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Fighter

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Jabardast & Gajab update bro

Is minral ka to kya kaha bro y jo kr de ya jo samjhe sb god hi jane isk charche dekhna jald hi world famous hone wale h bechare doctor k takle ka tabla samjh bajane lgi or naam veer ka wah hahaha
Agr iski sadi veer se ho gyi na to bechara puri jindagi samjhne m hi nikal jayegi

Y kya raj kile k bahar or use huaa kuch nhi wah y huyi n baat ab kundlini jagne k bad power ki koye seema hi nhi kyoki mene padh h bro is jagane k bad vo vykti sadharan nhi hota h usk sarir or vo divya power ka malik ho jata h

Ya to y sb is kach ki wajah se h ya fir is tilsam ko todne k liye y room main bindu h ?

Ohh neha k liye kitna bhayak najara h vo usne raj k sath itna kuch dekh liya varna pta nhi kya hota uska .....

Ab kya dekh liya raj ne shayd vo divya ko dekh liya ho ya fir neha wala scene ...?


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very nyc update..mrinal n to pura hospital hi palta diya..dr ke takle pr hi usko tabla bajane ko mila tha..aur bajta h...hahahaha...gajab bhai
mza a gya..medical wala scene bhi super tha..mrinal n story m bahut kam time m apni pahchan bana li h..raj abhi kile me uljha hua h.. is shisha m khuch gadbad jarur h..tilism ko bahut mast dikhaya h..neha ki halat sach me buri lgti h...mast horror scene...waiting next update
 

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Hum chalte huye ek basti tak pahuch gaye.....basti to bas naam ki hi thi.....vaha kayi ghar bane huye the pattharo ke kintu unme rahne wala koi nazar nahi aa raha tha.

Lekin sabse badi acharaj ki baat to ye thi ki ye sabhi ghar ek jaise bane huye the aur sabhi ko dekh kar aisa lag raha tha jaise ki inko kuch din pahle hi banaya gaya ho...dusri sabse badi baat ki kisi bhi ghar me chhat nahi thi matlab ki kewal deeware hi thi...upar se poora khula hua tha.

Maine ek ghar ko andar se ja kar dekhne ka faisla kiya aur hum ek ghar ke andar ghus gaye....lekin jaise hi andar ghuse vaise hi vaha andar ka nazara dekh kar sabhi ki cheekh nikal gayi.

Ab Aage......

Andar kamre me manav ke sir kate nar kankalo ka dher laga hua tha ....jabki dusre room me unke kate huye sir latak rahe the charo taraf deewar me.

Sabse adhik bhayavah baat ye thi ki sabhi nar kankalo ki haddiyo se taaza khoon tapak raha tha…jabki unn nar kankal me maans ka ek tukda tak nahi bacha tha phir bhi khoon tapak raha tha.

Vahi unn khopdi ke muh khulte aur band ho rahe the…..ye drishya dekhte hi sab buri tarah se darr gayi aur sabki cheekh nikal gayi….badbu itni jyada thi ki vaha pal bhar rukna bhi mushkil tha.

Sab cheekhte huye kamre se turant bahar bhag kar nikal aaye….iske baad aur kisi ghar me ghus kar dekhne ki ichcha hi nahi huyi..sabne pahle se hi hath khade kar diye the.

Neha—baap re…pata nahi aur kya kya dekhne ko baki rah gaya hai….? Abhi tak mera sharir darr se kaamp raha hai kya tha ye….?

Divya—ye to trailor tha chachi…..asli picture abhi shuru hi kaha huyi hai…..vo to qile me jane ke baad hi start hogi.

Payal—chup kar….ye raj kya kam tha jo ab tu bhi darane lagi.

Divya—meri pyari didi…..main to kewal vahi bata rahi hu jo aage hone wala hai…..khair mujhe kya….mat mano meri bala se.

Paridhi—vaise raj kya tha ye….?

Raj—ye sab tilismi jaal hain.....ye to yaha pag pag par kuch na kuch ajib dekhne ko milta hi rahega.

Divya—mera khyal hai ki hame kaise bhi kar ke andhera hone se pahle pahle qile ke andar chale jana chahiye... raat hone par khatra jyada ho sakta hai vaha tak pahuchne me..aur shayad hum yaha ki bhool bhulaiya me hi bhatakte rah jaye.

Raj—hmmmm....shayad tum theek kah rahi ho......hamara sabse pahla maqsad yaha ki har ajibo garib dikhne wali baat ko nazar andaz karte huye kisi tarah qile tak pahuchna hai....kyon ki yaha hone wali inn sabhi ghatnao ka talluk kahi na kahi qile se hi juda hua hai.

Payal—haa to chalo na...maine kab mana kiya hai.....ye ghar me ghus kar dekhne ka idea bhi tumhara hi tha samjhe.. idiot.

Hum basti ko paar karte huye aage nikal aaye…..achanak phir se vahi jungle wali ghatna piche piche chalne lagi… hum aage badhte ja rahe the aur piche ghana andhera phailta ja raha tha….maine iss khatre ko bhamp liya.

Raj—thoda tez tez chalo.

Divya—ab mujhse nahi chala jayega....ab yaha se mujhe god me utha ke chalo.

Raj—theek hai.... aa ja meri jaan.

Payal—mere badan me kaante dikhte hain kya tujhe jo tere gad jayenge.... ? mujhe bhi chadhna hai teri god me

Neha—raj tu apni power ka use kyo nahi karta…? Hum jaldi pahuch sakte hain qile me usse.

Raj—chachi darling….ye tilism hai….kisi bhi tilism ko shaktiyo se nahi balki uske har step ko paar karte huye hi aage jaya ja sakta hai…..yaha se qile tak ka rasta to hame paar karna hi padega.

Maine sab ke charo taraf ek majboot suraksha kawach bana diya jisse koi bhi adrishya shakti asani se kisi ko nuksan na pahucha sake.

Paridhi—lekin raj hame jana kidhar hai….? Vo qila hai kis disha me.... ? aise to hum yahi gol gol ghumte rah jayenge.

Divya—bilkul correct sawal kiya hai aap ne...ab lagta hai ki aap meri didi ho.

Payal—ye chup kar…ek to khud upar raj ke chadhi baithi hai aur hame gyan de rahi hai…chal utar niche…ab meri bari hai.

Divya—aap badi ho…main choti hu.

Saloni—paridhi ki baat to sahi hai raj…..akhir hame sahi disha ka to pata hona hi chahiye.

Raj—mujhe lagta hai ki qila yahi aas paas hi kahi hona chahiye…..shayad uss pahadi ke piche.

Payal—kyaaa shayad…..?

Neha—main to ab thak chuki hu…mujhse nahi chala jayega.

Paridhi (darte huye)—rajjjj….piche dekho.

Raj—sab samne dekho.....piche dekhne ki jarurat nahi hai kisi ko...

Paridhi—lekin ye kaise ho sakta hai ki yaha ujala hai aur hamare piche itna andhera..... ?

Raj—yaha kabhi bhi kuch bhi ho sakta hai....bahut rahsyamayi nagar lag raha hai ye.

Chalte huye hum ek shmashan ke paas pahuch gaye.....sab kuch shant tha vaha.....charo taraf sannata aur niravta ka vatavaran chhaya hua tha.

Neha—raj, tumhare paas itni shaktiya hain...ekadh hame bhi de do to tumhara kaam kuch aasaan ho jayega.....hum bhi kuch khatro ka samna kar payenge aur tumhe apni manzil talash karne me madad mil jayegi.

Raj—aap ko kya lagta hai ki ye sab saral aur sahaj hai..... ? kaise samjhau aap ko ki ye sab siddhiya aur sadhnaye sabhi logo ke liye nahi hain....sabhi nahi prapt kar sakte, sabhi nahi kar sakte......

Payal—kyo nahi kar sakte..... ?

Raj—iske liye bahut kasht uthana padta hai…..sansarik sukh, suvidha, anand aur tamam sansarik aakarsano ki sapne me bhi kalpana nahi karni padti….moh maya se bhi door rah kar sansar me, samaz me aur pariwar me jadwat aur shashwat rahna padta hai……tabhi ja kar manvettar shakti prapt hoti hai…….tabhi sab kuch sambhav bhi hota hai…… magar phir bhi manvettar shakti prapt kar lene ke baad vyakti ussi prakar sansar, samaz aur pariwar me apne apko sahaj aur vyavasthit nahi kar pata jaise main hu…….ek vichitra aur asahaj sthiti me ji raha hu main…..meri manas chetna aur meri aatm shakti deh ki seema ko laangh kar ek aise rahasyamay kendra ki oor unnamukh ho gayi hai, jaha shunya ke siway aur kuch bhi nahi hai……ek param shunya, ek virat aur sarv vyapak shunya se bharta ja raha hai mera jeevan aur astitva…….kabristan ki sari khamoshi aur sari niravta bikhar gayi hai mere charo oor……shmashan ki sari udasi aur sara vairagya bhar gaya hai mere jeevan ke kan kan me…ek nirashrit, ekaki aur sambalheen jeevan ji rahi hai meri aatma.

Neha—teri ye baate to mere sar ke upar se nikal gayi

Payal—mere bhi……

Paridhi—kab tak pahuchenge qile tak….? Ye andhera to hamara picha hi nahi chhod raha hai….parchhayi ki tarah piche hi lag gaya hai……ab to chala bhi nahi ja raha hai.

Raj—ruko main kuch vyavastha karta hu.

Maine vaha lage ek bade se ped ko ukhad liya……usme bahut sari moti moti tahniya thi……ki agar uske upar kayi log baith bhi jaye to vo tootengi nahi.

Raj—ab sab iss ped par baith jao…….main isko khich kar le chalta hu.

Sab bina koi sawal jawab kiye turant uss ped ki ek ek daal pakad kar baith gayi……maine ped ke nichle sire ko hath se pakad kar sarpat doud laga di.

Raste me kayi vichitra ghatnaye hoti rahi lekin mere suraksha kawach ke chalte vo hamara koi ahit nahi kar payi…. Inn adbhut drishyo ko apalak niharte huye main lagatar aage badhta gaya tabhi meri nazar ek qile par padi….Antatah hum uss qile tak pahuch hi gaye.

Door se hi dikh gaya vah qila…..choti choti pahadiyo se ghira ye qila kafi rahasyamay lag raha tha…..qile ka kafi hissa khandahar ho chuka tha ….baki hissa jo bacha tha vah bhi khandahar hone hi wala tha.

Qile ke charo taraf ghani jhadiya thi….jinke bhitar jungli kide kirr kirr kar rahe the…..jamin me gire sukhe patto ki khad khadahat ke alawa aur hawa ki sansanahat ke atirikt charo taraf gahan nistabdhata thi.

Dhwast parivesh me ateet ki ek yaadgar ke roop me vo qila dhool dhusrit ho kar bhi apni bhangima se sir ooncha kiye khada tha…..

