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Thanks bhai!!!Ding werewolf bhai first thanks for updating after such rush journey hopes aapke holiday aache gaye aash karta hu ke veer ko yaha interesting mission mileage nice work keep posting.
Super solid update bhai...
Thanks guys!Fantastic update sir amazing
Sir plz update soon
Waiting for Ur next update
Intezar ka phal meetha hota hai bhai. Samay dunga tabhi toh cheez acchi bana ke de paunga na...Ahahhhhh Bhai ab Jake chai Mili hai,.. short break tha lekin wo shirf aap ke liye humane toh bohut hi lamba intakar Kiya hai aap ka . Welcome back Bhai
Thanks man!!!Maja aa gaya ....jabardast update
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Ab lagta hai real action start hoga![]()
Nice fantastic zabaradast update waiting for next update
Fantastic update bhai![]()
Welcome back bhai.. Excellent update.. Bhai..![]()
Awesome update![]()
Amazing update![]()
Uttam Lekhni ka Prayog Werewolf bhai...Waiting for Next Update Eagerly...
Fantastic mind-blowing update
Zabardast fantastic
Zabardast fantastic update
Nice update bhaii bhit Awla Maza Aya gya par Kar ab new update Ka intazar ha
Dhanyavaad mitro!!Fantastic update
Jabardast update bhai![]()
Fantastic Update Brother![]()
Welcome back
As always superb update to gud Luvd it
Shandar
Nice update
Fantabulous update Werewolf bhai
Nice Update
Shandar update bhai
Amazing update bhai to yaha se Naya arc suru ho raha hai.to ab dekhte hai age kya hota hai.
Nice update. Welcome back from break.
Super update bro
Nice mast awesome update bro
Well come back bro
And nice update
Jabardust update Bhai
Superb update broo
Awesome
Amazing
Waiting for next update
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Thanks a lot bhaiyo!!!Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Werewolf bhai....
Nice and lovely update....
We wait to read your marvelous work werewolf bhai.Thanks a lot bhaiyo!!!
Saath bane rahiyega!![]()
Dekhte hai Tej ka kya hota hai..Must update tha bro
Ragini or veer bhi ab apas main khulne lage hai wese ye to aap decide karenge ki kon veer ki hogi par meri or se wo voat ragini ko jata hai par sem voat tejal urf tej ko bhi jata hai jo abhi bhi ek mistry hai
Or shweta ji ko batao ki usse pehle veer par ragini ka haq hai kyu ki ragini ko time rehte akal aagyi thi par shweta to tabhi bhi pranjal ki gaand chatne main lagi huyi thi
Mujhe bas is story main do chize hi dara rahi hai ek to suhana ka behavior or uska dusra rup or dusra ragini or veer ko sath dekh ne ke baad suman ki smile
Boht boht dhanyavaad bhai!!!Baki outstanding update bro
Well yes. Jaate samay flight se travel kiya tha. Aate samay train se. Dono ka maza liya.Kya Kahe is update ke bare me aisa dhmal mchaya hai aapne aate hi or lagta hai aapka vacation ✈ se travel karke hua hai, kya bariki se describe kiya hai ~ yatri gan kripya dhyan de... 30 ghante ek jagah baithna kafi ubau hota hai pr jb banda khyalo me ho to time ka pta hi nhi chalta...
Mystic Touch!!!Ragni bhabhi ye vo mahila hai Jo apna hak chhin legi yadi uske 2-3 baar kahne pr na diya to, vahi Aaj veer ke Las Vegas Jane ki baat sunkr Accha mauke ka chauka mara hai, veer ki skill bhi romantic mahaul me atomatic active ho jati hai ye to or bhi mazedar hai, iski jarurat bhi Bahut padne vali hai is arc me, to bhabhi ko 2 baar discharge karva diya apne sensual touch se
Bilkul!!! Dekhte hai Veer kese nipatata hai Divya se.Ye divya madam inka Bio data padh kr hi pari or veer ko negative vibes aa rhi hai, veer to satark ho gya hai abhi se, divya ne veer ko jigolo kaha jispr veer or suhana dono ne react kiya, veer ko Ise accha sabak sikhana chahiye, dekhte hai Vo samay kab aata hai... Awesome update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab amazing Superb bhai
Bilkul! Shweta ne kabhi Ragini ko aise nahi dekha tha. Fir aise achanak unn kapdo me Veer ke saath akele shopping par jaana aur raat me waapas aana. Shaq toh hoega hi na?nice update .ye ragini kuch jyada hi kar baithi ,veer ke saath khule aam chuma chati aur uske baad sidha upar ke kapde nikal diye aur veer ko boobs chusne ko de diye..
