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[Lucky@khan]

Werewolf bro aaj update aayega kya.....

Who kiya h n mai chai (tea) ke saath story phdta hu to agr aap bata do to mai chai bana lu...

 

[Werewolf]

Ye update kal hi padhu ga
1 ghanta lag jaye ga padne me
Or me bina pade bol rha hu update mast he

Fantastic mind-blowing update

update was awesome and mind blowing Fabolous night walker bala kya h jis ne veer kis speed ko b mat dydi next update kay bary ma ab tu had sey zyda intzar ban gaya h man bhut achy tariqy sey apne har chez ko dikhaya maza aya ga all thanks to you writer sir

प्रणाम भाई सहाब

अपने देशी छोरे ने तो विदेशियों की गांड मार रखी है, अपना छोरा वीर छा गया

भरपुर कौतूहल और रोमांच से भरा अनुच्छेद था भाई सहाब
इस बेहतरीन मनोरंजन की लिए आभार आप का

अगले रोमांचक अनुच्छेद के मेरी शुभ कामनाएँ आप को

Amazing update

bahot mst update bhai

Awesome Super amazing Update .. What a scene yrrr nidhi or veer aisa lga ek pal ke liye ki main mere roon me akela baitha hu room ki lights Band hai only TV chal rhi hai jisme veer or nidhi ek dusre ki baaho me hai veer apne dil ka haal byaan kr rha hai or nidhi sharm-o-haya ke palko talee nazre jhukaye Sun rhi hai. Mst bhut pyara moment tha.. Bechari nidhi ka reaction agey Kya rhne wala hai aise veer ke jazbaat Sun ke dekhna silchasp hoga. Suman ke sath to veer chotil haalat me bhi bhi hospital me hi bedroom wall feeling le rha tha banda hospital Ke bed pe hi romance shuru kr diya. Ye jante hue bhi ke bahar 2 deviyan mauzud hai. Jisko pta chalte hi ulta ltka degi. Ab ate hai ragini pr ragini ke aise behavior pr sala dimag hi kharab Ho jata hai woh veer pr apna adhikar chahti hai woh chahti hai veer usko har baat share kre kyo? Bhai kyo kre kis bina pr tujhe sab kuch btaye. Veer bewkuf hai ajtk ek baar bhi ragini ko ulta ke jawaab nhi diya mere kaan taras gye hai. Kya kaha usne pati ko chhod ke yahan rhti hai toh kisne kaha yahan pati ko chhod ke rhne ke liye sala sara blame ulta veer pe hi lga rhi hai veer ne kuch bola bhi nahi veer bhondu hai Kya be kuchh to bol aj itna caring kyo dikha Rhi hai. Pehle bhi yahi veer tha tu bhi thi. .. Khairr dekhte hai agey kya hota hai

What a mind blowing update bro!!!


Congrats for century!!!

Once again mind blowing update just like a Hollywood horror movie

Jabardast update.. Bhai..

Kuch to missing lag raha hai, kahin ye Nightwalker koi humanoid to nahi jiski wajah se usme itni furti aur speed thi. Kya ye room number mein bhi koi raaz hai kya aur ye Pari ki observation bhi kuch to ajeeb lag rahi hai kahin inse hi to koi raaj nahi khulne waala Nightwalker ka? Kya sach mein koi khajana hai bhi yaa nahi yahan? Lagta hai Chester ko room ke aander hi maar dala hai Nightwalker ne. Jabardast update.

Awesome update

Kadak update bro maza agaya

Nice Update

awesome update hai Werewolf bhai,
Behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,

Chester room ke andar hi mara gya?
Am i right?

Werewolf भाई इस अंक के लिए क्या उपमा दूँ
रहस्यमय और रोमांचक
पर आती सुंदर लिखूँ या अति भयंकर
बहुत ही उत्तम प्रस्तुति
सुहाना का दिव्या को हड़काना वीर के लिए और निक का वीर के प्रति असहनशीलता के चलते वीर को मौत के चंगुल में भेजना
अंत में एक हॉरर की अनुभूति करना
वाकई बहुत ही उच्चकोटि की प्रस्तुति
साधुवाद

Gajab ka update thril se bharpur ab dekhna hai kon Nightwalker hai

May be"Nik" Divya's husband

Waiting for next

Ye definitely 100 Update ke layaka tha.Lakin mujhe pakka yakin hai aur mai kah skta hu bahut se log kahenge ki aapne ye scene pura nahi kiya. Aur isme utna dhmaka nahi hua.
Lakin in ab un sub ko kon samjhaye ki in sub ka karan ye hai bhai Quki aapne is ek Update me itne dhmake ek sath kar diye ki in logo ke ye sb normal lag raha hoga.
Is ek Update me hi aapne do murder dikha diye . Ek baar nightwalker ka samna karwa diya veer se. Usne zoel ki jaan bhi bacha li. Nd do clues pari ne CRACK kiye. Sath me kai main question aapne chor diya panting se related, aur ye night walker lime limit me Attack kaise kar skta hai kisi par. Kahi aisa to koi hidden rule nahi hai ki jo time gold find karne ka hai us time me agar koi room me rahega to us par bhi nightwalker Attack karta hai. Aur agar aisa hai to wo ander gaya kaise room ke. Aur agar such me aisa hai to usne Zoel aur emma par is liye Attack to nahi kiya Wiki wo do log room me thi. Bahut se swal hai bhai.
Nd shuhana ko such me apne veer ki bahut jyada care hai nd jaisa ki mai starting se sochta aa raha tha bhai ki favour to alsi me veer ne hi kiya hai shuhana ne nahi. Aur aaj shuhana ne ye baat accept bhi ki hai.
Aur in divya Madam ka lagta hai ye case solve hone tak divorce ho jayega.
Aur agar aisa na bhi hua to shuhana ab nick ko jarur bahut ache se sabak sikhayegi. Sayad is baar na lakin agli baar fir se usne aisa kuch kiya to definitely wo aisa kuch karegi. Aakhir wo bhi kisi chote family se belong nahi karti hai.
At the end bahut hi awsm update bhai. Wakyi ek no. Itne day jo wait Krna padta hai un sb ki kasar puri ho jati hai aapke ek Update se.

Ye wala update previous update se bahut achchha tha man next update me macha diyo man pura xforum hi hila dena to next update Monday ko expect to kar hi sakta hoo kyu. Werewolf bhai?

Fantastic update

nice1

Marvelous jabardast update bro

Behad hi shaandar update Werewolf bhai poora horror movie ka feel de diya hai....

Bahot sahi hain yarrr, bahut badhiya maja aa gaya.

Ding veer ko mission milna he tha ab Night Walker ki band kaise bajti hai

Awesome update bhai or Nightwalker or veer ki puri fight shayad next update me aayegi waiting for next update

Do go mara ja chuka hai tisra mara ga jald

Wooh Aag laga di sir har second thrill , abhi nightWalker ka bhed nahi khula may be 1 update aur lagega. Nice update sir dil khus ho gya aur aapne mehnat ki saaf dikh raha hai loved it!!!!!

Its mind blowing fantastic

Beautiful update bhai

superb fantastic update bhai ekdum jabardust bhai likhna to bahot hai lekin aap jo apne hisab se story likh rahe ho wo best hai aap ne bahot suspence bana diye hi suhana ki shadi bhi sayad uski marji ke khilaf huyi hai aur chaester lagta hai pahle bhi yaha aaya hua hai dekhte hai aage kya hoga lage raho bhai aur aise hi update dete raho

Superb update bhai

Jabardast update

Lajawab update bhai
Bhai gold zameen ke undr nhi na gada huwa hai

pura Granth hi likh diya tumne to.....

Zabardast Update Bhai
Bahut Hi Shaandar Update Hai
Maza Aagaya

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Werewolf bhai.....
Nice and awesome update.....

Maaza Agya

Super update bro

Nice mast update bro

Mind-blowing update bro

Aw
Awesome updates

Bahut hi fadu update hai bhai maza aa gaya


Waiting for the next update

Zabardast update Bhai. Congrats for 100 updates. Aur sab se acchi baat hain aap kisi bhi update ko best nahi kah saktey coz har ek doosre se acchi hain. Bohat unique concept is forum per plus regular timely update aur usme bhi 4k plus words joki badey acche tareeqe se pesh kiye gaye hain lagta hain ek ek pushp chun kar yah mala bana kar parosi gayi hain.

Thriller update yaar sach me aap great ho suspense dalne main sach main aatish ka jlsa ho ya slogan ki mirror gallery but is mention ke aage sab fail hai kya update tha bro maza aagya

Sach main update 100 ko 100/100 grad deta hu yaar kya bolu this is so much horrible deaths jecob and Ronnie and maybe Chester

Bhai apne veer bhai ne to nightwalker ko khullam khulla challenge de diya maza ayega agle update ka to besabri se intezaar hai

Or ye divya iski gaand main kam hawa nahi hai bhai sach me ye night walker is very interesting killer but they are not one

Bro aapne ye kaha ki house of killers china toun main finish hoga to mera sawaal hai kya veer vegas or china ke alawa bhi koi or country jasakta hai meybe more killer??????

Baki dhasu dhamakedar outstanding update yaara

Awesome fantastic superb mind blowing update bhai...

Per ek baat he jab last half hour veer logo ka gold find karne ka tha 3 to 3:30 A:M wala this is the first time jab Nightwalker un logo ke time pe kisiko marne nikla tha uske phele wale me wo apne time pe hi kisiko mara he...

Or baaki sab ka boat se ana or jab Veer log aye tab sare boat gayab hona ek sochne wali baat he kya ye log alag alag logo ko bulate he taki wo log boat Leke aye or ye log apna saman un boat se ek jagah se dusri jagah supply kar sake taki police ho ya koye or wo log esi boat check nahi karenge ya or kuch bhi ho sakta he per mujhe Esa lagta he or ye paintings ka bhi kuch to raaz he lekin veer ka samaj nahi aa raha he veer ko ek hint ki jarurat he bas upper se veer ko mission bhi mila he catch the Nightwalker before 6:00 A:M matlab is bar veer Nightwalker ke time pe room se niklega or usko pakadne ki koshish karega dekhne me I mean padhne me Maja ayega...

Superb update bhai thrilling experience tha ekdum next update me maza ayngi waiting for it

wonderful update

agar treasure hi nahi to fir nightwalkers ki sachai kya hai

romanchak update .suhana aur divya ke bich tu tu me me chalu ho gayi ,dono haar maanne ko taiyar nahi hai ,waise divya kuch jyada hi harami aur ghamandi hai jo apne pati ko support kar rahi hai ye jaante huye bhi ki usne veer ko galat jagah fasa diya hai jabki wo na police hai na detective .
suhana ka pareshan hona bhi laajmi hai kyunki wahi to veer ko yaha leke aayi hai .

nightwalker ne 2 logo ka shikar kar liya .aur ab veer ko mission bhi mila hai ki nightwalker ko maarne ka .
shayad veer ki taakad ka tboda bahut andaja ho gaya hoga nightwalker ko . sab darr ke bhag rahe the par veer ne uska saamna kiya aur usko bhagne par majbur kar diya .
aur ye emma koi jasus ya police type to nahi jo wo bata nahi rahi ki waha kaise aayi hai . par uska darr dekhkar aisa lag nahi raha .
aur ek ko kamre me ghuksar to nahi maar diya .jab nightwalker ka sab jaal bichhaya hua hai to usko ye bhi pata hoga kisi kamre me kaise jaate hai .

Nice one. Waiting for next.

Main aapse gussa hu... Werewolf
Kitna wait kiya mne... 1:30 tak... Par update nahi aaya.
Update teen minute baad aaya.
Aisa nahi chalega...
Ab aapko mujhe manana hoga. Tabhi main iss update ka review dungi ...

Sorry for that bhai. Majboori hai, shabd hi nahin hain mere paas.

congratulations for 100 updates bro rat lo likhna yed ni raha

Super wonderful awesome update

For completed 100 updates on your story thread.....

Awesome, mind blowing
Veer kill night Walker.

Awesome 100th update. Maza aaya.

Nice update

suspense and thriller... I like it....

Gazab fabulous update Bhai superb

As always ek shaandaarrr update bhaii...shayad akhri main sirf chaar log hi bache veer,mike, emmma nd zoey...mujhe lagta hai veer ki list main yeh dono bhi shamil ho chuki haiii....

Super update

Mast
Pahli baar night walker bhi soch mai aaya hoga ki veer kaisa insan hai

Manane ke chakkar me next update aur bhi late jaayega Rihanna Ji ... ghussa kamm hone ki bajaye aur bhi badh jaayega

nicely updated bro

Okay... I do feel bad now...
Jaiye... Maaf kia aapko... Aap bhi kya yaad rakhoge...

purane wali dp use karo to baat bhi bane

Nice update...

Behtarin exilant update

Jabardasttt Updateee. Maza aagaya padhkee.

And for century

Awesome update. Is Chester alive in the room ? Very mysterious

Bahut hi thrill aur suspance se bhara update tha bhai jabardast


Har kamre har galiyare mai andhkar Nazar aata hai.
Yeh makaan jaise maut ka mukam Nazar aata hai,

Har tasweer jaise takti hai har ek hi chahere.
Jaise dhoondh rahi hai kis ki aakhon mai khauf Nazar aata hai.

Koi lachar, koi lalchi, koi swarthi Nazar aata hai.
Jo banke maut ghoom raha hai use inme shikaar Nazar aata hai.

Chahe chupalo kahi bhi khudko aap surakshit nahi hoge.
Jo aap dekh nahi sakte use wo rasta bhi nazar aata hai.

Jo rasta jata hai zindagi tak, uspe banke maut wo samne Nazar aata hai.
Chahere pe lagaye khoobsurat naqab,
Hathon mai hathyar liye nazar aata hai.


Eagerly waiting for next

Shandaar update akhir veer ko mission mil gaya par problem bahut h ek toh jagah bahut badi h aur sirf nightwalker he sari jagah ache se janta h usne har jagah fek traps lagaye h aur veer ko chod ke sab ki halat patli h upar se uske gale ladki aur agayi h toh dekhna h kanha se usai clue milta h nightwalker ka ya khud bahar jayega killing time mai ...... update full of thrill tha ......

ई का धमाका था बे, ससुरा ऐसन लागत रहा के कोनो अंग्रेजी भूत बाला फिलिम आँख के आगे चलत रही ।
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बाकई, अद्भुत update, इस update को पढ़ते समय मुझे ऐसा लगा की मै कोई हॉलीवुड की होर्रोर थ्रीलर मूवी देख रहा हूँ ।
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जिसमे हमे nightwalker एक ऐसा किरदार देखने को मिल रहा है, जिसने किसी के सर को धड़ से अलग करने मे जरा भी संकोच नही किया ।
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वीर अपने सूझ बूझ और बहादुरी से दोनो लड़कियों की जितना हो सके उतना रक्षा कर रहा है ।
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इस अध्याय मे हमे एक ऐसा बिंदु भी दिखाया गया है जिसके चलते हमे वाशतविक जीवन मे बहुत परेशानियाँ देखनी पड़ती है.. " लालच "........ रौनी को उसका लालच... एक हैवान का शिकार बना बैठा ।
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वोही एम्मा और जोय के मन मे एक ऐसी भावना देखने को मिली... जैसे की उन्हे वीर के छाया मे खुद को सुरक्षित एहशास हो रहा हो, और होगा भी क्यों नही... आखिर वीर ने अपनी वीरता का परमान उन दोनो की जान बचा कर दिया है .
इधर, सुहाना के मन मे एक डर देखने को मिला, और उसी डर के कारण वो आज दिव्या को भी खरी खोटी सुना बैठी...
जिस तरह दिव्या के भड़वा पति ने वीर को एक खुले मौत के मुह मे भेज दिया था, सुहाना का तो गुस्सा होना लाजमी ही था ।
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पर वीर को अब उसके सिस्टम का मिशन भी मिल चुका है, तो अब nightwalker के राज को वीर कैसे सुलझाता है इसे देखना बाकई लाज़ाबाब होगा ।
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100 वां अंश . . . . सफल रहा....
हाउस ऑफ किलर्स.... आर्क का अब तक का सबसे रोचक update....
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अद्भुत

Jaguaar bhai aap ko bhi apne reviews words badhane padenge..

