Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

[Werewolf]

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Latest Update - Update 201 ​

 

[Silent lover]

Kal ka intezar rahega

 

[Werewolf]

DING such a level up update zabardast work no words to describe completely superb next update kya hoga soch ke dahi ho raha hai keep posting

Thanks a lot. Agla update kal raatri me. Keep supporting.

Bahut hi jabardast update aur jaisa ki long ke baare mein bataya gaya tha pahle waisa hi menacing hai woh aur saath hi jangli janwar ka hamla bahut hi thrilling and nail biting the iss update mein, hope yea Ladayi Thodi lambi jaayegi aur humko Veer ke saath Jaw Long, Erica aur Renshu ke true potential ke baare mein pata chalega aur toh aur Renshu ke sirf 3 hi Close ally hai jahan ki Erika ka 5 aur Veer ke ahem... Well ginne ke liye bhi ungliya kam pad rahi hai Favourability section mein

3-4 update ki ladayi hai. 1 update humne dekh hi liya. 2 ya 3 update aur honge. Sirf Veer hi nahi hai. Renshu Erica bhi hai iss ladayi me. So... Itne updates tak jaa sakti hai fight.

Erica student hai, agar uske status par dhyaan diya ho toh. Woh allies uske college ke hai. Thanks btw. Keep supporting.

To ab tak aapne hume Veer ki favorability Erica aur Garofano ke liye dikhai kyu nhi? Hume vanchit karke kyu rakha h abhi tak? This is very bad.

Arre dikha dunga madam

Pull ke tootne ke baad bhi apni Stealth skill use kar ke Erica magarmachon ko avoid kar ke nadi paar kar sakti hai...

Shuru me apni ego aur apne pita ki blind worship karne ke kaaran laga tha ki Erica ek sadhaaran system holder hai, lekin uske stats, skills, cards aur sabse jyada level dekh kar pata chala ki weh bhi kitni powerful hai. Aur yeh sab aise hi fokat me nahi milta, usne yeh earn kiya hoga. Bass, abhi tak uska saamna kisi apne se powerful system holder se nahi hua hai. She lacks that experience., weh bhi ab mil jayega.

Erica stealth me maahir hai. Combat me nahi. Combat uska forte nahi. You'll come to know better in the later updates...

Shandaar...kya hi kahein.... Khtrnak jung jari hai.... Kuch kahenge to next update ke baad hii

Dhanyavad

action packed update bro
renshu and party traaped hue hai unhe ek aur system holder ke baare pata hi nahi tha
wahi veer ko bhi idea nahi tha ka uska pala kis tarah ke dangerous situation se hoga
abhi bhi wo sirf bhaag aur bach raha hai lekin dekhne layak hoga jab wo reaction dega kaise wo
apne uper humla karne wale ko harayega
aur renshu kaise bachenge uss naye system holder se
keep going

Yup. Abhi toh jaise taise kar ke animals ko stall karna hoga. Baaki dekhte hai ki kya way dhundhta hai Veer Jaw Long se nipatne ka. Thanks btw.

Bahut bahut dhanyawad sir ji
Maha mega update Dene ke liye
Aise hi aage mega update update dete rajiye

Dhanyavad. Aise hi saath bane rahiyega.

bohat zabadast gazab update tha me samajh raha tha 1 taraf sirf akela jaw long or dosri taraf 3 system holder jaw long inka kia he bigar lega lekin isne to sabki band baja ke rakhi hy dekhte hy veer yaha se kese bach ke nikalta hy eagerly waiting for next update

Yahi soch ke toh Veer bhi ghus Gaya tha.
Ab anjaam dekh lo.
Kuch na kuch tareeqa khojna padega warna woh waha maara jayega. Dhanyavad wese... Aise hi saath bane rehne ka.

Wah Bhai kya scene hey Hollywood web series se Kum nahi once again thanks this masterpiece..

Thanks a lot. Keep supporting.

Ladai ki intensity se ubhar kar aur baatein notice kari, Veer ki status window me abhi bhi Suhana, Kaera, Tej aur Purvi ki relationship ke aage (?) sign hai. Wo gane ke bol yaad aa gaye, 'Is pyar ko kya naam doon'.

Jo ki laazmi hai.

Jahan Suhana apne marriage commitment se, Kaera confusion se, Tej aur Purvi apni existing relationship se lad rahi hain, wahin jeet to pyar ki hi hogi.

