sunayi nahi di. Ab yaha se talashi karne ke do raaste the.

'Kaha gaye honge woh? Aage dekhe Genie?'

[Mere khayal se aage badhne se pehle hume neeche dekh lena chahiye. Neeche bhi kaafi jagah hai. Jangal neeche bhi hai. Neher ke uss orr dekho Erica.]

'Par bhala neeche kyu jayega woh?'

[Kyu nahi jayega woh? Judging by how he was escaping from those animals... There's a high possibility he might have chosen that route. Zara socho. Itne saare janvaro se bachne ka sabse behtar vikalp kya ho sakta hai? Insaan kaha jayega? Seedhe raaste par jaha janvar lagatar uska peechha kare? Ya fir neher ka sahara lete hue dusre chhor par jaha janvar aa hi na paaye?]

'You have a point, Genie! Theek hai toh fir. Pehle neeche hi talashi lete hai.'

Nirnay lete hue Erica pul ke madhya aayi, neeche dekhi, aur bina jhijke iss baar paani me kood gayi.

*Splaaaashhhhh*

Chhapak ki awaaz ke saath girte hi woh tairte hue fauran chhor par aayi aur khud ko neher se nikaalte hue ek gehri saans chhori. Iss baar usne paani me koodne ke liye koi shikayat nahi ki. Woh jaise sthiti ki gambheerta ko ab samajh rahi thi. Woh sambhalte hue aage badhi. Dheere dheere woh jangal ki gehrayiyo me pravesh karne lagi. Daudate daudate hi use kuch derr baad zameen par dur kuch nazar aaya. Aur, jaise hi woh aakriti uski nazro me aur spasht hui uski aankhein darr ke maare fel gayi. Qadmo ki gati aur tez ho gayi.

'N-Noooo-!!!!'

Ghabrahat! Ek ajeeb si ghabrahat uske andar janm li. Seene me vichitr sa ek bharipann mehsoos hua aur geele badan pe raungte khade ho gaye. Dur zameen par Veer ka shareer khoon se lathpath bejaan sa pada hua tha. Erica ki toh jaisi saari umeedein hi toot gayi. Kya usne derr kar di? Kya woh sahi samay par nahi pahuch paayi? Tamaam sawaal uske mastishk aur dil dono par chot karne lage.

Woh tez raftar se Veer ke nazdeek aayi aur ghisatate hue khud ko roki. Jhukte hi usne Veer ke sarr ke peeche ek haath le jaate hue uske sarr ko badi hi savdhani se uthaya aur apne kaan ko neeche uske seene par le jaate hue lagaya. Aur-

*Ba-dump*

*Ba-dump*

Agle hi shan uski aankhon me aansu apne aap panap aaye. Dil dhadak raha tha..! Usne kabhi nahi socha tha ki kabhi kisi ki dhadkan sunn ke use itna sukoon milega, itni khushi milegi, itni raahat milegi. Ek dil ki dhadkan ka mol jaise aaj use pata chal gaya tha.

Kabhi usne nahi socha tha ki Veer jaise ladke ke liye woh aisa kuch mehsoos karegi. Pehle din se hi Veer aur uska rishta koi khaas nahi tha. Magar, iss waqt Veer ke dhadakte dil ki awaaz sunn jo woh mehsoos kar rahi thi, unhe shabdo me bayaa kar paana uske liye behad mushqil tha.

'Thank God-!! Thank God!!! You idiot!!! *sniff* You are alive.'

[Ek minute!! Agar, Veer yaha hai. Toh, Jaw Long kaha hai?]

Genie ke prashn karte hi Erica ko jaise dhyaan aaya. Khatra woh janvar nahi the. Asli khatra toh Jaw Long tha. Uske baare me sochte hi uski aankhein satarkta ke chalte fel gayi.

Woh idhar udhar apni gardan ghumate hue chaaro orr dekhi. Magar, Jaw Long kahi bhi use dikhayi nahi diya. Woh toh aise gayab tha jaise cheel ke ghosle me maans.

Aur, tabhi-

*Booooooooommmmmm*

Dur use kuch shor sunayi diya. Aisa lag raha tha maano do log aapas me lad rahe the.

'What? What's happening?'

Uske sawal ka jawab bhi use jaise agle hi pal mil gaya. Dur jangal ki gehrayiyo se nikalta hua Jaw Long bhayanak tez raftar me uski orr hi aa raha tha. Ek shan pehle uski koi upasthiti nahi thi aur agle hi shan woh khud uski orr pagal saand ki tarah dauda chala aa raha tha.

'Huh!?'

Jab Erica ne danav jaise Jaw Long ko apni orr aata dekha toh maano uski haalat hi patli ho gayi. Jaise jaise woh nazdeek aa raha tha uski aakriti badhti jaa rahi thi. Asal me woh kitna vishal tha ye ab Erica ko samajh aa raha tha. Jaw Long ke haatho me uska wahi bada sa kulhada bhi tha. Ek baar hi uske chalane par Erica ke shareer ke do tukde ho sakte the.

Ye sochte hi woh bechari itna ghabra gayi ki usne neeche letey Veer ko apne seene se lagaya aur aankhein band kar apne haath khade kar diye. Agar, yahi unka ant tha... Toh wahi sahi.

Magar, iss se pehle ki Jaw Long unn tak pahuchta-

*Whooooooosshhhh*

Ek saaya unn dono ke beech aake khada ho gaya. Jab aakriti spasht hui toh pata chala ki ye Ava hi thi. Erica ne jab khamoshi ko mehsoos kar apni aankhein kholi toh apne saamne Ava ko khada dekh dang reh gayi.

Aur, uske hosh aur bhi zyada tab ude jab usne Ava ko check kar ye pata lagaya ki woh bhi ek system holder thi.

'Whattttt!!?? Wh-Who is she!?'

Ava agar chaahti toh camouflage activate kar woh fake status dikha sakti thi. Parantu, usne aisa na kiya. Veer ko dhoka dene ke baad se jaise use iss skill se nafrat si ho gayi thi.

Woh Jaw Long ke saamne nidarta se khadi hui thi. Usne apne kandhe ke upar se peeche halka sa mud Erica ko dekha jisne apne seene se Veer ko laga rakha tha. Uski nazre Erica ke seene aur Veer ke chehre par kuch zyada derr hi tiki rahi. Kuch shan baad woh boli.

Ava : Kuch samjhane ka time nahi hai. Uske wounds deep hai. Uska system andar hi andar bleeding ko rokne ki koshish kar raha hoga. Tab tak uski safety, mein tumhare haatho saunpti hu.

Erica itni zyada confused thi ki use kuch bhi samajh nahi aaya. Kaun thi ye ladki? Kar kya rahi thi ye yaha? Aur, Veer ko kaise jaanti thi?

Erica (frowns) : Who are you?

Ava : I'm... I'm someone who owes him a debt.

Erica (frowns) : Ye mere question ka answer nahi! Who exactly are you? Aur, mein tum par bharosa kyu karu?

Ava (smiles) : Kya waqai iss waqt tum ye sawal puch rahi ho? Saamne dekho apne. Agar, mein yaha se hatt gayi toh anjaam kya hoga?

Erica ne jaise hi Jaw Long ko dekha jo abhi tak satark hue unke saamne khada tha, uski bauhe ghabrahat ke chalte sikud gayi. Ava ki baat sahi thi. Agar, woh unke saamne se hati toh woh dono hi maare jaane waale the.

Ava : Shayad ab tumhe samajh aa gaya hoga ki tumhe mujhpe bharosa kyu karna chahiye. Right?

Erica : ...

Ava (exhales) : Take care of him! Use abhi move mat karna. Warna, blood flow hota rahega. Bleeding ruki nahi hai. Bas, uski hifazat karo. Bleeding ke rukte hi use yaha se leke nikal jaana.

Erica chup chaap sab kuch sunn rahi thi. Sawaal dher saare the uske mann me magar filhal unhe taal dena hi behtar tha. Kya iss ladki par bharosa kiya jaa sakta tha? Uske Dad bhi yaha nahi the. Ek decision hi unn dono ki life ya toh bacha sakta tha ya fir khatam kar sakta tha. Ek bahut badi zimmedari iss samay uske sarr thi.

Usne ek gehri saans lete hue fir apna nirnay liya. Haami bharte hue woh boli,

Erica (nods) : Theek hai! I'm trusting you.

Ava : Good! I will stall him until then. Yaad rakhna! Bleeding band hote hi tumhe use leke yaha se nikalna hai.

Erica : Hmm!

Aur, itna bol Ava wapas se apne saamne khade Jaw Long par focused ho gayi. Jaw Long jaan boojh ke hamla nahi kar raha tha.

Veer ke alawa uske saamne do do system holders maujood the. Zahir hai woh jaldbazi me koi galat qadam nahi uthana chahta tha. Aur, Ava ki woh zordar kick jo use padi thi. Uss se kahi na kahi use andaza lag gaya tha ki ye system holder ladki sirf kehne ki system holder nahi thi.

Woh kehte hai na, 'fook fook kar chalna hi samajhdari hoti hai.' Baad me dukhi hone se behtar tha ki abhi satark raha jaaye. Kisi tareeqe se woh Ava ko chakma deke yaha Veer aur Erica ko maarne ke liye aa toh gaya tha. Par, saamne khadi Ava ko dekh uske qadam sanshay me thame hue the.

Aur, Ava ne bhi jaise uske sanshay ka abhaas kar liya. Woh palak jhapakte apni jagah se gayab hui aur Jaw Long ki taraf lapki. Uske haath me ek katana talwar uski sheath se bahar nikli aur seedhe Jaw Long ke gale ki orr badhi.

Kuch bura abhaas hote hi Jaw Long ki aankhein sankat ke chalte chaudi ho gayi. Bhay ke maare woh peeche hua aur isi prakar Ava Jaw Long ko Veer aur Erica se dur karne me safal ho gayi.

Toh wahi idhar Erica Ava aur Jaw Long ko bhidte dekh ek alag anubhav le rahi thi. Usne apna dhyaan Veer par jaise hi punah daala toh veh ghabra uthi.

'My god...!'

Veer ke zakhm gehre the. Erica ne apne jeevan kaal me kayi maut apni aankhon ke saamne dekhi thi. Par, kabhi bhi kisi system holder ko iss tarah ghayal nahi dekha tha.

Ek system holder ka iss tarah zakhmi hona kis baat ka saboot tha? Iss se ye pata chalta tha ki Jaw Long unke liye kitna bada khatra tha. Agar, Veer unki madad na kar ke Jaw Long ko yaha baandh ke na rakhta toh kya hota? Woh sochna bhi nahi chahti thi.

[He's badly injured.]

'Uss ladki ne kaha ki Veer ka system use heal kar raha hoga andar hi andar.'

[So, he does have a healing skill huh?]

'Pata nahi! Card bhi ho sakta hai. Lekin, ye ghaav...! Kitna dard saha hoga Veer ne Genie?'

Erica Ava ke chehre ko poori tarah se nahi dekh paayi thi. Ava uss se baat karte samay bas halka sa hi mudi thi, jis kaaran vash use Ava ki soorat poori tarah se spasht dikhayi na padi. Parantu, woh Ava ke baare me kaafi kuch jaanti thi.

Woh jaanti thi ki Ava ek system holder thi. Veer ko Crimson se bachane ke baad Renshu ne use kaafi kuch bataya tha. Use ab bhi apne pita ke saath kiya gaya woh sanvaad yaad tha.

'Woh celebrity Natalia Martin bhi ek system holder hai, Erica!'

'Really?'

'Hmm! Aur, uss ladke ki maut ka ek kaaran bhi bann sakti thi. Agar, mein sahi samay par waha na pahuchta toh-'

'Hmph! Aap jab se waha se aaye ho uss ladke ke baare me hi baat kare jaa rahe ho. Akhir kaun hai woh?'

'Haha! Jo bhi hai bahut hi kaabil naujavan hai. Aur, rahi baat ki kaun hai woh? Jald hi tumhe pata lag jayega. Mera ek favour hai uspe ab. Jise chukaane wo zaroor yaha aayega. Tab, tum khud apni aankhon se dekh lena.'

'Hmph! I don't care! Balki, aap celebrity Natalia ke baare me mujhe kuch bataiye.'

'Uske baare me mein zyada nahi jaanta aur na hi uss se mila hu. Lekin, itna zaroor pata hai mujhe ki uss ladke ko shadyantra me phasane waali woh bhi ek thi. Maine itna anuman laga liya tha.'

'Woh kaise?'

'Ladka jab samundar me doob raha tha tab maine use waha se bachaya tha. Uss dauran, woh Natalia Martin helicopter me upar baithi neeche nazre gadayi sab kuch dekh rahi thi.'

'Ohhh-!?'

'Lloyd ne mujhe bata diya tha ki wo bhi ek system holder thi. Mujhe poore shadyantra ke baare me jankari to nahi hai. Lekin, kaafi kuch anumaan mein laga sakta hu.'

'I see!'

'Uske paas camouflage kar ke ek skill hai.'

'Camouflage?'

'Hmm! Uski madad se wo nakli status laga ke ghum rahi thi.'

'Iska matlab-!'

'Haan! Usi ke chakkar me shayad wo naujavan ek khatarnak shadyantra ka shikar ho gaya. Kherr, woh zinda hai abhi yahi acchi baat hai. Shayad, tab uss Natalia ne Camouflage ko band kar rakha tha. Tabhi, Lloyd use check kar paaya tha. Aur, asliyat ka pata laga paaya tha.'

'Hmm! Lekin, aapko kaise pata chala Dad ki Natalia ke paas Camouflage skill hai?'

'Kyuki jab maine use check kiya tha tab uska status mujhe dikhayi de raha tha. Woh nakli tha. Lloyd ne sahi pehchan baad me ki thi.'

'Ahh!'

'Erica!!!'

'Huh!?'

'Agar, kabhi tumhara saamna iss Natalia Martin se ho. Toh uss par bharosa mat karna. Celebrity hone ka matlab ye nahi ki kisi ka dil saaf ho.'

'Jii dad. Mein aapki baat ka dhyaan rakhungi.'

Ye baatein use acchi tarah se yaad thi. Magar, uska dhyaan to abhi uski jaangh par sarr rakha yeh naujavan kheenche hue tha.

Genie chup chaap Erica ke emotions ko padh rahi thi. Kaise Erica ke kaanpte hue haath Veer ke zakhmo par haule se fir rahe the. Jaise wo ghaav dekh ke hi unhe mehsoos kar paa rahi thi ki kitna dard hua hoga Veer ko jab ye chotein uske shareer par aayi hongi. Uski sarsari nigaahein Veer ke uttam kataav waale badan par bhi fir rahi thi.

[Tum uski dressing kyu nahi kar deti? Hamare paas rakhi hui hai na?]

'Arrey haan! M-Mujhe to dhyaan hi na raha.'

Usne apni jebo me se dressing ke liye kuch first aid ki pattiyaan nikaali aur Veer ke ghaavo ko saaf kar unn par savdhani se baandhne lagi. Bhale hi inse zyada madad nahi milne wali thi par ghaavo ko khula chorrne se toh ye behtar hi tha.

Dressing baandhte baandhte Erica ki nazre baar baar Veer ke chehre par phir rahi thi.

'G-Genie-! I... I was just thinking... Veer ki kya favorability hai mere liye?'

Sawaal sunte hi mann hi mann jaise Genie muskurayi. Woh jaise bhaanp gayi ki ye sab kis orr jaa raha tha.

[Sach me jaanana hai tumhe?]

'N-Nahi aisi koi khaas wajah nahi hai. M-Mein toh bas yuhi- curious thi...! Isliye- socha ki-'

Apne baalo ki latt ko ungli se ghumate hue woh khusur-pusur karte hue boli.

[Uski favorability tumhare liye 90 hai.]

Ank sunte hi Erica ki jaise aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi.

'Wh-What-!???'

Use pata tha ki 70-80 ke upar favorability ka hona kya darshata tha.

Pyaar!!!

Samajh aate hi uske gaal laal tamatar ki tarah laal hote chale gaye. Par, agle hi shan, maano jaise Genie ne uske sarr par thande paani se bhari balti udel di.

[Hahaha! Just kidding. Asli favorability 22 hai.]

'Y-You-!!! Genieeeeee!!!!'

Woh mann hi mann Genie par barsi. Toh wahi Genie uska reaction dekh aur zyada thahaake lagaane par majboor ho gayi. Genie jaan boojh ke mahaul ko halka karne ki koshish kar rahi thi. Aur, usme woh poori tarah se qamyab thi. Erica ka aisi sthiti me calm hona behad aavashyak tha.

'Ahinda se aisa tumne kabhi kiya na, toh mein tumhe sleep mode me daal dungi.'

[What?? H-Hey! Wait a minute! It was just a joke. Okay? Aur, maine ab bata to di asli favorability. It's 22. Twenty two. Jise dusri bhaasha me-]

'Haan pata hai!! Sunn liya maine. Sunn liya. I-It's not even a good number. Why are you yelling so much??? Enough! Sunn liya maine. 22 hai. I know! Hmph!'

[What? Kya tum chaah rahi thi aur zyada ho?]

'Wh-Who cares? *blushes* Ahem! Anyways! Mera ek sawal hai. System jab ek dusre ko check nahi kar sakta toh ek dusre ki favorability kaise bata deta hai?'

[Hmm! A very good question.]

'Please, ab baatein mat ghumaana.'

[Nahi nahi! I will tell you. Look! Hum sabhi system ek dusre ke prati satark rehte hai. Koi bhi system ye nahi chaahta ki agla system unke stats dekh paaye. We are afraid of each other.]

'Afraid?'

[Hmm! System apne stats ko hide kar sakta hai. Isliye, check karne par hume kuch bhi info haath nahi lagti. Ek prakar se ye hamara defensive mechanism hai. Par, Erica...! Emotions chhipaye nahi jaa sakte.]