आपके इस update मे डर का वातावरण ही ऐसा था की सालो की पतलून गीली हो गयी होगी... और हाथ पैर कांपने लगे होंगे... यही वजह है की... बेचारे ज्यादा बड़ा रिव्यू नही लिख पाए....
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या फिर उनका बहुत छोटा होगा......"उँगली"...... तो रिव्यू भी छोटा ही लिख पाते है
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खैर... एक बात और है की शब्द कम पड़ जाते है आपकी कहानी के update को रिव्यू देते समय...
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बस... उपर वाले से दुआ रहता है की आप हमेशा स्वस्थ रहे.... ताकी हमे update लगातार मिलती रहे....
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आपके इस टिप्पणी का मै समर्थन करता हूँ,... अच्छा हुआ की मैने भी update सुबह सुबह ही पढ़ा... वर्ना.... फिर...
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छोड़ो.... वैसे... बचपन मे आपकी पतलून भी गीली हो जाती होगी न असद भाई
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जिस तरह आपने बताया की आप होर्रोर मैगजीन पढ़ा करते थे... तो उसमे तो सच मे सबकी फट जाया करती थे.... ओवीयस है की हमारी भी फट जाया करती थी....

kya bataon bhai keh bachpan kaise hua karta tha.. abb to bass yaaden hi reh gai han.. aur bachpan aur dusre person ka same hi hota hai.. to patloon to sabki geeli hoti thi.. .. haan ek baat jab na samjh the aur patloon ya chaddi ko hi agar geela karte the to ajeeb lagne ke sath sath achha bhi lagta tha

kya aapko achha nahi lagta tha. jhut bolna buri baat hai bhai .. agar jhut bola to werewolf bhai seedha thok denge

A Great update
Bohat hi vadia scene description
Bohat baareeki se kaam kiya hai aapne update pe

Zabardast update

Suhana ne veer ko lekar apni bachpan ki friend divya ko suna dala or kya sunaya hai nik yha hota to or maza aata uski sulgane me, angur langur ke hath me, aapne pichhle update ki us chikh ko jis tarah se is update ki suhana ki chikh se mods hai or fir divya ki chikh se Emma ki chikh, ek baar ko lga hi nhi ki dono drisya alag alag the aisa lga jaise sab ek hi mention me ho or ek dusre ki chikhe sunai de rhi ho... mind-blowing bhai

sabse pahla saksh Jisne nightwalker ko dekha uska to sar dhad se alag mila pr Jisne dusri baar dekha Vo Emma thi aur kya daraya hai aapne nightwalker ko samne rakh kr veer ke bhi usko dekh khade ho gye rongte, I'm sure werewolf bhaya ki girl fan ke bhi rongte khade ho gye honge, vo bhi light band karke Padhti hai or aapne bhi mention me andhera kar rakha hai ...

photo kya Khatarnak Khatarnak dali hai bhai raat me yhi Sapne me aani hai aaj nightwalker ke sath, Pahle zecub ne lalach ki or mara gya us time Emma ne dekha or sabko btai pr veer ke saval bhi tark sangat the Usne aate huye kuchh bhi yha aane ka sadhan nhi dekha Vahi Emma ne yha aane ka method hi nhi btaya... to dusri baar Ronnie ne lalach dikhaya or nakli Sone ke chalte mara gya, Isko marte zoey ne dekha, veer ne abhi ke liye to bcha liya pr Yadi Ye aise hi lalach me ghumte rahe to inki maut pakki hai veer ko apna tramp card istemal Karna pada Emma or zoey ko bchane ke liye fir bhi halki chot aa hi gyi...

yha pr Chester ne ek baat notic ki vo painting ke Bich me chaukor frame jiske aar Paar dekha ja sakta tha or kuchh Samay baad vahi pr nightwalker ka hona koi ittefak nhi hai, vo inhi photo frame ke pichhe chhupta hai...

pari ne bhi 2 bate notic ki ek to painting ke face me feeling ka na hona or dusra ki jab bhi koi Marta hai to Uska koi na koi gavah jarur hota hai Jo maut ki jankari dusro ko de kr bhay faila sake...

veer ko mission mila hai nightwalker ko 6 bje tk pakadne ka Jisme kuchh hi Samay baki hai vahi Chester room me band hai or ab vo khol nhi rha hai iska mtlb yah bhi ho sakta hai ki Vo andar mar gya ho ya fir dar se hi fat gyi ho Uski... yha veer ki speed dekh kr nightwalker bhi surprise ho gya hai...

Dekhte hai Vo ab kya karta hai suhana ne veer ka past jitna vo janti hai sab bta diya hai ab Dekhte hai uska bartav badalta hai Ya nhi...

Awesome bhai mind-blowing Superb update sandar jabarjast Khatarnak photo ek dam sahi jagah pr prayog ki hai... head's off bhai...

Superb update

Bahut badhiya update hai bhai..... Jacob or wo ladki lalach me mar geye.....Emma or zoey to mask dekh kar hi fat geyi....or veer bhi kuch nhi kar paye nightwalker ke aage.....or dekhte hai nightwalker ko mar payega ya nhi....
Or lagta hai paintings me hi kuch locha hai....or wakai me ke yaha koi khazana wagera hai ya nhi dekhte hai...
Waiting for next update

Awesome update!

Chester to gya bhai.nightwalker ne to rongte khade kar diye sab ke.agle update ka intezaar hai ki kya hota hai
Awesome update

for completing 100 updates .....Har bar ki tarah iss var v koi lafaz nhi .. speechless.... Maza aa gya Mansion wala episode pd kr......worwolf ki blessings to full moon pe activate hoti Hein... kya aaj full moon tha...agar tha toh recently Jim ko pakada usdin v full moon...kuch hajam nhi huya..lgg nhi Raha dono incidents mein month ka fark tha...baki ju behtar jaante Hein....wtw ye nightwalker kis kis ki bali lega..aur kese jaal mein fasega..dekhte Hein.....

Is ladki ka dimag sath nahi de raha

Rihana mem ab to wolf bro ne bi bol diya chalo mere sath

Excellent update you have created suspence and exitment very well

Bhai full moon me Uski power sabse jyada hoti hai or baki time Vo werewolf ki average power use kr pata hai...

Kya matlab?

Wonderful update bhai... Yaha supernatural power hai ya wo koi adami hi hai joh nightwalker me roop main aa gaya....agar ek hi admi hai toh veer ka safar Vegas main bahot lamba jayega Q ki kisi ek admi ka kam nahi ho skata yes..
Dekhate hai veer kaise usko pakdata hai

Jabardast update bhai

Superb

Awesome

Chester bichra room me hi tapak gaya Sala chutiya nightwalker ko chida raha ta ....

Emma kuch na kuch wo chupa rahi hai uske upar doubt jyada ho raha hai ....

Veer to jarur pakdega is nightwalker bale chutiya ko .....

Btw fantastic amazing mind blowing update....​

One of the best updates of this story. Though it is a quite long one, each and every sentence full of suspense and thrills.
Eise Nightwalker kis se prerit hey??????

Awesome update bro

Nice update

Outstanding update bhai maza aa gaya to ab dekhte hai Chester ka kya hua or nightwalker 3 or 3: 30 k beech kaise aya.

Lajawab update
Waiting for next update

Super fantastic mind-blowing update

Zabardast update bhai story k her update me intrest badta jaraha hai aise hi update dete rahiye apna kimti waqt nikal kar k keep posting

Bro aapke update ka lalach bahut hota hai par kya kre aap bhi insan ho likhne sochne me mehnat lagti hai



Nice update

Lajawab update bhai
Bhai gold zameen ke undr nhi na gada huwa hai

Wow maja aa gaya padhakar.nightwalker jo sabako dara raha tha use veer ke dar se bhagna para.mast update hai Bhai.

Bohat he zabaradast update tha lalach ke chalte kafi logo ne apni Jaan dedi iktha me he takat or faida hy agr sab log sath millkr Sona dhondte to shayad inki Jan Bach jati ab dekhte Sona milta b hy inhe ya ye SIRF ek trap hy or night walker Ka investigator ke khoon se Kiya taluq or veer or night walker jab bidhengy to ye Banda mazedar ho ga dono he kafi takatwar hy eagerly waiting for next update

Update 100 ko lekr boleto apan ekich baat bolega ki ye century abhi tk ki sabse best update ko laa kr hamare saamne apke dwara pesh ki gayi hai...... gajab man ju ke writing pr apan ko kuch n bolna chata kyunki sab jaante hai apke writing skill ek alag hi level pe chalti hai........


Ye divya to apne chutiye kam gaandu husband ke bachao me jyada lagi hai sorry insult nhi dekha ja raha usse .....suhaana bohot jyada hi pareshan hai veer ko lekr jo lajmi hai hona bhi chahiye aakhir wo ussse lekr aayi hai yaha pr aur wo bhi indirectly divya ke kaaran,aur rahi baat nik ki to wo gaandu ki to gaand me kiwde chal rahe hai bhosdika.........Khair suhana ki bhi baat sahi hai ki ye sab sirf nik ke kaaran hua matlab veer ko sirf ussi ke kahne pr bheja gaya jo bohot galat tha lekin still suhana bohot jyada pareshan ho rakhi hai veer ko lekr aur veer ke prati wo jyada hi emotionally attach si ho rahi hai yaa ho bhi gayi hai jo spast roop se hmare saamne dikh bhi raha hai........ab batao iss divya ko isse matlab iss situation me bhi muh chodi sugh gayi batao matlab suru krdi ussne aur usse bahak kr suhana ne bhi apne husband ka izzat ka balatkar n dekha gaya

Khair ab aate apan log aage ke scene pe jo hai island ka boleto mansion ka,ab idhar Emaa piche gayi Jacob ke aur ye chutiya socho jara apne aap ko ye mahashay
race 3 movie ke salman khan smjh rahe the bc jaa to aise rahe the ki killer unka langotiya yaar ho, bahenchod iski to literally gaand hi ahemm-ahemm sorry haa to mai bol raha tha ki uski mundi ko hi football bana diya bc wo scene jab uske aankho me shocked wala reaction aur uske Kate hue hisse se jab wo khun riss rahe the aur uski andhruni nase woh....ho ho...ho.....kya hi scene tha it's fucking from that scene that I just loves it to see and imagine..... uss bloody wape scene ko imagine kr ke jo ek alag hi horror scene wali feeling aayi n wo mast tha mai sach kahu to bhai ye scene aur jo aage ke scene hue n dono ke murder ke to blood lust wali jo feeling aayi n gajab ki thi fucking great Hatt's off man ju ko and realy I am waiting for even more dangerous and bloody scenes.......but ...but but........ye scenes mughe sach kahu to utna bloody feeling n de payi lekin still mai jaanta hu Werewolf bhaya ki ye jo scenes the ye to abhi bas shuruwat thi iss story me abhi to asli jo scenes aaane wale hai wo alag hi level pr hongi, I just want to say man ki mai unn arcs ka besabri se intezar me rahunga lekin apka koi bharosa nhi kahi issi arc me wo scenes laa do aap

Khair mai kaha se kaha chala gaya apan log aate review pr sorry mai ata review pr

Emma ki to kya hi haalat ho gayi uski jaan hii nikal gayi thi mano jab wo apne hosh me aayi aur wo bhhagne lagi NIGHTWALKER se bach ke tab uski jo buri haalat huyi jitna uss katti hui mundi ko dekh kr n huyi thi kyunki piche uske wo NIGHTWALKER pada huua tha wo bhi hassiya liye hue literally ek aisa scene mind me ubhar ke aayi hogi n sab reader ke dimag me ki unke bhi raungtey khade ho gaye honge......aur jo uski chikh nikli thi wo dar aur khauf bayan kr rahi thi jo maine saaf notice kiya bhale ju log ne na kiya ho pr maine kiya jo uske uss chikh me jhalak rahi thi maut ka dar.....

Aur jab veer aur baaki sab apne kamre se nikal kr uss halway me aaye to unhe fir se chikh sunayi di jo kaafi pass se aayi thi aur agle hi pal Emma bhagti hui aakr veer se lag gayi.....gale yaar....haa to usne bas yahi bola ki usne dekha use aur uski baat sun oahlee to nhi smjh paaye lekin jab unhe pata chala to unki halak sukh gayi.....wo Tommy ne suggest kiya ki uske room me chalte hai jo manne hazam ho gaya lekin jab ander Emma ne puri scene ko bataya to unn sabki to fatt ke kya unki to rooh bhi kuch samay ke liye ghumne chali gayi hogi......and Emma jo veer se chipki padi thi kya kahu mere khyaal se Zoey laundiya jal bhun rahi thi sorry ye bakchodi-bakchodi me pel di.....

Haa to ab aate uss mahol me jab sab dare sahme khade the unke dare sahme jism me khauf aur badha diya uss grjarahat ne jo badal ke garjne ki awazz thi aur Emma to fir se lipat padi dar ke maare veer se jo Zoey ne bhaap liya ki uske just bagal me wo bhi hai lekin wo usse chorr veer pr kud rahi hai.......

And tab kiya veer ne ek sawal jo bohot jaaruri tha aur kyun tha mai aage batata......veer ka sawal ki tum log yaha kaise pahuche jiska sabne jawab diya bas Emma ko chor kr lekin ye baat Ronnie launde ko n bhayi aur wo Emma pr shak ki disha se apne bhav rakha jo sahi bhi tha aur hoi bhi kyun n lekin still veer apna gentle man Emma ki jimedari matlab apne sr pe li ki ye mere saath rahegi agar mai mara to ispar shakk kya pura hakk hi jayega katl ka lekin agar mughe kuch n hua to ye innocent prove ho jayegi jo sun to Emma ko bhagwan hi dikh gaye honge veer ke roop me......

And ab aate veer ke uss sawal pr jab veer ne bola ki jab ham aaye matlab veer aur Mike jab waha aye copter se to uss island ke pass kahi bhi unhe koi jetski yaa koi boat wagera n dikhi jo sun to unke ander jo dar ka bamm tyaar ho raha tha n wo phatt gaya wo bhi booommmm.....unnsabki to gandiya fatt gayi and ek baat bata du mai ki ye ssawal jaruri bhi hai ek baat ko clear krne ke liye ki uss NIGHTWALKER ne pahle se hi ye sab plan kr rakha tha yaa jitne bhi log waha aaye pade hai wo sab NIGHTWALKER ke dwara hi laye gaye hai lekin choro aage agar maine 2-3aur koi possibility likh di to lekhak mahoday meko gaali bakenge.......lekin ye to ssocho jara wo boats aur jet ski gaye kaha ye to issi traf indicate kr raha hai wo hai plan ki tarf matlab ye sab plan tha matlab insabko yaha laya gaya tha naki wo khud aaye the........



Ab Mike bhaya n kah daala indirectly ki apan ko investigation mangta hai jo sunke to unki aur fatti lekin still unhone apne timing ke hisab se maan liya ki khazana bhi to chahiye unhe aur iss chis ke lalach me pade Chester,Tommy aur Ronnie jo bohot bura bhi hua ek ke liye because lalach wo chis hai jisske piche agar tum pad gaye to tum aise loote jaoge ki tumhara kuch n bachega khas kar tumhari jaan bhi wo mang leti hai ye lalach itni burri bhavna hai n ki ye tumse khud jitna maangegi wo uske liye kam hai, ye khud me hi khud ko niharti hai ye lalach khud ko hi khud se bayan kr deti hai .......