Sab taraf saany saany ho raha tha……ek vichitra si udasi, ek aboojh si khinnata parivyapt thi uss qile me…..uske charo oor oonchi oonchi ghaas ugi huyi thi…..abhi hum qile ke bahar hi khade ho kar usko nihar rahe the.

Divya—bahut purana qila lag raha hai…iski banawat dekh kar hi lagta hai ki ye apne samay me kitna bhavya aur khubsurat raha hoga.

Payal—ab bahar se hi dekhna hai ki andar bhi chalna hai iske….?

Neha—yaha saanp bichhoo to nahi honge na….?

Sabhi bahar khade khae qile ke charo taraf dekh rahe the aur mann me soch rahe the ki ab kya kiya jaye….? Samne ek bada sa gate laga hua tha jo ki band tha.

Paridhi—bada bhayanak qila dikh raha hai…mujhe to darr lag raha hai….ab yaha se vapis loutne ka matlab hai ki raat ke syah andhakar me yaha ke tilismi aur shapit rakshaso ki bhookh ke samne khud ko samarpit kar dena aur sidhe bina kisi se puche yamlok pahuch jana.

Raj—chalo sab…lekin dhyan se.

Maine uss gate ko dhakka diya lekin vo nahi khula....kahi koi lock laga bhi nahi dikh raha tha....kafi mashakkat karne ke baad bhi vo tas se mas nahi hua.

Neha—ye to khul hi nahi raha hai...ab kya kare.... ?

Payal—kyo na vahi tarika apnaya jaye jo rajgarh ki gufa me tumne kiya tha raj.

Raj—dekhta hu…shayad kaam kar jaye….?

Lekin tabhi achanak vaha raat ho gayi…..har taraf ghanghor andhera vyapt ho gaya……kuch dikhayi hi nahi de raha tha.. maine hath se tatolte huye ek jagah bane khane me vahi locket set kar diya.

Aur uss locket ke uss jagah lagate hi vo gate apne aap jordar awaz karta hua khulta chala gaya…..gate ke khulte hi phir se raat se shaam ho gayi.

Saloni—ohhh..god….ye khul to gaya….

Neha—maine raat ke baad subah hote to kayi baar dekha hai apni life me lekin raat ke baad shaam hote pahli baar dekh rahi hu.

Divya—yaha jo bhi ho jaye sab kam hi hai chachi.

Hum vilamb na karte huye gate ke andar ghus gaye aur ek baar phir se mousam ne palti khayi….aas maan me kale badal ghir aaye…..megh garjana karne lage….hawa ka rukh tez ho gaya.

Sab mujhse chipak kar chal rahi thi shayad darr ki vajah se……har taraf badi badi ghaas ugi huyi thi…..hum unke upar se gujarte huye andar badhte rahe….tabhi

Payal—aaahhhh

Raj—kyaa hua….?

Payal—vvvv..o..vo…niche…..

Maine dekha to ek saanp unke pairo se lipat gaya tha....maine uski puch pakad kar door phenk diya....aur phir se chal pade.

Hum tezi se qile ke bhitar aa gaye....yaha ke vatavaran me ek aboojh si khinnata vyapt thi....qile ke dusri taraf vishal darwaja tha….vaha pahuch kar neha chachi ne usko khat khataya, magar koi nahi aaya darwaja kholne.

Payal—kyo khat khata rahi ho chachi….bhala iss khandahar me koun rahega jo isko kholne ayega.

Tabhi ek baar phir se raat ho gayi aur andhera chha gaya….main darwaje ko kholne ki koshish karne laga….lekin vo khulne ka naam hi nahi le raha tha.

Payal (kaan me)—chachi chalo na, mujhe jor se lagi hai.

Neha (dhire se)—to thoda kinare ja kar kar le na....vaise bhi andhera hai, kuch nahi dikhta.....lekin jyada door mat jana.

Payal didi bathroom karne ke liye qile ki deewar ko tatolte huye dusri taraf nikal gayi....tabhi unki nazar ek khidki me se aati huyi halki halki roshni par chali gayi...jise dekh vo chounk gayi.

Payal (mann me)—ye roshni kaisi hai....aur iss khandahar qile me.... ? ja kar raj ko batati hu…..lekin kyon na pahle main chupke se ja kar dekhu to sahi ki ye roshni hai kaisi…..?

Payal bathroom karna bhul kar hadbadahat ke sath qile ki deewar ko tatolte huye uss khidki ke paas pahuch gayi jisme se chhan kar roshni bahar aa rahi thi.

Khidki kahne se aap jo kalpana karenge vaisi nahi thi vah khidki….ek deewar me ek char foot choude aur chhah (six) foot lambe choukhat me ek samucha shisha fit tha….shisha safed rang ka aur kafi mota tha.

Jis kamre me shishe ki vah khidki fit thi, usme kafi tez roshni ho rahi thi….tabhi payal ko uss roshni me kamre ke bhitar ek vichitra aur ashcharya janak drishya dikhlayi pada….payal ki dhadkan tez ho gayi aur vo vahi jadwat ho gayi.

Khidki ke samne wali deewar ke paas bhagwati parashakti mahakali ki ek vishal aur vikral murti thi….murti ashtabhuji thi aur vo shav par aarudh thi.

Murti ke charno ke paas ek hawan kund tha, jisme se sugandhit dhoom nikal nikal kar kamre ke vatavaran me chha raha tha….hawan kund ke charo taraf palthi maar kar padmasan ki mudra me paanch chhah admi baithe huye the.

Unn sabhi ka roop bhayanak tha…..sharir ka rang kala aur sir mundan kiye huye the….gale me bandar ki khopadiya latak rahi thi….kano me bhi kisi jeev ki haddi ka kundal jhul raha tha.

Unn sabhi ke hoth iss prakar hil rahe the jaise ki vo koi mantra padh rahe ho…..beech beech me vo hawan kund me sharab aur ghee ki aahutiya bhi chhodte ja rahe the.

Hawan kund ke paas hi ek lambe aakaar ka farsa tha aur uss farse ke paas hi char paanch varsh ka ek bachcha leta hua tha….vah nanga tha aur uske poore sharir par sindur pota hua tha….gale me jawa phool ki mala bhi padi thi.

Sahsa uss rahasyamay kamre me ek yuvti na jane kidhar se aa gayi…..yuvti ki aayu 25 varsh se adhik nahi thi…. Rang kala tha, magar dekhne me akarshak thi….uske baal khul kar pith par bikhre huye the….hoth laal the aur ankhe bhi lal ho rahi thi….mastak par sindur ka gol tika aur gale me bandar ki khopdi jhul rahi thi.

Vah sarvang nagn thi….kisi dakini shakini jaisi lag rahi thi…..aisi bhayanak stri ki koi kalpana bhi nahi kar sakta…uske upasthit hote hi hawan kund ke paas baithe huye unn vyaktiyo me se ek vyakti uth kar hath me madira patra liye uske paas pahucha aur usko thama diya.

Kaal ratri si vah bhayankar yuvti ek hi saans me gatgat kar sari madira pine ke baad vahi ek aasan par baith gayi… uss samay uski mudra aur uske chehre ka bhaav bilkul amaanviya lag raha tha.

Muh bichka kar aur hotho ko daba kar kabhi vo sote huye uss bachche ki oor dekhti to kabhi kali ki murti ki oor… yuvti ka chehra kafi bhayanak aur kafi vibhats lag raha tha.

Madira ke nashe se bojhil uski ankhe goolar ke phool ki tarah lal ho rahi thi….lal lal ankho se kabhi kabhi vah kali ki murti ki oor bhi nihar liya karti thi.

Payal (mann me)—omg….ye log kitne bhayanak hain….lekin vo sarthi to kah raha tha ki yaha koi nahi rahta to phir ye log yaha kya kar rahe hain….? Jarur yaha par sab kuch inhi logo ka kiya dhara hoga….? Pakka ye log uss masum bachche ki bali dene wale honge.

Mann me ye khyal panapte hi payal me uss shishe me jor se mukka mara, par badi ajib baat thi ki na to vo shisha toota aur na hi usme koi awaz huyi mukka maarne par….andar moujud vyaktiyo ka dhyan bhi payal ki oor nahi gaya.

Payal ne niche baith kar jamin me tatolne lagi…tabhi uske hath me patthar ka ek bada sa tukda aa gaya….usko utha kar usne apni poori taqat se kayi baar jaldi jaldi shishe ke upar vaar kiye….lekin ashcharya ki baat thi ki itni jor jor se patthar se peetne par bhi vo shisha toota nahi aur na hi koi awaz huyi.

Payal (mann me)—ab kya kiya jaye….ye to toot hi nahi raha hai.

Payal patthar ka tukda hath me liye kisi asahay ki tarah andar dekhti rahi….itne me na jane kidhar se ek lambi choudi kad kathi ka vyakti uss kamre me prakat hua.

Uski shakal bhi bahut bhayanak thi…..sir par uske jata jut tha aur lambi dadhi thi….gale me bachcho ke khopdiyo ki mala pahne huye tha…..mastak par lamba tika lagaye, kamar me lal kapde ka tukda lapete aur hath me trishul liye tha.

Kamre me uss rahasyamay aur bhayanak vyaktitva wale sadhu ke pravistha hote hi vah yuvti apne sthan se uth khadi huyi aur shraddha se jhuk kar uske charno ka sparsh kiya.

Magar sadhu ne uski oor vishesh dhyan nahi diya....vah ek baar maa mahamaya ki pratima ki oor dekh kar koi mantra budbudane laga aur ussi avastha me dhire dhire chal kar hawan kund ke samip rakhe farse ko utha liya…phir ussi prakar chal kar bachche ke paas pahucha.

Issi beech hawan kund ke nikat baitha ek vyakti utha aur bachche ko god me lekar pratima ke samne lita diya….nishchay hi uss balak ko koi dawa dekar behosh kar rakha hoga inn logo ne.

Sadhu apne dahine hath me farsa liye uss bachche ka karib pahucha aur farse ko bachche ke sir se chhula diya…. Bachche ne ankhe kholi aur darte darte visfarit drishti se uss khadagdhari aghori sadhu ki taraf dekha.

Payal (ghabrate huye)—lagta hai ye log uss bachche ko maar denge…nahi…..nahi…mujhe rokna hoga….(chillate huye)—ye rukkk jaoooo……mat marooo uss bachche ko.

Payal jor jor se chillate huye patthar ko uss shishe par jor jor se thokne lagi kintu koi fayda nahi tha….vo shisha nahi toota aur dusri tajjub ki baat ye bhi thi ki payal jor jor se chilla to rahi thi kintu uski awaz kisi ko sunayi nahi de rahi thi…gale ke andar hi andar goonj rahi thi.

