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[Werewolf]

Hmm ... Mne aapko maaf kar diya h... Toh review dena to banta h... Warna aap firse sad na ho jao.

Mera toh pata nahi par ju ki haalat bigdi hui thi.

1) Sabse pehli baat. Hands down the best update after such a while. Aisi feeling mujhe last update 75 ko padh k aayi thi. Iss update ka narration... My god!!! Top class narration tha. No grammar mistakes. Sahi jagah pe sahi images. Aur har image itni scary, this was such a horror ride. I got goosebumps several times. And yes! Mne update raat me hi padha tha. I legitimately got scared and was havi5 goosebumps all over my skin. Hats off to you Sir!!!

Sahi images dhundhna is a hassle. It takes time and sometimes you don't get what you want. The images I posted were near close to my imagination. And that's why I picked them. Do images ko mene khud edit bhi kiya tha ki usme Nightwalker ko dikha saku. Woh smoke waala scene...

2) The details... Itna bada update likhne k baad bhi kahi koi mistake nahi hui h aapse. Har baat ka itna dhyan rakha h aapne. Emma ka bhaagte waqt ussi painting hall se guzarna aur fir uski tasveer. Basement ke floor ka geela hona. Aur baad me Ronnie k golden bars ussi geele floor par gir jana jis se pata lag sake ki wo fake the. Har time interval ka dhyan rakhna. Aur na jane kya kya... Aap sab kuch apne mind me baitha k rakhe hue the. Aur usse itni khubsoorti se paros k aapne hume prastut kia h ki mere paas shabd khatam ho rahe h ab...

Everything is about details.

3) The suspense... My god!!!! Kaha se laate ho itna sab? Haa? Mujhe laga tha haa ab ye gutthi meri samjh me aane lagi h, haa inhi me se koi ek ho sakta h, haa ye hoga woh hoga par jese jese update aage badhte gaya meri saari guessing dhari ki dhari reh gayi... Howww??? Sach kahu to mere sar k upar se nikal raha h ki Nightwalker ye sab kar kese raha h .. I'm sure Chester andar room me hi mara h... Tabhi uski awaaz nahi aayi. But howwww??? Andar kese gaya Nightwalker??? Andar jaane ka to sirf ek hi raasta h... Door khol k... Kahi koi khufiya surang h kya? Some hidden route???

There are no hidden routes.

4) The humour... Shuruvaat ka scene. Divya aur Suhana ka. I laughed so hard when Suhana said ek number ka chutiya h tumhara husband. Okay! I was clearly not expecting that... It came out of the blue. And I cracked up. Too great!!! It also shows that Suhana cares for Veer a lot. Face pe dikhati nahi h par chinta h usse Veer ki ...

It shows ki Suhana muhphat hai. Veer ke saath bhi ekdum starting me uski behes hoti thi. Paiso ka guroor and all. But she has changed for the better. Lekin fir bhi muhbaazi karne ki aadat abhi gayi nahi hai uski.

5) Thrill and horror .. itni khubsoorti se aapne isme bhara h na... Harr second pe dhadkane badh rahi thi padhte wakt... Too good!! Aage kya hone wala tha ye soch k hi goosebumps aa rahe the... Aur images ki to kya hi kahe ab.

Story will have thrill till the end.

6) Visualisation... Ye ab tak aisa ek update h jisme mujhe sabse zyaada visualisation ki feeling aayi h ... Matlab main update padh nhi rahi thi... Dekh rahi thi. Aisa laga main thriller movie dekh rahi hu koi... Visualization iss update ka itna strong tha ki main apni aakho ke saamne sab kuch hota dekh paa rahi thi... Ye sab kamal tha aapke flawless narration ka.

100th update pe boht mehnat kii thi apan ne. Toh obviously woh shandaar hona hi tha.

7) Dialogues... My god!!! Isme to aapko mahaarat haasil h... Mike ka hold onto that kehna, ho ya Veer ka emma se puchna why do you trust me so much. Dialogues itne realistic the ki yadi ye scene sach me play ho raha hota to sach me yahi dialogues kisi bhi noramal insaan k muh se nikalte... Seemless flow with top realistic dialogues...

Thanks girl...

8) Pari.... Pari ka care karna, veer k bina bole hi skills activate kar dena jese wo janti ho ki uske master kya chaah rahe h... Beech beech me apne master ko salaah dena, samjhana aur encourage karna... Veer ne sahi hi kaha h... Pari is his soul... There's no Veer without Pari. And there's no

That is true ...

9) Ab aur kuch soojh nhi raha mujhe... Jab kuch aur yaad aaega to likh dungi...

Aur naraaz mat hona okay? Jo do do word likhte h to aap unhe bas like kar k aage badh jao. Hum log h na... Hume replies dia karo aap. Aap aise hi likhte rahiye... You are the real treasure.

Irony toh dekho. Abhi mein reply nahi diya toh ju macchli ka tarah tadapne lagi...
Btw thanks a lot! Ye baat sach hai ki ju ke aane ke baad iss thread me raunak badhi hai. Aur uska mein abhaari hu. Aise hi bane rehne ka.

 

[Skul]

Marvelous update Bhai superb

 

[Werewolf]

Suhana is a queen!

I thought Kaera was a queen..
But yeah, we can't deny she was savage there.

The face-off between Veer & The Nightwalker has started! The previous update ended with a loud scream and now we know that Emma was behind it... The first prey of The Nightwalker was Jacob... Ab kaafi had tak saaf ho chuka hai ki laalach hi ek aisa kaaran hai jo is House Of Killers mein vyakti ko mrityu tak le jaata hai... Jacob, Ronnie or even Chester, teenon hi isi laalach ke chakkar mein pade aur nateejtan, apne praan teenon ko hi ganwane pade, though Chester's death hasn't been confirmed yet, But I'm sure that he's no more between the others...

You will have to read the next update to know more.

Jacob ne wahi soch dikhayi jo aksar mrityu ka kaaran banti hai... Not only in this story or House Of Killers, but in real life too, greed always pays off... Jacob ko yahi soch thi ki wo baaki sabse pehle bars dhoond lega aur Mansion se nikal jaayega, but wahi hua jiski apeksha thi... He died, and died a very horrifying death! Par Jacob ki maut se ek baat saaf ho gayi thi ki Veer ke liye aasan nahin hone waala is mansion se zinda baahar nikalna, that too with Zoey ...

Jacob purposefully mentioned The Nightwalker's name to induce a horror into the others. So that others won't go out without getting scared. But internally he didn't believe in Nightwalker. He thought those were just the rumours or a myth in order to keep the people away from the hidden treasure. Hence, at the end... XD

After that Jacob incident I thought ki baaki sab ko ek achha sabak milega ki unhe rules ke mutaabik hi bars ko dhoondna hai, anyatha badle mein unhe apni jaan ganwani hi padegi... But still, as they say, the world is filled with morons... Ronnie ne bhi wahi kiya jo Jacob ne kiya tha, bas ek difference tha ki Ronnie ka sach mein bohot bura kata men! Sewage Area mein maujood ek tunnel mein wo chest maujood thi, jiske andar wo bars Ronnie ko praapt huyi... Yadi wo asli hoti to Ronnie ke liye shayad bura bhi lagta but they were fake.. Poor Guy!

As the saying goes... Harr chamakne waali cheez sona nahi hoti.

Khair, Ronnie ka bhi wahi anjaam hua jo Jacob ka hua tha, but even after that another chutiya came up with his chutiyatic brain, namely Chester... Other two were just trying to get the gold bars before others but this clown challenged The Nightwalker... Vinaash Kaale Vipreet Buddhi! Chester ne apne room ko lock to kar liya tha par ab dekhna ye hai ki kya wo darwaza use bacha paane mein saksham tha bhi ya nahin... I don't think ki wo zinda hoga, yadi hua bhi to agle update mein mar hi jaayega, waise bhi is jaise praani kewal dharti par bojh maatra hain...

But the question is... How did he die???

Now, alongside Veer, Mike, Tommy, Emma & Zoey are left alive, inmein se bhi ek aadha aur marega abhi aisa mujhe lagta hai... Maybe Mike... Ab Veer ko simultaneously kuchh kaam karne padenge, firstly he has to ensure the safety of Zoey & Emma, I think ki ye donon Nightwalker ki prime targets hongi... Reason is ki jab Veer, Ronnie ki maut ke baad sewage area mein pahuncha, tab use chhodkar Nightwalker Emma aur Zoey ko maarne nikla tha... I guess, he kills people according to who comes in his way first, aur Emma aur Zoey uske changul se bach chuki hain, aise mein shayad ye donon uske target par hon...

That is true. If he sees you he will kill you. But.... I won't give spoilers if you haven't read the next update.

Emma... Kuchh hadh tak uska character samajh aa chuka hai... She's greedy for sure but at the same time she's pigeon hearted too... Pehle Jacob aur uske baad Ronnie ki maut ke baad uske dil – o – dimaag par beshak sabse gehra asar pada hoga... Especially, jab Jacob ka sar roll hokar uske pairon mein aa pahuncha tha... But is sabke dauraan Veer ke saath bhi Emma ki ek bonding banti huyi dikhayi pad rahi hai... No doubt ki Veer ne Zoey ko prathmikta di thi jab pratham baar donon ladkiyan uske saamne aayin, but somehow I feel ki yadi ye donon ladkiyan yahaan se zinda baahar nikli to Emma might play a vital role in future... Plus, Veer's gestures, firstly he stood up for Emma when Ronnie doubted her, afterwards that sewage area scene where he protected Emma and Zoey both, and how can we forget that he comforted her nicely too... Undoubtedly, Emma par ek gehra asar hone waala hai in sabka!

Both the girls might play some role in the future. Even Mike. We can't say anything for now but y'all are allowed to make assumptions after all.