'Ah!'

[Bhale hi stats hide kar diye gaye ho par feelings ko hide nahi kiya jaa sakta. Agla system holder tumhare liye kya bhaav rakh raha hai woh asaani se dikh jaata hai. Jaw Long ko dekhte hi uski ill intent humne mehsoos kar li. Zahir hai favorability minus me hai uski.]

'Right!'

[Wahi Veer ki 22 hai. Tumhare Dad ki tumhare prati 90 hai. Of course, it's all fatherly love.]

'Dad to meri chinta hi nahi chorrte. Mein badi ho gayi hu ab. *sighs* Toh aise work karta hai ye. Samajh gayi. Thanks Genie! Ohh! Look, woh ab saansein behtar dhang se le raha hai.'

[Uske system ne blood flow ko control me rakha hai. I think wo neend me hai.]

'Use araam ki sakht zaroorat hai. So, just-'

Iske pehle ki wo apni baat poori keh paati Jaw Long ki tezz dahaad ne uska dhyaan kheencha.

"Shebaaaaaaaaa-!!!!!"

*Keeeeeeaaaaaarrrrr*

Aur, beshaq...! Wahi baaj hawa me apne parr felaaye uske ek bulaave par haazir ho gaya. Sheba udta hua seedhe Erica ki orr aaya.

'Ahhh!'

[Careful!!]

Par, iss baar Erica ghabra ke dur nahi bhaagi. Usne apni peeth par peeche khusi hui kisi cheez ko baahar nikaala. Aur-

'This time...! I won't run!!'

*Fwoosh*

Seedha uss baaj ki orr usne wo fek diya. Wo cheez hawa me sansanati hui gol gol ghoom ke udte Sheba ko giraane ke liye aayi.

Sheba tezz raftaar se apni orr aa rahi cheez ko dekh baukhlate hue hawayi marg se hatt gaya. Aur, woh cheez jo hawa me feki gayi thi woh wapas se ek golaayi ka raasta apnaate-

*Thuck*

Erica ke haatho me aa thami.

Ek boomerang!!! Magar, koi sadharan boomerang nahi. Uske ird gird metal ke kuch nukeele tukde lage hue the. Kisi prakaar ki dhaar-daar blades. Jo nishchit roop se kisi ko ghayal karne ke liye hi lagayi gayi thi.

Metal bhi koi aisa wesa nahi. Ye tha titanium. Sabse halka aur mazboot metal. Aur, iss anokhe boomerang ki rachayita koi aur nahi ~ Swayam Erica thi.

Uska ek maatra card ~ Metallurgy!!!




Ek aisa card jo use saara gyaan, saari kshamtaye aur saara kaushal pradaan karta tha metals se hathyar banaane ke liye. Usne Garofano ke liye bhi kuch needles bana ke use di thi.

Erica ki aankhon me iss baar tej tha. Aur, uske mann me tabhi-

*Ding*

[Mission : Safeguard Veer until he recovers.
Rewards : Skill ~ Basic Seer Vision.
Mission failure penalty :
1) Loss of Order.
2) 10,000 points deduction.]

'Iss baar...! Mein peeche nahi hatne waali. Chaahe kuch bhi ho jaaye. Jab tak Veer recover nahi ho jaata! Mein yahi hu-!!!'

Aur, dur se use Sheba se ladta dekh, idhar Ava ke hontho par ek halki si muskan bikhar gayi.

***

Kintu, hua kya tha? Ava yaha kaise pahuchi? Woh itne din kaha thi? Veer yaha hai iss baare me use kaise pata chala? Aur, yaha aane ka uska maqsad kya tha?

Ye tamaam sawaal Veer ke mann me the behosh hone se pehle. Jinka uttar keval aur keval Ava hi apne muh se de sakti thi.

Kuch derr pehle...

Jab Veer eastside ki entrance se pravesh kar raha tha. Tab, woh nahi jaanta tha ki theek uske peeche Ava bhi use follow kar rahi thi.

[There he is, Miss! Thoda aur nazdeek jaa sakte hai hum. Itna peeche chalne ki zaroorat nahi.]

'Nahi Lily! Veer ke paas Beowulf hai. Senses badh jaate hai uske. Ho sakta hai usne activate kar ke rakha ho. Agar, mein iss se zyada nazdeek gayi toh wo meri presence ko mehsoos kar lega.'

[Ohh!]

Ava ne Veer ki aankhon me woh laal rang ki parat pehle bhi dekhi hui thi. Lily ne hi use khoj ke bataya tha ki Veer ke paas Beowulf card tha.

[Toh ab?]

'I will follow him from a distance.'

[Okay!]

'Lily...! What does he think of me now?'




[His favorability towards you is only 10.]

Ava ke chehre par ek muskan bikhar gayi. Magar, iss muskan me kahi na kahi nirasha bhi chhipi hui thi.

'10... is not a bad number.'

[My dear Miss! Is 10 really a good number?]

'Lily! Jo maine kiya tha...! Uske baad toh iss favorability ko minus me hona chahiye tha. *smiles* 10 is already a great number.'




[You've been smitten by him. *sighs* Kya hoga aage? I don't even know.]

'N-No-! That's not it! I-'

[Jhooth bolne ki zaroorat nahi hai. I can feel your emotions.]

Ava uske jawab me kuch na boli. Woh chupke chupke Veer ka peecha karti rahi. Veer jab uss blood trail ko laangh ke aage gaya toh Ava kuch shan wahi ruk gayi.

[Ye ek sensory type boundary ho sakti hai.]

'Andar jaane ke liye ise cross karna hi hoga.'

Aur, blood trail ko paar karte hue woh khud bhi Veer ki disha ki orr aage badh gayi.

Uske andar aate hi Jaw Long ko do vyaktiyo ke andar ghusne ke baare me pata lag chuka tha. Magar, Ava jaise pehle hi sab kuch plan kar ke chal rahi thi.

Seedhe taur par ladayi me na ghuste hue woh ped ki daali par baithe dur se sab kuch dekhti rahi.

'Yaha se mein uss par nazar rakh sakti hu. Jaise hi situation bigdegi, mein waha pahuch jaungi.'

Sirf Erica hi nahi thi, Veer ko unn janwaro se bhaagta dekh Ava ka badan bhi kaanp utha tha. Akele Veer ka waha ladna...! Woh kisi yoddha se kam nahi lag raha tha. Aur, uski woh nidarta se bhari chhavi Ava ke dil me aur nayi tarange utpann kar rahi thi.

Magar, akhir use Veer ke thikaane ka pata kaise laga? Yeh koi raaz nahi tha.

[Death Flag]

Wahi skill, jo Ava ne Veer par mark ki thi. Tab jab woh aur Suhana Las Vegas me uske concert me pehli baar daakhil hue the. Yeh wo skill thi jo ek vyakti ko mark kar ke rakhti thi. Ek seemit range tak uss vyakti ke zinda ya mrit hone ke baare me batati thi.

Tab se leke ab tak Veer par Death Flag ki woh marking bani hui thi. Kintu, Veer ke ruth ke jaane ke baad, Ava ne kuch kiya tha. Apne system ke saath. Uski system Lily ko bhi saari baatein yaad thi. Island par Veer jab use akela chorr ke chala gaya tha. Uss raat-

'Lily!'

[Yes?]

'Upgrade Death Flag's range!'

[What?]

'Suna nahi tumne? Maximize the range.'

[Jaanti ho na upgrade ke liye kitne points lagte hai? The first upgrade will take 5000 points. And, the second upgrade will take 10,000 points. Total 15,000 points.]

'Yes! Jaanti hu! Do it!'

[My dear Miss! Why are you so determined? Kis liye itne points ikhatta kiye the? Ab jab hum itna close hai Maisie's cure ke liye, you want to waste them on Death Flag's upgradation?]

'Lily!!!'

[Fine then!]

*Ding*

[Death Flag's range has been maxed out.]

'Good!'

Yahi woh pal tha jab Ava ki skill Death Flag ki range maximum ho chuki thi. Na sirf ab woh jeevit ya mrit ke baare me bataane me saksham thi balki, insaan ki ab location bhi woh saaf saaf dekh sakti thi. Veer duniya ke kisi bhi kone me hi kyu na rahe, agar Death Flag uss par marked thi toh Ava uski location ko asaani se dekh sakti thi.

Woh uss tak jab chaahe tab pahuch sakti thi. Aur, isi tarah woh yaha Veer ko dhundh paayi.

Veer ka achanak Mumbai chorr yaha China aana. Woh jaan chuki thi ki kuch gadbad thi. Yahi kaaran tha jo woh khud yaha chali aayi. Aur, uska sanshay ekdum sahi tha.

Aaj woh yaha na hoti toh Veer bahut bade jokhim me pad jaata. Kam se kam ab woh uske liye kuch samay nikaal sakti thi. Aur, yahi uska prayshchit tha. Bhale hi... Uski jaan hi kyu na chali jaaye.

[I just don't understand. Why are you so focused on him? Kya waqai aapko uss se-!?]

'He...! He gave me happiness, Lily. Jab mein use trap me fasaane ke liye uske khilaf chaale chal rahi thi. Tab woh meri khushiyo ka dhyaan rakhte hue mujhe protect kar raha tha. Can you imagine it?'




[...]

'Maine kabhi nahi socha tha unn moments ko mein firse enjoy kar paungi. Meri asli khushiyaan Mumbai me hi thi Lily. Jab mein chhoti thi. Mera bachpan...! Kaera aur Sonia ko chorr ke aane ke baad woh saari khushiyaan jaa chuki thi.'

[...]

'Veer ka saath jaise mujhe unhi lamho me le gaya. Par, kya kiya maine uske saath? I don't deserve his friendship. I don't deserve to be around him.'




Ho na ho, Veer hi woh kaaran tha jiski wajah se aaj Ava jeevit thi. Warna, France ki unn vardato ke baad usne-

[W-Wait!!! What are you doing?]

Uska uss pahaad ki choti par khade hona. Aur, neeche khaayi ki orr dekhna.

[D-Dear! Stop it! What the hell are you doing? H-Hey don't scare me! Please!]

'There's nothing left now! I must go as well! Lily...!'

[W-Wait!! N-Noooooo!]

Woh khud khushi karne jaa rahi thi. Aur usne apna perr aage badha bhi diya tha.

[Noooooooooooooo!!!!!]

Par, usi waqt Veer ke akhiri shabd uske mastishk me punah goonj gaye.

'Go and protect your loved one now.'

Aur, usne apne santulan ko girne se bacha liya.

[You idiot!!! You scared the shit outta me. Ye... Ye kya kar rahi thi dear? Whyyy?]

'I'm sorry-!!! *sniff* I'm sorry, Lily. I'm so sorry!!! Maine tumhare baare me zara bhi nahi socha. N-No-!! I didn't even think of him either-!!'

[Huh!?]

'Usi ne kaha tha na!? Th-Then I must protect him!'

[Y-You-!!!?]

*Clang* *Clang*

Ateet se baahar aate hue Ava ki aankhein saamne Jaw Long ke harr move ko padhne me vyast thi.

Woh prahar karti jaa rahi thi magar Jaw Long peeche fall back karte hue khud ko bacha le raha tha.

Jaw Long uss se direct fight nahi le raha tha. Pata nahi kyu, par woh Ava ke hathyar katana se kaafi bhaybheet sa nazar aa raha tha.

Ava ne apni tactic turant hi badli aur apni jeb se usne handgun nikaal seedha dur khade Jaw Long ki upar taan di.

'Kisi wajah se woh mujhse directly nahi lad raha hai. Agar woh long ranged fight hi chaahta hai toh theek hai. He can have a kiss of my bullet.'




*Bang*

Jaise Jaw Long ne kuch bhaanp liya. Woh tezz raftar me daudta hua apni jagah se bhaagne laga. Aur, Ava ki bullets apne nishaane se choonk gayi.

'Shit!! Kaash mere paas perfect aim ki koi skill hoti.'

*Bang* *Bang* *Bang*

Bullets gun ki nozzle se nikalti jaa rahi thi, par harr baar Jaw Long apni speed ke chalte unse bachta jaa raha tha. Saari bullets ya toh hawa me ya fir pedo ke tane par lag unke parchhatte udhedte hue nikal gayi.

Ava ko bhi mission mila hua tha. Magar, uska mission Jaw Long se bhidant ka nahi tha. Uska mission tha~

[Mission : Stall the time.
Description : Don't let your loved one die.
Rewards : ??]

Koi bhi penalty nahi dikh rahi thi. Iska matlab... Penalty death thi. Aur, system ko kho dena.

'Veer se ladne ke baad lagta hai ye aadmi kaafi thak chuka hai. I might be able to take him down.'

[Filhal toh wo hamari saari bullets se bach raha hai. Hume use jald se jald ghayal karna hoga.]

'Toh ek baar me ek bullet enough nahi haan? Alright then!'

Agle hi shan usne apni jacket khol andar se ek aur handgun nikali. Aur, dono handgun Jaw Long ke bheje ki orr taan usne trigger daba diya.




*Bang* *Bang*

Do sansanati hui bullets guns se nikal Jaw Long ki chithde udaane ko aayi. Lekin, lagatar tez gati se bhaag raha Jaw Long unhe chakma dene me qamyab raha. Magar, khel yahi samapt nahi hua tha. Fire karte hi Ava ne unn dono guns ko upar hawa me ucchaal diya. Guns hawa me upar gol ghumti hui gayi aur tabhi-

Ava ne apni jacket punah khol aur do handguns usme se nikali. Unse fir se bhaag rahe Jaw Long ki taraf nishana lagaya. Aur, iss baar jaise Jaw Long ke chehre par dehshat saaf nazar aa gayi.

*Bang* *Bang*

Hawa ko cheerte hue woh bullets uske maans me dhassne ko aayi aur Jaw Long darr ke chalte ped ke peeche jaa dubka. Woh bullets ped ke tane ko ukhaadte hue usme jaa dhansi.

Idhar Ava ne haath me pakdi dono guns ko bhi turant hi hawa me uchaal diya. Jaise hi usne ye guns hawa me feki, pichhli do guns jo usne pehle se hi hawa me feki hui thi woh gravity ke chalte tezi se neeche aayi.

Unhe punah haath me thaam usne firse-

*Bang* *Bang*

Aur, wapas se unhe hawa me uchhal diya. Upar feki gayi baaki ki do guns fir neeche aayi aur iss baar unhe thaam-

*Bang* *Bang*

Woh do guns hawa me fekti, do se fire karti aur fir unhe hawa me fekti aur pichli do guns se fire karti. Ek baar me hi... Woh 4 handguns istemal kar rahi thi.

Aur, ye sab kuch itni tezi se ho raha tha ki aam insaan ko bas Ava ke haath ki dhundhli aakritiyaan hi nazar aati. Uske haath after images bana rahe the. Guns itni tezi se hawa me uchhal ke neeche gir rahi thi aur wapas se hawa me jaa rahi thi ki pata laga paana mushqil tha kaun si gun pehli waali thi aur kaun si dusri.

Usne itni bullets ped pe daag di ki ped ka tana hi toot ke bikhar gaya. Jaw Long kisi bheegi billi ki tarah ek ped se dusre ped ki aadh me khud ko chhipane par majboor ho gaya.

Ab tak close ranged fight me woh bada hi guroor dikha raha tha. Par, bandook ke saamne aate hi woh dubak ke chhupne par vivash ho gaya.

[Such skill of handling weapons. She's a skilled warrior.]

Yaha tak ki uska khud ka system bhi Ava ki weapon handling ki tareef karne me peeche na raha.

'Kai! Agar, aise hi chalta raha toh-'

Woh mann me kehte hue ek ped ki aadh lene bhaaga jab tabhi-

*Bang*

*Squelch*

"Urrrghhh!"

"Finally! I got him!"

Akhir kaar ek bullet ne apna kaam kar hi diya. Kandhe ke paas aake bullet maans ko cheerte hue andar ghusi. Aur, Jaw Long ki ek dabi dard bhari karah muh se nikal gayi.

'Agility badhani hogi, Kai!'

[Long! Tumhare paas sirf 3000 points hi baaki hai.]

Kehte hue usne uske mann me hi full status dikha diya.







'Jaanta hu! Lekin, Aura vision ko upgrade karne ke liye mere paas paryapt points nahi. Agility ki zyada zaroorat hai.'

[Accha? Aur, sleep ka kya? Bina sleep ke points nahi badhne waale. Stats me points invest karna bekar hai.]

'...'

Jaw Long kuch na bola. Kai ki baat sahi thi. Agar, agility me points invest kar bhi diye to bina neend ke woh nahi badhne waale the.

[Intezar kiska kar rahe ho? Apne trump cards ka istemal karo. Aur, jald se jald ye ladayi khatam karo. Straight way se ghuse Li Renshu aur unke aadmi kahi mine tak na pahuch jaaye.]

'Hmm!'

Kai ki baat maante hi Jaw Long ke ird gird ki hawa badalne lagi. Woh poori tarah se gambheer ho gaya. Wahi, yaha Ava ki bullets ki saari magazines khatam ho chuki thi.

Woh ab apni katana ko haath me pakdi wapas se close combat ke liye taiyaar thi. Magar, Jaw Long ke haav bhaav use satark rehne par majboor kar rahe the.

Aur, fir-

*Ding*

['Berserk' has been equipped.]

*Ding*

['Berserk' has been activated.]




Agle hi shan Jaw Long ka saara intelligence dhadalle se neeche girne laga. Ek ke baad ek uske intelligence ke 150 points girte chale gaye. Aur, usi ke saath ye points uski 180 strength me judne lage. Jaha ek taraf intelligence ghat raha tha toh wahi dusri orr strength badhti jaa rahi thi.

Berserk! Ek aisa card jo intelligence aur strength stat ke beech apna game khelta tha. Ek aisa card jisme intelligence ka balidan dene ke baad uske saare points strength stat me liye jaa sakte the.