Dekhte hai kya hota hai.

Ek baat aur, mujhe Arohi ka character bahut interesting aur strong lag raha hai, she has the potential to become a successful business woman in the same league as that of Suhana, Kaera and Sonia, and she has no confusion about her love for Veer.

Lag raha hai? She has that ability already.
Arohi is the most calm character in the whole story. She hardly panics and loses her decisiveness. She will be the major asset for Veer later. But about love part...

She has the confusion. confusion sirf Kavya ko nahi hai. Use farq nahi padta kyuki woh zyada faaltu baatein nahi sochti. Agar Veer use pasand hai matlab pasand hai. Baaki bhaad me jaaye.

But unlike kavya, Arohi mature person hai aur Veer ki hi tarah future consequences ke baare me soch ke chalti hai. Woh janti hai ki ye sab sahi nahi, par ise tackle kaise kare iske baare me uske paas koi idea nahi hai. She's confused. Ye Disembowler's arc me dekhenge hum ki Arohi Veer se door bhaagti hai ya fir sab kuch accept karti hai.

 

[Jitu0786]

Wait for nxt update bro

 

[Werewolf]

Mind blowing mind fucking update Werewolf Bhai.

Dhanyavad bhai.

Itna lamba maha mega update tha, still it feels like ye to shuru hote hi khatam ho gya, just because of your extraordinary writing and the craziness your put in this update.

Thanks man. Lamba likhne me haalat kharab ho jaati hai sach me. Jab padhne me hi aadha ghanta lag jayega, toh socho use likhne me kitna samay gaya hoga.

Jaisa ki mene guess Kiya tha ki sirf Renshu ne hi kisi system holder ko nahi bulaya balki jaw long ne bhi system holder bulaya hai.

Internal matter me kya chal raha hai ye toh last ke updates me hi ujagar hoga. Abhi toh hum assumptions hi Maan sakte hai. For now we can say jaw Long ne kisi ke saath collaborate kiya hai.

And uske pass weapon specifically archery se related koi skill hai. Veer ki to halat tight ho gyi hai, Garofano ne isiliye warn Kiya tha ki bhulkar bhi jaw long se sidhe bhidne ki galti mat karna.

Actually pata... Garofano ko khud nahi pata tha ki Jaw Long aisa kuch istemal karta hai. Usne toh bas Veer ko savdhani ke liye kaha tha ki waha mat jaana. Maana ki favor return karna hai par wo kaam straight way me jaa ke bhi kiya jaa sakta tha. Garofano Veer ko khatre se door rehne ke liye keh rahi thi.

Jaise crimson ke pass sharks ko tame karne ki skill thi vaise hi jaw long ke pass bhi koi aisi hi skill hai jisse usne pure animal kingdom ko tame kar liya hai.
Aur iss skill ka level crimson ki skill se bahut bada hai.

Agle update me sab pata lag jayega ki animals kaise control hue, woh blood trail kis liye thi... Sab kuch.

Filhal to veer tab tak nahi bach sakta jabtak usse ye naa pta ho ko ye hai kya cheez.

Exactly. In other words... Jab tak janvaro se use chhutkara nahi mil jaata.

Hamne Renshu aur Erica ke stats dekhe dono hi bahut powerfull hai lekin veer ke stats unse jyada hai.

Because Veer ladta hi aaya hai shuru se. Use chenn ki saans zyada derr lene kaha milti hai. Crimson se peeche chhoota to Jaw Long aa gaya ab.

Erica veer ko bachane jaa rhi hai,vahan jakar use pta chalega ki asli ladai kya hoti hai jab do system holder ladte hai.

Yup.

Mujhe to ye Divya ke lakshan thik nahi lag rhe pakka yahan ye musibat me fasegi, phir veer ko ise bachana padega.

Arre aisa na bolo... Bechari care karti hai Veer ki.

Aur BC ye Suman ki favourability kya asman fadegi 200 cross kar chuki hai, aur jyadatar ki 100 cross hi chuki hai.

She's a psycho (when it comes to Veer)...

Nidhi aur kaera jo ek tarah se heroine ko tarah project hui hai unki abhi bhi 100 nahi hui, I guess next arc me ho jayegi.

