Incest Vihaan Aur Ashita - Bhai Behen ki kahani - Exclusively written for XFORUM(COMPLETED)

[Naina]

gaon mein alert rahna hoga vihaan ko. kya pata woh buddhiya ( Pooja ko maarne wali) kab nigal jaye ushko... buddhiya pe bharosha nahi ki jaa sakti..
Brilliant update casi sir.

 

[Lone survivor]

thanks very much bhai....
kushi hui aap ke coment dekh kar, yaar har baar hanssate zaroor ho apne comment se
haan yaad hai mujhe ap ne last comment mein kaha tha ke suman ki character dark nahin hai wo sahi kar rahi hai...
shukriya bhai sath bane rehna yaara

errr haan Ashita kaun hai?
she is just an imagination bro.
if you have not yet read my stories then read Aisha in "yeh bhi muhabat hi hai"
read Shanaya in "Love with a rapist"
Read Aditi in "the inocent wife"
Read "Sanjana" in Chawla family
tab mujhse sab ke baare mein eise hi puchoge..... I put life in my characters....
Will request you to read only one intro update of Shanaya though here:
Update 1 Shanaya
pease read this tab dekhta hoon ab kia kehte ho bhai

Bhai ye update padha but baki nahi padh sakta because I'm leaving xforum as soon as I finish my story
Bhai etne sweet character aise imagination me koe nahi likh sakta
Maine kamine type ke likhta hu kyuki main us atmosphere se aaya ya mujhe us time ki mili , aap sweet likhte ho matlab aapko koe sweet mili

Ab ye mat bolna ki Bhai sab imagination hai
Imagination ki ek limit hoti hai aur koe bhi writer etni barikiyo se bandi ke character ko explain nahi kar sakta unless or until uske liye me us character jaisa koe aaya ho

Abhi aap inkaar karoge aur hum maan lenge lekin......
Chalo chhodo next review dene do

 

[Casinar]

Bhai ye update padha but baki nahi padh sakta because I'm leaving xforum as soon as I finish my story
Bhai etne sweet character aise imagination me koe nahi likh sakta
Maine kamine type ke likhta hu kyuki main us atmosphere se aaya ya mujhe us time ki mili , aap sweet likhte ho matlab aapko koe sweet mili

Ab ye mat bolna ki Bhai sab imagination hai
Imagination ki ek limit hoti hai aur koe bhi writer etni barikiyo se bandi ke character ko explain nahi kar sakta unless or until uske liye me us character jaisa koe aaya ho

Abhi aap inkaar karoge aur hum maan lenge lekin......
Chalo chhodo next review dene do

thanks Shanaya padhne ke liye.
baat yeh nahin ke koyi eisi meri life mein hai ya mere surroundings mein hai,
bat yeh hai ke main ladki ko eisi dekhna passand karta hon jeise describe karta hoo, mere liye feminity woh hoti hai jo describe karta hoon hallan ke asli life mein jo apni hai wo bahut hi achchi hai, magar mere koyi bhi characters mein ussko nahin describe karta hoon..... magar bhai mere life mein dayan type bhi aaye hein, eisi ke zindagi aaj bhi ussko gali deti hai, eisi ke usske andar 1000 goliyan bharrne ka mann karta hai, eisi ke usske tukde tukde karke, usske jism ke sabhi organs baahar nikal kar uss par muthne ka mann karta hai, weisi bhi lady meri life mein aayi hai, magar ussko to describe karna mere liye shaitaan ko badhawa dena hai iss liye main positive feminine characters ko describe karta hoon hamesha
thanks very much bhai.

 

[Lone survivor]

About last four update
Firstly I want to take my words back for amit, he is a real gem
Respect for him

Secondly
Aap bolo to ye sala committee walo ki gand me danda daal du kya
Ya Bhai suman ke hatho gand me danda dalva dena tha story me alag hi aag lag jani thi

Third
Vihaan ka Gaon jana matlab apne baap ke sath jo hua uska badla lena
To be honest I don't thik ki vo necessary tha kyuki vihaan aur ashita ki story hai , unke baap ko bich me daalne ka.. Okay thik hai
But sala happy happy padh ke bhi bore ho jate
To yaha writer ke sath jate hai
Jo Kiya thik hai

Fourth
As expected sex hona hi tha, thoda jada erotic kar sakte the because first time tha but still it's good
But aur jada acha ho sakta tha bhai
Vaise main sex prefer nahi karta story me but public ki demand ke liye chalo thik hai

Fifth
Last emotions
On point
But vihaan ko sulana nahi tha
Unki ek conversation dikhani chahiye thi without sex and romance just a simple and sweet conversation

Overall great update as usual
Keep rocking and keep shining

 

[bondjamesbond09]

Update 56 – Back Home That Night​

Amit ne tab kaha,

“Good idea, this can be possible. Dekha aap logon ne Raghunath ji ne bhi keh diya ke baad mein donon ek saath reh sakte hein to filhaal sab ko khamosh karne ke liye chalo tum log 3 saal ke liye alag ho jao, phir usske baad mil lena yaar…” aur Amit ne Vihaan aur Ashita se ek enkh mara!

