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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery
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Death Kiñg
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Awesome Update.Update - 74 ~ Let the Hunt begin
[Contains gore related scenes.]
Ab tak...
Veer : Apni location bhej raha hu. Yaha do kachre ke dherr hai. Unhe alag karwana hai. Unse mein nipat chuka hu toh aur kuch mat karna.
Balhaar : Theek hai. Kaam ho jaega. Aur tumhaara kaam bhi ho gaya hai. Ek aham recording hai mere paas. Isse milkar hi dunga mein. Phone me nahi bhejunga.
Veer : Theek hai! Kya baat hai?
Aur fir Balhaar ne bas itna hi bataaya ki Slogan kya karne waala tha.
He was going for a..
FULL SCALE ATTACK!!!
Ab aage...
*Vrrrrrrrooooooooommmm*
Karan ki blue mulsanne road par sannaate hue bhaag rahi thi.
Blue mulsanne~
Lane me divider me lagi chamakti hui lights se car ki rims aise chamak rahi thi ki harr nikalta hua vyakti ek baar zaroor dekhne pe majboor ho jaata. Car thi hi aisi.
Karan drive kar raha tha aur uske bagal se Veer baitha hua tha. Wese uski blue mulsanne koi racing car nahi thi, par fir bhi abhi ke liye sahi thi. Kyuki, ye secured car khaas uski safety ke liye design kii gayi thi. Samay raat ka tha toh kismat thi unki jo traffic din ke muqaable kam tha. Warna traffic me hi laude lag jaate unn dono ke. Kyuki, Mumbai ke traffic se toh harr koi waaqif tha.
Veer khamosh baitha tha. Uss din Suman aur Aabha ko bachaane ke baad kayi nayi cheezein usse dekhne ko mili thi.
Sabse pehli baat toh wahi thi. Suman ki 126 ki favourability. Na keval Veer ko 300 points mile the balki usne ek chalta firta bomb taiyaar kar diya tha. Aisa kyu?
Kyuki Suman uske liye ab kuch bhi kar sakti thi. Aur jab kuch bhi kaha jaaye. Toh waqai, uska matlab kuch bhi hi tha.
SHE COULD EVEN KILL FOR VEER.
AND COULD EVEN DIE FOR HIM.
ABSOLUTE SERVITUDE!!!
Aur isliye, wo ek chalta firta bomb thi. Wahi dusri taraf Aabha ki favourability bhi skyrocket hoke 94 par pohuch chuki thi.
Veer unn 300 points ka upyog kar ke jald se jald apne stats full karna chaahta tha. Par usne aisa nahi kiya. Kyu?
Kyuki points ko bacha ke rakhna boht aham tha. Veer ko kayi baar aisa mehsoos hua tha ki yadi uske paas points hote toh woh kayi musibato se bach ke nikal sakta tha. Par uske 0 points ke chalte wo maat khaa jaata tha.
Isliye usne decide kar liya tha ki wo kuch points hamesha reserve me rakh ke chalega. Kya pata, kab kaha points ki zaroorat pad jaaye?
In case, yadi wo kisi situation me phassta hai toh yadi uske paas Points rahe toh shop se skill khareed ke wo uss situation se baahar aa sakta hai. Points ka reserve me rehna isliye important tha.
Bagal se Karan usse baar baar look de raha tha. Shayad kuch kehna chaah raha tha. Par Veer ko khamosh dekh wo chup hoke reh gaya.
Idhar Veer time pass nahi kar raha tha. Uske mann me already Enemy tracker skill active thi.
Aur target kaun tha??
STEVE!!!!!
*Beep* *Beep* *Beep*
Uske mann me wo laal bindu, jo Steve ki location ko darsha rahi thi, kaafi speed me ek location ki taraf badh rahi thi. Yaani ki Steve ne plan shuru kar diya tha. Wahi plan, jo Balhaar ne record kar ke Veer ko saup diya tha.
Veer ab bas Slogan ko ye dikhaana chaahta tha, ki wo uske jaal me fassi hui ek macchli hai. Par aisa tha nahi. Asal me toh wo khud hunter tha iss baar.
'This time... I will lay down the net for you!!!!'
Steve boss enemy nahi tha, toh obviously Basic Enemy Tracker skill kaam kar gayi. Bas, Veer yahi umeed kar raha tha ki...
Kaash...
Kaash, Slogan Steve ke saath hi baitha ho. Yadi aisa hua, toh Veer ek baar me hi uska kaam tamaam kar paega.
Kyuki ab chaahe usse mission mile ya na mile, Veer Slogan ko aur samay nahi dena chaahta tha. Warna ye uske aur uske qareebi ke liye aur bhi ghaatak ho sakta tha.
Par jaise system ne uske mann ki baat sunn lii thi aur tabhi,
*Ding*
[Mission : Kill Slogan at all cost.
Rewards : 1) ???? Points
2) One Random Skill
Time limit : 4 hours.
Mission Failure Penalty : 2000 Points Deduction.]
Aur mission padhte hi, Veer ke hontho par ek muskaan thi.
[You are surprisingly calm!]
Tabhi, Pari ki awaaz achanak hi uske mann me aayi.
'Kya matlab?'
[Matlab ye ki jab Aatish ko tumne maara tha. Tum sadme me the. Because, tumne pehi baar kisi ki jaan lii thi. So abhi ye mission milne ke baad tum kaafi shaant ho. No! Balki tum excited ho.]
'Hoo~ Kya meri Pari ko meri chinta ho rahi hai? Haan?'
[W-Wh-Who? Who cares for you? Hmph!]
'Toh fir achanak ye sawaal kyu?'
[Wo toh... Wo... Wo bas... Tumhaare andar pehle jaisi koi feelings nahi aayi iss waqt. Tum pehle sadme me the. Aatish ko maarne ke baad. But abhi tum ye jaante bhi ho ki tumhe kisi ki jaan lena hai. Still, you are calm. Isliye, mene pucha. Warna... Who cares for you? Hmph~ Stupid!]
Pari ki baat sunn Veer sarr jhukaate hue apni unn hatheliyo ko dekhne laga. Inhi haatho se usne Aatish ki jaan lii thi. Aur inhi ki wajah se wo Golu ko kho diya tha. Yadi inme tab aur taaqat hoti, toh aaj Karan ke hi jaise, uska ek aur dost uske bagal se baitha hota.
'Ye... Mere haath... Inme pehle hi khoon lag chuka hai Pari!!!'
[...]
'Ab inpe... Mera bas nahi chalta.'
[But...]
'Jo koi bhi mere parivaar ko nuksaan pohuchaane ke baare me sochega. Unhe mein apne raaste se hata dunga. Chaahe jaan hi kyu na leni pade mujhe.'
Pari kuch derr shaant rahi. Uske baad boli,
[Well, yes! That is the correct way. World unfair hai. Yadi koi ye sochta hai ki muskuraane se agla aadmi usse kuch nahi karega. Toh ye Bewakoofi hogi uski. Strong trample on weak. That is how world works. Yadi tum powerful ho, toh tumhari kahi gayi harr baat sahi hai.]
'I think so too! I have to get more powerful.'
[Yeah!!]
Pari aur Veer ki aapas me ho rahi baato se anibhigya, akhir kaar Karan ne kuch bolne ka socha.
Unke beech ki kaafi derr se maujood khamoshi ko usne toda,
Karan : You know what!? Mujhe nahi lagta tumhari info sahi hogi. Dad ne security boht high kar dii hai. So, I don't think aisa kuch hone waala hai.
Veer shaant tha. Usse pata tha ki Balhaar ki info pakki thi. Akhir usne khud wo video dekha tha jo Balhaar ne usse baad me diya tha. Wahi yaha Karan mood ko light karne ki koshish kar raha tha. Uske hisaab se security tight thi aur uski behan ko kuch nahi hone wala tha.
