Badhiya family ka taaruf karaya Ali k baare m kuch nahi bataya or dekhte inke khandan ka raz jo bachcho ko nahi pata kia h aisaFAMILY INTRO
Thoda family into kr lete hain.
Father: Salman Rajput, age 48, ek achi khaasi job hai upper middle class hain ye log, loving and caring hain.
Mother: Ghazaala Rajput, age 45, house wife hain, also loving and caring .
Inke 2 bacche hain 2non hi ladke hain.
Waqas(Viki), age 20. achi physics ka maalik hai, kaafi handsome hai or dil ka bhi saaf hai, abhi Kuch time pehle hi apna DAE complete kiya hai (CIT) ka or abhi ek achi jagah as an Cheif IT job kr rha hai, fresher hai pr apni field m kaafi acha hai to ye job asaani se mil gyiii.
Sami Rajput age 18, abhi College m hai, yeh bhi achi physics ka maalik hai bss bade bhai jitna nhi hai pr handsome to hai thoda hi sahi lekin hai.
(Inki family ke kuch gehre or dardnaak raaz hain jo bohot kam log jaante hain, sirf khaandaan k kuch badon ko hi maloom hai bache nhi jaante. Iske baare m aage pta chale gaa).
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Baaki relatives ho Village m rehte hain.
Inka gaon wala ghr koi pushtaini type nhi tha pr sab as a joint family hi rehte the Viki ki khala, uske mamu, chachu, phupho sabhi .
Inke ghr ek hi gali m ek hi line m the, or sabhi ghr ek 2sre k baraabar m the to inhon ne mil kr sabhi gharon k baher ek boundary wall banwaa rakhi thi like a society or a Haveli type jaise haveli m sabhi log saath rehte hain pr buildings alag alag bani hoti hain lekin outer boundary ek hi hoti hai waisa hi yahaan bhi tha.
Ab thoda intro bhi kr lete hain sabhi members ka.
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< Sabse pehle baat krte hain viki k Mamu ki
Kashif: age 47, gaon k hain to sehat yo achi hi hogi naa, or inka Transport ka kaam hai gaon se jo Faslen katti hain chahe phal hon ya sabziyaan ho ya phir anaaj usse city tk pohonchana or phir city se jo Khaad or Flour aata tha usse yahan laana .
Married hain ye inke 2 bache hain ek ladka ek ladki.
Mami: Shabana: age 46, haouse wife hain simple sii.
Beti:Sadiya: age 23, MBA kiya hai, abhi free hi hai.
Beta:Ayan, age 19 abhi college complete kiya hai .>
Viki ki 2 khala hain.
< 1st khala
Samina: age 43, married hain house wife hain nature ki achi hain. Inke husband ki death ho chuki hai. Inke bhi 2 bache hain ek beti ek beta.
Beta: Umar; age 18, college k final paper diye hain abhi.
Beti: Nimra; age 16, abhi college m admission liya hai isne .>
< Choti Khala
Shumaila: age 35, married hain.
Khalu: Ubaid; age 37, inka garments ka kaam hai.
Inki sirf 1 hi beti hai
Sonia: age 7, Vikii ki to jaan hai pehle kabhi milii nhi hai us se pr video call pr ya phonebaat krti hai yo bss phir koi rok nhi mobile nhi le sakta is se.>
Viki k 2 chachu hain.
< Bade Chacha
Hamid: Age 51, inke fruits k baagh hain. Nature k thode sakht hain aakhir sabse bade jo hain waise kam hi gussa krte hain.
Badi chachi: Huma; age 49, Bade chacha se thoda ulat ye thodi naram dil hain gussa bohot hi kam kabhi aye to .
Inke 3 bache hain.
Badi beti: Fiza; age 24, BBA kiya hai .
Beta: Faiz; age 25, Engineering ki hai or City m rehta hai Viki wale nhi, married hai abhi kiye koi khaas role nhi hai future ka kuch keh nhi sakte.
Choti Beti: Farah; age 23, MBA kiya hai, abhi free hi hai. >
< Chote Chacha
Khalid: age 44, ye out of country rehte hai apne bivi bachon k saath.
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< Phupho:
Nosheen; age 43, husband ki death ho chuki hai, baaki family support krti hai, apne bachon ko khud paala hai
Badi beti:Mehwish; age 22, Teaching krti hai
2nd beti: Hina; age 21, Media Management kr rhi hai.
3rd Beti: Laiba; age 18, abhi college end huwa hai.
Beta: Faizan(Faizi) age 15, abhi school m hai. >
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Ye tha family intro .
Or bhi characters ayen ge or unka intro waqt pr ho jaigaa sirf un logon ka jinka intro zaroori hoga.
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"Viki beta utha jaa kab se sooo rha hai, subah utha tha Namaz padh k phir soo gaya, chl jaldi uth"
Viki: ami sone doo na yrr thakaa huwa hun me .
Ami: q aisa kya kaam kr liya tune k thakaa huwa hai, konsa kheton m hallll chala kr aaya tha kal ? Gaon jaana hai aaj or tu abhi tk soo hi rha hai.
Viki: Ami aaj gaon jaana hai, ek to aap logon ne mujhe 3 din pehle bataya is baat ka to ohir mujhe apna pending kaam saara 3 din m krna padaa Or wo jo baaki k employees the mere under unko alag se saara kaam samjhaaya hai k kya krna hai kaise krna hai waghaira waghaira. Tab jaa kr jaan chuuti hai to thakna to hai hi naa. Or gaon trainshaam ki hai naa to abhi q jagaa rhi ho konsa train
Ami: beta train
Viki: Ami meri packing ho gyii hai. mera Laptop, laptop charger, mobile charger, power bank, handsfree etc sab to rakh liya hai mene .
Ami: to beta ek kaam krna pehenna bhi laptop hi haan, kapde nhi rakhne tujhe kya ek hi jode m ghooomta rahe poora time ?
Viki: wo to mujhe pta hai aapne packing kr di hogi mere kapdon ki bhi isii liye soo rha tha, afterall app meri pyaari ami jo ho
Ami: beta ami to me hun tumhaari or ab ye maske lagaane ki zaroorat nhi hai mene packing kr di hai to ab utho nahao tayyar ho jaa kr shaam m nikalna bhi hai or tumhe ptaa hai k shaam ko traffic kiyna jamm hota hai to jaldi nikalna hai.
Viki: acha thk hai jaa rha hun.
" Ye hain hamari story k main character Waqas aka Viki, aisaa hi hai ye apne kaamon m thoda careless atleast baaki logon ko to aisa hi lagta hai ".
Shaam theek 5:30 pr sabhi log RailwayStation pr pohonch jaate hain or train
Ali: chl yrr ab teri train ka time ho gaya hai to me bhi nikalta hun apna or baaki sabka khayaal rakhna, waise tujhe bolne ka koi faida to hai nhi pr ab formality bhi to poori krni hai na.
Viki: chl ab zeyaada daant na nikaal rakhun ga sabka khayaal or tu bhi dheyaan rakhna jaldi hi milen ge or haan araam se jaiyoo ghar mujhe pata hai tere Rideron wale keede ka to .
Ali: acha thk hai araam se hi jaoun gaa, Chl ok bye Have a Safe Journey.
Viki: Thanks bhai, bye and take care.
Or Ali wapas chl deta hai apne ghr aaj wo.jaldi aagaya tha office se apne dost ko station chorne k liye. (Iske ghr m isko Ami Abu ek bada bhai hai or ek Badi behen hai jinki shaadi ho chuki hai bhai ki bhi jaldi hi ho jaye gii Rishta pakka ho chuka hai unka bhi, Ali bhi Viki k saath ek hi College me padhta tha wahin 2non hi dosti huii or dekhte hi dekhte ye 2non Best Friends ban gye, ye bhi viki ki age ka hi hai bss viki se kuch months badaa hai ).
Wahin Train
Aakhir kaar 16 ghante k safar k baad ye log pohonch jaate hain apne gaon .
AT VILLAGE RAILWAY
Jaise hi train gaon k station pr rukti hai sabhi musaafir jinki manzil yehi thi woh sab utarnaa start kr dete hain yo Viki and family bhi sabhi ki trhaan apna samaan uthaa kr train se utarte hain or station k gate ki taraf .
Gaon ka mahol hi kuch alag tha abhi yeog station pr hi the jahan jaafi bheed bhaad thi aane or jaane wale logon ki pr phii bhi ek alag hi feel aa rahi thi. Gaon ki hawaon m hi ek alag positivity thi jo sbko ek sakoon de rhi thi wahin apne Viki baabu yo jaise kho hi gye hon.
Train
Abu: beta ye aise ulluuu ki trahan chaaron taraf gardan q ghumaa rha hai .
Viki: Nhi wo me dekh rha tha koi lene nhi aaya abhi tk .
