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Nice update bhai.Update 7
Sisters' Love
College khatam hone ke baad jab khushi apne ghar pahuchati hai to vahan koi nhi hota, vo paas me gamle ke niche se chabi nikalti hai or tala kholkar andar chali jati hai, is vakt Akansha apni job par gyi thi or raat se pehle nhi aane vali thi.
Khushi thodi der aaram krne ke baad padhai krne baith jati hai, padhai krte hue hi raat ke 8:00 baj jate hai. Khushi uthkar kitchen me jati hai or khana banane lagti hai. 1 ghante me vo khana bnakar taiyar kar deti hai, phir akansha ka wait krne lagti hai or intezar krte hue hi uski aankh lag jati hai.
Akansha raat ke 10:00 bje ghar pahuchati hai, vaise to vo 8:00 bje tak Ghar pahuch jati hai lekin overtime or Mumbai ke traffic ki vajah se vo kabhi kabhi late ho jati thi, aaj to vo vakai kafi late ho gyi thi.
7 saal pehle jab khushi sirf 12 saal ki thi tab ek train hadse me khushi ke parents ki death ho gyi thi, ek hi din me akansha or khushi ki jindagi tabah ho gyi, kyoki unke parents ki parivar ke khilaf jakar love marriage hui thi isliye unka koi rishtedar bhi nhi tha jo unki uss mushkil vakt me madad krta. Parents ki death ke baad khushi ne to jaise bolna hi chhod diya tha, aise vakt me akansha ne hi apne aapko mazboot bnaya or khushi ko sambhala use ek maa ki tarah pyar kiya.
Akansha uss vakt college me hi thi or ek ladke se pyar karti thi, lekin ghar ki jimmedariyon or khushi ko sambhalne me uska pyar kahin piche chhutata gya, phir uske boyfriend ne bhi usse saaf shabdo me breakup kar liya, isse akansha ka dil tut gya jis vakt use pyar or sahare ki sabse jyada jarurat thi usi vakt uske pyar ne use chhod diya, lekin akansha emotionally mazboot ladki thi use apne dard ko chhupana aata tha, usne sab kuch bhulakar sirf apni or khushi ki jindagi ko khushhaal bnane ke bare me socha. Uske baad se uski life me kabhi koi ladka nhi aaya tha, mano usne bhula diya ki jindagi me pyar ki bhi koi jarurat hoti hai, uske liye khushi hi uski duniya thi.
Kismat se bas unke pass apna Ghar tha vrna Mumbai jaise shahar me 2 akeli ladkiyo ke liye jindagi aasan nhi hoti. Jyada bada ghar nhi tha, 2 kamre, ek chota sa hall or kitchen.
Akansha jab ghar aayi to khushi ko dining table par hi sar rakhkar sote paya, ye dekhkar uske chehre par ek udasi bhari muskurahat aa gyi.
Akansha - (khushi ke sar sehlate hue) khushi.
Akansha ke jagane par khushi ki neend khulti hai to vo apni behen ko dekhkar khush ho jati hai.
Khushi - Didi, aa gyi aap?
Akansha - Sorry beta, aaj bahut late ho gyi, tum 2 minute wait kro me abhi fresh hokar aayi.
Kehkar Akansha bathroom me chali jati hai. Change karke dono behne aapas me batein krte hue khana khate hai.
Akansha - Sorry yrr, main late aayi isliye tumhe khana banana pada.
Khushi - Didi, aise mat bolo, mujhe acha lgta hai aapke liye khana bnana.
Akansha - Ok, chalo ab khana khao.
Dono khana khakar khane ke baad sone ke liye bedroom me chalti hai, vaise to khushi ka apna room tha, lekin vo jyadatar Akansha ke sath hi soti thi.
Khushi - Didi?
Akansha - Hmm?
Khushi - Neend nhi aa rhi, chalo na batein krte hai.
Akansha - (muskurate hue) tu bina apni subah se sham ki news btaye to soyegi nhi, chal bta aaj kya kya kiya tune college me?
Bas phir kya tha, khushi kisi radio ki tarah sab kuch batane lagi. Akansha sari batein sunkar hairan or pareshan hue jaa rhi thi.