Tabhi vah sadhu niche jhuka vaise hi uski nazar payal par chali gayi…..uski ankhe lal lal aur khichi khichi si thi.. naak tirchhi thi aur gaalo ki haddiya ubhari huyi thi.

Vah jab jhuk kar payal ki oor dekhne laga to payal bhi kisi aprasann vyakti ki bhanti uski taraf dekhti rah gayi…usne payal ko sir se pair tak nihara jaise theek se dekh kar usko pahchan lena chahta ho vah.

Achchi tarah se payal ko dekhne ke baad vo sadhu bachche ke samne ja kar khada ho gaya…..phir apne hath ka cham chamata hua farsa taan liya usne.

Dusre hi kshan khachch ki awaz huyi aur ussi ke sath uss bachche ki hriday vidarak cheekh bhi goonj uthi…bachche ka sir dhad se alag ho gaya tha aur kafi door tak ki vaha ki jamin uske khoon se lal ho uthi thi….bachche ka sir aur dhad thodi der tak chhat patata raha aur phir shant ho gaya.

Payal (jor se)—Raaaaaajjjjjjjjjjj……khoon…..khoon….khoon

Payal buri tarah se darr kar jor jor se raj ko chillate huye tezi se vaha se girte padte bhagi….iss baar payal ki awaz sabhi ko sunayi di.

Main tezi se unki taraf gaya aur vo bhagte huye aa kar mere seene se lag kar jor jor se rone lagi..jab unka rona kuch kam hua to maine pucha.

Raj—kya hua didi….? Aap chillayi kyo….?

Payal (ghabrate huye)—vo…vo..kkk…khoon,…uss kamre me khoon

Raj—kaha…chalo jaldi…

Maine tezi se unka hath pakad kar uss kamre ki khidki tak pahucha…..lekin vaha to kuch bhi nahi tha…..siway toote foote kamre ki deewaro ke….maine shisha ko thoda sa dhakka diya to vo niche gir gaya.

Hum uss khidki se kamre me ghus gaye….maine apni mani ki shakti se kamre me roshni phaila di…..kahi kuch bhi nahi dikha jaise ki payal didi ne bataya… har taraf bade bade jaale lage huye the….poore kamre me dhool jama thi…..vo abhi bhi hairan thi aur kaamp bhi rahi thi….lekin mahakali ki pratima vaha avashya thi.

Raj—yaha to kuch bhi nahi hai.

Payal—lekin vo khoon ke nishan aur vo laash kaha gayi….? Abhi to yahi thi aur vo sab admi kaha gaye….?

Raj—didi….lagta hai ki aap bhool gayi ho ki ye Tilismi aur shapit qila hai.

Uske baad hum vapis ussi darwaje ke paas aa gaye….ab ki baar maine ankhe band kar ke apni shaktiyo ko jagrit kiya aur phir jaise hi darwaje par hath rakha vo aise khul gaya jaise ki kabhi band hi nahi tha.

Kamre me ghuste hi kisi ke payal ki awaz vaha goonjne lagi….payal ki chhan chhan karti awaz ne ham sabhi ko hairat me daal diya.

Paridhi—ye payal ki awaz kis ki hai….?

Divya (jor se)—koun hai yaha….?

Lekin koi awaz nahi aayi....hum aage chalne lage kamre me....tabhi phir se kisi ke chhan chhan karti payal ki awaz aane lagi...ab ki baar aisa laga ki koi bilkul mere karib se gujra hai.

Payal ki awaz ab kabhi idhar se to kabhi udhar se goonjne lagi....aisa lag raha tha ki jaise koi athakheliya kar raha ho har baar mujhe aisa mahsoos hota jaise koi mere paas khada hai.

Raj (chillate huye)—koun hai.... ? samne kyo nahi aati.... ?

Aur tabhi vaha ek madhur geet goonj utha jise sunte hi hum chounk gaye.....

“Upar Ambar Niche Dharti, Beech Me hain Dil Ke Afsaane...
Afsaano Me Dard Hai Kitna, Pyar Ke Dushman Ye Kya Jane”

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Hum chalte huye ek basti tak pahuch gaye.....basti to bas naam ki hi thi.....vaha kayi ghar bane huye the pattharo ke kintu unme rahne wala koi nazar nahi aa raha tha.

Lekin sabse badi acharaj ki baat to ye thi ki ye sabhi ghar ek jaise bane huye the aur sabhi ko dekh kar aisa lag raha tha jaise ki inko kuch din pahle hi banaya gaya ho...dusri sabse badi baat ki kisi bhi ghar me chhat nahi thi matlab ki kewal deeware hi thi...upar se poora khula hua tha.

Maine ek ghar ko andar se ja kar dekhne ka faisla kiya aur hum ek ghar ke andar ghus gaye....lekin jaise hi andar ghuse vaise hi vaha andar ka nazara dekh kar sabhi ki cheekh nikal gayi.

Ab Aage......

Andar kamre me manav ke sir kate nar kankalo ka dher laga hua tha ....jabki dusre room me unke kate huye sir latak rahe the charo taraf deewar me.

Sabse adhik bhayavah baat ye thi ki sabhi nar kankalo ki haddiyo se taaza khoon tapak raha tha…jabki unn nar kankal me maans ka ek tukda tak nahi bacha tha phir bhi khoon tapak raha tha.

Vahi unn khopdi ke muh khulte aur band ho rahe the…..ye drishya dekhte hi sab buri tarah se darr gayi aur sabki cheekh nikal gayi….badbu itni jyada thi ki vaha pal bhar rukna bhi mushkil tha.

Sab cheekhte huye kamre se turant bahar bhag kar nikal aaye….iske baad aur kisi ghar me ghus kar dekhne ki ichcha hi nahi huyi..sabne pahle se hi hath khade kar diye the.

Neha—baap re…pata nahi aur kya kya dekhne ko baki rah gaya hai….? Abhi tak mera sharir darr se kaamp raha hai kya tha ye….?

Divya—ye to trailor tha chachi…..asli picture abhi shuru hi kaha huyi hai…..vo to qile me jane ke baad hi start hogi.

Payal—chup kar….ye raj kya kam tha jo ab tu bhi darane lagi.

Divya—meri pyari didi…..main to kewal vahi bata rahi hu jo aage hone wala hai…..khair mujhe kya….mat mano meri bala se.

Paridhi—vaise raj kya tha ye….?

Raj—ye sab tilismi jaal hain.....ye to yaha pag pag par kuch na kuch ajib dekhne ko milta hi rahega.

Divya—mera khyal hai ki hame kaise bhi kar ke andhera hone se pahle pahle qile ke andar chale jana chahiye... raat hone par khatra jyada ho sakta hai vaha tak pahuchne me..aur shayad hum yaha ki bhool bhulaiya me hi bhatakte rah jaye.

Raj—hmmmm....shayad tum theek kah rahi ho......hamara sabse pahla maqsad yaha ki har ajibo garib dikhne wali baat ko nazar andaz karte huye kisi tarah qile tak pahuchna hai....kyon ki yaha hone wali inn sabhi ghatnao ka talluk kahi na kahi qile se hi juda hua hai.

Payal—haa to chalo na...maine kab mana kiya hai.....ye ghar me ghus kar dekhne ka idea bhi tumhara hi tha samjhe.. idiot.

Hum basti ko paar karte huye aage nikal aaye…..achanak phir se vahi jungle wali ghatna piche piche chalne lagi… hum aage badhte ja rahe the aur piche ghana andhera phailta ja raha tha….maine iss khatre ko bhamp liya.

Raj—thoda tez tez chalo.

Divya—ab mujhse nahi chala jayega....ab yaha se mujhe god me utha ke chalo.

Raj—theek hai.... aa ja meri jaan.

Payal—mere badan me kaante dikhte hain kya tujhe jo tere gad jayenge.... ? mujhe bhi chadhna hai teri god me

Neha—raj tu apni power ka use kyo nahi karta…? Hum jaldi pahuch sakte hain qile me usse.

Raj—chachi darling….ye tilism hai….kisi bhi tilism ko shaktiyo se nahi balki uske har step ko paar karte huye hi aage jaya ja sakta hai…..yaha se qile tak ka rasta to hame paar karna hi padega.

Maine sab ke charo taraf ek majboot suraksha kawach bana diya jisse koi bhi adrishya shakti asani se kisi ko nuksan na pahucha sake.

Paridhi—lekin raj hame jana kidhar hai….? Vo qila hai kis disha me.... ? aise to hum yahi gol gol ghumte rah jayenge.

Divya—bilkul correct sawal kiya hai aap ne...ab lagta hai ki aap meri didi ho.

Payal—ye chup kar…ek to khud upar raj ke chadhi baithi hai aur hame gyan de rahi hai…chal utar niche…ab meri bari hai.

Divya—aap badi ho…main choti hu.

Saloni—paridhi ki baat to sahi hai raj…..akhir hame sahi disha ka to pata hona hi chahiye.

Raj—mujhe lagta hai ki qila yahi aas paas hi kahi hona chahiye…..shayad uss pahadi ke piche.

Payal—kyaaa shayad…..?

Neha—main to ab thak chuki hu…mujhse nahi chala jayega.

Paridhi (darte huye)—rajjjj….piche dekho.

Raj—sab samne dekho.....piche dekhne ki jarurat nahi hai kisi ko...

Paridhi—lekin ye kaise ho sakta hai ki yaha ujala hai aur hamare piche itna andhera..... ?

Raj—yaha kabhi bhi kuch bhi ho sakta hai....bahut rahsyamayi nagar lag raha hai ye.

Chalte huye hum ek shmashan ke paas pahuch gaye.....sab kuch shant tha vaha.....charo taraf sannata aur niravta ka vatavaran chhaya hua tha.

Neha—raj, tumhare paas itni shaktiya hain...ekadh hame bhi de do to tumhara kaam kuch aasaan ho jayega.....hum bhi kuch khatro ka samna kar payenge aur tumhe apni manzil talash karne me madad mil jayegi.

Raj—aap ko kya lagta hai ki ye sab saral aur sahaj hai..... ? kaise samjhau aap ko ki ye sab siddhiya aur sadhnaye sabhi logo ke liye nahi hain....sabhi nahi prapt kar sakte, sabhi nahi kar sakte......

Payal—kyo nahi kar sakte..... ?

