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Fantasy Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai ~ Ajab Sa Risk Hai ~ Reload (Completed)

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Issi ke sath Ishq Risk reloaded ka ye season poora hua. Next fantasy journey announce ho jayegi. Ummid hai pahle

"Arymani:- The Pure Alfa Between Two World's."

Yahi aaye... Jo bhi hoga purv suchna mil jayegi... Fihlaal end enjoy karenge... Aur kahani ka poora safar kaisa rahega wo ek baar jaroor sajha karen...



Filhaal Abhi vyast hun ek pure romantic journey par....


Aap sab ka :welcome1: hai udhar. Kahani par pahunchne ke liye story title par ulgi karne ka...


 
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Din ke 11 baje ka samay. Bacche sabhi school ja chuke the, Jyoti bhabhi ghar par bilkul akeli. Darwaja khula hua tha aur teen log chupke se dakhil huye.


Haan thik hai koi bahut bada suspence nahi hai, baat itni si thi ki Vyom ka kya karna hai. Kyonki usse kidnap kiye 3 din ho gaye the, jise Alexa Mula Mutha nadi ke kinare kahin chhipa'kar rakhe huye tha, aur 3 din se jankariyan nikal raha tha... Alexa jiske bare me Nandni sabko bata chuki thi ye kaun hai.


Sabhi hall me hi baithe the. Jyoti jigyasavash puchhne lagi... "Kya tumhe button tankne aata hai"…


Alexa:- Robot nahi hun mai, jo har kaam kar lun… Chitti hi bana do...


Jyoti bhabhi, apna muh bichkati... "Huhhh !!! Kya fayda hua fir tere hone ka. Tujhse aacha to mera pati hai. Khali time me mere blouse ke button bhi taank dete hain aur bacchon ke diaper bhi badal dete hain"…


Alexa:- Ab roj-roj jise button todne ki aadat hogi wahi to taankega na... Isme proud type feel karne wali kaun si baat hai.…


Alexa ki baat par jo hi hansi Nandni aur Kasak. Aur idhar Jyoti bhabhi usse gali deti hui kahne lagi.… "Bhag haramjada"…


Alexa:- Sorry wo flow me nikla tha bus... Matlab baad me samjh me aaya...


Jyoti bhabhi, aur jyada bhaukhlati hui... "Sala tharki, Nandu isse nikal bahar"…


Kasak:- Kya bhabhi wo naadani me kah gaya aur aap baat khich rahi… naraj na ho cutee par...


Alexa:- Thanks Kasak... U r so gentle..


Jyoti:- Abhi kya faltu ki punchayat hogi ya jis kaam ke liye aaye the uss par bhi baat kar le...


Nandni, Alexa ke ore dekhne lagi aur Alexa Vyom ke bare me batane laga. Uske hisab se ladka achha hai. Pune apne kisi business ke silsile me aaya hai. Kuch din ruk'kar wapas chala jayega. Jivisha ke liye uska ek hi openion hai ki wo thodi pagal aur bahut jyada hansmukh hai. Jo bhi uske sath rahta hoga, wo fir kabhi udas nahi rah sakta.


Nandni ne pahli mulakat ke bare me jikr ki, jahan Vyom ka kahna tha ki uske piche kuch log pare the... Is par Alexa javab dete huye khane laga ki usne iss baat ka bhi pata kiya tha… Haan iss shahar ke kuch criminas the jo kisi aur ke dhoke me Vyom ko pakad rahe the... Baad me un logon ne Vyom ko pakad bhi liya tha lekin fir chhod diya...


Apni baat jari rakhte Alexa aage batane laga... Shuru-shuru me Vyom ko laga tha ki Jivisha uska pichha kar rahi hai, lekin baad me pub night ki gahtna se usse laga ki wo bhi to aaj achanak sadkon par takra gaya. Uske shabdo me kahe to.…


"Humara milna mahaj ek itafaak tha, jo kuch hi waqt me lagataar ho raha hai. Shayad niyati ka kuch ishara hai aur kuch kaam wo hum dono ke jariye karwana chahta hai, isliye hume baar-baar mila raha"...


Puri baat sun'ne ke baad Kasak jod se kahne lagi... "Sala jhutha hai ye ek number ka"


Alexa:- Uski bhavna jhuthi nahi thi. Maine motion detector se pakda tha… balki iss waqt tum juban se kuch kah rahi ho aur dil ki bhawna kuch aur hai...


Nandni, aakhen dikhati..... "Ladkiyo ke dil aur juban ke upar nahi jate Alexa... Unhe ignore karo, warna tum fuse ho jaoge"...


Jyoti:- Thik hai kuch din Jivisha ko bhi apne mann ki kar lene do... Main apni pati ki haalat se jyada tumhari hi baat par gaur ki Nandu. Uss din tune bahut sahi kaha tha…. Uski jagah koi bhi ladki ya ladka hota to yahi sochta… dil uska toota hai par wo dard bata nahi rahi… aur jab wo achha aur sacha sathi dhundh rahi hai to bhala wo ladka Vyom kaise galat ho sakta hai... Ek baat to tay hai... Niyati wakai hi dono se kuch karwana chahti hai...


Kasak:- Dono sath mil'kar bacche hi paida karenge aur kya karenge...


Nandni:- Jhalli kahin ki kuch bhi bakwas karti hai...


Kasak:- Thik hai mai usse ek baar khud se parakhna chahungi..….


Jyoti:- Mai bhi, lekin pub me nahi...

Nandu:- Fir kahan...


Jyoti:- Wo baad me soch'kar bataungi... Abhi uss ladke Vyom ko thoda dhil de aur Jivisha ke pata chale bina us'par najar banaye rakho...


Nandni:- Apna Alexa kab kaam aayega... Kyon Alexa…


Alexa:- Ji sure.. mai dur se najar banaye rakhunga… kahoge to live prasaran wo bhi audio visual mobile par dikha dunga...


Jyoti:- Ye achha idea hai... Alexa jab bhi kuch aisa ho to mujhe call kar dena..


Nandni aur Kasak dono... "Mujhe bhi call kar dena"…


Chhoti si sabha bhang ho gayi. Ussi din Kasak bhi apni dramatic upastithi darj karti pahunch gayi swarn villa... Jivisha khushi se uchhal'kar usse gale lagaati hui.…. "Mai kahne hi wali thi, kuch din aa ja mere pass bahut akeli feel kar rahi hun. Raat me to kabhi-kabhi itne bhyanak khwaab aate hain ki kya kahun"….


Kasak:- Chal jhuti, drame kam kar... Tujhe bhi pata tha ki kaka aur baba jab sath mahina din bitayenge to main tere pass hi rahungi...


Saal me 4-6 mahine aise hi hote the jab Himanshu aur Sudhanshu dono bhai sath hi rahte the ek jagah. Dono bhaiyon ke bich ka lagaav hi kuch aisa tha.


Khair, dono bahne bistar par chit leti hui thi. Jivisha Kasak se uski love story puchh rahi thi aur Kasak usse apni kahani bata rahi thi...


Kaise wo Sahil se coffee shop me takra gayi aur galti puri ussi ki hone ke bavjood bhi Sahil ko khadi-khoti sunati chali gayi.


Aamuman har prem kahani ki ek sochi samjhi sajis wali shurwaat, jisme kisi bahane se 2 ajnabee mil jate hai… thik ussi prakar Sahil aur Kasak mil chuke the. Kasak ke shabdon anusar uske liye Sahil hamesa Harfanmaula, bindass aur flirty. Wahin apne aur apne doston ke liye jimmedar aur hasmukh, bakiyon ke liye shant, gambhir aur apne kaam se kewal matlab rakhne wala. Kasak ne Sahil ki tarif me kaha...


Fir Kasak dubti hui batane lagi kaise dhire-dhire dono karib huye. Sahil ne apna past bayan kiya aur Kasak ne apna.. lekin dono ko hi unke past me bahut jyada intrest nahi tha, bhale wo Kasak ka Jatin ho ya fir Sahil ki Nidhi.. Unhe vartman me kafi dilchaspi rahi.. Kasak aur Sahil...


Dono lagbhag 2 viprit svabhav ke the. Kasak shararti aur hamukh to Sahil shant aur gambhir. Haan kewal uska nature Kasak ke liye pura viprit ho jata.… Aisa koi din nahi bita hoga, jab pyar parwan chadhne ke baad bhi usne Kasak ke sath flirting band ki ho..… Uska to yahi maan'na tha sabse jyada pyar to unhi se jatane ki jaroorat hoti hai jo apne hote hain.... kyonki kaam to apne hi aate hai...


Kasak, Sahil ke khyalon me khoyi hui, apni bhavna vyakt karti rahi aur jaise-jaise Kasak apne armaan nikal rahi thi, Jivisha ke chehre par muskaan fail rahi thi... Kasak lagatar bol'kar jab khamosh hui, tab dono bahan chhat ko takti kamosh thi.…


Kasak jab karwat le'kar dekhi to Jivisha chhat ko dekh rahi thi. Uske chehre par muskaan faili hui thi aur aakhon se ek dhara aanshu ke nikal rahe the…. Kasak bade dhyan se Jivisha ko dekhne lagi...


Jivisha ko jab yah ehsas hua, wo aashu saaf kar'ke muskurati hui apni lalaat upar ki, mano puchhne ki kosis kar rahi ho "kya hua"…


Pratkriya me Kasak bhi muskura'kar kuch nahi ka ishara kee, aur dono bahne punah (dobara) chit let'kar kamoshi ko sun'ne lagi.… Dono ke jahan me bus itna hi tha ki kitne varshon ke baad mil rahe hain..


Baat 6 mahine pahle ya sal bhar pahle ki nahi thi, balki aisa lag raha tha dilon ke ehsas hi bahut dur ho chale the... Jivisha chhat ko takti hui, khamoshi ko todi.… "Aisa lagta hai kitna waqt bit gaya na... Jindgi tej hoti gayi aur hum bhid me kahin kho gaye"..


Kasak:- Bite dino me kya miss kar gaye us'par afsos karne se achha hai ki bhid se alag ho'kar hum kahin ekant aur shant mahol me baith'kar baten karen...


Jivisha:- Tumhare pass to fir bhi baten karne ke liye, mere pass to wo bhi nahi... Jo nahi dikhta usse dekhne aur chahne ki galti kar baithi aur tum sab jo dikh rahe the, uss se mai dur hoti chali gayi... Kaisa ye bharm jaal hai jisme mai ulajh gayi...


Kasak, piche tek laga'kar thoda upar hokar baithi aur Jivisha ke sir ko apne gode me le'kar balon par hath ferti…. "Tujhe yaad hai, jab hum gaanv me the aur tu aam churane Tribhuwan kaka ke aam ke bagiche me ghus jaya karti the"…


"Haan, jane ki meri ikchha hoti thi, chori mai kar leti thi, aur mere liye tu baaten sun leti thi"…


"Aam me hissedari bhi to leti thi beta, aise free service thode na tha... Waise issi chori ke chakkar me teri bhag-daur itni pakki ho gayi thi ki Kabaddi me sabko pachhar diya karti thi"..


"Areee jhuti, gundi thi tum. Hamesa cheating se mujhe jitwaya tha. Wo More yaad hai"..


"Kaun wo moti Ajani more"..


"Haan, wo rote huye teri shikayat lekar aati thi... Kabaddi ke baad roj Kasak mujhe pit'kar kahti hai, roj aise hi haarna"…


"Oh to ye Anjani More ka kaam tha jisne pol khol dee... Waise meri cheating yaad hai, apni bhul gayi"…


"Meri koi hai hi nahi"…


"Achha, aur 8th ke exam me jab baba ne warning diya tha ki iss baar yadi fail hui to sar mundwa dunga, tab ki baat kuch yaad hai kya?"…


"Areee, bade papa ne karo ya maro ki prastithi me la khada kiya tha. Pai-pai jod'kar hum balon ko maintain karte the aur wo meri bahan ke baal chhilwa dete... Aise kaise... Waise ek baat bata.. tujhe sach me takli kar dete kya?"


"Baba ka to pata nahi lekin teri maa to pakka karwa kar manti"…


"Ae bitte bhar ki ladki, ha ha ha"


"Ha ha ha, kaki ka epic dialogue tha. Waise wo 8th wali ghatna ke baad hi hum dono ko pata chala tha ki bina padhe bhi pass ho sakte hai. Tune aaj tak waise bataya nahi ki uss khadus Apte sir ko tu class se bhagayi kaise thi"…


"Sachi bata dun"


"Haan bata na"..


"Apte sir ko Lachhi madam ka love letter mila tha, aur wo class se gayab"..


"Love letter !!!! Ae ullu tu 8th class se love letter deti thi"…


"Ab itni filmen dekhi thi kuch to anubahv dikhati na... Likh dali love letter"..


"Haan tabhi dono ka ghar bhi bas gaya. Dono ko to pata hi nahi hoga ki unki love story ki bicholiya tu thi"..


"Huhhh !! Bicholiya thi ya atki nayya ki khewayya. Waise Kasak ab sab log kahan honge"…


"Chal aaj dhundhte hai sabko... Apne bachpan ke bhule bisre log.… Kuch facebook par milenge, aur kuch ka unse hi puchh lenge"….


"Yessss !!! Maza aayega… itne varson baad jaan'na kaun apni life me kya kar raha hai"


Har koi jaise bichhdon ko dhundhne nikla ho. Ye dekhne ki kosis kerne ki bhul'kar hume apni jindgi me tum kya kar rahe maherbaan.…



Zoren planet.…



Zoren me satta priwartan ke baad Nag Loki Shwetna ko aadha Zoren mila tha to aadha Zoren Dridh aayu Jatin urf Josefer ko. Jispar uski bahan Baby aur Jatin dono mil'kar shasan chalate the...


Mahamahim ki mahima samapt hote hi Zoren ke manushya ki aabadi ko bhi kafi jyada nukshan hua tha, isliye aabadi ab bahut jyada hi control me thi aur sabko family planning ki hidayat mili hui thi…


Nag Loki aur Dirdh aayu dono mitr rastr the, jo ab aapas me Jodi bana'kar mixed culture par kaam kar rahe the... Serin aur Nischal ki bhale hi puri yaad mit gayi ho, lekin har Aizemvasiyo ka sawagat yahan bahut hi garam Joshi se hota tha. Sath hi sath, dono hi rastr me Shashak ki kursi khali rahti thi, jo Vish-Nilayani ke wansaj aur Zoren ki satta pariwartak rahi Malkia Jivisha ki thi.…


Pichhli raat Aizem se 2 jahaj rawaana ho chuke the. Ek jahaj ka mukhiya Puncham tha, jo 8 high class trained warrior, 2 jasoos, 4 technician, 2 ammunation technology expert aur 4 pilot ki team ke sath Zoren ke liye rawana ho chuke the.


Ye ek puri tukdi, kitni bhi badi fauj ho usse kam se kam 24 ghante tak ek jagah par rok'kar apni fauj ko bulane me saksham the.… Inka jahaj Zoren utar chuka tha, jahan Puncham ne wahan ke shasak Jatin ki ek din ki mehman nawaji swaikar kar'ke apne dusre jahaj ko gupt roop se suchit karne nikal gaya tha...


Aizem ka dusra jahaj sidha prithvi ke liye rawana hua tha. Iss jahaj ki mukhiya Maha Prabandhak Lobhu ki Jodi Nayla, apni ek team ke sath prithvi ke liye sidha ravana hui thi. Iss team me bhi utne hi log the, bus itna anter tha ki Nayla ke sath uski 4 khatarnak sewikayen bhi ja rahi thi. Jo kisi ko bhi mohne aur apne ore aakarshit karne ke liye roop, yovan tatha kayi prakar ke rashayan (chemical) sath liye ghumti thi...