shweta ko thoda shak ho gaya hai ki ragini veer ko apna banana chahti hai ,
Aage lagta hai heated arguments hone waale hai inke beech.divya ko dekhkar achcha nahi laga pari ko aur usse sambhalkar rehne ko bhi kaha veer ko .
divya ka character thoda kharab lag raha hai aur uski baate ekdam ghinauni .gigolo bol diya veer ko par is baar veer ne divya ko maafi maangne pe majbur kar diya .
Thanks a lot man!dekhte hai aisa kya matter hai jo ek detective ne suhana ko las vegas me bulaya aur kuch serious hai aisa kaha.
Okay! Jesa ki mne promise kia tha. Main review dungi...
To ye lo Sir.![]()
Kya baat hai.Aate hi dhamaal macha dia aapne.
Main literally kal apne bed pe lappy rakh k lights off kar, snacks khaate khaate
Main to ab se yahi karne wali hu.Har update ab main aise hi read karungi...
Mera uddeshya hi yahi rehta hai.Aap story ko read nahi karwate ho, aap story ko dikhaate ho. Mujhe aisa laga tha main sach me kisi theatre me hu aur saamne movie chal rahi h...![]()
Ye dikhaana toh zaroori tha. Par past hi past nahi dikhaana chaahta tha mein isliye, Veer ko khayaalo me dubaaya... Taaki usse kal ke kuch pal yaad aaye aur uske zariye mein ye dikha saku ki Veer ke sang kya hua.Uske baad aapne jo past dikhaaya h Veer k kal ka. Kitni khubsoorti se usse dikhaya h... Usme aapne sabko itna idea de diya ki Veer k saath plane me aane se pehle kya kya hua tha. Yahi to mayne rakhta h...Too good
Hats off to you for noticing this.Mne ye cheez pehle bhi notice ki thi. Par kabhi mne kaha nahi tha. Par aap punctuations ko istemal karne me sartaaj ho.Idhar aapne jo pehle exclamation mark use kiya aur uske baad question mark. Yadi main galat nahi hu to ye sab ye indicate karta h ki Suhana Veer se ye puchte samay usse ek prakaar se puch bhi rahi thi par saath hi saath wo keh bhi rahi thi. She exclaimed... Yahi choti choti baate to update ki khubsoorti par 4 chaand laga deti h... Apki format setting itni neat and clean hoti h ki padhte samay itni asaani hoti h ki kya batau. Koi unnecessary dots nahi, koi faaltu k gaps nahi. Yadi kisi writer ko update likhne k baad usse edit karwana h, to sabse upar naam aapka hona chahiye. Aap usse edit kar uski sundarta aur badha doge. Kamal ho Sir...
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Ye bhi mein boht Pehle se karta aa raha hu. Aur ye aksar writers use karte hai.Aur fir ye... Ragini Bhabhi ka haklaate hue ye kehna. Jo do baar P ko aapne dash se alag kiya h. Kitni hi asani se ham readers ko ye samajh aa gaya ki Ragini bhabhi ne kese kaha hoga ise... Jesa ki mne kaha... Yahi choti choti baate to updates ko aur sundar banaati h... Aur aapki writing ko bhi...![]()
Mein capital letters ko impact dikhaane ke liye use karta hu. Kisi bhaari cheez ko dikhaana. Jis cheez ka bhaar zyaada ho. Chaahe wo jeevit ya ajeevit cheezein hi kyu na ho. Yaha par jis tarah se Veer ne NOW kaha. Ye uske bhaar ko darshaata hai. Ki awaaz me kitna wazan tha. Aur isliye... Capital letters se accha aur kya hi ho sakta hai inhe express karne ke liye?Jis tarah se aap capital letters ka use karte ho. Amazing Sir...
