★☆★ Xforum | Ultimate Story Contest 2024 ~ Reviews Thread ★☆★

[Mr. Magnificent]

Story :- SURAJ
Writer : Black
adultery se chalu huyi ye kahani bc incest kab bani pata hi nahi chala, sex se bharpur badle ki daastan badhiya title hota iske liye, typical black story jisme kisi se badla lena ho to usko chod chod ke uski chut hi suja dalo. badhiya story thi bhai aur alag alag point of view se usko dikhana bhi kafi jyada interesting tha jisse ye samajh aaya ke kya ho raha hai kyu ho raha hai kis kirdar ka apne kis action ke piche ka kya motive tha, bas end ko thoda aur badha dete to ke suraj pagal khane me kaise pahucha isme ek long story ho jati to...

 

[Mr. Magnificent]

Story :- कौमार्य (virginity)
Writer :- Shetan
bahut bahut bahut badhiya kahani hai shetan ji, ekdum dil ko chhu lene wali, ye kehna bhi galat nahi hoga ke ab tak meri is contest me padhi hi ye one of the finest stories hai aur romance category me to abhi tak mere liye ye sabse upar hai, this story shows ke aap ek abhut hi behtarin versatile writer hai jo kisi bhi theme par likhe to masterpiece nikal aaye, maine romance jyada padhta nahi hi lekin is kahani ne dil jeet liya hai, start se end tak kahi bhi aisa nahi laga ke kuch bhi aisa hai ko jabardasti ho raha hai ya extra hai, everything, har dialogue har scene perfect, awesome story.

 

[Mr. Magnificent]

Story :- Saajan
Writer :- Black
purani filmo ki yaad dila di balck bhai aapne, behtarin romantic kahani,upar se aapne apne andaj se hatkar ise likha hai fir bhi bahut hi gajab tarike se likha hai jaya aur saajan dono ka point of view dikhana kahani ko aur depth deta hai jisse dono characters ko unke man ke bhavo ko samajhna bhi aasaan ho jata hai waise to main romance ka utna fan nahi hu apne ko maar dhar thrill horror jyada exite karta hai lekin is kahani ne dil chhu liya hai upar se aapko isko present karne ka tarika ekdum lajawab tha. awesome story

 

[Sanki Rajput]

Story :- ।।इंदरबाग।।
Writer :- Sanki Rajput

bawal story hai be sala sara system hila diya specialy wo last wala twist ke sajay hi us haweli ka asal malik hai aur sala cannibal hai, bhai ekdum unique plot chune ho tum likhne ke liye ye aisa dark matter likhna har kisi ko nahi jamta but tumhe sahi se likha hai, kahani ko read karte time har moment me aage kya hoga iska exitement bana hua tha har ho rahi ghatna ko ekdusre se link kar raha tha main aur end me jab twist reveal hua to sab samajh bhi aaya ke wo saale buddhe dipak ko dekh ke hase kyu the sab kuch perfect tha khali mariyam ke charater ko chhod jo mujhe laga khali chodampatti ke liye hi tha, great story dude.

Correction : dipak nhi dinesh
Shukriya

 

[Mr. Magnificent]

Correction : dipak nhi dinesh
Shukriya

galti se mistek

 

[Shetan]

Story :- किस्सा एक अनहोनी का
Writer :- Shetan

setan ji aap gajab writer ho badhiya horror likhne me aapko maharat hasil hai aur ye baat is kahani se saaf jahir hoti hai, main waise to khud bhooto wagaira me vishwas nahi karta hu lekin ya aisi kahaniya padhna, sunna mujhe accha lagta hai, dai maa ke neha par se bhoot utarne ki ye kahani apne kafi interesting likhi hai, har element har hone wali ghatna aage kya hoga iski exitement paida karti hai, komal ka character jisse kahani ki shuruwat huyi thi aur jise main main lead samajh raha tha wo to side me hi ho gayi aur center stage to dai maa le gayi abhi tak aisa kuch maine real me dekha nahi hai lekin ab isko padhne ke baad soch raha hu ye aisa kuch real me dekhne mile to kya hi exiting baat hogi kahani padh kar darr to nahi laga lekin romanch jarur feel hua ke aage kya hoga, great story.