And jab Chester aur Tommie dono launde jab waha kalti maar liye Mike ko chorkr to wo unke greed ko saaf indicate kr raha tha

Aur rahi baat veer,Emma,Zoey,Ronnie ki to wo to basement me entry le li thi lekin unki to halak hi sukh gaya utne bade aur sequence type basement dekh kr aur lekin still mai ek baat bolna bhul gaya bhaya ki ju ne images ek dum perfecto daale hai jo har scenes ko ek alag hi imagination pr laakr chor deti hai.......Khair uss bbasement me bohot se se side way nikle hue the,wo logo ke kuch dur jaate hi Ronnie waha se ek side mud gaya jaha usse ek box millaa jise kholte hi uski khushi ka thikana hi nhi raha usse to laga ki matlab literally tum jara imagine kro ki tumhe ek box wo bhi gold biscuits se bhara pada mil jaaye to tumhara kya haal hoga tum to pagla jaoge and yaha to usse wahi mila jo dekh yaa paakr uski khushi charam sima pr thi leekin usse lalach ne daboch liya aur ussne ye baat veer aur Emma,Zoey ko n batayi jo uske liye bohot buri hone wali thi......jab Ronnie uss box ko wahi chorkr unke paas aakr unhe bahana bana kr baat ko Rafa dafa kiya lekin still wo uss lalach me doob chuka tha usse sirf wo gold biscuits hi chahiye the issliye to jab veer aur unnsabko kuch n mila uss basement me to wo wapas aagaye

Wahi baat kre apne Mike pe to wo kya hi kahe uska bhi haal behal tha Jacob ke body dekh lekin still usne jyada body ke saath cher chaar nhi kiya bas normally investigate kiya lekin usse itna to pata chal gaya investigation kr ke ki NIGHTWALKER kisi sharp weapons ka use kr raha hai lekin utna sharp nhi hai wo weapon......aur wo bhi laut aaya wapas

Aur idhar apne veer ne sabkee status check kr liya tha lekin usse kuch nhi mila yaha tk ki ussne Mike ko bhi check krliya tha lekin still nothing is there but bhaya ek baat batao ye aaj tumne mistake kr diya likhne me aapne Mike ko muke likh diya koi n bhaya ho jata hai apan aisa waisa kuch n bola.......and one thing also bhaya ki veer ne uss door ko bhi Check krliya lekin still kuch hath nhi aaya.......

Ab aate hai basement side jaha apne jony sorry Ronnie bhi nikal chuka tha apne saath ek bag lete hue and uske piche Zoey bhi kyunki wo apne room side aayi thi paani ke chalte kyunki usse lagi thi bhayankar pyaas aur wo nikli water bottle le kr bahar lekin usse dikhha Ronnie to hogayi wo uske piche, to wo jab aage ki wor gayi to Ronnie uske aankho se wojhal ho chuka tha lekin udhar Ronnie ke side to tandav chalu hogaya tha khauf ka bbc ki gandiya fatty gayi thi jab usne bag me gold biscuits bhar kr jaane laga aur piche se usse do pairo ki aur awazz sunayi jab wo piche muda to uske haath se wo bag hi chutt kr niche gir pada jisme se wo gold biscuits bahar ki wor gir gaye aur NIGHTWALKER jo uske saamne kisi bhootiye look ke saath khada tha

Thode der baad jab Zoey phonne ki light jala kr aage badhi aur kuch der me hi jab usse ek kata sar waha dikha to usse ulti si aagayi lekin usne control kiya aur bhagne ko hui to usse dikha wo NIGHTWALKER jiske mask ki wo do aankhe darane ke liye hi kaffi thi wo jor see chikhti hui bahar ki wor bhagi aur uske piche bhaga hasiya chalata hua. NIGHTWALKER jo bohot hi horror look de raha tha......aur jab wo halway side pohochi to wwo gir padi gile floor ke karan aur uskke saamne NIGHTWALKER khada tha uska sar dhad se alag krne ke liye jiske hasiya chalate hi uske aur hasiya ke bich koi lohe ki rod liye khada tha jo veer tha uski wo entry Zoey ne kabhi expect nhi ki thi lekin entry dhakar thi bhaya.....and Emma ki awazz piche se sunn Zoey uth kr uski. Wor gayi bhag kr jo hath me ek lakdi liye khadi thi lekin uski bhi fatti padi thi......

Wahi NIGHTWALKER ne veer ke chhest pr attack kiya jisse wo dodge kiya veer ne aur ye dekh kr NIGHTWALKER Emma aur Zoey ki traf bhaga hasiya liye aur idhar veer nee apne bewolf blessings ko on kiya aur uski traf tezzi se bhaga jo NIGHTWALKER ne bhi sense krliya aur wo thoda side ki traf bhaga lekin still wo achambhe me tha veer ki speed dekh aur wo Zoey aur Emma ke bagal se niklte hue unke piche lohe ke poles jo aksar kaam lagte hai tents ke wo the jisse NIGHTWALKER ne hasiye se ek jhatka diya aur bhag gaya aur idhar wo poles girne lagi lekin veer ne bacha liya EMMA aur Zoey ko kyunki usko kuch nhi hoga unn poles sse lekin Zoey aur Emma ko to hoga issliye ussne unhe bachana thik smjha aur pari ne kitni baar pucha bhi ki bone reaper oon kru lekin ussne usse mana krdiya lekin veer ko bhi takleef ho rahi thi thodi si aur Zoey aur Emma ki aankhe namm thi kyunki koi aur hota to bachata bhi nhi lekin veer !!

Aur jab wo waha se bach gaye to wo uss basement side gaye aur uss bag ko dekha jisme se gire wo gold biscuits colour chor rahi thi bhigte hue pani se and they are fake,and Ronnie to bekar hi me mara gaya isiliye maine kaha tha pichle review me ki agar greedygiri karoge to maut tumhe khud yaha bulayegi........

unhe pata chal gaya ki ye itna asan nhi hoga lekin jab wo kamre me aaye to veer pari se bato me laga tha jo usse NIGHTWALKER ke murder krne ke sequence smjha rahi thi wahi Chester dhundne nikal chuka tha god bars ko lekin usse mila NIGHTWALKER hasiya liye hue lekin usse still koi dar n laga aur wo khuleyaam bhagta hua kamre me aa chupa lekin wo yaha n ruka ussne chidhayya NIGHTWALKER ko jo usse bilkul acha n llaga hoga bilkul n iske liye wo natija bhugatna Hoga hi

Thodi der baad jab sab ikatha hua to unhe Chester kahi nhi dikha to unhone uske kamre ke door knock kiye lekin ussne nhi khola na hi awazz di it's means mughe kaise pata hoga but I guess that ki wo tapk gaya lekin awazze to n aayi ab bologe ki ander se soundproof hoga to may be lekin bahar ki awazze to,
Khair choro aage dekh lenge update me matlab padh lenge

Bhaya kuch chutt gaya hoga mere mind se to uspe jyada mind mt Krna bhaya kyunki ye review bohot jaldi likha hai maine biswas n kroge 10 minute pe pel daala ye review bhaya to kuch chutte to maaf krdena


Take care........

Excellent update bhai

Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Update padhke mujhe ek webseries yad aa gayi jiska nam yad nahi aa raha.
Game wali thi.

Werewolf bhai axhi bhali story ko horror main change krdia yaara otherwise awesome n amazing as always waiting for next

No humanoid, half human half machine that's what I mean.

Behad hi jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob fantastic.
Waiting for next update.....

Superb update

भाऊ fabulous mind blowing super super super duper update
Bhau mere pass likhne keliye word hi nhi ithna Acha tha update

Bhai yar par is Divya ki GA.... Marna yar bohot shani samjli ti हे khud Ko

100wala update maza aagya bhai

Veer ko discharge mil gya ghar akar Kuch din aram bhi kr liya zakhm bhi jldi bhar rha hai Reaper bone ki wajah se..Usse milne Bari-2 sbhi aye sonia bhi aai. OR suhana to apne chir -prichit andaaz me ayi. Kya hi kehne suhana ke. Pari or veer ke Nok jhok hmesha ke trh mst wala tha. Veer aur strong hona chahta hai qki usey lgta Hai itne Se Power se slogan jeso se ladaa nahi ja skta lekin pari ne acha suggestion diya hai ke ground level pe strong hona hoga physically strong hone ke sath or uske liye apna businesses start krna Best hoga lekin paise Kahan se ayenge. Sonia se woh lena nahi chahta qki Veer ko lgta hai jb uske apne uske nahi hue toh sonia kese agr degi bhi to usko lgega wapas dega bhi ya nahi veer ka sochna sahi hai kehte hai doodh ka jala chhanchh bhi phunk ke peeta hai. Rhi baat kaera ki toh veer ke dil me uske liye sympathy hai jo usse help lene se khud ko rok raha hai. Mujhe lgta hai suhana uski help kr skti hai bss bolne ki deri Hai.
Uske baad veer gya apne ghar jahan se uske Pariwar walo ne zaleel krke bhgaya tha. Ghar me enter krte hi shweta se samna hua veer se uske hi ghar me usse puchti Hai kaise ana hua yahan kaise.. hahaha iss shweta ke sath -2 iski beti ka woh ajaam hoga jisse iski rooh kaamp jayegi. Dada ji khush hue veer ko dekh kr kavya or arohi bhi khush hai. Bss 2-3 magaemachho ko chhod ke pranjal ko arohi nahi chhodne wali aisa mujhe lag rha hai. Ek baat or bhai apse puchhna tha jesa ki apne kaha ki ragini ka matter thoda alag hai chalo ragini ka smjh gya ki vivek ki wajah se khush nhi hogi veer ke sath uska shayad love sab ka scene ho skta hai. Toh Kya ghar ke baki members ko bhi maafi mil jayegi agey chal kr? khas kr baap ko maafi milegi? Qki mujhe lgta hai dusre apke sath bura krte hai to utna feel nhi hota feel tb hota hai jb koi apka Apna bura krta hai jese ke veer ke baap ne kiya veer ke sath ghar se nikala accident hone pe dekhne tk nhi gya zinda hai ya mar gya. Main sbko maaf kr skta hu ek pal ke liye lekin baap ko to kataai na kru. Baki agey pta chal hi jayega

Bht umda update hay full of action. Seems like NightWalker is a cop too may be an insider who has such influence k apnay Baray main koe info b kisi k pass nahi rehnay deta and that's how he become mythical. Someone that can pull up something like that without any interference from authorities or isi liay abhibtak usay koe b pakr nahi paya.

Full of excitement and thanks for a long update

Super awsm update brother to gud.
really luvd ur story
Eagerly waiting for next update plz do cont asap Takecare

Good update sirji

fantastic update

Superb update
Congratulations for completing 100 updates

भाई यह पार्ट जल्द खत्म करें । मैं ऐसा नही बोल रहा हु कि कहानी अच्छी नही है बस जबसे वीर अमेरिका में जाकर जासूसी कर रहा है उसका कोई भी मतलब कहानी में जोड़ने को समझ में नही आ रहा है बाकी कहानी आपकी है इसलिए अगर बुरा लगा हो तो माफ़ कर देना

Super update bro

Superb update

Suhana is a queen!

The face-off between Veer & The Nightwalker has started! The previous update ended with a loud scream and now we know that Emma was behind it... The first prey of The Nightwalker was Jacob... Ab kaafi had tak saaf ho chuka hai ki laalach hi ek aisa kaaran hai jo is House Of Killers mein vyakti ko mrityu tak le jaata hai... Jacob, Ronnie or even Chester, teenon hi isi laalach ke chakkar mein pade aur nateejtan, apne praan teenon ko hi ganwane pade, though Chester's death hasn't been confirmed yet, But I'm sure that he's no more between the others...

Jacob ne wahi soch dikhayi jo aksar mrityu ka kaaran banti hai... Not only in this story or House Of Killers, but in real life too, greed always pays off... Jacob ko yahi soch thi ki wo baaki sabse pehle bars dhoond lega aur Mansion se nikal jaayega, but wahi hua jiski apeksha thi... He died, and died a very horrifying death! Par Jacob ki maut se ek baat saaf ho gayi thi ki Veer ke liye aasan nahin hone waala is mansion se zinda baahar nikalna, that too with Zoey ...

After that Jacob incident I thought ki baaki sab ko ek achha sabak milega ki unhe rules ke mutaabik hi bars ko dhoondna hai, anyatha badle mein unhe apni jaan ganwani hi padegi... But still, as they say, the world is filled with morons... Ronnie ne bhi wahi kiya jo Jacob ne kiya tha, bas ek difference tha ki Ronnie ka sach mein bohot bura kata men! Sewage Area mein maujood ek tunnel mein wo chest maujood thi, jiske andar wo bars Ronnie ko praapt huyi... Yadi wo asli hoti to Ronnie ke liye shayad bura bhi lagta but they were fake.. Poor Guy!

Khair, Ronnie ka bhi wahi anjaam hua jo Jacob ka hua tha, but even after that another chutiya came up with his chutiyatic brain, namely Chester... Other two were just trying to get the gold bars before others but this clown challenged The Nightwalker... Vinaash Kaale Vipreet Buddhi! Chester ne apne room ko lock to kar liya tha par ab dekhna ye hai ki kya wo darwaza use bacha paane mein saksham tha bhi ya nahin... I don't think ki wo zinda hoga, yadi hua bhi to agle update mein mar hi jaayega, waise bhi is jaise praani kewal dharti par bojh maatra hain...

Now, alongside Veer, Mike, Tommy, Emma & Zoey are left alive, inmein se bhi ek aadha aur marega abhi aisa mujhe lagta hai... Maybe Mike... Ab Veer ko simultaneously kuchh kaam karne padenge, firstly he has to ensure the safety of Zoey & Emma, I think ki ye donon Nightwalker ki prime targets hongi... Reason is ki jab Veer, Ronnie ki maut ke baad sewage area mein pahuncha, tab use chhodkar Nightwalker Emma aur Zoey ko maarne nikla tha... I guess, he kills people according to who comes in his way first, aur Emma aur Zoey uske changul se bach chuki hain, aise mein shayad ye donon uske target par hon...

Emma... Kuchh hadh tak uska character samajh aa chuka hai... She's greedy for sure but at the same time she's pigeon hearted too... Pehle Jacob aur uske baad Ronnie ki maut ke baad uske dil – o – dimaag par beshak sabse gehra asar pada hoga... Especially, jab Jacob ka sar roll hokar uske pairon mein aa pahuncha tha... But is sabke dauraan Veer ke saath bhi Emma ki ek bonding banti huyi dikhayi pad rahi hai... No doubt ki Veer ne Zoey ko prathmikta di thi jab pratham baar donon ladkiyan uske saamne aayin, but somehow I feel ki yadi ye donon ladkiyan yahaan se zinda baahar nikli to Emma might play a vital role in future... Plus, Veer's gestures, firstly he stood up for Emma when Ronnie doubted her, afterwards that sewage area scene where he protected Emma and Zoey both, and how can we forget that he comforted her nicely too... Undoubtedly, Emma par ek gehra asar hone waala hai in sabka!

