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Sorry bhailog wo dost ka accident ho gaya tha. To bas hospital ke chakkar mein time hi nahi mila kal. As a result aaj thoda lamba update dene ki koshish ki hai. Padhkar pratikriya zaroor den. Thanks.
Thriller AV.... UNLOCK THE MYSTERY
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PART – I [ UNFOLD THE MYSTERY ] |
CHAPTER – 2 “ THE JOURNEY BEGINS ” |
UPDATE #9 [MAHIRA’S BIRTHDAY] |
| RECAP :- AB TAK AAPNE DEKHA KI AV LETTER KE MUTABIK HI AASHRAM MEIN PAHUNCH JAATA HAI. PAR JAISE HI WO AACHARYA RAMDAS JI KO WO LOCKET DIKHAATA HAI TO WO AV KI GARDAN PAR CHAAKU RAKH DETE HAIN. AB AAGE :- LOCATION :- AASHRAM AACHARYA – Jawaab do kaun ho tum aur kahaan se aaya ye locket tumhare paas? AACHARYA ka reaction dekh kar ek baar to AV hadbada gaya, lekin fir usne apne aap ko sambhalte hue vo letter hi AACHARYA ko pakda diya. Letter ko padhte vakt AACHARYA ke face par kayi expressions aa rahe the but ek expression stable tha aur vo tha – Shock. Letter pura padhne ke baad kabhi vo AV ko dekhte to kabhi fir se letter ko , jaise confirm kar rahe ho ki ye sab sach hai. AACHARYA – Kya tum sach me VEER ho. AV – Ji AACHARYA. AACHARYA ne aage badhkar AV ko gale se laga liya aur unki aankhen nam ho gayi. AV soch raha tha ki kesa aadmi hai, kabhi chaku chalata hai or kabhi gale lagata hai. Kucchh der tak ese hi rehne ke baad vo alag ho gaye. AACHARYA – To tum samajh hi gaye hoge ki tumhe mere paas kisliye bheja gaya hai. AV – Ji usmein kisi prakaar ki shiksha lene ke baare mein likha gaya tha. AACHARYA – Haan main tumhe pracheen yudh-kala ki shiksha dunga taaki tum aane waale khatron ka saamna kar sako. AV – Dhanyawaad AACHARYA. AACHARYA – AACHARYA nahi ab se tum mujhe Guru kahoge. AV – Ji Guruvar. Iske baad unhone AV se kucchh aur baatein ki aur use bataya ki use har roz shaam ko yahaan aana hoga. Aur agar late ho jaaye to raat ke liye vo yahin ruk sakta hai. Iske baad AV wahaan se chala gaya lekin AACHARYA wahin khade muskurate hue kuchh soch rahe the, kya– “Aakhir tum itne varshon ke intezaar ke baad waapis aa hi gaye. Bas ab dekhna ye hoga ki kya tum vo sab dobara waapis le paaoge jo tumse chheen liya gaya tha.” LOCATION :- HOTEL PARADISE [ MUMBAI ] Yahaan ek kamre mein do aadmi kucch baat kar rahe hain. Ek aadmi aaram se sofe par pasarkar baitha hua hai (AADMI 1), jabki dusra apna sar jhukaye khada hai (AADMI 2). Aaspas kaafi pehelwaan jaise log hai joki sabhi suit-boot mein hain. Kamre ke baahar bhi achhi khaasi security maujood hai. Saaf pata chal raha hai ki jaroor ye koi taaktwar party hai. Aaiye dekhte hain inki baat-cheet, I mean sunte hain, AADMI 1 – Dekho seedhi si baat ye hai ki tum kisi kaam ke nahi ho. Jo galti tumne 16 saal pehle ki thi wahi ab phir karke aa rhe ho. Pata nahi maine tum jaise kutton ko kyon pala hua hai. Arre ye AADMI 2 to wahi hai jo us din jungle mein RAJAN ke paas gaya tha, aur usne suicide kar liya tha. Oh! To matlab ye AADMI 1 hi iska boss (najayaz baap , as said by RAJAN), AADMI 2 – Maalik