Anirud ne kaha,

“OKAY IT WILL BE DONE!”

Ab aguey….

Sab ghar wapas aaye. Ek sannata Chaya hua tha ghar mein. Koyi kuch nahin bol raha tha. Vihaan aur Ashita khamosh sofe par baith gaye, lagta tha bahut thak gaye hein jeise koyi pahaad tod kar wapas aaye the.

Anirud ne khud ko apne kamre mein band kar liya, Suman usske piche hi gayi.

Ashita, Vihaan ke kaandhe par apna sar rakh kar usske haath mein apna haath daal kar hataash baithi thi aur Vihaan chhat taak raha tha kuch sochte hue. Ek dusre ke dil ki dhadkanen sunaayi de rahe the, itni khamoshi thi ghar ke andar.

Phir thori der baad Suman aur Anirud apne kamre se baahar nikle jinnko dekhte hue Vihaan aur Ashita heyraan hue kyunke weh soch rahe the ke donon sone chale gaye.

Sab ab ek saath lounge mein baithe hue the bina kuch kahe. Suman aur Anirud unn donon ke chehre ki udaasi dekh rahe the. Suman ke enkhen bhar aaye aur Anirud ko dekha. Tab Anirud ne gala saaf karte hue kaha,

“Vihaan to tum kal subha nikal jana tumko tumhare nana ke ghar chorr aunga kaam par jaane se pehle hi.”

Vihaan ki jagah Ashita ne rote hue Vihaan se chipak kar kaha,

“No papa bhai ko kahin mat bhejiye nah please!”

Vihaan khamosh raha.

Anirud ne kaha,

“Ashu tum kia chahti ho ke media wale hamare ghar ke saamne jama ho jaaye aur hamara tamasha bane?”

Ashita ne jawaab nahin diya buss Vihaan ko aur zor se jakar rahi thi.

Tab kuch der baad Vihaan ne kaha,

“Papa main aap ke gaon jana ziada passand karunga, uss peepal ke peyr ko dekhne ka mann kar raha hai, uss nadi ke paas jaane ko mann kar raha hai, badi bhua se milne ko mann kar raha hai, I would prefer to go to Dadaji’s place.”

Ashita ne aur ziada rote hue kaha,

“bhai mujhe chorr ke chale jaoge tum? Tumko mera parvah nahin hai kia?”

Vihaan ne tab Ashita ko baahon mein bharte hue kaha,

“Ari pagli door rehne se pyar aur ziada badhta hai, aur phir ab to mobile hai tumhare paas hum contact mein raheinge, baat karenge, messages karenge, khub chat karenge hehehe!”

Suman ne chahunkte hue pucha,

“tere paas bhi mobile hai ashu?”

To Ashita ne kaha,

“haan bhai ne hi diya gift mein mujhe.”

Suman ne Anirud ko dekhte hue kaha,

“dekha, donon mile hue hein mujhe pata tak nahin ke usske paas bhi mobile hein!”

Anirud chhup raha kyunke ussko to pata tha.

Anirud nahin chahta tha ke vihaan usske parents ke paas jaaye magar kyunke Vihaan jaana chahta tha to raazi hua magar kaha,

“ab sochna yeh hai ke kia kahenge wahan unn logon se tum kyun wahan rehne aa rahe ho wo bhi 3 Saal ke liye?”

Vihaan ne kaha,

“Main ne soch liya hai papa it’s very easy, magar wo baat aap ko kehna hoga wahan sabhi se, kyunke aap mujhe wahan chorrne ke liye jaoge, aur wo aap ki decision hogi jissko main maanunga!”

Anirud ne pucha,

“aur kia kehna hoga mujhe unn logon se?”

Vihaan: “aap kahoge ke main yahan drug addict’s logon ke sanghat mein pad gaya hoon iss liye aap mujhe inn logon se door kar rahe ho, kehna main ussi vajah se exams mein fail hua aur college jana bandh kiya to aap ko behtar laga ke mujhe kuch saal ke liye wahan ke aab o hawa khaane ke liye chorr jaaye!”