Aisa nahi tha ki wo apni behan ki chinta nahi karta tha. Veer se bhi zyaada fiqr usse Kaera ki thi. Par usse apni security par bhi bharosa tha. Isliye Karan ko laga ki shayad Veer bewajah hi zyaada fiqr kar raha hai.
Karan : Hey! Wese, tumne apne liye koi partner dhundi ya nahi?
Usne mood ko light karte hue kaha.
Veer : Tumhe abhi ye baat sujh rahi hai? Seriously?
Karan : What? Heyyy! Just answer me!
Veer (sighs) : Filhaal nahi!
Karan : You know what? I can introduce you to some fine ladies. Aur sab badi family se hi hai. Mere kehne par wo pakke se tumhaare sang... Hehehe~
Veer : You should think about yourself. Aur tezz drive karo. Hum late nahi ho sakte.
Karan : Driving me tumhe mujhse behtar driver nahi milega Veer. Foreign me mein harr weekends ki raat ko friends ke saath milkar hum track racing karte the. I'm one hell of a driver hahaha~
Kehte hue usne forun hi gaadi, 3rd se 4th gear me daal dii aur acceleration diya,
*Vrrrrooooooooooooooommmmm*
Gaadi sarpat bhaagte hue road par daudne lagi.
Veer ka haath uske seene me tange locket par tha. Usse kass ke thaame hue tha. Uski asal Maa ki dii hui ek maatr nishaani. Aaj wo kaise bhi kar ke, apne iss mission me fail nahi ho sakta tha.
Kyuki ye Final Fight thi. Ya toh aaj wo ghar lautne waala tha, ya fir Slogan.
There was no other way.
One has to kill the other!
***
Delhi Airport...
Time : 10 : 15 PM
Meanwhile, Delhi ke airport me iss waqt ek flight just arrive hui aur air strip par plane ki gati dheere dheere kam hoti jaa rahi thi.
Aur dekhte hi dekhte kuch hi palo me wo plane poori tarah se ruk gaya.
Andar passengers waali seat par se saare yaatri dheere dheere uth ke baahar ki orr nikalne lage. Air hostesses, unhe smile dete hue vida kar rahi thi.
Inhi seats me se do seats par ek naujavaan ladki aur ek khubsoorat mahila baithi hui thi.
"Mom!! Pohuch gaye. Uthiye!"
Uss ladki ne kehte hue apni Maa ko hilaaya toh wo mahila forun hi uth gayi. Wo toh bas thakaan ke chalte aankhein band kii hui araam kar rahi thi. Soyi nahi thi.
Apni beti ki baat sunn, haa me sarr hilaate hue wo dono maa beti, airport se nikle aur cab kar apne ghar ki orr nikal gaye.
Ghar pohuchte hi andar maujood ek kaam karne waali maid ne gate khola aur unn dono ka swaagat kiya.
Ye maid poori loyal thi unki. Isliye jab bhi wo kahi bhi jaate the, wo aksar hafto hafto tak akeli ghar me raha karti thi. Aur ghar ki poori dekh bhaal karti thi.
Andar aate hi, Dono Maa beti ek saath bed par girte hue pasar gayi. Dono ne ek dusre ko dekha. Aur fir dono hi zorr se hassne lagi.
"Sach me, boht thakaan ho gayi. Haaasshh! Finally, apne ghar ke sukoon ki kuch baat hi alag hoti hai. Hai na Mom?" Wo ladki boli.
Toh uski maa bhi muskuraayi, "Bilkul! Apne ghar ki baat toh kuch..." Bolte bolte wo achanak hi rukk gayi.
"Kya hua Mom?"
"K-Kuch nahi... Mein washroom se aati hu." Aur wo uth ke seedha washroom me chali gayi.
Uski beti keval usse jaata hua dekhti rahi. Wo asahaay, ekaaki, aur akeli aurat.
'Kab tak? Kab tak aur mujhse chhipaogi Mom? I already know what you are hiding.' Usne socha aur maayusi uske chehre par chha gayi.
Ye koi aur nahi, wahi thi. Bhavna ki ekmaatr ladki.
Aur wo aurat Veer ki asli maa thi ~ Bhavna.
Jo filhaal, yaha Bhavna nahi, balki Geeta ke naam se jaani jaati thi.
***
Mumbai...
xxxxxxx resort.
10:35 PM
Resort ki entrance par achaanak hi ek car aayi. Toh guard uth ke uss car ke nazdeek aaya. Aur...
*Thud* *Thud*
Usne haath se sheeshe par do baar thoka toh...
*Swwiiissshhhhh*
Sheesha neeche hua.
Guard : Peeche ki Dickey kholo.
Toh uss car ke driver ne haa me sarr hilaaya aur dickey khol dii. Guard ne poori Dickey check kii aur band kar andar jaane ka ishaara de diya.
*Vrrroooommm*
Car aage badhi aur andar jaati jaa rahi thi. Resort itna bada tha ki aisa lag raha tha kisi highway me gaadi chal rahi ho.
Ek jagah aake gaadi ruki aur driver ne gaadi ki headlights band kar dii. Par gaadi abhi bhi chaalu thi.
*CLICK*
Driver ki bagal waali seat par baithe aadmi ne lighter jalaaya aur cigerette ko muh me daal usse jala ke ek kash lagaaya.
Aur badi gambheerta se bola, "Aaj sab doodh ka doodh aur paani ka paani ho jaega."
Ye buland awaaz jo acche accho ki hawa tight kar de, kisi aur ki nahi, SLOGAN ki thi.
Aur Driving seat par baitha koi aur nahi, Slogan ka hi right hand aadmi, STEVE tha.
Steve : Yadi aapka anumaan sahi hai Dada. Toh woh yaha nahi aaega. Par...
Slogan : Hmm! Information usne sahi bheji. Par abhi uska aana baaki hai.
Yaha baat ho rahi thi ekmaatr shaks kii. Aur wo tha...
BALHAAR!!!
Aaj Balhaar ka test tha. Slogan jis din apna plan samjha raha tha Steve ko. Usse ek anubhuti hui thi ki kuch gadbad tha. Aur uska shaq, Balhaar par tha.
Isliye, aaj Balhaar ki pareeskha thi. Slogan ne Steve ko keh ke Balhaar ki saari chhaan been karwaayi thi. Par unhe kuch haasil na hua. Steve ka kehna tha ki Balhaar loyal hai. Par Slogan abhi bhi apni baat par ada hua tha. Kuch gadbad zaroor thi. Itna experience usne aise hi nahi haasil kar ke rakha tha.
Ye resort kisi aur ka nahi, balki Kaera ka tha. Jo usne haal hi me apne naam karwaaya tha. Aaj wo yaha bas bachi hui payment karne aayi thi. Slogan ko ye baat pehle hi apne aadmiyo se pata lag chuki thi. Par...
Par wo Balhaar ko test karna chaahta tha. Yadi Balhaar bekasoor tha, yadi usne gaddaari nahi kii hogi, toh woh behsaq sab kuch sahi details dene waala tha. Isliye Slogan ne resort ki saari details laane ka kaam Balhaar ko saup diya.
Yadi, Balhaar galat info deta, toh Slogan ko pata lag jaata aur wo Balhaar ko dhad dabochta. Par aisa na hua. Balhaar ne usse ekdum sahi info dii.
Ki ye resort Kaera ka hai, aur wo iss tareekh ko iss samay par iss gaadi se yaha payment dene aaegi. Information itni sahi thi ki Slogan ka Balhaar ke upar se shaq samaapt ho jaana chahiye tha. Lekin fir bhi... Aisa na hua.