usne mujhe dekhte hi khudko goli maar li warna main use pakadne hi gaya …. Iski baat poori hi na hui thi ki AADMI 1 ne iske kaan ke neeche tabla baja diya, aur iski fat ke chaar ho gayi, AADMI 1 – Mujhe naa sun ne ki aadat nahi hai, aur ye tu bahut acchhi tarah se jaanta hai, mujhe wo kutta chahiye , agar kal ko wo waapis aa gaya na yahaan to meri itne saal ki mehnat par paani fir jaayega. (Ji sahi samjhe ye AV ki hi baat kar raha hai, aur agar aap soch rahe hain ki ye ek bache ko kyon nahi pakad paa rahe to main bata dun ki ye log jise dhoond rahe hai uska naam sirf VEER tha, but ab vo ABHIMANYU hai, isliye inse naa ho paayega , aur yahi reason hai ki JAIDEV-SANJANA ke jaane ke baad bhi AV zinda hai, balki main to ye kahunga ki agar wo dono iske saath hote to AV zaroor marta.) Itna kehne ke baad AADMI 1 ne dusre ko baahar jaane ka ishara kiya aur vo bhi sar jhukaye hi nikal gaya. Hotel se bahar aane ke baad usne apna gussa bahar khade apne aadmiyon par utara aur zor se chillaya, AADMI 2 – Kab tak bachega mujhse tu, ek na ek din tujhe mar kar hi dum loonga, ye mera waada hai aur DEVEN RAJVANSH apna wada har haal mein poora karta hai..... LOCATION :- MAHIRA’s HOUSE (IN HER ROOM) Yahaan MAHIRA usi ladki kee tasveer ko dekh rahi hai aur aansoon baha rahi hai, tabhi uske mom-dad room mein aa jaate hain aur wo jhat se tasveer ko pillow ko neeche rakh kar aansoon ponch leti hai, but vo Maa-Baap hi kya jo apne bachon ka dukh na dekh paayein. Wo dono jaakar MAHIRA ke paas baith gaye. RAGINI – Beta kyun baar-baar use yaad karke aansoo bahati rehti hai. Wo waapis nahi aayegi ab. MAHI (rote hue) – Mai kya karun maa mujhe unki bahut yaad aati hai. Kaash wo aaj Zinda hoti. MAHENDRA – MAHI jo chale jaate hain na wo kabhi waapis nahi aate , lekin tu khud hi soch beta kya wo tujhe ese dekh kar khush hoti hogi? MAHI kucchh nahi bol rahi thi par uski aankhon mein dukh ke alawa ek aur cheez thi, aur wo tha nischay, dridh – nischay apna badla lene ka, us ladki ka badla lene ka. Kuchh der tak MAHI ko samjhane ke baad wo dono waapis chale jaate hain. Idhar MAHI apne aap se hi keh rahi thi , DIDI aap chinta mat karo , main aapko insaaf dila kar rahungi , Us SARTHAK (ANKITA’s Brother) aur RAHUL ko saja nahi dilwayi to mera naam bhi MAHI nahi. Chalo isko yahin chhodte hain aur chalte hain , inke paas LOCATION :- N.K. COMPLEX (SUYASH’S OFFICE ) To ye hain SUYASH SINGHVI, ARYAN ke father saab. Is samay ye apne office mein baithe kuchh kaam kar rahe hain, tabhi inke paas ek call aata hai inke assistant ka, SHEKHAR – Good afternoon sir. SUYASH – Afternoon SHEKHAR. Bolo kya hua. SHEKHAR – Sir koi aapse milne aaya hai. SUYASH – Tumhe pata hai na bina appointment main kisi se nahi milta. SHEKHAR – Maine unhe ye baat batayi lekin unhone kaha ki wo aapko jaante hain. Aur apna naam batane ko kaha. SUYASH – Kya naam hai unka? SHEKHAR – MAHENDRA SHARMA. Ye naam sun ne ke baad SUYASH ek baar ko to shock ho gaya lekin fir usne unhe andar bula liya. SUYASH ke shock hone ki wajah ye thi ki ek time par