Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

[Lone survivor]

WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye

 

[Shanu]

Wonderful update Bhai

 

[krish1152]

Nice update

 

[king cobra]

commissioner ko bata deta ki mai hun kaun to wo paint ma moot deta

 

[Tripuri chakraborty]

Wonderful update

 

[Herry]

Next update please

 

[Sidd19]

Mind blowing update

 

[Sidd19]

Mind blowing update bhai

 

[sorbobhuk]

UPDATE-256
Lucifer- kyu lode jaise sakal bana kar batha hai? Khushi ka din hai ye to

Naag- bhai nervous ho raha hu bas

Lucifer- abhi bhi mokka pada hai bhag le baad me to bas…. Samjh ja

Naag- aane wala hai aapka din bhi. Aap apna socho, main to fir bhi kaise bhi sambhal lunga

Lucifer- aur mera etna bada hai ki kisi ka muh hi nahi khulne dega

Naag- mansi ko dekha kya bhai aapne? Kaisi dikh rahi hai vo?

Lucifer- achi nahi lag rahi thi mujhe to bilkul bhi. Das kilo ka to makeup kar rakha tha upar se dress…. Chhiii
Pura ka pura mood kharab ho gaya esliye to yaha aa gaya

Naag- bhai mazak na karo

Lucifer- ab jo sach hai vo hai main kya karu esme

Naag- lekin vo to makeup karti hi nahi hai

Lucifer- abe gandu hi rahega tu. Aaj tak aisi ladki dekhi hai tune jo makeup nahi karti ho? Makeup karna unka janam sidh adhikaar hai esko nahi chhod sakti. Lekin etna over bhi nahi karna chahiye tha. Sayad galat decision le liya maine

Naag- aap meri maar rahe ho na bhai?

Lucifer- jake khud dekh le. Sala sach bolna hi paap hai aaj ke time me

Naag- ruko main phone karke bol deta hu use ki makeup kam karle

Lucifer- ha aur jaise vo teri baat maan legi. Aaj tak konsi baat maani hai usne teri? Yaha aakar teri gand aur faad degi agar uske makeup ke bare me kuch bola to

Naag- to main kya karu?

Lucifer- pure time aankh band kare rahna agar uspar najar nahi gaye to hi acha hai nahi to ulti aa jayegi

Naag- aisa kuch bhi nahi hai. Vo bahut sundar hai bhai

Lucifer- mat maan mera kya hai. Main apna mood theek karne ja raha hu
Aur lucifer naag ko vaha akela chhod kar chala jata hai

Bahar vahi shadi ka kaam joro soro se chal raha tha aur en sabke beech ek aur naya chehra use dikh gaya th

Naya matlab bahut dino se jiska chehra nahi dikha tha vo chehra anisha ka

Ek bahut pyaarr lahnge me vo kahar dhah rahi thi. Jaise hi dono ki najar mili anisha ke chehre par muskaan ubhar aaye aur dono ke kadam ek dusre ki taraf ho liye

Lucifer- wow somebody is looking pretty

Anisha- wow somebody know how to compliment?

Lucifer- kiske liye etna saja ja raha hai? Hum to pehle hi ghayal ho chuke hai tumhri aankhon se

Anisha- blush blush

Lucifer- hayyyeeeee

Anisha- bas bhi karo ab. Kaise ho?

Lucifer- aao pyaar kare khulam khula

Anisha- lucifeerrrr plllleeasse

Lucifer- theek hai theek hai. Pyaar ki to koe kadar hi nahi rah gaye dunia me. Kaisi ho?

Anisha- good. You looking different kuch hua hai kya?

Lucifer- kya hoga? Main to bilkul badiya hu. Sayad bahut dino se tune kuch khaya nahi hai mere se esliye lag raha hai

Anisha- i can sense something is wrong here. Bata sakte ho mujhe tum

Lucifer- nah all good.

Anisha- marji aapko. Hum to diwane hai aapke jaisa bologe maan lenge

Lucifer- oyye hoyye aaj kya ho raha hai ye mere sath?
Kahi main sapna to nahi dekh raha?

Anisha- sapna hi to hai ye. Konse angel se reality lag raha hai?

Lucifer- fair enough

Anisha- now tell me what’s going on?

Lucifer- ghumne chalegi mere sath? Ek bahut badiya jagah dundi hai maine

Anisha- aur us badiya jagah par kya dundna hai hume?

Lucifer- ab ye to vaha ja kar hi pata chalega. Sayad tumhe jada jaldi pata chal jaye. After all you have a brain of a supercomputer

Anisha- jada makhan lagane ki jarurat nahi hai. Maine vaise bhi kabhi aapko kisi ke liye mana nahi kiya

Lucifer- abhi to kiya

Anisha- ahh juthee maine kab kiske liye mana kiya?