Ek surkasha aur madad ki niti Aizem wale apnate hai... Jahan backup 24 ghante me nahi bhej sakte, wahan 1 gupt jahaj bhejte the. Taki aapatkalin stithi me madad kar sake aur apne logon ko bacha'kar la sake.…


Puncham, gupt suchna de'kar jaise hi wapas lauta, wahan ke sabha bhavan ka najara dekh'kar sidha apne sar me goli maar lee aur agle hi kshn (moment) uske dimag ke chithre udd gaye.…


Pancham ka mirt sarir jamin par gira bhi nahi tha ki flash raushni jali, jis'me aakhri sandesh tha Pancham ka.…


"Mai uska sabse pyara sagird hun jo tum sab ka baap hai. Bus intzar karo, jis pal usse khabar mili, wo ussi pal wahan se chalega… Uski beraham khanjar jab tumhara imtihan legi to tumhe apni maut par chikhne ka waqt nahi milega…. Abhi mai mar raha hun, aur iss pal ke baad se hi kaal tum par mandrane laga hai... Jitne din tum ji sakte ho apni sari ikchhayen puri kar lo"



"Hawa ka rukh kuch khusk aur badla sa lag raha hai Rachita. Tumhe kuch mehsus ho raha hai"….



"Haan Zoren ki hawaon ka rukh badla hua hai. Shikari laut aaya hai"


"Rachita apni puri seema surakshit karo. Prweash dwar par chetavni daal do ki yeh kshetr ab bahar walon ke liye band ho gaya hai. Varsak puri fauj lekar tum puri seema ki nigrani karoge... Bhumigat ho'kar. Rachita, Varshak tum dono par puri jimmedari chhod'kar ja rahi hun.
Ek baat yaad rahe, ladne se jyada jaroori hai apni jaan bachana, isliye kisi bhi paristhiti me sabko surakshit rakhne ka kaam tumhara hai"…


"Aap kahan ja rahi hai Shwetna"…


"Yahan ki Shashika par najar rakhne, kyonki Zoren ki badli hawa ka asar nischit taur par prithvi par bhi hoga. Lin, HuYu ko sandesh bejo hume prithvi tak le'kar chale"….



Zoren ki Naag Loki Shashika Shwetna, ek baar fir badle mahol ko bhaanpti hui, apne sabhi up-shashkon ko samjha'kar Prithvi ke liye kisi bhi pal ravana hone wali thi.
Bahot zaberdast shaandaar lajawab update
 

Badshah Khan

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Awesome update nain11ster
Apne chirag aur arshi to pori planning kar chuke they commissioner sahab ki wardi utarwane ka but jivisha unke plan ko bhap gayi ab inko ek aur sathi milgaya yuvraj kya nandu ka andaza sahi hai ki chirag aur arshi ne apne naye dost ko apna research centre dikha diya isliye hi usne inhe itne paise diya
Agar sach mai aisa hai to ab dekhne ye hoga ki kya yuvraj par chirag aur arshi ka itna bharusa sahi rahega
Alexa ke sath choti si meeting mai vyom ke uppar charcha Hogayi but mujhe nahi lagta vyom koi aam insan hai
Jivisha and kasak apne bachpan ko phir se dhundne lagi hai dekhte hai ye ab kis kis ki waat laga ti 😂
And lagta phir se ek baar jung hone wali hai ab iska parinam kya hoga
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Din ke 11 baje ka samay. Bacche sabhi school ja chuke the, Jyoti bhabhi ghar par bilkul akeli. Darwaja khula hua tha aur teen log chupke se dakhil huye.


Haan thik hai koi bahut bada suspence nahi hai, baat itni si thi ki Vyom ka kya karna hai. Kyonki usse kidnap kiye 3 din ho gaye the, jise Alexa Mula Mutha nadi ke kinare kahin chhipa'kar rakhe huye tha, aur 3 din se jankariyan nikal raha tha... Alexa jiske bare me Nandni sabko bata chuki thi ye kaun hai.


Sabhi hall me hi baithe the. Jyoti jigyasavash puchhne lagi... "Kya tumhe button tankne aata hai"…


Alexa:- Robot nahi hun mai, jo har kaam kar lun… Chitti hi bana do...


Jyoti bhabhi, apna muh bichkati... "Huhhh !!! Kya fayda hua fir tere hone ka. Tujhse aacha to mera pati hai. Khali time me mere blouse ke button bhi taank dete hain aur bacchon ke diaper bhi badal dete hain"…


Alexa:- Ab roj-roj jise button todne ki aadat hogi wahi to taankega na... Isme proud type feel karne wali kaun si baat hai.…


Alexa ki baat par jo hi hansi Nandni aur Kasak. Aur idhar Jyoti bhabhi usse gali deti hui kahne lagi.… "Bhag haramjada"…


Alexa:- Sorry wo flow me nikla tha bus... Matlab baad me samjh me aaya...


Jyoti bhabhi, aur jyada bhaukhlati hui... "Sala tharki, Nandu isse nikal bahar"…


Kasak:- Kya bhabhi wo naadani me kah gaya aur aap baat khich rahi… naraj na ho cutee par...


Alexa:- Thanks Kasak... U r so gentle..


Jyoti:- Abhi kya faltu ki punchayat hogi ya jis kaam ke liye aaye the uss par bhi baat kar le...


Nandni, Alexa ke ore dekhne lagi aur Alexa Vyom ke bare me batane laga. Uske hisab se ladka achha hai. Pune apne kisi business ke silsile me aaya hai. Kuch din ruk'kar wapas chala jayega. Jivisha ke liye uska ek hi openion hai ki wo thodi pagal aur bahut jyada hansmukh hai. Jo bhi uske sath rahta hoga, wo fir kabhi udas nahi rah sakta.


Nandni ne pahli mulakat ke bare me jikr ki, jahan Vyom ka kahna tha ki uske piche kuch log pare the... Is par Alexa javab dete huye khane laga ki usne iss baat ka bhi pata kiya tha… Haan iss shahar ke kuch criminas the jo kisi aur ke dhoke me Vyom ko pakad rahe the... Baad me un logon ne Vyom ko pakad bhi liya tha lekin fir chhod diya...


Apni baat jari rakhte Alexa aage batane laga... Shuru-shuru me Vyom ko laga tha ki Jivisha uska pichha kar rahi hai, lekin baad me pub night ki gahtna se usse laga ki wo bhi to aaj achanak sadkon par takra gaya. Uske shabdo me kahe to.…


"Humara milna mahaj ek itafaak tha, jo kuch hi waqt me lagataar ho raha hai. Shayad niyati ka kuch ishara hai aur kuch kaam wo hum dono ke jariye karwana chahta hai, isliye hume baar-baar mila raha"...


Puri baat sun'ne ke baad Kasak jod se kahne lagi... "Sala jhutha hai ye ek number ka"


Alexa:- Uski bhavna jhuthi nahi thi. Maine motion detector se pakda tha… balki iss waqt tum juban se kuch kah rahi ho aur dil ki bhawna kuch aur hai...


Nandni, aakhen dikhati..... "Ladkiyo ke dil aur juban ke upar nahi jate Alexa... Unhe ignore karo, warna tum fuse ho jaoge"...


Jyoti:- Thik hai kuch din Jivisha ko bhi apne mann ki kar lene do... Main apni pati ki haalat se jyada tumhari hi baat par gaur ki Nandu. Uss din tune bahut sahi kaha tha…. Uski jagah koi bhi ladki ya ladka hota to yahi sochta… dil uska toota hai par wo dard bata nahi rahi… aur jab wo achha aur sacha sathi dhundh rahi hai to bhala wo ladka Vyom kaise galat ho sakta hai... Ek baat to tay hai... Niyati wakai hi dono se kuch karwana chahti hai...


Kasak:- Dono sath mil'kar bacche hi paida karenge aur kya karenge...


Nandni:- Jhalli kahin ki kuch bhi bakwas karti hai...


Kasak:- Thik hai mai usse ek baar khud se parakhna chahungi..….


Jyoti:- Mai bhi, lekin pub me nahi...

Nandu:- Fir kahan...


Jyoti:- Wo baad me soch'kar bataungi... Abhi uss ladke Vyom ko thoda dhil de aur Jivisha ke pata chale bina us'par najar banaye rakho...


Nandni:- Apna Alexa kab kaam aayega... Kyon Alexa…


Alexa:- Ji sure.. mai dur se najar banaye rakhunga… kahoge to live prasaran wo bhi audio visual mobile par dikha dunga...


Jyoti:- Ye achha idea hai... Alexa jab bhi kuch aisa ho to mujhe call kar dena..


Nandni aur Kasak dono... "Mujhe bhi call kar dena"…


Chhoti si sabha bhang ho gayi. Ussi din Kasak bhi apni dramatic upastithi darj karti pahunch gayi swarn villa... Jivisha khushi se uchhal'kar usse gale lagaati hui.…. "Mai kahne hi wali thi, kuch din aa ja mere pass bahut akeli feel kar rahi hun. Raat me to kabhi-kabhi itne bhyanak khwaab aate hain ki kya kahun"….


Kasak:- Chal jhuti, drame kam kar... Tujhe bhi pata tha ki kaka aur baba jab sath mahina din bitayenge to main tere pass hi rahungi...


Saal me 4-6 mahine aise hi hote the jab Himanshu aur Sudhanshu dono bhai sath hi rahte the ek jagah. Dono bhaiyon ke bich ka lagaav hi kuch aisa tha.


Khair, dono bahne bistar par chit leti hui thi. Jivisha Kasak se uski love story puchh rahi thi aur Kasak usse apni kahani bata rahi thi...


Kaise wo Sahil se coffee shop me takra gayi aur galti puri ussi ki hone ke bavjood bhi Sahil ko khadi-khoti sunati chali gayi.


Aamuman har prem kahani ki ek sochi samjhi sajis wali shurwaat, jisme kisi bahane se 2 ajnabee mil jate hai… thik ussi prakar Sahil aur Kasak mil chuke the. Kasak ke shabdon anusar uske liye Sahil hamesa Harfanmaula, bindass aur flirty. Wahin apne aur apne doston ke liye jimmedar aur hasmukh, bakiyon ke liye shant, gambhir aur apne kaam se kewal matlab rakhne wala. Kasak ne Sahil ki tarif me kaha...


Fir Kasak dubti hui batane lagi kaise dhire-dhire dono karib huye. Sahil ne apna past bayan kiya aur Kasak ne apna.. lekin dono ko hi unke past me bahut jyada intrest nahi tha, bhale wo Kasak ka Jatin ho ya fir Sahil ki Nidhi.. Unhe vartman me kafi dilchaspi rahi.. Kasak aur Sahil...


Dono lagbhag 2 viprit svabhav ke the. Kasak shararti aur hamukh to Sahil shant aur gambhir. Haan kewal uska nature Kasak ke liye pura viprit ho jata.… Aisa koi din nahi bita hoga, jab pyar parwan chadhne ke baad bhi usne Kasak ke sath flirting band ki ho..… Uska to yahi maan'na tha sabse jyada pyar to unhi se jatane ki jaroorat hoti hai jo apne hote hain.... kyonki kaam to apne hi aate hai...


Kasak, Sahil ke khyalon me khoyi hui, apni bhavna vyakt karti rahi aur jaise-jaise Kasak apne armaan nikal rahi thi, Jivisha ke chehre par muskaan fail rahi thi... Kasak lagatar bol'kar jab khamosh hui, tab dono bahan chhat ko takti kamosh thi.…


Kasak jab karwat le'kar dekhi to Jivisha chhat ko dekh rahi thi. Uske chehre par muskaan faili hui thi aur aakhon se ek dhara aanshu ke nikal rahe the…. Kasak bade dhyan se Jivisha ko dekhne lagi...


Jivisha ko jab yah ehsas hua, wo aashu saaf kar'ke muskurati hui apni lalaat upar ki, mano puchhne ki kosis kar rahi ho "kya hua"…


Pratkriya me Kasak bhi muskura'kar kuch nahi ka ishara kee, aur dono bahne punah (dobara) chit let'kar kamoshi ko sun'ne lagi.… Dono ke jahan me bus itna hi tha ki kitne varshon ke baad mil rahe hain..


Baat 6 mahine pahle ya sal bhar pahle ki nahi thi, balki aisa lag raha tha dilon ke ehsas hi bahut dur ho chale the... Jivisha chhat ko takti hui, khamoshi ko todi.… "Aisa lagta hai kitna waqt bit gaya na... Jindgi tej hoti gayi aur hum bhid me kahin kho gaye"..


Kasak:- Bite dino me kya miss kar gaye us'par afsos karne se achha hai ki bhid se alag ho'kar hum kahin ekant aur shant mahol me baith'kar baten karen...


Jivisha:- Tumhare pass to fir bhi baten karne ke liye, mere pass to wo bhi nahi... Jo nahi dikhta usse dekhne aur chahne ki galti kar baithi aur tum sab jo dikh rahe the, uss se mai dur hoti chali gayi... Kaisa ye bharm jaal hai jisme mai ulajh gayi...


Kasak, piche tek laga'kar thoda upar hokar baithi aur Jivisha ke sir ko apne gode me le'kar balon par hath ferti…. "Tujhe yaad hai, jab hum gaanv me the aur tu aam churane Tribhuwan kaka ke aam ke bagiche me ghus jaya karti the"…


"Haan, jane ki meri ikchha hoti thi, chori mai kar leti thi, aur mere liye tu baaten sun leti thi"…


"Aam me hissedari bhi to leti thi beta, aise free service thode na tha... Waise issi chori ke chakkar me teri bhag-daur itni pakki ho gayi thi ki Kabaddi me sabko pachhar diya karti thi"..


"Areee jhuti, gundi thi tum. Hamesa cheating se mujhe jitwaya tha. Wo More yaad hai"..


"Kaun wo moti Ajani more"..


"Haan, wo rote huye teri shikayat lekar aati thi... Kabaddi ke baad roj Kasak mujhe pit'kar kahti hai, roj aise hi haarna"…


"Oh to ye Anjani More ka kaam tha jisne pol khol dee... Waise meri cheating yaad hai, apni bhul gayi"…


"Meri koi hai hi nahi"…


"Achha, aur 8th ke exam me jab baba ne warning diya tha ki iss baar yadi fail hui to sar mundwa dunga, tab ki baat kuch yaad hai kya?"…


"Areee, bade papa ne karo ya maro ki prastithi me la khada kiya tha. Pai-pai jod'kar hum balon ko maintain karte the aur wo meri bahan ke baal chhilwa dete... Aise kaise... Waise ek baat bata.. tujhe sach me takli kar dete kya?"


"Baba ka to pata nahi lekin teri maa to pakka karwa kar manti"…


"Ae bitte bhar ki ladki, ha ha ha"


"Ha ha ha, kaki ka epic dialogue tha. Waise wo 8th wali ghatna ke baad hi hum dono ko pata chala tha ki bina padhe bhi pass ho sakte hai. Tune aaj tak waise bataya nahi ki uss khadus Apte sir ko tu class se bhagayi kaise thi"…


"Sachi bata dun"


"Haan bata na"..


"Apte sir ko Lachhi madam ka love letter mila tha, aur wo class se gayab"..