Zoey... The way she was looking at Veer while he was holding Emma, says a lot... I think ki Zoey jald hi Veer ki taraf attract ho jaayegi, ya kahun ki shayad already ho chuki hai... That too, a really strong attraction... Sarvpratham, pehla hi scene hua tha jo donon ke madhya, the way both of them looked at each other, after that Zoey chose to stay with Veer & Mike, in place of the others, Veer's caring behaviour not only towards Zoey but towards Emma too, and at the end, saving her in the sewage area... When she hugged Veer, it was enough to show the flow of emotions inside her... Halaanki, abhi jis situation mein fanse huye hain ye sab, usmein kuchh bhi future relationships athva feelings ke baare mein predict karna sahi nahi hai, because in such horrifying situation, where life's at stake, the feelings become more strong than they're in reality... Khair, ab dekhna ye hai ki Veer kitnon ko yahaan se zinda nikaal paayega, nikaal bhi paayega ya nahin...

Yes! See, attractive people gets attracted to other attractive people. It's as simple as that. Veer is handsome and Zoey is gorgeous. So the moment they saw each other. Amidst all the average looking people, they seemed like a perfect couple. They do had a sexual tension between them. Veer felt like she would jump on him. But he was wrong. Zoey had a pride. And so did Veer. So he chose to stay quiet and didn't try to ass lick. Sakht launda apna. Zoey too thought Veer would come out and make a move on her. But she was wrong too. Thus, she got curious about him. And when he saved her... Her pride shattered. She immediately hugged him after getting emotional...

Jo baat cheet sabke beech huyi thi, about how they all reached the Mansion... Emma ne kis wajah se wahaan aane ke saadhan ke baare mein disclose nahin kiya, ye bhi ek sawaal hai... I guess, something illegal would've been involved..? Plus, the boats getting disappeared raises sone questions too... Kya iski wajah ye hai ki The Nightwalker nahin chahta ki koyi us Island se zinda baahar nikal paaye ya kuchh aur...

Nightwalker ke baare mein abhi koyi bhi prediction kar paana kathin hai... Pari aur Veer jin baaton par charcha kar rahe the yadi unpar nazar daali jaaye to...

Boats disappearing is a simple guess. Someone doesn't want them to leave the mansion.

Room numbers ka koyi connection hona killings mein abhi ke liye sambhav nahin lagta... But, the assumption of Pari regarding The Nightwalker attacking people in the group of two... Ye shayad sahi nahin hai... Because, Chester ke pichhe jab bhaaga tha wo, tab Chester akela hi tha... Room nos. bhi kisi order mein nahin dikhayi de rahen hain... Let's see next update mein iske baare mein aur kya jaan ne ko milta hai...

Ohhhh maaaannnnn!!!! You are not ready...

Between what Pari said about those paintings, I can think of only one possibility... Yadi wo paintings kewal passport size photograph ke samaan hain, means only face & no body, then I'm sure ki wo unhi logon ki paintings hongi jo yahaan aakar tapak gaye... After getting their heads slashed, obviously they won't have been having a smile on their faces, so... Baali yadi koyi aur baat hai to wo definitely interesting rahega... Beharhal, ye Gold Bars mansion mein hain bhi ya nas chutiya kaata jaa raha hai, aur yadi hain bhi to jaane kitne aur traps ho sakte hain, jaise Ronnie ke liye tha...

Paintings ka raaz khulega aage.

Idhar Suhana aur Divya ko baat cheet se hi is update ki shuruaat huyi thi... I still believe ki Nik ka definitely koyi na koyi connection zaroor hai is saare prakran se, I mean he's the black sheep... Aur yadi aisa hota hai to definitely Veer ke harem mein ek mahila ki entry already pakki ho gayi hai... Nik aur Divya ho yaan fir Suhana aur Gaurav, donon couples hi mismatched hain... Donon saheliyan bhi bhali – bhaanti parichit hain ek – doosre ki married life mein chal rahe tanaav se... Donon hi kahin na kahin apne jeevan saathi ke roop mein ek aise insan ko nahi paa saki jo unke kaabil ho... But I'm happy ki wo donon us track par nahin gayi jispar Niharika chal di thi (yeah, I know ki in donon ka past Niharika jaisa nahi hai, par fir bhi pati to similar hi hain )...

Too many assumptions. I like it. dekhte hai kya hota hai.

Ab ek baat spasht ho chuki hai ki Suhana cares for Veer, she cares a lot for him! Saath hi use ye realise bhi ho chuka hai ki jin favours ke kaaran Veer ko wo apne saath Vegas laa paayi asal mein unka existence hi fake hai... Favour to Veer ne uspar kiya tha by eliminating Aatish, otherwise he might have been seriously harmful for Sonia... I guess, ek aur flashback line mein jud gaya hai, i.e., the marriage of Gaurav & Suhana!

Indeed!!!

The update majorly revolved around the build-up of Veer vs The Nightwalker... Donon ka ek baar aamna – saamna zaroor hua par abhi ek final aur shayad kahani ki ab tak ki sabse behatreen fight baaki hai... Meanwhile, The Nightwalker now, would be aware of the capabilities of Veer! How he saved both the girls, a criminal like Nightwalker would've understood that Veer's different from others! On the other hand, Veer also knows that his enemy is swift but what's more haunting is that he's brutal & emotionless... Sone real good bloodshed is coming soon!

Nightwalker's methods were just the starting of the gruesome murders and bloodshed.

Another beautiful one Men! Loved the conversation between Suhana & Divya, these small incidents which strike the humour part are real important in the story and we've seen you doing that very well, many times... On the other hand, the way you're describing the Mansion part, is insane! The Jalsa Part (Aatish & Golu), then the chase for Slogan and now this Mansion, loved the way you've raised the bar of the negative prospects wrt, Veer's capabilities... Btw. The couple of emotional scenes, that breakdown of Emma, they were great too!

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Thanks man!!! As I said earlier, this arc is really good. This is where you'll see many new things. New characters. And this is where things starts to get serious. Like really serious. That's the reason why I love this arc. Thanks a lot man for all the support. Keep supporting as usual man...

 

[Ashwathama]

Update - 101 ~ Exposed (1)
[Note : Contains gore and blood elements.]​

Ab tak...

Mike : Where is he?

Tommy : He told me he will look outside.

Mike : Let's go and check his room!

Woh sabhi Chester ke room me pohuche toh Chester ka room band tha. Matlab koi andar tha. Chester hi toh tha.

Unhone darwaaza peeta aur awaaz lagaayi.

Par...

Andar se koi awaaz na aayi!!!!

Ab aage...

"Cheeessssstttteeerrrrrrrr!!!!!!"

"Open the goddam door!!!!"

*Baaammmmm* *Baaammmmmm*

Darwaaze ko Veer, Mike aur Tommy baahar se peet rahe the. Par andar se abhi bhi koi jawaab nahi aaya.

"Shiiiittttt!!!"

Woh teeno door pe haath maarte rahe. Lekin koi halchal hone ki awaaz bhi nahi sunaayi dii unhe bheetar se.

Mike (bauhe sikodte hue) : Something is wrong.

Tommy : If the door is locked from the inside. Then it's obvious someone is inside. And who else could it be other than Chester?

Veer : Let's break it!

Tommy : Wh-Whaaaattttt??? Are you kidding me?

Veer : No! I'm not! Just help me out.

Bas yahi ek upaay bacha tha unke paas. Andar koi na koi toh maujood tha. Warna darwaza apne aap kese band ho sakta tha? Toh upaay yahi tha ki darwaaze ko hi tod diya jaaye.

Tommy ne Veer ko hairat-angez me dekha. Jese woh kisi bewakoof ko dekh raha tha. Itna bhaari door, bhala dhakka dene se kese toot sakta tha?

Mike : We don't have any other option. We can try at least. It's 3:30 already. Nightwalker's time has started. We should hurry up.

Wo ye nahi jaante the ki Veer ke paas kya tha. Isliye unhe ye darwaaza todna asambhav sa lag raha tha. Unhe nahi pata tha ki Veer ke akele me kitne logo ka bal tha.

Par wo sare aam akele darwaaza nahi tod sakta tha. Aisa karne se uss par kayi sawaal khade ho jaate. Ek aadh lene ki zaroorat thi usse. Aur isliye, Veer ne unn dono ko bhi dhakka dene kaha.

Mike ko lagega ki Veer aur Tommy ne zorr se dhakka diya hai. Tommy ko lagega ki Veer aur Mike ne zorr se dhakka diya hai. Par sach toh yahi hai ki...

Veer ke akele ke hi vaar se darwaaza khulna tha. Unki madad lena toh keval apni kaabiliyat ko chhupaane ka ek zariya tha.

Woh sabhi jese hi dhakka dene ke liye taiyaar hue,

*Ding*

[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned ON]

Apni aankho ki laali chhupaane ke liye Veer ne apni palke band kar lii.

Uske sang Mike, Tommy peeche run leke daude aur teeno ne saath milkar zorr se darwaaze par dhakka maara.

*Baaaaaammmmmmmmmmmm*

Kuch toh hua. Darwaaze ka ek hinge dheela pad gaya.

*Baaaaaaaaaammmmmmmmmm*

Iss baar darwaaze ka pehla hinge poori tarah se nikal gaya.

Aur,

*Baaaaaaammmmmmmmmmmmm*

*Baaaaaaaammmmmmmmmmmm*

4-5 aur dhakko me poora ka poora darwaaza hi hinge se ukhad gaya. All thanks to Beowulf's Blessings and Veer's stats.

*Dhadaaammmmmm*

Teeno hi kamre ke andar dhakka dene ke kaaran floor par gir pade. Unn sabki nazre sabse pehle bed par gayi.