Abu: wah beta tu koi chota baccha hai ya pahli baar aaya hai yahan jo koi lene ayega or waise bhi kisi ko ye nhi pata hai k hum kitne baje aane wale hain.
Viki: nhi mene bola ab itna bada superstar aaaya hai to koi to ayega hi naa lene lekin koi nhi aaya pr ab aap bol rhe ho to thk hai kisi ko nhi pta to jaane dete hain. (viki ne bade style se chaude hote huwe ye baat boli).
Abu: hainnnn kon superstar beta ?
Ye sun kr Viki ka to munh hi dekhne wala ho gaya tha jis style se janaaab ne khud ko superstar bola tha uspar Abu k jawaab se suthri wali ho gyiii bechare kii .
Haste haste sabhi station se baher aate hain or taxi le kr chl dete hain apni manzil ki taraf.
Inka gaon wala ghr koi pushtaini type nhi tha pr sab as a joint family hi rehte the Viki ki khala, uske mamu, chachu, phupho sabhi .
Inke ghr ek hi gali m ek hi line m the, or sabhi ghr ek 2sre k baraabar m the to inhon ne mil kr sabhi gharon k baher ek boundary wall banwaa rakhi thi like a society or a Haveli type jaise haveli m sabhi log saath rehte hain pr buildings alag alag bani hoti hain lekin outer boundary ek hi hoti hai waisa hi yahaan bhi tha.
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Jaise hi Viki log main gate se enter krte hain to unhe aangan jo k bada sa joint wala hi tha wahan pr Sonia or Faizi khelte huwe dikh jaate hain Faizi ne abhi tk inko nhi dekha tha.
Pr Sonia ki nazr in pr pad jaati hai or woh Bhaiyaaaa chillaati hui bhaag kr Viki k gale lag jaati hai (mtlb k us se lipat jaati hai) or Viki bhi usse apni godi m utha leta hai.
Sonia: Bhaiyaa aap aagaye.
Viki: nhi Abhi raaste m hun ye to mera bhoot hai.
Sonia: Very bad aise nhi bolte ap to yahin ho mazaq mat karo.
Viki: Acha meri gudiya ye batao k ap kaisi ho or baaki sab kaise hain ?
Sonia: Me to bilkul thk hun ap kaise ho.
Viki: Thk hun or ap ko dekh liya to Ek dam Fitt ho gaya hun.
Sonia (masoomiyat se) sacchiiii bahiyaa ?
Viki: Mucchi meri gudiya.
Viki: waise gudiya baaki sab kahan hain ?
"Hum yahaan hain, shukarr hai janaab ko yaad to aaya k yahaan koi or bhi rehta hai wrna ye to bss gudiya k saath hi lage rehte"
(Ye thi Mehwish baji)
Ab Sonia chillayee hi aise thi k baher mohalle wale bhi aajate agr sun liya hota to ye to phir bhi family wale the jo Sonia ki cheekh sun kr daude chale aye the, sab ek saath hi aye the q sabhi saath baith kr gappe jo maar rhe the. Ab ye female talk ka time jo tha .
Viki: Are Baji aisi baat nhi hai, wo sabse pehle gudiya hi dikhii thi or ye hai hi itni cute k is se baaten krne se dil hi nhi bhartaa, pr ap sab ko koi bhoola nhi tha .
Mehwish: Acha chalo pehle andar chalo ap sab phir baat krte hain.
Bade Chacha ka ghr main gate k saamne hi tha to sabhi wahin chl dete hain andr jaa kr sab apasss m milte hain Slaaam Duaa ka daur chalta hai itne m Fiza or Farah sabke liye Cold drinks etc le aate hain or Start ho jaata hai baaton ka daur.
Wohi sab k yaad nhi ayii, or job etc kaise jaa rhi hai, bacchon ki studies ka kya haal hai.
Baaton Baaton m Raat k khaane ka time bhi ho jaata hai tab tak 2non Chachu or Mamu bhi aajate hain phir dhbaara se wohi inquiry session chalta hai
Viki logon ko Bade chacha k ghr hi thehraaya jaata hai halaan k inka apna ghr bhi Baraabar m hi tha pr abhi usko saaf krne m thoda time lag jaata is liye yahin ruk gye ye log.
Next Day
Sab apne time se uthte hain or naashte ka baaad mard log jo the apne apne kaam pr chale gye the accept Viki and family.
Yahaan Sonia to Viki ko akela chod hi nhi rhi thi Raat ko sote time bhi zidd kr k Viki ka saath hi soyiii thi or abhi bhi Viki k haathon se hi Natasha kiya tha Shehzaadi Sahiba n.
Sab ko inka ye pyaar dekh kr kaafi khushi ho rhi thi k pehli baar hi mile hain or dekho aisa lag rha hai k jaise hamesha se saath hi hon .
Yehi to baat thi apne Viki ki jis se bhi hass k 2 bol bol deta tha usse apna banaa leta tha han bss condition ye hai k wo khud chahta ho .
Fiza: waise Viki tum sunao kya chl tha hai?
Viki: (sochne ki acting krte huwe) aaaa jahan tk mujhe idea hai to fogg to purana ho gaya hai uske ilaawa abhi koi dialogue yaad nhi aaraha to baad m bataoungaa.
Fiza Viki k kaan kheenchte huwe: tum kisi baat ka seedha jawaab nhi de sakte naa.
Viki: Are meri Hitler Baji kabhi hasss bhi liya karo jab dekho gussa hi krti rehti ho.
Fizagusse ki acting krte huwe
) kya bola tumne me hittler hun haan .
Viki: jab dekho aise gussa krti rehti ho to banda or kya bole.
Fiza: koi wajaah bhi to ho hasne ki ya aise hi paaglon ki trhan haste rho bila wajah hi .
Viki: Ab khush rehne k liye bhi koi wajah thodi dhoondta hai or agr reason hi chahiye to wohi to de rha tha me pr aap ho k mujh masooomko daant rhi ho .
Fiza: Hain masoom woh bhi tum, kon phela rha hai ye afwaahen ?
Fiza ki is baat pr sabhi hanss dete hain
Jab sabka hansnaa kam huwaa to
Viki: Dekha aise hi hanste rha kro, or khush rehne k liye Reasons nhi dhoonda krte balke khud Resources banye jaate hain situation create ki jaati hain naa k is umeed m baithe raho k Reasons khud chal kr ayen ge or bolen ge k behen hum Khushi k reasons hain to kya aap thoda sa hans den gi humne photo leni hai
Viki ki baat pr sabhi ko hansii aa jaati hai or is baar Fiza bhi Hans deti hai.
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Viki ki baat pr sabhi ko hansii aa jaati hai or is baar Fiza bhi Hans deti hai.
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Sadiya: waise kyaa baat hai Viki tumne Fiza ko hansaa diya, sach m kuch to baat hai tumhaari jo (halke se ) hittler ko hansaa diya .
Sami: Bhai to hain hi aise, inka bass chale to ye murde ko bhi thahaake lagaane pr majboor kr den .
Viki: (style k saath khade hote huwe) Thanks for these precious compliments, glad to know that i have such lovely Fans
Uski is karkat pr phirse room m thahaake gunj jaate hain.
Thodi der aise hi baaten kr k Viki or Sami nikal jaate hain apne ghr ki saaf safayii krwaane .
Lunch time sab wapss se ikathe baith k khana khate hain or inka safayii program shaam tk chalta hai tab jaa kr sab set hota hai ye sab fresh ho kr dinner krte hain or sone chale jaate hain apne apne room m.
Next day Naashte k baad wohi sab idher udher ki baaten or phir lunch phir TV dekhne m time nikal jaata hai or dinner k baad sabhi baccha party ki mehfil lagti hai Viki k Room m.
Sadiya: Viki tum log apne college etc k baare m batao kya kya kiya, kuch sports activities bhi krte the ya nhi.
Sami: baji inse kya pooch rhi ho is bande se baaki poori duniya ka pooch lo bata de ga lekin apne baare m sirf utna hi bolte hain jitna agla banda pehle se jaanta ho.
Fiza: acha aisa hai kya, to tum hi bata do phir.
Sami: Padhne m to ye janaab ache hain hi pr sports activities m bhi bohot ache hain. Apne college ki team ka Captain the bhai.
Ayan: waahh kya baat hai Captain.
Umar: waise batao to konse konse sports m participate kiya hai bhai ne ?
Sami: participate to bohot se sports m krte hain like Cricket, Running, Quiz, Computer & Mobile games etc hain or sab m hi kaafi ache bhi hain pr cricket or running m to kamaaal hain.
Nimra: phir to medals or Trophybhi jeeti hongi naa.
Sami: haan bilkul jeeti hain abhi Intra-Collleges Sport's festival m 2 races m 1st position li hai or Cricket tournament m to Best Player ki trophy or MOM bhi jeete hain.