"Love letter !!!! Ae ullu tu 8th class se love letter deti thi"…


"Ab itni filmen dekhi thi kuch to anubahv dikhati na... Likh dali love letter"..


"Haan tabhi dono ka ghar bhi bas gaya. Dono ko to pata hi nahi hoga ki unki love story ki bicholiya tu thi"..


"Huhhh !! Bicholiya thi ya atki nayya ki khewayya. Waise Kasak ab sab log kahan honge"…


"Chal aaj dhundhte hai sabko... Apne bachpan ke bhule bisre log.… Kuch facebook par milenge, aur kuch ka unse hi puchh lenge"….


"Yessss !!! Maza aayega… itne varson baad jaan'na kaun apni life me kya kar raha hai"


Har koi jaise bichhdon ko dhundhne nikla ho. Ye dekhne ki kosis kerne ki bhul'kar hume apni jindgi me tum kya kar rahe maherbaan.…



Zoren planet.…



Zoren me satta priwartan ke baad Nag Loki Shwetna ko aadha Zoren mila tha to aadha Zoren Dridh aayu Jatin urf Josefer ko. Jispar uski bahan Baby aur Jatin dono mil'kar shasan chalate the...


Mahamahim ki mahima samapt hote hi Zoren ke manushya ki aabadi ko bhi kafi jyada nukshan hua tha, isliye aabadi ab bahut jyada hi control me thi aur sabko family planning ki hidayat mili hui thi…


Nag Loki aur Dirdh aayu dono mitr rastr the, jo ab aapas me Jodi bana'kar mixed culture par kaam kar rahe the... Serin aur Nischal ki bhale hi puri yaad mit gayi ho, lekin har Aizemvasiyo ka sawagat yahan bahut hi garam Joshi se hota tha. Sath hi sath, dono hi rastr me Shashak ki kursi khali rahti thi, jo Vish-Nilayani ke wansaj aur Zoren ki satta pariwartak rahi Malkia Jivisha ki thi.…


Pichhli raat Aizem se 2 jahaj rawaana ho chuke the. Ek jahaj ka mukhiya Puncham tha, jo 8 high class trained warrior, 2 jasoos, 4 technician, 2 ammunation technology expert aur 4 pilot ki team ke sath Zoren ke liye rawana ho chuke the.


Ye ek puri tukdi, kitni bhi badi fauj ho usse kam se kam 24 ghante tak ek jagah par rok'kar apni fauj ko bulane me saksham the.… Inka jahaj Zoren utar chuka tha, jahan Puncham ne wahan ke shasak Jatin ki ek din ki mehman nawaji swaikar kar'ke apne dusre jahaj ko gupt roop se suchit karne nikal gaya tha...


Aizem ka dusra jahaj sidha prithvi ke liye rawana hua tha. Iss jahaj ki mukhiya Maha Prabandhak Lobhu ki Jodi Nayla, apni ek team ke sath prithvi ke liye sidha ravana hui thi. Iss team me bhi utne hi log the, bus itna anter tha ki Nayla ke sath uski 4 khatarnak sewikayen bhi ja rahi thi. Jo kisi ko bhi mohne aur apne ore aakarshit karne ke liye roop, yovan tatha kayi prakar ke rashayan (chemical) sath liye ghumti thi...


Ek surkasha aur madad ki niti Aizem wale apnate hai... Jahan backup 24 ghante me nahi bhej sakte, wahan 1 gupt jahaj bhejte the. Taki aapatkalin stithi me madad kar sake aur apne logon ko bacha'kar la sake.…


Puncham, gupt suchna de'kar jaise hi wapas lauta, wahan ke sabha bhavan ka najara dekh'kar sidha apne sar me goli maar lee aur agle hi kshn (moment) uske dimag ke chithre udd gaye.…


Pancham ka mirt sarir jamin par gira bhi nahi tha ki flash raushni jali, jis'me aakhri sandesh tha Pancham ka.…


"Mai uska sabse pyara sagird hun jo tum sab ka baap hai. Bus intzar karo, jis pal usse khabar mili, wo ussi pal wahan se chalega… Uski beraham khanjar jab tumhara imtihan legi to tumhe apni maut par chikhne ka waqt nahi milega…. Abhi mai mar raha hun, aur iss pal ke baad se hi kaal tum par mandrane laga hai... Jitne din tum ji sakte ho apni sari ikchhayen puri kar lo"



"Hawa ka rukh kuch khusk aur badla sa lag raha hai Rachita. Tumhe kuch mehsus ho raha hai"….



"Haan Zoren ki hawaon ka rukh badla hua hai. Shikari laut aaya hai"


"Rachita apni puri seema surakshit karo. Prweash dwar par chetavni daal do ki yeh kshetr ab bahar walon ke liye band ho gaya hai. Varsak puri fauj lekar tum puri seema ki nigrani karoge... Bhumigat ho'kar. Rachita, Varshak tum dono par puri jimmedari chhod'kar ja rahi hun.
Ek baat yaad rahe, ladne se jyada jaroori hai apni jaan bachana, isliye kisi bhi paristhiti me sabko surakshit rakhne ka kaam tumhara hai"…


"Aap kahan ja rahi hai Shwetna"…


"Yahan ki Shashika par najar rakhne, kyonki Zoren ki badli hawa ka asar nischit taur par prithvi par bhi hoga. Lin, HuYu ko sandesh bejo hume prithvi tak le'kar chale"….



Zoren ki Naag Loki Shashika Shwetna, ek baar fir badle mahol ko bhaanpti hui, apne sabhi up-shashkon ko samjha'kar Prithvi ke liye kisi bhi pal ravana hone wali thi.
:superb: :good: :perfect: awesome update hai nain bhai,
Behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
 

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"Whatttttt?????" … Sabhi ka ek jaisa reaction aur hospital ke darwaje par khadi Commissioner ki gadi ka jab gate khula tha to wahi najara dekhne mila tha, Chirag, Aarsi dono hathkadi me... Sab ek hi baat sochne lage.…. "Aarsi-Chirag !!! Ab ye dono kya kaand kar aaye"….


Jivisha daud'kar bhagi. Idhar Jyoti bhabhi ne dono (Kasak aur Nandni) ko ishare se rokti hui puchhne lagi…..


"Ye isse achanak se boyfriend banane ka bhut kaise sawar ho gaya. Aur Nandu tu Nischal ko kaise ignore kar'ke Jivisha ko kah di thik hai ja bana le boyfriend"…


Nandni:- Suno bhabhi, Kasak tu bhi sun... Hum yadi kisi ko kisi baat ke liye rokte hain, usse wo chij karne ki utni hi tej ikchha hoti hai... Sayad uski iss haalat ka hum log hi jimmedar hain...


Kasak:- Kaise???


Nandni:- Tune thik se suna nahi Jisa kya kahi... 6 mahina pahle jo chhod'kar gaya wo aaj tak nahi lauta aur humare kahe par wo kal shadi kar legi, kyonki uske laut'kar naa aane par bhi hum usse dhokebaj nahi mante...


Kasak:- To kya hume dhokebaj maan'na chahiye tha.


Jyoti, ek tafli mathe par marti.… "Abhi wo Jivisha idhar hi dekhne lagegi, uski baat puri sun na pahle"..


Nandni:- Kahne ka sidha matlab hai ki humne to uske dil me ye ehsas karwa diya ki uski koi sacchi mohabbat thi. Jab sachi mohabbat thi to wo lauta kyon nahi... Filhaal ke liye to chalo humne kah diya ki wo bhi tumhari tarah blank ho gaya hai... Lekin kya aisa sambhav hai mujhe batao...


Jyoti aur Kasak.… "Tu time pass band kar, sidha-sidha bata na"…


Nandni:- Sidhi baat ki humne uski sachi mohabbat to batayi, lekin wo din kat'ti jiske intzar me thi 6 mahine se, wo nahi lauta... Aur ab Jivisha apne kore (blank) panne par kisi ko jagah dena chahti hai, kyonki ab wo maan chuki hai ki wo kisi ko sache dil se chahi thi jo lauta nahi. Aur bhagwan mujhe wo dard dena nahi chahta tha, isliye uski yaden mita'kar, meri tadap mita dee hai".…

"Jivisha ab jald se jald apna boyfriend banana chahti hai. Koi achha aur sacha, taki uske baad roj wo bhagwan se prathna kare ki ek baar wo Nischal mere samne aaye to Jivisha usse dikha sake ki uske bina wo behad khush hai"…


Kasak:- Oye Karamchand ki nani, tujhse ye sab kahi hai wo...


Nandni:- Abhi-abhi to indirectly sabko samjha dee. Ab kya sab saaf-saaf kah de. Suni nahi usse yakin hai ki Nischal ek nahi kayi ladkiyon ke sath hai, isliye laut nahi raha... Aur haan jald hi mulakat hogi Nischal se... So bade se drame ke liye taiyar raho...


Jyoti:- Nischal ka koi sandesh aaya tha kya????


Nandni:- Nahi, Jivisha ne abhi to bataya..


Kasak, tul gayi uska gala dabane par... Jyoti usse pakadti hui... "Oye tu subah-subah gaanjaa funk'kar aayi thi kya.. ye kya bak rahi hai"…


Nandni:- Situation ko main aasan kar deti hun.… Jivisha ki ikchha shakti... Iss baat se bekhabar usse bhi pata nahi ki wo jo Nischal ke bare me soch rahi hai wo sach hai... Usne yakin se kaha hai ki Nischal kisi dusri ladki ke sath hai, matlab wo hai.… Yadi Jivisha ne kaha hai ki Nischal usse bhul gaya to tu ye samjh ja ki sach me wo bhi Jivisha ko bhul gaya hai"...

"Ab aaj wo kah rahi thi na ki Jis din wo Nischal mile puchh lena uski jindgi me ladkiyan thi ya nahi... Iska matlab"....


Kasak:- Oh my God, iska matlab Nischal se jald hi humari mulakat hogi... Oye lekin ye Vyom ka kya karenge...


Nandni:- Filhaal to kidnap karwa diya hai, aaram se baith'kar sochenge kya karna hai uska.…


Jyoti aur Kasak apni aakhen badi kiye.… "Kya??? Kidnap???"


Nandni:- Abhi liliputiyan ko dekhte hain, fir aaram se Jyoti bhabhi ke ghar par hi meeting karenge.…


Teeno jaise hi samne dekhi, mamla kuch ajib hi tha.… Ek dhai fit ka ladka, armani ka suit pahne, commissioner ko hi ungli dikha raha tha…. Teeno jab pass pahunche.… "Commissioner sir in 2 abhiyukton ke khilaf aap karyawahi karenge, ya mai court me aapke khilaf case file karwa dun"…


Commissioner:- Jivisha ye sab tumhare bhatije ke galat sangat ka asar hai... Dekho apni aakhon se...


Sab apni khuli aakhon se dekh rahe the. Uss ladke ka pura muh chhila hua tha. Piche sir phuta hua tha aur wo ladka ilaj nahi karwa'kar pahle FIR ki maang kar raha tha…


Hua kuch yun ki ye ladka apne logon ke sath, jo aas-pass khade the, uske sath coffee pine gaya tha aur wahin usne Aarsi ko aankh maar diya... Jise dekh'kar Chirag bhadak gaya aur coffee ka cup fenk'kar mara. Jis'se uska sir phoot gaya... Sar phootne ke baad to wo aankh maar'kar seeti bajate huye gane laga.…


"Tu bemisaal hai teri kya misaal doon, Aasmaan se aayi hai yahi keh ke taaldoon. Phir bhi koi jo puche kya hai tu kaisi hai, Haathon mein rang leke hawan mein uchal doon"…


Iss baat par to dono (Chirag aur Aarsi) bhadak gaye. Fir Chirag punching bag practice karne laga aur Aarsi gusse me uska muh noch lee.


Bawal ke bich thane ko phone gaya. Ghorpade to tha nahi, uski jagah uska junior pahuncha aur dono ko chhudane lage... Complaine uss ladke ke PA ne kiya tha aur saboot ke taur par puri video footage. Police walon ki roni soorat ho gayi thi, kyonki ye to sala juvenile case ke bhi layak nahi the, upar se teeno lagbhag hum umr, jahan tak wo ladka to dono se chhota hi dikh raha tha.


Commissioner sahab pahunche... Mamle ko dekha, fir complaint karne wale PA ko ghurte huye puchhne lage…. "Inki complaint kroge ya inhe samjhoge"….


Aarsi:- Papa mujhe chhod do aur jakar vakil karo, iska khun karke mai aaj jail chali jaungi.…


Chirag:- Na love, Iss chhachunder ka to khun mai karunga.…


Bechare commissioner…. Aarsi aur Chirag ka gussa dekh'kar kato to khun na nikle. Upar se public me hath bhi nahi utha sakte the. SI ke kaan me unhone bol diya ki dono piddiyon ko mere car ki pichhli seat par bitha'kar hathkadi laga do... Uske baad commissioner ke request par wo ladka, ilaj karane apne 6 car ke kafile ke sath pahuncha...


Lekin jab wo ek private hospital dekha to bhadak gaya... Kahne laga "na, yahan ilaj nahi karwaunga, court me case kamjor hoga. Sarkari hasptal chalo aur pahle FIR likho"


Uss ladke ka koi bhi aadmi bol nahi raha tha aur wo akele hi commissioner ko pani pilaye huye tha…. Sabhi khade ho'kar kabhi uska size dekh rahe the to kabhi uske muh se nikle IPC ki dharayen.…


Jivisha jo bina kuch bole kafi der se tamasha dekh rahi thi.… "Hmmmm ! To case karoge. Thik hai uncle FIR likh lo aur dono ko jail me dal do"…


Commissioner:- Matlab



Jivisha:- Wahi jo aapne suna. Sab nautankibaaj hai. FIR karo aur dalo ander dono ko... Beta sare proof uncle ko de do.…


"Sach me chalak bua hai ye. Ek meri hai Dumbo"…. Ladka apne man me kahne laga...


Commissioner:- Naam bolo..


Ladka:- Naam batane se kya hoga. Aarsi ko to wo Chirag...


Tabhi gadi se aawaj aayi…. "Kya Yuvraj bro, flow me puri mehnat par pani fer diye"…


Jiski Jivisha aur Kasak jaisi bua ho uska bhatija kam nautanki thode na hoga... 2 din pahle Aarsi ko uske papa ne daant diya tha, sath hi sath gusse me ye bhi bol baithe.…

"Mai isse IAS banane ke liye prayas'rat (strived) hun, lekin ye uss Chirag ke sath mil'kar jaroor criminal banegi. Log kahenge dekho ek commissioner apni beti ko hi achha insan nahi bana saka. Tumhe to kisi chor ke ghar paida hona chahiye tha"…


Khair itna sunane ke pichhe ki vajah bhi utni hi khatarnak thi. Dono (Chirag aur Aarsi) abhi se hi lagatar school bunk kar rahe the, aur apne hi class teacher ko ghus de'kar attendence maintain kar rahe the. Iss baat par principal ne commissioner ko pakad'kar suna diya aur tane me kah bhi diya.… "Bacche to wahi sikhenge na, jo ghar ke mahol me dekhenge"….