Tommy : Ugghh!!! What the fuck? This motherfucker is sleeping here???

Tommy gusse me gurraaya. Itni chinta liye woh sabhi paagalo ki tarah usse pukaar rahe the aur woh tha ki yaha chenn se so raha tha? Himmat kese hui uski?

Chester araam se bed par dala hua tha. Ek kambal odhe. Baahar se uska sarr, perr aur haath hi dikhaayi pad rahe the kambal ke.

Tabhi Mike ki bauhe kass uthi, maathe par silvatein chha gayi. Shayad kuch...

Mike : I smell something...!?

Par iss se pehle ki woh apni baat poori rakh paata, Tommy gusse me uth ke apne dost ke upar se kambal hata diya,

Tommy : You fucker, get up this insta-- huhh???

*Flllllaaaaaaaapppppppp*

Kambal jese hi hata...

Saamne ka manzar dekh teeno ke badan thande pad gaye. Shareer ke raungte khade ho gaye. Dil ki dhadkan aisa laga jese pal bhar ke liye wahi ruk gayi. Ghutno me kamzori aa gayi,

Tommy ke andar jese aatma ne shareer ka tyaag kar diya. Woh toh dekhte hi bechaara ussi pal ladkhada ke behosh ho gaya. Wo peeche ludka,

Mike : Shiiitttt!!!

Aur idhar, Mike ne fauran aage badh usse apne haatho se pakad sambhaala. Aur usse side me deewaar se tikaaya. Usne sarr utha ke Veer ko dekha,

Mike : Veer! We must- huhhh???

Par jab usne Veer ko dekha toh bhaanpa ki Veer ko usne aise pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha. Veer khauf ke maare saamne nazre gadaaye hue tha. Uski aankho me ek chamak nami ke kaaran janm le chuki thi.

Achanak hi usse akbakayi aayi. Muh par ek haath rakh woh turant hi peeche muda aur deewaar par apna dusra haath tikaaye lambi lambi saansein lene laga.

*Badump* *Badump* *Badump*

Dil itni zorr se dhadak raha tha ki Veer ko khud dhadkano ki awaaz sunaayi de rahi thi.

Mike : V-Veeeerrr???

Veer : It's... It's okay!!! I'm fine! J-Just give me a second.

Mike : Alright! But make it quick. Only you and I can do this. Together!

Veer : Y-Yeaahhh!

[Maaaasttttteerrrrr~]

Aisa kese ho sakta tha ki Veer pareshani me ho aur Pari ko chinta na hoye? Beshaq! Veer ke iss ravaiyye par turant hi Pari uske mann me usse pukaarne lagi.

'It's okay Pari!!!'

[It's not... ]

Pari jaanti thi Veer kin halaato se guzar raha tha. Kyuki bed par...

Bed par Chester laita toh hua tha. Par...

Uska shareer...

Uska shareer do hisso me bata hua tha. Poori ki poori tarah se kata hua tha. Pait se uski atadiya baahar ko nikli hui thi aur poora bed neeche lahu luhaan ho chuka tha. Andhruni maas aur ango ko aankho ke saamne dekh acche se acche insaan ko ulti aa jaaye aur uske perr ladkhada jaaye. Koi hairat ki baat nahi thi.

*Sccchllliiiiinnnnggggggg*

*Kllliiiiinnnngggggggg*

Veer ko Nightwalker ki woh haath me pakdi hasiya yaad aayi. Na jaane kese kaat ke alag kiya hoga usne Chester ko. Aari se lakdi ki tarah usne Chester ko kaata hoga. Soch ke hi Veer ke badan ke raungte khade ho gaye.

Par uss se bhi badi baat thi. Woh kuch aur thi. Veer ko woh manzar yaad aa gaya. Woh bhi toh kuch issi prakaar maara gaya tha na?

Golu!!!! Uski maut bhi behad dardnaak thi.

Aur ab Chester. Ye pehli baar tha jo Veer Nightwalker ke dwara bichhayi gayi laasho ko apni aankho ke saamne dekh raha tha. Koi insaan itni darindagi se kese maar sakta tha kisi ko? Veer ko jo baat sabse zyada darra rahi thi woh ye thi ki,

Nightwalker ne ek shan bhi nahi socha kisi ke badan ko do tukdo me kaatne se pehle. Seedha kaat daala. Jese insaan nahi, koi sabzi ho.

It was an absolute brutality.

Mike : Veeerrrr?

Mike ki punaah awaaz se wo apne hosh me aaya.

[Maaaasttteeerrrr~ don't worry. I'm with you!]

Pari ki baat sunn, aur apni himmat waapas baandh woh palta, Mike ko dekh usne haami bhari. Aur unn dono ne Tommy ko thaama. Veer aur Mike usse apne room ki orr le gaye. Chester ka room unhone wese hi chorr diya. Woh kuch bhi nahi kar sakte the iss maamle me.

Idhar Zoey aur Emma ne room khola aur Tommy ko behosh dekh woh dono tension me aa gayi. Jab Chester ki maut ki khabar unhe mili toh Emma toh poori tarah se ro padi.

Ek darr baith gaya usme. Ki jese ab woh nahi bachegi. Agla shikaar jese ab wahi hone waali thi.

Woh chillaane lagi, jese tese Veer aur Mike ne usse shaant kiya. Zoey khud andar tak hili hui thi. Par antatah woh chup thi.

Aur Mike gusse me. Ek detective tha woh. Chester ke room me ghuste hi jo dhaas usne hawa me soonghi...

Loha!!! Yaani iron. Jo hamaare khoon me maujood hota hai. Itne saal kaam karne ke baad Mike ko kaafi tajurba ho chuka tha. Khoon ki gandh vatavaran me jo faili hui thi, usne ek baar me pakad lii thi. Yaha tak ki Veer ko bhi pehle hi pata lag chuka tha.

Jese hi usne Beowulf activate kiya tha. Andar se khoon ki gandh usse pehle hi aa gayi thi.

Par ab jo ho chuka tha usse badla nahi jaa sakta tha. Unke beech se, ek aur shaks maara jaa chuka tha. Yadi aise hi chalta raha toh...

"Damn it! Damn it! Daammnmn ittt!!!"

*Baaaaaaammmmmm*

Mike ne gusse me aake deewaar par zorr se haath maara. Ek detective hoke, uski naak ke neeche se Nightwalker uske bando ko maar raha tha aur woh yaha haath par haath dhare baitha hua tha.

Veer aur woh ek dusre ke bagal se khade hue the uske hi room me. Tommy behosh haalat me bed par wall se tik ke baitha tha. Aur uske hi bagal se Emma aur Zoey jo ek dusre se chipki ek dusre ko sambhaalne ki koshish kar rahi thi. Zoey toh fir bhi theek thi, par Emma ka haal behaal tha.

Mike ne jeb se cigarette nikaali,

*Kliinkkk*

Lighter se cigarette jalaayi aur ek kash lagaaya aur cigarette ka packet Veer ki taraf aage badhaya,

Mike : You smoke?

Veer ne packet ko dekha aur ek cigarette usme se nikaali,

Veer : I can!

Detoxification ON thi. Veer ko koi tension nahi thi.

Lighter se cigarette jalaate hue wo dono khidki ki taraf pohuche, jiske sheeshe par baahar se baarish ki badi badi boonde pad rahi thi. Aur andar se cigarette ka dhua. Saath hi Bijli ki chamak sheeshe se hote hue kamre me aa rahi thi.

Unhone dono ladkiyo ko ye nahi bataya tha ki Chester kis tareeqe se marra tha. Ye maut alag thi. Isme sarr nahi kata tha. Balki poora ka poora pait hi cheer diya tha Nightwalker ne. Aisa rooh jhanjhor kar rakh dene waala kaam kiya tha.

Idhar Veer ne Mike ko bagal se dekha,

Veer : Chester got killed.

Mike (kash lagaate hue) : Yes!

Veer : What now?

Mike : We must find the killer. Before dawn. Otherwise we will all die here.

Veer : Senior Connor mentioned something in his video right? The cameras! We are being recorded.

Mike : Found 4 of them.

Veer : Huhhh??

Veer ne hairat me Mike ko dekha. Stabdh hona swabhavik tha. Connor ne mention kiya tha video me ki yaha par logo ki activities record kari jaati thi. Iska matlab kahi na kahi cameras lage hue the. Aur Mike ne seedhe seedhe hi Veer ko jawab de diya ki usne 4 cameras already dhundh liye the.

Veer : Where?

Mike : Found one on the ground floor, Second in my room, third one in the corridor, and fourth one...

Veer : ???

Mike : ... is right above our head. Between the fan.

Uske shabd sunn Veer ko ek jhatka laga. Ek camera upar pankhe ke beech me laga hua tha. Veer ne khud iss par gaur nahi kiya tha. Woh abhi dekhne hi wala tha upar ki,

Mike : D-Don't!!!! Don't look.

Mike ke kehne par usne sarr jhuka liya.

Veer : But Chester was killed when the room was locked from the inside.

Mike : Yes!

Veer : How is that even possible?

Mike : That's what I'm not getting.

Aisa kese ho sakta tha? Andar aane jaane ka raasta ek tha. Toh jab kamra andar se locked tha toh Chester marra kese bhala? Dono Veer aur Mike ka dimaag ghoom chuka tha.

Mike : Did you notice one more thing?

Veer : That he got killed during the search time?

Mike : Exactly!

Aur Chester ki hatya bhi kayi sawaal khade kar rahi thi. Banda search time me maara gaya. Akhir kaise????

Veer ne ek lambi aah chorri par tabhi uske mastishq se ek jhakjhor kar rakh dene waala vichaar hoke guzra. Jiske chalte uske haath se cigarette phisal kar neeche gir gayi.

Mike : ???

Veer : N-Noooo!