*Ding*

[Intelligence has reached zero.]

[Strength stat has reached 330.]

Intelligence ke saare ke saare points strength me jaa chuke the. Jaw Long ke ird gird ki hawa bhaari mehsoos hone lagi. Uske lambe baal hawa me lehrane lage.

330 ki strength. Akhir kitni taqat rakhti thi? Woh kisi pagal khule saand ki tarah ho chuka tha. Jo raaste me aaye kisi bhi insaan ke tukde tukde karne ko taiyaar tha.

[This is bad!!! I can feel it. He's using something. Dear! Distance leke hi fight lena. Woh kisi prakar ka card istemal kar raha hai. Uski taqat badhti hui mehsoos ho rahi hai. Be careful!]

Lily ki chinta janak awaaz Ava ke mann me goonji. Ava ki bauhe bhi bhay aur duwidha ke chalte sikudi hui thi. Jaw Long ka aura woh feel kar paa rahi thi.

Aur, tabhi-

"Haaaaaaaarrrggghhhh!!!"

Jaw Long dahaad maarte hue hawa me uchakta uski orr aaya. Ava ghabrate hue peeche koodi aur Jaw Long ka taqatvar mukka zameen par jaa gira.

*Boom*

Ava ne jaise hi uss jagah ko dekha jaha woh pehle khadi hui thi uski aankhein khauf ke maare fel gayi. Zameen ke chithde udd chuke the. Ek mukke se hi waha par crater bann gaya.

'Wh-What kind of power is he using?'

[Maine kaha tha na. Usne kisi prakar se apni strength badhayi hai. Warna iss tarah ka damage asaani se nahi kiya jaa sakta. Beware! Agar ek bhi attack hume laga, to hamare liye mushqil ho jayegi.]

'Yeah!'

Jaw Long par jaise bhoot sawar ho chuka tha. Ava ko maarne ke liye jaise hi usne dusra mukka feka, Ava peeche gulati maarte hue uss se distance bana ke bachi aur ped ki aadh lete hue peeche ho gayi.

Parantu, ped jaise hi Jaw Long ke mukke ke sampark me aaya-

*Smaaaashhhhh*

Aisa laga maano ped me kisi ne bomb laga ke chorr diya ho. Kyuki, kisi visfot ki tarah hi uske parchhatte udd gaye. Ped tukdo tukdo me toot ke hawa me bikhar gaya. Itna vishalkaay ped yu ek hamle se hi dhwast ho gaya. Ava ki haalat iss samay shabdo me bayaan kar paana mushqil tha. Usne aaj tak aisi taaqat ka namoona nahi dekha tha. Ghabrahat ab uske andar janm le chuki thi.

'Th-That's-!'

Woh abhi koi rann-neeti sochti ki tabhi kisi vyakti ki awaaz aayi.

"Hahaha! Koi bhi bhaag nahi sakta ab Lord. Maine saare pul ki rassiya kaat di hai. Ab sabko-"

Kehte hue woh nadaan tribe ka member jaise hi Jaw Long ke nazdeek aaya. Jaw Long ne uska kandha thaam use wahi jakad liya.

"Huh?"

Apne Lord ki bina aankhon ki putliyo waali chhavi qareeb se dekh uss tribe ke aadmi ka moot uski jaanghiya me hi nikal gaya.

"L-Lord?"

Aur, ye uske akhiri shabd the. Kyuki, palak jhapakte hi-

*Bammmm*

"A-Ah-!!!"

Ava ki aankhon me dehshat saaf nazar aayi. Saamne ka drishya dekh uska badan kaanp utha. Jaw Long ne aisa mukka maara ki uss tribe member ka sarr kisi tarbooj ki tarah fatt gaya. Khoon sahet dimag ke chhote chhote tukde, aur andhruni ang bhi kayi tukdo me vibhajit hote hue chaaro orr fel ke gir gaye. Uska bina sarr ka bacha hua shareer bhi ladkhada ke zameen par dhamm se gir pada.

Aur, vatavaran me khoon ki gandh fel gayi.

*Blurgh*

Ava ko vomiting jaisa feel hua. Usne iss tarah ki maut kabhi nahi dekhi thi. Neeche uss tribe member ke dimaag ke tukde, toh kahi aankh ki putliyaan, uske chehre ke alag alag ang dale hue the jo ab pehchan me bhi nahi aa rahe the.

Yahi tha Berserk card! Jo apno aur dushmano ke beech antar karne me asaksham tha. Jaw Long ne apna intelligence sacrifice kar strength ko apnaya tha. Ab 15 minute tak bas Berserk ka hi prakop chalne wala tha.

[He's a monster!]

'H-How am I gonna fight him?'

[Tabhi toh keh rahi hu. Iski koi zaroorat nahi. Just run and escape.]

'N-No Lily! I can't-! And, I won't! Mein use yaha chorr ke nahi jaa sakti.'

[You-!!!]

'I'm sorry, Lily. But please...! Help me this one last time.'

[ *sighs* Fine!]

*Ding*




['Vinona's Mark' has been equipped.]

['Vinona's Mark' has been activated.]

['Vinona's Mark' has been applied on the target.]

[20 minutes...! Sirf 20 minutes hai. Hume uss se tez rehna hoga. Tabhi uske attacks se bach payenge. Defensive hote hue uss par bas ek ek vaar karti jaana. 10 consequent hits lagte hi use 150% zyada dard pahuchega. Aur, bleed bhi apply ho jayega.]

'I know! Par, uss se bachna hi sabse bada challenge hai.'

[Lekin, hume karna hoga.]

'How many points do I have?'

[See for yourself!]

*Ding*







Ava ka full status uske samaksh tha. Points ki kami dekh usne apne nichle honth ko gusse me daanto tale daba liya.

'Sirf 1500!?'

[You purchased 'Rekkaken' and 'Judo Combat' last month. Aur, Masie's cure ke liye itne saare points Death Flag me istemal ho gaye the. Mission bhi itne time baad mila hai. Of course, we have a shortage of points.]

'Damn it!'

Ava zyada derr tak apni vartalap Lily ke sang na kar paayi kyuki, Jaw Long chhalaang maar apni jagah se uda aur use maarne ke liye aaya.

Vinona's Mark activate hote hi Ava apne Judo combat style ko apnaate hue stance me aa gayi.

'Come!'

Weapon Master card ki wajah se woh harr hathyaar ko chalaane me saksham thi. Magar, Judo Combat usne ab tak kisi pe istemal nahi ki thi. Ye skill nayi thi. Aur, uska pehla hi pratidwandi Jaw Long tha.

Jaw Long ka mukka uski kamar par lagne ko aaya toh Ava chhalaang maarte hue peeche hui aur perr zameen par rakhte hi-

*Whoosh*

Woh jhatke se Jaw Long ke peeche aayi. Aur, ek strike seedhe Jaw Long ki peeth par maari.

*Thuck*

Maarte hi woh hawa ki gati se peeche hatt gayi. Aur, ye ekdum sahi faisla tha. Jaw Long ne apni laat itni tezi me peeche ghumayi ki agar woh waha khadi rehti toh uski haddiya toh tootati hi saath hi woh kayi metre dur jaake girti.

Idhar strike padte hi Jaw Long ko jaise kaafi kshati pahuchi. Vinona's Mark marked target par 120% damage zyada karta tha. Ava ki strength 150 par thi.

150 strength ka 120% zyada damage. Matlab 330 ka physical damage. Ava khud bhi nahi jaanti thi ki woh itna damage kar sakti thi. Usne kabhi bhi Vinona's Mark ka itna istemal nahi kiya tha. Aur, na hi Judo Combat ka.

Woh nahi jaanti thi ki uska damage Jaw Long ke damage ke barabar pahuch chuka tha. Ya yu kahe ki usne uss detail par utna dhyan hi nahi diya tha. Jaw Long ko jaise hi peeth par woh vaar pada, uski peeth ki maans peshiyaan andar hi andar phatne ko ho gayi.

[Bas 9 hits aur...!]

Bleed apply karne ke liye Ava ko 9 baar aur vaar karna tha. Aur, woh bhi bina ek bhi attack apne upar liye. Tabhi, uske attacks consequent kehlaate.

Woh datt kar aage badhi. Magar, pichli baar wali chaal iss baar qamyab na ho saki. Jaisi hi woh Jaw Long ki taraf feint attack karne ko aayi.

Sheba na jaane achanak kaha se uske bagal se apne panje felaata use nochne ko aa gaya. Woh ghabrati hui jaise hi mudi-

Uss se yahi par galti ho gayi. Sheba apne pankh fad-fadata hua wapas upar uda aur Jaw Long ko yaha mauka mil gaya.

[Shit...! Dear, careful!]

Parantu, kaafi derr ho chuki thi. Ava jaisi hi wapas palti-

*Pooooowwwwwww*

Jaw Long ka punch uske pait par pada aur woh hawa me udti hui kayi feet dur jaa giri. Uske muh se khoon nikalne laga.

Internal bleeding!!!

[Dear...!]

Lily chintit swar me chillaayi. Aisa lag raha tha maano andar ki saari atadiyo par 100 kilo ka wazan rakh diya ho. Uski saansein ukhdi ukhdi prateet hone lagi. Jaw Long ka endurance 200 par tha. Magar, wahi Ava ka maatr 150. Zahir hai uski dard sehen karne ki kshamta Jaw Long se kam thi.

"Urgghhh!!!"

[D-Dear-!!]

Na chaahte hue bhi Ava apne ghutno par gir padi.

'It hurts like hell...! Urrghhh! L-Lily!'

[Y-Yes!!?]

'Aisa lag raha hai jaise andar se kisi ne mere ango ko noch ke daba diya ho. Ahhh-!!'

[Bear with it, dear. Just bear with it.]

Magar, use react karne ka samay hi nahi diya gaya. Jaw Long uske saamne aake khada ho gaya.

[N-No-!!! Dear!!! RUNNN!]

***

Jab Jaw Long aur Ava dur ladne me vyast the. Toh wahi Veer apni neend me kaafi recovery kar chuka tha.

Pari ne Beowulf ko kuch derr ON rakh Veer ki healing ko badha diya tha. Aur, jaise hi bleeding band hui, usne use wapas se band kar diya. Kyuki, woh jaanti thi ki Beowulf aage kaam aane waala tha.

Veer ki palke jhapki... Aur, woh apne hosh me aaya. Neend ki wajah se usne jo points pehle add kiye the woh ab invest ho chuke the.

[Are you awake now?]

'Pari-!!!'

Saamne ka dhundhla drishya jaise hi spasht hua toh Veer ne paaya ki uske saamne Erica baithi hui thi. Erica bhi jaise use hosh me aata dekh chehek uthi.

Erica : Ahhh!!! Tumhe hosh aa gaya!!!?

Veer (breathes heavily) : Erica???

Erica (nods) : Haan! Tum theek ho na?

Veer : T-Tum yaha?

Erica : Uh-huh!

Veer : Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?

Erica : M-Mein tumhe yaha se le jaane aayi hu obviously. Jaw Long bahut zyada shaktishali hai. Hum abhi uske level par nahi hai.

Veer : Jaw Long! Th-That's right! W-Wait-!!! Ava...! Ava kaha hai?

Jaise ab use sahi se hosh aaya. Woh uth ke baitha aur apne shareer ko idhar udhar mod apne dheele aur ghayal purjo ko usne jaise sahi kiya.

Erica : Ava?? Kaun Ava?

Veer : Wahi jisne mujhe bachaya. Jo yaha aayi thi...! Jaw Long mujhe maarna aa raha tha aur woh-

Erica : Oh tumhara matlab woh ladki? System holder?

Veer : Yeah!!

Erica : Wahi toh jab se Jaw Long se bhidi hui hai.

Veer : She's fighting Jaw Long?

Jab Veer ke chehre par uss ladki ke liye chinta ke bhaav Erica ne dekhe toh woh asahaj sa mehsoos karte hue tapaak se puchi,

Erica : K-Kaun hai woh ladki?

Veer : Ava-!!! She's none other than... Natalia Martin!

Erica (stands up) : Whaaatttt???

Apne pita ke wahi bol Erica ko fir yaad aa gaye. Chaahe kuch bhi ho jaaye Natalia Martin par bharosa mat karna. Aur, yaha woh usi Natalia Martin ke bharose pehle hi baithi hui thi.

Erica : U-Uss par bharosa nahi kar sakte hum. Hai na?

Uske sawal par Veer khamosh raha. Uski chuppi ko dekh Pari ne kaha.

[Boy-!!! What are you thinking?]

'Woh move...! Maine wo knife feki thi uss Jaw Long ki taraf.'

[Yeah, so? Pata laga liya hai humne already ki uske paas koi dodging skills nahi hai.]

'Ho sakta hai...! Par-! Maine woh sirf isliye nahi feki thi.'

[Huh!?]

'Aura vision!!! Non living things nahi dekh sakti-!!'

Pari ne jaise hi ye suna uske dil ne jaise ek dhadkan phaand li. Agar woh yaha uske saamne khadi hoti toh uske badan me khade hue raungte Veer saaf saaf dekh paata.

[You fucking-! Hahahahaha!!!!]

Woh zorro se hassne lagi.

Aura vision non living things nahi dekh sakti thi jab tak ki use upgrade na kiya jaaye. Yahi kaaran tha jo Jaw Long Ava ke dwara nikaali gayi katana se itna bhaybheet hoke dur bhaag raha tha.

Kyuki, use katana dikhayi hi nahi de rahi thi. Woh sirf Ava ke haath ke movements ko padh andaaza laga ke uss se ladd raha tha. Ava ke haath me hathyaar kitna lamba tha woh bas iska anumaan hi laga sakta tha. Aur, isliye woh Ava ki guns se bhi bhaagta raha. Na hi woh guns dekh paa raha tha aur na hi bullets. Kyuki, ye sab non living things thi.

Veer ne na sirf woh knife fek ke ye check kiya ki Jaw Long ke paas koi dodging skills thi ya nahi, balki ye bhi check kar liya tha ki Jaw Long ne Aura vision upgrade ki hui thi ya nahi. Aur, isi ke chalte use ye baat bhi pata lag gayi ki Jaw Long ke paas Aura vision ko upgrade karne ke paryapt points nahi the.

[If I would have been in my physical form. I swear I would have crushed your head while hugging you. Hahahahahahaha!!!]

Pari ka excitement iss waqt charam pe tha. Agar woh saamne hoti toh uske chehre par ek khaufnak muskan feli hui hoti.

'It's time for Round 2!'

Gehri saans lete hue Veer uth khada hua. Badan abhi bhi dard kar raha tha. Ghaav abhi bhi gehre the. Magar, samay yaha baith ke araam farmaane ka nahi tha.

Erica : U-Utho mat! Just rest! Bleeding abhi abhi band hui hai. Agar, tum zyada chaloge firoge to ho sakta hai firse shuru ho jaaye.

Veer : I need to go-!

Erica : What???

Veer : Erica! Kya tum mujhe yaha reh ke protect kar rahi thi?

Erica : Uh-huh! M-Mujhe mission bhi mila tha.

Usne jaise hi bola, uske mann me tabhi ghanti bhi baj uthi.

*Ding*

['Mission : Safeguard Veer until he recovers' is completed.]

*Ding*

[You have been rewarded with the skill 'Basic Seer Vision.']

[Skill : Basic Seer Vision.
Description : Allows the host to witness all the events that transpired at a particular place within an hour prior from the running time.]

Erica : O-Oh! Mission poora ho gaya.

Veer : Thanks!

Erica : Ehh??

Veer : Meri safety ka dhyan rakhne ke liye thanks. You... have grown up!

Erica : ...!!!?

Veer : Now I need to fulfill my role.

Erica : Wait-! Tum iss haalat me-

*Whoosh*

Kintu, uski baat adhoori hi reh gayi. Kyuki, Veer hawa ke jhonke ki tarah waha se jaa chuka tha.

Erica (shouts) : Veeeeerrrrrr!!!!

***

'I think... This is the end, Lily!'

[Noooo-!!! Get up and run!!!]

'I... I can't-! Mere perr kaanp rahe hai.'

Jaw Long uske saamne uski maut bann ke khada hua tha. Ek hit me hi Ava ka shareer atyadhik damage le chuka tha. Endurance kam hone ka nateeja tha ye.

Jaw Long bhi kaafi ghayal tha. Magar, Berserk use tike rehne ki himmat de raha tha. Usne apna haath hawa me uthaaya aur uss tribal ke aadmi ki tarah woh Ava ke sarr ke chithde udaane hi wala tha jab-

Bagal se aati ek zordaar kick ne use dur girne par majboor kar diya. Jab Ava ne saari umeedein chorr di thi, tab ek baar fir Veer uske saamne aake khada ho gaya.

Ava : !!!??

Veer uski taraf peeth kar ke khada hua tha. Woh nahi jaanta tha ki iss waqt Ava ki aankhon me aasu the.

Veer : I told you to never show me your face. Right?

Ava : ...!

Woh khamosh rahi. Apna sarr jhukaate hue woh apne hontho ko daanto se kaat khud ko dosh dene lagi. Kya kar sakti thi? Woh apne dil ke aage bebas thi.

Veer ne aage kuch na kaha. Woh bas Jaw Long ki taraf daud pada. Aur, idhar Ava ke chehre ke bhaav taajub me tab badle jab use apne mann me woh notification sunayi diya.

*Ding*

[Veer's favorability has increased to 20.]

Ava bas aashcharya me dur jaate Veer ki peeth ko dekhti reh gayi.

'V-Veer-!!?'

Veer Jaw Long se bhid baitha. Berserk ko khatam hone me abhi 2 minute baaki the. Woh tez raftar ke saath uske paas pahucha. Jaw Long ne jaise hi Veer ki taraf apni kick maarni chaahi-

Veer neeche jhuk gaya. Zordar force waali kick uske sarr ke upar se nikal gayi. Aur, Veer ka taqat se bhara mukka seedha Jaw Long ki jaangh pe jaa ke laga.

