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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

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Apun b hai re bawa🙂
Hasshhh do numbari nhi karne ka apun bohat soft hearted banda hun saha nhi jai ga kyu kia samjhe😂
Mere bolne ka matlab writer ko chod ke sabhi samjhdaar hai yaha :roll:
Or mai Apki baat samjh gaya :scared:
 
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Mega Update

Update - 39 ~ A Mother's Love will always be Eternal

[This update contains explicit gore scenes. Beware!]

Ab tak...

Veer uske jaate hi apne bagal me rakhi ek cheez ko dekhne laga aur uss par haath dheere se rakha usne...

'Kal... I promise... I will take him down...'

Usne mann me thaana, aur usse cheez ko zorr se bheench liya.

Aur Wo cheez thi...

Golu ki cycle...


Ab aage...

Wo mahina tha March ka. Jab thand ka mausam jaa raha tha aur garmiyo ka mausam aana shuru ho chuka tha. Mein apni Maa ki goad me sarr rakh ke laita hua tha.

Bade hi pyaar se wo apna ek paav jhula rahi thi taaki mujhe neend jaldi aa jaaye, par aaj jese mujhe neend aa hi nahi rahi thi.

Mein aur Maa ghar ke andar hi neeche zameen par chataayi bicchaaye baithe the. Ya yu kahu, ki Maa baithi thi aur mein laita hua tha. Ghar kehna bhi galat hoga. Ek chota sa hissa tha chaar diwaaro ka jisme upar se khappar ki chhat thi aur darwaaze ke naam pe bas ek toota foota lakdi ka darwaaza.

"Aai!?"

Mere pukaarne par meri Aai ne mujhe jhukte hue dekha aur boli,

"Tu abhi tak soya nahi Ashu?"

"Nahi Aai! Mujhe neend hi nahi aa rahi hai."

"Accha? Aur kyu nahi aa rahi hai mere lalla ko neend?"

"Aai! Mein ye soch raha tha, kal hamaare ghar wo 3-4 police waale kyu aaye the?"

Mere ye sawaal karte hi mene dekha ki Aai ke chehre par agle hi pal chinta aa gayi aur wo kisi soch me pad gayi.

"Aai?"

"H-Huh?? Kuch nahi lalla. Tu apne khel kood aur padhayi par dhyaan diya kar samjha?"

Aai ne thoda uchi awaaz me bola toh mein shaant ho gaya. School toh naam maatr ka tha. Hum sabhi bacche jaate, teacher aata ya nahi aata baat ek hi thi. Keval unhi ke upar dhyaan zyaada dete the teacher jinke baap ke paas paisa zyaada hota tha.

Mere Baba toh badi mushqil se meri school fees de paate the. Abhi mein Baba ke hi baare me soch raha tha ki utne me ghar ka darwaaza khula aur Baba andar aa gaye.

"Babaaa!"

Mein utha aur Baba se lipat gaya.

"Hahahaha~ Mera beta!! Aaj tere liye tohfa laaya hu. Wahi jiske baare me tu roz charcha kiya karta tha."

Mene Baba ko prashn bhari nazro se dekha toh unhone mujhe thoda dur karte hue apne peeche se ek jhola nikaala aur usse jese hi khola toh meri aankhein hairaani aur khushi dono ke maare felti chali gayi.

"Y-Ye toh..."

"Hahahaha~ Ye raha tumhara tohfa."

"Mera tohfaaaa..."

Mein chillaaate hue uss par jhapta. Aur kyu nahi jhapatata? Saamne mere ek hockey stick maujood thi. Roz mein maidaan me khelne jaata tha. Waha hum sabhi hockey khelte the. Kuch logo ke paas hockey stick thi toh kuch bas lakdiyo se apna kaam chalaate the.

Roz mein Baba ko iss baare me bataata tha aur wo meri baat sunke sarr hila dete the. Par mujhe nahi pata tha ki wo meri baat ko aise hi poora kar denge. Aaj mein boht khush tha. Kitni chamak rahi thi meri hockey stick. Kal jab mein apne dosto ko dikhaunga toh kitna jalenge sabhi.

Wese toh yadi aap accha khelo toh pradesh starr par khelne ka bhi mauka diya jaata tha. Par ye mauka keval 18 umr se upar waalo ke liye tha. Aur mujhe 18 ka hone me abhi 5 saal baaki the.

"Itna kharcha? Kyu??? Aap jaante hai hum wese hi kitni pareshaani me hai fir bhi?"

Aai ne chintit nazro se Baba ko dekhte hue kaha.

"Arre theek hai ab... Kab se laga hua tha wo... Kabhi kabhi chalta hai."

"Kabhi kabhi...? Arre ghar ki sthiti ka bhi toh dhyaan rakhiye."

"Mein sab dhyaan rakh raha hu meri priye. Tumhi batao... Kya mene tumlogo ke alaawa kabhi kisi aur baare me socha hai?"

"Ab... Ab aap aisa bolenge toh mein kya hi vrodh kar paungi?"

"Hahaha~ Tum chinta mat karo. Sab sahi ho jaega."

Na jaane Aai Baba kya baat kar rahe the par mein itna toh jaanta tha ki hamaare ghar ki aarthik sthiti boht kamzor thi.

"Aai! Tumhari kya khwaaish hai?"

Mene apni hockey ko rakhte hue pucha. Toh Aai muskuraayi aur bagal me rakhe ek chote se lakdi ke bane mandir ko dekhne lagi.

"Meri khwaaish? Meri khwaaish toh bas yahi hai ki tu ek boht bada aadmi bane. Aur ye jo mandir hai na... Mein isse poori chaandi ka banwaana chaahti hu. Par wo tabhi mumkin hoga jab tu bada aadmi banega samjha?"

"Hmmm!"

"Jaa ab so jaa."

Na chaahte hue bhi, mujhe laitna pada. Par neend toh aaj jese meri aankho se koso dur thi. Mein karwat leke laita hua tha kaafi derr se aur isliye shayad Aai Baba ko laga ki mein so gaya hu.

Aur wo baatein karne lage. Par mein jaag raha tha. Aur issi kaaran mujhe kayi saari baatein pata chali jo wese mujhe kabhi nahi pata thi.

"Aaj aap ko itna mehnga tohfa laane ki kya zaroorat thi waqai..."

"Tum abhi bhi uske peeche lagi ho. Arre baccha hai. Aur wo mene apni jama punji se liya hai uske liye."

"Yadi koi kitaab laake dete toh bhi koi baat hoti..."

"Khel se bhi aadmi bada aadmi ban sakta hai. Aur Ashu ko khel me ruchi hai toh hume toh usse uss taraf badhaava dena hi chaahiye na?"

"Aapke saamne meri ek na chalti. Accha wo... fir kya hua? Hamari zameen ka? Mujhe boht chinta ho rahi hai. Yadi wo hamaare haath se gayi, toh kya hoga hamaara?"

"Hmm! Uss kameene ne chhal se hamaari zameen ke kaagzaat chori karwaaye hai. Aur ab hume kese bhi karke unhe waapas lena hai."

"Wahi puch rahi hu aap se. Kal police waale bhi aaye the. Kitni dhamki deke gaye hume. Sab mile hue hai. Upar se... Upar se mujhe toh unn police waalo ke iraade bilkul theek na lag rahe..."

"Kya kehti ho? Kya kal unn ne...?"

"Hmm! Aapne shayad gaur nahi kiya. Par wo sabhi mere badan ko gandi nazar se dekh rahe the."

"Unn haraam ke pillo ki toh mein..."

"Shaant! Ashu uth jaega!"

"Hmm! Mujhe ab wo kadam uthaana hi padega..."

"??"

"Bhulo mat ki mein uske hi ghar me kaam karta hu. Mujhe pata hai usne kaagzaat kaha rakhe honge... Bas ek baar haath aa jaaye..."

"Choriii??"

"Chori nahi hai ye... Ye hamaara apna haq hai priye! Ye toh hamaari zameen hai. Uss thakur ko yadi waha building banwaani hai toh banwaaye. Par hamaaari kheti ki zameen ko chorr ke banwaaye. Aur hum apna haq leke rahenge. Bhale hi mujhe uske ghar se apne kagzaat kyu na lene pade."

"Par... Par yadi uss thakur ko pata chala toh..."

"Pata chala bhi toh kya? Kam se kam hamaare paas... kachehri me dikhaane ke liye kagzaat toh rahenge."

"Kachehri toh hume surakshit rakh legi par uske baad kya? Wo haraami thakur kuch bhi kar sakta hai. Yadi hamaare Ashu ko kuch ho gaya toh?"

"Bilkul nahi! Tum kal ek kaam karna... Ashu ko maidaan khelne bhej dena. Jese hi mein kaagaz leke aaunga hum seedhe dusre thaane chalenge aur kachehri bhi jaenge. Vakeel ko dene ke liye hai paisa humaare paas. Bas hume jald se jald sab kuch karna hoga. Iss se pehle ki wo thakur hamaare vakeel ko khareed paaye."

"Kya aapko waqai lagta hai ki hum safal honge?"

"Bhagwaan ke ghar derr hai, andherr nahi!"

"Hmmm! Aur... Hamara sabzi aur phal ka dhandha toh accha hai hi par aapke mochi ke dhande ka kya hua?"

"Aaj acchi kamaayi hui. Wo jinki haweli hai na? Singh sahab kii? Wo aaj mujhe haweli me bulwaaye the."

"Kyaa?"

"Haa! hahaha~ Arre unke joote videsh se aaye hai. Aur tum jaanti hi ho ki jooto ka mujhe kitna shauk hai. Mene joote ke baare me itna sab kuch bataaya unhe ki wo khush ho gaye aur meri acchi khaasi kamaayi ho gayi."

"Chaliye! Ye toh badi hi acchi baat hai."

Aai, Baba kuch derr yu baat karke so gaye the. Par unki baate mere dimaag me hi raat bhar ghumti rahi.

Agli subah wahi hua. Aai ne naashte me mujhe roti dii aur bas aam ka achaar. Mein thoda boht khaaya aur tab tak sooraj sarr ko chadhne par tha.

Din hote hi Aai ne mujhe maidaan me jaane keh diya. Mujhe pata tha ghar me kuch sahi nahi hai aur isliye mene jaane se mana kar diya.

"Ab jaata kyu nahi!? Wese toh roz ghar me laga rahega. Ab jab Baba tere liye hockey le aaye hai toh jaa na... Dikha apne dosto ko... Kyu nahi jaa raha ab!?"

"Mujhe nahi jaana..."

"Tu... Jaata hai ya mein pitaayi karu teri...!?"

Aai ne jhaadu uthaayi toh mein gusse me bina hockey uthaaye hi bhaag gaya. Mujhe rona aa raha tha. Ek toh mein itni chinta kar raha tha upar se Aai ne meri bhawnao ko samjha hi nahi. Hmph!

