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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

    Votes: 1,211 83.2%
  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 24 1.6%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 188 12.9%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 33 2.3%

  • Total voters
    1,456

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Update - 69 ~ The Grand Banquet!
Ab tak...

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Aur Veer ne ek baar me hi purchase ke option pe click kiya aur...

*Ding*

[Intermediate Martial Art Skill is now available.]

Aur ye notification sunte hi Veer muskuraate hue waapas se apni dono sevikaao ke beech lait gaya.

'Pranjal! I'm preparing a surprise for you!!!'


Ab aage...

"Ouch ouch!!!!"

"Bolo ab? Ab kabhi karoge aisa? Haan?"

"N-Nahi! Bilkul nahi!"

"Hmm! Chalo maaf kiya! Par ahinda se dhyaan rakhna. Okay!?"

"Of course!"

Ye awaaz thi Veer ki jo apne aap ko churraane ki koshish kar raha tha Ragini ke haatho se. Kyuki Ragini uske kaan ko pakde hue aaj uski khabar le rahi thi.

Doctor Mrinal ke ghar se toh theek hoke aa gaya tha Veer. Par ab tak usne apni Ragini Bhabhi ko poori baat nahi bataayi thi. Jesa ki Ragini ne pehle hi usse keh ke rakha tha ki wo uske theek hone ke baad uski acche se pareeksha legi. Toh bas, wahi paath chal raha tha abhi. Veer ki class lag rahi thi.

Aur uski aisi haalat dekh Aabha aur Sonali dono hi dur se hasste hue maze le rahi thi. Wahi Suman bechaari apne maalik ko dekh bas asahaay waali muskuraahat hi de paa rahi thi. Isme wo kuch nahi kar sakti thi.

Ant me Ragini ne bhi dheere se muskuraate hue Veer ke kaan ko chorra aur boli, "Apna khayaal rakha karo Veer pehle. Pehle khud ki jaan hai, fir dusro ki."

Ragini usse aaj ki duniya ka gyaan padhaana chaah rahi thi. Aur theek hi toh keh rahi thi woh. Aaj ki iss swaarth sii bhari duniya me aadmi pehle apni jaan ki parvaah karta hai. Baad me dusre ki. Sochte hue usse jese Vivek ki harqat ki yaad aa gayi.

Par Veer ki toh jaise alag hi soch thi. Wo bhi muskuraya aur bola, "Mein Vivek Bhaiya ki tarah nahi Bhabhi! Mere liye apne pehle hai. Fir mein khud."

*Badump*

Aur pal bhar ke liye Ragini ka dil ek dhadkan jese phaand gaya.

"H-Huh!?" Wo zorr se saans kheechte hue Veer ko aashcharya bhare bhaav se dekhi.

Veer ko bhi jese dhyaan aaya ki shayad usse Vivek ka naam aise beech me nahi laana chahiye tha. Toh usne agle hi pal maafi maangi.

Ragini : Nahi Veer! Isme maafi maangne ki koi zaroorat nahi. Aur wese bhi, sahi hi toh kaha tumne.

Iss baar uski nazre jhuk gayi. Aur awaaz me maayusi bhi thi.

Ragini : Suman jii! K-Kya aap sab baahar jaa sakte ho? M-Mujhe Veer se akele me kuch baat karni hai.

Suman : Jii Ragini jii! Aabha beti, Sonali, chalo baahar.

Aur Suman unn dono ko lekar baahar chali gayi.

Kamre me keval Veer aur Ragini hi the ab. Abhi subah ke 8:30 baj rahe the aur Ragini bas naha ke naashta hi banaane jaa rahi thi jab usse yaad aaya ki Veer se usne wo baatein puchi hi nahi. Toh isliye wo aaj Veer se saari baat jaan'ne ke liye aayi thi uske kamre me.

Uske ghane baal, abhi bhi paani se halke bheege hue the aur khule hue the. Kyuki wo Vivek ke saath uske ghar pe nahi rehti thi ab toh usse saare kapde pehn'ne ki chhoot thi. Wo top bhi pehenti thi, saree bhi, kurta, suit, salwaar sab kuch.

Aur aaj Ragini ek pink aur black colour combination ki saree pehni hui thi jisme wo husn ki mallika lag rahi thi. Ye kehna ki Veer Ragini se attracted nahi tha jab se wo ghar me aayi thi toh ye galat tha. Jab se Vivek ki shaadi hui thi, Veer hamesha se Ragini ke sang baatein karna chaahta tha.

Kaun nahi chaahega ki aapke saath ek khubsoorat bhabhi ho jo aapse baatein kare? Par Ragini uss samay Veer ko bhaav nahi deti thi. Aur aaj dekho, aaj kismat aisi thi Veer ki, ki wo Ragini ke sang reh raha tha, Ragini khud uss se upat ke baatein karti thi, yaha tak ki uski behad parvah aur uska khayaal bhi rakhti thi. Shayad isliye samay ko sabse shaktishaali maana gaya hai.

Lekin Ragini ke mann me idhar jese abhi bhi kuch bechaini thi.

Ragini : Veer?

Veer : Hmm?

Ragini : Tum... Tumne sach me maaf kar diya hai na mujhe? Mein tumse baat bhi nahi karti thi pehle. Fir dheere dheere hum dono ki beech sulaah ho gayi. Dooriya hatt gayi. Par... Par kahi tum ye toh nahi sochte na ki tumhari ye bhabhi, mauka dekh ke palat gayi aur ab tumhaare sang acche se pesh aane lagi. Kahi tum aisa toh nahi sochte na? Bolo?

Ragini ki insecurity, Veer dekh paa raha tha. Wo dekh paa raha tha ki Ragini iss baat ko lekar behad chintit thi. Toh usne forun hi jawaab diya.

Veer : Bhabhi! Yadi aisi baat hoti toh mein aapse kabhi itna friendly hoke pesh aata hi nahi. Isliye aap ye baat mann se nikaal dijiye. Aisi koi baat nahi hai. Aur wese bhi, aapka koi zyaada dosh tha bhi nahi. Mere dimaag me unn logo ke naam acche se maujood hai jinka sabse zyaada kasoor tha.

Veer ki kahi gayi baat se Ragini muskuraayi aur ek chenn ki saas lii. Wo sheeshe ke saamne jaake khadi hui aur nazre jhukaate hue boli,

Ragini : Tumhari yahi baat toh mujhe sabse acchi lagti hai Veer. Aur... Kahi tumhe bura toh nahi lagta na? Meri baato ka? Meri harqato ka? Mene aaj sabke saamne tumhaare kaan kheeche, tumse baatein bulwaayi. Kahi tum bura toh nahi maante na?

Wo Veer ka jawaab sunn'ne ke liye intezaar kar hi rahi thi ki jab achanak hi usse apne nange pait par kisi ka haath mehsoos hua.

"Haaaaahhhhh!?"

Zorr se sisakte hue Ragini ne jese hi sheeshe me dekha toh paaya ki Veer uske theek peeche tha aur apni thuddi ko uske kandhe par rakh usse peeche se apni orr kheech liya.

'This... This...! Aah!'

Ragini bechaari bhauchakki sii aankhein phaade sheeshe me dekh rahi thi, jisme usse khud ki aakriti toh dikh hi rahi thi par saath hi saath uske peeche se chipke hue Veer ki bhi aakrit nazar aa rahi thi.

Veer ke haath ka touch apne nagn pait par paate hi Ragini ki saasein tezz ho chuki thi. Veer ki hatheli Vivek ki hatheli sii kayi guna alag thi. Ya yu kahe ki behtar thi. Ragini ko garm sa ehsaas ho raha tha apne pait par.

Itni ladaayiyo me bhidne ke baad Veer ki hatheli ab pehle ki tarah narm nahi thi. Unme halki halki kharoche thi, kul milaake uski twacha sakht, aur thodi rough thi. Par yahi rough sii skin Ragini ko ek protective aur mardaana feeling de rahi thi aaj jo feeling Vivek usse kabhi nahi de paaya tha.

Na chaahte hue bhi, Ragini ka mann dol raha tha aaj. Wo apni saasein kaabu me hi nahi kar paa rahi thi. Aisa kuch toh usne aaj tak feel nahi kiya tha.

Veer ke haath ka touch usse uss raat ko yaad dila raha tha jis din Veer usse bachaane aaya tha. Uski hatheli ka maatr sparsh hi Ragini ko sabse surakshit anubhooti pradaan kar raha tha. Jese maano duniya me iss se safe jagah koi aur ho hi nahi sakti thi.

Veer toh anjaane me ye kar raha tha. Wo toh bas saantvna dena chaahta tha Ragini ko ki wo uski baat ka bura nahi maanta hai.

Aur uske baad hi, Ragini ki saasein uncontrollable ho gayi jab Veer ne achanak hi...

*Chu~*

Ragini ke gaal ko chum liya.

"Aaaaaaaaaahhhhhh!"

Ragini hadbadaate hue palti aur Veer ko dekh wo fatafat waha se apne surkh laal gaal lete hue nikal ke bhaag gayi.

"Hmm?"

Veer bechaara bas dekhta hi reh gaya. Usse iss baat ka koi andaaza nahi tha ki Ragini apne mann me iss waqt kya kya soch rahi thi usko lekar.

***

****** Hospital...

"Dekhiye! Humne X-Ray nikaala hai. Hum aapki bhalaayi ke liye hi keh rahe hai. Iska theek hona asambhav hai. Aap baat maaniye aur...."

"Nahi!!!!!"

*Thud*

"!???"

Ek bada hi sajjan doctor iss waqt saamne khade aadmi ko apni baat samjha raha tha. Par saamne khade vyakti ne uski baat sunte hi apne dono haath uski table par patak diye.

Jii haan! Ye vyakti aur koi nahi, Balhaar hi tha jo kal Veer ke haatho apna daaya haath kho baitha tha. Kyuki uska woh haath ab kisi kaam ka nahi tha.

Ye chautha jaana maana doctor tha sheher ka jisse aaj Balhaar apna haath dikhaane aaya tha. Par yaha bhi wahi jawaab mila usse.

Uska gussa saatve aasmaan par tha.

Balhaar : Bewakufo!!! Kaahe ka doctor ho saalo? Ek haath bhi pehle jesa nahi kar sakte? Nahi karwani mujhe koi surgery... Mujhe mera yahi haath chahiye samjhe!??? Koi artificial haath nahi!!

Doctor : Dekhiye! Y-Ye impossible hai. Ye beyond repair hai. Mein aapki bhalayi ke liye hi...

Iss se pehle ki doctor kuch keh paata, Balhaar ne uski collor pakad usse uski chair se uthaaya aur uchi awaaz me chillaya,

Balhaar : Dekh behanchod!!! Tu kuch bhi kar, jisse bhi bulaana hai bula par mera ye haath theek kar. Samjha?

Doctor : Dekhiye! A-Aap tameez se baat kijiye! Y-Ye impossible hai. Aap... Aapki limb iss tareeqe se mudi hui hai ki isse waapas se seedha karna asambhav hai. Ye... Ye koi rubber nahi hai. Ye haath hai. Zara sii bhi chuk hui toh dard toh hoga hi, saath hi poori tareeke se haddi toot sakti hai.

"Aaaaaarrrrghhhhhhhhhh!" Balhaar gusse me chillaaya aur uss doctor ko wahi dhakka dekar baahar nikal gaya.

Mann me uske Veer ke wahi shabd gunj rahe the.

"Tera jo ye haath hai na. Tu duniya ke kisi bhi doctor ke paas hi kyu na chala jaaye. Chaahe usse kitne bhi paise kyu na de de. Tera ye haath duniya me koi repair nahi kar sakta. Siwae mere!"

Ab shayad, Balhaar ko Veer ki baat ka visvaash ho raha tha. Wo chaar bade se bade sheher ke doctors ke paas ho aaya tha. Par kabhi bhi usse umeed nazar nahi aayi. Yadi aise hi chalta raha toh...!?

"Nahi!!! M-Mein apna haath nahi kho sakta."

Usne abhi tak Slogan ya kisi anya ko Veer ke baare me koi jankaari nahi dii thi. Wo isliye Kyuki pehle wo confirm karna chaahta tha ki Veer ki baat sahi hai bhi ya nahi? Lekin veer ki baat ab usse sach hoti nazar aa rahi thi.

"Tchhhh!" Daato ko meeste hue usne apna nirnay forun hi le liya.

Aur wo tha...

Wo SLOGAN ki saari khabre Veer ko dene waala tha!

***

Veer's Old House...
11:30 AM...

"Sab maujood hai na?" Manorath kehte hue single seat sofe par viraajmaan ho gaye.

"Jii Dada jii! Sab yahi hai!" Manorath ke bagal me khade Pranjal ne kaha.

Aaj Manorath apna faisla apni jaydaat ko lekar sunaane waale the.

Ghar me aaj sabhi maujood the. Veer chup chaap apni aankhein band kiye, dono haath mode ek sofe par baitha hua tha. Uske bagal se Arohi aur Kavya dono hi baithi hui thi.

Toh wahi Brijesh aur Karunesh ek saath viraajmaan the. Vivek apni Maa Sumitra ke saath baitha hua tha. Aur Bhumika aur Shweta dono Maa beti alag se ek seat me.

Manorath formally ye decison suna rahe the. Toh vakeel se leke documents sab maujood the. Saara kaam aaj hi shuru hone waala tha. Wo jald se jald iss jaydaat se chhutkaara paana chaahte the.

Brijesh ne ek jhalak Veer ki orr dekha aur Veer ne bhi usse dekha. Par dono me se kisi ne kuch kaha.

Pranjal Dada jii ke bagal se hi baith gaya.

Aur fir Manorath bolna shuru kiye,

Manorath : Toh mein baato ko zyaada ghumaunga nahi. Seedha mudde par aata hu. Meri saari jaydaat ko aaj mein apne pote potiyo me baatne jaa raha hu. Aur haan, ye mein poore hosh me rehke suna raha hu. Jaydaat me se koi bhi cheez Brijesh, Karunesh aur unki dharm patniyo ko nahi baati jaegi. Ye keval mere pote potiyo ke liye hi hai. Aur wo bhi unke liye jo mujhe lagta hai sahi tarah se iss jaydaat ka upyog kar paenge.

Manorath ki baat sunn sabhi shaant the. Par sabhi ke dil ki dhadkan zorro se dhadak rahi thi. Khaaskar Vivek, aur Shweta ki.

Manorath : Toh mera faisla tay raha...

Kehte hue Manorath ne harr ek waha baithe shaks par nazre ghumaayi. Veer ko koi matlab nahi tha. Uske hisaab se Dada jii ko ye kaam abhi nahi karna chaahiye tha. Isliye, wo bas chup chaap side me baitha raha.

Sab ki nazre Manorath ki orr hi thi. Aur tabhi Manorath ne apna faisla sunaaya jisse sunke waha maujood sabhi ke hosh udd gaye.

Manorath : Meri 40% jaydaat... Mein Veer ke naam karta hu.

*Boom*

Jese ek bam phata waha baithe logo par.

Veer : Huh?

[Hahaha~ Ye hui na baat ab! Just look at their faces.]

Pranjal abhi bhi shaant baitha hua tha. Par uske maathe par paseena zaroor jhalak raha tha.

Manorath : Aur 40% jaydaat... Mein apne pote Pranjal ke naam karta hu.

Jo paseena Pranjal ke maathe par tha. Ye sunte hi usne wo paseena poch liya. Baaki sab bas apne gale me atka hua thook hi gutak ke reh gaye.

Manorath : Baaki ki bachi hui 20% jaydaat me se... Mein 10% apni poti Arohi aur baaki ki 10% apni sabse choti poti Kavya ke naam karta hu.

Shweta : H-Huh!? Y-Ye?

Vivek : !???

Manorath : Yahi hai mera poora faisla.

Shweta jiske chehra ka rang hi udd chuka tha faisla sunn ke wo forun hi apni jagah se uth khadi hui.

Shweta : P-Papa jii!? Ye... Ye aap kya keh rahe hai?

Manorath : Sahi keh raha hu.

Shweta : H-Huh? P-Par meri beti Bhumika. Wo... Wo bhi toh aapki poti hai na? Aur wo bhi sabse badi poti... T-Toh uska naam kaha hai? Aapne usse kuch kyu nahi diya?

Manorath : Kuch samay pehle, mene inn sabhi ko apne kamre me bulaaya tha. Tab mein inse ye nahi puchna chaah raha tha ki jaydaat kisse dii jaaye. Mein inn sabhi ka vyaktitv parakh raha tha. Jiski pareeskha me Vivek aur Bhumika dono hi fail ho gaye.

Bhumika ka ye baat sunn apne aap sarr jhuk gaya. Wo naraaz nahi thi. Na hi gussa thi. Usse jese waqai koi gham nahi tha. Kaafi calm thi woh.