Mike : What?

Veer ne Mike ko dekha,

Veer : The voice!!!! The voice told us that search time will be allotted to us. But... But it never said that Nightwalker won't kill us during those hours.

Mike (jhepte hue) : That's... N-Nooo... But Nightwalker's time is different then how can he...!?

Veer : You forgot one thing!!

Mike : Huhhh?

Veer : It also said... If the Nightwalker saw you roaming, he will kill you.

Toh ye baat thi. Veer ki baat jab Mike ne suni toh woh andar se hil gaya. Veer ne ek raaz se parda utha diya tha.

Uss awaaz ne ye zaroor kaha tha ki search time diya jaega. Par awaaz ne aisa toh kahi nahi bola tha ki uss search ke dauraan Nightwalker kisi ko bhi nahi maarega? Ye toh Veer aur uski team ne apne aap assume kar liya tha ki iss time Nightwalker nahi maarega.

Awaaz ne toh sirf yahi bataya tha ki Nightwalker apne time par ghoomega. Par iska ye matlab nahi tha ki woh search ke time me maarega nahi. Beshaq, woh uss dauraan ghoomega nahi. Par uss dauraan chhipega bhi nahi.

Dusre shabdo me, Nightwalker ne unn sabhi ko chutiya banaaya tha. Apne shabdo ke istemaal se.

"Daaamnnn itttt!!!! This baastaardddd!!!!"

Aur Mike ka gussa aur bekaabu ho gaya. Ye toh laazmi tha.

Iska matlab saaf tha. Chester ne ghoomte waqt Nightwalker ko zaroor dekha hoga. Nateeja? Uski maut!!!

Par sawaal jo unhe sabse zyada pareshan kar raha tha woh tha room ka andar se band hona.

Veer : I'm going out.

Veer ne ek taq jawaab diya,

Mike : "WE" are going out Veer. YOU and ME. BOTH!!!

[Maaasteeerrr ~ Hum Mike ke saath nahi reh sakte. Hume Nightwalker se akele me bhidna hoga. Mission khatam hone ke liye bhi zyada samay nahi bacha hai.]

'I know Pari!!!'

Veer : We will go seperately. We both have our walkie talkie. If something happens, we can just call each other out.

Mike ne kuch shan tak Veer ko dekha aur fir haami bhari. Woh Veer ki baat se sehmat tha. Bhale hi ye tareeqa risky tha par yahi sahi approach thi.

Alag alag hone se Nightwalker ki talaash jaldi hone waali thi, aur Nightwalker akele aadmi ko dekh zaroor khud ko baahar nikaalne wala tha. Yahi sahi tareeqa tha.

Mike, Emma aur Zoey ko jata ke waha se baahar nikla,

Mike : You take left. I'll take the right.

Veer : Alright!

Aur woh daayi corridor ki taraf chal diya.

Idhar Veer ne bhi Emma aur Zoey ko jab jataaya ki woh bhi jaa raha hai toh dono vyaakul ho uthi,

Emma : Nooooooooooooo~ You can't!!! He will kill you. He will...

Zoey : Th-That's right... You shouldn't go out there. It's dangerous. We all can just spend the night here in one room. Then we can leave tomorrow.

Veer : Do you really believe he will let us leave? Just like that?

Veer ke sawaal par Zoey ki bolti band ho gayi. Zoey ka kehna tha ki wo sabhi ek hi room me saari raat ruk jaaye aur subah hote hi woh nikal jaenge. Par... Par kya Nightwalker waqai unhe jaane dene waala tha?

Veer : I'm going.

Emma : Nooooooooooo~

Zoey : S-Stay safe... And...

Veer : ???

Zoey : You will come alive...

Veer (smiles) : I will!

Aur ek akhiri baar unn dono ko peeche mud ke dekh Veer waha se palta, Zoey ne room andar se lock kiya aur Veer corridor me aa gaya.

***

Ab aar ya paar ki ladaayi thi. Aankh micholi, aur lukan chhupaayi ka ye khel boht ho chuka tha. Ab seedha bhidant thi.

Ya toh Veer sahi salaamat nikalne wala tha ya fir Nightwalker.

Veer ke kadam badhne toh left corridor ki orr chahiye the, par wo right corridor me jaane laga,

[Huh? M-Master?? O-Ohhhhhhh!!!! I see~]

Pari bhi pal bhar ke liye confused reh gayi. Par Veer ke mann me usne jab jhaank ke dekha toh wo sab samajh gayi.

Nightwalker Veer se bhid chuka tha. Woh jaan gaya tha ki Veer ko yadi usne firse face kiya toh Veer seedhe ladaayi par utar aaega.

Toh aise me jab 2 insaan, Mike aur Veer akele akele mansion me ghoom rahe ho toh kis par pehle hamla karna theek rahega?

Jawaab saaf tha.

Mike!!!

Aur isliye,

Veer ne apni raftaar badhaayi, tezz kadmo ke saath wo Mike ka peecha karne laga.

Beshaq, uska anumaan ekdum sateek tha.

Mike upar ke floor se chhaan been kar jab basement ki orr badha. Basement me ghuste hi uski bauhe chinta me sikud gayi.

Zameen par pehle ke muqaable paani kuch zyaada hi tha. Mike ke talwe paani me doob chuke the.

Aur Veer theek uske peeche tha.

[Master~ Apne shoes utaar dijiye, paani me chalne se awaaz kam hogi aise me.]

'Alright!'

Shoes ko utaar Veer peeche peeche Mike ke chalta raha aur abhi kuch hi dur tak woh aaya hoga ki...

Saamne basement ke hallway me se andhere me halki roshni aayi, dhuaa uthne laga...

Aur dhue me se...

Ek daraavna mask nikal ke aaya... Fir ek haath dikhaayi diya... Jisme khoon se latpat hasiya thi...

Nightwalker!

Mike : So it's you!!!!

Mike ne apni kamar se ek handgun nikaali aur saamne Nightwalker ki orr aim kii,

Mike : Drop your act now. You have been charged under the violent commitments of brutal murders. Raise your hands, drop your weapon, and hand yourself over.

Ye tactic kaam nahi aane waali thi. Mike bhi ye jaanta tha. Aur wahi hua,

Nightwalker suddenly, bagal ke hallway me ghusa...

Mike : Shiiittttt!

Mike usse pakadne aage dauda,

*Chhappp* *Chhhappp* *Chhhhaapppp*

Paani me uske daudne ki awaaz basement me goonjne lagi,

Peeche se Veer bhi dabe paav liye aage badha.

Par jese hi Mike uss hallway me aaya, usse Nightwalker kahi nazar nahi aaya.

Mike : Fuckkk!!! Where did he go?

Woh gun ko dono haatho se pakad aage badhta raha. Ab neeche paani bhi khatam ho chuka tha. Iss area me sookha tha.

Aur abhi woh dhundh hi raha tha jab,

*Thud*

Achanak hi uske sarr par ek zorr ka phatka aake laga.

Mike ke muh se kuch bhi nahi nikal paaya aur woh behosh hoke wahi gir pada. Uske bagal se, Nightwalker apni hasiya liye khada tha.

Hasiya ko hawa me utha wo Mike ke shareer ko dekhne laga. Pehle kaun sa ang kaata jaaye? Mundi? Ya pait? Ya haath perr? Ya jeebh? Ya fir kaan?

Uska haath zorr se neeche aaya hi tha Mike ki mundi kaatne ke liye ki tabhi,

*Whoooooosssshhhh*

*Cllllllaaaaannnnggggggggg*

Haath par zorr se kuch aake laga aur uske haath se hasiya chhooth ke dur jaa giri.

Fauran hi usne mud ke aag baboola aankho se dekha...

Saamne Veer khada hua tha. Aur ussi ne ek bottle fek ke uske haath se hasiya girayi thi.

Veer bhaaga... Nightwalker ki taraf... Full speed me...

Hawkeye ne apna kaam kar diya tha. Ab baari thi...

*Ding*

[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned ON.]

Veer ko tezzi se apni orr aata dekh Nightwalker dusri disha me bhaaga. Woh waapas se uss area me aa gaye jidhar floor par paani maujood tha.

*Chhappp* *chhapp* *chhappp*

Basement me unke kadmo ki awaaz goonjne lagi.

"I'm gonna catch you bastard!! Iss baar tu kahi nahi bhaag paayega."

Veer gurraaya aur ekdum Nightwalker ke peeche pohuch usne haath aage badha ke pakda hi tha ki,

*Whoooooosssshhhh*

Nightwalker achanak palta, usne apna haath ulta kar Veer ke chehre par chalaaya. Aur idhar reflexes ke chalte Veer ne turant duck kar liya.

*Swoooossssssshhhhhh*

Dono aamne saamne the ab.

Aur bina kahe hi,

*Chhap* *chhhapppp* *chhhappp*

Unn dono ne daud ke ek dusre ki mutthi aapas me kassi, Nightwalker ne laat bhi uthaayi saathi hi, Veer ke pait par maarna chaaha par...

*Deflect*

Veer ne apne haath se uski laat deflect kar dii.

"One inch punch!!!!!"

Aur Veer ki fist Nightwalker ke apne pait par aake padi.

*Baaaaaaaammmmmmmmmm*

Kya hi impact tha. Hawa me uchhalte hue woh peeche ki orr jaa gira,

*Chhhapaaaakkkkkkk*

Paani me uske kapde geele ho chale.

[Nice one Master!!!]

Nightwalker ki aankhein ekdum gusse se laal ho chuki thi. Par eka-ek woh utha, aur wahi rakhe lakdi ke boxes par chadha. Uska haath peeche gaya aur usne kahi se ek wire kheech ke nikaala,

[Maaaasttteerrrr~ N-Noooo!!!! Jump on the box!!!!! Quick!!]