*Pooowwww*

Uska santulan bigda aur woh ladkhadaya. Mauka dekh Veer seedhe uske peeche gaya. Uske dono haath Jaw Long ki kamar par lipte-

Aur, agle hi shan itna bhari bharkam Jaw Long hawa me tha. Peeche se Veer ne use uthaaya aur peeche hi le jaate hue-

*Baaaaaaammmmm*

Neeche zameen par use sarr ke bal patak diya. Zameen par ek crater bann gaya.

Haafte hue Veer Jaw Long ki kamar ke peeche se baahar nikla. Sarr par bahut zorr ke padi thi Jaw Long ko.

'Did I... win?'

Veer abhi khade hue ye soch hi raha tha kyuki Jaw Long koi bhi harqat nahi kar raha tha. Par, achanak hi-

'Shit-!!!'

Jaw Long ne akasmat hi uske ankle ko apne haath me jakad liya. Uski pakad itni mazboot thi ki uss se chhootna namumkin sa tha.

Jaw Long uchakta hua Veer ko apne saath hawa me upar le gaya aur fir-

Usne itni zorr se neeche Veer ko patka ki ek shockwave uss poore ilaaqe me fel gayi. Sahi samay par Pari ne Bone Reaper equip kar liya warna Veer ki haddiyon ko aaj choorma bann jaata.

"Veeeeeer-!!", Ava dur se hi kamzor awaaz ke saath uski orr chillaayi. Lekin, koi fayda na tha.

Veer ka ang ang dard se tadap raha tha. Magar, Jaw Long wahi par nahi ruka. Usne punah Veer ke perr ko kheencha aur use-

*Craaaassshhhhh*

Ped se bhedte hue ped ke tukde kar diye. Veer ek baar fir khoon se lathpath dur jaata hua gira.

Jo bhi bleeding pehle ruki thi woh dheere dheere wapas se behna shuru ho rahi thi.

[Agar, aise hi chalta raha toh tum blood loss se hi marr jaoge.]

Tabhi-

*Swoosh* *Swoosh*

*Swoosh* *Swoosh*

Kuch teer Veer ke ird gird golaayi me jaa ke zameen par dhansne lage. Parantu, woh sirf teer nahi the. Unke chorr par insaano ki asli khopdi latki hui thi.

Berserk ka samay samapt ho chuka tha. Jaw Long wapas se apne hosh me aa chuka tha.

"Shebaaaaaa-!!!!"

Baaj ko awaaz lagaate hi woh baaj jaise ishara samajh kahi udta hua chala gaya.

Jaw Long fir Ava ki taraf badhne laga. Usne Ava ke baalo ko apne haath me jakda aur use kheenchte hue le jaane laga.

"Nnnghhh!!!"

Veer ne apni ardh khuli aankhon se jab ye dekha toh himmat kar woh uthne ki koshish karne laga. Magar, dard ke chalte woh wapas se gir gaya.

'N-No-!!!'

[Tumhari chaheeti ko baalo se pakad ke woh le jaa raha hai. Toh? Ab kya karoge tum?]

'Pari-!!'

[Fufu~ Yes?]

Bhaagti hui aayi Erica ne jab ye manzar dekha toh ek sihran uske badan me fel gayi. Ava ko bachaane ke liye usne apna boomerang Jaw Long ki orr feka.

Toh, Jaw Long ne ek haath se uss boomerang ko pakad liya.

Erica : K-Kaise-!?

Woh majbooran uski orr bhaagi. Peeche nahi baith sakti thi. Magar, nateeja wahi. Erica ko pakad ke jaise hi Jaw Long ne ek ped se bheda, bechari Erica ke sarr se khoon behna shuru ho gaya. Sirf do mukke hi kaafi the Erica ko ghaayal karne ke liye. Dono haatho me do sundariyo ke kesho se unhe jakadte hue Jaw Long unhe zameen me ghaseetata hua le jaane laga.

Veer apna haath aage badha ke unki taraf jaane chaahta tha. Lekin, uska shareer jawab de raha tha.

[What are you gonna do now?]

Pari toh jaise uski iss haalat par lutf le rahi thi. Jaise woh kuch soch ke baithi hui thi.

'A-Ava-!! Erica!!!'

Jaw Long ne unn dono ko bhi ek ek jagah par patak diya. Aur, unn dono ke ird gird bhi teer zameen par baari baari khuse hue the. Aur, unke chhor se insaano ki khopdiyaan latak rahi thi.

Jaw Long zameen par baitha. Aur, tabhi-

*Keaaaarrrrrr*

Sheba akaash me udta hua uski orr aane laga. Uske panjo me kuch tha jo bilbila ke tadap raha tha. Ek murga!!!

Murge ko hawa me chorrte hue Sheba wapas se ped ki daali par baithne chala gaya. Toh wahi Jaw Long ne uss murge ko pakda aur apni vidhi ko shuru karne ke liye taiyaar ho gaya.

Uske muh se vichitra bhaasha me bol nikalne lage. Aisi bhaasha... Jise Veer kya, kisi ka bhi system pehchaan na saka.

[He's using Gong Tau!!!]

Pari ke bol tabhi Veer ke mann me goonje.

Gong Tau ek black magic skill thi. Aur, iska upyog karne ke peeche ek hi kaaran tha ~ Laalach!

Gong Tau ek vashikaran ki kriya thi. Jiski madad se targets ko control kiya jaa sakta tha. Vashikaran hone ke baad agar targets ko maar diya jaaye toh unke saare cards aur skills Jaw Long ke paas aa jaane waale the.

Isi laalach ke peeche woh iss kriya ka upyog karne laga. Woh kuch padhta jaa raha tha. Aur, nirantar uski awaaz badhti jaa rahi thi.

Achanak hi-

*Rattle* *Rattle*

Teer par khusi khopdiyaan apne aap kampan karne lagi. Kad-kad ki awaaz ke saath woh thar-tharaane lagi. Hawaaein tezz ho gayi. Aur, Jaw Long ne fir uss murge ko pakda-

*Slit*

Uske gale ke paas ek cut maara...! Murge ko latkaya toh uska khoon neeche tapakte hue kisi vichitra si dikhne waali cheez par girne laga.

Khoon kuch maatra me giraate hi Jaw Long ne uss murge ko feka toh murga apni peeth ke bal hawa me perr kiye zameen par gir pada. Jaw Long ne ye dekh haami bhari. Iska matlab tha ki aatmao ne uski kriya ko sweekar kar liya tha.

Aur tabhi-

Woh murga jiska gala kaata gaya tha woh apne aap uth khada hua aur pankh fad-fadaata hua waha se bhaag utha. Idhar Jaw Long apni kisi prakar ki tantra vidyao me wapas se lag gaya.

Aur, ab Veer ko apne shareer me kuch gadbad mehsoos hone lagi. Sirf Veer hi nahi, Ava aur Erica ka bhi yahi haal tha.

[He's taking control of your body...! Agar tumne kuch nahi kiya. Toh, sab khatam hai.]

'P-Pari-!! Help me-!!!'

Veer ki bahut kamzor awaaz uske mann me aayi.

[Hmm? I didn't hear you-!?]

Jaw Long ke garajte bol apna asar kar rahe the. Veer samet Ava aur Erica ke haath apne aap unke gale par jaake jakad gaye. Woh sabhi apne apne gale ko kass ke dabaane lage. Erica aur Ava dono ki aankhon me aasu the.

Jaha ek taraf Ava haar maante hue sab kuch sweekar kar chuki thi aur mayus aankhein liye Veer ko dekhti jaa rahi thi jaise ye antim shan tha ek dusre ko akhiri baar dekhne ka toh wahi Erica ka chehra kuch aur keh raha tha. Use dekh ke lag raha tha maano jaise woh marrna nahi chaahti thi. Bebasi uske chehre par saaf jhalak rahi thi. Aankhon se mote mote aansu uske gaalo se behte hue gir rahe the.

'Pariiii-!!!'

[Hmm?]

'H-Help me-!!'

[Ohh? Mujhe kuch sunayi nahi de raha! Fufu~]

'I beg you-!! Please!!!'

[Ohh!! Waqai?]

'Please!!'

Veer ki saansein ukhdi ukhdi aa rahi thi. Pari kuch derr shaant rahi. Veer ke haath apne aap gale ko dabaate hue kasste jaa rahe the.

"Urrghhh!"

'P-Pari...!!!'

Agle hi shan Pari ki awaaz thodi badal gayi. Maano jaise woh bhayanak gusse me uss se baat kar rahi thi.

[THEN...! ARE YOU WILLING TO GIVE YOUR BODY TO ME???]

'Huh!??'

[DO YOU WANT ME TO TAKE CONTROL? TO DEFEAT THIS PUNY LITTLE BASTARD?]

'H-Haan-!!'

[ARE YOU WILLING TO HAND OVER YOUR POINTS TO ME???]

Woh chillaayi.

'Haan! *Gwakh* H-Haan!'

[THEN GIVE THEM TO ME-!!!]

'Hmmm!!'

[YOU ARE DOING THIS BY YOUR OWN ACCORD. RIGHT???]

'Y-Yes-!!!'

[THEN GIVE ME... THOSE POINTS!]

'Hmmm-!'

Aur, tabhi Veer ke 5692 points jo usne emergency ke liye bachaaye the. Woh dhadalle se ghatne lage.

[YES...! YES...! GIVE THEM TO ME!! THAT'S RIGHT!!! KEEP IT COMING!! THE MORE THE BETTER...!]

Woh points kaha jaa rahe the, unka istemal kaha ho raha tha Veer kuch nahi jaanta tha. Woh toh Pari ki baat maan vivash hote hue apne saare points daav par laga diya tha.

[YOU MUST THANK ME LATER KID-!!! IT'S YOUR GOOD LUCK THAT I WAS HERE-!!! OTHERWISE, YOU WOULD'VE BEEN DEAD!!!]

Veer ki consciousness dheere dheere jaane lagi. Aur, kuch hi shano me woh behosh ho chuka tha. Pari ne poore shareer pe takeover kar liya tha. Ghatate ghatate Veer ke saare points zero par aake ruk gaye.

[Hahahahahahahaha-!!!]

Pari paaglo ki tarah hass rahi thi.

[Hahahaha-!!! THIS BODY...! IT'S WEAK!!! BUT YOU'RE LUCKY KID-!! BECAUSE I'M THE ONE POSSESSING IT NOW.]

Veer ka badan jab gale ko dabaate hue gir pada toh Erica ne rote hue apni nazre ferr li. Use laga ki Veer iss duniya se jaa chuka hai. Magar, Ava ki nigaahein ekdum Veer ke shareer ke upar sthir tiki hui thi.

Death Flag me aisa koi bhi notification nahi aaya tha. Woh jaanti thi ki Veer zinda tha.

Aur, fir-

Achanak hi Veer ka shareer gravity ke viruddh uski iccha ke bina upar uthne laga. Aas paas ke neeche bikhre sookhe patte kaapne lage. Uske uthate hi uski zulfo ne uski aankhon ko dhak liya.

Ava, Erica samet Jaw Long khud palat ke use dekhne par majboor ho gaya. Ye chal kya raha tha?

Jaw Long ko poora yakeen tha ki Veer kaafi damage le chuka tha. Uske baad bhi iss tarah uth khade hona...! Zaahir hai use hairangi honi hi thi. Use kya, yaha par uski jagah koi bhi system holder maujood hota toh uska bhi yahi reaction hota.

Na pehle kabhi aisa kuch dekha gaya, na suna gaya aur na hi aisa kuch hone ki kisi system holder ne kabhi kalpana bhi kari thi. Kintu, Jaw Long sab kuch mehsoos kar paa raha tha. Aur, ye sab kuch asal me ho raha tha. Uske saamne khada yeh naujavan ladka iska jeeta jaagta udahran tha ki aisa kuch bhi sambhav tha.

Veer utha. Uska muh achanak hi khula aur usne ek gehri saans muh se chorri. Kintu, raat me jangal me thand hone ke chalte uski garam saans dhue me tabdeel ho gayi. Aur, dhua uske chehre se chhatate hi uske hontho par ek bhayanak, daanavi aur kutil muskaan fel gayi.





'Huh!?'

Jaw Long ka badan iss baar ek jhatka khaaya, pal bhar ke liye shareer par ruye khade ho gaye. Thand iska kaaran nahi thi. Uski vidhi beech me hi ruk gayi. Harr insaan ka aura neele rang ka hota tha.

Par... Par kabhi bhi usne aisa kuch aaj tak nahi dekha tha. Veer ka aura...

Veer ke badan se jo aura nikal raha tha. Woh pichli baar ki tarah neele rang ka nahi tha. Uske badan se... Iss baar... Woh bhayanak gehre kaale rang ke aura ki lapto se ghira hua tha. Aura keval andar hi nahi tha. Balki, Veer ke badan ke baahar ird gird bhi lapte maarta hua nikal raha tha.

Aisa lag raha tha jaisa nark se koi bhayanak pishaach dharti par aa gaya ho. Jaw Long ne iske pehle bas aatmao ki nakaratmak urjao ke aura ko hi halke kaale rang se lipta dekha tha. Aura vision urjao ko bhi halke rango se dikhaane me saksham thi.

Bhoot, pret, pishaach jeevit praani nahi hote the lekin nakaratmak urja ka strotra zaroor hote the isliye, unka bhi kahi na kahi thoda bahut aura hota tha. Magar, woh aura itna prachand nahi hota tha. Kaali lapte zaroor hoti thi par behad maamuli si. Par, idhar-

Veer ke badan se bheeshan kaali lapte aise nikal rahi thi jaise maano uss par kisi ne aag laga di ho. Bas, farq itna tha ki lapte peeli nahi kaali thi. Beshaq, ye lapte kisi ko bhi dikhayi nahi de sakti thi.

Veer ke naye roop ko dekh Jaw Long do qadam apne aap peeche ki orr chala gaya. Woh samajh raha tha ki savdhani baratna kitna zaroori tha yaha par.

Kintu, Veer poori tarah se shaant khada hua tha. Uski aankhein uske baalo se chhipi hui thi aur muh se nikalti saans nirantar thand ke chalte bhaap me badalti jaa rahi thi. Uske hontho par saji muskan kahi se bhi uski prateet nahi ho rahi thi. Lag raha tha maano uske andar kisi aur jeev ne apna vaas kar liya ho. Kisi aur ne uske shareer par qabza kar liya ho.

Iss waqt uska roop bhayanak, raudra, aur prachand maalum pad raha tha. Yuhi nahi Jaw Long ne apne qadam peeche liye the. Chaah ke bhi Veer ki iss badli hui sthiti ke baare me use kuch pata nahi lag paa raha tha. Yaha tak ki uska system bhi iss paristhiti se anjaan tha.

[Kuch gadbad hai. Samajh nahi aa raha ki kaun se card ya skill ka istemal kiya gaya hai.]

Ava jo Veer ko uthata dekh ek raahat ki saans li, usne apni katana ko hawa me feka jo Veer ke bagal se jaa ke zameen par khus gayi.

Ava : Take it... Veer!!!

Magar, Veer ke muh se uske baad jo bol nikle woh uske nahi the. Awaaz uski hi thi, parantu bol Pari ke the.

"I don't need any weapons...! I AM THE WEAPON!!!"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
This update consists of 10.6k words. Ye thoda aur lamba jaata magar kisi bhi cheez ki zaroorat se zyada maatra haanikarak hoti hai. Isliye, ise yahi rokna sahi tha. Agle update me sab kuch samapt hai. Maine keh hi diya tha ki fight 4 updates legi. Teen update ho chuke hai. Bas ek baaki hai. Aur, uske baad shayad ek update aur rahega jo arc ke closure ke liye rahega. Update bahut late aaya hai jaanta hu. Par, mein vivash hu dosto. Baaki, likes thokne ka aur revos dene ka. Target apna 200 hi hai. Pahucha do. Agla update jald dene ki koshish rahegi.
Dhanyavad!

Bhai ye kya ta kabhi socha nahi ta Aisa bhi hoga you are next lvl writer bro Mera dimag chakra Gaya bhai

 

[ironman123]

Mega Update

Update - 177 ~ Berserk
[Note : Contains Gore related scenes.]​

Ab tak...

Magar, sirf itna hi nahi tha. Ava apni maa ko bachaane ke liye ye sab kari thi. Aur, isliye Island chorr kar jaane se pehle Veer ne ek vaakya aur kaha tha. Itni dheere ki sirf use hi sunaayi de sake. Lekin, Ava ne woh sunn liya tha.

Woh bol the-

'Go and protect your loved one now.'

Ab aage...

Pedo ki daalo ke upar Erica chhalang maarte hue aage badhti jaa rahi thi. Hawa se uske baal lehra rahe the aur bauhe bechaini ke maare kasi hui thi.

'Veer!!!'

Badi mushqil se usne apne darr ke upar qaabu paaya tha. Kahi na kahi mann hi mann woh khud ko dosh bhi de rahi thi ki woh yaha aayi toh Veer ko bachaane thi magar khud hi sakpaka ke baith gayi. Kya aise woh apne pita ko proof karne waali thi ki woh ab frontline missions ke liye taiyaar thi?

Dekha jaaye toh galti uski bhi nahi thi. Woh kabhi bhi aisi paristhiti me padi nahi thi aur na hi usne kabhi aise drishya apni aankhon ke saamne dekhe the. Jis wajah se woh hamesha cheezon ko halke me le liya karti thi. Bilkul waise hi jaise ek kue me baitha mendhak, upar kue ki golayi se dikh rahe aasmaan ko dekh ye samajhne lagta hai ki aasmaan bas itna hi hai. Magar, baad me kue se nikalne ke baad use pata chalta hai ki aasmaan asal me kitna vishal hai. Aaj Erica ko poorn roop se abhaas ho gaya tha ki asli darr kya hota hai, duniya me kitne khatarnak log hote hai, apno ko khone ka bhay kya hota hai aur ek jaan ki qeemat kya hoti hai.