Raj—iske liye bahut kasht uthana padta hai…..sansarik sukh, suvidha, anand aur tamam sansarik aakarsano ki sapne me bhi kalpana nahi karni padti….moh maya se bhi door rah kar sansar me, samaz me aur pariwar me jadwat aur shashwat rahna padta hai……tabhi ja kar manvettar shakti prapt hoti hai…….tabhi sab kuch sambhav bhi hota hai…… magar phir bhi manvettar shakti prapt kar lene ke baad vyakti ussi prakar sansar, samaz aur pariwar me apne apko sahaj aur vyavasthit nahi kar pata jaise main hu…….ek vichitra aur asahaj sthiti me ji raha hu main…..meri manas chetna aur meri aatm shakti deh ki seema ko laangh kar ek aise rahasyamay kendra ki oor unnamukh ho gayi hai, jaha shunya ke siway aur kuch bhi nahi hai……ek param shunya, ek virat aur sarv vyapak shunya se bharta ja raha hai mera jeevan aur astitva…….kabristan ki sari khamoshi aur sari niravta bikhar gayi hai mere charo oor……shmashan ki sari udasi aur sara vairagya bhar gaya hai mere jeevan ke kan kan me…ek nirashrit, ekaki aur sambalheen jeevan ji rahi hai meri aatma.

Neha—teri ye baate to mere sar ke upar se nikal gayi

Payal—mere bhi……

Paridhi—kab tak pahuchenge qile tak….? Ye andhera to hamara picha hi nahi chhod raha hai….parchhayi ki tarah piche hi lag gaya hai……ab to chala bhi nahi ja raha hai.

Raj—ruko main kuch vyavastha karta hu.

Maine vaha lage ek bade se ped ko ukhad liya……usme bahut sari moti moti tahniya thi……ki agar uske upar kayi log baith bhi jaye to vo tootengi nahi.

Raj—ab sab iss ped par baith jao…….main isko khich kar le chalta hu.

Sab bina koi sawal jawab kiye turant uss ped ki ek ek daal pakad kar baith gayi……maine ped ke nichle sire ko hath se pakad kar sarpat doud laga di.

Raste me kayi vichitra ghatnaye hoti rahi lekin mere suraksha kawach ke chalte vo hamara koi ahit nahi kar payi…. Inn adbhut drishyo ko apalak niharte huye main lagatar aage badhta gaya tabhi meri nazar ek qile par padi….Antatah hum uss qile tak pahuch hi gaye.

Door se hi dikh gaya vah qila…..choti choti pahadiyo se ghira ye qila kafi rahasyamay lag raha tha…..qile ka kafi hissa khandahar ho chuka tha ….baki hissa jo bacha tha vah bhi khandahar hone hi wala tha.

Qile ke charo taraf ghani jhadiya thi….jinke bhitar jungli kide kirr kirr kar rahe the…..jamin me gire sukhe patto ki khad khadahat ke alawa aur hawa ki sansanahat ke atirikt charo taraf gahan nistabdhata thi.

Dhwast parivesh me ateet ki ek yaadgar ke roop me vo qila dhool dhusrit ho kar bhi apni bhangima se sir ooncha kiye khada tha…..

Sab taraf saany saany ho raha tha……ek vichitra si udasi, ek aboojh si khinnata parivyapt thi uss qile me…..uske charo oor oonchi oonchi ghaas ugi huyi thi…..abhi hum qile ke bahar hi khade ho kar usko nihar rahe the.

Divya—bahut purana qila lag raha hai…iski banawat dekh kar hi lagta hai ki ye apne samay me kitna bhavya aur khubsurat raha hoga.

Payal—ab bahar se hi dekhna hai ki andar bhi chalna hai iske….?

Neha—yaha saanp bichhoo to nahi honge na….?

Sabhi bahar khade khae qile ke charo taraf dekh rahe the aur mann me soch rahe the ki ab kya kiya jaye….? Samne ek bada sa gate laga hua tha jo ki band tha.

Paridhi—bada bhayanak qila dikh raha hai…mujhe to darr lag raha hai….ab yaha se vapis loutne ka matlab hai ki raat ke syah andhakar me yaha ke tilismi aur shapit rakshaso ki bhookh ke samne khud ko samarpit kar dena aur sidhe bina kisi se puche yamlok pahuch jana.

Raj—chalo sab…lekin dhyan se.

Maine uss gate ko dhakka diya lekin vo nahi khula....kahi koi lock laga bhi nahi dikh raha tha....kafi mashakkat karne ke baad bhi vo tas se mas nahi hua.

Neha—ye to khul hi nahi raha hai...ab kya kare.... ?

Payal—kyo na vahi tarika apnaya jaye jo rajgarh ki gufa me tumne kiya tha raj.

Raj—dekhta hu…shayad kaam kar jaye….?

Lekin tabhi achanak vaha raat ho gayi…..har taraf ghanghor andhera vyapt ho gaya……kuch dikhayi hi nahi de raha tha.. maine hath se tatolte huye ek jagah bane khane me vahi locket set kar diya.

Aur uss locket ke uss jagah lagate hi vo gate apne aap jordar awaz karta hua khulta chala gaya…..gate ke khulte hi phir se raat se shaam ho gayi.

Saloni—ohhh..god….ye khul to gaya….

Neha—maine raat ke baad subah hote to kayi baar dekha hai apni life me lekin raat ke baad shaam hote pahli baar dekh rahi hu.

Divya—yaha jo bhi ho jaye sab kam hi hai chachi.

Hum vilamb na karte huye gate ke andar ghus gaye aur ek baar phir se mousam ne palti khayi….aas maan me kale badal ghir aaye…..megh garjana karne lage….hawa ka rukh tez ho gaya.

Sab mujhse chipak kar chal rahi thi shayad darr ki vajah se……har taraf badi badi ghaas ugi huyi thi…..hum unke upar se gujarte huye andar badhte rahe….tabhi

Payal—aaahhhh

Raj—kyaa hua….?

Payal—vvvv..o..vo…niche…..

Maine dekha to ek saanp unke pairo se lipat gaya tha....maine uski puch pakad kar door phenk diya....aur phir se chal pade.

Hum tezi se qile ke bhitar aa gaye....yaha ke vatavaran me ek aboojh si khinnata vyapt thi....qile ke dusri taraf vishal darwaja tha….vaha pahuch kar neha chachi ne usko khat khataya, magar koi nahi aaya darwaja kholne.

Payal—kyo khat khata rahi ho chachi….bhala iss khandahar me koun rahega jo isko kholne ayega.

Tabhi ek baar phir se raat ho gayi aur andhera chha gaya….main darwaje ko kholne ki koshish karne laga….lekin vo khulne ka naam hi nahi le raha tha.

Payal (kaan me)—chachi chalo na, mujhe jor se lagi hai.

Neha (dhire se)—to thoda kinare ja kar kar le na....vaise bhi andhera hai, kuch nahi dikhta.....lekin jyada door mat jana.

Payal didi bathroom karne ke liye qile ki deewar ko tatolte huye dusri taraf nikal gayi....tabhi unki nazar ek khidki me se aati huyi halki halki roshni par chali gayi...jise dekh vo chounk gayi.

Payal (mann me)—ye roshni kaisi hai....aur iss khandahar qile me.... ? ja kar raj ko batati hu…..lekin kyon na pahle main chupke se ja kar dekhu to sahi ki ye roshni hai kaisi…..?

Payal bathroom karna bhul kar hadbadahat ke sath qile ki deewar ko tatolte huye uss khidki ke paas pahuch gayi jisme se chhan kar roshni bahar aa rahi thi.

Khidki kahne se aap jo kalpana karenge vaisi nahi thi vah khidki….ek deewar me ek char foot choude aur chhah (six) foot lambe choukhat me ek samucha shisha fit tha….shisha safed rang ka aur kafi mota tha.

Jis kamre me shishe ki vah khidki fit thi, usme kafi tez roshni ho rahi thi….tabhi payal ko uss roshni me kamre ke bhitar ek vichitra aur ashcharya janak drishya dikhlayi pada….payal ki dhadkan tez ho gayi aur vo vahi jadwat ho gayi.

Khidki ke samne wali deewar ke paas bhagwati parashakti mahakali ki ek vishal aur vikral murti thi….murti ashtabhuji thi aur vo shav par aarudh thi.

Murti ke charno ke paas ek hawan kund tha, jisme se sugandhit dhoom nikal nikal kar kamre ke vatavaran me chha raha tha….hawan kund ke charo taraf palthi maar kar padmasan ki mudra me paanch chhah admi baithe huye the.

Unn sabhi ka roop bhayanak tha…..sharir ka rang kala aur sir mundan kiye huye the….gale me bandar ki khopadiya latak rahi thi….kano me bhi kisi jeev ki haddi ka kundal jhul raha tha.

Unn sabhi ke hoth iss prakar hil rahe the jaise ki vo koi mantra padh rahe ho…..beech beech me vo hawan kund me sharab aur ghee ki aahutiya bhi chhodte ja rahe the.

Hawan kund ke paas hi ek lambe aakaar ka farsa tha aur uss farse ke paas hi char paanch varsh ka ek bachcha leta hua tha….vah nanga tha aur uske poore sharir par sindur pota hua tha….gale me jawa phool ki mala bhi padi thi.

Sahsa uss rahasyamay kamre me ek yuvti na jane kidhar se aa gayi…..yuvti ki aayu 25 varsh se adhik nahi thi…. Rang kala tha, magar dekhne me akarshak thi….uske baal khul kar pith par bikhre huye the….hoth laal the aur ankhe bhi lal ho rahi thi….mastak par sindur ka gol tika aur gale me bandar ki khopdi jhul rahi thi.

Vah sarvang nagn thi….kisi dakini shakini jaisi lag rahi thi…..aisi bhayanak stri ki koi kalpana bhi nahi kar sakta…uske upasthit hote hi hawan kund ke paas baithe huye unn vyaktiyo me se ek vyakti uth kar hath me madira patra liye uske paas pahucha aur usko thama diya.

Kaal ratri si vah bhayankar yuvti ek hi saans me gatgat kar sari madira pine ke baad vahi ek aasan par baith gayi… uss samay uski mudra aur uske chehre ka bhaav bilkul amaanviya lag raha tha.

Muh bichka kar aur hotho ko daba kar kabhi vo sote huye uss bachche ki oor dekhti to kabhi kali ki murti ki oor… yuvti ka chehra kafi bhayanak aur kafi vibhats lag raha tha.

Madira ke nashe se bojhil uski ankhe goolar ke phool ki tarah lal ho rahi thi….lal lal ankho se kabhi kabhi vah kali ki murti ki oor bhi nihar liya karti thi.

Payal (mann me)—omg….ye log kitne bhayanak hain….lekin vo sarthi to kah raha tha ki yaha koi nahi rahta to phir ye log yaha kya kar rahe hain….? Jarur yaha par sab kuch inhi logo ka kiya dhara hoga….? Pakka ye log uss masum bachche ki bali dene wale honge.

Mann me ye khyal panapte hi payal me uss shishe me jor se mukka mara, par badi ajib baat thi ki na to vo shisha toota aur na hi usme koi awaz huyi mukka maarne par….andar moujud vyaktiyo ka dhyan bhi payal ki oor nahi gaya.