Anirud ne khush hote hue kaha,

“wow what a bright idea yaar, tumne yeh socha keise? Kitna fit baithta hai yeh sab?”

Vihaan: “buss soch liya papa, kuch to kehna padta nah unn logon ko, agar nana ke yahan jaate to bhi yehi baat kehte aap!”

Ashita roti jaa rahi thi. Aur Vihaan usske chehre ko apne haath se sehlaate jaa raha tha, to Suman ne apne baahon ko khol kar Ashita ko apne paas bulaya. Ashita vihaan ke paas se uthkar apne maa ke goad mein gayi. Suman ne Ashita ko zor se seene se lagaate hue ussko bahot pyar kiya. Apni jagah se vihaan Ashita ko dekh raha tha aur wo vihaan ko.

Tab anirud ne kaha,

“okay then vihaan go pack all your bags and so on, subha 6 bajne se pehle nikalna hoga, train se challenge nah? Air ticket ke paise nahin hein mere paas. 400 kms door jana hai pata hai nah, shaayad raaste mein bank call karke mujhe ya to half day lena padega ya full day leave.!”

Vihaan ne kaha,

“papa aap mujhe station chorr kar wapas chale aao main khud wahan reach ho jaunga. Wahan pahunchte hi aap ko call karunga tab phone dada dadi ya badi bhua ko dunga aur aap sab samjha dena unn logon ko.”

Anirud ne kaha,

“nahin thik nahin lagta uss tarah mujhe. Mujhe khud wahan apna shakal dikhana hi hoga, aur weise mujhe kuch aur karna hai lage haath wahan.”

Ashita sab sun rahi thi aur Vihaan ke chehre mein ghurre jaa rahi thi. Phir ussne kaha,

“Bhai lagta hai ke tum Khushi Khushi jaa rahe ho, tumhein meri koyi fikar nahin hai ab!”

Suman ne Ashita se kaha,

“chhup kar usska jaana mushkil mat nah kar tu!”

Ashita uthi aur apne kamre ke taraf badhte hue kehti gayi,

“phir thik hai main hi tumhare bags ko pack karna start karti hoon, mujhe pata hai tumko kia kia saath lejana hai!”

Vihaan ka dil bade zor se dhadakne laga ab Ashita se door hone ko soch kar…. Ussne lounge ke wall clock par time dekha ke karib barah bajne ko tha aur socha subha 6 baje ghar se nikalna hai to matlab usske paas sirf 6 ghante bache the Ashita ke saath rehne ko. Ussne apne mummy papa ko good night wish kiya aur chala gaya apne kamre mein Ashita ke piche.

Andar jaate hi ussne khade hue position mein hi Ashita ko bahot zor se apne baahon mein liya aur rone laga. Ashita bhi zor se vihaan ko baahon mein bharke rone lagi…. Kuch der donon weise hi ek dusre ko baahon mein liye khade rahe bed ke paas, Vihaan ne Ashita ke sar ko chuma aur usski thudi uthake apne chehre ke taraf kiya aur usska munh apne munh se lagaya aur donon kiss karne lage wahin khade khade. Vihaan ke haath Ashita ke peeth par ferr rahe the kiss ke dauraan, aur Ashita bhi wohi kar rahi thi vihaan ke peeth par. Kiss ke baad Vihaan ne bed par ek suitcase mein dekha ke Ashita ne usske kuch kapde already daal diye the to kaha,

“chalo pehle packing kar lete hein then we will make love sweetheart okay?”

To donon lag gaye vihaan ke important chizon ko uss suitcase mein lagaane. Kapdon ko daal diye to last mein suitcase ko niche rakha aur Ashita bed banane lagi. Tab vihaan ne pucha, “mera shaving foam aur razor bhi daal diye tumne?”

“Ashita ne jeeb ko daanton ke beech dabaate hue kaha,

“oooopss nahin dala bhool gayi main!”

Vihaan gaya unn chizon ko lene badbadaate hue,

“badi aayi mere sabhi chizon ka pata rakhne wali!”

Ussko sun ke Ashita ne hansste hue bedsheet change kiye.

Aur aakhir mein jab vihaan ne apne razor aur shaving foam, after shave, sab rakh diye tab pucha,

“mere sabhi underwears rakhe hein nah tumne?”

Ashita ne kaha,

“haan sab rakh diye sirf jo tum ne abhi pehna hua hai wo yahan reh jaega, ya ussko bhi daal dega suitcase mein hihihihihihi!”

Vihaan ne kaha,

“nahin magar ek chiz nahin liya main ne….

Ashita ne pucha, “kia?”

Vihaan ne kaha,

“tumhari ek panty aur bra!”