Akansha - (ghabrate hue) kya? tujhe or komal ko ladko ne pareshan kiya or komal ke sath jabardasti....tu thik to hai naa...tujhe kahi chot to nhi aayi aur komal vo kaisi hai, thik to hai na vo...sab bta mujhe.
Khushi - shant gadadhari bheem shant, aap to ek sath itne sawal krne lge jitne koi jitne koi teacher bhi nhi krta. Sab thik hai, main bhi thik hu or komal vo to maje kar rhi hogi ghar pe.
Akansha - khushi ye koi majak ki baat nhi hai, aaj tumhare sath kuch bhi ho skta tha...aur tum dono bachi kaise.
Khushi - Hame Superman bachane aaya tha na.
Akansha - Superman? Kya bol rahi hai sahi shi bata.
Khushi - Are didi komal ka bhai hai na usne hme bacha liya, vo bahut strong hai (phir usne samar ki fight ko mirch masala lgakar akansha ko bta diya) vo bahut acha hai or Mera dost bhi hai, unn ladko ko to usne hospital pahucha diya mar markar.
Akansha - shukr hai bhagwan ka, ki tum dono safe ho. Lekin jahan tak mujhe pta hai komal ka to koi bhai nhi hai phir...
Khushi - are didi samar uske chacha ka beta hai, kuch din pehle hi mumbai aaya hai gaon se, padhai krne ke liye.
Akansha - Ohh acha, par tu khyal rkhana akele kahi mat jana, tu janti hai naa tere bina meri kya halat hoti hai..agar tujhe kuch hua to me to mar hi jaungi.
Khushi - Didi, pls aisi baat mat kro, main kabhi aapko nhi chhodungi, hmesha aapke sath rahungi, lekin...
Khushi ne mahol ko halka karne ki koshis ki.
Akansha - lekin kya?
Khushi - Lekin shadi krne ke baad to aapko jana pdega.
Akansha - kyashadi, konsi shadi. Shadi teri hogi bachhu meri nahi.
Khushi - lekin badi to aap ho to aapki shadi pehle hogi, phir meri.... Mene to aapke liye ladka bhi dhundh liya hai.
Akansha - ladka kaisa ladka, konsa ladka
Khushi - Haa ladka vo bhi bahut acha, Samar.
Akansha - kya, me koi shadi nhi krne vali kisise or tujhe abhi 2 din hue hai usse mile tune use mere liye chun bhi liya.
Khushi - Hahahaha didi aap to serious ho gye, main to majak kar rahi thi. vaise idea bura nhi hai.
Akansha - (khushi ke sar pe tapli marte hue) chal chup karke soja bahut batein karne lagi hai aaj kal, mere liye tu hi bahut hai mujhe kisi or ki jarurat nhi hai.
Khushi - Ok
Phir khushi akansha ki bahon me simatkar so jati hai or akansha bhi.
Samar ke ghar
Raat ho gyi thi or sabhi sone ke liye jaa chuke the, Samar abhi sone ke liye jaa hi rha tha ki uske kamre par dastak hoti hai, vo darwaza kholta hai to samne komal khadi thi.
Samar - Are gudiya tu abhi, kuch kaam tha kya?
Komal -
Samar - are mene aisa kab kahan, ye bhi tera hi room hai jab chahe tab aa sakti hai.
Komal - Exactly,,,isliye aaj se main bhi aapne sath soungi.
Samar - Haasath soyegi, lekin kyu.
Komal - kyu kya, mann hai to bas...aapko koi problem hai.
Samar - Ok,,Ok so jaa mujhe koi problem nhi hai.
Komal Samar ke sath hi let jati hai
Phir Komal Samar ko good night kiss deti hai lekin ye kiss normal nhi tha, hotho par tha.
Samar -ye kya tha.
Komal - kya? kya tha? kiss tha, so jao chup chap.
Samar - (ye ladki puri pagal hai, ye bhi nhi samjhti ki bhai ko hotho par kiss nhi kiya jata)
Komal Samar ke sath hi so jati hai aur sochti hai
komal -(man me -
To Khushi Akansha ki life me Samar ko lana chahti hai, dekhte hai ki kya vo kamyab hogi.