Next arc heroines par kaafi focused rahega. But at the same time sirf famiglia arc nahi chalega... Mysteries, suspense saath hi chalte jayenge.

Super dhamakedar update
Next update ka intezar besabri se.

Thanks a lot Bhai. Aise hi bane rehne ka.

 

[parkas]

Update 176 will arrive on 18th March at night. ​

Besabari se intezaar kar rahe hai next update ka Werewolf bhai...

 

[Sidd19]

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Update 176 will arrive on 18th March at night. ​

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[Werewolf]

I think this update was the most awaited one... The Heavy Violence. As the name says... This was the heaviest update till now after Veer's fake death update. (For me)

Was it? Really? Well! Okay!

It's not a surprise that you are outdoing yourself as days are progressing... I know the future updates will be more thrilling and mind boggling. Pretty sure they will leave us awe struck...

Yup. It's all the build up. The more we progress the better it gets.

Now coming to the update... I have said this multiple times... Nd firse ek baar bolti hu... What makes you different from the other writers is the... The premise setup...

There's no one else I've seen who can set the premise like this. Even if they can, the next part becomes troublesome. Executing the premise setup and then utilising it's full environment. Crimson k sath jab Veer fight kia tha... That island premise... Light house... Tab bhi mne yahi kaha tha... Ki aapse better environment ko use karne me koi nhi...

You again proved that here. Right from the beginning jo words the... Jaise update start hua... The pictures of the forest in the dark... Seedhe hume uss environment me pull karke le jata h... Immediately...

Premise is one of the most essential parts to draw your readers in when writing a story. It's not an easy task to imagine a scenery and then utilising everything in it. I get in trouble too. One must have a vivid imagination to do so.

Renshu's men getting demotivated. Kisne socha hoga? I mean... Agar main writer hoti to seedhe fight par le jaati... This is what separates an expert writer from an amateur one.

The moment writer goes like... This is the main protagonist, I must focus on this only... His work deteriorates...

Treating every character like the main cast is the vital part which can change the quality of your work tremendously.

You can feel how those men felt. They were terrified and demotivated. The fear of unknown is the worst. The lack of information... The darkness... The lack of people in numbers... Every details were thrown which filled the occuring questioning gaps in our mind with answers at the right time.

Yes. For that part... I had to remove my focus from everything and solely pay attention to the Order's men. I put myself in their shoes to imagine how they must have felt when going inside the forest with no system at all. And, that is how you do it...

When you're writing about a certain character... Step into their shoes and then see the story according to their perspective.

Erica's character is very unique tbh... She's cocky, a bit egoistic but has a kind heart. Her intentions are always good. What she shows on her face isn't what she actually means. Her skills... Finally hume uska full status dekhne ko mila...

You have described Erica correctly. What she says... She doesn't mean it most of the times.

Dead silence Garofano k paas bas nhi h that means... Also chameleon is such an interesting skill too. Idk why but I feel like stealth suits to Garofano more than Erica... Or maybe they both need stealth...

Garofano has an advantage of combat. She's stealthy too but not like Erica. In a stealth Infiltration Erica can surpass Garofano however, if you put some strong enemies there then Erica will get stuck unlike Garofano who will emerge victorious at the end. She won't fight them head on rather evade them to infiltrate successfully.

Fight with unit 1 was a piece of cake... Too easy... But as they went deeper... Renshu was right. Now a freaking new system holder... Surpise after surpise... Aur kitne surprise doge...

mujhe pta ni kyu par ye unknown system holder kafi dangerous lag rha h... Uske intentions bhi clear ni h... Of course no wonder Renshu ne Erica ko kyu waha se bhagaya... Girl... Life is more important than your ego for now... I love how Genie kept motivating her... So we can assume she's a kind system.

Yes. Genie knows her host ain't strong enough so she instructs her to avoid the fights most of the time.

Renshu k bhi stats dekhne ko mile... I'm not gonna talk about him for now. Because I believe ki hume next updates me uske baare in-depth information milne wali h??? Am I right? Werewolf Sir???

Info sirf skills, cards, perks inhi ki milegi. Baaki aur zyada kuch hai thodi usme samjhane jaisa.

Erica ko Veer ke words yaad aana... Apne dad ke order k against Jana only to save Veer... Is something cooking here? What did I miss?? Achanak se Erica ko itni fiqr Veer ki? Did I miss some ishaare??