JAIDEV–SUYASH aur MAHENDRA bahut achhe dost hua karte the but JAIDEV ki maut ke baad MAHENDRA ne unse kabhi baat nahi ki. Ek baar SUYASH ne unse milne ki koshish bhi ki but nahi mil paaye. To itne saal baad aaj achanak se prakat kaahe ho gaye? Ye soch hi rahe the ki itne mein darwaaza khulta hai or MAHENDRA andar aa gaya. MAHENDRA ke chehre par khushi saaf jhalak rahi thi , apne puraane dost se milne ki but SUYASH kuchh khaas khush nahi hua. Inki mulaakat ke baare mein agle update mein jaan ne ko milega kyonki inki baat– cheet kholegi story ka pehla raaz. To is din aur kuchh khaas nahi hua bas shaam ko AV pahunch gaya AASHRAM mein. Pehle din AACHRYA ne us se halki fulki exercise, running hi karwayi but dhyaan lagane par focus karne ko kaha. Aur bhi jaruri baatein batayi unhone AV ko jiske baad wo ghar ki taraf chala gaya. AV sab kuchh jan na chahata tha apne baare mein but abhi use koi raasta nazar nahi aa raha tha, usne AACHRYA se bhi puchha but unhone wahi evergreen dialogue chipka diya “ WAQT AANE PAR APNE AAP PATA CHAL JAAYEGA.” NEXT MORNING :- AV ne subah uthkar dhyaan lagaya , thik waise hi jaise AACHARYA ne use bataya tha, ab ye koi halwa kaam to hai nahi , isiliye AV ki timing abhi kam hi thi, but starting ho chuki thi. LOCATION :- SCOTTISH INTERNATIONAL SCHOOL “ OHO, AAJ SURAJ KAHAAN SE NIKLA HAI , TU MUJHSE PEHLE SCHOOL MEIN , IMPOSSIBLE ” To ye the ARYAN babu jo AV ko apne pahunchne se se pehle hi school pahuncha mein dekh kar aascharya chakit ho gaye. But surprisingly AV ne iski baat ka koi jawaab nahi diya. ARYAN – Tune maun vrat to nahi rakha na. Waise bina bhounke tu rah to nahi sakta. AV – Dekh aaj mera mood bahut sahi hai, isliye bakwaas mat kar or chup – chaap apni jagah par jaakar baith jaa. ARYAN – Tera naukar nahi hun main , main to yahin baithunga. But tabhi ANKITA class mein aa gayi, aur AV ko ghoorkar dekha, jo inki aadat thi, lekin ARYAN sir apni baat se palat te hue bhaagkar ANKITA ke saath baith gaye. Lekin ab aap soch rahe honge ki AV ka mood achha kyon hai to wo isliye kyonki aaj uski Mom ka birthday hai, joki har saal wo celebrate karta hai. To iske baad MAHIRA class mein aayi aur AV ke saath hi baithi. Aaj bhi AV MAHIRA Ko chor nazron se dekhta raha aur RAHULWA in dono ko dekhkar chidta raha par aaj uske chehre par beintehaan gussa tha. Aage chalkar zaroor ye koi kaand karega. Isi tarah inka school off ho gaya and ab AV ki yahi routine ban gayi thi ki subah uthkar dhyaan lagana , then School jaana (ya fir ye kahun ki MAHIRA ko ghoorne jaana) , then to the AASHRAM. Ab time aa gaya hai thoda skip button dabane ka. AFTER 1 MONTH :- LOCATION :- AASHRAM TANN, TANN DHABB, DHABB AAH, AAH Confused ho gaye kya, ruko samjhata hoon ki ho kya raha hai. To ye ho raha hai AV ka pehla test. Aaj jab AV AASHRAM pahuncha to AACHARYA ne use bataya ki aaj tak usne jo bhi sikha hai uska test hoga. AV iske liye kaafi excited tha. Ab tak usne talwaarbaazi aur thodi fighting techniques bhi seekh li thi. Matlab abhi jyaada nahi par haan 7–8 bando ko aaram se