Par yahi baat uski Maa Shweta ke liye nahi kahi jaa sakti thi. Shweta ka toh bechaini ke chalte poora shareer thitur raha tha.

Shweta : Ye... Ye aap!?? Aisa kese kar sakte hai? A-Arohi aur K-Kavya ko toh dii na aapne? Fir bechaari meri Bhumika hi kyi reh gayi?

Manorath : Mein bataata hu ki kyu Bhumika aur Vivek ko ratti bhar bhi jaydaat nahi mil paayi. Kyuki jab Vivek se mene pucha tha ki jaydaat kitne hisso me kisse baati jaaye. Toh Vivek ne sabhi ka naam liya tha. Siwae Veer ke. Jis bhai ko apne sabse chote bhai ki fiqr tak na ho usse bhala mein ye jaydaat kese de sakta hu? Yahi kaaran Bhumika ka bhi hai. Bhumika bitiya ne ek baar bhi apne bhai Veer ka zikr nahi kiya tha.

Manorath ki baat sunn, Shweta ka dimaag hi sann reh gaya. Uss din khud ussi ne toh Bhumika ko patti padha ke bheja tha ki Apne Dada jii se directly apna haq maang lena. Aur dekho kya ho gaya aaj. Shweta ko apni galti ka abhaas hote hi itna zyaada pachtaava ho raha tha ki uski mutthi me saree ka bhaag poora nichud ke reh gaya. Yaha tak ki aankho ke kono me halke halke aasu bhi utpann ho chuke the.

Vivek wahi baithe apne mann me khud ko hi kos raha tha. Usse laga tha ki shayad Veer ka naam nahi lete hue Dada jii ne uski baato ko zyaada dhyaan nahi diya hoga. Par wo galat tha. Bas mann me gaali hi nikal rahi thi uske.

Manorath : Wahi dusri orr, Pranjal Arohi, aur Kavya teeno ne hi Veer ko apne dhyaan me rakh uska naam lete hue usse jaydaat dene ko kaha tha. Arohi bitiya toh apna poora hissa Veer ko dena chaahti thi. Toh wahi Kavya ko kuch nahi chaahiye tha. Wo bhi yahi kahi thi ki jaydaat Veer ko de dii jaaye. Aur Pranjal bete ka bhi yahi kehna tha.

Veer ne palat'te hue dono hi Arohi aur Kavya ko dekha toh dono hi behno ne usse ek smile pass kii.

Manorath : Arohi sahi maayno me haqdaar nahi thi. Kyuki jaydaat usse hi sahi phalti hai jo iska upyog sahi se karna jaane aur ek iccha rakhe. Arohi bitiya ke mann me koi iccha nahi thi. Usse koi matlab nahi tha. Yahi kaaran hai ki usse keval 10% hi jaydaat ka hissa mila. Wo isliye, kyuki usse apne bhai Veer ka dhyaan tha. Dhyaan tha ki wo iss ghar se dur tha.

Arohi : ....

Manorath : Wahi Kavya ko ye jaydaat ka 10% isliye diya gaya kyuki wo ghar ki sabse choti poti hai meri. Aur sabse pyaari. Abhi usse utni samajh nahi. Aisa ho sakta hai ki aage jaa ke usse aur samajh aaye toh kahi usse pachtaava na ho. Isliye uske jeb me kuch toh hona chahiye na? Ye 10% ki jaydaat ab wo jese chaahe upyog kare, ye uske upar hai.

Shweta aur Vivek dono hi Manorath ki baat vistaar se sunn'ne ke baad wahi jamm ke reh gaye. Aisa lag raha tha jese kisi ne unke muh me nimbu nichod diya ho. Aisa muh ho gaya tha dono ka.

Aur fir Shweta jese bhadak uthi,

Shweta (chilaate hue) : Ye galat hai. Ye sarasar anyaay hai... Ye galat hai! Aap... Aap aisa nahi kar sakte. Aapne galat nirnay liya hai. Ye meri beti ke saath chhal hai. Sabko aapne kuch na kuch diya par meri beti ke liye ek rupaya bhi nahi chhootha aapke haath se? K-Kya kami reh hai meri beti me?
Kyu kiya aapne aisa!? Haaan?

Shweta ki ladkhadaati hui awaaz sunn, waha baitha Brijesh usse bauhe sikod ke dekhne laga. Toh wahi Bhumika apni Maa ke kandho ko thaam usse rokne ka prayatn karne lagi. Par aaj jese Shweta bilkul bhi nahi baithne waali thi.

Shweta (screams) : AAPNE GALAT KIYA HAI! AAP GALAT HO!!!! AAPNE MERI BETI SE USKA HAQ CHHEENA HAI!!!!!

Uski cheenkhe poore hall me goonj rahi thi. Aur uska chehra poora laal ho chuka tha. Aur aankho se aasu behte hue gaal par bikhar chuke the. Bhumika bhi sehemte hue apni Maa ko rokne ki koshish kar rahi thi.

Baar baar samjhaane par bhi jab Shweta na chup hui toh iss baar Brijesh nahi ruka. Wo utha aur tezz kadmo ke saath Shweta ke sameep aaya.

Brijesh (chillaate hue) : SHWETAAAA!!!

Shweta : !!?

Brijesh : Mene tumhare liye kitna kuch nahi kiya? Arre itni badi hotel tumhare aur Bhumika ke naam par hai. Fir tum Papa jii se aisi baatein kyu kar rahi ho? Aur kya chahiye tumhe? Yaha toh hum sabhi gharwale hai na? Fir ab aur kya chahiye tumhe? Kya tum itne se bhi santusht nahi ho? Sab kuch toh de hi raha hu na mein tumhe!? Fir Papa jii se kyu zabaan lada rahi ho?

Shweta (screams) : KYUKI YE DHONGI HAI!!!! YE BAS MEETHI MEETHI BAATEIN KARTE HAI! INHE MERI BACCHI KI KOI PARVAAH NAHI!!! YE DHONGII HAI....!!!!

Bas, Shweta ka itna chillana hi tha ki tabhi...

*Chataaaaaaaaaaaaaaak*

Ek zordaar thappad ki goonj poore hall me fel gayi.

Shweta : !!!?

Shweta apne gaal ko pakad ek taraf chehra jhukaaye hairat ke maare khade reh gayi. Brijesh ne usse ek zordaar tamaacha jad diya tha.

Aur maano waha jese sannaata saa chha gaya.

Manorath samet sabhi apni jagah se hairat ke maare khade ho gaye.

Bhumika : M-Mom!!!!!

Shweta ne fir Brijesh ko wahi roti hui soorat se dekha. Aaj jese uske andar kuch toot chuka tha.

Brijesh jesa bhi tha. Wo apne pita ki boht izzat karta tha. Haan, kabhi kabhi uski apne pita se kaha suni ho jaati thi. Par kabhi palat ke jawaab nahi deta tha Brijesh. Par aaj...

Aaj uski hi patni uske pita ko sabke saamne dhongi keh ke bula rahi thi? Kya kami reh gayi thi uski aur uski beti ki parvarish me?

Brijesh : Abhi ke abhi andar jao. Bhumika!!!! Leke jao apni Maa ko.

Shweta toh jese sann sii pad gayi thi. Wo Bhumika ke saath kab hall chorr ke baahar nikal gayi usse pata hi nahi chala.

Brijesh : Papa jii! Yadi sab kuch ho gaya ho toh kya...

Manorath : Tumhe haath nahi uthaana tha bahu pe. Aurat pe haath uthaana...

Brijesh : M-Mein jaanta hu. Par uss samay mujhe wo zaroori laga.

Manorath ne toh jese ye pal pehle hi parakh liya tha. Isliye wo shaant ho gaye.

Manorath : Aaj mein apni saari zimmedaariyo se mukt ho chuka hu. Toh isliye, kal mene iski khushi me ek bhavya daavat rakhi hai 5 star hotel me. Kal sabhi ko waha time se raat me maujood hona hai. Aur... Bahu ko mana lena. Mein nahi chaahta wo waha par na mile.

Brijesh : J-Jii!!

Manorath : Ye program mene isliye rakha hai. Kyuki mein chaahta hu ki Veer aur Pranjal dono hi waha apni kaabiliyat dikhaaye. Ab kyuki wo do bade hisso ke maalik hai. Toh waha dherr saare bade bade logo ka aagman hoga. Wo saare mere pehchaan ke hai. Unse acche rishte banaoge toh aage jaldi badhoge. Ab dekhna ye hai ki tum dono me se kaun acche se rishte bana paata hai. Samay aur jagah raat tak tum logo ko message dwaara bata diye jaengi. Parivaarik baithak yahi samaapt hoti hai. Tum sab jaa sakte ho.

Aur fir jo bhi documents ke kaam the, unhe niptane ke baad Veer bhi apne ghar aa gaya.

Yaha Pranjal apne room ki orr jaa raha tha jab Vivek ne usse peeche se thaam ke paltaaya.

Vivek : Chote!!! Ye vaar toh ulta hi pad gaya mere liye. Mujhe nahi laga tha ki...

Pranjal (smiles) : Ab kuch nahi ho sakta bhaiya! Aap ne apne khud ke perr par kulhaadi maar lii.

Vivek : Huh?

Pranjal : Chalta hu.

Vivek : Ek... Ek minute! Tujhe 40% mili hai na... Toh...

Pranjal : Haan toh? Ye 40% mujhe mili hai. Aapko bhi milti. Yadi aapne Veer ka dhyaan rakha hota toh. Ab isme mein kuch nahi kar sakta bhaiya.

Vivek Pranjal ki baat sunte hi itna aag baboola ho gaya ki usne forun hi apne chote bhai ki collor pakad lii. Saala iss chote bhai ke liye itna risk utha raha tha woh? Usse laga tha ki 40 kam se kam Pranjal ko toh mili hi hai. Wo aadhi toh de hi dega. Akhir wo dono partners the. Par...

Dene ki toh baat chorro, Pranjal ne saaf inkaar kar diya kuch bhi dene se. Gussa aana toh swabhaavik tha.

Vivek : Mein tujhe harr kadam par saath leke chala. Aur tune ye kiya? Bhul mat chote! Ki mene hi tujhe iss plan me shaamil kiya tha. Yadi mein na hota toh tujhe ye sab...

Pranjal : Hahahaha~

Pranjal ne hasste hue apni collor se Vivek ke haath hataaye aur muskuraate hue usse dekhte hue bola,

Pranjal : Kamaal karte ho bhaiya! Itni badi company ke maalik ho. Dad ne aap pe na jaane kitna paisa phooka hoga. Uske baad ab jab itne jeevan me mujhe kuch mil raha hai toh wo bhi aapko hi chaahiye? Na bhaiya na! Bilkul nahi! Aapne na keval Bhabhi ko khoya, balki khud ke hi perr me kulhaadi maar aapne ye jaydaat bhi kho dii. Kherr, jaisa jiska naseeb... Chalta hu!

Aur wo Vivek se dur hatt apne kamre ki orr nikal gaya. Idhar Vivek bas apni mutthi ko gusse me kassta hi reh gaya.

"Chote!!!"

Kamre me aate hi Pranjal ki jo muskaan thi wo gaayab ho chuki thi. Wash basin ke paas aate hi usne apne chehre par paani ke chheethe maare aur saamne lagae sheeshe me khud ko dekhne laga.

'What went wrong???'

Manorath ka decision uski predictibility se bilkul alag tha. Usne socha tha ki uske Dada jii 50% usse, 30% Veer aur 10-10% Arohi aur Kavya ko baatenge.

Par wo galat tha.

Veer bhi utne hi pratishat ka maalik tha jitna ki woh khud. Aur issi ke chalte uske mann me dherro sawaal aa rahe the. Uska plan fail ho chuka tha.

'Sab kuch toh sahi kar raha tha mein. Galti kaha reh gayi? Damn it!!! Veer bhi mera equal ka partner hai. Mujhe...

Hmm!!! Mujhe jald se jald Arohi dii aur Kavya se unka hissa kese bhi karke lena hoga. At least tab mein 60% ka maalik toh kehla paunga. Baaki ki jaydaat Veer se kese hadapni hai. Uske baare me baad me sochunga. Kal major gathering rakhi hai Dada jii ne. Bade bade log aaenge. Mein kisi bhi haalat me Veer ko unse milne ke chances nahi de sakta. Mujhe uske saare chances intercept karne honge. Kal! Kal mein uski saari izzat ka aisa faaluda banaunga ki paraaye toh kya uske apno ke beech uski izzat mitti me milke reh jaegi!'

Wo khud se itna soch chala gaya kapde badalne.

***

Agli raat aaj Banquet ka din tha. Bhavya daavat rakhi gayi thi Manorath dwaara 5 star hotel me.

Ek se ek log aaye the. Bhale hi Veer ki family Kaera ya Sonia jitne level ki nahi thi. Par kaafi log unke hi standard ke aaye hue the. Wo isliye kyuki Manorath ne apni guzarti life me inse contact banaaye the.

Manorath ko chorr ke uske ghar se sabhi hotel me aa chuke the. Wese toh ye program Shweta ke hotel me hi rakha jaa sakta tha. Par...

Kal ki ghatna ke chalte aur saath hi saath ye sochke chalte ki Shweta fir hotel ke kaamo me busy ho jaegi. Isliye, fir ye banquet ek 5 star hotel me aayojit kiya gaya.

Mehngi se mehngi cars ki parking hoti jaa rahi thi. Aur aadmi aurat mehnge mehnge kapde pehne hue andar jaa rahe the. Manorath ne iss baar koi kami nahi dikhaayi thi. Laakho rupaye kharch kiye the unhone aaj ki iss daavat me.

Brijesh aur Karunesh andar hi saath me suit pehne khade hue aapas me baatein kar rahe the.

Karunesh : Lo bolo! Papa jii hume samjhaate the ki party mat karo, party mat karo. Aur ab khud ko dekho. Aisi party pheki unhone ki kya hi kahe ab...

Brijesh : Wo Papa jii hai. Kuch bhi kar sakte hai.

Wahi dusri orr, Arohi aur Kavya hasinaayo jesi saji hui Veer ka hi wait kar rahi thi jab ek car parking me aakar ruki. Aur usme se Veer nikla.

Shandaar ek tuxedo pehne aaj wo bhi poori tarah se taiyaar hoke aaya tha.

Kyuki wo jaanta tha, ki iss Banquet me usse kayi saare relationship banaane hai bade logo se.

Aur upar se... Usne apne 200 points ka upyog bhi stats me use kar liya the. Usne 60 points Strength me, 30 points Intelligence me, 30-30 points Agility aur Endurance me aur baaki ke 50 seedhe appearance me daal diye the.

'Pari'

[Hmm?]

'Show me my full status!'

[Okay!]

*Ding*

[Name : Veer

Age : 21
Status : Student

Stats :
Strength - 96/100
Intelligence - 95/100
Agility - 65/100
Endurance - 65/100
Appearance - 75/100


Skills :
1) Sex Protection : ON (Silver Tier Skill)
2) Basic Martial Arts Skill (Bronze Tier Skill) upgraded to Intermediate Martial Arts Skill (Silver Tier Skill)
3) Hawkeye (Diamond Tier Skill)
4) Limbo (Silver Tier Skill)
5) Basic Enemy Tracker (Bronze Tier Skill)

System's Internal Features :
Check-I, Check-II, Path Tracker, Past Illustration, Translator, Quest Hunt, Slot.

Relationships :
1) Suman : Loyal Slave (Favourability : 92)
2) Aabha : Familiar (Favourability : 68)
3) Sonali : Familiar (Favourability : 45)
4) Ragini : Close Friend (Favourability : 70)
5) Nidhi : Close Friend (Favourability : 54)
6) Shreya : Close Friend (Favourability : 65)
7) Juhi : Best Friend (Favourability : 89)
8) Suhana : Close Friend (Favourability : 62)
9) Sonia : Good Friend (Favourability : 64)
10) Kavya : Very Close Friend (Favourability : 85)
11) Arohi : Good Friend (Favourability : 66)
12) Bhumika : Familiar (Favourability : 30)
13) Shweta : Familiar (Favourability : 5)
14) Kaera : Best Friend (Favourability : 72)

System Level : Level 5
(120 EXP more to reach Level 6)]

Aur stats me appearance 75 dekhte hi Veer ke andar kaafi confidence tha aaj. Kyuki usse pata tha ki andar jaate hi kya hone waala tha.

'Let's go!'

[Yeah!!!]
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!

Dhanyavaad! This update contains more than 4.7k words. Mega update ke kaafi nazdeek hai ye waala. Toh apna apna kaam kar ke jaane ka aur apni sameeksha rakhne ka. 😁
Not enough words for this update.

Veer ka life hi change hojayega bahut jald...........

One of the best updates written till now.
 