'Hang in there.'

Bhaagte hue use kuch theek sa nahi lag raha tha. Jaise ye khamoshi use bechain kar rahi thi.

'Achanak se itni shaanti kyu chha gayi hai?'

[Something is off.]

Jaw Long ke Animal Kingdom card ka asar khatam hote hi saare janvar waha se afra tafri me dur bhaag chuke the. Toh wahi neeche chal rahi Veer aur Jaw Long ki ladayi bhi Veer ke ghayal hone ke chalte lagbhag samapt ho chuki thi. Yahi kaaran tha ki ab Erica ko koi bhi shor sunayi nahi de raha tha. Magar, jitni vatavaran me khamoshi fel rahi thi Erica ki bechaini utni hi badhti jaa rahi thi. Kahi ye kisi anhoni ke ghatit hone ka sanket toh nahi tha? Woh nahi jaanti thi. Woh toh bas itna jaanti thi ki Veer ko iss daldal se baahar nikaal ke use sahi salamat wapas leke jaana hai.

[Woh dono yaha nahi hai, Erica. Ab ya toh woh pul ke uss paar gaye hai ya fir neeche.]

Erica dusre pul tak pahuch chuki thi jaha se Veer neeche gira tha. Pul ke uss paar se toh use koi bhi dhwani sunayi nahi di. Ab yaha se talashi karne ke do raaste the.

'Kaha gaye honge woh? Aage dekhe Genie?'

[Mere khayal se aage badhne se pehle hume neeche dekh lena chahiye. Neeche bhi kaafi jagah hai. Jangal neeche bhi hai. Neher ke uss orr dekho Erica.]

'Par bhala neeche kyu jayega woh?'

[Kyu nahi jayega woh? Judging by how he was escaping from those animals... There's a high possibility he might have chosen that route. Zara socho. Itne saare janvaro se bachne ka sabse behtar vikalp kya ho sakta hai? Insaan kaha jayega? Seedhe raaste par jaha janvar lagatar uska peechha kare? Ya fir neher ka sahara lete hue dusre chhor par jaha janvar aa hi na paaye?]

'You have a point, Genie! Theek hai toh fir. Pehle neeche hi talashi lete hai.'

Nirnay lete hue Erica pul ke madhya aayi, neeche dekhi, aur bina jhijke iss baar paani me kood gayi.

*Splaaaashhhhh*

Chhapak ki awaaz ke saath girte hi woh tairte hue fauran chhor par aayi aur khud ko neher se nikaalte hue ek gehri saans chhori. Iss baar usne paani me koodne ke liye koi shikayat nahi ki. Woh jaise sthiti ki gambheerta ko ab samajh rahi thi. Woh sambhalte hue aage badhi. Dheere dheere woh jangal ki gehrayiyo me pravesh karne lagi. Daudate daudate hi use kuch derr baad zameen par dur kuch nazar aaya. Aur, jaise hi woh aakriti uski nazro me aur spasht hui uski aankhein darr ke maare fel gayi. Qadmo ki gati aur tez ho gayi.

'N-Noooo-!!!!'

Ghabrahat! Ek ajeeb si ghabrahat uske andar janm li. Seene me vichitr sa ek bharipann mehsoos hua aur geele badan pe raungte khade ho gaye. Dur zameen par Veer ka shareer khoon se lathpath bejaan sa pada hua tha. Erica ki toh jaisi saari umeedein hi toot gayi. Kya usne derr kar di? Kya woh sahi samay par nahi pahuch paayi? Tamaam sawaal uske mastishk aur dil dono par chot karne lage.

Woh tez raftar se Veer ke nazdeek aayi aur ghisatate hue khud ko roki. Jhukte hi usne Veer ke sarr ke peeche ek haath le jaate hue uske sarr ko badi hi savdhani se uthaya aur apne kaan ko neeche uske seene par le jaate hue lagaya. Aur-

*Ba-dump*

*Ba-dump*

Agle hi shan uski aankhon me aansu apne aap panap aaye. Dil dhadak raha tha..! Usne kabhi nahi socha tha ki kabhi kisi ki dhadkan sunn ke use itna sukoon milega, itni khushi milegi, itni raahat milegi. Ek dil ki dhadkan ka mol jaise aaj use pata chal gaya tha.

Kabhi usne nahi socha tha ki Veer jaise ladke ke liye woh aisa kuch mehsoos karegi. Pehle din se hi Veer aur uska rishta koi khaas nahi tha. Magar, iss waqt Veer ke dhadakte dil ki awaaz sunn jo woh mehsoos kar rahi thi, unhe shabdo me bayaa kar paana uske liye behad mushqil tha.

'Thank God-!! Thank God!!! You idiot!!! *sniff* You are alive.'

[Ek minute!! Agar, Veer yaha hai. Toh, Jaw Long kaha hai?]

Genie ke prashn karte hi Erica ko jaise dhyaan aaya. Khatra woh janvar nahi the. Asli khatra toh Jaw Long tha. Uske baare me sochte hi uski aankhein satarkta ke chalte fel gayi.

Woh idhar udhar apni gardan ghumate hue chaaro orr dekhi. Magar, Jaw Long kahi bhi use dikhayi nahi diya. Woh toh aise gayab tha jaise cheel ke ghosle me maans.

Aur, tabhi-

*Booooooooommmmmm*

Dur use kuch shor sunayi diya. Aisa lag raha tha maano do log aapas me lad rahe the.

'What? What's happening?'

Uske sawal ka jawab bhi use jaise agle hi pal mil gaya. Dur jangal ki gehrayiyo se nikalta hua Jaw Long bhayanak tez raftar me uski orr hi aa raha tha. Ek shan pehle uski koi upasthiti nahi thi aur agle hi shan woh khud uski orr pagal saand ki tarah dauda chala aa raha tha.

'Huh!?'

Jab Erica ne danav jaise Jaw Long ko apni orr aata dekha toh maano uski haalat hi patli ho gayi. Jaise jaise woh nazdeek aa raha tha uski aakriti badhti jaa rahi thi. Asal me woh kitna vishal tha ye ab Erica ko samajh aa raha tha. Jaw Long ke haatho me uska wahi bada sa kulhada bhi tha. Ek baar hi uske chalane par Erica ke shareer ke do tukde ho sakte the.

Ye sochte hi woh bechari itna ghabra gayi ki usne neeche letey Veer ko apne seene se lagaya aur aankhein band kar apne haath khade kar diye. Agar, yahi unka ant tha... Toh wahi sahi.

Magar, iss se pehle ki Jaw Long unn tak pahuchta-

*Whooooooosshhhh*

Ek saaya unn dono ke beech aake khada ho gaya. Jab aakriti spasht hui toh pata chala ki ye Ava hi thi. Erica ne jab khamoshi ko mehsoos kar apni aankhein kholi toh apne saamne Ava ko khada dekh dang reh gayi.

Aur, uske hosh aur bhi zyada tab ude jab usne Ava ko check kar ye pata lagaya ki woh bhi ek system holder thi.

'Whattttt!!?? Wh-Who is she!?'

Ava agar chaahti toh camouflage activate kar woh fake status dikha sakti thi. Parantu, usne aisa na kiya. Veer ko dhoka dene ke baad se jaise use iss skill se nafrat si ho gayi thi.

Woh Jaw Long ke saamne nidarta se khadi hui thi. Usne apne kandhe ke upar se peeche halka sa mud Erica ko dekha jisne apne seene se Veer ko laga rakha tha. Uski nazre Erica ke seene aur Veer ke chehre par kuch zyada derr hi tiki rahi. Kuch shan baad woh boli.

Ava : Kuch samjhane ka time nahi hai. Uske wounds deep hai. Uska system andar hi andar bleeding ko rokne ki koshish kar raha hoga. Tab tak uski safety, mein tumhare haatho saunpti hu.

Erica itni zyada confused thi ki use kuch bhi samajh nahi aaya. Kaun thi ye ladki? Kar kya rahi thi ye yaha? Aur, Veer ko kaise jaanti thi?

Erica (frowns) : Who are you?

Ava : I'm... I'm someone who owes him a debt.

Erica (frowns) : Ye mere question ka answer nahi! Who exactly are you? Aur, mein tum par bharosa kyu karu?

Ava (smiles) : Kya waqai iss waqt tum ye sawal puch rahi ho? Saamne dekho apne. Agar, mein yaha se hatt gayi toh anjaam kya hoga?

Erica ne jaise hi Jaw Long ko dekha jo abhi tak satark hue unke saamne khada tha, uski bauhe ghabrahat ke chalte sikud gayi. Ava ki baat sahi thi. Agar, woh unke saamne se hati toh woh dono hi maare jaane waale the.

Ava : Shayad ab tumhe samajh aa gaya hoga ki tumhe mujhpe bharosa kyu karna chahiye. Right?

Erica : ...

Ava (exhales) : Take care of him! Use abhi move mat karna. Warna, blood flow hota rahega. Bleeding ruki nahi hai. Bas, uski hifazat karo. Bleeding ke rukte hi use yaha se leke nikal jaana.

Erica chup chaap sab kuch sunn rahi thi. Sawaal dher saare the uske mann me magar filhal unhe taal dena hi behtar tha. Kya iss ladki par bharosa kiya jaa sakta tha? Uske Dad bhi yaha nahi the. Ek decision hi unn dono ki life ya toh bacha sakta tha ya fir khatam kar sakta tha. Ek bahut badi zimmedari iss samay uske sarr thi.

Usne ek gehri saans lete hue fir apna nirnay liya. Haami bharte hue woh boli,

Erica (nods) : Theek hai! I'm trusting you.

Ava : Good! I will stall him until then. Yaad rakhna! Bleeding band hote hi tumhe use leke yaha se nikalna hai.

Erica : Hmm!

Aur, itna bol Ava wapas se apne saamne khade Jaw Long par focused ho gayi. Jaw Long jaan boojh ke hamla nahi kar raha tha.

Veer ke alawa uske saamne do do system holders maujood the. Zahir hai woh jaldbazi me koi galat qadam nahi uthana chahta tha. Aur, Ava ki woh zordar kick jo use padi thi. Uss se kahi na kahi use andaza lag gaya tha ki ye system holder ladki sirf kehne ki system holder nahi thi.

Woh kehte hai na, 'fook fook kar chalna hi samajhdari hoti hai.' Baad me dukhi hone se behtar tha ki abhi satark raha jaaye. Kisi tareeqe se woh Ava ko chakma deke yaha Veer aur Erica ko maarne ke liye aa toh gaya tha. Par, saamne khadi Ava ko dekh uske qadam sanshay me thame hue the.

Aur, Ava ne bhi jaise uske sanshay ka abhaas kar liya. Woh palak jhapakte apni jagah se gayab hui aur Jaw Long ki taraf lapki. Uske haath me ek katana talwar uski sheath se bahar nikli aur seedhe Jaw Long ke gale ki orr badhi.

Kuch bura abhaas hote hi Jaw Long ki aankhein sankat ke chalte chaudi ho gayi. Bhay ke maare woh peeche hua aur isi prakar Ava Jaw Long ko Veer aur Erica se dur karne me safal ho gayi.

Toh wahi idhar Erica Ava aur Jaw Long ko bhidte dekh ek alag anubhav le rahi thi. Usne apna dhyaan Veer par jaise hi punah daala toh veh ghabra uthi.

'My god...!'

Veer ke zakhm gehre the. Erica ne apne jeevan kaal me kayi maut apni aankhon ke saamne dekhi thi. Par, kabhi bhi kisi system holder ko iss tarah ghayal nahi dekha tha.

Ek system holder ka iss tarah zakhmi hona kis baat ka saboot tha? Iss se ye pata chalta tha ki Jaw Long unke liye kitna bada khatra tha. Agar, Veer unki madad na kar ke Jaw Long ko yaha baandh ke na rakhta toh kya hota? Woh sochna bhi nahi chahti thi.

[He's badly injured.]

'Uss ladki ne kaha ki Veer ka system use heal kar raha hoga andar hi andar.'

[So, he does have a healing skill huh?]

'Pata nahi! Card bhi ho sakta hai. Lekin, ye ghaav...! Kitna dard saha hoga Veer ne Genie?'

Erica Ava ke chehre ko poori tarah se nahi dekh paayi thi. Ava uss se baat karte samay bas halka sa hi mudi thi, jis kaaran vash use Ava ki soorat poori tarah se spasht dikhayi na padi. Parantu, woh Ava ke baare me kaafi kuch jaanti thi.

Woh jaanti thi ki Ava ek system holder thi. Veer ko Crimson se bachane ke baad Renshu ne use kaafi kuch bataya tha. Use ab bhi apne pita ke saath kiya gaya woh sanvaad yaad tha.

'Woh celebrity Natalia Martin bhi ek system holder hai, Erica!'

'Really?'

'Hmm! Aur, uss ladke ki maut ka ek kaaran bhi bann sakti thi. Agar, mein sahi samay par waha na pahuchta toh-'

'Hmph! Aap jab se waha se aaye ho uss ladke ke baare me hi baat kare jaa rahe ho. Akhir kaun hai woh?'

'Haha! Jo bhi hai bahut hi kaabil naujavan hai. Aur, rahi baat ki kaun hai woh? Jald hi tumhe pata lag jayega. Mera ek favour hai uspe ab. Jise chukaane wo zaroor yaha aayega. Tab, tum khud apni aankhon se dekh lena.'

'Hmph! I don't care! Balki, aap celebrity Natalia ke baare me mujhe kuch bataiye.'

'Uske baare me mein zyada nahi jaanta aur na hi uss se mila hu. Lekin, itna zaroor pata hai mujhe ki uss ladke ko shadyantra me phasane waali woh bhi ek thi. Maine itna anuman laga liya tha.'

'Woh kaise?'

'Ladka jab samundar me doob raha tha tab maine use waha se bachaya tha. Uss dauran, woh Natalia Martin helicopter me upar baithi neeche nazre gadayi sab kuch dekh rahi thi.'

'Ohhh-!?'

'Lloyd ne mujhe bata diya tha ki wo bhi ek system holder thi. Mujhe poore shadyantra ke baare me jankari to nahi hai. Lekin, kaafi kuch anumaan mein laga sakta hu.'

'I see!'

'Uske paas camouflage kar ke ek skill hai.'

'Camouflage?'

'Hmm! Uski madad se wo nakli status laga ke ghum rahi thi.'

'Iska matlab-!'

'Haan! Usi ke chakkar me shayad wo naujavan ek khatarnak shadyantra ka shikar ho gaya. Kherr, woh zinda hai abhi yahi acchi baat hai. Shayad, tab uss Natalia ne Camouflage ko band kar rakha tha. Tabhi, Lloyd use check kar paaya tha. Aur, asliyat ka pata laga paaya tha.'

'Hmm! Lekin, aapko kaise pata chala Dad ki Natalia ke paas Camouflage skill hai?'

'Kyuki jab maine use check kiya tha tab uska status mujhe dikhayi de raha tha. Woh nakli tha. Lloyd ne sahi pehchan baad me ki thi.'

'Ahh!'

'Erica!!!'

'Huh!?'

'Agar, kabhi tumhara saamna iss Natalia Martin se ho. Toh uss par bharosa mat karna. Celebrity hone ka matlab ye nahi ki kisi ka dil saaf ho.'

'Jii dad. Mein aapki baat ka dhyaan rakhungi.'

Ye baatein use acchi tarah se yaad thi. Magar, uska dhyaan to abhi uski jaangh par sarr rakha yeh naujavan kheenche hue tha.

Genie chup chaap Erica ke emotions ko padh rahi thi. Kaise Erica ke kaanpte hue haath Veer ke zakhmo par haule se fir rahe the. Jaise wo ghaav dekh ke hi unhe mehsoos kar paa rahi thi ki kitna dard hua hoga Veer ko jab ye chotein uske shareer par aayi hongi. Uski sarsari nigaahein Veer ke uttam kataav waale badan par bhi fir rahi thi.

[Tum uski dressing kyu nahi kar deti? Hamare paas rakhi hui hai na?]

'Arrey haan! M-Mujhe to dhyaan hi na raha.'

Usne apni jebo me se dressing ke liye kuch first aid ki pattiyaan nikaali aur Veer ke ghaavo ko saaf kar unn par savdhani se baandhne lagi. Bhale hi inse zyada madad nahi milne wali thi par ghaavo ko khula chorrne se toh ye behtar hi tha.

Dressing baandhte baandhte Erica ki nazre baar baar Veer ke chehre par phir rahi thi.

'G-Genie-! I... I was just thinking... Veer ki kya favorability hai mere liye?'

Sawaal sunte hi mann hi mann jaise Genie muskurayi. Woh jaise bhaanp gayi ki ye sab kis orr jaa raha tha.

[Sach me jaanana hai tumhe?]

'N-Nahi aisi koi khaas wajah nahi hai. M-Mein toh bas yuhi- curious thi...! Isliye- socha ki-'

Apne baalo ki latt ko ungli se ghumate hue woh khusur-pusur karte hue boli.

[Uski favorability tumhare liye 90 hai.]

Ank sunte hi Erica ki jaise aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi.

'Wh-What-!???'

Use pata tha ki 70-80 ke upar favorability ka hona kya darshata tha.

Pyaar!!!

Samajh aate hi uske gaal laal tamatar ki tarah laal hote chale gaye. Par, agle hi shan, maano jaise Genie ne uske sarr par thande paani se bhari balti udel di.

[Hahaha! Just kidding. Asli favorability 22 hai.]

'Y-You-!!! Genieeeeee!!!!'

Woh mann hi mann Genie par barsi. Toh wahi Genie uska reaction dekh aur zyada thahaake lagaane par majboor ho gayi. Genie jaan boojh ke mahaul ko halka karne ki koshish kar rahi thi. Aur, usme woh poori tarah se qamyab thi. Erica ka aisi sthiti me calm hona behad aavashyak tha.