Zoey... The way she was looking at Veer while he was holding Emma, says a lot... I think ki Zoey jald hi Veer ki taraf attract ho jaayegi, ya kahun ki shayad already ho chuki hai... That too, a really strong attraction... Sarvpratham, pehla hi scene hua tha jo donon ke madhya, the way both of them looked at each other, after that Zoey chose to stay with Veer & Mike, in place of the others, Veer's caring behaviour not only towards Zoey but towards Emma too, and at the end, saving her in the sewage area... When she hugged Veer, it was enough to show the flow of emotions inside her... Halaanki, abhi jis situation mein fanse huye hain ye sab, usmein kuchh bhi future relationships athva feelings ke baare mein predict karna sahi nahi hai, because in such horrifying situation, where life's at stake, the feelings become more strong than they're in reality... Khair, ab dekhna ye hai ki Veer kitnon ko yahaan se zinda nikaal paayega, nikaal bhi paayega ya nahin...

Jo baat cheet sabke beech huyi thi, about how they all reached the Mansion... Emma ne kis wajah se wahaan aane ke saadhan ke baare mein disclose nahin kiya, ye bhi ek sawaal hai... I guess, something illegal would've been involved..? Plus, the boats getting disappeared raises sone questions too... Kya iski wajah ye hai ki The Nightwalker nahin chahta ki koyi us Island se zinda baahar nikal paaye ya kuchh aur...

Nightwalker ke baare mein abhi koyi bhi prediction kar paana kathin hai... Pari aur Veer jin baaton par charcha kar rahe the yadi unpar nazar daali jaaye to...

Room numbers ka koyi connection hona killings mein abhi ke liye sambhav nahin lagta... But, the assumption of Pari regarding The Nightwalker attacking people in the group of two... Ye shayad sahi nahin hai... Because, Chester ke pichhe jab bhaaga tha wo, tab Chester akela hi tha... Room nos. bhi kisi order mein nahin dikhayi de rahen hain... Let's see next update mein iske baare mein aur kya jaan ne ko milta hai...

Between what Pari said about those paintings, I can think of only one possibility... Yadi wo paintings kewal passport size photograph ke samaan hain, means only face & no body, then I'm sure ki wo unhi logon ki paintings hongi jo yahaan aakar tapak gaye... After getting their heads slashed, obviously they won't have been having a smile on their faces, so... Baali yadi koyi aur baat hai to wo definitely interesting rahega... Beharhal, ye Gold Bars mansion mein hain bhi ya nas chutiya kaata jaa raha hai, aur yadi hain bhi to jaane kitne aur traps ho sakte hain, jaise Ronnie ke liye tha...

Idhar Suhana aur Divya ko baat cheet se hi is update ki shuruaat huyi thi... I still believe ki Nik ka definitely koyi na koyi connection zaroor hai is saare prakran se, I mean he's the black sheep... Aur yadi aisa hota hai to definitely Veer ke harem mein ek mahila ki entry already pakki ho gayi hai... Nik aur Divya ho yaan fir Suhana aur Gaurav, donon couples hi mismatched hain... Donon saheliyan bhi bhali – bhaanti parichit hain ek – doosre ki married life mein chal rahe tanaav se... Donon hi kahin na kahin apne jeevan saathi ke roop mein ek aise insan ko nahi paa saki jo unke kaabil ho... But I'm happy ki wo donon us track par nahin gayi jispar Niharika chal di thi (yeah, I know ki in donon ka past Niharika jaisa nahi hai, par fir bhi pati to similar hi hain )...

Ab ek baat spasht ho chuki hai ki Suhana cares for Veer, she cares a lot for him! Saath hi use ye realise bhi ho chuka hai ki jin favours ke kaaran Veer ko wo apne saath Vegas laa paayi asal mein unka existence hi fake hai... Favour to Veer ne uspar kiya tha by eliminating Aatish, otherwise he might have been seriously harmful for Sonia... I guess, ek aur flashback line mein jud gaya hai, i.e., the marriage of Gaurav & Suhana!

The update majorly revolved around the build-up of Veer vs The Nightwalker... Donon ka ek baar aamna – saamna zaroor hua par abhi ek final aur shayad kahani ki ab tak ki sabse behatreen fight baaki hai... Meanwhile, The Nightwalker now, would be aware of the capabilities of Veer! How he saved both the girls, a criminal like Nightwalker would've understood that Veer's different from others! On the other hand, Veer also knows that his enemy is swift but what's more haunting is that he's brutal & emotionless... Sone real good bloodshed is coming soon!

Another beautiful one Men! Loved the conversation between Suhana & Divya, these small incidents which strike the humour part are real important in the story and we've seen you doing that very well, many times... On the other hand, the way you're describing the Mansion part, is insane! The Jalsa Part (Aatish & Golu), then the chase for Slogan and now this Mansion, loved the way you've raised the bar of the negative prospects wrt, Veer's capabilities... Btw. The couple of emotional scenes, that breakdown of Emma, they were great too!

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Dono bachpan ki dost k beech achchi khasi bahes huwi veer ko leker Suhana n Divya ko uske pati ko leker achcha sunaya
Jacob or Ronnie mare gaye apni hoshyari k chalte Veer n almost Night Walker dher dabocha tha lekin bujdil ki tarah bhaag nikla dekhte h aage kia hota h
Chester awaz dene per kuch bol raha kamre ander se tow kia uske saath bhi ho gaya lekin kamre k ander kaise
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h
Behad shaandaar lajawab update bhai

for completing 100 updates of the wonderful story

awesome fantastic update

congratulations to 100 update

Marvelous

100 updates complete krne k liye bahut bahut badhayiya..... Jordaar update maza aa gya pdh kr......

Waiting for next update

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting for Next

NIGHTWALKER HUNT ALL HIS PRAY OR VEER HUNT NIGHTWALKER Q IS REMAIN OR LUGTA HAY SUNALI ALSO LOVE VEER

It's simply and Unsimply dramatically horrifying thrill suspense even much more represent in this whole update it just started in last update the suspense thriller so now when 2 bloody rascals have gone who just gone for treasure and 1 idiot is in suspense now it will be fun seeing that the next idiot is alive or get chop chop even in Bedroom and will next encounter of veer and Nightwalker will be final encounter of Nightwalker for life and how veer will subdue this issue and how many he can save along with him

Waiting for next update bro

Intazar rahenga

Congratulations for the big 100 update.

मित्र, पता नहीं क्या लिखूँ और वो भी कैसे? आप इतना डरावना अनुच्छेद देंगे वो भी रात मे देड़ बजे, क्या खुद आपको डर नहीं लगता है क्या? आप जैसे दिखाये की उस लड़की(नाम याद नहीं) के पैर मे उस अंग्रेज़ का काटा हुआ सर। पता नहीं वो लड़की भागी कैसे, उसके जगह पर मेरे जैसे कोई होता तो सीधा वही पर "धड़ाम" हो जाता। इस दल मे दो जन है जो थोड़ा नहीं बहुत ज्यादा लालची किस्म के, एक वो चेस्टर और दूसरा जो मर गया। मैं बहुत कोशिश किया की पता लगाने के लिए की कौन हो सकता है वो nightwalker लेकिन बार बार फ़ेल हो जाता हूँ। कभी लगता है की वो चेस्टर तो नहीं है कभी लगता है वो लड़की जोए तो नहीं? चलिये, जितना जल्दी यह प्रकरण समाप्त हो जाए उतना अच्छा होगा। एक अच्छा जानकारी हासिल हुआ सुहाना के बिषय मे। यह सुहानाजी का दो भाव के बारे मे तो जानकारी था ही लेकिन अभी तक कभी वीर के बारे मे उसकी असली मनोदशा सामने बाहर नहीं आया था। यह पहली बार उसकी असली बात वीर को लेके सामने आया, यह कम प्राप्ति नहीं हम पाठक के लिए। आप लेकिन इशारों इशारों मे बहुत कुछ बोल गए उस सुहाना के पति गौरब के बारे मे लेकिन शायद मैं ही नहीं पकड़ पा रहें है। देखते है क्या होता है। असल मे हम ठहरे भारतबासी जिसको भारत से बाहर ज्यादा दिन मन नहीं लगता है(एकबार 10 दिन का जात्रा के अंत होते होते ऐसा ऊब गए थे की और कभी जाने का सोचा ही नहीं)। पता नहीं यह सुहाना और वीर को कैसे महसूस हो रहा होगा मुंबई से दूर जाके। यह arc मे अभी तक तीन जन का समाप्ती हो गया और दो तीन जन को जाना पड़ सकता है ( वो nightwalker को लेके)। अभी उत्सुक है उस nightwalker के संग वीर का आमना सामना लड़ाई का परिस्थिति देखने के लिए। आप इतना अच्छा से मेगा अनुच्छेद देते है की लगता है हम खुद उस जगह पर खड़े है। शायद मैं कुछ ज्यादा ही बोल दिये, इसलिए बुरा नहीं मानिएगा मित्र। अगला अनुच्छेद जल्दी दे दीजिएगा मित्र। धन्यबाद।

Me to Werewolf

Bhai update kb tk aayega..

Jab hum puri mehnat karke ek uodate taiyaar karte hai karte hai feedbaxk man mutabik nahi aate

सौ अपडेट्स की खुशी में आपको बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद भाई । क्या ही अपडेट लिखा आपने सौवां अपडेट ! इसे लिखने में तीन चार दिनों का समय जरूर लगा होगा । काफी मेहनत की होगी आपने । आप के इस मेहनत और जज्बे को भी सलाम ।

बहुत बढ़िया लगता है आप के स्टोरी पर मौजूद रीडर्स को देखकर । करीब पौने दो सौ लोगों का रियेक्सन । वाह ! यहां तो रिकॉर्ड की झड़ी सी लगा दी है आपने ।
यह एक अच्छे कहानी का सबूत ही तो है ।

मैं रिहाना मैडम की बातों से बिल्कुल एतफाक रखता हूं ।‌‌‌‌ ऐसा लग रहा था जैसे हम कोई कहानी नहीं बल्कि मूवी देख रहे थे । मेंशन की एक एक एक्टिविटी हमारे आंखों के सामने प्रत्यक्ष दृष्टिगोचर हो रही थी ।

एक डर एवं उत्सुकता का माहौल बना हुआ था कि अब क्या होगा ! क्या जैकब बचेगा या नाइट वाकर के हाथों कत्ल कर दिया जाएगा ! क्या एम्मा खुद को बचा पाएगी या उसकी भी कब्र यहीं खुद जायेगी !
वैसा ही हाल जोए और टाॅमी के साथ भी हुआ ।
पुरा वाक्या सच में काफी सनसनीखेज रहा । मजा आ गया पढ़कर । आउटस्टैंडिंग वर्क्स ब्रदर ।

मेंशन में मौजूद आठ लोगों में शायद तीन का पता कट चुका है । मुझे नहीं लगता चेस्टर भी अब जिंदा बचा होगा । और अगर बच भी गया हो तो शायद कुछ लम्हों के लिए । उसकी आत्मा भी चंद पलों के लिए उसके शरीर में है ।

शायद तीन घंटे का वक्त और बचा है । इस बीच नाइट वाकर का कल्याण नहीं हुआ तो वो श्योर बाकी बचे सभी लोगों का कल्याण कर देगा ।
दोनों युवतियों की उम्र अभी तक तो मुझे लम्बी ही नजर आ रही है । वो इसलिए कि दोनों एक बार जीवन दान पा चुकी हैं । लेकिन दुर्भाग्य का क्या भरोसा ! वो तब तक आप का दरवाजा खटखटाता रहता है जब तक आप दरवाजा खोल न दें ! मैं प्रार्थना करता हूं कि वो लड़कियां कम से कम तीन घंटे तक दरवाजा खोले ही न ।

सभी रीडर्स की नजरें वीर पर टिकी हुई है । वही है जो यहां तरन तारन की भुमिका निभा सकता है ।

सुहाना का वीर के लिए फिक्रमंद होना मुझे पसंद आया । आखिर वो उसके ही भरोसे तो अपने घर परिवार से दूर अमेरिका आया था । दिव्या के साथ बिल्कुल ही उचित बर्ताव किया ।

एक अद्भुत अपडेट के लिए फिर से शुक्रिया ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग एंड ब्रिलिएंट अपडेट।
एंड " जगमग जगमग " भी ।

awesome updates
waiting next.......

Expecting all viewers to be happy?

People never understand your situation and your problems

Bhai itne stories toh likhe hai ek abhi running hai aur kya chahiye you are already writer

Werewolf bro mujhe first time avi bhai ki story pada tab laga Aisa hota hai story writing than mujhe kismat se xforum or usme apki story mili jisse reader ko quality content ka pata chala nahi to yaha or baki site me bas Bina sir pair k kahani likha jata hai waise bahut kam hai aise writers hats of man apki story padke mujhe wohi feeling jab aap manga \novel padhe thanks man aise story likhne k liye log bhul hi gye the quality content kise kahte hai keep it up man

Satya vachan kaha writer actualy apni khud ki lekhni ki kafi ya bahut ya sari chije anubhav ya mahus karna chahta h par uski life start se he alag rah jati h aur wo usi mai struggle karta huva life ko ek disha deta h...par bahut si aisi khawishe hoti h jo wo nahi kar pata h is struggle bhari jindgi mai aur wo phir unhi kalpanao ya ichao ko apni lekhani mai dikhata h jo kisi ko pasand ati h toh kisi ko boring lagti h but writer jarur sukun mahsus karta h......apne dil mai chupi huvi bhavnao ko abhiwayakt karke

Bhai main bhi only nyc ya good ya beautiful update heen aisa har baar reply karta huun kyunki main aap jaisa soch nahin sakta hum sabme fark hain main aapko aapke update pe koi galti ya kuch nikal nahin sakta kyunki hum uske kabil nahin hain jo aapke like mein galti nikal den ...

Waiting for next update bro

Many Many congratulations for 100 update,wants 1000 update bhai.

Bhai update kab de rahe ho

Are guru update kab d rhe ho

Wating new update

Sir ji mai aapki saari updates ke average words ki baat kar raha thaa ki woh 4k plus hotey hai.

Waiting for next update

Update

for for 1800 pages

congratulations for 1800 pages

Congrats for 1800 pages

Congratulations bro 1800 pages

Update kab aye ga

Sabhi update ek sath padhe he.
Aur ye house of killer wala arc bahut suspense liye betha he.
Ragini ko ab bahut yaad aa rahi he veer ki jab Jane se pehle itna close hue the dono. Suman ko bhi pata he ragini ke dil ka haal sath me wo shweta ki halat bhi janti he. Juhi aur Nidhi ka wo scene bahut badhiya likha, esa aage bhi hoga par tab juhi kuch aur bolegi veer ko aur Nidhi bhi haq se sawal karegi ki kab aaoge wapis ?? Yaha maa beti bete ko chhod ke bahar ghum rahe ho ??
Nik sahi me chutiya he jese shuhana ne kaha. Khud risk lena nahi aur profit pura lena he. Divya bhi apne pati ki side le rahi he jab ki veer ko bhejna Nik ki galti hi thi. Kyuki veer uske liye kaam nahi karta, na veer se uska koi lena dena he. Iss Nik ko uski aukaat dekha ne ke baad jana he Veer ko.
Conner ne jo kaha tha usme "Dark web" shabd use hua he. Aur jese usne kaha he usse saaf pata chalta he ki wo "RED ROOM" ki baat kar raha tha. Jaha insaan ko torture kiya jata he client ke wish ke according. Aur esi servies Dark Web ke alawa kahi aur nahi mil sakti.
Mike aur Veer yaha mansion me aa chuke he aur hatya ka silsila bhi shuru ho chuka he. Ab Nightwalker kon he, kyu kar raha he wo sab aage aayega hi. Par Dekhna ye he ki Veer kese ye solve karta he.
Emma dari hui he aur Veer ke sath hi reh rahi he aur ye sab zoey ki aankhe dekh rahi he. Emma ki har harqat wo dekh rahi he par kuch keh nahi sakti jab wo khud Veer se pehli baar mil rahi he, to kese haq jata de veer pe.
Nightwalker ke sath ek face off bhi ho chuka he jisme Veer ne dono ladkiyo ki jaan bachai he aur ab wo dono room me hi bandh rehna chahti he, golden bars ki lalach chhod ke.
Ab chester room ke bahar aata he ya nahi ?? Nahi aata to room ke andar bhi koi safe nahi he.
Aur room ke numbers, paintings, Door lock inn sab ke piche jarur koi na koi baat hogi hi. Emma ko batana hi hoga ki wo yaha kese pahuchi ??
Aur ye zoey ke sath ho sake to Veer ko aaage badhna chahiye. Harem banana he apna to kuch ladkiya to rakhni hi padegi Mumbai me Kami nahi he uske paas aur yaha bhi zoey ho sakti he.
Waiting for next update Werewolf bhai.