Farah: kya baat hai hame to pata hi nhi tha k hamara bhai itna talented hai.
Viki: Thanks pr hamara bhai nhi hamare bhai, or Sami tu kya meri baat kr rha hai apna bhi bata naa.
Mehwish: to tum bata do naa kya daant rhe ho us ko tumhare munh m konsa dahi jamne k liye rakha huwa hai (usne ye baat to apne hisaab se normally hi boli thi pr kya karen teacher hai na to sakhti lagti hi thi uski baat m).
Hahahaha
Viki: ap na aise mt bola karen aise lagta hai daant rhi hon apke saamne jo mene bola tha woh to kuch bhi nhi hai. Aise hi mujh jaise masoom bacche ko daantti rehti ho.
Hahahaha
Laiba: bhai ap chodo na inki baaton ko ye teacher hain na to aise hi bolti hain ap batao na Sami k baare m .
Viki: acha to m kahan tha
Hina: tum yahin baithe huwe the
Is baat pr sab hans dete hain .
Viki: haan yaad aaya ye Sami apne batch ka topper hai or bhai sahab jin races ki baat kr rhe hain un races m 3rd aaye the. Or bhi bohot kuch hai, bataoun kya ?
Sami: nhi itna hi kaafi hai bhai or kuch batane ki zaroorat nhi hai.
Hina: waise Sami ek baat batao tumhari koi Gf hai kya ?
Sami: kya Meri Gf nhi g meri koi Gf nhi hai .
Hina: or Viki tumhari??
Hahahaha
Umar: yrr ab tumhe kya ho gaya jo aise hanss rhe ho bilaa wajah kahin paagal to nhi ho gye, pata hai hamen k tum or Viki bhai sage bhai hain to saabit kyun krne lag gye
Viki(in his mind) gazab bezzati hai .
Sami (hanste huwe): to hansun nhi to kya karun Gf or woh bhi Viki bhai ki. Hahahaha
Mehwish: isme hansne wali kya baat hai itna handsome or dashing to hai hamara bhai to Gf kyun nhi ho sakti, ab aisa thodi hai k koi ghaans hi nhi daale gi or woh bhi isse.
Sami: mujhe pta hai k ye dashing or handsome hain, pr wajah kuch or hai mere hansne ki. Ab zaroori thodi na hai k ghoda bhooka hai kyun k kisi ne ghans nhi daali, yeh bhi to ho sakta hai na k ghoda khud khaana hi nhi chahta .
Fiza : to paheliyaan bujhaana chodo or is baat pr roshni daalo k q iski gf nhi hai or tum hans q rhe ho.bss
Sami: acha bataata hun .
Sadiya: to bolo na ab kya likh kr dena pade gaa.
Viki: are bsss bsss Pariyoo us bechare ko kuch bolne to do thodi saans le lo.
Sami: baat ye hai k mene apko bataya tha na Intera-College Sports festival ka to uske end pr jo Award Ceremony hoti hai tab ki baat hai.
Bhai khade the apne ek dost k saath me bhi paas m hi khada tha itne m ek ladki ayiii khoobsoorat thi or dekhne se bhi ache ghr ki lag rhi thi. Usne bhai k kandhe pr touch kiya, means jaise apni taraf mukhaatib kiya usne or boli,
Ladki boli:excuse me please apse baat krni hai. bhai halka sa mude uski taraf Foran hi us ladki ne bola : I LOVE YOU
Mehwish:kya aise hi direct ILY bol diya or thi kon woh or ab kahan hai, mtlb.... Chodo yrr tum baat poori kro abhi words hi nhi mil rhe bolne ko.
Hahahaha
Sami: shayad kisi 2sre college ki student thi woh or ab kahan hai mujhe nhi pata pr asal baat to suno ap log.
Hina: to batao naa yrrr.
Sami: jab us ladki ne apni baat bol li to wo bhai ki taraf dekhne lagi or unke reply ka wait krne lagi, bhai ne bade araam se apne ek kaan se earbud nikala or bole "I'm sorry Sister mene suna nhi apne jo bhi bola, can you please repeat what were you saying earlier" .
Ye sun kr sab Viki ki taraf dekh kr hansne lage k ya kya thaa bhai
Fiza: mtlb bhai sahab n suna hi nhi k agli n kya bola or sister bol diya or agli ka patta ugne se pehle hi kaat diyaaa
Sami: ye aise hi hai koi ek baar thodi na kiya hai hamesha kuch bahana bana dete hain.
Viki: mujhe gf banani hi nhi hai or kisne bola k mene suna nhi mere kaanon m bhale hi earbuds lage the or mene aise pretend kiya k mene suna nhi or usse anjaane m sister bola hai pr let me clear.
Sadiya: haan please.
Viki: mene earbuds lagaye huwe the ye sach hai pr that time ye off the or mene uski poori baat ache se suni thi.
Nimra : to bhai phir apne aise kyun bola .
Umar: han aisa kyun laga jaise apne suna hi nhi uski baat ko.
Viki: woh is liye chote kyun k me aisa show krna chahta tha k mene kuch suna nhi pr mene sab suna tha.
Umar: to bhai phir aapne aisa q kiya, woh batao naa.
Viki: mene kaha to mujhe ye gf waghaira nhi banani hai mujhe nhi interest time pass relationships m.
Mehwish: tumhara matlab kya hai ? K woh sab time pass kr rhi thin.
Viki: mera matlab hai k jab mujhe unse dosti krne m ya baat krne m interest hi nhi hai to me kyun zabardasti haan kr duun or gf bana lun aise hi, isi liye mene aisa kiya k naa bolna bhi nhi pade or agla samjh jaye . Ab agar me haan kr bhi dun to ye ek trhaan se agle k liye hi buraa hai q k me to interested hun nhi or mujhe jis type ki Chahiye ye Woh bhi nhi hai to is se me utna loyal nhi ho paoun gaa, means ab bivi to hai nhi k meri pasand ki nhi thi lekin waqt k saath sab sahi ho jaiga or Shayad mujhe us se pyaar ho jaye or agr naa bhi huwa to bhi agr bivi hogi to uska haq to poora kr sakta hun na jo k kisi bhi Shohar ka farz hota hai pr girlfriend boyfriend k relationship m aisa nhi ho sakta ye sab difference aage chal kr bohot badi problem create kr sakte hain . Isi liye or phir mujhe kahin na kahin aisa lage gaa k shaayad me zabardasti ka shikaar ho rha hun. To ek trhaan se ye time pass hi huwa na jis relationship ka koi future nhi hai usme aap saamne wale ko ghaseeto or baad me bol do "just leave the Cramp and walk away" aisa nhi ho sakta .
Sadiya: ab ye kya baat huii agr tumhare Mom Dad ne arranged marriage krwayii tumhari to kya tab bhi to same hi situation hogi naa k tum unki mrzi se kr rhe ho. To phir usme kya burayiii huiii ? Hann !
Viki: burayiii nhi hai pr arrange marriage m atleast ye to hoga na k family ki manzoori hogi or dill bhi mutmayiin hoga, or family walon ko mera pta hai to wo mere liye apne hisaab se better hi chose karen ge or jab one sided hi krni hai to bnda family ki mrzi se kr le .
Fiza: tumhaari baat mujhe smjh nhi ayii pr jo bhi ho agr tum bol rhe ho to kuch soch kr hi bol rhe hoge to all the best (or ek evil smile deti hai).
Ye dekh kr Viki thora shocked hota hai k Fiza baji ne aisa q bola or phir ye smile kya baat hai aakhir.
Thodi der m sab sone chale jaate hain.
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Yeh sahi m Ammi Abbu n bomb hi fod dia kon h woh khush naseeb jo viki ki banne wali h gher waliUpdate 06
NEXT DAY
Wohi sab roz ka subah uth kr Naashta phir Tv etc, phir lunch, phir TV,baataen phir dinner sab waisa hi tha.
Pr aaj dinner k baad kuch to alag hone waala tha shaayad mujhe to aisaa hi lagta hai.
Dinner k baaad Sonia aati hai Viki k paas .
Sonia: Bhaiya apko na Khala n bulaya hai unke room m abhi.
Viki: (Sonia ko god m bethate huwe) q kya huwa koi baat hai kya gudiyaa ?
Sonia: pta nhi Bhaiya mujhe yo bss apko bulaane ko kaha tha.
Viki: acha gudiya to ap yahan betho me aata hun baat sun krr.
Or Viki Sonia ko neeche utaarta hai or chal padta hai apne Ami Abu k room ki taraf.
Wahan jaa kr wo door knock krta hai.
Knockkk knockkkk...