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Update - 69 ~ The Grand Banquet!
Ab tak...

Intermediate Martial Art Skill!!!

Neeche price likha hi tha~

400 Points!

Aur Veer ne ek baar me hi purchase ke option pe click kiya aur...

*Ding*

[Intermediate Martial Art Skill is now available.]

Aur ye notification sunte hi Veer muskuraate hue waapas se apni dono sevikaao ke beech lait gaya.

'Pranjal! I'm preparing a surprise for you!!!'


Ab aage...

"Ouch ouch!!!!"

"Bolo ab? Ab kabhi karoge aisa? Haan?"

"N-Nahi! Bilkul nahi!"

"Hmm! Chalo maaf kiya! Par ahinda se dhyaan rakhna. Okay!?"

"Of course!"

Ye awaaz thi Veer ki jo apne aap ko churraane ki koshish kar raha tha Ragini ke haatho se. Kyuki Ragini uske kaan ko pakde hue aaj uski khabar le rahi thi.

Doctor Mrinal ke ghar se toh theek hoke aa gaya tha Veer. Par ab tak usne apni Ragini Bhabhi ko poori baat nahi bataayi thi. Jesa ki Ragini ne pehle hi usse keh ke rakha tha ki wo uske theek hone ke baad uski acche se pareeksha legi. Toh bas, wahi paath chal raha tha abhi. Veer ki class lag rahi thi.

Aur uski aisi haalat dekh Aabha aur Sonali dono hi dur se hasste hue maze le rahi thi. Wahi Suman bechaari apne maalik ko dekh bas asahaay waali muskuraahat hi de paa rahi thi. Isme wo kuch nahi kar sakti thi.

Ant me Ragini ne bhi dheere se muskuraate hue Veer ke kaan ko chorra aur boli, "Apna khayaal rakha karo Veer pehle. Pehle khud ki jaan hai, fir dusro ki."

Ragini usse aaj ki duniya ka gyaan padhaana chaah rahi thi. Aur theek hi toh keh rahi thi woh. Aaj ki iss swaarth sii bhari duniya me aadmi pehle apni jaan ki parvaah karta hai. Baad me dusre ki. Sochte hue usse jese Vivek ki harqat ki yaad aa gayi.

Par Veer ki toh jaise alag hi soch thi. Wo bhi muskuraya aur bola, "Mein Vivek Bhaiya ki tarah nahi Bhabhi! Mere liye apne pehle hai. Fir mein khud."

*Badump*

Aur pal bhar ke liye Ragini ka dil ek dhadkan jese phaand gaya.

"H-Huh!?" Wo zorr se saans kheechte hue Veer ko aashcharya bhare bhaav se dekhi.

Veer ko bhi jese dhyaan aaya ki shayad usse Vivek ka naam aise beech me nahi laana chahiye tha. Toh usne agle hi pal maafi maangi.

Ragini : Nahi Veer! Isme maafi maangne ki koi zaroorat nahi. Aur wese bhi, sahi hi toh kaha tumne.

Iss baar uski nazre jhuk gayi. Aur awaaz me maayusi bhi thi.

Ragini : Suman jii! K-Kya aap sab baahar jaa sakte ho? M-Mujhe Veer se akele me kuch baat karni hai.

Suman : Jii Ragini jii! Aabha beti, Sonali, chalo baahar.

Aur Suman unn dono ko lekar baahar chali gayi.

Kamre me keval Veer aur Ragini hi the ab. Abhi subah ke 8:30 baj rahe the aur Ragini bas naha ke naashta hi banaane jaa rahi thi jab usse yaad aaya ki Veer se usne wo baatein puchi hi nahi. Toh isliye wo aaj Veer se saari baat jaan'ne ke liye aayi thi uske kamre me.

Uske ghane baal, abhi bhi paani se halke bheege hue the aur khule hue the. Kyuki wo Vivek ke saath uske ghar pe nahi rehti thi ab toh usse saare kapde pehn'ne ki chhoot thi. Wo top bhi pehenti thi, saree bhi, kurta, suit, salwaar sab kuch.

Aur aaj Ragini ek pink aur black colour combination ki saree pehni hui thi jisme wo husn ki mallika lag rahi thi. Ye kehna ki Veer Ragini se attracted nahi tha jab se wo ghar me aayi thi toh ye galat tha. Jab se Vivek ki shaadi hui thi, Veer hamesha se Ragini ke sang baatein karna chaahta tha.

Kaun nahi chaahega ki aapke saath ek khubsoorat bhabhi ho jo aapse baatein kare? Par Ragini uss samay Veer ko bhaav nahi deti thi. Aur aaj dekho, aaj kismat aisi thi Veer ki, ki wo Ragini ke sang reh raha tha, Ragini khud uss se upat ke baatein karti thi, yaha tak ki uski behad parvah aur uska khayaal bhi rakhti thi. Shayad isliye samay ko sabse shaktishaali maana gaya hai.

Lekin Ragini ke mann me idhar jese abhi bhi kuch bechaini thi.

Ragini : Veer?

Veer : Hmm?

Ragini : Tum... Tumne sach me maaf kar diya hai na mujhe? Mein tumse baat bhi nahi karti thi pehle. Fir dheere dheere hum dono ki beech sulaah ho gayi. Dooriya hatt gayi. Par... Par kahi tum ye toh nahi sochte na ki tumhari ye bhabhi, mauka dekh ke palat gayi aur ab tumhaare sang acche se pesh aane lagi. Kahi tum aisa toh nahi sochte na? Bolo?

Ragini ki insecurity, Veer dekh paa raha tha. Wo dekh paa raha tha ki Ragini iss baat ko lekar behad chintit thi. Toh usne forun hi jawaab diya.

Veer : Bhabhi! Yadi aisi baat hoti toh mein aapse kabhi itna friendly hoke pesh aata hi nahi. Isliye aap ye baat mann se nikaal dijiye. Aisi koi baat nahi hai. Aur wese bhi, aapka koi zyaada dosh tha bhi nahi. Mere dimaag me unn logo ke naam acche se maujood hai jinka sabse zyaada kasoor tha.

Veer ki kahi gayi baat se Ragini muskuraayi aur ek chenn ki saas lii. Wo sheeshe ke saamne jaake khadi hui aur nazre jhukaate hue boli,

Ragini : Tumhari yahi baat toh mujhe sabse acchi lagti hai Veer. Aur... Kahi tumhe bura toh nahi lagta na? Meri baato ka? Meri harqato ka? Mene aaj sabke saamne tumhaare kaan kheeche, tumse baatein bulwaayi. Kahi tum bura toh nahi maante na?

Wo Veer ka jawaab sunn'ne ke liye intezaar kar hi rahi thi ki jab achanak hi usse apne nange pait par kisi ka haath mehsoos hua.

"Haaaaahhhhh!?"

Zorr se sisakte hue Ragini ne jese hi sheeshe me dekha toh paaya ki Veer uske theek peeche tha aur apni thuddi ko uske kandhe par rakh usse peeche se apni orr kheech liya.

'This... This...! Aah!'

Ragini bechaari bhauchakki sii aankhein phaade sheeshe me dekh rahi thi, jisme usse khud ki aakriti toh dikh hi rahi thi par saath hi saath uske peeche se chipke hue Veer ki bhi aakrit nazar aa rahi thi.

Veer ke haath ka touch apne nagn pait par paate hi Ragini ki saasein tezz ho chuki thi. Veer ki hatheli Vivek ki hatheli sii kayi guna alag thi. Ya yu kahe ki behtar thi. Ragini ko garm sa ehsaas ho raha tha apne pait par.

Itni ladaayiyo me bhidne ke baad Veer ki hatheli ab pehle ki tarah narm nahi thi. Unme halki halki kharoche thi, kul milaake uski twacha sakht, aur thodi rough thi. Par yahi rough sii skin Ragini ko ek protective aur mardaana feeling de rahi thi aaj jo feeling Vivek usse kabhi nahi de paaya tha.

Na chaahte hue bhi, Ragini ka mann dol raha tha aaj. Wo apni saasein kaabu me hi nahi kar paa rahi thi. Aisa kuch toh usne aaj tak feel nahi kiya tha.

Veer ke haath ka touch usse uss raat ko yaad dila raha tha jis din Veer usse bachaane aaya tha. Uski hatheli ka maatr sparsh hi Ragini ko sabse surakshit anubhooti pradaan kar raha tha. Jese maano duniya me iss se safe jagah koi aur ho hi nahi sakti thi.

Veer toh anjaane me ye kar raha tha. Wo toh bas saantvna dena chaahta tha Ragini ko ki wo uski baat ka bura nahi maanta hai.

Aur uske baad hi, Ragini ki saasein uncontrollable ho gayi jab Veer ne achanak hi...

*Chu~*

Ragini ke gaal ko chum liya.

"Aaaaaaaaaahhhhhh!"

Ragini hadbadaate hue palti aur Veer ko dekh wo fatafat waha se apne surkh laal gaal lete hue nikal ke bhaag gayi.

"Hmm?"

Veer bechaara bas dekhta hi reh gaya. Usse iss baat ka koi andaaza nahi tha ki Ragini apne mann me iss waqt kya kya soch rahi thi usko lekar.

***

****** Hospital...

"Dekhiye! Humne X-Ray nikaala hai. Hum aapki bhalaayi ke liye hi keh rahe hai. Iska theek hona asambhav hai. Aap baat maaniye aur...."

"Nahi!!!!!"

*Thud*

"!???"

Ek bada hi sajjan doctor iss waqt saamne khade aadmi ko apni baat samjha raha tha. Par saamne khade vyakti ne uski baat sunte hi apne dono haath uski table par patak diye.

Jii haan! Ye vyakti aur koi nahi, Balhaar hi tha jo kal Veer ke haatho apna daaya haath kho baitha tha. Kyuki uska woh haath ab kisi kaam ka nahi tha.

Ye chautha jaana maana doctor tha sheher ka jisse aaj Balhaar apna haath dikhaane aaya tha. Par yaha bhi wahi jawaab mila usse.

Uska gussa saatve aasmaan par tha.

Balhaar : Bewakufo!!! Kaahe ka doctor ho saalo? Ek haath bhi pehle jesa nahi kar sakte? Nahi karwani mujhe koi surgery... Mujhe mera yahi haath chahiye samjhe!??? Koi artificial haath nahi!!

Doctor : Dekhiye! Y-Ye impossible hai. Ye beyond repair hai. Mein aapki bhalayi ke liye hi...

Iss se pehle ki doctor kuch keh paata, Balhaar ne uski collor pakad usse uski chair se uthaaya aur uchi awaaz me chillaya,

Balhaar : Dekh behanchod!!! Tu kuch bhi kar, jisse bhi bulaana hai bula par mera ye haath theek kar. Samjha?

Doctor : Dekhiye! A-Aap tameez se baat kijiye! Y-Ye impossible hai. Aap... Aapki limb iss tareeqe se mudi hui hai ki isse waapas se seedha karna asambhav hai. Ye... Ye koi rubber nahi hai. Ye haath hai. Zara sii bhi chuk hui toh dard toh hoga hi, saath hi poori tareeke se haddi toot sakti hai.

"Aaaaaarrrrghhhhhhhhhh!" Balhaar gusse me chillaaya aur uss doctor ko wahi dhakka dekar baahar nikal gaya.

Mann me uske Veer ke wahi shabd gunj rahe the.

"Tera jo ye haath hai na. Tu duniya ke kisi bhi doctor ke paas hi kyu na chala jaaye. Chaahe usse kitne bhi paise kyu na de de. Tera ye haath duniya me koi repair nahi kar sakta. Siwae mere!"

Ab shayad, Balhaar ko Veer ki baat ka visvaash ho raha tha. Wo chaar bade se bade sheher ke doctors ke paas ho aaya tha. Par kabhi bhi usse umeed nazar nahi aayi. Yadi aise hi chalta raha toh...!?

"Nahi!!! M-Mein apna haath nahi kho sakta."

Usne abhi tak Slogan ya kisi anya ko Veer ke baare me koi jankaari nahi dii thi. Wo isliye Kyuki pehle wo confirm karna chaahta tha ki Veer ki baat sahi hai bhi ya nahi? Lekin veer ki baat ab usse sach hoti nazar aa rahi thi.

"Tchhhh!" Daato ko meeste hue usne apna nirnay forun hi le liya.

Aur wo tha...

Wo SLOGAN ki saari khabre Veer ko dene waala tha!

***

Veer's Old House...
11:30 AM...

"Sab maujood hai na?" Manorath kehte hue single seat sofe par viraajmaan ho gaye.

"Jii Dada jii! Sab yahi hai!" Manorath ke bagal me khade Pranjal ne kaha.

Aaj Manorath apna faisla apni jaydaat ko lekar sunaane waale the.

Ghar me aaj sabhi maujood the. Veer chup chaap apni aankhein band kiye, dono haath mode ek sofe par baitha hua tha. Uske bagal se Arohi aur Kavya dono hi baithi hui thi.

Toh wahi Brijesh aur Karunesh ek saath viraajmaan the. Vivek apni Maa Sumitra ke saath baitha hua tha. Aur Bhumika aur Shweta dono Maa beti alag se ek seat me.

Manorath formally ye decison suna rahe the. Toh vakeel se leke documents sab maujood the. Saara kaam aaj hi shuru hone waala tha. Wo jald se jald iss jaydaat se chhutkaara paana chaahte the.

Brijesh ne ek jhalak Veer ki orr dekha aur Veer ne bhi usse dekha. Par dono me se kisi ne kuch kaha.

Pranjal Dada jii ke bagal se hi baith gaya.

Aur fir Manorath bolna shuru kiye,

Manorath : Toh mein baato ko zyaada ghumaunga nahi. Seedha mudde par aata hu. Meri saari jaydaat ko aaj mein apne pote potiyo me baatne jaa raha hu. Aur haan, ye mein poore hosh me rehke suna raha hu. Jaydaat me se koi bhi cheez Brijesh, Karunesh aur unki dharm patniyo ko nahi baati jaegi. Ye keval mere pote potiyo ke liye hi hai. Aur wo bhi unke liye jo mujhe lagta hai sahi tarah se iss jaydaat ka upyog kar paenge.

Manorath ki baat sunn sabhi shaant the. Par sabhi ke dil ki dhadkan zorro se dhadak rahi thi. Khaaskar Vivek, aur Shweta ki.

Manorath : Toh mera faisla tay raha...

Kehte hue Manorath ne harr ek waha baithe shaks par nazre ghumaayi. Veer ko koi matlab nahi tha. Uske hisaab se Dada jii ko ye kaam abhi nahi karna chaahiye tha. Isliye, wo bas chup chaap side me baitha raha.

Sab ki nazre Manorath ki orr hi thi. Aur tabhi Manorath ne apna faisla sunaaya jisse sunke waha maujood sabhi ke hosh udd gaye.

Manorath : Meri 40% jaydaat... Mein Veer ke naam karta hu.

*Boom*

Jese ek bam phata waha baithe logo par.

Veer : Huh?

[Hahaha~ Ye hui na baat ab! Just look at their faces.]

Pranjal abhi bhi shaant baitha hua tha. Par uske maathe par paseena zaroor jhalak raha tha.

Manorath : Aur 40% jaydaat... Mein apne pote Pranjal ke naam karta hu.

Jo paseena Pranjal ke maathe par tha. Ye sunte hi usne wo paseena poch liya. Baaki sab bas apne gale me atka hua thook hi gutak ke reh gaye.

Manorath : Baaki ki bachi hui 20% jaydaat me se... Mein 10% apni poti Arohi aur baaki ki 10% apni sabse choti poti Kavya ke naam karta hu.

Shweta : H-Huh!? Y-Ye?

Vivek : !???

Manorath : Yahi hai mera poora faisla.

Shweta jiske chehra ka rang hi udd chuka tha faisla sunn ke wo forun hi apni jagah se uth khadi hui.

Shweta : P-Papa jii!? Ye... Ye aap kya keh rahe hai?

Manorath : Sahi keh raha hu.

Shweta : H-Huh? P-Par meri beti Bhumika. Wo... Wo bhi toh aapki poti hai na? Aur wo bhi sabse badi poti... T-Toh uska naam kaha hai? Aapne usse kuch kyu nahi diya?

Manorath : Kuch samay pehle, mene inn sabhi ko apne kamre me bulaaya tha. Tab mein inse ye nahi puchna chaah raha tha ki jaydaat kisse dii jaaye. Mein inn sabhi ka vyaktitv parakh raha tha. Jiski pareeskha me Vivek aur Bhumika dono hi fail ho gaye.

Bhumika ka ye baat sunn apne aap sarr jhuk gaya. Wo naraaz nahi thi. Na hi gussa thi. Usse jese waqai koi gham nahi tha. Kaafi calm thi woh.

