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Kapendra Mishra poore aawesh me aa kar ek jhannatedar thappad Istak ke gaal par chipka diye.… Apne logon ke jod par ahankar me chur, Istak, ne thappad ke jawab me, Kapendra Mishra ka collor pakad kar dhakka de diya.
Jaise hi dhakka laga Vyas daura... Asif, Istak ke aage khada ho gaya. Koi kuchh kahta uss se pahle hi bullet ki aisi firing shuru hui jise insane firing kaha jaye to galat nahi hoga. Koi apni jagah se ek inch hila nahi hoga, kisi ke muh se aawaj nahi nahi nikli hogi, kisi ki najar Mishra family se hat kar bahar ke khali jamin tak na gayi hogi. Ek bullet fire hone ki awaj nahi aayi aur Istak ke har aadmi ko 2 tranculizer lag chuka tha.
Har koi jaise ek sath harkat me aaya tha. Idhar jaise hi Kapendra Mishra ko Istak ne dhakka diya, fir to Sia apna vikral roop dharan kar chuki thi...
Sia teji ke sath apne gale ka neckless nikali... Usme lage moti aur anya sajo saman jamin par bikher duye aur hath me takriban 8 fit ke patla metal wire. Sia Asif ko khinch kar piller ke side ki. Achanak chali goliyon se poora bhuchakka tha Istak. Sia poorn gusse ka parichay deti, metallic wire pahle left fir right hand par ek fold lapet dee. Patle metallic wire ka dono sira ko bayen hath se pakdi aur dayen hath se Istak ke baal ko pura jod se pakad kar niche ki ore patki.
Istak ka chehra Sia ke ghutne se takraaya aur agle hi pal Sia wire ke dono sire ko dono hath se pakadti, ek fit pichhe hui aur Istak ke sine par ek laat jama di. Sharir poora pichhe gaya aur wire me fasi kalai aage ke ore iss teji se khinchi ki maans ke ander haddiyon tak wo wire ghus gaya tha.
Istak ke hosh gum wo hakka-bakka ho kar baap-baap chilla raha tha... Sia dono hath se wire pakdi Istak ke piche pahunch chuki thi. Istak ke dono haath uske sharir ke pichhe the aur Sia ne dono sira itna tej khincha tha ki dono kalai aapas me chipki hui thi. Istak apne ghutno par tha aur Sia uske ritdh ki haddi par laat daal kar wire ke dono sire ko poori takat ke sath khinchte.… "Teri himmat kaise hui mere pitaji ko hath bhi lagane ki"…
Uss rassi ka davab aisa tha ki wo mas chid kar haddiyon me ghusta ja raha tha. Istak ki dard bhari chikh sab ke sar me dard dene laga. Har sniper dwara 3 round tranculizer bullet fire karna aur Sia ka pahle ghutno se Istak ke naak tod dena, baad me chahti par laat maarne ke uprant anth me uske kalai me wire fasa kar pichhe se teji me khinchna...
1 minute pahle aur 1 minute ke baad me jamin aasman ka anter tha. Istak ki gala faad chikh sabke kaan faad rahi thi. Iss bich jab firing ruki, sabhi log Som ko aate huye dekh rahe the. Aas pass 20 alag-alag postion par mask lagaye sniper apne bandook taane the.…
"Ye kya kar rahi ho Sia, kitna chilla raha hai"… Lata Mishra chidhti hui kahne lagi…
Sia:- Vyas muh me kapda dalo iske...
Vyas, pichhe ka najara dekha... Istak ki dono kalai aadhi jhul rahi thi... "Sia nahi"..
Sia:- In haramjadon ki itni himmat, mere samne mere pitaji ko dhakka diya... Dekha nahi jata to aankhen mund lo...
Vyas, Sia ke hath se wire chhin kar usse wahan se hatate... "Bus karo Jhansi ki rani, kalai uski jamin par gir jayegi..."
Sia kuchh hosh me aayi. Wire ko khinch kar uski kalai se nikali aur pith par ek jordar laat aise mari ki Istak muh ke bal jamin par gir gaya...