Waiting for next update bhai

And congratulations for 1800 pages..

for 1800 pages.

Waiting for update 101.

Congratulations for completing 1800 pages

100 update mai 1800 page Kiya baat hai

Congratulations bhai1800 pages ka






Bhai aaj ki party mera tar sa
Kuch matha ha jay

Enjoy party

For completed 1.8k pages on your story thread...

Congratulations for 1800 pages

Waiting

Congratulations for 1800 pages

Superb updates
Waiting for next update

Tujhe chahte hain be-intiha,
Par chahna nahi aata..
Ye kaisi mohobbat hai,
Ki hume kehna nahi aata. .
Zindagi main aa jao,
hamari zindagi ban kar,
tere bin humain yun
zinda rehna nahi aata.




Kaisa lga guys pahli bar likhi h

अगले एपिसोड की बेसब्री से प्रतीक्षा में

Nice update Bhai

Congratulations for completing 1800 pages

Congratulations for 1800 pages

LoL aisy kaisy beech Mai chor dain main tu pkg bhi sirf isi story k liy lagwata hu .

Congratulations for 800

nahi nahi bhai ap ye zulam mat kri please hum update kay bhut basabri sey intazar hai

Bhai galti kiska he Saja bhi usko hi dena he sabko nahi plz we are waiting for update so eagerly plz understand

Update 101 has been posted.

 

[dilbansal]

bhai faaaaaadddduuuu update par suspense clear karna chahiye tha

 

[Super nova]

Great update

 

[Devil hunter123]

Kaarya pragati par hai. Kuch 500 words aur bache hai.

Intzar rahega update

Update - 101 ~ Exposed (1)​

Ab tak...

Mike : Where is he?

Tommy : He told me he will look outside.

Mike : Let's go and check his room!

Woh sabhi Chester ke room me pohuche toh Chester ka room band tha. Matlab koi andar tha. Chester hi toh tha.

Unhone darwaaza peeta aur awaaz lagaayi.

Par...

Andar se koi awaaz na aayi!!!!

Ab aage...

"Cheeessssstttteeerrrrrrrr!!!!!!"

"Open the goddam door!!!!"

*Baaammmmm* *Baaammmmmm*

Darwaaze ko Veer, Mike aur Tommy baahar se peet rahe the. Par andar se abhi bhi koi jawaab nahi aaya.

"Shiiiittttt!!!"

Woh teeno door pe haath maarte rahe. Lekin koi halchal hone ki awaaz bhi nahi sunaayi dii unhe bheetar se.

Mike (bauhe sikodte hue) : Something is wrong.

Tommy : If the door is locked from the inside. Then it's obvious someone is inside. And who else could it be other than Chester?

Veer : Let's break it!

Tommy : Wh-Whaaaattttt??? Are you kidding me?

Veer : No! I'm not! Just help me out.

Bas yahi ek upaay bacha tha unke paas. Andar koi na koi toh maujood tha. Warna darwaza apne aap kese band ho sakta tha? Toh upaay yahi tha ki darwaaze ko hi tod diya jaaye.

Tommy ne Veer ko hairat-angez me dekha. Jese woh kisi bewakoof ko dekh raha tha. Itna bhaari door, bhala dhakka dene se kese toot sakta tha?

Mike : We don't have any other option. We can try at least. It's 3:30 already. Nightwalker's time has started. We should hurry up.

Wo ye nahi jaante the ki Veer ke paas kya tha. Isliye unhe ye darwaaza todna asambhav sa lag raha tha. Unhe nahi pata tha ki Veer ke akele me kitne logo ka bal tha.

Par wo sare aam akele darwaaza nahi tod sakta tha. Aisa karne se uss par kayi sawaal khade ho jaate. Ek aadh lene ki zaroorat thi usse. Aur isliye, Veer ne unn dono ko bhi dhakka dene kaha.

Mike ko lagega ki Veer aur Tommy ne zorr se dhakka diya hai. Tommy ko lagega ki Veer aur Mike ne zorr se dhakka diya hai. Par sach toh yahi hai ki...

Veer ke akele ke hi vaar se darwaaza khulna tha. Unki madad lena toh keval apni kaabiliyat ko chhupaane ka ek zariya tha.

Woh sabhi jese hi dhakka dene ke liye taiyaar hue,

*Ding*

[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned ON]

Apni aankho ki laali chhupaane ke liye Veer ne apni palke band kar lii.

Uske sang Mike, Tommy peeche run leke daude aur teeno ne saath milkar zorr se darwaaze par dhakka maara.

*Baaaaaammmmmmmmmmmm*

Kuch toh hua. Darwaaze ka ek hinge dheela pad gaya.

*Baaaaaaaaaammmmmmmmmm*

Iss baar darwaaze ka pehla hinge poori tarah se nikal gaya.

Aur,

*Baaaaaaammmmmmmmmmmmm*

*Baaaaaaaammmmmmmmmmmm*

4-5 aur dhakko me poora ka poora darwaaza hi hinge se ukhad gaya. All thanks to Beowulf's Blessings and Veer's stats.

*Dhadaaammmmmm*

Teeno hi kamre ke andar dhakka dene ke kaaran floor par gir pade. Unn sabki nazre sabse pehle bed par gayi.

Tommy : Ugghh!!! What the fuck? This motherfucker is sleeping here???

Tommy gusse me gurraaya. Itni chinta liye woh sabhi paagalo ki tarah usse pukaar rahe the aur woh tha ki yaha chenn se so raha tha? Himmat kese hui uski?

Chester araam se bed par dala hua tha. Ek kambal odhe. Baahar se uska sarr, perr aur haath hi dikhaayi pad rahe the kambal ke.

Tabhi Mike ki bauhe kass uthi, maathe par silvatein chha gayi. Shayad kuch...

Mike : I smell something...!?

Par iss se pehle ki woh apni baat poori rakh paata, Tommy gusse me uth ke apne dost ke upar se kambal hata diya,

Tommy : You fucker, get up this insta-- huhh???

*Flllllaaaaaaaapppppppp*

Kambal jese hi hata...

Saamne ka manzar dekh teeno ke badan thande pad gaye. Shareer ke raungte khade ho gaye. Dil ki dhadkan aisa laga jese pal bhar ke liye wahi ruk gayi. Ghutno me kamzori aa gayi,

Tommy ke andar jese aatma ne shareer ka tyaag kar diya. Woh toh dekhte hi bechaara ussi pal ladkhada ke behosh ho gaya. Wo peeche ludka,

Mike : Shiiitttt!!!

Aur idhar, Mike ne fauran aage badh usse apne haatho se pakad sambhaala. Aur usse side me deewaar se tikaaya. Usne sarr utha ke Veer ko dekha,

Mike : Veer! We must- huhhh???

Par jab usne Veer ko dekha toh bhaanpa ki Veer ko usne aise pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha. Veer khauf ke maare saamne nazre gadaaye hue tha. Uski aankho me ek chamak nami ke kaaran janm le chuki thi.

Achanak hi usse akbakayi aayi. Muh par ek haath rakh woh turant hi peeche muda aur deewaar par apna dusra haath tikaaye lambi lambi saansein lene laga.

*Badump* *Badump* *Badump*

Dil itni zorr se dhadak raha tha ki Veer ko khud dhadkano ki awaaz sunaayi de rahi thi.

Mike : V-Veeeerrr???

Veer : It's... It's okay!!! I'm fine! J-Just give me a second.

Mike : Alright! But make it quick. Only you and I can do this. Together!

Veer : Y-Yeaahhh!

[Maaaasttttteerrrrr~]

Aisa kese ho sakta tha ki Veer pareshani me ho aur Pari ko chinta na hoye? Beshaq! Veer ke iss ravaiyye par turant hi Pari uske mann me usse pukaarne lagi.

'It's okay Pari!!!'

[It's not... ( ⚈̥̥̥̥̥́⌢⚈̥̥̥̥̥̀)]

Pari jaanti thi Veer kin halaato se guzar raha tha. Kyuki bed par...

Bed par Chester laita toh hua tha. Par...

Uska shareer...

Uska shareer do hisso me bata hua tha. Poori ki poori tarah se kata hua tha. Pait se uski atadiya baahar ko nikli hui thi aur poora bed neeche lahu luhaan ho chuka tha. Andhruni maas aur ango ko aankho ke saamne dekh acche se acche insaan ko ulti aa jaaye aur uske perr ladkhada jaaye. Koi hairat ki baat nahi thi.

*Sccchllliiiiinnnnggggggg*

*Kllliiiiinnnngggggggg*

Veer ko Nightwalker ki woh haath me pakdi hasiya yaad aayi. Na jaane kese kaat ke alag kiya hoga usne Chester ko. Aari se lakdi ki tarah usne Chester ko kaata hoga. Soch ke hi Veer ke badan ke raungte khade ho gaye.

Par uss se bhi badi baat thi. Woh kuch aur thi. Veer ko woh manzar yaad aa gaya. Woh bhi toh kuch issi prakaar maara gaya tha na?

Golu!!!! Uski maut bhi behad dardnaak thi.

Aur ab Chester. Ye pehli baar tha jo Veer Nightwalker ke dwara bichhayi gayi laasho ko apni aankho ke saamne dekh raha tha. Koi insaan itni darindagi se kese maar sakta tha kisi ko? Veer ko jo baat sabse zyada darra rahi thi woh ye thi ki,

Nightwalker ne ek shan bhi nahi socha kisi ke badan ko do tukdo me kaatne se pehle. Seedha kaat daala. Jese insaan nahi, koi sabzi ho.

It was an absolute brutality.

Mike : Veeerrrr?

Mike ki punaah awaaz se wo apne hosh me aaya.

[Maaaasttteeerrrr~ don't worry. I'm with you!]

Pari ki baat sunn, aur apni himmat waapas baandh woh palta, Mike ko dekh usne haami bhari. Aur unn dono ne Tommy ko thaama. Veer aur Mike usse apne room ki orr le gaye. Chester ka room unhone wese hi chorr diya. Woh kuch bhi nahi kar sakte the iss maamle me.

Idhar Zoey aur Emma ne room khola aur Tommy ko behosh dekh woh dono tension me aa gayi. Jab Chester ki maut ki khabar unhe mili toh Emma toh poori tarah se ro padi.

Ek darr baith gaya usme. Ki jese ab woh nahi bachegi. Agla shikaar jese ab wahi hone waali thi.

Woh chillaane lagi, jese tese Veer aur Mike ne usse shaant kiya. Zoey khud andar tak hili hui thi. Par antatah woh chup thi.

Aur Mike gusse me. Ek detective tha woh. Chester ke room me ghuste hi jo dhaas usne hawa me soonghi...

Loha!!! Yaani iron. Jo hamaare khoon me maujood hota hai. Itne saal kaam karne ke baad Mike ko kaafi tajurba ho chuka tha. Khoon ki gandh vatavaran me jo faili hui thi, usne ek baar me pakad lii thi. Yaha tak ki Veer ko bhi pehle hi pata lag chuka tha.

Jese hi usne Beowulf activate kiya tha. Andar se khoon ki gandh usse pehle hi aa gayi thi.

Par ab jo ho chuka tha usse badla nahi jaa sakta tha. Unke beech se, ek aur shaks maara jaa chuka tha. Yadi aise hi chalta raha toh...

"Damn it! Damn it! Daammnmn ittt!!!"

*Baaaaaaammmmmm*

Mike ne gusse me aake deewaar par zorr se haath maara. Ek detective hoke, uski naak ke neeche se Nightwalker uske bando ko maar raha tha aur woh yaha haath par haath dhare baitha hua tha.

Veer aur woh ek dusre ke bagal se khade hue the uske hi room me. Tommy behosh haalat me bed par wall se tik ke baitha tha. Aur uske hi bagal se Emma aur Zoey jo ek dusre se chipki ek dusre ko sambhaalne ki koshish kar rahi thi. Zoey toh fir bhi theek thi, par Emma ka haal behaal tha.

Mike ne jeb se cigarette nikaali,

*Kliinkkk*

Lighter se cigarette jalaayi aur ek kash lagaaya aur cigarette ka packet Veer ki taraf aage badhaya,

Mike : You smoke?

Veer ne packet ko dekha aur ek cigarette usme se nikaali,

Veer : I can!

Detoxification ON thi. Veer ko koi tension nahi thi.

Lighter se cigarette jalaate hue wo dono khidki ki taraf pohuche, jiske sheeshe par baahar se baarish ki badi badi boonde pad rahi thi. Aur andar se cigarette ka dhua. Saath hi Bijli ki chamak sheeshe se hote hue kamre me aa rahi thi.

Unhone dono ladkiyo ko ye nahi bataya tha ki Chester kis tareeqe se marra tha. Ye maut alag thi. Isme sarr nahi kata tha. Balki poora ka poora pait hi cheer diya tha Nightwalker ne. Aisa rooh jhanjhor kar rakh dene waala kaam kiya tha.

Idhar Veer ne Mike ko bagal se dekha,

Veer : Chester got killed.

Mike (kash lagaate hue) : Yes!

Veer : What now?

Mike : We must find the killer. Before dawn. Otherwise we will all die here.

Veer : Senior Connor mentioned something in his video right? The cameras! We are being recorded.

Mike : Found 4 of them.

Veer : Huhhh??

Veer ne hairat me Mike ko dekha. Stabdh hona swabhavik tha. Connor ne mention kiya tha video me ki yaha par logo ki activities record kari jaati thi. Iska matlab kahi na kahi cameras lage hue the. Aur Mike ne seedhe seedhe hi Veer ko jawab de diya ki usne 4 cameras already dhundh liye the.

Veer : Where?

Mike : Found one on the ground floor, Second in my room, third one in the corridor, and fourth one...

Veer : ???

Mike : ... is right above our head. Between the fan.

Uske shabd sunn Veer ko ek jhatka laga. Ek camera upar pankhe ke beech me laga hua tha. Veer ne khud iss par gaur nahi kiya tha. Woh abhi dekhne hi wala tha upar ki,

Mike : D-Don't!!!! Don't look.

Mike ke kehne par usne sarr jhuka liya.

Veer : But Chester was killed when the room was locked from the inside.

Mike : Yes!

Veer : How is that even possible?

Mike : That's what I'm not getting.

Aisa kese ho sakta tha? Andar aane jaane ka raasta ek tha. Toh jab kamra andar se locked tha toh Chester marra kese bhala? Dono Veer aur Mike ka dimaag ghoom chuka tha.

Mike : Did you notice one more thing?

Veer : That he got killed during the search time?

Mike : Exactly!

Aur Chester ki hatya bhi kayi sawaal khade kar rahi thi. Banda search time me maara gaya. Akhir kaise????

Veer ne ek lambi aah chorri par tabhi uske mastishq se ek jhakjhor kar rakh dene waala vichaar hoke guzra. Jiske chalte uske haath se cigarette phisal kar neeche gir gayi.

Mike : ???

Veer : N-Noooo!

Mike : What?