'Ahinda se aisa tumne kabhi kiya na, toh mein tumhe sleep mode me daal dungi.'

[What?? H-Hey! Wait a minute! It was just a joke. Okay? Aur, maine ab bata to di asli favorability. It's 22. Twenty two. Jise dusri bhaasha me-]

'Haan pata hai!! Sunn liya maine. Sunn liya. I-It's not even a good number. Why are you yelling so much??? Enough! Sunn liya maine. 22 hai. I know! Hmph!'

[What? Kya tum chaah rahi thi aur zyada ho?]

'Wh-Who cares? *blushes* Ahem! Anyways! Mera ek sawal hai. System jab ek dusre ko check nahi kar sakta toh ek dusre ki favorability kaise bata deta hai?'

[Hmm! A very good question.]

'Please, ab baatein mat ghumaana.'

[Nahi nahi! I will tell you. Look! Hum sabhi system ek dusre ke prati satark rehte hai. Koi bhi system ye nahi chaahta ki agla system unke stats dekh paaye. We are afraid of each other.]

'Afraid?'

[Hmm! System apne stats ko hide kar sakta hai. Isliye, check karne par hume kuch bhi info haath nahi lagti. Ek prakar se ye hamara defensive mechanism hai. Par, Erica...! Emotions chhipaye nahi jaa sakte.]

'Ah!'

[Bhale hi stats hide kar diye gaye ho par feelings ko hide nahi kiya jaa sakta. Agla system holder tumhare liye kya bhaav rakh raha hai woh asaani se dikh jaata hai. Jaw Long ko dekhte hi uski ill intent humne mehsoos kar li. Zahir hai favorability minus me hai uski.]

'Right!'

[Wahi Veer ki 22 hai. Tumhare Dad ki tumhare prati 90 hai. Of course, it's all fatherly love.]

'Dad to meri chinta hi nahi chorrte. Mein badi ho gayi hu ab. *sighs* Toh aise work karta hai ye. Samajh gayi. Thanks Genie! Ohh! Look, woh ab saansein behtar dhang se le raha hai.'

[Uske system ne blood flow ko control me rakha hai. I think wo neend me hai.]

'Use araam ki sakht zaroorat hai. So, just-'

Iske pehle ki wo apni baat poori keh paati Jaw Long ki tezz dahaad ne uska dhyaan kheencha.

"Shebaaaaaaaaa-!!!!!"

*Keeeeeeaaaaaarrrrr*

Aur, beshaq...! Wahi baaj hawa me apne parr felaaye uske ek bulaave par haazir ho gaya. Sheba udta hua seedhe Erica ki orr aaya.

'Ahhh!'

[Careful!!]

Par, iss baar Erica ghabra ke dur nahi bhaagi. Usne apni peeth par peeche khusi hui kisi cheez ko baahar nikaala. Aur-

'This time...! I won't run!!'

*Fwoosh*

Seedha uss baaj ki orr usne wo fek diya. Wo cheez hawa me sansanati hui gol gol ghoom ke udte Sheba ko giraane ke liye aayi.

Sheba tezz raftaar se apni orr aa rahi cheez ko dekh baukhlate hue hawayi marg se hatt gaya. Aur, woh cheez jo hawa me feki gayi thi woh wapas se ek golaayi ka raasta apnaate-

*Thuck*

Erica ke haatho me aa thami.

Ek boomerang!!! Magar, koi sadharan boomerang nahi. Uske ird gird metal ke kuch nukeele tukde lage hue the. Kisi prakaar ki dhaar-daar blades. Jo nishchit roop se kisi ko ghayal karne ke liye hi lagayi gayi thi.

Metal bhi koi aisa wesa nahi. Ye tha titanium. Sabse halka aur mazboot metal. Aur, iss anokhe boomerang ki rachayita koi aur nahi ~ Swayam Erica thi.

Uska ek maatra card ~ Metallurgy!!!




Ek aisa card jo use saara gyaan, saari kshamtaye aur saara kaushal pradaan karta tha metals se hathyar banaane ke liye. Usne Garofano ke liye bhi kuch needles bana ke use di thi.

Erica ki aankhon me iss baar tej tha. Aur, uske mann me tabhi-

*Ding*

[Mission : Safeguard Veer until he recovers.
Rewards : Skill ~ Basic Seer Vision.
Mission failure penalty :
1) Loss of Order.
2) 10,000 points deduction.]

'Iss baar...! Mein peeche nahi hatne waali. Chaahe kuch bhi ho jaaye. Jab tak Veer recover nahi ho jaata! Mein yahi hu-!!!'

Aur, dur se use Sheba se ladta dekh, idhar Ava ke hontho par ek halki si muskan bikhar gayi.

***

Kintu, hua kya tha? Ava yaha kaise pahuchi? Woh itne din kaha thi? Veer yaha hai iss baare me use kaise pata chala? Aur, yaha aane ka uska maqsad kya tha?

Ye tamaam sawaal Veer ke mann me the behosh hone se pehle. Jinka uttar keval aur keval Ava hi apne muh se de sakti thi.

Kuch derr pehle...

Jab Veer eastside ki entrance se pravesh kar raha tha. Tab, woh nahi jaanta tha ki theek uske peeche Ava bhi use follow kar rahi thi.

[There he is, Miss! Thoda aur nazdeek jaa sakte hai hum. Itna peeche chalne ki zaroorat nahi.]

'Nahi Lily! Veer ke paas Beowulf hai. Senses badh jaate hai uske. Ho sakta hai usne activate kar ke rakha ho. Agar, mein iss se zyada nazdeek gayi toh wo meri presence ko mehsoos kar lega.'

[Ohh!]

Ava ne Veer ki aankhon me woh laal rang ki parat pehle bhi dekhi hui thi. Lily ne hi use khoj ke bataya tha ki Veer ke paas Beowulf card tha.

[Toh ab?]

'I will follow him from a distance.'

[Okay!]

'Lily...! What does he think of me now?'




[His favorability towards you is only 10.]

Ava ke chehre par ek muskan bikhar gayi. Magar, iss muskan me kahi na kahi nirasha bhi chhipi hui thi.

'10... is not a bad number.'

[My dear Miss! Is 10 really a good number?]

'Lily! Jo maine kiya tha...! Uske baad toh iss favorability ko minus me hona chahiye tha. *smiles* 10 is already a great number.'




[You've been smitten by him. *sighs* Kya hoga aage? I don't even know.]

'N-No-! That's not it! I-'

[Jhooth bolne ki zaroorat nahi hai. I can feel your emotions.]

Ava uske jawab me kuch na boli. Woh chupke chupke Veer ka peecha karti rahi. Veer jab uss blood trail ko laangh ke aage gaya toh Ava kuch shan wahi ruk gayi.

[Ye ek sensory type boundary ho sakti hai.]

'Andar jaane ke liye ise cross karna hi hoga.'

Aur, blood trail ko paar karte hue woh khud bhi Veer ki disha ki orr aage badh gayi.

Uske andar aate hi Jaw Long ko do vyaktiyo ke andar ghusne ke baare me pata lag chuka tha. Magar, Ava jaise pehle hi sab kuch plan kar ke chal rahi thi.

Seedhe taur par ladayi me na ghuste hue woh ped ki daali par baithe dur se sab kuch dekhti rahi.

'Yaha se mein uss par nazar rakh sakti hu. Jaise hi situation bigdegi, mein waha pahuch jaungi.'

Sirf Erica hi nahi thi, Veer ko unn janwaro se bhaagta dekh Ava ka badan bhi kaanp utha tha. Akele Veer ka waha ladna...! Woh kisi yoddha se kam nahi lag raha tha. Aur, uski woh nidarta se bhari chhavi Ava ke dil me aur nayi tarange utpann kar rahi thi.

Magar, akhir use Veer ke thikaane ka pata kaise laga? Yeh koi raaz nahi tha.

[Death Flag]

Wahi skill, jo Ava ne Veer par mark ki thi. Tab jab woh aur Suhana Las Vegas me uske concert me pehli baar daakhil hue the. Yeh wo skill thi jo ek vyakti ko mark kar ke rakhti thi. Ek seemit range tak uss vyakti ke zinda ya mrit hone ke baare me batati thi.

Tab se leke ab tak Veer par Death Flag ki woh marking bani hui thi. Kintu, Veer ke ruth ke jaane ke baad, Ava ne kuch kiya tha. Apne system ke saath. Uski system Lily ko bhi saari baatein yaad thi. Island par Veer jab use akela chorr ke chala gaya tha. Uss raat-

'Lily!'

[Yes?]

'Upgrade Death Flag's range!'

[What?]

'Suna nahi tumne? Maximize the range.'

[Jaanti ho na upgrade ke liye kitne points lagte hai? The first upgrade will take 5000 points. And, the second upgrade will take 10,000 points. Total 15,000 points.]

'Yes! Jaanti hu! Do it!'

[My dear Miss! Why are you so determined? Kis liye itne points ikhatta kiye the? Ab jab hum itna close hai Maisie's cure ke liye, you want to waste them on Death Flag's upgradation?]

'Lily!!!'

[Fine then!]

*Ding*

[Death Flag's range has been maxed out.]

'Good!'

Yahi woh pal tha jab Ava ki skill Death Flag ki range maximum ho chuki thi. Na sirf ab woh jeevit ya mrit ke baare me bataane me saksham thi balki, insaan ki ab location bhi woh saaf saaf dekh sakti thi. Veer duniya ke kisi bhi kone me hi kyu na rahe, agar Death Flag uss par marked thi toh Ava uski location ko asaani se dekh sakti thi.

Woh uss tak jab chaahe tab pahuch sakti thi. Aur, isi tarah woh yaha Veer ko dhundh paayi.

Veer ka achanak Mumbai chorr yaha China aana. Woh jaan chuki thi ki kuch gadbad thi. Yahi kaaran tha jo woh khud yaha chali aayi. Aur, uska sanshay ekdum sahi tha.

Aaj woh yaha na hoti toh Veer bahut bade jokhim me pad jaata. Kam se kam ab woh uske liye kuch samay nikaal sakti thi. Aur, yahi uska prayshchit tha. Bhale hi... Uski jaan hi kyu na chali jaaye.

[I just don't understand. Why are you so focused on him? Kya waqai aapko uss se-!?]

'He...! He gave me happiness, Lily. Jab mein use trap me fasaane ke liye uske khilaf chaale chal rahi thi. Tab woh meri khushiyo ka dhyaan rakhte hue mujhe protect kar raha tha. Can you imagine it?'




[...]

'Maine kabhi nahi socha tha unn moments ko mein firse enjoy kar paungi. Meri asli khushiyaan Mumbai me hi thi Lily. Jab mein chhoti thi. Mera bachpan...! Kaera aur Sonia ko chorr ke aane ke baad woh saari khushiyaan jaa chuki thi.'

[...]

'Veer ka saath jaise mujhe unhi lamho me le gaya. Par, kya kiya maine uske saath? I don't deserve his friendship. I don't deserve to be around him.'




Ho na ho, Veer hi woh kaaran tha jiski wajah se aaj Ava jeevit thi. Warna, France ki unn vardato ke baad usne-

[W-Wait!!! What are you doing?]

Uska uss pahaad ki choti par khade hona. Aur, neeche khaayi ki orr dekhna.

[D-Dear! Stop it! What the hell are you doing? H-Hey don't scare me! Please!]

'There's nothing left now! I must go as well! Lily...!'

[W-Wait!! N-Noooooo!]

Woh khud khushi karne jaa rahi thi. Aur usne apna perr aage badha bhi diya tha.

[Noooooooooooooo!!!!!]

Par, usi waqt Veer ke akhiri shabd uske mastishk me punah goonj gaye.

'Go and protect your loved one now.'

Aur, usne apne santulan ko girne se bacha liya.

[You idiot!!! You scared the shit outta me. Ye... Ye kya kar rahi thi dear? Whyyy?]

'I'm sorry-!!! *sniff* I'm sorry, Lily. I'm so sorry!!! Maine tumhare baare me zara bhi nahi socha. N-No-!! I didn't even think of him either-!!'

[Huh!?]

'Usi ne kaha tha na!? Th-Then I must protect him!'

[Y-You-!!!?]

*Clang* *Clang*

Ateet se baahar aate hue Ava ki aankhein saamne Jaw Long ke harr move ko padhne me vyast thi.

Woh prahar karti jaa rahi thi magar Jaw Long peeche fall back karte hue khud ko bacha le raha tha.

Jaw Long uss se direct fight nahi le raha tha. Pata nahi kyu, par woh Ava ke hathyar katana se kaafi bhaybheet sa nazar aa raha tha.

Ava ne apni tactic turant hi badli aur apni jeb se usne handgun nikaal seedha dur khade Jaw Long ki upar taan di.

'Kisi wajah se woh mujhse directly nahi lad raha hai. Agar woh long ranged fight hi chaahta hai toh theek hai. He can have a kiss of my bullet.'




*Bang*

Jaise Jaw Long ne kuch bhaanp liya. Woh tezz raftar me daudta hua apni jagah se bhaagne laga. Aur, Ava ki bullets apne nishaane se choonk gayi.

'Shit!! Kaash mere paas perfect aim ki koi skill hoti.'

*Bang* *Bang* *Bang*

Bullets gun ki nozzle se nikalti jaa rahi thi, par harr baar Jaw Long apni speed ke chalte unse bachta jaa raha tha. Saari bullets ya toh hawa me ya fir pedo ke tane par lag unke parchhatte udhedte hue nikal gayi.

Ava ko bhi mission mila hua tha. Magar, uska mission Jaw Long se bhidant ka nahi tha. Uska mission tha~

[Mission : Stall the time.
Description : Don't let your loved one die.
Rewards : ??]

Koi bhi penalty nahi dikh rahi thi. Iska matlab... Penalty death thi. Aur, system ko kho dena.

'Veer se ladne ke baad lagta hai ye aadmi kaafi thak chuka hai. I might be able to take him down.'

[Filhal toh wo hamari saari bullets se bach raha hai. Hume use jald se jald ghayal karna hoga.]

'Toh ek baar me ek bullet enough nahi haan? Alright then!'

Agle hi shan usne apni jacket khol andar se ek aur handgun nikali. Aur, dono handgun Jaw Long ke bheje ki orr taan usne trigger daba diya.




*Bang* *Bang*

Do sansanati hui bullets guns se nikal Jaw Long ki chithde udaane ko aayi. Lekin, lagatar tez gati se bhaag raha Jaw Long unhe chakma dene me qamyab raha. Magar, khel yahi samapt nahi hua tha. Fire karte hi Ava ne unn dono guns ko upar hawa me ucchaal diya. Guns hawa me upar gol ghumti hui gayi aur tabhi-

Ava ne apni jacket punah khol aur do handguns usme se nikali. Unse fir se bhaag rahe Jaw Long ki taraf nishana lagaya. Aur, iss baar jaise Jaw Long ke chehre par dehshat saaf nazar aa gayi.

*Bang* *Bang*

Hawa ko cheerte hue woh bullets uske maans me dhassne ko aayi aur Jaw Long darr ke chalte ped ke peeche jaa dubka. Woh bullets ped ke tane ko ukhaadte hue usme jaa dhansi.

Idhar Ava ne haath me pakdi dono guns ko bhi turant hi hawa me uchaal diya. Jaise hi usne ye guns hawa me feki, pichhli do guns jo usne pehle se hi hawa me feki hui thi woh gravity ke chalte tezi se neeche aayi.

Unhe punah haath me thaam usne firse-

*Bang* *Bang*

Aur, wapas se unhe hawa me uchhal diya. Upar feki gayi baaki ki do guns fir neeche aayi aur iss baar unhe thaam-

*Bang* *Bang*

Woh do guns hawa me fekti, do se fire karti aur fir unhe hawa me fekti aur pichli do guns se fire karti. Ek baar me hi... Woh 4 handguns istemal kar rahi thi.

Aur, ye sab kuch itni tezi se ho raha tha ki aam insaan ko bas Ava ke haath ki dhundhli aakritiyaan hi nazar aati. Uske haath after images bana rahe the. Guns itni tezi se hawa me uchhal ke neeche gir rahi thi aur wapas se hawa me jaa rahi thi ki pata laga paana mushqil tha kaun si gun pehli waali thi aur kaun si dusri.

Usne itni bullets ped pe daag di ki ped ka tana hi toot ke bikhar gaya. Jaw Long kisi bheegi billi ki tarah ek ped se dusre ped ki aadh me khud ko chhipane par majboor ho gaya.

Ab tak close ranged fight me woh bada hi guroor dikha raha tha. Par, bandook ke saamne aate hi woh dubak ke chhupne par vivash ho gaya.

[Such skill of handling weapons. She's a skilled warrior.]

Yaha tak ki uska khud ka system bhi Ava ki weapon handling ki tareef karne me peeche na raha.

'Kai! Agar, aise hi chalta raha toh-'

Woh mann me kehte hue ek ped ki aadh lene bhaaga jab tabhi-

*Bang*

*Squelch*

"Urrrghhh!"

"Finally! I got him!"

Akhir kaar ek bullet ne apna kaam kar hi diya. Kandhe ke paas aake bullet maans ko cheerte hue andar ghusi. Aur, Jaw Long ki ek dabi dard bhari karah muh se nikal gayi.

'Agility badhani hogi, Kai!'

[Long! Tumhare paas sirf 3000 points hi baaki hai.]

Kehte hue usne uske mann me hi full status dikha diya.







'Jaanta hu! Lekin, Aura vision ko upgrade karne ke liye mere paas paryapt points nahi. Agility ki zyada zaroorat hai.'

[Accha? Aur, sleep ka kya? Bina sleep ke points nahi badhne waale. Stats me points invest karna bekar hai.]