Kuch tha, jo Slogan ko andar se kachot raha tha. Jese abhaas dila raha tha ki kuch gadbad hai.
Aur tabhi,
Resort ki main building ka bada sa automatic glass door khula aur ek behad khubsoorat ladki ek sundar sii dress me baahar aayi.
KAERA!!!!
Aur usse dekhte hi, Slogan ki aankh me ek chamak aa gayi. Wesi chamak jesi ek saanp ko ande dekhte waqt aati hai.
Aur tabhi usse side se aata hua Balhaar nazar aaya.
Usne unki car ki taraf dekha par kiya kuch nahi.
Slogan ne ek kaam usse aur saupa tha. Uska kaam ye tha ki... Kaera ko jaake bas itna kehna ki uss car me Veer uska intezaar kar raha hai.
Kaera nazdeek aaegi, car me peeche baithe aur do log Kaera ke bodyguards ko restrict karenge, Steve issi beech Kaera ko car me daalega aur wo khud tab tak driver seat par aake car aage badha chuka hoga.
Yahi Slogan ka plan tha. In fact peeche baithe do logo ko ye bhi nahi pata tha ki Slogan unhe yaha maarne laaya hai. Bali ka bakra bana ke.
Wo bas, wait kar raha tha. Balhaar ke call ki. Yadi usne call kiya, aur jesa bataaya gaya tha wesa kiya iska matlab tha ki Balhaar dhokebaaz nahi tha. He was loyal. Wo apni pareeskha me pass ho jaega.
Tabhi Slogan aur Steve dono ne hi dekha ki Balhaar ne apna phone nikaala aur call lagaaya.
Unn dono ne apne apne phone baahar nikaale par...
Call nahi aaya.
Slogan : Huh??
Steve (frowns) : Ye call kyu nahi aaya.
Aur tabhi, Slogan ne dekha ki...
Balhaar wahi shaant khada hua tha. Uske chehre par agle hi pal... Dheere dheere... Shaitano waali muskaan bikharti jaa rahi thi.
Uss andhere me keval halki roshni me, Balhaar ke chehre ki wo daraavni muskaan dekh, aaj pehli baar itne saalo me...
SLOGAN ke raungte khade ho gaye.
Steve ko jese hi samajh aaya wo chillaaya,
Steve : BALHAAAARRRRRR!!!!
SLOGAN sahi tha. Wo sahi tha. Balhaar was a fucking traiter.
Aur Steve ne abhi chillaya hi tha ki...
*BAAAAAANGGGGGGGGGGGG*
*SPLUUUUURRRTTTTTT*
Achanak hi Slogan ke chehre par khoon ke cheethe bikhar gaye.
STEVE WAS DEAD!!!!
Car ke window glass ko cheerti hui, bullet aayi aur uski khopdi ko phaadte hue ghus gayi. Sarr ka maas aadha latak gaya aur car ke andar khoon ke cheethe bikhar gaye. Slogan ke chehre par jo khoon laga tha, wo Steve ka hi tha. Maano uske toh dil ki dhadkan hi band ho gayi thi achanak se ye sab dekh.
"Aaaaahhhhhh!!!!" Kaera jisne sab kuch dur se dekha wo chillaayi. Aur uske bodyguards forun hi aakar usse gher ke andar le jaane lage.
Idhar Slogan ne tabhi, door khola aur...
*Thud*
Steve ke shareer ko laat se maar ke baahar giraaya. Palak jhapakte hi wo Driving seat par aaya, uska perr accelerator par aur...
*Vrrrrrrrrrrroooooooommm*
Zorr se race dete hue gaadi aage badhi...
*BAAAAAAAANNNGGGGGG*
Ek aur goli chalne ki awaaz aayi par Slogan bach ke nikal chuka tha.
Akhir kya hua palak jhapakte hi? Boht kuch hua tha.
Resort ke upari bhaag par hi...
There was a SNIPER!!!
Jo kisi aur ne nahi Veer ne hi Karan ko keh ke rakhwaaye the. Aur sniper ne apna kaam bakhubi kiya. Ek sarr dard jaa chuka tha. Steve!
*Badump* *Badump*
Slogan ki dhadkane yaha train ke jese tezz ho chuki thi. Seconds me hi kya se kya ho gaya tha.
Par uske chehre par bhayankar gussa bhara hua tha.
"Veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrr!!!"
Wo chillaya. Kyuki, of course...
Uske siwa aur kaun kar sakta tha ye? Aaj usse ek baat ka pata lag gaya tha ki,
He underestimated Veer!!!
Slogan ko ye nahi pata tha ki jab wo Balhaar ka test lene ke liye usse Resort ki info laane ko saup raha tha, toh woh apni hi qabar khod raha tha.
Balhaar ne jaan bujh ke Kaera ki ekdum sahi info dii thi. Taaki, Slogan yaha aaye Kaera ko pakadne ke liye.
Balhaar ne shuru se ant tak aasvaashan jataate hue aur bharosa dilaate hue unhe yakeen dilaaya tha ki kaam ho jaega. Wo ant tak Slogan aur Steve ko shaq me rakha raha. Keval iss moment ke liye.
Steve ke jaane se, ek jhatka toh lag hi gaya tha Slogan ko.
Aur ye sab kiske kehne par kiya tha Balhaar ne?
Veer!!!!
Jaha Slogan ye samajh raha tha ki wo Balhaar ka test lega aur Kaera ko pakad bhi lega toh wahi Veer ne jaan boojh ke Balhaar ka test lene diya. Usne jaan boojh ke Kaera ki ekdum sahi location dilwaayi Balhaar se.
Yahi kaaran tha ki Veer ne Karan ko apne sang rakha. Karan ne security badhwa dii thi aur upar Snipers rakhwa diye the, Veer ke kehne par.
Aur Veer ne jaan boojh ke ye jagah chuni. Ye Kaera ka hi resort tha. In other words, yadi Steve marra bhi, toh Police ka koi lafda hone hi nahi waala tha. Veer was totally safe.
It was a plan to lure out a snake out of its cave. Saanp ko maarne ke liye usse uske bil se nikaalna zaroori tha. Wahi kiya tha Veer ne.
*Craaaaasssssssshhhhhhh*
Slogan ki car entrance ke barrier ko todte hue nikli, Guard bas daudta hi reh gaya uske peeche.
Aur Balhaar jo phone pe call laga raha tha usne phone me bola,
Balhaar : Wo nikal gaya.
"Good!!!" Dusri taraf se awaaz aayi, jo kisi aur ki nahi, Veer ki hi thi.
Entrance se baahar nikalte hi jese hi Slogan ki car sadak par aayi. Uske theek peeche se hi kuch hi duri par...
Ek aur car aa rahi thi.
Karan : Wo rahi car... Damn it!!!! Tum sahi the!!!
Veer (smiles) : I told you!!!
Karan kuch na bola. Kyuki, yadi car dikhi toh ab plan ke next move ko anjaam dene ka tha.
Usne seedha call Jassi ko lagaaya.
Karan : Jasssssiiiiii!!!
Jassi : Got it!!!
*Call ends*
Jassi jo ek mod par car ke andar baitha hua tha usne sheesha khol apne haath se bas ek baar aage badhne ka ishaara kiya aur...
Kareeb 15 se 20 gaadiya ikhatte mod se nikal ke main road par aa gayi.
*Vrrrrroooooommmmm*
SLOGAN jo gaadi chala ke bhaag raha tha usne jese hi apne daayi taraf dekha toh uske hosh hi udd gaye.
Daayi taraf se na jaane kitni saari kaali gaadiya bas nikalte hi jaa rahi thi. Uske toh maano chehre se rang hi udd chuka tha.
"Fuuuucckkkkkk!!!!" Wo kheejte hue chillaaya.