Asshita ne usske chehre mein dekhte hue kaha,

“paagal ho kia tum bhai?”

Vihaan ne kaha,

“nahin I mean it, give me one of your panty and bra, I want to feel them when I am alone, tab feel karunga ke tum mere saath ho!”

Ashita ne socha ke wo mazaak kar raha tha magar nahin wo serious tha, to Ashita almari se apni ek panty aur bra lekar ussko diya jo vihaan suitcase mein rakhne jaa raha tha magar ruk gaya…. Ashita ne pucha,

“ab kia hua bhai?!”

Vihaan, suitcase par jhuka hua tha aur piche mudhkar wahin se ashita ke chehre mein dekhte hue kaha,

“No, isse nahin, jo tumne abhi pehni hui hai wo mujhe utaar kar do, main ussko lejaunga apne saath!”

Ashita ne munh banaate hue kaha,

“What? Chheeeeee, yeh gande hein issko dhona hein!”

Vihaan ne kaha,

“tujhe kia pata little sis ke inn mein mujhe tumhare khushbhoo ayenge, I will smell you, the real you, your body odour is splendid sweetheart, tumhari pasine ki khushbhoo ko sunghunga, tumhare jism ki khushbhoo mere liye kia maene rakhta hai tum nahin samjhogi, balke main wo sab le jaunga jo kuch abhi tumne pehni hui hai, tumhari yeh dress bhi….sab utaaro completely aur ek alag plastic bag mein bandh kar suitcase mein dalo, achchi tarah se plastic bag ko bandhna taake usske andar se odour baahar nah jaaye…..

To be continued immediately in the next post

Vihaan apne gaon jayega apne dada dadi ke pass per wahan jaker kya karega ye suke jane ke baad hi pta chalega ashita vihaan 3 saal ke dur ho rahe hai kaise gujrega ye wakt?
Nice update

 

[bondjamesbond09]

Update 57 Night Of Eroticism​

Ashita ne apne kapde utaare, Vihaan ussko record karne lage…. Jab Ashita ne dress utaar diye aur bra aur panty mein thi to Vihaan ne ussko rukne ko kaha aur ziada karib aakar Ashita ko closeup mein shoot karne laga phir Ashita se kaha ke dhire dhire bra ke straps ko kaandhe se niche kare bina unhook kiye jisko Vihaan ne record kiya phir Ashita ko turn karne ko kaha tab usski peeth ko shoot kiya usski baazu par bra ke strap latke hue the tab kaha ab

“peeth par bra ko unhook karo sweetheart,”

Ashita ke peeth par usska haath bra ko unhook karte hue record karte hue dikhaayi diye screen par… tab Vihaan ne Ashita ko aaguey ghumne ko kaha, jab wo turn hui to Vihaan ne kaha,

“Ab ahiste ahiste bra ki cup ko boob se sarakne do, very slowly main sab capture kar raha hoon, tumhare boobs ko bilkool ahiste ahiste jeise slow motion mein record karunga baby….”

Uss waqt Ashita ek shy model ki tarah dikh rahi thi, jeise newcomer hai modelling ki dunya mein aur sharmaate hue sab action ko kiye jaa rahi thi kabhi camera mein dekhte hue to kabhi Vihaan ke chehre mein dekhte hue. Aur jab bra nikal gayi to Ashita ne apne haath mein cup ko hold karte hue half boobs ko dhaankte hue Vihaan ko ek smile ke saath dekha to Vihaan ne kaha,

“Ab niche girrne do bra ko aur camera mein dekhte jao weise hi issi look ke saath…”

Ashita ne wohi kiya, phir apne baal ko haath se piche se karte hue apne saamne kiya Ashita ne jiss se thoda sa boobs cover hue, uss haath ki movement ko Vihaan ne record karte hue sar upar uthakar Ashita ke chehre mein dekha ke wo kitni sexy dikh rahi thi aur uss se kaha,

“Sweetheart, apne baalon ko wapas piche karo jeise ke ab mujhko boob dikhana chahti ho, I mean camera ko boob dikhana chahti ho iss liye baal ko dhire se apne haathon se, kuch adaa ke saath piche karo, do ya teen baar mein thoda thoda karke baal ko piche karo, it’s super-hot baby!”

Ashita ne thoda muskuraya phir apne niche wale honth ko daant mein dabaate hue apne baalon ko teen hisse karke teen baar apne kaande ke piche kiya jiss se usske donon boob bilkool nude saamne aaye aur Vihaan ne record kiya.

Aur camere mein dekhte hue khilkhila kar hansste hue Ashita ne apne haath se camera ko cover karte hue kaha,

“Kia bhai ab buss karo nah kitna record karoge, mujhe sharam aa rahi hai stop now!”