'...'

Jaw Long kuch na bola. Kai ki baat sahi thi. Agar, agility me points invest kar bhi diye to bina neend ke woh nahi badhne waale the.

[Intezar kiska kar rahe ho? Apne trump cards ka istemal karo. Aur, jald se jald ye ladayi khatam karo. Straight way se ghuse Li Renshu aur unke aadmi kahi mine tak na pahuch jaaye.]

'Hmm!'

Kai ki baat maante hi Jaw Long ke ird gird ki hawa badalne lagi. Woh poori tarah se gambheer ho gaya. Wahi, yaha Ava ki bullets ki saari magazines khatam ho chuki thi.

Woh ab apni katana ko haath me pakdi wapas se close combat ke liye taiyaar thi. Magar, Jaw Long ke haav bhaav use satark rehne par majboor kar rahe the.

Aur, fir-

*Ding*

['Berserk' has been equipped.]

*Ding*

['Berserk' has been activated.]




Agle hi shan Jaw Long ka saara intelligence dhadalle se neeche girne laga. Ek ke baad ek uske intelligence ke 150 points girte chale gaye. Aur, usi ke saath ye points uski 180 strength me judne lage. Jaha ek taraf intelligence ghat raha tha toh wahi dusri orr strength badhti jaa rahi thi.

Berserk! Ek aisa card jo intelligence aur strength stat ke beech apna game khelta tha. Ek aisa card jisme intelligence ka balidan dene ke baad uske saare points strength stat me liye jaa sakte the.

*Ding*

[Intelligence has reached zero.]

[Strength stat has reached 330.]

Intelligence ke saare ke saare points strength me jaa chuke the. Jaw Long ke ird gird ki hawa bhaari mehsoos hone lagi. Uske lambe baal hawa me lehrane lage.

330 ki strength. Akhir kitni taqat rakhti thi? Woh kisi pagal khule saand ki tarah ho chuka tha. Jo raaste me aaye kisi bhi insaan ke tukde tukde karne ko taiyaar tha.

[This is bad!!! I can feel it. He's using something. Dear! Distance leke hi fight lena. Woh kisi prakar ka card istemal kar raha hai. Uski taqat badhti hui mehsoos ho rahi hai. Be careful!]

Lily ki chinta janak awaaz Ava ke mann me goonji. Ava ki bauhe bhi bhay aur duwidha ke chalte sikudi hui thi. Jaw Long ka aura woh feel kar paa rahi thi.

Aur, tabhi-

"Haaaaaaaarrrggghhhh!!!"

Jaw Long dahaad maarte hue hawa me uchakta uski orr aaya. Ava ghabrate hue peeche koodi aur Jaw Long ka taqatvar mukka zameen par jaa gira.

*Boom*

Ava ne jaise hi uss jagah ko dekha jaha woh pehle khadi hui thi uski aankhein khauf ke maare fel gayi. Zameen ke chithde udd chuke the. Ek mukke se hi waha par crater bann gaya.

'Wh-What kind of power is he using?'

[Maine kaha tha na. Usne kisi prakar se apni strength badhayi hai. Warna iss tarah ka damage asaani se nahi kiya jaa sakta. Beware! Agar ek bhi attack hume laga, to hamare liye mushqil ho jayegi.]

'Yeah!'

Jaw Long par jaise bhoot sawar ho chuka tha. Ava ko maarne ke liye jaise hi usne dusra mukka feka, Ava peeche gulati maarte hue uss se distance bana ke bachi aur ped ki aadh lete hue peeche ho gayi.

Parantu, ped jaise hi Jaw Long ke mukke ke sampark me aaya-

*Smaaaashhhhh*

Aisa laga maano ped me kisi ne bomb laga ke chorr diya ho. Kyuki, kisi visfot ki tarah hi uske parchhatte udd gaye. Ped tukdo tukdo me toot ke hawa me bikhar gaya. Itna vishalkaay ped yu ek hamle se hi dhwast ho gaya. Ava ki haalat iss samay shabdo me bayaan kar paana mushqil tha. Usne aaj tak aisi taaqat ka namoona nahi dekha tha. Ghabrahat ab uske andar janm le chuki thi.

'Th-That's-!'

Woh abhi koi rann-neeti sochti ki tabhi kisi vyakti ki awaaz aayi.

"Hahaha! Koi bhi bhaag nahi sakta ab Lord. Maine saare pul ki rassiya kaat di hai. Ab sabko-"

Kehte hue woh nadaan tribe ka member jaise hi Jaw Long ke nazdeek aaya. Jaw Long ne uska kandha thaam use wahi jakad liya.

"Huh?"

Apne Lord ki bina aankhon ki putliyo waali chhavi qareeb se dekh uss tribe ke aadmi ka moot uski jaanghiya me hi nikal gaya.

"L-Lord?"

Aur, ye uske akhiri shabd the. Kyuki, palak jhapakte hi-

*Bammmm*

"A-Ah-!!!"

Ava ki aankhon me dehshat saaf nazar aayi. Saamne ka drishya dekh uska badan kaanp utha. Jaw Long ne aisa mukka maara ki uss tribe member ka sarr kisi tarbooj ki tarah fatt gaya. Khoon sahet dimag ke chhote chhote tukde, aur andhruni ang bhi kayi tukdo me vibhajit hote hue chaaro orr fel ke gir gaye. Uska bina sarr ka bacha hua shareer bhi ladkhada ke zameen par dhamm se gir pada.

Aur, vatavaran me khoon ki gandh fel gayi.

*Blurgh*

Ava ko vomiting jaisa feel hua. Usne iss tarah ki maut kabhi nahi dekhi thi. Neeche uss tribe member ke dimaag ke tukde, toh kahi aankh ki putliyaan, uske chehre ke alag alag ang dale hue the jo ab pehchan me bhi nahi aa rahe the.

Yahi tha Berserk card! Jo apno aur dushmano ke beech antar karne me asaksham tha. Jaw Long ne apna intelligence sacrifice kar strength ko apnaya tha. Ab 15 minute tak bas Berserk ka hi prakop chalne wala tha.

[He's a monster!]

'H-How am I gonna fight him?'

[Tabhi toh keh rahi hu. Iski koi zaroorat nahi. Just run and escape.]

'N-No Lily! I can't-! And, I won't! Mein use yaha chorr ke nahi jaa sakti.'

[You-!!!]

'I'm sorry, Lily. But please...! Help me this one last time.'

[ *sighs* Fine!]

*Ding*




['Vinona's Mark' has been equipped.]

['Vinona's Mark' has been activated.]

['Vinona's Mark' has been applied on the target.]

[20 minutes...! Sirf 20 minutes hai. Hume uss se tez rehna hoga. Tabhi uske attacks se bach payenge. Defensive hote hue uss par bas ek ek vaar karti jaana. 10 consequent hits lagte hi use 150% zyada dard pahuchega. Aur, bleed bhi apply ho jayega.]

'I know! Par, uss se bachna hi sabse bada challenge hai.'

[Lekin, hume karna hoga.]

'How many points do I have?'

[See for yourself!]

*Ding*







Ava ka full status uske samaksh tha. Points ki kami dekh usne apne nichle honth ko gusse me daanto tale daba liya.

'Sirf 1500!?'

[You purchased 'Rekkaken' and 'Judo Combat' last month. Aur, Masie's cure ke liye itne saare points Death Flag me istemal ho gaye the. Mission bhi itne time baad mila hai. Of course, we have a shortage of points.]

'Damn it!'

Ava zyada derr tak apni vartalap Lily ke sang na kar paayi kyuki, Jaw Long chhalaang maar apni jagah se uda aur use maarne ke liye aaya.

Vinona's Mark activate hote hi Ava apne Judo combat style ko apnaate hue stance me aa gayi.

'Come!'

Weapon Master card ki wajah se woh harr hathyaar ko chalaane me saksham thi. Magar, Judo Combat usne ab tak kisi pe istemal nahi ki thi. Ye skill nayi thi. Aur, uska pehla hi pratidwandi Jaw Long tha.

Jaw Long ka mukka uski kamar par lagne ko aaya toh Ava chhalaang maarte hue peeche hui aur perr zameen par rakhte hi-

*Whoosh*

Woh jhatke se Jaw Long ke peeche aayi. Aur, ek strike seedhe Jaw Long ki peeth par maari.

*Thuck*

Maarte hi woh hawa ki gati se peeche hatt gayi. Aur, ye ekdum sahi faisla tha. Jaw Long ne apni laat itni tezi me peeche ghumayi ki agar woh waha khadi rehti toh uski haddiya toh tootati hi saath hi woh kayi metre dur jaake girti.

Idhar strike padte hi Jaw Long ko jaise kaafi kshati pahuchi. Vinona's Mark marked target par 120% damage zyada karta tha. Ava ki strength 150 par thi.

150 strength ka 120% zyada damage. Matlab 330 ka physical damage. Ava khud bhi nahi jaanti thi ki woh itna damage kar sakti thi. Usne kabhi bhi Vinona's Mark ka itna istemal nahi kiya tha. Aur, na hi Judo Combat ka.

Woh nahi jaanti thi ki uska damage Jaw Long ke damage ke barabar pahuch chuka tha. Ya yu kahe ki usne uss detail par utna dhyan hi nahi diya tha. Jaw Long ko jaise hi peeth par woh vaar pada, uski peeth ki maans peshiyaan andar hi andar phatne ko ho gayi.

[Bas 9 hits aur...!]

Bleed apply karne ke liye Ava ko 9 baar aur vaar karna tha. Aur, woh bhi bina ek bhi attack apne upar liye. Tabhi, uske attacks consequent kehlaate.

Woh datt kar aage badhi. Magar, pichli baar wali chaal iss baar qamyab na ho saki. Jaisi hi woh Jaw Long ki taraf feint attack karne ko aayi.

Sheba na jaane achanak kaha se uske bagal se apne panje felaata use nochne ko aa gaya. Woh ghabrati hui jaise hi mudi-

Uss se yahi par galti ho gayi. Sheba apne pankh fad-fadata hua wapas upar uda aur Jaw Long ko yaha mauka mil gaya.

[Shit...! Dear, careful!]

Parantu, kaafi derr ho chuki thi. Ava jaisi hi wapas palti-

*Pooooowwwwwww*

Jaw Long ka punch uske pait par pada aur woh hawa me udti hui kayi feet dur jaa giri. Uske muh se khoon nikalne laga.

Internal bleeding!!!

[Dear...!]

Lily chintit swar me chillaayi. Aisa lag raha tha maano andar ki saari atadiyo par 100 kilo ka wazan rakh diya ho. Uski saansein ukhdi ukhdi prateet hone lagi. Jaw Long ka endurance 200 par tha. Magar, wahi Ava ka maatr 150. Zahir hai uski dard sehen karne ki kshamta Jaw Long se kam thi.

"Urgghhh!!!"

[D-Dear-!!]

Na chaahte hue bhi Ava apne ghutno par gir padi.

'It hurts like hell...! Urrghhh! L-Lily!'

[Y-Yes!!?]

'Aisa lag raha hai jaise andar se kisi ne mere ango ko noch ke daba diya ho. Ahhh-!!'

[Bear with it, dear. Just bear with it.]

Magar, use react karne ka samay hi nahi diya gaya. Jaw Long uske saamne aake khada ho gaya.

[N-No-!!! Dear!!! RUNNN!]

***

Jab Jaw Long aur Ava dur ladne me vyast the. Toh wahi Veer apni neend me kaafi recovery kar chuka tha.

Pari ne Beowulf ko kuch derr ON rakh Veer ki healing ko badha diya tha. Aur, jaise hi bleeding band hui, usne use wapas se band kar diya. Kyuki, woh jaanti thi ki Beowulf aage kaam aane waala tha.

Veer ki palke jhapki... Aur, woh apne hosh me aaya. Neend ki wajah se usne jo points pehle add kiye the woh ab invest ho chuke the.

[Are you awake now?]

'Pari-!!!'

Saamne ka dhundhla drishya jaise hi spasht hua toh Veer ne paaya ki uske saamne Erica baithi hui thi. Erica bhi jaise use hosh me aata dekh chehek uthi.

Erica : Ahhh!!! Tumhe hosh aa gaya!!!?

Veer (breathes heavily) : Erica???

Erica (nods) : Haan! Tum theek ho na?

Veer : T-Tum yaha?

Erica : Uh-huh!

Veer : Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?

Erica : M-Mein tumhe yaha se le jaane aayi hu obviously. Jaw Long bahut zyada shaktishali hai. Hum abhi uske level par nahi hai.

Veer : Jaw Long! Th-That's right! W-Wait-!!! Ava...! Ava kaha hai?

Jaise ab use sahi se hosh aaya. Woh uth ke baitha aur apne shareer ko idhar udhar mod apne dheele aur ghayal purjo ko usne jaise sahi kiya.

Erica : Ava?? Kaun Ava?

Veer : Wahi jisne mujhe bachaya. Jo yaha aayi thi...! Jaw Long mujhe maarna aa raha tha aur woh-

Erica : Oh tumhara matlab woh ladki? System holder?

Veer : Yeah!!

Erica : Wahi toh jab se Jaw Long se bhidi hui hai.

Veer : She's fighting Jaw Long?

Jab Veer ke chehre par uss ladki ke liye chinta ke bhaav Erica ne dekhe toh woh asahaj sa mehsoos karte hue tapaak se puchi,

Erica : K-Kaun hai woh ladki?

Veer : Ava-!!! She's none other than... Natalia Martin!

Erica (stands up) : Whaaatttt???

Apne pita ke wahi bol Erica ko fir yaad aa gaye. Chaahe kuch bhi ho jaaye Natalia Martin par bharosa mat karna. Aur, yaha woh usi Natalia Martin ke bharose pehle hi baithi hui thi.

Erica : U-Uss par bharosa nahi kar sakte hum. Hai na?

Uske sawal par Veer khamosh raha. Uski chuppi ko dekh Pari ne kaha.

[Boy-!!! What are you thinking?]

'Woh move...! Maine wo knife feki thi uss Jaw Long ki taraf.'

[Yeah, so? Pata laga liya hai humne already ki uske paas koi dodging skills nahi hai.]

'Ho sakta hai...! Par-! Maine woh sirf isliye nahi feki thi.'

[Huh!?]

'Aura vision!!! Non living things nahi dekh sakti-!!'

Pari ne jaise hi ye suna uske dil ne jaise ek dhadkan phaand li. Agar woh yaha uske saamne khadi hoti toh uske badan me khade hue raungte Veer saaf saaf dekh paata.

[You fucking-! Hahahahaha!!!!]

Woh zorro se hassne lagi.

Aura vision non living things nahi dekh sakti thi jab tak ki use upgrade na kiya jaaye. Yahi kaaran tha jo Jaw Long Ava ke dwara nikaali gayi katana se itna bhaybheet hoke dur bhaag raha tha.

Kyuki, use katana dikhayi hi nahi de rahi thi. Woh sirf Ava ke haath ke movements ko padh andaaza laga ke uss se ladd raha tha. Ava ke haath me hathyaar kitna lamba tha woh bas iska anumaan hi laga sakta tha. Aur, isliye woh Ava ki guns se bhi bhaagta raha. Na hi woh guns dekh paa raha tha aur na hi bullets. Kyuki, ye sab non living things thi.

Veer ne na sirf woh knife fek ke ye check kiya ki Jaw Long ke paas koi dodging skills thi ya nahi, balki ye bhi check kar liya tha ki Jaw Long ne Aura vision upgrade ki hui thi ya nahi. Aur, isi ke chalte use ye baat bhi pata lag gayi ki Jaw Long ke paas Aura vision ko upgrade karne ke paryapt points nahi the.

[If I would have been in my physical form. I swear I would have crushed your head while hugging you. Hahahahahahaha!!!]

Pari ka excitement iss waqt charam pe tha. Agar woh saamne hoti toh uske chehre par ek khaufnak muskan feli hui hoti.

'It's time for Round 2!'

Gehri saans lete hue Veer uth khada hua. Badan abhi bhi dard kar raha tha. Ghaav abhi bhi gehre the. Magar, samay yaha baith ke araam farmaane ka nahi tha.

Erica : U-Utho mat! Just rest! Bleeding abhi abhi band hui hai. Agar, tum zyada chaloge firoge to ho sakta hai firse shuru ho jaaye.

Veer : I need to go-!

Erica : What???

Veer : Erica! Kya tum mujhe yaha reh ke protect kar rahi thi?

Erica : Uh-huh! M-Mujhe mission bhi mila tha.

Usne jaise hi bola, uske mann me tabhi ghanti bhi baj uthi.

*Ding*

['Mission : Safeguard Veer until he recovers' is completed.]

*Ding*

[You have been rewarded with the skill 'Basic Seer Vision.']

[Skill : Basic Seer Vision.
Description : Allows the host to witness all the events that transpired at a particular place within an hour prior from the running time.]

Erica : O-Oh! Mission poora ho gaya.

Veer : Thanks!

Erica : Ehh??

Veer : Meri safety ka dhyan rakhne ke liye thanks. You... have grown up!

Erica : ...!!!?

Veer : Now I need to fulfill my role.

Erica : Wait-! Tum iss haalat me-

*Whoosh*

Kintu, uski baat adhoori hi reh gayi. Kyuki, Veer hawa ke jhonke ki tarah waha se jaa chuka tha.

Erica (shouts) : Veeeeerrrrrr!!!!

***

'I think... This is the end, Lily!'

[Noooo-!!! Get up and run!!!]

'I... I can't-! Mere perr kaanp rahe hai.'

Jaw Long uske saamne uski maut bann ke khada hua tha. Ek hit me hi Ava ka shareer atyadhik damage le chuka tha. Endurance kam hone ka nateeja tha ye.