Yaha isse padh k hi andaaza lagaya jaa sakta h ki Veer aur Suhana ne kis shabd ko zorr se kaha hoga. NOW and DIVYAAAA... aur jo extra A lagaaye h aapne. Ye indicate karta h ki Suhana kis bhaav se Divya ko chillaate hue bula rahi thi. Fabulous work.
Wese to kayi aur writers ye karte h par aap perfection se karte ho...
Ye update Laptop par type kiya tha kyuki mene.Mujhe iss update me ek bhi spelling mistakes nazar nahi aayi. What a beautiful experience it was...![]()
Actually yes. Aapne sahi guess kiya hai. Waapsi ke dauraan train me kisi se mulaqaat hui thi.Veer gaya hua h Las Vegas. Divya... Kitna alag kirdaar laye ho aap. Train me inspiration mil gayi thi kya koi Sir??Ya shayad flight se travel kiya ho aapne? Par kitna naya kirdaar h... Iss tarah ki female character kahani me nahi thi abhi tak. Dekhte h kese Veer aur Divya k beech conversations honge. Kyuki Divya to Veer k maze lene par tuli hogi...
Dekhte hai kya hota hai...Aur Veer hamara aisa hone nahi dega...Behas to pakka hoegi... Suhana ki dusri personality kab bahar aaegi? I believe issi arc me hume uska wo roop firse dekhne ko milega...
Boht boht dhanyavaad aapka. Boht hi kam readers itna accha review de paate hai. Aur aap ladki hoke itna sab kuch likh rahi hai. Warna ladkiya toh yaha aksar baat hi nahi karti ya kam karti hai. Aur ladki na maatr ke barabar hi hai yaha. Mujhe khushi hui ki aapne itna samay nikaal kar itni baato ko notice kar itna sab yaha likha. Boht boht shukriya!!!So so so... Amazing update Sir...Please ham readers ko issi tarah khush karte rahiye. Par apna bhi dhyan rakhiye. Jis din aap update na de pae to chalega... Ham samajh jaenge ki aapko koi kaam ya pareshani aa gayi h... Safe rahiye... Khush rahiye...
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Thanks a lot bhai!Wooohooooo wow boss...
Veer aur Ragini ka romance shuru ho hi gaya!! Aur kya zabardast scene create kare ho bhai
Maza hi aa gaya
Much much better than I expected...
Ye toh ek na ek din hona hi tha.The culmination of slow torture.. into blissful rupture!!
Ragini ke Slow cooker mein Pakte armaan achanak Garam doodh ki tarah ufan gaye...![]()
There is no duration. Scroll hai ye. Veer ne scroll ko consume kiya hai toh ye hamesha ab uske andar hai. Aur ye romantic situations me apne aap trigger hota hai. Par zaroori nahi hai ki harr romantic situations me trigger hoye.The breast play, dirty talk, the flavoured kiss! The explosive mix of love fueled with lust Blew my senses away.
Ye mystic touch sahi mil gaya hero ko. Will help him thaw ice queens.
Is ability ki duration nahi mention kari?
Divya is indeed a complex character. Lekin Suhana aur bhi complex hai. She has after all 2 personalities within her.The trip to Vegas will flesh out Suhana’s character and back story.
Love the interaction b/w veer and Pari.
Suhana to ek interesting character thi hi, ye Divya bhi kaafi complex bandi lag rahi hai. Time to time veer ko khud ko prove karna padega shayad.
Also Divya seems to have inherent shades of grey in her personality. Ye vamp type ki hai kaafi. Maybe not one of the good guys...
Boht boht dhanyavaad bhaaya!Maza ayega. After all complex characters make interesting stories intriguing!!!!
Waiting for next instalment with bated breath. And hats off to your continual streak![]()