Vihaan ne kaha,

Tumhare boobs thoda sa aur bada ho gaya hai ab nah?”

Vihaan ka jamke khada ho chuka tha sab record karte hue aur apne ghutnon par agaya Ashita ke saamne aur usske nitambon ko bahon mein bharte hue apne chehre ko Ashita ke panty par kiya, ussko chumte hue…. Ashita khadi thi, Vihaan ghutnon ke bal usske saamne tha usski pussy ko, panty ke upar se hi, chum raha tha aur halke se jeeb nikaal kar chata panty ko… Ashita ne apne donon haathon ko Vihaan ke sar par kiya aur usske baalon ko apne ungliyon mein jakra aur khud apne sar ko chhat ke taraf uthaa kar dekhte hue ek dheemi siskaari chorrte hue patli si awaaz mein kaha,

“uuufff bhai…. Uuuiiiii, eisa mat karo nah, choro mujhe… bhaiiiiiiii”

Tab tak Vihaan ke ungliyan Ashita ke kamar par usski panty ke elastic ke beech jaa chuke the aur dhire dhire Ashita ki panty ko ncihe karne mein lag gaye the…. Ashita ne apne peth ko ziada zor se dabaya Vihan ke chehre par aur ek haath se apni panty ko thaam liya to Vihaan sar upar uthaa kar ussko dekhte hue panty ko chorrne ko kaha… Ashita thoda muskura rahi thi, thoda sharma bhi rahi thi aur thoda bachpana dikh raha tha usske chehre mein usske samajh mein nahin araha tha ke kia karen…. Phir ussne panty chorr diya aur Vihaan panty ko ahiste ahiste niche karta gaya aur usska chehra Ashita ke pussy par gaya jiss dum panty niche utar rahe the….

Apne jeeb se pussy ke upar chaata Vihaan ne aur Ashita ke chehre mein upar nazar karke dekhte hue kaha,

“tumne waxing kiya hai kia?”

Tab tak panty Ashita ke paon tak reach hogaye the aur Vihaan ne ashita ko tang upar uthane ko kaha panty ko nikaalne ke liye to ek ek karke Ashita ne peyr upar kiye aur Vihaan ne panty ko ab naak se lagaya aur sunga, phir plastic bag mein dala, uss mein Ashita ki thoda sa gilapan aa chuka tha, wohi Vihaan chahta tha panty mein rakhne ko…..

Dobara Ashita ke pussy ko chuma aur chaata Vihaan ne aur phir pucha,

“shave kiya hai ya trim karti ho baby?”

Ashita ke pure badan mein jeise current lagti hui feel hone lagi aur kaampne lagi phir kaampti awaaz mein kaha,

“bhai main waxing nahin karti bahut dard hota hai sirf ek baar try kiya tha, shave karti hoon tumhare hi razor se wo to tumne le liya mujhe ab dusri kharidna padega”

Vihaan ne kaha,

“5 saal pehle tumko shave karna seekhaya tha nah? to kyun waxing try kiya tha tumne, of course dard hoga, shaving is easier, aur hamesha shave karna chahiye, its hygienic, keep it clean always sweetheart.”

Aur tab Vihaan ne apne jeeb ko Ashita ki pussy ke beech kiya kuch thook se bheegote hue, aur Ashita khud ba khud toes par khadi ho gayi, wo weise karna nahin chahti thi magar automatically usski peyr uth gaye aur usski badan ke saare rowan khade ho gaye ussko ek thand feel hui pure badan mein to Vihaan ke sar ke baalon ko muthi mein bharte hue Ashita ne phir kaampte awaaz mein kaha,

“Bhai I am shivering, dekho keise kaamp rahi hoon mujhko bahot cold feel ho raha hai, I have goose bumps bhai stop please!”

Magar tab tak Vihaan ka jeeb Ashita ki pussy ke pankhuriyon ke beech jaa chuka tha aur ussko salty taste feel hone laga tha jeeb par, Ashita bilkool gili ho chuki thi!

Ashita ke taangein thartharaa rahe the, wo khadi nahin ho paa rahi thi ab, to Vihaan ne ussko utha ke bed par leytaya aur apne kapde utaare. Wo bhi bilkool nanga ho gaya, usska auzaar tanna hua lamba khada tha, Ashita ke haath pakar ke vihaan ne apne lund par kiya jissko Ashita ne thaama apne honton ko daanton mein dabaate hue….

Aur Vihaan ne kaha,

“Ek 69 pose karte hein, you take me in your mouth and I will explore you there….”