Veer ne Mike ko dekha,

Veer : The voice!!!! The voice told us that search time will be allotted to us. But... But it never said that Nightwalker won't kill us during those hours.

Mike (jhepte hue) : That's... N-Nooo... But Nightwalker's time is different then how can he...!?

Veer : You forgot one thing!!

Mike : Huhhh?

Veer : It also said... If the Nightwalker saw you roaming, he will kill you.

Toh ye baat thi. Veer ki baat jab Mike ne suni toh woh andar se hil gaya. Veer ne ek raaz se parda utha diya tha.

Uss awaaz ne ye zaroor kaha tha ki search time diya jaega. Par awaaz ne aisa toh kahi nahi bola tha ki uss search ke dauraan Nightwalker kisi ko bhi nahi maarega? Ye toh Veer aur uski team ne apne aap assume kar liya tha ki iss time Nightwalker nahi maarega.

Awaaz ne toh sirf yahi bataya tha ki Nightwalker apne time par ghoomega. Par iska ye matlab nahi tha ki woh search ke time me maarega nahi. Beshaq, woh uss dauraan ghoomega nahi. Par uss dauraan chhipega bhi nahi.

Dusre shabdo me, Nightwalker ne unn sabhi ko chutiya banaaya tha. Apne shabdo ke istemaal se.

"Daaamnnn itttt!!!! This baastaardddd!!!!"

Aur Mike ka gussa aur bekaabu ho gaya. Ye toh laazmi tha.

Iska matlab saaf tha. Chester ne ghoomte waqt Nightwalker ko zaroor dekha hoga. Nateeja? Uski maut!!!

Par sawaal jo unhe sabse zyada pareshan kar raha tha woh tha room ka andar se band hona.

Veer : I'm going out.

Veer ne ek taq jawaab diya,

Mike : "WE" are going out Veer. YOU and ME. BOTH!!!

[Maaasteeerrr ~ Hum Mike ke saath nahi reh sakte. Hume Nightwalker se akele me bhidna hoga. Mission khatam hone ke liye bhi zyada samay nahi bacha hai.]

'I know Pari!!!'

Veer : We will go seperately. We both have our walkie talkie. If something happens, we can just call each other out.

Mike ne kuch shan tak Veer ko dekha aur fir haami bhari. Woh Veer ki baat se sehmat tha. Bhale hi ye tareeqa risky tha par yahi sahi approach thi.

Alag alag hone se Nightwalker ki talaash jaldi hone waali thi, aur Nightwalker akele aadmi ko dekh zaroor khud ko baahar nikaalne wala tha. Yahi sahi tareeqa tha.

Mike, Emma aur Zoey ko jata ke waha se baahar nikla,

Mike : You take left. I'll take the right.

Veer : Alright!

Aur woh daayi corridor ki taraf chal diya.

Idhar Veer ne bhi Emma aur Zoey ko jab jataaya ki woh bhi jaa raha hai toh dono vyaakul ho uthi,

Emma : Nooooooooooooo~ You can't!!! He will kill you. He will...

Zoey : Th-That's right... You shouldn't go out there. It's dangerous. We all can just spend the night here in one room. Then we can leave tomorrow.

Veer : Do you really believe he will let us leave? Just like that?

Veer ke sawaal par Zoey ki bolti band ho gayi. Zoey ka kehna tha ki wo sabhi ek hi room me saari raat ruk jaaye aur subah hote hi woh nikal jaenge. Par... Par kya Nightwalker waqai unhe jaane dene waala tha?

Veer : I'm going.

Emma : Nooooooooooo~

Zoey : S-Stay safe... And...

Veer : ???

Zoey : You will come alive...

Veer (smiles) : I will!

Aur ek akhiri baar unn dono ko peeche mud ke dekh Veer waha se palta, Zoey ne room andar se lock kiya aur Veer corridor me aa gaya.

***

Ab aar ya paar ki ladaayi thi. Aankh micholi, aur lukan chhupaayi ka ye khel boht ho chuka tha. Ab seedha bhidant thi.

Ya toh Veer sahi salaamat nikalne wala tha ya fir Nightwalker.

Veer ke kadam badhne toh left corridor ki orr chahiye the, par wo right corridor me jaane laga,

[Huh? M-Master?? O-Ohhhhhhh!!!! I see~]

Pari bhi pal bhar ke liye confused reh gayi. Par Veer ke mann me usne jab jhaank ke dekha toh wo sab samajh gayi.

Nightwalker Veer se bhid chuka tha. Woh jaan gaya tha ki Veer ko yadi usne firse face kiya toh Veer seedhe ladaayi par utar aaega.

Toh aise me jab 2 insaan, Mike aur Veer akele akele mansion me ghoom rahe ho toh kis par pehle hamla karna theek rahega?

Jawaab saaf tha.

Mike!!!

Aur isliye,

Veer ne apni raftaar badhaayi, tezz kadmo ke saath wo Mike ka peecha karne laga.

Beshaq, uska anumaan ekdum sateek tha.

Mike upar ke floor se chhaan been kar jab basement ki orr badha. Basement me ghuste hi uski bauhe chinta me sikud gayi.

Zameen par pehle ke muqaable paani kuch zyaada hi tha. Mike ke talwe paani me doob chuke the.

Aur Veer theek uske peeche tha.

[Master~ Apne shoes utaar dijiye, paani me chalne se awaaz kam hogi aise me.]

'Alright!'

Shoes ko utaar Veer peeche peeche Mike ke chalta raha aur abhi kuch hi dur tak woh aaya hoga ki...

Saamne basement ke hallway me se andhere me halki roshni aayi, dhuaa uthne laga...

Aur dhue me se...

Ek daraavna mask nikal ke aaya... Fir ek haath dikhaayi diya... Jisme khoon se latpat hasiya thi...

Nightwalker!

Mike : So it's you!!!!

Mike ne apni kamar se ek handgun nikaali aur saamne Nightwalker ki orr aim kii,

Mike : Drop your act now. You have been charged under the violent commitments of brutal murders. Raise your hands, drop your weapon, and hand yourself over.

Ye tactic kaam nahi aane waali thi. Mike bhi ye jaanta tha. Aur wahi hua,

Nightwalker suddenly, bagal ke hallway me ghusa...

Mike : Shiiittttt!

Mike usse pakadne aage dauda,

*Chhappp* *Chhhappp* *Chhhhaapppp*

Paani me uske daudne ki awaaz basement me goonjne lagi,

Peeche se Veer bhi dabe paav liye aage badha.

Par jese hi Mike uss hallway me aaya, usse Nightwalker kahi nazar nahi aaya.

Mike : Fuckkk!!! Where did he go?

Woh gun ko dono haatho se pakad aage badhta raha. Ab neeche paani bhi khatam ho chuka tha. Iss area me sookha tha.

Aur abhi woh dhundh hi raha tha jab,

*Thud*

Achanak hi uske sarr par ek zorr ka phatka aake laga.

Mike ke muh se kuch bhi nahi nikal paaya aur woh behosh hoke wahi gir pada. Uske bagal se, Nightwalker apni hasiya liye khada tha.

Hasiya ko hawa me utha wo Mike ke shareer ko dekhne laga. Pehle kaun sa ang kaata jaaye? Mundi? Ya pait? Ya haath perr? Ya jeebh? Ya fir kaan?

Uska haath zorr se neeche aaya hi tha Mike ki mundi kaatne ke liye ki tabhi,

*Whoooooosssshhhh*

*Cllllllaaaaannnnggggggggg*

Haath par zorr se kuch aake laga aur uske haath se hasiya chhooth ke dur jaa giri.

Fauran hi usne mud ke aag baboola aankho se dekha...

Saamne Veer khada hua tha. Aur ussi ne ek bottle fek ke uske haath se hasiya girayi thi.

Veer bhaaga... Nightwalker ki taraf... Full speed me...

Hawkeye ne apna kaam kar diya tha. Ab baari thi...

*Ding*

[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned ON.]

Veer ko tezzi se apni orr aata dekh Nightwalker dusri disha me bhaaga. Woh waapas se uss area me aa gaye jidhar floor par paani maujood tha.

*Chhappp* *chhapp* *chhappp*

Basement me unke kadmo ki awaaz goonjne lagi.

"I'm gonna catch you bastard!! Iss baar tu kahi nahi bhaag paayega."

Veer gurraaya aur ekdum Nightwalker ke peeche pohuch usne haath aage badha ke pakda hi tha ki,

*Whoooooosssshhhh*

Nightwalker achanak palta, usne apna haath ulta kar Veer ke chehre par chalaaya. Aur idhar reflexes ke chalte Veer ne turant duck kar liya.

*Swoooossssssshhhhhh*

Dono aamne saamne the ab.

Aur bina kahe hi,

*Chhap* *chhhapppp* *chhhappp*

Unn dono ne daud ke ek dusre ki mutthi aapas me kassi, Nightwalker ne laat bhi uthaayi saathi hi, Veer ke pait par maarna chaaha par...

*Deflect*

Veer ne apne haath se uski laat deflect kar dii.

"One inch punch!!!!!"

Aur Veer ki fist Nightwalker ke apne pait par aake padi.

*Baaaaaaaammmmmmmmmm*

Kya hi impact tha. Hawa me uchhalte hue woh peeche ki orr jaa gira,

*Chhhapaaaakkkkkkk*

Paani me uske kapde geele ho chale.

[Nice one Master!!!]

Nightwalker ki aankhein ekdum gusse se laal ho chuki thi. Par eka-ek woh utha, aur wahi rakhe lakdi ke boxes par chadha. Uska haath peeche gaya aur usne kahi se ek wire kheech ke nikaala,

[Maaaasttteerrrr~ N-Noooo!!!! Jump on the box!!!!! Quick!!]

Aur woh wire Nightwalker ne seedha neeche paani se bhare floor par fek diya.

*Zaaapppppp* *zaappppp* *zapppp*

Bijli aur paani ka jab milan hota hai toh kya hota hai ye bataane ki zaroorat nahi thi.

Ek tezz current poore paani se bhare floor me fel gaya. Kya hi shaatir tha saala ye Nightwalker.

Par Pari ne Veer ko pehle hi sachet kar diya tha.

*Thud*

Back flip maar ke Veer khud ek box par chadh chuka tha.

"Youuu fuckkerrr!!!!" Veer zorr se chillaaya aur,

*Whoooooosssshhhh*

Usne Nightwalker ke paas maujood boxes ki orr chhalaang lagaayi.

*Baaammmmm*

Aur shuru ho gayi unki haathapaayi. Ek dusre ke kapde pakad, dono hi ek dusre ko current se bhare paani me fekne ki koshish kar rahe the.

Veer stats ke according zyada strong tha. Aur isliye,

Nightwalker Veer ko dhakel nahi paa raha tha. Veer ne usse dhakka dete hue box ki edge tak kiya aur,

Nightwalker : I WON'T FAIL... NEVER...

Veer : Heh~ So you can talk huh?

Nightwalker ne Veer ko apne sang uske kapde pakad kheecha toh Veer ne ek jhatke apne shareer se woh sweatshirt hi nikaal dii,

Aur...

*Chhhapaaaakkkkkkk*

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrgggghhhhhhhhh"

Poore basement me ek zordaar dard se bhari cheenkh goonj gayi. Nightwalker uss current se fele paani me dhapaak se jaa gira.

Current itna nahi tha ki uski maut ho jaaye par itna zaroor tha ki aadmi behosh ho jaaye.

Current lagne ke kuch hi seconds ke andar Veer ne wire kheech liya. Aur Nightwalker behosh udhar hi paani me dala raha.

[Phew~ We did it Master!]

Veer lambi lambi saasein lete hue khud ko durust karne laga. Uske gaal pe ek cut laga tha jis se halka khoon beh raha tha. Baaki aur koi kharoch nahi aayi thi usse.

Akhir kaar, Hatyaao ke iss khel ko virhaam lag chuka tha.

*Ding*

[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned OFF.]

*Ding*

[Mission : Capture The Nightwalker had been completed.]

[1000 Points have been rewarded.]

[500 Fame points have been rewarded.]

Points kam the. Waqai! Par Veer ka interest abhi kisi aur cheez me hi tha,

'Check!!'

*Ding*

Veer ne Nightwalker ko check kiya. Par kuch khaas na mila usse. Jo jaan'na tha woh toh nahi mila.

Nightwalker ko usne rassi dhundh poori tarah se baandh diya ki woh kahi bhi bhaag na paaye. Mike ko usne apni peeth par uthaaya.

Aur woh chal diya upar ki orr,

Usne ek kamre me Mike ko litaaya. Aur abhi woh Zoey aur Emma ko jataane hi jaa raha tha ki ab sab kuch surakshit hai ki woh Chester ke room ke baahar se punah guzra...

Neeche darwaaza pada hua tha wesi hi haalat me, aur andar Chester ki laash jo dekhi tak nahi jaa sakti thi. Woh sab wese ka wesa hi maujood tha.

'Hmm?'

Veer ne kuch akasmat hi notice kiya,

'Ye... Wait a minute... Pehle toh ye aisa nahi tha? Then why is it...'

Aur fir uski nazar kahi aur gayi...

'Huhhhhh???????'

[Maaasssttterrrrr!!!!!!!!!!]

Uske baad... Veer ke raungte aise khade hue ki woh ladkhada ke wahi zameen par gir pada.

Aise goosebumps toh usse Slogan se ladte time bhi nahi aaye the.

Yaha tak ki Pari ka dimaag bhi kaam karna band kar chuka tha. Woh khud jese sadme me jaa chuki thi. Aur maun reh gayi.

Veer ka toh jese astitv hi hil ke reh gaya tha.

'N-Noooooooo!!!! I-It can't be!!!!! H-How did he...!!????'

Woh dauda, Zoey aur Emma ki orr. Apne kamre ki taraf. Usne unn dono ko baahar nikaal neeche ground floor par jaane ko kaha.

Aur fir woh bhaag ke Zoey ke room me gaya. Jese woh kuch talaash raha ho...

Aur agle hi pal,

*Craaaaaaasssshhhhhhhhhhhh*

[This... Mastterrrrr!!!!!]

Pari jhep gayi.

'So I was right!!!!! That motherfucker...!!!!'

***

After few hours...

Mansion me ho raha ye maut ka nanga naach khatam ho chuka tha. Subaah ho chuki thi, baarish tham chuki thi aur aasmaan se baadal hatt chuke the. Aisa lag raha tha waqai buraai par acchai ki jeet hui thi.

Mike, Veer aur anya ko lene investigation department se copter aaya hua tha.

Woh sabhi usme baith waha se ravaana huye aur waapas pohuche.

Helicopter jese hi land kiya, Veer ko utarte hi dur khadi Suhana aur Divya nazar aayi.

Yaha tak ki Nik bhi khada tha.

Suhana achanak se daud ke bechaini me aage aayi. Pal bhar ke liye Veer bhi hairat me reh gaya.

Lekin achanak hi Suhana ko jese dhyaan aaya aur uske kadam dheere ho gaye. Woh Veer ke paas pohuchi, aur jo haath woh pehle uske gaalo par rakhne waali thi woh haath uske seene par jaake tik gaya.

Suhana : T-Tum theek toh ho na?

Veer (surprised) : Well! Hmm!

Suhana : Th-That's good!!!

Pehli baar Suhana ko iss qadar dekh Veer sach me dang tha. Aisa usne pehle kabhi nahi kiya tha. Fir aaj kyu?

Wahi Divya ko jhatka sabse bada tab laga tha jab usse ye khabar lagi thi ki Veer ne poora ka poora case solve kar daala hai.

Aur ab usse apni aankho ke saamne dekh wo duwidha me thi.




Ab toh aur 100 sawaal uske mann me uth chuke the. Filhaal unhe side me rakh woh aage badhi,

Aur usne muskuraate hue Veer ko welcome kiya,




Divya (smiles) : It's good to see you return.

