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Awesome updatesUpdate 40BAbb takk...
Mega update
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Rj -bhai... Apne gusse pe thoda kaabu rakhna... Jaate jaate koi lafda mat kar dena.
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Rj ki baato ko tatally ignore karte huye mai tezi se apne kamre se bahar jaan laga....
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Kuchh der baad.... Neha ke room kaa scene.
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Neha, joki abhi apne bag me Sare kapde samet kar... Bed pe baithi huyi thi... Aur apne smartphone ke screen ko scroll kar rhi thi... Ki jhatke ke sath uske kamre ka darwaja khula... Aur mai... Apne ek haath me uska bracelate aur letter lekar uske paas gusse me pahunch gya....
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"Tumhari himmat kaise huyi mujhse apna koi rishta jodne ki.... Tumne soch kaise liya ki tum ye.. Faltu ke.... Cards aur... Ye... Bracelet.... Dekar mere sath rishta jod sakti ho...
Appnnniiiii..... Haddd.... Me.... Raho.... Ladki.....
Mai to tumhare card aur... Iss... Bekar ke bracelet ka koi value hi nhi derha... Par uss letter me jo tumne mere sath wo rishta jodne ki koshish kiye ho... Wo... Bhai bala.... Wo mujhe nagawar guzra.... Kabhi sochna bhi matt ki mai tum jaise ladki ko apni bahan maan lunga.... "
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Gusse ke sath... Tezz aawaz me maine ye baat bola tha neha ko... Jisse sun kar ek ekdam stabdh ho gayi thi... Dar ke maare uska pair kaanpne laga tha... Iss waqt na hi uska halat aisa ho gya tha... Ki jaise kaato to khoon na mile.... Bilkul ghabra gayi thi wo.... Jiss vajah se usne apne aankh tak ko band kar di thi.
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"Parrr,..... Haannn.... Mujhe malum hai ki maine galti ki hai... Par wo sab maine jaan bujh kar thode na ki hunn... Mujhe jaisa bataya gya tha... Waisa hi mai karti thi... Mujhe sachayi thode na pata tha.... Aapne avni aur khushi ko bhi to maaf kar diya hai... Par mujhe kyun nhi bhaiiiy.............. "
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"Chuppppppp, ek dam chuuppppp..... Agar ek shabd bhi aur boli to soch lena mujhse bura koi nahi hoga... Mujhe nahi chahiye kisi ke sath koi rishta.... Aur kisne kaha ki maine unn dono ko maaf kar diya.... Mujhe jarurat thi unki.... Maine madad mangi.... Aur usne kiya... Baar khatam...
Lekin... Tum sab ne mere sath jo.. Jo.. Juadtiya kiye ho... Usse mai bhoool jaaun.... Ye kabhi bhi nhi ho sakta.... Achha hoga ki mujhse door hi rahna... Warna.... Aage tum khud hi samajhdaar hi... "
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Itna bol kar mai jaane hi laga tha... Ki neha ki baat sun kar mai fir ruk gaya...
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" Hannn, maalum hai mujhe aap mujhse kiss baat ke liye naraz hai... Par mai karu.... Is waqt meri age bas 16 saal thi... Aur hame aapke baare me shirf galat baate hi batayi gayi thi... Aap hi batao... Agar mere jagah aap hote to aap kya karte... "
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" Achhaa.... Matlab... Wahann.... Apne awara dosto ke sath milkar mera mazak udana... Uske sath baith kar mere baare me bhadde bhadde... Aur gande gande baate karna... Tumhe ghar baalo ne sikhaya... Wahh.... Achha hua dada ne mujhe iss ghar se bahar bhej diya.... Ghinn aati hai mujhe jab bhi mujhe wo time yaad aati hai...jab tum uss din apne shareer se apne dosto ke hath garm kar rhi thi...chheeeee"
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Mere itna bolne ke baad.... Mai wahann se bahar nikal gaya... Aur peechhe rah gayi to bas neha... Jo ki kere dwara bole gaye akhiri baat ko soch kar... Foot foot kar rone lagi thi.... Usse wo sab yaad aane laga jab wo mujhe harash karne ke liye, mujhe mentally kamjor karne le liye itna hadd tak gir gayi thi ki.... Uske hi dost uska fayda uthane ja rhe the...