Payal ne niche baith kar jamin me tatolne lagi…tabhi uske hath me patthar ka ek bada sa tukda aa gaya….usko utha kar usne apni poori taqat se kayi baar jaldi jaldi shishe ke upar vaar kiye….lekin ashcharya ki baat thi ki itni jor jor se patthar se peetne par bhi vo shisha toota nahi aur na hi koi awaz huyi.

Payal (mann me)—ab kya kiya jaye….ye to toot hi nahi raha hai.

Payal patthar ka tukda hath me liye kisi asahay ki tarah andar dekhti rahi….itne me na jane kidhar se ek lambi choudi kad kathi ka vyakti uss kamre me prakat hua.

Uski shakal bhi bahut bhayanak thi…..sir par uske jata jut tha aur lambi dadhi thi….gale me bachcho ke khopdiyo ki mala pahne huye tha…..mastak par lamba tika lagaye, kamar me lal kapde ka tukda lapete aur hath me trishul liye tha.

Kamre me uss rahasyamay aur bhayanak vyaktitva wale sadhu ke pravistha hote hi vah yuvti apne sthan se uth khadi huyi aur shraddha se jhuk kar uske charno ka sparsh kiya.

Magar sadhu ne uski oor vishesh dhyan nahi diya....vah ek baar maa mahamaya ki pratima ki oor dekh kar koi mantra budbudane laga aur ussi avastha me dhire dhire chal kar hawan kund ke samip rakhe farse ko utha liya…phir ussi prakar chal kar bachche ke paas pahucha.

Issi beech hawan kund ke nikat baitha ek vyakti utha aur bachche ko god me lekar pratima ke samne lita diya….nishchay hi uss balak ko koi dawa dekar behosh kar rakha hoga inn logo ne.

Sadhu apne dahine hath me farsa liye uss bachche ka karib pahucha aur farse ko bachche ke sir se chhula diya…. Bachche ne ankhe kholi aur darte darte visfarit drishti se uss khadagdhari aghori sadhu ki taraf dekha.

Payal (ghabrate huye)—lagta hai ye log uss bachche ko maar denge…nahi…..nahi…mujhe rokna hoga….(chillate huye)—ye rukkk jaoooo……mat marooo uss bachche ko.

Payal jor jor se chillate huye patthar ko uss shishe par jor jor se thokne lagi kintu koi fayda nahi tha….vo shisha nahi toota aur dusri tajjub ki baat ye bhi thi ki payal jor jor se chilla to rahi thi kintu uski awaz kisi ko sunayi nahi de rahi thi…gale ke andar hi andar goonj rahi thi.

Tabhi vah sadhu niche jhuka vaise hi uski nazar payal par chali gayi…..uski ankhe lal lal aur khichi khichi si thi.. naak tirchhi thi aur gaalo ki haddiya ubhari huyi thi.

Vah jab jhuk kar payal ki oor dekhne laga to payal bhi kisi aprasann vyakti ki bhanti uski taraf dekhti rah gayi…usne payal ko sir se pair tak nihara jaise theek se dekh kar usko pahchan lena chahta ho vah.

Achchi tarah se payal ko dekhne ke baad vo sadhu bachche ke samne ja kar khada ho gaya…..phir apne hath ka cham chamata hua farsa taan liya usne.

Dusre hi kshan khachch ki awaz huyi aur ussi ke sath uss bachche ki hriday vidarak cheekh bhi goonj uthi…bachche ka sir dhad se alag ho gaya tha aur kafi door tak ki vaha ki jamin uske khoon se lal ho uthi thi….bachche ka sir aur dhad thodi der tak chhat patata raha aur phir shant ho gaya.

Payal (jor se)—Raaaaaajjjjjjjjjjj……khoon…..khoon….khoon

Payal buri tarah se darr kar jor jor se raj ko chillate huye tezi se vaha se girte padte bhagi….iss baar payal ki awaz sabhi ko sunayi di.

Main tezi se unki taraf gaya aur vo bhagte huye aa kar mere seene se lag kar jor jor se rone lagi..jab unka rona kuch kam hua to maine pucha.

Raj—kya hua didi….? Aap chillayi kyo….?

Payal (ghabrate huye)—vo…vo..kkk…khoon,…uss kamre me khoon

Raj—kaha…chalo jaldi…

Maine tezi se unka hath pakad kar uss kamre ki khidki tak pahucha…..lekin vaha to kuch bhi nahi tha…..siway toote foote kamre ki deewaro ke….maine shisha ko thoda sa dhakka diya to vo niche gir gaya.

Hum uss khidki se kamre me ghus gaye….maine apni mani ki shakti se kamre me roshni phaila di…..kahi kuch bhi nahi dikha jaise ki payal didi ne bataya… har taraf bade bade jaale lage huye the….poore kamre me dhool jama thi…..vo abhi bhi hairan thi aur kaamp bhi rahi thi….lekin mahakali ki pratima vaha avashya thi.

Raj—yaha to kuch bhi nahi hai.

Payal—lekin vo khoon ke nishan aur vo laash kaha gayi….? Abhi to yahi thi aur vo sab admi kaha gaye….?

Raj—didi….lagta hai ki aap bhool gayi ho ki ye Tilismi aur shapit qila hai.

Uske baad hum vapis ussi darwaje ke paas aa gaye….ab ki baar maine ankhe band kar ke apni shaktiyo ko jagrit kiya aur phir jaise hi darwaje par hath rakha vo aise khul gaya jaise ki kabhi band hi nahi tha.

Kamre me ghuste hi kisi ke payal ki awaz vaha goonjne lagi….payal ki chhan chhan karti awaz ne ham sabhi ko hairat me daal diya.

Paridhi—ye payal ki awaz kis ki hai….?

Divya (jor se)—koun hai yaha….?

Lekin koi awaz nahi aayi....hum aage chalne lage kamre me....tabhi phir se kisi ke chhan chhan karti payal ki awaz aane lagi...ab ki baar aisa laga ki koi bilkul mere karib se gujra hai.

Payal ki awaz ab kabhi idhar se to kabhi udhar se goonjne lagi....aisa lag raha tha ki jaise koi athakheliya kar raha ho har baar mujhe aisa mahsoos hota jaise koi mere paas khada hai.

Raj (chillate huye)—koun hai.... ? samne kyo nahi aati.... ?

Aur tabhi vaha ek madhur geet goonj utha jise sunte hi hum chounk gaye.....

“Upar Ambar Niche Dharti, Beech Me hain Dil Ke Afsaane...
Afsaano Me Dard Hai Kitna, Pyar Ke Dushman Ye Kya Jane”

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Payal ki awaz ab kabhi idhar se to kabhi udhar se goonjne lagi....aisa lag raha tha ki jaise koi athakheliya kar raha ho har baar mujhe aisa mahsoos hota jaise koi mere paas khada hai.

Raj (chillate huye)—koun hai.... ? samne kyo nahi aati.... ?

Aur tabhi vaha ek madhur geet goonj utha jise sunte hi hum chounk gaye.....

“Upar Ambar Niche Dharti Beech Me hain Dil Ke Afsaane
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Ab Aage……

Ye geet ke bol sunte hi hum sab chounk gaye….geet me dard bahut tha….maine kayi baar awaz lagayi ki koun ga rahi hai..samne aaye kintu vo idhar se udhar ghum rahi thi.

Payal (shocked)—ye to vahi shayari hai…jiske piche hum yaha aaye hain.

Neha—lagta hai ki minakshi idhar hi hai…ab yaha kahi vo mombatti aur mil jaye to uss sawal ka jawab poora ho jayega aur hum minakshi tak pahuch jayenge.

Achanak vo geet band ho gaya aur payal ki jhankar andhere me chhan chhan kar aati rahi…har baar mujhe aisa mahsoos hota jaise ki koi mere bilkul paas me khada hai.

Neha (cheekh kar)—aaahhhhh

Raj—kya hua….?

Neha—kisi ne mere piche jor se nakhun se chimti kaati.

Paridhi—aap bhi na mummy...ek to vaise hi hum iss bhutiya qile me darr rahe hain aur aap aur bhi dara rahi ho.

Payal—aaaaaaa

Raj—ab kya hua...... ?

Payal—kisi ne jor se mere kaan marode.

"S....a...a...j...a....n" kisi ne mere kaan me dhire se kaha to main bhi chounk gaya aur jaise palta to vaha koi nahi tha.. par nazar koi na aaya.

Aur ek baar phir se payal ki chhan...chhan karne ki awaz vaha goonjne lagi....tabhi vo chhan chhan ki awaz karib aati gayi aur jaise hi mujhe laga ki vo ab mere bagal me hi hai to turant maine usko pakadne ke liye hath badhaya ki vo awaz mujhse door ho gayi.

Hum kafi der tak uska picha karte huye bhatakte rahe....lekin kuch fayda nahi hua.....akhir me maine achanak se apni mani ka prakash vaha phaila diya....

Prakash phailte hi hum sab chounk gaye.….hum jaha khade the vaha phool hi phool bikhre huye the....main abhi kuch aur sochta ki achanak payal didi jor se cheekh uthi.

Payal (jor se)—rajjjjjj...vo...v..o

Raj—kya hua ab.... ?

Payal (darte huye)—maine...abhi vaha...ussi ladki ko dekha....vaha....vo yahi hai....

Sab ke sath main bhi chounk gaya...lekin phir jyada dhyan nahi diya ye soch kar ki aisi jagaho par iss tarah ki ghatnao ka hona koi hairat ki baat nahi hai.

Raj—come on didi....maine pahle bhi bataya hai na ki ye jagah kaisi hai.... ? phir usme itna pareshan kyo ho rahi ho aap.... ? balki main to khush hu ki uske geet se mujhe meri manzil karib nazar aane lagi hai.

Neha—vo kaise….?

Divya—vo aise chachi ki…iss shayari aur mombatti ka aapas me gahra sambandh hai…ye geet yaha sunayi diya iska matlab ki minakshi tak pahuchne ka rasta yahi se ho kar niklega aur shayad iss tilism ko todne ke baad hi hame vo rasta milega.

Raj—par hame iss tilism ko todne ka rasta to talash karna hoga…..lekin mujhe lagta hai ki sabse pahle hame yaha se juda itihas janna chahiye …bina uski jankari ke tilism ko tod pana bahut mushkil hoga.

Saloni—to chalo..apni talash aage badhate hain.

Raj—hmmmm…chalo…inn sidhiyo se chalte hain…dekhte hain kya milta hai….?

Dhool se sani tuti footi sidhiya chadhte samay dahshat se par fadfadate huye hamare kano ko chhu kar koi nikal gaya jisse sab darr se ghabra gayi.

Uss mlaan nistabdh qile me mujhe vichitra anubhuti ho rahi thi….dhool se bhare pade, patthar aur toote phoote sidhiyo par ghumte huye har kshan yahi lag raha tha ki rundhi huyi hawa ke beech koi dhire dhire hamare sath chal raha hai aur ateet ke jeern sheern kale parde ko ughar dega …..aur sahaj hi me iss darawne andhiyare vatavaran me mann prano ko ek bargi stambhit kar dega,

Abhi hum qile ke aangan me ghum rahe the ki tabhi meri nazar kisi gupt tahkhane me jane ke liye ek chote se darwaje par padi.