Lucifer- jab maine pyaar karne ke liye kaha tab

Anisha- mana thode kiya hai. Privacy nahi hai yaha par aur mujhe public me show off karna pasand nahi hai

Lucifer- chalo privacy dikhata hu aur lucifer anisha ka hath pakad kar ander ki taraf le jane lagta hai

Aur use ander bane ek store room ki taraf le jata hai aur pahuchte hi use apni bahoo me jakad leta hai, honth apne aap ek dusre se mil gaye the aur ek wild smooch start ho gaya

Anisha ko thoda dar lag raha tha ki koe aa nahi jaye lekin aise moments ka bhi apna hi maja hota hai aur esliye hi anisha jada excited ho rahi thi

Kuch hi seconds me uska hath lucifer ke hathiyaar par chala gaya aur jaise hi pant ki zip kholne lagi vaise hi

“Tum dono ko koe sarm hai ya nahi? Aise khule me kabhi bhi kahi bhi suru ho jate ho?” Ek aawaz se dono chhonke aur samne dekha to ashmita apne kamar par hath rakhe badi ada se unhe dekh rahi thi

Lucifer- tujhe kabab me haddi banane ke alava kuch aur aata hai kya?
Lucifer bhi usi tone me bola aur tab tak anisha apna huliya theek karne me lag gaye. Kuch hi minutes me lucifer ne uska pura makeup, hair sab kharab kar diya tha

Ashmita- yaha room ki kami hai kya? Jo tum dono openly suru ho gaye? Kisi room me nahi ja sakte the?

Lucifer- hum dono ko openly pasand hai. Tujhe koe problem?

Ashmita- tujhse to baat karni hi bekar hai. Anisha chal mere sath

Lucifer- vo….
“Chhup rah bilkul” ashmita ne use kuch bolne hi nahi diya aur anisha ko leke vaha se chali gaye

Bechara lucifer kya hi kar leta ashmita ke samne sivay usko anisha ko le jane ke?

Fir khud bhi uth kar bahar chal diya

Shadi ki tayari teji se chal rahi thi aur ab use kuch naye chehre bhi dikhne lag gaye the jo mostly ladki walo ki side se hi the

Lekin unse lucifer ko matlab hi kya tha? Vo apne bhavro ki taraf hi mandra raha tha lekin koe bhav nahi de raha tha use to jake mansi ke pass bath gaya jaha mahandi ka kaam chal raha tha

Lucifer- mujhe to sab bhul hi jate hai kisi ko pata hi nahi hai kitna important hu main

Mansi- hehe kya hua?

Lucifer- kuch nahi kuch logo ko meri khushi dekhi nahi jati bas.

Inaaya- tum ladke wale ki side se ho esliye yaha par tum allowed nahi ho esliye jaldi se utho aur niklo

Lucifer- sweetheart tum bhi ladke walo ki side se hi ho

Ashmita- mahandi lagvayega kya?
Achi lagegi tere par

Lucifer- tujh par bhi saree achi lagegi kabhi pahan liya kar hume bhi to lage ki samne wali ladki hai

Ashmita- shut up

“Hello young man, humse bhi milo bahut suna hai aapke bare me” ek damdar aawaz lucifer ke kano me gunji mud ke dekha to ek kadak banda khada hua tha

Chehre par ek rob alag hi dikh raha tha jo chhikh chhikh kar bol raha tha ki ye bahut powerful banda hai

Lucifer- hello uncle. Kaise ho?
Lucifer ladkiyo ke beech se khada ho gaya aur unke samne aa gaya

Veer paal singh mansi ke pitaji aur ek police commissioner

Singh- main bahut badiya. Are bhai jo bhi mil raha hai sab tumhri hi baatein karte rahte hai aur hume dekho milna tak naseeb nahi ho raha?

Lucifer- waqt jab milata hai to ek alag hi drasay banta hai uncle ji jaise aaj bana hai

Singh- ye baat to hai. So kya karte ho aap?

Lucifer- main…

Inaaya- he is my partner uncle ji. Rathore group ka external matter yehi handle karta hai
Inaaya ko laga lucifer kuch fucked up na karde esliye khud hi beech me aakar bolna pada

Singh- internal aap karti ho external ye karta hai to fir mera damaad kya karta?

Lucifer- jo main karta hu vohi vo karta hai. Main inaaya ka partner hu aur vo mera

Singh- sab ek dusre ke partner bane hue hai yaha to

Lucifer- joint family me ja rahi hai aapki ladki. Kisi tarah ki koe problem nahi aayegi

Singh- ab agar meri eklauti beti ko koe problem aaye to khak hai mere jinda rahne ka.

Lucifer- i assure you. Uski life me sirf aur sirf khushiya hi hogi

Singh- i hope aisa hi ho nahi to anjaam acha nahi hoga kisi ke liye

Lucifer- I understand ucle

Singh- okay then main thoda bahar ka kaam check karke aata hu
Lucifer- jee uncle
Aur vo vaha se chale gaye

Inaaya- thank youuuu
Ek gehri saas lete hue inaaya ne kaha

Lucifer- for what?