Par yahi baat uski Maa Shweta ke liye nahi kahi jaa sakti thi. Shweta ka toh bechaini ke chalte poora shareer thitur raha tha.

Shweta : Ye... Ye aap!?? Aisa kese kar sakte hai? A-Arohi aur K-Kavya ko toh dii na aapne? Fir bechaari meri Bhumika hi kyi reh gayi?

Manorath : Mein bataata hu ki kyu Bhumika aur Vivek ko ratti bhar bhi jaydaat nahi mil paayi. Kyuki jab Vivek se mene pucha tha ki jaydaat kitne hisso me kisse baati jaaye. Toh Vivek ne sabhi ka naam liya tha. Siwae Veer ke. Jis bhai ko apne sabse chote bhai ki fiqr tak na ho usse bhala mein ye jaydaat kese de sakta hu? Yahi kaaran Bhumika ka bhi hai. Bhumika bitiya ne ek baar bhi apne bhai Veer ka zikr nahi kiya tha.

Manorath ki baat sunn, Shweta ka dimaag hi sann reh gaya. Uss din khud ussi ne toh Bhumika ko patti padha ke bheja tha ki Apne Dada jii se directly apna haq maang lena. Aur dekho kya ho gaya aaj. Shweta ko apni galti ka abhaas hote hi itna zyaada pachtaava ho raha tha ki uski mutthi me saree ka bhaag poora nichud ke reh gaya. Yaha tak ki aankho ke kono me halke halke aasu bhi utpann ho chuke the.

Vivek wahi baithe apne mann me khud ko hi kos raha tha. Usse laga tha ki shayad Veer ka naam nahi lete hue Dada jii ne uski baato ko zyaada dhyaan nahi diya hoga. Par wo galat tha. Bas mann me gaali hi nikal rahi thi uske.

Manorath : Wahi dusri orr, Pranjal Arohi, aur Kavya teeno ne hi Veer ko apne dhyaan me rakh uska naam lete hue usse jaydaat dene ko kaha tha. Arohi bitiya toh apna poora hissa Veer ko dena chaahti thi. Toh wahi Kavya ko kuch nahi chaahiye tha. Wo bhi yahi kahi thi ki jaydaat Veer ko de dii jaaye. Aur Pranjal bete ka bhi yahi kehna tha.

Veer ne palat'te hue dono hi Arohi aur Kavya ko dekha toh dono hi behno ne usse ek smile pass kii.

Manorath : Arohi sahi maayno me haqdaar nahi thi. Kyuki jaydaat usse hi sahi phalti hai jo iska upyog sahi se karna jaane aur ek iccha rakhe. Arohi bitiya ke mann me koi iccha nahi thi. Usse koi matlab nahi tha. Yahi kaaran hai ki usse keval 10% hi jaydaat ka hissa mila. Wo isliye, kyuki usse apne bhai Veer ka dhyaan tha. Dhyaan tha ki wo iss ghar se dur tha.

Arohi : ....

Manorath : Wahi Kavya ko ye jaydaat ka 10% isliye diya gaya kyuki wo ghar ki sabse choti poti hai meri. Aur sabse pyaari. Abhi usse utni samajh nahi. Aisa ho sakta hai ki aage jaa ke usse aur samajh aaye toh kahi usse pachtaava na ho. Isliye uske jeb me kuch toh hona chahiye na? Ye 10% ki jaydaat ab wo jese chaahe upyog kare, ye uske upar hai.

Shweta aur Vivek dono hi Manorath ki baat vistaar se sunn'ne ke baad wahi jamm ke reh gaye. Aisa lag raha tha jese kisi ne unke muh me nimbu nichod diya ho. Aisa muh ho gaya tha dono ka.

Aur fir Shweta jese bhadak uthi,

Shweta (chilaate hue) : Ye galat hai. Ye sarasar anyaay hai... Ye galat hai! Aap... Aap aisa nahi kar sakte. Aapne galat nirnay liya hai. Ye meri beti ke saath chhal hai. Sabko aapne kuch na kuch diya par meri beti ke liye ek rupaya bhi nahi chhootha aapke haath se? K-Kya kami reh hai meri beti me?
Kyu kiya aapne aisa!? Haaan?

Shweta ki ladkhadaati hui awaaz sunn, waha baitha Brijesh usse bauhe sikod ke dekhne laga. Toh wahi Bhumika apni Maa ke kandho ko thaam usse rokne ka prayatn karne lagi. Par aaj jese Shweta bilkul bhi nahi baithne waali thi.

Shweta (screams) : AAPNE GALAT KIYA HAI! AAP GALAT HO!!!! AAPNE MERI BETI SE USKA HAQ CHHEENA HAI!!!!!

Uski cheenkhe poore hall me goonj rahi thi. Aur uska chehra poora laal ho chuka tha. Aur aankho se aasu behte hue gaal par bikhar chuke the. Bhumika bhi sehemte hue apni Maa ko rokne ki koshish kar rahi thi.

Baar baar samjhaane par bhi jab Shweta na chup hui toh iss baar Brijesh nahi ruka. Wo utha aur tezz kadmo ke saath Shweta ke sameep aaya.

Brijesh (chillaate hue) : SHWETAAAA!!!

Shweta : !!?

Brijesh : Mene tumhare liye kitna kuch nahi kiya? Arre itni badi hotel tumhare aur Bhumika ke naam par hai. Fir tum Papa jii se aisi baatein kyu kar rahi ho? Aur kya chahiye tumhe? Yaha toh hum sabhi gharwale hai na? Fir ab aur kya chahiye tumhe? Kya tum itne se bhi santusht nahi ho? Sab kuch toh de hi raha hu na mein tumhe!? Fir Papa jii se kyu zabaan lada rahi ho?

Shweta (screams) : KYUKI YE DHONGI HAI!!!! YE BAS MEETHI MEETHI BAATEIN KARTE HAI! INHE MERI BACCHI KI KOI PARVAAH NAHI!!! YE DHONGII HAI....!!!!

Bas, Shweta ka itna chillana hi tha ki tabhi...

*Chataaaaaaaaaaaaaaak*

Ek zordaar thappad ki goonj poore hall me fel gayi.

Shweta : !!!?

Shweta apne gaal ko pakad ek taraf chehra jhukaaye hairat ke maare khade reh gayi. Brijesh ne usse ek zordaar tamaacha jad diya tha.

Aur maano waha jese sannaata saa chha gaya.

Manorath samet sabhi apni jagah se hairat ke maare khade ho gaye.

Bhumika : M-Mom!!!!!

Shweta ne fir Brijesh ko wahi roti hui soorat se dekha. Aaj jese uske andar kuch toot chuka tha.

Brijesh jesa bhi tha. Wo apne pita ki boht izzat karta tha. Haan, kabhi kabhi uski apne pita se kaha suni ho jaati thi. Par kabhi palat ke jawaab nahi deta tha Brijesh. Par aaj...

Aaj uski hi patni uske pita ko sabke saamne dhongi keh ke bula rahi thi? Kya kami reh gayi thi uski aur uski beti ki parvarish me?

Brijesh : Abhi ke abhi andar jao. Bhumika!!!! Leke jao apni Maa ko.

Shweta toh jese sann sii pad gayi thi. Wo Bhumika ke saath kab hall chorr ke baahar nikal gayi usse pata hi nahi chala.

Brijesh : Papa jii! Yadi sab kuch ho gaya ho toh kya...

Manorath : Tumhe haath nahi uthaana tha bahu pe. Aurat pe haath uthaana...

Brijesh : M-Mein jaanta hu. Par uss samay mujhe wo zaroori laga.

Manorath ne toh jese ye pal pehle hi parakh liya tha. Isliye wo shaant ho gaye.

Manorath : Aaj mein apni saari zimmedaariyo se mukt ho chuka hu. Toh isliye, kal mene iski khushi me ek bhavya daavat rakhi hai 5 star hotel me. Kal sabhi ko waha time se raat me maujood hona hai. Aur... Bahu ko mana lena. Mein nahi chaahta wo waha par na mile.

Brijesh : J-Jii!!

Manorath : Ye program mene isliye rakha hai. Kyuki mein chaahta hu ki Veer aur Pranjal dono hi waha apni kaabiliyat dikhaaye. Ab kyuki wo do bade hisso ke maalik hai. Toh waha dherr saare bade bade logo ka aagman hoga. Wo saare mere pehchaan ke hai. Unse acche rishte banaoge toh aage jaldi badhoge. Ab dekhna ye hai ki tum dono me se kaun acche se rishte bana paata hai. Samay aur jagah raat tak tum logo ko message dwaara bata diye jaengi. Parivaarik baithak yahi samaapt hoti hai. Tum sab jaa sakte ho.

Aur fir jo bhi documents ke kaam the, unhe niptane ke baad Veer bhi apne ghar aa gaya.

Yaha Pranjal apne room ki orr jaa raha tha jab Vivek ne usse peeche se thaam ke paltaaya.

Vivek : Chote!!! Ye vaar toh ulta hi pad gaya mere liye. Mujhe nahi laga tha ki...

Pranjal (smiles) : Ab kuch nahi ho sakta bhaiya! Aap ne apne khud ke perr par kulhaadi maar lii.

Vivek : Huh?

Pranjal : Chalta hu.

Vivek : Ek... Ek minute! Tujhe 40% mili hai na... Toh...

Pranjal : Haan toh? Ye 40% mujhe mili hai. Aapko bhi milti. Yadi aapne Veer ka dhyaan rakha hota toh. Ab isme mein kuch nahi kar sakta bhaiya.

Vivek Pranjal ki baat sunte hi itna aag baboola ho gaya ki usne forun hi apne chote bhai ki collor pakad lii. Saala iss chote bhai ke liye itna risk utha raha tha woh? Usse laga tha ki 40 kam se kam Pranjal ko toh mili hi hai. Wo aadhi toh de hi dega. Akhir wo dono partners the. Par...

Dene ki toh baat chorro, Pranjal ne saaf inkaar kar diya kuch bhi dene se. Gussa aana toh swabhaavik tha.

Vivek : Mein tujhe harr kadam par saath leke chala. Aur tune ye kiya? Bhul mat chote! Ki mene hi tujhe iss plan me shaamil kiya tha. Yadi mein na hota toh tujhe ye sab...

Pranjal : Hahahaha~

Pranjal ne hasste hue apni collor se Vivek ke haath hataaye aur muskuraate hue usse dekhte hue bola,

Pranjal : Kamaal karte ho bhaiya! Itni badi company ke maalik ho. Dad ne aap pe na jaane kitna paisa phooka hoga. Uske baad ab jab itne jeevan me mujhe kuch mil raha hai toh wo bhi aapko hi chaahiye? Na bhaiya na! Bilkul nahi! Aapne na keval Bhabhi ko khoya, balki khud ke hi perr me kulhaadi maar aapne ye jaydaat bhi kho dii. Kherr, jaisa jiska naseeb... Chalta hu!

Aur wo Vivek se dur hatt apne kamre ki orr nikal gaya. Idhar Vivek bas apni mutthi ko gusse me kassta hi reh gaya.

"Chote!!!"

Kamre me aate hi Pranjal ki jo muskaan thi wo gaayab ho chuki thi. Wash basin ke paas aate hi usne apne chehre par paani ke chheethe maare aur saamne lagae sheeshe me khud ko dekhne laga.

'What went wrong???'

Manorath ka decision uski predictibility se bilkul alag tha. Usne socha tha ki uske Dada jii 50% usse, 30% Veer aur 10-10% Arohi aur Kavya ko baatenge.

Par wo galat tha.

Veer bhi utne hi pratishat ka maalik tha jitna ki woh khud. Aur issi ke chalte uske mann me dherro sawaal aa rahe the. Uska plan fail ho chuka tha.

'Sab kuch toh sahi kar raha tha mein. Galti kaha reh gayi? Damn it!!! Veer bhi mera equal ka partner hai. Mujhe...

Hmm!!! Mujhe jald se jald Arohi dii aur Kavya se unka hissa kese bhi karke lena hoga. At least tab mein 60% ka maalik toh kehla paunga. Baaki ki jaydaat Veer se kese hadapni hai. Uske baare me baad me sochunga. Kal major gathering rakhi hai Dada jii ne. Bade bade log aaenge. Mein kisi bhi haalat me Veer ko unse milne ke chances nahi de sakta. Mujhe uske saare chances intercept karne honge. Kal! Kal mein uski saari izzat ka aisa faaluda banaunga ki paraaye toh kya uske apno ke beech uski izzat mitti me milke reh jaegi!'

Wo khud se itna soch chala gaya kapde badalne.

***

Agli raat aaj Banquet ka din tha. Bhavya daavat rakhi gayi thi Manorath dwaara 5 star hotel me.

Ek se ek log aaye the. Bhale hi Veer ki family Kaera ya Sonia jitne level ki nahi thi. Par kaafi log unke hi standard ke aaye hue the. Wo isliye kyuki Manorath ne apni guzarti life me inse contact banaaye the.

Manorath ko chorr ke uske ghar se sabhi hotel me aa chuke the. Wese toh ye program Shweta ke hotel me hi rakha jaa sakta tha. Par...

Kal ki ghatna ke chalte aur saath hi saath ye sochke chalte ki Shweta fir hotel ke kaamo me busy ho jaegi. Isliye, fir ye banquet ek 5 star hotel me aayojit kiya gaya.

Mehngi se mehngi cars ki parking hoti jaa rahi thi. Aur aadmi aurat mehnge mehnge kapde pehne hue andar jaa rahe the. Manorath ne iss baar koi kami nahi dikhaayi thi. Laakho rupaye kharch kiye the unhone aaj ki iss daavat me.

Brijesh aur Karunesh andar hi saath me suit pehne khade hue aapas me baatein kar rahe the.

Karunesh : Lo bolo! Papa jii hume samjhaate the ki party mat karo, party mat karo. Aur ab khud ko dekho. Aisi party pheki unhone ki kya hi kahe ab...

Brijesh : Wo Papa jii hai. Kuch bhi kar sakte hai.

Wahi dusri orr, Arohi aur Kavya hasinaayo jesi saji hui Veer ka hi wait kar rahi thi jab ek car parking me aakar ruki. Aur usme se Veer nikla.

Shandaar ek tuxedo pehne aaj wo bhi poori tarah se taiyaar hoke aaya tha.

Kyuki wo jaanta tha, ki iss Banquet me usse kayi saare relationship banaane hai bade logo se.

Aur upar se... Usne apne 200 points ka upyog bhi stats me use kar liya the. Usne 60 points Strength me, 30 points Intelligence me, 30-30 points Agility aur Endurance me aur baaki ke 50 seedhe appearance me daal diye the.

'Pari'

[Hmm?]

'Show me my full status!'

[Okay!]

*Ding*

[Name : Veer

Age : 21
Status : Student

Stats :
Strength - 96/100
Intelligence - 95/100
Agility - 65/100
Endurance - 65/100
Appearance - 75/100


Skills :
1) Sex Protection : ON (Silver Tier Skill)
2) Basic Martial Arts Skill (Bronze Tier Skill) upgraded to Intermediate Martial Arts Skill (Silver Tier Skill)
3) Hawkeye (Diamond Tier Skill)
4) Limbo (Silver Tier Skill)
5) Basic Enemy Tracker (Bronze Tier Skill)

System's Internal Features :
Check-I, Check-II, Path Tracker, Past Illustration, Translator, Quest Hunt, Slot.

Relationships :
1) Suman : Loyal Slave (Favourability : 92)
2) Aabha : Familiar (Favourability : 68)
3) Sonali : Familiar (Favourability : 45)
4) Ragini : Close Friend (Favourability : 70)
5) Nidhi : Close Friend (Favourability : 54)
6) Shreya : Close Friend (Favourability : 65)
7) Juhi : Best Friend (Favourability : 89)
8) Suhana : Close Friend (Favourability : 62)
9) Sonia : Good Friend (Favourability : 64)
10) Kavya : Very Close Friend (Favourability : 85)
11) Arohi : Good Friend (Favourability : 66)
12) Bhumika : Familiar (Favourability : 30)
13) Shweta : Familiar (Favourability : 5)
14) Kaera : Best Friend (Favourability : 72)

System Level : Level 5
(120 EXP more to reach Level 6)]

Aur stats me appearance 75 dekhte hi Veer ke andar kaafi confidence tha aaj. Kyuki usse pata tha ki andar jaate hi kya hone waala tha.

'Let's go!'

[Yeah!!!]
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!

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Update - 69 ~ The Grand Banquet!
Ab tak...

Intermediate Martial Art Skill!!!

Neeche price likha hi tha~

400 Points!

Aur Veer ne ek baar me hi purchase ke option pe click kiya aur...

*Ding*

[Intermediate Martial Art Skill is now available.]