Principle ne jaise ek imandar aadmi ke gaal par tamacha maara ho. Commissioner sahab school se laute aur gusse me apni pyari beti ko kuchh jyada hi bol gaye. Commissioner ke daantne se bechari Aarsi roti hi rahi... Ab jab 5 sal relation wali girlfriend royegi to boyfriend uska chehra dekh'kar samajh jaye ki royi thi... Chirag ne pucha aur Aarsi bilakhti hui sab bol gayi. Bus fir kya tha, ussi baat ka khunnas nikal rahe the dono, inhe suspend karwane ki puri planning bana'kar


School ke bahar wale coffee house ke dono (Chirag aur Aarsi) to permanent customer the hi, sath hi sath Chirag aur Aarsi ka monthly khata bhi chalta tha... Ye ladka jo khud ko Yuvraj kahta tha, wo bhi pichhle mahine din se coffee house aata tha... Teeno me pahchan bani aur dosti gahri ho gayi...


2 din pahle Chirag aur Asrsi tension me the aur apni samasya Yuvraj ke sath share karte huye kahne lage... "Yadi wo thoda sa sath de to Aarsi ke papa jo vardi ka rob dikhate hain, unka wo rob na rahega. lekin uske liye thoda khun bahana aur usse maar khana parega.. taki sab orignal lage"….


Scripted by Chirag tha aur screen play teeno ne mil'kar kar diya. Pahla mauka tab fisla jab itne acting ke baad bhi commissioner ne bhid me hath nahi uthaya. Charo ore se shooting chalu thi…


Ab dusra mauke par kaam kar rahe the... Kisi tarah media aa jaye aur sawal puchh le ki mamla kya hai... Tab Yuvraj ko kahna tha ki.…

"Commissioner apni beti aur uske school friend Chirag ko dekh'kar jalta hai. Unhe tourcher karta hai. Mai bich me aaya to mujhe bhi mara aur kah rahe hai FIR karo dono ke khilaaf"…


Lekin becharon ki kismat, aaj ACP ne aisa tandav machaya tha ki har journalist kewal aur kewal Pune City hi nahi balki pure Pune Zile ke har thane ki he news cover kar rahe the...


Ek bench par teeno aur idhar thik samne baki sab muh par hath dal'kar teeno ko hairani se dekh rahe the...


Commissioner:- Jivisha apni bhabhi se puchho ki wo jab pregnent thi to kya kisi baba se mili thi, ya kuch extra kha rahi thi.. Ya koi kitab padh rahi thi... Ya kisi ki taveer subah saam dekh'kar sochti thi ki uska beta uss jaisa bane...


Jivisha:- Kyon sir???


Commissioner:- Un sab chijon par pratibandh lagaunga... Inki harkat par ji to karta hai ki danda tod dun... Inse to jyada masoom mujhe ab criminals lagte hai... Jina haram kar rakha hai dono ne. Aur pata na apne jaise namune kahan se dhundh lete hai...


Chirag aur Aarsi ek sath…. "Humare dost ko namuna mat bulao"…


Kasak:- Achha namuna na bualun... Fir ye jo tumne iska muh noch liya hai, aur ye pichhe se sir phod dale ho...


Yuvraj:- Poor people… ek replay karke dikhata hun.. sab log shoot karo...


Kuch pal bitne ke baad... "Sab baad me ghur lena, shoot to karo"….


Sabne mobile nikala aur Yuvraj ne ishara kiya... Pahle Aarsi uske pure chere ko cover hi kar lee aur jab hath hatayi to koi najar nahi de paya… chehre ki skin latki hui thi... Tabhi fir thodi dur se Chirag ne ek cup chalaya. Cup jaise hi laga, thik usi pal Yuvraj ne apna hath lagaya aur jab hath hataya to khun ki dhar…


Sab chinta me aa gaye... Tabhi teeno hasne lage… Yuvraj ne apne jhulte skin ko khinch'kar pura hi noch diya... Khun jahan se nikal raha tha wahan se stiker nikalte.… "Kabhi-kabhi jo najren dekhti hai wo sach nahi hota.… Baki ab khud faisla kar lo kaun namuna hai"….


Tabhi wahan uska PA pahuncha aur kaan me kuch kahne laga… Yuvraj uss se dhime se kuch kah diya.… Issi bich Ansh bhi hospital se bhagte huye cafeteria ke ore pahuncha.… Wo kuch kahta uss se pahle hi Jivisha puchhne lagi…. "Oye piddi tu hai kaun"…


Yuvraj chalte huye.… "Main devil group ka Yuvraj hun... Naam hai Vaibhav, next generation... Mere gurudev ka sandesh aa gaya hai, baad me mulkat hogi lekin kewal apne doston se"…


Vaibhav apni baat kahte car me baith chuka tha aur uska kafila nikal gaya.… Devil group.… Sab hairani se Vaibhav ko hi dekh rahe the... Tabhi Ansh kahne laga... "Wo chhota ladka hai kya Vaibhav"…


Nandni:- Haan kya hua so...


Ansh:- Ussi ke uncle ne raat ko sabko admit karwaya tha... 60 hazar hospital ka charge lekar sab paise jaise hi wapas kiye, un logon ne turant bache paise Chirag aur Aarsi ke account me transfer kar diye...


Nandni:- Kya bol rahe ho, unke pass inki account detail kahan se aayi… Aur tumhare hospital me cash jama karwane ki suvidha kab se hone lagi.… Bank ka koi branch ander khol rakhe ho kya...


Ansh:- Duffer paise ka pura hisab tha to usse bank me jama karwaynge, ya cash apne pass rakhenge.…


Kasak:- Aur inke account...


Chirag:- Mujhse maanga tha...


Jivisha:- Kitne paise jama karwaye...


Ansh:- 2 caror 39 lakh 40 hazar...


Sab ke muh khule rah gaye... Sabke ek hi sawal... "Lekin kyon"…


Ansh:- Mere muh se bhi yahi nikla to kahne lage, Vaibhav ke doston ko uske achhe kaam me kabhi paise badha nahi ban'ne chahiye….


Baki kisi ko to kuch bhi samjh me nahi aaya, lekin Nandni samjh chuki thi ye dono apne work station ko usse ya to dikha chuke hain ya bata chuke hain... lekin itna chhota ladka itne paise ka descision kaise le sakta hai...


Nandni khyalon me hi thi tabhi Jyoti bhabhi kahne lagi.… "Ye trailer aisa tha to iska gurudev kaisa hoga... Mai to fan ho gayi uski... Chirag, Aarsi... Isko bolna ki iske gurudev se mai ek baar milna chahti hun"….
Hmmm....
Perhaps one of Jibhu's sleeping powers, the power of telepathy, is still awake. Due to which the idea of Jibhu is true that Nishchu has really forgotten everything about Jibhu. ...

There is an old story. May be everyone has read.
There was once a boy who for fun...as a prank screamed "Sher...Sher"...when the villagers came running there was no lion...
once again as a prank he screamed "Sher...Sher"...when the villagers came running there was no lion...The third time when the boy screamed for help nobody came to his help...but unfortunately this time the lion had actually come...And the boy had to pay a huge price. His Life
Chirag and Arshi should read this story and understand its real meaning. Otherwise the day is not far when both of these will also get trapped in very bad trouble and no one will come to save them. Everyone will think that both of these are just doing mischief to make other people nervous.
I believe that both Arshi and Chirag are very naughty and sharp minded ... Both love each other a lot.
Both together do some mischief too. Because both of them have this childishness.Suppose that both of them are being restrained by their family members in some cases. But it certainly does not mean that both of them should harass their own family members in this way.
And to take such a way to tease your own family is wrong.
anyway..
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills nainu ji :applause: :applause:
 

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"Whatttttt?????" … Sabhi ka ek jaisa reaction aur hospital ke darwaje par khadi Commissioner ki gadi ka jab gate khula tha to wahi najara dekhne mila tha, Chirag, Aarsi dono hathkadi me... Sab ek hi baat sochne lage.…. "Aarsi-Chirag !!! Ab ye dono kya kaand kar aaye"….


Jivisha daud'kar bhagi. Idhar Jyoti bhabhi ne dono (Kasak aur Nandni) ko ishare se rokti hui puchhne lagi…..


"Ye isse achanak se boyfriend banane ka bhut kaise sawar ho gaya. Aur Nandu tu Nischal ko kaise ignore kar'ke Jivisha ko kah di thik hai ja bana le boyfriend"…


Nandni:- Suno bhabhi, Kasak tu bhi sun... Hum yadi kisi ko kisi baat ke liye rokte hain, usse wo chij karne ki utni hi tej ikchha hoti hai... Sayad uski iss haalat ka hum log hi jimmedar hain...


Kasak:- Kaise???


Nandni:- Tune thik se suna nahi Jisa kya kahi... 6 mahina pahle jo chhod'kar gaya wo aaj tak nahi lauta aur humare kahe par wo kal shadi kar legi, kyonki uske laut'kar naa aane par bhi hum usse dhokebaj nahi mante...


Kasak:- To kya hume dhokebaj maan'na chahiye tha.


Jyoti, ek tafli mathe par marti.… "Abhi wo Jivisha idhar hi dekhne lagegi, uski baat puri sun na pahle"..


Nandni:- Kahne ka sidha matlab hai ki humne to uske dil me ye ehsas karwa diya ki uski koi sacchi mohabbat thi. Jab sachi mohabbat thi to wo lauta kyon nahi... Filhaal ke liye to chalo humne kah diya ki wo bhi tumhari tarah blank ho gaya hai... Lekin kya aisa sambhav hai mujhe batao...


Jyoti aur Kasak.… "Tu time pass band kar, sidha-sidha bata na"…


Nandni:- Sidhi baat ki humne uski sachi mohabbat to batayi, lekin wo din kat'ti jiske intzar me thi 6 mahine se, wo nahi lauta... Aur ab Jivisha apne kore (blank) panne par kisi ko jagah dena chahti hai, kyonki ab wo maan chuki hai ki wo kisi ko sache dil se chahi thi jo lauta nahi. Aur bhagwan mujhe wo dard dena nahi chahta tha, isliye uski yaden mita'kar, meri tadap mita dee hai".…

"Jivisha ab jald se jald apna boyfriend banana chahti hai. Koi achha aur sacha, taki uske baad roj wo bhagwan se prathna kare ki ek baar wo Nischal mere samne aaye to Jivisha usse dikha sake ki uske bina wo behad khush hai"…


Kasak:- Oye Karamchand ki nani, tujhse ye sab kahi hai wo...


Nandni:- Abhi-abhi to indirectly sabko samjha dee. Ab kya sab saaf-saaf kah de. Suni nahi usse yakin hai ki Nischal ek nahi kayi ladkiyon ke sath hai, isliye laut nahi raha... Aur haan jald hi mulakat hogi Nischal se... So bade se drame ke liye taiyar raho...


Jyoti:- Nischal ka koi sandesh aaya tha kya????


Nandni:- Nahi, Jivisha ne abhi to bataya..


Kasak, tul gayi uska gala dabane par... Jyoti usse pakadti hui... "Oye tu subah-subah gaanjaa funk'kar aayi thi kya.. ye kya bak rahi hai"…


Nandni:- Situation ko main aasan kar deti hun.… Jivisha ki ikchha shakti... Iss baat se bekhabar usse bhi pata nahi ki wo jo Nischal ke bare me soch rahi hai wo sach hai... Usne yakin se kaha hai ki Nischal kisi dusri ladki ke sath hai, matlab wo hai.… Yadi Jivisha ne kaha hai ki Nischal usse bhul gaya to tu ye samjh ja ki sach me wo bhi Jivisha ko bhul gaya hai"...

"Ab aaj wo kah rahi thi na ki Jis din wo Nischal mile puchh lena uski jindgi me ladkiyan thi ya nahi... Iska matlab"....


Kasak:- Oh my God, iska matlab Nischal se jald hi humari mulakat hogi... Oye lekin ye Vyom ka kya karenge...


Nandni:- Filhaal to kidnap karwa diya hai, aaram se baith'kar sochenge kya karna hai uska.…


Jyoti aur Kasak apni aakhen badi kiye.… "Kya??? Kidnap???"


Nandni:- Abhi liliputiyan ko dekhte hain, fir aaram se Jyoti bhabhi ke ghar par hi meeting karenge.…


Teeno jaise hi samne dekhi, mamla kuch ajib hi tha.… Ek dhai fit ka ladka, armani ka suit pahne, commissioner ko hi ungli dikha raha tha…. Teeno jab pass pahunche.… "Commissioner sir in 2 abhiyukton ke khilaf aap karyawahi karenge, ya mai court me aapke khilaf case file karwa dun"…


Commissioner:- Jivisha ye sab tumhare bhatije ke galat sangat ka asar hai... Dekho apni aakhon se...


Sab apni khuli aakhon se dekh rahe the. Uss ladke ka pura muh chhila hua tha. Piche sir phuta hua tha aur wo ladka ilaj nahi karwa'kar pahle FIR ki maang kar raha tha…


Hua kuch yun ki ye ladka apne logon ke sath, jo aas-pass khade the, uske sath coffee pine gaya tha aur wahin usne Aarsi ko aankh maar diya... Jise dekh'kar Chirag bhadak gaya aur coffee ka cup fenk'kar mara. Jis'se uska sir phoot gaya... Sar phootne ke baad to wo aankh maar'kar seeti bajate huye gane laga.…


"Tu bemisaal hai teri kya misaal doon, Aasmaan se aayi hai yahi keh ke taaldoon. Phir bhi koi jo puche kya hai tu kaisi hai, Haathon mein rang leke hawan mein uchal doon"…


Iss baat par to dono (Chirag aur Aarsi) bhadak gaye. Fir Chirag punching bag practice karne laga aur Aarsi gusse me uska muh noch lee.


Bawal ke bich thane ko phone gaya. Ghorpade to tha nahi, uski jagah uska junior pahuncha aur dono ko chhudane lage... Complaine uss ladke ke PA ne kiya tha aur saboot ke taur par puri video footage. Police walon ki roni soorat ho gayi thi, kyonki ye to sala juvenile case ke bhi layak nahi the, upar se teeno lagbhag hum umr, jahan tak wo ladka to dono se chhota hi dikh raha tha.


Commissioner sahab pahunche... Mamle ko dekha, fir complaint karne wale PA ko ghurte huye puchhne lage…. "Inki complaint kroge ya inhe samjhoge"….


Aarsi:- Papa mujhe chhod do aur jakar vakil karo, iska khun karke mai aaj jail chali jaungi.…


Chirag:- Na love, Iss chhachunder ka to khun mai karunga.…


Bechare commissioner…. Aarsi aur Chirag ka gussa dekh'kar kato to khun na nikle. Upar se public me hath bhi nahi utha sakte the. SI ke kaan me unhone bol diya ki dono piddiyon ko mere car ki pichhli seat par bitha'kar hathkadi laga do... Uske baad commissioner ke request par wo ladka, ilaj karane apne 6 car ke kafile ke sath pahuncha...


Lekin jab wo ek private hospital dekha to bhadak gaya... Kahne laga "na, yahan ilaj nahi karwaunga, court me case kamjor hoga. Sarkari hasptal chalo aur pahle FIR likho"


Uss ladke ka koi bhi aadmi bol nahi raha tha aur wo akele hi commissioner ko pani pilaye huye tha…. Sabhi khade ho'kar kabhi uska size dekh rahe the to kabhi uske muh se nikle IPC ki dharayen.…


Jivisha jo bina kuch bole kafi der se tamasha dekh rahi thi.… "Hmmmm ! To case karoge. Thik hai uncle FIR likh lo aur dono ko jail me dal do"…


Commissioner:- Matlab



Jivisha:- Wahi jo aapne suna. Sab nautankibaaj hai. FIR karo aur dalo ander dono ko... Beta sare proof uncle ko de do.…


"Sach me chalak bua hai ye. Ek meri hai Dumbo"…. Ladka apne man me kahne laga...