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(Flash back)
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Baat, aaj se 3 saal pahle ki hai... Uss waqt mai 10th me tha... Bhopal me hi meri life kat rhi thi... Tab mai dubla sa huaa karta tha... Ek 6 ft ka dubla sa ladka jiske halki halki dadhi aarhi thi.... Mai uss waqt bahut fattu huaa karta tha... Mere frnds bhi hamesha ki tarah shirf ek hi tha rajnjsh... Jo uss waqt apne ghar me rahta tha... Kabhi kabhar mere room me aajaya karta tha... Uss waqt mai school me padhta tha... Aur mere school ka naam tha... St. Peters school.... Aur mere school iss area ka main branch tha... Aur issi school ka ek branch mere gao... Trimathpur me bhi tha....
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To baat ye huye ki... St peters ke jo head the... Father jorge... Unhone ek tour orgnise kiya jinme unhone uss area ke jitne bhi st. Peters ke branches the... Unse bhi student ko participate lene ko kaha gya... Ye ek tarah se educational tour tha...
Aur isse badkismati kahe ya kuchh aur... Hamare main branch ka coordination hua... Mere gao bale branch ke sath... Aur ussi school me neha bhi padhti thi jiske baare me mai nhi janta tha...
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Khair tour pe jaane ke 1 din pahle dadi mere room pe ayi thi.. Aur unhone neha ki photo mujhe dikhate huye kaha ki... Kal neha apne school ke taraf se tour pe jaa rhi hai...
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Maine bhi kaha ki... Mera school bhi le ja rha hai.. Aur shayad... Gao ke branch ka student bhi hamare sath honge... Kya neha bhi wahin padhti hai... Maine excited hokar poochha tha...
Mujhe laga tha itne din door rahne ke baad neha aur mere family baale kuchh had tak to meri fikra kiye honge... Kuchh to badla hoga unke manne... Par nhi... Aisa bilkul nhi huaaa....
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Dadi.... Wapas gao jaakar... Neha ko bhi kishan ki tasveer dikhati hai... Aur usse bolti hai. Ki tumhare school ke sehar bale branch me hi tumhara bhai kishan bhi padhta h.... Maine jo bola hai uspe dhyan dena...
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Neha aona sar hila kar usse haan bol nikal jaati hai...
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Tour ka din aagya.... Ek badi si bas hamare school me aayi... Usme se saare students bahar nikle . ... Neha bhi thi... Aur uske sath uske dost bhi the....
Iske dosto me do ladkiya aur 2 ladke the....
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Mai usse dekh kar mushkuraya aur uske paas gaya... Usse jakar bola..
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"Hello neha... Kaisi ho? "
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Mere aise achanak samne aakar neha se direct baat karna... Wahan mauzud dono ladko ko achha nhi laga... Par ek baar wo neha ka jabab bhi sunna chahte the.
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"Ooo..... Hello.... Kon ho tumm....? Mai nhi jaanti tumhe.... Hato mere raste se"
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Neha... Mujhe bilkul hi ignore karte huye bolti hai
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" Are, Mai hunn kishan.... Tumhara bhai... Shayad tumne pehchana nhi... 12 salo se ghar jo nhi gaya hunn"
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"Achhaa, to tum ho.... Aur plss ye bhai... Waai ka rishta mat jodo mujh se... Mai kisi manhush ki sister nhi banna chahti.... So pls mujhse door rho... Mai apne frnds ke sath enjoy karne aayi hunn.. Mujhe enjoy karne do"
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Neha ne ek tarah se mera mazak udate huye kaha.... Par Mai uss waqt sach me bahot dambo tha... Mai bhi apna sar jhukaye... Wapas apne jagah pe aagya jaha mai najane kitne samay se akela hi baitha tha... Mai ne ek baar fir apni nazre utha kar neha ke taraf dekhne ki koshish ki... Jaha wo log... Mujhe dekh kar hi kuchh baate kiye ja rahe the.... Aur beech beech me hashe jaa rhe the... Mai kuchh samajh yo nhi raha tha... Par apne dambo jaise soch ki vajah se unhe haste dekh Mai bhi has deta.. Jiske vajah se unka dheere dheere hasna... Badh kar thehako me badal jata...