Som bade aaram se un sab ke bich pahunch chuka tha. Yahan ke audio-visuals Mejor ki team ko mil rahe tha. Som niche baith kar, Istak ka baal pakad kar chehra upar kiya, aur dhul mitti lage uske chehre ki tasveer khinch kar, Zerul ko bhejte.… "Beta chahiye ya jamin decide kar le.. Som"…
Istak dard se chhatpata raha tha. Tabhi syren bajati ambulance wahan pahunch gayi. Bakiyon ko load kiya gaya, ek doctor bahut sare equipment ke sath wahin ruka aur Istak ke hath me local anasthesia de kar uski marham patti karne laga...
Som, gusse me Sia ko ghurte.… "Tumhe message kiya tha na sab ko yahan se le kar jane"…
Sia:- Tum bhi mujhe hi daant lo. Maa aur Pitaji ko kuchh mat kaho...
Som:- Main unhe kya kah dun. Tumne ek baar bhi unhe bola kahan ki yahan khatra hai.
Sia, apna phone check karti… "Sorry, jis waqt tumhara sandesh aaya, shayad uss waqt Asif, Zerul ki wo harkat bata raha tha jisne hume jhakjhor kar rakh diya tha. Wo humara pahla contractor ne yahan..
Som bich me hi rokte... "Haan tumhara phone on tha aur maine sab sun liya tha. Tum sab ab yahin aaram se baitho kyonki ab ye society poori tarah se block ho chuki hogi. Baki tamasa dekho"…
Vyas:- Zerul se hisab to aap kar hi loge. Lekin kamal hai bade bhaiya, yahan poora parivar tha uske bich goli chalwayi... Kamal ho aap..
Vyas:- Boys ek goli iss ladke ko bhi maaro. Chinta mat karo jo bullet lagi hai wo tranculizer hai. Agle 10 se 12 ghante bus behosh rahenge. Jab tak sniper position lete, Istak aur uske log boundry ke ander ghus chuke the. Hum boundry par rokte to uss waqt ye log moving target hote. Sab ke karib pahunch kar bus unhe apne kadam rokne hi to the... Plus close range se 2 nali se firing thodi muskil hoti hai.… Aap sab thik hain..
Kapendra:- Main bilkul thik nahi hun... Main Kripa Shankar ko phone lagwa raha tha…
Som:- Pitaji maine sun liya hai... Aap chinta mat karo. Zerul ke khilaf pahle se millitary operation chal rahi hai...
Kapendra:- Mujhe wo Zerul Imam yahan chahiye... Abhi...
Som:- Mujhe ek ghante do... Jab tak Diksha sab ke liye pizza order karo… aur koi mujhe batayega ye ladki kaun hai...
Lata:- Ye ladki Asif ki lover hai...
Som:- Aqsa hai. Maa apne ghar me bahu ne pahli baar kadam rakha hai... Aap Nirbhay chachu se Aqsa ki vidai ke liye kuchh mangwa lo... Khali haath ladki jaye achha nahi lagta.
Vyas:- Bade bhaiya sab khade rahenge kya?…
Som kuchh na bolte lagatar call milate raha. Kuchh der baad hi 1-2 truck darwaje par lagi. Kuchh labour pahunche... Dhardhar saman utar kar chhat ke niche lagaya. Kayi sari kursiyan ek bada sa dianing table... Sofa set... Tv... Kuchh der baad pizza wala pahuncha. Uske pichhe Nirbhay singh, apne kuchh logon me sath sara saman le kar aaya. Fatafat sara kaam hota raha.
Aqsa:- Bade bhaiya agar izazat ho to main apna ek poorana hisab le lun iss kamine Istak se...
Vyas aur Asif ek sath.… "Hum bhi katar me hain"
Som:- Poori chhut hai... Kursi par bitha kar bandho aur poora hisab le lo...
Som, ki baat sun kar Aqsa ek najar Asif aur Vyas ko dekhi. Jaise yahan par uske hone ke liye dono se dhanywad kah rahi ho aur sath me kuchh izazat bhi maang rahi ho. Vyas aur Asif ne bhi hath ke ishare se... "Poori bhadas nikal lo".. Dono ko sun kar Aqsa muskurai aur Istak ke samne aati…. "Tujhe main yaad hun ki nahi re kutte"..
Vyas:- O meri hone wali bhabhijaan usse sab yaad hai. Bus iska kaha wo epic dialogue to yaad dilao…
Aqsa:- Haan kyun nahi... "Hum yahan jis chij par hath rakh de wo meri... Sala koi hum se bhi gundai kar sakta hai"... Yaad aaya ki nahi galich tujhe apni baat...