"D-Dadaaaa!!! Ab kya karna hai???" Peeche baitha ek chillaaya.
Slogan ke daant aapas me gusse se kitkita rahe the. Uska poora dhyaan filhaal gaaadiyo ko chakma deke bhaagne me tha.
"VEEEEERRRRR!!! DAMNNN YOUUU!!"
Just what really happened? Uska plan backfire kese kar gaya? Wo jaanta tha ki yadi Balhaar dhoka bhi dega toh zyaada se zyaada kya hoga?
Usse pata chalega aur wo waha se turant hi Kaera ko chorr ke bhaag niklega. Akhir isliye toh usne Steve se keh ke car ko on hi rakha tha waha par. Ki kuch bhi yadi ho, toh forun bhaag sake.
Par...
What he didn't understand was that...
Usne Veer ko underestimate kar diya. Wo sochta tha ki Veer bas ek ladka tha jo ladna jaanta tha bas. Uski halki fulki pehchaan thi aur wo Kaera ki nazron me ek accha ladka tha. Bas, iss se zyada koi impression nahi tha Slogan ke mann me Veer ke liye.
Aur yahi par usse muh ki khaani pad gayi aaj.
Uska plan simple tha. Ek gaadi me jaana jis se bhaagne me asaani ho, yadi kuch gadbad hoti hai toh. Yadi nahi hoti hai toh plan simple hi tha aage bhi.
Kaera ko kidnap karna, aur fir usse apni destination par laana.
Slogan ne saara intezaam kyuki wahi karke rakha hua tha. Usse laga tha ki yadi wo Kaera ko kidnap kar ke le jaega. Toh Kishor shaant nahi baithega. Wo definitely apni poori security bhej dega Kaera ki khoj me. Aur wo ye bhi jaanta tha ki Kishor ki security uska thikaan dhundh bhi legi.
Par...
Par yadi dhundh bhi liya toh kya?
Yahi toh plan tha uska. Usne itne aadmi aur itni force waha laga ke rakhi thi ki yadi Kaera ki security enter karti bhi hai toh unhe poori tarah se andar aane me kaafi samay lag jaega. Yadi Kishor copter bhi bhejta hai toh uska intezaam bhi tha Slogan ke paas. Rocket launcher!!!
Aur jab tak security uski gang se bhidegi, tab tak Slogan Kaera ko thikaane laga chuka hoga.
Uska lakshya poora ho chuka hoga. Par...
Par na keval aaj usne apne lakshya ko khoya, balki Steve ko bhi kho diya tha.
Aur itna hi nahi, uski haalat bheegi billi ki tarah ho chuki thi.
AND, IT WAS ALL BECAUSE OF THAT FUCKING VEER!!!
Of course, yadi Veer nahi tha toh aur kaun tha? Kishor ko bhali bhaati jaanta tha Slogan. Uspe intelligence bhi rakhta tha. Ye uska kaam hargiz nahi tha.
'Kahi wo toh nahi? N-Nahi... Wo nahi ho sakta.'
Sochte hue usne mann ko shaant karne ki koshish kii.
Par gussa uske chehre se jaa hi nahi raha tha.
Ek hi upaay tha. Jald se jald wo apni destination par pohuch jaaye.
Par peeche...
*Vrrrroooommm*
*Vrrrrooooooom*
*Vrrrrooooooom*
Dherr saari gaadiya uske peeche lagi hui thi.
Aur tabhi,
*BANNNNGGGGGGGGGG*
Ek bullet aayi aur seedha aake uski car ke right mirror se lagi aur mirror ko poora ukhaad ke alag kar dii.
"Daaamnnn itttt!!!!"
Iss hamle ka jawaab dene ke liye, Slogan ke saath peeche baithe wo do aadmi bhi apni apni gun nikaal cross firing shuru kar diye.
*BANG*
*BANNNNGGGGGGGGGG*
Jassi aur Raghu, apne poore aadmiyo ke saath uske peeche the. Saathi hi Veer aur Karan bhi.
Slogan ki car ek sunsaan raaste me ghusti jaa rahi thi.
Ye lamba route tha.
Aur rasta aisa tha ki chaah ke bhi Veer aur Karan uski gaadi ko overtake kar usse rok nahi sakte the.
Par Veer ke hontho par muskaan thi. Wo confident tha.
Kitna bhi kyu na bhaag le Slogan, aaj uska ant nishchit tha. Wo isliye kyuki...
Upar halke ghane badlo me jo chamak kar apni roshni bikher raha tha. Wo tha...
FULL MOON!!!
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!
Next update boht dhamakedaar hoega. Ye aap anumaan laga hi sakte ho.
Like karne ka aur revos rakhne ka yaara!
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बेहद रोमांचक और शक्तिशाली अनुच्छेद। स्लोगन का समय लगता है की सामने आ गया है। लेकिन उसका एक बात खटक रहा है की "कहीं वो तो नहीं"। यह वो दूसरा कौन होगा जो स्लोगन के संग संग वीर को को भली भांति जानता है?अगला अनुच्छेद के प्रतीक्षा मे रहेंगे।
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Arre bhai! Rula diya!So, Update 70 started off with Veer reaching the party place... And as expected Kavya and Aarohi were visibly surprised to see the difference in Veer's appearance, afterall appearance of 75 is huge compared to what he was having earlier... Aarohi ka Veer ki presence mein sharmana, us se baat karte huye baar - baar blush karna, it was quite evident that she's attracted towards Veer... Joki kahin na kahin laazmi bhi tha, because Veer saved her from Aatish that Night, then how things have unfolded between them, Aarohi has somehow started Falling for him (Veer ke liye uska past ka bura behaviour bhi iska ek bada kaaran hai)... And now, this kiss... Or should I say an accidental kiss... Jo bhi ho, The story has the first glimpses of “Incest” in the 70th Update, and taking into note the fact that each update is of around 3.5-4k words... This is what makes the story and the writer special, that's the reason of this story being one of the best “Incest” stories on the forum already & Cheers for that Werewolf bro! (This story is a perfect example of Plot >>> Sex, exactly what I look for in a story).
Thanks a lot bro! Yes! Arohi has already started developing certain feelings which she's right now unsure of. Once she comes to know that she's fallen in love with her own brother. Things will get crazy. XD
For now, Arohi's scene hasn't been shown up after that kiss. Considering, how jealous she gets when seeing Veer with others. This kiss might cool her down a bit, and she'll keep a distance from Veer. Here, Veer will have to come forward to sort out that awkwardness between them.
Yeah!Pranjal urf chhote kameene, ko ek perfect example mila hoga, What you sow so shall you reap, ka... Veer ko sabke saamne beizzat karne ka jo tareeka usne socha tha wahi uspar bhaari pad gaya aur fir...
Jo dusro ke liye gaddha khodte hai, wo khud hi uss me gir jaate hai.
Uska target filhaal Veer nahi.
He has a plan already.
Wtf! Ragini = Ashleel?? By the way this scene suddenly reminded me of something related with this name - “Ragini”
Yes! Kritika is attracted. But so are Sonia, Kaera, and others.
Can Kritika withstand girls at Kaera's calibre?
Well yes! Things that she used to for Vivek. She's now doing those for Veer. And this is why Veer came to know about a new feeling, when he admits that it's so good to have a caring wife like her.
But how can she admit it? It's not easy for her.
Bilkul! Ek toh maa hai woh do baccho ki. Married hai already aur upar se Veer uska student hai. Plus the age gap. Age gap ko toh ek baar fir bhi nazarandaaz kar sakte hai. Ye kehke ki, Age is just a number.
But... Jail is also just a room.
Balhaar! We'll have to see, how much he can take over.
Ragini ke saath interesting scenes dekhne ko milenge. And so with Arohi too. Pranjal's plot will start simultaneously after Slogan's plot. Vivek! We'll see what he does.