Aur ye notification sunte hi Veer muskuraate hue waapas se apni dono sevikaao ke beech lait gaya.

'Pranjal! I'm preparing a surprise for you!!!'


Ab aage...

"Ouch ouch!!!!"

"Bolo ab? Ab kabhi karoge aisa? Haan?"

"N-Nahi! Bilkul nahi!"

"Hmm! Chalo maaf kiya! Par ahinda se dhyaan rakhna. Okay!?"

"Of course!"

Ye awaaz thi Veer ki jo apne aap ko churraane ki koshish kar raha tha Ragini ke haatho se. Kyuki Ragini uske kaan ko pakde hue aaj uski khabar le rahi thi.

Doctor Mrinal ke ghar se toh theek hoke aa gaya tha Veer. Par ab tak usne apni Ragini Bhabhi ko poori baat nahi bataayi thi. Jesa ki Ragini ne pehle hi usse keh ke rakha tha ki wo uske theek hone ke baad uski acche se pareeksha legi. Toh bas, wahi paath chal raha tha abhi. Veer ki class lag rahi thi.

Aur uski aisi haalat dekh Aabha aur Sonali dono hi dur se hasste hue maze le rahi thi. Wahi Suman bechaari apne maalik ko dekh bas asahaay waali muskuraahat hi de paa rahi thi. Isme wo kuch nahi kar sakti thi.

Ant me Ragini ne bhi dheere se muskuraate hue Veer ke kaan ko chorra aur boli, "Apna khayaal rakha karo Veer pehle. Pehle khud ki jaan hai, fir dusro ki."

Ragini usse aaj ki duniya ka gyaan padhaana chaah rahi thi. Aur theek hi toh keh rahi thi woh. Aaj ki iss swaarth sii bhari duniya me aadmi pehle apni jaan ki parvaah karta hai. Baad me dusre ki. Sochte hue usse jese Vivek ki harqat ki yaad aa gayi.

Par Veer ki toh jaise alag hi soch thi. Wo bhi muskuraya aur bola, "Mein Vivek Bhaiya ki tarah nahi Bhabhi! Mere liye apne pehle hai. Fir mein khud."

*Badump*

Aur pal bhar ke liye Ragini ka dil ek dhadkan jese phaand gaya.

"H-Huh!?" Wo zorr se saans kheechte hue Veer ko aashcharya bhare bhaav se dekhi.

Veer ko bhi jese dhyaan aaya ki shayad usse Vivek ka naam aise beech me nahi laana chahiye tha. Toh usne agle hi pal maafi maangi.

Ragini : Nahi Veer! Isme maafi maangne ki koi zaroorat nahi. Aur wese bhi, sahi hi toh kaha tumne.

Iss baar uski nazre jhuk gayi. Aur awaaz me maayusi bhi thi.

Ragini : Suman jii! K-Kya aap sab baahar jaa sakte ho? M-Mujhe Veer se akele me kuch baat karni hai.

Suman : Jii Ragini jii! Aabha beti, Sonali, chalo baahar.

Aur Suman unn dono ko lekar baahar chali gayi.

Kamre me keval Veer aur Ragini hi the ab. Abhi subah ke 8:30 baj rahe the aur Ragini bas naha ke naashta hi banaane jaa rahi thi jab usse yaad aaya ki Veer se usne wo baatein puchi hi nahi. Toh isliye wo aaj Veer se saari baat jaan'ne ke liye aayi thi uske kamre me.

Uske ghane baal, abhi bhi paani se halke bheege hue the aur khule hue the. Kyuki wo Vivek ke saath uske ghar pe nahi rehti thi ab toh usse saare kapde pehn'ne ki chhoot thi. Wo top bhi pehenti thi, saree bhi, kurta, suit, salwaar sab kuch.

Aur aaj Ragini ek pink aur black colour combination ki saree pehni hui thi jisme wo husn ki mallika lag rahi thi. Ye kehna ki Veer Ragini se attracted nahi tha jab se wo ghar me aayi thi toh ye galat tha. Jab se Vivek ki shaadi hui thi, Veer hamesha se Ragini ke sang baatein karna chaahta tha.

Kaun nahi chaahega ki aapke saath ek khubsoorat bhabhi ho jo aapse baatein kare? Par Ragini uss samay Veer ko bhaav nahi deti thi. Aur aaj dekho, aaj kismat aisi thi Veer ki, ki wo Ragini ke sang reh raha tha, Ragini khud uss se upat ke baatein karti thi, yaha tak ki uski behad parvah aur uska khayaal bhi rakhti thi. Shayad isliye samay ko sabse shaktishaali maana gaya hai.

Lekin Ragini ke mann me idhar jese abhi bhi kuch bechaini thi.

Ragini : Veer?

Veer : Hmm?

Ragini : Tum... Tumne sach me maaf kar diya hai na mujhe? Mein tumse baat bhi nahi karti thi pehle. Fir dheere dheere hum dono ki beech sulaah ho gayi. Dooriya hatt gayi. Par... Par kahi tum ye toh nahi sochte na ki tumhari ye bhabhi, mauka dekh ke palat gayi aur ab tumhaare sang acche se pesh aane lagi. Kahi tum aisa toh nahi sochte na? Bolo?

Ragini ki insecurity, Veer dekh paa raha tha. Wo dekh paa raha tha ki Ragini iss baat ko lekar behad chintit thi. Toh usne forun hi jawaab diya.

Veer : Bhabhi! Yadi aisi baat hoti toh mein aapse kabhi itna friendly hoke pesh aata hi nahi. Isliye aap ye baat mann se nikaal dijiye. Aisi koi baat nahi hai. Aur wese bhi, aapka koi zyaada dosh tha bhi nahi. Mere dimaag me unn logo ke naam acche se maujood hai jinka sabse zyaada kasoor tha.

Veer ki kahi gayi baat se Ragini muskuraayi aur ek chenn ki saas lii. Wo sheeshe ke saamne jaake khadi hui aur nazre jhukaate hue boli,

Ragini : Tumhari yahi baat toh mujhe sabse acchi lagti hai Veer. Aur... Kahi tumhe bura toh nahi lagta na? Meri baato ka? Meri harqato ka? Mene aaj sabke saamne tumhaare kaan kheeche, tumse baatein bulwaayi. Kahi tum bura toh nahi maante na?

Wo Veer ka jawaab sunn'ne ke liye intezaar kar hi rahi thi ki jab achanak hi usse apne nange pait par kisi ka haath mehsoos hua.

"Haaaaahhhhh!?"

Zorr se sisakte hue Ragini ne jese hi sheeshe me dekha toh paaya ki Veer uske theek peeche tha aur apni thuddi ko uske kandhe par rakh usse peeche se apni orr kheech liya.

'This... This...! Aah!'

Ragini bechaari bhauchakki sii aankhein phaade sheeshe me dekh rahi thi, jisme usse khud ki aakriti toh dikh hi rahi thi par saath hi saath uske peeche se chipke hue Veer ki bhi aakrit nazar aa rahi thi.

Veer ke haath ka touch apne nagn pait par paate hi Ragini ki saasein tezz ho chuki thi. Veer ki hatheli Vivek ki hatheli sii kayi guna alag thi. Ya yu kahe ki behtar thi. Ragini ko garm sa ehsaas ho raha tha apne pait par.

Itni ladaayiyo me bhidne ke baad Veer ki hatheli ab pehle ki tarah narm nahi thi. Unme halki halki kharoche thi, kul milaake uski twacha sakht, aur thodi rough thi. Par yahi rough sii skin Ragini ko ek protective aur mardaana feeling de rahi thi aaj jo feeling Vivek usse kabhi nahi de paaya tha.

Na chaahte hue bhi, Ragini ka mann dol raha tha aaj. Wo apni saasein kaabu me hi nahi kar paa rahi thi. Aisa kuch toh usne aaj tak feel nahi kiya tha.

Veer ke haath ka touch usse uss raat ko yaad dila raha tha jis din Veer usse bachaane aaya tha. Uski hatheli ka maatr sparsh hi Ragini ko sabse surakshit anubhooti pradaan kar raha tha. Jese maano duniya me iss se safe jagah koi aur ho hi nahi sakti thi.

Veer toh anjaane me ye kar raha tha. Wo toh bas saantvna dena chaahta tha Ragini ko ki wo uski baat ka bura nahi maanta hai.

Aur uske baad hi, Ragini ki saasein uncontrollable ho gayi jab Veer ne achanak hi...

*Chu~*

Ragini ke gaal ko chum liya.

"Aaaaaaaaaahhhhhh!"

Ragini hadbadaate hue palti aur Veer ko dekh wo fatafat waha se apne surkh laal gaal lete hue nikal ke bhaag gayi.

"Hmm?"

Veer bechaara bas dekhta hi reh gaya. Usse iss baat ka koi andaaza nahi tha ki Ragini apne mann me iss waqt kya kya soch rahi thi usko lekar.

***

****** Hospital...

"Dekhiye! Humne X-Ray nikaala hai. Hum aapki bhalaayi ke liye hi keh rahe hai. Iska theek hona asambhav hai. Aap baat maaniye aur...."

"Nahi!!!!!"

*Thud*

"!???"

Ek bada hi sajjan doctor iss waqt saamne khade aadmi ko apni baat samjha raha tha. Par saamne khade vyakti ne uski baat sunte hi apne dono haath uski table par patak diye.

Jii haan! Ye vyakti aur koi nahi, Balhaar hi tha jo kal Veer ke haatho apna daaya haath kho baitha tha. Kyuki uska woh haath ab kisi kaam ka nahi tha.

Ye chautha jaana maana doctor tha sheher ka jisse aaj Balhaar apna haath dikhaane aaya tha. Par yaha bhi wahi jawaab mila usse.

Uska gussa saatve aasmaan par tha.

Balhaar : Bewakufo!!! Kaahe ka doctor ho saalo? Ek haath bhi pehle jesa nahi kar sakte? Nahi karwani mujhe koi surgery... Mujhe mera yahi haath chahiye samjhe!??? Koi artificial haath nahi!!

Doctor : Dekhiye! Y-Ye impossible hai. Ye beyond repair hai. Mein aapki bhalayi ke liye hi...

Iss se pehle ki doctor kuch keh paata, Balhaar ne uski collor pakad usse uski chair se uthaaya aur uchi awaaz me chillaya,

Balhaar : Dekh behanchod!!! Tu kuch bhi kar, jisse bhi bulaana hai bula par mera ye haath theek kar. Samjha?

Doctor : Dekhiye! A-Aap tameez se baat kijiye! Y-Ye impossible hai. Aap... Aapki limb iss tareeqe se mudi hui hai ki isse waapas se seedha karna asambhav hai. Ye... Ye koi rubber nahi hai. Ye haath hai. Zara sii bhi chuk hui toh dard toh hoga hi, saath hi poori tareeke se haddi toot sakti hai.

"Aaaaaarrrrghhhhhhhhhh!" Balhaar gusse me chillaaya aur uss doctor ko wahi dhakka dekar baahar nikal gaya.

Mann me uske Veer ke wahi shabd gunj rahe the.

"Tera jo ye haath hai na. Tu duniya ke kisi bhi doctor ke paas hi kyu na chala jaaye. Chaahe usse kitne bhi paise kyu na de de. Tera ye haath duniya me koi repair nahi kar sakta. Siwae mere!"

Ab shayad, Balhaar ko Veer ki baat ka visvaash ho raha tha. Wo chaar bade se bade sheher ke doctors ke paas ho aaya tha. Par kabhi bhi usse umeed nazar nahi aayi. Yadi aise hi chalta raha toh...!?

"Nahi!!! M-Mein apna haath nahi kho sakta."

Usne abhi tak Slogan ya kisi anya ko Veer ke baare me koi jankaari nahi dii thi. Wo isliye Kyuki pehle wo confirm karna chaahta tha ki Veer ki baat sahi hai bhi ya nahi? Lekin veer ki baat ab usse sach hoti nazar aa rahi thi.

"Tchhhh!" Daato ko meeste hue usne apna nirnay forun hi le liya.

Aur wo tha...

Wo SLOGAN ki saari khabre Veer ko dene waala tha!

***

Veer's Old House...
11:30 AM...

"Sab maujood hai na?" Manorath kehte hue single seat sofe par viraajmaan ho gaye.

"Jii Dada jii! Sab yahi hai!" Manorath ke bagal me khade Pranjal ne kaha.

Aaj Manorath apna faisla apni jaydaat ko lekar sunaane waale the.

Ghar me aaj sabhi maujood the. Veer chup chaap apni aankhein band kiye, dono haath mode ek sofe par baitha hua tha. Uske bagal se Arohi aur Kavya dono hi baithi hui thi.

Toh wahi Brijesh aur Karunesh ek saath viraajmaan the. Vivek apni Maa Sumitra ke saath baitha hua tha. Aur Bhumika aur Shweta dono Maa beti alag se ek seat me.

Manorath formally ye decison suna rahe the. Toh vakeel se leke documents sab maujood the. Saara kaam aaj hi shuru hone waala tha. Wo jald se jald iss jaydaat se chhutkaara paana chaahte the.

Brijesh ne ek jhalak Veer ki orr dekha aur Veer ne bhi usse dekha. Par dono me se kisi ne kuch kaha.

Pranjal Dada jii ke bagal se hi baith gaya.

Aur fir Manorath bolna shuru kiye,

Manorath : Toh mein baato ko zyaada ghumaunga nahi. Seedha mudde par aata hu. Meri saari jaydaat ko aaj mein apne pote potiyo me baatne jaa raha hu. Aur haan, ye mein poore hosh me rehke suna raha hu. Jaydaat me se koi bhi cheez Brijesh, Karunesh aur unki dharm patniyo ko nahi baati jaegi. Ye keval mere pote potiyo ke liye hi hai. Aur wo bhi unke liye jo mujhe lagta hai sahi tarah se iss jaydaat ka upyog kar paenge.

Manorath ki baat sunn sabhi shaant the. Par sabhi ke dil ki dhadkan zorro se dhadak rahi thi. Khaaskar Vivek, aur Shweta ki.

Manorath : Toh mera faisla tay raha...

Kehte hue Manorath ne harr ek waha baithe shaks par nazre ghumaayi. Veer ko koi matlab nahi tha. Uske hisaab se Dada jii ko ye kaam abhi nahi karna chaahiye tha. Isliye, wo bas chup chaap side me baitha raha.

Sab ki nazre Manorath ki orr hi thi. Aur tabhi Manorath ne apna faisla sunaaya jisse sunke waha maujood sabhi ke hosh udd gaye.

Manorath : Meri 40% jaydaat... Mein Veer ke naam karta hu.

*Boom*

Jese ek bam phata waha baithe logo par.

Veer : Huh?

[Hahaha~ Ye hui na baat ab! Just look at their faces.]

Pranjal abhi bhi shaant baitha hua tha. Par uske maathe par paseena zaroor jhalak raha tha.

Manorath : Aur 40% jaydaat... Mein apne pote Pranjal ke naam karta hu.

Jo paseena Pranjal ke maathe par tha. Ye sunte hi usne wo paseena poch liya. Baaki sab bas apne gale me atka hua thook hi gutak ke reh gaye.

Manorath : Baaki ki bachi hui 20% jaydaat me se... Mein 10% apni poti Arohi aur baaki ki 10% apni sabse choti poti Kavya ke naam karta hu.

Shweta : H-Huh!? Y-Ye?

Vivek : !???

Manorath : Yahi hai mera poora faisla.

Shweta jiske chehra ka rang hi udd chuka tha faisla sunn ke wo forun hi apni jagah se uth khadi hui.

Shweta : P-Papa jii!? Ye... Ye aap kya keh rahe hai?

Manorath : Sahi keh raha hu.

Shweta : H-Huh? P-Par meri beti Bhumika. Wo... Wo bhi toh aapki poti hai na? Aur wo bhi sabse badi poti... T-Toh uska naam kaha hai? Aapne usse kuch kyu nahi diya?

Manorath : Kuch samay pehle, mene inn sabhi ko apne kamre me bulaaya tha. Tab mein inse ye nahi puchna chaah raha tha ki jaydaat kisse dii jaaye. Mein inn sabhi ka vyaktitv parakh raha tha. Jiski pareeskha me Vivek aur Bhumika dono hi fail ho gaye.

Bhumika ka ye baat sunn apne aap sarr jhuk gaya. Wo naraaz nahi thi. Na hi gussa thi. Usse jese waqai koi gham nahi tha. Kaafi calm thi woh.

Par yahi baat uski Maa Shweta ke liye nahi kahi jaa sakti thi. Shweta ka toh bechaini ke chalte poora shareer thitur raha tha.

Shweta : Ye... Ye aap!?? Aisa kese kar sakte hai? A-Arohi aur K-Kavya ko toh dii na aapne? Fir bechaari meri Bhumika hi kyi reh gayi?