Nope! Filhal aisa kuch nahi. Erica ke mann me Veer ke liye abhi koi pyaar vyaar nahi hai. Ek fellow system holder ke naate woh use bachane jaa rahi hai because agar Veer haarta hai toh unki team kamzor pad jayegi. So she must save Veer.

nd nd nd... Finally... The goosebumps portion... The eastside... Starting me to sab mystery me shrouded tha... That blood boundary... Trail whatever it was...

Idk what was happening... Nd then came the danger himself... Jaw Long... What a fucking description...

That guy didn't even say a word to Veer. Not a single word... Nd charged at him right from the get go ...

Yahi toh khauf hai. He saw Veer... He knew Veer was a danger... He made the decision... And charged at him. No hesitations.

The moment I saw those dears pic... Pure goosebumps...

But the picture that took my breath away and made me shiver was this...

Haha! Thanks a lot. I'm glad you liked it.

There's no way you drew this okay? There's no wayyyy What are you doing to me???

Of course I drew them. Wdym?
Koi aur thodi banane aayega yaha mere liye.

You are taking my imagination to next level... Nd I'm not ready for that... Figures in my imagination run wobbly here and there...

This was too much... The sheer determination to execute this update so well and going as far to even make your own sketch...

Thanks.

Kya nhi aata h?? Bata do... Ab ye mat kehna ki gaana aur nachna bhi ata h... No no noooo... I can't...

Gaana toh aata hai... Naachna wahi shaadi waala apna laundo waala dance

Roti banana nahi aata... If you know what I mean...

Anyways... Things have just started... Veer has yet to exchange some punches with Jaw Long... I bet the upcoming updates will be fire too. Koi doubt ni h... Okay... Enough blabbering... I don't want to bore you...

Revo padh ke kabhi bhi bore nahi hota mein. Khaas kar aise revos. Ye toh dawa ka kaam karte hai. So, never be sorry about this... Write all toh want... There's not a limit.

Thank you so much for this jaw dropping update. Goosebumps dena koi aapse seekhe... I'm waiting for some lovey dovey scenes between Erica nd Veer... I know I know... We have Kaera nd nidhi Maam nd Sonia in Mumbai... But Erica ko Veer k baare me aur pata chalna chahiye... His hardships nd all... I'm sure uska nazaria badlega.. nd that would be fun to watch... Her reaction...

Aur kitni dilwaogi apne hero ko?
Ek hi sambhal jaaye wahi bahut hai. Itni ko peeche laga ke meri halat kaahe kharab kar rahi?

aise hi likhte rahiye sir... Always love ur work... This was tremendous... Awaiting for your new new update.

Thanks a lot dear. Keep supporting as usual. Next update kal raatri me.

 

[Werewolf]

Yeh update kafi rochak tha

1 naye system holder ki entry hoyi

Jaw long ki thodi se jhalak mili jisme yeh pata chala k woh kitna zada powerfull hai

Veer ko bhi ehsas hua k woh iss baar kisse takra raha hai filhaal uski Jaan khud bahut mushkil mein hai kaise woh khud ko bachaye phir Jow Long ko haraye wahi Erica bhi Veer k liye chintit hai or usko bhi Veer ki musibat ka ehsas ho gaya isliye woh Veer ki madad k liye aa rahi hai shayad woh kuch kar pate Veer k liye


Udhar Renusha bhi mushkil mein hai woh bhi 1 system holder se lad Raha hai
Dekhte hai ab yeh Jung kya roop leti hai

Dhanyavad. Sab fasse hue hai dekha jaaye toh. Baaki woh kaise isme se baahar aate hai ye agle update me darshaya jayega.
Keep supporting.

यह तो ऐसा लग रहा है जैसे वीर ' जूरासिक पार्क ' के डायनासोर वर्ल्ड मे चला गया है । आदमखोर डायनासोर के बीच फंसा एक अदना - सा इंसान ।
वैसे इस सीन्स को गजब का लिखा है आपने वोल्फी भाई।
मिस्टर लोंग के पास शर्तिया ऐसी कोई स्पेशल स्किल है जिनसे वह जंगल के जानवरों को कंट्रोल कर रहा है और अपने इशारे पर नचा रहा है

Jaw Long ki skills ka rehesya bhi kuch hadd tak agle update me khul jayega bhaaya. Wo kaise kar raha tha ye sab iska pata lag jayega.