Inaaya- for not fucking up

Lucifer- don’t worry i will fuck you tonight aur aisa ki subah tum khadi bhi nahi ho paogi and you will keep on screaming ohh lucifer ahhh lucifer lucifer lucifer lucifer

Inaaya- shut up
Muskurate hue inaaya boli aur vapas mansi ke pass jake bath gaye jo thodi tensed lag rahi thi jab uska baap aur lucifer baat kar rahe the lekin jis tarike se lucifer ne handle kiya sab use bhi saas aa gaye aur vapas muskaan fail gaye uske chehre par….

Bahut badhiya update hai Bhai
Ye shadi jaldi nipta do or aage badho....
Kahani ki speed slow hote jaa rahe hai....
Waiting for next update

 

[BP high]

UPDATE-256
Lucifer- kyu lode jaise sakal bana kar batha hai? Khushi ka din hai ye to

Naag- bhai nervous ho raha hu bas

Lucifer- abhi bhi mokka pada hai bhag le baad me to bas…. Samjh ja

Naag- aane wala hai aapka din bhi. Aap apna socho, main to fir bhi kaise bhi sambhal lunga

Lucifer- aur mera etna bada hai ki kisi ka muh hi nahi khulne dega

Naag- mansi ko dekha kya bhai aapne? Kaisi dikh rahi hai vo?

Lucifer- achi nahi lag rahi thi mujhe to bilkul bhi. Das kilo ka to makeup kar rakha tha upar se dress…. Chhiii
Pura ka pura mood kharab ho gaya esliye to yaha aa gaya

Naag- bhai mazak na karo

Lucifer- ab jo sach hai vo hai main kya karu esme

Naag- lekin vo to makeup karti hi nahi hai

Lucifer- abe gandu hi rahega tu. Aaj tak aisi ladki dekhi hai tune jo makeup nahi karti ho? Makeup karna unka janam sidh adhikaar hai esko nahi chhod sakti. Lekin etna over bhi nahi karna chahiye tha. Sayad galat decision le liya maine

Naag- aap meri maar rahe ho na bhai?

Lucifer- jake khud dekh le. Sala sach bolna hi paap hai aaj ke time me

Naag- ruko main phone karke bol deta hu use ki makeup kam karle

Lucifer- ha aur jaise vo teri baat maan legi. Aaj tak konsi baat maani hai usne teri? Yaha aakar teri gand aur faad degi agar uske makeup ke bare me kuch bola to

Naag- to main kya karu?

Lucifer- pure time aankh band kare rahna agar uspar najar nahi gaye to hi acha hai nahi to ulti aa jayegi

Naag- aisa kuch bhi nahi hai. Vo bahut sundar hai bhai

Lucifer- mat maan mera kya hai. Main apna mood theek karne ja raha hu
Aur lucifer naag ko vaha akela chhod kar chala jata hai

Bahar vahi shadi ka kaam joro soro se chal raha tha aur en sabke beech ek aur naya chehra use dikh gaya th

Naya matlab bahut dino se jiska chehra nahi dikha tha vo chehra anisha ka

Ek bahut pyaarr lahnge me vo kahar dhah rahi thi. Jaise hi dono ki najar mili anisha ke chehre par muskaan ubhar aaye aur dono ke kadam ek dusre ki taraf ho liye

Lucifer- wow somebody is looking pretty

Anisha- wow somebody know how to compliment?

Lucifer- kiske liye etna saja ja raha hai? Hum to pehle hi ghayal ho chuke hai tumhri aankhon se

Anisha- blush blush

Lucifer- hayyyeeeee

Anisha- bas bhi karo ab. Kaise ho?

Lucifer- aao pyaar kare khulam khula

Anisha- lucifeerrrr plllleeasse

Lucifer- theek hai theek hai. Pyaar ki to koe kadar hi nahi rah gaye dunia me. Kaisi ho?

Anisha- good. You looking different kuch hua hai kya?

Lucifer- kya hoga? Main to bilkul badiya hu. Sayad bahut dino se tune kuch khaya nahi hai mere se esliye lag raha hai

Anisha- i can sense something is wrong here. Bata sakte ho mujhe tum

Lucifer- nah all good.

Anisha- marji aapko. Hum to diwane hai aapke jaisa bologe maan lenge

Lucifer- oyye hoyye aaj kya ho raha hai ye mere sath?
Kahi main sapna to nahi dekh raha?

Anisha- sapna hi to hai ye. Konse angel se reality lag raha hai?

Lucifer- fair enough

Anisha- now tell me what’s going on?

Lucifer- ghumne chalegi mere sath? Ek bahut badiya jagah dundi hai maine

Anisha- aur us badiya jagah par kya dundna hai hume?

Lucifer- ab ye to vaha ja kar hi pata chalega. Sayad tumhe jada jaldi pata chal jaye. After all you have a brain of a supercomputer

Anisha- jada makhan lagane ki jarurat nahi hai. Maine vaise bhi kabhi aapko kisi ke liye mana nahi kiya

Lucifer- abhi to kiya

Anisha- ahh juthee maine kab kiske liye mana kiya?

