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Update 11
'Hostage'
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Samar ki aankh khulti hai to vo apne aapko hospital ke ward me pata hai....uske sar me dard ho rha tha.
Samar - Ahh...mera sar..
Samar apne side me dekhta hai to Sugandha ne uska hath pakda hua tha aur soi hui thi (darasal Samar ko hosh aane me jyada hi vakt lag gya tha) kal raat ko uski ladai killer se hui thi aur abhi bhi raat ke 8 baje the. Sugandha uske pass se hati nhi thi vo bhi kal raat se jagi hui thi. Aur abhi uski neend bethe bethe lag gai thi..
Commissioner Samar ko dekhne aaye the, lekin Samar aur Komal ki halat jankar uske hosh me aane par inform karne ki baat kehkar vapas chale gye the. Unhone uss area ke CCTV footage check karne ke order de diye the.
Samar - Ahh..Maa
Samar ki aawaz sunkar sugandha ki nind khulti hai aur vo bhi uth jati hai.
Sugandha - Uth gye beta tum...nhi..nhi..lete raho uthne ki koshish mat karo..abhi tumhe rest ki jarurat hai...
Samar - Maa...Komal kaisi hai aur Sanjana, vo dono thik to hai naa.
Sugandha - haa beta dono thik hai, abhi tum aaram karo. Main doctor ko bolti hu.
Sugandha bahar chali jati hai, vo doctor aur phone par commissioner ko inform kar deti hai.
Jaise hi komal ko pta chalta hai ki samar ko hosh aa gya hai vo daudte hue, samar ke paas aati hai.
Komal - Bhai
(aur uske gale lag jati hai) I'm sorry bhai. Samar - are kitna roti hai...chal chup kar main thik hu. (Komal ke aansu pochta hai, aur use mathe par kiss karta hai)
Ye pehli baar tha jab samar ne komal ko kiss kiya tha, halaki puri tarah se bhai ki tarah, lekin komal isse chup ho jati hai.
Sanjana bhi komal ke piche khadi thi, vo samar se puchti hai.
Sanjana - ab kaise ho tum?
Samar - haa thik hu, vo kya hua tha vahan.
Sanjana - tumne jab uss killer ko mara, uske baad tum behosh ho gye the. Main komal aur tumko ambulance se hospital layi aur maa ko phone kar diya tha.
Maa ne commissioner uncle ko bhi phone kar diya hai abhi aate hi honge.
Samar - Uncle?
Sanjana - Haa, vo divya ke papa hai na aur maa bhi unhe ache se janti hai.
Samar - acha.
Komal abhi bhi samar se hi lipti hui thi, samar ko thoda dard to ho rha tha apne shoulder me, lekin vo komal ko hata nhi raha tha.
Itne me doctor andar aate hai.
Dr Batra - kaise ho young boy.
Samar - acha hu Sir.
Dr - tum mujhe uncle keh sakte ho, ye dono (komal aur Sanjana ) ki tarah. Ab kaisa mehsus kar rhe ho.
Samar - thik hai sir, bas thoda sa pain hai.
Komal Samar ke side me aa jati hai, Dr Batra Samar ko examine krne lagte hai.
Dr Batra - hmm, quite interesting. Kafi speed se recovery ho rahi hai tumhari. Tension ki koi baat nhi hai, tum aaram karo main chalta hu.
Sugandha - Dr. hum samar ke paas beth sakte hai.
Dr Batra - ha ha sure, bas ise uthne mat dijiyega.
Ye kehkar Dr chale jate hai aur ab room me Sugandha, Sanjana, Komal aur Samar hi the. Kal to Sugandha ne komal ko kuch nhi kaha tha. Lekin ab usne bolna thik samjha.
Sugandha - ye dekho tumhari jidd ki vajah se kya ho gya, kyo koi baat nahi sunti tum. Agar kal ko kisi ko bhi kuch ho jata to....
Samar - Use mat datiye maa, uski koi galti nhi hai. Jo hona tha vo ho gya.
Sugandha - main daant nhi rahi lekin kabhi kabhi dusro ki baat maan na bhi jaruri hota hai, har baar jid achi nhi hoti. Agar ise ya tumhe ya sanjana ko kuch bhi ho jata to main kabhi khud ko maaf nhi kar pati.
Samar sugandha ko gale laga leta hai....kuch nhi hua maa. Sab thik hai.
Komal - Maa thik keh rahi hai bhai....ye sab meri vajah se hi hua hai...agar main picture jane ki jidd nhi karti yaa vahan se jaldi aa jati to kabhi ye nhi hota... I'm sorry maa... promise main ab kabhi jidd nhi karungi...mujhe maaf kar do
Sugandha komal ko gale laga leti hai...
Sugandha - ohh meri bacchi...main tujhe jidd karne se mana nhi kar rahi bas kabhi kabhi bado ki baat maan leni chahiye...chal ab chup ho jaa...
Agle din subah ke vakt hi commissioner Virendra Sharma aur unke sath Suman bhi aa gyi thi hospital. Jab Suman ko pta chala ki kisi par Killer ne hamla kiya hai aur vo bach gya hai to Suman bhi commissioner ke sath chali aayi.
Sabhi samar ke paas hi the. Sugandha , komal, sanjana, commissioner, Suman aur Dr. Batra.
Sugandha - beta ye hai Commissioner Virendra Sharma hamare family friend. Aur divya ke papa.
Samar - Namaste Sir.
Commissioner - khush raho beta, lekin ye kya main koi tumhara sir thodi hu, tum to mere liye family ki tarah ho tum mujhe uncle bhi bula sakte ho. Akhir tum Ranjeet ke bete ho. Vo mere chote Bhai ki tarah tha.