Aur woh wire Nightwalker ne seedha neeche paani se bhare floor par fek diya.

*Zaaapppppp* *zaappppp* *zapppp*

Bijli aur paani ka jab milan hota hai toh kya hota hai ye bataane ki zaroorat nahi thi.

Ek tezz current poore paani se bhare floor me fel gaya. Kya hi shaatir tha saala ye Nightwalker.

Par Pari ne Veer ko pehle hi sachet kar diya tha.

*Thud*

Back flip maar ke Veer khud ek box par chadh chuka tha.

"Youuu fuckkerrr!!!!" Veer zorr se chillaaya aur,

*Whoooooosssshhhh*

Usne Nightwalker ke paas maujood boxes ki orr chhalaang lagaayi.

*Baaammmmm*

Aur shuru ho gayi unki haathapaayi. Ek dusre ke kapde pakad, dono hi ek dusre ko current se bhare paani me fekne ki koshish kar rahe the.

Veer stats ke according zyada strong tha. Aur isliye,

Nightwalker Veer ko dhakel nahi paa raha tha. Veer ne usse dhakka dete hue box ki edge tak kiya aur,

Nightwalker : I WON'T FAIL... NEVER...

Veer : Heh~ So you can talk huh?

Nightwalker ne Veer ko apne sang uske kapde pakad kheecha toh Veer ne ek jhatke apne shareer se woh sweatshirt hi nikaal dii,

Aur...

*Chhhapaaaakkkkkkk*

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrgggghhhhhhhhh"

Poore basement me ek zordaar dard se bhari cheenkh goonj gayi. Nightwalker uss current se fele paani me dhapaak se jaa gira.

Current itna nahi tha ki uski maut ho jaaye par itna zaroor tha ki aadmi behosh ho jaaye.

Current lagne ke kuch hi seconds ke andar Veer ne wire kheech liya. Aur Nightwalker behosh udhar hi paani me dala raha.

[Phew~ We did it Master!]

Veer lambi lambi saasein lete hue khud ko durust karne laga. Uske gaal pe ek cut laga tha jis se halka khoon beh raha tha. Baaki aur koi kharoch nahi aayi thi usse.

Akhir kaar, Hatyaao ke iss khel ko virhaam lag chuka tha.

*Ding*

[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned OFF.]

*Ding*

[Mission : Capture The Nightwalker has been completed.]

[1000 Points have been rewarded.]

[500 Fame points have been rewarded.]

Points kam the. Waqai! Par Veer ka interest abhi kisi aur cheez me hi tha,

'Check!!'

*Ding*

Veer ne Nightwalker ko check kiya. Par kuch khaas na mila usse. Jo jaan'na tha woh toh nahi mila.

Nightwalker ko usne rassi dhundh poori tarah se baandh diya ki woh kahi bhi bhaag na paaye. Mike ko usne apni peeth par uthaaya.

Aur woh chal diya upar ki orr,

Usne ek kamre me Mike ko litaaya. Aur abhi woh Zoey aur Emma ko jataane hi jaa raha tha ki ab sab kuch surakshit hai ki woh Chester ke room ke baahar se punah guzra...

Neeche darwaaza pada hua tha wesi hi haalat me, aur andar Chester ki laash jo dekhi tak nahi jaa sakti thi. Woh sab wese ka wesa hi maujood tha.

'Hmm?'

Veer ne kuch akasmat hi notice kiya,

'Ye... Wait a minute... Pehle toh ye aisa nahi tha? Then why is it...'

Aur fir uski nazar kahi aur gayi...

'Huhhhhh???????'

[Maaasssttterrrrr!!!!!!!!!!]

Uske baad... Veer ke raungte aise khade hue ki woh ladkhada ke wahi zameen par gir pada.

Aise goosebumps toh usse Slogan se ladte time bhi nahi aaye the.

Yaha tak ki Pari ka dimaag bhi kaam karna band kar chuka tha. Woh khud jese sadme me jaa chuki thi. Aur maun reh gayi.

Veer ka toh jese astitv hi hil ke reh gaya tha.

'N-Noooooooo!!!! I-It can't be!!!!! H-How did he...!!????'

Woh dauda, Zoey aur Emma ki orr. Apne kamre ki taraf. Usne unn dono ko baahar nikaal neeche ground floor par jaane ko kaha.

Aur fir woh bhaag ke Zoey ke room me gaya. Jese woh kuch talaash raha ho...

Aur agle hi pal,

*Craaaaaaasssshhhhhhhhhhhh*

[This... Mastterrrrr!!!!!]

Pari jhep gayi.

'So I was right!!!!! That motherfucker...!!!!'

***

After few hours...

Mansion me ho raha ye maut ka nanga naach khatam ho chuka tha. Subaah ho chuki thi, baarish tham chuki thi aur aasmaan se baadal hatt chuke the. Aisa lag raha tha waqai buraai par acchai ki jeet hui thi.

Mike, Veer aur anya ko lene investigation department se copter aaya hua tha.

Woh sabhi usme baith waha se ravaana huye aur waapas pohuche.

Helicopter jese hi land kiya, Veer ko utarte hi dur khadi Suhana aur Divya nazar aayi.

Yaha tak ki Nik bhi khada tha.

Suhana achanak se daud ke bechaini me aage aayi. Pal bhar ke liye Veer bhi hairat me reh gaya.

Lekin achanak hi Suhana ko jese dhyaan aaya aur uske kadam dheere ho gaye. Woh Veer ke paas pohuchi, aur jo haath woh pehle uske gaalo par rakhne waali thi woh haath uske seene par jaake tik gaya.

Suhana : T-Tum theek toh ho na?

Veer (surprised) : Well! Hmm!

Suhana : Th-That's good!!!

Pehli baar Suhana ko iss qadar dekh Veer sach me dang tha. Aisa usne pehle kabhi nahi kiya tha. Fir aaj kyu?

Wahi Divya ko jhatka sabse bada tab laga tha jab usse ye khabar lagi thi ki Veer ne poora ka poora case solve kar daala hai.

Aur ab usse apni aankho ke saamne dekh wo duwidha me thi.




Ab toh aur 100 sawaal uske mann me uth chuke the. Filhaal unhe side me rakh woh aage badhi,

Aur usne muskuraate hue Veer ko welcome kiya,




Divya (smiles) : It's good to see you return.

Veer : ...

Divya : Department wants an explanation.

Veer : Alright!!!

Kuch derr baad...

Investigation department ke office me ek bade se room me woh maujood the.

Sab ke sab. Nolan se leke Mike, Zoey, Emma, Tommy... Sab! Sab udhar maujood the.

Aur saamne projector ke liye badi si screen lagi hui thi.

Veer ekdum saamne khada hua tha. Aur usne bolna shuru kiya,

Veer : I have decoded everything!!!

Tommy : Okay! Tell us!

Veer ne haami bhar seedhe ek picture dikhaayi projector ke jisse dekh waha baithe sabke maatho par silvatein confusion ke maare aa padi,

Tommy apni jagah se uth khada hua,

Tommy : Are you kidding me??? Is this a joke?

Par Veer ne usse koi jawaab na diya.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Moderation hua firse yaha par. Ye update 6k words ke upar jaana tha. Par mene isse do bhaag me vibhaajit kiya hai. Kyuki next part me mein do matter aur samaapt kar sakunga. Baaki, likes thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka guys.
Dhanyavaad!

एक और अद्भुत अंश,
जिसने दिमाग के पुर्जे तक को हिला कर रख दिया,
सच बोलता हूँ श्री Werewolf इस अध्याय को पढ़ते वक़्त न जाने कितनी भावना मेरे मन मे उभरी... अक्सर मै जब किसी कहानी को पढ़ता हूँ तो उसमे घटी घटना का परिदृश्य बनाना बहुत मुश्किल होता है मुझे, पर इस अध्याय का परिदृश्य अपने आप प्रारंभ से ही मुझे दिखने लगी थी ।

Par wo sare aam akele darwaaza nahi tod sakta tha. Aisa karne se uss par kayi sawaal khade ho jaate. Ek aadh lene ki zaroorat thi usse. Aur isliye, Veer ne unn dono ko bhi dhakka dene kaha.

यहाँ जिस तरह वीर, बिना अपनी वशतविकता को दिखाये, चेस्टर के रूम मे जाने के लिए उस भारी दरबाजे को तोड़ा... ये काबिले तारीफ था...

Apni aankho ki laali chhupaane ke liye Veer ne apni palke band kar lii

अपनी, तकनीकी शक्तियां beowulf को संचालित करने के बाद उसके आँखो मे aane बाले परिवर्तन को कोई देख न ले... इस लिए महाशय ने अपनी आँखे ही बंद कर ली..
वाह....

Kambal jese hi hata...

Saamne ka manzar dekh teeno ke badan thande pad gaye. Shareer ke raungte khade ho gaye. Dil ki dhadkan aisa laga jese pal bhar ke liye wahi ruk gayi. Ghutno me kamzori aa gayi,

Tommy ke andar jese aatma ne shareer ka tyaag kar diya. Woh toh dekhte hi bechaara ussi pal ladkhada ke behosh ho gaya. Wo peeche ludka,

Mike : Shiiitttt!!!

Aur idhar, Mike ne fauran aage badh usse apne haatho se pakad sambhaala. Aur usse side me deewaar se tikaaya. Usne sarr utha ke Veer ko dekha,

Mike : Veer! We must- huhhh???

Par jab usne Veer ko dekha toh bhaanpa ki Veer ko usne aise pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha. Veer khauf ke maare saamne nazre gadaaye hue tha. Uski aankho me ek chamak nami ke kaaran janm le chuki thi.

Achanak hi usse akbakayi aayi. Muh par ek haath rakh woh turant hi peeche muda aur deewaar par apna dusra haath tikaaye lambi lambi saansein lene laga.