Manorath : Mein bataata hu ki kyu Bhumika aur Vivek ko ratti bhar bhi jaydaat nahi mil paayi. Kyuki jab Vivek se mene pucha tha ki jaydaat kitne hisso me kisse baati jaaye. Toh Vivek ne sabhi ka naam liya tha. Siwae Veer ke. Jis bhai ko apne sabse chote bhai ki fiqr tak na ho usse bhala mein ye jaydaat kese de sakta hu? Yahi kaaran Bhumika ka bhi hai. Bhumika bitiya ne ek baar bhi apne bhai Veer ka zikr nahi kiya tha.

Manorath ki baat sunn, Shweta ka dimaag hi sann reh gaya. Uss din khud ussi ne toh Bhumika ko patti padha ke bheja tha ki Apne Dada jii se directly apna haq maang lena. Aur dekho kya ho gaya aaj. Shweta ko apni galti ka abhaas hote hi itna zyaada pachtaava ho raha tha ki uski mutthi me saree ka bhaag poora nichud ke reh gaya. Yaha tak ki aankho ke kono me halke halke aasu bhi utpann ho chuke the.

Vivek wahi baithe apne mann me khud ko hi kos raha tha. Usse laga tha ki shayad Veer ka naam nahi lete hue Dada jii ne uski baato ko zyaada dhyaan nahi diya hoga. Par wo galat tha. Bas mann me gaali hi nikal rahi thi uske.

Manorath : Wahi dusri orr, Pranjal Arohi, aur Kavya teeno ne hi Veer ko apne dhyaan me rakh uska naam lete hue usse jaydaat dene ko kaha tha. Arohi bitiya toh apna poora hissa Veer ko dena chaahti thi. Toh wahi Kavya ko kuch nahi chaahiye tha. Wo bhi yahi kahi thi ki jaydaat Veer ko de dii jaaye. Aur Pranjal bete ka bhi yahi kehna tha.

Veer ne palat'te hue dono hi Arohi aur Kavya ko dekha toh dono hi behno ne usse ek smile pass kii.

Manorath : Arohi sahi maayno me haqdaar nahi thi. Kyuki jaydaat usse hi sahi phalti hai jo iska upyog sahi se karna jaane aur ek iccha rakhe. Arohi bitiya ke mann me koi iccha nahi thi. Usse koi matlab nahi tha. Yahi kaaran hai ki usse keval 10% hi jaydaat ka hissa mila. Wo isliye, kyuki usse apne bhai Veer ka dhyaan tha. Dhyaan tha ki wo iss ghar se dur tha.

Arohi : ....

Manorath : Wahi Kavya ko ye jaydaat ka 10% isliye diya gaya kyuki wo ghar ki sabse choti poti hai meri. Aur sabse pyaari. Abhi usse utni samajh nahi. Aisa ho sakta hai ki aage jaa ke usse aur samajh aaye toh kahi usse pachtaava na ho. Isliye uske jeb me kuch toh hona chahiye na? Ye 10% ki jaydaat ab wo jese chaahe upyog kare, ye uske upar hai.

Shweta aur Vivek dono hi Manorath ki baat vistaar se sunn'ne ke baad wahi jamm ke reh gaye. Aisa lag raha tha jese kisi ne unke muh me nimbu nichod diya ho. Aisa muh ho gaya tha dono ka.

Aur fir Shweta jese bhadak uthi,

Shweta (chilaate hue) : Ye galat hai. Ye sarasar anyaay hai... Ye galat hai! Aap... Aap aisa nahi kar sakte. Aapne galat nirnay liya hai. Ye meri beti ke saath chhal hai. Sabko aapne kuch na kuch diya par meri beti ke liye ek rupaya bhi nahi chhootha aapke haath se? K-Kya kami reh hai meri beti me?
Kyu kiya aapne aisa!? Haaan?

Shweta ki ladkhadaati hui awaaz sunn, waha baitha Brijesh usse bauhe sikod ke dekhne laga. Toh wahi Bhumika apni Maa ke kandho ko thaam usse rokne ka prayatn karne lagi. Par aaj jese Shweta bilkul bhi nahi baithne waali thi.

Shweta (screams) : AAPNE GALAT KIYA HAI! AAP GALAT HO!!!! AAPNE MERI BETI SE USKA HAQ CHHEENA HAI!!!!!

Uski cheenkhe poore hall me goonj rahi thi. Aur uska chehra poora laal ho chuka tha. Aur aankho se aasu behte hue gaal par bikhar chuke the. Bhumika bhi sehemte hue apni Maa ko rokne ki koshish kar rahi thi.

Baar baar samjhaane par bhi jab Shweta na chup hui toh iss baar Brijesh nahi ruka. Wo utha aur tezz kadmo ke saath Shweta ke sameep aaya.

Brijesh (chillaate hue) : SHWETAAAA!!!

Shweta : !!?

Brijesh : Mene tumhare liye kitna kuch nahi kiya? Arre itni badi hotel tumhare aur Bhumika ke naam par hai. Fir tum Papa jii se aisi baatein kyu kar rahi ho? Aur kya chahiye tumhe? Yaha toh hum sabhi gharwale hai na? Fir ab aur kya chahiye tumhe? Kya tum itne se bhi santusht nahi ho? Sab kuch toh de hi raha hu na mein tumhe!? Fir Papa jii se kyu zabaan lada rahi ho?

Shweta (screams) : KYUKI YE DHONGI HAI!!!! YE BAS MEETHI MEETHI BAATEIN KARTE HAI! INHE MERI BACCHI KI KOI PARVAAH NAHI!!! YE DHONGII HAI....!!!!

Bas, Shweta ka itna chillana hi tha ki tabhi...

*Chataaaaaaaaaaaaaaak*

Ek zordaar thappad ki goonj poore hall me fel gayi.

Shweta : !!!?

Shweta apne gaal ko pakad ek taraf chehra jhukaaye hairat ke maare khade reh gayi. Brijesh ne usse ek zordaar tamaacha jad diya tha.

Aur maano waha jese sannaata saa chha gaya.

Manorath samet sabhi apni jagah se hairat ke maare khade ho gaye.

Bhumika : M-Mom!!!!!

Shweta ne fir Brijesh ko wahi roti hui soorat se dekha. Aaj jese uske andar kuch toot chuka tha.

Brijesh jesa bhi tha. Wo apne pita ki boht izzat karta tha. Haan, kabhi kabhi uski apne pita se kaha suni ho jaati thi. Par kabhi palat ke jawaab nahi deta tha Brijesh. Par aaj...

Aaj uski hi patni uske pita ko sabke saamne dhongi keh ke bula rahi thi? Kya kami reh gayi thi uski aur uski beti ki parvarish me?

Brijesh : Abhi ke abhi andar jao. Bhumika!!!! Leke jao apni Maa ko.

Shweta toh jese sann sii pad gayi thi. Wo Bhumika ke saath kab hall chorr ke baahar nikal gayi usse pata hi nahi chala.

Brijesh : Papa jii! Yadi sab kuch ho gaya ho toh kya...

Manorath : Tumhe haath nahi uthaana tha bahu pe. Aurat pe haath uthaana...

Brijesh : M-Mein jaanta hu. Par uss samay mujhe wo zaroori laga.

Manorath ne toh jese ye pal pehle hi parakh liya tha. Isliye wo shaant ho gaye.

Manorath : Aaj mein apni saari zimmedaariyo se mukt ho chuka hu. Toh isliye, kal mene iski khushi me ek bhavya daavat rakhi hai 5 star hotel me. Kal sabhi ko waha time se raat me maujood hona hai. Aur... Bahu ko mana lena. Mein nahi chaahta wo waha par na mile.

Brijesh : J-Jii!!

Manorath : Ye program mene isliye rakha hai. Kyuki mein chaahta hu ki Veer aur Pranjal dono hi waha apni kaabiliyat dikhaaye. Ab kyuki wo do bade hisso ke maalik hai. Toh waha dherr saare bade bade logo ka aagman hoga. Wo saare mere pehchaan ke hai. Unse acche rishte banaoge toh aage jaldi badhoge. Ab dekhna ye hai ki tum dono me se kaun acche se rishte bana paata hai. Samay aur jagah raat tak tum logo ko message dwaara bata diye jaengi. Parivaarik baithak yahi samaapt hoti hai. Tum sab jaa sakte ho.

Aur fir jo bhi documents ke kaam the, unhe niptane ke baad Veer bhi apne ghar aa gaya.

Yaha Pranjal apne room ki orr jaa raha tha jab Vivek ne usse peeche se thaam ke paltaaya.

Vivek : Chote!!! Ye vaar toh ulta hi pad gaya mere liye. Mujhe nahi laga tha ki...

Pranjal (smiles) : Ab kuch nahi ho sakta bhaiya! Aap ne apne khud ke perr par kulhaadi maar lii.

Vivek : Huh?

Pranjal : Chalta hu.

Vivek : Ek... Ek minute! Tujhe 40% mili hai na... Toh...

Pranjal : Haan toh? Ye 40% mujhe mili hai. Aapko bhi milti. Yadi aapne Veer ka dhyaan rakha hota toh. Ab isme mein kuch nahi kar sakta bhaiya.

Vivek Pranjal ki baat sunte hi itna aag baboola ho gaya ki usne forun hi apne chote bhai ki collor pakad lii. Saala iss chote bhai ke liye itna risk utha raha tha woh? Usse laga tha ki 40 kam se kam Pranjal ko toh mili hi hai. Wo aadhi toh de hi dega. Akhir wo dono partners the. Par...

Dene ki toh baat chorro, Pranjal ne saaf inkaar kar diya kuch bhi dene se. Gussa aana toh swabhaavik tha.

Vivek : Mein tujhe harr kadam par saath leke chala. Aur tune ye kiya? Bhul mat chote! Ki mene hi tujhe iss plan me shaamil kiya tha. Yadi mein na hota toh tujhe ye sab...

Pranjal : Hahahaha~

Pranjal ne hasste hue apni collor se Vivek ke haath hataaye aur muskuraate hue usse dekhte hue bola,

Pranjal : Kamaal karte ho bhaiya! Itni badi company ke maalik ho. Dad ne aap pe na jaane kitna paisa phooka hoga. Uske baad ab jab itne jeevan me mujhe kuch mil raha hai toh wo bhi aapko hi chaahiye? Na bhaiya na! Bilkul nahi! Aapne na keval Bhabhi ko khoya, balki khud ke hi perr me kulhaadi maar aapne ye jaydaat bhi kho dii. Kherr, jaisa jiska naseeb... Chalta hu!

Aur wo Vivek se dur hatt apne kamre ki orr nikal gaya. Idhar Vivek bas apni mutthi ko gusse me kassta hi reh gaya.

"Chote!!!"

Kamre me aate hi Pranjal ki jo muskaan thi wo gaayab ho chuki thi. Wash basin ke paas aate hi usne apne chehre par paani ke chheethe maare aur saamne lagae sheeshe me khud ko dekhne laga.

'What went wrong???'

Manorath ka decision uski predictibility se bilkul alag tha. Usne socha tha ki uske Dada jii 50% usse, 30% Veer aur 10-10% Arohi aur Kavya ko baatenge.

Par wo galat tha.

Veer bhi utne hi pratishat ka maalik tha jitna ki woh khud. Aur issi ke chalte uske mann me dherro sawaal aa rahe the. Uska plan fail ho chuka tha.

'Sab kuch toh sahi kar raha tha mein. Galti kaha reh gayi? Damn it!!! Veer bhi mera equal ka partner hai. Mujhe...

Hmm!!! Mujhe jald se jald Arohi dii aur Kavya se unka hissa kese bhi karke lena hoga. At least tab mein 60% ka maalik toh kehla paunga. Baaki ki jaydaat Veer se kese hadapni hai. Uske baare me baad me sochunga. Kal major gathering rakhi hai Dada jii ne. Bade bade log aaenge. Mein kisi bhi haalat me Veer ko unse milne ke chances nahi de sakta. Mujhe uske saare chances intercept karne honge. Kal! Kal mein uski saari izzat ka aisa faaluda banaunga ki paraaye toh kya uske apno ke beech uski izzat mitti me milke reh jaegi!'

Wo khud se itna soch chala gaya kapde badalne.

***

Agli raat aaj Banquet ka din tha. Bhavya daavat rakhi gayi thi Manorath dwaara 5 star hotel me.

Ek se ek log aaye the. Bhale hi Veer ki family Kaera ya Sonia jitne level ki nahi thi. Par kaafi log unke hi standard ke aaye hue the. Wo isliye kyuki Manorath ne apni guzarti life me inse contact banaaye the.

Manorath ko chorr ke uske ghar se sabhi hotel me aa chuke the. Wese toh ye program Shweta ke hotel me hi rakha jaa sakta tha. Par...

Kal ki ghatna ke chalte aur saath hi saath ye sochke chalte ki Shweta fir hotel ke kaamo me busy ho jaegi. Isliye, fir ye banquet ek 5 star hotel me aayojit kiya gaya.

Mehngi se mehngi cars ki parking hoti jaa rahi thi. Aur aadmi aurat mehnge mehnge kapde pehne hue andar jaa rahe the. Manorath ne iss baar koi kami nahi dikhaayi thi. Laakho rupaye kharch kiye the unhone aaj ki iss daavat me.

Brijesh aur Karunesh andar hi saath me suit pehne khade hue aapas me baatein kar rahe the.

Karunesh : Lo bolo! Papa jii hume samjhaate the ki party mat karo, party mat karo. Aur ab khud ko dekho. Aisi party pheki unhone ki kya hi kahe ab...

Brijesh : Wo Papa jii hai. Kuch bhi kar sakte hai.

Wahi dusri orr, Arohi aur Kavya hasinaayo jesi saji hui Veer ka hi wait kar rahi thi jab ek car parking me aakar ruki. Aur usme se Veer nikla.

Shandaar ek tuxedo pehne aaj wo bhi poori tarah se taiyaar hoke aaya tha.

Kyuki wo jaanta tha, ki iss Banquet me usse kayi saare relationship banaane hai bade logo se.

Aur upar se... Usne apne 200 points ka upyog bhi stats me use kar liya the. Usne 60 points Strength me, 30 points Intelligence me, 30-30 points Agility aur Endurance me aur baaki ke 50 seedhe appearance me daal diye the.

'Pari'

[Hmm?]

'Show me my full status!'

[Okay!]

*Ding*

[Name : Veer

Age : 21
Status : Student

Stats :
Strength - 96/100
Intelligence - 95/100
Agility - 65/100
Endurance - 65/100
Appearance - 75/100


Skills :
1) Sex Protection : ON (Silver Tier Skill)
2) Basic Martial Arts Skill (Bronze Tier Skill) upgraded to Intermediate Martial Arts Skill (Silver Tier Skill)
3) Hawkeye (Diamond Tier Skill)
4) Limbo (Silver Tier Skill)
5) Basic Enemy Tracker (Bronze Tier Skill)

System's Internal Features :
Check-I, Check-II, Path Tracker, Past Illustration, Translator, Quest Hunt, Slot.

Relationships :
1) Suman : Loyal Slave (Favourability : 92)
2) Aabha : Familiar (Favourability : 68)
3) Sonali : Familiar (Favourability : 45)
4) Ragini : Close Friend (Favourability : 70)
5) Nidhi : Close Friend (Favourability : 54)
6) Shreya : Close Friend (Favourability : 65)
7) Juhi : Best Friend (Favourability : 89)
8) Suhana : Close Friend (Favourability : 62)
9) Sonia : Good Friend (Favourability : 64)
10) Kavya : Very Close Friend (Favourability : 85)
11) Arohi : Good Friend (Favourability : 66)
12) Bhumika : Familiar (Favourability : 30)
13) Shweta : Familiar (Favourability : 5)
14) Kaera : Best Friend (Favourability : 72)

System Level : Level 5
(120 EXP more to reach Level 6)]

Aur stats me appearance 75 dekhte hi Veer ke andar kaafi confidence tha aaj. Kyuki usse pata tha ki andar jaate hi kya hone waala tha.

'Let's go!'

[Yeah!!!]
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Update - 68 ~ Planning Ahead!
Ab tak...

Sonia ke honth uske gaalo par the.

Suhana : Sonuuuuuu!???????

Kaera : ??????

Aur tabhi...

*Ding*

[Mission : Take Sonia on a date.

Rewards : ??? Points.
Time Limit : 2 weeks.]

'Huh? W-Waitttt!!!!'

[Rest in peace!]

'Shutttttt uppppp Pariiiiiii~'


Ab aage...

Kuch din guzar chuke the aur Veer waapas se apne ghar yaani ki Ragini ke ghar laut chuka tha. Sonia ko date pe le jaane ke liye abhi ek hafte baaki the uske paas. Uss mission ko side rakhte hue Veer kuch soch raha tha. Jab wo Doctor Mrinal ke ghar me maujood tha, toh kayi saare log uss se milne aaye the.