Gusse aur udaasi ke chalte mein poora din maidaan me raha. Ghar gaya hi nahi.

Jab shaam hui aur andhera hone ko aaya tab hi mein utha aur ghar ki orr jaane laga.

Hamaara ghar thoda ucche sthaan par tha. Thoda sa pahaadi ilaaka tha. Wese Mumbai me pahaad nahi the par baahri chhetr me kuch kuch hote the jinpe log makaan bana kar guzaara karte the.

Jese hi mein kacchi sadak se hote hue apne ghar ke paas pohucha toh...

Mujhe nazar aaya ki ghar ke baahar se 3 se 4 police waale nikal rahe the. Unki shaqale mujhe boht acche se yaad thi. Kyuki yahi log kal bhi aaye the.

Wo ghar se baahar nikle aur jaldbaazi me bhaag gaye. Mein thoda chintit hote ghar ke nazdeek aaya toh paaya ki andar se laalten jalne ki roshni baahar sadak tak aa rahi thi.

"Aai!?? Babaaa!?"

Awaaz lagaate hue mein jese hi andar aaya toh...
Meri aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi. Saamne ke drishya ko dekh meri rooh kaanp gayi. Ek pal me mere shareer ke raungte khade ho gaye. Dil zorro se dhadakne laga. Aur darr ke maare mera badan kaapne laga.

Mein waha aise jam gaya tha jese mene koi bhoot dekh liya ho.

"N-Nahiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!"

Mein cheenkha... Aur ladkhada ke aage badha...

Saamne...

Saamne mere Baba ka sarr phata hua tha. Unke sarr se poora khoon hi khoon beh raha tha. Khoon ke chheete diwaaro par bikhre hue tha. Zameen par khoon behte hue felta jaa raha tha.

Aur unke bagal se...

Meri hockey stick rakhi hui thi, jis par...

Khoon hi khoon laga hua tha.

"Baaabaaaaaaaaa!!!"

Mein firse cheekha... Aur thar-tharaate hue bagal me bistar ki orr dekha... Toh maano jese mere perro ke neeche se zameen khisak gayi thi.

Saamne meri Aai...

Peeth ke bal bistar par padi hui thi. Muh se jhaag beh raha tha. Aur unki aankhein...

Unki aankhein ekdum khuli hui thi, maano baahar hi aa jaengi.

Unke seene ka kapda phata hua tha, neeche ka kapda bhi phata hua tha. Alag alag jagah se unke ang dikh rahe the.

"A-Aaiii!?"

Mein girta hua reng ke unke paas pohucha aur unhe jese hi mene chhiya...

Unka shareer hilke dhadaam se bistar se neeche gir gaya.

"Aaaaahhhhhhhh!"

Mein darr ke 2 kadam peeche hata, aur unhe seedha kiya toh... Wo bas aankhein khole hue thi.

"Aaaiii!!! Uthooo... Uthoo aaiii!!!"

Mene na jaane kitni guhaar lagaayi hongi. Par Aai ek baar bhi na uthi.

"Nahi... Nahiiiiiiiiiiiii!!? Aaaaaiiiiiii!!! Baaabbaaaaaa!!"

Apna gala phaad phaad ke mene unhe pukaara. Par mere Aai Baba dono ne hi koi jawaab nahi diya.

Mene kaapte hue haatho se apni wo hockey stick uthaayi aur dekha... Toh mujhe samajh aaya ki ispe jo khoon laga tha aur jo khoon Baba ke sarr se beh raha tha, wo shayad ek hi tha.

Aur ye sab sochte hi mein agle hi pal, wahi behosh ho gaya.

Jab meri neend khuli toh pata chala mein kisi aur hi jagah par tha. Ek anjaan jagah.

Mene dekha toh paaya ki saamne mere ek aadmi maujood tha, jo kareeb 30-32 saal ka prateet ho raha tha.

"Toh hosh aa gaya tumhe!?"

Uske sawaal par mene haa me sarr hilaaya. Mene gaur kiya ki wo bade hi acche kapde pehne hue tha.

"Aaj se tum mere saath rahoge. Kyuki... Tumhara ab apna ghar toh raha nahi... Hai na?"

Uski baat se mujhe sab kuch yaad aa gaya. Aur agle hi pal meri aankho se aasu behne lage. Mein khub roya. Par jitna mein udaas tha, uss se kahi zyaada mujhme gussa bhara hua tha. Aur ek josh tha, pratishodh lene ka.

"Bolo? Rahoge mere saath?"

Mere paas aur koi chaara nahi tha. Mene haa me sarr hilaaya aur bas...

Uss din se mein uss aadmi ke saath rehne laga. Uss aadmi ne mujhe kaha tha ki mein usse 'Dada' keh ke pukaaru. Toh mein usse Dada keh ke hi bulaane laga. Mujhe pata chala ki uss raat Dada ke kuch aadmi udhar se guzar rahe the. Aur mujhe waha dekh ke wo mujhe Dada ke paas le aaye the.

Dheere dheere jese jese meri umr badhne lagi, mein Dada ke saath kaam karne me aur bhi leen hota gaya.

Mujhe pata chala Dada kya kaam karte the. Drugs, aur avaidh cheezo ki smuggling. Daaru se leke harr ek cheez jisme kaala dhan rehta tha, wo sabhi ka dhanda Dada karte the. Mujhe kabhi isme buraayi nazar nahi aayi. Akhir itna paisa jo aa raha tha.

Mujhe pata chala ki kese inn sab kaamo ko kiya jaata tha. Dada mujhe harr choti sii choti baat samjhaate, jisse mein apne dimaag me baitha leta tha.

Par issi waqt mujhe ye bhi pata chala, ki uss raat meri Maa ko unhone maara hi nahi tha, balki unki izzat bhi looti thi aur berehmi se mere Aai Baba ki jaan lii thi. Tab se lekar ab tak... Mein bas tadap raha tha. Ki kab mujhe mauka mile, aur kab mein unn saare policewalo ko apne haatho se maut du.

"Tum badla lena chaahte ho?"

"Jii! Dada!"

Aur aaj wo din aa chuka tha. Mene akhir kaar apne badle ki bhaavna Dada ke saamne rakhi. Wo muskuraaye aur bole,

"Aadmi aur hathyaar mein dilwa dunga. Par maarna tumhe hai. Ki kaise tum maarna chaahte ho aur kaha pe... Tum bhi meri hi tarah kismat ke maare ho. Mujhe tum se badi umeede hai. Ek accha pradarshan rakhna.""

"Jii! Dada!"

Dada ki baat saaf thi. Wo mujhse kaafi kuch umeede liye baithe the. Aur mein unhe bilkul bhi niraash nahi karna chaahta tha.

Fir wo din aaya...

Mere jeevan ka sabse khush-haal din...

Saari jad toh wo thakur tha. Mene na keval apni zameen ke kaagaz, balki apni chaturayi ke chalte uski khud ki building bhi mene apne kabze me karwaa lii thi.

Jin police waalo ki mujhe talaash thi. Wo sab bhi mere changul me fasse hue the.

Iss waqt hum sabhi Thakur ki hi uss building me khade hue the. Aur upar...

Upar uchaayi par...

Thakur, aur wo sabhi police waale rassi se bandhe latke hue the, jo gidgida rahe the. Hawa me perr unke kisi bin paani ki machli ki tarah hil rahe the.

Aur aankho me unka wo khauf dekh, pata nahi kyu... Mere hontho par apne aap ek daraavni sii muskuraahat felti jaa rahi thi. Mujhe ye sab accha lag raha tha. Aanand aa raha tha mujhe ye sab karne me.

"Haaah... Hahahahahaha~"

Mein paagalo ki tarah hassne laga. 10 saal... 10 saal tak mene intezaar kiya tha apna badla lene ke liye.

Aaj... Mere haatho me Baba ki dii hui wahi hockey thi. Perro me mehnge joote, jinka Baba ko hamesha shauk rehta tha. Aur aaj unn haraam ke pillo ki bilakhti hui awaazein jo 10 saal pehle mere Aai Baba par garajti thi.

Mene na keval Aai Baba ki zameen wapas lii thi balki uss madarchod Thakur ki zameen bhi hadap lii thi. Aur inn sab ko karne me meri chaturayi toh kaam aayi hi par Dada ne bhi mera boht saath diya.

"Udaa do ek ek ko..."

Mene ant me ishaara kiya aur tabhi...

*Bang* *Bang*
*Bang* *Bang*
*Bang* *Bang*

Goliyo ki awaaz poori building me goonj uthi. Upar khade aadmiyo ne apni bandooko se ek ke baad ek goliya unn aadmiyo ke shareer me ghop dii...

Aur...

Goli padte hi, unn sabhi ke jism se aise khoon ke chheete uchak ke bikhar rahe the maano jese hawa me koi rocket phoot ke chingaariya bikher raha ho. Unke ang goli ke lagte chithado ki tarah shareer se nikal ke alag hoke gir rahe the.

Waqai! Aaj mene khoon ki aatishbaazi karwa dii thi.

Neeche mein apne haath felaaye aankhein band kiye, apne Dushmano ke khoon me naha raha tha. Aur hontho par ek santushti bhari muskaan bikhri hui thi.

Jab sab kuch shaant hua toh Dada, jo kuch dur khade hue the wo bole,

"Aaj! Aaj hamaare khaas, Ashu ne apna badla liya hai. Jiska wo 10 saal se intezaar kar raha tha. Aaj ye building bhi uski hui aur uski apni zameen bhi. Isliye... Aaj iss khushi ke mauke par mein kuch ghoshna karna chaahta hu..."

Hum sabhi Dada ki baatein bade hi dhyaan se sunn rahe the.

"Aaj se... Ashu, 'Aatish' ke naam se jaana jaega. Aur ye building... 'Jalsa' ke naam se."

"Aatish Bhau! Aatish Bhau! Aatish Bhau! Aatish Bhau!"

Aur bas...

Mere naye naam ke naare lagne shuru ho gaye. Mein khush tha. Behad khush. Ajeeb sii muskaan feli thi mere hontho par jo jaa hi nahi rahi thi.

Dade mere kareeb aaye aur mere kandhe par haath rakhe aur bole,

"Aaj se ye akkha Mumbai ko tu bhi sambhalega. Mein jald hi yaha se chala jaunga... Tab... Poora ka poora ye Mumbai tere haatho me hoga. Mujhe niraash na karna."

"Jii! Dada!" Mene muskuraate hue jawaab diya.

Aur Dada chale gaye. Ek baat thi, jo mujhe pata thi. Yahi... Ki mene aaj itihaas likh diya tha.

