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Fantasy Antique Love (Anokha Pyar) Incest, Magic, Romance, Thriller & Fantasy (Hinglish)

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Naughtyrishabh

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Teen teen update or tino hi shandaar or jabardast bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Kya kahun bhai or kitni tarif Karon .
Shabd Kam pad jayenge yaar lekin baat or tarif khatm nhi hogi.
Har ek sentence ho chahe Masti , pyar , udasi ya man me erotic ka bhaw, Shiksha , ya fir pitayi.
Har chij Kamal ki thi or ekdam lajwaab.
Pic to char Chand Laga dete h bhai or shyri to Kamal ki thi.
Kitni bollon yaar .
Shandaar shandaar shandaar or shandaar update bhai.
E sala last me aa hi Gye chhichhore....

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjar
 
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killar_back

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Baba__Bhai said:
Bhai sach me yarr aaj aapne pritam bhai ki yaad dila di unki likhi shayri bhej kar...
Us wakht sirf mujhe pritam bhai ki koi to rok lo or Dil ka rishta story bohot pasand thi, or sath me "Pighalta aasman bhi..
"Koi to rok lo" apne aap me ek misaal thi, itni emotional story maine aaj tak nahin padhi, us story ki shayri padhkar meri aakhin me aansu aa jate the,
Usme priya ka dard bohot zabarzast tha... Maine vo story takreeban 20 ya 22 baar read ki hogi... Mujhe aaj bhi uske ek ek dialog yaad hain... Khaskar keerti ka chhip chhip kqr baaten sunna or ami nimi ki nadani to man moh leti thi...
Ahhh! Kya story thi, kash vo poori ho pati,
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Bhai main koi professional writwr to nahin hun, ki unke jaise emotions dikha sakun.. vo to ek brilliant writer the, par main ab ahista - ahista seekh raha hun..
..
Hope ki aapko maza aayega...
Or don't worry..
Chahe kuchh bhi ho jaye ya kitne bhi nagative comments kyon na milen.. main ye story poori karke hi dam lunga...

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Baba Bhai sach kaha aapne, pritam da ka to jawab nahi, kya likhte they, kya emotions hua karta tha, par afsos ki kahani puri nahi ho saki, uski sari sayari ek se badkar ek thi, wo chehe kirti ki ho ya priya ne kahi ho, kya pyaar tha, dil ko chune wala...
Kaas wo story puri ho paati....:biggboss:
 
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Hellohoney

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Mast updet bhai ekse badhkar ek ab jaldise femili se milva do waiting for next updet
 
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luv4sale696969

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Still waiting...
 
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