Lagta hai Samar ka pyar pane me komal sabse aage hogi, abhi baki kisi ko samar se pyar bhi nhi hua or ye uske room me permanent seat bhi book kar gyi.
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Aap bahut achcha likh rahe dheere dheere jo character aur story development ho rahi waqai bahut achchi jaa rahi hai..... agle update ka intezar rahega....
Update 7 Posted on Page no. 19 pls read and give your precious reviews
Awesome update bhaiUpdate 7
Sisters' Love
College khatam hone ke baad jab khushi apne ghar pahuchati hai to vahan koi nhi hota, vo paas me gamle ke niche se chabi nikalti hai or tala kholkar andar chali jati hai, is vakt Akansha apni job par gyi thi or raat se pehle nhi aane vali thi.
Khushi thodi der aaram krne ke baad padhai krne baith jati hai, padhai krte hue hi raat ke 8:00 baj jate hai. Khushi uthkar kitchen me jati hai or khana banane lagti hai. 1 ghante me vo khana bnakar taiyar kar deti hai, phir akansha ka wait krne lagti hai or intezar krte hue hi uski aankh lag jati hai.
Akansha raat ke 10:00 bje ghar pahuchati hai, vaise to vo 8:00 bje tak Ghar pahuch jati hai lekin overtime or Mumbai ke traffic ki vajah se vo kabhi kabhi late ho jati thi, aaj to vo vakai kafi late ho gyi thi.
7 saal pehle jab khushi sirf 12 saal ki thi tab ek train hadse me khushi ke parents ki death ho gyi thi, ek hi din me akansha or khushi ki jindagi tabah ho gyi, kyoki unke parents ki parivar ke khilaf jakar love marriage hui thi isliye unka koi rishtedar bhi nhi tha jo unki uss mushkil vakt me madad krta. Parents ki death ke baad khushi ne to jaise bolna hi chhod diya tha, aise vakt me akansha ne hi apne aapko mazboot bnaya or khushi ko sambhala use ek maa ki tarah pyar kiya.
Akansha uss vakt college me hi thi or ek ladke se pyar karti thi, lekin ghar ki jimmedariyon or khushi ko sambhalne me uska pyar kahin piche chhutata gya, phir uske boyfriend ne bhi usse saaf shabdo me breakup kar liya, isse akansha ka dil tut gya jis vakt use pyar or sahare ki sabse jyada jarurat thi usi vakt uske pyar ne use chhod diya, lekin akansha emotionally mazboot ladki thi use apne dard ko chhupana aata tha, usne sab kuch bhulakar sirf apni or khushi ki jindagi ko khushhaal bnane ke bare me socha. Uske baad se uski life me kabhi koi ladka nhi aaya tha, mano usne bhula diya ki jindagi me pyar ki bhi koi jarurat hoti hai, uske liye khushi hi uski duniya thi.
Kismat se bas unke pass apna Ghar tha vrna Mumbai jaise shahar me 2 akeli ladkiyo ke liye jindagi aasan nhi hoti. Jyada bada ghar nhi tha, 2 kamre, ek chota sa hall or kitchen.
Akansha jab ghar aayi to khushi ko dining table par hi sar rakhkar sote paya, ye dekhkar uske chehre par ek udasi bhari muskurahat aa gyi.
Akansha - (khushi ke sar sehlate hue) khushi.
Akansha ke jagane par khushi ki neend khulti hai to vo apni behen ko dekhkar khush ho jati hai.
Khushi - Didi, aa gyi aap?
Akansha - Sorry beta, aaj bahut late ho gyi, tum 2 minute wait kro me abhi fresh hokar aayi.
Kehkar Akansha bathroom me chali jati hai. Change karke dono behne aapas me batein krte hue khana khate hai.
Akansha - Sorry yrr, main late aayi isliye tumhe khana banana pada.
Khushi - Didi, aise mat bolo, mujhe acha lgta hai aapke liye khana bnana.
Akansha - Ok, chalo ab khana khao.
Dono khana khakar khane ke baad sone ke liye bedroom me chalti hai, vaise to khushi ka apna room tha, lekin vo jyadatar Akansha ke sath hi soti thi.
Khushi - Didi?
Akansha - Hmm?
Khushi - Neend nhi aa rhi, chalo na batein krte hai.
