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Thriller DIL,DOSTI AND REVENGE (action,thrill, suspense and romance)(Completed)

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Next update Kal subah aayega dosto.

Sath banaye rakhe.........
 

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UPDATE 2



Ki achanak hi hamari gadi KE samne ek aurat aa gyi or Maine sahi Samy per break laga diya barna bahut bada accident ho jata mene gadi se Bahar us aurat se puchha ki aap thik to hai to us aurat ne Mujhe dekha or dekhte hi asi chouki ki koi bhoot dekh liya ho mene Radha ko ishara kiya to usne us aurat ko sambhala or fir humne usse pochha ki aap thik to hai to abhi bhi Mujhe ghoor rahi thi to Radha ko pata nhi kiya hua usne unhe thoda hilaya jisse vo thoda hosh me aayi or fir hamse kaha ki me thik hu. To Maine unse puucha aap kaha bhag rahi thi aise. To unhone kaha ki koi Mera peechha Kar Raha hai please Mujhe bacha lijeye Surya…

Ye sunke ham sab buri tarah choke ki inko Mera naam kaise pata Maine to nahi bataya na hi to Maine unse poocha aapko Mera naam kaise pata hai. to unhone kaha ki main tumhare maa Papa ko janti thi Maine tumhe bhi dekha hai bachpan me. Main abhi aage kuch poochta isse pehle hi kuch 4 log hamare pass aaye or kehne lage ki is aurat ko hamare hawale Kar do Verna thik nahi hoga

Main- tum log kon ho or inke peeche kyu pade ho

G1- dekh londe chup chap yaha se Chala ja Verna thik nahi hoga samjha na

Tabhi dusra bola

G2- yaar is loundiya ko to dekh Kya mast maal hai iske sath raat gujarne per to maja hi aa jayega


Ye sunke Mujhe itna gussa aaya Ki Maine ek punch bana Kar us dusre gunde ko mar diya or itni tej punch tha ki kisi ko kuch pata bhi nahi Chala ki Kya hua or bahi vo dusra gunada thodi door per peeth ke Bal gira hua tha or bilkul bhi Hil nahi Raha tha to uske sathi ne jab use dekha to turant hi uske pass Gaye or use uthane lage lekin Sayed vo behosh ho gaya tha or ye dekhkar un logo ko gussa aaya or vo log Mujhe marne ke liye jaise hi aage bade Maine turant hi un baki KE teeno ko ek ek punch or jad diya unki naak per or teeno bahi ke bahi gir Gaye or urhe bhi nahi ye sab itni fast hua ki kisi ko kuch dikha hi nahi ki ye sab hua kaise tabhi Radha mere pass daud Kar aayi or mere gale lag gayi or rone lagi Maine usko shant karwaya or uski peeth thapthapai tab jakar vo shant hui or fir Vijay jakar unlogo ko lato se marne laga ki or bolne laga ki sale tum logo ki himmat kaise hui Radha ko kuch bolne ki.fir Maine usko bhi shant karwaya or hum us aunty ke pass gye lekin vo aunty vaha per nahi thi or humne aas pas dekha lekin vo aurat vaha nahi thi uske istarh gayb hone se hum sabhi pareshan the ki vo kaha chali gyi lekin kuch samj me nhi aa Raha tha to humne fir un bato ko chhod Kar car me baithe or Ghar ki or nikal gaye. Ghar aaker hum sab fresh hue or fir dinner kiya or jakar aapne apne room me sone ki try karne lage. Meri neend bilkul udd gyi thi ye sab soch Kar ki ye ho Kya Raha hai

Pehle bua fufa ka rajesthan ke naam per pareshan hona fir Kaka ka adhi baat batana or fir vo aurat ka achanak Mera naam Lena or fir gayab hona kuch bhi samj me nhi aa Raha tha ki ye sab ho Kya Raha hai. Tabhi Radha ne Mera dhyan toda or mujhse isi bare me poochne lagi lekin Mujhe khud kuch pata nahi tha to use Kya batata. Fir Radha boli Bhai Mujhe aapse kuch kehna hai