Andar se Abu ki awaaz aati hai
"Andar aajao gate khula hi hai "
Viki gate khol kr andar jaata hai or Ami
Abu ko Salaam krta hai or wahin gate k paas hi khada ho jaata hai.
Salaam ka jawaab de kr Abu bolte hain.
Abu: beta gate lock kr do or yahan hamare paas aa kr Betho.
Abu or Ami bed pr baithe huwe the, jahan abu tekk laga kr baithe the to Ami bhi bed pr peron ki side bethi thin.
Viki waisa hi krta hai jaisa Abu ne bola tha or bed k paas hi chair le kr baith jaata hai.
Viki: g Abu aapne bulaaya tha!
Abu: haan beta wo jab se yahan aane ka decide huwa tha tab se hi tum jaldi kaam khatam krne k chakkar m bussy ho gye the or yahan bhi tum sab bacche apasss m hi itna bussy ho k time hi nhi mila tumse baat krne kaa.
Viki: acha aisi kyaa baat krni thi aapko mujhse ? Sab thk yo hai na (usne fikar k saath pucha ).
Ami: haan beta sab thk hi hai tum batao sab thk hai or yahan aa kr kaisa lag rha hai.
Viki: g ALLAH PAK ka shukr hai Sab thk hai or yahaan bhi acha lag rha hai sab se mil kr, apne behen bhaiyon se mil kr or specially apni Gudiyaa se mil kr .
Abu: ye to achi baat hai .
Viki: waise Abu kya baat hai jo apne mujhe akele m bulaaya baat krne k liye q k ye sab baaten to baher bhi ho sakti thin sabke saamne to kuch yo khaas baat hai jo ap mujhse akele m krna chahte ho.
Abu: haan beta tumne sahi kaha tumse akele m kuch khaas baat hi krni thi isi bulayaa hai .
Viki: to batayen Abu kya baat hai koi kaam hai yo hukum karen me foran hi lag jaata hun .
Abu: are nhi beta hukum krne jaisa kuch nhi hai.
Phir Ami ki taraf dekh kr "tum hi batao apne bete ko"
Ami: apka bhi to beta hai or aap hi bataiye.
Abu: bilkul hum donon k beta hai or mujhe fakhr hai is pr, lekin agr ye baat tum batao to behter hoga k ye baat wo apni maa k munh se sune to.
Viki thoda confused or tensed ho gaya tha inki baaten sun kr k aisa kya hai jo ye aise bol rhe hain.
Viki: Abu sab thk yo hai na? aap hi bata den kya baat hai mujhe ghabraahat ho rhi hai .
Abu: beta ghabrao mat, (phir thoda ruk kr) acha ek baat batao.
Viki: g poochen Abu.
Abu: beta tumhaara shaadi k baare m kya khayaal hai koi ladki dekhi hai kya tumne ?..
Ye sunn kr to Viki thoda chonk hi gaya k aaj achaanak uske Abu ko ye khayaal kaise aagaya
Pr khud ko normal krte huwe bola
Viki: nhi abu mene kuch khaas socha nhi hai or ladki dekhne ka to koi sawaal hi nhi hai. Woh to apki pasand ki hi hogi naa.
Ami: beta humen pata hai tere karnaamon ka .
Viki (Heraan hote huwe) kkk kya mtlb, me Kuch samjha nhi.
Ami: yehi k kis kis ladki ne tujhe propose kiya hai or tune manaa kr diya ya phir behen banaa liya.
Viki: To isme ghalat kya hai mujhe achi nhi lagi ya pasand nhi thin to mana kr diya, me bila wajah kisi ko aasre m nhi rakhna chahta tha isi liye direct hi mana kr diya .
Ami: pr beta aise direct hi manaa kr diya, tareeke se bhi to samjhaya jaa sakta tha naa.
Viki: Ami yehi behter tareeka tha, k waqt rehte hi naa keh dun wrna baad m problems ho sakti thin, mujhe nhi unko isi liye aisa liya.
Or wiase bhi mene to aap logon ki mrzi se hi krni hai jo ap dhoondo ge ussii se waqt aane pr kr lun gaa.
Abu: beta hum se zeyaad tumhari razaamandi zaroori hai kyun k zindagi tumne guzaarni hai to decision bhi tumhe hi lena Chahiye naa.
Viki: g pr me chahta hun k ap log ye decision len .
Abu: acha thk hai lekin woh ladki tumhe bhi pasand hogi yo hii hum haan Karen ge wrna hamari marzi ki itni value nhi jitni tumhaari khushi ki hai.
Viki(smile krte huwe) g jaisa ap behter samjhen.
Ab me chalun ?
Ami: nahi abhi betho main baat to abhi baaki hai .
Viki: sab baaten to ho gyiii ab kya baaki hai, kahin ye to nhi k aapne koi ladki bhi dekh liii hai hahaha
Viki ne to ye baat mazak m bol di pr jab apne Ami Abu k expressions dekhe jo serious hi the bss thode smiley faces the unke us time, laughter jaisa kuch nhi tha to woh bhi thoda serious ho gaya.
Viki: kahin sach m to aisa nhi hai na ??
Ami: Haan beta aisaa hi hai humne ek ladki dekhi hai tumhaare liye.
Boooommmmmm
Or ye phataa bomb viki pr usse kahan khayaal tha k aisa kuch hogaa ab usko kal wali baat yaad aati hai to last nightFiza Baji ne usse boli thi all the best or unki woh
Usse sab samajh aagaya k Fiza baaji ko sab maloom tha iska matlab hai k baaki log bbi jaante honge or isssii liye achaanak yahaan aane ka plan bana.
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SAME NIGHT (VIKI'S ROOM)
Sabhi bacche log abhi bhi wahin baithe the or baaton m lage huwe the k Nimra boli.
Nimra: ye Viki bhai kahan reh gye khala k room m gye the baat krne itni der lag gyii aaye nhi abhi tk.
Ye sun kr Sadiya,Fiza, Mehwish, Ayan,Farah or Hina ek 2sre ki taraf dekh kr halkaa sa muskurate hain jo Nimra bhi dekh leti hai or
Nimra: ab aap sab ko kya huwaa aise muskuraa kyun rhe ho ??
Sadiya(baat sambhalte huwe) are Kuch nhi wo is liye hum smile kr rhe the k tumhe apne bhai ki kitni fiqr hai naa or waise bhi woh koi baccha thodi hai jo gum ho jaigaa Phupho log zaroor koi important baat kr rhe hon ge isii liye der ho rhi hai tum chordo uski Fikren.
* Phir ye log aise hi baaten krte rehte hain
Wahin 2sri taraf
Parents Room
Ami: kya huwa beta kya soch rhe ho koi masla hai kya tumhe ?
Viki: nhi aisii baat nhi hai bss yehi soch rha tha k ye plan aapne kab banaya or mujhe nhi pta baki sabko pta hai.
Abu: beta ye plan asal m 2 weeks pehle hi bana tha or humne socha jab nikalne ka time hoga to 2 ya 3 din pehle tumhe batayen ge or tumhare ilaawa sabko pta hai mtlb kise or kya pata hai ?
Viki: yehi k aapne mere liye koi ladki dkehi hai or sbko hi to pta hoga jab Fiza Baji ko pata hai to sirf choton ko hi nhi pta hoga wrna unhon n to ab tak dhamaaka kr diya hota .
Ami: haan unhe hi nhi pta bss, waise tum batao tum kya chahte ho ab.
Viki: kis baare m?
Abu: yehi beta jo ladki dekhi hai humne uske baare m!
Viki: acha mujhe thoda sa time Chahiye pr me abhi shaadi nhi krna chahta.
Ami: thk hai le lo jitna time Chahiye pr koshish krna k jaldi bata do hame.
Viki: waise hai ko wo ladki ?
Abu: beta wo tumhari Samina khala hain na unki Nand ki badi beti Saba uski baat kr rhe hain hum.
Viki (Smile krte huwe) mene Samina khala ki nand ko bhi shayad hi dekha ho to uski beti ka kya pta,(phir thode serious tone m) acha m Saba se baat krna chahta hun is baare m tab hi me koi final decision le sakun ga .
Ami: thk hai Fiza ko bolna woh tumhe Saba ki photo or details bhej de gii.
Viki (hhhhuhhh, lambi sans chodte huwe) acha to ab ijaazat hai mujhe ??
Abu: haan beta jao ab araam kro or Fiza ko bola dena thk hai.
Viki: g behtar, Shab-Bakher.
Ami & Abu : Shab-Bakher.
Phir Viki wapss apne room m aajata hai jahan ab bhi sabhi baithe the or ludo khel rhe the usse aata dekh kr Sonia uchal kr uski god m chad jaati hai
Sonia: aap aagaye bhaiyaa.
Viki: (smile k saath) kya lagta hai aagaya hun ya abhi raaste m hi hun.