Lucifer- jab maine pyaar karne ke liye kaha tab

Anisha- mana thode kiya hai. Privacy nahi hai yaha par aur mujhe public me show off karna pasand nahi hai

Lucifer- chalo privacy dikhata hu aur lucifer anisha ka hath pakad kar ander ki taraf le jane lagta hai

Aur use ander bane ek store room ki taraf le jata hai aur pahuchte hi use apni bahoo me jakad leta hai, honth apne aap ek dusre se mil gaye the aur ek wild smooch start ho gaya

Anisha ko thoda dar lag raha tha ki koe aa nahi jaye lekin aise moments ka bhi apna hi maja hota hai aur esliye hi anisha jada excited ho rahi thi

Kuch hi seconds me uska hath lucifer ke hathiyaar par chala gaya aur jaise hi pant ki zip kholne lagi vaise hi

“Tum dono ko koe sarm hai ya nahi? Aise khule me kabhi bhi kahi bhi suru ho jate ho?” Ek aawaz se dono chhonke aur samne dekha to ashmita apne kamar par hath rakhe badi ada se unhe dekh rahi thi

Lucifer- tujhe kabab me haddi banane ke alava kuch aur aata hai kya?
Lucifer bhi usi tone me bola aur tab tak anisha apna huliya theek karne me lag gaye. Kuch hi minutes me lucifer ne uska pura makeup, hair sab kharab kar diya tha

Ashmita- yaha room ki kami hai kya? Jo tum dono openly suru ho gaye? Kisi room me nahi ja sakte the?

Lucifer- hum dono ko openly pasand hai. Tujhe koe problem?

Ashmita- tujhse to baat karni hi bekar hai. Anisha chal mere sath

Lucifer- vo….
“Chhup rah bilkul” ashmita ne use kuch bolne hi nahi diya aur anisha ko leke vaha se chali gaye

Bechara lucifer kya hi kar leta ashmita ke samne sivay usko anisha ko le jane ke?

Fir khud bhi uth kar bahar chal diya

Shadi ki tayari teji se chal rahi thi aur ab use kuch naye chehre bhi dikhne lag gaye the jo mostly ladki walo ki side se hi the

Lekin unse lucifer ko matlab hi kya tha? Vo apne bhavro ki taraf hi mandra raha tha lekin koe bhav nahi de raha tha use to jake mansi ke pass bath gaya jaha mahandi ka kaam chal raha tha

Lucifer- mujhe to sab bhul hi jate hai kisi ko pata hi nahi hai kitna important hu main

Mansi- hehe kya hua?

Lucifer- kuch nahi kuch logo ko meri khushi dekhi nahi jati bas.

Inaaya- tum ladke wale ki side se ho esliye yaha par tum allowed nahi ho esliye jaldi se utho aur niklo

Lucifer- sweetheart tum bhi ladke walo ki side se hi ho

Ashmita- mahandi lagvayega kya?
Achi lagegi tere par

Lucifer- tujh par bhi saree achi lagegi kabhi pahan liya kar hume bhi to lage ki samne wali ladki hai

Ashmita- shut up

“Hello young man, humse bhi milo bahut suna hai aapke bare me” ek damdar aawaz lucifer ke kano me gunji mud ke dekha to ek kadak banda khada hua tha

Chehre par ek rob alag hi dikh raha tha jo chhikh chhikh kar bol raha tha ki ye bahut powerful banda hai

Lucifer- hello uncle. Kaise ho?
Lucifer ladkiyo ke beech se khada ho gaya aur unke samne aa gaya

Veer paal singh mansi ke pitaji aur ek police commissioner

Singh- main bahut badiya. Are bhai jo bhi mil raha hai sab tumhri hi baatein karte rahte hai aur hume dekho milna tak naseeb nahi ho raha?

Lucifer- waqt jab milata hai to ek alag hi drasay banta hai uncle ji jaise aaj bana hai

Singh- ye baat to hai. So kya karte ho aap?

Lucifer- main…

Inaaya- he is my partner uncle ji. Rathore group ka external matter yehi handle karta hai
Inaaya ko laga lucifer kuch fucked up na karde esliye khud hi beech me aakar bolna pada

Singh- internal aap karti ho external ye karta hai to fir mera damaad kya karta?

Lucifer- jo main karta hu vohi vo karta hai. Main inaaya ka partner hu aur vo mera

Singh- sab ek dusre ke partner bane hue hai yaha to

Lucifer- joint family me ja rahi hai aapki ladki. Kisi tarah ki koe problem nahi aayegi

Singh- ab agar meri eklauti beti ko koe problem aaye to khak hai mere jinda rahne ka.

Lucifer- i assure you. Uski life me sirf aur sirf khushiya hi hogi

Singh- i hope aisa hi ho nahi to anjaam acha nahi hoga kisi ke liye

Lucifer- I understand ucle

Singh- okay then main thoda bahar ka kaam check karke aata hu
Lucifer- jee uncle
Aur vo vaha se chale gaye

Inaaya- thank youuuu
Ek gehri saas lete hue inaaya ne kaha

Lucifer- for what?