dho sakta tha ye. To yahi tha aaj ka iska test ek saath do talwaar baazon aur do fighters ko harana tha. Aapko bata doon ki ye chaaron isi AASHRAM ke shishya hain. Aur haan ye bhi apni–apni skills mein master hain. To fight shuru hui pehle dono talwaarbaaz bhaagte hie aage aaye hain, AV pehle waale ko dodge karta hua doosre ki talwar ko shield se rok deta hai. Fir ek saath do talwaaron ko use karta hua dono ki talwaaron ke saath takra jaata hai. Usi samay wo donon ke pet par ek saath laat jad deta hai aur dono karahte hue gir jaate hain. Itne mein baaki ke dono fighters bhaagte hue aage aate hain. AV bhi apni talwaare drop kar deta hai. Pehle waale ko ek punch jadne ke baad dusre ke kandhe par jor daalte hue halka jhatka de deta hai. Ye ek special technique thi jisme saamne waale fighter ki muscles ko halka twist kar diya jaata hai, lekin usko dard haddi dislocate hone jitna hi hota hai. Wo karahta hua neeche gir jaata hai. Itne mein baaki teeno uth jaate hain aur ek saath aage badhte hain. Ab AV jaldi se khel khatam karna chahta tha. Isliye wo pehle waale ke ghutne par jordar waar karta hai or uska haal behaal ho jata hai. Bechara khada bhi na ho pa raha tha. Agle waale ke saath bhi yahi hota hai and then last waale ko utha kar patak deta hain aur pichhe se jaakar uski gardan daboch leta hai. It results in Tap Out and the winner is AV. AACHARYA AV ke pradarshan se bahut khush the aur baaki ke shishya bas muh faade dekh rahe the. Iske baad AACHARYA AV ko shabaashi aur aashirwaad dete hain aur wo ghar ki taraf rawana ho jaata hai. NEXT MORNING :- LOCATION :- SCOTTISH INTERNATIONAL SCHOOL Aaj kuchh khaas hai, kya? MAHIRA ka birthday. Aapko bata dun ki Is 1 mahine mein AV or MAHIRA kaafi close aa gaye the. Dono ki baat–cheet bhi badh gayi thi. Dono roz ek saath baith te the. Ab ARYAN ko bhi sab pata chal gaya tha RAHUL se break-up ke baare mein and wo bhi ab MAHIRA se normal ho gaya tha. “ YE TUMHE CHOT KAISE LAGI. CHHOTE BACHE HO KYA. APNA DHYAAN BHI NAHI RAKH SAKTE. ” Ye awaaz thi MAHIRA ki jisne ye baat AV ko dekh kar kahi. Darasal kal ki fight ke dauran AV ke haath par chot lag gayi thi aur abhi wahan patti bandhi hui thi. Jis tarah MAHIRA ne AV ki chot ko dekh kar ye care dikhayi , uske kaaran wo fula nahi sama raha tha. Bole to dil naach utha lounde ka. Wo bas ek tak MAHIRA ko dekh raha tha aur khush ho raha tha. MAHI – Jawaab kyon nahi dete aur ye bandar ki tarah has kyon rahe ho. AV – Haan vo kuchh nahi bas thoda cut lag gaya tha aur kucchh nahi. MAHI – Tum apna dhyaan rakha karo agar tumhe kuchh ho gaya to, MAHI bolte–bolte beech mein hi ruk gayi , use ehsaas hua ki wo kya bolne jaa rahi thi aur is baat par AV se nazren churane lagi. AV to is baat par aur bhi zyadaa khush ho gaya aur smile karne laga. Tabhi teacher class mein aa gaye aur inki padhayi shuru ho gayi. But filhaal MAHI kaafi gusse mein thi kyonki subah se sabne use birthday wish kar diya tha but AV ne use wish nahi kiya tha. Is baat par uska chehra bilkul laal hua pada tha. Aur AV uske expressions