Main- ha bol na gudiya Kya bolna hai

Radha-Bhai vo darashal iiiii lovvvvveevv youuuuj

Main- are to isme itna hakla kyu rahi hai I love you 2

Radha- Bhai ye Bhai bahen wala nahi balki bf gf wala bola hai Maine

Ye sunke me buri tarah choka ki ye Kya bol rahi hai

Main- ye Kya bol rahi ho tum ha pagal to nahi ho gyi

Radha- pagal to hui ho lekin aaoke pyar me me to aapse kab se ye kehna chahti thi lekin Meri himmat hi nahi ho rahi thi lekin aaj Maine ye pakka faisla Kar ke bol hi diya

Main- (gusse me)dekh Radha hum Bhai bahen hai ye hamare beech nahi ho sakta samjhi or ab ye sab batein bhool jao

Radha- bhai jaan manglo lekin ye sab mat bolo please accept my love or vo jor jor se rone lagi

Mujhse ye sab nahi dekha ja Raha tha lekin vo Jo keh rahi thi bo bhi nahi Kar sakta that Mujhe use pyar se samjhana chahiye Sayed maan Jaye has

Main- dekh Radha ye rona band ye nahi ho sakta samajne ki kosis Kar ye rista kabhi bhi hum samne nahi la payenge or bua or fufa ka to soch in per Kya beetangi ye sab jab unhe pata chalega. Dekh please ye sab bhool ja ha apne Bhai ka kehna nahi manegi tu ha

Radha- Bhai aapke liye to jaan bhi hazir hai lekin ye mujhse nahi hoga isse behtar to me marna paasand karungi. Or ye keh Kar vo Bahar bhaag gyi or Mujhe kafi dar lagne laga ki ye kahi koi Ulta kadam na utha le Mujhe kuch karna hi hoga. Or me bhi uske peeche peeche bhaga to bo Mujhe kitchen ki taraf jati hui dikhi me uske peeche gya to dekha ki vo chaku se apna hath katne ki kosis Kar rahi hai to Maine turant uske hath se chaku chhina or ek laga Kar diya gaal per. Or use gale laga liya or

Main- pagal ho gyi hai ye Kya karne ki kosis Kar rahi thi ye bhi na Socha ki Tere baad Mera Kya hoga bua ka Kya hoga or Tere Papa ka Kya hoga. Kya jawab deta me bua ko ha

Radha- to Bhai me Kya karti me apne dil ko u toot te hue nahi dekh sakti please Bhai accept my love.

Main- dekh abhi tu chal so ja hum subah is per baat karenge thik hai subah me tuje apna faisla suna dunga thik hai abhi chal soja

Ye kehke Maine use thoda shant kiya or kamre me le aaya pyar se sehla ke usko sula diya

Or fir me iske bare me sochne laga ki Kya kiya Jaye Mujhe kuch bhi samj me nahi aa Raha tha. Halaki me bhi usse pyar karta tha lekin kabhi admit nahi Kar pa Raha tha tabhi Mujhe ek idea aaya or mene bua ko call kiya

Main- hello bua Kya haal hai

Bua- beta me to thik hu tum log thik se pahuch Gaye koi takleef to nahi hui na

Main- are nahi bua koi takleef nahi hui for me thodi der shant Raha or fir bola bua Mujhe aapse kuch kehna hai


Bua- ha bol na beta Kya hua sab thik to hai na


Fir Maine unko Jo abhi hua bo sab Bata diya ki Radha ne Mujhe prapose kiya hai abhi

Main- bua aap please koi idea dejiye na ki me Kya karu


Fir kuch der Shanti chhyi rahi fir bua boli

Bua- beta agar tere Dil me uske liye Jara so bhi feeling hai to tu usko haa bol de