Inaaya- for not fucking up

Lucifer- don’t worry i will fuck you tonight aur aisa ki subah tum khadi bhi nahi ho paogi and you will keep on screaming ohh lucifer ahhh lucifer lucifer lucifer lucifer

Inaaya- shut up
Muskurate hue inaaya boli aur vapas mansi ke pass jake bath gaye jo thodi tensed lag rahi thi jab uska baap aur lucifer baat kar rahe the lekin jis tarike se lucifer ne handle kiya sab use bhi saas aa gaye aur vapas muskaan fail gaye uske chehre par….

Ek or behtari update bhai

Bhai kahase soch leteho itna sab,
Script was mind blowing.
Aapka thought process bohot hi achha he sathi utilize karna aap ko bakhubi ata he.

Thanks for the wonderful update
Please keep writing
Waiting for next

 

[Thakur]

UPDATE-191


Car me bahut shanti thi lucifer drive kar raha tha uske bagal me ashmita bathi thi aur piche tara lekin lucifer ko shanti pasand kaha hai?

Lucifer- aassshhuuuu
Vo ashmita ko irritate karne wali aawaz me bola
Ashmita- muh band rakh apna

Lucifer- tu kabab me haddi banana kab band karegi?
Ashmita- tu gate band karna kab suru karega?

Lucifer- tara batao kab gate band karna sikhogi tum?
Jaldi se sikh lo nahi to ye aise hi mood kharab karti rahegi

Tara bechari pehle hi ashmita se najar nahi mila pa rahi thi upar se lucifer bakchodi pe bakchodi kiye ja raha tha

Ashmita- kutta kahi ka
Lucifer- na khud kuch karti hai na kisi ko karne deti hai
Pata hai tara kitni udaas ho gaye thi jab main usse beech me hi chhod ke aaya

Ashmita- lucifer tujhe marna hai kya?
Chhup chhap drive kar
Lucifer- maar to dena lekin aaj meri baaton se bach nahi payegi tu

Ashmita- mujhe sunana hi nahi hai
Lucifer- tujhe sunanan padega
Kab tak sach se bhagti rahegi?

Ashmita- main bhagti hu?
Khud ko dekh
Apne bare me pata hai tujhe kuch?
Paglo ki tarah yaha vaha muh marta firta hai
Ye tak nahi pata tujhe ki tu hai kon

Bas ye nahi bolna tha ashmita ne vo gusse me bol gaye aur vapas ghadi me shanti chha gaye
Lucifer ke pass es sawal ka koe jawab nahi tha esliye vo chhup ho gaya aur chehra bilkul serious

Jab ashmita ko realize hue ki usne abhi abhi gusse me kya bol diya hai to usne ek second bhi nahi lagaye sorry bolne me

Ashmita- sorry mera vo matlab nahi tha
I'm really sorry
Lucifer- to kya matlab tha tera?
Main sach esliye nahi janana chahta kyuki vaha kuch acha nahi milega
Aur main tujhse kuch chhupa nahi sakta
Tu bata jab tujhe vo sab pata chalega to tu kaise react karegi?
Abhi to tu bol degi ki main humesha sath hu lekin sach ye hai ki besak mujhe yaad na ho ki mera past me kya hua hai lekin mujhe etna bahut ache se pata hai ki jo hua vo etna bura hai ki teri jaisi strong ladki bhi mujhse door ho sakti hai
Main aage badhna chahta hu ashu esliye piche nahi dekhna chahta
Aur agar tu chahti hai main past pata karu to vohi sahi

Ashmita- sorry na
Main gusse gusse me bol gaye
Lucifer- gusse me kuch bhi bol degi kya?
Main kabhi kuch bola hu gusse me tujhe?

Ashmita- ab se nahi bolungi pakka promise
Lucifer- tune ek baar pehle bhi bola tha aur aaj firse bol diya tu kal vapas yehi karegi
Bc meri feelings ki to kadar hi nahi hai

Ashmita- teri feelings ki kadar nahi hai?
Soch samjh ke bol samjha
Lucifer- nahi to kya?
Firse mere past ke bare me majak banayegi?

Ashmita- lucifer main sorry bol chuki hu
Ab kya tere pair pakdu?
Lucifer- ha pair pakad

Ashmita- le pakad liye tere pair
Ab khush?
Lucifer ke pair pakadte hue boli
Lucifer- abhi nahi
Thoda upar se pakad tisra pair mera

Ashmita- bakwas nahi kar ab
Lucifer- main to bakwas hi karta hu
Tu hi to dusro ke past ka mazak banati hai

Ashmita- galti se nikal gaya muh se
Tujhe pata hai main tujhse kitna pyaar karti hu fir bhi tu aisi baat kar raha hai?
Tara- ashu vo majje le raha hai tere
Aur tu bhi eski baaton me aa rahi hai

Ashmita ne ghoor ke lucifer ko dekha to uska serious chehre par hassi aa gaye jis se ashmita aur jada chhid gaye

Lucifer- main bilkul mazak nahi kar raha bahut jada serious hu main
Ashmita- teri maut mere hi hatho likhi hai dekh lena tu?