Aap mante nahi ho. Vo bat alag he. Par ye kissa mene apni life me jita jagta dekha huaa he. Bas farak itna tha ki dai maa ki jagah mere pita the. Halaki vo ab jivit nahi he par mene ise thoda natkiya bana ne ke lie dai maa ko include kiya.

Ye meri ek long story किस्से उन्होंनियो के ka pahela kissa tha. Contest ke bad ye kahani post karungi. Aage ke kisso ka horror level aur jyada up hoga. Aap ho sake to jarur padhiyega.

Ek achhe review ke lie lot of thanks.

 

[Shetan]

Story :- कौमार्य (virginity)
Writer :- Shetan
bahut bahut bahut badhiya kahani hai shetan ji, ekdum dil ko chhu lene wali, ye kehna bhi galat nahi hoga ke ab tak meri is contest me padhi hi ye one of the finest stories hai aur romance category me to abhi tak mere liye ye sabse upar hai, this story shows ke aap ek abhut hi behtarin versatile writer hai jo kisi bhi theme par likhe to masterpiece nikal aaye, maine romance jyada padhta nahi hi lekin is kahani ne dil jeet liya hai, start se end tak kahi bhi aisa nahi laga ke kuch bhi aisa hai ko jabardasti ho raha hai ya extra hai, everything, har dialogue har scene perfect, awesome story.

Bahot bahot shukriya. Aap ko ye kahani achhi lagi to mera likhna safal he. Halaki mai bhi romance likhna pasand nahi karti par pichhle contest me bhi meri ek romantic story ko pasand kiya to is bar bhi mene ye story likhi. Thankyou so much.

 

[Mr. Magnificent]

Story :- " कामावतार "
Writer :- manu@84
professor sahab aaj se hum aapke fan, bole to jabra fan. kahani ka title mujhe ek to kafi sahi interesting laga isiliye maine padhna shuru kiya aur fir jab tak kahani khatam nahi huyi ruka hi nahi, jonny ki journey ko bahut khub dikhaya hai aapne, uska pehle financial struggle aur fir baad me jab uske paas paisa tha tab emotional struggle bahut ache tarike se show hua hai, jo jindagi usne chuki thi uspar use akela hi chalna tha ye end me aakar sabit ho gaya, ye kahani ki badhiya baat mujhe ye lagi ke kahani kahi bhi ubau nahi lagi usne mujhe padhte huye bandhe rakha aur ye bas aapki lekhni ka kamaal hai, kahani to badhiya thi hi bas ek request hai, hindi hi tution milegi kya wo main marathi wala hu na soch raha hindi me bhi ek kahani likhu

 

[Mahi Maurya]

Is bar aane me badi der kardi. Par der aae durust aae. Thankyou so much Mahi.

Ha vo galtiya ka kya batau. Me galtiyo ko dhire dhire hi sudhar paungi. Kosis lagatar kar rahi hu. Thankyou so much Mahi.

समय की कमी के कारण बहुत देर हो गई है, लेकिन सभी कहानी पर अपनी टिप्पणी जरूर देने की कोशिश करेंगे।

 

[Mr. Magnificent]

Story :- The Last Apology : A Tale Of Friendship And Regrets..
Writer :- Agasthya
dil jeet liya crime partner is story se tune, sala main bhi ye face kiya hu re ghar se bahar rehna kya hota hai dosto ka sath kya hota hai aur dosto se bichadne ka gam kya hota hai apne ko acche se malum hai career ki raah me hum sala itne dur aa gaye ke jinke sath us career ko leke sapne dekhe the unse hi bichadte aa gaye, aisi aur story likha kar bhai feel good tha story ka 1st part aur aakhri me late late emotional kar diya tum.