Nidhi ka plan filhaal toh yahi hai.
Very very soon...
Simply Amazing piece of writing bro! That Aarohi scene, I just loved it... Then the conversation with Ragini and her gestures, that was written beautifully by you... And as always the scene involving Nidhi was written with perfection! Without a doubt, you are a master in writing those conversations and portraying the deep feelings between story characters... Great work mate!
Thanks a lot bro! It means a lot! Ju ke revos padhne me dil khush ho jaata hai.
Keep supporting yaara!
Bane rehna!!!
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Ab tak ka sab se best update bhaiUpdate - 74 ~ Let the Hunt begin
[Contains gore related scenes.]
Ab tak...
Veer : Apni location bhej raha hu. Yaha do kachre ke dherr hai. Unhe alag karwana hai. Unse mein nipat chuka hu toh aur kuch mat karna.
Balhaar : Theek hai. Kaam ho jaega. Aur tumhaara kaam bhi ho gaya hai. Ek aham recording hai mere paas. Isse milkar hi dunga mein. Phone me nahi bhejunga.
Veer : Theek hai! Kya baat hai?
Aur fir Balhaar ne bas itna hi bataaya ki Slogan kya karne waala tha.
He was going for a..
FULL SCALE ATTACK!!!
Ab aage...
*Vrrrrrrrooooooooommmm*
Karan ki blue mulsanne road par sannaate hue bhaag rahi thi.
Blue mulsanne~
Lane me divider me lagi chamakti hui lights se car ki rims aise chamak rahi thi ki harr nikalta hua vyakti ek baar zaroor dekhne pe majboor ho jaata. Car thi hi aisi.
Karan drive kar raha tha aur uske bagal se Veer baitha hua tha. Wese uski blue mulsanne koi racing car nahi thi, par fir bhi abhi ke liye sahi thi. Kyuki, ye secured car khaas uski safety ke liye design kii gayi thi. Samay raat ka tha toh kismat thi unki jo traffic din ke muqaable kam tha. Warna traffic me hi laude lag jaate unn dono ke. Kyuki, Mumbai ke traffic se toh harr koi waaqif tha.
Veer khamosh baitha tha. Uss din Suman aur Aabha ko bachaane ke baad kayi nayi cheezein usse dekhne ko mili thi.
Sabse pehli baat toh wahi thi. Suman ki 126 ki favourability. Na keval Veer ko 300 points mile the balki usne ek chalta firta bomb taiyaar kar diya tha. Aisa kyu?
Kyuki Suman uske liye ab kuch bhi kar sakti thi. Aur jab kuch bhi kaha jaaye. Toh waqai, uska matlab kuch bhi hi tha.
SHE COULD EVEN KILL FOR VEER.
AND COULD EVEN DIE FOR HIM.
ABSOLUTE SERVITUDE!!!
Aur isliye, wo ek chalta firta bomb thi. Wahi dusri taraf Aabha ki favourability bhi skyrocket hoke 94 par pohuch chuki thi.
Veer unn 300 points ka upyog kar ke jald se jald apne stats full karna chaahta tha. Par usne aisa nahi kiya. Kyu?
Kyuki points ko bacha ke rakhna boht aham tha. Veer ko kayi baar aisa mehsoos hua tha ki yadi uske paas points hote toh woh kayi musibato se bach ke nikal sakta tha. Par uske 0 points ke chalte wo maat khaa jaata tha.
Isliye usne decide kar liya tha ki wo kuch points hamesha reserve me rakh ke chalega. Kya pata, kab kaha points ki zaroorat pad jaaye?
In case, yadi wo kisi situation me phassta hai toh yadi uske paas Points rahe toh shop se skill khareed ke wo uss situation se baahar aa sakta hai. Points ka reserve me rehna isliye important tha.
Bagal se Karan usse baar baar look de raha tha. Shayad kuch kehna chaah raha tha. Par Veer ko khamosh dekh wo chup hoke reh gaya.
Idhar Veer time pass nahi kar raha tha. Uske mann me already Enemy tracker skill active thi.
Aur target kaun tha??
STEVE!!!!!
*Beep* *Beep* *Beep*
Uske mann me wo laal bindu, jo Steve ki location ko darsha rahi thi, kaafi speed me ek location ki taraf badh rahi thi. Yaani ki Steve ne plan shuru kar diya tha. Wahi plan, jo Balhaar ne record kar ke Veer ko saup diya tha.
Veer ab bas Slogan ko ye dikhaana chaahta tha, ki wo uske jaal me fassi hui ek macchli hai. Par aisa tha nahi. Asal me toh wo khud hunter tha iss baar.
'This time... I will lay down the net for you!!!!'
Steve boss enemy nahi tha, toh obviously Basic Enemy Tracker skill kaam kar gayi. Bas, Veer yahi umeed kar raha tha ki...
Kaash...
Kaash, Slogan Steve ke saath hi baitha ho. Yadi aisa hua, toh Veer ek baar me hi uska kaam tamaam kar paega.
Kyuki ab chaahe usse mission mile ya na mile, Veer Slogan ko aur samay nahi dena chaahta tha. Warna ye uske aur uske qareebi ke liye aur bhi ghaatak ho sakta tha.
Par jaise system ne uske mann ki baat sunn lii thi aur tabhi,
*Ding*
[Mission : Kill Slogan at all cost.
Rewards : 1) ???? Points
2) One Random Skill
Time limit : 4 hours.
Mission Failure Penalty : 2000 Points Deduction.]
Aur mission padhte hi, Veer ke hontho par ek muskaan thi.
[You are surprisingly calm!]
Tabhi, Pari ki awaaz achanak hi uske mann me aayi.
'Kya matlab?'
[Matlab ye ki jab Aatish ko tumne maara tha. Tum sadme me the. Because, tumne pehi baar kisi ki jaan lii thi. So abhi ye mission milne ke baad tum kaafi shaant ho. No! Balki tum excited ho.]
'Hoo~ Kya meri Pari ko meri chinta ho rahi hai? Haan?'
[W-Wh-Who? Who cares for you? Hmph!]
'Toh fir achanak ye sawaal kyu?'
[Wo toh... Wo... Wo bas... Tumhaare andar pehle jaisi koi feelings nahi aayi iss waqt. Tum pehle sadme me the. Aatish ko maarne ke baad. But abhi tum ye jaante bhi ho ki tumhe kisi ki jaan lena hai. Still, you are calm. Isliye, mene pucha. Warna... Who cares for you? Hmph~ Stupid!]
Pari ki baat sunn Veer sarr jhukaate hue apni unn hatheliyo ko dekhne laga. Inhi haatho se usne Aatish ki jaan lii thi. Aur inhi ki wajah se wo Golu ko kho diya tha. Yadi inme tab aur taaqat hoti, toh aaj Karan ke hi jaise, uska ek aur dost uske bagal se baitha hota.
'Ye... Mere haath... Inme pehle hi khoon lag chuka hai Pari!!!'
[...]
'Ab inpe... Mera bas nahi chalta.'
[But...]
'Jo koi bhi mere parivaar ko nuksaan pohuchaane ke baare me sochega. Unhe mein apne raaste se hata dunga. Chaahe jaan hi kyu na leni pade mujhe.'
Pari kuch derr shaant rahi. Uske baad boli,
[Well, yes! That is the correct way. World unfair hai. Yadi koi ye sochta hai ki muskuraane se agla aadmi usse kuch nahi karega. Toh ye Bewakoofi hogi uski. Strong trample on weak. That is how world works. Yadi tum powerful ho, toh tumhari kahi gayi harr baat sahi hai.]
'I think so too! I have to get more powerful.'
[Yeah!!]