Lucifer- agar main mar gaya to jee legi tu?
Lucifer ne bola aur ashmita ka gussa wala chehra utar gaya ab usse samjh nahi aaya ki kya bole

Lucifer- bol mar gaya main to jee legi tu?
Ashmita- chhup rah tu
Mujhe nahi baat karni tujhse

Lucifer- to tu drive kar le
Main tara ke sath piche bath jata hu aur ha mirror ulta kar lena kahi hum dono ko dekhti rahe ki kya kar rahe hai hum
Ashmita- chhup rah tu
Bahut gussa aa raha hai mujhe

Lucifer- kya rakha hai gusse me?
Tara- lucifer chhup raho na tum?
Tara thodi normal ho gaye thi ab tak

Lucifer- dekh raho ho binod kitni respect di ja rahi hai Lucifer ko
Bechari tara jo abhi normal hue thi vapas sarma gaye

Ashmita- ja kaha rahe hai hum?
Lucifer-.

Ashmita- bata nahi to main utar jaungi yahi
Lucifer-.

Ashmita- main sach bol rahi hu
Lucifer- tu pehle decide kar le mujhe karna kya hai?
Kabhi bolti hai muh band rah kabhi muh khulvane ka kaam karvati hai
Pata nahi koe etna confused kaise ho sakta hai?

Ashmita- kaha ja rahe hai hum? Ye bata bas sidhe sidhe
Lucifer- hum ja rahe hai mount abu

Ashmita- aur kaha kyu?
Lucifer- mujhe tara ke sath baraf me sex karna hai esliye

Ashmita- to main kyu ja rahi hu?
Lucifer- tu darshak ban kar dekhna humari raasleela

Ashmita- I'm not interested
Lucifer- dekhna padega
Tere pass koe dusra option nahi hai

Ashmita- tune agar faltu bolna band nahi kiya to main utar jani hu es ghadi se bata rahi hu main
Lucifer- arrogant ass****

Mata- ek sawal puchna tha aapse
Supreme- ha bolo

Mata- aapne apne Lucifer ke sath hi aisa kyu kiya?
Supreme- jiske sath bhi karta vo bhi to kisi ka lucifer hota na?

Mata- agar usse bura hi dikhana tha to usme achae kyu dikhae?
Bachpan se hi usse aisa banate ki koe usse pasand nahi karta
Fir sayad kisi ko etna dard nahi hota
Supreme- dard hi jeevan ka saar hai
Humne Lucifer ko pyaar diya lucifer ko pyaar sikhaya tumne
Lekin fir bhi vo bana to satan hi na?
Es se pata chalta hai ki parishthi kab kisi kaha le jaye ye humare hatho me nahi hota
Agar vo suru se hi bura hota to sabko lagta ye to bura hi hai es se hum kis chhij ki umeed kar sakte hai?
Lekin lucifer se umeed ki ja sakti thi jis umeed ko vo todta aur ek sikhsha deta ki jaruri nahi umeed puri hi ho

Mata- ye sab myth hai
Lucifer ne kisi ki umeed nahi todi
Aapne jitna usko bura banane ki kosis ki vo usme bhi achae dund leta tha esliye aapne uske sath aisa kiya
Supreme - lucifer mera beta hai
Main uske sath khel to khelunga nahi
Ye shristhi ke liye bahut jaruri thi

Mata- maan liya us se logo ko kuch sikh milegi
Chalo maan liya
Lekin kya kuch log usme apne aapko nahi dekhne lag jayenge?
Tab kya hoga?
Supreme- tabhi to balance bana rahega achae aur burae ka

Mata- aur uske pyaar ka kya?
Kyu uski jindagi me etni ladkiya aaye?
Agar dhokha dikhana hi aapka maksad tha to vo kisi ek ladki se bhi to dikha sakte the?
Supreme- sirf dhokha nahi dikhana tha
Saanvi ka pyaar dikhana tha, Simran ki dosti to mitika ka samarpan...

Mata- kya eda ne pyaar nahi kiya tha?
Kya eda dosti nahi karna chahti thi?
Kya eda samarpan nahi thi?
Ya jo khubiya bakiyo me thi vo sab eda me nahi thi?
Agar shakti dikhani thi to kya eda roshini se jada shaktishali nahi thi?
Agar bhalae dikhani thi to kya eda shreya se jada logo se pyaar nahi karti thi?
Agar gyaan dikhana tha to kya eda trisha se jada gyaani nahi thi?
Aur chalo maan liya eska aapke pass koe jawab hai lekin ye sab prithvi par vapas karne ka kya jawab hai aapke pass?
Aur eda ko jeevit rakhne ka kya?