Ye sunke me bura choka ki ye bua Kya bol rahi hai

Main- bua aap ye Kya bol rahi ho vo aapki beti hai or Meri Bahan bhi hai me aisa nahi Kar sakta

Bua- beta ye Meri nahi tumhari MAA ki ikchha thi ki tumhari or Radha ki shadi ho. Main to ye baat bhool hi gyi thi lekin Meri beti ki kismat Sayed tum hi ho isiliye usne tumhe prapose kiya hai. Meri maan to tu use ha bol de. Or bese bhi usko Tere se achha pati kahi nahi milega. Tu khud soch or faisla Kar baki Meri taraf se to ha hi samj.


Fir me kuch der sochta Raha or mene bua ko baad me baat karne ka bol ke call Kat Kar diya.

Uske baad me raat bhar so na saka yahi sab batein me sochta Raha or Radha ka pyara chera dekhta Raha jisse Mujhe 2 Saal PEHLE ki ek ghatna yaad aa gyi.

Hua ye tha ki school me ek ladka Radha ko bahut pareshan karta tha uska naam Rohit tha currently MLA ka beta tha to sabhi ko rov jhadta rehta that or Radha ko kafi chedta rehta that humne usko kafi samjhaya ki baat aage mat bada lekin vo maanta hi nahi tha. Aise hi ek din school me koi function tha to hum sab usme gye the vo Rohit bhi aaya tha usne function ke dauran Radha ki colddrink me kuch Mila diya jisse use chakkar aane lage me uske pass tha nahi to vo apni saheliyo ko washroom ka bol ke chali gyi lekin kafi der Tak jab vo nahi aayi to uski saheli Riya ne Mujhe bataya ki Radha gayab hai mil nahi rahi hai. To me bhayankar choka or me or Vijay osko dundne lage lekin kahi nahi mili me us din bahut ghabra gaya tha ki Radha kaha chali gyi. me neeche hi sab kamro me dekh Raha tha or Vijay oper. To vo chhat per Chala gaya to chhat ka gate lock tha vo bapis ja hi Raha tha ki usko chhat per kuch aawaj aayi or samaj gaya ki yaha kuch gadbad hai, usne turant Mujhe call karke uper bulaya to bhagkar aaya or unki baatein sunkar Mera khoon hi khol gaya or Mujhe bahut tez gussa aaya mene ek jordaar laat Mari gate per to vo toot Kar gir gaya or me or Vijay chhat per aaye to dekha ki Rohit or uske kuch dost Radha ke kapde utaar rahe the or ek ladka uska mms bana Raha tha. Maine turant duad Kar ek flying kick us camera bale ko di to vo to bo chhat ki reling per gira or uska balance bigda or vo neeche fir gaya chhat se tabtak Vijay ne Rohit ko pakad Kar ek punch diya uski naak per jisse vo ladkhada Kar gir gaya or fir me uth Kar Maine us Rohit ko uthaya or uske muh per puches ki barsaat Kar di jisse vo behosh ho gaya lekin me usko Marta hi Raha tabhi peeche se Mujhe kisi be pakda to me usko marne hi wala tha lekin ruk gaya kyuki vo Radha thi or Mujhe Mana Kar rahi thi or ro rahi thi usko is haalat me dekh Kar Maine use jhat se apne gale laga liya or usko dilasha dene laga ki kuch nahi hua hai. Kafi der lagi mujhe usko sambhalne me fir usko sambhalkar Maine police ko call karke bulaya hum log us Rohit ko leke neeche aaye or jab Tak police aayi Vijay us dusre ladke ko bhi utha laya or bahi patak diya. Ye sab dekh Kar principal bhi aa Gaye or humse pochhne lage ki Kya hua hai to Vijay ne unko pori Kahani Bata di unko bahut gussa to aaya lekin vo kuch Kar nahi paa rahe the kyuki vo MLA ka ladka tha tabhi vaha police aa gayi or unhone use arrest Kar liya lekin unhe bhi pata tha ki Rohit kon hai lekin vo sab hame nahi jaante the ki kon hai. Isiliye vo log filhaal usko leke hospital chale Gaye kyuki dono ki haalat kafi nazuk thi fir hum Ghar aa Gaye to fufa ko sari sacchai Bata di unko bahut gussa aaya or vo kisi ko phone karte hue Bahar chale gye.