***

Apne haatho me ek tasveer liye Aatish iss waqt Jalsa ke hi basement me apni puraani yaado ko yaad kar raha tha.

"Dekh! Mene kaha tha na... Tere liye uphaar hai ek."

Usne kehte hue jeb se ek kaagaz nikaala,

"Ye dekh Aai! Iss poori basement ki diwaaro par sone ki parat chadh jaegi. Ussi ka contract hai ye. Tu kehti rahi na? Tujhe chaandi ka mandir chaahiye? Arre tere Ashu ne poora sone ka itna bada mandir banwaya hai dekh..."

Usne photo ko ghumaaya, jese maano photo ko kuch dikha raha ho.

Saamne ek behad hi shaandaar boht bada sa sone ka mandir tha. Par...

Bas ek hi baat ajeeb thi. Wo ye ki wo ekdum khaali tha.

"Ab tu puchegi ki bhagwaan kaha hai? Tu jaanti hai na? Mein Bhagwan pe vishvaash nahi karta. Mein toh keval tujh pe aur Baba pe vishvaash karta hu. Hahaha~ Kaam karo toh bada karo..."

Wo hassa...

Par tabhi...

"Ekdum sahi kaha..."

Usse peeche se ek awaaz sunaayi dii. Aur ye sunte hi Aatish ke pal bhar ke liye raungte khade ho gaye.

Wo forun hi palta par...

*Pooooooooooowwww*

Ek zordaar ghusa uske chehre par aake kisi patthar ki tarah laga aur uss impact se Aatish ki body hawa me uchak ke peeche jaa giri.

*Craaaassshhhhhhhh*

Peeche rakhi ek table bhi gir gayi aur saath hi saath usme rakha samaan bhi.

Uske haath se uski hocky ki stick bhi gir chuki thi aur saath hi saath wo contract ka paper aur wo tasveer bhi.

Jese hi Aatish khada hua usne dekha ki saamne ek ladka maujood tha. Jo ek kaala hoodie aur kaala hi jeans pehne hue tha. Yaha tak ki uski aankho ke neeche bhi kaale rang ka kapda bandha hua tha.

Aatish : K-Kaun ho tum!?? Yaha andar kese aaye...!?

Par jese usse samajh aaya ki sawaal karna fizool hai aur yahi soch Aatish ne fataak se apne coat ki inner jeb se apna revolver nikala aur wo saamne khade ladke par chalaane hi wala tha ki tabhi...

*Craaaaaasssssshhhhhhhh*

Uske haath pe ek daaru ki bottle udd ke aayi aur seedha uske haath pe hi phoot gayi.

"Aaaaarrghh!"

Revolver ke neeche girte hi wo ladka aage badha aur uski collor pakad ke ghoose pe ghoose dena shuru kar diya.

"Aaaaarrghhhh!! Ughhhhh... Haraamiyo baahar aao jaldi... Kaha chhupe ho?"

Usne apne pantaro ko bulaana chaaha...

Par... Jese koi fayda hi nahi tha. Kyuki koi nahi aaya.

Chheena jhapti me jab Aatish ne kuch vaar kiye toh uss ladke ke muh se kapda hatt gaya aur saamne uss parichit chehre ko dekh uski aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi...

"T-Tummm!???"

"Haan! Mein!"

Saamne khada wo ladka koi aur nahi, Veer hi tha.

Veer ko dekh Aatish forun hi bhaaga. Aur lift ki orr gaya.

[Wo bhaag raha hai Master! Chase him down!]

Veer tezzi se aage badha aur next second hi...

*Ding*

[Mission : Take Down Aatish!

Rewards : 1) ??? Points.
2) One Random Free Skill.

Time Limit : 30 minutes.]

Veer ko Mission mil chuka tha par iss waqt mission padhne ka time bilkul nahi tha uske paas. Wo toh aaj wese hi Aatish ko maarne hi aaya tha, chaahe mission mile ya nahi.

*Huffff* *Hufff*

Tezz tezz saasein liye Aatish lift me ghus upar seedha second floor par jaane laga.

But too bad for him. Veer ne neeche se hi check kar liya tha ki lift kis floor par jaa rahi hai. Aur agle hi pal Veer stairs ki madad se seedha second floor ki orr bhaaga.

Lift khulte hi jese hi Aatish baahar nikla, toh saamne hi Veer khada hua tha.

Aatish : Huh???

Aatish ko yu pakad Veer ne usse kamre me fek diya. Ye wahi kamra tha, jaha rassiya hi rassiya latki hui thi.

Kisi me upar tezaab bhara tha toh kisi me eete, toh kisi me lohe ki rods.

Aatish : Veeeeeeeerrrr!! Tum yaha aa zaroor gaye... Par laut ke ab kabhi nahi jaa paoge... Tumne yaha aa ke sabse badi galti kii hi Veeeeeeerrr...

Wo cheenkha... Iss umeed me ki shayad uske ye kehne se Veer ka manobal dagmagaega.

Par Veer toh jese kisi faulaad ki tarah saamne nidar hoke khada hua tha. Uska seena haafne se upar neeche ho raha tha. Aur aankhein ekdum laal thi. Gusse se bharpoor.

Agle hi pal dono ek dusre par jhapte. Ek dusre ke kapde pakad wo jese haawi hone ki koshish kar rahe the.

Kuch punches Veer deta toh kuch Aatish usse maarta. Par most of the time, Veer dodge kar le raha tha. Jiske kaaran Aatish ki haalat jald hi kharaab ho rahi thi.

Abhi wo ek dusre ko jakde hi hue the ki tabhi... Aatish haivaano ki tarah muskuraaya aur...

*Pulls*

Usne bagal me latak rahi ek rassi kheench dii.

Upar ki ceiling ka box palta aur...

*Craaaaaaaaaaassssssshhhhh!*

Saari lohe ki roads neeche giri. Veer jaanta tha ki upar rods thi. Wo Aatish se ek kadam aage hi chal raha tha. Usne pehle hi nazar maar lii thi upar.

Aatish Veer ke changul se chooth peeche kuda aur Veer bhi kayi backflip maarte hue peece ho gaya.

'Huh!??'

[Moves apne aap niklenge. Mene kaha tha na master. Basic Martial Arts skill aapko parkour aur acrobatics me kaafi madad karengi.]

'Got it!'

Veer ko bachta dekh Aatish daant peeste hue bhaagne ke liye hua par tabhi...

Veer ne ek rassi haath me lii aur wo Aatish ke paas jaa pohucha. Usne Aatish ko ek laat dii...

*Poooowwwww*

Aur Aatish peeche ki orr gira...

'Got you!'

Aur agle hi pal Veer ne muskuraate hue haath me lii hui rassi kheench dii.

*Craasssssssssshhhhhhh*

*Thud* *Thud* *Thud*

Dherr saare Eete uske upar girne lage.

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh"

Wo chillaaya aur apna jese tese sarr usne bachaaya. Par itna toh saaf tha ki uski peeth ki ek aad haddi toh toot hi gayi hongi.

Veer dheere dheere uske kareeb aaya aur usne Eeto ko hata ke Aatish ko ghaseet ke baahar nikaala.

Abhi wo Aatish ko aur maarta ki tabhi Aatish ne chalaaki se apne coat ki jeb me chhupi ek pocket knife nikaali aur Veer ke perr me ghop dii...

"Aaaaaaaarrrrrggghhhh.... Ssssss"

Veer jese hi gira toh Aatish khud ko churra ke lift ki orr bhaaga.

[He's running away master! Oh Noooo~ Are you okayyyy!?]

'Fuuuucccckkkkk!!!! Aaaarrrghhhh!'

[Jaldi! Apna rumaal use kariye. Hum koi bhi aham clue nahi chorr sakte. Aur isliye toh mene aapko gloves pehnaaye hai.]

Pari ki baat sunn Veer ne jaldi jaldi apna rumaal nikaal ke apne muh ki madad se rumaal ko taang par laga ke usme ek gathaan baandhi aur apni bleeding ko jese tese thoda roka.

Aatish third floor pe gaya tha. Udhar se hi secret passage tha jo seedha control room ko hote hue nikalta tha. Control room bole toh wahi room jaha par baith ke Aatish sabhi Cameras ki footages pe nazar rakhta tha.

Uthate hue Veer bhi apna dard ignore kar seedha third floor pe jaa pohucha. Aatish ne jese hi dekha ki Veer peeche se aa raha hai, wo dekh ke aaj pehli baar usse ghabraahat mehsoos ho rahi thi.

Veer bhi langda raha tha. Par... Uske bawajood wo dheere dheere aage badh raha tha. Aise jese maano wo jaanta tha ki aage kya hone waala hai.

Aatish haafte hue bhaagte bhaagte jese hi darwaaza kholne ke liye hua toh usse ek aur jhatka laga.

Darwaaza dusri taraf se locked tha.

"Huhhhh!??? Ye... Ye darwaaza!? Haraam ke pillo tum sab so gaye kya??? Baahar aao madarchodo... Kis baat ki tankha khaate ho tum?""

Par usse kya pata tha... Ki Veer yaha poori taiyaari se aaya tha. Veer ne hi control room se saare cameras off kiye the. Veer ne hi uss darwaaze par peeche se lock lagaaya tha. Veer ne hi uske pantaro ko ek ek karke daboch ke maar ke unhe baandh diya tha.

Sab kuch...

Wo itni derr pehle kar chuka tha. Ab baaki tha..
Toh bas badi machli ka shikaar karna.

"Veeeeeeerrrrrr!!!! Aaj ya toh tum bachoge ya toh mein." Aatish ghabraate hue chillaaya aur wo aage badh ke Veer pe hamla karne hi waala tha ki tabhi...

"Huhhhh?"

Uska perr ek rassi ke phande me phassa aur tabhi...

Uska poora ka poora shareer hawa me ulta jhool gaya.

Ek trap! Bilkul wesa hi jesa Aatish ne Veer ke liye banaaya tha.

Veer aage dheere dheere badha aur usne Aatish ke neeche uss boht badi sii cheez se parda hata diya.

Aatish ne jese hi neeche dekha toh uski haalat patli ho gayi. Aaj pehli baar usse itna darr mehsoos ho raha tha. Apni jaan ka darr.

Neeche bada sa glass tank tha. Aur uss glass tank me... Wahi Magar maujood tha jisne Golu ki jaan lii thi.

Wahi Magar, yaani ki Aatish ka paaltu janwar urf Clutch.

"Na-Nahiiiiii!!!! Nahiiiii!!!" Usne apna sarr naa me hilaaya aur ghabraate hue Veer ko dekhne laga.

Neeche Magar uska jese wait hi kar raha tha aur uss magar ki aankhein itni khatarnaak lag rahi thi iss waqt ki Aatish shabdo me bhi baya nahi kar sakta tha.