Raj—lagta hai ki yaha koi tahkhana hai….chalo dekhte hain

Neha—mujhe to darr lag raha hai

Payal—to aap yahi ruk kar hamare vapis loutane tak intazar karo.

Neha—nnn..nahi…nahi…main bhi sath me chalungi.

Hum darwaje ke andar aa gaye…vaha niche jane ke liye chakkar daar sidhiya thi….pahle niche utarne me sab ko darr avashya laga lekin mere utarte hi sab sahas kar ke fatafat mere piche piche utarne lagi.

Karib 8-10 sidhiya utarne ke baad mujhe kafi lamba chouda ek kamra mila….main dekhne ke liye uss kamre me ghus gaya…seelan aur badbu se bhara tha poora kamra.

Divya (naak daba ke)—kitni badbu hai yaha….

Payal—chal jaldi bahar niklo yaha se nahi to iss badbu se hi marr jayenge.

Raj—sab naak band kar lo ya kuch der bahar wait karo…main thodi talashi to le lu iss kamre ki…sab darwaje ke paas ja kar khadi ho gayi.

Main kamre ko bariki se dekhne laga….ek kone me lohe ka ek sandook rakha hua tha….lagbhag saat foot lamba, char foot ooncha aur lagbhag utna hi chouda tha vah….usme lock laga tha.

Maine gour se uss lock ko dekha to usme chabi se kholne ke liye koi jagah nahi thi…maine kayi prayas kiye kintu kamyabi nahi mili….akhir me maine mani ki shakti se uss lock ko tod diya.

Na jane kis prerna ke vashibhut ho kar maine uss box ka bhari bharkam dhakkan khol diya maine…..dhakkan khulte hi badbu ka ek tez jhonka bahar nikal kar phail gaya…uss badbu se sab ka jee machla utha to darwaje se bahar ho gayi.

Payal—uuuu….ye kya haiii…..?

Neha—mujhe to ulti hone wali hai

Divya—yahi bahar se dekhte hain…andar rukne ki himmat nahi hai ab.

Maine uss box ke andar dekha to usme taambe aur pital ki lagbhag do foot ki teen char pipes thi…..unn pipes me dhakkan lage huye the.

Unn dono pipes ko maine utha liya aur bahar aa kar khola to dekha ki usme kagaz jaise patle tambe ke patro par kisi agyat bhasa me koi pandu lipi thi….kul mila kar usme tamra patro ki sankhya chalis thi.

Neha—ye kya hai…?

Divya—chachi inko tamra patra kahte hain…..pahle ke jamane me inke upar hi likha jata tha kuch bhi.

Payal—par inme likha kya hai…? Koun si bhasa hai ye….?

Raj—yah kafi mulyavan aur ati durlabh sampatti hai.....ye pali bhasa se ek milti julti ek vishesh bhasa hai, inn pandu lipiyo ki aaj se lagbhag 500 varsh pahle ek prantiya bhasa thi.

Paridhi—kya likha hai inme..... ?

Raj—aayurved tantra ke antargat ras rasayan ke anek durlabh siddhanto aur unn siddhanto ke aadhar par anek rasaynik prayogo ka savistar varnan kiya gaya hai.

Payal—inme khas baat kya hai…..?

Raj—ab ye to inko padhne ke baad hi malum chalega…..ab chalo aur aage chalte hain

Hum vaha se aage badh gaye….kuch sidhiya aur niche utarne par do kamre dikhayi diye vaha….maine ek kamre ko chun kar uske andar ghus gaye…aur chalte chalte ussi kamre me pahuch gaye jaha kuch der pahle payal didi ne vo drishya dekha tha.

Payal—arey…ye to vahi kamra hai….?

Raj—hmmmmm

Tabhi maine nazar ghuma kar piche ki taraf khidki me dekha to vaha vo shisha phir se apni jagah par fit ho gaya tha jisko ki kuch der pahle maine niche gira diya tha.,,magar kuch dekh kar main chounk gaya.

Khidki ke bahar tez roshni thi……jaise ki din hi ho aur tez roshni me mujhe khidki se bahar thode se fasle par ek vistrat maidan dikhalayi diya.

Maidan ke ek oor kayi tope, jinka muh akash ki oor tha, ek katar me rakhi huyi thi……magar unn topo ko dagne ke liye vaha koi nahi tha…magar kuch hi pal ke baad vo tope swayam apne aap hi aag ugalne lagi.

Unme se kala sa dhua nikal kar maidan ke charo taraf phail gaya......thodi der baad hi maidan ke paas ki oonchi imarto me ek visfot hua aur aag tatha neele ranga ka dhua akash me chha gaya.

Phir achanak tope shant ho gayi aur vo dhua bhi adrishya ho gaya……aur uss maidan me antariksh se ek badi si hilti dulti vartulakar tashtari aati dikhayi dene lagi.

Pahle to main ye samajh hi nahi paya ki ye udan tashtari hai…..neele aas maan me ek lal taare jaisi dikhayi de rahi thi vo……bilkul mangal tare jaisi.

Pahle yahi vichar mere mann me aaya, par jab vah paas aane lagi to yakin ho gaya ki vah mangal tara nahi hai…aur nazdik aane par main samjh gaya ki ye udan tashtari hai.

Vah tashtari kuch hi kshan me maidan me utar kar sthir ho gayi……vo neele rang ki thi….samne ki oor ati tivra gati se ek pankha chal raha tha, jisme se aag ki halki halki lapte hawa ke sath nikal rahi thi…achanak uske bagal ka darwaja khula aur usme se jo nikla usko dekh kar main hairan rah gaya…..shakal itni bhayanak ki agar koi dekh le to vaise hi bina poison piye hi mar jayega.

Kisi bhi jivit prani se uski koi samanta nahi thi…..kaddu jaisa gol aur bada sa matha, kafi ooncha lalat, teen badi badi ankhe, ek lalat me aur do agal bagal thi.

Naak to thi hi nahi….ekdam sapat tha, mathe ke niche ka hissa…..sirf ek muh tha aur vo bhi ek lambe faank jaisa… kano ki jagah do bade bade nariyal lage huye the….aur unhi ke paas se foot dedh foot lambe baalo ki jataye upar ki oor nikli huyi thi….bilkul kisi jhingur ke muchho ki tarah.

Gala nahi tha balki gale ki jagah ek hath hi tha…..uske agal bagal hatho ke panjo me barah barah ungliya thi…..aur kafi lambe lambe nakhun the.

Uss vilakshan prani ke sharir par kapde the ya nahi ya uske sharir ka gathan hi iss prakar ka tha, yah samajh pana kathin hi tha…karan ki yadi vah kapde pahne tha to uske kapde uske badan se ekdam chipte huye the.

Chhati aur pet ka aakaar nagade jaisa tha…..aur teen pair the uske….piche ke ek pair par khade ho kar samne ke dono pair utha kar usne ek chhalang li to 40 – 50 foot ka fasla paar kar liya.

Ek chhalang le kar aur pichla pair tek kar usne phir se chhalang lagayi..iss tarah vah poore maidan me koodta phirta raha.

Iske baad vah sidhe meri taraf aaya aur pahle apni dono ankho se mujhe dekhta raha….phir mathe par ka teesra netra khula uska….atyant tivra prakash ki kiran jaisi nikli uski teesri ankh se….aur phir meri ankho ke samne andhera chha gaya.

Tad tad aur phir jhann ki awaz huyi…mere seene me dard sa uthne laga aur phir cheekh maar kar main behosh hota chala gaya.




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Iske baad vah sidhe meri taraf aaya aur pahle apni dono ankho se mujhe dekhta raha….phir mathe par ka teesra netra khula uska….atyant tivra prakash ki kiran jaisi nikli uski teesri ankh se….aur phir meri ankho ke samne andhera chha gaya.

Tad tad aur phir jhann ki awaz huyi…mere seene me dard sa uthne laga aur phir cheekh maar kar main behosh hota chala gaya

Ab Aage……..

Mere behosh hote hi mani ki roshni bhi band ho gayi….sath hi mere behosh hone ke karan unke upar mere dwara banaya gaya suraksha kawach bhi khandit ho gaya…..uss kamre me ek baar phir se andhera chha gaya…mere aise cheekh kar behosh ho jane se sab ghabra gayi…upar andhere aur anjan jagah ka darr alag.

Payal (ghabrate huye)—rajjj….kya huaaa….? Tujhe kya hua….uth na….rajjj….tu cheekha kyo….? Ye andhera kyo ho gaya…? Doctor dekho na…kya ho gaya hai mere raj ko….? Rajjj uth na.

Divya (hilate huye)—saajann…kyaaa huaaa…utho naaa…kisne kiya hai ye….samne kyo nahi aata…bujdil kahi ka….? Saajan utho…kya maine sadiyo se isliye intazar kiya hai ki har baar tum mujhe chhod kar chale jao…? Iss baar main aisa nahi hone dungi……samajh gaye na…..tumhe meri khatir uthna hoga…..saajan tumhe apni divya ke liye uthna hoga.

Paridhi (nam ankho se)—rajjj…kya ho gaya…mummy dekho na mere rajj ko kya hua hai…ye kuch bol kyo nahi raha hai….kya meri qurbani bekar chali jayegi….? Nahi..nahi..aisa nahi ho sakta

Neha—rajj…kya hua beta….uth na….dekh agar tu hi aise karega to hum sab ka kya hoga…..koun sambhalega hame yah hame to sirf tera hi bharosa hai.

Saloni—aap log shanti rakho…raj ko kuch nahi hoga….dekhna jaldi hi uthega vo…raj ko maarna itna asan nahi hai kisi ke liye…shayad thakan ke karan aisa hua hoga

Sabhi buri tarah se ghabra chuke the….unki ankho me nami utar aayi thi….lekin sabse jyada ghabrahat payal didi aur paridhi ko ho rahi thi……neha bhi pareshan thi…..halanki ghabra to divya bhi gayi thi kintu jaise hi usko guru maa aur devi laxmi ki baate smaran huyi to uski ghabrahat kuch kam ho gayi thi lekin phir bhi raj ko dard me mahsoos kar ke uske seene me bhi taklif ho rahi thi.

Tabhi neha chachi jor jor se cheekhne lagi…..ek baar phir se vahi payal bajne aur kisi ladki ke hasne ki awaz aas paas me sab ko sunayi dene lagi….sab darr se kampne lagi.

Neha (cheekhte huye)—aaaaaaaaa….bachaooooo….rajjjjjj…..aaaaaaaa…….koi mere pair pakad ke mujhe ghasit raha hai…aaaaaaaaa

“Chhan….chhan…chhan…..chhan……hihihihihihihi”

Paridhi—mummyyyyy…..aap kaha hoooooo…..?