Samar - ji sir, sorry uncle.
Commissioner - ab kaisi tabiyat hai tumhari.
Samar - ab thik hai uncle pain bhi kam hai.
Commissioner - hmm, hame sanjana ne sab btaya, kis bahaduri se tumne uss killer ka mukabla Kiya.
Samar - ji sir pta nhi uss killer ne kya kiya tha mere sath mujhe kuch hosh hi nhi reh gya. Mere senses thik se kaam nhi kar rahe the.
Dr Batra - tumpar hallucination drugs ka uss hua tha, hallugin naa ki drug.
Suman - hallugin?
Batra - ji hallugin, ye ek aisa drug hai jo sidha nervous system par asar karta hai aur insan ke senses ko affect karta hai, iski vajah se uske senses apna control kho dete hai aur hallucination bhi ho sakta hai. Main to hairan hu ki tumne iss drug ke nashe me bhi uss killer se mukabla kiya. Vrna normal insan to isko lene ke baad khada bhi nhi ho skta. You are really a tough guy.
Komal - mere bhaiya Superman hai.
Sabne komal ki taraf dekha to komal shant ho gyi, lekin phir sab has pade.
Samar - lekin vo mere hathon se bach nikla.
Commissioner - hum use jald hi pakad lenge.
Acha ab tum aaram karo, hum jald hi milenge.
Samar ke accident ki khabar sunkar uski dadi aur kavita bhi mumbai aa gyi thi, ji haa samar ne unhe accident ki baat hi btao aur sugandha ko bhi sach batane se mana kar diya. Jab samar ko chanda ki shadi ke bare me pta chala to vo udas ho gya. Na jane kyu lekin use ye baat bardasht nhi ho rahi thi ki chanda ki shadi ho gyi hai.
Suresh bhi hospital me unn sabko dekhne apni business trip cancel karke aaya. Lekin usne samar ko hi datna shuru kar diya, usne inn sabka jimmedar samar ko hi thehraya lekin sugandha ke aage jyada kuch samar ko nhi bol paya.
Divya aur khushi bhi samar se milne aayi thi. Vo kuch der uske sath baithi uss se batein ko aur phir khushi aur divya alag alag apne ghar nikal gyi.
Divya apni car se ghar jaa hi rahi thi ki road par uske samne ek aadmi cycle par Jaa raha tha. Divya horn deti hai lekin vo nahi hat ta, divya baar baar horn bajati hai lekin uspar to jaise koi asar hi nhi ho rha tha.
Divya apni car rok kar bahar aati hai aur jaise hi uske paas pahuchti hai vo aadmi divya ke muh par ek kapda lagata hai aur kuch hi seconds me divya behosh ho jati hai.
Raat 11 bje night club.
2 ladkiya club me entry marti hai.
Ladki 1 - yrrr, ye tune sahi kiya ki bodyguard ko sath nhi layi andar.
Ladki 2 -. Haa yrr ye security ne to mera dimag kharab kar diya hai, jahan jao vahin sath chalte hai.
Ladki 1 - kitna acha lagta hai na aise khulkar jine me.
Ladki 2 - haa yrrr, ye security ke chakkar me koi hamse thik se baat bhi nhi karta tha, lekin aaj ki raat khulkar enjoy karenge.
Ladki 1 - haa bilkul lekin uske pehle ek baar washroom chalte hai.
Dono ladkiya toilet ki taraf jati hai, abhi ye dono mirror ke samne apne aapko sajane sawarne melagi thi ki itne me ladki 1 ke sar par ek chiz se vaar hora hai aur vo vahi behosh ho jati hai. Dusri ladki abhi kuch reaction deti ki uske pehle hi koi use piche se pakad kar usko bhi behosh kar deta hai.
Phir vo aadmi unn dono ladkiyo ko ek bade se plastic bag me dalkar club ke piche ke darvaje se nikal jata hai.
Agle din pure media me aur internet par ek hi video viral ho rahi thi.
Newschannel - breaking news, breaking news. Pehli baar killer aaya samne.
Hamare paas hai ek exclusive video, dekhte hai killer kya keh rha hai.
Sabhi channel ek sath uss video ko chalate hai.
Killer - haaahaa, mumbai valo, swagat hai aapka. Mujhe pehchana? Are pehchanenge kaise, mujhe to pehli baar dekh rahe hai. Main vahi hu jisko aapke shahar ki nikkami police aur sarkar ab tak nhi pakad payi. Clown the killer.
Kuch din pehle mere shikar ko kisi ne mujhse chhin liya, pehli baar main katl karne me nakam raha.
Kuch dikhau. Dekho, vo teeno ladkiyo ke chehre se mask hatata hai. Haaa haaa, ye hai CM, COMMISSIONER aur Business Tycoon Malhotra ki betiya.
Ab meri ek shart 24 ghante me agar vo ladka jisne mujhse mera shikar chhina aur vo dono ladkiya mere paas nhi aayi to inke tukde pure shahar me bikher dunga. Haaaaahhaaa.
Aur ye mat sochna ki police ya koi army inhe bacha sakti hai, agar kuch bhi harkat karne ki koshish ki to ek click me inke shareer ke chithde ho jaayenge.
News me ye video aate hi pure shahar me hadkamp mach gya. Chief Minister, Police Commissioner aur Desh ke sabse bade businessman me se ek Rajiv Malhotra inn teeno ki betiyo ka kidnap ek pagal psycho killer ne kiya tha.
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