Sonia bhi muskurate huwe : lag to rha hai k aa gye ho
Inki baaton pr sab muskuraa rhe the.
Viki baher se bhale hi smile kr rha tha or andar se aisa nhi tha, aisa bhi nhi tha k woh dukhi tha bss woh thoda disturbed tha bass or usse araam Chahiye tha isii liye woh bolta hai .
Viki: acha yrr mujhe neend aaa rahi hai ap logon ko or khelna hai ya baaten krni hain to me baraabar wale room m soo jaata hun !
Sadiya: are nhi yrrr hum bhi jaa hi rhe hain bss tumhare aane ka wait kr rhe the ab hum.bhi chalte hainn
Phir ek ek kr ke sabhi baher jaane lagte hain Viki k room se or jab Fiza jaane lagti hai to viki usse awaaz de kr
Viki: Fiza Baji mujhe wo photos waghaira bhej dena phir aap .
Fiza: (Smile krte huwe) jo hukum janaab.
Or hanste huwe room se nikal jaati hai or Viki bhi apna room lock kr ke fresh hone chala jaata hai or jab woh change kr k aata hai or jab apne mobile ko on kr k dekhta hai to uske WhatsApp pr notification aaya hota hai to apne bed or laitte huwe usse open krta hai to ye Fiza k hi messages the jisme usne Saba ki pics or details etc bheji thin.
Wo sabse pehle details hi padhta hai;
(Name: Saba
Age : 20, bss Viki se kuch months hi choti hai
Viki ki hi trhaan yeh bhi IT Student hai bss isne DAE nhi kya isne INTER kiya tha COMPUTER SCIENCE me or aage UNI m bhi IT ka hi krna chahti hai. Abhi free hi hai
Sister: Irum: age 16.
Mom: Salma, age 44, house wife,
Dad: Shahid, age 46, state agencies ka kaam hai.)
Phir Viki Saba ki photo open krta hai or jab dekhta hai to bsss
Asal m Saba thi hi itni pyaari or khoobruuu thi or phir un pic's m bhi uski saadgi saaf jhalak rhi thi bcz wo pics kisi function ki thin shaayad uske college function ki or chunke wo girls college me padhti thi to uske saath uski baaki class mates bhi dikh rhi thin un pics m pr jahan baaki sab ne makeup kiya huwatha wahin Saba apni saadgi m hi sabse alag or achi lag rhi thi.
Or yehi wajah thi k pehli baar sirf pics dekh kr hi Viki k dil m uske liye ek alag hi jagah ban gyiii thi ab isse pyaar kehna to jaldbaazi hi hogi pr wo normal se to oooper hi thi.
Viki photo dekhte huwe apne bed pr leta tha or uske face pr ek dilkash smile thi or ho bhi kyun na aakhir First time Viki kisi ladki ki taraf attract huwa tha or woh just photo dekh kr lekin Viki itna bhi paagal nhi tha k just photo m kisi ladki ki khoobsoorati dekh kr woh haan kr deta ya us pr complete flat ho jaata isii liye woh ab bhi Saba se khud milna chahta tha or kuch baaten krna chahta tha.
Viki apna phone
Ab woh Saba se kya baat krna chahta hai or kal kya hoga ye to ab aage chl kr hi pta chale gaa.
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Bahot khoob shaandaar updateUpdate 08
NEXT DAY
Viki subah apne time se hi uthta hai apna Daily ka routine follow krta hai phir Naashta krne chal deta hai. Dinning table pr sabko slaaam krta hai, phir apni chair pr baith jataa hai Sonia k baraabar m, or aaj uske face pr ek alag hi Khushi thi jisse woh sab se chupaa kr Naashta krne lag jaata hai.
Khala Samina: Ghazala baji meri Salma logon se baat huiii thi woh bol rahi thi k Woh log 4pm tak ajaain ge .
Ami: chalo acha hai ye to.
Nimra: Ami Salma phupho aa rahi hain, to kya Saba Baji or Irum bhi ayen gii ?
SaminaK: haan beta woh 2non bhi aa rahi hain saath.
Nimra: wiase aaj achaanak kaise koi khabar na koi baat kisi n bataaya hi nhi k aa rahe hain koi khaas wajah hai kya.
SaminaK: haan beta wajah to hai (ye bol kr Ghazala ki taraf dekhti hai jaise k aaage ki baat batane ki permission maang rhi ho jo k usse mil bhi jaati hai, Ghazala apna sarrr hila kr haan bol deti hai).
Nimra: waise kya wajah hai Ami?
SaminaK: Beta tumhare Viki bhai or Saba Baji k rishte ki baat k liye aa rahe hain woh log.
Kyyaaaaaaaa
Ye awaz thi Sami, Umar, Nimra,Faizi, Laiba or Sonia ki jo ye baat sun kr hi chonk gye the k unke Viki bhai k Rishte ki baat ho rhi hai
Sami: Viki bhai kya ye sach hai or aapne bataaya q nhi mujhe ya kisi or ko ?
Viki: mujhe to aise bol rha hai jaise mujhe to pehle se sab pata tha!
Umar: matlb kya hai iska ?
Viki: matlab ye hai k mujhe khud kal raat ko pata chala hai jab Abu or Ami se baat krne gaya tha tabhi.
Faizi: waise jo bhi ho baat to Khushi ki hai naa to bhai party to banti hai.
Phupho: oooo party tu idher aaa tujhe me krwaati hun party abhi baat ho rhi hai pehle Rishta to pakka hone de phir kr lena apni party.
Faizi: chlo usme konsa time lage gaa.
Laiba: tu to aise bol rha hai jaise sab tune fix kr rakha hai or wohi hoga pehle ladka ladki pasand to kr len ek 2sre ko.
Faizi: to usme kya hai pasand to yun kr len ge ek 2sre ko, Bhai apna Handsome hai or Behen ya yun kahun kone wali Bhabhi konsa kisi se kam hain.
Phupho: ab yee baaten bnd karo or Naashta karo khamoshi se, bilaa wajah bss faaltuu ki baaten le kr baith jaate ho.
Iske baad sab araam se Naashta krte hain or jo log job wale the wo sab apni apni jobs pr chale jaate hain shaam tk aane ka bol kr.
Naashte k baad jab sare bade log apne apne kaamon m lag gye to yahan baccha party means youngsters ne Viki ki class laga li or lag gye usse chedne.
Is waqt Viki apne room m tha or baaki sab bhi.
Nimra: waise bhai mujhe Fiza Baji n bataya k kal raat ko apko Saba baji ki photo bheji thi yo kaisi lagin apko.
Laiba: han bhai batao naa.
Sabhi aise hi kuch na kuch bol rhe the wahin apna Viki to aise baitha tha jaise usne kuch suna hi naa ho.
Aakhir me Sadiya hi usse hilate huwe
Sadiya: kin Khayaalon m ho kab se pooch rhe hain or tum ho kuch bol hi nhi rhe, kahin Saba k hi khayaalon m to nhi khoye huwe naa.
Hahahaha
Viki apne kaanon se earbuds nikaal kr: g kya kaha aapne ??
Uski ye baat sun kr sab chonk jaate hain k hum kab se bolte jaa rhe hain or ye earbuds laga kr gaane sun rha hai.
Mehwish to kuch zeyaada hi chid gyii thi woh or Fiza to Viki ko maarne bhage lekin Viki thehra athlete woh foran jump kr k door hat jaata hai .
Mehwish: seedha seedha yahan aajao wrna mujhse or Fiza se maar khaa lo ge tum.
Fiza: han araam se yahan ajaao wrna Mehwish tumhe bohot maare giii.
Fiza ki baat pr sab phir se hansne lagte hain or Viki bhi hanste huwe sabke paas aajata hai or bolta hai,
Viki: are yrr gussa mt karo me mazaak kr rha tha mene sab suna hai.
Laiba: ab mazaak ho gaya ho to seedhe 2 batao jo poocha hai.
Viki: yrr wo baat to hai k "FIRST IMPRESSION IS THE LAST IMPRESSION" but...
Mehwish uski baat ko beech m hi kaatte huwe..
Mehwish: to mtlb tumhe Saba pasand hai, mtlb tumhaari haan hai, or Ami bata rhi thin k Saba to pehle hi haan kr chuki hai to iska matlab to ye huwa k jodi set hai phir.. haaan
Hahah sab is baat pr thoda sa hans dete hain k tabhi...
Viki: guys guys guys listen to me .
Umar: haan bolo na, tareef hi krni hai na Bhabhi ki to karo khul k karo roka kisne hai.
hahahaha
Viki: Arree oh bhabhi k bhai ruko zara sabar karo, mene abhi haan nhi kiya hai okkk!
Sadiya: woh kyun, or kab kro ge phir ?