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Samay beeta... Rajnish bhi aagya.... Hamdono sath hi jaane wale the... Par tour me jaane ke liye jo bus aaya tha... Usme seet no ke jaise baithna tha... Aur mera fir se bad luck... Aaj fir rajnish ki seat aage aur meri last se 3sri mili thi... Mere peechhe... Neha.. Aur uski saheli ka seat mila tha... Aur mere aage... Uske male dosto ko...
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Aur fir start huaa... Un sab ka ganda khel mujhe harash karne ka... Wo bhi bhaddi bhaddi... Nonvej baato ko bol kar...
1 ladka ---" Kyaa be chomu... Saale... Shirf lamba ho gaya hai chutiye.... Suna tere ghar me tera koi izzat hi nhi hai... Sab gali ke kutte jaisa salook karte hai tere se"
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2ladka --- " Abe haan be... Aur suna hai tu yaha apne school me bhi poora fattu hai.... Teri koi bhi gaand maar leta hai... Ab tak to gufa ban gaya hoga..... Hahahah
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Uski baato se sab hasne lagte hai... Neha bhi...
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1 ladki -- waise.... Dikhne me to smart lagta hai tu... Par kya karu... Tu kaisa bhi rahe hai to manhoosh hi naaa.... Teri hi manhooshiyat ki vajah se dekh aaj ham sab ko bus ke last me seat mili hai... Wo bhi ek bhi window seat nhi mila.... Achha neha ye basterd hai kya...
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Un sab ki baate mujhe kisi seel ki tarah chubh rahi thi.... Mere ankho se anshu niklne lage the... Aur mujhe gussa bhi bahut aarha tha.... Maine apne chehre ko utha kar ghoor kar uss ladki ko dekha jisne mujhe last me basterd kaha tha...
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2 ladka ---" Ale ale ale... Dekho to iss chutiye ko gussa bhi aata hai... Saale... Jyada aankh mat dikha warna yahin jungle me teri maar lunga... Bsdk....
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1 Ladka -- waise... Chutiye Tu shirf ghoor hi sakta hai... Aur kuchh karne ki teri himmat hi nhi hai.... Gandu sala....
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Aur mujhe sab se jyda buraa tab laga jah neha bhi apne dosto ke sath milkar... Mere baare me bekaar bekaar baate kar ke... Mera mazak banane lagi... Aur fir hasne lagi... Unki hassi mere kaano me gunjne lagi...
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Ki tabhi... Bus ke aage se rajnish... Aur uske sath mere hi school ke do badmash ladke hamare taraf aaye.... Shayad rajnish ne unki baat sun liya tha... Aur wo pahle se hi dill doll bala banda tha... Aur uske sath jo bande the wo bhi mere class ke hi the., bhale hi hamari jyada baat nhi hoti thi... Par ri aksar un se baat kiya karta tha...
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"Achaaa...... Ab tum jaise gawar log ham sab ko himmat dikhana sikhayenge be madharchodo..... Sale harami ke aulado ye mat bhoolna... Tum sab iss waqt hamare hi school ke bus me ho.... Aur bematlab ka gand faade ja rhe ho.... "
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Rajnish aone shirt ke baahe ko modte huye.... Un do ladko ke theek samne askar bolta hai... Rajnish kad aur kathi se kisi bhi pehalbaan se kam nhi lag rha tha.. Aur sath aaye log bhi waise hi the.....
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Rajnish ki baat ko sun kar... Aur uske dill doll bale shareer ko dekh kar... Un dono ka thook unke gale me hi sookh gya...
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Fir tab tak wahann pe shanti rahi, hab tak bus apne destination pe pahunch nhi gayi....
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Wahan pagluunchne ke baad... Teeachers ne aaj aaram karne ko kaha...
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Shamm hote hi.... Paas me hi aag lehkaayi gayi.... Sab log ussi aag ke charo taraf baith gaye.... Mai aur rajnish bhi wohin baith gaye the....
Mera mood ab kuchh achha tha... Waise bhi uss samay Mai sach me bilkul chutiya hi tha... Mai pal bhar me apne dukh aur gam bhula deta tha.... Lekin jab yaad aati un gamo ki... Tab yo nind hi nhi aati thhi...
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Wohinnn.... Neha. Ke frnds aur Neha ek sath baithe huye the...