"Aise hi... Aise hi tumne Golu ko maara tha... Mujh se marwaaya tha usse haan!? I will kill you in the exact same way!!!!!!"

Veer ne itna bol dheere dheere ussi pocket knife se rassi kaatna shuru kar dii, jo Aatish ne kuch derr pehle usse maari thi.

"Naaaaaaahiiiiiiiiiiiii.... Nahiiiiiiii Veeeeeeeeerrrr"

Wo chillaaya par....

*Splaaasssssssshhhh*

Tab tak boht derr ho chuki thi. Aur agle hi pal wo paani me jaa gira.

*Chhap* *Chhap*

Uske haath perr vyarth hi idhar udhar machalte hue baahar nikalne ka prayatn kar rahe the. Par...

Agle hi pal...

*Cruncccccchhhhhhhh*

Magar aage badha aur ek baar me hi Aatish ke sarr ko apne nukile daato me jakad usse daba diya...

"Aai!!!!" Bas... Yahi aakhiri shabd uske muh se nikla.

Uske baad... Poore tank ka saaf paani bas laal rang ke khoon hi khoon se bhar gaya.

Aur Veer apni bauhe sikode saamne ke iss manzar ko dekhta raha jab tak ki paani me ho rahi wo chhap chhap awaaz kam na ho gayi. Aur fir shaanti sii na chha gayi...

'It's over!'

[Yes master! Aap theek ho na?]

'I'm not fine. But...'

[???]

'Aatish ne teen badi galtiya kari thi.'

[Hmm?]

'Pehli ye... Ki usne mere kareebi jano ko chherra.'

[...]

'Dusri ye ki usne mujhe zinda chorr diya.'

[Master!]

'Aur teesri ye... ki usne aisa jaanwar paala jo apne hi maalik aur maalik ke dushmano me antar karna nahi jaanta.'

[Hmm!]

Pari kuch soch ke shaant ho gayi par tabhi...

*Ding*

['Mission : Take down Aatish!!!' has been completed.]

*Ding*

[120 points have been rewarded.]

*Ding*

[You have been rewarded a Random skill. ~ Hawkeye.]

*Ding*

[Past Illustration function is invoked.]

[Do you want to see Aatish' Past?]

'Huh???'

Veer chakit ekdum saamne ki orr dekh raha tha. Tank me Aatish ke kuch shareer ke hisse terr rahe the. Aur ussi ke upar system ki screen hawa me khuli hui thi.

'Ye sab..!?'

[Mene aapko bataya tha na master. Past Illustration function ke baare me... Aap yadi kisi vyakti ko maarte hai toh uske baad uska past padh sakte hai. So? Kya aap dekhna chaahte hai?]

Veer ne kuch socha aur fir haa me sarr hilaaya aur mann me hi 'Yes' keh diya.

Uske baad Aatish ka poora past Veer ke saamne ussi screen me likh ke aa gaya. Sab kuch.

Jab Veer ne wo sab padha toh uska sarr apne aap jhuk gaya.

[Master! Do you regret it now?]

'No! I don't... Pari! Usne Golu ki jaan lii. Aur na jaane kitne nirdosh logo ki jaan lii hogi usne. I don't regret it. It's finally over.'

[Yes! Aapko yaha se jaana chaahiye!]

'Hmmm! Par uss se pehle... Kuch kaam hai..'

Veer third floor se waapas basement me aaya jaha wahi sona ka mandir rakha hua tha.

Usne aage aake wahi hockey stick uthaayi aur wo contract bhi...

Aur wo tasveer bhi... Usme ek aadmi, ek aurat aur ek bacche ki tasveer thi.

Unn sabhi ko leke wo mandir ke kareeb aaya aur teeno cheeze usne mandir me hi rakh dii.

[Hmm? Maaasteeerr!?? W-Whyy!? Aapne...!?]

Veer ka behaviour Pari ke palle nahi pada tha aur isliye... Usne ye sawaal kiya. Iss Waqt toh Veer ko apne ghar ki orr bhaagna chaahiye tha aur sabse pehle apni chot ke baare me sochna chahiye tha. Par wo ulta yaha waapas aake dushman ki cheezo ko utha ke idhar se udhar kar raha tha.

Ye sab kuch Pari ke liye prashn janak tha.

Par...

Pari ke sawaal par...

Veer ke muh se ek hi uttar nikla...

"Maa... toh akhir Maa hoti hai... Pari!!!"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Issi ke saath yaha par khatam hota hai Aatish' arc. Slogan arc shuru hoega next update se. Tab tak ke liye like karke jaane ka pasand aaye toh aur comment karne ka. 😁

Dhanyavaad!
 
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Nice update bro it's really fantastic

Super update bhai Mazza AA gaya hai kya likha hai aapne bahut achcha superb

So emotional update bro so veer started changing from soft heartto stone heart let's see what he has in bag for future of his own ,family and aatish eagerly waiting for next update

Nice update bro

Nice update

Awesome update bro...


But short update

Amazing update ab veer badal gya he dekhte hain kya karta he kal 🧐🤔

Wonderful but little bit short update Werewolf bro., Aatish's life is getting longer and longer, story is just stuck around Aatish, bhai please give some movement to this amazing and unparallel story. "IT IS MY HUMBLE REQUEST TO YOU"

Jabardast Updatee

Nice update bhai

Ek dum jabardast update bhai.....

Aatish ke din poore hue, jald hi Veer uspar Kehar banke totega...

Super update hai Bhai

I hope veer strong ho jaaye iss sab ke baad. Nidhi kabhi bhi apne aapko theek se express nahi kar paati hai aur shayad isi wajah se wo veer se door ho rahi hai. Dekhte hai veer aatish ko kaise khatam karta hai. Damn good update.

Awesome update

Update was fantastic.i hope atish death will be more painful than Golu's.

Excellent update

Nice update bhai veer ki step mom aur uski step sister bar bar aisi situation me pad jata hai...🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣Veer ab kaise atish ke sath panga leta hai dekhte hai aage

Awesome fabulous update
Aaisa lag rha h killing mode on ho gaya h keep posting

M
Mast update bhaiya

Nice update bro

Awesome update


जोरदार खतरनाक शानदार जबरदस्त लाजवाब update bhai

बढ़िया बहुत ही बढ़िया
पर क्या इस मिशन के लिए कोई पॉइंट्स नहीं होने चाहिए थे
वैसे मैं आतिश का विश्वास को टूटते हुए देखना चाहता हूं
पर क्या वाकई वीर के लिए आसान होगा

Awesome update bhai...waiting for next update eagerly...

Super updated bro nice

Awesome update tha mere bhediye.

Now the action story bigins the heroine suhana. Baba re baba.

Shweta samajh hi gayi hogi.

:applause:
Superb update....
Keep it up

Aarohi regreted about her ignorance to the injustice done to veer in the past by knowing that how much veer cares about her and her family.that makes aarohi sad.
Nidhi and Pari the two main reason of veer's power today.
Suhana now trusted veer .After knowing veer knows the man who is behind Sonia to kill her she got surprised.veer checked the stats of suhana he got impressed.veer and suhana need to help each to tackle aatish.suhana helped veer to get back golu's cycle.
Amazing update...😍😍😍

Super wonderful update

Superb update bhai... :hug:

Next update kb aaega bhai

Awesome update bro maza aa gaya


Waiting for the next update bro

Awesome update bhai

Superb update

Awesome Update

zabardast

Fantastic super update

Awesome superb update

Nice update bhai

Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai bhai...
Nice and lovely update...

Were wolf... bhai aage se. Update 10 pm tak de dena please.... warna meri wife meri halat kharab kar degi ..... bol rahi thi ki tumahara mobile se ji nahi bharta kya ab usko kya bolun............ kyonki meri wife padhi likhi nahi hai ..... hi hi hi hi hi

romanchak update ..veer theek ho chuka hai aur uska ek hi maksad hai aatish ko jaan se maarna aur golu ki maut ka badla lena .
arohi ko jala diya apni baato se aur ab arohi bhi pasand karne lagi hai veer ke bhai ki tarah .

nidhi mam se uske flat pe jaake mila aur unka clip bhi pehna diya par ander jake pehnata to jyada sahi rehta 😁.. lipatate huye dekh liya bajuwali aurat ne 🤣..

aisa laga suhana se shreya ke job ko lekar mila veer par uska maksad kuch aur hi tha .
naam to pata chal gaya suhana se aur suhana ko direct keh diya ki wo aatish ko jaan se maarna chahta hai .
suhana ki bahut pehchan hai police aur baaki jagah par ye baat uske ghar me kisiko pata nahi .

par abhi ye ek raaz hai ki aatish sonia ke pichhe kyu pada hua hai yaa shayad wo bhau type aadmi .

shweta to wakai ghamandi aur ghatiya kism ki aurat hai jisne direct keh diya ki wo veer ko nahi jaanti aur uski ek hi beti hai bhumika 😡.. pari sahi kehti hai ki wo shweta se nafrat karti hai 😍 ek pari hi hai jo sabse jyada najdik hai veer ke bhale wo insan nahi hai 😍..


aur veer ko bhi us kamini aurat se koi rishta nahi rakhna chahiye .

Nice Update bro
Keep Posting

Nice now it's time for avange!!!

Fantastic update...

Awasome super update

Behtareen shaandaar update bhai

Superb update

Awesome updates

It’s like story has moved into a dark territory…. Waiting for next interesting update!

Boht zabardast update

Amazing update

Whether Pari really cares for Veer or has fallen in love with Veer, I doubt sometimes :roflol: Nidhi mam uff wherever she is mentioned I went crazy. :cmouth: Like every time a lot remained incomplete this time too there is a fear that the story of these two may not remain incomplete :verysad: When a person is unable to explain then we should try to understand ourselves. :blush: Now Aarohi realizes but Veer's behavior leaves her shocked, anyway he has to change himself with time and circumstance. :D When our loved ones refuse to recognize us, it hurts a lot, only veer can understand this pain. :sigh2: I want to see Aatish's painful death. :evillaugh:
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...

★ Fabulous Mind Blowing Update Werewolf Bhaiji... 🔥


★ Aarohi ko Veer ki itni care krna Accha lagne laga hai jisse uske dil me veer ke liye pyar umad rha hai (incest wala🤭)..?

★ Kya veer Aarohi ko uski sari galti yaad dila rha ho jo uske sath ghr me ho rahe ataychar par bhi nhi bolti thi..?

★ Aur Veer Ka Yu Achanak Badla Hua Behavior kya ye Atish ke liye tha jo ab uska kaal banne wala hai...?

★ Kya Ragini Ke dil se vivek nikal chuka hai aur ab uski jaga Veer lete jaa rha hai...?