Pari aur Veer ki aapas me ho rahi baato se anibhigya, akhir kaar Karan ne kuch bolne ka socha.
Unke beech ki kaafi derr se maujood khamoshi ko usne toda,
Karan : You know what!? Mujhe nahi lagta tumhari info sahi hogi. Dad ne security boht high kar dii hai. So, I don't think aisa kuch hone waala hai.
Veer shaant tha. Usse pata tha ki Balhaar ki info pakki thi. Akhir usne khud wo video dekha tha jo Balhaar ne usse baad me diya tha. Wahi yaha Karan mood ko light karne ki koshish kar raha tha. Uske hisaab se security tight thi aur uski behan ko kuch nahi hone wala tha.
Aisa nahi tha ki wo apni behan ki chinta nahi karta tha. Veer se bhi zyaada fiqr usse Kaera ki thi. Par usse apni security par bhi bharosa tha. Isliye Karan ko laga ki shayad Veer bewajah hi zyaada fiqr kar raha hai.
Karan : Hey! Wese, tumne apne liye koi partner dhundi ya nahi?
Usne mood ko light karte hue kaha.
Veer : Tumhe abhi ye baat sujh rahi hai? Seriously?
Karan : What? Heyyy! Just answer me!
Veer (sighs) : Filhaal nahi!
Karan : You know what? I can introduce you to some fine ladies. Aur sab badi family se hi hai. Mere kehne par wo pakke se tumhaare sang... Hehehe~
Veer : You should think about yourself. Aur tezz drive karo. Hum late nahi ho sakte.
Karan : Driving me tumhe mujhse behtar driver nahi milega Veer. Foreign me mein harr weekends ki raat ko friends ke saath milkar hum track racing karte the. I'm one hell of a driver hahaha~
Kehte hue usne forun hi gaadi, 3rd se 4th gear me daal dii aur acceleration diya,
*Vrrrrooooooooooooooommmmm*
Gaadi sarpat bhaagte hue road par daudne lagi.
Veer ka haath uske seene me tange locket par tha. Usse kass ke thaame hue tha. Uski asal Maa ki dii hui ek maatr nishaani. Aaj wo kaise bhi kar ke, apne iss mission me fail nahi ho sakta tha.
Kyuki ye Final Fight thi. Ya toh aaj wo ghar lautne waala tha, ya fir Slogan.
There was no other way.
One has to kill the other!
***
Delhi Airport...
Time : 10 : 15 PM
Meanwhile, Delhi ke airport me iss waqt ek flight just arrive hui aur air strip par plane ki gati dheere dheere kam hoti jaa rahi thi.
Aur dekhte hi dekhte kuch hi palo me wo plane poori tarah se ruk gaya.
Andar passengers waali seat par se saare yaatri dheere dheere uth ke baahar ki orr nikalne lage. Air hostesses, unhe smile dete hue vida kar rahi thi.
Inhi seats me se do seats par ek naujavaan ladki aur ek khubsoorat mahila baithi hui thi.
"Mom!! Pohuch gaye. Uthiye!"
Uss ladki ne kehte hue apni Maa ko hilaaya toh wo mahila forun hi uth gayi. Wo toh bas thakaan ke chalte aankhein band kii hui araam kar rahi thi. Soyi nahi thi.
Apni beti ki baat sunn, haa me sarr hilaate hue wo dono maa beti, airport se nikle aur cab kar apne ghar ki orr nikal gaye.
Ghar pohuchte hi andar maujood ek kaam karne waali maid ne gate khola aur unn dono ka swaagat kiya.
Ye maid poori loyal thi unki. Isliye jab bhi wo kahi bhi jaate the, wo aksar hafto hafto tak akeli ghar me raha karti thi. Aur ghar ki poori dekh bhaal karti thi.
Andar aate hi, Dono Maa beti ek saath bed par girte hue pasar gayi. Dono ne ek dusre ko dekha. Aur fir dono hi zorr se hassne lagi.
"Sach me, boht thakaan ho gayi. Haaasshh! Finally, apne ghar ke sukoon ki kuch baat hi alag hoti hai. Hai na Mom?" Wo ladki boli.
Toh uski maa bhi muskuraayi, "Bilkul! Apne ghar ki baat toh kuch..." Bolte bolte wo achanak hi rukk gayi.
"Kya hua Mom?"
"K-Kuch nahi... Mein washroom se aati hu." Aur wo uth ke seedha washroom me chali gayi.
Uski beti keval usse jaata hua dekhti rahi. Wo asahaay, ekaaki, aur akeli aurat.
'Kab tak? Kab tak aur mujhse chhipaogi Mom? I already know what you are hiding.' Usne socha aur maayusi uske chehre par chha gayi.
Ye koi aur nahi, wahi thi. Bhavna ki ekmaatr ladki.
Aur wo aurat Veer ki asli maa thi ~ Bhavna.
Jo filhaal, yaha Bhavna nahi, balki Geeta ke naam se jaani jaati thi.
***
Mumbai...
xxxxxxx resort.
10:35 PM
Resort ki entrance par achaanak hi ek car aayi. Toh guard uth ke uss car ke nazdeek aaya. Aur...
*Thud* *Thud*
Usne haath se sheeshe par do baar thoka toh...
*Swwiiissshhhhh*
Sheesha neeche hua.
Guard : Peeche ki Dickey kholo.
Toh uss car ke driver ne haa me sarr hilaaya aur dickey khol dii. Guard ne poori Dickey check kii aur band kar andar jaane ka ishaara de diya.
*Vrrroooommm*
Car aage badhi aur andar jaati jaa rahi thi. Resort itna bada tha ki aisa lag raha tha kisi highway me gaadi chal rahi ho.
Ek jagah aake gaadi ruki aur driver ne gaadi ki headlights band kar dii. Par gaadi abhi bhi chaalu thi.
*CLICK*
Driver ki bagal waali seat par baithe aadmi ne lighter jalaaya aur cigerette ko muh me daal usse jala ke ek kash lagaaya.
Aur badi gambheerta se bola, "Aaj sab doodh ka doodh aur paani ka paani ho jaega."
Ye buland awaaz jo acche accho ki hawa tight kar de, kisi aur ki nahi, SLOGAN ki thi.
Aur Driving seat par baitha koi aur nahi, Slogan ka hi right hand aadmi, STEVE tha.
Steve : Yadi aapka anumaan sahi hai Dada. Toh woh yaha nahi aaega. Par...
Slogan : Hmm! Information usne sahi bheji. Par abhi uska aana baaki hai.
Yaha baat ho rahi thi ekmaatr shaks kii. Aur wo tha...
BALHAAR!!!
Aaj Balhaar ka test tha. Slogan jis din apna plan samjha raha tha Steve ko. Usse ek anubhuti hui thi ki kuch gadbad tha. Aur uska shaq, Balhaar par tha.
Isliye, aaj Balhaar ki pareeskha thi. Slogan ne Steve ko keh ke Balhaar ki saari chhaan been karwaayi thi. Par unhe kuch haasil na hua. Steve ka kehna tha ki Balhaar loyal hai. Par Slogan abhi bhi apni baat par ada hua tha. Kuch gadbad zaroor thi. Itna experience usne aise hi nahi haasil kar ke rakha tha.
Ye resort kisi aur ka nahi, balki Kaera ka tha. Jo usne haal hi me apne naam karwaaya tha. Aaj wo yaha bas bachi hui payment karne aayi thi. Slogan ko ye baat pehle hi apne aadmiyo se pata lag chuki thi. Par...
Par wo Balhaar ko test karna chaahta tha. Yadi Balhaar bekasoor tha, yadi usne gaddaari nahi kii hogi, toh woh behsaq sab kuch sahi details dene waala tha. Isliye Slogan ne resort ki saari details laane ka kaam Balhaar ko saup diya.