Us hadse ke 2 din baad sab normal ho rahe the ki achanak vo MLA hamare Ghar aaya or fufa ke pair padne laga ki uske bete ko maff karde lekin fufa ne koi Rehan nahi dikhaya or usko laat maarkar Ghar Bahar nikal diya uske baad us Rohit ko 4 Saal ki saja hui or vo abhi bhi jail me hai lekin uske baap us MLA ka kuch pata nahi Chala ki vo kaha gayab ho gaya.

Us hadse se me bahut ghabra gaya tha ki agar Meri Radha ko kuch ho jata to me Kya karta lekin bhagwan ki daya se sab thik ho gaya usi din se mujhme Radha ke prati kuch alag feeling aati thi lekin me usko ignore Kar deta tha lekin aaj Mera dimaag haar man gaya tha or Mera dill Jeet Raha tha kahi na kahi me bhi usse pyar karta tha ye Mera dill Mujhe Bata Raha tha or fir bua wali baat yaad aai ki Meri mom bhi yahi chahti thi to mene decide Kar liya ki Kal me mere or Radha ke din ko special banaoga ye sochka Mujhe itni Shanti mili ki me Bata nahi sakta. Mene time dekha to abhi 4 am ho Raha tha to me Radha ko hug karke so gaya………….
 

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Dost start bhi acha kiya ha start ka hi suspense bna dala ab to Second update ka besabri sa intzar ha
Thanks for your support Bhai.....

And second update de diya hai.....
 

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Update 3





Subah subah Radha jaldi uth gyi or apne aap ko Meri baho me dekh Kar vo sharmane lagi or bahut kush bhi hui fir usne mujhe mere lip to lip ek halka kiss kiya lekin usko Sayed bahut chota laga to vo fir se Mujhe kiss karne lage jisse Meri bhi need khul gayi or me bhi usko reply dene laga jisse bo or khus ho gayi karib 5 minutes Tak hum kiss karte rahe. Jab hum dono ki saas thodi ukhdi to mene kiss ko Todd diya or uski aankho me dekhne laga vo bahi Sharma rahi thi or me usko hi dekhta dekhta usi me kho gaya thodi der baad jab mene koi pratikriya nahi di to usne mujhe hilaya jisse me hosh me aaya or usko dekh mene bo bola jiski usko ummed thi mene bola

I LOVE YOU TOO MERI SWEETU

Jise sunkar usne turant Mujhe apne baho me sama liya. Or kafi der Tak gale lage rahe tabhi gate per Vijay ne dastak di to hum log alag hue or Radha Sharma Kar bathroom me chali gyi fresh hone or mene darwaja khol Kar Vijay ko Ander liya or ose good morning wish kiya same. Usne bhi Mujhe wish kiya fir bola ki abhi Tak so Raha hai chal jaldi fresh ho or ghoomne chalte hai