Ashita ne kuch nahin kaha buss side par leyt gayi, aur Vihaan bhi side mein hokar apne sar ko Ashita ke tangon ke beech kiya. Aur uss taraf Ashita ki jeeb Vihaan ke lund ko touch kiya…..

Vihaan ne apne ungliyon se Ashita ki pankhuriyon ko alag kiya aur jeeb ko usski gili yoni par lagaate hue chaata aur jeeb ki tip ko jeise andar daalne ki koshish mein lag gaya; jiss se Ashita ne khudbakhud apne tangon ko alag karte hue ussko position de diye wo sab karne ke liye.

Vihaan ka jeeb Ashita ke andar jaane ki koshish mein tha aur Ashita ke munh mein usska lund jaa chuka tha, wo Vihaan ko chussne lagi thi aur behaal jeise hone lagi, thi apne bhai ko apne jaanghon ke beech dabaate hue…..

Donon ek dusre ko lick/suck karte gaye kuch der tak, phir Ashita aur kaampne lagi bed par hi, jiss se Vihaan ko disturbance feel hua kyunke Ashita ki jaanghon ke beech jo daba hua tha aur josh mein aakar Ashita usske gardan daba rahi thi apne jaanghon ke beech…. To Vihaan ne kaha,

“apne peeth par leyt jao nah baby, aur tangon ko feyla do ab….”

Ashita ne nah chahte hue bhi wo kiya….

Tab Vihaan, ko behtar position mila usski pussy explore karne ke liye. Iss baar Vihaan apne ungli ko pusy ke hole mein introduce karne ki koshish mein tha to jhatak kar Ashita ne kamar ko ek taraf kiya usske lund ko munh se nikaal kar aur kaha,

“What are you doing? Apne ungli se mujhko penetrate karoge kia bhai?!”

Tab Vihaan ne pure jeeb se pussy ko chaata tab upar gaya Ashita ke boobs ko munh mein liye ek ek karke, donon boobs ko dabaate hue chussa, phir chehre ke paas gaya aur usske munh ko apne munh mein le liya kiss karte hue… wo ab Ashita ke upar tha, usska tanna hua lund Ashita ke pussy ke upar tha, Ashita ne donon jaanghon ko satta ke rakha hua tha jeise Vihaan ko andar ghussne se roke ne ke liye. Ashita ke donon baazu Vihaan ke kaandhe se hokar usske peeth par ungliyan gada rahe the, jabke Vihaan ke donon haath Ashita ke nice the zor se ussko jakre hue….

Vihaan ka lund ragadh raha tha Ashita ki yoni ke upar kiss karte hue to Vihaan ne ek haath se usski ek tang ko alag kiya….. Ashita ne ussko karne diya, jab donon Ashita ke jaangein satte hue the pehle se ab Ashita ne ek tang ko alag hone diya…kia wo Vihaan ko penetrate karne dene ke liye weisa kar rahi thi? Kia aaj Ashita Vihaan ko apne andar lena chahti thi?

Vihaan thoda hanffne laga tha, donon ke dil ki dhadkanein badhne lage the aur Vihaan ne kuch ziada alag kiya Ashita ke tango ko, fir Ashita ne khud apne tango ko feyla diya bilkool…. To jaldi se Vihaan ne apne lund ke tip ko usski pussy ke beech raghda usski gilapan ko apne lund par feel kiya Vihaan ne tab ahiste se usski chedh par lund ko dabaate hue Vihaan ne andar daalne ki koshish kiye……

Ashita ne enkhen bandh kar liye aur khud apne haath se Vihaan ke lund ko pakar kar apne pussy ki chedh par dabaya to Vihaan ko easy hua andar ghussane ko aur ussne push kiya halke se, Ashita ne ‘uff’ kiya aur Vihaan ne zor lagaya push karte hue kamar par zor dete hue…. Aur hona kia tha Bhai ka lund behen ke chedh ke andar ghussa aur Ashita ki awaaz nikli.

“aaaaaahhhhh uuufffff bhaiiiiiiii ssssshshshsh”

Vihaan ne aur zor lagaya aur usska pura lund Ashita ke andar sama gaya jiss se Ashita ke enkh se paani nikal gaye aur ussne Vihaan ko itna zor se baahon mein jakra ke Vihaan ko eisa laga usska dum ghuth rahe the… ek hi dhake mein wo Ashita ke andar jaa chuka tha, aur theher gaya andar ghuss kar, wapas nahin khincha, Ashita ke andar ghuss kar usski andar ki garmaahat ko feel kar raha tha apne lund par…..