Viki: maana k "FIRST IMPRESSION IS THE LAST IMPRESSION" ye baat ek had tk thk hai but life k itne bade decisions aise hi just first impression ki base pr nhi liye jaa sakte .
Nimra: bhai explain it please.
hahahaha
Viki: haan kyun nhi. Dekho baat ye hai k ye meri or uski yaani k Saba ki life ka bohot hi important decision hai to humen isse soch samjh kr lena chahiye ta k aage chl kr koi problem naa ho hum 2non ko.
Fiza: pr tumne to bola tha na k parents ki mrzi se karo ge agr tumhe koi pasand ki ladki nhi mili to ab kya huwa ye Tumhare parents ki pasand ki hi to hai phir kya problem hai .
Viki: are yrr mene haan nhi bola iska mtlb ye bhi nhi k mene naa kr diya ho.
Fiza: matlab ??
Viki: yrr me chahta hun k pehle Saba se mil kr baat krun Phir hi koi bhi decision len hum.
Sadiya: ye bhi shi hai aaj aaa hi rhe hain woh log to tab kr lena us se baat akele m.
Viki: hmmm.
Trinnnnn trinnmnnn....
Koi kuch or bolta k Viki ka phone baj utha Viki call receive kr k side m chala jaata hai or kuch baat kr ki phone rakh deta hai kisi ko samajh nhi ataa k woh kis se or kya baat kr rha tha bss uske face pr ek halki si smile thi or sabko end k e bss yehi words sunayiii dete hain "ye to acha ho gaya hai, thk hai bye" . Bss itna hi or kuch nhi .
Sub ko thodi curiosity thi k aakhir kis se aise akele m baat kr tha hai Viki ?
Aakhir kaar Umar ne pooch hi liya k
Umar: bhai kis ka call tha or sab thk hai na ?
Viki: haan yrr sab thk hai bss office se call tha nothing else.
Phir aise hi lunch ka time ho jaata hai or lunch kr ke yeh sab thora araam krne apne 2 rooms m chale jaate hain.
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Bahot khoob shaandaar update bhaiUpdate 09
Same Day
4pm
Sab log Hall m bethe the or Saba and family ka wait kr rhe the k tabhi Samina khala k paas call ati hai or woh baat krne k baad sabko bolti hain.
SaminaK: woh meri abhi Salma se baat huii hai.
Ami: to kya bola unhon n kab tk aa rahe hain woh log ?
SaminaK: wo bol rhi thi k unki gadi puncture ho gyiii hai to unhe time lag jaigaa, takreeban 5 pm tk hi aaa payen ge .
Abu: chlo koi baat nhi 5pm bajne m konsa bohot time baaki hai .
Mamu: thk hai tab tk agr kisi ko koi kaam hai to woh niptaa lo.
Is baat pr almost sabhi uth jaate hain or chl dete hain apne kaam niptaane Viki bhi kuch kaam ka bol kr apne room m chala jaata hai or wahan apne Laptop pr kuch kaam krne lagta hai.
Aise hi 5 bhi baj jaate hain or 5:10pm tk Saba and family bhi aajati hai .
Sab log milne milaane or salam dua k baad wahin hall m baith jate hain.
Ami bhi Sonia ko bolti hain k beta jao apne Bhaiyaa ko bula kr le aao, unko bolo k woh log aagye hain.
Sonia: g khala.
Bol kr chal padti hai uchalte kuudte huwe Viki k paas usse bulaane or wahan jaa kr Viki k Room pr Knock krti hai
Viki: aajao gudiyaa .
Sonia gate khol kr andar chali jaati hai or sabse pehle apni aadat k mutabik apne Bhaiya ko salam krti hai phir uske gaal ko choom kr uski godi m chadh jaati hai.
Viki bhi waise hi reply krta hai phir
Viki: bolo kya baat hai, ap is waqt yahan kaise ?
Sonia: wo Bhaiya woh log aagaye hain to Khala n mujhe bheja tha apko bulaane k liye.
Viki: acha to thk hai chalo.
Sonia: chaloooo.
Viki usee aise hi godi m uthaye hi chal deta hai hall ki taraf.
Hall m pohonch kr sabse pehle to Viki sabko Salaam krta hai phir wahin ek khaali seat pr baith jaata hai.
Shahid uncle: (Saba's father) or suno Viki beta kya haal hai or kya kr rhe ho aaj kal ?
Viki: ALLAH ka karam hai thk, or job kr rha hun filhaal to. Phir apni job k baare m batata hai .
Or phir wohi regular baaten hoti hain idher udher kii. Beech 2 m Viki or Saba n ek 2sre ki taraf dekha bhi pr ye dekhna sirf 1 second k liye hi tha sarsarii saa nazren thehrii nhi thin unki ek 2sre pr .
Phir aise hi baaten or hansi mazak m dinner ka time ho jaata hai or sab ek saath Dinner krte hain.
Dinner k baad Viki kuch kaam k bol kr apne room m chala jaata hai. Idher SaminaK Fiza ko kuch ishaara krti hain to Fiza Saba ko apne paas bulaati hai or halki awaaz m us se kuch baat krti hai k koi sune nhi or phir woh usko Viki k room k baher le jaa kr "Best of Luck" bolti hai or khud wahan se chali jaati hai hall ki taraf.
Saba thodi si nervous thi, pehli baar jo kisi ladke se aise baat krne ja rhi thi woh bhi akele m or larka bhi woh jisse uske parents ne uske liye chose kiya hai. Usse koi problem nhi thi apne parents ki choice se bss aise akele m baat krne se pehle bass thodi si nervous thi, aakhir kaar woh khud pr kaabu krte huwe gate ko Knock krti hai to andar se awaaz aati hai.
"Gate khula hi hai aajao"
Saba normally gate ko open krti hai or phir bnd kr k room m enter krti hai or ek chair le kr baith jaati hai .
Saba: A.slaam.alaikum.
Viki: W.salam, (phir thoda ruk kr )kya hal hai .
Saba ek baar Viki ki taraf dekhti hai phir: Alhamdulillah thk ap batain.
Viki: me bhi bilkul thk thodi nervous lag rhi ho !
Saba: ab first time kisi ladke se baat kr thi hun akele m jiss se mere rishte ki baat chl rhi hai to thoda nervous hona to normal hi hai, or ap bhi to nervous lag rhe hain.
Viki: hmm baat to shi hai tumhaari, or mera bhi same tumhare jaisa hi first time hai to isii liye lag sakta hai.
Saba: hmm waise apko kaise pata chala k gate k baher me hi khadi hunn mtlb koi or bhi to ho sakta tha naa.
Viki: han ho to sakta tha pr nhi tha naa. Mujhe Fiza baji ne message kiya tha k Saba aa rahi hai tumhare room m is liye mujhe pata tha.
Saba: ohh acha shi.
Viki: chlo ab hum ye formal hona chod kr thoda khul kr baat kr lete hain.
Saba: jaisa apko thk lage.
Viki: tum ab bhi formal ho rhi ho.
Saba: acha thk hai chlo normally hi baat krte hain ab thk hai .
Viki: ye batao tumhara kya khayaal hai is rishte k baare m , means hum 2non k baare m.
Saba: mujhe koi problem nhi hai is rishte se pr shayad apko hai isii liye ap baat krna chahte the.
Viki (halka sa hanste huwe): are nhi aisii baat nhi hai mujhe bhi koi problem nhi hai bas waise hi me chahta tha k hum log final decision lene se pehle aapas m baat kr len, jis se hum thoda ek 2sre k saath comfortable ho jain or me yw bhi jaanna chahta tha k tumne haan apni mrzi se ki hai na koi pressure to nhi tha tum pr .
Saba (muskurate huwe): g nhi ye mara apna faisla hai mujh pr kisi qism ka koi pressure nhi tha even k Ami (Saba's mom) n to mujhe bola hai k agr mujhe manzoor nhi hai to baat yahin khatam ho jaigiii, pr seriously mujhe koi problem nhi hai to meri taraf se to haan hai.
Viki: ye to achi baat hai phir. Wiase aage ka kya plan hai phir or studies etc ka ?
Saba: Agr ap shadi ka pooch rhe ho to wo to family wale jab bhi decide kren ge tab hi ir studies ka to phir ap k faisle pr depend krta hai agr aap permission do ge to shayad...
Viki: meri baat chodo ye batao tum kya chahti ho? Bcz tumhaari baat zeyaada matter krti hai yahan.
Saba: me to aage study krna chahti hun.
Viki: thk hai to phir mujhe bhi koi issue nhi hai ulta me to khud bhi yehi chahta hun. Or haan it's a yes from me as well.
Saba: to phir chl kr baaki sab ko bhi bata dete hain .
Viki: hmm chalo chalte hain phir.