Commissioner:- Naam bolo..


Ladka:- Naam batane se kya hoga. Aarsi ko to wo Chirag...


Tabhi gadi se aawaj aayi…. "Kya Yuvraj bro, flow me puri mehnat par pani fer diye"…


Jiski Jivisha aur Kasak jaisi bua ho uska bhatija kam nautanki thode na hoga... 2 din pahle Aarsi ko uske papa ne daant diya tha, sath hi sath gusse me ye bhi bol baithe.…

"Mai isse IAS banane ke liye prayas'rat (strived) hun, lekin ye uss Chirag ke sath mil'kar jaroor criminal banegi. Log kahenge dekho ek commissioner apni beti ko hi achha insan nahi bana saka. Tumhe to kisi chor ke ghar paida hona chahiye tha"…


Khair itna sunane ke pichhe ki vajah bhi utni hi khatarnak thi. Dono (Chirag aur Aarsi) abhi se hi lagatar school bunk kar rahe the, aur apne hi class teacher ko ghus de'kar attendence maintain kar rahe the. Iss baat par principal ne commissioner ko pakad'kar suna diya aur tane me kah bhi diya.… "Bacche to wahi sikhenge na, jo ghar ke mahol me dekhenge"….


Principle ne jaise ek imandar aadmi ke gaal par tamacha maara ho. Commissioner sahab school se laute aur gusse me apni pyari beti ko kuchh jyada hi bol gaye. Commissioner ke daantne se bechari Aarsi roti hi rahi... Ab jab 5 sal relation wali girlfriend royegi to boyfriend uska chehra dekh'kar samajh jaye ki royi thi... Chirag ne pucha aur Aarsi bilakhti hui sab bol gayi. Bus fir kya tha, ussi baat ka khunnas nikal rahe the dono, inhe suspend karwane ki puri planning bana'kar


School ke bahar wale coffee house ke dono (Chirag aur Aarsi) to permanent customer the hi, sath hi sath Chirag aur Aarsi ka monthly khata bhi chalta tha... Ye ladka jo khud ko Yuvraj kahta tha, wo bhi pichhle mahine din se coffee house aata tha... Teeno me pahchan bani aur dosti gahri ho gayi...


2 din pahle Chirag aur Asrsi tension me the aur apni samasya Yuvraj ke sath share karte huye kahne lage... "Yadi wo thoda sa sath de to Aarsi ke papa jo vardi ka rob dikhate hain, unka wo rob na rahega. lekin uske liye thoda khun bahana aur usse maar khana parega.. taki sab orignal lage"….


Scripted by Chirag tha aur screen play teeno ne mil'kar kar diya. Pahla mauka tab fisla jab itne acting ke baad bhi commissioner ne bhid me hath nahi uthaya. Charo ore se shooting chalu thi…


Ab dusra mauke par kaam kar rahe the... Kisi tarah media aa jaye aur sawal puchh le ki mamla kya hai... Tab Yuvraj ko kahna tha ki.…

"Commissioner apni beti aur uske school friend Chirag ko dekh'kar jalta hai. Unhe tourcher karta hai. Mai bich me aaya to mujhe bhi mara aur kah rahe hai FIR karo dono ke khilaaf"…


Lekin becharon ki kismat, aaj ACP ne aisa tandav machaya tha ki har journalist kewal aur kewal Pune City hi nahi balki pure Pune Zile ke har thane ki he news cover kar rahe the...


Ek bench par teeno aur idhar thik samne baki sab muh par hath dal'kar teeno ko hairani se dekh rahe the...


Commissioner:- Jivisha apni bhabhi se puchho ki wo jab pregnent thi to kya kisi baba se mili thi, ya kuch extra kha rahi thi.. Ya koi kitab padh rahi thi... Ya kisi ki taveer subah saam dekh'kar sochti thi ki uska beta uss jaisa bane...


Jivisha:- Kyon sir???


Commissioner:- Un sab chijon par pratibandh lagaunga... Inki harkat par ji to karta hai ki danda tod dun... Inse to jyada masoom mujhe ab criminals lagte hai... Jina haram kar rakha hai dono ne. Aur pata na apne jaise namune kahan se dhundh lete hai...


Chirag aur Aarsi ek sath…. "Humare dost ko namuna mat bulao"…


Kasak:- Achha namuna na bualun... Fir ye jo tumne iska muh noch liya hai, aur ye pichhe se sir phod dale ho...


Yuvraj:- Poor people… ek replay karke dikhata hun.. sab log shoot karo...


Kuch pal bitne ke baad... "Sab baad me ghur lena, shoot to karo"….


Sabne mobile nikala aur Yuvraj ne ishara kiya... Pahle Aarsi uske pure chere ko cover hi kar lee aur jab hath hatayi to koi najar nahi de paya… chehre ki skin latki hui thi... Tabhi fir thodi dur se Chirag ne ek cup chalaya. Cup jaise hi laga, thik usi pal Yuvraj ne apna hath lagaya aur jab hath hataya to khun ki dhar…


Sab chinta me aa gaye... Tabhi teeno hasne lage… Yuvraj ne apne jhulte skin ko khinch'kar pura hi noch diya... Khun jahan se nikal raha tha wahan se stiker nikalte.… "Kabhi-kabhi jo najren dekhti hai wo sach nahi hota.… Baki ab khud faisla kar lo kaun namuna hai"….


Tabhi wahan uska PA pahuncha aur kaan me kuch kahne laga… Yuvraj uss se dhime se kuch kah diya.… Issi bich Ansh bhi hospital se bhagte huye cafeteria ke ore pahuncha.… Wo kuch kahta uss se pahle hi Jivisha puchhne lagi…. "Oye piddi tu hai kaun"…


Yuvraj chalte huye.… "Main devil group ka Yuvraj hun... Naam hai Vaibhav, next generation... Mere gurudev ka sandesh aa gaya hai, baad me mulkat hogi lekin kewal apne doston se"…


Vaibhav apni baat kahte car me baith chuka tha aur uska kafila nikal gaya.… Devil group.… Sab hairani se Vaibhav ko hi dekh rahe the... Tabhi Ansh kahne laga... "Wo chhota ladka hai kya Vaibhav"…


Nandni:- Haan kya hua so...


Ansh:- Ussi ke uncle ne raat ko sabko admit karwaya tha... 60 hazar hospital ka charge lekar sab paise jaise hi wapas kiye, un logon ne turant bache paise Chirag aur Aarsi ke account me transfer kar diye...


Nandni:- Kya bol rahe ho, unke pass inki account detail kahan se aayi… Aur tumhare hospital me cash jama karwane ki suvidha kab se hone lagi.… Bank ka koi branch ander khol rakhe ho kya...


Ansh:- Duffer paise ka pura hisab tha to usse bank me jama karwaynge, ya cash apne pass rakhenge.…


Kasak:- Aur inke account...


Chirag:- Mujhse maanga tha...


Jivisha:- Kitne paise jama karwaye...


Ansh:- 2 caror 39 lakh 40 hazar...


Sab ke muh khule rah gaye... Sabke ek hi sawal... "Lekin kyon"…


Ansh:- Mere muh se bhi yahi nikla to kahne lage, Vaibhav ke doston ko uske achhe kaam me kabhi paise badha nahi ban'ne chahiye….


Baki kisi ko to kuch bhi samjh me nahi aaya, lekin Nandni samjh chuki thi ye dono apne work station ko usse ya to dikha chuke hain ya bata chuke hain... lekin itna chhota ladka itne paise ka descision kaise le sakta hai...


Nandni khyalon me hi thi tabhi Jyoti bhabhi kahne lagi.… "Ye trailer aisa tha to iska gurudev kaisa hoga... Mai to fan ho gayi uski... Chirag, Aarsi... Isko bolna ki iske gurudev se mai ek baar milna chahti hun"….
nice update ..nandni sab sahi samajh rahi hai ki jivisha ko kuch pata chalta hai ..
aur ye piddi gang wakai kamaal ki hai 🤣🤣🤣.. aarshi ko daanta to uske baap ko naukri se nikalne ki planning kar di ..aur ye vaibhav kiska beta hai 🤔🤔..
devil gang apasyu ka hai ..
aur apasyu to paise kharch karne ke maamle me pichhe nahi rehta to 2 crore aarshi aur chirag ko diye ye koi badi baat nahi hai 🤩🤩..
aur ab sab apasyu se milne ke liye betaab ho gaye hai aisa lagta hai ..
 

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nice update ..vyom ke baare me bahut kuch pata lagaya alexa ne ..aur ab wo uspe najar bhi rakhnewala hai .
kasak aur jivisha apni purani yaade taaza kar rahi hai aur ab jivisha sabko dhundna chahti hai ..

aur puncham ne aisa kya dekha ki usne khudko goli maar li 🤔🤔..
nischal ne hi 2 tukdi bheji thi shayad jivisha ke baare me jaankari nikalne ke liye .

par puncham ke tukdi ki jo taarif ki thi ke wo kisi bhi sena ko kuch waqt tak rok sakte hai to apne aap ko goli maarne ka matlab kya hai 🤔🤔🤔 aur apne saathiyo ke baare me socha bhi nahi 🤔..
kahi aisa to nahi ki pratham ne waha par apna kabja kar liya ho 🤔🤔..
 

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Din ke 11 baje ka samay. Bacche sabhi school ja chuke the, Jyoti bhabhi ghar par bilkul akeli. Darwaja khula hua tha aur teen log chupke se dakhil huye.


Haan thik hai koi bahut bada suspence nahi hai, baat itni si thi ki Vyom ka kya karna hai. Kyonki usse kidnap kiye 3 din ho gaye the, jise Alexa Mula Mutha nadi ke kinare kahin chhipa'kar rakhe huye tha, aur 3 din se jankariyan nikal raha tha... Alexa jiske bare me Nandni sabko bata chuki thi ye kaun hai.


Sabhi hall me hi baithe the. Jyoti jigyasavash puchhne lagi... "Kya tumhe button tankne aata hai"…


Alexa:- Robot nahi hun mai, jo har kaam kar lun… Chitti hi bana do...


Jyoti bhabhi, apna muh bichkati... "Huhhh !!! Kya fayda hua fir tere hone ka. Tujhse aacha to mera pati hai. Khali time me mere blouse ke button bhi taank dete hain aur bacchon ke diaper bhi badal dete hain"…


Alexa:- Ab roj-roj jise button todne ki aadat hogi wahi to taankega na... Isme proud type feel karne wali kaun si baat hai.…


Alexa ki baat par jo hi hansi Nandni aur Kasak. Aur idhar Jyoti bhabhi usse gali deti hui kahne lagi.… "Bhag haramjada"…


Alexa:- Sorry wo flow me nikla tha bus... Matlab baad me samjh me aaya...


Jyoti bhabhi, aur jyada bhaukhlati hui... "Sala tharki, Nandu isse nikal bahar"…


Kasak:- Kya bhabhi wo naadani me kah gaya aur aap baat khich rahi… naraj na ho cutee par...


Alexa:- Thanks Kasak... U r so gentle..


Jyoti:- Abhi kya faltu ki punchayat hogi ya jis kaam ke liye aaye the uss par bhi baat kar le...


Nandni, Alexa ke ore dekhne lagi aur Alexa Vyom ke bare me batane laga. Uske hisab se ladka achha hai. Pune apne kisi business ke silsile me aaya hai. Kuch din ruk'kar wapas chala jayega. Jivisha ke liye uska ek hi openion hai ki wo thodi pagal aur bahut jyada hansmukh hai. Jo bhi uske sath rahta hoga, wo fir kabhi udas nahi rah sakta.


Nandni ne pahli mulakat ke bare me jikr ki, jahan Vyom ka kahna tha ki uske piche kuch log pare the... Is par Alexa javab dete huye khane laga ki usne iss baat ka bhi pata kiya tha… Haan iss shahar ke kuch criminas the jo kisi aur ke dhoke me Vyom ko pakad rahe the... Baad me un logon ne Vyom ko pakad bhi liya tha lekin fir chhod diya...


Apni baat jari rakhte Alexa aage batane laga... Shuru-shuru me Vyom ko laga tha ki Jivisha uska pichha kar rahi hai, lekin baad me pub night ki gahtna se usse laga ki wo bhi to aaj achanak sadkon par takra gaya. Uske shabdo me kahe to.…


"Humara milna mahaj ek itafaak tha, jo kuch hi waqt me lagataar ho raha hai. Shayad niyati ka kuch ishara hai aur kuch kaam wo hum dono ke jariye karwana chahta hai, isliye hume baar-baar mila raha"...


Puri baat sun'ne ke baad Kasak jod se kahne lagi... "Sala jhutha hai ye ek number ka"


Alexa:- Uski bhavna jhuthi nahi thi. Maine motion detector se pakda tha… balki iss waqt tum juban se kuch kah rahi ho aur dil ki bhawna kuch aur hai...


Nandni, aakhen dikhati..... "Ladkiyo ke dil aur juban ke upar nahi jate Alexa... Unhe ignore karo, warna tum fuse ho jaoge"...


Jyoti:- Thik hai kuch din Jivisha ko bhi apne mann ki kar lene do... Main apni pati ki haalat se jyada tumhari hi baat par gaur ki Nandu. Uss din tune bahut sahi kaha tha…. Uski jagah koi bhi ladki ya ladka hota to yahi sochta… dil uska toota hai par wo dard bata nahi rahi… aur jab wo achha aur sacha sathi dhundh rahi hai to bhala wo ladka Vyom kaise galat ho sakta hai... Ek baat to tay hai... Niyati wakai hi dono se kuch karwana chahti hai...


Kasak:- Dono sath mil'kar bacche hi paida karenge aur kya karenge...


Nandni:- Jhalli kahin ki kuch bhi bakwas karti hai...


Kasak:- Thik hai mai usse ek baar khud se parakhna chahungi..….


Jyoti:- Mai bhi, lekin pub me nahi...

Nandu:- Fir kahan...


Jyoti:- Wo baad me soch'kar bataungi... Abhi uss ladke Vyom ko thoda dhil de aur Jivisha ke pata chale bina us'par najar banaye rakho...


Nandni:- Apna Alexa kab kaam aayega... Kyon Alexa…


Alexa:- Ji sure.. mai dur se najar banaye rakhunga… kahoge to live prasaran wo bhi audio visual mobile par dikha dunga...


Jyoti:- Ye achha idea hai... Alexa jab bhi kuch aisa ho to mujhe call kar dena..


Nandni aur Kasak dono... "Mujhe bhi call kar dena"…


Chhoti si sabha bhang ho gayi. Ussi din Kasak bhi apni dramatic upastithi darj karti pahunch gayi swarn villa... Jivisha khushi se uchhal'kar usse gale lagaati hui.…. "Mai kahne hi wali thi, kuch din aa ja mere pass bahut akeli feel kar rahi hun. Raat me to kabhi-kabhi itne bhyanak khwaab aate hain ki kya kahun"….


Kasak:- Chal jhuti, drame kam kar... Tujhe bhi pata tha ki kaka aur baba jab sath mahina din bitayenge to main tere pass hi rahungi...


Saal me 4-6 mahine aise hi hote the jab Himanshu aur Sudhanshu dono bhai sath hi rahte the ek jagah. Dono bhaiyon ke bich ka lagaav hi kuch aisa tha.


Khair, dono bahne bistar par chit leti hui thi. Jivisha Kasak se uski love story puchh rahi thi aur Kasak usse apni kahani bata rahi thi...