Ashita ki enkhen bandh rahi kuch der aur wo bhi Vihaan ke mote auzaar ko apne andar feel kar rahi thi pehli baar… jiss chiz ko wo barson se chhute aayi thi, jissko chumte, chusste aayi thi aaj uss chiz ko apne jism ke andar feel kar rahi thi Ashita for the first time in her life!!

Donon hanff rahe the uss position mein jeise freeze hokar. Ashita hamesha se soch rahi thi aur khud se kehti aa rahi thi itnse saalon se ke, ‘yeh itna mota hai yeh keise mere andar ghussega, nahin ghuss paega, kabhi nahi jaega mere andar’ aur aaj jab wo usske andar thehra hua tha Ashita ko jeise yakeen nahin ho raha tha ke wo mota, lamba sa gudda usske andar jaa chuka hai aur ussko baakhubi mehsoos kar rahi thi Ashita.

Vihaan ne tab Ashita ke honton ko chumte hue kaha,

“keisa feel ho raha hai baby? Dard hua?”

Ashita ne tab enkhen khole aur Vihaan ke chehre mein dekhte hue haan mein sar hillayi aur kaha,

“tumko wahin rehne ka irada hai kia bhai?”

Vihaan ne ashita ke gaalon ko chumte hue kaha,

“Mujhe darr lag raha hai ke tumko aur dard hoga jab andar baahar karunga to, tumko dard nahin dena chahta baby! Main ussko nikaal leta hoon okay?!”

Ashita muskuraai aur wapas Vihaan ko chumte hue kaha,

“No, it’s okay tum karo jo karna hai tab niklaalna main seh lungi muuuah!”

Vihaan ne pucha,

“Are you sure? Chilaaoge to nahin nah buss 5 ya 6 baar andar baahar karne se ho jaega I am sure, I am very excited right now…balke darr hai ke wahin nah jhad jaun abhi!”

Ashita ne kaha,

“Oh no? Don’t do that, control karo bhai before you ejaculate baahar jaldi se nikaalna, I don’t want to get pregnant now…. Okay you start now and hurry up baahar nikaalne ke liye iss se pehle ke tum ejaculate karo…..!”

Aur Vihaan ne ek baar khincha, phir push kiya, phir khiincha phir push kiya sab gehraayi se feel karte hue aur kayi baar weise push kiya aur tezi ke saath baahar khinch kar nikala aur usska saara paani Ashita ke peth par pichkaari maarte hue Ashita ko latpath kar diya usske gardan tak balke kuch karte usski baalon tak gaye…. Ashita orgasm mein doobi hui thi jiss dauraan Vihaan ne chhati baar push kiya tha Ashita apne peak reach ho chuki thi sab feel karte hue aur jiss waqt Vihaan pichkaari chorr raha tha Ashita jeise ek dusri dunya mein thi ussko laga ke wo behosh hokar wapas apne senses mein aayi thi, hanff rahi thi aur ek dard aur Khushi ka milaap jeisa feel ho raha tha Ashita ko….

Kuch der tak Vihaan Ashita ke upar weise hi thehra raha, donon ek dusre ko baahon mein bhare hue the, hanffna bandh ho gaya tha aur Vihaan ke enkh lag gaye ussi position mein Ashiya ke upar. Magar Ashita jaagi hui thi ussko ek jalan se feel ho rahi thi niche, aur ussko pata tha ke bleed hui hogi aur bedsheet par khoon ke daag lage honge……

Koyi 5 minutes ke baad Ashita ne Vihaan ko hillate hue jagaya aur hattne ko kaha, Vihaan palat kar apne peeth par hua to jaldi se ashita uth kar apne jaanghon ko feyla kar dekhne lagi haan bedsheet par khoon ke kuch katre lage hue the aur usski jaaghon ke beech bhi thoda semen aur khoon ke mixture nazar aaye…. Ashita uthkar washroom gayi khud ko saaf karne, aur thandi paani se dhoya khud ko uss jalan ko mitaane ke liye…..

Jitni der Ashita washroom mein thi yahan Vihaan gehre needh mein tha. Ashita wapas aakar ussko jagaya aur bedsheet change kiya ussko khoon ke dhabe dikhaate hue aur kaha ke abhi hi ussko wash karna padega varna kal mummy ko pata chal jaega.

Ashita gayi chaadar ko dhone unn hisson ko dhoya jahan khoon lage hue the, wapas aayi to Vihaan phir needh mein tha. Ashita ne bade pyar se ussko baahon mein liya, kiss kiya aur usske sirhaane takiye laga kar khud sone gayi apne bhai ko baahon mein bharke…… Ashita sochne lagi aaj usski suhaag raat thi….