Or ye 2non chal padte hain hall ki taraf or jab ye hall m pohonchte hain to baghair kuch bole hi sabko inke chehre dekh kr hi samjh aajata hai k kya nateeja nikla inki baat-cheet ka .
ShumailaK: to phir munh meetha krte hain sab ...
Ye bol kr wo Laiba ko Ishaara krti hai to Laiba jaa kr mithayii le kr aati hai or sabka munh meetha krwaati hai .
Aaj k liye itna hi.
Saath bane rahiye or apni qeemti raye zaroor dete rehiye.
Tow Viki Laiba k saath uske college gaya or yaha bhi apne logic sabke samne rakkheUpdate 10
Next morning
Subah sabhi as routine uthte hain or Naashta kar k Sabhi mard log (parents) baher chale gye the ab ghr m sirf ladies or apne youngsters hi reh gye the.
Ladies apne ghar k kaamon m lagi huii thin to bache log aapsss m baaton or hansi mazak kr rhe the jo inka roz ka hota hai pr aaj inki baaton ka ek ehem hissa Saba thi. Sonia bhi godi m chadh kr baithi thi pr aaj Kuch alag tha jahan pehle woh sirf Viki ki godi m hi baithti thi to aj woh Saba k saath chipki huiii thi aakhir uski hone wali Bhabhi jo thi Saba or iska 2nd reason ye tha apna Viki jo is scene se ghayab tha asal m Viki apna kuch kaam kr rha tha office ka, atleast baaki sab ko to usne yehi bola tha.
Baaki poora din normal hi guzarta hai.
Next day
Naashte k baad sab bade log apne apne kaam pr nikal jaate hain to wahin aaj Saba bhi ready thi or usne Burka pehena huwa tha or wo Mehwish ka wait kr rhi thi (Full too BURKA AVENGER wala look lag rha tha jaise abhi jaa kr BABA BANDOOK ka fuse nikaal degi
Asal m aaj Mehwish jis school m padhaati thi wahan pr koi function tha or kyun k woh girls school m padhaati thi to usne socha k apne saath Saba ko bhi le chalti hun usse bhi koi problem nhi hogi. Pehle to Saba manaa krti hai pr Mehwish k insist krne or maan jaati hai.
Mehwish ready ho kr aati hai or ye 2non nikal jaate hain Schoolki taraf.
Wahin Viki bhi jaa raha tha baher, woh Umar or Laiba k saath jaa rha tha unke college kyun k aaj un 2non ka result aane wala tha.
Umar or Laiba 2non hi same college me padhte the or class bhi same hi thi inki bcz in 2non ne hi arts liya tha .
Ghr se carle kr nikal jaate hain car
Ab apna Viki itna handsome to tha k free mahol wali ladkiyaan ek baar dekh kr kuch had tak impress to ho hi jaati thin waisa hi yahan bhi huwa kuch girls thin jo usse taad rhi thin pr apna Viki thehra sakht londa ab har kisi pr thode hi pighle gaa to usne wohi kiya jo wo hamesha se krta aaya tha means ignore.
Laiba or Umar Viki ko le kr apne group ki taraf chale jaate hain, inke group m 2 ladke or 3 ladkiyaan or thin in 2non k ilaawa.
Salaam dua k baad sab ek saath hi baith jaate hain .
F1(friend 1 "in ka koi khass role nhi hai to name nhi likha"): yrr Laiba ye kon hai tumhare saath pehle to nhi dekha kabhi.
F2: haan Umar kon hai ye bata naa.
Umar
Viki halki smile k saath unko great krta hai.
F3: cousin pr tumhare to sabhi cousins ko him jaante hain ya atleast dekha to hai or inko kabhi nhi dekha .
Laiba: woh is liye k Bhai apne Ami Abu or bhaiyon k saath Karachi m rehte hain.
F4: acha Sahi waise ye Kuch bol q nhi rhe ?
Laiba: kab se to tum sab k sawaal jawaab chal rhe hain to kaise bolen ge or waise bhi bhai kisi ko jaante nhi to kya baat Karen ge tumhe kuch baat krni hai to bolo .
F2(jo ladki thi Viki ki taraf haath aage krti huii) ap mujhse friendship karen ge please.
Sun kr baaki friends thode shocked huwe pr Laiba or Umar to just apna head shake krne lage.
Viki: I'm sorry Sister but me girls k saath dosti nhi krta, please don't mind haan.
Ye sun kr to us ladki ka muhn hi utarr gaya pr usne sambhalte huwe bola
F2: waise me jaan skti hun k wajah kya hai iski ?
Laiba: woh me batati hun, darasal bhai ladkiyon se dosti hi nhi krte or wiase bhi jo tum soch rhi ho woh ab possible bhi nhi hai .
F2: me kya soch rhi hun or kya possible nhi hai?
Umar: yehi k tum jo bhai ki gf banne ka soch rhi ho woh possible nhi hai pehli baat to bhai khud in chakkaron m nhi padte or 2nd k bhai ka rishta pakka ho chuka hai to samajh rhi ho na tumhaara patta ugne se pehle hi cut gaya hai
F5: ohhhh to yeh baat hai .
F6: wiase kya hum wajah jaan sakte hain k ap girls se dosti kyun nhi krte ?
Viki: zaroori nhi kr har cheez ki koi wajah ho bss mera dil nhi maanta to nhi krta simple.
F5: hain ye kya baat huii .
Viki: isme problem hi kya hai insaan ko wohi krna chahiye jo uska dil bole lekin usme dimaagh ka hissa bhi ho. Lekin bss condition yeh hai k woh kaam shi ho jo aapka dil apko krne ka bol rha hai .
Ab dekho na dost me banana nhi chahta or behen woh banna nhi chahtin to isme me kya kr sakta hun .
Hahahaha sabhi hans dete hain .
Utne m hi results announcement start ho jaati hai to sab khamoshi se us taraf focus kr lete hain.
Laiba Umar or inke sabhi dost ache numbers se paas ho gye the to ye log canteen m jaa kr choti sii party krne lagte hain k itne m
Trinnmnnn trinnmnnn
Viki ka phone bajta hai dekho to ghr se Ami ki call thi.
Viki: A.SalaaamoAlikum Ami.
Ami:W.Salaam.
Viki: g Ami sab khairiyat hai jo aapne call kiya ?
Ami: khairiyat k bacche ghr jab aoge bola tha na k jaldii aajana ghr shopping bhi krni hai or tum ho k abhi tk nhi aye thode se to din hain apne paas.
Viki: ye meri ghalti nhi hai results aane m time lag gaya or bss abbi canteen m hain bss aate hain thodi der m.
Ami: jaldi aaoo yahaan itne kaam hain or tum ho k ghayab ho or Saba or Mehwish bhi nhi ayiin abhi tk.
Viki: to itni jaldi kis baat ki hai Ami next week ki date hai na to araam se ho jaiga sab waise bhi konsa koi badaa function krna hai jo itna pareshan ho rhi ho.
Ami: beta hamare liye to ye bada function hi hai. Or ab tum Baaton m time waste naa Karo or jaldi ghr aajao.
Viki: ok Ami aate hain bss.
Call cut kr ke Laiba or Umar se bolta hai.
Viki: chlo yrr jaldi kro Ami ka call tha jaldi bula rhi hain.
Laiba (to her friends) ok friends ab hum chalte hai ghr m kuch kaam hain to humen nikalna pade gaa.
Same day
Saba' side
Ab dekh lete hain k yahan school
To jab Mehwish Saba ko le kr school pohonchti hai to ek Side pr uski colleagues or kuch puraani friends khadi hoti hain (inke bhi name important nhi hain to F1,F2 hi likhun gaa).
Salaam dua k baad ek Mehwish intro krwaati hai sabka
Mehwish: Saba ye meri colleagues or friends hain or friends ye hai Saba meri hone wali Bhabhi.
Sabhi shocked
F1: Mehwish ye tu kya bol rhi hai yeh trri hone wali Bhabhi! Mtlb kaise?
Mehwish: kya matlb kaise or ye kyun nhi ho skti meri Bhabhi??
F2: are isko dekh kr to lagta hai k iski age kam se kam 19 ya 20 to hogi hi .
Mehwish: han 20 ki hai ye to usme kya problem hai.
F3: are problem nhi hai mtlb yeh hai hamare bolne ka k ye 20 ki hai or Faizi to abhi sirf 15 ka hi hai.
Ye sun kr Mehwish to hansne lag jaati hai.
Mehwish (hanste huwe) paagal ho kya sab k sab jo ye soch rhe ho k ye or faizi hahahaha
F3: hans kyun rhi hai or ye Faizi ki nhi hai ??
Mehwish: haan mtlb nhi ye Faizi ki bhi hone wlai Bhabhi hi hai or tum log kya soch the the mene hone wali Bhabhi kya bola tum to apne hi logics lag baithi.