Akansha - (muskurate hue) tu bina apni subah se sham ki news btaye to soyegi nhi, chal bta aaj kya kya kiya tune college me?
Bas phir kya tha, khushi kisi radio ki tarah sab kuch batane lagi. Akansha sari batein sunkar hairan or pareshan hue jaa rhi thi.
Akansha - (ghabrate hue) kya? tujhe or komal ko ladko ne pareshan kiya or komal ke sath jabardasti....tu thik to hai naa...tujhe kahi chot to nhi aayi aur komal vo kaisi hai, thik to hai na vo...sab bta mujhe.
Khushi - shant gadadhari bheem shant, aap to ek sath itne sawal krne lge jitne koi jitne koi teacher bhi nhi krta. Sab thik hai, main bhi thik hu or komal vo to maje kar rhi hogi ghar pe.
Akansha - khushi ye koi majak ki baat nhi hai, aaj tumhare sath kuch bhi ho skta tha...aur tum dono bachi kaise.
Khushi - Hame Superman bachane aaya tha na.
Akansha - Superman? Kya bol rahi hai sahi shi bata.
Khushi - Are didi komal ka bhai hai na usne hme bacha liya, vo bahut strong hai (phir usne samar ki fight ko mirch masala lgakar akansha ko bta diya) vo bahut acha hai or Mera dost bhi hai, unn ladko ko to usne hospital pahucha diya mar markar.
Akansha - shukr hai bhagwan ka, ki tum dono safe ho. Lekin jahan tak mujhe pta hai komal ka to koi bhai nhi hai phir...
Khushi - are didi samar uske chacha ka beta hai, kuch din pehle hi mumbai aaya hai gaon se, padhai krne ke liye.
Akansha - Ohh acha, par tu khyal rkhana akele kahi mat jana, tu janti hai naa tere bina meri kya halat hoti hai..agar tujhe kuch hua to me to mar hi jaungi.
Khushi - Didi, pls aisi baat mat kro, main kabhi aapko nhi chhodungi, hmesha aapke sath rahungi, lekin...
Khushi ne mahol ko halka karne ki koshis ki.
Akansha - lekin kya?
Khushi - Lekin shadi krne ke baad to aapko jana pdega.
Akansha - kya
Khushi - lekin badi to aap ho to aapki shadi pehle hogi, phir meri.
Akansha - ladka kaisa ladka, konsa ladka
Khushi - Haa ladka vo bhi bahut acha, Samar.
Akansha - kya, me koi shadi nhi krne vali kisise or tujhe abhi 2 din hue hai usse mile tune use mere liye chun bhi liya.
Khushi - Hahahaha didi aap to serious ho gye, main to majak kar rahi thi. vaise idea bura nhi hai.
Akansha - (khushi ke sar pe tapli marte hue) chal chup karke soja bahut batein karne lagi hai aaj kal, mere liye tu hi bahut hai mujhe kisi or ki jarurat nhi hai.
Khushi - Ok
Phir khushi akansha ki bahon me simatkar so jati hai or akansha bhi.
Samar ke ghar
Raat ho gyi thi or sabhi sone ke liye jaa chuke the, Samar abhi sone ke liye jaa hi rha tha ki uske kamre par dastak hoti hai, vo darwaza kholta hai to samne komal khadi thi.
Samar - Are gudiya tu abhi, kuch kaam tha kya?
Komal -
Samar - are mene aisa kab kahan, ye bhi tera hi room hai jab chahe tab aa sakti hai.
Komal - Exactly,,,isliye aaj se main bhi aapne sath soungi.
Samar - Haa
Komal - kyu kya, mann hai to bas...aapko koi problem hai.
Samar - Ok,,Ok so jaa mujhe koi problem nhi hai.
Komal Samar ke sath hi let jati hai
Phir Komal Samar ko good night kiss deti hai lekin ye kiss normal nhi tha, hotho par tha.
Samar -
Komal - kya? kya tha? kiss tha, so jao chup chap.
Samar - (ye ladki puri pagal hai, ye bhi nhi samjhti ki bhai ko hotho par kiss nhi kiya jata)
Komal Samar ke sath hi so jati hai aur sochti hai
komal -(man me -
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