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"Neha.... Tum kya chahti ho... Apne iss manhoosh bhai... Ko mentally torcher karna na chahti ho... '
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"Hanann, aaj uske dosto ne mere dosto ki insult ki hai... Aaj Mai usse itna torture karna chahti hunn jisse wo... Apne aap se nafrat karne lage... "
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" Achhaa.. To mere paas ek idea hai... Par uske liye tumhe kuchh der acting karni hogi... "
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"Kaisi acting... "
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Fir uske dost sab wo behad hi ghatiya aur.... Bhadda idea usse dete hai...
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"Ham dono, uss manhoosh ke samne tumhe chhedne ki acting karenge... Mtlb tumhare shareer ko uske samne chhuyenge... Aur jaisa Maine dekha hai... Bhale hi Tu usse bhai nahi manti hai... Par wo tumhe apni bahan jarur manta... Aur jab uski ankho ke samne uski bahan se koi chhed khhani karega... Tab uspe kyaa beetega... "
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"Kyaaa...... Ye bahut hi bekaar idea hai mai aisa kuchh nhi karne baali... "
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1 kadki.... Jo 2nd ladke ki cousin thi... Usse malum chal gya ki wo ladka kyaa chaal chal raha hai... Aur wo beech me bolti hai..
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1ladki ---Tu bhi na yaar Neha, ye log hamare frnds h aur tumhe inn pe bharosha nhi hai.... Aur bas acting hi to karni haii.... Isse uss manhoos ka dimag thikane aayega.
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Aur Neha... Jo iss waqt apne bhai se nafrat ke chalte.. Itni andhi ho gayi thi.. Usse gyat hi nhi huaa ki usne anjane me kyaa galti kar di hai...
Usne apne dosto ko haan kar diya...
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Jisse dekh kar.... Wo dono ladke Neha se bach kar ek dusre ko ankh mar diye....
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Raat beeti.... Subah bhi ho gayi...... Sab log... Aane baale adventure ke liye ready ho gaye...
Mai rajnish ke sath hi tha....
Ki tabhi sir ne rajnish ko bula liya.. Aur usse apne sath hi chalne ko kaha... Taki rashte me agar kuchh jaruri cheez unhe mile to usse store karne ke liye koi unke sath rah sake....
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Mai fir se akela ho gya... Aur aisehi dheere dheere jaane laga....
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Kuchh der..... Chalte rahne ke bad... Sir hame ek jagah rune ka bol diye... Aur tent laga lene ka bol kar... Apne sath rajnish ko lekar jungle me lakdiya laane chale gaye...
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Hamsab apne apne tent laga liye...
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Sabhi thakavat ke vajah se apne apne tent me aaram karne chale gaye.. Mai bhi jaa hi raha tha...
Ki wo dono ladke fir se mere paas aagye aur....
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1st - dekh bhai.... Game maaf kar de, Mai nahi chahta ki tumhara pahalbaan dost hamari haddiya tode.... Issiliye ham sonk thm se maafi mangna chahte hai. Hamdono ne jo bhi bola wo sab anjane me bol diya.. Baad me hame bhi kharab laga...
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2nd - aur hann bhai... Neha bhi tumse maafi mangna chah rhi hai... Par bechari jhijhak rahi h bol rahi hai... Mai apne bhaiya se kaise nazar mila paungi.... Usse bahot afsos hai tumhare sath ais akarne ki.
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Aur mai thehra... Ekdam bada bala chutiya... Sala unke trap me fas gaya...
Aur mai khushi khushi un dono ke sath.... Jane laga.. Jahan Neha aur uski saheliya hamari hi mulaqat kar rhi thi....
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Waha pahonch kar.... Pahla ladka bolta hai...
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" Lo Neha, aagya tumhara bhai... Tum maafi mangna chahti thi na... "
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" Bhala, koi... Kayar.... Manhoosh ladka... Bhi mera bhai.. Ho sakta hai bhala... Are bhai ka matlab hota hai wo jo bahan ki hifazat kare... Tumhe kya lagta hai ki ye apne bahan ki hifazat kar sakta hai... "
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" Kyaaa.... Tum pagal ho gayi ho Neha... Tumhara bhai... Jarur tumhari hifazat karega..... Kyunn bhaiii.... Karoge na... "
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Usne mere taraf haste huye dekh kar poochaa.
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"Hannn, hannn... Mai karunga .... Mai karunga tumhari hifazat... Neha....yum bas mujhse nafrat karna band kar do"
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Meri baat sun kar dusra ladka bolta hai...