*Badump* *Badump* *Badump*

Dil itni zorr se dhadak raha tha ki Veer ko khud dhadkano ki awaaz sunaayi de rahi thi.

Mike : V-Veeeerrr???

Veer : It's... It's okay!!! I'm fine! J-Just give me a second.

यहाँ का मंजर इयहाँस कदर वहशीपणा दिखाता है की मेरे बस पढ़ने और इसे बारे मे सोचने भर से ही... रोंगटे खड़े हो गए...
उबकाई आने लगी।
कोई इतनी दरिंदगी भी कर सकता है क्या...
हह्ह्....

[Maaaasttttteerrrrr~]

Aisa kese ho sakta tha ki Veer pareshani me ho aur Pari ko chinta na hoye? Beshaq! Veer ke iss ravaiyye par turant hi Pari uske mann me usse pukaarne lagi.

'It's okay Pari!!!'

[It's not... ]

Pari jaanti thi Veer kin halaato se guzar raha tha. Kyuki bed par...

इस तरह की दरिंदगी वीर पहले भी देख चुका था... जब उसके एकमात्र मित्र गोलू को घड़ियाल के आगे परोसा गया था...
और आज भी ऐसा ही वहशीपणा देख वीर को भी उबकाई आने लगी...
पर... उसकी... एक तरह से जो हमशफर है... परी... वो कैसे वीर को ऐसे देख सकती थी....
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यहाँ... मै ये कहना चाहता हूँ की परी का ये बिहेविअर अब तक का उसका सबसे हसीन रूप दिखाता है ।

Veer ko woh manzar yaad aa gaya. Woh bhi toh kuch issi prakaar maara gaya tha na?

Golu!!!! Uski maut bhi behad dardnaak thi.

उस वक्त , वीर कुछ और था... अब तो वीर... वीर न होके एक शूरवीर बनने के करीब जा चुका है

[Maaaasttteeerrrr~ don't worry. I'm with you!]

परी.... बाकई मे एक परी ही तो है जो वीर के साथ उसके छाया बन कर चल रही है अब तक...
और आशा है की आगे भी चलेगी

Mike gusse me. Ek detective tha woh. Chester ke room me ghuste hi jo dhaas usne hawa me soonghi...

यहाँ आपके लेखनी को सलाम जो आपने एक अन्य पात्र की मौजूदगी को भी दिखाया... और बखूबी दिखाया...

Mike ne gusse me aake deewaar par zorr se haath maara. Ek detective hoke, uski naak ke neeche se Nightwalker uske bando ko maar raha tha aur woh yaha haath par haath dhare baitha hua tha.

जिस तरह एक ज़िम्मेदार detective को होना चाहिए बिल्कुल वैसा ही था mike का वर्ताव इतना सब कुछ होने के बाद...
आखिर कौन इमान्दार और दिलेर अधिकारी खुद को शांत रख पाता...

Veer ne hairat me Mike ko dekha. Stabdh hona swabhavik tha. Connor ne mention kiya tha video me ki yaha par logo ki activities record kari jaati thi. Iska matlab kahi na kahi cameras lage hue the. Aur Mike ne seedhe seedhe hi Veer ko jawab de diya ki usne 4 cameras already dhundh liye the.

Detective का दिमाग....
लुसिफर सेरिज की याद आगयी....

Ek daraavna mask nikal ke aaya... Fir ek haath dikhaayi diya... Jisme khoon se latpat hasiya thi...

Nightwalker!

Mike : So it's you!!!!

Mike ne apni kamar se ek handgun nikaali aur saamne Nightwalker ki orr aim kii,

Mike : Drop your act now. You have been charged under the violent commitments of brutal murders. Raise your hands, drop your weapon, and hand yourself over.

Ye tactic kaam nahi aane waali thi. Mike bhi ye jaanta tha. Aur wahi hua,

Nightwalker suddenly, bagal ke hallway me ghusa...

Mike : Shiiittttt!

Mike usse pakadne aage dauda,

यहाँ वीर की दिलेरी देख कर, और जिस तरह आपने उसके ये बहादुरी को लिखा है उसका मै कायल हो गया हूँ....
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साला ये nightwalker के वहशी पण को देखकर तो किसी की हिम्मत न होती उसके नजदीक जाने की...
पर mike को वहाँ जाना था... आखिर ये उसका काम जो था...
अद्भुत

Nightwalker : I WON'T FAIL... NEVER...

चूतिये का पहला वचन....
आप ने ऐसे लिखा... जैसे की उसने इन शब्दो को गुर्राते हुए बोला हो....
इसके बाद वीर और nightwalker के बीच का वो फाइट....
भले ही साला भड़वा अपने वीर के सामने ज्यादा समय टिक न पाया... पर उसके वजह से वीर को परेशानियाँ बहुत झेलनी पड़ी... वो भी मात्र एक रात मे ही....

Veer ne kuch akasmat hi notice kiya,

'Ye... Wait a minute... Pehle toh ye aisa nahi tha? Then why is it...'

अब ये क्या देख लिया लवड़े ने, साला एक तो पहले से ही उसकी nightwalker ले चुका था... और अब ये....

Aur fir uski nazar kahi aur gayi...

'Huhhhhh???????'

अबे ये आँखे बंद कर ले न भोसड़ी.... क्या क्या देख रहा है... और हमसब की दिमाग की मा का भो*** किये जा रहा है....
अजीब है यार.... उफ्फ...
खैर.... जब पावर्स मिली है तो ज़िम्मेबारिया भी तो उठानी पड़ेगी...
अब अगले update मे देखना होगा की.. ऐसा क्या देख लिया लवडे ने...

Uske baad... Veer ke raungte aise khade hue ki woh ladkhada ke wahi zameen par gir pada.

Aise goosebumps toh usse Slogan se ladte time bhi nahi aaye the.

Yaha tak ki Pari ka dimaag bhi kaam karna band kar chuka tha. Woh khud jese sadme me jaa chuki thi. Aur maun reh gayi.

हद है यार.....
एक suspance खतम क्या हुआ... दुसरी गांड मारने को तैयार हो जाती है...
और अब ऐसा क्या देख लिया जिसके बाद वीर तो वीर... बेचारी परी भी सदमे मे जाने की हालात मे चली गयी....
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कही ये परी से ही रेलटेड तो नही कुछ...

Pari jhep gayi.

'So I was right!!!!! That motherfucker...!!!!'

शायद.... वीर ने असली माधरचोद को ढूंढ लिया....
जिसके बारे मे जानने के लिए हमे अगला अंश का इंतेज़ार करना होगा...

Suhana : T-Tum theek toh ho na?

Veer (surprised) : Well! Hmm!

Suhana : Th-That's good!!!

"सुहाना " इसका व्यवहार तो पूर्णतः बदल गया...
शायद वीर इसे कुछ ज्यादा ही भाने लगा है....

भायेगा भी क्यो नही... अपीएरेंस मे इतने अंक जो झोके हुए है वीर ने...

Veer ne haami bhar seedhe ek picture dikhaayi projector ke jisse dekh waha baithe sabke maatho par silvatein confusion ke maare aa padi,

Tommy apni jagah se uth khada hua,

Tommy : Are you kidding me??? Is this a joke?

Par Veer ne usse koi jawaab na diya.

कुछ तो धमाकेदार मिला है.... जो वहाँ मौजूद बहुतो को अपने अंदर समेटने बाला है....
टॉमी का पिक्चर देखने के बाद का वो reaction.....
शायद.... अगला update बहुत सारे सफेद पोष को बेनकाब करने बाला है....
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और अंत मे... मै एक बार फिर से लेखक महोदय की लेखनी को सलाम करता हूँ...
ऐसे कहानिया अक्सर हमारे हृदय मे घर कर जाते है...
बस दुआ रहेगी की लेखक महोदय स्वस्थ रहे और ऐसे ही लाजबाब अध्याय देते रहे...
धन्यवाद

 

[Ghanshyam markande]

Mujhe reviews dena nahi aata ( actually mujhe sand hi nahi milte kya likhu ) but maine ye slogan or atish wala kahi to pada tha matlab similarly thode se match karte the jo veer k same padav sat hai ye those those similar the para nai kaha pada btw mai yaha next update k liye notification pane k liye comment kiya hai bhai don't ofend mujhe apki story achchhi lagati hai but ye updata thoda chhota laga mujhe ya mai apne hi dhun me tha but mujhe is story me sabse achchhi chiz pahala pari hai or dusra suspance or baki character jisko abhi tak apne form me hai jo abhi tak dagmagay nahi matlab akdam se kisi ko fast kardo ya kisi ko slow ya direct sex karwa do aisa nahi hai sab apni jagah hai jisse audience ko bhi padne me maja aata hai

 

[Ashwathama]

aaj apan pahle to review pelega........