★ Kya ragini kbhi ghr wapas jyegi yha humesa ke liye veer ki ho jyegi..?

★ My Favorite Nidhi Maam ko Aur kitna intezaar krna pdega Veer ke liye...?

★ Kya Veer suhana ko apne sath mila kar uski help le kar bhut kuch kar skta hai..?

★ Kya veer suhana se madad se atish ko sabak sikhane wala hai..?



Dekhate Hai Aage Au6Kya Hote Wala hai Veer Ki life me...?? 🤭







Waiting for next update... 🙏

Atish sahi khel gaya sala lawde ne wahi pattern phir se follow kiya mgr is bar Veer bacha nhi paya jaise taise ker wo age barh rha ta mgr last sb kiye karaye per pani pir gaya
Or Golu ko wo magarmach maar diya
uski maut ka ilzam khud apne ser liya Veer ne jise wo bachana chahta ta wo usko bacha na paya utla uske hi hathu uski maut karwa di gayi guilt itna ziada k hosh kuch na rha
Buri tarah se pita us k bandu ne
lakin jism ki maar se ziyada mentally jo use tora wo bohat hi ziyada effective ta
sambhale nhi sambhal rha ta wo or phir Kavya ko Nidhi ko bolana para
Veer halat uski samjh se pare ti lakin apne hisab se wo poori koshish ki lakin respond 0 finally jb Pari us hosh me lai
reality dikhayi k atish sirf golu tak nhi rukne wala wo phir se ae ga or agli dafa koi b ho sakta hai Juhi tak b safe nhi reh pai gi to is se pehle agar wo na sambhal saka to sb kuch koh de ga
Pari ka hona na hona 1 barabar laga mujhe kia faida us k hone ka
Jb kuch dhang ka ho hi nhi rha
Mission fail k chalte 90 point cut ker li
sali burchudi😏
wo koi aam insan to nhi phir b ye sb kyu
khair abhi k liye itna hi in dinu
bohat tight schedule raha or yaqeen jane k is time b bohat thaka howa hu dimagh k b lawde lage pare dill chah raha hai k lambi taan k so jau kuch time k liye take jism or dimagh thora relaxed to ho jai in dinu fields me busy ta season chal rha hai rice ki field ka so usi me busy ta jis k chalte ider time nhi de saka is liye so sorry
Revo kuch adhora hai meri gair hazir dimaghi ki wajah se to itne se kaam chala lijiye ga jald hi sabhi gile shikve dour ker du ga
Keep going😊

Superb update

Wah wah wah wah🤣🤣🤣

Tharki Pari Haye Haye :protest: :protest2:

Khair intresting update hai
Bola tha maine ki nidhi aur veer ratein rangeen karenge :kissie:

Khair aarohi bhi lattu hoti jari hai ab Pari ki tharak puri hogi :lotpot:

Let's see whats happen next


Tharki Pari Haye Haye :protest: :protest2:

Well
This is the true character of the protagonist we all wanted
Fearless Confident and audacious

Nice update...

NICE update!!
Golf's death will be avenged...

Sudden change in Veer's personality is really intriguing..

Veer surely Badshah hone ke rah mein chal para hey!!!

Sandaar update

Fantastic update ajj hi read ki hai maza a gya veer main changes axhi hain chalo daikhtein hain Atish ka kya hota hai next update main good luck veer

Nice update bhai

Wahhhhh jabrdast mindblowing superbbb speechless update.......
waiting for next update.......

Nice update

Awesome Update Bhai Keep Posting

Bahot hi badhiya story he 2 hi din me 38 update pad dale...

Fantastic 😍😍😍😊 update

Superb awsm update to gud

निःसंदेह वीर अब वह नहीं रहा....
क्यूंकि दर्द व हालात केवल इंसान को जुझना ही नहीं सिखाता बल्कि कठोर भी बनाता है....
वीर एक इंसान ही तो है.... जो अब चलन सीख रहा है..... इसलिए वह इस ठोकर पर गिरा....
अब वह उठेगा तो आतिश की विश्वास की नींव ही नहीं पूरा महल ही ढह जाएगा....
उसके दर्द व संघर्ष के पथ पर निधि निधि एक छाँव है, एक दवा है, असल में वीर शख्सियत की आत्मा है...
उन दोनों के बीच ज़ज्बात के ज्वार भाटा का वर्णन अति सुंदर व हृदय स्पर्षी है
बढ़िया बहुत बढ़िया
प्रतीक्षा रहेगी अगले अपडेट की

Bhai aage se update 10 pm de dena please... main itni der tak update ke intjaar me mobile chalata hoon ki meri wife gussa ho jati hai ........ meri wife kisi rat ko mujhe pel degi...... hi hi hi hi hi

Awesome update bhai waiting for next update

Bhai agar aane wale update me aatish ki mot hone wali he to uski mot bahut buri honi chahiye sab ki aankho me dar dekhne ka shokh he na usko wahi dar aatish ki aankho me hona chahiye apani mot ka dar or uska bhi wishavas tutana chahiye jese wo dusre ke sath karta he

Vj4u ki story ke bad agar koi achchi lagi to vo aapki he..

Bahut gap late ho yar app but you have your problem also
Great updates👍👍👍👏👏😊😊

Zabardast UpdaT

Agla update kb tk ayega bhai

Waiting bhau

:congrats: For completed 1.1M views on your story thread.....

Bhai update ka milega ya nahi aj ye to bata do

Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Wating bhava

Waiting bro





waiting for bigbang

Eagerly awaiting for it.....


Bhai ho sake toh update thoda jaldi dediya kare.....bahut late ho jata hai par kya kare bina apka update pare neend bhi nahi aati


waiting for update
Update 39 has been posted.
 

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Mega Update

Update - 39 ~ A Mother's Love will always be Eternal

[This update contains explicit gore scenes. Beware!]

Ab tak...

Veer uske jaate hi apne bagal me rakhi ek cheez ko dekhne laga aur uss par haath dheere se rakha usne...

'Kal... I promise... I will take him down...'

Usne mann me thaana, aur usse cheez ko zorr se bheench liya.

Aur Wo cheez thi...

Golu ki cycle...


Ab aage...

Wo mahina tha March ka. Jab thand ka mausam jaa raha tha aur garmiyo ka mausam aana shuru ho chuka tha. Mein apni Maa ki goad me sarr rakh ke laita hua tha.

Bade hi pyaar se wo apna ek paav jhula rahi thi taaki mujhe neend jaldi aa jaaye, par aaj jese mujhe neend aa hi nahi rahi thi.

Mein aur Maa ghar ke andar hi neeche zameen par chataayi bicchaaye baithe the. Ya yu kahu, ki Maa baithi thi aur mein laita hua tha. Ghar kehna bhi galat hoga. Ek chota sa hissa tha chaar diwaaro ka jisme upar se khappar ki chhat thi aur darwaaze ke naam pe bas ek toota foota lakdi ka darwaaza.

"Aai!?"

Mere pukaarne par meri Aai ne mujhe jhukte hue dekha aur boli,

"Tu abhi tak soya nahi Ashu?"

"Nahi Aai! Mujhe neend hi nahi aa rahi hai."

"Accha? Aur kyu nahi aa rahi hai mere lalla ko neend?"

"Aai! Mein ye soch raha tha, kal hamaare ghar wo 3-4 police waale kyu aaye the?"

Mere ye sawaal karte hi mene dekha ki Aai ke chehre par agle hi pal chinta aa gayi aur wo kisi soch me pad gayi.

"Aai?"

"H-Huh?? Kuch nahi lalla. Tu apne khel kood aur padhayi par dhyaan diya kar samjha?"

Aai ne thoda uchi awaaz me bola toh mein shaant ho gaya. School toh naam maatr ka tha. Hum sabhi bacche jaate, teacher aata ya nahi aata baat ek hi thi. Keval unhi ke upar dhyaan zyaada dete the teacher jinke baap ke paas paisa zyaada hota tha.

Mere Baba toh badi mushqil se meri school fees de paate the. Abhi mein Baba ke hi baare me soch raha tha ki utne me ghar ka darwaaza khula aur Baba andar aa gaye.

"Babaaa!"

Mein utha aur Baba se lipat gaya.

"Hahahaha~ Mera beta!! Aaj tere liye tohfa laaya hu. Wahi jiske baare me tu roz charcha kiya karta tha."

Mene Baba ko prashn bhari nazro se dekha toh unhone mujhe thoda dur karte hue apne peeche se ek jhola nikaala aur usse jese hi khola toh meri aankhein hairaani aur khushi dono ke maare felti chali gayi.

"Y-Ye toh..."

"Hahahaha~ Ye raha tumhara tohfa."

"Mera tohfaaaa..."

Mein chillaaate hue uss par jhapta. Aur kyu nahi jhapatata? Saamne mere ek hockey stick maujood thi. Roz mein maidaan me khelne jaata tha. Waha hum sabhi hockey khelte the. Kuch logo ke paas hockey stick thi toh kuch bas lakdiyo se apna kaam chalaate the.

Roz mein Baba ko iss baare me bataata tha aur wo meri baat sunke sarr hila dete the. Par mujhe nahi pata tha ki wo meri baat ko aise hi poora kar denge. Aaj mein boht khush tha. Kitni chamak rahi thi meri hockey stick. Kal jab mein apne dosto ko dikhaunga toh kitna jalenge sabhi.

Wese toh yadi aap accha khelo toh pradesh starr par khelne ka bhi mauka diya jaata tha. Par ye mauka keval 18 umr se upar waalo ke liye tha. Aur mujhe 18 ka hone me abhi 5 saal baaki the.

"Itna kharcha? Kyu??? Aap jaante hai hum wese hi kitni pareshaani me hai fir bhi?"

Aai ne chintit nazro se Baba ko dekhte hue kaha.

"Arre theek hai ab... Kab se laga hua tha wo... Kabhi kabhi chalta hai."

"Kabhi kabhi...? Arre ghar ki sthiti ka bhi toh dhyaan rakhiye."

"Mein sab dhyaan rakh raha hu meri priye. Tumhi batao... Kya mene tumlogo ke alaawa kabhi kisi aur baare me socha hai?"

"Ab... Ab aap aisa bolenge toh mein kya hi vrodh kar paungi?"

"Hahaha~ Tum chinta mat karo. Sab sahi ho jaega."

Na jaane Aai Baba kya baat kar rahe the par mein itna toh jaanta tha ki hamaare ghar ki aarthik sthiti boht kamzor thi.

"Aai! Tumhari kya khwaaish hai?"

Mene apni hockey ko rakhte hue pucha. Toh Aai muskuraayi aur bagal me rakhe ek chote se lakdi ke bane mandir ko dekhne lagi.