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"Achhaa.... To iss baat ko abhi shabit kar ke batao... Mai tumhari bahan... Neha ke shareer ke sath khelne.... Yaani ko tumhari bahan ko chhedne ja rha hunn aur tum apni bahan ko mujhse bacha lo... "
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Abhi dusra ladka itna hu bola tha ki mai daud kar usse marne bhaga...
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"Zabaan samhaal kar bol haramzaade... "
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Par mere uss ladke tak pahunchne se pahle 1hla ladka mujhe pakad leta hai... Aur mai usse chhutne ki koshish karne lagta hunnn
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Wohinn dusra ladka.... Neha ke paas jaata hai... Ji iss waqt ek jeans aur top pehne huye thi....
Wo ladka Neha ke paas jakar mujhe dekhte huye shaitani muskaan dikhate huye... Neha ka top halka upar kar ke uske pet pe hath ferne lagta hai aur apna dusra hath wo Neha ke gale pe sehlane lagta hai...
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Uaki iss harkat ko dekh kar mera khoon khaulne lagta hai.... Mai jor jor se cherkh kar usse gaaliya dene lagra hu.. Mere ankho se anshu bag me lagte hai.... Wohi.... Meri iss halat ko dekh kar jahan wo ladke hase jaa rahe the wohi... Neha... Bilkul.... Shant khadi... Hontho pe muskaan liye mujhe dekhe ja rhi thi...
. Aur jaise hi meri nazar uske chehre pe padi.... Mai ekdam shockd ho gya... Uska itna calm reaction mujhe saaf saaf bata raha tha ki wo sab jaan bujh kar aisa kar rahe hai...mujhe jahan abhi kuchh samay pahle tak apne bahan ke nafarat ko door karne ka koi bahana chahiye tha... Wohi ab un sabki itni ghatiya harkat ko dekh kar mujhe khud Mujhe un sab se nafrat hone lagi... Khash kar meri so called bahan Neha se... Maine rona band kar diya.........
Mujhe laga ki ye ladke jyada aage nhi badhenge... Par unka irada to kuchh aur hi tha... Achana mujhe aise shant dekh... Uss ladke ko achha nhi laga aur usne apna ek hath Neha ke seene pe rakh diya... Jahan abhi... Kishoravastha ka prabhav dikh rha tha... Wohi... Apna ek haath... Neha ke back pe ja kar fagadne laga....
Aur ek baar fir Neha ne usse tokne ki koi bhi koshish nahi ki.... Aur ab mujhe waha.. Un logo se shirf ghinn aa rhi thi...
Maine kas ke chillaya.....
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"Bassssss.... Tum sab ko jo bhi karna hai.... Karo mujhe naa to tum sab se koi matalab hai aur naa hi issa.... Badchalan ladki se... Fuckk offff... Aur hann sach me tum meri bahan ho nhi sakti.... Tumhare jaisa ghatiya khoon kabhi bhi pratap khandan ki ghar ki beti nhi hi sakti...... Chhodo be madharchod..... Barna abhi gand maar lungaaaa "
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Pata nhi kaha se mujhme itni himmat aur takat aagyi.... Maine apne haatho ko jaise hi jhadka... Jo ladka mujhe pakda huaa tha... Wo sala soor jaa giraa.... Aur mai.... Neha ko uski washtavikta me laakar wahan se apne tent ke taraf aagya... Ab mujhe uski koi bhi parvaah nhi thi... Chahe uske sath... Kuchh bhi ho....
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Wohi... Neha... Jise jaise hi meri baat sunayi di.... Usse bhi ehshash hone laga ki wo kya kar rahi hai... Aur usne bhi apne aao ko dusre ladke se alag kar li... Uske ankho me bhi aanshu aane lage... Aaj pahle baar kisi ne usse badchalan kaha tha... Aur wo manti bhi thi... Ki wo sach me waisi hi harkat aaj kar rhi thi.... Ek badchalan ladki baali....
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Neha ke aise hath jhadak dene se... Uss ladke ko bura lag gaya... Usne ek baar fir se Neha ko pakadna chaha... Par Neha ne ro diya... Aur boli... Ab wo chala gya... Hame bhi chalana chahiye...
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Par uske jabab me 1hla ladka uske paas aaya aur bola...
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Abhi kaha baby... Abhi to mai baaki hunn.... Mujhe bhi to thoda maza lene do apne sharir ki... Jab jatin ko apne sharir ki mazade sakti hi to hame kyo nhi....