Aqsa apni baat kahti khinch kar uss ke gaal par sandel marti... "Allha ne mauka nahi baksha fir kabhi jo tujh se aise hisab le sakun. Asif yahan aaj lane ke liye shukriya..."
Aqsa apni baat samapt karte hi uske sine par aisa laat mari ki wo kursi samet jamin par gira. Asif aur Vyas usse wapas se bithate, dono thik uske samne aate, thappadon se apni bhadas nikalte… "Bhaiya waise iska karne kya wale ho"..
Som:- Gaddar hain sale... Inko to sidha military le kar jayegi. Iska baap abhi logon ko jama kar raha hai, wo yahan aayega aur NIA ki ek team, 2 batallian Force, sath me 1000 police.… poore force ke sath iske poori gali aur ghar par chhapa marenge.
Lata:- Aur wo Zerul Imam aur uske log jo yahan aayenge...
Yahan ek poori batallian apne position me thi. 20 Sniper jo iss ghar me the wo aas-pass phail chuke the. Som ke institute me traning de rahe 10 anya sniper ko bhi Som bula chuka tha. Wo Som ke ghar se kuchh duri ki chhaton par position liye the... Society ke sabhi gharon me 2 police wale, sabhi family ko uske ghar ke ander rakhe the aur aas pass ke chatton par sena ke sniper tainat the.
Idhar Zerul ne bhi police commissioner ko iss ilake me koi action lene se mana kar diya tha, dono bina ye jane ki sena ne jitni police force maangi thi sab Zerul ke liye hi tha. Aagyakari commissioner M.K.Shula ji bhi bechare bade desh bhakt sabit ho gaye. Dusre deshbhakt District Magistrate B.K.Nahate, jiske ishare par 2 km ke ilake me crafue to laga lekin Zerul aur uske log allowed the...
Khair ye to dono pakshon ki taiyari thi. Lata Mishra ke sawal par Som, Lata aur Kapendra mishra ko ek sath apne baju me samet'te... "Maa, pitaji uss bacchi ke paun ka hisab aaj hi hoga. Uske swagat ki poori taiyari ho gayi hai.. Aap dono shant raho. Maine uss bacchi ke parent ko bhi bulwaya hai... Bahut galat kar gaye lekin ab bus..."
Nirbhay:- Main kuchh help kar dun...
Som:- Haan kyun nahi Singh sahab. Sabhi logon ko piller ke pichhe cover me rahne dijiye, aur koi bhi bich ki prati jamin cross kar ke upar yahan tak pahunche, unhe aap log lita dena.
Diksaha, pichhe se Som ke kandhe par hath deti... "Kya ye jaroori hai. Itne khun kharabe ki planning. Kya hum bhi unki tarah bandook utha kar logon ko daraye."
Som:- Main kabhi iske paksh me nahi rahta Diksha. Lekin main system se lad kar nahi rah sakta.
Diksha:- Tu kya army me hain. Kisi agency me hai.. Police hai... Kya hai tu...
Som:- A family man. Wo mere parivar ke liye aa rahe. Maine action nahi liya to wo action lenge. Meri jagah koi bhi ghar ka baccha hota, yahi karta. Fir isme dusri soch kaise... Itna mahol hi nahi hua hota yadi tum sab yahan nahi hote. Kewal tv par ek chhoti khabar aati... Zurul Imam ke yahan raid... Jaise abhi hone wale kand dusre log tv par dekhenge aur tum log poora mehsus karoge, kyonki boundry ke ander kisi ko aane nahi diya jayega jo tum log aankhon se dekh sako ki yahan kya ho raha hai. Ye sab jab shant hoga to fir hum poora parivar dur-dur tak picture me nahi honge. Public aur govt. unhi sab department ko shabasi denge jiska naam tumne abhi liya. Additional me ek kisi neta ka naam jodenge taki usse political milage mile aur hume poorn chhutkara....
Diksha maine tumhe samjha diya hai. Ab bhi tumhe lagta hai ki ye khun kharaba nahi hona chahiye to viswas mano, ye log mere kahne se rukne wale nahi hai... Aage tum jaisa kaho Diksha. Main apne parivar ke liye aage khada rahun ya kuchh parivar wale log desh ke sipahi hain aur wo jo kaam kar rahe hain usme humara aur na jane kitne logon ka dosi Zurul aur uske sathi pisne wala hai, ye soch kar main pichhe rahun. Main elligal kaam nahi karta isliye licenced weapon mere hath me hai aur parivar ke aage khade rahne ki poori chhut... Descision ab tum sab ka hai...