Kaise wo Sahil se coffee shop me takra gayi aur galti puri ussi ki hone ke bavjood bhi Sahil ko khadi-khoti sunati chali gayi.


Aamuman har prem kahani ki ek sochi samjhi sajis wali shurwaat, jisme kisi bahane se 2 ajnabee mil jate hai… thik ussi prakar Sahil aur Kasak mil chuke the. Kasak ke shabdon anusar uske liye Sahil hamesa Harfanmaula, bindass aur flirty. Wahin apne aur apne doston ke liye jimmedar aur hasmukh, bakiyon ke liye shant, gambhir aur apne kaam se kewal matlab rakhne wala. Kasak ne Sahil ki tarif me kaha...


Fir Kasak dubti hui batane lagi kaise dhire-dhire dono karib huye. Sahil ne apna past bayan kiya aur Kasak ne apna.. lekin dono ko hi unke past me bahut jyada intrest nahi tha, bhale wo Kasak ka Jatin ho ya fir Sahil ki Nidhi.. Unhe vartman me kafi dilchaspi rahi.. Kasak aur Sahil...


Dono lagbhag 2 viprit svabhav ke the. Kasak shararti aur hamukh to Sahil shant aur gambhir. Haan kewal uska nature Kasak ke liye pura viprit ho jata.… Aisa koi din nahi bita hoga, jab pyar parwan chadhne ke baad bhi usne Kasak ke sath flirting band ki ho..… Uska to yahi maan'na tha sabse jyada pyar to unhi se jatane ki jaroorat hoti hai jo apne hote hain.... kyonki kaam to apne hi aate hai...


Kasak, Sahil ke khyalon me khoyi hui, apni bhavna vyakt karti rahi aur jaise-jaise Kasak apne armaan nikal rahi thi, Jivisha ke chehre par muskaan fail rahi thi... Kasak lagatar bol'kar jab khamosh hui, tab dono bahan chhat ko takti kamosh thi.…


Kasak jab karwat le'kar dekhi to Jivisha chhat ko dekh rahi thi. Uske chehre par muskaan faili hui thi aur aakhon se ek dhara aanshu ke nikal rahe the…. Kasak bade dhyan se Jivisha ko dekhne lagi...


Jivisha ko jab yah ehsas hua, wo aashu saaf kar'ke muskurati hui apni lalaat upar ki, mano puchhne ki kosis kar rahi ho "kya hua"…


Pratkriya me Kasak bhi muskura'kar kuch nahi ka ishara kee, aur dono bahne punah (dobara) chit let'kar kamoshi ko sun'ne lagi.… Dono ke jahan me bus itna hi tha ki kitne varshon ke baad mil rahe hain..


Baat 6 mahine pahle ya sal bhar pahle ki nahi thi, balki aisa lag raha tha dilon ke ehsas hi bahut dur ho chale the... Jivisha chhat ko takti hui, khamoshi ko todi.… "Aisa lagta hai kitna waqt bit gaya na... Jindgi tej hoti gayi aur hum bhid me kahin kho gaye"..


Kasak:- Bite dino me kya miss kar gaye us'par afsos karne se achha hai ki bhid se alag ho'kar hum kahin ekant aur shant mahol me baith'kar baten karen...


Jivisha:- Tumhare pass to fir bhi baten karne ke liye, mere pass to wo bhi nahi... Jo nahi dikhta usse dekhne aur chahne ki galti kar baithi aur tum sab jo dikh rahe the, uss se mai dur hoti chali gayi... Kaisa ye bharm jaal hai jisme mai ulajh gayi...


Kasak, piche tek laga'kar thoda upar hokar baithi aur Jivisha ke sir ko apne gode me le'kar balon par hath ferti…. "Tujhe yaad hai, jab hum gaanv me the aur tu aam churane Tribhuwan kaka ke aam ke bagiche me ghus jaya karti the"…


"Haan, jane ki meri ikchha hoti thi, chori mai kar leti thi, aur mere liye tu baaten sun leti thi"…


"Aam me hissedari bhi to leti thi beta, aise free service thode na tha... Waise issi chori ke chakkar me teri bhag-daur itni pakki ho gayi thi ki Kabaddi me sabko pachhar diya karti thi"..


"Areee jhuti, gundi thi tum. Hamesa cheating se mujhe jitwaya tha. Wo More yaad hai"..


"Kaun wo moti Ajani more"..


"Haan, wo rote huye teri shikayat lekar aati thi... Kabaddi ke baad roj Kasak mujhe pit'kar kahti hai, roj aise hi haarna"…


"Oh to ye Anjani More ka kaam tha jisne pol khol dee... Waise meri cheating yaad hai, apni bhul gayi"…


"Meri koi hai hi nahi"…


"Achha, aur 8th ke exam me jab baba ne warning diya tha ki iss baar yadi fail hui to sar mundwa dunga, tab ki baat kuch yaad hai kya?"…


"Areee, bade papa ne karo ya maro ki prastithi me la khada kiya tha. Pai-pai jod'kar hum balon ko maintain karte the aur wo meri bahan ke baal chhilwa dete... Aise kaise... Waise ek baat bata.. tujhe sach me takli kar dete kya?"


"Baba ka to pata nahi lekin teri maa to pakka karwa kar manti"…


"Ae bitte bhar ki ladki, ha ha ha"


"Ha ha ha, kaki ka epic dialogue tha. Waise wo 8th wali ghatna ke baad hi hum dono ko pata chala tha ki bina padhe bhi pass ho sakte hai. Tune aaj tak waise bataya nahi ki uss khadus Apte sir ko tu class se bhagayi kaise thi"…


"Sachi bata dun"


"Haan bata na"..


"Apte sir ko Lachhi madam ka love letter mila tha, aur wo class se gayab"..


"Love letter !!!! Ae ullu tu 8th class se love letter deti thi"…


"Ab itni filmen dekhi thi kuch to anubahv dikhati na... Likh dali love letter"..


"Haan tabhi dono ka ghar bhi bas gaya. Dono ko to pata hi nahi hoga ki unki love story ki bicholiya tu thi"..


"Huhhh !! Bicholiya thi ya atki nayya ki khewayya. Waise Kasak ab sab log kahan honge"…


"Chal aaj dhundhte hai sabko... Apne bachpan ke bhule bisre log.… Kuch facebook par milenge, aur kuch ka unse hi puchh lenge"….


"Yessss !!! Maza aayega… itne varson baad jaan'na kaun apni life me kya kar raha hai"


Har koi jaise bichhdon ko dhundhne nikla ho. Ye dekhne ki kosis kerne ki bhul'kar hume apni jindgi me tum kya kar rahe maherbaan.…



Nandu was probably rightly saying that Jibhu was waiting for nischhu. She was waiting for months, but he has not returned yet. And now Jeevisha wants to give someone a place in her heart, because now Jibhu has agreed that the one whom Jibhu wanted with a sincere heart did not return. And maybe even God did not want to give Jibhu the pain of being separated in love, so erased nischhu's memories from Jibhu's memories..
Kasak and Jyoti Bhabhi have also agreed on this matter .
So will Jibhu really choose Vyom as her life partner? Will Jibhu really start loving jackass Vyom.
Enough is Enough....
What kind of game was created by Nainji. :cry:

Zoren planet.…
Zoren me satta priwartan ke baad Nag Loki Shwetna ko aadha Zoren mila tha to aadha Zoren Dridh aayu Jatin urf Josefer ko. Jispar uski bahan Baby aur Jatin dono mil'kar shasan chalate the...


Mahamahim ki mahima samapt hote hi Zoren ke manushya ki aabadi ko bhi kafi jyada nukshan hua tha, isliye aabadi ab bahut jyada hi control me thi aur sabko family planning ki hidayat mili hui thi…


Nag Loki aur Dirdh aayu dono mitr rastr the, jo ab aapas me Jodi bana'kar mixed culture par kaam kar rahe the... Serin aur Nischal ki bhale hi puri yaad mit gayi ho, lekin har Aizemvasiyo ka sawagat yahan bahut hi garam Joshi se hota tha. Sath hi sath, dono hi rastr me Shashak ki kursi khali rahti thi, jo Vish-Nilayani ke wansaj aur Zoren ki satta pariwartak rahi Malkia Jivisha ki thi.…


Pichhli raat Aizem se 2 jahaj rawaana ho chuke the. Ek jahaj ka mukhiya Puncham tha, jo 8 high class trained warrior, 2 jasoos, 4 technician, 2 ammunation technology expert aur 4 pilot ki team ke sath Zoren ke liye rawana ho chuke the.


Ye ek puri tukdi, kitni bhi badi fauj ho usse kam se kam 24 ghante tak ek jagah par rok'kar apni fauj ko bulane me saksham the.… Inka jahaj Zoren utar chuka tha, jahan Puncham ne wahan ke shasak Jatin ki ek din ki mehman nawaji swaikar kar'ke apne dusre jahaj ko gupt roop se suchit karne nikal gaya tha...


Aizem ka dusra jahaj sidha prithvi ke liye rawana hua tha. Iss jahaj ki mukhiya Maha Prabandhak Lobhu ki Jodi Nayla, apni ek team ke sath prithvi ke liye sidha ravana hui thi. Iss team me bhi utne hi log the, bus itna anter tha ki Nayla ke sath uski 4 khatarnak sewikayen bhi ja rahi thi. Jo kisi ko bhi mohne aur apne ore aakarshit karne ke liye roop, yovan tatha kayi prakar ke rashayan (chemical) sath liye ghumti thi...


Ek surkasha aur madad ki niti Aizem wale apnate hai... Jahan backup 24 ghante me nahi bhej sakte, wahan 1 gupt jahaj bhejte the. Taki aapatkalin stithi me madad kar sake aur apne logon ko bacha'kar la sake.…


Puncham, gupt suchna de'kar jaise hi wapas lauta, wahan ke sabha bhavan ka najara dekh'kar sidha apne sar me goli maar lee aur agle hi kshn (moment) uske dimag ke chithre udd gaye.…


Pancham ka mirt sarir jamin par gira bhi nahi tha ki flash raushni jali, jis'me aakhri sandesh tha Pancham ka.…


"Mai uska sabse pyara sagird hun jo tum sab ka baap hai. Bus intzar karo, jis pal usse khabar mili, wo ussi pal wahan se chalega… Uski beraham khanjar jab tumhara imtihan legi to tumhe apni maut par chikhne ka waqt nahi milega…. Abhi mai mar raha hun, aur iss pal ke baad se hi kaal tum par mandrane laga hai... Jitne din tum ji sakte ho apni sari ikchhayen puri kar lo"



Shwetna, jatin aka josefer.... haww khatarnak ladki baby bhi :ecs:
By the way, the people of Joren are also happy as soon as all three come to the law. And all the people are spending their lives happily.
On the other hand, Nayal, along with one of her team, has left for Earth directly to get Jibhu's information.

"Hawa ka rukh kuch khusk aur badla sa lag raha hai Rachita. Tumhe kuch mehsus ho raha hai"….
"Haan Zoren ki hawaon ka rukh badla hua hai. Shikari laut aaya hai"


"Rachita apni puri seema surakshit karo. Prweash dwar par chetavni daal do ki yeh kshetr ab bahar walon ke liye band ho gaya hai. Varsak puri fauj lekar tum puri seema ki nigrani karoge... Bhumigat ho'kar. Rachita, Varshak tum dono par puri jimmedari chhod'kar ja rahi hun.
Ek baat yaad rahe, ladne se jyada jaroori hai apni jaan bachana, isliye kisi bhi paristhiti me sabko surakshit rakhne ka kaam tumhara hai"…


"Aap kahan ja rahi hai Shwetna"…


"Yahan ki Shashika par najar rakhne, kyonki Zoren ki badli hawa ka asar nischit taur par prithvi par bhi hoga. Lin, HuYu ko sandesh bejo hume prithvi tak le'kar chale"….



Zoren ki Naag Loki Shashika Shwetna, ek baar fir badle mahol ko bhaanpti hui, apne sabhi up-shashkon ko samjha'kar Prithvi ke liye kisi bhi pal ravana hone wali thi.
Maybe something bad is going to happen :cold:
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills nainu ji :applause: :applause:
 

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"Whatttttt?????" … Sabhi ka ek jaisa reaction aur hospital ke darwaje par khadi Commissioner ki gadi ka jab gate khula tha to wahi najara dekhne mila tha, Chirag, Aarsi dono hathkadi me... Sab ek hi baat sochne lage.…. "Aarsi-Chirag !!! Ab ye dono kya kaand kar aaye"….


Jivisha daud'kar bhagi. Idhar Jyoti bhabhi ne dono (Kasak aur Nandni) ko ishare se rokti hui puchhne lagi…..


"Ye isse achanak se boyfriend banane ka bhut kaise sawar ho gaya. Aur Nandu tu Nischal ko kaise ignore kar'ke Jivisha ko kah di thik hai ja bana le boyfriend"…


Nandni:- Suno bhabhi, Kasak tu bhi sun... Hum yadi kisi ko kisi baat ke liye rokte hain, usse wo chij karne ki utni hi tej ikchha hoti hai... Sayad uski iss haalat ka hum log hi jimmedar hain...


Kasak:- Kaise???


Nandni:- Tune thik se suna nahi Jisa kya kahi... 6 mahina pahle jo chhod'kar gaya wo aaj tak nahi lauta aur humare kahe par wo kal shadi kar legi, kyonki uske laut'kar naa aane par bhi hum usse dhokebaj nahi mante...


Kasak:- To kya hume dhokebaj maan'na chahiye tha.


Jyoti, ek tafli mathe par marti.… "Abhi wo Jivisha idhar hi dekhne lagegi, uski baat puri sun na pahle"..


Nandni:- Kahne ka sidha matlab hai ki humne to uske dil me ye ehsas karwa diya ki uski koi sacchi mohabbat thi. Jab sachi mohabbat thi to wo lauta kyon nahi... Filhaal ke liye to chalo humne kah diya ki wo bhi tumhari tarah blank ho gaya hai... Lekin kya aisa sambhav hai mujhe batao...


Jyoti aur Kasak.… "Tu time pass band kar, sidha-sidha bata na"…


Nandni:- Sidhi baat ki humne uski sachi mohabbat to batayi, lekin wo din kat'ti jiske intzar me thi 6 mahine se, wo nahi lauta... Aur ab Jivisha apne kore (blank) panne par kisi ko jagah dena chahti hai, kyonki ab wo maan chuki hai ki wo kisi ko sache dil se chahi thi jo lauta nahi. Aur bhagwan mujhe wo dard dena nahi chahta tha, isliye uski yaden mita'kar, meri tadap mita dee hai".…

"Jivisha ab jald se jald apna boyfriend banana chahti hai. Koi achha aur sacha, taki uske baad roj wo bhagwan se prathna kare ki ek baar wo Nischal mere samne aaye to Jivisha usse dikha sake ki uske bina wo behad khush hai"…


Kasak:- Oye Karamchand ki nani, tujhse ye sab kahi hai wo...


Nandni:- Abhi-abhi to indirectly sabko samjha dee. Ab kya sab saaf-saaf kah de. Suni nahi usse yakin hai ki Nischal ek nahi kayi ladkiyon ke sath hai, isliye laut nahi raha... Aur haan jald hi mulakat hogi Nischal se... So bade se drame ke liye taiyar raho...


Jyoti:- Nischal ka koi sandesh aaya tha kya????


Nandni:- Nahi, Jivisha ne abhi to bataya..