Payal—chachiiiiiii……?

Divya—chachiiiii…..aap bolti kyo nahiiiiiiii……..?

Neha—(koi jawab nahi)

Sab ne aas paas tatol kar dekha lekin neha ka kahi koi pata nahi tha……ab to sab ki halat bahut jyada kharab hone lagi thi……sab rajjjjj….rajjjj…chillate huye andhere me mujhe tatolne lagi.

Tabhi ek baar phir se vahi payal ki goonj sunayi dene lagi…..payal aur paridhi ek dusre se chipak gayi darte huye… kyon ki andhera hone ke karan mujhe dhoondh hi nahi pa rahi thi….lekin main unhe kahi nahi mila…to unki dasha par kate pakshi ki tarah ho gayi.

“Chhan….chhann…chhan…chhann…chhannn”

Paridhi (darte huye)—kkkkkk…..koun hai yaha…….?

‘’Hihihihihihihihihihihi......chhan......chhann...chhan...chhan’’

Paridhi (chillate huye)—aaaaaaaaaaaa.......raajjjjjjjjjj......mummyyyy.......rajjjjj...bachaaoooooo....koi mujhe bhiii pair pakad kar ghasit raha hai......aaaaaaaa.....raaajjjjjjjj

Payal (jor se)—paridhiiiiiiiiiiiii.......rajjjj uthooooo......nahi to hum sab maare jayenge yahaaaa....paridhiiiii

Divya—didiiiiiiiiiiiii

Paridhi—(no response)

‘’Chhan...chhan....chhan...hihihihihihi’’

Payal (rote chillate)—raaaaajjjjjjj.......bachaaaooooooooo......raaaajjjjjjjjjj.....aaaaaaaa.....koi mujhe bhi ghasit raha hai...rajjj

Divya—didiiiiiiiiii.......saajannnnn....uthoooooo....saajannnnnn

Saloni—payallllllll

Payal ka bhi koi jawab nahi aaya.....ab to divya aur saloni bhi buri tarah se dahshat aur khauf ke saaye me doob chuki thi....dono baar baar sabhi ko awaz laga rahi thi lekin kisi ki taraf se koi bhi prattuttar nahi aa raha tha.... agar kuch sunayi de rahi thi to sirf kisi ke payal ki ghungharoo ki awaz aur uski dil dahla dene wali bhayanak hasi.

Jaise hi ye awaz paas aane lagi to divya aur saloni bhi ghabra kar yaha vaha andhere me bhagne lagi....divya mera naam lekar chillaye ja rahi thi to saloni bhi.....par dono ko ye pata nahi tha ki vo ek hi jagah par bhag rahi hai... ek kadam bhi vaha se nahi bhag payi thi jabki unhe lag raha tha ki vo bhagte huye door nikal aayi hain kamre se.

‘’Hihihihihi.....bhago....aur tez....aur tez.....hihihihihihihi....Ek baar aane ke baad koi yaha se kahi nahi bhag sakta...hihihi’’

Divya (chillate huye—saajaannnnnnnn

Saloni—rajjjjjjjj.....aaaaaa......mujhe bhi koi ghasitttt raha haiiii....aaaaaaaa

Par ab ki baar kuch alag hua......saloni ki cheekh ke sath ek cheekh aur bhi vaha goonj uthi....dusri cheekh uski thi jo saloni ko ghasit raha tha ya rahi thi.

Aur dusri cheekh ki vajah ye thi ki jo bhi saloni ko ghasit rahi thi....dard se cheekhte huye achanak saloni ki ankho se aag nikalne lagi....jaise hi vo aag ghasitne wale ke upar padi to uski bhi cheekh nikal gayi jabki divya ye dekh kar stabdh rah gayi.

Divya (shocked)—koun ho tum.... ? tum doctor nahi ho sakti... ? koun ho…?

Saloni—mere baare me saajan ko pata hai…pahle isse to nipat lu.

‘’Ohhhh...to tu mujhe takkar dena chahti hai…..ab dekh main tera kya haal karti hu’’

Saloni (jor se)—koun hai tu...... ?....baki logo ka kya kiya tune....jaldi bata warna tere liye achcha nahi hoga

Magar jawab dene ki jagah usne bhi aag ka jawab aag se dena shuru kar diya...lekin uss aag ki roshni me jo chehra nazar aaya vo bada hi bhayanak tha...divya ke to hath pair hi dheele pad gaye.

Lekin saloni bhi jyada der tak uska samna nahi kar payi.....aur akhir kuch der baad uski bhi cheekhe goonjne lagi aur uska bhi vahi haal hua jo baki ka hua tha.

Divya akeli asahay saajan ko ghabrate huye phir se tatol tatol kar andhere me khojne lagi aur sath me roti bhi ja rahi thi...tab tak saloni ko thikane lagane ke baad vo phir se payal chhankati huyi uske hasne ki awaz paas me sunayi dene lagi.

‘’Hihihihihi...chhan...chhan....chhann....ab tu bhi cheekh....bachaoo...bachaaooo....cheekh...hihihihihihi’’

Divya (darr se chillate huye)—dekho...mere paas nahi aana....door raho mujhse.....saajan tumhe chhodega nahiii

‘’Saajannnn....hhihihihihi...vo to kabbbb kaa marrr chukaaa...hihihihi...ab teri bari hai’’

Divya (chillate huye)—saajan ko maar sake aisi teri aukat nahi.

Aur agle hi pal kroadhit ho kar usne jaise hi divya ko ghasitne ke liye usko hath lagaya hi tha ki usse aisa jabardast jhatka laga ki vo uss aakashiya bijli ke jhatke se phisalti huyi aur dard se cheekhti na jane kaha aur kitni door ja kar giri.

Divya andhere me mera naam le kar har taraf mujhe dhoondhne lagi.....idhar mere behosh hone ke baad meri ankho ke samne kuch drishya baar baar jhilmilane lage.

Meri ankho ke samne ek kamra dikha jisme bahut sara saman rakha hua hai, uske baad raj sabha ka drishya dikhayi diya.....sabha ke beecho beech latakta hua ek tarazu nazar aaya aur phir uske baad mata mahakali ki ek pratma dikhayi dene lagi.

Ye sab drishya meri ankho ke samne baar baar jaldi jaldi ghum aur badal rahe the...ant me ek tahkhana nazar aaya aur uss tahkhane ke andar ek darwaja dikha....jaise hi vo darwaja khula ki tabhi.......

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Dusri taraf yaha ghar me mamta ko hosh to aa gaya tha lekin vo phir se jaldi hi behosh ho gayi thi dubara...aise me doctors ne unhe hospital me admitt karne ke liye kaha.

Doctor—dekhiye...ye abhi hi to coma se bahar aayi thi...aise me kisi bhi tarah ka sadma inko phir se coma me le ja sakta hai...inka baar baar behosh hona theek nahi hai....behtar yahi hoga ki mrs. Thakur ko hospital me rakha jaye jaha 24 hrs. Doctors ki nazar rahegi inki condition par.

Veer—theek hai doctor...jaisa aap theek samjhe

Mamta ko turant hospital admitt kar diya gaya….ghar ke lagbhag sabhi log hospital me moujud the…..siwaye vidhya aur chanchal ke.

Vidhya to uske baad se apne room se bahar hi nahi nikli thi, pata nahi kis soch me doobi huyi thi jabki chanchal mamta ke hospital le jate hi sidhe ek mandir ke bahar dharne par baith gayi thi.

Halanki Raat hone ki vajah se mandir ke darwaje band the….tathapi vo bahar hi baith kar upar wale se prarthana karne me lag gayi thi.

Chanchal (rote huye mann me)—hey bhagwan….meri maa ko theek kar do…..ye sab mere hi paapo ka dund hai jo aaj unhe bhugatna pad raha hai….mere hi kadam manhoos hain….mujhe paida hi kyo kiya bhagwan tune….? Mere kadam uss mandir me padte hi vaha gum ke badal chha gaye hain….bas ek baar meri maa ko theek kar do bhagwan aur mere raj ko jindagi ki har khushi dena….main aaj ke baad kabhi apni manhoos shakal kisi ko nahi dikhaungi…bahut door chali jaungi sab ki zindagi se.

Vahi hospital me doctor barabar mamta ka check up karne me lage huye the…mamta ko VIP ward me shift kiya gaya tha…doctor ke mana karne ke bavjud sab andar ghus gaye the…..jo doctor chair par baithe huye mamta ko check kar raha tha uske sir me baal nahi the ye dekh kar mrinal ke hath me khujli hone lagi thi…jo ki doctor se thoda hat ke khadi thi.

Doctor ke agal bagal ruchi aur veer khade the..veer ke baju me mrinal khadi thi….usne ek baar sab ki taraf dekha aur phir piche se hath le ja kar chatttt se doctor ke sir me maar diya.

Mrinal (mann me)—hmmmmm…..bajta hai….maza aa gaya….ek baar aur baja kar dekhti hu.

Iss achanak maar se doctor chakra gaya aur usne charo taraf dekha lekin sabhi ka dhyan mamta ki oor tha….usne ek baar veer ko ghur kar dekha aur phir se ilaz karne me lag gaya apne sir me hath ferte huye.

Jaise hi usne sir se hath hataya vaise hi mrinal ne ek baar phir se uske takle par chatt se maar diya lekin ab ki baar jara jor se hath pad gaya…jiski awaz bhi sab ko sunayi de gayi.

Doctor apne takle ko sahlate huye baukhla kar khada ho gaya aur veer ko gusse se dekhne laga…
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Doctor ke agal bagal ruchi aur veer khade the..veer ke baju me mrinal khadi thi….usne ek baar sab ki taraf dekha aur phir piche se hath le ja kar chatttt se doctor ke sir me maar diya.

Mrinal (mann me)—hmmmmm…..bajta hai….maza aa gaya….ek baar aur baja kar dekhti hu.

Iss achanak maar se doctor chakra gaya aur usne charo taraf dekha lekin sabhi ka dhyan mamta ki oor tha….usne ek baar veer ko ghur kar dekha aur phir se ilaz karne me lag gaya apne sir me hath ferte huye.

Jaise hi usne sir se hath hataya vaise hi mrinal ne ek baar phir se uske takle par chatt se maar diya lekin ab ki baar jara jor se hath pad gaya…jiski awaz bhi sab ko sunayi de gayi.

Doctor apne takle ko sahlate huye baukhla kar khada ho gaya aur veer ko gusse se dekhne laga…

Ab Aage……..

Hua ye tha ki jaise hi doctor ke takle par phali baar mrinal ne tabla bajaya to doctor ghabra kar iss akasmat huye apne takle par hamle se idhar udhar sab ko dekhne laga ki ye kis ki harkat hai….? Sabhi ka dhyan mamta ki taraf tha unhe pata hi nahi chala ki abhi kya hua hai.

