Jassybabra
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Eershya, jalan, nafarat or nasamjhi insan se pta nhi kya-2 krwa deti hai iska ehsas jab tk hota h tab tk shayad bahut der ho chuki hoti hai iska udaharan Neha ki ye flash back wali harakat h wo kahte hain na ab pachhtaye hota jb chidiya chug gayi khet
By the way nice update waiting for next
Romanchak aur Rochak Pratiksha agle rasprad update ki
Ab dikhna ma maja aya gya neha es nafrat ko kisa pyar ma badlti ha brilliant writing skills bro![]()
Nice update
Neha itne kaise gir gayi thi acha hua kishan itne jaldi maf nahi krna chahiye .....
GOOD story keep it up looking forward for the next update
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good going dear
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Awesome updates
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Majedar dhamakedar fantastic mind blowing superb update bro
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Ok bhai hum intezar karenge
Bhai aaj update aayega kya
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Ab kab aayega
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Update 41 postedWaiting for next update bhai
Update 41
Dopehar hone ke pahle hi sharda devi apne poore parivaar ke sath wapas apne gao trimathpur pahunch chuke the, wahin kishan aur rj abhi kuchh din aur bijendra ji ke gao me hi rukne bala tha.
Neha...
Andar se toot chuki thi...
Usse baar baar wahi din yaad aarhe the jab usne apne nafrat ko ek paydan aur aage badhane ke liye kitni badi bhool kar baithi thi. Agar uss din kishan ka dost rajnish nhi aata tab uska kya hota...
Uske parivar ke izzat ka kya hota...
Fir usse kishan ki baato ki yaad aati hai, kaise wo uss din usse baaat karne ke liye, utabla tha, aur ab...
Ab to bas uske baato aur ankho me nafrat hi nazar aati hai...
Neha apne bed pe leti huyi, inhi sab baato ko soch soch kar apne anshu bahaye ja rahi thi...
Wo jaanti thi ki innsab ki zimmedar wo khud hai...
Aur kahi na kahi uske mata pita bhi...
wo apne mata pita ko to kuchh nhi bol sakti thi...
Had se jyada pyar jo karti thi apne mata pita se...
Par wo khud ko saza de sakti hai...
Aisa uske dimag me ghoom raha tha...
Us ne nirnay kar liya tha...
Ki aisi zindagi zeene ka bhi bhala kya fayada jisme uska bhai hi usse badchalan aur ghatiya ladki samajhta hai...
Aur samjhega bhi kyu nahi... Aavesh me usne galti hi bahut ghatiya aur besharmo baali ki thi....
Neha ko ab ye lagne laga tha ki... Usne aisi galti kar di hai..
Jiski maafi usse saat janmo tak bhi nhi mil sakti hai...
Aur jab usse maafi milegi hi nhi tab...
Usse zinda rahne ka kya fayada...
Neha ke dimag me ab shirf aur shirf....
Khud ke liye nafrat....
Aur uss nafrat ko mitane ke liye... Sucide kar lena....
Yahi ghoom raha tha....
Ye sab sochte sochte...
Neha ki ankhe ekdam laal ho rakhi thi....
Achanak se wo apne bed se uthti hai, aur kamre me rakhe almeera ke drower se neend ki goliyo ki sisi nikalti hai....
Aur wo uss sisi se Sare goliya apne hatho me nikal leti hai...
Agle pal hi wo unn goliyo ko apne muh me lene hi baali hoti hai ki...
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"Rukkkk jaaoooo........ "
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Ek ladki ki aawaj uske kamre me gunjti hai., ek aisi aawaj jisse sun kar saaf pata chal raha tha ki... Iss aawaz ki malik koi virangna hi hogi...
Itni powerful awaz ki, uske sunne ke baad neha ke to ridd ke haddiyo tak me sihran daud gayi... Itna bhay vyapt ho gya uske andar...
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Neha ko laga shayad kisi ne darwaje ke bahar se usse aawaj lagaya hai... "Konn haiii" Chillate huye kamre se bahar aayi... Usne bahar dekha to koi nahi tha... Apne bagal wale kamre me jakar usne dekha... Waha.. Avni aur khushi apne kapde... Bags se nikal kar... Apne apne cubord me rakh rahi thi...