पहले क्रिम्पसन , फिर मिस्टर रेंशू और अब यह जाउ लोंग - सभी लोग वीर से पावरफुल ही मिले । खैर कोई बात नही , युद्ध मे जीत सदैव धर्म और सत्य की ही होती है।

Ye bhi toh ho sakta hai na ki Jaw Long apni taraf se ekdum sahi ho? Technically dekha jaaye toh Veer aur Renshu unki Territory me aake hamla kiye hai.

वीर के लिए मुझे डर नही है , डर है इरिका के लिए जो अपना ' वार जोन ' छोड़कर वीर के जोन मे आ रही है । वीर के लिए चुनौतियाँ काफी बड़ी होने वाली है । खुद को डिफेंस , इरिका को डिफेंस और फिर लोंग पर अटैक - काफी मुश्किल होने वाली है ।
वैसे मेरी इच्छा है कि इरिका अपने पिता और वीर को गलत साबित कर दे कि वो कमजोर है।

Erica combat based system holder nahi hai. Toh Jaw Long ka saamna karna... Ahem... Haan par woh kaam zaroor aa sakti hai aur kuch aur bhi kar sakti hai...

इधर मिस्टर रेंशू सर को भी एक और सिस्टम धारी मानव ने हैरान परेशान कर दिया । यह महाशय कहां से आ गए ? इनका परिचय क्या है ?
शायद मेरा शक सही ही था कि यह युद्ध सिस्टम होल्डर्स का युद्ध होने वाला है । शायद सभी सिस्टम होल्डर्स यहां इकठ्ठे होने वाले हैं ।

Sabhi?
Arre nahi bhaaya. Kul 17 system holder bache hai. Jisme se Veer, Renshu, Garofano, Erica, Jaw Long, Unknown system holder... Inko toh aapne yahi dekh liya. Agar sabhi yaha aa jayenge toh meri kya haalat hogi?

ऐसे मौके पर दिव्या मैडम की यहां मौजूदगी उनके लिए खतरे से खाली नही है । बेहतर होता वो मिस्टर रेंशू के आवास पर रहकर इनके वापस आने की प्रतिक्षा करती।

She's a detective... Khojne ka keeda uske zehen me barso se hai... Wo yaha se peeche nahi hatne waali.

दस हजार शब्दों से भी ऊपर का अपडेट । यह वास्तव मे अद्भुत है । इसे पढ़ने मे अगर आधे घंटे से भी अधिक समय लग जाए तो इसे लिखने मे कितना समय लगता होगा ! अपडेट लिखना , फिर करेक्शन करना , फिर रिवीजन करना - बहुत बहुत कठीन काम है ।
आप के मेहनत को साधुवाद ।

अपडेट नो डाऊट , आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग।
और जगमग जगमग।

Bilkul. Bilkul! Bahut samay jaata hai bhaiya. Chalo koi toh samajhta hai.
Dhanyavad. Aise hi saath bane rehne ka.

veer ko hi focus kar rhe hai bhaiya ji lekin aap update dene ka thoda jaldi vichar kare kyoki update padne ke baad update ke antim me aisa lagta hai ki update thoda aur likhta to kya ho jata. ye to man ki upaj hai
new update kab tak ayega sir ji

baaki update achha laga

Aisa nahi hota Bhai. Fir thoda aur likh deta toh fir yahi baat aa jaati ki thoda aur likh dete aur iss scene ko aur dikha dete toh kya ho jaata... Ye silsila chalta jaata hai...

Ek nirdharit format decide kar ke hi update taiyaar kiya jaata hai ki iss update ko itne se itne shabdo ke beech rakhna hai. Isme ye ye cheezein dikhani hai aur itna itna lamba kheechna hai. Farq nahi padta ki update cliffhanger pe khatam hoye ya adhura... Iss update ka role yahi tak tha... Iske aage agla update apna role nibhayega aur pichle update ki kadiyo ko jodega...!