Veer : ...

Divya : Department wants an explanation.

Veer : Alright!!!

Kuch derr baad...

Investigation department ke office me ek bade se room me woh maujood the.

Sab ke sab. Nolan se leke Mike, Zoey, Emma, Tommy... Sab! Sab udhar maujood the.

Aur saamne projector ke liye badi si screen lagi hui thi.

Veer ekdum saamne khada hua tha. Aur usne bolna shuru kiya,

Veer : I have decoded everything!!!

Tommy : Okay! Tell us!

Veer ne haami bhar seedhe ek picture dikhaayi projector ke jisse dekh waha baithe sabke maatho par silvatein confusion ke maare aa padi,

Tommy apni jagah se uth khada hua,

Tommy : Are you kidding me??? Is this a joke?

Par Veer ne usse koi jawaab na diya.
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Fantastic mind-blowing update

 

[Werewolf]

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No man!! Those pics are gone.

 

[Tripuri chakraborty]

Lajabab update but aapne susence mein chor diya agala update ka besabri se intejer rehega

 

[Werewolf]

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[hiakarji]

Update - 101 ~ Exposed (1)
[Note : Contains gore and blood elements.]​

Ab tak...

Mike : Where is he?

Tommy : He told me he will look outside.

Mike : Let's go and check his room!

Woh sabhi Chester ke room me pohuche toh Chester ka room band tha. Matlab koi andar tha. Chester hi toh tha.

Unhone darwaaza peeta aur awaaz lagaayi.

Par...

Andar se koi awaaz na aayi!!!!

Ab aage...

"Cheeessssstttteeerrrrrrrr!!!!!!"

"Open the goddam door!!!!"

*Baaammmmm* *Baaammmmmm*

Darwaaze ko Veer, Mike aur Tommy baahar se peet rahe the. Par andar se abhi bhi koi jawaab nahi aaya.

"Shiiiittttt!!!"

Woh teeno door pe haath maarte rahe. Lekin koi halchal hone ki awaaz bhi nahi sunaayi dii unhe bheetar se.

Mike (bauhe sikodte hue) : Something is wrong.

Tommy : If the door is locked from the inside. Then it's obvious someone is inside. And who else could it be other than Chester?

Veer : Let's break it!

Tommy : Wh-Whaaaattttt??? Are you kidding me?

Veer : No! I'm not! Just help me out.

Bas yahi ek upaay bacha tha unke paas. Andar koi na koi toh maujood tha. Warna darwaza apne aap kese band ho sakta tha? Toh upaay yahi tha ki darwaaze ko hi tod diya jaaye.

Tommy ne Veer ko hairat-angez me dekha. Jese woh kisi bewakoof ko dekh raha tha. Itna bhaari door, bhala dhakka dene se kese toot sakta tha?

Mike : We don't have any other option. We can try at least. It's 3:30 already. Nightwalker's time has started. We should hurry up.

Wo ye nahi jaante the ki Veer ke paas kya tha. Isliye unhe ye darwaaza todna asambhav sa lag raha tha. Unhe nahi pata tha ki Veer ke akele me kitne logo ka bal tha.

Par wo sare aam akele darwaaza nahi tod sakta tha. Aisa karne se uss par kayi sawaal khade ho jaate. Ek aadh lene ki zaroorat thi usse. Aur isliye, Veer ne unn dono ko bhi dhakka dene kaha.

Mike ko lagega ki Veer aur Tommy ne zorr se dhakka diya hai. Tommy ko lagega ki Veer aur Mike ne zorr se dhakka diya hai. Par sach toh yahi hai ki...

Veer ke akele ke hi vaar se darwaaza khulna tha. Unki madad lena toh keval apni kaabiliyat ko chhupaane ka ek zariya tha.

Woh sabhi jese hi dhakka dene ke liye taiyaar hue,

*Ding*

[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned ON]

Apni aankho ki laali chhupaane ke liye Veer ne apni palke band kar lii.

Uske sang Mike, Tommy peeche run leke daude aur teeno ne saath milkar zorr se darwaaze par dhakka maara.

*Baaaaaammmmmmmmmmmm*

Kuch toh hua. Darwaaze ka ek hinge dheela pad gaya.

*Baaaaaaaaaammmmmmmmmm*

Iss baar darwaaze ka pehla hinge poori tarah se nikal gaya.

Aur,

*Baaaaaaammmmmmmmmmmmm*

*Baaaaaaaammmmmmmmmmmm*

4-5 aur dhakko me poora ka poora darwaaza hi hinge se ukhad gaya. All thanks to Beowulf's Blessings and Veer's stats.

*Dhadaaammmmmm*

Teeno hi kamre ke andar dhakka dene ke kaaran floor par gir pade. Unn sabki nazre sabse pehle bed par gayi.

Tommy : Ugghh!!! What the fuck? This motherfucker is sleeping here???

Tommy gusse me gurraaya. Itni chinta liye woh sabhi paagalo ki tarah usse pukaar rahe the aur woh tha ki yaha chenn se so raha tha? Himmat kese hui uski?

Chester araam se bed par dala hua tha. Ek kambal odhe. Baahar se uska sarr, perr aur haath hi dikhaayi pad rahe the kambal ke.

Tabhi Mike ki bauhe kass uthi, maathe par silvatein chha gayi. Shayad kuch...

Mike : I smell something...!?

Par iss se pehle ki woh apni baat poori rakh paata, Tommy gusse me uth ke apne dost ke upar se kambal hata diya,

Tommy : You fucker, get up this insta-- huhh???

*Flllllaaaaaaaapppppppp*

Kambal jese hi hata...

Saamne ka manzar dekh teeno ke badan thande pad gaye. Shareer ke raungte khade ho gaye. Dil ki dhadkan aisa laga jese pal bhar ke liye wahi ruk gayi. Ghutno me kamzori aa gayi,

Tommy ke andar jese aatma ne shareer ka tyaag kar diya. Woh toh dekhte hi bechaara ussi pal ladkhada ke behosh ho gaya. Wo peeche ludka,

Mike : Shiiitttt!!!

Aur idhar, Mike ne fauran aage badh usse apne haatho se pakad sambhaala. Aur usse side me deewaar se tikaaya. Usne sarr utha ke Veer ko dekha,

Mike : Veer! We must- huhhh???

Par jab usne Veer ko dekha toh bhaanpa ki Veer ko usne aise pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha. Veer khauf ke maare saamne nazre gadaaye hue tha. Uski aankho me ek chamak nami ke kaaran janm le chuki thi.

Achanak hi usse akbakayi aayi. Muh par ek haath rakh woh turant hi peeche muda aur deewaar par apna dusra haath tikaaye lambi lambi saansein lene laga.

*Badump* *Badump* *Badump*

Dil itni zorr se dhadak raha tha ki Veer ko khud dhadkano ki awaaz sunaayi de rahi thi.

Mike : V-Veeeerrr???

Veer : It's... It's okay!!! I'm fine! J-Just give me a second.

Mike : Alright! But make it quick. Only you and I can do this. Together!

Veer : Y-Yeaahhh!

[Maaaasttttteerrrrr~]

Aisa kese ho sakta tha ki Veer pareshani me ho aur Pari ko chinta na hoye? Beshaq! Veer ke iss ravaiyye par turant hi Pari uske mann me usse pukaarne lagi.

'It's okay Pari!!!'

[It's not... ]

Pari jaanti thi Veer kin halaato se guzar raha tha. Kyuki bed par...

Bed par Chester laita toh hua tha. Par...

Uska shareer...

Uska shareer do hisso me bata hua tha. Poori ki poori tarah se kata hua tha. Pait se uski atadiya baahar ko nikli hui thi aur poora bed neeche lahu luhaan ho chuka tha. Andhruni maas aur ango ko aankho ke saamne dekh acche se acche insaan ko ulti aa jaaye aur uske perr ladkhada jaaye. Koi hairat ki baat nahi thi.

*Sccchllliiiiinnnnggggggg*

*Kllliiiiinnnngggggggg*

Veer ko Nightwalker ki woh haath me pakdi hasiya yaad aayi. Na jaane kese kaat ke alag kiya hoga usne Chester ko. Aari se lakdi ki tarah usne Chester ko kaata hoga. Soch ke hi Veer ke badan ke raungte khade ho gaye.

Par uss se bhi badi baat thi. Woh kuch aur thi. Veer ko woh manzar yaad aa gaya. Woh bhi toh kuch issi prakaar maara gaya tha na?

Golu!!!! Uski maut bhi behad dardnaak thi.

Aur ab Chester. Ye pehli baar tha jo Veer Nightwalker ke dwara bichhayi gayi laasho ko apni aankho ke saamne dekh raha tha. Koi insaan itni darindagi se kese maar sakta tha kisi ko? Veer ko jo baat sabse zyada darra rahi thi woh ye thi ki,

Nightwalker ne ek shan bhi nahi socha kisi ke badan ko do tukdo me kaatne se pehle. Seedha kaat daala. Jese insaan nahi, koi sabzi ho.

It was an absolute brutality.

Mike : Veeerrrr?

Mike ki punaah awaaz se wo apne hosh me aaya.

[Maaaasttteeerrrr~ don't worry. I'm with you!]

Pari ki baat sunn, aur apni himmat waapas baandh woh palta, Mike ko dekh usne haami bhari. Aur unn dono ne Tommy ko thaama. Veer aur Mike usse apne room ki orr le gaye. Chester ka room unhone wese hi chorr diya. Woh kuch bhi nahi kar sakte the iss maamle me.

Idhar Zoey aur Emma ne room khola aur Tommy ko behosh dekh woh dono tension me aa gayi. Jab Chester ki maut ki khabar unhe mili toh Emma toh poori tarah se ro padi.

Ek darr baith gaya usme. Ki jese ab woh nahi bachegi. Agla shikaar jese ab wahi hone waali thi.

Woh chillaane lagi, jese tese Veer aur Mike ne usse shaant kiya. Zoey khud andar tak hili hui thi. Par antatah woh chup thi.

Aur Mike gusse me. Ek detective tha woh. Chester ke room me ghuste hi jo dhaas usne hawa me soonghi...

Loha!!! Yaani iron. Jo hamaare khoon me maujood hota hai. Itne saal kaam karne ke baad Mike ko kaafi tajurba ho chuka tha. Khoon ki gandh vatavaran me jo faili hui thi, usne ek baar me pakad lii thi. Yaha tak ki Veer ko bhi pehle hi pata lag chuka tha.

Jese hi usne Beowulf activate kiya tha. Andar se khoon ki gandh usse pehle hi aa gayi thi.

Par ab jo ho chuka tha usse badla nahi jaa sakta tha. Unke beech se, ek aur shaks maara jaa chuka tha. Yadi aise hi chalta raha toh...

"Damn it! Damn it! Daammnmn ittt!!!"

*Baaaaaaammmmmm*

Mike ne gusse me aake deewaar par zorr se haath maara. Ek detective hoke, uski naak ke neeche se Nightwalker uske bando ko maar raha tha aur woh yaha haath par haath dhare baitha hua tha.

Veer aur woh ek dusre ke bagal se khade hue the uske hi room me. Tommy behosh haalat me bed par wall se tik ke baitha tha. Aur uske hi bagal se Emma aur Zoey jo ek dusre se chipki ek dusre ko sambhaalne ki koshish kar rahi thi. Zoey toh fir bhi theek thi, par Emma ka haal behaal tha.

Mike ne jeb se cigarette nikaali,

*Kliinkkk*

Lighter se cigarette jalaayi aur ek kash lagaaya aur cigarette ka packet Veer ki taraf aage badhaya,

Mike : You smoke?

Veer ne packet ko dekha aur ek cigarette usme se nikaali,

Veer : I can!

Detoxification ON thi. Veer ko koi tension nahi thi.

Lighter se cigarette jalaate hue wo dono khidki ki taraf pohuche, jiske sheeshe par baahar se baarish ki badi badi boonde pad rahi thi. Aur andar se cigarette ka dhua. Saath hi Bijli ki chamak sheeshe se hote hue kamre me aa rahi thi.

Unhone dono ladkiyo ko ye nahi bataya tha ki Chester kis tareeqe se marra tha. Ye maut alag thi. Isme sarr nahi kata tha. Balki poora ka poora pait hi cheer diya tha Nightwalker ne. Aisa rooh jhanjhor kar rakh dene waala kaam kiya tha.

Idhar Veer ne Mike ko bagal se dekha,

Veer : Chester got killed.

Mike (kash lagaate hue) : Yes!

Veer : What now?

Mike : We must find the killer. Before dawn. Otherwise we will all die here.

Veer : Senior Connor mentioned something in his video right? The cameras! We are being recorded.

Mike : Found 4 of them.

Veer : Huhhh??

Veer ne hairat me Mike ko dekha. Stabdh hona swabhavik tha. Connor ne mention kiya tha video me ki yaha par logo ki activities record kari jaati thi. Iska matlab kahi na kahi cameras lage hue the. Aur Mike ne seedhe seedhe hi Veer ko jawab de diya ki usne 4 cameras already dhundh liye the.

Veer : Where?

Mike : Found one on the ground floor, Second in my room, third one in the corridor, and fourth one...

Veer : ???

Mike : ... is right above our head. Between the fan.

Uske shabd sunn Veer ko ek jhatka laga. Ek camera upar pankhe ke beech me laga hua tha. Veer ne khud iss par gaur nahi kiya tha. Woh abhi dekhne hi wala tha upar ki,

Mike : D-Don't!!!! Don't look.

Mike ke kehne par usne sarr jhuka liya.

Veer : But Chester was killed when the room was locked from the inside.

Mike : Yes!

Veer : How is that even possible?

Mike : That's what I'm not getting.

Aisa kese ho sakta tha? Andar aane jaane ka raasta ek tha. Toh jab kamra andar se locked tha toh Chester marra kese bhala? Dono Veer aur Mike ka dimaag ghoom chuka tha.

Mike : Did you notice one more thing?

Veer : That he got killed during the search time?

Mike : Exactly!

Aur Chester ki hatya bhi kayi sawaal khade kar rahi thi. Banda search time me maara gaya. Akhir kaise????

Veer ne ek lambi aah chorri par tabhi uske mastishq se ek jhakjhor kar rakh dene waala vichaar hoke guzra. Jiske chalte uske haath se cigarette phisal kar neeche gir gayi.

Mike : ???

Veer : N-Noooo!

Mike : What?

Veer ne Mike ko dekha,

Veer : The voice!!!! The voice told us that search time will be allotted to us. But... But it never said that Nightwalker won't kill us during those hours.

Mike (jhepte hue) : That's... N-Nooo... But Nightwalker's time is different then how can he...!?

Veer : You forgot one thing!!

Mike : Huhhh?

Veer : It also said... If the Nightwalker saw you roaming, he will kill you.

Toh ye baat thi. Veer ki baat jab Mike ne suni toh woh andar se hil gaya. Veer ne ek raaz se parda utha diya tha.

Uss awaaz ne ye zaroor kaha tha ki search time diya jaega. Par awaaz ne aisa toh kahi nahi bola tha ki uss search ke dauraan Nightwalker kisi ko bhi nahi maarega? Ye toh Veer aur uski team ne apne aap assume kar liya tha ki iss time Nightwalker nahi maarega.

Awaaz ne toh sirf yahi bataya tha ki Nightwalker apne time par ghoomega. Par iska ye matlab nahi tha ki woh search ke time me maarega nahi. Beshaq, woh uss dauraan ghoomega nahi. Par uss dauraan chhipega bhi nahi.

Dusre shabdo me, Nightwalker ne unn sabhi ko chutiya banaaya tha. Apne shabdo ke istemaal se.