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Neha, apne aap ko shant karte huye, avni aur khushi se poochhti hai,
" Tum dono mujhe aawaz laga rhi thi kya...? "
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"Nhi to, ham to apne apne kapde wapas almeera me rakh rhe hai...waise tujhe kya hua hai... Ankhe kyu laal hai teri... Sab theek ha na?"
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"Oo shayad mujhe nind aarhi hai, aur issi liye mujhe laga koi mujhe bula rha hai... Ankhe bhi ussi ke karan lal lag rhi ha... Tum log bhi aaram kar lo... Ye sab samet kar "
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" Hmmm, hamne bhi yahi socha hai... "
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"Theek hai, mai jaati hun sone... Bye... '
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"Bye.... "
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Uske baad neha wapas apne room me aajati hai, abhi bhi uske mutthi me wo goliya mauzud thi...
Neha ne apne kamre ko iss bar achhe se lock kar liya aur jakar aiyene ke samne khadi ho gayi...
Usse bhi lagne laga ki jyada sochne ki vajah se usse wo aawaje sunayi di hogi...
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Usne apne hatho ki mutthi ko khola... Aur unn goliyo ko punah... Usske sisi me rakh di...
Usne apne man me apne aap se kaha...
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"Mai haar nahi sakti... Kishan bhai... Bhale hi aap mujhse apar nafarat karte hai, lekin mai iss nafrat ko pyaar me badal kar rahungi... Chahe jo bhi ho... Mai aapko apna pyaar dikha kar rahungi.... Jab mai apna nafrat ko dikhane ke liye uss hadd tak gir sakti hunnn,... To aa soch bhi nhi sakti mai apne pyaar ko sabit karne ke liye... Kya kuchh nhi kar sakti hunnn.... "
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Neha, apne aap ko ek aur dridh sankalp me bandh kar... Table pe rakhe paani ke bottle se pani ko peeti hai...
Aur fir wo apne bistar pe sone chali jati hai....
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Idhar Neha ke jaate hi.... Avni aur khushi... Ka bhi sara kaam lagbhag ho hi gya tha... Par... Khushi aaj jab se apne gao aayi thi tab se uske chehre ka rang feeka feeka lag trha tha... Jisse avni ne gaur kar liya tha....
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Avni - Kya hua hai tujhe, subah se dekh rhi hun,itni gumsum to Tu kabhi hoti nhi hai, bata na chehra kyun murjhaya hua hai tera...? "
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Khushi -Avni yaar, pata nhi... Kal raat ko jab se bhaiya ko sheetal di ke sath kiss karte huye dekhi hunn tab se man me azeeb azeeb se khayal aarhe hai ...? "
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Avni(apne ankhe roll karte huye) - azeeb khayal ka matlab... Tu kehna Kya chahti hai... Kaisa khyala aarhe hai tere man me...?
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Khushi - (feeki muskaan ke sath) pata nhi... Par mujhe jealousy baali feeling aane lagi hai... Sheetal di ko bhai ke baho me dekh kar...
Aisa nhi hai ki mujhe sheetal di pasand nhi hai...
Wo ek achhi ladki hai... Unka behaviour ham logo ke prati bahut achha hai...
Hamesha ham se achhe se baat karti hai...
Par, pata nhi kyun... Mujhe unka bhaiya ke sath rahna...
Ek bechaini sa de jata hai...
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Avni, jo ki khushi ki baato ko sun rahi thi... Wo poori tarah shocked thi... Karan tha ki khushi isse whi sab baate bata rahi thi... Jo ki uske sath bhi ho rha tha...
Usse bhi raat ko sheetal aur kishan ka yun... Ek sath kiss karna... Andar tak jala diya tha...
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Avni -( khushi ke ankho me dekhte huye) khushi.... Sach bolu to mere andar bhi sheetal di ko lekar jealousy hone lagi hai...
Aur ye baat shayad tum bhi samajh gayi hogi ki... Ye kyu ho rha hai...
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Khushi - iska matlab.... Jo mai soch rahi hunn... Wo to nhi...
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Avni - hannnn.... Aur kya ho sakta hai bhala....?
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Khushi - yaaaaarrrrrrrr...... Par ye to galat hai na... Hammm... Hammmm kaise.... Haammmm kaise bhaaii ko pyaar karne lag sakte hai......