dekh kar man hi man has raha tha. Inki classes isi tarah chalti rahi. Beech–beech mein AV ne MAHIRA se baat karne ki koshish ki but MAHIRA ne har baar use ek Khatarnak look dekar chup kara diya. Jab inka school off hua to AV,ARYAN aur KABIR ek saath khade the, tabhi wahaan MAHIRA aayi or AV ko dekh kar kaha , MAHI – Tum , tum na mujhse kabhi baat mat karna, gande, huhh. Aur gusse me tilmilati hui chali gayi. Pichhe chhod gayi in teeno ko haste hue. KABIR – Tu na bahot bada kameena hai, saale kyon tang kar raha hai use, bola kyon nahi happy birthday. AV – Beta esa hai ki jab shaam ko use vo surprise milega na, to jo khushi uske chehre par hogi uske liye itna to chalta hai. ARYAN – Tujhe jo karna hai kar, par agar tune aaj use propose na kiya na to fir tu gaya. Iske baad sabhi apne–apne ghar ki taraf chal diye. Aaj AV ko AASHRAM nahi jaana tha kal ki fight ke baad use ek din ki chhuti mil gayi thi. TIME :- 7:30 p.m. LOCATION :- MAHIRA’S HOUSE (IN HER ROOM) :- ( Haan aapko ek baat bata doon ki MAHIRA ke ghar par birthday celebrations nahi honge. Last year bhi nahi hue the. Iska kaaran aapko aage chalkar pata chalega. ) Is time MAHIRA apne bed par baithi hui gusse mein badbada rahi thi – Gande, ek baar bhi wish nahi kiya, dekhna kabhi tumse baat nahi karungi. Par tumse baat kiye bina reh bhi to nahi sakti. Kab samjhoge mere dil ki baat. Main tumse bahut pyaar karti hun. Tumhari caring, tumhara attitude, tumhari baatein sab mujhe bahut pasand hai. I LOVE YOU. Ye bolkar MAHIRA apna muh takiye mein chhupakar sharmane lagti hai. Tabhi uske mobile ki ring bajti hai, wo ARYAN ka call tha. MAHIRA – HI ARYAN. ARYAN – MAHIRA, meri baat suno, wo AV ka naa accident ho gaya hai, wo jo tumhare ghar ke paas garden hai na wahaan par. Dekho main abhi door hun , tum wahaan jaakar dekho naa. MAHIRA to ye baat sunkar jad si ho gayi thi, uski aankhon se pani behne laga. Lekin use hosh me laate hue ARYAN ne kaha, ARYAN – MAHIRA jaldi karo time waste mat karo, jao. Bas tabhi MAHIRA ban gayi Usain Boult aur bhagti hui chal di. Neeche hall mein hi uski Mom baithi thi, RAGINI – Beta kahaan ja rahi hai itni jaldi me. MAHIRA – Mom paas mein hi jaa rahi hun jaldi aa jaungi. Iske baad wo fatafat bhaagte hue us park ke paas pahunchi , ab tak halka andhera hona shuru ho gaya tha aur chaaron taraf street lights bhi jal rahi thi. But surprisingly garden ke andar poora andhera tha. Ye dekh kar halka hairan hui MAHIRA but fir andar ki taraf badh gayi. Surprise, surprise, jaise-jaise MAHIRA aage badh rahi thi, waise hi sequence mein garden ke andar lights jalti jaa rahi thi. Ek taraf MAHIRA chinta mein thi wahin dusri taraf ye sab dekh kar hairan bhi. Tabhi pure ground mein ujala ho gaya aur chaaron taraf purple colour theme se decoration ki hui thi. Kyon??? Kyonki ye MAHIRA ka fav Colour hai. Tabhi ground mein HAPPY BIRTHDAY song bajne laga aur MAHIRA ke saamne ki taraf se AV chala aa raha tha haathon mein purple colour ke flowers ka bouquet lekar. Wo MAHIRA ke kareeb pahunch kar bouquet uski taraf