Kasak, tul gayi uska gala dabane par... Jyoti usse pakadti hui... "Oye tu subah-subah gaanjaa funk'kar aayi thi kya.. ye kya bak rahi hai"…


Nandni:- Situation ko main aasan kar deti hun.… Jivisha ki ikchha shakti... Iss baat se bekhabar usse bhi pata nahi ki wo jo Nischal ke bare me soch rahi hai wo sach hai... Usne yakin se kaha hai ki Nischal kisi dusri ladki ke sath hai, matlab wo hai.… Yadi Jivisha ne kaha hai ki Nischal usse bhul gaya to tu ye samjh ja ki sach me wo bhi Jivisha ko bhul gaya hai"...

"Ab aaj wo kah rahi thi na ki Jis din wo Nischal mile puchh lena uski jindgi me ladkiyan thi ya nahi... Iska matlab"....


Kasak:- Oh my God, iska matlab Nischal se jald hi humari mulakat hogi... Oye lekin ye Vyom ka kya karenge...


Nandni:- Filhaal to kidnap karwa diya hai, aaram se baith'kar sochenge kya karna hai uska.…


Jyoti aur Kasak apni aakhen badi kiye.… "Kya??? Kidnap???"


Nandni:- Abhi liliputiyan ko dekhte hain, fir aaram se Jyoti bhabhi ke ghar par hi meeting karenge.…


Teeno jaise hi samne dekhi, mamla kuch ajib hi tha.… Ek dhai fit ka ladka, armani ka suit pahne, commissioner ko hi ungli dikha raha tha…. Teeno jab pass pahunche.… "Commissioner sir in 2 abhiyukton ke khilaf aap karyawahi karenge, ya mai court me aapke khilaf case file karwa dun"…


Commissioner:- Jivisha ye sab tumhare bhatije ke galat sangat ka asar hai... Dekho apni aakhon se...


Sab apni khuli aakhon se dekh rahe the. Uss ladke ka pura muh chhila hua tha. Piche sir phuta hua tha aur wo ladka ilaj nahi karwa'kar pahle FIR ki maang kar raha tha…


Hua kuch yun ki ye ladka apne logon ke sath, jo aas-pass khade the, uske sath coffee pine gaya tha aur wahin usne Aarsi ko aankh maar diya... Jise dekh'kar Chirag bhadak gaya aur coffee ka cup fenk'kar mara. Jis'se uska sir phoot gaya... Sar phootne ke baad to wo aankh maar'kar seeti bajate huye gane laga.…


"Tu bemisaal hai teri kya misaal doon, Aasmaan se aayi hai yahi keh ke taaldoon. Phir bhi koi jo puche kya hai tu kaisi hai, Haathon mein rang leke hawan mein uchal doon"…


Iss baat par to dono (Chirag aur Aarsi) bhadak gaye. Fir Chirag punching bag practice karne laga aur Aarsi gusse me uska muh noch lee.


Bawal ke bich thane ko phone gaya. Ghorpade to tha nahi, uski jagah uska junior pahuncha aur dono ko chhudane lage... Complaine uss ladke ke PA ne kiya tha aur saboot ke taur par puri video footage. Police walon ki roni soorat ho gayi thi, kyonki ye to sala juvenile case ke bhi layak nahi the, upar se teeno lagbhag hum umr, jahan tak wo ladka to dono se chhota hi dikh raha tha.


Commissioner sahab pahunche... Mamle ko dekha, fir complaint karne wale PA ko ghurte huye puchhne lage…. "Inki complaint kroge ya inhe samjhoge"….


Aarsi:- Papa mujhe chhod do aur jakar vakil karo, iska khun karke mai aaj jail chali jaungi.…


Chirag:- Na love, Iss chhachunder ka to khun mai karunga.…


Bechare commissioner…. Aarsi aur Chirag ka gussa dekh'kar kato to khun na nikle. Upar se public me hath bhi nahi utha sakte the. SI ke kaan me unhone bol diya ki dono piddiyon ko mere car ki pichhli seat par bitha'kar hathkadi laga do... Uske baad commissioner ke request par wo ladka, ilaj karane apne 6 car ke kafile ke sath pahuncha...


Lekin jab wo ek private hospital dekha to bhadak gaya... Kahne laga "na, yahan ilaj nahi karwaunga, court me case kamjor hoga. Sarkari hasptal chalo aur pahle FIR likho"


Uss ladke ka koi bhi aadmi bol nahi raha tha aur wo akele hi commissioner ko pani pilaye huye tha…. Sabhi khade ho'kar kabhi uska size dekh rahe the to kabhi uske muh se nikle IPC ki dharayen.…


Jivisha jo bina kuch bole kafi der se tamasha dekh rahi thi.… "Hmmmm ! To case karoge. Thik hai uncle FIR likh lo aur dono ko jail me dal do"…


Commissioner:- Matlab



Jivisha:- Wahi jo aapne suna. Sab nautankibaaj hai. FIR karo aur dalo ander dono ko... Beta sare proof uncle ko de do.…


"Sach me chalak bua hai ye. Ek meri hai Dumbo"…. Ladka apne man me kahne laga...


Commissioner:- Naam bolo..


Ladka:- Naam batane se kya hoga. Aarsi ko to wo Chirag...


Tabhi gadi se aawaj aayi…. "Kya Yuvraj bro, flow me puri mehnat par pani fer diye"…


Jiski Jivisha aur Kasak jaisi bua ho uska bhatija kam nautanki thode na hoga... 2 din pahle Aarsi ko uske papa ne daant diya tha, sath hi sath gusse me ye bhi bol baithe.…

"Mai isse IAS banane ke liye prayas'rat (strived) hun, lekin ye uss Chirag ke sath mil'kar jaroor criminal banegi. Log kahenge dekho ek commissioner apni beti ko hi achha insan nahi bana saka. Tumhe to kisi chor ke ghar paida hona chahiye tha"…


Khair itna sunane ke pichhe ki vajah bhi utni hi khatarnak thi. Dono (Chirag aur Aarsi) abhi se hi lagatar school bunk kar rahe the, aur apne hi class teacher ko ghus de'kar attendence maintain kar rahe the. Iss baat par principal ne commissioner ko pakad'kar suna diya aur tane me kah bhi diya.… "Bacche to wahi sikhenge na, jo ghar ke mahol me dekhenge"….


Principle ne jaise ek imandar aadmi ke gaal par tamacha maara ho. Commissioner sahab school se laute aur gusse me apni pyari beti ko kuchh jyada hi bol gaye. Commissioner ke daantne se bechari Aarsi roti hi rahi... Ab jab 5 sal relation wali girlfriend royegi to boyfriend uska chehra dekh'kar samajh jaye ki royi thi... Chirag ne pucha aur Aarsi bilakhti hui sab bol gayi. Bus fir kya tha, ussi baat ka khunnas nikal rahe the dono, inhe suspend karwane ki puri planning bana'kar


School ke bahar wale coffee house ke dono (Chirag aur Aarsi) to permanent customer the hi, sath hi sath Chirag aur Aarsi ka monthly khata bhi chalta tha... Ye ladka jo khud ko Yuvraj kahta tha, wo bhi pichhle mahine din se coffee house aata tha... Teeno me pahchan bani aur dosti gahri ho gayi...


2 din pahle Chirag aur Asrsi tension me the aur apni samasya Yuvraj ke sath share karte huye kahne lage... "Yadi wo thoda sa sath de to Aarsi ke papa jo vardi ka rob dikhate hain, unka wo rob na rahega. lekin uske liye thoda khun bahana aur usse maar khana parega.. taki sab orignal lage"….


Scripted by Chirag tha aur screen play teeno ne mil'kar kar diya. Pahla mauka tab fisla jab itne acting ke baad bhi commissioner ne bhid me hath nahi uthaya. Charo ore se shooting chalu thi…


Ab dusra mauke par kaam kar rahe the... Kisi tarah media aa jaye aur sawal puchh le ki mamla kya hai... Tab Yuvraj ko kahna tha ki.…

"Commissioner apni beti aur uske school friend Chirag ko dekh'kar jalta hai. Unhe tourcher karta hai. Mai bich me aaya to mujhe bhi mara aur kah rahe hai FIR karo dono ke khilaaf"…


Lekin becharon ki kismat, aaj ACP ne aisa tandav machaya tha ki har journalist kewal aur kewal Pune City hi nahi balki pure Pune Zile ke har thane ki he news cover kar rahe the...


Ek bench par teeno aur idhar thik samne baki sab muh par hath dal'kar teeno ko hairani se dekh rahe the...


Commissioner:- Jivisha apni bhabhi se puchho ki wo jab pregnent thi to kya kisi baba se mili thi, ya kuch extra kha rahi thi.. Ya koi kitab padh rahi thi... Ya kisi ki taveer subah saam dekh'kar sochti thi ki uska beta uss jaisa bane...


Jivisha:- Kyon sir???


Commissioner:- Un sab chijon par pratibandh lagaunga... Inki harkat par ji to karta hai ki danda tod dun... Inse to jyada masoom mujhe ab criminals lagte hai... Jina haram kar rakha hai dono ne. Aur pata na apne jaise namune kahan se dhundh lete hai...


Chirag aur Aarsi ek sath…. "Humare dost ko namuna mat bulao"…


Kasak:- Achha namuna na bualun... Fir ye jo tumne iska muh noch liya hai, aur ye pichhe se sir phod dale ho...


Yuvraj:- Poor people… ek replay karke dikhata hun.. sab log shoot karo...


Kuch pal bitne ke baad... "Sab baad me ghur lena, shoot to karo"….


Sabne mobile nikala aur Yuvraj ne ishara kiya... Pahle Aarsi uske pure chere ko cover hi kar lee aur jab hath hatayi to koi najar nahi de paya… chehre ki skin latki hui thi... Tabhi fir thodi dur se Chirag ne ek cup chalaya. Cup jaise hi laga, thik usi pal Yuvraj ne apna hath lagaya aur jab hath hataya to khun ki dhar…


Sab chinta me aa gaye... Tabhi teeno hasne lage… Yuvraj ne apne jhulte skin ko khinch'kar pura hi noch diya... Khun jahan se nikal raha tha wahan se stiker nikalte.… "Kabhi-kabhi jo najren dekhti hai wo sach nahi hota.… Baki ab khud faisla kar lo kaun namuna hai"….


Tabhi wahan uska PA pahuncha aur kaan me kuch kahne laga… Yuvraj uss se dhime se kuch kah diya.… Issi bich Ansh bhi hospital se bhagte huye cafeteria ke ore pahuncha.… Wo kuch kahta uss se pahle hi Jivisha puchhne lagi…. "Oye piddi tu hai kaun"…


Yuvraj chalte huye.… "Main devil group ka Yuvraj hun... Naam hai Vaibhav, next generation... Mere gurudev ka sandesh aa gaya hai, baad me mulkat hogi lekin kewal apne doston se"…


Vaibhav apni baat kahte car me baith chuka tha aur uska kafila nikal gaya.… Devil group.… Sab hairani se Vaibhav ko hi dekh rahe the... Tabhi Ansh kahne laga... "Wo chhota ladka hai kya Vaibhav"…


Nandni:- Haan kya hua so...


Ansh:- Ussi ke uncle ne raat ko sabko admit karwaya tha... 60 hazar hospital ka charge lekar sab paise jaise hi wapas kiye, un logon ne turant bache paise Chirag aur Aarsi ke account me transfer kar diye...


Nandni:- Kya bol rahe ho, unke pass inki account detail kahan se aayi… Aur tumhare hospital me cash jama karwane ki suvidha kab se hone lagi.… Bank ka koi branch ander khol rakhe ho kya...


Ansh:- Duffer paise ka pura hisab tha to usse bank me jama karwaynge, ya cash apne pass rakhenge.…


Kasak:- Aur inke account...


Chirag:- Mujhse maanga tha...


Jivisha:- Kitne paise jama karwaye...


Ansh:- 2 caror 39 lakh 40 hazar...


Sab ke muh khule rah gaye... Sabke ek hi sawal... "Lekin kyon"…


Ansh:- Mere muh se bhi yahi nikla to kahne lage, Vaibhav ke doston ko uske achhe kaam me kabhi paise badha nahi ban'ne chahiye….


Baki kisi ko to kuch bhi samjh me nahi aaya, lekin Nandni samjh chuki thi ye dono apne work station ko usse ya to dikha chuke hain ya bata chuke hain... lekin itna chhota ladka itne paise ka descision kaise le sakta hai...


Nandni khyalon me hi thi tabhi Jyoti bhabhi kahne lagi.… "Ye trailer aisa tha to iska gurudev kaisa hoga... Mai to fan ho gayi uski... Chirag, Aarsi... Isko bolna ki iske gurudev se mai ek baar milna chahti hun"….
ooo teri chota packet bda dhamaka.................
ye to vaibhav bhi ghana syana ho gya..............
khair commissioner ki kursi bachi nhi to inhone to puri planning hi kr li thi...............
whi nandu ne bhi jivisa ki iccha shakti se satik anuman lagaya h

dekhte h ab inka milan kb hota h.............
 
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Din ke 11 baje ka samay. Bacche sabhi school ja chuke the, Jyoti bhabhi ghar par bilkul akeli. Darwaja khula hua tha aur teen log chupke se dakhil huye.


Haan thik hai koi bahut bada suspence nahi hai, baat itni si thi ki Vyom ka kya karna hai. Kyonki usse kidnap kiye 3 din ho gaye the, jise Alexa Mula Mutha nadi ke kinare kahin chhipa'kar rakhe huye tha, aur 3 din se jankariyan nikal raha tha... Alexa jiske bare me Nandni sabko bata chuki thi ye kaun hai.


Sabhi hall me hi baithe the. Jyoti jigyasavash puchhne lagi... "Kya tumhe button tankne aata hai"…


Alexa:- Robot nahi hun mai, jo har kaam kar lun… Chitti hi bana do...


Jyoti bhabhi, apna muh bichkati... "Huhhh !!! Kya fayda hua fir tere hone ka. Tujhse aacha to mera pati hai. Khali time me mere blouse ke button bhi taank dete hain aur bacchon ke diaper bhi badal dete hain"…


Alexa:- Ab roj-roj jise button todne ki aadat hogi wahi to taankega na... Isme proud type feel karne wali kaun si baat hai.…


Alexa ki baat par jo hi hansi Nandni aur Kasak. Aur idhar Jyoti bhabhi usse gali deti hui kahne lagi.… "Bhag haramjada"…


Alexa:- Sorry wo flow me nikla tha bus... Matlab baad me samjh me aaya...


Jyoti bhabhi, aur jyada bhaukhlati hui... "Sala tharki, Nandu isse nikal bahar"…


Kasak:- Kya bhabhi wo naadani me kah gaya aur aap baat khich rahi… naraj na ho cutee par...


Alexa:- Thanks Kasak... U r so gentle..


Jyoti:- Abhi kya faltu ki punchayat hogi ya jis kaam ke liye aaye the uss par bhi baat kar le...


Nandni, Alexa ke ore dekhne lagi aur Alexa Vyom ke bare me batane laga. Uske hisab se ladka achha hai. Pune apne kisi business ke silsile me aaya hai. Kuch din ruk'kar wapas chala jayega. Jivisha ke liye uska ek hi openion hai ki wo thodi pagal aur bahut jyada hansmukh hai. Jo bhi uske sath rahta hoga, wo fir kabhi udas nahi rah sakta.