Mene usko neeche wait karne ko bola or fir me dusre kamre me ja Kar fresh hone laga. Fir thodi der baad hum dono fresh hokar niche mile or nasta karne lage hum dono hi chupchap the or chupke chupke ek dusre ki aankho me dekh rahe the or Vijay hum dono ko dekh Raha tha ki aakhir chal Kya Raha hai. Tabhi usse Raha nahi gaya or usne mujhse pooch hi liya ki aakhir baat Kya hai to mene bhi usko Bata diya ki Kal raat Kya hua tha. Jise sunkar Vijay Mujhe ektak ghoorne laga or aise dekha ki Mujhe kha hi jayega lekin usne jab bola to kamaal hi ho gaya usne Radha ko bola ki aakhir tumne ise prapose Kar hi diya maan Gaye tumko wah Bhai wah or ye kehke usne Radha ko 500 RS bhi de diye jise dekh Kar mene poochha ye Kya hai to usne mujhse kaha ki me ye baat bahut pehle se janta tha ki Radha tumse pyar karti hai or usne mujhse idea bhi manga tha ki ma Kya karu to Maine usko bola tha ki kabhi aise mouke per tum usko prapose Kar Dena jaisa abhi hua hai lekin Mujhe doubt tha ki ye prapose nahi karegi isiliye mene ise shart laga Kar uljha diya ki agar isne tumhe prapose kiya to main tumhe 500 RS dunga to isne bhi Mera challenge accept Kar liya or me aaj apni shart har gaya to mene usko uske pese de diye. Ye sunke Mujhe itna gussa aaya vijay per ki mene usko utha Kar sofe per patka or usko dhone laga(friend s wali ladi koi serious nahi) jisse Mera gussa kafikam hua or usko utha Kar Maine baitha diya or usse poocha ki vo jab se janta hai or usne mujhe kyu nahi bataya to usne kaha ki 2 Saal PEHLE isne Mujhe bataya tha ki iski feeling badal rahi hai tumhare liye to mene isko smay per sab chhod dene ko keh diya or usi ne Mujhe tumhe kuch bhi batane se Mana kiya tha apni kasam dekar to mene tumhe kuch nahi bataya sorry yaar ab maaf bhi karde…

Fir Maine usko gale laga Kar maaf kardiya halaki main usse gussa tha hi nahi fir bhi isi beech Radha aa gayi or hum teeno fir gale lage ek sath. Uske baad hum logo ne udhar bahut dhamaal machaya do Dino Tak fir hum sab log Jaipur KE liye nekle car se hi. Hum log subah nasta karke nikal Gaye the SAFAR kafi lamba tha jisme lagbhag 7 hours lagne the to hum sab masti karte hue ja rahe the abhi lagbhag hum log 50 km hi aaye honge ki ek sunsaan ilake me ek van hame overtake karke hamere aage rok li jisse Maine turant break lagaya jisse hum sab Hil Gaye me Bahar nikal Kar chillaya ki

Abe andha hai Kya aisa koi break lagata hai Kya to Meri awaj sunkar us van me se 10 mustande aadmi nikle or Meri taraf aane lage. Mujhe unke irade kuch theek nahi lag rahe the. Fir unme se ek Banda aage aaya or bolne laga

G1- kyu be londe tune hi us din hamare aadmi ko mara tha na

Main- kis din ki baat Kar rahe ho tum

G1- abhi 2 din pehle raat ke samay jab mere aadmi ek aurat ka peecha Kar rahe the

Main- ha us din maine hi mara tha unko. kyu tum badla lene aaye ho mujhse.maine has ke bola

G1- Abe jyada mat has ha hum badla lene hi aaye ha sale Teri himmat kaise hui unko hath lagane ki unme se ek Mera Bhai bhi tha.

Main- Abe ja us din to unko Maine jinda chhod diya tha lekin agar aaj tum logo ne apni limit cross ki to aaj tum mese koi bhi Ghar lout Kar nahi ja payega. Samjha. Or achha yad aaya jate jate Mujhe ye batate jao ki tum us aurat ke peeche kyu pade the or vo hai kon chal jaldi Bata.

G1- Abe sale Teri himmat ki daad deta hu hum log 10 hai or tum 2 fir bhi itni himmat wah wah wah.

