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This is not the end...Fantastic update bhai. Ajay ko sabaq toh mila lakin us ki iss beizzati ko kis ne dekha. Jab veer ko maara tha ajay ne toh uss k dost uss k saath the. Veer ki beizzati in sab k saamne hoi aur ajay ki akele mein. Kya yaar
Veer aur Nidhi ke beech moments aaj ke update me dekhne ko milenge...nice update plz cont asap and plzz add some veer and nidhi moments to
Thanks a lot bro!Good update brother
Pora update ajay par hi based tha
Ab veer ne apna badla to leliya par kya ajay ab khamosh baithega?
Ya wo phir se koi plan karega veer ko sabak sikhane ke liye
Par jis tarah se ajay ki Maa ka intro huwa hai kahani mai usse mujhe lagta hai shayad veer ajay ko sudhare aur shayad ajay bhi agey chalakar kuch sudhar jaye and ek acha beta ban jaye and shayad apne pyaar ko bhi pa ssake veer ki madad se hi.
Dekhte hai akhir future mai kya rakha hai ajay ki.
And veer ko apna badla wala task pora karne par ab jya points milenge.
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Hmm! Waqai! Yadi kisi din mein boht zyaada khush raha toh 10k words ka likh sakta hu. Aur update aaj raat aa jaega.Jaha Kuch Accha Milta hai Greed Bhi To wahi Hoti Hai na Bro
To Fir To Magane me Kya Harz hai Kabhi Mil Hi Jaye Kya pata
Kisi Din Writer Saheb Bahut khus ho Aur Isi khushi me 10k word likh hi de na 10k to 8 or 9k hi sahi
By The way Next Update Kab Ayega Writer Saheb![]()
Dhanyavaad bro!!!Waah Werewolf bhai.
Badla aakhir le hi liya veer ne. Wo bhi achhe se Ajay ko bewkoof bana ke. Ajay ne kabhi na socha hoga ki uske sath esa hone wala he.
Wahi veer bhi ab badal raha he. Nice going bhai. Points bhi lagta he achhe milenge iske.
Waha wo ladki ab veer se milne wali he. Majha aayega usme.![]()
Haa! Wo bhi padhna...Agar ap 3 update week main data ho to it's a lot bki ap ki first story bhi start krdi ha Mana and it seems quite interesting ☺ bro update schedule ka mutabik diya kro mtlb ak din bd ak bki ap busy ho to hm manege kr lain ga but jldi free ho jao can't wait
Yesvese Bhai update aaj Raat 10 bje aayega na???