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Avni - pyaar thode na kabhi pooch kar hota hai... Wo to bas ho jata hai....
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Khushi - fir bhi avni, agar aisa hai... To kya... Bhai... Kabhi hamare pyar ko dekh payenge... Samajh payenge....
Ye to bas hame hi tadpate rahega na....
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Avni - agar prem sacha ho to wo mil hi jaati hai na... Waise bhi bhai bahut achhe hai.... Agar wo hame na bhi apnaye to bhi... Hame bas unka sath... Unka pyaar chahiye... Ham to ussi me khush rahenge....
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Khushi - aur phir sheetal di ka kya... Wo kabhi iss baat ke liye raazi honge....
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Avni - are oo sekhchand... Pahle bhaiya ko to pata lo... Uske baad bhabhi ko bhi dekh lenge.... Hihihi... Chal ab so ja... Mai to bahot thak gayi hunn....
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Khushi - hihihi... Chalo... Sote hai...
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Mumbai
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Ek bade se building me electric board pe mote mote achhro me likha hua tha
THE GROUP OF R'T
Wo building lagbhag 50 mala tak ka tha...
Uske andar kaam karne baale Sare karmchari apne apne kaamo me lage huye the...
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Building ke 45 ve flore pe... Ek kamre ke bahar waiting lounge me filhal do log baithe huye the... Lala aur ranjeet... Jo ki aaj R'T group ke ceo se milne aaye the.. Indono ne raat ko hi fone kar ke aaj ki appoinnent fix kar liya tha...
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Uss hall numa kamre ka darwaja khulta hai... Aur usme se ek bahut hi sundar si ladki chalti huye bahar aati hai...
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Wo ladki - Excuse Me mr. Ranjeet .... Mam aap dono ko andar bula rahi hai... Please come with me..
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Ek pyari gesture ke sath wo ladki ranjeet aur lala ko andar chalne ko kahti hai. Aur aage aage chalne lagti hai...
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Uske peeche ranjeet aur lala bhi ho lete hai... Jinki najar bar bar us ladki ke nangi jangho pe hi ja rahi thi.
Uss ladki ne ek white shirt aur apne jangho tak ke tight dress pahne huye thi..
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Khair... Wo dono kamre ke andar jaate hai... Aur andar jane ke baad un dono ka dhyan kamre me rakhe gaye expensive chizo ko dekh kar tutati hai...
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Wahi... Unki nazar ek bade se glass ke table ke peechhe chair pe baithi huyi ek hot ladki pe jaati hai... Jo kisi bhi supermodel se kam nhi thi... office ke coat pant me bhi uske figure ko batana koi badi baat nhi thi...
Jahan pahle ranjeet aur lala uss ladki ko yaad rahe the... Wohi.. Ab uska nazar uss ladki pe jaati hai...
Uske.... Table pe ek name plate rakha hua tha...
Jispe name likha huaa tha... TINA KHANNA...
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" Haan to, mr. ranjeet... And mr. Sukhdev... Bataiye kaise aana hua aapka...
Ohh.. Sorry soryy... Please pahle baithiye na... Yun khade khade hi chale jayenge kya....."
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Tina apne files ko sis me rakh kar... Apne peeth ko kursi pe tika kar bolti hai...
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" Shukriya madam, ham dono to bas apne deal ke baare me baat karne aaye hai... Jise shayad koi galatfehme ke wajah se apke manager ne cancle kar diya hai... "
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" Sorry to say... Mr. sukhdev, par wo deal hamare manager ne nahi balki mere husband, aur iss company ke md ROHAN KHANNA ne cancle kiya hai... Aur unhone aisa kyo kiya hai ye to aapko wo hi bata sakte hai... Aur aap log pareshan nhi hoiye... Agar aapne koi galti nhi ki hai... To jarur ROHAN kisi aur vajah se deal cancle kiya hoga... Aap aisa kijiye... Kal subah aajaiye... Aapko ROHAN mil jayenge... Abhi unki meating start huye hai... To wo raat tak chalegi... Okkk
You may go now... "
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Itna bol kar, TINA paas me hi bane room me chali jaati hai, jo uske office se attached hi tha...