Jaw Long bhi kaafi ghayal tha. Magar, Berserk use tike rehne ki himmat de raha tha. Usne apna haath hawa me uthaaya aur uss tribal ke aadmi ki tarah woh Ava ke sarr ke chithde udaane hi wala tha jab-

Bagal se aati ek zordaar kick ne use dur girne par majboor kar diya. Jab Ava ne saari umeedein chorr di thi, tab ek baar fir Veer uske saamne aake khada ho gaya.

Ava : !!!??

Veer uski taraf peeth kar ke khada hua tha. Woh nahi jaanta tha ki iss waqt Ava ki aankhon me aasu the.

Veer : I told you to never show me your face. Right?

Ava : ...!

Woh khamosh rahi. Apna sarr jhukaate hue woh apne hontho ko daanto se kaat khud ko dosh dene lagi. Kya kar sakti thi? Woh apne dil ke aage bebas thi.

Veer ne aage kuch na kaha. Woh bas Jaw Long ki taraf daud pada. Aur, idhar Ava ke chehre ke bhaav taajub me tab badle jab use apne mann me woh notification sunayi diya.

*Ding*

[Veer's favorability has increased to 20.]

Ava bas aashcharya me dur jaate Veer ki peeth ko dekhti reh gayi.

'V-Veer-!!?'

Veer Jaw Long se bhid baitha. Berserk ko khatam hone me abhi 2 minute baaki the. Woh tez raftar ke saath uske paas pahucha. Jaw Long ne jaise hi Veer ki taraf apni kick maarni chaahi-

Veer neeche jhuk gaya. Zordar force waali kick uske sarr ke upar se nikal gayi. Aur, Veer ka taqat se bhara mukka seedha Jaw Long ki jaangh pe jaa ke laga.

*Pooowwww*

Uska santulan bigda aur woh ladkhadaya. Mauka dekh Veer seedhe uske peeche gaya. Uske dono haath Jaw Long ki kamar par lipte-

Aur, agle hi shan itna bhari bharkam Jaw Long hawa me tha. Peeche se Veer ne use uthaaya aur peeche hi le jaate hue-

*Baaaaaaammmmm*

Neeche zameen par use sarr ke bal patak diya. Zameen par ek crater bann gaya.

Haafte hue Veer Jaw Long ki kamar ke peeche se baahar nikla. Sarr par bahut zorr ke padi thi Jaw Long ko.

'Did I... win?'

Veer abhi khade hue ye soch hi raha tha kyuki Jaw Long koi bhi harqat nahi kar raha tha. Par, achanak hi-

'Shit-!!!'

Jaw Long ne akasmat hi uske ankle ko apne haath me jakad liya. Uski pakad itni mazboot thi ki uss se chhootna namumkin sa tha.

Jaw Long uchakta hua Veer ko apne saath hawa me upar le gaya aur fir-

Usne itni zorr se neeche Veer ko patka ki ek shockwave uss poore ilaaqe me fel gayi. Sahi samay par Pari ne Bone Reaper equip kar liya warna Veer ki haddiyon ko aaj choorma bann jaata.

"Veeeeeer-!!", Ava dur se hi kamzor awaaz ke saath uski orr chillaayi. Lekin, koi fayda na tha.

Veer ka ang ang dard se tadap raha tha. Magar, Jaw Long wahi par nahi ruka. Usne punah Veer ke perr ko kheencha aur use-

*Craaaassshhhhh*

Ped se bhedte hue ped ke tukde kar diye. Veer ek baar fir khoon se lathpath dur jaata hua gira.

Jo bhi bleeding pehle ruki thi woh dheere dheere wapas se behna shuru ho rahi thi.

[Agar, aise hi chalta raha toh tum blood loss se hi marr jaoge.]

Tabhi-

*Swoosh* *Swoosh*

*Swoosh* *Swoosh*

Kuch teer Veer ke ird gird golaayi me jaa ke zameen par dhansne lage. Parantu, woh sirf teer nahi the. Unke chorr par insaano ki asli khopdi latki hui thi.

Berserk ka samay samapt ho chuka tha. Jaw Long wapas se apne hosh me aa chuka tha.

"Shebaaaaaa-!!!!"

Baaj ko awaaz lagaate hi woh baaj jaise ishara samajh kahi udta hua chala gaya.

Jaw Long fir Ava ki taraf badhne laga. Usne Ava ke baalo ko apne haath me jakda aur use kheenchte hue le jaane laga.

"Nnnghhh!!!"

Veer ne apni ardh khuli aankhon se jab ye dekha toh himmat kar woh uthne ki koshish karne laga. Magar, dard ke chalte woh wapas se gir gaya.

'N-No-!!!'

[Tumhari chaheeti ko baalo se pakad ke woh le jaa raha hai. Toh? Ab kya karoge tum?]

'Pari-!!'

[Fufu~ Yes?]

Bhaagti hui aayi Erica ne jab ye manzar dekha toh ek sihran uske badan me fel gayi. Ava ko bachaane ke liye usne apna boomerang Jaw Long ki orr feka.

Toh, Jaw Long ne ek haath se uss boomerang ko pakad liya.

Erica : K-Kaise-!?

Woh majbooran uski orr bhaagi. Peeche nahi baith sakti thi. Magar, nateeja wahi. Erica ko pakad ke jaise hi Jaw Long ne ek ped se bheda, bechari Erica ke sarr se khoon behna shuru ho gaya. Sirf do mukke hi kaafi the Erica ko ghaayal karne ke liye. Dono haatho me do sundariyo ke kesho se unhe jakadte hue Jaw Long unhe zameen me ghaseetata hua le jaane laga.

Veer apna haath aage badha ke unki taraf jaane chaahta tha. Lekin, uska shareer jawab de raha tha.

[What are you gonna do now?]

Pari toh jaise uski iss haalat par lutf le rahi thi. Jaise woh kuch soch ke baithi hui thi.

'A-Ava-!! Erica!!!'

Jaw Long ne unn dono ko bhi ek ek jagah par patak diya. Aur, unn dono ke ird gird bhi teer zameen par baari baari khuse hue the. Aur, unke chhor se insaano ki khopdiyaan latak rahi thi.

Jaw Long zameen par baitha. Aur, tabhi-

*Keaaaarrrrrr*

Sheba akaash me udta hua uski orr aane laga. Uske panjo me kuch tha jo bilbila ke tadap raha tha. Ek murga!!!

Murge ko hawa me chorrte hue Sheba wapas se ped ki daali par baithne chala gaya. Toh wahi Jaw Long ne uss murge ko pakda aur apni vidhi ko shuru karne ke liye taiyaar ho gaya.

Uske muh se vichitra bhaasha me bol nikalne lage. Aisi bhaasha... Jise Veer kya, kisi ka bhi system pehchaan na saka.

[He's using Gong Tau!!!]

Pari ke bol tabhi Veer ke mann me goonje.

Gong Tau ek black magic skill thi. Aur, iska upyog karne ke peeche ek hi kaaran tha ~ Laalach!

Gong Tau ek vashikaran ki kriya thi. Jiski madad se targets ko control kiya jaa sakta tha. Vashikaran hone ke baad agar targets ko maar diya jaaye toh unke saare cards aur skills Jaw Long ke paas aa jaane waale the.

Isi laalach ke peeche woh iss kriya ka upyog karne laga. Woh kuch padhta jaa raha tha. Aur, nirantar uski awaaz badhti jaa rahi thi.

Achanak hi-

*Rattle* *Rattle*

Teer par khusi khopdiyaan apne aap kampan karne lagi. Kad-kad ki awaaz ke saath woh thar-tharaane lagi. Hawaaein tezz ho gayi. Aur, Jaw Long ne fir uss murge ko pakda-

*Slit*

Uske gale ke paas ek cut maara...! Murge ko latkaya toh uska khoon neeche tapakte hue kisi vichitra si dikhne waali cheez par girne laga.

Khoon kuch maatra me giraate hi Jaw Long ne uss murge ko feka toh murga apni peeth ke bal hawa me perr kiye zameen par gir pada. Jaw Long ne ye dekh haami bhari. Iska matlab tha ki aatmao ne uski kriya ko sweekar kar liya tha.

Aur tabhi-

Woh murga jiska gala kaata gaya tha woh apne aap uth khada hua aur pankh fad-fadaata hua waha se bhaag utha. Idhar Jaw Long apni kisi prakar ki tantra vidyao me wapas se lag gaya.

Aur, ab Veer ko apne shareer me kuch gadbad mehsoos hone lagi. Sirf Veer hi nahi, Ava aur Erica ka bhi yahi haal tha.

[He's taking control of your body...! Agar tumne kuch nahi kiya. Toh, sab khatam hai.]

'P-Pari-!! Help me-!!!'

Veer ki bahut kamzor awaaz uske mann me aayi.

[Hmm? I didn't hear you-!?]

Jaw Long ke garajte bol apna asar kar rahe the. Veer samet Ava aur Erica ke haath apne aap unke gale par jaake jakad gaye. Woh sabhi apne apne gale ko kass ke dabaane lage. Erica aur Ava dono ki aankhon me aasu the.

Jaha ek taraf Ava haar maante hue sab kuch sweekar kar chuki thi aur mayus aankhein liye Veer ko dekhti jaa rahi thi jaise ye antim shan tha ek dusre ko akhiri baar dekhne ka toh wahi Erica ka chehra kuch aur keh raha tha. Use dekh ke lag raha tha maano jaise woh marrna nahi chaahti thi. Bebasi uske chehre par saaf jhalak rahi thi. Aankhon se mote mote aansu uske gaalo se behte hue gir rahe the.

'Pariiii-!!!'

[Hmm?]

'H-Help me-!!'

[Ohh? Mujhe kuch sunayi nahi de raha! Fufu~]

'I beg you-!! Please!!!'

[Ohh!! Waqai?]

'Please!!'

Veer ki saansein ukhdi ukhdi aa rahi thi. Pari kuch derr shaant rahi. Veer ke haath apne aap gale ko dabaate hue kasste jaa rahe the.

"Urrghhh!"

'P-Pari...!!!'

Agle hi shan Pari ki awaaz thodi badal gayi. Maano jaise woh bhayanak gusse me uss se baat kar rahi thi.

[THEN...! ARE YOU WILLING TO GIVE YOUR BODY TO ME???]

'Huh!??'

[DO YOU WANT ME TO TAKE CONTROL? TO DEFEAT THIS PUNY LITTLE BASTARD?]

'H-Haan-!!'

[ARE YOU WILLING TO HAND OVER YOUR POINTS TO ME???]

Woh chillaayi.

'Haan! *Gwakh* H-Haan!'

[THEN GIVE THEM TO ME-!!!]

'Hmmm!!'

[YOU ARE DOING THIS BY YOUR OWN ACCORD. RIGHT???]

'Y-Yes-!!!'

[THEN GIVE ME... THOSE POINTS!]

'Hmmm-!'

Aur, tabhi Veer ke 5692 points jo usne emergency ke liye bachaaye the. Woh dhadalle se ghatne lage.

[YES...! YES...! GIVE THEM TO ME!! THAT'S RIGHT!!! KEEP IT COMING!! THE MORE THE BETTER...!]

Woh points kaha jaa rahe the, unka istemal kaha ho raha tha Veer kuch nahi jaanta tha. Woh toh Pari ki baat maan vivash hote hue apne saare points daav par laga diya tha.

[YOU MUST THANK ME LATER KID-!!! IT'S YOUR GOOD LUCK THAT I WAS HERE-!!! OTHERWISE, YOU WOULD'VE BEEN DEAD!!!]

Veer ki consciousness dheere dheere jaane lagi. Aur, kuch hi shano me woh behosh ho chuka tha. Pari ne poore shareer pe takeover kar liya tha. Ghatate ghatate Veer ke saare points zero par aake ruk gaye.

[Hahahahahahahaha-!!!]

Pari paaglo ki tarah hass rahi thi.

[Hahahaha-!!! THIS BODY...! IT'S WEAK!!! BUT YOU'RE LUCKY KID-!! BECAUSE I'M THE ONE POSSESSING IT NOW.]

Veer ka badan jab gale ko dabaate hue gir pada toh Erica ne rote hue apni nazre ferr li. Use laga ki Veer iss duniya se jaa chuka hai. Magar, Ava ki nigaahein ekdum Veer ke shareer ke upar sthir tiki hui thi.

Death Flag me aisa koi bhi notification nahi aaya tha. Woh jaanti thi ki Veer zinda tha.

Aur, fir-

Achanak hi Veer ka shareer gravity ke viruddh uski iccha ke bina upar uthne laga. Aas paas ke neeche bikhre sookhe patte kaapne lage. Uske uthate hi uski zulfo ne uski aankhon ko dhak liya.

Ava, Erica samet Jaw Long khud palat ke use dekhne par majboor ho gaya. Ye chal kya raha tha?

Jaw Long ko poora yakeen tha ki Veer kaafi damage le chuka tha. Uske baad bhi iss tarah uth khade hona...! Zaahir hai use hairangi honi hi thi. Use kya, yaha par uski jagah koi bhi system holder maujood hota toh uska bhi yahi reaction hota.

Na pehle kabhi aisa kuch dekha gaya, na suna gaya aur na hi aisa kuch hone ki kisi system holder ne kabhi kalpana bhi kari thi. Kintu, Jaw Long sab kuch mehsoos kar paa raha tha. Aur, ye sab kuch asal me ho raha tha. Uske saamne khada yeh naujavan ladka iska jeeta jaagta udahran tha ki aisa kuch bhi sambhav tha.

Veer utha. Uska muh achanak hi khula aur usne ek gehri saans muh se chorri. Kintu, raat me jangal me thand hone ke chalte uski garam saans dhue me tabdeel ho gayi. Aur, dhua uske chehre se chhatate hi uske hontho par ek bhayanak, daanavi aur kutil muskaan fel gayi.





'Huh!?'

Jaw Long ka badan iss baar ek jhatka khaaya, pal bhar ke liye shareer par ruye khade ho gaye. Thand iska kaaran nahi thi. Uski vidhi beech me hi ruk gayi. Harr insaan ka aura neele rang ka hota tha.

Par... Par kabhi bhi usne aisa kuch aaj tak nahi dekha tha. Veer ka aura...

Veer ke badan se jo aura nikal raha tha. Woh pichli baar ki tarah neele rang ka nahi tha. Uske badan se... Iss baar... Woh bhayanak gehre kaale rang ke aura ki lapto se ghira hua tha. Aura keval andar hi nahi tha. Balki, Veer ke badan ke baahar ird gird bhi lapte maarta hua nikal raha tha.

Aisa lag raha tha jaisa nark se koi bhayanak pishaach dharti par aa gaya ho. Jaw Long ne iske pehle bas aatmao ki nakaratmak urjao ke aura ko hi halke kaale rang se lipta dekha tha. Aura vision urjao ko bhi halke rango se dikhaane me saksham thi.

Bhoot, pret, pishaach jeevit praani nahi hote the lekin nakaratmak urja ka strotra zaroor hote the isliye, unka bhi kahi na kahi thoda bahut aura hota tha. Magar, woh aura itna prachand nahi hota tha. Kaali lapte zaroor hoti thi par behad maamuli si. Par, idhar-

Veer ke badan se bheeshan kaali lapte aise nikal rahi thi jaise maano uss par kisi ne aag laga di ho. Bas, farq itna tha ki lapte peeli nahi kaali thi. Beshaq, ye lapte kisi ko bhi dikhayi nahi de sakti thi.

Veer ke naye roop ko dekh Jaw Long do qadam apne aap peeche ki orr chala gaya. Woh samajh raha tha ki savdhani baratna kitna zaroori tha yaha par.

Kintu, Veer poori tarah se shaant khada hua tha. Uski aankhein uske baalo se chhipi hui thi aur muh se nikalti saans nirantar thand ke chalte bhaap me badalti jaa rahi thi. Uske hontho par saji muskan kahi se bhi uski prateet nahi ho rahi thi. Lag raha tha maano uske andar kisi aur jeev ne apna vaas kar liya ho. Kisi aur ne uske shareer par qabza kar liya ho.

Iss waqt uska roop bhayanak, raudra, aur prachand maalum pad raha tha. Yuhi nahi Jaw Long ne apne qadam peeche liye the. Chaah ke bhi Veer ki iss badli hui sthiti ke baare me use kuch pata nahi lag paa raha tha. Yaha tak ki uska system bhi iss paristhiti se anjaan tha.

[Kuch gadbad hai. Samajh nahi aa raha ki kaun se card ya skill ka istemal kiya gaya hai.]

Ava jo Veer ko uthata dekh ek raahat ki saans li, usne apni katana ko hawa me feka jo Veer ke bagal se jaa ke zameen par khus gayi.

Ava : Take it... Veer!!!

Magar, Veer ke muh se uske baad jo bol nikle woh uske nahi the. Awaaz uski hi thi, parantu bol Pari ke the.

"I don't need any weapons...! I AM THE WEAPON!!!"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
This update consists of 10.6k words. Ye thoda aur lamba jaata magar kisi bhi cheez ki zaroorat se zyada maatra haanikarak hoti hai. Isliye, ise yahi rokna sahi tha. Agle update me sab kuch samapt hai. Maine keh hi diya tha ki fight 4 updates legi. Teen update ho chuke hai. Bas ek baaki hai. Aur, uske baad shayad ek update aur rahega jo arc ke closure ke liye rahega. Update bahut late aaya hai jaanta hu. Par, mein vivash hu dosto. Baaki, likes thokne ka aur revos dene ka. Target apna 200 hi hai. Pahucha do. Agla update jald dene ki koshish rahegi.
Dhanyavad!

Bro update bohot jayda mast tha
But jo ya last me veer ke sath hoaa ha vo kosh pele nahi pada matlab pari me koi skill ya koi card purchase kiya ha ya pari khod aayi ha for only fight

 

[ironman123]

Bro is baar jayda wait mat karvana is week me hi next update da dene baad me jo next arc ho ga us me time la ka de dene update but is arc ka last update jaldi dene ki koshish kerna