Arohi se jab uski mulaqaat hui thi toh shuruaat me toh Arohi ke saath uski normal baatein hi hui. Par baad me agle din Arohi ne kuch aur baatein bataayi thi Veer ko. Jese ki...

Arohi : Wo... Meri mummy, Papa aur Tau jii bhi aaye the yaha.

Ye sunn ke Veer thoda chakit tha. Uski chachi chacha ka aana fir bhi swabhaavik laga usse par uske pita, Brijesh? Wo bhala kab se uski chinta karne lage? Kyu aaye the wo yaha par bhala?

Veer : Chachi Chacha? Aur... Dad?

[Don't call him a Dad! He's a STUPID and SELFISH person! Hmph~]

Pari uske mann me gurraate hue boli. Shayad Brijesh ko koi bhi pasand nahi karta tha. System me maujood Pari bhi nahi.

Arohi : Hmm~

Veer : Kyu?

Arohi : Wo aaye the. Aur puche ki kitna kya kharcha aaya hai medical fee me. Fir tumhe ek baar dekh nikal gaye. Mom bhi aayi thi Dad ke saath. Tum hosh me nahi the par tab.

Veer : I see!

Iss baat ko jaan'ne ke baad Veer khud thodi soch me pad chuka tha. Akhir uske pita Brijesh usse dekhne kyu aaye the?

'Kahi Dada jii ke kehne par toh nahi!??'

Keval itna hi nahi, Veer ki baat Suhana se bhi hui thi. Aur Suhana ne bhi usse ek bada jhatka diya tha ye baatein kehte hue...

Suhana : I'm sorry!

Veer : Huuuuhhhh???

Suhana : Mene kaha I'm sorry!

Veer : Ni... Wo suna mene. B-But kisliye? Ye sorry?

Suhana (sighs) : Dekho! Tumne mujhse help maangi thi. Par mein apni friend ko ye batana bhul gayi thi ki tum Slogan se bhidne jaa rahe ho. Aur usne apne best aadmi nahi bheje the. Also, police was also involved. Mene police ko rokne ke saare prabandh kiye the but tumhari bhabhi. She went to the police. So, Police involved ho gayi. Ab unhe shaant karne ke liye thoda samay lagega. But wo iss matter se jald hi dur ho jaenge. So isliye, Sorry!

Suhana ke muh se sorry sunn'na apne aap me ek badi baat thi. Wo aurat jispe itna guroor sawaar rehta tha, yadi wo sorry kahe toh kuch toh baat thi.

Veer ne bhi Suhana ko asaani se maaf kar diya. Dekha jaaye toh isme Suhana ki koi galti nahi thi. Veer apni taraf se ladd raha tha aur yaha usse khud prepare hona chaahiye tha. Wo dusro ki madad ke liye nahi baith sakta tha.

Saath hi inke alaawa uski baat Karan se hui thi. Jo agle din Veer se milne aaya tha. Dono ki mulaqaat shuruaat me toh thoda ajeeb tareeke se aage badhi par ant bada hi niraala tha. Wo isliye kyuki...

Karan : Toh ab kesa mehsoos kar rahe ho?

Veer : Kaafi behtar!

Karan : Hmm! Wo...

Veer : ???

Karan : Thank you! Tumne Dii ko ek baar fir... I mean... Unki help kii bina apni parvaah karte hue. Toh uske liye... Thank you!

Veer : I already promised!

Karan : Yeah! Toh... Ahem... Ab hum friends!?

Usne ek baar fir dosti ka haath aage badhaaya. Veer jo kuch derr maun tha usne ant me finally apna haath aage badhaaya aur Karan ka haath thaam liya.

Veer (smiles) : Friends!!!

Karan (sighs) : Phew! Mujhe laga tha kahu tum firse ye na keh do, 'Mein dost nahi banata!' hahahaha~

***

Veer theek hone ke baad jab ghar me aaya kuch din baad toh wo apne kamre ko band kar, apni aankhein band kar kisi gehre chintan me tha.

Uske pita ka yu aspataal aana, Pranjal ki planning, Nidhi ma'am aur unke pati ka matter, Ragini Bhabhi aur uske bade bhai Vivek ke beech ka sambandh, Dada jii ki property waali baat, Slogan aur uske saathi, Kaera aur uska rishta, uski bichdi Maa Bhavana, Suhana ko vaade me diye gaye favours, uska food truck ka business...

Inn sab ke baare me Veer badi hi gehraayi se soch raha tha. Aur usse ek baat samajh aa chuki thi.

Ki usse pehle se plan karke chalna padega. He will have to become agressive.

'This time... I'll plan ahead! SLOGAN!!! Iss baar tum mujhe nahi pakdoge. Instead, I'll come for you!'

Aur usne fir agle hi pal zorr se Pari ko mann me awaaz lagayi,

'PARIIIII!!!!'

[W-What!??]

'Kitne points available hai?'

[500 points for now!]

'Good! Shop me se... Mujhe kuch aisa dhund ke do. Jis se mein kisi ko apne under control kar saku. Par dhyaan rahe ki wo virodh na kare.'

[Ohhhh~ You mean tumhe kuch aisa chaahiye jis se koi tumhe restrict na kare aur tumhari baat bhi maane.]

'Yes! Kuch aisa hi...'

[Okay then there you go...]

Aur Pari ne ek skill dhund ke nikaali Veer ke liye shop me se.

*Ding*

[Skill : Limbo
Bio : User can break any limb of any person in an odd fashion. Limb once broken by the user won't be able to get repaired by any means. Only the user himself can repair the broken limb.]

Skill ka description padhte hi Veer ke hontho par ek kaatil sii muskaan thi.

'Yahi toh chaahiye tha~'

'Pariii!!!!'

[H-Huh!?? Now whattt?]

'Buy this one!'

[Iski cost 300 points hai. A-Are you sure?]

'Yes!!!!'

[Okay toh ye lo~]

*Ding*

[Limbo is now available.]

'Good! Now search for something which can track enemies.'

[Enemies tracker!?]

'Hmm~'

Aur Veer ki baat sunn Pari ne firse kuch dhund ke diya.

[Ye lo! This one is basic. Dhyaan rahe ki tumhaare paas keval ab 200 points hi bache hai. Toh mene isliye yahi dhund ke dii. Because iss se sasti aur koi enemies ko track karne waali skill nahi hai.]

'Show me the details!'

[Alright!]

*Ding*

[Skill : Basic Enemy Tracker.

Bio : User can track the basic enemies. The skill won't work for the Boss Enemy.]

Skill simple thi. Ye Veer ki enemies ko track karne ke liye thi. Par iska ek hi downfall tha. Wo ye ki iss skill se aap keval apne boss enemy ke chuzo ko hi track kar paoge. Yaani ki Veer Slogan ke under kaam kar rahe logo ko toh track kar paega. Par Slogan ko nahi.

Par filhaal Veer ko jese yahi chaahiye tha.

Wo muskuraate hue apne kapde badal jaise hi baahar aaya toh room ke baahar hi usse Suman nazar aa gayi jo shayad uske hi room me aa rahi thi.

Veer : Hmm?

Suman : Maalik!?

Veer ne agle hi pal usse kheencha aur apne honth Suman ke honth se bhida diye.

Suman : Mmmphhh!??

Usne ek hi jhatke me Suman ke blouse se uski ek bhaari bharkam chuchhi nikaali aur usse zorr se mees diya.

"Aaaaahhhhhmmmm~"

Tabhi Suman ke kamre ka darwaaza khula aur Aabha baahar nikli. Aur jese hi usne Veer aur apni saasu maa ko dekha wo wahi jamm ke reh gayi.

Veer ne jese hi apni aankh ke kone se Aabha ko dekha toh usse forun hi ungli se ishaare karte hue apni orr bulaaya.

Aabha aankhein faade, lambi saasein lete hue dheere dheere aayi. Veer ke honth abhi bhi Suman ke hontho ko hi choos rahe the.

Aur Aabha jab ekdum nazdeek aa gayi toh Veer ne Suman ko chorr Aabha ko apni baaho me kheencha aur uske komal gulaabi honth apne muh ke giraft me le liye.

"Mmmmm~"

Kuch derr ki honth chusaayi aur doodh dabaane ke baad Veer ne bas itna hi kaha unn dono se,

"Mein kaam se kahi jaa raha hu. Raat ko tum dono... Taiyaar rehna!"

Aur bas, itna bol wo baahar nikal gaya.

Dono hi Maa aur bahu lambi lambi saasein letwe hue Veer ko jaate hue dekhti rahi. Unhe jese raat ka besabri se intezar tha.

*Vrroooooooommmmm*

Veer gaadi ko repte hue bas bhaage jaa raha tha.

Uski destination saaf thi.

Basic Enemy Tracker ke chalte usse Slogan ke ek aadmi ka pata lag chuka tha jo uske sabse nazdeek tha.

Aur uske mann me hi ek map khula hua tha jo enemy ki position dikha raha tha laal bindu bann ke. Jese maano uske mann me hi alag se kisi ne GPS fit kar diya ho.

***

xxxxxxx Club...
Aka Aatish' Hideout 3...

Kisi club me iss waqt mehfil sii jami hui thi. Aur ye Aatish ka teesra hideout tha jo aksar kam hi use hua karta tha. Kyuki yaha deals aur planning kam, ladkiyo ke saath rangreliya aur mauj masti zyaada kari jaati thi.

Iss waqt bhi yahi ho raha tha. Ek luxury bade se sofe par viraajmaan ek badi taund waala aadmi baith hua tha.

Uske agal bagal do prostitute ladkiya baithi hui thi jo uske gale me muh ghusaaye usse chaat rahi thi.

"Hahahaha~ aise hi meri pyaari sundariyo... Hahaha~"

Ashleel gaane baj rahe the aur daaru ke nashe me sab tull hoke mauj masti kar rahe the.

*Gudgudgud*

Tabhi achanak uss aadmi ke pait me gudgud hui. Ab daaru pee thi toh peshaab toh aani hi thi.

"Mauj masti jaari rakho re. Mein bathroom se aaya hahahaha~"

Wo petu aadmi utha aur baahar nikal club ke hi washroom me gaya.

*Suuuuuu*

Wo chenn se moot hi raha tha. Aur abhi apni zip band hi kiya tha jab uske kandhe par ek haath peeche se aakar kisi ne rakha.

'Huh?'

Wo palta aur tabhi usse apne kaano me ek awaaz sunaayi dii.

"I'll be damaging this...!"

Aur agle hi pal...

*CRAAACKKKK!!!!*

"AAAAhhhmmmmmmm~!!??"

Usse kuch samajh aata uske pehle hi uski cheenkh ko rokne ke liye kisi ne uske muh me rumaal ghused diya tha.

Uske saamne khada wo vyakti koi aur nahi Veer hi tha.

Uske peeche se aate hi Veer ne usse paltaaya aur uska haath pakad marod diya.

LIMBO!!!

Abhi abhi Veer ke dwaara khareedi gayi skill.

Iss skill ki yahi khaasiyat thi. Limbo ek aisi skill thi jo limb break karti thi. Aur acche se kaha jaaye toh...

Veer ne jo abhi kiya tha. Uss se uss aadmi ki haddi toh tooti hi haath ki par saath hi saath usne aisi position me modte hue kiya ye ki ab uss aadmi ka haath koi nahi repair kar sakta tha. Mahaan se mahaan doctor bhi nahi.

Siwae Veer ke.

Aur yahi Limbo ki khaasiyat thi. Kisi ka koi bhi ang aisa mod do ki wo kabhi repair hi na ho paaye.

Veer ne bhi abhi iss aadmi ke haath ko yahi kiya.

Iss aadmi ki location Veer ko pehle hi mil gayi thi Enemy Tracker se. Veer bas yahi soch raha tha ki iss aadmi ko baahar kese laaya jaaye.

Par iss aadmi ne toh jese khud hi Veer ka kaam asaan kar diya tha. Wo khud hi baahar chala aaya.

Mauka dekhte hi Veer ne seedha Limbo use kiya aur uska haath marod diya.

Haath itna buri tarah muda hua tha ki wo aadmi dard se karaah raha tha aur uski aankho se aasu beh rahe the. Wo cheenkh paata ki uske pehle hi Veer ne uske muh me rumaal thoos diya tha.

Dard se tadapte hue usne muh se wo rumaal nikaalni ki koshish kii toh...

*Thud*

"Uuuuuuuuu~"

Veer ne apni laat uthaate hue seedha uske muh pe maari aur uske muh pe hi rakh dii. Jis kaaran uss aadmi ka sarr bathroom ki side ki deewar se jaa bhida.

"Ek shabd nahi!!! Samjha na!???"

Veer ne usse gusse me dekhte hue kaha.

'Check!!!'

[Name : Balhaar.

Age : 36
Bio : Just a normal goon of Aatish. Now he serves for Slogan. No family, no background. Cash, Beer and girls are his favourite things.

Favourability : -5
Relationship : Enemies.]

Aur uske baare me padhte hi Veer ko aur bhi gussa aane laga.

Usse pakad ke Veer ne uthaaya aur usse dekhte hue kaha,

"Kyu bey Balhaar? Mauj ho rahi hai haan? Kya hua chaunk gaya? Yahi ki mujhe tera naam kese pata? Mein tere baare me sab jaanta hu samjha? Slogan abhi underground ho gaya hoga. Hai na? Khabar toh mili hi hogi tujhe?"

Veer ka itna kehna hi tha ki Balhaar ke chehre se rang udd chuka tha.

Veer ko uska naam kese pata tha bhala? Upar se Slogan ke baare me Veer kese jaanta tha? Wo sochna toh chaahta tha par jese apne haath ka dard usse kuch sochne nahi de raha tha.

"Uuuuuu~ Uuuuu~"

"Chupp! Ekdum Chup! Koi awaaz nahi samjha? Tujhe pata hai Slogan kyu underground hua? Mere kaaran!"

Kehte hue Veer muskuraaya toh Balhaar ki gaand hi phatt gayi. Aur kyu na phatati? Slogan jesa crime boss iss ladke ke kaaran underground ho chuka tha.

"Tumne sahi andesha lagaaya. Mein wahi hu. Wahi ladka jiske liye aksar wo Steve tum jaise chuzo ko order deta hai. Veer!!!!!"

Aur ek baar fir, Balhaar ki aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi.

"Bol? Kya karu tere saath? Yahi uda du ya...!?"

Veer ne dhamkaate hue uske muh se jese hi kapda hataaya toh wo Veer ke perr par gir pada.

"M-Mujhe jaane do... M-Mujhe mat maaro... M-Mein kuch bhi karunga... Mein tumhaare haath jodta hu. Uhu uhu uhu...."

Ek baar fir Veer ne uski collor pakad usse uthaaya aur deewar me bhed diya.

Veer : Meri ek hi shart hai.

Balhaar : K-Kesi shart!?

Veer (smiles) : Tujhe sirf mujhe Slogan ke harr movement ke baare me khabar deni hai.

Balhaar : Huh!?? B-Bas???

Veer (smiles) : Hmm~ Bas!!!

Balhaar : Mein karne taiyaar hu. M-Mein tumhe harr information dunga. M-Mujhe chorr do.

Balhaar ne keh toh diya tha. Par uske mann me yahi chal raha tha ki ...

Ek baar bas tu mujhe chorr madarchod. Fir mein poori gang leke aaunga aur teri dhajjiya uda dunga.

Par Veer kaun tha? Veer ke paas system tha. Aur wo khud bhi hoshiyaar tha. Wo jaanta tha iss gaandu ke mann me kya chal raha tha.

Veer dheere se muskuraate hue uske kaan ke nazdeek aaya aur bade hi haule se bola.

"Mein jaanta hu tu kya soch raha hai. Yahi na? Ki mein jese hi tujhe chorrunga tu agle din mujhe maarna aaega? Hahahahahaha~ So naive!!!!"

Veer ke hassi sunn ek baar fir Balhaar darr gaya.

"Sunn gaandu! Tera jo ye haath hai na. Tu duniya ke kisi bhi doctor ke paas hi kyu na chala jaaye. Chaahe usse kitne bhi paise kyu na de de. Tera ye haath duniya me koi repair nahi kar sakta. Siwae mere..."

Aur ek baar fir, Balhaar ko ek bada jhatka laga. Kya bol raha tha ye ladka?

"Yadi visvaash na ho toh try kar lena. Aur yadi tune galti se bhi kisi ko mere baare me khabar dii. Toh samajh lena tu gaya. Akhir kabhi na kabhi toh tu akela rahega hi na? Wo pal tera akhiri pal hoega."

Balhaar : H-Huhhhh!??