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Tina ki seceretary.... Wo ladki... Jiska nam priya hai... Wo ranjeet aur lala ko bahar chalne ko keh deti hai...
Ranjeet aur lala bhi bahar aa jate hai... Wo nakhush to the par unhe ek aasha bhi mil gayi thi ki sab kuchh sahi bhi ho sakta hai...
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" Aakhir baat kya hai ROHAN, aap kya karne ja rahe hai... "
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" Ek bahut hi khash kaam darling... Bahut hi khash kaam... Ahayad ye wohi kaam hai... Jiske liye maine janm liya hai... "
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"Mai samjhi nahi jaan... Aisa kon sa kaam hai.. Jiske liye aap aisi azeeb azeeb baate kar rahe ho"
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" Abhi nahi bata sakta Tina darling, lekin vada karta hunn, meri safalta ka suruaat tumhi se hoga... Aur mai safal bhi tumhare hi karan banunga... Wo kahte jai na ki har ek mard ke safalta ke peechhe ek aurat ka haath hota hai...
To samajh lo ki wo mard mai hunn aur uske sath jo aurat hai wo tum ho meri zaann.... "
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Itna bol kar wo shaks Tina ko kiss karne lagta hai....
Darasal... Ye shaks aur koi nhi balki ROHAN hi hai... Wohi rohan jis ke pariwar ke sath 22 varsh pahle uske apno ne hi barbarta kiya tha... Aur ussi barbarta ka badla lene ke liye ROHAN ne andheri duniya ki kaali shaktiyo ki madad lekar ... Ek nakaratmakta ka rashta chuna....
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(Flashback... Of ROHAN)
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20 varsho ke tap ke baad.... Usse bahut saare ashadharan saktiya prapt huye... Par... Unsabse badi cheez jo usse mili... Wo hai... Uska dimag... Uska dimag...
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Par uske dimag ki bhi kuchh weeknes hai jo shirf ussi ko pata hai...
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Rohan... Ne tap purn hone ke baad... Tantrik ko baba bolna prarambh kar diya... Aur tantrik ne uss bol diya.. Ki jaao... Manushyo ke duniya me khud ko chhupa lo... Unke duniya me... Shirf apne soch aur dimag ke bal pe hi... Apne aap ko mazboot banao... Ek safal manzil tak khud ko pahunchao...
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Jiske jabab me rohan ne bola ki... Theek hai baba, par kya mai jaan sakra hun ki... Aakhir aisa kya hai... Jiske liye mujhe apne aap ko itna mazboot banana pad raha hai....
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Tantrik - ....TILISMYI KHANJAR.... Tumhe samarth ban kar tilismayi khanjar dhundna hai ROHAN... Iske liye tumhe inshano ke beech me inshano ke tarah rah kar hi ek aisi ladki se vivah karni hogi... Jiska janm... Kartik maah ke purnima ke din huaa hai... Ussi ke madhyam se tumhe wo TILISMI KHANJAR milega...
Aur yaad rakhna... Tum inshano ke duniya me apni shakti ka praoyog nhi karoge.... Tumhe apne dimag ka prayog karna hoga.. Aur tumhe iss kanya ko bhi apne pyaar se hi manana hoga...
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Rohan - theek hai baba., waise kya mai jaa sakta hun ki uss khanjar me aisa kya hai... Jiske liye mujhe itne papad belne padenge.
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Tantrik - wo koi aam khanjar nahi hai murkh... Wo khanjar... Samudra manthan ke samay... Samudra se nikli thi... Jise chhal se devtao ne apne paas rakh liya...
Parantu kalantral me raha bali ne uss khanjar ko devtao se chheen liya...
Lekin....
Uske danvo ke paas aate hi wo khanjar kahi gayab ho gaya...
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Pata chala ki jab raja bali...kisi Brahmannn ko 3 pag jameen daan de rahe the... Tabhi... Wo khanjar... Dharti par kahi gir gaya tha... Aur jahan wo khanjar gira.... Wahan uske raksha ke liye.. Devtao ne ek maya rach diya taaki... Koi uss maya ko tod kar uss khanjar ko nahi paa sake...
