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Koi baat buri na lagi bro.YaR Story Axhi Hy Bx Emotional seen Koxh Zada Hi Hai Last Update Bara Tha But Bore Ho Nay Lag Para Q Ky Aik Hi Seen Chali Ja Rha Tha Bx. Story Ko Thora Speed Mai Rakho. Ye Bx Aik Suggestion hai Baki Apki Story hy apki marzi hy Jaisay Bhi Likhai. Agar Koi Bt Buri Lagi Ho To Uskay Liya Sory
Kabhi kabhi Veer ki kismat boht acchi ho jaati hai toh kabhi kabhi ekdum jhandu.Very emotional update ya Ragini ki bhi kuch aur hi felling ha paka sa.
400 points look many new upgrade will come.
Aur new skills ka acha use agaya vo bhi itni jaldi
Mujy lga shaid bhai Kisi aur site pr b update day rhy.......
Yahi toh gutthi hai janaab.to ye plan tha shologan ka veer ko phsnsne ka lakin most important sholgan ko kese pta k veer ary ga
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Kuch galat chal raha hai kya ju ke mann me?Bhai kya Pari real life me aa sakti hai??? Like - Vision /AI
Ek alg concept hoga imagine![]()
Nhi bhai sex na ho to bhi chalega pari ka character evolve ho rha Isliye ye question pucha. Agar hua to mza hi aa jayegaYahi toh gutthi hai janaab.
Kuch galat chal raha hai kya ju ke mann me?
Pari ko veer se thukwaane ke iraade toh nahi?
Anyways! Wo kya hai, kyu hai aur real life me aa sakti hai ya nahi ye sab kuch ek secret. Aur ye tab hi khulega jab Veer unn baato ko jaan'ne ke laayak hoga.
Kaha the ju itne dino se?Hazar takleefo ke beech jab ek insaan ap ke chehre per muskurahat le aye....us insaan ki jagha koi nahi le sakta us ka mukam he ek alag jagha hota hai jahan na koi pohanch sakta hai na us ki jagha hum kisi ko dena chahte hai....Nidhi se juri ek choti si cheez Veer ke chehre per muskurahat la rahi hai itni takleefo me....iss se pata chalta hai ke Nidhi Veer ke liye kitni eham hai
Bilkul sahi baat. Aur unn dono zindagiyo ko chalaane me zaahir hai ki kathnaaiya toh aaengi hi saamne.Iss tarha ke hadsat aksar insaan ki zahri shaksiyat ko badal dete hai....Insaan sab ke saamne to khud ko mazboot dikhata hai lekin andar se pura toot ker badal chuka hota hai....aur badlawat aisi hoti hai ke Insaan chah ker bhi apni purani zindagi me wapis nahi aa sakti.....Aisa he Veer ke saath ho ga veer ek aisi rah per chal chuka hai jahan use jagha jagha naye dushman mile gye har pal us per aur us ke apno per khatra ho ga ab daikhna ye hai ke veer apni dono Zindagiyo ko kaise ek saath chalae ga
Kabhi kabhi insaan ke ravaiyye ko badalne ke liye ek gehri thokar ki zaroorat padti hai. Wo bhi seedha dil pe. Arohi ko bhi thokar hi lagi thi. Gehri thokar. Aur uss kaaran uska ravaiyya hi badal gaya. Par abhi bhi usme kuch avrodh hai. Apni baatein khul ke na rakhne ka. Shayad wo Veer ko dekhte hi guilt me doob jaati hai aur apni baatein nahi rakh paati.Jaisa main ne kaha hadse insaan ko badal dete hai....Ye wo he Arohi hai jo veer ko daikh ka raasta badal leti ho gi....lekin ek hadse ne use iss mor per la ker khara ker dia jahan apne bhai ke ek chote se kaam se use sakoon mil raha Hai
Satya vachan! Shabd ki dhaar talwaar ki dhaar se bhi tezz hoti hai janaab. Ye toh hum Shweta ki katu zabaan se dekh hi chuke hai.Bohat baar logo ko saza dene ke liye haath uthane ki zaroorat nahi parti chand alfaz he kafi hote hai.....in Chand alfazo ne Arohi ko us ki galti ka Ehsaas karwa dia ho ga....lekin wo kahawat hai na....Ab pachataye kia faida jav chiriya chug gayi khet
Dhanyavaad yaara!Bohat mazboot scene tha ye ek scene insaan ki puri gilani ko zahir ker dia....ye he ek ache writer ki Nishani hoti hai ke use sab cheeze bayan nahi karni parti
Exactly! Par apun koi spoilers nahi dega. Ju khid read karna. Next update is a must read.Veer ke kadam un andheri rahoo ki taraf barh rahe hai jahan se kadam wapis kheenchna na mumkin hai....Ye badla Veer ko thora sakoon to de ga per us ke liye bohat kuch badal bhi de ga
Uske dil par jo chot lagi hai wo boht gehri hai. Aur abhi toh aur bhi baatein ujaagar hoengi jese jese Veer aur uske conversations badhte jaenge.Sab sirf apne nazariye se Ragini ke faisle ko daikh rahe hai.....lekin koi bhi us ki asli halat samajh nahi paa raha....wo andar se kitni bhikri huwi hai iss ka ehsaas use khud ko he hai....Veer kuch had tak samajh sakta hai lekin puri tarha wo bhi nahi samajh saka
It's a big secret!Nhi bhai sex na ho to bhi chalega pari ka character evolve ho rha Isliye ye question pucha. Agar hua to mza hi aa jayega
Already harr update around 4k words ka rehta hai bro. 4 hazaar shabd boht hote hai yaara.Bro update ki size thoda or bdao taaki ye jo 2or3 days ka gep he ye feellup ho jaaye bus itna sa hi jyada or kucch nhi.....
बेसबर बन के बैठा हूँ जानेमन तुम्हारे इंतेज़ार मे ,
बस आज न करना दगा वरना,
कहीं मै मर ना जाऊ डूब करनिम्बू के आचार मे !!
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बहुतही खट्टा है बे ई तो........ Sasura!!!
De diya bhai, de diya.Monday ke din ko bana do yaad gaar
update de do dhamakedaar
Already posted bro. Edit karte waqt kuch minutes upar neeche ho jaate hai. Ye font wagarh adjust karne me. Unka colour badlo fir size and all. Fir ek baar proofread maaro. So... Samay lag jaata hai.हे मित्र !
आपने "Before 11" का अकल्पनीय वादा किया था !
यूँ अपना वादा ना तोड़ना | "Before 11" ही कहानी के अगले अंश को जोड़ना |
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Koshish rahegi bro. Not a promise.Writer Bhai Update ki timing 9-10 ke beech rakhlo aapke update ke chakkar me late-night Sona padta h or late sone ke kaaran ankho ke niche kya bolte h use........are bolte honge English ki maa ka bhosda......are yad aaya Ankho ke neeche kale kale dhappe pad gye h.....
Ab Aap bologe ki subha uth kr pad Lena...
Or Humara jabab ye h ki bo hoti h na SHIGHARPATAN ki bimari bo hi hume h aapke update ko lekar jitni jaldi ho sake to pad lo.hahahahahah
Sayyam Naam ki cheej nhi h humare pas...hihihi