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Chatakkkk
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Abhi 1hla ladka itna hi bola tha ki... Neha ne ek tamacha jad diya... Uske gaalo pe....
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" How dare you... Tumhari himmat kaise huyi mujhse aise baat karne ki... "
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" Saali, randi.... Abhi to bade maje se apne santare iss jatin se dabba rahi thi aur ab sati sabitri banne ki dhong kar rahi hai... Tera bhai sahi bolta hai... Tu badchalan hai.... Aur ab Tu hamari randi banegi.... "
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Uske shabd.... Neha ke kaano me ek teer se lage... Usse ab aabhash hone lega ki ye sab uska faida uthana chahte the.... Aur ab usse apne aap ko bachane ka koi bhi rashta nazar nhi aarha tha.... Unlogo ka camp bhi wahan se bahut door tha....
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Par jaise hi 1hla... Ladka... Neha ke nazdeek jaakar uske sath kuchh galat karta waise hi... Uske kandhe par kisi ne bahut hi jordaar baar kiya....
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Ye aur koi nahi balki rajnish tha... Jo sukhi lakdiyo ke talash me waha gya tha...
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Aur usse waha do ladke kisi ladki ke sath badtamizi karte huye dikhe... Aur jab wo samne jakar uss ladki ko pehchanta hai... Ki wo kishan ki bahan hai tab uska gussa aur bhi badh jata hai.... Aur wo unn dono ladko ko kutte ki tarah peetne lagta hai... Aur unhe maar maar ke wahi pe adhmara kar deta hai... Neha ke sath jo uski saheliye thi... Wo dar ke maare waha se bhag gayi... Aur apne apne tent me chali gayi... Neha ko rajnish apne sath chalne ko kahta hai... Aur usse wapas camo me le aata hai....
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(Flashback end)
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Kishan ke kadbe bol.... Jo usne camo me bole the... Wk 3 salo baad aaj tak Neha ko yaad the... Ki..... Ek badchalan ladki meri bahan nhi ho sakti....
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Kishan to kamre se bahar nikal kar... Seedhe haveli se bhi bahar nikal gaya.... Rj bhi uske peechhe peechhe chala gay.... Kishan ko yunn gusse me bahar jaate huye.... Darvaaje le paas khade sunil pratal bhi dekh leta hai.... Aur uske muh se bas ek hi shabd nikalta hai....
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" Bas... Kuchh maheene aur.... Ab tumhe apni vashtavikta janne se koi bhi nhi ro sakta.... Koi bhi nahi..... "
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Lekin tabhi.... Usss darbaaje ke paas lage street light me ek short sircuit hoti hai... Aur uske vajah se waha mauzud jinte bhi bijli ke upkaran the... Wo jal gaye... Wo bhi ek bhayanak aawaj ke sath....
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Aur aisa hota dekh..... Sunil ke lalat pe bal padne lage.... Aur wo daudte huye... Apne maa ke kamre me jaane lage... Jahan sharda devi.... Apne kapde bag me rakh rahe the.....
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Aaj ke liye itna hi.... Agar update pasand aaye to like kar dena... Aaj ek suspence pe se parda hata hai... Dheere dheere... Basic suspance solve honge... Aur uske jagah pe ek super natural suspance... Apni jagah lenge....
Awesome update..![]()
Superb fantastic update bhai
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Superb very nice
Eershya, jalan, nafarat or nasamjhi insan se pta nhi kya-2 krwa deti hai iska ehsas jab tk hota h tab tk shayad bahut der ho chuki hoti hai iska udaharan Neha ki ye flash back wali harakat h wo kahte hain na ab pachhtaye hota jb chidiya chug gayi khet
By the way nice update waiting for next
Nice update
Fantastic mind-blowing update
Awesome.
Romanchak aur Rochak Pratiksha agle rasprad update ki
Ab dikhna ma maja aya gya neha es nafrat ko kisa pyar ma badlti ha brilliant writing skills bro![]()
Nice update
Neha itne kaise gir gayi thi acha hua kishan itne jaldi maf nahi krna chahiye .....
GOOD story keep it up looking forward for the next update
Waiting ravan bhai
Waiting for new update bhai
Waiting for next update
Waiting for next update Bhai
Waiting for next update bhai
Waiting
Agle update update update update
good going dear
lege reho
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