To aate scene ke starting hoti hai apne Chester ke room ke baahar se to mughe laga pahle ki ju hamesha ki trah sidha scene aage badha doge lekin n ju ne ye nhi kiya kyunki flow jo khraab n Krna tha ju ko.......to jab door nhi khola kisi ne ander se yaa ye bhi Kahlo ki ander se awazz tk n aayi...... Khair jab koi response nhi aaya to itna confirm to krliya Mike ne ki something wrong inside.....aur tab veer ne aisi baat boli ki waha sabki najar veer pr eka ek tik gayi, wo log usse ghurne lage jo lajmi thi kyunki utna heavy door kisi se nhi tut sakta tha aur veer ne bola "Let's break it"......matlab yaar jara imagine hi krlo ki agar tumhe koi simple hi door todne ki bole to tum wo nhi tod sakte to itna heavy door bilkul n..... ek simple door ko bhi todne me gaand fatt jaati hai ache acho ki to ye to ek heavy door jisse todne ka to sawal nhi paida hota......Mike ne tab bola ki atleast hame try to Krna hi chahiye kyunki 3:30 ho gaye hai aur NIGHTWALKER ka time hai ye .....aur tab Tommy,Mike,veer teeno ne door ko run-up lete hue 4-5 dhako me hi door ki toddiya aur ye to sabko pata hai ki Mike aur Tommy ke karan to door bilkul nhi tuta obviously bilkul nhi aur agar Werewolf bhaya likhte bhi nhi n to ye lagbhag sabko pata hi hota lekin ye likhna jaruri bhi tha ki veer ne akele ke dum pe hi door toda kyunki veer ke pass tha "bewolf blessings" jiske aur agar veer ye use bhi n krta to tab bhi door ko wo akela tod hi sakta tha itni to strength thi usme lekin still usne Tommy sur Mike ko issliye apne saath door ko todne ko kaha taaki unhe veer pr koi sakk yaa dout n ho.......

Aur sabse main line iss 1st scene ka kya raha pata hai wo hai
"Apni aankho ki laali chhupaane ke liye
Veer ne apni palke band kar lii."
Ye line matlab boleto kya hi bolu ek alag hi imagination pr le kr gayi ki usne apni wo laal ho rakhi aankhe kaise band ki hongi kyaa hi scenery yaa kaho view bane honge sabke saamne mtlab literally awesome........


Aur jab gate tuta to sabse pahle sabbka dhyaan farsh or gire hue hi bed pr gaya jaha wo so raha tha literally Chester so raha tha bahenchod gussa to sabko aaya hoga hi jise Tommy to gusse me usse sote dekh Gurate hue "MOTHERFUCKER" bhi bol gaya literally jara socho tumhe pure ghar me dhunda gaya bahar tk dhunda gaya lekin tum mile kaha bathroom me sote hue auur lajmi hai ki sabko gussa aayega hi aayega ......aur yaha to scene hi alag hai ek killer jo maut liye ghum raha hai piche sabke aur ye Chester mahasay yaha so rahe hai......

Lekin tab Mike ko smell aayi jo khun ki thi aur lajmi thi ki agar yaha khun hai kahi to Mike jo detective hai usse uske experience dhoka n de yaha aur uske experience ne usse dhoka bhi nhi diya.....


aur sabse main baat jab ju ne likha ye line maine padha tabhi mere dimag me ek baat khtk gayi thi

"Chester araam se bed par dala hua tha." Jab maine ye line padha n to mughe dout to ho gaya kyunki line chlo ju ne likha sahi lekin yaha ju ne "dala" word use kiya jo saaf saaf negative chis indicate kr rahi thi kyunki agar cheater sota to aap likhte

"Chester araam se bed par *pada* hua tha."
Lekin ju ne ye chis wo feel lane ke liye likhi ki "something is wrong there" aur wo hua bhi.......aur baat kre uske sarr pair jo bahar thi kambal ke to ispar utna dout n hua lekin itna confirm ho gaya puri trah se ki Chester beta tapak chuka hai lekin kaise ?? Aur iska jawab bhi ju ne de hi diya jab Chester ke uppar se Tommy ne kambal hataya to teeno ki rooh kaanp gayi matlab simple bhassa me bolu to unki atma bhi kaanp gayi ho gai ek pal bhar ke liye unke raungtey khade kya kaanp rahe honge aisa scene wo tha yaha tk ki Tommy ki to kya hi kahu bechare ki to Halat aisi ho gayi jaise bin badal pani aur jaise ju ne ye line likhi ki "uski atma ne uska sath chorr diya ho wo aise farsh or ludhak gaya" haa unn lines ka mtlab to yahi nikla lekin jo scenes veer ke saath hue jo hame Mike ke dwara ju ne feel krwaya yaa kaho to imagine hi krwa diya ju ne ki veer khauf se bhadi apni aankhe uss manzar pr hi gadaye hue tha uske ankho me ek chamak si ban gayi thi jo unn bund pani ki thi jo apne samne ke manzar ko dekh apne aap hi pnap se gaye the tabhi veer ko to ek alag si hi anubhati ho gayi thi jo pahli baar usse itna khauf me iss scene me ju nee dikhaya usse yaha tk apne saamne pade manzar ko dekh usse emit yaa kaho to vomit si situation create ho gayi thi lekin still usne control kiya haa usse vomiting nhi aayi thi ussne aisa manzar apne saamne deekh liya tha jisse wo bardas nnhi kr sakta yaa kaho to uske sense aur uska mind uss chis ko jyada der tk jhel nhi sakta tha jo lajmi bhi thi kyunki wo manzar hi aisa tha......veer ne jjaise taise khud or kabu paya


par tabhi pari jo shant thi usse veer ki halat dekhi n gayi aur wo bol padi jo lajmi bhi thi kyunki pari kabhi veer ko pareshani me nhi dekh sakti thi aur tab ju ne uss scene ko hamare samne laya jo uss samay se teeno ke liye pareshani si hogayi thi......samne Chester bed pr do hisso me bata hua tha boleto usko bicho bich se hi kaat diya tha kisine sorry aur kon hoga NIGHTWALKER......Chester ke wo andhruni jagaho se riste khun jo uss bedsheet ko lalam-laal kr rahi thi jo uski katte hisso se andhruni artariya aur manshpeshiya bahar aarahi ho ho ho bhai gajab yahi to chahiye apan ko ye feeling hi allag aati hai imagine krne me bloody wape moment that's I like it very much bhai very much iss scene ko tumne jiss trah se imagine krwaya n wo ek alag level ki thi ek Hollywood ka scene yaad agaya apan ko jab apan ne Alter's ke ek short movie dekha tha "PIECES OF ME" uska scene yaad agaya mai to kya hi bolu bhaya but ye scenes to abhi bloody gore's ki suruwat hai iss story ki abhi to aaur bhi bloodiest moment aayenge jo ander tk hila ke rakh dene wali hongi.......maine iss scene ko kamse kam 7-8 baar to pakka padha hi hoga bhaya lekin tab bhi man n bhara I just like this scene gajab ka moment hua ye

Ab baat kre uske bicho bich katne ki to bhaya ye to almost impossible hai kisi aam admi ke liye asal me jo scenes ham itni asani se dikha deta hai story me ki ye kaat diya wo kaat diya lekin ju ne to sidha bicho bich do part literally kitna strength use kiya hoga wo NIGHTWALKER just imaginable matlab boleto wo ek baar me to bilkul nhi kata hoga bilkul nhi lekin bhaya ju ke story padh kr jo realistic feeling aati hai n wo kisi story pr n aati kyunki ye story ju par tiki hai aur ju hi iske karta dharta ho...... Hatt's off man.......

Tab Mike aur veer ne Tommy ko lekr nikle uss room se jo abhi behosh tha aur usse wo log apne room me le gaye jaha Zoey aur Emma thi.....jab zoey aur Emma ne jab Tommy ko behosh dekha to tension me to aayengi hi aur unki wo tension dar me badal gayi jab unhe chester ki maut ki news milli unhe to.....wahi Emma to ro padi uskee dimag me aisa baith sa gaya tha ki ab wo n bachegi lekin apan yaha ek baat bolna chta bhaya ki ju ne Emma ke charecter ko kuch alag hi sa banaya hai matlab ju smjh rahe ho n ek alag sa boleto ek darpok kahna galat hoga kyunki uske jagah koi aur bhi hota to wo bhi darta haa usse pirit kah sakte hai NIGHTWALKER se kyunki ussnne to apne saamne live dekha tha Jacob ki maut haa utne wistar se nhi lekin jo bhi ussne dekha tha scene jacobb ke maut ke saath saath NIGHTWALKER ka wo roop jo kisi ko bhi ander tk hila dene ke liye kaafi tha aur yaha to Emma ne sab khud apni aankho se ye sab deekha tha to lajmi hai ki wo aise rahe aur baat kre Zoey ki to wo to apne par had se zyada hi conttrol krti hai haa usse dar lagta hai pr wo appne dar pe kaboo to paa leti hai pr it seems to be amazing to be saw her in future updates.......



Emaa aur Zoey bed pr ekdusre se chipk kr baithi thi wahi veer aur Mike bagl me ek dusre se khade the

Emma aur Zoey ko agar wo bata dete ki Chester kaise mara to Emma ki to abhi hi jaan nikal jaati yaha tk ki Zoey ki ruwai paka foot padti lekin Khair veer aur Mike ne nhi bataya unhe

Lekin uss samay jab veer ne bewolf blessings on kiya tha tabhi usse smell agayi thi ye baat mai bhul gaya tha lekin ju ke aage yaad krate hi apan ko yaad agayi

Tab Mike ne cigrate nikalte hue khud bhi liya aur veer ko bhi offer kiya to veer ne accept krliyaa kyunki uski wo ability on thi boleto detoxification on thi usne cigrate lete hue jalayi lighter se wahi Mike abhi bhi gusse me tha akhir wo ek detective jo tha aur woo yaha apne saath walo ko nhi bacha paa raha tha.....