Supreme halki muskurahat ke sath
Aaj humari priye humse naraj lag rahi hai?
Mata- main vohi puch rahi hu jo jaruri hai
Mujhe aaj sab bata dijiye
Mujhe sab janana hai
Kahi aisa na ho ek bete ki bagawat aap sambhal nahi pa rahe agar uski maa ne bhi bagawat suru kar di to puri shristhi ka naash aap rok na pao

Supreme- pyaar se suruvaat karte hai
Eda aur saanvi me se saanvi kyu aur eda kyu nahi?
Maine ek baar pehle bhi bola tha ki eda ko lucifer se door rakhne ka ek bahut bada karan tha lekin tumne usse vardaan deke mere kaam me rukavat kar di
Fir bhi main us chhij ko sambhal lunga
Eda aur saanvi ke saanvi sirf esliye hai kyuki eda ka janam lucifer ke liye hua hi nahi
Bahut badi jimmedari aani hai uske jeevan me aur vo abhi us jimmedari ko uthane ke liye tayar ho rahi hai

Dusra sawal eda aur simran me se simran kyu aur eda kyu nahi?
Eda ki baat to ab karenge nahi uska karan main bata chuka hu to sirf simran kyu sirf eski baat karenge
Lucifer ko koe ek aisa chahiye tha jiski baat vo sun sake aur vo ladki apni baat lucifer se manva bhi sake
Simran ke alava aisa koe nahi hai jo lucifer se apni baat manva sake
Sirf vohi hai jiske liye lucifer ke dil me pyaar se badh kar rishta hai
Aisa rishta jo jismani na ho kar rooh se rooh tak ka hai
Aur jitna eda ka aham role hai vo role simran ke bina pura nahi ho sakta esliye simran es kahani ki mukhya abhinetri hai

Ab baari aati hai mitika
Mujhe mitika bahut pasand hai
Vo ek spy ke jaisi hai kahi se bhi kuch bhi pata kar leti hai
Jab jab lucifer apna rasta bhatkega usse sirf mitika hi samne khadi milegi jo usse bataegi ki kis taraf jana hai
Lucifer jab khud ko dundne lagega tab bhi mitika hi uske sath khadi hogi
Vo na to khud ko mitika ke bagar dund payega aur na apne aap ko mitika ke bina pahchan payega
Mitika usse lucifer bana ke rakhne ka kaam karegi
Jab jab lucifer kamjor padega tab tab mitika uska hath pakad kar usse aaena dikhaegi

Ab aage kon?
Shreya?
Sabse pehla sawal to ye aana chahiye ki shreya saanvi se alag kaise hai?
Dono ek jaisi to hai
Soch bhi ek jaisi hai
To fir do alag alag insaan kyu banaye gaye?
Ek antar hai dono me
Vo dono hi lucifer ko behad pyaar karti hai aur agar hum pyaar ki drasti se dekhe to saanvi shreya se jeet bhi jayegi
To shreya kaha jeetegi?
Shreya ek nischal ladki hai
Usse logo me achae ke alava aur kuch nahi dikhta
Shreya ek aisa pavitar sagar hai jisme koe tair nahi paya aur jo tair gaya usne dunia pa li
Vahi saanvi ka pyaar lucifer se hai usse dunia se humdardi hai lekin pyaar nahi hai
Vo acha karna chahti hai lekin kar nahi pati
Usse khud ke bare me bhi sochna hai aur lucifer ke bare me bhi
Yehi chhij hai jo saanvi aur shreya ko alag banate hai
Ek nischal prem kya hota hai vo dikhane ke liye shreya ka janam hua hai

Ab aate hai trisha par

Ek aisa kirdaar jo khud andhere me rahta hai lekin dusro ko roshni dikhata hai
Lucifer se bilkul ulta
Na parivaar hai, na dost hai na kabhi pyaar hua na kabhi socha
Jo bhi eske pass ayega vo apne baare me kuch na kuch jaan kar hi vapas jayega
Lucifer akela rah kar devil bana aur trisha akeli rah kar ek monk
Lucifer ne andhera kiya to ye samne diya leke khadi mili
Esko ache bure ka pata nahi hai agar koe madad mangne aaya ya fir trisha ko laga ki samne wale ko madad ki jarurat hai to ye khud se madad karne pahuch jayegi
Gyaan ka bhandaar hai trisha
Aisa sayad hi koe sawal hoga jiska sateek jawab trisha ke pass na ho
Lucifer ke jeevan me gyaan aur budhi trisha hi leke aayegi

Roshini

Ab etne kirdaar aa gaye to ek aur lucifer ko to aana hi tha
Jaisa lucifer hai bilkul vaisi hi hai roshini
Apne naam ke bilkul ulti
Esne bhi andhere ko hi chhuna aur ussi me sama gaye
Eski aur lucifer ko bahut kam banegi lekin jab banegi to gayab ki banegi
Simran ke alava agar koe hai jo lucifer ke liye jaan le sakta hai vo roshini hi hai
Lucifer ki premika me sabse khatarnaak aur sabse alag
Jab do buraeya aapas me takrati hai to kya hota hai?
Vo dikhegi jab lucifer aur roshini apas me takraenge
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Mata- ek aur bach gaye
Supreme- maya
Maya lucifer ki premika nahi hai