"Meri khwaaish? Meri khwaaish toh bas yahi hai ki tu ek boht bada aadmi bane. Aur ye jo mandir hai na... Mein isse poori chaandi ka banwaana chaahti hu. Par wo tabhi mumkin hoga jab tu bada aadmi banega samjha?"

"Hmmm!"

"Jaa ab so jaa."

Na chaahte hue bhi, mujhe laitna pada. Par neend toh aaj jese meri aankho se koso dur thi. Mein karwat leke laita hua tha kaafi derr se aur isliye shayad Aai Baba ko laga ki mein so gaya hu.

Aur wo baatein karne lage. Par mein jaag raha tha. Aur issi kaaran mujhe kayi saari baatein pata chali jo wese mujhe kabhi nahi pata thi.

"Aaj aap ko itna mehnga tohfa laane ki kya zaroorat thi waqai..."

"Tum abhi bhi uske peeche lagi ho. Arre baccha hai. Aur wo mene apni jama punji se liya hai uske liye."

"Yadi koi kitaab laake dete toh bhi koi baat hoti..."

"Khel se bhi aadmi bada aadmi ban sakta hai. Aur Ashu ko khel me ruchi hai toh hume toh usse uss taraf badhaava dena hi chaahiye na?"

"Aapke saamne meri ek na chalti. Accha wo... fir kya hua? Hamari zameen ka? Mujhe boht chinta ho rahi hai. Yadi wo hamaare haath se gayi, toh kya hoga hamaara?"

"Hmm! Uss kameene ne chhal se hamaari zameen ke kaagzaat chori karwaaye hai. Aur ab hume kese bhi karke unhe waapas lena hai."

"Wahi puch rahi hu aap se. Kal police waale bhi aaye the. Kitni dhamki deke gaye hume. Sab mile hue hai. Upar se... Upar se mujhe toh unn police waalo ke iraade bilkul theek na lag rahe..."

"Kya kehti ho? Kya kal unn ne...?"

"Hmm! Aapne shayad gaur nahi kiya. Par wo sabhi mere badan ko gandi nazar se dekh rahe the."

"Unn haraam ke pillo ki toh mein..."

"Shaant! Ashu uth jaega!"

"Hmm! Mujhe ab wo kadam uthaana hi padega..."

"??"

"Bhulo mat ki mein uske hi ghar me kaam karta hu. Mujhe pata hai usne kaagzaat kaha rakhe honge... Bas ek baar haath aa jaaye..."

"Choriii??"

"Chori nahi hai ye... Ye hamaara apna haq hai priye! Ye toh hamaari zameen hai. Uss thakur ko yadi waha building banwaani hai toh banwaaye. Par hamaaari kheti ki zameen ko chorr ke banwaaye. Aur hum apna haq leke rahenge. Bhale hi mujhe uske ghar se apne kagzaat kyu na lene pade."

"Par... Par yadi uss thakur ko pata chala toh..."

"Pata chala bhi toh kya? Kam se kam hamaare paas... kachehri me dikhaane ke liye kagzaat toh rahenge."

"Kachehri toh hume surakshit rakh legi par uske baad kya? Wo haraami thakur kuch bhi kar sakta hai. Yadi hamaare Ashu ko kuch ho gaya toh?"

"Bilkul nahi! Tum kal ek kaam karna... Ashu ko maidaan khelne bhej dena. Jese hi mein kaagaz leke aaunga hum seedhe dusre thaane chalenge aur kachehri bhi jaenge. Vakeel ko dene ke liye hai paisa humaare paas. Bas hume jald se jald sab kuch karna hoga. Iss se pehle ki wo thakur hamaare vakeel ko khareed paaye."

"Kya aapko waqai lagta hai ki hum safal honge?"

"Bhagwaan ke ghar derr hai, andherr nahi!"

"Hmmm! Aur... Hamara sabzi aur phal ka dhandha toh accha hai hi par aapke mochi ke dhande ka kya hua?"

"Aaj acchi kamaayi hui. Wo jinki haweli hai na? Singh sahab kii? Wo aaj mujhe haweli me bulwaaye the."

"Kyaa?"

"Haa! hahaha~ Arre unke joote videsh se aaye hai. Aur tum jaanti hi ho ki jooto ka mujhe kitna shauk hai. Mene joote ke baare me itna sab kuch bataaya unhe ki wo khush ho gaye aur meri acchi khaasi kamaayi ho gayi."

"Chaliye! Ye toh badi hi acchi baat hai."

Aai, Baba kuch derr yu baat karke so gaye the. Par unki baate mere dimaag me hi raat bhar ghumti rahi.

Agli subah wahi hua. Aai ne naashte me mujhe roti dii aur bas aam ka achaar. Mein thoda boht khaaya aur tab tak sooraj sarr ko chadhne par tha.

Din hote hi Aai ne mujhe maidaan me jaane keh diya. Mujhe pata tha ghar me kuch sahi nahi hai aur isliye mene jaane se mana kar diya.

"Ab jaata kyu nahi!? Wese toh roz ghar me laga rahega. Ab jab Baba tere liye hockey le aaye hai toh jaa na... Dikha apne dosto ko... Kyu nahi jaa raha ab!?"

"Mujhe nahi jaana..."

"Tu... Jaata hai ya mein pitaayi karu teri...!?"

Aai ne jhaadu uthaayi toh mein gusse me bina hockey uthaaye hi bhaag gaya. Mujhe rona aa raha tha. Ek toh mein itni chinta kar raha tha upar se Aai ne meri bhawnao ko samjha hi nahi. Hmph!

Gusse aur udaasi ke chalte mein poora din maidaan me raha. Ghar gaya hi nahi.

Jab shaam hui aur andhera hone ko aaya tab hi mein utha aur ghar ki orr jaane laga.

Hamaara ghar thoda ucche sthaan par tha. Thoda sa pahaadi ilaaka tha. Wese Mumbai me pahaad nahi the par baahri chhetr me kuch kuch hote the jinpe log makaan bana kar guzaara karte the.

Jese hi mein kacchi sadak se hote hue apne ghar ke paas pohucha toh...

Mujhe nazar aaya ki ghar ke baahar se 3 se 4 police waale nikal rahe the. Unki shaqale mujhe boht acche se yaad thi. Kyuki yahi log kal bhi aaye the.

Wo ghar se baahar nikle aur jaldbaazi me bhaag gaye. Mein thoda chintit hote ghar ke nazdeek aaya toh paaya ki andar se laalten jalne ki roshni baahar sadak tak aa rahi thi.

"Aai!?? Babaaa!?"

Awaaz lagaate hue mein jese hi andar aaya toh...
Meri aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi. Saamne ke drishya ko dekh meri rooh kaanp gayi. Ek pal me mere shareer ke raungte khade ho gaye. Dil zorro se dhadakne laga. Aur darr ke maare mera badan kaapne laga.

Mein waha aise jam gaya tha jese mene koi bhoot dekh liya ho.

"N-Nahiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!"

Mein cheenkha... Aur ladkhada ke aage badha...

Saamne...

Saamne mere Baba ka sarr phata hua tha. Unke sarr se poora khoon hi khoon beh raha tha. Khoon ke chheete diwaaro par bikhre hue tha. Zameen par khoon behte hue felta jaa raha tha.

Aur unke bagal se...

Meri hockey stick rakhi hui thi, jis par...

Khoon hi khoon laga hua tha.

"Baaabaaaaaaaaa!!!"

Mein firse cheekha... Aur thar-tharaate hue bagal me bistar ki orr dekha... Toh maano jese mere perro ke neeche se zameen khisak gayi thi.

Saamne meri Aai...

Peeth ke bal bistar par padi hui thi. Muh se jhaag beh raha tha. Aur unki aankhein...

Unki aankhein ekdum khuli hui thi, maano baahar hi aa jaengi.

Unke seene ka kapda phata hua tha, neeche ka kapda bhi phata hua tha. Alag alag jagah se unke ang dikh rahe the.

"A-Aaiii!?"

Mein girta hua reng ke unke paas pohucha aur unhe jese hi mene chhiya...

Unka shareer hilke dhadaam se bistar se neeche gir gaya.

"Aaaaahhhhhhhh!"

Mein darr ke 2 kadam peeche hata, aur unhe seedha kiya toh... Wo bas aankhein khole hue thi.

"Aaaiii!!! Uthooo... Uthoo aaiii!!!"

Mene na jaane kitni guhaar lagaayi hongi. Par Aai ek baar bhi na uthi.

"Nahi... Nahiiiiiiiiiiiii!!? Aaaaaiiiiiii!!! Baaabbaaaaaa!!"

Apna gala phaad phaad ke mene unhe pukaara. Par mere Aai Baba dono ne hi koi jawaab nahi diya.

Mene kaapte hue haatho se apni wo hockey stick uthaayi aur dekha... Toh mujhe samajh aaya ki ispe jo khoon laga tha aur jo khoon Baba ke sarr se beh raha tha, wo shayad ek hi tha.

Aur ye sab sochte hi mein agle hi pal, wahi behosh ho gaya.

Jab meri neend khuli toh pata chala mein kisi aur hi jagah par tha. Ek anjaan jagah.

Mene dekha toh paaya ki saamne mere ek aadmi maujood tha, jo kareeb 30-32 saal ka prateet ho raha tha.

"Toh hosh aa gaya tumhe!?"

Uske sawaal par mene haa me sarr hilaaya. Mene gaur kiya ki wo bade hi acche kapde pehne hue tha.

"Aaj se tum mere saath rahoge. Kyuki... Tumhara ab apna ghar toh raha nahi... Hai na?"

Uski baat se mujhe sab kuch yaad aa gaya. Aur agle hi pal meri aankho se aasu behne lage. Mein khub roya. Par jitna mein udaas tha, uss se kahi zyaada mujhme gussa bhara hua tha. Aur ek josh tha, pratishodh lene ka.

"Bolo? Rahoge mere saath?"

Mere paas aur koi chaara nahi tha. Mene haa me sarr hilaaya aur bas...

Uss din se mein uss aadmi ke saath rehne laga. Uss aadmi ne mujhe kaha tha ki mein usse 'Dada' keh ke pukaaru. Toh mein usse Dada keh ke hi bulaane laga. Mujhe pata chala ki uss raat Dada ke kuch aadmi udhar se guzar rahe the. Aur mujhe waha dekh ke wo mujhe Dada ke paas le aaye the.

Dheere dheere jese jese meri umr badhne lagi, mein Dada ke saath kaam karne me aur bhi leen hota gaya.

Mujhe pata chala Dada kya kaam karte the. Drugs, aur avaidh cheezo ki smuggling. Daaru se leke harr ek cheez jisme kaala dhan rehta tha, wo sabhi ka dhanda Dada karte the. Mujhe kabhi isme buraayi nazar nahi aayi. Akhir itna paisa jo aa raha tha.