Tabhi mrinal ne jab dekha ki doctor uski taraf dekh raha hai to usne apni ungli se veer ki taraf ishara karne lagi… bas phir kya tha, doctor veer ko ghurte huye phir se ilaz me vyast ho gaya.

Lekin mrinal ke hath ki khujli to abhi miti hi nahi thi, balki usko to doctor ke takle par tabla bajane se jo awaz uttapann huyi usse sun kar bahut maza aaya.

Doctor ke phir se ilaz me vyast hote hi mrinal ne sab ki nazar bacha kar dhire se apne hath ko veer ke piche se le ja kar phir se doctor ke takle par chatt se maar diya, kintu iss baar hath jara jor se pad gaya jiski awaz ki goonj lagbhag sabhi ko sunayi de gayi.

Doctor ka to poora dimag hi ghoom gaya aur chakkar aane lag gaya….vo baukhla kar chair se uth khada hua…aur apne takle ko hatho se sahlate huye veer ko gusse se ghurne lag gaya.

Doctor (gusse se)—Ye kya badatzmizi hai mr. veer…..? apko sharm aani chahiye aisi ghatiya harkat karte huye.

Ruchi—lekin hua kya doctor….? Kya kiya hai veer ne….?

Doctor—ye to aap inse hi puchiye ki kya harkat ki hai inhone mere sath…….raj sahab ka dost aur aisi harkate….? Maine to kabhi socha bhi nahi tha.

Veer—dekhiye doctor, shayad apko koi galat fahmi huyi hai

Doctor—ji nahi, mujhe koi galat fahmi nahi huyi hai…..main ab aur yaha nahi ruk sakta…sorry main kisi dusre doctor ko bhejta hu.

Sab usko samjhane ki koshish karte rahe lekin vo nahi mana aur bahar jane ke liye darwaje tak pahucha hi tha ki chakkar kha kar niche gir gaya….ye to hona hi tha, akhir ek yaksh kanya ka hath jo pad gaya tha sir me.

Jaldi se staff ke log aa kar uss doctor ko uth le gaye…..doctor ke jate hi sab mrinal ki oor ghur ghur ke dekhne lage kyon ki sab samajh gaye the ki ye harkat iske siwa koi nahi kar sakta.

Mrinal—meri taraf sab aise mat dekho…..aap logo ne suna nahi ki uss takle dok dhar ne kya kaha tha…? Ki sab kuch iss balatkari ne kiya hai.

Veer—chup kar…..iss pagal ko yaha lane ki kya jarurat thi…..? aur tu meri maa, mere piche kyo shani ban kar piche pad gayi hai…..?

Ruchi—ab maa ka ilaz koun karega….? Main baat karti hu head doctor se.

Veer—apko pareshan hone ki jarurat nahi hai didi…main baat karta hu.

Veer doctor’s se baat karne chala gaya….idhar priyadarshini ne mrinal ka mamla handle kar liya…..kuch der baad dusri ladies doctor aa gayi aur mamta ka check up karne lagi..

Mitaly—doctor….iss ladki (mrinal) ke liye bhi kuch dimag theek karne ki koi dawayi likh dena.

Doctor—ok…..ye lijiye ja kar counter se le lo ye dawayi.

Mrinal—theek hai.

Mrinal dawayi lene ke liye….vo jhumte huye apni mastani chaal me chalte huye beech me kisi nurse se takra gayi…mrinal ka to kuch nahi hua par uss nurse ki kamar ki haddi toot gayi takra kar girte hi…mrinal ne usko chaar baate suna kar aage badh gayi aur vo bechari nurse dard se chillane lagi.

Magar iss chakkar me vo dawazi ka kagaz vahi gir gaya…..counter par pahuch kar vo kagaz dekhne lagi ki kaha gaya par vo nahi mila.

Mrinal (mann me)—vo kagaz kaha gaya jo uss dok dhar ne likha tha….? Chalo koi baat nahi….dawayi to dawayi hoti hai….koi bhi le le lungi.

Asal me mrinal ko dawayi ka matlab hi malum nahi tha kyon ki dev lok me dawayi ko ausadhi ke naam se jana jata hai....usne ye shabd hi pahli baar suna tha....counter par ek ladka tha.

Mrinal—Ye kabutar.......mujhe dawayi chahiye.....jaldi se de.....

Ladka—koun si dawayi chahiye..... ?

Mrinal (ankhe dikhate huye)—koun si matlabbbb...... ? achchi wali dawayi chahiye.....

Ladka—arey madam....vahi to puch raha hu ki koun si dawayi chahiye..... ?

Mrinal (dukan ko dekhte huye)—hmmmm…..jo khoob meethi ho…..aur jisse taqat khoob aati ho.

Ladka—ye lo...ye goli le lo.

Mrinal—kyaaaa tu mujhe goli (ullu banana) de raha hai.... ? ruk tujhe abhi batati hu....main dawayi maang rahi hu aur tu .mujhe goli de raha hai......thahar.

Bas phir kya tha....mrinal ne samjha ki vo ladka usko bewkoof banne ki koi cheez de raha hai dawayi ke badle me to usne counter ko jump kar ke dukan me ghus gayi aur uss ladke ki jam kar pitayi kar di...bechara vo dukan chhod kar kisi tarah apni jaan bacha kar bhaga vaha se.

Tab tak shor sharaba ki awaz sun kar achchi khasi bheed jama ho gayi thi vaha par.....veer bhi pahuch gaya aur mrinal ko vaha dekhte hi apna sir peet liya.

Guard aur public police ko bulane ki baat karne lage...magar veer ne jaise hi bataya ki ye pagal hai to poori bheed turant titar bitar ho gayi....sab ye soch kar bhag liye ki ek pagal ka kya bharosa...kisko thok de.... ?

Veer—tu yaha kya kar rahi hai.... ? chal yaha se jaldi.... ?

Mrinal—ruk main dawayi to le lu.

Mrinal fatafat do polythene me 30-40 dawayi ki shishi bhar ke vahi sab ke paas aa gayi….itni dawayi dekh kar sab ke sath doctor bhi chakra gayi.

Vahi dusri taraf meri jab ankh khuli to unhi drishyo ke baare me hi sochne laga…..phir mujhe baki sab ka khyal aaya to maine apne aas paas kisi ko na pakar soch me pad gaya….maine sab ka naam lekar pukara par koi jawab na milne par maine ankhe band kar li.

Maine apni kundalini shakti jagrit kar ke jab apni ankhe kholi to khud ko qile ke bahar leta hua paya….tabhi mujhe behosh hone se pahle ki ghatna dhyan aate hi maine apne charo taraf nazar ghuma kar dekha to vaha koi maidan nahi dikhayi de raha tha…..isko tilism ka ek khel samajh kar main turant uth kar khada hua aur andar ghus gaya qile ke.

Kundalini shakti ke jagrit ho jane se mujhe ab raat me bhi din ke saman hi dikhayi de raha tha….mujhe bakiyo ki chinta hone lagi thi…isliye maine sidhe uss kamre me vahi khidki ke jariye jaldi pahuchna sahi samjha.

Main bahar ke raste se hi vaha khidki tak pahucha to vaha vahi shisha laga hua tha….maine andar jhank kar dekhne ki koshish ki sab kya kar rahe hain….to vaha mujhe koi nahi dikhayi di….? Ab to meri chinta aur bhi badh gayi.

Raj—kaha gayi ye sab…..? mere behosh hone ke baad kahi kuch hua to nahi inke sath…..?

Aur tabhi maine jaise hi uss shisha ko todne ke liye hath uthaya to ye dekh kar dang rah gaya ki ab kamre ke andar sabhi moujud thi aur main behosh pada tha…..

Uske baad vaha jo kuch hua tha vo sab drishya ek ek kar ke mujhe dikhayi dene lage…maine turant uss shisha ko dhakka dekar niche gira diya aur kamre ghus gaya…maine uss khidki ki oor palat kar dekha to vo shisha phir se khidki par fit ho chuka tha.

Uss shishe ke uss paar phir se mujhe ek scene dikhayi dene laga jisko dekh kar main bhi chounk gaya….aur iska sara rahasya bhi shayad meri samajh me ab aa gaya tha.

Philhal ke liye abhi maine uss baat ko dar kinar karte huye uss kamre se andar ja kar sab ko talash karne laga… naam se awaz lagate huye.

Vahi neha kisi andheri jagah me idhar se udhar rajj aur baki sab ka naam chillate huye darte darte bhatak rahi thi ki achanak vaha roshni jhil milane lagi.

Roshni ke aise achanak aane se vo aur bhi ghabra gayi aur cheekhne hi wali thi ki uska muh khula ka khula rah gaya…cheekh bhi nahi payi vo kyon ki uske samne koi aurat uski taraf pith kiye khadi thi.

Jaise hi vo aurat palti to uska chehra samne aa gaya….chehra dekhte hi neha ki ruh kaamp gayi…darr aur khauf se uska poora sharir thar thar kampne laga.

Kyon ki uska aurat ka chehra bahut hi bhayanak tha…..aadha jala hua chehra jispe khoon riste huye niche gir raha tha aur dekhte hi dekhte vo jali huyi parat chehre se utarti huyi niche gir gayi.aur usme se khoon ki dhara bahne lagi.

Neha ke muh se koi bol hi nahi phoot rahe the…..cheekhna to bahut door ki baat hai….vo apni jagah par khadi khadi buri tarah kaamp rahi thi….badi mushkil se uske muh se cheekh nikal payi.

Neha (cheekhte huye)—aaaaaaaaaaaaaa……..raaaaaaajjjjjjjjjj…….bachaaaaooooooo

Vo jor se chillate cheekhte huye piche ki taraf bhagi lekin darr aur khauf se thar thar kampte uske pair bhagne me uska sath nahi de paye jisse vo piche ki taraf dhadam se gir gayi…..niche girte hi uska sir kisi nukili cheez se takra gaya….ek baar phir se vo dard aur khauf se cheekh uthi.

Neha (dard se cheekhte huye)—aaaaaaaaaaaaa……..marrrrr….. gayiiiiiii ……. raaaajjjjjjj……bachaooooooo

Usne turant apne hath ko sir me dard wali jagah par lagaya….aur dard se phir chilla uthi…..dard se karahte huye usne apna hath aage kiya to uska hath khoon se sana hua tha.

Neha ne dard bhare chehre se darte darte apni nazar ko utha kar samne dekha to chounk gayi...kyon ki kuch der pahle jaha ek bhayanak aurat khadi thi, ab vaha par koi nahi tha.

Idhar main sabhi ko awaz lagata hua har jagah qile me talash karne laga ki tabhi meri ankho ne kuch aisa dekha ki main usko dekhte hi chounk gaya.
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