Khair dono khidki ke pass khade bahar kdkti bijiliya aur bataate moti moti wo chamkti boonde jo khidki or pad rahi thi aur ander jo dhua uth raha tha ek alag hi feeling laarahi thi jo horror sai lagi jo mughe ek alag hi feeling laa rahi thi just chilling in this imagination but ander kuch to feel hui thi mughe jo ek alag hi feel de rahi thi ekdum alag sa

Khair veer ne chupi todi aur baate suru hui unndono me aur aakr ruuki ek bbaaat pr jo tha cameras ka jikr jo Conor ne kiya tha apne video me matlab ssab record abhi bhi ho rahe hai aur tab Mike ne shock wali baat veer ko batayi ki usse 4 cameras mill chuke hai jo veer ko jhtka to laga lekin tab Mike ne usse bataya ki iss room me fan matlab pankhe ke bicho bich bhi ek camera hai unn 4 me se tab veer ne udhar dekhna chaha to Mike ne rok diya jo sahi bhi tha

Ab baat aayi ki chester search time me kaise maara gaya to ye sawal apan ka bhi tha to ju ne bola tha ki agle Update me to apan ko jawab mil gaya to jawab likhna to banta hai to chester issliye mara gaya jo veer ko uss voice ki baat se yyaad kyunki uss voice ne kuch nhi kaha tha iss baare me ki search time me NIGHTWALKER ghumega yaa nhi inn logish ne to khud b khud new rule boleto new point bana liye the jo chester ke maut ka karan bhi bana......aur chester to idhar se udhar ghum bhi raha tha aur uss awazz ne ye bola bhi tha ki agar ghumte mile to gaye NIGHTWALKER dwara.......matlab saaf baat me NIGHTWALKER khel gaya firki le daali unnsabkki

Tab veer ne kah daala sidha ki mai bahar jaa raha hu tab Mike ne bhi bol diya ki tum nhi sirf....mai aur tum dono chalenge saath aur ye baat pr pari ne bola bhi ki wo saath nhi jaa sakte nhi thik bhi tha tab veer ne bola ke hame alag alag jaana chahiye ki taki ham jaldi kuch dhund sake clue aur unke pass walki talkie bhi tha to koi problem bhi nhi thi jaldi contact banega aur Mike maan bhi gaya akhir kuch socha bhi hoga ussne jarur veer ke baare me lekin tab wo nikle bahar Zoey aur Emma ko smjha kr Tommy to behosh tha aur jab jaate jate veer se Zoey ne bola ki tum jinda laute ge matlab usse pura yakkin to tha hi kyunki wo wo veer ko utna to bhanp gayi hi thi lekin Emma to puri dar gayi thi veer ke jaane se bhi

aur wahi baat kre jab wo rasta chunne ki aayi to apne Mike ne right chose kiya jo lajmi thi aur veer ko left bheja jab Mike chal diya right side tab veer bhi left side se u turn lete hue matlab wapas Mike ki wor chala gaya jisska karan pari bhi smjh gayi aaur apan bhi akhire NIGHTWALKER veer pr attack to bilkul nhi krega kyunki wo janta veer sidha bhidega aur wahi Mike uske liye asan target tha kyunki usne veer ko notice krliya tha lekin Mike ko nhi to wo uske piche jaayega aur gaya bhi

Lekin ek baat batao aaj kal ju mistake kr rahe ho yaa hame hint dene ke liye mistake krte ho jaise ki ye

"You take left. I'll take the right."

"right" ke pahle "the" laga kr ju ne uska hint de diya hame ki Mike ne pahle bhi kha tha ki wo hamesha right hi krta hai yaaa leta hai ju to bohot Tezz ho rahe ho


Mike jab basement me pohoncha to waha usse pani ka level jyada badha dikha satah or jo mughe ajjib laga bohot jaise laga kuch plan sa ho ye lekin uss ko maine padhte waqt side rakh diya Khair aate ab veer par to wo pari ke kahne pr shoes utaar chalne laga aage ki wor aur wahi jab aage dhua utha aur NIGHTWALKER saamne aaya hath me hasiya liye aur face pr darwana mask liye lekin ju ne to uske mask ko sunder bataya tha to ye kya likha ju ne but isse related kuch to.......Khair aage badhta mai

To jab mike ne jab usse dekha to wo apni hand gun nikal point out jaise kiya waise hi NIGHTWALKER waha kalti mara lajmi thi uske hath me gun thi jo aur wo NIGHTWALKER bhaga aur ek alag side ghus gaya aur wahi jab kuch dur Mike aaya hi tha ki uske sar pe kuch laga jo bohot joro se laga aur wo gir pada behosh ho kr wahi bagal me NIGHTWALKER khada abhi uski mundi udane wala hi tha ki veer ne bottle fekk ke maari jisse uska hassiya gir gaya dur auur ye kamal Hawkeye ka tha

To ab kamal suru hua bewolf blessings ka jisse veer tezzi se uski wor badha jisse dekh wo pani waale satah or aagaya lekin ab mughe pura dout hogaya ki ye NIGHTWALKER ka plan to nhi kah haa kah sakte hai chalak bohot hai ye isne sayad se soch liya tha ki mai isse nhi jeet paunga to isse bijli wali wire ko pani me chor usse maar dunga yaa behosh kr sakta hu lekin ye chis uski fail gayi jab aisa hua to veer jaldi se NIGHTWALKER jaise boxes wali jagah pr chadh gaya jisse wo unn bijliyon se. Jhunjhnati hui pani se bach gaya aur bhid gaya NIGHTWALKER se aur dono ek dusre ko girane ki koshish kr e lage lekin yaha haar gaya NIGHTWALKER aur pani me gir gaya aur uski chikh ke saath wo behosh ho gaya krkarati hui bijli bhari pani se

Lekin jab ju ne NIGHTWALKER ki pahli baar awazz sunayi tab veer ne usko kya hi tease kiya ki "heh, so you can talk !!"

Jisske baad usse bandh ke rassiyo se veer usse wahi chor diya lekin jo reward system ne usse diya ye mere pale n pada sirf 1000 points mile usse aur 500 fame points ye kuch gadbad laga kyunki system hamesha kisi jaruri mission pr jyada points reward me deta hai lekin ye mission to bohot jaruri bhi tha lekin nope kuch gadbad hai system isitrah itne kam points may be ye sab jo ho raha ho NIGHTWALKER ka mamla kuch aur hi indication ho khair dekhte hai aage ju kya naye twist laate ho yaa mai hi galat hu saayad. ....

Lekin jab wo chester ke room se guzra to ussne kuch notice kiya saayad se ussne bed sheet ko notice kiya jo saayad side para hoga thoda aur uss bed ke ander koi jagah hogi may be tabhi to pari ne kaha how did he?? Matlab uss samay jab wo teeno ander aaye the tab saayad NIGHTWALKER ander hi chupa hua tha uske aur may be unke jate hi nikal liya.....

To iska saaf matlab hai kuch to hua aur veer Zoey ki traf gaya aur unn dono niche jaane ko kaha aur sayad se ussne bed sheet hata kr wo takhta Utha ke dekha bed ka but but wo sound jo create hue "Craaaaaassshhhhh" matlab koi kaanch tutne jaisi awazz yaa kaho to koi vase tutne ki awazz may be but it may be true......

Lekin jab veer jhep gayi jaise uuske aur veer ke bich kuch baat hui aur usme pari koi baat galat saabit ki ho aur wo baat abhi sach hogayi aise jhep gayi wo lekin jab veer ne bola jis tone me uska saaf matlab nikla ki wo jaan gaya ki ye sab kisne kiya ya krwa raha tha sabka krta dharta and I guess ye sab wo Connor kr raha tha I am sure about this but may be ki ye galat ho but I think ki uski dead body ka bhi to sayad jikr n hua to fir aur usse marta hua dekha bhi n gaya matlab ye sab ussi ka kiya dhara tha aur pahle wala murder jo hua tha Daniel ka wo bhi ussi ne kiya and I am damn sure about this dekhte kya hota hai aage

Aur ju ne to scene hi shift kr diya aage copter tk jab sab wapas aagaye aur tab suhana to bohot khus thi aur wahi divya ne bhi uska welcome uski to Muniya jal bhun gayi hogi lekin wo bhi khus thi may be mai kya uska dimag padhu ab but ju ne kya hi scene dikhaya aur imagine krwaya man mai to aur likhna chahta hu review me pr wiram dete hai akhiri paragraph se

Jab last me veer ne sabko photo dikhaya sayad se kisika and wo Connor ka hi hoga meri imagination seriously nhi lene ka lekin mai sure hu wahi hai inn sabke piche and ek baat batao ye Tommy kaha se agaya yaha wo to waha tha veer ke saath mansion me to ye Tommy yaha kaise kahi galti se to nik ki jagah nhi likh diye ju ne......

That update was just a marvellous I say just fucking creativity of realistic you done in this.....ju ne kya hi likha har scene me har line ki ek alag hi matlab aur maza aaraha tha feeling saaf bhar aarahi thi I just think ki ju Rihanna sahi to nhi ki tum kahi jadu tona to nhi krwate Werewolf sach batana Khair update was such marvellous I say....... Hatt's off man


Waiting for next one.......
Take care......

Sanki Rajput bhaya, ju ke likhe revo padhne se update ki barikiya aur achhe se samajh paya...
Par sach me itna bada likhna....
Salam thare ko bhi

 

[Werewolf]

Mujhe reviews dena nahi aata ( actually mujhe sand hi nahi milte kya likhu ) but maine ye slogan or atish wala kahi to pada tha matlab similarly thode se match karte the jo veer k same padav sat hai ye those those similar the para nai kaha pad

Toh dhundne ka man ... Aur mujhe bhi padhwane ka... Ki kaha padha tha.

 

[Rihanna]

jo khaas hote han.. unka number ya to pehle lagta hai ya fir end me..

Sach h ye baat.... Par unhone mujhe late reply diya. Na pehle na baad me... Beech me fass gayi main... Iska matlab...

 

[Rihanna]

ye Werewolf bhai ke liye nahi hai Rihanna ji..... ye to aapke liya ha.. yakeen na ho to poochh len Sanki Rajput ji se ..

Mere liye? Wo kese?

 

[Rihanna]

Irony toh dekho. Abhi mein reply nahi diya toh ju macchli ka tarah tadapne lagi...

Mujhe laga tha aap mujhse naraaz h...