Mujhe pata chala ki kese inn sab kaamo ko kiya jaata tha. Dada mujhe harr choti sii choti baat samjhaate, jisse mein apne dimaag me baitha leta tha.

Par issi waqt mujhe ye bhi pata chala, ki uss raat meri Maa ko unhone maara hi nahi tha, balki unki izzat bhi looti thi aur berehmi se mere Aai Baba ki jaan lii thi. Tab se lekar ab tak... Mein bas tadap raha tha. Ki kab mujhe mauka mile, aur kab mein unn saare policewalo ko apne haatho se maut du.

"Tum badla lena chaahte ho?"

"Jii! Dada!"

Aur aaj wo din aa chuka tha. Mene akhir kaar apne badle ki bhaavna Dada ke saamne rakhi. Wo muskuraaye aur bole,

"Aadmi aur hathyaar mein dilwa dunga. Par maarna tumhe hai. Ki kaise tum maarna chaahte ho aur kaha pe... Tum bhi meri hi tarah kismat ke maare ho. Mujhe tum se badi umeede hai. Ek accha pradarshan rakhna.""

"Jii! Dada!"

Dada ki baat saaf thi. Wo mujhse kaafi kuch umeede liye baithe the. Aur mein unhe bilkul bhi niraash nahi karna chaahta tha.

Fir wo din aaya...

Mere jeevan ka sabse khush-haal din...

Saari jad toh wo thakur tha. Mene na keval apni zameen ke kaagaz, balki apni chaturayi ke chalte uski khud ki building bhi mene apne kabze me karwaa lii thi.

Jin police waalo ki mujhe talaash thi. Wo sab bhi mere changul me fasse hue the.

Iss waqt hum sabhi Thakur ki hi uss building me khade hue the. Aur upar...

Upar uchaayi par...

Thakur, aur wo sabhi police waale rassi se bandhe latke hue the, jo gidgida rahe the. Hawa me perr unke kisi bin paani ki machli ki tarah hil rahe the.

Aur aankho me unka wo khauf dekh, pata nahi kyu... Mere hontho par apne aap ek daraavni sii muskuraahat felti jaa rahi thi. Mujhe ye sab accha lag raha tha. Aanand aa raha tha mujhe ye sab karne me.

"Haaah... Hahahahahaha~"

Mein paagalo ki tarah hassne laga. 10 saal... 10 saal tak mene intezaar kiya tha apna badla lene ke liye.

Aaj... Mere haatho me Baba ki dii hui wahi hockey thi. Perro me mehnge joote, jinka Baba ko hamesha shauk rehta tha. Aur aaj unn haraam ke pillo ki bilakhti hui awaazein jo 10 saal pehle mere Aai Baba par garajti thi.

Mene na keval Aai Baba ki zameen wapas lii thi balki uss madarchod Thakur ki zameen bhi hadap lii thi. Aur inn sab ko karne me meri chaturayi toh kaam aayi hi par Dada ne bhi mera boht saath diya.

"Udaa do ek ek ko..."

Mene ant me ishaara kiya aur tabhi...

*Bang* *Bang*
*Bang* *Bang*
*Bang* *Bang*

Goliyo ki awaaz poori building me goonj uthi. Upar khade aadmiyo ne apni bandooko se ek ke baad ek goliya unn aadmiyo ke shareer me ghop dii...

Aur...

Goli padte hi, unn sabhi ke jism se aise khoon ke chheete uchak ke bikhar rahe the maano jese hawa me koi rocket phoot ke chingaariya bikher raha ho. Unke ang goli ke lagte chithado ki tarah shareer se nikal ke alag hoke gir rahe the.

Waqai! Aaj mene khoon ki aatishbaazi karwa dii thi.

Neeche mein apne haath felaaye aankhein band kiye, apne Dushmano ke khoon me naha raha tha. Aur hontho par ek santushti bhari muskaan bikhri hui thi.

Jab sab kuch shaant hua toh Dada, jo kuch dur khade hue the wo bole,

"Aaj! Aaj hamaare khaas, Ashu ne apna badla liya hai. Jiska wo 10 saal se intezaar kar raha tha. Aaj ye building bhi uski hui aur uski apni zameen bhi. Isliye... Aaj iss khushi ke mauke par mein kuch ghoshna karna chaahta hu..."

Hum sabhi Dada ki baatein bade hi dhyaan se sunn rahe the.

"Aaj se... Ashu, 'Aatish' ke naam se jaana jaega. Aur ye building... 'Jalsa' ke naam se."

"Aatish Bhau! Aatish Bhau! Aatish Bhau! Aatish Bhau!"

Aur bas...

Mere naye naam ke naare lagne shuru ho gaye. Mein khush tha. Behad khush. Ajeeb sii muskaan feli thi mere hontho par jo jaa hi nahi rahi thi.

Dade mere kareeb aaye aur mere kandhe par haath rakhe aur bole,

"Aaj se ye akkha Mumbai ko tu bhi sambhalega. Mein jald hi yaha se chala jaunga... Tab... Poora ka poora ye Mumbai tere haatho me hoga. Mujhe niraash na karna."

"Jii! Dada!" Mene muskuraate hue jawaab diya.

Aur Dada chale gaye. Ek baat thi, jo mujhe pata thi. Yahi... Ki mene aaj itihaas likh diya tha.

***

Apne haatho me ek tasveer liye Aatish iss waqt Jalsa ke hi basement me apni puraani yaado ko yaad kar raha tha.

"Dekh! Mene kaha tha na... Tere liye uphaar hai ek."

Usne kehte hue jeb se ek kaagaz nikaala,

"Ye dekh Aai! Iss poori basement ki diwaaro par sone ki parat chadh jaegi. Ussi ka contract hai ye. Tu kehti rahi na? Tujhe chaandi ka mandir chaahiye? Arre tere Ashu ne poora sone ka itna bada mandir banwaya hai dekh..."

Usne photo ko ghumaaya, jese maano photo ko kuch dikha raha ho.

Saamne ek behad hi shaandaar boht bada sa sone ka mandir tha. Par...

Bas ek hi baat ajeeb thi. Wo ye ki wo ekdum khaali tha.

"Ab tu puchegi ki bhagwaan kaha hai? Tu jaanti hai na? Mein Bhagwan pe vishvaash nahi karta. Mein toh keval tujh pe aur Baba pe vishvaash karta hu. Hahaha~ Kaam karo toh bada karo..."

Wo hassa...

Par tabhi...

"Ekdum sahi kaha..."

Usse peeche se ek awaaz sunaayi dii. Aur ye sunte hi Aatish ke pal bhar ke liye raungte khade ho gaye.

Wo forun hi palta par...

*Pooooooooooowwww*

Ek zordaar ghusa uske chehre par aake kisi patthar ki tarah laga aur uss impact se Aatish ki body hawa me uchak ke peeche jaa giri.

*Craaaassshhhhhhhh*

Peeche rakhi ek table bhi gir gayi aur saath hi saath usme rakha samaan bhi.

Uske haath se uski hocky ki stick bhi gir chuki thi aur saath hi saath wo contract ka paper aur wo tasveer bhi.

Jese hi Aatish khada hua usne dekha ki saamne ek ladka maujood tha. Jo ek kaala hoodie aur kaala hi jeans pehne hue tha. Yaha tak ki uski aankho ke neeche bhi kaale rang ka kapda bandha hua tha.

Aatish : K-Kaun ho tum!?? Yaha andar kese aaye...!?

Par jese usse samajh aaya ki sawaal karna fizool hai aur yahi soch Aatish ne fataak se apne coat ki inner jeb se apna revolver nikala aur wo saamne khade ladke par chalaane hi wala tha ki tabhi...

*Craaaaaasssssshhhhhhhh*

Uske haath pe ek daaru ki bottle udd ke aayi aur seedha uske haath pe hi phoot gayi.

"Aaaaarrghh!"

Revolver ke neeche girte hi wo ladka aage badha aur uski collor pakad ke ghoose pe ghoose dena shuru kar diya.

"Aaaaarrghhhh!! Ughhhhh... Haraamiyo baahar aao jaldi... Kaha chhupe ho?"

Usne apne pantaro ko bulaana chaaha...

Par... Jese koi fayda hi nahi tha. Kyuki koi nahi aaya.

Chheena jhapti me jab Aatish ne kuch vaar kiye toh uss ladke ke muh se kapda hatt gaya aur saamne uss parichit chehre ko dekh uski aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi...

"T-Tummm!???"

"Haan! Mein!"

Saamne khada wo ladka koi aur nahi, Veer hi tha.

Veer ko dekh Aatish forun hi bhaaga. Aur lift ki orr gaya.

[Wo bhaag raha hai Master! Chase him down!]

Veer tezzi se aage badha aur next second hi...

*Ding*

[Mission : Take Down Aatish!

Rewards : 1) ??? Points.
2) One Random Free Skill.

Time Limit : 30 minutes.]

Veer ko Mission mil chuka tha par iss waqt mission padhne ka time bilkul nahi tha uske paas. Wo toh aaj wese hi Aatish ko maarne hi aaya tha, chaahe mission mile ya nahi.

*Huffff* *Hufff*

Tezz tezz saasein liye Aatish lift me ghus upar seedha second floor par jaane laga.

But too bad for him. Veer ne neeche se hi check kar liya tha ki lift kis floor par jaa rahi hai. Aur agle hi pal Veer stairs ki madad se seedha second floor ki orr bhaaga.

Lift khulte hi jese hi Aatish baahar nikla, toh saamne hi Veer khada hua tha.

Aatish : Huh???

Aatish ko yu pakad Veer ne usse kamre me fek diya. Ye wahi kamra tha, jaha rassiya hi rassiya latki hui thi.

Kisi me upar tezaab bhara tha toh kisi me eete, toh kisi me lohe ki rods.

Aatish : Veeeeeeeerrrr!! Tum yaha aa zaroor gaye... Par laut ke ab kabhi nahi jaa paoge... Tumne yaha aa ke sabse badi galti kii hi Veeeeeeerrr...

Wo cheenkha... Iss umeed me ki shayad uske ye kehne se Veer ka manobal dagmagaega.

Par Veer toh jese kisi faulaad ki tarah saamne nidar hoke khada hua tha. Uska seena haafne se upar neeche ho raha tha. Aur aankhein ekdum laal thi. Gusse se bharpoor.

Agle hi pal dono ek dusre par jhapte. Ek dusre ke kapde pakad wo jese haawi hone ki koshish kar rahe the.

Kuch punches Veer deta toh kuch Aatish usse maarta. Par most of the time, Veer dodge kar le raha tha. Jiske kaaran Aatish ki haalat jald hi kharaab ho rahi thi.

Abhi wo ek dusre ko jakde hi hue the ki tabhi... Aatish haivaano ki tarah muskuraaya aur...