"Daaamnnn itttt!!!! This baastaardddd!!!!"

Aur Mike ka gussa aur bekaabu ho gaya. Ye toh laazmi tha.

Iska matlab saaf tha. Chester ne ghoomte waqt Nightwalker ko zaroor dekha hoga. Nateeja? Uski maut!!!

Par sawaal jo unhe sabse zyada pareshan kar raha tha woh tha room ka andar se band hona.

Veer : I'm going out.

Veer ne ek taq jawaab diya,

Mike : "WE" are going out Veer. YOU and ME. BOTH!!!

[Maaasteeerrr ~ Hum Mike ke saath nahi reh sakte. Hume Nightwalker se akele me bhidna hoga. Mission khatam hone ke liye bhi zyada samay nahi bacha hai.]

'I know Pari!!!'

Veer : We will go seperately. We both have our walkie talkie. If something happens, we can just call each other out.

Mike ne kuch shan tak Veer ko dekha aur fir haami bhari. Woh Veer ki baat se sehmat tha. Bhale hi ye tareeqa risky tha par yahi sahi approach thi.

Alag alag hone se Nightwalker ki talaash jaldi hone waali thi, aur Nightwalker akele aadmi ko dekh zaroor khud ko baahar nikaalne wala tha. Yahi sahi tareeqa tha.

Mike, Emma aur Zoey ko jata ke waha se baahar nikla,

Mike : You take left. I'll take the right.

Veer : Alright!

Aur woh daayi corridor ki taraf chal diya.

Idhar Veer ne bhi Emma aur Zoey ko jab jataaya ki woh bhi jaa raha hai toh dono vyaakul ho uthi,

Emma : Nooooooooooooo~ You can't!!! He will kill you. He will...

Zoey : Th-That's right... You shouldn't go out there. It's dangerous. We all can just spend the night here in one room. Then we can leave tomorrow.

Veer : Do you really believe he will let us leave? Just like that?

Veer ke sawaal par Zoey ki bolti band ho gayi. Zoey ka kehna tha ki wo sabhi ek hi room me saari raat ruk jaaye aur subah hote hi woh nikal jaenge. Par... Par kya Nightwalker waqai unhe jaane dene waala tha?

Veer : I'm going.

Emma : Nooooooooooo~

Zoey : S-Stay safe... And...

Veer : ???

Zoey : You will come alive...

Veer (smiles) : I will!

Aur ek akhiri baar unn dono ko peeche mud ke dekh Veer waha se palta, Zoey ne room andar se lock kiya aur Veer corridor me aa gaya.

***

Ab aar ya paar ki ladaayi thi. Aankh micholi, aur lukan chhupaayi ka ye khel boht ho chuka tha. Ab seedha bhidant thi.

Ya toh Veer sahi salaamat nikalne wala tha ya fir Nightwalker.

Veer ke kadam badhne toh left corridor ki orr chahiye the, par wo right corridor me jaane laga,

[Huh? M-Master?? O-Ohhhhhhh!!!! I see~]

Pari bhi pal bhar ke liye confused reh gayi. Par Veer ke mann me usne jab jhaank ke dekha toh wo sab samajh gayi.

Nightwalker Veer se bhid chuka tha. Woh jaan gaya tha ki Veer ko yadi usne firse face kiya toh Veer seedhe ladaayi par utar aaega.

Toh aise me jab 2 insaan, Mike aur Veer akele akele mansion me ghoom rahe ho toh kis par pehle hamla karna theek rahega?

Jawaab saaf tha.

Mike!!!

Aur isliye,

Veer ne apni raftaar badhaayi, tezz kadmo ke saath wo Mike ka peecha karne laga.

Beshaq, uska anumaan ekdum sateek tha.

Mike upar ke floor se chhaan been kar jab basement ki orr badha. Basement me ghuste hi uski bauhe chinta me sikud gayi.

Zameen par pehle ke muqaable paani kuch zyaada hi tha. Mike ke talwe paani me doob chuke the.

Aur Veer theek uske peeche tha.

[Master~ Apne shoes utaar dijiye, paani me chalne se awaaz kam hogi aise me.]

'Alright!'

Shoes ko utaar Veer peeche peeche Mike ke chalta raha aur abhi kuch hi dur tak woh aaya hoga ki...

Saamne basement ke hallway me se andhere me halki roshni aayi, dhuaa uthne laga...

Aur dhue me se...

Ek daraavna mask nikal ke aaya... Fir ek haath dikhaayi diya... Jisme khoon se latpat hasiya thi...

Nightwalker!

Mike : So it's you!!!!

Mike ne apni kamar se ek handgun nikaali aur saamne Nightwalker ki orr aim kii,

Mike : Drop your act now. You have been charged under the violent commitments of brutal murders. Raise your hands, drop your weapon, and hand yourself over.

Ye tactic kaam nahi aane waali thi. Mike bhi ye jaanta tha. Aur wahi hua,

Nightwalker suddenly, bagal ke hallway me ghusa...

Mike : Shiiittttt!

Mike usse pakadne aage dauda,

*Chhappp* *Chhhappp* *Chhhhaapppp*

Paani me uske daudne ki awaaz basement me goonjne lagi,

Peeche se Veer bhi dabe paav liye aage badha.

Par jese hi Mike uss hallway me aaya, usse Nightwalker kahi nazar nahi aaya.

Mike : Fuckkk!!! Where did he go?

Woh gun ko dono haatho se pakad aage badhta raha. Ab neeche paani bhi khatam ho chuka tha. Iss area me sookha tha.

Aur abhi woh dhundh hi raha tha jab,

*Thud*

Achanak hi uske sarr par ek zorr ka phatka aake laga.

Mike ke muh se kuch bhi nahi nikal paaya aur woh behosh hoke wahi gir pada. Uske bagal se, Nightwalker apni hasiya liye khada tha.

Hasiya ko hawa me utha wo Mike ke shareer ko dekhne laga. Pehle kaun sa ang kaata jaaye? Mundi? Ya pait? Ya haath perr? Ya jeebh? Ya fir kaan?

Uska haath zorr se neeche aaya hi tha Mike ki mundi kaatne ke liye ki tabhi,

*Whoooooosssshhhh*

*Cllllllaaaaannnnggggggggg*

Haath par zorr se kuch aake laga aur uske haath se hasiya chhooth ke dur jaa giri.

Fauran hi usne mud ke aag baboola aankho se dekha...

Saamne Veer khada hua tha. Aur ussi ne ek bottle fek ke uske haath se hasiya girayi thi.

Veer bhaaga... Nightwalker ki taraf... Full speed me...

Hawkeye ne apna kaam kar diya tha. Ab baari thi...

*Ding*

[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned ON.]

Veer ko tezzi se apni orr aata dekh Nightwalker dusri disha me bhaaga. Woh waapas se uss area me aa gaye jidhar floor par paani maujood tha.

*Chhappp* *chhapp* *chhappp*

Basement me unke kadmo ki awaaz goonjne lagi.

"I'm gonna catch you bastard!! Iss baar tu kahi nahi bhaag paayega."

Veer gurraaya aur ekdum Nightwalker ke peeche pohuch usne haath aage badha ke pakda hi tha ki,

*Whoooooosssshhhh*

Nightwalker achanak palta, usne apna haath ulta kar Veer ke chehre par chalaaya. Aur idhar reflexes ke chalte Veer ne turant duck kar liya.

*Swoooossssssshhhhhh*

Dono aamne saamne the ab.

Aur bina kahe hi,

*Chhap* *chhhapppp* *chhhappp*

Unn dono ne daud ke ek dusre ki mutthi aapas me kassi, Nightwalker ne laat bhi uthaayi saathi hi, Veer ke pait par maarna chaaha par...

*Deflect*

Veer ne apne haath se uski laat deflect kar dii.

"One inch punch!!!!!"

Aur Veer ki fist Nightwalker ke apne pait par aake padi.

*Baaaaaaaammmmmmmmmm*

Kya hi impact tha. Hawa me uchhalte hue woh peeche ki orr jaa gira,

*Chhhapaaaakkkkkkk*

Paani me uske kapde geele ho chale.

[Nice one Master!!!]

Nightwalker ki aankhein ekdum gusse se laal ho chuki thi. Par eka-ek woh utha, aur wahi rakhe lakdi ke boxes par chadha. Uska haath peeche gaya aur usne kahi se ek wire kheech ke nikaala,

[Maaaasttteerrrr~ N-Noooo!!!! Jump on the box!!!!! Quick!!]

Aur woh wire Nightwalker ne seedha neeche paani se bhare floor par fek diya.

*Zaaapppppp* *zaappppp* *zapppp*

Bijli aur paani ka jab milan hota hai toh kya hota hai ye bataane ki zaroorat nahi thi.

Ek tezz current poore paani se bhare floor me fel gaya. Kya hi shaatir tha saala ye Nightwalker.

Par Pari ne Veer ko pehle hi sachet kar diya tha.

*Thud*

Back flip maar ke Veer khud ek box par chadh chuka tha.

"Youuu fuckkerrr!!!!" Veer zorr se chillaaya aur,

*Whoooooosssshhhh*

Usne Nightwalker ke paas maujood boxes ki orr chhalaang lagaayi.

*Baaammmmm*

Aur shuru ho gayi unki haathapaayi. Ek dusre ke kapde pakad, dono hi ek dusre ko current se bhare paani me fekne ki koshish kar rahe the.

Veer stats ke according zyada strong tha. Aur isliye,

Nightwalker Veer ko dhakel nahi paa raha tha. Veer ne usse dhakka dete hue box ki edge tak kiya aur,

Nightwalker : I WON'T FAIL... NEVER...

Veer : Heh~ So you can talk huh?

Nightwalker ne Veer ko apne sang uske kapde pakad kheecha toh Veer ne ek jhatke apne shareer se woh sweatshirt hi nikaal dii,

Aur...

*Chhhapaaaakkkkkkk*

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrgggghhhhhhhhh"

Poore basement me ek zordaar dard se bhari cheenkh goonj gayi. Nightwalker uss current se fele paani me dhapaak se jaa gira.

Current itna nahi tha ki uski maut ho jaaye par itna zaroor tha ki aadmi behosh ho jaaye.

Current lagne ke kuch hi seconds ke andar Veer ne wire kheech liya. Aur Nightwalker behosh udhar hi paani me dala raha.

[Phew~ We did it Master!]

Veer lambi lambi saasein lete hue khud ko durust karne laga. Uske gaal pe ek cut laga tha jis se halka khoon beh raha tha. Baaki aur koi kharoch nahi aayi thi usse.

Akhir kaar, Hatyaao ke iss khel ko virhaam lag chuka tha.

*Ding*

[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned OFF.]

*Ding*

[Mission : Capture The Nightwalker has been completed.]

[1000 Points have been rewarded.]

[500 Fame points have been rewarded.]

Points kam the. Waqai! Par Veer ka interest abhi kisi aur cheez me hi tha,

'Check!!'

*Ding*

Veer ne Nightwalker ko check kiya. Par kuch khaas na mila usse. Jo jaan'na tha woh toh nahi mila.

Nightwalker ko usne rassi dhundh poori tarah se baandh diya ki woh kahi bhi bhaag na paaye. Mike ko usne apni peeth par uthaaya.

Aur woh chal diya upar ki orr,

Usne ek kamre me Mike ko litaaya. Aur abhi woh Zoey aur Emma ko jataane hi jaa raha tha ki ab sab kuch surakshit hai ki woh Chester ke room ke baahar se punah guzra...

Neeche darwaaza pada hua tha wesi hi haalat me, aur andar Chester ki laash jo dekhi tak nahi jaa sakti thi. Woh sab wese ka wesa hi maujood tha.

'Hmm?'

Veer ne kuch akasmat hi notice kiya,

'Ye... Wait a minute... Pehle toh ye aisa nahi tha? Then why is it...'

Aur fir uski nazar kahi aur gayi...

'Huhhhhh???????'

[Maaasssttterrrrr!!!!!!!!!!]

Uske baad... Veer ke raungte aise khade hue ki woh ladkhada ke wahi zameen par gir pada.

Aise goosebumps toh usse Slogan se ladte time bhi nahi aaye the.

Yaha tak ki Pari ka dimaag bhi kaam karna band kar chuka tha. Woh khud jese sadme me jaa chuki thi. Aur maun reh gayi.

Veer ka toh jese astitv hi hil ke reh gaya tha.

'N-Noooooooo!!!! I-It can't be!!!!! H-How did he...!!????'

Woh dauda, Zoey aur Emma ki orr. Apne kamre ki taraf. Usne unn dono ko baahar nikaal neeche ground floor par jaane ko kaha.

Aur fir woh bhaag ke Zoey ke room me gaya. Jese woh kuch talaash raha ho...

Aur agle hi pal,

*Craaaaaaasssshhhhhhhhhhhh*

[This... Mastterrrrr!!!!!]

Pari jhep gayi.

'So I was right!!!!! That motherfucker...!!!!'

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After few hours...

Mansion me ho raha ye maut ka nanga naach khatam ho chuka tha. Subaah ho chuki thi, baarish tham chuki thi aur aasmaan se baadal hatt chuke the. Aisa lag raha tha waqai buraai par acchai ki jeet hui thi.

Mike, Veer aur anya ko lene investigation department se copter aaya hua tha.

Woh sabhi usme baith waha se ravaana huye aur waapas pohuche.

Helicopter jese hi land kiya, Veer ko utarte hi dur khadi Suhana aur Divya nazar aayi.

Yaha tak ki Nik bhi khada tha.

Suhana achanak se daud ke bechaini me aage aayi. Pal bhar ke liye Veer bhi hairat me reh gaya.

Lekin achanak hi Suhana ko jese dhyaan aaya aur uske kadam dheere ho gaye. Woh Veer ke paas pohuchi, aur jo haath woh pehle uske gaalo par rakhne waali thi woh haath uske seene par jaake tik gaya.

Suhana : T-Tum theek toh ho na?

Veer (surprised) : Well! Hmm!

Suhana : Th-That's good!!!

Pehli baar Suhana ko iss qadar dekh Veer sach me dang tha. Aisa usne pehle kabhi nahi kiya tha. Fir aaj kyu?

Wahi Divya ko jhatka sabse bada tab laga tha jab usse ye khabar lagi thi ki Veer ne poora ka poora case solve kar daala hai.

Aur ab usse apni aankho ke saamne dekh wo duwidha me thi.




Ab toh aur 100 sawaal uske mann me uth chuke the. Filhaal unhe side me rakh woh aage badhi,

Aur usne muskuraate hue Veer ko welcome kiya,




Divya (smiles) : It's good to see you return.

Veer : ...

Divya : Department wants an explanation.

Veer : Alright!!!

Kuch derr baad...

Investigation department ke office me ek bade se room me woh maujood the.

Sab ke sab. Nolan se leke Mike, Zoey, Emma, Tommy... Sab! Sab udhar maujood the.

Aur saamne projector ke liye badi si screen lagi hui thi.

Veer ekdum saamne khada hua tha. Aur usne bolna shuru kiya,

Veer : I have decoded everything!!!

Tommy : Okay! Tell us!

Veer ne haami bhar seedhe ek picture dikhaayi projector ke jisse dekh waha baithe sabke maatho par silvatein confusion ke maare aa padi,

Tommy apni jagah se uth khada hua,

Tommy : Are you kidding me??? Is this a joke?

Par Veer ne usse koi jawaab na diya.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Moderation hua firse yaha par. Ye update 6k words ke upar jaana tha. Par mene isse do bhaag me vibhaajit kiya hai. Kyuki next part me mein do matter aur samaapt kar sakunga. Baaki, likes thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka guys.
Dhanyavaad!

Literally amazing n awesome update with interesting action scene nd other things which r totally outstanding