Bhut bhut dhansu update bro

I love your writing skills bro

Thanks

वाकई वीर मुसीबत के बीच फंस चुका एक तरफ़ jaw long और दूसरी तरफ उसके द्वारा नियंत्रित किए गए जानवर, they are totally focused on veer और उधर erica भी इस खतरे से अंजान वीर की तरफ ही आ रही है किंतु वीर का intelligence भी 180 है वो जरूर इस खतरे का कोई न कोई हल निकाल ही लेगा खैर आगे की लड़ाई बहुत ही भयानक होने वाली है जिसके आसार इसी अपडेट में नजर आ रहे हैं सो अगले अपडेट का बेसब्री से इंतज़ार है ।

और हां आपकी लेखनी में वाकई जादू है warewolf भाई आपके हर अपडेट का एक एक शब्द पढ़कर किसी चलचित्र की भांति आंखों के समक्ष प्रस्तुत हो ऐसा प्रतीत होता है।

Abhi intelligence 180 kaha hai bhai. Abhi Veer ne sleep kaha li hai? Points sleep ke baad hi badhte hai. Bhool gaye?

Abhi 170 hi hai. Sleep ke baad hi 180 hoga. Dekhte hai kya dimag lagata hai Veer. Shukriya wese... Saath bane rehne ka.

 

[Werewolf]

Oh no you can't kill Erica so early so either Renshu has to take the hit which may prove fatal or she will have a valiant escape.

Let's see.

Waiting bro.

We'll see in the next update.

Bohat hi behtreen bohat hi aala aur shandar update hai Maza a giya but plz atleàst every week give one update and if it before it's much better ur story is unique I never ever read such kind of story sci Fi thriller action suspense love sex emotions everything is available Fabolous

Thanks a lot mate.
Update 176 will come tomorrow at night.

Garofano Pr shaq sa Ho rha hai.. Veer se mithi -2 baate krna shaq krwa rha baki dekhte real murderer kon hai...

Aage padhne ka

Bahot zabardast sabse ziada khaternaak update h bhai ab tak ki Kahani ka
Sabki soch se Ulta ho raha h Renshu ke ek ladka bhari per raha Jo system owner h or idher veer ke samne tow pata nahi kon kon se janwer pade huwe h
Sala pehle se pata hota ki aisa kuch khaternaak hoga tow aata hi nahi
Baherhal dekhte h Pari in janwaro se nipatne ke liye koyi Rasta nikal paati h ya nahi Jo jaw long ke isharo per naach rehe h kia yahi saare janwer Pari ki madad se veer ke iShare per nachenge
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h
Badhiya zabardast shaandar lajawab update bhai

Kisi ne ye nahi socha tha Bhai ki Jaw Long ke paas aisa kuch hoga. Pari abhi samay kaatne ko keh rahi hai, agar woh kuch bata paati hai toh theek warna Veer ka bachna mushqil hoga. Thanks and keep supporting.

Waiting for the epic fight between veer and long jaw please update

Kal raatri me.

Ur story is my most favorite sorry for asking again and again for update but I do this thing for only ur story a top of the list story forever

Thanks. It's hard to give updates very soon because I have my job. So, it takes time to complete the updates. Anyways, keep supporting.

That update was too Fabulous...more action to come ....
& Your drawings ...@Werewolf aap toh chupe rustam nikale ....

Haha! I'm glad you all liked it. Thanks and keep supporting.

Hello sir mai aapka old reader hun meri I'd uda dete sab ishiliye nawa id lekar aata hun waiting new update

Old ID ka kya name tha?
Kuch harqat kiye hoge bhai, tabhi ID ban hui. Zabardasti nahi hota koi ban...

Hey boss sorry for inactive.... Waiting for update.... Preparing for civil services so can't activate so sorry for not comments

Good luck.
Take your time... Study hard... And feel free to drop by whenever you feel like it.

Jabardast update aage kya hone waala hai usika intejer hain jaldi update kar dena please bahut suspense hai

Dhanyavad

USC k liye all d best


Waise Gurafano aayegi usne dil jo lagaya hai Veer se …. Erica and Gurafano fight karegi Jaw Long se jab Veer ghayal / thaka hua rahega - aisa mujhe lagta hai

Waiting for the update taki pataa chale ki kon kidhar n kya kar raha hai

Garofano isn't here. Woh to apne upar se accusations hatane ki formalities me busy hai.

Erica hi jaa rahi hai filhal toh. Dekhte hai kya hota hai. thanks and keep supporting.