Wo aaj bhi kisi rudramandir ke taikhane me rakhi huyi hai... Uss khanjar ko wohi ladki utha sakti hai... Jo kartik maah ke purnima ke din janm li hai... Aur wo bhi tab tak... Jab to wo shareer se kunvaari hai... Agar usne sambhoh kar liya... Tab wo uss khanjar ko uthane ke liye samarth nhi rahegi...
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Rohan - samajh gaya baba.... Ab aagya dijiye... Mai aaj hi kisi bade shehar ke taraf nikalta hunn.
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Tantrik - ruko....
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Uske tantrik... Kuchh mantra budbudata hai aur usse Rohan ke taraf badha deta hai...
Rohan Jo... Itne din tak tap karne se... Poora jungleee , kamjor aur 45 varsh ke adhed ka ho gya tha ... Uska shareer... Tantrik ke spell bolne par ek 23 saal ke nauzaban jaisa ban gaya... Uska shareer.. Bhi ekdam kisi film ke hero jaisa ho gaya...
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Apne aap me badlao ko dekh kar Rohan bahut khush hua... Uske baad wo uss jungle se bahar nikal gaya....
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Pahle to wo apne shehar hi gaya... Kangada.. Himachal pradesh... Par ab uska ghar waha nhi tha... Waha pe ek restorent ban gaya tha...
Aabadi bhi bahut badh gayi thi...
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Rohan jyada samay wahan nahi ruka... Wo paas ke hi kisi liberary me jaa kar kitabe padhne laga.. Jisse wo aaj ke samay ke baare me bahot kuchh jaan gaya....
Uske bad.. Usne... Kangada ne hi kuchh majdooro ke sath... Kaam kiya... 1 hafte baad... Wo kangda se train me baith kar mumbai aagya...
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Usne waha aakar... Apne kuchh certificate banvaye... Jo ki poore original hi the.. Uske baad usne apne dimag se aise bahut saare ladkiyo ke baare me pata lagaya.. Jo kartik purnima ke din janm li ho...
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Aur fir usse kuchh din baad hi pata chala ki... Khanna group ke malik... Rupesh khanna ki ekmatra beti Tina khanna... Me wo saare gun hai jo... Usse chahiye... Tina bhi kartik mah ke purnima me hi janm li hai...
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Rohan... Agle subah hi... Khanna grop me apne liye job ki sifarish lekar chala gya...
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Apne dimag aur.. Shadgi ko dikha kar... ROHAN ne Tina ke pita.. Khanna group ke me... Rupesh Khanna ko apna diwana bana diya... Aur... Uss company me ek achhi post pe naukari karne laga...
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Kuchh din me hi rupesh Khanna ko itna pasand karne laga ki usse apne ghar pe dinner ke liye invite karne laga...
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Aur Rohan... Rupesh ke ghar me jakar... Uski beti Tina se bhi mil liya... Jahan Tina bhi rohan ko dekh kar pahli nazar me hi usse pasand karne lagi thi...
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Uske baad tina aur Rohan ke beech nazdeekiya badhne lagi... Rupesh ko bhi iski jaankari thi ki... Uski beti Rohan ko pasand karti hai... Aur usse isse koi aiteraaz bhi nahi tha... Akhir.. Uske nazar me Rohan ki kabiliyat hi itni thi ki... Usse rohan se achha ladka nazar hi nahi aaya apne companu ko samjalne ke liye...
Aur ant me usne Rohan aur tina ki shadi karne ka faisla kar liya...
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Par jab Rohan se isa baare me poochha gaya to... Usne saaf saaf bol diya ki... Pahle wo Khanna group ko world ke top five companies ke list me le jayega.. Uske baad hi Tina se se koi rishta rakhega... Tab tak... Wo shirf company ko bulandiyo pe le jane ke liye poori mehnat karega...
Aur uski ye baat rupesh Khanna aur Tina ko bahut pasand aayi... Aur fir unhone apne company ko Rohan ke hatho me de diya... Aur company ka naam Khanna group se badal kar
THE GROUP OF R'T KHANNA kar diya....
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(Flashback end)
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Aaj ke liye itna hi,.. Agar update pasand aaaye to like karna aur apne revos me ye batana ki... Kishan ki dusri heroin ANUPAMA ko abhi samne laun... Yaa fir baad me
जू कैसे अस्लिल अस्लिल इशारे कर रहे हो भाया... रावण भाई को छेद दिखा रहे हो