*Pulls*

Usne bagal me latak rahi ek rassi kheench dii.

Upar ki ceiling ka box palta aur...

*Craaaaaaaaaaassssssshhhhh!*

Saari lohe ki roads neeche giri. Veer jaanta tha ki upar rods thi. Wo Aatish se ek kadam aage hi chal raha tha. Usne pehle hi nazar maar lii thi upar.

Aatish Veer ke changul se chooth peeche kuda aur Veer bhi kayi backflip maarte hue peece ho gaya.

'Huh!??'

[Moves apne aap niklenge. Mene kaha tha na master. Basic Martial Arts skill aapko parkour aur acrobatics me kaafi madad karengi.]

'Got it!'

Veer ko bachta dekh Aatish daant peeste hue bhaagne ke liye hua par tabhi...

Veer ne ek rassi haath me lii aur wo Aatish ke paas jaa pohucha. Usne Aatish ko ek laat dii...

*Poooowwwww*

Aur Aatish peeche ki orr gira...

'Got you!'

Aur agle hi pal Veer ne muskuraate hue haath me lii hui rassi kheench dii.

*Craasssssssssshhhhhhh*

*Thud* *Thud* *Thud*

Dherr saare Eete uske upar girne lage.

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh"

Wo chillaaya aur apna jese tese sarr usne bachaaya. Par itna toh saaf tha ki uski peeth ki ek aad haddi toh toot hi gayi hongi.

Veer dheere dheere uske kareeb aaya aur usne Eeto ko hata ke Aatish ko ghaseet ke baahar nikaala.

Abhi wo Aatish ko aur maarta ki tabhi Aatish ne chalaaki se apne coat ki jeb me chhupi ek pocket knife nikaali aur Veer ke perr me ghop dii...

"Aaaaaaaarrrrrggghhhh.... Ssssss"

Veer jese hi gira toh Aatish khud ko churra ke lift ki orr bhaaga.

[He's running away master! Oh Noooo~ Are you okayyyy!?]

'Fuuuucccckkkkk!!!! Aaaarrrghhhh!'

[Jaldi! Apna rumaal use kariye. Hum koi bhi aham clue nahi chorr sakte. Aur isliye toh mene aapko gloves pehnaaye hai.]

Pari ki baat sunn Veer ne jaldi jaldi apna rumaal nikaal ke apne muh ki madad se rumaal ko taang par laga ke usme ek gathaan baandhi aur apni bleeding ko jese tese thoda roka.

Aatish third floor pe gaya tha. Udhar se hi secret passage tha jo seedha control room ko hote hue nikalta tha. Control room bole toh wahi room jaha par baith ke Aatish sabhi Cameras ki footages pe nazar rakhta tha.

Uthate hue Veer bhi apna dard ignore kar seedha third floor pe jaa pohucha. Aatish ne jese hi dekha ki Veer peeche se aa raha hai, wo dekh ke aaj pehli baar usse ghabraahat mehsoos ho rahi thi.

Veer bhi langda raha tha. Par... Uske bawajood wo dheere dheere aage badh raha tha. Aise jese maano wo jaanta tha ki aage kya hone waala hai.

Aatish haafte hue bhaagte bhaagte jese hi darwaaza kholne ke liye hua toh usse ek aur jhatka laga.

Darwaaza dusri taraf se locked tha.

"Huhhhh!??? Ye... Ye darwaaza!? Haraam ke pillo tum sab so gaye kya??? Baahar aao madarchodo... Kis baat ki tankha khaate ho tum?""

Par usse kya pata tha... Ki Veer yaha poori taiyaari se aaya tha. Veer ne hi control room se saare cameras off kiye the. Veer ne hi uss darwaaze par peeche se lock lagaaya tha. Veer ne hi uske pantaro ko ek ek karke daboch ke maar ke unhe baandh diya tha.

Sab kuch...

Wo itni derr pehle kar chuka tha. Ab baaki tha..
Toh bas badi machli ka shikaar karna.

"Veeeeeeerrrrrr!!!! Aaj ya toh tum bachoge ya toh mein." Aatish ghabraate hue chillaaya aur wo aage badh ke Veer pe hamla karne hi waala tha ki tabhi...

"Huhhhh?"

Uska perr ek rassi ke phande me phassa aur tabhi...

Uska poora ka poora shareer hawa me ulta jhool gaya.

Ek trap! Bilkul wesa hi jesa Aatish ne Veer ke liye banaaya tha.

Veer aage dheere dheere badha aur usne Aatish ke neeche uss boht badi sii cheez se parda hata diya.

Aatish ne jese hi neeche dekha toh uski haalat patli ho gayi. Aaj pehli baar usse itna darr mehsoos ho raha tha. Apni jaan ka darr.

Neeche bada sa glass tank tha. Aur uss glass tank me... Wahi Magar maujood tha jisne Golu ki jaan lii thi.

Wahi Magar, yaani ki Aatish ka paaltu janwar urf Clutch.

"Na-Nahiiiiii!!!! Nahiiiii!!!" Usne apna sarr naa me hilaaya aur ghabraate hue Veer ko dekhne laga.

Neeche Magar uska jese wait hi kar raha tha aur uss magar ki aankhein itni khatarnaak lag rahi thi iss waqt ki Aatish shabdo me bhi baya nahi kar sakta tha.

"Aise hi... Aise hi tumne Golu ko maara tha... Mujh se marwaaya tha usse haan!? I will kill you in the exact same way!!!!!!"

Veer ne itna bol dheere dheere ussi pocket knife se rassi kaatna shuru kar dii, jo Aatish ne kuch derr pehle usse maari thi.

"Naaaaaaahiiiiiiiiiiiii.... Nahiiiiiiii Veeeeeeeeerrrr"

Wo chillaaya par....

*Splaaasssssssshhhh*

Tab tak boht derr ho chuki thi. Aur agle hi pal wo paani me jaa gira.

*Chhap* *Chhap*

Uske haath perr vyarth hi idhar udhar machalte hue baahar nikalne ka prayatn kar rahe the. Par...

Agle hi pal...

*Cruncccccchhhhhhhh*

Magar aage badha aur ek baar me hi Aatish ke sarr ko apne nukile daato me jakad usse daba diya...

"Aai!!!!" Bas... Yahi aakhiri shabd uske muh se nikla.

Uske baad... Poore tank ka saaf paani bas laal rang ke khoon hi khoon se bhar gaya.

Aur Veer apni bauhe sikode saamne ke iss manzar ko dekhta raha jab tak ki paani me ho rahi wo chhap chhap awaaz kam na ho gayi. Aur fir shaanti sii na chha gayi...

'It's over!'

[Yes master! Aap theek ho na?]

'I'm not fine. But...'

[???]

'Aatish ne teen badi galtiya kari thi.'

[Hmm?]

'Pehli ye... Ki usne mere kareebi jano ko chherra.'

[...]

'Dusri ye ki usne mujhe zinda chorr diya.'

[Master!]

'Aur teesri ye... ki usne aisa jaanwar paala jo apne hi maalik aur maalik ke dushmano me antar karna nahi jaanta.'

[Hmm!]

Pari kuch soch ke shaant ho gayi par tabhi...

*Ding*

['Mission : Take down Aatish!!!' has been completed.]

*Ding*

[120 points have been rewarded.]

*Ding*

[You have been rewarded a Random skill. ~ Hawkeye.]

*Ding*

[Past Illustration function is invoked.]

[Do you want to see Aatish' Past?]

'Huh???'

Veer chakit ekdum saamne ki orr dekh raha tha. Tank me Aatish ke kuch shareer ke hisse terr rahe the. Aur ussi ke upar system ki screen hawa me khuli hui thi.

'Ye sab..!?'

[Mene aapko bataya tha na master. Past Illustration function ke baare me... Aap yadi kisi vyakti ko maarte hai toh uske baad uska past padh sakte hai. So? Kya aap dekhna chaahte hai?]

Veer ne kuch socha aur fir haa me sarr hilaaya aur mann me hi 'Yes' keh diya.

Uske baad Aatish ka poora past Veer ke saamne ussi screen me likh ke aa gaya. Sab kuch.

Jab Veer ne wo sab padha toh uska sarr apne aap jhuk gaya.

[Master! Do you regret it now?]

'No! I don't... Pari! Usne Golu ki jaan lii. Aur na jaane kitne nirdosh logo ki jaan lii hogi usne. I don't regret it. It's finally over.'

[Yes! Aapko yaha se jaana chaahiye!]

'Hmmm! Par uss se pehle... Kuch kaam hai..'

Veer third floor se waapas basement me aaya jaha wahi sona ka mandir rakha hua tha.

Usne aage aake wahi hockey stick uthaayi aur wo contract bhi...

Aur wo tasveer bhi... Usme ek aadmi, ek aurat aur ek bacche ki tasveer thi.

Unn sabhi ko leke wo mandir ke kareeb aaya aur teeno cheeze usne mandir me hi rakh dii.

[Hmm? Maaasteeerr!?? W-Whyy!? Aapne...!?]

Veer ka behaviour Pari ke palle nahi pada tha aur isliye... Usne ye sawaal kiya. Iss Waqt toh Veer ko apne ghar ki orr bhaagna chaahiye tha aur sabse pehle apni chot ke baare me sochna chahiye tha. Par wo ulta yaha waapas aake dushman ki cheezo ko utha ke idhar se udhar kar raha tha.

Ye sab kuch Pari ke liye prashn janak tha.

Par...

Pari ke sawaal par...

Veer ke muh se ek hi uttar nikla...

"Maa... toh akhir Maa hoti hai... Pari!!!"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Issi ke saath yaha par khatam hota hai Aatish' arc. Slogan arc shuru hoega next update se. Tab tak ke liye like karke jaane ka pasand aaye toh aur comment karne ka. 😁

Dhanyavaad!
Awesome Update

Aatish ke saath past mein bahot bura hua tha. Uske maa baap ko behrami se maara gaya aur saath hi uski maa ka balatkaar bhi kiya gaya.

Aur iss kathin samay mein uska saath diya ek aadmi ne jisse Aatish ne Dada bolke bulaya aur usi ki madad se Aatish ne apna badla liya aur pure mumbai mein raaj karne laga.

Veer ne bhi apna badla liya. Jo Aatish ne uske saath kiya tha same waisa hi usne bhi Aatish ke saath kiya. Par aakhir mein usne ek aisa kaam kiya jisse pari bhi hairan hogyi. Veer ne Aatish ka ek adhura kaam pura kiya. Uss sone se bane mandir mein woh photo rakhdi jo shayad Aatish rakhna chahta tha.

Ab shayad next villain woh Dada aayega jo shayad Aatish ki maut ka badla lega.
 
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