Mata- to kya hai maya?
Supreme- maya lucifer ko ek parivaar ki mahtavta batayegi
Lucifer us se parivaar kya hota hai ye janega
Parivaar ke liye koe kya kya kar sakta hai kis had tak ja sakta hai ye sab maya ke jariye hi lucifer ko pata chalega
Hum lucifer ko parivaar wala pyaar nahi de paye lekin maya usse parivaar degi, uska pyaar degi
Har vo chhij jo lucifer ko ek parivaar me chahiye thi vo sab usse maya se hi milegi

Mata- to kya maya lucifer se pyaar nahi karti?
Supreme- ye sawal hum waqt par chhod dete hai
Aur kuch bacha hai?

Mata- tara?
Supreme- tara ko tumne banaya hai maine nahi

Mata- chalo maan liya ye sab alag alag kaam ke liye bani hai lekin
Supreme- ab bhi lekin bach gaya kya?

Mata- ha
Simran lucifer se pyaar bhi karti thi aur uski dost bhi thi, vo uske liye dunia se lad bhi sakti thi aur dunia ko us se bacha bhi sakti thi, uske pass bahut gyaan tha aur vo lucifer ko lucifer se mila bhi sakti thi, maine simran ko hi sabse pavitra manugi kyuki vo lucifer ke prati samarpit thi
To fir baki sab ko banane ki kya jarurat thi jab vo sare kaam lucifer ke liye simran hi kar sakti thi to?
Supreme- kya vo etna boj utha pati?
Log usse pagal samjh lete ye soch kar ki are ye kabhi hasti hai to kabhi roti hai kabhi pyaar karti hai to kabhi gussa
Kabhi marti hai to kabhi marham lagati hai
Sab ko alag alag karna hi sabse sahi tha taki vo apna kaam bakubi kar sake

Mata- log kya kahenge sirf eske liye aapne etne logo ki jindagi dard se bhar de?
Log kuch to kahenge unka kaam hai kahna

Lucifer- mujhe sab sochna padta hai
Logo ka kaam nahi hai logo ke bare me sochna lekin mera hai

Mata- theek hai ye bhi maan liya lekin prithvi par ye sab vapas dhorane ka kya karan hai?

Supreme- vahi par to honi hai sabki agni pariksha
Kon apne karyo par khara utarta hai vo sab vahi par dikhega

Mata- kya kabhi lucifer vapas angel ban payega?
Supreme- vo angel hi hai humesha se angel hi raha hai
Usse vapas banane ki jarurat nahi

Mata- kitna khoon bahega?
Supreme- ye dharti ne etne paap kiye hai ki ab khoon se hi vo paap saaf honge

Mata- matlab bahut jada bahega
Supreme - jinka jaruri hai unka to bahega hi

Mata- agar lucifer hi na raha to kya aap us se lad paoge?
Aap bhul rahe ho ki keval lucifer hi usko hara sakta hai
Aapka vardaan hai ye
Supreme- aisa koe vachan nahi koe vardaan nahi jo main nahi tod sakta
Maine dunia banae hai aur esme paida hone wale har ek chhij ko maine banaya hai

Mata- aur usme bahut khamiya bhi hai
Aap na to usko hara paoge aur na us ko baand paoge
Aapki banae dunia ko bahut ache se padha hai usne aur un khamiyo se apne aapko banaya hai

Supreme- priye etna nahi socha karte
Sab kuch hoga apne waqt par
Main es dunia ko bahut pehle jaisa bana dunga jaha sirf aur sirf pyaar tha bas uske liye thoda khoon banana jaruri hai
Mata- aapke thode sabad se hi dar lagta hai mujhe
KYA LUCIFER JINDA BACHEGA????

Finally Budhau ne muh khola, aur humko achha laga
Har baar Budhau ke karname ke karan galiyan padhti thi par ab sab picture clear hai.
Story me sab ka role fix he , pura match fix hai
Par humko kya humko to maja aa raha hai
Rahi baat readers ke response ki to aap hamare jaise achhe response ko consider karo baki nice update great update walo ko ignore karo. Bahot kam stories he idhar jo content deti he thrill deti hai par na waha muh na khulega kisi ka . Kher jane do ab.

Iss story ko mene khandahar ke paas chhod diya tha kyonki wahi pe mere dimag ka bhosda hua tha
Jab Ashmita ki maa ne Lucifer ki maa ko main director bataya na ke Supreme budhau ko
Ab firse padh raha hu to lag raha he ke mene shuru he kaha se kiya tha
Khali itna revise karna he ke
Ashmita : Simran
Inaya : Saanvi
Anisha : Mitika
Baki sab ka jo h role he wo he