Nandni ne pahli mulakat ke bare me jikr ki, jahan Vyom ka kahna tha ki uske piche kuch log pare the... Is par Alexa javab dete huye khane laga ki usne iss baat ka bhi pata kiya tha… Haan iss shahar ke kuch criminas the jo kisi aur ke dhoke me Vyom ko pakad rahe the... Baad me un logon ne Vyom ko pakad bhi liya tha lekin fir chhod diya...


Apni baat jari rakhte Alexa aage batane laga... Shuru-shuru me Vyom ko laga tha ki Jivisha uska pichha kar rahi hai, lekin baad me pub night ki gahtna se usse laga ki wo bhi to aaj achanak sadkon par takra gaya. Uske shabdo me kahe to.…


"Humara milna mahaj ek itafaak tha, jo kuch hi waqt me lagataar ho raha hai. Shayad niyati ka kuch ishara hai aur kuch kaam wo hum dono ke jariye karwana chahta hai, isliye hume baar-baar mila raha"...


Puri baat sun'ne ke baad Kasak jod se kahne lagi... "Sala jhutha hai ye ek number ka"


Alexa:- Uski bhavna jhuthi nahi thi. Maine motion detector se pakda tha… balki iss waqt tum juban se kuch kah rahi ho aur dil ki bhawna kuch aur hai...


Nandni, aakhen dikhati..... "Ladkiyo ke dil aur juban ke upar nahi jate Alexa... Unhe ignore karo, warna tum fuse ho jaoge"...


Jyoti:- Thik hai kuch din Jivisha ko bhi apne mann ki kar lene do... Main apni pati ki haalat se jyada tumhari hi baat par gaur ki Nandu. Uss din tune bahut sahi kaha tha…. Uski jagah koi bhi ladki ya ladka hota to yahi sochta… dil uska toota hai par wo dard bata nahi rahi… aur jab wo achha aur sacha sathi dhundh rahi hai to bhala wo ladka Vyom kaise galat ho sakta hai... Ek baat to tay hai... Niyati wakai hi dono se kuch karwana chahti hai...


Kasak:- Dono sath mil'kar bacche hi paida karenge aur kya karenge...


Nandni:- Jhalli kahin ki kuch bhi bakwas karti hai...


Kasak:- Thik hai mai usse ek baar khud se parakhna chahungi..….


Jyoti:- Mai bhi, lekin pub me nahi...

Nandu:- Fir kahan...


Jyoti:- Wo baad me soch'kar bataungi... Abhi uss ladke Vyom ko thoda dhil de aur Jivisha ke pata chale bina us'par najar banaye rakho...


Nandni:- Apna Alexa kab kaam aayega... Kyon Alexa…


Alexa:- Ji sure.. mai dur se najar banaye rakhunga… kahoge to live prasaran wo bhi audio visual mobile par dikha dunga...


Jyoti:- Ye achha idea hai... Alexa jab bhi kuch aisa ho to mujhe call kar dena..


Nandni aur Kasak dono... "Mujhe bhi call kar dena"…


Chhoti si sabha bhang ho gayi. Ussi din Kasak bhi apni dramatic upastithi darj karti pahunch gayi swarn villa... Jivisha khushi se uchhal'kar usse gale lagaati hui.…. "Mai kahne hi wali thi, kuch din aa ja mere pass bahut akeli feel kar rahi hun. Raat me to kabhi-kabhi itne bhyanak khwaab aate hain ki kya kahun"….


Kasak:- Chal jhuti, drame kam kar... Tujhe bhi pata tha ki kaka aur baba jab sath mahina din bitayenge to main tere pass hi rahungi...


Saal me 4-6 mahine aise hi hote the jab Himanshu aur Sudhanshu dono bhai sath hi rahte the ek jagah. Dono bhaiyon ke bich ka lagaav hi kuch aisa tha.


Khair, dono bahne bistar par chit leti hui thi. Jivisha Kasak se uski love story puchh rahi thi aur Kasak usse apni kahani bata rahi thi...


Kaise wo Sahil se coffee shop me takra gayi aur galti puri ussi ki hone ke bavjood bhi Sahil ko khadi-khoti sunati chali gayi.


Aamuman har prem kahani ki ek sochi samjhi sajis wali shurwaat, jisme kisi bahane se 2 ajnabee mil jate hai… thik ussi prakar Sahil aur Kasak mil chuke the. Kasak ke shabdon anusar uske liye Sahil hamesa Harfanmaula, bindass aur flirty. Wahin apne aur apne doston ke liye jimmedar aur hasmukh, bakiyon ke liye shant, gambhir aur apne kaam se kewal matlab rakhne wala. Kasak ne Sahil ki tarif me kaha...


Fir Kasak dubti hui batane lagi kaise dhire-dhire dono karib huye. Sahil ne apna past bayan kiya aur Kasak ne apna.. lekin dono ko hi unke past me bahut jyada intrest nahi tha, bhale wo Kasak ka Jatin ho ya fir Sahil ki Nidhi.. Unhe vartman me kafi dilchaspi rahi.. Kasak aur Sahil...


Dono lagbhag 2 viprit svabhav ke the. Kasak shararti aur hamukh to Sahil shant aur gambhir. Haan kewal uska nature Kasak ke liye pura viprit ho jata.… Aisa koi din nahi bita hoga, jab pyar parwan chadhne ke baad bhi usne Kasak ke sath flirting band ki ho..… Uska to yahi maan'na tha sabse jyada pyar to unhi se jatane ki jaroorat hoti hai jo apne hote hain.... kyonki kaam to apne hi aate hai...


Kasak, Sahil ke khyalon me khoyi hui, apni bhavna vyakt karti rahi aur jaise-jaise Kasak apne armaan nikal rahi thi, Jivisha ke chehre par muskaan fail rahi thi... Kasak lagatar bol'kar jab khamosh hui, tab dono bahan chhat ko takti kamosh thi.…


Kasak jab karwat le'kar dekhi to Jivisha chhat ko dekh rahi thi. Uske chehre par muskaan faili hui thi aur aakhon se ek dhara aanshu ke nikal rahe the…. Kasak bade dhyan se Jivisha ko dekhne lagi...


Jivisha ko jab yah ehsas hua, wo aashu saaf kar'ke muskurati hui apni lalaat upar ki, mano puchhne ki kosis kar rahi ho "kya hua"…


Pratkriya me Kasak bhi muskura'kar kuch nahi ka ishara kee, aur dono bahne punah (dobara) chit let'kar kamoshi ko sun'ne lagi.… Dono ke jahan me bus itna hi tha ki kitne varshon ke baad mil rahe hain..


Baat 6 mahine pahle ya sal bhar pahle ki nahi thi, balki aisa lag raha tha dilon ke ehsas hi bahut dur ho chale the... Jivisha chhat ko takti hui, khamoshi ko todi.… "Aisa lagta hai kitna waqt bit gaya na... Jindgi tej hoti gayi aur hum bhid me kahin kho gaye"..


Kasak:- Bite dino me kya miss kar gaye us'par afsos karne se achha hai ki bhid se alag ho'kar hum kahin ekant aur shant mahol me baith'kar baten karen...


Jivisha:- Tumhare pass to fir bhi baten karne ke liye, mere pass to wo bhi nahi... Jo nahi dikhta usse dekhne aur chahne ki galti kar baithi aur tum sab jo dikh rahe the, uss se mai dur hoti chali gayi... Kaisa ye bharm jaal hai jisme mai ulajh gayi...


Kasak, piche tek laga'kar thoda upar hokar baithi aur Jivisha ke sir ko apne gode me le'kar balon par hath ferti…. "Tujhe yaad hai, jab hum gaanv me the aur tu aam churane Tribhuwan kaka ke aam ke bagiche me ghus jaya karti the"…


"Haan, jane ki meri ikchha hoti thi, chori mai kar leti thi, aur mere liye tu baaten sun leti thi"…


"Aam me hissedari bhi to leti thi beta, aise free service thode na tha... Waise issi chori ke chakkar me teri bhag-daur itni pakki ho gayi thi ki Kabaddi me sabko pachhar diya karti thi"..


"Areee jhuti, gundi thi tum. Hamesa cheating se mujhe jitwaya tha. Wo More yaad hai"..


"Kaun wo moti Ajani more"..


"Haan, wo rote huye teri shikayat lekar aati thi... Kabaddi ke baad roj Kasak mujhe pit'kar kahti hai, roj aise hi haarna"…


"Oh to ye Anjani More ka kaam tha jisne pol khol dee... Waise meri cheating yaad hai, apni bhul gayi"…


"Meri koi hai hi nahi"…


"Achha, aur 8th ke exam me jab baba ne warning diya tha ki iss baar yadi fail hui to sar mundwa dunga, tab ki baat kuch yaad hai kya?"…


"Areee, bade papa ne karo ya maro ki prastithi me la khada kiya tha. Pai-pai jod'kar hum balon ko maintain karte the aur wo meri bahan ke baal chhilwa dete... Aise kaise... Waise ek baat bata.. tujhe sach me takli kar dete kya?"


"Baba ka to pata nahi lekin teri maa to pakka karwa kar manti"…


"Ae bitte bhar ki ladki, ha ha ha"


"Ha ha ha, kaki ka epic dialogue tha. Waise wo 8th wali ghatna ke baad hi hum dono ko pata chala tha ki bina padhe bhi pass ho sakte hai. Tune aaj tak waise bataya nahi ki uss khadus Apte sir ko tu class se bhagayi kaise thi"…


"Sachi bata dun"


"Haan bata na"..


"Apte sir ko Lachhi madam ka love letter mila tha, aur wo class se gayab"..


"Love letter !!!! Ae ullu tu 8th class se love letter deti thi"…


"Ab itni filmen dekhi thi kuch to anubahv dikhati na... Likh dali love letter"..


"Haan tabhi dono ka ghar bhi bas gaya. Dono ko to pata hi nahi hoga ki unki love story ki bicholiya tu thi"..


"Huhhh !! Bicholiya thi ya atki nayya ki khewayya. Waise Kasak ab sab log kahan honge"…


"Chal aaj dhundhte hai sabko... Apne bachpan ke bhule bisre log.… Kuch facebook par milenge, aur kuch ka unse hi puchh lenge"….


"Yessss !!! Maza aayega… itne varson baad jaan'na kaun apni life me kya kar raha hai"


Har koi jaise bichhdon ko dhundhne nikla ho. Ye dekhne ki kosis kerne ki bhul'kar hume apni jindgi me tum kya kar rahe maherbaan.…



Zoren planet.…



Zoren me satta priwartan ke baad Nag Loki Shwetna ko aadha Zoren mila tha to aadha Zoren Dridh aayu Jatin urf Josefer ko. Jispar uski bahan Baby aur Jatin dono mil'kar shasan chalate the...


Mahamahim ki mahima samapt hote hi Zoren ke manushya ki aabadi ko bhi kafi jyada nukshan hua tha, isliye aabadi ab bahut jyada hi control me thi aur sabko family planning ki hidayat mili hui thi…


Nag Loki aur Dirdh aayu dono mitr rastr the, jo ab aapas me Jodi bana'kar mixed culture par kaam kar rahe the... Serin aur Nischal ki bhale hi puri yaad mit gayi ho, lekin har Aizemvasiyo ka sawagat yahan bahut hi garam Joshi se hota tha. Sath hi sath, dono hi rastr me Shashak ki kursi khali rahti thi, jo Vish-Nilayani ke wansaj aur Zoren ki satta pariwartak rahi Malkia Jivisha ki thi.…


Pichhli raat Aizem se 2 jahaj rawaana ho chuke the. Ek jahaj ka mukhiya Puncham tha, jo 8 high class trained warrior, 2 jasoos, 4 technician, 2 ammunation technology expert aur 4 pilot ki team ke sath Zoren ke liye rawana ho chuke the.


Ye ek puri tukdi, kitni bhi badi fauj ho usse kam se kam 24 ghante tak ek jagah par rok'kar apni fauj ko bulane me saksham the.… Inka jahaj Zoren utar chuka tha, jahan Puncham ne wahan ke shasak Jatin ki ek din ki mehman nawaji swaikar kar'ke apne dusre jahaj ko gupt roop se suchit karne nikal gaya tha...


Aizem ka dusra jahaj sidha prithvi ke liye rawana hua tha. Iss jahaj ki mukhiya Maha Prabandhak Lobhu ki Jodi Nayla, apni ek team ke sath prithvi ke liye sidha ravana hui thi. Iss team me bhi utne hi log the, bus itna anter tha ki Nayla ke sath uski 4 khatarnak sewikayen bhi ja rahi thi. Jo kisi ko bhi mohne aur apne ore aakarshit karne ke liye roop, yovan tatha kayi prakar ke rashayan (chemical) sath liye ghumti thi...


Ek surkasha aur madad ki niti Aizem wale apnate hai... Jahan backup 24 ghante me nahi bhej sakte, wahan 1 gupt jahaj bhejte the. Taki aapatkalin stithi me madad kar sake aur apne logon ko bacha'kar la sake.…


Puncham, gupt suchna de'kar jaise hi wapas lauta, wahan ke sabha bhavan ka najara dekh'kar sidha apne sar me goli maar lee aur agle hi kshn (moment) uske dimag ke chithre udd gaye.…


Pancham ka mirt sarir jamin par gira bhi nahi tha ki flash raushni jali, jis'me aakhri sandesh tha Pancham ka.…


"Mai uska sabse pyara sagird hun jo tum sab ka baap hai. Bus intzar karo, jis pal usse khabar mili, wo ussi pal wahan se chalega… Uski beraham khanjar jab tumhara imtihan legi to tumhe apni maut par chikhne ka waqt nahi milega…. Abhi mai mar raha hun, aur iss pal ke baad se hi kaal tum par mandrane laga hai... Jitne din tum ji sakte ho apni sari ikchhayen puri kar lo"



"Hawa ka rukh kuch khusk aur badla sa lag raha hai Rachita. Tumhe kuch mehsus ho raha hai"….



"Haan Zoren ki hawaon ka rukh badla hua hai. Shikari laut aaya hai"


"Rachita apni puri seema surakshit karo. Prweash dwar par chetavni daal do ki yeh kshetr ab bahar walon ke liye band ho gaya hai. Varsak puri fauj lekar tum puri seema ki nigrani karoge... Bhumigat ho'kar. Rachita, Varshak tum dono par puri jimmedari chhod'kar ja rahi hun.
Ek baat yaad rahe, ladne se jyada jaroori hai apni jaan bachana, isliye kisi bhi paristhiti me sabko surakshit rakhne ka kaam tumhara hai"…


"Aap kahan ja rahi hai Shwetna"…


"Yahan ki Shashika par najar rakhne, kyonki Zoren ki badli hawa ka asar nischit taur par prithvi par bhi hoga. Lin, HuYu ko sandesh bejo hume prithvi tak le'kar chale"….



Zoren ki Naag Loki Shashika Shwetna, ek baar fir badle mahol ko bhaanpti hui, apne sabhi up-shashkon ko samjha'kar Prithvi ke liye kisi bhi pal ravana hone wali thi.
behatrin update bro.............
action suru hone wala h bro............
wese bro pancham ne esa kya dekh liya sabha bhavan m ki khud ko hi goli mar li.............
lgta h khud ko prakrati kahne wale joren pahuch gye...............
or nayla bhi prithvi k liye nikal gyi or ab swetna bhi whi ja rhi h.........

lgta h sbse bda sangram prithvi pr hi dekhne ko milega sari main power whi jo jma ho rhi h.,...........
 
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