Veer : Kyuki tune dekha na? Mene tujhe yu dhund liya. Tu kahi bhi kyu na chhup jaaye. Mein tujhe dhund lunga. Behtar yahi hoga, ki meri baat maan, mera kaam kar aur kaam ke baad... Mein tera ye haath fix kar dunga.

Veer ne politely kehte hue smile pass kii. Jo smile toh kahi se bhi nahi lag rahi thi. Aisa lag raha tha ki koi devil muskura raha ho.

Balhaar : M-Mujhe bas info dena hai na?

Veer : Haan haan! Bas tujhe satark rehke saari info mujhe dena hai. Mera number ye le...

Kehte hue Veer ne apna number ek kaagaz ke tukde me pehle se likha hua nikaal ke uski breast pocket me ghused diya.

Veer : Chota sa hi kaam hai. Tu mujhe info de... Aur mein teri iss gaddaari ke baare me kisi ko pata lagne nahi dunga. Kaam ke baad mein tera ye haath bhi fix kar dunga. Aur ye bhi ho sakta hai ki... Slogan ke baad... Mein tujhe uski jagah saup du?

Veer ki akhiri baat sunte hi Balhaar ke kaan khade ho gaye.

Balhaar : Th-Thik hai. M-Mein wesa hi karunga. A-Abhi mujhe jaane do.

Veer : Itni jaldi kya hai? Tumhaare aadmiyo ko toh dekh lu.

Veer aur Balhaar fir dono hi jab club me waapas se enter kiye toh waha ka maujood haal dekh Veer bas chup raha.

Ek ladka uske nazdeek aaya sharaab ke nashe me dhutt hoke,

"Hehe~ B-Boss! Ye bacche ko bhi aapne gang me bhar liya? Hic.... Hehehe~"

Veer ne kuch na kaha. Kyuki usse kehne ki koi zaroorat hi nahi padi.

*Chataaaaaaaaakkkkk*

Ek zordaar tamaacha uss ladke ke gaal par pada aur uski poori daaru jese wahi utar gayi.

"Madarchod gaandu... Lavde!!! Ek rehepta dunga na kheech ke jhaatu insaan. Iski maa ka bhosda... Aahahaha~ S-Sir!!! Ye mere aadmi zyaada padhe likhe samajhdaar nahi hai. Inhe maaf kar dijiyega!"

Apne Boss ki baat sunn jese waha maujood aadmiyo ke sarr ke upar ek bam sa phata.

Unke boss iss naujavaan ladke ko sir kehke bula rahe the? Aur upar se apne hi aadmi ko maarne lage wo?

Keval ek hi khayaal aaya unke mann me fir.

'Iss aadmi se panga nahi lene ka. Aur bina Boss ki ijazat ke iss ladke se koi bakchodi nahi karne ka.'

Unhe nahi pata tha ki unka boss iss waqt apna haath peeche chhupaaye andar hi andar dard se tadap raha tha.

Veer (smiles) : Inhe paath padhaao...

Balhaar : J-Jiii! Bilkul!! Jesa aap kahe...

Aur itna bol Veer bas waha se nikal gaya.

[Well! That went smooth!!!]

***

Jab Veer ghar pohucha tabhi uske phone par ek message aaya.

"Kya tum free ho Veer? I want to talk to you! I'll treat you to a meal."

Sonia ki taraf se aaye iss message ko padh, Veer ki maano jese ek tension hi khatam ho gayi thi. Sonia ko date par le jaane ka mission jo mila tha. Lag raha tha ki shayad aaj hi uska ye mission bhi poora ho jaega. Aur finally wo unn points ko baaki skills aur apne stats par jald se jald invest kar payega.

Veer ne "Okay!" likhte hue Sonia ko message bhej diya aur beshaq, agle hi pal usse messsage aaya ki Sonia khud usse pick up karne aaegi. Par Veer ne mana kar diya. Ladki usse pick up karne aaye? Ye Veer ka style nahi tha.

Bhale hi abhi uske paas car nahi thi khud ki. Toh kya? Uske paas bike toh thi. Aur Sonia ne raazi hote hue usko ek hotel ka address aur meeting time message kar diya.

Sonia jo idhar apne ghar me thi wo apne phone se Veer ko message karne ke baad apne wardrobe me se dress choose karne me lag gayi.

Usse nahi pata kyu, par aaj wo kaafi chintit thi.

"Ye waala... Nahi, ye waala... Ughh! What should I wear?"

Sonia ek ke baad ek apni dress ko apne saamne lagaati aur mirror ke saamne khade hoke khud ko dekhti. Aaj uske liye ye boht zaroori nirnay tha.

Aam taur par chaahe wo meetings me jaaye ya kisi company related kaam se toh Sonia bas professional look me khud ko dhaalti thi. Parties me thoda sa exotic look aur casually ride karte time ek decent look apnaati thi woh.

Par aaj, wo thodi bechain thi. Kya pehne? Aur kesi lagegi wo Veer ke saamne? Uske mann me yahi chal raha tha. Veer se uss din ki mulaqaat ke baad se hi, Sonia ka Veer me interest kayi guna badh chuka tha. Aise toh woh kabhi kisi ladke par itna dhyaan nahi deti thi. Par Veer ne jese uska nazariya badal diya tha. Ek kaaran aur tha Veer ke peeche jaane ka.

Kaera!!

Kaera jaisi ladki Veer ke peeche lagi hui thi. Toh iss baar toh jese Sonia ye baazi harr haal me jeetna chaahti thi.

***

At Night...
8:35 PM...

Veer bataayi gayi hotel me pohuch chuka tha. Saala hotel bhi 5 star thi. Aalishaan ekdum.

Andar Veer jese hi daakhil hua, usse Sonia alag hi nazar aa gayi. Kyuki aaj wo itni zyaada khubsoorat jo lag rahi thi.

Ye hotel sheher me boht prachilit thi. Toh waha sabhi high class waale log maujood the. Including the rich and graceful ladies.

High society ki ladies waha sabhi mehngi mehngi jwellery pehne aur mehnge kapde pehne hue baithi hui thi.

Bhale hi wo kitni bhi sundar kyu na ho, unn sabki sundarta jese aaj Sonia ne apne husn se dhaak ke rakh dii thi.

Wo bas chupchap baithi Veer ka intezaar kar rahi thi. Aur uske chup rehne ke bawajood wo waha baithe aadmiyo ko sarr baar baar ghumaane par majboor kar rahi thi.

'She looks so beautiful!'

Apne mann me soch Veer aage badha.

Hotel ka ambiance itna pyaara tha aur halki halki roshni Sonia ke theek upar pad rahi thi jo uski makhmali gori twacha ko aur bhi nikhaar ke darsha rahi thi. Aaj wo shaandar red dress pehne hue thi.

Aankho me behad chamak thi, uski bhari bhari kaali palke baar baar jhapakti, uski bauhe bhi aankho ki harqat ke hisaab se upar neeche hoti. Par...

Par uske dil me abhi bhi wahi bechaini maujood thi.

Veer aaya aur aake seedha Sonia ke saamne waali seat par baith gaya. Aur uske aisa karte hi, waha maujood aadmi jo Sonia par nazre gadaaye the unka jese dil toot gaya. Mann me bas gaali hi nikli Veer ke liye.

Veer ek simple black shirt aur blue jeans me tha. Nike ke shoes aur haath par ek casual sii watch. Uska appearance accha tha par uss hotel me Veer se bhi kayi guna ameer aur kayi guna acche dikhne waale bande baithe hue the.

Aur Veer ko dekh unke mann me yahi chal raha tha ki...

'Ye gaandu me aisi kya khaas baat hai?'
'Ye ladka toh ekdum simple hai!'
'Iss ladke ne bhala aisi khubsoorat lady kaha se pata lii?'

Kuch aisi hi baatein unke dimaag me aa rahi thi.

[Hmph~ Look at those assholes! Getting Jealous...]

Veer ne unn jalan khori logo ki nazro ko ignore kiya aur muskuraate hue Sonia ko dekh bola,
"Kya mein zyaada late tha Miss Sonia? I see you were waiting!'"

Achanak se Veer ko apne saamne dekh Sonia ki bechaini aur bhi badh gayi.

Sonia : Ahh! N-Nahi! Mein bhi abhi aayi bas Veer!

Bhale hi Sonia ne muskuraate hue ye baatein kahi thi. Par Veer acchi tarah se parakhna aur dekhna jaanta tha.

Make-up se harr cheez nahi chhupaayi jaa sakti thi. Ya yu kahe ki zyaada make-up se, kuch cheeze apne aap ujaagar ho jaati thi. Veer dekh paa raha tha ki aaj Sonia ne aankho ke neeche usual se kuch zyaada hi make-up kiya hua tha.

'She was crying!'

[H-Huh? Par kyu?]

Pari ke sawaal ko Veer ne ignore kar diya. Pari aur Veer dono hi ye nahi jaante the ki aaj Sonia yaha aane se pehle royi toh zaroor thi. Par ye khushi ke aasu the.

Uss din jo Veer ne baat kahi thi.

"You and Miss Kaera, are both equal to me!'"

Ye vaakya jaise Sonia ke kaano me mandra raha tha uss din se. Na jaane kabse usse kisi ke muh se ye sunn'ne ka intezar tha. Warna aksar harr koi usse aur Kaera ko compare karta aur fir usse chorr Kaera ki tarafdaari karne lagta. Par Veer ne toh jese ek nayi aas de deti thi Sonia ko.

Ant me Veer ne apne sawaal rakha, "Aap ne suddenly aaj mujhe bulaaya!? Kya kuch kaam tha?"

Sonia : Haaaah!? N-Nahi! Kya mein... Kya mein tumhe dinner ke liye nahi puch sakti?

Veer (smiles) : Kyu nahi puch sakti? Of course you can! Mujhe bas laga ki shayad aapko koi zaroori kaam tha.

Veer ki baat sunn, Sonia ne apni nazre neeche kar lii aur badi hi dheemi awaaz me boli,

Sonia : Actually... Uss din... Uss din jo tumne mujhse kaha tha. Trust me Veer! Aaj tak mujhse wo baatein kisi ne nahi kahi. I'm very thankful to you. Thank you! Thank you very much. Tum jaante nahi ho, but it means a lot to me.

Veer Sonia ko bhawnao ko samajh paa raha tha isliye usne bhi muskurate hue apni baat rakhi.

Veer : Mene wahi kaha jo mere liye sach tha. Aur hamesha sach rahega.

Sonia (blushes) : Ahh!?

Uss din na jaane Sonia me itni himmat kaha se aa gayi thi ki wo Veer ko gaalo par kiss de baithi. Par asal me, Sonia badi hi sharmeeli kism ki ladki thi. Kyuki usne kabhi man ke saath utna interact kiya hi nahi tha. Khaaskar iss jawaani ke samay. Bas Veer hi ek tha.

Sonia (blushes) : Umm...

Veer : Hmm?

Sonia : That...

Veer : !??

Veer ne notice kiya ki Sonia kuch kehna chaah rahi thi par keh nahi paa rahi thi. Shayad sharma rahi thi.

Veer : Kuch baat hai kya Miss Sonia?

Sonia (blushes) : I...

Bechaari Sonia itna sharma rahi thi. Par jese tese usne himmat karke puch hi liya.

Sonia (blushes) : W-What is the relationship between you and Kaera?

Veer : *cough* *cough*

Veer jo iss waqt paani pee raha tha, ye sawaal sunte hi usse phanda lag gaya.

[Ohhhhhh~ Hahahahahaha! Explain karo ab.]

Sonia : Aah! A-Araam se... Be careful!

Sonia ne uske haatho se glass liya aur waapas table par rakh diya.

Par Veer itna hairaan kyu reh gaya tha? Kyuki jese hi Sonia ne ye sawaal pucha tha. Veer ko Kaera ke sang bitaayi pehli raat yaad aa gayi, jis kaaran se usse phanda lag gaya tha.

Veer : Ahem... That...

Sonia : Hnn!?

Veer : Actually! We both just know each other. Wo meri help karti hai kabhi, toh kabhi mein unki.

Sonia : K-Kis...? Kis tarah ki help?

Veer : Like, last time unhone mujhe meri signature dishes ko dhundne me help kii thi. She gave me some business related advises. Aur mene unki madad uss din unhe uss Mirror Gallery me ho rahe hamle se bacha ke kii thi. You know... Mutual exchange!

Sonia (maayus hote hue) : Mutual exchange huh? But... Keval advises ke badle me, khud ki jaan daav par lagaana!? That's quite an exchange.

Sonia maayus thi. Beshaq! Isme koi doubt nahi tha. Uska kehna bas simple tha. Bhala chand advises ke liye Veer ne Kaera ki jaan bachaane ke liye khud ki jaan jokhim me kyu daali? Par jese Sonia ko iska uttar agle hi pal mil gaya.

Veer (smiles) : Yadi Miss Kaera ki jagah aap waha hoti, I would have done the same for you!

*Badump*

Sonia : Aahhhh!???

Sonia ka dil pal bhar ke liye itni zorr se dhadka ki wo aankhein phaade Veer ko dekhne lagi.

Sonia (blushes) : T-T-Th-That...

Bechaari ki zubaan hi ladkhada gayi.

Sonia (khuspusaaate hue) : W-Why for me...!? Why would you?

Veer (smiles) : Didn't I say before? For me... Miss Kaera and Miss Sonia are both equal!

*Badump*

Sonia bechaari iss baar Veer ke hamle ko na seh paayi aur usne sharmaate hue apni nazre neeche kar lii.

Uske baad unn dono ne hi khaana khaaya aur jab bill dene ke baari aayi toh Veer ne bill pay karne ko kaha.

Sonia : No waaay! Mene tumhe bulaaya tha Veer. So, mujhe hi bill pay karna chahiye!

Veer : Bilkul bhi nahi! Aapne pehli baar mujhe bulaaya hai. Iss baar toh bill mein hi pay karunga. Agli baar bhale aap kar dena.

Sonia (blushes) : That... F-Fine!

Aur dono hi hotel se baahar nikal aaye.

Sonia : Umm... So? Kya mein tumhe firse aise dinner par bula sakti hu na?

Veer : Of course! But next time aap nahi, mein aapko leke chalunga.

Sonia (smiles) : R-Really?

Veer (smiles) : Really!

Sonia : Th-Thanks!

Veer nod karte hue jese hi jaane ke liye hua toh...

Sonia (blushes) : Wo...

Sonia ki awaaz sunn wo palta aur tabhi...

Usse do narm aur behad hi garm cheez ka ehsaas apni chaathi par hua.

Sonia uske gale se lag chuki thi. Par jab tak Veer iss ehsaas ko aur acche se mehsoos kar paata wo forun hi sharmaate hue peeche hatt gayi,
"I'll... I'll tell you beforehand mein kab free rahunga. B-Bye! Take care~"

Aur itna bol wo bas tezz kadmo ke saath apni gaadi ki orr bhaag gayi.

Aaj wo behad khush thi.

Veer bas muskuraaya aur apni gaadi utha ke chal diya ghar ki orr...

Aur tabhi,

*Ding*

['Mission : Take Sonia on a date' has been completed.]

[You have been rewarded 600 Points.]

***

Raat me Suman aur Aabha jesa ki baat tay hui thi dono hi uske agal bagal laiti hui thi. Aur dono hi...

Jesa ki aapne sahi samjha. Dono hi ekdum nagn haalat me thi. Veer aaj unn par toot pada tha.

Wo laita hua abhi apne agal bagal se chipke dono Aabha aur Suman ke doodh ko enjoy kar raha tha aur dheere dheere dono ke chutado ko mal raha tha.

Jab achanak hi usse Arohi ka call aaya,

Veer : Arohi dii?

Arohi : Kal! Subah! Sharp 11 baje... Ghar aa jaana Veer. Dada jii! Wo apna decision sunaane waale hai.

Aur thodi derr Arohi se baat kar Veer bistar par uth ke baith gaya. Kal pakke se kuch scene bann'ne wala tha ghar me.

Pari toh sleep mode me thi. Isliye Veer ne khud hi apne mann me shop kholi aur seedha shop me search maara.

Intermediate Martial Art Skill!!!

Neeche price likha hi tha~

400 Points!

Aur Veer ne ek baar me hi purchase ke option pe click kiya aur...

*Ding*

[Intermediate Martial Art Skill is now available.]

Aur ye notification sunte hi Veer muskuraate hue waapas se apni dono sevikaao ke beech lait gaya.

'Pranjal! I'm preparing a surprise for you!!!'
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!
Like thok ke jaane ka. Holi me baith kar likha hai update. Aur comments zaroor rakhne ka. 😁
badhiya shaandar update bhai
sonia n khane per bula ker veer ki date per le jaane wale misson ko asan ker dia
ab dekhte h gher per kia hota h or pranjal ka kia hot h
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