karte hue kehta hai, HAPPY BIRTHDAY MAHI. MAHI aankhon mein khushi aur hairangi liye ye sab dekh rahi thi, usne haath aage badhakar wo bouquet le liya aur bas THANK YOU kaha. Tabhi uske chehre par gusse ke bhaav aa gaye, MAHI – To ye tum dono ki planning thi, bas yahi bahana mila tha mujhe yahaan bulane ka pata bhi hai main kitna dar gayi thi. Tum sach me bahut gande ho. Bandar. MAHI ke expressions dekh kar AV ko bahut hasi aa rahi thi but wo kisi tarah control kar raha tha. AV – Sorry, sorry dekho bura mat mano, mujhe tumhe yahaan bulane ka koi aur idea nahi soojha, to bas isiliye, dekho apna mood kharab mat karo. Aur chalo abhi to aur surprise baaki hain. Surprise ke baare mein sunkar wo khush ho jaati hai or AV ke saath chalne lagti hai. ( Aapko bata dun ki ye ground 8:00 baje band ho jaata hai isiliye yahaan koi aur nahi hai, but yahaan ka security guard ARYAN ke pitaji ko bahut maanta hai, kyonki unhone uski bahut help ki hai, charity and all, isiliye ARYAN ki request par usne in dono ke liye gate khula rakha.) Iske baad AV & MAHI aage badhte hue pahunchte hain ek table ke paas. Ye table ground ke center mein rakha hua tha. Aur sab kuchh purple colour ka hi tha. Tabhi AV ne cake ka box khola aur use dekh kar MAHI shocked ho gayi. Kyon? ( Because jab ye log LADAKH gaye the tab wahaan par ek cake shop par MAHI ne yahi cake dekha tha aur use bahut pasand aaya tha. AV ne ye baat notice kar li thi aur us cake ki ek pic le li thi and order dekar same wahi cake banwa liya. ) MAHI aankhon mein khushi liye ye sab enjoy kar rahi thi. Tabhi AV ne uske saamne knife rakh diya. Fir cake cutting ceremony sampoorn hui, then in dono ne ek dusre ko cake khilaya. Is sabke dauran MAHI ke chehre par ek smile bani hui thi aur AV use dekh kar ghayal hua jaa raha tha. AV – Haaye ab itna bhi zulm mat karo is gareeb par ki ye apna hosh hi kho baithe. MAHI – Kya bol rahe ho tum? AV – Ek to itni jaanlewa smile deti ho aur upar se samajhti bhi nahi. Ab ye sunkar MAHI ke gaal laal ho gaye aur wo aankhen neeche karke sharmane lagi. Tabhi, MAHI – Tumne koyi gift to diya hi nahi , laayo mera gift do. AV – Ab gift ki kya zaroorat hai, main hoon na tumhara gift. MAHI ( aankhen dikhati hui ) – Gift do. AV – Achha baba deta hoon, ye lo. Ye kehkar AV ne ek chhota sa box MAHI ko pakda diya. Jab MAHI ne wo khola to usmein ek locket tha aadhe dil ka aur uske upar AV likha hua tha. MAHI Shocked hoakr AV ko dekhne lagi. AV – MAHI main tumse , main tumse..... MAHI – Aage bhi bolo. AV – MAHI main tumse kuchh kehna chahta hoon. MAHI – Kaho...... To bhailog milte hain next update mein, aage ke scene ke saath, aur haan next update mein saamne aayega JAIDEV se juda ek raaz. Tab tak ke liye bye-bye and take care. YOURS RD.... (3377 WORDS) |
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Thanks bhai. Hoga bhai Propose bhi hoga. Agle update ka title hi yahi hai. Saath bane rahiye.
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Thnx bro. Be along.
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