सर, मैं आपका बहुत बड़ा फैन हूं, मैंने आपकी पुरानी कहानी पूरी पढ़ी है, और यह कहानी तो मुझे बहुत ही ज्यादा पसंद है, सबसे अनोखी कहानी है आपकी सर, पहले मैं एक मूक पाठक था इसलिए मैंने कभी आपके स्टोरी में कॉमेंट नहीं किया सर इसके लिए माफ़ी चाहूंगा

Koi baat nahi Bhai. Ab toh aa gaye ho ...
Thread me swagat hai.
Umeed hai aage dikhte rahoge.

Chalo koi bt nhi next tym padh li jayegi USC ki story
Aur rhi baar is update ki to - Take your time
Vese b sabr ka fal meetha hota h

Exactly

 

[Werewolf]

भाया तुस्सी छा गए। आपने कहानी संग अपनी पुरानी कला को भी जिंदा कर लिया। सच मानिए आपको आज की इस भाग दौड़ वाली जिंदगी में वो पल ही सुकून के लगे होंगे।

Ye baat toh hai. Pencil ek baar pakdne ke baad bas use chalate jaane ka hi mann kar raha tha. Thoda zung lag gayi hai ab uss skill me meri... Aur sketches kaafi roughly banaye gaye the. Toh utne behtar nahi aa paaye jitne aane chahiye the. Warna aur bhi behtareen hote. Par samay ki pabandi dekhte hue mere hisaab se woh bhi kaafi badhiya tha.

यहा अब कहानी में दो तरफ जंग स्टार्ट हुई है। और मोड़ आपने पहली और ही एक नया किरदार यानी नया सिस्टम होल्डर लाकर खड़ा कर चौका ही दिया है। उसकी काबिलियत क्या है। वो क्या क्या पॉवर रखता है। ये नही पता है। और ये लड़की बीच लड़ाई में अपनी जगह छोड़ एक छोटे से मिले टच से ही उस ओर भाग ली है। कहानी में रोचकता ला ही देते है। मजबूर कर रखा है। पाठक को,
अब नसा सा परोस रहे है। हर अपडेट में,

Erica ki baat Karu toh woh pyaar ki wajah se Veer ke paas nahi jaa rahi hai.

Uske jaane ke do kaaran hai. Pehla toh ye ki Veer ka parajit hone unke liye ghatak sabit ho sakta hai. Veer ko kaise bhi kar ke zinda rakhna hi hai. Woh unki team ke side hai akhir...

Dusra kaaran ye hai ki woh ab dikhana chahti hai ki woh frontline missions ke liye taiyaar hai. Bhale hi woh Jaw Long se na Ladd paaye par kam se kam Veer ko waha se bacha ke bhaga le jaaye... Ye toh mumkin ho sakta hai na? Yahi soch Erica ki hai. Baaki toh update hi batayega.

वीर बिना कोई तर्क किये मैदान में कूद गया है। अपने किये अहसान को चुकाने के लिए, या यूं कहें कुछ नया पाने के लिए, या वाला तर्क आपके लिए ही छोड़ देते है। क्यो पता है। इस बार ओर कुछ नया परोस देगे आप, फिर इमेज किया गायब हो जाएगा।

Veer apne upar bharosa rakh ke maidan me kooda hai bhaaya. Use vishvas hai ki uska system shaktishali hai. Woh crimson ko maar chuka hai. Confidence hai usme... Par choonk ho gayi toh sirf jankaari na hone ki... Kisi ne nahi socha tha ki jaw Long apne system me aisa kuch rakha hoga. Aur uska nateeja saamne hai.

वैसे सच कहूं आप इसको एक बुक का रूप दे, या एक नोबल या वेब सीरीज का, आप मे इसमें की गई बाते हमेसा याद ही रहेगी।

कुछ विशेष दोस्तो के किये कमेंट भी

Agar karna bhi chaahu toh kaise karu?
Ye aisi cheez nahi jaha aap dukaan me le jaake iski print nikalwa le. Itna samay kaun dega? Incest jaisi theme iss kahani ka hissa hai. Aur forum par anya website ya product ka prachar karna rules ke khilaf hai.

आपको सादर आभार है। आप अपना अमूल्य वक्त निकाल कर कुछ अच्छा पैसे कर रहे है। वरना आज की भाग दौड़ में लोगो को सोचने लिखने पढ़ने का वक्त ही नही है।

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