Yadi, Balhaar galat info deta, toh Slogan ko pata lag jaata aur wo Balhaar ko dhad dabochta. Par aisa na hua. Balhaar ne usse ekdum sahi info dii.
Ki ye resort Kaera ka hai, aur wo iss tareekh ko iss samay par iss gaadi se yaha payment dene aaegi. Information itni sahi thi ki Slogan ka Balhaar ke upar se shaq samaapt ho jaana chahiye tha. Lekin fir bhi... Aisa na hua.
Kuch tha, jo Slogan ko andar se kachot raha tha. Jese abhaas dila raha tha ki kuch gadbad hai.
Aur tabhi,
Resort ki main building ka bada sa automatic glass door khula aur ek behad khubsoorat ladki ek sundar sii dress me baahar aayi.
KAERA!!!!
Aur usse dekhte hi, Slogan ki aankh me ek chamak aa gayi. Wesi chamak jesi ek saanp ko ande dekhte waqt aati hai.
Aur tabhi usse side se aata hua Balhaar nazar aaya.
Usne unki car ki taraf dekha par kiya kuch nahi.
Slogan ne ek kaam usse aur saupa tha. Uska kaam ye tha ki... Kaera ko jaake bas itna kehna ki uss car me Veer uska intezaar kar raha hai.
Kaera nazdeek aaegi, car me peeche baithe aur do log Kaera ke bodyguards ko restrict karenge, Steve issi beech Kaera ko car me daalega aur wo khud tab tak driver seat par aake car aage badha chuka hoga.
Yahi Slogan ka plan tha. In fact peeche baithe do logo ko ye bhi nahi pata tha ki Slogan unhe yaha maarne laaya hai. Bali ka bakra bana ke.
Wo bas, wait kar raha tha. Balhaar ke call ki. Yadi usne call kiya, aur jesa bataaya gaya tha wesa kiya iska matlab tha ki Balhaar dhokebaaz nahi tha. He was loyal. Wo apni pareeskha me pass ho jaega.
Tabhi Slogan aur Steve dono ne hi dekha ki Balhaar ne apna phone nikaala aur call lagaaya.
Unn dono ne apne apne phone baahar nikaale par...
Call nahi aaya.
Slogan : Huh??
Steve (frowns) : Ye call kyu nahi aaya.
Aur tabhi, Slogan ne dekha ki...
Balhaar wahi shaant khada hua tha. Uske chehre par agle hi pal... Dheere dheere... Shaitano waali muskaan bikharti jaa rahi thi.
Uss andhere me keval halki roshni me, Balhaar ke chehre ki wo daraavni muskaan dekh, aaj pehli baar itne saalo me...
SLOGAN ke raungte khade ho gaye.
Steve ko jese hi samajh aaya wo chillaaya,
Steve : BALHAAAARRRRRR!!!!
SLOGAN sahi tha. Wo sahi tha. Balhaar was a fucking traiter.
Aur Steve ne abhi chillaya hi tha ki...
*BAAAAAANGGGGGGGGGGGG*
*SPLUUUUURRRTTTTTT*
Achanak hi Slogan ke chehre par khoon ke cheethe bikhar gaye.
STEVE WAS DEAD!!!!
Car ke window glass ko cheerti hui, bullet aayi aur uski khopdi ko phaadte hue ghus gayi. Sarr ka maas aadha latak gaya aur car ke andar khoon ke cheethe bikhar gaye. Slogan ke chehre par jo khoon laga tha, wo Steve ka hi tha. Maano uske toh dil ki dhadkan hi band ho gayi thi achanak se ye sab dekh.
"Aaaaahhhhhh!!!!" Kaera jisne sab kuch dur se dekha wo chillaayi. Aur uske bodyguards forun hi aakar usse gher ke andar le jaane lage.
Idhar Slogan ne tabhi, door khola aur...
*Thud*
Steve ke shareer ko laat se maar ke baahar giraaya. Palak jhapakte hi wo Driving seat par aaya, uska perr accelerator par aur...
*Vrrrrrrrrrrroooooooommm*
Zorr se race dete hue gaadi aage badhi...
*BAAAAAAAANNNGGGGGG*
Ek aur goli chalne ki awaaz aayi par Slogan bach ke nikal chuka tha.
Akhir kya hua palak jhapakte hi? Boht kuch hua tha.
Resort ke upari bhaag par hi...
There was a SNIPER!!!
Jo kisi aur ne nahi Veer ne hi Karan ko keh ke rakhwaaye the. Aur sniper ne apna kaam bakhubi kiya. Ek sarr dard jaa chuka tha. Steve!
*Badump* *Badump*
Slogan ki dhadkane yaha train ke jese tezz ho chuki thi. Seconds me hi kya se kya ho gaya tha.
Par uske chehre par bhayankar gussa bhara hua tha.
"Veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrr!!!"
Wo chillaya. Kyuki, of course...
Uske siwa aur kaun kar sakta tha ye? Aaj usse ek baat ka pata lag gaya tha ki,
He underestimated Veer!!!
Slogan ko ye nahi pata tha ki jab wo Balhaar ka test lene ke liye usse Resort ki info laane ko saup raha tha, toh woh apni hi qabar khod raha tha.
Balhaar ne jaan bujh ke Kaera ki ekdum sahi info dii thi. Taaki, Slogan yaha aaye Kaera ko pakadne ke liye.
Balhaar ne shuru se ant tak aasvaashan jataate hue aur bharosa dilaate hue unhe yakeen dilaaya tha ki kaam ho jaega. Wo ant tak Slogan aur Steve ko shaq me rakha raha. Keval iss moment ke liye.
Steve ke jaane se, ek jhatka toh lag hi gaya tha Slogan ko.
Aur ye sab kiske kehne par kiya tha Balhaar ne?
Veer!!!!
Jaha Slogan ye samajh raha tha ki wo Balhaar ka test lega aur Kaera ko pakad bhi lega toh wahi Veer ne jaan boojh ke Balhaar ka test lene diya. Usne jaan boojh ke Kaera ki ekdum sahi location dilwaayi Balhaar se.
Yahi kaaran tha ki Veer ne Karan ko apne sang rakha. Karan ne security badhwa dii thi aur upar Snipers rakhwa diye the, Veer ke kehne par.
Aur Veer ne jaan boojh ke ye jagah chuni. Ye Kaera ka hi resort tha. In other words, yadi Steve marra bhi, toh Police ka koi lafda hone hi nahi waala tha. Veer was totally safe.
It was a plan to lure out a snake out of its cave. Saanp ko maarne ke liye usse uske bil se nikaalna zaroori tha. Wahi kiya tha Veer ne.
*Craaaaasssssssshhhhhhh*
Slogan ki car entrance ke barrier ko todte hue nikli, Guard bas daudta hi reh gaya uske peeche.
Aur Balhaar jo phone pe call laga raha tha usne phone me bola,
Balhaar : Wo nikal gaya.
"Good!!!" Dusri taraf se awaaz aayi, jo kisi aur ki nahi, Veer ki hi thi.
Entrance se baahar nikalte hi jese hi Slogan ki car sadak par aayi. Uske theek peeche se hi kuch hi duri par...
Ek aur car aa rahi thi.
Karan : Wo rahi car... Damn it!!!! Tum sahi the!!!
Veer (smiles) : I told you!!!
Karan kuch na bola. Kyuki, yadi car dikhi toh ab plan ke next move ko anjaam dene ka tha.
Usne seedha call Jassi ko lagaaya.
Karan : Jasssssiiiiii!!!
Jassi : Got it!!!
*Call ends*
Jassi jo ek mod par car ke andar baitha hua tha usne sheesha khol apne haath se bas ek baar aage badhne ka ishaara kiya aur...