Kapendra:- Sab log piller ke pichhe aa jao.
Sab log piller ke pichhe ja chuke the. Som makan ke floor par kinare se paun latka kar baitha tha. Istak ko kursi se bandh kar wahin aage ki parti jamin par bithaya gaya. Har koi aane wale pal ko soch kar ghabra raha tha. Vyas aur Asif bus ek dusre ka muh hi dekh rahe the. Som ko afsos sa ho raha tha ki uske parivar ko ye sab dekhna par raha hai... Har koi khamosh tha lekin sab ke ander ghabrahat ka toofan tha.
Takriban dedh ghante baad uss jagah gadiyon ki kataar lag gayi. Ruphale parde par chalne wale kisi kalpnik drishya ke saman hi yah drishya tha. Gadiyon ke awaj ke sath hi Som ko alert mila. Som ne chehre ko achhe se mask kiya. Hath ke ishare se kisi ko cover ke bahar na aane ki hidayat dee.
Gadiyan bhar-bhar kar log pahunche the. Sabhi boundry ke bahar bade se khule darwaje ke samne khade the. Bade se darwaje ke ek fit aage board par saaf akshron me likha tha... "Jise jaan pyari na ho wo ye line cross kare.."
Darwaje se takriban 5 fit ki duri par hathiyar uthaye kewal log hi log najar aa rahe the. Ek kaali chamchamati car boundry wall ke bahar khadi hui aur Zerul Imam sabse aage aa kar khada hua...
"Kyon be Haramiyon... Mere bete ko bandhak bana kar mere sath hi khel khel rahe"….Bahar se bhonpu par Zerul chillaya… "Boys kitne log hain"… .
"Boss maximum 400"..
Som:- Thik hai sab taiyar raho.
"Boss bade bade hatiyar ke sath pahuncha hai. Graned launcher aur rocket launcher ke sath laaye hain"..
Som:- Kisi ko pata hai uss bacchi ka kaun sa paun gaya hai...
Asif:- Bade bhaiya right wala...
"Suno, 2 log 7mm bullet load karo... Zerul Imam ka right paun chahiye mujhe aur haan unke chamche ko warning do yadi hathiyar par hath bhi gaya to abhi Zerul Imam sirf ghayal hua hai... Weapon chalane ki kosis hui to goli sidha sir me. Sabko Zerul se 5 fit dur rakho aur kuchh apna buddhi bhi istamal kar lena...
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Ishq ki mauj mein aa
Aaja behne ke liye
Tu zaroori, zaroori sa hai
Mujhko zinda rehne ke liye
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oh to ye hai asli raaz ki baatAreeee daffu ...
Anurag aur Sadhna ka beta hai Som.
Jay Kumar aur uski pahli patni se hai Sia..




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Naina.. bichad ke aaj ro diye hain yun
Naina.. jo milke raat jaagte the
Naina.. sehar mein palken meechte hain yun...
Phir bhi nain11ster saheb murder mystery add nahi kar rahe hai story peare kam se kam do teen kirdaaro ka patta saaf kar dijiye story se hi taaki Naina ke dil ko sukun mile
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मन में जितनी भड़ास हो सब निकल दीजिएगा उस कहानी में।
किसको किसके साथ सेट करने है। किसको कौन सी गाली देनी हैं ये तो आप बखूबी जानती हैं।
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khunnas khaye huye hai kayi writer logis isi firak mein hai main kab story suru karu...
mujhe na likhni koi story bory![]()
isliye....... isliye meera ke dada ji aur Sadhna ji ki shaadi jald se jald ho jaani chahiye... taaki pehli barish ki fuhar mein unke hot hotter hottest scenes dekh ke ye dono maa beti sudhar jaaye![]()
.. Chhi chhi chhi chhi... Ek achhi macchi talab ke gandi machhliyon ke bich aa gayi... Unsanskari demand 
Riaz & Sia.........
Aankhon ki.... Gustakhiyan.. maaf hon..
Ek tuk ek duje dekhti hain...
baat kehna chaahe zubaan
ek duje ko vo ye kehti hain.....
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LOL.. ye Anurag Malhotra to sach mein maha chutiya niklaoh to ye hai asli raaz ki baat
Kahani sadhna ki....