F4: to phir kiski hone wali wife hai ye ?
Mehwish: are mene bataaya tha na mere Mamu aye huwe hain Karachi se unke bade bete Viki ki hone wali wife hai ye .
F4: acha acha sorry hann please maaf krna Saba humen thodi ghalatfehmi ho gyii thi.
Saba: koi baat nhi ap sorry na bolen .
F5: waise tum krti kya ho Saba means k studies etc .
Saba: abhi tk mene apna Enter kiya hai Computer Science se aage abhi B-Tech ya BSCS krna hai .
F4: pr uske liye yo bohot dimaagh chahiye hota hai or mehnat bhi bohot lagti hai .
Mehwish: to uska kya hai ye topper hai apne college ki to koi masla hi nhi hai iske liye to entry test agr huwa bhi to ye yuun clear kr le gii.
F4: mera mtlb ye hai k shaadi k baad iska hubby isko permission de ga aage padhne ki ir phir shaadi k baad studies manage krna easy nhi hota naa.
Saba: woh kyun mana karen ge ulta unhon ne to mujhe khud bola tha k aage studies krna chahti ho to unhe koi problem nhi hai ulta woh to support m hain is baat k.
F3: ladke to bolte hain bss or jab khud padhte nhi hain to apni biviyon ko kaise padhne den ge .
Mehwish: faaltu baaten naa kro Viki khud bohot hi bright hai studies m. Jitna woh handsome hai us se zeyaada intelligent hai apne college ka topper hai or sports activities m bhi brilliant hai wo.
F2: acha ye baat hai, phir to thk hai .
F3: chlo dekhen g k kitna intelligent hai ye Viki.
Mehwish: ab tum log bss uska exam na lene Beth janaa .
Hahahaha Sabhi hanse dete hain .
Aise hi kaafi time nikal jaata hai to Phupho ki call aati hai Mehwish k paas k jaldi ghr aajaao etc to ye log bhi nikal jaate hain ghr ki taraf.
Ab aaakhir aisa kya hona hai next week jiski tayaari ho rhi hai bcz Viki ki shaadi to pakka nhi hai usne khud jo abhi manaa kiya tha.
To aage dekhte hain k kya baat hai aakhir lekin next update m.
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Maybe aaj raat tk ek update orr aye.
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Tow seedha nikah ka hi programme bana dala mujhe laga tha engagement ker lenge basUpdate 11
To chalen jaante hain k aakhir kis chiz ki tayaari ho thi hai pr us k liye humen jaana hoga thoda past m,
aaahaaan zeyaada peeche bhi nhi bss us raat jab Viki or Saba ki baat huii thi or inhon ne haan boli thi.
A Night before yesterday
To munh meetha krne ke baad rishte k hawaale se baat ho rhi thi tabhii
Rashid uncle (Saba's father): to phir kya khayaal hai date bhi final kr lete hain .
Abu: haan kyun nhi yeh nek kaam bhi aaj hi jr dete hain .
Ami: bilkul or koi nazdeek ki hi tareekh rakhte hain.
Salma aunty: haan ye Aapne shi kaha behen g koi kareeb ki hi date rkhte hain.
Inki baaten sun kr Viki or Saba confused the or ek 2sre ki taraf hi dkeh rhe the Saba ishaare se Viki se poochti hai k "kis chiz ki baat ho rhi hai" to Viki bhi ishaare se bolta hai k "mujhe khud nhi pta, ruko me poochta hun".
Viki: sorry to interrupt pr Ami ye kis chiz ki date fix krne ki baat kr rhe hain aap log ?
Ami: beta tumhare or Saba k Nikaah ki date fix kr rhe hain .
Viki or Saba both shocked
"Kyyaaaaaaaa"
Bss yehi nika donon ke muh se.
Shahid uncle: kya huwa beta koi masla hai kya?
Saba: nhi Abu woh baat nhi hai pr abhi kyun fix kr rhe hain date, hamari baat to huii thi k abhi shaadi nhi hogi or Viki bhi to yehi chahte hain ka shaadi kuch arse baad to phir.
Viki: haan abu baat to huii hi thi meri bhi aapse phir ye sab .
Abu: are beta abhi shaadi thodi ho rhi hai sirf Nikaah kr rhe hain baaki rasmen jaise mehendi, Baraat, Valima , Rukhsati wo sab to baad m hi hoga naa .
Viki: woh sab to thk hai pr Nikaah bhi itni jaldi.
Salma aunty: are beta koi khaas wajah nhi hai bss hum log chahte hain k ye kaam jaldi hi ho jaye or phir Saba bhi tumhaare saath hi same University me padhayii kare gi aage ki.
Saba: Ami lekin studies to me wahan ja kr waise bhi kr sakti hun na to phir?
Shahid uncle: beta studies to ap kr skti ho wahan jaa kr lekin agr Nikaah nhi hoga abhi to phir ap donon ek 2sre se mil nhi sakte Shaadi tk or naa hi baat kr sakte ho. Bolo manzoor hai ?
Saba or Viki ek saath: or woh kyun ?
Ami: woh is liye beta k ye rules hain or inhe change nhi kiyaa jaa skta to isii liye aisa hi hoga to ab batao kya krna hai Nikaah ya shaadi tk wait (with smile).
Ye sun kr Viki or Saba ek 2sre ko dekhte hain or ishaaron m hi kuch baat krte hain phir ek saath
"Ok hamen manzoor hai"
Salma aunty: kya manzoor hai ?
Dono: Nikaah.
Sab is baat kr Khush ho jaate hain k in 2non n haan kr di hai.
Or phir kya tha ho gyii discussion start k kab ki date fix karen kaafi der dimaagh khapaane k baad ye final hota hai k next week Saturday I shaam ko Nikaah hoga inka is baat se sab agree krte hain.
Abu: to phir ye final rha k next Saturday Nikaah hai kisi ko kuch bolna hai yo abhi bata do baad m naa bolnaa.
Viki ko masti soojhti hai to wo bolta hai
Viki: wiase Abu mujhe abhi bhi doubt hai itni jaldi kis baat ki thi (or munh daba kr hansne lagta hai)
Pr woh bolte hain na k "Beta chahe kitna bhi bada ho jaye Baap Baap hi hota hai". To kya tha Abu ne bhi maar diya iss half volley pr sixer
Abu: beta ab tum itna pooch hi rhe ho to bata hi deta hun .
Viki: g bilkul bataiye.
Abu: beta hamen to koi maslaa nhi tha bss tujhe bharosa nhi tha naa jis hisaab se tuu jaa rha hai or tu ladkiyon ko behen bana rha hai na to kahin agr un behnon k beech tujhe koi dost mil gyii na to masla ho jaigaa, yaa phir tune galati se isse hi Behen bol diya to
Viki: apko apne bete pr zara bhi bharosa nhi hai kya.
Abu: BilKul bharosa hai isi liye to ye decision liya hai humne
Viki: hainnn gazab bezzati hai yeh to apni, taanaa maar rhe ho woh bhi
Sar-e-Aam.
Hahahaha
Shahid uncle: acha ab ye mazak chodo or koi kaam ki baat hai to krte hain wrna sab sone chlo raat kaafi ho gyiii hai.
Unki is baat pr ladies gang foran bola
"Shopping bhi krni hai uska kya"
Abu: jo bhi lena hai wo din m hi lene jao ge na to thk hai phir abhi sone chalo sab.
Phir kya sab chale sone .
Yahan yeh log to khushiyaan manaa rhe the pr kahin koi tha ya yun kahun k thi Jo pareshan thi.
2 ladkiyaann aapas m baat kr rhi thin. 2non ko dekh kr o unki baaton se to aisa lagta tha k dost hain ye 2non .
1st ladki: yrr aakhir kab tk tu ye sab bardaasht kare gi or akeli hi in sab problems se ladti rahe giii.
2nd ladki: jab tak mujh m jaan hai tab tak, jab tk ALLAH PAK kisi ko bhej nhi deta mera saath dene ke liye ya ye problems khatam nhi ho jaatin tab tk.
1st: or tab tk tu aise hi suffer krti rhe gii or in zaalimon se akeli ladki rahe gi youn chupti phire giii. Or kab aye gaa tera woh maseeha jo tera saath dega haaan.
2nd: mujhe poora yaqeen hai k woh aaj nhi to kal nhi to parson kisi ko bhej hi den ge or nhi bheja to me akeli hi ladti rahun gi sab se .
1st: acha chl ab chalte hain yahan se is se pehle k koi aajaye .
2nd : haan chal chalen .
Or phir woh wahan se apne bags uthati hain or nikal jaati hai wahan se peeche kuch reh jaata hai to wo 2 bnde jo neeche pade the shaayad marr chuke the or inhi 2non ya kisi ek ladki ne unko maara tha.
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