Kareeb 15 se 20 gaadiya ikhatte mod se nikal ke main road par aa gayi.
*Vrrrrroooooommmmm*
SLOGAN jo gaadi chala ke bhaag raha tha usne jese hi apne daayi taraf dekha toh uske hosh hi udd gaye.
Daayi taraf se na jaane kitni saari kaali gaadiya bas nikalte hi jaa rahi thi. Uske toh maano chehre se rang hi udd chuka tha.
"Fuuuucckkkkkk!!!!" Wo kheejte hue chillaaya.
"D-Dadaaaa!!! Ab kya karna hai???" Peeche baitha ek chillaaya.
Slogan ke daant aapas me gusse se kitkita rahe the. Uska poora dhyaan filhaal gaaadiyo ko chakma deke bhaagne me tha.
"VEEEEERRRRR!!! DAMNNN YOUUU!!"
Just what really happened? Uska plan backfire kese kar gaya? Wo jaanta tha ki yadi Balhaar dhoka bhi dega toh zyaada se zyaada kya hoga?
Usse pata chalega aur wo waha se turant hi Kaera ko chorr ke bhaag niklega. Akhir isliye toh usne Steve se keh ke car ko on hi rakha tha waha par. Ki kuch bhi yadi ho, toh forun bhaag sake.
Par...
What he didn't understand was that...
Usne Veer ko underestimate kar diya. Wo sochta tha ki Veer bas ek ladka tha jo ladna jaanta tha bas. Uski halki fulki pehchaan thi aur wo Kaera ki nazron me ek accha ladka tha. Bas, iss se zyada koi impression nahi tha Slogan ke mann me Veer ke liye.
Aur yahi par usse muh ki khaani pad gayi aaj.
Uska plan simple tha. Ek gaadi me jaana jis se bhaagne me asaani ho, yadi kuch gadbad hoti hai toh. Yadi nahi hoti hai toh plan simple hi tha aage bhi.
Kaera ko kidnap karna, aur fir usse apni destination par laana.
Slogan ne saara intezaam kyuki wahi karke rakha hua tha. Usse laga tha ki yadi wo Kaera ko kidnap kar ke le jaega. Toh Kishor shaant nahi baithega. Wo definitely apni poori security bhej dega Kaera ki khoj me. Aur wo ye bhi jaanta tha ki Kishor ki security uska thikaan dhundh bhi legi.
Par...
Par yadi dhundh bhi liya toh kya?
Yahi toh plan tha uska. Usne itne aadmi aur itni force waha laga ke rakhi thi ki yadi Kaera ki security enter karti bhi hai toh unhe poori tarah se andar aane me kaafi samay lag jaega. Yadi Kishor copter bhi bhejta hai toh uska intezaam bhi tha Slogan ke paas. Rocket launcher!!!
Aur jab tak security uski gang se bhidegi, tab tak Slogan Kaera ko thikaane laga chuka hoga.
Uska lakshya poora ho chuka hoga. Par...
Par na keval aaj usne apne lakshya ko khoya, balki Steve ko bhi kho diya tha.
Aur itna hi nahi, uski haalat bheegi billi ki tarah ho chuki thi.
AND, IT WAS ALL BECAUSE OF THAT FUCKING VEER!!!
Of course, yadi Veer nahi tha toh aur kaun tha? Kishor ko bhali bhaati jaanta tha Slogan. Uspe intelligence bhi rakhta tha. Ye uska kaam hargiz nahi tha.
'Kahi wo toh nahi? N-Nahi... Wo nahi ho sakta.'
Sochte hue usne mann ko shaant karne ki koshish kii.
Par gussa uske chehre se jaa hi nahi raha tha.
Ek hi upaay tha. Jald se jald wo apni destination par pohuch jaaye.
Par peeche...
*Vrrrroooommm*
*Vrrrrooooooom*
*Vrrrrooooooom*
Dherr saari gaadiya uske peeche lagi hui thi.
Aur tabhi,
*BANNNNGGGGGGGGGG*
Ek bullet aayi aur seedha aake uski car ke right mirror se lagi aur mirror ko poora ukhaad ke alag kar dii.
"Daaamnnn itttt!!!!"
Iss hamle ka jawaab dene ke liye, Slogan ke saath peeche baithe wo do aadmi bhi apni apni gun nikaal cross firing shuru kar diye.
*BANG*
*BANNNNGGGGGGGGGG*
Jassi aur Raghu, apne poore aadmiyo ke saath uske peeche the. Saathi hi Veer aur Karan bhi.
Slogan ki car ek sunsaan raaste me ghusti jaa rahi thi.
Ye lamba route tha.
Aur rasta aisa tha ki chaah ke bhi Veer aur Karan uski gaadi ko overtake kar usse rok nahi sakte the.
Par Veer ke hontho par muskaan thi. Wo confident tha.
Kitna bhi kyu na bhaag le Slogan, aaj uska ant nishchit tha. Wo isliye kyuki...
Upar halke ghane badlo me jo chamak kar apni roshni bikher raha tha. Wo tha...
FULL MOON!!!
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!
Next update boht dhamakedaar hoega. Ye aap anumaan laga hi sakte ho.
Like karne ka aur revos rakhne ka yaara!
Aaj agar SLOGAN bach bhi jata hai to bhi apni puri life me kisi se panga lene se phle etni baar sochega ki tb tak matter hi close ho chuka hoga
Ab to jldi se agla update de do ab wait nhi kiya jata
Aadi bhai
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Nidhi Veer se dur hi rahegi. Jitna paas jaegi, usse wahi feelings firse sataane lagengi. Isliye, wo Veer se dur rahegi. Aur jitna ho sakega wo Veer ko ek normal student ki tarah hi treat karegi. No special treatment.
Nice update bhai
Thank you guys!
Nidhi ki personality hi aisi hai. Wo itni asaani se apni feelings show nahi karti.
Thanks bhai!Bhai nidhi ma'am ka love ekdum true hein heart touching hein woh bhi so emotional.
But she was fight heart & mind bcz her age gap and family so they can't accept....!
Speechless update.....!
Keep Writing...!
Nidhi majboor hai. Aur wo isse paap samajhti hai. Veer uska student hai.
Samay bataega!
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Aisa isliye kyuki, Nidhi chehra dekh ke pyaar nahi kar leti kisi se.वाह क्या बात है
रागिनी की फेवोरेबिलीटी बढ़ गई पर यह क्या निधि की फेवोरेबिलीटी घट गई
पर वीर का मिशन तो निधि को बचाना है
हम्म्म अब वीर की अपीयरेंस बढ़ जाने के बाद भी फेवोरेबिलीटी का घटना मतलब दिल पर दिमाग का हावी हो जाना
फिर भी लाज़वाब अपडेट
Yadi aisa hota. Toh Veer mauj mana raha hota.Boht boht Dhanyavaad bhai!भाई आप बहुत ही ड्रमैटिक लिखते है और मुझे ऐसा फॅमिली ड्रामा पसंद है जो की एक किरदार के कैरिक्टर को मजबूत और बढ़ने मे मदद करे, खैर कहानी बहुत ही अच्छी तरह से आगे बढ़ रही है, आपने हर किरदार पर हल्का प्रकाश डालते हुए वीर के किरदार को मजबूत किया है। और एक और बड़े रोमांचक मोड पर अपडेट को खतम किया है है। आगे देखते है क्या होता है।
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Exactly! Kabhi na kabhi Veer ko pahal toh karni hi thi. Kyuki, Nidhi toh karne se rahi. Par ab Veer chaahta hai ki Nidhi khud apne pyaar ka izhaar kare. Dekhte hai kya hota hai. Thanks a lot!
Keep supporting!
Thanks bhailog!
Bane rehne ka.
Dhanyavaad yaara!
Keep supporting!