Ek beta paida hone ke baad bhi.. matlab Som ke paida hone baad bhi business office ke chalte Anurag waqt nahi paya sadhna aur Som ko... Toh sadhna Jay ke prati aakarshit hone lagi.... wohi dusri taraf Jay ki biwi nahi rahi .. . to jawani ki aag sambhale na sambhaal paaye... Sadhna ki garmi ko dekh pighal gaya hoga... phir kya tha sadhna ne pati, pati ka ghar, apne Som sabhi ko chhod chad ke Jay ke sath bhag ke shaadi kar li..... Bhaad mein gaya pati Anurag aur beta Som gaya tel lene...
waise ek mod tha is kahani mein wo yeh ki Jay ko bhi pehli waali biwi se ek beti thi naam Sia....
Oh to Sia aur Som ke bich koi khoon ka rishta nahi...
are yaar... are mera sar chakkaraing....
jiske sath Anurag ki biwi bhagi us Jay ki beti ko apni beti tarah pyar kare Anurag
BADI AJIBO GARIB BHOOL BHOOLIYEYA HAI YE KAHANI....
are ab to bas Vyas, Riaz aur Asif se hi ummid hai ki unki wajah se ye kahani dilchasp ho...

Areee gadheri... Fir shadi me wo Nirvan jo tha bada beta... Wo kahan se aa gaya...oh to ye hai asli raaz ki baat
Kahani sadhna ki....
Ek beta paida hone ke baad bhi.. matlab Som ke paida hone baad bhi business office ke chalte Anurag waqt nahi paya sadhna aur Som ko... Toh sadhna Jay ke prati aakarshit hone lagi.... wohi dusri taraf Jay ki biwi nahi rahi .. . to jawani ki aag sambhale na sambhaal paaye... Sadhna ki garmi ko dekh pighal gaya hoga... phir kya tha sadhna ne pati, pati ka ghar, apne Som sabhi ko chhod chad ke Jay ke sath bhag ke shaadi kar li..... Bhaad mein gaya pati Anurag aur beta Som gaya tel lene...
waise ek mod tha is kahani mein wo yeh ki Jay ko bhi pehli waali biwi se ek beti thi naam Sia....
Oh to Sia aur Som ke bich koi khoon ka rishta nahi...
are yaar... are mera sar chakkaraing....
jiske sath Anurag ki biwi bhagi us Jay ki beti ko apni beti tarah pyar kare Anurag
BADI AJIBO GARIB BHOOL BHOOLIYEYA HAI YE KAHANI....
are ab to bas Vyas, Riaz aur Asif se hi ummid hai ki unki wajah se ye kahani dilchasp ho...
... 2 bacche to aise dikh rahe hain
... Bakayda talaq ke drama hua tha madam ke ghar par... 
Har acche aadmi aaj ke date me chutiya hi hota hai... Hiiiii hiiiii hiiii hiiii ... Khiiii khiiii khiiii khiiii...LOL.. ye Anurag Malhotra to sach mein maha chutiya nikla![]()

Ohk supadi maine accept kar liya hai... jald hi 2-4 ko tapkate hun... Koi buses demand ...
Ohk ji ...
Wo khud ki nahi maanti .. tabhi to dimag ka fuse udda sa rahta hai... Abhi kuchh likhegi aur ghante baad apne hi post ko quote kar ke uske ulat likh sakti hai...
To jo insan khud ki nahi maanta uss se aap kah rahi meri maniye... Azi wo bilkul na maane wali hai
Is baat se to ek hi matlab nikalta hai... Miss naina accept kar rahi Ki wo jaan bujh kar apne comment se mahol banati hai... Warna aisi baat na nikakti...
Ye kuchh dusre hi level ka dimag aur demand hai... Dosh aap ka nahi jagah ka hai.... 4 ek jaise bolne wale milte hain to log bhi sur mila lete hain ye bhul kar ki usne khud aaj tak kya sikha.. Chhi chhi chhi chhi... Ek achhi macchi talab ke gandi machhliyon ke bich aa gayi... Unsanskari demand
Gaanja pina hai kya... Jo Som ko ek tak dekh rahi![]()
are ju ki us garam sadhna ne atit mein itne mardo ke sath shaadi kar kar ke gul khilati rahi tab to kuch na bole... ab readers kuch bole ju ke sine pe saap lotne lage 