Fir usne apne aadmiyo ko ishara kiya or 2 aadmi hamari tarf aane lage to mainne Socha Sayed Vijay ko ye log noksaan pahucha sakte hai isiliye mene Vijay se pehle hi unko speed me ek ek punch jad diya jisse bo log bahi ke bahi gir Gaye. Or ye sab itni jaldi hua ki kisi ko kuch samaj me hi nahi aaya ki aakhir hua Kya hai fir me bola

Main- soch lo abhi bhi aage badna hai ya Ghar Jana hai kyuki ye aakhiri mouka hai tum logo ke pass

Un dono ki ye halat dekh Kar unko yakeen hi nahi ho Raha tha ki ek londe ne unke 2 behtreen pehalbaano ko ek ek punch me gira diya. ye soch Kar hi vo log thode thode darne lage the or confuse the ki aage Jaye ya nahi

Tabhi unka Jo boss tha bo jor se bola mar dalo sale ko koi bhi jinda na Jane paye or me bhi isi ka intejaar Kar Raha tha or isi KE sath unme se ek ne chaku nikal Kar mujh per hamle kiya lekin me iske liye ready tha or mene oska hath pakad Kar mod diya or usse chaku chhin liya or fir Maine ek ko pakad Kar uske gale per fira dala. Tabhi dusra aa gaya.to Mene uske hath me ghusaya. 3-4 jagah and baha SE hata KE uske gale per fira dala.tabhi 2 log or aa Gaye. Jo Mujhe marne ka try karne lage. Lekin Mene ek ko duck kiya or dusre ke gale per fira dala.and turant hi us bande KE gale me bhi ghusa diya.aise hi karte hue Mene sabhi KE gale me chaku Chala diya.and ye sab karne me Mujhe muskil se 20 second lage. aftar this keval vo boss hi jinda bacha tha baki sab idhar udhar mare pade or boss poora kaamp Raha tha me uske pass gaya or use pakad Kar bola ki ab Bata bo aurat kon thi or kyu peechhe pade the tum log uske

Vo dar ke mare kaamp Raha tha or Meri aankhe dekh Kar to uski fat ke hath me aa gyi thi to usne mujhe batana suru kiya

G1- bhai vo aurat kon hai hum nahi jante hame to kisi ne us aurat ki supari di thi isiliye hum use pakad rahe the.

Main- kisne di thi supari unko maarne ki

G1- bhai usko maarna nahi keval pakdna tha or jisne hame supari di thi uske hawale karna tha. Or Bhai jisne hame supari di thi ham use nahi jaante.humne to use dekha bhi nahi hai

Main- to fir usne tum logo se contact kaise kiya

G1- bhai uska private no. Se call aaya tha or usne mere account me pese bhi daal diye the isi liye ham us aurat ko dhood rahe the or vo us din mil bhi gyi thi lekin aap beech me aa Gaye or vo Bach ke nikal gayi.

Main- uska naam pata hai tumko

G1- bhai uska naam CHANDRIKA

Tha. Ha yahi naam bataya tha us pese dene wale ne


Fir Maine kuch soch Kar usse uska account no. Manga or usko Jane ka bol diya. Or vo baha se 9-2-11 ho gaya. Or Maine peeche dekha to Radha or vijay bahi car ke pass kahde hokar fighting ka maja le rahe the. Fir me unke pass gaya and Maine unko car me baithaya or fir hum log nikal Gaye apni manjil ki or. Raste me hamne lunch kiya ek restaurant me fir karib 7 hours me hum log Jaipur me apne hotal pahuch Gaye. Baha pahuch Kar hamne 2 room book kiye the ek me Vijay akela or ek me main or Radha sath me. Hum sab ko kafi thakan ho rahi thi to hum log aaram karne lage.or aaram karte karte me haal hi me hui ghatnao ke bare me soch Raha tha ki ye sab Kya ho Raha hai ye CHANDRIKA kon hai mene to kabhi iske bare me nahi suna. Sayed bua janti hongi. Ha me unhi se Ghar Jane ke baad pochhunga ki ye kon hai.filhal Mujhe ye to samaj me aa gaya tha ki aage chal ke Meri life normal to nahi hone wali.





To be continued…………..
 
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