Ashita ko neendh nahin arahi thi. Subha ke 2 baj gaye the,4 ghante baad Vihaan ko uthna tha aur hamesha ke liye Ashita ko chorr ke jaana tha…. Ashita ki enkhen bhar aayi yeh soch kar ke suhaag raat ke baad sab couples ek saath rehte hein dusre din ko aur usski phooti kismat ke usski suhaag raat ke baad ussko apne saathi se door hona parr raha tha!!!!!

To be continued….(4200 words from both updates)

Pahla sampurn milan aakhir ho hi gya 'adhbhut' update

 

[Casinar]

About last four update
Firstly I want to take my words back for amit, he is a real gem
Respect for him

Secondly
Aap bolo to ye sala committee walo ki gand me danda daal du kya
Ya Bhai suman ke hatho gand me danda dalva dena tha story me alag hi aag lag jani thi

Third
Vihaan ka Gaon jana matlab apne baap ke sath jo hua uska badla lena
To be honest I don't thik ki vo necessary tha kyuki vihaan aur ashita ki story hai , unke baap ko bich me daalne ka.. Okay thik hai
But sala happy happy padh ke bhi bore ho jate
To yaha writer ke sath jate hai
Jo Kiya thik hai

Fourth
As expected sex hona hi tha, thoda jada erotic kar sakte the because first time tha but still it's good
But aur jada acha ho sakta tha bhai
Vaise main sex prefer nahi karta story me but public ki demand ke liye chalo thik hai

Fifth
Last emotions
On point
But vihaan ko sulana nahi tha
Unki ek conversation dikhani chahiye thi without sex and romance just a simple and sweet conversation

Overall great update as usual
Keep rocking and keep shining

thanks bhai.... sex scene aur ziada zaroor majedaar/erotic ban sakta tha magar newcomers hein donon iss baare mein iss liye utna hi rakha magar jo aap ne kaha ke Vihaan ko sulana nahin chahiye tha baat cheet karna chahiye the tro are bhai to be continued likha hai nah ussko Ashita jagaati hai baat karne ke liye kyunke wo chala jaega yeh aaj ke update mein aega
aur haan vihaan koyi bhi badla lene nahn jaa raha hai bhai wo sirf wahan rehne jaa raha hai, nothing to be involved with his dad's past!

 

[Amity]

Wow these two updates were very meticulously written by the very special pen of Casinar ji.
just awesome, sensual, erotic update.
appreciated this very much my dear, you are an awesome erotic writer casinar j, tired of repeating this to you so many times
In the first update love the part where Anirud asked his wife either he is watching her daughter in law or daughter
then the way Vihaan started to shoot Ashita was superb and the way you have described Ashita reacting to his requests was marvellous.
And the second one is full an erotic and sensual update where Ashita surrendered to Vihaan this night
But the last part Ashita started to think that now she will be parted from him when she needed him to be more with him.... hope you will continue it from there itself as a conversation is important i believe between them before they part away...
fabulous updates Casinar ji, hats off.

 

[The Survivor]

thanks Shanaya padhne ke liye.
baat yeh nahin ke koyi eisi meri life mein hai ya mere surroundings mein hai,
bat yeh hai ke main ladki ko eisi dekhna passand karta hon jeise describe karta hoo, mere liye feminity woh hoti hai jo describe karta hoon hallan ke asli life mein jo apni hai wo bahut hi achchi hai, magar mere koyi bhi characters mein ussko nahin describe karta hoon..... magar bhai mere life mein dayan type bhi aaye hein, eisi ke zindagi aaj bhi ussko gali deti hai, eisi ke usske andar 1000 goliyan bharrne ka mann karta hai, eisi ke usske tukde tukde karke, usske jism ke sabhi organs baahar nikal kar uss par muthne ka mann karta hai, weisi bhi lady meri life mein aayi hai, magar ussko to describe karna mere liye shaitaan ko badhawa dena hai iss liye main positive feminine characters ko describe karta hoon hamesha
thanks very much bhai.

Hahahaha

Har kisi ki zindagi me ati ek berahem Randi

 

[Casinar]

Hahahaha

Har kisi ki zindagi me ati ek berahem Randi

bhai wo meri life mein directly nahin aayi thi balke rishte mein aayi hai, bade bhai ki wife bankar, hamare hanssti khilti life ko ussne narak bana diya tha, aaj bhi hai wo magar hum sab ussko ignore karte hein ussi ke baare mein likha hai upar.... mera uss se koyi lena dena to nahin magar jin dinon ek saath apne parents ke saath reh rahe the hamare unn dinon ko haraam kiya tha ussne....